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Heatherstar (D) ~ ApprovedEdit

Heatherstar.deputy Every single colour matches the leader. I got the hex code for the shading from Beebs; thanks Beebs! My first deputy, and I'm quite proud of her. Comment away~ Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 14:24, July 9, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the shading just a bit. Nicely done~ Cloud ( 23:06, 7/9/2013 )

Reuploaded thanks x3 Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 14:49, July 10, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front leg closest to us, maybe? Bbunlegs 01:31, July 11, 2013 (UTC)

Define the unshaded parts just the tiniesttt bit? c: Good job ^^ Mistypebble 04:04, July 11, 2013 (UTC)

You do not have the date on the table, which is as good as not reserving. Declined. -Raelic (Talk)1:25 Fri Jul 12 2013

What? I forgot! I'm so sorry, please let's add it in! Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 06:50, July 12, 2013 (UTC)

I added it in. I'm sorry, it won't happen again, I just forgot to add the date.Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 11:16, July 12, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded thanks, Misty :) Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 11:25, July 12, 2013 (UTC)

Nice! Fix the tail shading a little? The way the tail is currently shaded makes it look sort of wavey :2 You don't have to fix it if you don't agree though User:Kelpsey/Sig 02:59 Sun Jul 14

I think its fine. Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 03:05, July 14, 2013 (UTC)

Perhaps not wavy as Kelpsey said, but it does throw off the consistency with the light source. The light source looks like it's coming from our left side on the chest, and head, as well as the tip of the tail. However, on the hind leg, the light looks like it's coming from directly in front because there's just a spot of darkness on the (our) left edge of the lineart and since it looks like it's being continued from the hind leg down to the tail, that's where your light source for the middle tail highlight as well as the light source from our left side with the tail tip. Just extend the hind leg highlight in a gradual slope down starting at our right side and going till it matches up with the tail tip. Atelda insert vague subtext here 03:40, July 14, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded If this isn't right, please don't shoot me. Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 11:20, July 14, 2013 (UTC)

Can I prod for comments comments or if its ready, CBA? Been over a day since the last comment.Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 22:47, July 15, 2013 (UTC)

Remove the highlight on the lower part of the hind leg, and the highlights on the tail should connect. The shading also slightly recedes from the spine. Atelda insert vague subtext here 22:59, July 15, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 09:01, July 17, 2013 (UTC)

Can this be commented on again, or CBA'd? I want to squeeze in another charart before I go on holiday on August 8th. (I'll note on the vacation list nearer to the date) Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 14:40, July 19, 2013 (UTC)

Could you remove the bit of shading along the front of her haunch, and on the raised forepaw? Rainlegs 01:06, July 20, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 01:40, July 20, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front leg furthest from us - I can't see any (it's the one that's raised/bent) c: Queen Beebs 03:29, July 20, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded this look ready? Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 09:53, July 20, 2013 (UTC)

Comments before approval, anyone? Cloud ( 21:23,7/21/2013 )

Blur the ear pink, just a tad. Thistleflight (talk) 16:22, July 22, 2013 (UTC)

Its fine. Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 20:07, July 22, 2013 (UTC)

As I agree with Sorrel, I do believe the CBA should continue from the above time. However, if I'm wrong, go ahead and correct me. Cloud ( 20:19,7/22/2013 )

Approved. Cloud ( 15:16, 7/23/2013 )

Doespring (A) ~ ApprovedEdit

Doespring.apprenticeouo ShoonderpLike nobody’s around~ 23:07, July 9, 2013 (UTC)

Can you define the shading or unshaded parts? It looks a bit flat Mistypebble 00:26, July 10, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ShoonderpLike nobody’s around~ 12:02, July 10, 2013 (UTC)

Add shading to the tail and get rid of the light spot on the far back legs, as your light source appears to be coming from the front. Paleggy Ship it 16:20,7/10/2013

I think when you blur the whole thing/Gaussian blur some shading areas recede a little. Repaint the area directly left of her shoulder, and left/under her leg. Also define tail shading. :3 User:Kelpsey/Sig 03:03 Sun Jul 14

Re-uploaded -- —.neha it's that gloom boy season. 23:16, July 14, 2013 (UTC)

She still looks a bit flat. Maybe just the unshaded parts this time? Otherwise good job! ^^ Mistypebble   01:51, July 16, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded -- Thank you~ —.neha it's that gloom boy season. 11:27, July 16, 2013 (UTC)

Define the unshaded parts on the tail? And the shading looks like it's receded from the edge a bit where the far hind leg meets the haunch. Lookin' good~ Shimmer 03:04, 07/20/2013

Re-uploaded.neha it's that gloom boy season. 15:09, July 21, 2013 (UTC)

Shall we go CBA? Lovely image, dear<3 Cloud ( 20:43, 7/22/2013 )

None; Approved. Berry Midnight Monster's Parade! 02:09 Wed Jul 24

Barkface (Ki) ~ ApprovedEdit

Barkface.kit hello there friends. — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 06:15, 07/13/2013

Blur the shading a ton. Paleggy Ship it 14:31,7/13/2013

Reuploaded.ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 17:19, 07/13/2013

Now it's really dark on the neck while it's barely visible in the other places. If you're using gaussian blur, I'd suggest not using that on kits. Not enough control. Define the shading everywhere but the neck, and maybe expand it too. Paleggy Ship it 01:12,7/14/2013

Reups Completely redid shading, and changed light source. — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 02:46, 07/14/2013

Blur the shading on the front legs a bit? c: Queen Beebs 02:47, July 14, 2013 (UTC)

I think it's fine, but if someone else says to blur it, I'll do it. c: — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 02:54, 07/14/2013

Blur most of the shading, and perhaps lighten it a bit, too. Rainlegs 02:59, July 14, 2013 (UTC)

Reups.ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 19:00, 07/14/2013

Can I prod for comments, or if its ready, CBA? Been over a day since the last comment. — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 23:24, 07/15/2013

Blur the neck shading. Cloud ( 18:52, 7/16/2013 )

Reups.ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 19:35, 07/16/2013

Perhaps make the tail a bit thinner to match the thickness of the other shorthaired cats' tails more. x3 -Ducksauce 23:47, July 16, 2013 (UTC)

Reups ahhh his tail is so little and cute<33 — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 14:47, 07/17/2013

Blur the facial shading just a tiny bit. Rainlegs 19:34, July 17, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploadedferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 16:58, 07/21/2013

Define the tail shading, I can't even see that there's any there. -Ducksauce 19:16, July 21, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. His tail is so tiny it's hard to work with xD — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 19:25, 07/21/2013

Blur the shading near the base of his tail. Thistleflight (talk) 16:25, July 22, 2013 (UTC)

Reups.ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 21:17, 07/22/2013

This is a gorgeous image, and I can't see anything, so CBA? Knight Chasing after gold mines 21:59, July 22, 2013 (UTC)

None; Approved. Berry Midnight Monster's Parade! 02:11 Wed Jul 24

Stagleap (Ki) ~ ApprovedEdit

File:Stagleap.kit.png oh look berry's back Berry Midnight Monster's Parade! 01:48 Sat Jul 20

Blur the shading on his tail. Looks great! User:~xXRavenfrostXx~/Sig 12:14, July 20, 2013 (UTC)

Honestly, I'd rather not. That tail is the hardest mother to work with, if I blur it anymore you won't even be able to tell there's shading there. Berry Midnight Monster's Parade! 13:44 Sat Jul 20

