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== [[Webster]] - Silver Nomination == |
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Content Drive
Since Mudclaw (WC), apart from TUG and Starlight, has a filled out history, and most of the problems the article had before had been fixed, such as quotes and history, and since I'm close to nominating him at this point, I think we should have a new Content Drive - and I have a new idea, as well.
-Singular cat; For this one, I choose Sharpclaw (SC) - his history needs lots of expansion, and more quotes could be used. He's in a similar state Mudclaw was in before his article became CD.
-Multiple cats; Skye suggested this earlier, and they thought of SkyClan in general, since most of the cats' history needs work.
What do you all think? Queen Beebs 20:49, August 16, 2014 (UTC)
Hm, what about a cat that's already silver but needs loads of work. Sandstorm would be a prime example of this, she's extremely major but yet her history is pitifully short in most sections. I don't really like the idea of doing multiple cats, because honestly it would be a hassle to keep track of and project members would have to go through a total of 111 articles and expand them. With the project's current size, I think it would be an enormous task to undertake, especially with already approved ideas in other projects that need tons of work (such as Chapter Subpages, and soon the Events Pages). I think it would be an unneeded hassle at this point. But, to me, Sandstorm and Sharpclaw are the forerunners for the next Content Drive. -Ducksauce 23:26, August 16, 2014 (UTC)
iirc i don't think Skye meant all of them - just the ones that are on PC's front page ^^;; Queen Beebs 18:54, August 17, 2014 (UTC)
I did mean the ones listed on the front page, since they appear to be in the greatest need of work. Why only one character, when someone can easily get that done in a couple days if they're feeling up to it? I think perhaps having a couple as content drives would be a good idea. Perhaps Sharpclaw, Harveymoon, and Waspwhisker? There's one fairly major SkyClan cat, and two more minor ones. I never said to do all of them- that would be madness, even by my standards, but perhaps pick a couple and shift the focus. Or, maybe pick more than one cat, so... say, Sandstorm, Sharpclaw, and Owl Eyes? And you wouldn't have to go through all 111 articles. A fair bit of them are already fairly good (I've written quite a few of them myself), and you could pick out the top two or three that are in need of the most work. —Jayce(00:55, 8/22/2014)
I agree with Sharpclaw being one. I have SkyClan's Destiny, so I can help out with that part of it, which goes for any SC cat. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 12:59 AM, Fri Aug 22, 2014
Multiple articles are interesting, but I'm more peaked at the idea of having an article already silver being the content drive. There's already an incentive for Sharpclaw, Harveymoon, and Waspwhisker because they're still bronze. Yet, focusing on a character that needs work that is already silver gives a bit of incentive in completing the content drive. Atelda insert vague subtext here 04:31, August 22, 2014 (UTC)
Even with only three articles, I think it would be daunting to other users and still hard to do. -Ducksauce 18:07, August 23, 2014 (UTC)
Two of those three cats are rather minor and wouldn't take long for them to be expanded, especially in Harveymoon's case. If we're doing singular cats, though, Sharpclaw still stands as my choice. (trying to get more attention for this.) Queen Beebs 01:28, September 1, 2014 (UTC)
well, I don't think it would be best, but I do think that a few cats would be better than a whole group of cats. oh, also, waspwhisker's silver already. -Ducksauce 02:35, September 8, 2014 (UTC)
we need some more opinions guys -Ducksauce 02:39, September 18, 2014 (UTC)
I think more than one or two articles would be a bit intimidating for those of us who can't write an article or large section all in a few days with it still being quality work. Any more would be too much in my opinion. With the other projects already having fairly large content drives, a smaller content drive might be a better choice until the other two projects have gotten farther into their current content drives. I like the idea of improving an existing silver article and support Sandstorm for that. Bird Squash one, squash two, squash three... 03:55, September 18, 2014 (UTC)
