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Barley(KP) - Approved

Barley.kittypet Comments? I really don;t like this one. owo -Ducksauce 01:26, August 7, 2013 (UTC)

If I'm not mistaken, on the loner image, the white parts are tinted blue, but I could be wrong ouo Queen Beebs 02:01, August 7, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the shading - and define it on the face. Also possibly lighten it on the white? 🎃Appledash🎃 13:37, August 8, 2013 (UTC)

Smooth out the tail shading a bit. Splook it's a long way down. 15:56 Thu Aug 8

Re-uploaded Redid the shading and I'm much more pleased. -Ducksauce 01:26, August 11, 2013 (UTC)

The shading needs to be blurred a tad more. 🎃Appledash🎃 16:05, August 11, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded -Ducksauce 18:32, August 11, 2013 (UTC)

CBA? Mistypebble 00:27, August 14, 2013 (UTC)

Approved. Jayce team rowlet < 08:05, 8/15/2013 >

Flamepelt (W) - Approved

Flamepelt.warrior scarly loves her days off with wifi....and Flamepelt too, I suppose. Comments? ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 03:06, July 20, 2013 (UTC)

Darken the stripes a bit? They look lighter compared to the elder. Nice work, Scar! Queen Beebs 03:31, July 20, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 13:59, July 20, 2013 (UTC)

I don't think that there are as many stripes on her his elder, and the stripes are a tad thicker on his elder, wonderful work! -Ducksauce 17:45, July 20, 2013 (UTC)

There's a tiny bit of waste this side > of the tail. Nice work!--Ambershine223 (talk) 21:46, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

Still working? -Whiskey our freedom's just a loan22:04 Thu Jul 25 2013

Re-uploaded Yup ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 01:22, July 26, 2013 (UTC)

The bit of waste is still there.--Amber The One and Only 12:30, July 26, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 23:07, July 27, 2013 (UTC)

Personal preference, but do you think you can give him more defined stripes? As is, the stripes almost look like texture. -Whiskey our freedom's just a loan17:22 Mon Jul 29 2013

Maybe add some more depth to the shading. If not, cool with me, as this is a neat image ouo Queen Beebs 02:42, July 30, 2013 (UTC)

Still working? -Whiskey our freedom's just a loan6:21 Sun Aug 4 2013

Re-uploaded Yeah, still working. Internet at camp's been a butt lately... >.< ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 01:20, August 5, 2013 (UTC)

Can you add some more depth to the shading, it still seems hard to see. 🎃Appledash🎃 21:35, August 6, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 20:02, August 9, 2013 (UTC)

CBA? This is actually quite neat looking. .o. Jayce team rowlet < 05:05, 8/10/2013 >

There is some shading left off the back heel. Sorry to interrupt!

  1. REDIRECT User:Kelpsea/Sig 05:45 Sat Aug 10

It looks fine to me? o.O I'm going to continue the CBA, since I honestly cannot see what you mean. Jayce team rowlet < 05:48, 8/10/2013 >

The purple tint doesn't really seem to go well with the base pelt color, in my opinion. Could you try lightening the shading or changing it to a more browner/redder color? Mistypebble 06:17, August 10, 2013 (UTC)

I agree, but I think it looked good when it was black imho.

  1. REDIRECT User:Kelpsea/Sig 16:39 Sat Aug 10

Waste <--- to the left of the neck.

  1. REDIRECT User:AmaterasuRaven/Sig 21:39, August 10, 2013 (UTC)

Dullen and redden the earpink, it's quite conspicuous right now. And by the shading being of the heel, I meant this..

  1. REDIRECT User:Kelpsea/Sig 20:06 Sun Aug 11

The earpink is fine, as it can be that color with red/ginger cats, too. But I agree with the neck/heel shading owo Mistypebble 22:06, August 12, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded This shading is driving me nuts... <angry face; squinty eyes> ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 02:34, August 13, 2013 (UTC)

CBA? -Whiskey our freedom's just a loan6:00 Wed Aug 14 2013

Sorry, but define paw shading?

  1. REDIRECT User:Kelpsea/Sig 23:52 Wed Aug 14

It's fine, imho. CBA will continue. Jayce team rowlet < 23:55, 8/14/2013 >

Approved. Jayce team rowlet < 08:05, 8/15/2013 >

Finchkit (Star) ~ Approved

Finchkit.star Ugh I dun like how this turned out Shimmer 06:19, 07/17/2013

O I just noticed I forgot to change the date from my previous reservation. I'm not entirely sure if that affects this considering it's like a minute after that I noticed and I'm changing it? Someone tell me whether or not this gets declined? /shot Shimmer 06:24, 07/17/2013

Could you blur the stripes just a tad to match her other image? Mistypebble 03:48, July 18, 2013 (UTC)

Just lighten the shading juuussst a smidge? If not, that's okay. Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 20:38, July 18, 2013 (UTC)

Shading needs lightened, and blurred a touch. -Whiskey our freedom's just a loan2:01 Fri Jul 19 2013

Thicken the stripes just by a pixel or two, and define the pale belly. -Ducksauce 00:06, July 20, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Shimmer 16:09, 07/20/2013

The black shading is throwing the color off, could you tint it a different color perhaps? Iveh Yo! 00:07, July 21, 2013 (UTC)

Waste < this side of the chest. --Ambershine223 (talk) 21:43, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Shimmer 11:45, 07/27/2013

Define the earpink on the << ear, as I can't see it. This is really cute Shimmer! Queen Beebs 02:41, July 30, 2013 (UTC)

Maybe lighten the shading a tad on the back/midsection area? User:Shadewing/Sig 00:26, August 1, 2013 (UTC) Shadewing

I think the shading's fine '^^ Still working? Mistypebble 03:08, August 3, 2013 (UTC)

I think both the shading and earpink are fine, I can see the earpink. Yeah sorry for not keeping up with this very well, I've been busy as of late. x.x Shimmer 22:37, 08/3/2013

I think the earpink on --> side is on the wrong side of the ear. x3 -Ducksauce 22:39, August 3, 2013 (UTC)

Looks great! The >> eye looks like its a lazy eye so maybe let it point the other way?