Okay, I respect your decision. User:~xXRavenfrostXx~/Sig 16:36, July 20, 2013 (UTC)

CBA? Cloud ( 21:49, 7/22/2013 )

None; Approved. Berry Midnight Monster's Parade! 02:12 Wed Jul 24

Heatherstar (A) ~ ApprovedEdit

Heatherstar.apprentice Colors are all the same as the leader. I have tried to define the shading as much as possible on the haunch, but it keeps fading out, so that's as defined as it can be. Comments? ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot 15:58, July 20, 2013 (UTC)

Hmm maybe define the shading on the area between the top of the haunch and tail, maybe? And maybe smudge the fur into the earpink, as well. Nice work, Hawky! Queen Beebs 15:59, July 20, 2013 (UTC)\

Re-uploaded. Why thank you, Beebs. I left the earpink because it it blurred on her other images. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot 16:05, July 20, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shoulder shading. Appledash the devil's hand 01:59, July 21, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Changes might not be showing. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot 02:26, July 21, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Blurred shading on chest. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot 02:29, July 21, 2013 (UTC)

I hate to rush, but there hasn't been comments in a day. Can someone comment on this or is this ready for CBA? ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot 16:11, July 22, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shoulder highlight -Ducksauce 21:00, July 22, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Changes might not be showing. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot 00:05, July 23, 2013 (UTC)

Well, this is beautiful. CBA? Knight Chasing after gold mines 16:30, July 23, 2013 (UTC)

Approved. -Raelic (Talk)0:09 Thu Jul 25 2013

Mothflight (Star) - ApprovedEdit

Mothflight.star After researching some chararting stuff, I've finally made my first wiki charart! *Hooray sound effect* I smudged it a bit to give the appearance of fur, hope it's not minded... —Preceding unsigned comment added by Kelpsey (talkcontribs) 02:39, July 14, 2013

Kelpsery, this is absolutely fantastic! Maybe blur the shading a bit - mainly on the back/near the face. c: Queen Beebs 02:41, July 14, 2013 (UTC)

The shading looks too yellow. Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 02:44, July 14, 2013 (UTC)

There's nothing wrong with tinted shading, perhaps expand the shading on the head a little? So it doesn't look as flat. This is really pretty Kelps~ c: Raven Chicks = Trouble 02:48 Sun Jul 14

REUPLOADED 2X User:Kelpsey/Sig 03:34 Sun Jul 14

The texture in the shading is really awesome. However, the shading still needs blurring as well as definition so I suggest (if you use layers) to overlay a layer of shading underneath (or over, it depends on how it looks to you) with a little lower opacity to really emphasis the shading and add depth while still keeping the fur texture. On the earpink, you might want to try smudging up (vertically) rather than to the side (horizontally). You also could try adding some depth in the eyes by varying the color shades. Nice job so far. Atelda insert vague subtext here 03:50, July 14, 2013 (UTC)

I'll fix the image in a sec, but before I tweak I wanted to say that I disagree with your comment on the eyes, as I took a really long time to make sure all the colors and stuff blended in. If someone else says something about that, I'll fix though :3 And thanks you guys! User:Kelpsey/Sig 05:22 Sun Jul 14

I agree with 'teldy on the eyes, and perhaps lighten them up a tad? I can barely tell them apart from the lineart, and had to quint to see them. Cloud ( 06:13, 7/14/2013 )

Also, on the back, close to the head, that shading seems a tad too dark, could you lighten it a little? This is splendid, nice work Iveh Yo! 06:14, July 14, 2013 (UTC)

REUP. Thanks! The dark shading near the head was actually a shadow, I made it invisible. Here we go weeeeeeeeee User:Kelpsey/Sig 19:58 Sun Jul 14

Hate to rush, but this has gone over a full day without comment. So, constructive comments? User:Kelpsey/Sig 22:31 Mon Jul 15

The earpink color and base pelt color are off a few shades when comparing this to the rest of the images. The earpink needs to fill the ear, or at least the top half of it. Atelda insert vague subtext here 22:56, July 15, 2013 (UTC)

So, upon realizing that I need to match images, I (painstakingly) redid the whole image. And restyled the earpink less realisticly to fill the ear. Am I allowed to, like, take away my image rights? User:Kelpsey/Sig 05:46 Tue Jul 16

Blur the shading a bit. This is wonderful~ Cloud ( 05:47, 7/16/2013 )

Re-up . NOT happy with this at all. I would be more than happy to tweak from the previous version, if you agree. Thanks Sky! User:Kelpsey/Sig 15:04 Tue Jul 16

You can always withdraw and you didn't have to completely redo it. How to do the art and follow the critiques is completely up to you so long as it matches the description. Blur the right (our right) side of the chest and the right fore paw. Atelda insert vague subtext here 16:37, July 16, 2013 (UTC)

Still working? Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 20:19, July 20, 2013 (UTC)

This image is over 50% and 80% complete, so I have changed the heading to "For Approval" and will move you up to apprentice. -Raelic (Talk)2:41 Sun Jul 21 2013

Blur the shading on the foreleg closest to us, and the haunch. Queen Beebs 21:20, July 22, 2013 (UTC)

YEP YOU GUESSED IT reuploaded. Sorry totally forgot about this while enjoying the (literally) sunny side of the united states X3 no but srsly lol User:Kelpsey/Sig 02:52 Tue Jul 23

CBA? david 🌈 03:44, July 23, 2013 (UTC)

Approved. -Raelic (Talk)0:09 Thu Jul 25 2013

Marshcloud (W) ~ ApprovedEdit

Marshcloud.warrior Any suggestions for improvement? Splashmist3271 (talk) 20:55, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

If I'm not mistaken, all RiverClan cats are longhairs, unless they are stated to be shorthaired ^^;. Nice work of the stripes! Bbunlegs 20:59, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Add/define the shading a lot. Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 21:00, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Ok, will do! It might be a bit though. Splashmist3271 (talk) 21:38, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

Also, the earpink looks rather solid. Can you blur it just a smidge? Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 21:40, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

The stripes go onto the lineart. Remove, please (I love your tabby style)? Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 21:47, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

I fixed it- is this better? Splashmist3271 (talk) 22:34, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

The shading still needs to be defined a ton. And the tail looks rather odd-shaped. Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 22:36, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

I fixed it again. The tail is supposed to look kind of odd because he is described as having a short tail. Splashmist3271 (talk) 23:16, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

There's waste along his spine. Thin the tail, and blur the shading a lot. Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 23:25, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

I'll fix the waste, but I'm not sure how to blur the shading without blurring the tabby marks... Anyways, I have to go now, so the edited version probably won't be up until tomorrow. Splashmist3271 (talk) 23:38, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

What program do you use, Splashmist? Atelda insert vague subtext here 23:38, July 2, 2013 (UTC)

I use Adobe Photoshop Elements 10 --Splashmist3271 (talk) 12:50, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Ok, I fixed the tail & shading (I tried some lighting too), and I added goldenish stripes just cuz. Splashmist3271 (talk) 14:45, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

There's waste by his front legs and chest. I really like this! Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 17:12, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Oh, and by his far ear, in between his legs, and tail (I didn't see that at first). And I think the lineart at the tail-tip is blurred. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 17:16, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Oh okay, that's at least an easy fix! Glad you like it :) Splashmist3271 (talk) 17:21, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Okay, I deleted the waste. Splashmist3271 (talk) 17:45, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a bit. Silverhmm 17:51, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shading. -Ducksauce 20:11, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Round out the lineart on the tail or something, it looks a tad square. I really like the stripes. david 🌈 23:22, July 3, 2013 (UTC)

