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Buzzardstar (Star) - Approved

Buzzardstar.star Phew! Hard cat to do, as I am not that good at texture. I should have the color hex codes soon. Suggestions for improvement for Buzzardstar? Knight Chasing after gold mines 00:10, March 13, 2013 (UTC)

Beautiful like diamonds in the sky maybey lighten the belly and face-neck ish shading? Bramble (talk) 03:58, March 13, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. Pretty~ david ✌️ 04:26, March 13, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thanks! Blurred haunch shading, then lightened it along with the face and neck. Also forgot the lighter color along the bottom of the tail, so I added that in. Knight Chasing after gold mines 23:07, March 13, 2013 (UTC)

I honestly can't find anything wrong with this. CBA? -Whiskey our freedom's just a loan 01:46, March 14, 2013 (UTC)

Approved. Jayce team rowlet < 15:54, 3/15/2013 >

Jagged Peak (Ki) ~ Approved

Jagged Peak.kit Alrighty, here's Little Sniffles. Comments? Beebs 05:12, March 9, 2013 (UTC)

I am in love with the facial stripes <3333 Maybe blur the earpink on the right a tad?  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  16:31, 09, 03, 2013

Re-up. Thank you Mounty c:. Beebs 16:36, March 9, 2013 (UTC)

Define the tail shading a tad. -Ducksauce 19:22, March 10, 2013 (UTC)

Re-up. Beebs 19:48, March 10, 2013 (UTC)

Maybe define the shading a tad on the leg closer to the tail. david ✌️ 22:59, March 10, 2013 (UTC)

Re-up. Beebs 23:06, March 10, 2013 (UTC)

Re-up Redid the facial stripes. Beebs 01:05, March 12, 2013 (UTC)

Could you remove the stripes on his nose? It looks a tad unnatural to me. Rainlegs 01:12, March 12, 2013 (UTC)

Re-up. I saw what was the problem; they were connected to the nose! x3 Beebs 01:18, March 12, 2013 (UTC)

Maybe remove the stripes right to the side of the nose on each size, it makes him look like he's a mustached kitty. Paleggy Ship it 02:17,3/12/2013

There's nothing wrong with the stripes. It looks kinda cute, actually. -Whiskey our freedom's just a loan 04:23, March 12, 2013 (UTC)

Paleh, I'm sorry, but I must disagree as well, the stripes look fine. I really like this and can find nothing wrong with it personally, so let's just try a CBA Iveh Yo! 00:01, March 13, 2013 (UTC)

Minor thing, add/define the shading on the back foot, it looks really flat and I can't really see any shading there. Paleggy Ship it 01:15,3/13/2013

Re-up. Beebs 01:18, March 13, 2013 (UTC)

Shall we re-CBA? Jayce team rowlet < 02:17, 3/13/2013 >

Sorry to interrupt, but could you define/add some shading on the front legs and between them? -Whiskey our freedom's just a loan 01:49, March 14, 2013 (UTC)

Re-up. Let's hope that's the last upload for now. Beebs 18:19, March 14, 2013 (UTC)

I think maybe define the gap leg shading just a tiny tad more, and also on the tail~ david ✌️ 23:24, March 14, 2013 (UTC)

Re-up. Beebs 23:30, March 14, 2013 (UTC)

Shall we re-CBA? david ✌️ 23:33, March 14, 2013 (UTC)

Approved david ✌️ 23:40, March 15, 2013 (UTC)

Sky (Leader) (L) - Approved

File:Sky (leader).leader.png Here we go, the cat I've been wanting for ages upon ages! I tried something different with the shading, I tried doing fuzzy shading, and I think it still needs some work. Fire your critiques away! Iveh Yo! 00:20, March 5, 2013 (UTC)

Try defining the shading a little? Also I think you forgot his earpink. xD david ✌️ 01:51, March 5, 2013 (UTC)

It looks more mottled that furry... try making it smudge more smoothly in the direction of the fur, rather than just being fuzzy all over. Paleggy Ship it 02:15,3/5/2013

Reuploaded I didn't forget the earpink. And Paleh that's not it. I tweaked the shading a bit, but the fur texture on it flows in the direction that a cat's fur flows Iveh Yo! 05:05, March 5, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the shading, and it stills looks mottled to me. I still think that's what's causing it, but if it's not, could you please fix whatever is? Paleggy Ship it 05:17,3/5/2013

Reuploaded I just redid the fur texture. Don't think changes are showing Iveh Yo! 05:45, March 5, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded again The shading was bothering me. Screw doing furry shading, I need more practice. Iveh Yo! 06:00, March 5, 2013 (UTC)

Expand the chest and haunch highlight. Paleggy Ship it 09:17,3/5/2013

Is that some waste by the ears? ☮♞✞SorrelΩflower☠☯⛄I need Coffee!

'Re'uploaded I don't see any waste, but I slected outside the blank and cleared it on all layers. Zees better? Iveh Yo! 04:58, March 6, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the shading a touch? -Whiskey our freedom's just a loan 21:44, March 6, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded Iveh Yo! 01:27, March 7, 2013 (UTC)

I still see waste above the ears o3o Can you blur the haunch shading just a little more too?  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  01:41, 07, 03, 2013

Reuploaded Derp, yeah there was waste, it was just hard for me to see cause I'm a derp. I'm going to be at my Mom's where it's highly likely there'll be no Internet, however, if someone gives me their email I might be able to send it to there from my phone and they could upload it for me, if'n anyone's interested Iveh Yo! 17:04, March 7, 2013 (UTC)

I see some waste around it close to the lineart, plus some above the ears. Shimmer 00:36, 03/8/2013

The fur around the earpink needs to be smudged, and it's really hard edged when it gets lighter. Paleggy Ship it 05:16,3/9/2013

Smudge the pelt into the ear-pink a bit more ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 05:35, March 9, 2013 (UTC)

I think I can see waste by the part where the tail joins the bottom of the hind-quarter, by the right of the back paw. This is lovely :) ☮♞✞SorrelΩflower☠☯⛄I need Coffee!

Can you maybe darken the shading a tad just to make it less flat? That or define the unshaded areas. Mistypebble 04:12, March 12, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded Alright, is this better? And thanks for being patient and understanding about the Internet situation, you guys are awesome Iveh Yo! 22:35, March 12, 2013 (UTC)

There's a white pixel and an unshaded part(I think?) by the tail. Fix that, please? Wonderful job. Beebs 22:39, March 12, 2013 (UTC)

The white pixel is part of the lineart, and is artist's choice whether or not to fill it. Jayce team rowlet < 02:19, 3/13/2013 >

Reuploaded Yeah I'm going to leave it, sorry. Minor fixes. Iveh Yo! 16:27, March 15, 2013 (UTC)

So, we're gonna do this. CBA? although Clear Sky is a butt and doesn't deserve anything. Jayce team rowlet < 16:30, 3/15/2013 >

Approved david ✌️ 23:56, March 16, 2013 (UTC)

Petal (Ro) (Ki) - Approved

File:Petal (Ro).kit.png Kit Petal and Fox were adorable. Comments? -Whiskey our freedom's just a loan 20:51, March 13, 2013 (UTC)

The stripes on the tail seem more saturated than the others, is it meant to be like that? o3o david ✌️ 23:32, March 14, 2013 (UTC)