  1. REDIRECT User:Kelpsea/Sig 04:56 Sun Aug 4

Couldn't the earpink be on either side, though? I thought it worked for both, but sorry if I'm wrong >.< Mistypebble 13:38, August 4, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded No, it can't work for either side, nor was it on the wrong side. The color was just really close to the pelt color and it made it appear that way since the earpink layer was under the shading layer. I changed the earpink color, hopefully that's fixed it. I hate the eyes on this blank x.x Shimmer 14:21, 08/4/2013

I think the ear pink works on either side of --> ear. I know when I made Mosskit's alt, I had it on the other side, and it looked fine... I think it's artist's choice on these blanks, just like the loners. Jayce team rowlet < 19:38, 8/4/2013 >

Quite a few days without comments, so Imma CBA this. Jayce team rowlet < 01:08, 8/11/2013 >

Sorry, but shoulder stripes don't curve with the shoulder.

  1. REDIRECT User:Kelpsea/Sig 20:02 Sun Aug 11

They appear to be fine to me. ^^;; Jayce team rowlet < 20:07, 8/11/2013 >

I honestly still think the shading could be tinted more like in the kit image and made a little lighter Iveh Yo! 21:16, August 11, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded The tint matches almost exactly now, and I lightened it a bit. Not sure if changes are showing. Shimmer 12:07, 08/13/2013

I'm not sure if you want to, it could be just me, but can you define the nosepink?  ☯Stoneclaw☯ 18:07,8/13/2013  

I'd prefer not to, since it's the same color as the kit's. Shimmer 02:21, 08/14/2013

Looks fine to me. CBA? -Whiskey our freedom's just a loan6:01 Wed Aug 14 2013

Approved. Jayce team rowlet < 08:05, 8/15/2013 >

Cloudstar (A) ~ Approved

Cloudstar.apprentice *Adds to list of patterns I hate matching* I tried to make the white non-gray, and that's as white as they'll get. I was thinking about tinted shading, but then saw his others had black, so I went with the flow. Comments? ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot 00:58, July 29, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Bunch of things I forgot to do. XD ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot 01:03, July 29, 2013 (UTC)

The big white patch on his face should be reversed to the << side, like on his StarClan image Queen Beebs 01:06, July 29, 2013 (UTC)

No because the StarClan image was made after the pattern redo and it doesn't match and it needs to be tweaked Iveh Yo! 01:34, July 29, 2013 (UTC)

You can probably get away with darkening the gray slightly, since on the three out of the four images of Cloudstar, the gray is darker than this. It might also help if you defined the shading more. Wonderful, Hawkmask. Atelda insert vague subtext here 04:07, July 29, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot 14:12, July 29, 2013 (UTC)

Could you define the patches, and blur the shading on the arm. 🎃Appledash🎃 21:12, July 29, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot 22:00, July 29, 2013 (UTC)

Could you sharpen and/or define the shading a bit more on the shoulders and head? It's just a bit hard for me to tell where it is right now. And perhaps also sharpen up the patches a bit more? Knight Chasing after gold mines 16:57, July 30, 2013 (UTC)

I'll be gone for a few days so I'll re-upload when I get back. Please do not decline as it'll only be a day or two. Thanks! ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot 17:24, July 31, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot 19:39, August 1, 2013 (UTC)

Front shoulder shading is faced the wrong way. I think if you make the shading just a little teal or something you can get away with it and plus it'll make the shading look more... defined. 

  1. REDIRECT User:Kelpsea/Sig 17:36 Fri Aug 2

I think it's fine, and I am not doing tinted shading; no way. Shading is artist's choice. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot 01:01, August 3, 2013 (UTC)

Define where exactly the patches are, as I can't tell, and it looks like somewhat blotchy shading. Jayce team rowlet < 07:30, 8/3/2013 >

Withdrawing. I lost the file. I wish I could still work on this. I found it but I'll upload later. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot 03:02, August 4, 2013 (UTC)

Also, I should probably mention that the leader image is not tinted, and that's what everything was based off of, therefore you don't have to tint the image at all. Jayce team rowlet < 04:16, 8/4/2013 >

Re-uploaded. It's hard to work with such a small space, and the white is as defined as possible. The shading looked blotchy because of the area the shading was in and the way the white was smudged. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot 15:29, August 4, 2013 (UTC)

Do you use Gaussian blur? Try using the regular blur tool, only blurring when you need it to blend over a surface like a shoulder/haunch/etc.That way you can adjust the blur size to make it blend over more or less, depending on the surface. hope that made sense =3