Ok, so should I blur the stripes or not? Silvereye1 and Trollsky are contradicting each other... Splashmist3271 (talk) 01:05, July 4, 2013 (UTC)

They're not. xD You can blur the stripes if you wish. Cloud ( 01:06, 7/4/2013 )

Okay, I darkened the shading, but I didn't blur the stripes because it looked a tad bit strange with the dark shading. Anything else I should do? 12:37, July 4, 2013 (UTC)Splashmist3271 (talk)

The stripes appear to be lost in the shading. Have you tried setting your shading layer to multiply and seeing what that does? If you need help, go ahead and ask one of us, and perhaps we could set up a join.me session? I use PS, so I'm familiar with the tools you're working with. Cloud ( 15:39, 7/4/2013 )

Could you (or someone else) help? I'm lost... this is my first charart. Splashmist3271 (talk) 16:32, July 4, 2013 (UTC)

Usually for a charart to make it easier to edit, we usually separate base color, shading, lineart, and other markings on separate layers. Without them, it makes charart editing more complicated. If you already use layers, awesome. Just go to your shading layer, and above it, there is a drop down box. Click on that, and change the setting from "normal", or whatever you may have it on, to "multiply". It darkens it and shows markings below it. You can adjust the opacity from there to make your shading how dark or light you want it to be. Hope that helps! I absolutely love those stripes! Knight Chasing after gold mines 04:29 Fri Jul 5

Thanks so much for the help! Is this better, or is the shading too dark? --Splashmist3271 (talk) 13:46, July 5, 2013 (UTC)

Can you blur the stripes juuussst a tad? Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 18:35, July 6, 2013 (UTC)

I think the stripes are fine, along with the shading. ^^ But could you try fixing that tiny 'dip' in his tail lineart and make it a bit more smooth? Mistypebble 05:12, July 7, 2013 (UTC)

File:Marshcloudblank.png Might I suggest this lineart for the tail, Splash? If not, that's fine :) Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 20:32, July 8, 2013 (UTC)

Still working on this? Iveh Yo! 21:06, July 10, 2013 (UTC)

If this is still being worked on, would this be considered a triangle tabby, or no? Thistle 03:54, July 11, 2013 (UTC)

Yeah I think so. Paleggy Ship it 05:43,7/11/2013

I really like the lineart Sorrel, but I don't really want to start all over again. Is this better? --Splashmist3271 (talk) 20:27, July 13, 2013 (UTC)

The shading could be blurred a bit, and the stripes seem to get lost in the shading. Maybe set the shading layer onto multiply? Queen Beebs 20:29, July 13, 2013 (UTC)

He's also looking a tad green in color. Raven Chicks = Trouble 22:30 Sat Jul 13

I don't really know what to do about blurring the shading because I had to close my photoshop program while I went on vacation, so now the layers aren't separated (into main, stripes, shading, etc.), so it would be really hard to do around the stripes. I already set the shading layer onto multiply, and I think it looks fine. Also, I don't really think it looks green... --Splashmist3271 (talk) 23:02, July 13, 2013 (UTC)

I agree with Raven, it does look a tad bit green. Thistle 23:18, July 13, 2013 (UTC)

I don't really know what you want me to do about that... --Splashmist3271 (talk) 23:57, July 13, 2013 (UTC)

Change the colors. Move the color closer to red/orange and farther from yellow. Paleggy Ship it 01:15,7/14/2013

Is that better or is that too ginger? --Splashmist3271 (talk) 14:33, July 14, 2013 (UTC)

I'm sorry that the layers aren't separated anymore, but the problems still need to be fixing. You can either withdraw or forge on ahead with this, but either way, I agree with the comments above that have not been addressed. The shading needs blurring and the stripes probably ought to be changed. You can go here to possibly try out a different tabby pattern. Atelda insert vague subtext here 20:10, July 17, 2013 (UTC)

I read and addressed every comment above; I already blurred the shading, and multiplied it, and darkened the shading, and fixed the stripes, and everything else that people said to do. I actually just looked at the Apprentice Tutorial page yesterday, coincidentally- I saw all of the tabby designs, but I also remember that there was a whole conversation about 'triangle tabbies' (which I THINK that mine would be classified as) and last I heard people were allowed to draw them. ANYWAYS, I can't edit right now because I am out of town for my Great-Grandmother's funeral, so I don't have any of my files (at least I have A computer!). --Splashmist3271 (talk) 02:11, July 18, 2013 (UTC)

Well, regardless, the shading still needs blurring. Cloud ( 02:24, 7/18/2013 )

I'll blur it on Monday when I get back, but I don't feel that I have to change the stripes. --Splashmist3271 (talk) 13:54, July 18, 2013 (UTC)

I'm like 90% sure, that triangle tabbies were agreed upon not to be drawn, but I'm not 100% sure this is indeed one. But anyways define the shading on the base of the tail, the base of the haunch, and the paws some. x3 -Ducksauce 19:27, July 18, 2013 (UTC)

Ok, I'll fix the shading when I get home. 90% of the people who commented on this said that they liked the stripes, so I don't feel that I need to change it. --Splashmist3271 (talk) 00:08, July 19, 2013 (UTC)

Well, we did say that triangle tabbies weren't really allowed, so...I would say change the tabby style. There are many others. ^^ Also, that edge of the shading on the back seems to be...sudden, like, it becomes suddenly darker from the rest of the shading. (sorry, don't know how to explain it. xD) ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot 22:02, July 19, 2013 (UTC)

As this is not reserved on the table, I must decline this image. Sorry, but it needs to be reserved with the proper rank and date. Cloud ( 21:22,7/21/2013 )

Ummm... it WAS reserved, but I want to withdraw this anyways because I have too many other things going on. --Splashmist3271 (talk) 17:09, July 22, 2013 (UTC)

Re-up. Taking over, and I was told by Paleh that I could use the tail lineart of Cedarpelt for this, so yeah, comments? o3o Queen Beebs 20:36, July 22, 2013 (UTC)

OMG, Beebs, he is so sexyyyyy~ *takes and runs away together* ouo Define the unshaded part on the tail a tad, I sort of have to squint to see it. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot 20:51, July 22, 2013 (UTC)

Re-up. Queen Beebs 21:05, July 22, 2013 (UTC)

Hmm CBA? -Raelic (Talk)4:37 Wed Jul 24 2013

Approved david 🌈 06:23, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

Shrewclaw (Ki) ~ ApprovedEdit

Shrewclaw.kit He's a cute little fella. Okay, I need comments and I need them fast; I'm going on holiday for two weeks on August 8th, I desparatly want him approved in time. Comments? Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 16:11, July 23, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shading on his chest and tail. Queen Beebs 00:55, July 24, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 01:09, July 24, 2013 (UTC)

This is really good Sorrel. I can't see anything wrong with it honestly, so CBA? -Raelic (Talk)4:31 Wed Jul 24 2013

Approved david 🌈 06:23, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

Redclaw (Alt W) ~ ApprovedEdit

Redclaw.warrior.alt I didn't know if tawny cats got stripes so I just did it anyways. Referenced from [1] Berry Midnight Monster's Parade! 03:27 Wed Jul 24

I believe it's optional. Either way, this is gorgeous. CBA? -Raelic (Talk)0:00 Thu Jul 25 2013

Approved david 🌈 05:48, July 26, 2013 (UTC)

