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Fire and Ice/Chapter 9 ~ Silver Nomination
Welp, college has made me kind of spacey, oh well, here's a subpage silver nomination, I'm very slowly getting more active. So yayy Prussia:The Awesome Time Lord 00:55, October 20, 2014 (UTC)
oh my gosh this is so late i'm sorry You have some run-on sentences in the first half of the summary, and you also need to add the Important Events section. Other than that, this looks nice, but double-check for spelling just in case. Bird Squash one, squash two, squash three... 20:28, November 30, 2014 (UTC)
Hopefully fixed the run-on sentences, I added the Important Events section (Although I couldn't find any events taht could constitute as majorly important) Looked through, found no spelling (although I am half asleep so I could have missed like one or two) Prussia:The Awesome Time Lord 18:33, December 3, 2014 (UTC)
All the sentences look good now. As I understand it, Important Events are important things that happened in the actual chapter, not necessarily in the whole book. Here is an example of an event that isn't crucial to the plot, but is important to the chapter Does that make sense? I'm not good at explaining stuff You've formatted the section slightly incorrectly as well, so just fix that and this will be all good :D Bird Squash one, squash two, squash three... 21:41, December 3, 2014 (UTC)
Ok, fixed it, although I couldn't find anything crucial the the chapter other than maybe Firestar catching his sister's scent. Prussia:The Awesome Time Lord 18:46, December 6, 2014 (UTC)
-poke- Bird Squash one, squash two, squash three... 20:21, December 22, 2014 (UTC)
Could we have another comment/CBV? Bird Squash one, squash two, squash three... 19:59, February 1, 2015 (UTC)
Rising Storm/Chapter 8 - Silver Nomination
Comments? Bird Squash one, squash two, squash three... 16:27, December 29, 2014 (UTC)
Comments anyone? Bird Squash one, squash two, squash three... 01:23, February 5, 2015 (UTC)
There's just a few minor instances of weird phrasing/awkward tense, could you go through and maybe reword them (ex. using "were" in a spot where maybe "are" would be a better choice sorry this sounds so nitpicky)? Dazzy 11:37, February 7, 2015 (UTC)
Tigerclaw's Fury/Cliffnotes ~ Silver Nomination
I think this article is ready to be graded silver. Comments? ♠Pinely ~Anything Is Possible 03:02, January 3, 2015 (UTC)
This looks really good :D Nothing to change stands out to me, but just double check for those sneaky grammar/spelling errors. They can slip by the best of us :) Bird Squash one, squash two, squash three... 15:49, January 3, 2015 (UTC)
Alright, thank you. ^^ ♠Pinely ~Anything Is Possible 05:59, January 4, 2015 (UTC)
pokety poke Bird Squash one, squash two, squash three... 01:24, February 5, 2015 (UTC)
Thunder Rising/Chapter 1 ~ Silver Nomination
aka the worst summary I've ever written. Comments? ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 06:22, January 3, 2015 (UTC)
The tenses in each paragraph are inconsistent. It switches back and forth from present to past tense over and over. I think that's mainly the biggest issue. ^^ ♠Pinely ~Anything Is Possible 07:27, January 3, 2015 (UTC)
Whew, I just fixed it before it became an embarrassment to me ^^ ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 07:35, January 3, 2015 (UTC)
Better, but the tense is still a little off in places, so just make sure everything is in the present tense. And take out the last sentence in the summary, as we try not to use sentences in these like "The chapter starts..." or "The chapter ends..". Then, just add the Important Events section (that was just recently decided on as a required section). This looks good for your fist nomination :) Bird Squash one, squash two, squash three... 15:46, January 3, 2015 (UTC)
Fixed ^^ I really can't write in present tense, I prefer past but whatever. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 09:42, January 4, 2015 (UTC)
Any more comments? ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 08:59, January 6, 2015 (UTC)
Not being impatient... But Is there going to be any more comments on this? It's been like... 3 weeks without comments. ~ Foxy Don't eat my food 07:41, January 25, 2015 (UTC)
This looks good! I can't actually ask for last comments, which is the step before putting up a vote, so Birdpaw and Skye? Could you comment on/CBV this? Bird Squash one, squash two, squash three... 19:58, February 1, 2015 (UTC)
CBV? (alsoo soundslikei'mintroublewhenpeepzcallmeBirdpaww) Prussia:The Awesome Time Lord 22:22, February 1, 2015 (UTC)
pssh you're not in trouble i just totally blanked on what to call you :P Vote's up! Bird Squash one, squash two, squash three... 01:11, February 5, 2015 (UTC)
The Forgotten Warrior/Chapter 24 silver nomination
Had some fun typing this. The major/minor list was annoying to do though. Comments? ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 07:56, January 3, 2015 (UTC)
Yeah, those lists can go on forever :P This looks very good, just double check for spelling/grammar and add the Important Events section (it is a required section now, and if you need help, the chapter subpage tutorial explains how to use it, or you can ask here). Bird Squash one, squash two, squash three... 15:38, January 3, 2015 (UTC)
Done. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 09:37, January 4, 2015 (UTC)
Comments? It's been a month. ~ Burntclaw Yolo ♫ ♪ 00:16, February 2, 2015 (UTC)
pokes Sorry about that Burntclaw, this looks great! Anything anyone would like to add?Bird Squash one, squash two, squash three... 01:17, February 5, 2015 (UTC)
I just picked up on a couple run-on sentences and a spelling error here or there (sorry I just fixed all the ones that I noticed since they were really minor). Other than that, looks good! Dazzy 11:34, February 7, 2015 (UTC)
Fire and Ice/Chapter 20 ~ Silver Nomination
This was fun to write. I think everything is there, but I'd like someone to check the page numbers. I don't have a physical copy of the book, only a PDF. I looked at the book store today, and it was the only one they didn't have. So, comments? ^^ ♎ giaria time on my side 21:15 Sat Jan 17
I fixed up the cites for you. Just add in Brackenpaw to the characters lists, but otherwise this looks quite good :D Bird Squash one, squash two, squash three... 01:35, February 5, 2015 (UTC)
done~ ♎ giaria time on my side 01:48 Thu Feb 5
There's a few bits with inconsistent tenses, could you fix those? Dazzy 11:30, February 7, 2015 (UTC)
Rejoin
Ayyy I was never actually removed so I figured might as well lmao Dazzy 13:15, January 27, 2015 (UTC)
Yeah you can rejoin! I presume you know where the guidelines and such are, and welcome back! Bird Squash one, squash two, squash three... 01:18, February 5, 2015 (UTC)
Join?
Am I able to join this project? Since there are fewer editors here than in Project Characters, I would like to help out as soon as I can. --Songheart (talk) 05:35, February 2, 2015 (UTC)
You most certainly can jon! Here are the guidelines (read through these before nominating anything) and here is a chapter subpage tutorial (which you can look through if you need help). If you have any questions, go ahead and ask one of the leads or on the talk page. Welcome to the project! Bird Squash one, squash two, squash three... 01:21, February 5, 2015 (UTC)