  1. REDIRECT User:Kelpsea/Sig 18:06 Sun Aug 4

I already prefer using the blur tool, thanks. I am very experienced with GIMP and know my way around, so you don't have to tell me. -_- ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot 20:07, August 4, 2013 (UTC)

She was just giving you a suggested, Hawk. No need to get snippy. Also, the patches should still be defined a bit more, as they look a tad overblurred and don't quite match juuuust yet. Placement is good, as is coloring, but just overblurred. Jayce team rowlet < 20:13, 8/4/2013 >

Re-uploaded. Sorry. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot 00:32, August 5, 2013 (UTC)

The patches are rather over-smudged; could you maybe smooth out the edges a little bit? Also, can you define the shading a bit? Knight Chasing after gold mines 22:40, August 6, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Changes might not be showing. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot 00:09, August 7, 2013 (UTC)

I think the gray on his pelt looks smudged a bit. ♥♦Ɔяɛαмтαιℓ41♦♥ ♦Ƨнιиɛ βяιɢнт ˩ικɛ α Ɖιαмσи∂♦ 16:02, August 8, 2013 (UTC)

I think it's fine, and it's the shading that makes it look that way. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot 16:38, August 8, 2013 (UTC)

Nice! However, I would suggest defining the difference between the shading and the patches. They seem to blend together making it seem as if the patches are the shading. Perhaps try not to blur the patches too much.  ☯Stoneclaw☯ 00:19,8/9/2013  

Well, there isn't much I can do. The base pelt is very light, and the surface area of the blank is very small. The only thing I can do is lighten the shading on the patches. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot 00:41, August 9, 2013 (UTC)

Yes, but on the other images, you can clearly make out the patches. They're overblurred (still), and the white looks gray. Jayce team rowlet < 00:45, 8/9/2013 >

Re-uploaded. Redid shading and patches. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot 01:04, August 9, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. White looked gray. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot 01:07, August 9, 2013 (UTC)

The white still looks a teeny bit gray, but I think that'll be fine. This looks much better! Jayce team rowlet < 04:51, 8/9/2013 >

I'll be gone for a few days so I'll update when I get back. Please don't decline! ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot 17:45, August 10, 2013 (UTC)

Shade over the chest highlight as it suggests a light source from underneath. I find this image pleasing :)

  1. REDIRECT User:Kelpsea/Sig 20:19 Sun Aug 11

Re-uploaded. Looks like the trip would only last a day. -_- The light source is actually coming from <-- this side. Thank you. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot 01:44, August 12, 2013 (UTC)

There is waste all around the tail, and above the back behind the head. There might be more, but I didn't check. I'm lazy xD

  1. REDIRECT User:AmaterasuRaven/Sig 20:22, August 12, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. This must be it. *muffled awe music playing in the distance* ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot 00:19, August 13, 2013 (UTC)

Aye, this is nice. CBA? Knight Chasing after gold mines 00:49, August 14, 2013 (UTC)

Approved. Jayce team rowlet < 08:07, 8/15/2013 >

Doespring (Ki) ~ Approved

Doespring.kitI think she looks O.K xD But eh I'm not sure. RueyPatchey 00:18, July 10, 2013 (UTC)

Can you define her shading? She looks a bit flat. Rainlegs 03:00, July 10, 2013 (UTC)

Re-ups. RueyPatchey 03:30, July 10, 2013 (UTC)

Perhaps sharpen it just a little more? Rainlegs 03:46, July 10, 2013 (UTC)

Re-ups RueyPatchey 03:53, July 10, 2013 (UTC)

Liittle more, still looks overblurred and a bit flat as a result. Paleggy Ship it 13:37,7/10/2013

Re-ups. GIMPs being a pain.  RueyPatchey 14:35, July 10, 2013 (UTC)

Thin out the shading; I can hardly see that she's pale brown... Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 15:52, July 10, 2013 (UTC)

The backround won't go away... 1 second.. RueyPatchey 16:15, July 10, 2013 (UTC)

This needs to be a .png file, not a .jpg. Please fix that. Paleggy Ship it 16:21,7/10/2013

Re-ups. RueyPatchey 16:48, July 10, 2013 (UTC)

Could you lighten up her a little bit more, and then add/define "highlights" (not necessarily a new layer, just places where there is no shading) to the paws, legs, face, and maybe a little on the tail there. Nice job~ Knight Chasing after gold mines 18:28 Wed Jul 10

Re-ups. RueyPatchey 18:42, July 10, 2013 (UTC)

This should be named File:Doespring.kit.png Raven Chicks = Trouble 22:52 Wed Jul 10

^ Bloo is right. What you need to do, is you need to "Export" the file from GIMP[if that's what you use], save it again, check all the boxes except the very top one, then it becomes a png file.