Dawnstripe (Star) ~ Approved Edit

Dawnstripe.star I've wanted to do a charart for this cat for so long you have no idea david 🌈 05:14, July 21, 2013 (UTC)

I like the texture..blur the shading on the front paws. Minty, Living life to its fullest 12:33, July 21, 2013 (UTC)

I think the shading is fine. This is amazing, Skt. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot 19:47, July 22, 2013 (UTC)

I think the shading could be blurred a tad on the paws and a bit at the base of the tail. Stunning! =) -Ducksauce 21:00, July 22, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. david 🌈 08:42, July 23, 2013 (UTC)

Can you blur the stomach shading? Silverhmm 20:34, July 23, 2013 (UTC)

I personally think it's fine ouo Queen Beebs 00:55, July 24, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the stripes in a little more? They're less defined on the warrior. -Raelic (Talk)4:32 Wed Jul 24 2013

Re-uploaded. yooo david 🌈 18:26, July 24, 2013 (UTC)

CBA? -Raelic (Talk)0:03 Thu Jul 25 2013

Approved david 🌈 05:48, July 26, 2013 (UTC)

Plumclaw (A) ~ ApprovedEdit

Plumclaw.apprentice Don't tell me to define the eye depth. Comments?☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot 02:51, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

Might I ask ask to why you won't define the eye depth, Hawk? Not gonna force you, but curious, is all. Also, perhaps define the tail shading a smidge? Nicely done~ Cloud ( 02:56, 7/25/2013 )

Re-uploaded. The changes won't show for me. Don't know why, and you can should clearly see the tail shading, as well as I defined the eye depth and changed the eye color to hazel because I wanted to. ouo I didn't define it before because it was supposed to match the warrior version, but it was declined, so I was just confuzzled before. XD ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot 16:10, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

This is an awesome image, and it has been a couple days since comments, so CBA? Knight Chasing after gold mines 17:33, July 27, 2013 (UTC)

None; Approved. Knight Chasing after gold mines 23:51, July 28, 2013 (UTC)

Sorrelpaw (WC) (Ki) ~ ApprovedEdit

Sorrelpaw (WC).kit eh, comments? Queen Beebs 13:07, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

Her left paw (our right) shouldn't be completely brown; can you make it mainly gray like on the apprentice? This is an awesome image! Knight Chasing after gold mines 17:38, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

Re-up. Queen Beebs 21:45, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 01:28, July 26, 2013 (UTC)

Re-up. Queen Beebs 01:35, July 26, 2013 (UTC)

CBA? Knight Chasing after gold mines 17:31, July 27, 2013 (UTC)

None; Approved. Knight Chasing after gold mines 00:14, July 29, 2013 (UTC)

Bess (KP) - Approved Edit

Bess.kittypet lamborghini mercy, splook is so thirsty Splook it's a long way down. 19:55 Wed Jul 10

I don't know if it's my computer, but the shading is so dark on her already dark pelt that I can't see it or the lineart. Could you lighten it a little and maybe add highlights? Iveh Yo! 21:04, July 10, 2013 (UTC)

I agree with Ivy. Also, lighten the left ear pink a tad to match the other? Thistle 03:50, July 11, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Splook it's a long way down. 15:52 Thu Jul 11

I don't know if the shading on the leg should be that way, it makes it look liek it's coming from a didfferent way to the rest. She's preeeetty david 🌈 06:07, July 12, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shading some? If you want I can shoot through the rogue's file ouo Berry Midnight Monster's Parade! 15:16 Fri Jul 12

Reuploaded. Thanks Berry, I'll ask you if the colors are off ouo Just a heads up, I'm leaving for a week tomorrow for vacation and won't have computer access. Hope you all understand. Splook it's a long way down. 00:30 Sun Jul 14

I can barely see the lineart and texture. -Ducksauce 19:47, July 14, 2013 (UTC)

Still working? Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 15:41, July 19, 2013 (UTC)

The shading on the hind paw is really gray. She's pretty~ ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot 20:17, July 20, 2013 (UTC)

Splook is gone for a week - she's at camp. If you would do me a favor and just hold this for her, that would be great. She just forgot to warn you guys in advance. Appledash the devil's hand 02:02, July 21, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I actually did warn everyone in my last reupload, but thank you Icy. Splook it's a long way down. 02:29 Mon Jul 22

The nosepink is pink on the rogue, and it should be on this as well. Nice work! Queen Beebs 21:19, July 22, 2013 (UTC)

Black cats should have black noses unless otherwise specified, last I checked. Cloud ( 21:51, 7/22/2013 )

So do I keep it black? Splook it's a long way down. 21:00 Tue Jul 23

Yes it needs to be black. -Raelic (Talk)4:36 Wed Jul 24 2013

Still working, Splook? Cloud ( 12:03, 7/29/2013 )

She doesn't exactly have any critiques she needs to fulfill... Atelda insert vague subtext here 17:28, July 29, 2013 (UTC)

This is true. CBA? -Raelic (Talk)17:29 Mon Jul 29 2013

Approved. Appledash the devil's hand 21:50, July 30, 2013 (UTC)

Hareflight (TR) (W) - ApprovedEdit

Hareflight (TR).warrior i tried texture, but idk Comments? -Ducksauce 20:39, July 22, 2013 (UTC)

OMSC Duck, he is sexy~ Define the shading on the tail a tad. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot 20:49, July 22, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded thank you kindly c: -Ducksauce 20:56, July 22, 2013 (UTC)

The texture on the face should be moving from all directions outward the muzzle, I believe, instead of being with the body. Love it, Duck - he reminds me of coffee ice cream! Queen Beebs 21:23, July 22, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I tried owo Thanks! -Ducksauce 21:29, July 22, 2013 (UTC)

Can you define the texture and/or shading on the tail? I hate tails on short-haired cats. x.x Cloud ( 21:48, 7/22/2013 )

Re-uploaded yes, yes i do , too -Ducksauce 21:59, July 22, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shading and define the lighter part on the tail. david 🌈 03:43, July 23, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded -Ducksauce 18:32, July 23, 2013 (UTC)

Maybe make the haunch shading curve gently, to make it go with the fur more ouo Queen Beebs 00:56, July 24, 2013 (UTC)

I think it's fine. -Ducksauce 01:23, July 24, 2013 (UTC)

Define the haunch shading, please. Cloud ( 03:52, 7/24/2013 )

Re-uploaded Redid everything except the base pelt and left out the texture, I like this a lot better. -sigh- -Ducksauce 17:03, July 24, 2013 (UTC)

Looks good. CBA? Splook it's a long way down. 18:50 Thu Jul 25

Eeps, sorry, once again, minor item, but the shading is receding from the back of the charart, or the spine region. It should be just a minor fix. Atelda insert vague subtext here 15:16, July 26, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Went ahead and changed the heading, too. -Ducksauce 18:42, July 26, 2013 (UTC)

Could you kind of thin out or erase the shading near the front of the haunch? The light source looks to be shining towards his face, and the shading near the front of the haunch doesn't quite match. This looks very nice! Knight Chasing after gold mines 17:27, July 27, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thanks! -Ducksauce 20:41, July 27, 2013 (UTC)

Define the light source on his face. Queen Beebs 18:49, July 28, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded -Ducksauce 19:50, July 28, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. Appledash the devil's hand 21:15, July 29, 2013 (UTC)

Sorry, but I think that it's fine. x3 -Ducksauce 04:37, July 30, 2013 (UTC)