They're the same color as the other stripes, but they're just on there thicker. I did the same with the rogue, but it's harder to see. -Whiskey our freedom's just a loan 06:13, March 16, 2013 (UTC)

hm, CBA? david ✌️ 23:54, March 16, 2013 (UTC)

Approved david ✌️ 08:27, March 18, 2013 (UTC)

Leafstar's Mother (Star) - Approved

Leafstar&#039;s Mother.star Meh... ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 04:17, March 6, 2013 (UTC)

Make the stripes more jaggedy and less smooth (but not smudged). Paleggy Ship it 10:21,3/6/2013

Could you expand the highlights on her back and shoulders? Very pretty~ -Whiskey our freedom's just a loan 21:39, March 6, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Not sure you meant by "jaggedy" but I sharpened them ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 00:18, March 7, 2013 (UTC)

Beautiful my wife <33333 Blur or smudge the pelt into the earpink a little, love.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  01:37, 07, 03, 2013

Re-uploaded all for you, my love <33333 <cuddles with love> ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 03:38, March 7, 2013 (UTC)

Not jaggedy like sharpened but I mean... look at the stripes on the queen. It has like these bumps and such and they're not totally smooth. Jaggedy is the only way I can describe it. Has nothing to do with blurring, just with shape. Paleggy Ship it 00:55,3/8/2013

Re-uploaded ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 04:45, March 9, 2013 (UTC)

No, I said specifically not smudged, it's not the smudging that causes it, it's the shape. They shouldn't be smudged. Paleggy Ship it 05:11,3/9/2013

Re-uploaded ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 20:13, March 9, 2013 (UTC)

Make the stripes a bit darker to match. Beebs 20:17, March 9, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 20:25, March 9, 2013 (UTC)

They still look smudged... Paleggy Ship it 06:05,3/11/2013

Re-uploaded These stripes are gonna be the death of me... ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 23:26, March 11, 2013 (UTC)

Gonna sound like a broken record here, but still looks smudged and not jagged :/ Paleggy Ship it 02:18,3/12/2013

Re-uploaded ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 03:20, March 12, 2013 (UTC)

Define the unshaded parts on the paws and shoulders? -Whiskey our freedom's just a loan 04:27, March 12, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 22:51, March 12, 2013 (UTC)

This looks absolutely lovely, but I think what Paleh is getting at is that the thickness doesn't particularly go with the curves of the stripes on the back. The stripes on the queen are extremely thick when it meets the spine and then taper out unevenly like stalactites with odd angles chipped off and added to them at random and with variation thus not uniform and smooth. The other stripes should also have an angle in the middle of them as well as uneven thickness so it looks like it changes direction abruptly rather than smoothly. Atelda insert vague subtext here 01:33, March 13, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 01:05, March 14, 2013 (UTC)

The stripes on the queen seem a tad bit more blurred than these ones... not sure if that's just my eyes or not, though. Jayce team rowlet < 01:32, 3/16/2013 >

Re-uploaded ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 01:36, March 16, 2013 (UTC)

The chest shading is if flat. Add some unshaded parts in. Paleggy Ship it 09:00,3/16/2013

Re-uploaded soooo done with this charart... ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 19:59, March 16, 2013 (UTC)

I think this is beautifuuul. CBA? Splook it's a long way down. 14:22, March 17, 2013 (UTC)

Approved. Jayce team rowlet < 16:16, 3/18/2013 >

Dappled Pelt (R) ~ Approved

File:Dappled Pelt.rogue.pngComments?  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  07:11, 16, 03, 2013

dwaaww I wanted it... This absolutely gorgeous, my love. I honestly see nothing wrong. CBA? ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 16:08, March 17, 2013 (UTC)

Approved. Jayce team rowlet < 16:16, 3/18/2013 >

Hawksnow (Star) ~ Approved

Hawksnow.starok I promise I won't withdraw this one because Hawksnow <3333 david ✌️ 02:35, March 16, 2013 (UTC)

I'm not sure if this is required, but can you lighten/define the earpink please? Thistle. 05:01, March 16, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I just lightened the shading a tad. david ✌️ 06:22, March 16, 2013 (UTC)

This is stunning, Sheepy. CBA? Jayce team rowlet < 17:48, 3/17/2013 >

Approved. Jayce team rowlet < 19:45, 3/18/2013 >

Turtle Tail (Ro) ~ Approved

Turtle Tail.rogue All colors match the KP, so I'm not changing them. Comments otherwise? Jayce team rowlet < 17:14, 3/16/2013 >

Re-uploaded. Forgot to add the white chest. Jayce team rowlet < 17:22, 3/16/2013 >

The white near the eyes on the kittypet isn't as, erm, sharp. Maybe round it a bit? Wonderful job Skye! Bbunlegs 23:47, March 16, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Jayce team rowlet < 00:11, 3/17/2013 >

I think define the shading a tad. Lookin real good c: david ✌️ 23:42, March 17, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Eh, I thought it was fine, but whatever. xD Jayce team rowlet < 23:47, 3/17/2013 >

CBA? david ✌️ 08:29, March 18, 2013 (UTC)

Smudge the white tail tip juuust a bit more. Paleggy Ship it 09:46,3/18/2013

Re-uploaded. I thought it was fine. ._. Jayce team rowlet < 09:50, 3/18/2013 >

try again for a CBA? ouo david ✌️ 22:48, March 18, 2013 (UTC)

Approved. Wonderful job Cloudy! Iveh Yo! 00:16, March 20, 2013 (UTC)

Hawk Swoop (Q) ~ Approved

Hawk Swoop.queen Okay, probably gonna play with the colors a bit...but not the stripes. based 'em off one of my ginger tabbies<3 Imma redden the earpink tomorrow, 'cause gingers are a pain and I can only take so much of them in one sitting. Any other comments? Rainlegs 02:40, March 13, 2013 (UTC)

Maybe define the shading just a wee bit ^^ god damn man david ✌️ 04:26, March 13, 2013 (UTC)

I think for the most part the shading's alright, but on the haunch and face it could be defined ya. I dunno, up to leggo. Paleggy Ship it 12:02,3/13/2013

Leggo, psst. Still working on this? Jayce team rowlet < 01:42, 3/18/2013 >

Yes ahmagawd I suck XD Forgot I had this up 'till now. Reuploaded~ Rainlegs 00:56, March 19, 2013 (UTC)

CBA? ;D Paleggy Ship it 14:04,3/19/2013

Approved. Wonderful work Leggo Iveh Yo! 19:53, March 20, 2013 (UTC)

Moon Shadow (Ro) ~ Approved

Moon Shadow.rogueAlright, finally got the shading to cooperate. Comments? ShoonderpFriends are forever~ 20:14, March 17, 2013 (UTC)

Can you define the unshaded part on the tail? I love this<3 RowanOnly One Can Judge... 23:01, March 18, 2013 (UTC)

Re-ups - Thanks<3 ShoonderpFriends are forever~ 23:14, March 18, 2013 (UTC)

This is fantastic. CBA? -Whiskey our freedom's just a loan 23:07, March 19, 2013 (UTC)

Approved. Jayce team rowlet < 23:38, 3/20/2013 >

Graywing (Ro) ~ Approved

File:Graywing (WC).rogue.png I know the shading and ear is dodgy... I'll fix that later, because I don't have time right now. ☮♞✞SorrelΩflower☠☯⛄I need Coffee!

Withdrawing - God I am so sorry, I've just decided I wnat to return to Halftail. Sorry for the confusion. ☮♞✞SorrelΩflower☠☯⛄I need Coffee!