  1. REDIRECT User:AmaterasuRaven/Sig 13:46, July 11, 2013 (UTC)

Re-ups Siberia 05:28, July 13, 2013 (UTC)

Re-ups. Siberia 17:45, July 12, 2013 (UTC) </font> 16:06, July 11, 2013 (UTC)

Define the unshaded parts on the face. It's also suggest you look at the Signature Policy and try to make your signature a template so that it doesn't create a wall of coding. -Whiskey our freedom's just a loan4:59 Sat Jul 13 2013

Okie. And I did. Siberia 05:28, July 13, 2013 (UTC)

Re-ups, I can change it if its still too dark. RueyPatchey 20:12, July 14, 2013 (UTC)

Define the unshaded parts on the face more. Shimmer 19:30, 07/18/2013

Define the tail shading a bit. Queen Beebs 03:36, July 20, 2013 (UTC)

Still working on this? Knight Chasing after gold mines 05:53, July 20, 2013 (UTC)

Re-ups. It looked weird when I uploaded it... RueyPatchey 17:43, July 21, 2013 (UTC)

Just smudge the pelt into her earpink a lil bit. Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 02:51, July 22, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink lots as it's looking rather solid. Thistleflight (talk) 16:24, July 22, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail. Queen Beebs 21:16, July 22, 2013 (UTC)

Re-ups ~ User:Takeachance32

Define the shading on the tail and chest some, and define the light source on the tail as well. Queen Beebs 01:07, July 24, 2013 (UTC)

Re-ups RueyPatchey 01:33, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

The shading is looking a bit flat; could you sharpen up the shading, along with expanding the "highlight" on the a face and defining the "highlight" on her left front leg? Knight Chasing after gold mines 17:05, July 27, 2013 (UTC)

Re-ups RueyPatchey 18:58, July 28, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shading on the <<< foot. Queen Beebs 02:39, July 30, 2013 (UTC)

Re-ups ☼We are the crazy people☼~Ke$ha 17:23, July 31, 2013 (UTC)

Stretch the chest highlight down the legs a bit to make the shading less flat

  1. REDIRECT User:Kelpsea/Sig 03:58 Thu Aug 1

I'm going to withdraw her, if thats ok with ya'll. I'm not very good at textured cats and I think I'll work on something less complicated. ☼We are the crazy people☼~Ke$ha 23:30, August 1, 2013 (UTC)

I'll take over. —.neha darling just hold on. 23:33, August 1, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded -- I tried...to match it best I could, probably going to redo the shading. —.neha darling just hold on. 15:45, August 7, 2013 (UTC)

Her head looks a little darker than her body. Maybe fix that (if needed) ♥♦Ɔяɛαмтαιℓ41♦♥ ♦Ƨнιиɛ βяιɢнт ˩ικɛ α Ɖιαмσи∂♦ 13:40, August 8, 2013 (UTC)

That's the shading. All the colors are from the apprentice image. —.neha darling just hold on. 20:22, August 9, 2013 (UTC)

Could you define the shading on the legs and tail a bit? He looks cool! Knight Chasing after gold mines 19:36, August 10, 2013 (UTC)

I'm having some trouble seeing the texture, define it a bit? -Ducksauce 02:16, August 11, 2013 (UTC)

Define the eye depth a bit, maybe? ouo Queen Beebs 03:46, August 11, 2013 (UTC)

There is shading missing along the lineart on the right side. Fix please.

  1. REDIRECT User:AmaterasuRaven/Sig 12:38, August 12, 2013 (UTC)

? The right side looks fine, just define the shading all together ^^ Mistypebble 22:00, August 12, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded -- Okay, I had to redo the entire image, since I lost the file. I defined the texture and the shading. And Beebs, the eye color is exactly from the apprentice, so I'd rather not change it. —.neha darling just hold on. 20:15, August 13, 2013 (UTC)

Looks good to me, honestly. CBA? Jayce team rowlet < 08:08, 8/15/2013 >

Sorry, but can you define the unshaded parts on her tail+paws? Then I'll re-CBA it. Mistypebble 00:10, August 16, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded -- These blanks are really tiny, but I did the best I could. —.neha darling just hold on. 13:16, August 16, 2013 (UTC)

As Misty promised. CBA? Jayce team rowlet < 03:38, 8/18/2013 >

Approved. Jayce team rowlet < 11:39, 8/19/2013 >

The Stranger (TST) (Ro) - Approved

The Stranger (TST).rogue Comments? First time using photoshop with this computer. o.o -Whiskey our freedom's just a loan16:38 Fri Aug 16 2013

Ohmygawd this is beautiful. *steals* Can you blur the shading on the shoulder area, if you'd like. owo  ☯Stoneclaw☯ 17:28,8/16/2013  

Is the nose filled in? your chararts are freaking amazing.

  1. REDIRECT User:Kelpsea/Sig 17:57 Fri Aug 16

Reuploaded. Thank ya kindly. ouo -Whiskey our freedom's just a loan6:07 Sat Aug 17 2013

I can't find anything else wrong with this so CBA? Iveh Yo!  00:04, August 19, 2013 (UTC)

Approved Iveh Yo! 00:47, August 20, 2013 (UTC)

Brackenwing (Alt Star) ~ Approved

Brackenwing.star.alt Changes aren't showing. It'll be the second in the file history, or you can look here. I'd rather not change the color, as it's the base from Oakheart's tawny alt warrior, and I worked for hours getting that coloring right. Jayce team rowlet < 19:51, 8/15/2013 >

Okay I found a missing pixel and reuploaded and it seems like changes are showing now. Jayce team rowlet < 20:36, 8/15/2013 >

Some of the eye color is leaking out; this is really pretty Skye c: Raven Chicks = Trouble 21:33 Thu Aug 15

Re-uploaded. here be image if changes aren't showing. Which if it shows up blurry, then it's wikia, and the image is fine. Jayce team rowlet < 22:14, 8/15/2013 >

Perhaps add some specularity in the eyes. Wanty (talk) 00:36, August 16, 2013 (UTC)

I believe eyes are artist's choice. Blur >>>> this paw's shading a bit?