I disagree with you, Duck. Perhaps blur it a tad? Cloud ( 11:29, 7/30/2013 )

Re-uploaded -Ducksauce 14:49, July 30, 2013 (UTC)

This looks really nice. CBA? Knight Chasing after gold mines 17:02, July 30, 2013 (UTC)

None; Approved. Knight Chasing after gold mines 17:49, August 3, 2013 (UTC)

Ryestalk (A) ~ Approved Edit

Ryestalk.apprentice I know the stripes don't match so don't comment on them. I lost the original file that I made of this so I have to redo it. x.x Cloud ( 00:23, 8/2/2013 )

Perhaps define the shading a tad on the tail. Great job! Wanty (talk) 02:29, August 2, 2013 (UTC)

maybe sharpen the stripes a bit, and make the ends pointy? make the tail stripes at the tip of the tail curve a little to make the tail appear more cyllindric and less flat User:Kelpsey/Sig 17:29 Fri Aug 2

Uh, I asked for no comments on the stripes, as I'm redoing them to match better? Also, Want, I'll get right on the shading and upload sometime later on. Cloud ( 07:32, 8/3/2013 )

Re-uploaded. Hmm. Cloud ( 00:59, 8/4/2013 )

My apologies, didn't see that there. User:Kelpsey/Sig 02:12 Sun Aug 4

Lighten her up. -Raelic (Talk)6:17 Sun Aug 4 2013

Re-uploaded. I didn't lighten her that much, since I don't want to deviate from the original coloring too much with the shading. Cloud ( 06:32, 8/4/2013 )

Define the shading on the tail just a tad. This is incredible work, Cloudy! I love how you did the shading. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot 15:31, August 4, 2013 (UTC)

Eh, I think it's fine. But if others disagree with me, I'll change it. Cloud ( 16:23, 8/4/2013 )

I think she looks good to go, CBA? Iveh Yo! 18:20, August 4, 2013 (UTC)

Approved. Cloud ( 23:16, 8/5/2013 )

Pigeonpaw (A) ~ ApprovedEdit

Pigeonpaw.apprentice Comments? c: Mistypebble 23:22, July 9, 2013 (UTC)

The shade of gray doesn't match the kit image, and the smudging is both too extreme and needs to follow the flow of the fur and the body. Paleggy Ship it 16:22,7/10/2013

Reuploaded Changes are not showing, I believe. Is this okay? Mistypebble 22:58, July 10, 2013 (UTC)

His paws and legs look rather grey. Maybe just erase a little shading there? He looks very nice! Knight Chasing after gold mines 23:35 Wed Jul 10

Nice job, Misty! However, I do believe that there's a (faint but present) layer of texture on the gray on the kit c: Bbunlegs 02:05, July 11, 2013 (UTC)

Where's your light source coming from? Paleggy Ship it 05:34,7/11/2013

Personal preference pregerence lol. pregerence=pregnant? , but the shading is really dark to me. Lighten or keep, if no one agrees. Maybe it's just my screen User:Kelpsey/Sig 03:06 Sun Jul 14

Hmm, would you like the file for the kit to help ya' out, Misty? o3o Queen Beebs 01:13, July 15, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded Whoops, sorry for being late >.< I wanted to upload the redone shading before I did anything else p: Oh, and sure, I guess so, Beebs c: (do you need my email again?) Mistypebble 01:19, July 16, 2013 (UTC)

The white is looking gray. -Ducksauce 23:44, July 16, 2013 (UTC)

Still working? Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 14:56, July 21, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded ^^ Mistypebble 23:22, July 22, 2013 (UTC)

Define the tail shading a bit, and make the texture a bit more visible ouo Queen Beebs 00:59, July 24, 2013 (UTC)

Smudge the shoulder just a teensy bit. Though this is just me. --Pearls 22:26, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thank you for the xcf. Beebs! c: Mistypebble 23:17, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

There's some texture on his other patches as well, I believe. Queen Beebs 23:20, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

Mmm, I think it's fine. Atelda insert vague subtext here 23:27, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

Hm, I agree with Beebs, after all, she'd know, she's the kit's OA. -Ducksauce 18:16, July 26, 2013 (UTC)

I thought you couldn't have texture on one part of the cat and not the rest? If it's on the gray, it should be on the white too. Regardless, you really can't tell if there's texture or not on the kit. o.O Cloud ( 18:19, 7/26/2013 )

I agree; the texture is hard to see on the kit, and it seems to match fine without it. Her chest and her back near the spine is looking rather gray, can you add highlights to them? I think it should help out with any gray-white shading. I really like this.  :) Knight Chasing after gold mines 17:40, July 27, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded Is this okay, Knight? ^^ I didn't want to mess up the light source with any highlights, so I tried something else. Mistypebble 03:51, July 29, 2013 (UTC)

Define the tail shading a bit more. Queen Beebs 02:38, July 30, 2013 (UTC)

Maybe my screen is poorly lit, but he doesn't look as white as he should. again, it might just be me User:Kelpsey/Sig 23:17 Tue Jul 30

Reuploaded Defined the tail shading, and I think that the white is fine, but if anyone else agrees, I will change it. Mistypebble 02:56, August 3, 2013 (UTC)

CBA? Even though I don't like Misty. -Raelic (Talk)6:23 Sun Aug 4 2013

Changed the heading c: get your head in the game breezy Mistypebble 13:46, August 4, 2013 (UTC)

Approved. Cloud ( 23:16, 8/5/2013 )

Deadfoot (A) - ApprovedEdit

Deadfoot.apprentice Comments? First black cat c:Raven Chicks = Trouble 07:29 Sun Jul 21

Raise the injured paw up a few pixels so it doesn't look like it's even with the other paw. Wonderful work! -Ducksauce 19:07, July 21, 2013 (UTC)

Could you lighten either the base pelt or the shading a tad? I can't see the lineart at all, and you don't have to lighten it too much, just a little. —.neha it's that gloom boy season. 20:02, July 21, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded How's this? c: Raven Chicks = Trouble 07:31 Thu Jul 25

He should have a black nose, m'thinks. Cloud ( 18:20, 7/26/2013 )

From memory; they can have dark grey noses aswell. I'm also sure his nose is dark enough; without it being too dark. Raven Chicks = Trouble 05:09 Sat Jul 27

Well, Bess' images were told to have black noses, and I think that's what we go by. Perhaps someone else could back me up, or prove me wrong? Either/or, I don't care. Plus, aren't his other images shown with black noses? o.O Cloud ( 12:00, 7/29/2013 )

Looks black to me. -Raelic (Talk)17:17 Mon Jul 29 2013

I don't think it's quite black, it's dark gray. But reguardless if black cats can have a dark gray nose, the SC has a pure black nose, so this needs to match. -Ducksauce 04:40, July 30, 2013 (UTC)

Re-ups Raven Exodia! It's not possible! 07:54, August 3, 2013 (UTC)

CBA? -Raelic (Talk)6:19 Sun Aug 4 2013

Approved. Cloud ( 23:16, 8/5/2013 )

Woollytail (W) ~ ApprovedEdit

Woollytail.warrior this doesn't deserve to be in the presence of the SC image Berry Midnight Monster's Parade! 08:22 Fri Jul 26

The texture looks a bit different on the SC, like there's not as much texture or something. Also, blur the white on his ches just a smidge. -Ducksauce 18:21, July 26, 2013 (UTC)

I think his paws (apart from the foreleg furthest from us) are a tad gray. Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 12:37, July 27, 2013 (UTC)