I'll take over, if I can? ShoonderpFriends are forever~ 22:32, March 11, 2013 (UTC)

Yep, don't even have to ask. Just make sure you reserve it. Mistypebble 04:10, March 12, 2013 (UTC)

If you have reserved the image, please put your image up soon. :) Iveh Yo! 16:58, March 15, 2013 (UTC)

Withdrawn. I just can't get this to look right x.x Sorry. ShoonderpFriends are forever~ 14:03, March 16, 2013 (UTC)

I'll take over, if that's good with y'all. :D Knight Chasing after gold mines 22:41, March 16, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded That ear and shading rogue blanks... Knight Chasing after gold mines 23:38, March 16, 2013 (UTC)

Heh. Blur the shading? `david ✌️ 23:55, March 16, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Knight Chasing after gold mines 00:00, March 18, 2013 (UTC)

CBA? -Whiskey our freedom's just a loan 23:30, March 19, 2013 (UTC)

Sorry to interrupt, but I think the shading could be smudged a tad to match the leader's shading. Bbunlegs 23:33, March 19, 2013 (UTC)

Erm, shading doesn't /have/ to match. Shading will look different at different times and I'm pretty sure that the shading didn't look exactly the same when he was a leader. So, Re-CBA? Appledash❤ crowfeather 01:51, March 20, 2013 (UTC)

Continuing from where original CBA was started. Approved. Jayce team rowlet < 23:38, 3/20/2013 >

Jackdaw's Cry (R) ~ Approved

Jackdaw&#039;s Cry.rogue The shading killed me? x.x Anyways, good to be back. Comments? RowanOnly One Can Judge... 21:48, March 16, 2013 (UTC)

Darken the base coat a bit? He looks dark gray. He also needs a torn ear, too. Job well done, and welcome back Rowan! ^^; Bbunlegs 21:51, March 16, 2013 (UTC)

Maybe define the shading a tad on the tail? I know tails are hard x.x Beautiful<3 And, welcome back<3 ShoonderpFriends are forever~ 02:36, March 17, 2013 (UTC)

Re-Ups^ Thanks guys. Shading Dx RowanOnly One Can Judge... 17:23, March 17, 2013 (UTC)

Re-Ups^ Forgot the torn ear. Changes being a butt :P RowanOnly One Can Judge... 17:43, March 17, 2013 (UTC)

Define the unshaded part of the tail and I think this'll be ready for CBA. david ✌️ 08:32, March 18, 2013 (UTC)

I think the shading on the legs could be defined a tad too. Jayce team rowlet < 19:42, 3/18/2013 >

Re-Ups^ Not sure about changes. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 21:02, March 18, 2013 (UTC)

CBA? david ✌️ 22:47, March 18, 2013 (UTC)

Sorry, but can you define the unshaded parts on the tail? -Ducksauce 22:52, March 18, 2013 (UTC)

Re-Ups^ RowanOnly One Can Judge... 16:41, March 19, 2013 (UTC)

CBA once more? -Whiskey our freedom's just a loan 23:23, March 19, 2013 (UTC)

Approved. Jayce team rowlet < 23:38, 3/20/2013 >

Fernpelt (Star) - Approved

Fernpelt.star A huge thank you to the wonderful Cloudy for reserving Here's Fernpelt who's lookin' gorgeous xD ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 19:38, March 18, 2013 (UTC)

You're very welcome~ The stripes seem a tad pixely. I'm not sure if that's just the style, or PS being a butt. Jayce team rowlet < 19:41, 3/18/2013 >

They're supposed to be a bit on the pixely side but not a whole lot ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 19:43, March 18, 2013 (UTC)

They're a bit too pixely.... And the chest seems really flat, add an unshaded spot? Paleggy Ship it 14:02,3/19/2013

Re-uploaded ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 15:31, March 19, 2013 (UTC)

Add a bit more shading to the chest? -Whiskey our freedom's just a loan 23:05, March 19, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 23:09, March 19, 2013 (UTC)

Honestly? It looks like it matches to me and is a grogeous piece of art. Let's try for a CBA. Excellent, Scar! Iveh Yo! 00:13, March 20, 2013 (UTC)

Approved. Jayce team rowlet < 00:45, 3/21/2013 >

Quick Water (Ro) ~ Approved

Quick Water.rogue Meh david ✌️ 08:23, March 19, 2013 (UTC)

This is just preference, but the fur looks a little pixily to me. If you want, could you smoothen it a tad? This is wonderful (and kind of reminds me of my cat!) Iveh Yo! 18:24, March 19, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks C: david ✌️ 23:52, March 19, 2013 (UTC)

She looks a little too dark to be gray and white, it looks more black and white. Lighten the gray a bit? Bbunlegs 00:18, March 20, 2013 (UTC)

Actually she's around the same sort of shade as Holloyflower, and it never specifies (as far as I know) her shade, so I think it's ok. david ✌️ 00:22, March 20, 2013 (UTC)

No, I agree with Beebs, I thought she was black and white :S Bramble (talk) 02:03, March 20, 2013 (UTC)

The color is perfectly acceptable. It looks gray and white to me, and since her shade is never specified, the darkness of the gray is artist's choice. Jayce team rowlet < 02:06, 3/20/2013 >

I'm sorry but I must agree with them, it looks near black. Darker than cats specifically described as near black. I think it could be lightened just a bit. Paleggy Ship it 02:08,3/20/2013

Re-uploaded. I lightened the texture some, but the base is fine. It's about Yellowfang's colour if not slightly lighter, and the other bits are shading. david ✌️ 02:18, March 20, 2013 (UTC)

This be cool. CBA? Jayce team rowlet < 18:30, 3/20/2013 >

Approved o3o david ✌️

Bumble (KP) - Approved

Bumble.kittypet Austria collar C: So um yeah. I like doing kittypets. As for the tortoiseshell part... eh. Splook it's a long way down. 01:58, March 17, 2013 (UTC)

The paws look a little grey. This is cute Splooky Raven Chicks = Trouble 03:12, March 17, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks c: Splook it's a long way down. 04:18, March 17, 2013 (UTC)

blur the earpink a wee bit -steals- david ✌️ 02:30, March 18, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. C: Splook it's a long way down. 22:03 Mon Mar 18 22:03, March 18, 2013 (UTC)

CBA plz david ✌️ 05:12, March 19, 2013 (UTC)

Sorry but the pattern doesn't seem very dappled. More brindled than anything else. Could you make it more dapple-y? Paleggy Ship it 14:07,3/19/2013

Reuploaded. I'd rather not redo the entire pattern, so I added dapples to both the tan and black. Better? Splook it's a long way down. 00:45 Thu Mar 21

Comments before approval? Appledash❤ crowfeather 01:12, March 21, 2013 (UTC)

approved. Appledash❤ crowfeather 01:37, March 22, 2013 (UTC)

Tansypaw (Star) ~ Approved

Tansypaw.star Wee, a new Vicky's facebook answer from a month ago said all CJ cats were SkyClan ancestors(well, the SkyClan ones, at least.) Comments? Beebs 00:02, March 16, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shading. Also...the color seems to be a bit off. Did you tint the shading? Jayce team rowlet < 06:23, 3/16/2013 >

Re-up. Yeah, I tinted the shading a tad. Bbunlegs 14:27, March 16, 2013 (UTC)