  1. REDIRECT User:Kelpsea/Sig 01:12 Fri Aug 16

Well I was gonna do this image since mine got declined..but no. A SW/deputy can do it.. *sigh* Just what we need.. *sad*

  1. REDIRECT User:AmaterasuRaven/Sig 01:47, August 16, 2013 (UTC)

Ravenfrost, this is not a place to mope about not getting an image you wanted. What are you implying with that last sentence? That comment was completely unnecessary and quite rude. You keep your complaints to yourself, and you do not try to make other feel sorry for you because you were unable to claim an image you wanted. Just because Skye is a the deputy doesn't mean she has any less or more claim to an image than you do- in this project, it's first come, first serve. If that doesn't work for you, then, your loss. Rainlegs 03:20, August 16, 2013 (UTC)

Leggo, we have it under control, so yeah. Stop acting rude please, thank you.

  1. REDIRECT User:AmaterasuRaven/Sig 16:23, August 16, 2013 (UTC)

Refrain from commenting on my image for approval if you do not have anything nice, constructive, or supporting to add. If you do not comply with this request, I will be reporting you for harassment. Jayce team rowlet < 16:25, 8/16/2013 >

Skye gave me permission to comment on this. Raven, if anyone is the one being rude right now, it is you. You were the one who commented on an image merely for sympathy, in hopes of gaining it. From what is above, on Bristlekit, you are being disrespectful towards not only your senior warriors/deputy, but your own fellow PCA members. We are all equals, save for the ability to CBA and/or decline images. I'm going to stop now before I get carried away, but you are on some thin ice right now. Watch what you say next time. Rainlegs 16:29, August 16, 2013 (UTC)

Oh, and, Skye, remove the shading on his chin and add some highlights to his ears. Rainlegs 16:30, August 16, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I just removed the shading from the ears as it's not a light source I've had enough practice with to start doing that just yet. Jayce team rowlet < 16:50, 8/16/2013 >

Since my comment was before the argument directly a few spaces above, I think you had skipped my comment about blurring the >>> paw shading? Or do you think it's alright?

  1. REDIRECT User:Kelpsea/Sig 18:00 Fri Aug 16

Re-uploaded. I /did/ miss that, I apologize. Jayce team rowlet < 18:18, 8/16/2013 >

Isn't Brackenwing a she-cat? The eyelash is missing. X3 Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 22:15, August 16, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Whoops ouo Jayce team rowlet < 22:56, 8/16/2013 >

Could you add a little more shading to the right side of the stomach/back where it meets that line by the shoulder/elbow? Looks like the shading recedes there a bit. Hoping that made sense. Knight Chasing after gold mines 01:10, August 19, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Changes might not be showing. And I got what you meant, Knight. ouo Jayce team rowlet < 01:18, 8/19/2013 >

This is awfully pretty, CBA? :) Knight Chasing after gold mines 02:07, August 20, 2013 (UTC)

Approved. Jayce team rowlet < 20:29, 8/21/2013 >

Wrenflight (Ki) ~ Approved

Wrenflight.kitOh my gosh, its been so long since i've done this. Its my first time doing a more detailed one, so i might need some help :P. I should have finished this earlier, but a hard drive crash cost me all of my hard work. Pearls 22:01, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

Se looks a bit cross-eyed. This is cute! Queen Beebs 22:07, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

I agree, her eyes need fixing. --Ambershine223 (talk) 22:13, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded, Changes aren't showing! D: Pearls 22:17, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

Eyes still look a bit... Weird. But apart from the eyes, this is great!--Ambershine223 (talk) 22:50, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded, i noticed that this image was more of a russet color than brown, so i fixed that. I also tried to fix the eyes too. Pearls 23:02, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

Taking a break from this for today, Will continue tommorow. Pearls 23:06, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

The texture doesn't really match, nor does the color. Try to make her match more. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot 23:22, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

I'm withdrawing this since i'm so caught up with other things. Anyone else is free to take over. Pearls 14:39, July 26, 2013 (UTC)

I changed the heading for you. --Amber The One and Only 14:51, July 26, 2013 (UTC)

I can take over. User:Shadewing/Sig 15:16, July 26, 2013 (UTC) Shadewing

Re-Uploaded. I redid it.  Changes not showing.  On the file page, you have to look at the second most recent version to see mine.  User:Shadewing/Sig 23:28, July 31, 2013 (UTC) Shadewing

Define the ear pink, I can't really see it. Also, define the shading on the tail a little more. Looks good. :)  Frosty ☾Supernatural 05:52, August 1, 2013 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded.  Thank you!  I don't think the changes are showing.  User:Shadewing/Sig 18:52, August 1, 2013 (UTC) Shadewing

Her color doesn't quite match the warrior. -Ducksauce 16:41, August 3, 2013 (UTC)

I got the colors off the warrior.  But I'll try to make it match more.  User:Shadewing/Sig 19:15, August 3, 2013 (UTC) Shadewing

Could you make the texture curve with the body some more? Shimmer 02:49, 08/4/2013

Re-Uploaded I got the colors straight off the warrior again, so if they don't match then I don't know why. Changes aren't showing. User:Shadewing/Sig 20:51, August 4, 2013 (UTC) Shadewing

Still make the texture flow around the body some more? And define it some? Shimmer 22:48, 08/4/2013