Guys, I'm seriously not gonna be able to match the texture completely, I'm not blurring the white chest because that's how it is on the SC - smudged, not blurred, and of course the paws are gonna be a bit grey - I'm not gonna be able to fix that without removing the leg/paw shading. I'd like to keep these things as they are unless someone says so. Berry Midnight Monster's Parade! 15:48 Sat Jul 27

The texture is up to you, I'm not saying that you need to match completely but I think that it could match more. The white chest does look more blurred on the SC, no matter if it isn't blurred, it looks like it is a tad and I think this one could be. And you can make the white whiter without removing the shading. You make a new layer, add white where you want it whitened, blur/smudge the white then lower the opacity to make it white. It is very possible. -Ducksauce 16:55, July 27, 2013 (UTC)

Duck, how do you know it could match more? Perhaps Berry's tried her best to match it, and she cannot match it anymore? I'm not entirely sure you can be the judge of whether or not it's capable of being matched "more", since you're not the artist of the image. Honestly, we're getting far too picky with what "matches" and what doesn't. I believe the texture is fine as it is. Cloud ( 01:09, 7/29/2013 )

I am very confident in Berry's abilities in charart making, and I do think she could just match it a bit more. And if we were going by that, then a lot of chararts would be being CBA'd just because the user 'tried' to make it match and did their best. All Berry needs to do is extend the texture to make it a bit longer, and it should be fine. Mistypebble 04:04, July 29, 2013 (UTC)

I never said I didn't have confidence in Berry's abilities. And the artist has said before that she'd rather not change the texture. Which, if you compare the the images, the texture really isn't that far off from one another. Also, I never said that...but if a user tries their best, then that's that, and we shouldn't push them if they don't want to change it. It was also said the texture was /up to Berry/, and she's said at least twice that I know of that she doesn't want to change it. Cloud ( 11:43, 7/29/2013 )

Nobody ever said that you did not have confidence in Berry's abilities. And the texture on this does look different, like Misty said, all she has to do is lengthen and thicken it out a tad. Cloudy, all Berry has to do is come out and say, I tried my best, I'd like some help. Then I'm sure users would do a join.me wit her or something to help, but if we're going to go by we shouldn't push users if they don't want to change it, then we might as well CBA everything without any comments because I'm sure every user tries their best, but we don't. Yes, I said the texture was up to Berry the second time, but Misty, also thought it should be changed. Also, I can only find once where Berry didn't want to change it. owo -Ducksauce 15:49, July 29, 2013 (UTC)

I agree with Cloudy; the texture is absolutely fine. It does not need to match the style of the StarClan image pixel for pixel, as every single artist has different styles and different ways to do chararts. Berry has matched the StarClan image to the best of her ability, and honestly, she does not need to match it better. Both images have texture that are close in style to the other, and both textures are very well done. I went to the liberty to ask a friend and a family member if the images matched each other, which both people said yes. Our readers aren't going to ctritisize images whose textures do not quite match, but still look just fine. We are not going to CBA every image because the artist did their best, we CBA the image because it looks done to us, and ask for any other critique from other members. Some images need more improvement than others, and if you have objections to the CBA rules, then take it to the project talk page. The only thing that I see that needs improvement in the current upload is that his left front paw and back paws need to be whitened a bit, because they look grey unless you examine the image image further. Knight Chasing after gold mines 17:33, July 29, 2013 (UTC)

Sorry, but I don't think the texture matches very well. It makes him look more mottled than furry. -Raelic (Talk)18:04 Mon Jul 29 2013

Oh and can you also expand the "highlight" on the face? His head looks almost entirely shading. -Raelic (Talk)18:14 Mon Jul 29 2013

While I agree it doesn't have to match exactly, it does need to match somewhat, and WHiskey's right about it looking mottled rather than furry. Also, maybe dull the actual highlights a bit, as they make him look a tad shiny. Paleggy Ship it 07:48,7/31/2013

Re-uploaded Seriously I hate this image so much. If this version gets approved i don't even know. Berry Midnight Monster's Parade! 09:25 Wed Jul 31

If you hate it so much, why exactly did you post it...? Smudge the texture more, it looks painted on right now. Paleggy Ship it 17:59,7/31/2013

Re-uploaded ha it looks half decent now. Berry Midnight Monster's Parade! 06:31 Sun Aug 4

CBA? and shush it looks great :o Mistypebble 13:31, August 4, 2013 (UTC)

Approved. Cloud ( 23:16, 8/5/2013 )

Palebird (W) ~ ApprovedEdit

Palebird.warrior i literally cannot do warriors anymore david 🌈 08:30, July 26, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit, wonderful job! -Ducksauce 18:23, July 26, 2013 (UTC)

Add some highlights to the white and black a bit to lighten them? Black I can't see shading on, and white's just a tad gray in the areas that should be highlighted. Paleggy Ship it 14:38,7/31/2013

I agree that you should blur the shading, and I also think that you should blur/smudge the texture a bit. Splashmist3271 (talk) 01:45, August 1, 2013 (UTC)

Please don't repeat other users' comments, Splashmist. But, I actually think a little more texture in the white wouldn't hurt. Perhaps adding more, will make the cat really come to life~ If you know what I mean... ;) So far, nice job skt. c: User:~xXRavenfrostXx~/Sig 05:31, August 1, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. forgot i even had this up david 🌈 07:40, August 1, 2013 (UTC)

Hmm CBA? -Raelic (Talk)13:20 Thu Aug 1 2013

Maybe it's just the awkward uncalled for zoom settings, but it's really hard for me to see the black shading. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Kelpsey (talkcontribs) 17:25, August 2, 2013

Just changing back the title for this ^^ critique. Knight Chasing after gold mines 18:00, August 3, 2013 (UTC)

I think it's fine, if I lighten it more it won't match. david 🌈 01:54, August 4, 2013 (UTC)

Back to CBA? Mistypebble 13:32, August 4, 2013 (UTC)

Approved. Cloud ( 23:16, 8/5/2013 )

Nightsky (W) - Approved Edit

Nightsky.warrior Dark ginger~ Comments? -Raelic (Talk)22:30 Mon Jul 29 2013

Ah only thing I'm able to say is define the earpink a bit? Holy shizz, Rae, this is stunning~ Canadia~ Sirius is hiding... 23:19, July 29, 2013 (UTC)

Beautiful! Maybe blur the shading a little at the the end of the tail?  Frosty ☾Supernatural 18:44, July 30, 2013 (UTC)

Amazing...-wants to steal- Maybe also blur the shading on the ear farthest from us? But that's your choice. You don't have to. User:~xXRavenfrostXx~/Sig 20:44, July 30, 2013 (UTC)

Earpink looks fine great in my opinion :) Where can I buy a awesomely feathery cat like this? Yeah, I'll pay 200 grand for that. User:Kelpsey/Sig 23:48 Tue Jul 30

I'll get the earpink because I really dont' like the color I used but I have no clue what either of you two are talking about. -Raelic (Talk)1:47 Wed Jul 31 2013

Other than the fact that I can hardly see the earpink, this charart is legit PERFECT! Great job! --Splashmist3271 (talk) 01:47, August 1, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Please don't repeat critiques. -Raelic (Talk)2:42 Thu Aug 1 2013

What we were saying, is that the parts we pointed out look like shading clumps. All were asking is to hit them slightly with the blur tool. ._. It doesn't take that much time, does it? About 30 seconds at least[not trying sounding mean, just helpful]. User:~xXRavenfrostXx~/Sig 05:20, August 1, 2013 (UTC)