Maybe define the tail shading just a wee bit. david ✌️ 01:34, March 18, 2013 (UTC)

Re-up. Bbunlegs 01:39, March 18, 2013 (UTC)

Add an unshaded spot to the chest, it looks really flat. Paleggy Ship it 05:08,3/19/2013

Re-up. Ahh I don't like this unshaded spot but oh well x.x Bbunlegs 14:53, March 19, 2013 (UTC)

Round out the face shading a little, maybe. david ✌️ 00:20, March 20, 2013 (UTC)

Re-up. Bbunlegs 00:25, March 20, 2013 (UTC)

I guess we'll try for a CBA on this. david ✌️ 23:21, March 20, 2013 (UTC)

Approved david ✌️ 02:12, March 22, 2013 (UTC)

Stoatfur (Star) - Approved

Stoatfur (CJ).star Impossible to match pattern is flipping impossible to match. Ffff. This is the best I could do in such a different position. x.x But ah well, wheeee Stoat~ Comments? Paleggy Ship it 14:00,3/19/2013

Can you define the unshaded part on the tail? Love the pattern oh my o: Mistypebble 21:07, March 20, 2013 (UTC)

Not really, trust me without the markings there it's very defined, but it goes kinda wonky when you put dark on the unshaded part and white on the shaded part. Happened on the warrior tail too. Not much I can to about it, sorry. Paleggy Ship it 01:34,3/21/2013

CBA? Jayce team rowlet < 02:12, 3/21/2013 >

Approved david ✌️ 02:12, March 22, 2013 (UTC)

Acornpaw (A) ~ Approved

Acornpaw.apprentice lol this sucks david ✌️ 05:07, March 13, 2013 (UTC)

He's sweet! I think there's some black lineart on the right corner of his mouth - it looks like he's chewing something. Remove?☮♞✞SorrelΩflower☠☯⛄I need Coffee!

I don't think that's lineart. I think it's just how the texture was smudged. Jayce team rowlet < 18:36, 3/13/2013 >

Re-uplaoded. Wasn't the lineart since I put it on a different layer, just some stray texture. xD david ✌️ 22:08, March 13, 2013 (UTC)

Could you soften the texture a little? -Whiskey our freedom's just a loan 01:41, March 14, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded o david ✌️ 02:36, March 14, 2013 (UTC)

Maybe define the tail shading a wee bit? ermegersh trolly <33 Beebs 23:23, March 14, 2013 (UTC)

So I'm withdrawing this....one day he'll get his image david ✌️ 00:09, March 15, 2013 (UTC)

GIMP is working, I will take over owo Thistle. 00:14, March 15, 2013 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded *shot* I never realized how hard the color brown is to make not gross. Thistle. 01:29, March 15, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shading a tad. Beebs 01:30, March 15, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I just noticed some waste, I'll get that on the next re-upload. Thistle. 03:41, March 15, 2013 (UTC)

He seems greenish. Mayhap make him toward more red/orange. david ✌️ 08:51, March 15, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thistle. 22:40, March 15, 2013 (UTC)

Color in the nose. Looks cute c: Splook it's a long way down. 18:37 Sun Mar 17 18:37, March 17, 2013 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Thistle. 02:05, March 20, 2013 (UTC)

I honestly can't see anything wrong with this. Let's try a CBA ^^ Iveh Yo! 02:49, March 20, 2013 (UTC)

Seems a bit golden, move it just a taaad closer to the red on the color wheel/bar. Paleggy Ship it 03:00,3/20/2013

Re-uploaded Thistle. 03:05, March 20, 2013 (UTC)

Comments before approval, anyone? Jayce team rowlet < 01:14, 3/21/2013 >

Approved david ✌️ 02:13, March 22, 2013 (UTC)

Softpaw blanks- Approved

File:Maleshortsoftpaw.pngFile:Malelongsoftpaw.pngFemaleshortsoftpawFemalelongsoftpawAlright, since I won't be on later tonight, and I was told they should be on here today, here's the short-haired male blank. As wit blanks in the past, I will perfect this one first, then the others will be an easy lineart tweak. Iveh Yo! 20:51, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

There's some thinner lineart by the tip of the tail. (I can't help with the other stuff, 'cause I know nothing about it. lol, sorry for providing useless help.) Jayce team rowlet < 21:02, 9/18/2012 >

Can you make the back leg go behind the front leg on the side nearer to the right? I hope I make sense, I'm horrible at wording things owo.Boos Dinosaurs on a Spaceship! 21:18, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the blank a little bot smaller, and the nose more centered in the face? Also, make the tail just a little tiny bit longer. Beautiful, Ivy <3 Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 21:31, September 18, 2012 (UTC)


Cats have the most awesome anatomy while running. 8D Anyway, first thing is, if an animal has their legs that far forward while running, chances are both their front paws will not be on the ground. I would recommend lifting at least one amd giving it a wrist joint. Second, it's chest is way too large. Cats' ribcages end almost right with the shoulders, so that far shoulder is going to be much more prominent, the chest flatter, and the nearer shoulder larger. I would also recommend the cats head to our left slightly so that it's neck will appear longer and give you more room for the shoulders. It also might be slightly too large. The back legs are also off. Take the knee joint and bump it up higher. The hock will also be much shorter, so that the lineart for the foot is almost behind foreleg, and the far leg should be farther right and up. Here are the references I was using for it: 1, 2, 3. -Whiskey our freedom's just a loan 21:34, September 18, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe lift the tail up a bit higher on the flank and make it a touch longer. The face seems to bulge a bit one this <-- side, but the eyes seems to indicate a flatter, more triangular face. Maybe lift the father ear up a bit more and make this --> side's whisker's bend go down instead of up. ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 00:29, September 20, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, I'm not a cat analogy person but the thing with the hind paw on our right side, it looks odd. Mainly because with the other paw, they just seem different. The shape of the paw is odd and I think it looks... upside down I guess XDD. Well, mainly as the paw comes to a point and the paw shape doesn't seem... cat like. I know, I am also terrible at explaining things. Raineh Has returned :D 22:21, September 21, 2012 (UTC)

Uh, well, I'm not really an expert at these things, but the head seems to bulge a little. And the lower jaw seems to indicate a straight-up head, while the rest seems to be tilted. Dazzy 01:01, September 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried D: Iveh Yo! 01:19, September 22, 2012 (UTC)

Make the ear on the right come <---this was a bit? The head looks a bit too long at the top owo

Ivy, you want me to redline for anatomy? Shelly For a limited time only 05:48, September 22, 2012 (UTC)

Make the neck longer and move it slightly higher. Round and smooth out the back and move the far hind leg even furthur under the body. Also, move that jaw line closer to the rest of the head. You also might make that near front paw a little smaller. You're doing awesome, Ivy. -Whiskey our freedom's just a loan 15:00, September 22, 2012 (UTC)

I'm no expert, but could you smooth out the lineart? Amazing job<3333  ☯Stoneclaw☯ 16:17,9/22/2012  

Can you fix the right ear's (our right) lineart? Where the earpink normally goes that's a bumped line where the ear's actual lineart connects. Hope this makes sense xD. Silverhmm 22:46, September 22, 2012 (UTC)

Not knocking you guys, but redlines help me the most, I'm just a visual kind of person. I'd really appreciate one Shelly :) Iveh Yo! 00:56, September 23, 2012 (UTC)

Alright, I'll get that done asap. Shelly For a limited time only 06:34, September 23, 2012 (UTC)

