Style Concerns Edit
A Dangerous Path, The Darkest Hour, and Starlight could be expanded. Needs a more quotes. Outcast should be expanded. Whole article could be summarized.I did as much as I thought was necessary, but more can always be taken off Echoblaze♥ 08:41, June 28, 2011 (UTC)
- Certain sections should be checked for better flow and clarity.
- Needs History Completed
- All of the Os and NP sections need to be expanded.
- Secrets and Cats of the Clans need to be expanded.
- Firestar's Quest and Outcast could be expanded.
how do u make the cat pictures?? - Very confused cat
How do u become a member? Can I become one and make A cat?
hey is dustpelt and ferncloud goining to have any mor kits.
Wait, isn't Dustpelt and Ferncloud kin? Because Ashfur is his nephew, and shouldn't that make Ferncloud his niece? I'm very confused!17:48, November 13, 2010 (UTC)
i just looked at brindleface's page it dustpelt and ferncloud are.........BROTHER AND SISTER!!!!!!!!!!!! that's inbreeding eww!Littletigress10 02:56, November 15, 2010 (UTC)littletigress10Littletigress10 02:56, November 15, 2010 (UTC)
They aren't siblings. I was wondering if we should add his kits to the grand niece/nephew and Ferncloud to niece.
You just saw the dashed line and thought it was a line, Littlegress (don't know links) they are not related at all, I think.
I have a really good quote, but I forget: do I need to put it on the talk page to be approved first? Can someone please reply soon so I don't loose my spot in my book. Thanks, -- Wolfwhisker Trick or Treat 04:43, December 5, 2010 (UTC)
you could just place it here and maybe they will see it. i only edit pages and post things here. im not really sure what else im supposed to do so...yeah. just post it here and maybe someone will approve of it. and i had a question. why isnt The Darkest Hour listed as one of the books Dustpelt is alive in and yet shows everything else? and Night Whispers. he alive in that one too. 18.104.22.168 16:45, January 16, 2011 (UTC)Riverripple
Hey, should we put under niecies ferncloud because they are mates and neice and uncle?--22.214.171.124 17:19, January 18, 2011 (UTC)
They are direct Ferncloud is his sister Brindleface's daughter Lionheart 1717
Foxleap is his son. :)
Dustpelt elder? Edit
when will dustpelt be an elder?
That is for the Erins to decide. This isn't improving the article as of yet, so I suggest you ask for guesses on the forums and not on the talk pages. Fawngaze 21:25, June 11, 2011 (UTC)
I hope this will never happen, he and Brackenfur are awsome. I think dusty will become leader
He was called Dustltpelt or something in Dark River, in the later pages. If Ravenpaw was called Ravepaw and Tornear was called Turnear, shouldn't this be in Dustpelt's trivia?
-Dustleaf, too lazy to log in
It says Foxleap is is daughter. That's not true. (hopefully) Can somebody please change it?
Shelly, the user was talking about the fact Foxleap was listed as a she-cat, not a tom. Plus, it was probably a coding issue. If not listed properly, it shows up a little odd. —Garrus ღ 21:27, February 13, 2012 (UTC)
Spiderleg being an Elder?Edit
In the Last Hope it said Spiderleg was getting white around his muzzle and might join the elders soon. Dustpelt is OLDER then him...? And so is Squirrelflight Leafpool Brightheart and so on should this be added to his trivia?
Because if Spiderleg was getting old then Dustpelt would have already been an elder. --Lionheart 1717 18:59, April 22, 2012 (UTC)
Dustpelt had Spiderleg when he was still rather young. They're both old. Having an old son doesn't automatically make Dustpelt an elder. Now please discuss this elsewhere since it has nothing to do with improving the article. Shelly For a limited time only 19:04, April 22, 2012 (UTC)
Shelly that's not my point what I'm saying is he should be added to his trivia his son was mistakenly noted as older then him not that he should be an elder.. --Lionheart 1717 00:31, April 24, 2012 (UTC)
It was never said that Spiderleg was older than Dustpelt. Just because Spiderleg was called old doesn't say anything for Dustpelt. Dustpelt wasn't called young, old, ect, when Spiderleg was said to have gray flecks on his muzzle. I don't even think Dustpelt was around... —Garrus ღ 00:39,4/24/2012
Who wrote that Sorrelpaw was mentored by Dustpelt? Her mentor was Sandstorm!
Dustpelt's never seen or mentioned as a kit, while Ravenpaw was. The youngest we see Dustpelt is as Dustpaw, and he never talks about his kit-hood. Shelly For a limited time only 17:52, June 14, 2012 (UTC)