The shading looks flat, could you define/sharpen it and darken it? Knight Chasing after gold mines 23:39, August 4, 2013 (UTC)

Define the ear pink a little? Amber The One and Only 07:54, August 5, 2013 (UTC)

If need be, you can always just email me for the .xcf file here. Atelda insert vague subtext here 21:32, August 5, 2013 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Changes aren't showing. Second image down on the file page again. User:Shadewing/Sig 00:08, August 9, 2013 (UTC) Shadewing

Could you define the shading on her legs and tail? It looks rather flat there. Nice job! Knight Chasing after gold mines 17:06, August 10, 2013 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Changes aren't showing. User:Shadewing/Sig 19:04, August 12, 2013 (UTC) Shadewing

There is a speck of waste near this ----> front paw. Also, make the shine of white on ----> this eye match the other.

  1. REDIRECT User:AmaterasuRaven/Sig 20:18, August 12, 2013 (UTC)

Eye style is artist's choice, Raven, and I can't quite see what you're talking about... the eyes look fine to me? Jayce team rowlet < 20:22, 8/12/2013 >

One white is brighter than the other. And, I wouldn't have said anything about it if there had been shading where that eye is. But since there isn't, it has to be fixed. Know what I'm talking about now? Lol xD

  1. REDIRECT User:AmaterasuRaven/Sig 20:32, August 12, 2013 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. I can't really tell if changes are showing. I removed the waste and fixed the eyes. If waste is showing up on this version, changes aren't showing. User:Shadewing/Sig 01:25, August 13, 2013 (UTC) Shadewing

Maybe move the ear pink up on this >>>> side? If not, that's fine. Amber The One and Only 10:01, August 14, 2013 (UTC)

Wait, wrong ear. <<<< That one. Amber The One and Only 10:02, August 14, 2013 (UTC)

Ear pink looks fine to me, imho. Jayce team rowlet < 13:22, 8/14/2013 >

I agree with Skye. User:Shadewing/Sig 17:38, August 14, 2013 (UTC) Shadewing

Define the unshaded parts on her two front paws? Otherwise, well done! Mistypebble 00:14, August 15, 2013 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Again, it's hard to tell if changes are showing. If the shading on the paws is defined like Misty said, then they are. User:Shadewing/Sig 00:06, August 16, 2013 (UTC) Shadewing

Legs are flat. Instead of painting and blurring, how about using a fuzzy brush abot half the size of the legs and erasing a highlight through the shading? Don't have to if you don't want to, but...

  1. REDIRECT User:Kelpsea/Sig 01:09 Fri Aug 16

I'm not just "painting and blurring" but I will try to add some highlight or depth. User:Shadewing/Sig 02:39, August 16, 2013 (UTC) Shadewing

Re-Uploaded. I don't believe changes are showing. User:Shadewing/Sig 17:49, August 16, 2013 (UTC) Shadewing

am I the only one who paints and blurs my shading? I feel really awkward sorry lol It looks great now~ How about some depth to the tail?

  1. REDIRECT User:Kelpsea/Sig 18:06 Fri Aug 16

Re-Uploaded. Tried the best I could, kit tails are a pain to work with. I can't tell if changes are showing, but they probably aren't. User:Shadewing/Sig 16:29, August 18, 2013 (UTC) Shadewing

This looks great so CBA? Iveh Yo! 00:06, August 19, 2013 (UTC)

I'm sorry to interrupt, but could you add some more depth to the shading? Make a thinner, darker layer of shading on the parts where no light hits at all, and blur it the way you do normally with your shading o3o Queen Beebs 00:30, August 19, 2013 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Changes aren't showing. User:Shadewing/Sig 02:07, August 19, 2013 (UTC) Shadewing

Back to CBA? Mistypebble 20:21, August 21, 2013 (UTC)

Approved. Jayce team rowlet < 20:56, 8/22/2013 >

Flamepelt (E) ~ Approved

Flamepelt.elderRe-posted! Um, I tried to fix all of the things Knight suggested before this got declined. Changes aren't showing. Comments? User:Shadewing/Sig 01:46, July 17, 2013 (UTC) Shadewing

Define the paw shading just a tad? Nice work, Shade Queen Beebs 01:48, July 17, 2013 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Thanks!  Changes not showing.  User:Shadewing/Sig 01:57, July 17, 2013 (UTC) Shadewing

The stripes still look a tad paintbrushy imho, smudge them a bit more? -Ducksauce 05:33, July 17, 2013 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded.  I don't think the changes are showing.  User:Shadewing/Sig 22:55, July 18, 2013 (UTC) Shadewing

Could just be me, but the stripes almost look redder up front. -Ducksauce 00:07, July 20, 2013 (UTC)

Can you expand the earpink to fill the whole ear? Mistypebble 22:50, July 22, 2013 (UTC)

Still working? ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 15:18, July 23, 2013 (UTC)

Sorry Shadewing, but I have to decline this due to lack of work >.< Mistypebble 23:27, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

I'll take over. Atelda insert vague subtext here 23:27, July 25, 2013 (UTC)

Atelda, it's almost been a week. Are you still working? Not to rush, but...