Alright, I'm sorry, I couldn't redline. But I was able to work from your pose with a slight shift to look more natural. Feel free to use this or not. I think it's angry at something... 20120923200241!Shellyheart.png Shelly For a limited time only 20:04, September 23, 2012 (UTC)

Wow, Ivy, this is beautiful <3. Could you try to make the tail a bit longer and make the head a bit more circular? Feather 17:20, September 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded How about this? I feel that the back leg looks kind of funky but I tried :P Iveh Yo! 00:39, September 29, 2012 (UTC)

There's a spot on the tail where the lineart's thinner than the rest. Fix it, please? Or if it's supposed to be like that, ignore me. Jayce team rowlet < 00:45, 9/29/2012 >

I'm no anatomy expert, but the ear closest to us looks a bit...weird? o.oPikachushinxthe power of the past 02:06, September 29, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, it does look a little longer and more circular than the other one. Maybe make it straighter and shorter and angle it back a little more.      CharlieLet's go to Candy Mountain 02:08, September 29, 2012 (UTC)

I hope you don't mind I did a redline of this, although I'm not officially added back yet.

File:Redline.pngI couldn't actually see the redline on top, so I moved it over. Basically, the legs need to be thinner and shorter, and the head rounder. Also, the shape of the hindleg is a little awkward. Darkhallows call me maybe 07:22, September 29, 2012 (UTC)

Elongate the neck, too. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 20:29, September 30, 2012 (UTC)

The neck's fine, Storm. It's on an angle so he wouldn't have much of a neck anyway. oblivionAudience? 21:25, September 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I...tried XD Is all I can say. Iveh Yo! 05:05, October 2, 2012 (UTC)

Make the ear close to us less round, and the shape of the back foot close too us still seems a bit awkwardly shaped imo. Berry Dear Sweets! 05:08 Tue Oct 2

Here's a redline I made using one of the links Breeze gave as reference. Hope it helps. Paleggy Ship it 06:38, October 2, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe make the Softpaw a tad skinnier. Giratina_orig.gif Crystals over Sparks Dialga_Sprite.gif 03:15, October 3, 2012 (UTC)

Make the head a touch bigger ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 03:27, October 3, 2012 (UTC)

The legs are still too long and wide. --Đarkɦallows 06:38, October 5, 2012 (UTC)

There seems to be a small break in the tail(near the base), can you either smooth it out or thicken the lineart there? Mistypebble   20:31, October 6, 2012 (UTC)

You still working on these? ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 00:44, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I am, I've just been having complications with it. My sincerest apologies :( Iveh Yo!  01:04, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

The front paws are still a bit too big, can you shrink them a bit? Mistypebble   19:37, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

Bump the closest eye up higher and smooth out the back. -Whiskey our freedom's just a loan 20:32, October 11, 2012 (UTC)

The front left (my left) paw should be facing the front a bit more. It's on quite an awkward angle. MillieIt's all black magic! 02:07, October 12, 2012 (UTC)

The face looks...How do I put this? Flat-ishPikachushinxthe power of the past 14:58, October 14, 2012 (UTC)

In my opinion, the face is fine. With the pose that it is in, the head would be angled that way, making the face appear that it looks kind of 'flattish'. Mistypebble   01:20, October 16, 2012 (UTC)

Still working? Appledash❤ crowfeather 17:56, October 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'm trying, I really am, the anatomy just frustrates me at times because at this angle, it's difficult to get perfect Iveh Yo!  02:51, October 25, 2012 (UTC)

The front paw on this<--- side is still at an awkward angle. Could you please fix that? :3 Berry Dear Sweets! 02:57 Thu Oct 25

I'm going to feel horrible for critiquing this, because I'm Horrid at cat anatomy, and I wouldn't be able to do any better.  Also, if I repeat anything from up there^ I did Not mean to.  I would remove the line on the back, the legs look too thick, the paws I don't think should be wider than the legs themselves, the tail is crooked, as is the back leg closest to us, and to me the neck looks to short. --RavenBeeeeeees 18:08, October 25, 2012 (UTC)

Smooth out the back a little more and move the "foot" on the hind leg back a little. -Whiskey our freedom's just a loan 00:28, October 30, 2012 (UTC)

It's been a week with no update and over a month and a half since the initial upload... Sorry, Ivy, I know you're trying and your blank is cool, but I think someone else should finish this. Keep the pose but get it wrapped up. Shelly For a limited time only 16:23, November 2, 2012 (UTC)

I've really been trying, but with the redlines being so different and not entirely getting it, it's just been really difficult. I don't want to give this up, but I guess if the project agrees, I can send my file over to someone new. :/ Iveh Yo!  19:02, November 2, 2012 (UTC)

Well I've asked cloudy multiple times what would happen about time limits and such on this, and though an agreements never been made, but I personally think Ivy should have 2 months on this, and if it's not approved by then, someone else could take it, keeping the same pose. It's a blank, it should have a bit more time than normal images. However you would have to keep uploading it Ivy. I certainly wouldn't mind taking over, but I personally think Ivy should get until two months are up before it goes up for grabs to anyone, unless she chooses to withdraw it early for any reason. Paleggy Ship it 05:37, November 3, 2012 (UTC)

I agree with Paleh. Two months is good; twice as long as a normal charart. However, I think Ivy should choose who the blanks get passed off to, since they were hers. I also agree with keeping the same pose, since /that's/ why these blanks were picked. Jayce team rowlet < 20:00, 11/3/2012 >

Alright. Well, I did try and fix them up again, but I really need help on the paws. They are giving me the fits, no matter how much I re-shape them XD Iveh Yo!  01:32, November 4, 2012 (UTC)

Try making them more round, especially the one that is off the ground. -Whiskey our freedom's just a loan 21:33, November 7, 2012 (UTC)

You still working on this, Ivy? ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 04:10, November 11, 2012 (UTC)

I /am, I didn't see the comment. I'm unable to shape the paws right and I am asking for help to get them right, I don't think I worded it correctly but I need a redline over my image on how the paws should look since I can't make them righ. Iveh Yo!  06:04, November 11, 2012 (UTC)

Oops. Sorry. I didn't see your comment. Here, I made some redlines. It might be a bit stylized but I hope it helps. -Whiskey our freedom's just a loan 02:33, November 16, 2012 (UTC)

If you give it up, can I take over? Crystalheart! ❄ 20:48, November 17, 2012 (UTC)

First of all, Ivy's supposed to pick who to give it to when time's up, not just give it to whoever asks. Second, it's quite rude to ask to take over something before it's declined. Please don't do that. Paleggy Ship it 14:31, November 18, 2012 (UTC)

However, it has been two months, as agreed. Shelly For a limited time only 03:39, November 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I used Breeze's redline pretty heavily, I hope this does it. If not, I already have someone in mind who can take over. I'm about at my wit's end with this lol Iveh Yo!  03:48, November 19, 2012 (UTC)

The head seems a little flat. Try rounding it out a little, move the closer ear forward, and make the muzzle stick out a bit more. -Whiskey our freedom's just a loan 17:44, November 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Iveh Yo!  22:38, November 23, 2012 (UTC)

Can you maybe shrink the (our) right ear a bit? And the head looks a bit small for the body. (though that could just be me, I'm not good with this whole anatomy stuff) Mistypebble   22:14, November 27, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried making the head bigger, only by a few pixils. Iveh Yo!  21:51, November 28, 2012 (UTC)