okay, since there's been no comments for quite awhile, and we're pretty much split. I've decided to open a forum vote on this, so we can finally reach a consensus. -Ducksauce 22:34, October 22, 2014 (UTC)
Injuries
I'd like to suggest adding spoilered injuries into the trivia for cats such as Brightheart, Cinderpelt, or One-eye to name a few. These cats tend to have plenty of descriptions of their injuries that we could write a sentence or two about them for the sake of reference. There's really nowhere else reliable that has them listed and we could easily cite them. It would make it easier for artist or fanfiction writers to describe the cats accurately, and it's in the trivia so its completely within our spoiler rule. If describing their injuries is something that would gross people out we can always put them in a dropdown, but I still think it would be a handy tool for people looking into it so they don't have to search through the books. -Rustle it takes a leap of faith3:18 Thu Sep 11 2014
I'd support this, and honestly, I never got why we didn't put it in the description. Yes it's spoilers, but the charart shows it and the spoiler tag could always be moved up. -Ducksauce 03:20, September 11, 2014 (UTC)
More comments please guys~ -Ducksauce 23:05, October 18, 2014 (UTC)
I also support this. I've never understood why this couldn't be in the description with the charart showing the injury. Bird Squash one, squash two, squash three... 23:36, October 18, 2014 (UTC)
I wouldn't mind just moving the spoiler tag to the top of the page and just adding the injuries. It's not like they're not constantly called this, whether it be in the allegiances, official art, or even by the authors themselves. Plus, it's obvious when it comes to Brightheart and Briarlight especially- their chararts are a dead giveaway. Moving the spoiler tag seems to be the best idea to me- otherwise we're going against our own spoiler rule by having these injuries in our chararts. —Jayce(20:05, 10/19/2014)
I would support this. First the injuries belong to the descreption of a cat and then sometimes not just the picture can spoil. Sometimes the can the Affliation spoil too. And yes sometimes this section is over the spoiler tag. And if I'm with mobile on the hole box is over the spoiler tag. And this spoiled me from time to time too. Sorrelclaw (talk) 06:01, October 23, 2014 (UTC)
I support this too. As stated befor, nearly everything on the page could give out a spoiler anyway, which includes the box- The affiliations (as mentioned by sorrelclaw) or cause-of-death, the family section for cats like Jayfeather, Hollyleaf, and Lionblaze, even the name of the page gives very minor name spoilers sometimes. It's not hard to just move the spoiler tag up and actually include the injuries on the page- it's part of their description, it should be added. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 14:11, October 23, 2014 (UTC)
Sagewhisker
So I worked on the Yellowfang's Secret part of Sagewhisker's page, but I'm not sure if I got enough information. If someone would be so kind as to give it a read-through and tell me in I'm missing anything big, I would love you forever. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 9:21 PM, Sun Sep 28, 2014
Hello? User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 4:26 PM, Sun Oct 5, 2014
Could I possibly get a little feedback, or should I just go ahead and remove the stub tags? User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 10:39 PM, Tue Oct 14, 2014
It could be expanded far more - if memory serves me right, she has 15 pages of mentions in YS. Try going back to see for more. Queen Beebs 22:42, October 14, 2014 (UTC)
Okay, I'll try to work on it sometime this week. Thanks :) User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 11:15 PM, Sat Oct 18, 2014
She does indeed have quite a few mentions in Yellowfang's Secret. While this is up, and since you asked for comments, perhaps consider expanding her section for The Ultimate Guide, since she does have a page all her own, and add a few more quotes from YS. —Jayce(05:29, 10/21/2014)
Join?
Could I join, please? Sorrelclaw (talk) 16:24, October 5, 2014 (UTC)
Please read guidelines and FAQ. Welcome! -Ducksauce 23:01, October 18, 2014 (UTC)
Joining?
Can I join the project please? Stealthfire star (talk) 03:39, October 10, 2014 (UTC)
Please read guidelines and FAQ. Welcome! -Ducksauce 23:03, October 18, 2014 (UTC)
Join Request
May I join this project? Tiger Sunny days 18:30, October 10, 2014 (UTC)
Please read guidelines and FAQ. Welcome! -Ducksauce 23:03, October 18, 2014 (UTC)
Really tho...
