- Several sections need expanding:
Forest of Secrets Rising Storm A Dangerous Path The Darkest Hour Midnight Moonrise Long Shadows The entire Power of Three Section I don't see how the others need expansion, but Long Shadows is still pretty short. Aspenheart 23:18, September 27, 2010 (UTC)
- Needs cites for thick, sleek, and glossy
Tons of grammatical errors and spelling mistakes.
Mentors need citations. Needs Citations for eye color, and description. Into the Wild through Forest of Secrets need to be shortened so they don't take up too much space.
I have the page number for him having amber eyes, for the Trivia section. On page 132 in Midnight, it mistakenly says, "Oh right." Graystripes amber eyes glowed with understanding..." Please add a citiation; I don't know how to. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion☣ 18:58, August 27, 2010 (UTC)
Okay, I know this is the talk page for graystripe, but if you're reading this, Nightflower of ThunderClan, then pay close attention.
Go under source mode (the little button thingy that says source and has the < > on it)
Then type view the coding that I have under the source mode, make sure when you add it it's actually under source mode. Stuff in Parenthesies is my explanations
<ref>Revealed in (book name, make sure it's made like this ''[[Midnight]]'' just the first book that came to my mind), page (fill in page number, 35235235252)</ref>
And if its for allegiances,
<ref>Revealed in the (book name allegiances, followed by the seperation mark and allegiances [[Allegiances Midnight|allegiances]]) on (book name again, make sure it matches to where the allegiances link ''[[Midnight]]'')</ref>
So for yours, it would be the following:
<ref>Revealed in ''[[Midnight]]'', page 123</ref>
There! Any questions can be asked on my talk page. TawnytasticYOU'RE JUST AS CONTAGIOUS AS GREENCOUGH MOUSEBRAIN!!! 19:07, August 27, 2010 (UTC)
Kit Version Edit
Graystripe should have a kit version because in the end of Bluestar's Prophecy he is mentioned as Graykit.
P.S. Sandstorm, Dustpelt, and Ravenpaw too.
The only time in Bluestar's Prophecy, that Graystripe is mentioned is when himself, Dustpaw, and Sandpaw, are playfighting. He was never seen as a kit, nor was Ravenpaw, Dustpaw, and Sandpaw. --Dawnleaf 05:45, September 4, 2010 (UTC)
no i belive ever cat should have a kit verison kittypet loners and rouges because no cat start out at 6 six moons old or do they
- The breadth of the art project would become a monumental task if that was done that way. Instead only those characters that have appeared in books at that age are given art. If you wish to propose a fundamental change to the methodologies of a project, I suggest discussing it with the appropriate project. Den/CoSC 19:20, September 11, 2010 (UTC)
We (Being the members of Project Charart) don't make a kit/apprentice/warrior for every cat, it would put too much work on all of us.
Though I think I remember them being mencioned as kits as well...
Stealthstar 18:17, April 22, 2011 (UTC)
LionClan (Modern) Edit
Should it not say in the section for past residents that he was part of moder LionClan. It says so for Brackenfur, Firestar, Mistyfoot... So why not him? --Wolfwhisker GO FALLOWFERN! 03:03, October 10, 2010 (UTC)
Ravenpaws path Edit
Shouldn't he have a section on the ravenpaw's path series? I'm not sure if he appears in A Can in need, but I'm pretty sure he is on the patrol to save the barn in The Heart of A Warrior. I can't do it because I don't have either of them but I think someone else should. Thanks --Spottedpool76 21:41, October 26, 2010 (UTC) (Sorry if the link isn't working, I'm trying to fix it)
You're right, he is on a hunting patrol in A Clan in Need, and the battle patrol in The Heart of a Warrior.IloveDovepaw 06:25, April 9, 2012 (UTC)IloveDovepaw
This needs fixed up because Bumblestripe and Storfur are not his mates!Silverstream is not his half-sister!Usernamer 2-Cool Catz 21:18, October 30, 2010 (UTC)
So, did, Graystripe die, I am very confused?03:08, December 22, 2010 (UTC)184.108.40.206
this belongs on the fourms*Wildfire* 13:56, January 8, 2011 (UTC)
Charcat Family Tree Edit
On Graystripe's Charcat in the family box, it all has the right cats on it, but they're in the wrong places! Graystripe's Charcat needs some serious fixing up!-Kittycat79 06:05, December 26, 2010 (UTC)
If someone WILL NOT fix up Graystripe's family tree on his Charcat soon, I will do it myself! It looks very stupid the way it is, I think, and ppl will begin to get confused and muddled up about Graystripe's family tree.-Kittycat79 02:57, January 2, 2011 (UTC)