The head still seems a little flat. Maybe make it more round? Crystalheart! ❄ 21:57, November 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Iveh Yo!  02:27, November 29, 2012 (UTC)

It's ten days past the two month mark. I'm not trying to be mean, I swear, but someone needs to wrap this up. Shelly For a limited time only 04:21, November 29, 2012 (UTC)

Make the face flater now, please. x3 -Ducksauce 00:00, November 30, 2012 (UTC)

The muzzle needs to look a little shorter in my opinion, but I don't know anatomy... xD --.foxderp talk to the fox creature 01:07, November 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I can only do so much before I'm right back to where I started before I redid the head. Iveh Yo!  04:54, November 30, 2012 (UTC)

Try to make the muzzle a bit smaller and straighten out the side of the chin. -Whiskey our freedom's just a loan 22:54, November 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Iveh Yo!  00:18, December 1, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry I sound so pushy, but could you push the lower jaw back and kinda smooth out the top jaw on <-- side? -Whiskey our freedom's just a loan 01:17, December 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Iveh Yo!  01:33, December 1, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the muzzle a bit more square and make the forepaw that's up a bit less splayed. Don't make the due-claw/toe pop out so much and maybe round the left hind paw a touch rounder/define the toes ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 04:47, December 1, 2012 (UTC)

The muzzle looks like the jaw is sticking out.. fix that, please. And smoothen out the tail a bit. Crystalheart! ❄ 05:05, December 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Iveh Yo!  01:46, December 2, 2012 (UTC)

This blank is beautiful, but it's a bit large. Maybe shrink it a tad? Crystalheart! ❄ 06:31, December 2, 2012 (UTC)

Erm, I don't mean to be a hassle or anything, but it's been well over two months, nearing three now. Shouldn't this be passed on to whoever Ivy chooses now? Paleggy Ship it 09:28, December 3, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, Ivy, but I got to agree with Paleh. :/ -Whiskey our freedom's just a loan 23:43, December 3, 2012 (UTC)

But nobody has said anything else about any other flaws, if you see any other flaws then I guess decline this :/ But I'm only going to pass this on to whomever won't redo the blank. Iveh Yo!  01:19, December 4, 2012 (UTC)

Well I'm sorry but yes, the anatomy's still off on the legs and paws, and the whole blank needs to be shrunk, and the muzzle looks a bit... off *can't describe it* Sorry Ivy. Paleggy Ship it 01:51, December 4, 2012 (UTC)

You know what? I'm done. Whoever is willing to work with this instead of redoing it, leave me a message. I thought I was so close to getting this approved, but I'm not letting two months of hard work be erased. Iveh Yo!  05:09, December 4, 2012 (UTC)

Ok, I'm sorry I got hissy there, but all I;ve wanted was to get these blanks completed, and now I can't, and it's just really frustrating, please understand how difficult this is for me. When the prey hunter blanks were being made by Night Shine and she left, Iceheart finished them for her, and I just want to be given that same courtesy. Iveh Yo!  08:10, December 4, 2012 (UTC)

I agree with that, Ivy. I think that if a user wants to take on the blanks, they should work with what's already given. It's not fair to you, and since others have gotten that same privilege, so will you. Plus, I voted for these because of the stance, and since that's what got picked, that's what'll stay. It's unfair to you, and to everyone who voted for your blanks. Jayce team rowlet < 18:38, 12/4/2012 >

Agreed. Ivy won the contest fair and square, her blanks were chosen to be put up for approval. That's what going to stay up for approval unless Ivy herself decides to take them down. There has never been, to my knowledge, a time limit on new blanks, and even if we decide to impose one in the future, that shouldn't apply to this. Ivy keeps the blanks. End of story. ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 00:56, December 6, 2012 (UTC)

Um, Scar that's not what any of us were saying... Cloudy was just saying that whoever gets the blank shouldn't redo it. We decided on a time limit of two months like a month ago. :/ Paleggy Ship it 07:06, December 7, 2012 (UTC)

Well, even if Scar was off topic, I'm inclined to agree with her. We created this time limit on blanks in the middle of Ivy working on these- it shouldn't apply to her. On any future blanks, then, I'm sure, yes, it will apply, but for these, no. Ivy should be able to continue work on these, like every other user in the past who's made a new blank. Rainlegs 22:09, December 7, 2012 (UTC)

Leggo's got a good point, and I'm inclined to agree with her. Had we decided this before the blanks were posted, I would have to argue the point, however, that's not what we did. Since they were decided right in the middle of her posting them, it's hardly fair at all. So, I think Ivy should be allowed to keep them unless she so wishes to pass them on to another user to work on them. I didn't even /think/ of that. Thanks for pointing it out, Leggo. Jayce team rowlet < 22:21, 12/8/2012 >

Well, if that's what you guys want to do, then I will continue to work on them. However, since there have been a lot of comments on this, might I suggest we archive them to save room? Iveh Yo!  02:47, December 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded How's this? I reconstructed the mouth and eyebrow bone, gave the paws a more defined shape, and made the top of the hind foot less curvy. Also, shrank the blank more, it really should make the cat about the size of the apprentice blanks. Iveh Yo!  18:38, December 11, 2012 (UTC)

Hmm... should there be a gap in where the tail meets the rest of the body? Like, kinda how Briarlight's warrior image is? (again, not real good with this kind of thing. ._.) Jayce team rowlet < 18:42, 12/11/2012 >

Cloudy's right there should be a gap but you shouldn't erase the whole line just like 2/3's of it or so, and when you do you'll need to make the top of the tail blend a little bit better with back or the lineart will kind of dip in wierd, I think.  Also, on our left, the muzzle looks like it extends to far out, you need to start curving it in closer to the face. Shimmer 00:24, December 12, 2012 (UTC)

-insert join.me session advice here just for the sake of it being on record- ouo Paleggy Ship it 06:03, December 12, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ok, I gotta give major major MAJOR credit to Paleh's join.me session, and every detail was looked upon until she couldn't find anything else to critique. 8D Iveh Yo!  06:48, December 12, 2012 (UTC)

Amazing! The only thing I can find fault with is that the far hind leg seems to be overall missing. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 14:21, December 12, 2012 (UTC)

It's there, Blue. It's just the position of the cat, I can see a bit of white where you can fill it in~ Canadia~ Sirius is hiding... 23:19, December 12, 2012 (UTC)

I think we've butchered this honestly, but perhaps that's just me. This is a completely optional choice for you to do whatever craziness that follows Ivy. Elongate the body, bring the front paw closest to us more forward (<-- that a way), perhaps move the hind-legs back just a tad, put the hind-leg paw down more, and lower the chest area and put a little angle at the front of it. Atelda insert vague subtext here 23:36, December 12, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry teldy but I have to disagree with most of that. The front paws are that far back when cats are running in this position, and it really helps to show movement, rather than just a cat floating there. And the chest probably wouldn't show too much on that.