Hey guys! I haven't been able to read the books or even participate in this project. My interest is evaporating and I feel someone else would be better suited as deputy. Schönen Dank. C: Atelda insert vague subtext here 01:58, October 13, 2014 (UTC)
sorry to see you go, but thanks for being such a great seniow warrior, deputy, and leader of the project! -Ducksauce 15:08, October 19, 2014 (UTC)
Reedshine ~ Silver Nomination
Not much to put for her, soo. Comments? Queen Beebs 15:15, October 19, 2014 (UTC)
Is she mentioned in TUG? -Ducksauce 19:59, October 19, 2014 (UTC)
Nope, actually. Amber went and checked for me earlier, and she couldn't even find a mention of her. Queen Beebs 20:01, October 19, 2014 (UTC)
The 'family' section is formatted wrong and is missing a lot of characters- remember, Shellheart is Reedshine's grandson, and we need all of that. Also make sure to update the status template with the character names- I went and added those last night. She also needs the family tree, but those are a pain in the butt to format (I even have issues and I'm probably one of the more experienced users with wikicode here) so that could probably be worked on later. —Jayce(20:09, 10/19/2014)
Got 'em all. Anything else? Queen Beebs 22:43, October 19, 2014 (UTC)
Pouncetail ~ Silver Nomination
Fun, fun, fun. Comments? Queen Beebs 15:27, October 19, 2014 (UTC)
CBV? -Ducksauce 00:45, October 24, 2014 (UTC)
Scarlet ~ Silver Nomination
I like her. Comments? Queen Beebs 15:35, October 19, 2014 (UTC)
CBV? -Ducksauce 00:45, October 24, 2014 (UTC)
Patchkit_(TC) ~ Silver nomination
So I think this is my first nomination... IDK. Comments? Amber The One and Only17:32 Sun Oct 19
The grammar in The Ultimate Guide appears to be a bit confusing, and it needs to written in present tense (I think?). The family tree is also missing and needs to be added, and I believe Shellheart's line (going from him to current) would also need to be added since Patchkit and Appledusk and Reedshine's kits are all related due to sharing the same father. —Jayce(20:11, 10/19/2014)
yes, articles need to be written in present tense. -Ducksauce 01:02, October 20, 2014 (UTC)
New Deputy
Hey all, with 'teldy resigning I've decided that Bbun will be the next deputy of PC! Congrats Beebs! -Ducksauce 19:53, October 19, 2014 (UTC)
Hopekit - Silver Nomination
that's all i can find. comments? (anyone else think her name should be sunkit or shadowkit from arti's fanfic on wfw?) -Ducksauce 20:10, October 19, 2014 (UTC)
Hmm, she was mentioned in Secrets of the Clans, so add that in, as her sibling as that. Queen Beebs 20:12, October 19, 2014 (UTC)
Can you edit the family tree to change the two unknown females to Hopekit and Wishkit? Other than that, I see nothing off the top of my head...but maybe add a quote if possible about Yellowfang seeing her daughters in StarClan? I know that's mentioned in Yellowfang's Secret. —Jayce(20:13, 10/19/2014)
Done, and I added a quote from SotC because I thought it fit better in the page. c: -Ducksauce 20:33, October 19, 2014 (UTC)
I think there is a little mistake in the last sentence of the Yellowfang's Secret part. It have to be "She" and not "SHe". Sorrelclaw (talk) 06:38, October 20, 2014 (UTC)
fixed, thanks c: -Ducksauce 20:21, October 20, 2014 (UTC)
Wishkit - Silver Nomination
i wish these kits would have survived. comments? -Ducksauce 20:34, October 19, 2014 (UTC)
CBV? -Ducksauce 00:46, October 24, 2014 (UTC)
Webster - Silver Nomination
His name is A+. Comments? I highly doubt there are any personality quotes. I've read Bramblestar's Storm at least three times now and this section more than I care to admit. —Jayce(05:23, 10/21/2014)
Riga - Silver Nomination
Let's get these pages up to silver because I know we can do it. Same as Webster- there aren't really any quotes and Riga doesn't even speak really. —Jayce(05:23, 10/21/2014)
I think you could add the quote that is the main quote of Ziggy's page because it says the same about Riga as about Ziggy. Sorrelclaw (talk) 15:48, October 21, 2014 (UTC)
Hmm, fair enough. I've added that to his page, then. —Jayce(16:01, 10/21/2014)
O'Hara - Silver Nomination
I see the reference with his name omg. Comments? Looks good to me imho. —Jayce(05:23, 10/21/2014)