  1. REDIRECT User:Kelpsea/Sig 17:49 Fri Aug 2

She removed her reservation, because she doesn't have enough time. ._. ...an last I checked, asking if someone was still working on an image was a lead job? o.O Jayce team rowlet < 18:16, 8/2/2013 >

Actually, I don't think the guidelines say anything about only leads asking if someone is still working. Unless I missed something, it says nothing like that. owo -Ducksauce 18:30, August 2, 2013 (UTC)

My apologies lol XD may i remove my blizzardwing reservation and take over?? I was having trouble with that pattern anyways

  1. REDIRECT User:Kelpsea/Sig 02:33 Sun Aug 4

'Course, Kelpsey~ Don't even really need to ask, just make sure to reserve it. Shimmer 02:54, 08/4/2013

Reup Arghhh here... I think I've ripped all the hair out of my head now *shoots pixlr and its founder and myself and Flamepelt*

  1. REDIRECT User:Kelpsea/Sig 04:43 Sun Aug 4

Okay, I hope you don't mind, but I'm not going to re-up till Monday when I finally get home and have gimp to work with. Please dont decline lol

  1. REDIRECT User:Kelpsea/Sig 04:46 Sun Aug 4

I believe it'd need to match the warrior, since it's already up on the approval page. It's fine if you can't reupload, as long as it doesn't go over a week between updates. Shimmer 05:02, 08/4/2013

I'd prefer if you comment on what is currently posted because Scarlet hasn't posted for well over a week and has gotten a comment about the stripes. I'll leave a message on her talk concerning our images. I don't have anything against her image, it's just i don't want to get caught up imitating scarlet's amazing masterpieces when I'm not sure what's happening with this yet. lol inexperienced apprentices x.x

  1. REDIRECT User:Kelpsea/Sig 16:38 Sun Aug 4

I think you have to wait until the end of the 7th day or until it's at least declined. Anyway if this does stay up, define the shading depth tons and blur the stripes a tad. -Ducksauce 17:24, August 4, 2013 (UTC)

It's not declined until it's declined, therefore you really should match Scarlet's pattern... Jayce team rowlet < 17:27, 8/4/2013 >

Also, to match Scar's pattern, darken the base coat a bit, and define the earpink some. Queen Beebs 02:18, August 5, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded reunited with gimp X3 I know this doesn't match completely for the sake of realism. I'll check with Scar if this is okay or not.

  1. REDIRECT User:Kelpsea/Sig 05:07 Mon Aug 5

Make the tail match more. This is great! ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot 16:31, August 5, 2013 (UTC)

It looks like he has paler parts on him that he does not have on his warrior image, could you get rid of those? Mistypebble 23:25, August 5, 2013 (UTC)

Add some more depth to the shading, its hard to see. 🎃Appledash🎃 21:36, August 6, 2013 (UTC)

Could you elongate the haunch shading a bit into the leg? If that made any sense at all. Splook it's a long way down. 21:42 Tue Aug 6

New shading! Awaiting an answer from scarly right now. Crossing my fingers for cba lol

  1. REDIRECT User:Kelpsea/Sig 00:23 Thu Aug 8

Blur the stripe above the eye just a smidge. Great job! Splook it's a long way down. 16:00 Thu Aug 8

The one directly above, or the chevron-shaped one?

  1. REDIRECT User:Kelpsea/Sig 20:01 Thu Aug 8

The chevron-shaped one. Splook it's a long way down. 22:06 Thu Aug 8

Can you get rid of all the pale parts? The warrior does not have any. Also, the tail still needs to match. (the warrior doesnt have the solid stripes on them right? forgive me if it's just my bad eyesight) Mistypebble 00:59, August 9, 2013 (UTC)

Nope, you're right, Misty. There are pale parts on the head and face and on the tail, they need to have stripes.  Frosty ☾Supernatural 13:41, August 9, 2013 (UTC)

Reup I'd already gotten rid of the pale parts x.x and I'd rather keep the tail that way because it's more realistic. Blurred the stripe, though.

  1. REDIRECT User:Kelpsea/Sig 04:57 Sat Aug 10

Unless Scarlet has it on her image, you need to remove it from yours, actually... and I don't see that on the warrior, so please match Scar's image....that includes the tail. o3o Jayce team rowlet < 05:04, 8/10/2013 >

Reup Tinted shading to match scar's too.sneaking aroung @ 1:30 am >;)

  1. REDIRECT User:Kelpsea/Sig 08:29 Sat Aug 10

There is still a big blank spot on the face. you should have the mini stripes run over it, but keep the big ones still. Make it match. Run it smoothly over.

  1. REDIRECT User:AmaterasuRaven/Sig 13:56, August 10, 2013 (UTC)

I think it's fine.

  1. REDIRECT User:Kelpsea/Sig 16:35 Sat Aug 10

I agree with Raven. The warrior had the mini stripes running over his face, so of course the elder should. Add them please.  Frosty ☾Supernatural 01:04, August 11, 2013 (UTC)

If I'm not mistaken the elder would have a bluish tint, since the warrior has it o3o Queen Beebs 03:49, August 11, 2013 (UTC)

Reup Thought the tint was purple, lol XD and if i'm not mistaken, there aren't any stripes on the muzzle but..

  1. REDIRECT User:Kelpsea/Sig 20:11 Sun Aug 11

There are not. xD Maybe add a little more depth to the shading where the legs bend and meet?