Excuse me? They look completely fine, all of the cats are in the right places. Also, instead of yelling at people you could do it yourself, no one will stop you. WhiteStorm is back! 17:48, January 2, 2011 (UTC)
does anyone find it creppy how his mom and dad Willowpelt and Pacthpelt are bro and sis IT JUST SCARES ME - king692
Yes, but please take it to the forums xD And only people on Project Charart are allowed to edit that section. If it still bothers you, I'll talk to Frostheart. And I realize this is old but whatever xD
Stealthstar 18:21, April 22, 2011 (UTC)
Family Edit Edit
Okay, Whitestorm, I'll do it myself, and srry for yelling.-Kittycat79 03:56, January 6, 2011 (UTC)
What the.... Edit
What the?! On Graystripe's page, the cats in Graystripe's Charcat family tree are in the wrong places, but when I go to the Charcat editing window, in the Preview, it shows all the cats on Graystripe's Charcat family tree in the right places!~ Kittycat79 04:01, January 6, 2011 (UTC)
Firestar- Graystripe's great uncle? I doubt it. Edit
In the trivia, it says that Firestar is Graystripe's great uncle because he and Holly, Jay, and Lion are his cousins...Um, no. Sandstorm being related to Graystripe and her being mates with Firestar does NOT make Fire and Gray *too lazy to type their full names :)* related. I'm going to take it out, but feel free to discuss it with me. ;) -Foxstar 220.127.116.11 03:00, January 7, 2011 (UTC)
Precisely. :) Because Sandstorm's father is Redtail and Graystripe's mother is Willowpelt, and Redtail and Willowpelt are siblings, that makes Sandstorm and Graystripe cousins, which means Firestar is also Graystripe's cousin. =) --Midnite Talk 03:15, January 7, 2011 (UTC)
Actually, they are related. :P I apologize for wording it wrong before; Graystripe is Firestar's cousin-in-law. It's, as you probably know, the cousin of one's wife/husband, and since Graystripe is Sandstorm's cousin, Graystripe and Firestar are cousins-in-law. That makes them related. --Midnite Talk 03:30, January 7, 2011 (UTC)
Related can mean blood connection, but by this related I mean they were in the same family. Not blood connection family, but we can relate they are in the same group because Sandstorm links him to Swiftbreeze and Adderfang's litter. So what I mean is, not technical relation, but general. --Midnite Talk 03:43, January 7, 2011 (UTC)
Actually, no. You can't be related to your mate's parents or whatever. If what you are saying is true, then by Firestar taking Sandstorm as his mate, that automacally makes him half-brothers with Ashfur, or Brindleface's son. oblivionAudience? 03:55, January 7, 2011 (UTC)
Half-brother? A half-brother is a sibling who shares one biological parent. And yes, of course you can be related. Firestar, by taking Sandstorm as his mate, immediately becomes Brindleface's son-in-law and Ashfur's half-brother-in-law. Think about it. If a man were to marry a woman, then although not by blood, he would be part of the family because he's his wife's son-in-law. :P So, yes, they can too be related. --Midnite Talk 04:02, January 7, 2011 (UTC)
Earlier you said that because Firestar takes Sandstorm as his mate, that makes him and Graystripe cousins, which isn't true. The only way you can be related is through blood. In-laws aren't relations. The only reason we're talking about this is because of who we're putting on his family members. Graystripe isn't related to Firestar in any way. oblivionAudience? 04:48, January 7, 2011 (UTC)
Do the Clans do the in-law thing? Mates don't seem to be official in any capacity (IE: No formal ceremony, no acknowledgment, ect). Do we even have one mention of offspring's mate being considered a son or daughter of the parents? Den/CoSC 13:37, January 7, 2011 (UTC)
I'll just quit arguing since you make so many good points, Oblivion. ;) And Kitsu, you probably are correct. Without any acknowledgement from the mate's parents, it is highly unlikely that in-laws in Clans even exist. My deep apologies for being way off and making this section on his talk page way too long. XD --Midnite Talk 21:00, January 7, 2011 (UTC)
Size? Strength? Edit
I believe it mentions somewhere near the end of A Dangerous Path that Graystripe is big, and possibly very muscular. Fireheart says, "And that big gray tom over there is my friend Graystripe. Don't worry, he's a lot gentler than he looks." to Princess.
