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The Sun Trail - Silver Nomination
- Article
- Allegiances
- Gallery
Not nominating the cliffnotes now. Everything else was practically done, I went through the history, reworded parts, and fixed an error in the allegiances. Comments? -Ducksauce 01:42, May 3, 2014 (UTC)
Can you add the bonus scene? Bird Squash one, squash two, squash three... 22:45, May 11, 2014 (UTC)
Still working on this, Duck? —Jayce(17:01, 5/30/2014)
The First Battle - Silver Nomination
And every corresponding article except the cliffnotes. Back pains because of this. Also I'm conflicted as if I should add Wind Runner's story or not, but you can tell me if I have to and I will. Also youre paying for my back medication. Appledash the light of honor 00:38, May 6, 2014 (UTC)
Well, if you decided to add the bonus scene, it could go into a section apart from the main plot summary. I think it should be added, since it is relevant to Wind, and was part of the book. Or, a new page could be created for the bonus scenes, like the adventure games. As for what you have right now, just fix Shaded Moss' red link and remove the coming soon template in the summary. Bird Squash one, squash two, squash three... 01:00, May 6, 2014 (UTC)
Fixed. Haven't added Wind Runner's thing yet. Maybe it should just be in her page? Since it's not really apart of the plot, but maybe we could mention in the trivia. Appledash the light of honor 20:50, May 6, 2014 (UTC)
Well, I think since it's part of the book, it should be added. I like Birdqueen's idea of having a separate section. It's still part of the book and really should be added somewhere in there. —Jayce'(04:09, 5/7/2014)
Ok. Then maybe we should do the same thing for the sun trail and thunder rising? Appledash the light of honor 21:54, May 11, 2014 (UTC)
Yes, a separate section for the bonus scenes in TST, TR, and TFB. Bird Squash one, squash two, squash three... 22:44, May 11, 2014 (UTC)
Mmhmm. That seems like a good idea to me. Unless someone else has another idea, I think we could go ahead with that. —Jayce(22:45, 5/11/2014)
Sorry I'm going to be gone for a week and a half. If you could do me a favor and keep this up until I get my computer back thatd be great, but if not I understand. Appledash the light of honor 23:09, May 12, 2014 (UTC)
Disregard that I found a computer. Ok I finished the bonus scene. Any other comments? Appledash the light of honor 16:49, May 13, 2014 (UTC)
Just do a quick sweep to check for typos, grammar errors, ect. —Jayce(17:01, 5/30/2014)
I think I got them all? I'm not quite sure because spellchecker doesn't work on this computer. But if I did miss any, I just ask if you can fix it, and if not, tell me where. Thanks. Appledash the light of honor 02:09, June 1, 2014 (UTC)
It needs the publication list. Other than that, awesome! Stoneclaw 23:15,6/2/2014
Rising Storm/Chapter 4 - Silver Nomination
Comments? Bird Squash one, squash two, squash three... 21:17, May 23, 2014 (UTC)
Very detailed, Birdqueen. =) Go through and check for typos and grammar errors, just in case, though. —Jayce(17:01, 5/30/2014)
Checked, and thanks! Bird Squash one, squash two, squash three... 17:19, May 30, 2014 (UTC)
Thunder Rising - Silver Nomination
Appledash the light of honor 15:02, May 24, 2014 (UTC)
Is this including the cliffnotes? If so, fill in those. Queen Beebs 15:06, May 24, 2014 (UTC)
Cliffnotes aren't mandatory when nominating. She can do those another time if she wants. —Jayce(15:08, 5/24/2014)
Cut up the paragraphs into shorter ones, and could the overall summary be shortened, and more summarized. Lots of detail is what we've got the cliffnotes for :P Stoneclaw 15:12,5/26/2014
Actually, the cliffnotes are supposed to be short and brief. I'd be overjoyed if we could have in-depth, longer, and more focused plot summaries. —Jayce(15:15, 5/26/2014)
Oh I meant to say the chapter pages, not clliffnotes Dx *noob moment* Stoneclaw 15:17,5/26/2014
I do agree with cutting down the paragraphs- instead of making giant ones, splitting them would be fine. —Jayce(17:01, 5/30/2014)
I'm not shortening the plot summary, because a plot summary is supposed to be detailed. That's why there's the "detailed plot summary". However, I did shorten the paragraphs, which I'd probably have to the First Battle because it's the same length. Appledash the light of honor 16:13, May 31, 2014 (UTC)