Yes, I got that much. However, I think that both the ear and the tip of the tail are fine and don't think that there's anything to fix. -Raelic (Talk)13:10 Thu Aug 1 2013

Could you possible make her a little more white than pink? I get the shading's more than likely tinted, but I seriously thought she was pink at first. o.o Cloud ( 00:25, 8/2/2013 )

Looks perfectly fine to me. Not too tinted, looks clearly white imo. Paleggy Ship it 11:29,8/2/2013

Agreeing with Paleggy here. Don't want to sound like a beggar, but I was scrolling through the page and realized this has gone 48 hours without comment. x.x User:Kelpsey/Sig 22:54 Sun Aug 4

CBA? ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 01:55, August 5, 2013 (UTC)

Approved. Appledash the devil's hand 21:23, August 6, 2013 (UTC)

Nettlespot (A) ~ Approved Edit

Nettlespot.apprentice  Look I know there is the black background around it but I don't know how to remove it, I was wondering if one of you could help me with that? I made sure I had reserved first (I think) and I also think I named it correctly. I know the spots are bad, it was a five minute job. Comments? Ambershine223 (talk) 16:46, July 22, 2013 (UTC)

I honestly think that you should just redo it- removing a black background would be hard because the cat becomes blurry as you zoom in and the cat needs fixing anyways; the shading needs to be blurred, the ear-pink needs to be blurred, and the spots need to be touched up a tad. Splashmist3271 (talk) 17:17, July 22, 2013 (UTC)

That's fine, as I said before it was a five minute job so I'll withdraw this and maybe spend some more time on it later on. Ambershine223 (talk) 17:48, July 22, 2013 (UTC)

I'll take over if there's no objections. owo — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 03:45, 07/24/2013

You don't need to ask! Iveh Yo! 07:30, July 24, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I tried ;w; — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 12:57, 07/24/2013

The flecks on the warrior are larger and more orange. -Raelic (Talk)0:02 Thu Jul 25 2013

The shading tint should be red, I think, since the white looks a bit different than the warrior o3o. Queen Beebs 00:04, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

Still working? Amber The One and Only 20:36, July 27, 2013 (UTC)

Amber, please do not ask that, as it's a lead's job to ask if someone is working on an image; since if not, it's part of the declining process. You have two days, Ferk, or else this'll be declined for lack of work. Cloud ( 11:59, 7/29/2013 )

Sorry Cloudy. Amber The One and Only 12:09, July 29, 2013 (UTC)

Reups vwv — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 02:09, 07/30/2013

Perhaps lighten or lower the opacity of the flecks a tad to match the other images more. -Ducksauce 04:39, July 30, 2013 (UTC)

Maybe thin out the shading a little for a "highlight" on his left foreleg (our right)? Nice job! Knight Chasing after gold mines 17:06, July 30, 2013 (UTC)

Un-orange the shading, it makes the spots look like they went away. Use something like black, or blue? User:Kelpsey/Sig 23:28 Tue Jul 30

It has to be orange to match her other image. But I do agree, some of the spots do get lost in it. Maybe lighten it a tad? Mistypebble 03:33, July 31, 2013 (UTC)

No, it being this orange makes it not match. It needs to be desaturated a ton, even if it does need a tint to match. Paleggy Ship it 15:10,7/31/2013

Reupsferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 23:11, 07/31/2013

The spots are sparser and larger on the warrior. -Raelic (Talk)13:18 Thu Aug 1 2013

The spots are sorta getting lost in the shading, so perhaps lessen the tint just a tad? -Ducksauce 16:38, August 3, 2013 (UTC)

Still working? ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 02:25, August 5, 2013 (UTC)

I keep trying and I can't get this right, so I'm gonna withdraw ;A; — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 02:54, 08/6/2013

Re-ups I need sleep. Raven Exodia! It's not possible! 09:36, August 6, 2013 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Appledash the devil's hand 21:34, August 6, 2013 (UTC)

Approved. Splook it's a long way down. 02:29 Thu Aug 8

Fuzzypelt (A) ~ ApprovedEdit

Fuzzypelt.apprentice All colours are from his elder. Same as Shrewkit, I need comments ASAP, since I'll be away for two weeks on August 8th. Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 10:59, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shading on the furthest front paw. Cute! Queen Beebs 20:21, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded thanks! c: Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 20:26, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded since it looks like the tweak nomination has won, I've darkened his base to be more black. Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 17:40, July 26, 2013 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure his nose should be black, sine she's a black cat. -Ducksauce 18:18, July 26, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded oopsie x3 changes aren't showing; see here. Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 18:30, July 26, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded I added some more tufts to the tail to match W and E. but its not yet showing Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 18:47, July 27, 2013 (UTC)

CBA? c: Mistypebble 15:10, July 28, 2013 (UTC)

Sorry, but define the haunch highlight please. Also, could you make this color match his warrior? -Ducksauce 19:43, July 28, 2013 (UTC)

The color matches well enough, imho. Cloud ( 19:49, 7/28/2013 )

Reuploaded I defined the haunch highlight, and as Cloudy said, it does match enough. Changes aren't yet showing. Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 20:19, July 28, 2013 (UTC)

Re-CBA? Cloud ( 11:57, 7/29/2013 )

Sorry, but the face and shoulder highlight throw off the consistency with the light source as it looks like the light is coming from somewhere underneath rather than the left side because the highlights extend from the face down to the neck while the shoulder highlights cover the chest. You might also want to think about moving the haunch highlight more to our left for better consistency. Atelda insert vague subtext here 23:50, July 30, 2013

Reuploaded Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 22:22, July 31, 2013 (UTC)

I see some waste near the end of the tail and the hind leg closest to us. Queen Beebs 20:59, August 1, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded is this ready for CBA? I've got six days (eep!) to get him approved. Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 21:17, August 1, 2013 (UTC)

Spread the shoulder highlight up and extend the tail highlight all the way to the tip. Atelda insert vague subtext here 03:45, August 3, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded changes may not be showing, and I have five days left. Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 11:20, August 3, 2013 (UTC)

This might just be my screen, but some of the highlights look lighter than the other ones, also, define the shading at the base of the tail. -Ducksauce 16:45, August 3, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded it must be just your screen. I checked, and they're the same. I defined the shading on the base of the tail?Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 17:01, August 3, 2013 (UTC)

Yepp they all look the same shade to me :) maybe make earpink a duller purplier shade rather than the neonish pinker shade you have right now. You may leave it to have it match though. User:Kelpsey/Sig 02:26 Sun Aug 4

Reuploaded I have four days to get him approved, so I need him CBA'd asap.Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 09:11, August 4, 2013 (UTC)

Sorrel, this could just be me, but please do not keep saying that you need him CBA'd quickly, he'll be CBA'd when a SW thinks that he's ready, not any sooner. Anyways, define the light on his right back paw. -Ducksauce 17:27, August 4, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded sorry, Duck. Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 18:26, August 4, 2013 (UTC)

Could I prod a bit? It's been over 24 hours without comment. Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 19:29, August 5, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the shading on where the back meets the leg a tad. This is great! ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot 20:23, August 5, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded thanks, Hawky! Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 20:30, August 5, 2013 (UTC)

-prods- can I get another comment please?Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 20:31, August 6, 2013 (UTC)

Let's try the CBA again, hmm? This is actually very nicely done, and I know how much of a pain in the butt lineart can be. Cloud ( 20:56, 8/6/2013 )