But the back could be arched a biiit more, and the front paws drunk a bit. Maybe round the head a bit more too (I know that goes against what I said earleir, but...) Paleggy Ship it 06:07, December 13, 2012 (UTC)

Make the paws a little rounder, even out the eyes, make the body larger and the legs slightly shorter. Rotate the hock on the closes hind leg up a little bit. Make the haunch bigger and probably bend to go up higher. And I have to agree that the cat's raised paw is too far back. -Whiskey our freedom's just a loan 06:21, December 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Iveh Yo!  04:08, December 16, 2012 (UTC)

The front left (our right) foot looks a lot larger than the rest of the feet. Also, thin out the tail a little? Unwanted IℓℓusionBack to start again. 22:48, December 17, 2012 (UTC)

Move both ears forward slightly, and reduce how pronounced the stop on its face is. -Whiskey our freedom's just a loan 22:57, December 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I don't get what you mean by the stop of the face, my apologies. Do you mean where the cheek bone is, the nose, or the chin? Iveh Yo!  06:41, December 20, 2012 (UTC)

If I remember correctly, the stop is where the muzzle and forehead meet. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 15:55, December 20, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, it is. Do you think you could make the ears a touch more triangular, also? -Whiskey our freedom's just a loan 00:13, December 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Iveh Yo!  08:03, December 28, 2012 (UTC)

The front leg on <--this side looks a bit awkward the way it's bent. And the paw's a bit peculiar too. Berry Dear Sweets! 08:06 Fri Dec 28

I suggest moving the ear (on --> side) closer to the face since it looks a tad out of place. --Starry~angelfase~ 04:08, December 29, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried :P Iveh Yo!  03:51, December 31, 2012 (UTC)

The way it is now, it looks almost cartoon-y. Shrink the ears, elongate the body just a tad, and thin out that bottom paw. oblivionAudience? 06:36, December 31, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, and elongate the legs and round the back. oblivionAudience? 06:43, December 31, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded which paw? Iveh Yo!  21:21, January 5, 2013 (UTC)

I don't know if I am allowed to comment, but the mouth on the left side, it looks a little odd. You should let it come up more instead of going down.Gummybearkiller (talk) 21:55, January 6, 2013 (UTC)

The hind leg looks a bit too long, maybe give some more differentiation between the hip/flank and the actual leg? And show the pull on the shoulder muscle on the foreleg closest to us. Maybe scoot the head forward to make room for a bit of neck and shoulders? Maybe give some volume to the farthest forepaw, it looks a little flat. ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 00:43, January 8, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'm kind of unsure what you mean in the first part Iveh Yo!  06:03, January 10, 2013 (UTC)

Could you kinda tilt the image, or something? I don't know how to explain it, but it kinda looks like the cat's getting kicked in the shading place and flying away... sorry if I sound confusing I dunno how to explain it I'm not good with this stuff Jayce team rowlet < 20:58, 1/10/2013 >

Awesome! I think it is ready now.Gummybearkiller (talk) 22:59, January 10, 2013 (UTC)

Gummy, there are still comments that need to be accomplished under this topic, so it is not ready just yet. Also, refrain from commenting just to say it looks nice. I know you're new, so this is just a reminder. :) Splook it's a long way down. 00:54, January 11, 2013 (UTC)

The anatomy could still use some re-working. The feet are oddly proportioned, the body is contorted oddly, the face anatomy looks off... sorry, but I can't think of how to be more helpful than that without being redundant. Shelly For a limited time only 21:31, January 16, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'll just casually place this here that I made with a reference I found Iveh Yo!  01:03, January 17, 2013 (UTC)

Beautiful, Ivy! Make the hind legs a touch bigger and maybe expand the head a bit so the features aren't quite so squashed ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 02:06, January 17, 2013 (UTC)

<33 I love it. The cat looks thin, not sure if that's supposed to look like that. Giratina is not amused 03:19, January 17, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded How's this? Iveh Yo!  05:37, January 17, 2013 (UTC)

Enlarge the hind paw and make the "elbow" of the foreleg closest to us a bit bigger ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 02:28, January 18, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded Iveh Yo!  18:21, January 25, 2013 (UTC)

Move the elbow up a bit and make the shoulder larger and rounder. Also, straighten hind foot and make the paw rounder and erase that toe to fit in at least three, four if you can. Also, smooth and round out the top of the thigh, and move the our right ear and cheek forward a bit. And maybe shorten the extended leg a little. -Whiskey our freedom's just a loan 21:44, January 29, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded Alright, I tried, though I think I failed on bringing the cheek forward Iveh Yo!  04:31, February 4, 2013 (UTC)

Ah, I didn't mean that. I mean the side of the jaw. D: Sorry, bad phrasing. -Whiskey our freedom's just a loan 04:36, February 4, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded Iveh Yo!  01:19, February 8, 2013 (UTC)

The hind paw closest to us still looks a bit odd, maybe try making it a bit bigger and sorta oval-y ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 04:56, February 12, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded Like deese? Iveh Yo!  07:26, February 12, 2013 (UTC)

The lineart seems thicker...is it just my poor eyesight? x.x Rainlegs 05:26, February 13, 2013 (UTC)

The lineart thickness is two pixils thick all the way around (or it should be, at least) Iveh Yo!  06:34, February 13, 2013 (UTC)

Make the tail just a little longer. It looks stubby. I love these<3333 -Feather 10:31, February 16, 2013 (UTC)

=D The front paw farthest to us is thicker than the rest. It looks puffed up at the wrist. Fix that? Crys I liek Giratinas 20:27, February 17, 2013 (UTC)

Forgive my terminology here; I study rabbit anatomy, not cats, but here goes: Bring up the hock/ankle joint of the hind foot closest to us up a bit, so the hind foot is at the same tilt as the front paw closest to us. Last, make the top curve on the shoulder a bit shorter and slightly flatter. Knight Chasing after gold mines 01:29, February 18, 2013 (UTC)

Alright, I promise to reupload here in a bit, I'm having a friend of mine help me with this, along with the most recent submissions, and I'll reupload it here very soon. I know it's been 8 days since the last reupload, but if I could just have a little bit of leeway so my friend can help me perfect it, I'd really appreciate it. Iveh Yo!  03:31, February 21, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'm still waiting for my friend to get back with me but figured I'd go ahead and work with these suggestions anyway to keep it going. Iveh Yo!  02:34, February 23, 2013 (UTC)

Shoulder looks a bit wonky, lineart's too think on the top of the head, the back leg seems curved and almost broken like Cinderpelt's, the front paw closest to us is really thick, while the far one is too straight and thin. Paleggy Ship it 05:16,2/27/2013

Reuploaded So close...come on...let's get it thereIveh Yo!  05:55, February 27, 2013 (UTC)

Ivystripe.png The foot was bothering me, and I don't know if this position is right or not (I just uploaded it over my PI) but does this look better than the current way the back foot is positioned? Iveh Yo!  05:48, March 1, 2013 (UTC)

Shorten the far front leg a bit, and, on the closer front, switch that line going into the other from the arm going up to the shoulder going to the side. I think this is almost done and the others can be posted soon. -Whiskey our freedom's just a loan 07:06, March 2, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded Also redid lines in Sai with the binary tool, the lines look much better now! And I'm assuming you meant the second version was better? -is a total derp- Iveh Yo!  05:28, March 5, 2013 (UTC)

Yes. The foot in the above is much better. Could you make the far front leg just a liiiiittle thinner? And then I'd say go ahead and post the other three because this is looking amazing. -Whiskey our freedom's just a loan 05:48, March 5, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded Just checking in to make sure this is thin enough but not too thin!  (fandom secret: son I am excite!) Iveh Yo!  06:06, March 5, 2013 (UTC)

Yes, it looks good! Although I meant the foot as in the second version you have directly above. Put that one back on? ^^ -Whiskey our freedom's just a loan 06:15, March 5, 2013 (UTC)