Why is he not listed in the kittypet category? Is there a reason? If not I'm gonna add him to it. Paleclaw 10:45, February 23, 2011 (UTC)
Graystripe's Information Box Edit
Okay, for some reason something is wrong. You know the box thing at the right of Graystripe's page that has his picture and information in it? Well, something is wrong with the family section. An example is that it says Sorreltail is his mate. It also says Millie and Silverstream are his sons. Is someone going to fix it? I am new to warriors wiki, and I wanted to edit it, but I don't know how. Moonhop 22:53, February 25, 2011 (UTC)
one of my favorite charcters
Yeah, I saw it too. But for me it said Brambleckaw and Stormfur are his mates, and his half-brother is Sorreltail, and Feathertail is his son, etc.
Yes, but it isnt spam. The last person to edit it accidentaly added an extra 'enter' so Everything is down a line then they are supposed to be. :] No worries
Dotn froget to sign your comment with 4~'s
18.104.22.168 04:23, April 20, 2011 (UTC)Grizzlyclaw
Wouldn't Graystripe and Silverstream be formerly mates i know he still loves her but he has a new mate Millie. Wouldn't that mean they aren't mates anymore since her death and Millie?
I'm soooo sorry about not taking this to PCA but in Forest of secretes (it may have been fire and ice) it says he has a gray nose. I can't find the page right now, but i think it should be added. -Mudstone; THe return of a lost foe? 06:28, September 17, 2011 (UTC)
It's there, and I'll find the cite. Eventually. Does anybody else have that? -Mudstone; Return from the dead! 02:24, September 19, 2011 (UTC)
Maine Coon Edit
I swear I read somewhere that one of the Erins said that Graystripe had maine coon blood in him. Does anyone else remember seeing this? I think it would be a relevant point to add to his page. Shelly For a limited time only 19:55, December 28, 2011 (UTC)
I'm sorry, I fixed a typo. xD Anyway, I do hazily remember seeing this myself somewhere myself,but I also don't remember where. Sorry, I hope someone else does! Feathermoon. 20:05, December 28, 2011 (UTC)
Why is the image link showing him as an apprentice?
Book Appearances Edit
At the end of Bluestar's Prophecy, it mentioned Graypaw play fighting with Dustpaw and Sandpaw. Also, when Bluestar was talking with Spottedleaf about 'the flame colored kittypet' (Rusty), she said, "I'll ask Graypaw to stalk him for a while." Shouldn't Bluestar's Prophecy be in his book appearances? Sproutingfire 19:44, March 22, 2012 (UTC)QSproutingFire
Hey! D:< Edit
WTH is wrong with his quote! I will KILL that vandal! >:(
Incorrect Trivia Edit
The triva says he was described with black paws in Into the Wild, but I checked the refrences in the book, and it says BACK paws, not BLACK paws. Whoever added the trivia must have read that part wrong. I believe this trivia should be taken off.IloveDovepaw 06:22, April 9, 2012 (UTC)IloveDovepaw
On Graystripe's kittypet charat, he has no nicked ears. Cn someone change it? - Frogpath, Apr. 23, 5:56 PM
Take it up with PCA.
Why hasn't Graystripe become an elder yet? He's older then Frostfur was when she retired, and she was just a permanent queen!
I don't think Graystripe should have mated with Millie.