Sorry to interrupt, but would you mind making the light source on the head and neck match the rest of the body? -Raelic (Talk)15:38 Wed Aug 7 2013

It does. I used the apprentice tutorials. Please can this be re-CBA'd?Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 15:39, August 7, 2013 (UTC)

Not really. The rest of the light seems to be coming from above, where the light on the head and neck seem to be coming from below. Try moving the highlight on the head up a bit. -Raelic (Talk)15:41 Wed Aug 7 2013

Actually, I can disagree with you, Breezey. The ight source can also probably be coming form the left (our left), then it would be fine. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot 15:44, August 7, 2013 (UTC)

Then in that case she needs to expand the highlight on the neck and define the unshaded tops of the feet. -Raelic (Talk)15:50 Wed Aug 7 2013

Reuploaded -sighs- I'm sorry but please put him back on CBA if he's ready; I'm going tomorrow.Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 15:56, August 7, 2013 (UTC)

CBA? -Raelic (Talk)18:24 Wed Aug 7 2013

Approved. Rainlegs 00:02, August 9, 2013 (UTC)

Ryestalk (Ki) ~ ApprovedEdit

Ryestalk.kit kit blanks are sure demons to work with, comments? o3o Queen Beebs 23:49, August 3, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs and tail. Cloud ( 00:53, 8/4/2013 )

Re-up. Queen Beebs 01:08, August 4, 2013 (UTC)

She looks paler than her apprentice image. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot 15:32, August 4, 2013 (UTC)

I color-picked this from the warrior image, so I think it's fine. Queen Beebs 15:33, August 4, 2013 (UTC)

I think stripes can use a little darkening. User:Kelpsey/Sig 22:56 Sun Aug 4

The stripes are also the same opacity and color as the warrior image, so I think it's fine as well o3o Queen Beebs 22:57, August 4, 2013 (UTC)

Can you sort of "sharpen" the stripes or taper them a bit at the ends. They look a tad paintbrushy.... ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 01:57, August 5, 2013 (UTC)

Re-up. eh I tried Queen Beebs 02:13, August 5, 2013 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. Appledash the devil's hand 21:19, August 6, 2013 (UTC)

I think it's fine, but if anyone disagrees I'll change it ^; Queen Beebs 21:21, August 6, 2013 (UTC)

Gonna side with Icy on this one, Beebs. If you don't mind defining it~ Cloud ( 21:30, 8/6/2013 )

Re-up. Queen Beebs 22:47, August 6, 2013 (UTC)

I think this looks pretty good. CBA? Splook it's a long way down. 01:43 Thu Aug 8

Approved, wonderful job Iveh Yo! 04:06, August 9, 2013 (UTC)

Hickorynose (Alt W) - Approved Edit

Hickorynose.warrior.altAnd here's the alt to go with it! Everything is from the warrior except pelt color, tinting has been changed to suit a gray cat, and earpink is slightly different (I don't feel like the color is right though, can someone help direct me to which color gradient is most appropriate?) Iveh Yo! 06:11, July 14, 2013 (UTC)

Define eye depth, and I can't see the light source. User:Kelpsey/Sig 19:46 Sun Jul 14

I think both are fine, perhaps just expand the unshaded area around his shoulder and the shading depth on his front paws. x3 -Ducksauce 19:56, July 14, 2013 (UTC)

Yeah the eyes are the same as on the Warrior so I'd really rather not touch it. I'll see what I can do about that in a little Duck ^^ Iveh Yo! 21:48, July 14, 2013 (UTC)

Maybe blur the highlight around the chest area? User:Shadewing/Sig 12:13, July 17, 2013 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded I tried, does this look any better? <: Iveh Yo! 06:18, July 19, 2013 (UTC)

Could you enlarge the highlight on his chest area? Rainlegs 00:59, July 20, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the highlight more, and define the shading. Appledash the devil's hand 02:06, July 20, 2013 (UTC)

Define the highlight, if any, on the front leg closest to us, and the hind leg closest to us. Nice work! Queen Beebs 03:35, July 20, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded I don't really like how the unshaded part of the chest looks but I'm not used to unshading that part Iveh Yo! 23:25, July 21, 2013 (UTC)

Expand it just a little more. Rainlegs 23:26, July 21, 2013 (UTC)

I have darker shading underneath of his chin and directly under his head though, and to me it just doesn't look right. Do you mean more out ---> this way and not up, because if so I can do that Iveh Yo! 23:35, July 21, 2013 (UTC)

Yeah, more to our right. Rainlegs 23:37, July 21, 2013 (UTC)

reuploaded Iveh Yo! 07:29, July 24, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit? -Raelic (Talk)0:07 Thu Jul 25 2013

Reuploaded I'm going to be getting some dental work done and I'm going to be at my Mom's for a few days (without Internet access), but I will be back within a week so yes I am still working on this :> Iveh Yo! 16:26, July 29, 2013 (UTC)

The shading seems to have no depth - could you add some and blur it? Appledash the devil's hand 21:17, July 29, 2013 (UTC)

His front shoulders highlight are a bit small, maybe expand a bit? User:Kelpsey/Sig 23:20 Tue Jul 30

I think his shoulder highlight is fine. Mistypebble 03:47, July 31, 2013 (UTC)

Still working? Mistypebble 13:44, August 4, 2013 (UTC)


Reuploaded *points to my previous comment above* Also I just redid the shading Iveh Yo! 17:18, August 4, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the neck. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot 20:10, August 4, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shading on the forelegs. Queen Beebs 02:14, August 5, 2013 (UTC)

Smooth out the highlights. Splook it's a long way down. 21:52 Tue Aug 6

Reuploaded Highlights do not need to be smoothed as they are hardly visible but I did the best I could do I suppose Iveh Yo! 17:37, August 7, 2013 (UTC)

CBA? c: Mistypebble 01:09, August 9, 2013 (UTC)

Approved. Cloud ( 05:01, 8/10/2013 )

Tallstar (KP) ~ Approved Edit

Tallstar.kittypet eh david 🌈 09:12, August 6, 2013 (UTC)

It's beautiful......~drools visibly xD~ Blur the tail-tip shading just a tad. Other than that, amazing. User:~xXRavenfrostXx~/Sig 11:34, August 6, 2013 (UTC)

The texture looks a bit painted on right now, perhaps blur it just a tad. -Ducksauce 01:29, August 7, 2013 (UTC)

I think the texture is fine. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot 02:47, August 8, 2013 (UTC)

No, I agree with Duck. The texture sort of seperates the limbs and belly from the body. May you smudge it so it flows with the body?this is amazingg User:Kelpsey/Sig 22:06 Thu Aug 8

..the texture does flow with the body. I think it's fine. Rainlegs 23:59, August 8, 2013 (UTC)

I agree with Leggo. It looks fine to me~ Cloud ( 00:25, 8/9/2013 )

Maybe define the earpink on this > ear a teenie bit? Unless you think it's fine. This is amazing! User:Shadewing/Sig 01:30, August 9, 2013 (UTC) Shadewing

Re-uploaded. didn't touch the texture but I blurred the tailtip. also the earpink is in shadow, so it'll be darker and harder to see (: david 🌈 05:55, August 9, 2013 (UTC)

Lengthen the tail ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 20:04, August 9, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded david 🌈 02:35, August 10, 2013 (UTC)

CBA? Splook it's a long way down. 02:50 Sun Aug 11

Approved. Cloud ( 18:16, 8/12/2013 )