Doh, that was my mistake! I forgot to switch the filename and junk. Iveh Yo!  06:22, March 5, 2013 (UTC)

This looks terrific. Go ahead and post the others. c: -Whiskey our freedom's just a loan 06:24, March 5, 2013 (UTC)

Although, it might be a good idea to archive what's here now. It's getting a bit long. -Whiskey our freedom's just a loan 06:25, March 5, 2013 (UTC)

Sorry but the jaw seems to jut out just a bit too much right now. It should kind of go in the lower it is. Just a little bit though. And this is preference I guess, but is there any chance you could make the eyes look a bit less angry? Also, could you make the proportions a bit closer to those of the apprentice blanks? These look like fully grown adults mostly instead of clearly young cats. Paleggy Ship it 10:32,3/6/2013

Reuploaded Kay, I did what you asked, but in looking at the apprentice blank, as well as a kitten to adult growth chart, I've found that most of it was in proportion with a younger cat. Larger ears, bigger eyes. I slimmed down his tummy some but honestly you're going to have to tell me what else is adult like about this. (I'm glad I didn't upload the longhairs in this case) Iveh Yo!  18:44, March 6, 2013 (UTC)

The eyes are on his forehead and his forehead is all bulgy Bramble (talk) 00:16, March 7, 2013 (UTC)

The eyes are not on the forehead or bulgy, I was instructed to make them larger and they are only a few tony little pixils larger than they were Iveh Yo!  01:30, March 7, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded Alright, I'm going to be going to my Mom's for a few days and there's a high probability that there will be no Internet. Cloudy said I should go ahead and post all of them. Don't be afraid to crit the anatomy if it is wrong but I'm pretty sure it's close if not already so. The fur on the haunches is bugging me and I have no idea how you did it on the loners, Mountain XD Iveh Yo!  04:22, March 7, 2013 (UTC)

The fur on the chest and tail looks good, but you might thin out how many lines are on the haunches, since it looks a bit weird, and add some fluff on the underbellies. -Whiskey our freedom's just a loan 05:42, March 7, 2013 (UTC)

I'm sorry, this should have been addressed before uploading the longhairs, but with the position and angle this is at, I don't think the far back leg would be show past the shoulder at all. Paleggy Ship it 02:25,3/12/2013

Reuploaded Changes are not showing on some of them, dunno about for you guys Iveh Yo!  03:02, March 14, 2013 (UTC)

Well, I'm going to put CBA on these. david ✌️ 05:08, March 15, 2013 (UTC)

Sorry, but can you tighten in lack of a better word choice the flowing fur on the haunch. ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 02:45, March 16, 2013 (UTC)

The back leg is a tad stubby now that I look at it again... and the far back leg should show through the belly in that gap, just not past the shoulder or anything. Point the ends of the fur more so they don't look so round and kinda mop-like, make the lines not go in so far, and add more belly fur and elbow fur. Also, the whiskers that go outside the lineart should angle up more, as if they're running, the wind would be blowing them so they wouldn't just stick straight out. Paleggy Ship it 04:36,3/16/2013

Reuploaded And I'm sorry but I can't see where it's "stubby". And the fur looks a little sharp to me now but here you goIveh Yo!  23:45, March 19, 2013 (UTC)

I have to disagree about the back leg being stubby. It looks like it is being pulled up, with the muscles bunching, which is exactly what should happen. It would look a bit shorter than normal, especially at the angle these are at and altering that would mess up the proportions. -Whiskey our freedom's just a loan 23:49, March 19, 2013 (UTC)

CBA again? -Whiskey our freedom's just a loan 17:32, March 20, 2013 (UTC)

Sorry but I think the haunch fur is a bit too... even for lack of better word. Most of the fur over there is all the same thickness and length. Try varying it a bit more. And maybe get rid of this reaaally thick spot in the longhair tail lineart? Paleggy Ship it 01:41,3/21/2013

Honestly, it's fine. It's not going to be perfect, and it looks fine to me. Re-CBA'ing. Appledash❤ crowfeather 01:45, March 21, 2013 (UTC)

I'm sorry but I strongly disagree. These are blanks, they're going to be used on a lot of images, it's not like it's just on charart. We should get them as good as possible, and right now, that fur really bugs me because how even it is. Paleggy Ship it 02:51,3/21/2013

Well I don't know if you noticed but I reuploaded them with said changes anyways and I forgot to mention it. Is it still that bad? ^^; Iveh Yo!  04:16, March 21, 2013 (UTC)

Re-CBA? ouo david ✌️ 04:17, March 21, 2013 (UTC)

Approved Iveh Yo! 04:17, March 22, 2013 (UTC)

Weaselwhisker (Star) - Approved

Weaselwhisker.star I think I got the pattern. .-. Comments? -Whiskey our freedom's just a loan 20:51, March 18, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shading on the paws ever so slightly? If you don't want to, that's cool with me. This is a wonderful image. .o. I can haz steal please? Jayce team rowlet < 20:54, 3/18/2013 >

Reuploaded. No get your own. >C -Whiskey our freedom's just a loan 04:08, March 21, 2013 (UTC)

CBA? Paleggy Ship it 05:35,3/21/2013

Approved david ✌️ 05:40, March 22, 2013 (UTC)

Shaded Moss (Ro) ~ Approved

Shaded Moss.rogue first original rogue since way back with Antpelt lol. caooments? Berry Dear Sweets! 08:00 Sat Mar 16

Ooh~ This is pretty! Can you define the light on the hind flank a touch more ...or it might also be my horrible eyesight... eheheh ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 16:09, March 17, 2013 (UTC)

Really good! Idk if its just me, but the black is a little flat but good job! Bramble (talk) 18:29, March 17, 2013 (UTC)

It's difficult to tell that he has green eyes, and aside from the highlight the eye just looks like one dark mass. Iveh Yo! 02:48, March 20, 2013 (UTC)

re-uploaded just redid it because it's annoying the absolute hell out of me Berry Dear Sweets! 08:09 Wed Mar 20

I'm going to try a CBA on it since it's nearly been two days without comment and I see nothing wrong with it Iveh Yo! 22:47, March 21, 2013 (UTC)

Approved. Splook it's a long way down. 22:09 Fri Mar 22

Nightfur (Star) - Approved

File:Nightfur.star.png.pngMy first black cat I think....x.x It's really bad I know, but I tried. xD Thistle. 03:54, March 22, 2013 (UTC)

I can see nothing visibly wrong with this image. The highlights, shading, and everything else appear to be in working order, so I'm going to CBA it. For your first black cat, Tai, I'm very impressed~ Jayce team rowlet < 19:59, 3/22/2013 >

Sorry to interrupt, but can you add an eye white? I don't see any. Bbunlegs 20:04, March 22, 2013 (UTC)

Eye style is artist's choice. And it looks fine to me, honestly. Jayce team rowlet < 20:09, 3/22/2013 >

It's fine. Continuing CBA. -Whiskey our freedom's just a loan 20:22, March 22, 2013 (UTC)

There's waste, and I don't believe having the white present in some way is artists choice. Neither of these affect the quality of the image, but could you please fix them? Paleggy Ship it 01:28,3/23/2013

I didn't see any watse but I went over all of the layers anyway. And added eye whites. Thistle. 05:57, March 23, 2013 (UTC)

Approved david ✌️ 22:45, March 23, 2013 (UTC)

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