  1. REDIRECT User:AmaterasuRaven/Sig 16:43, August 12, 2013 (UTC)

Can you try to make the stripes on the tail match more to the body? They look too long, and there are too few of them Mistypebble 01:47, August 13, 2013 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading more?  ☯Stoneclaw☯ 18:08,8/13/2013  

Reupload -_-

  1. REDIRECT User:Kelpsea/Sig 02:57 Wed Aug 14

Why the face? I saw no need for it.... Anyways, blur the shading a little bit more, please. Jayce team rowlet < 02:59, 8/14/2013 >

Reup. I can't blur anymore than this. And I hadn't done anything to the face in the last upload.

  1. REDIRECT User:Kelpsea/Sig 23:46 Wed Aug 14

No, I was talking about your -_- comment. Could you define exactly where the ear pink is? I have to squint to see it. Jayce team rowlet < 23:56, 8/14/2013 >

Reup. Sorry it's just this image was beginning to piss me off.

  1. REDIRECT User:Kelpsea/Sig 00:08 Thu Aug 15

Haha, don't worry, we've all been there cx But I do believe that there is a gray pixels on his haunch lineart.. Mistypebble 00:19, August 15, 2013 (UTC)

Reup. lol

  1. REDIRECT User:Kelpsea/Sig 00:37 Thu Aug 15

Oh jeezuz umm if this isn't approved by Tuesday-Wednesday then decline for me, I've gtg to france! spending all day with my granny doing nothing... Fun. -_-

  1. REDIRECT User:Kelpsea/Sig 22:23 Thu Aug 15

Could you extend the "highlight" on the haunch farther back some more? It looks rather flat there, and that should help out a bit. If not, darken the shading near the far back near the lineart of the haunch to add depth. Knight Chasing after gold mines 01:11, August 16, 2013 (UTC)

Reup I think these blanks might require a bit of tweaking..

  1. REDIRECT User:Kelpsea/Sig 06:51 Fri Aug 16

Blur the shading, and if you want to, maybe add some more depth (you can try adding a 'secondary shading' with some darker parts in the... areas that are the darkest). Sorry if that's too confusing. x.x  ☯Stoneclaw☯ 02:00,8/17/2013  

I think that the shading is fine without the blurring. But with depth, I do agree. Mistypebble 03:32, August 17, 2013 (UTC)

reup i hate this new depth thing. uploads are all up to hawk now unless this is CBAed. hope its allowed lol

  1. REDIRECT User:Kelpsea/Sig 03:55 Sat Aug 17

Kelp allowed me to take over, so this is officially mine now. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot 19:33, August 18, 2013 (UTC)

I don't think there'd be any earpink on the furthest ear, but I could be wrong. Queen Beebs 19:37, August 18, 2013 (UTC)

Artist's interpretation, Beebs. It's like the loner and rogue blanks in the sense you have some choice as to where the ear pink is located. Jayce team rowlet < 19:40, 8/18/2013 >

Re-uploaded. I decided to change anything according to the way I usually do things, so this is how it is. Changes may not be showing. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot 19:41, August 19, 2013 (UTC)

Could you darken or define the shading on the neck a little bit? Nice! Knight Chasing after gold mines 01:22, August 20, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Changes might not be showing. Thank you kindly, Knight. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot 17:25, August 20, 2013 (UTC)

May I budge for comments, please? It's been 48 hours since the last one. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot 19:53, August 22, 2013 (UTC)

Of course! Hmm, maybe darken the shading on the tail to match it with the rest? Lovely job~ Mistypebble 03:23, August 23, 2013 (UTC)

It is the same, it's just the tail is coming out from the body, and I think it's fine, so I'll leave it the way it is unless someone says otherwise. Thank you very much, Misty. ^-^ ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot 12:38, August 23, 2013 (UTC)

I agree with Misty, actually. It shouldn't need to be darkened too much, though. Perhaps just a little bit of a slide on the opacity bar. Jayce team rowlet < 21:36, 8/24/2013 >

Re-uploaded. Thank you for your suggestion, Cloudy. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot 00:04, August 25, 2013 (UTC)

Let's go CBA on this. Such wonderful artwork. .o. Jayce team rowlet < 22:35, 8/25/2013 >

Approved. Jayce team rowlet < 19:38, 8/27/2013 >

Plumclaw (W) ~ Approved

Plumclaw.warrior First charart on this wiki. Matched it as best I could to the apprentice charart that is up there, though I may change the eye color to match it to the one up there later on if people agree to that. Comments? Stoemstar 04:26, July 26, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink. Nice job for a first! Thistleflight (talk) 15:01, July 26, 2013 (UTC)

Derfine the shdaing, and define the earpink. Match the eye color please. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot 17:08, July 26, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Matched exact eye color from apprentice, and made her a bit lighter to match the apprentice too. Stoemstar 18:58, July 26, 2013 (UTC)

Darken and define the shading. Queen Beebs 16:59, July 27, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Stoemstar 17:18, July 27, 2013 (UTC)

I see some waste in the area between her legs. Queen Beebs 17:21, July 27, 2013 (UTC)

Can you define the unshaded parts on her legs some? ^^ Mistypebble 15:06, July 28, 2013 (UTC)

Define the ear pink. 🎃Appledash🎃 21:14, July 29, 2013 (UTC)

I can see the earpink alright. Define the shading on the head a little bit? Very nice job on this! Knight Chasing after gold mines 20:08, July 30, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ Stoemstar 17:13, July 31, 2013 (UTC)

Nice!  Maybe blur the highlight on the face/head area?  User:Shadewing/Sig 23:00, July 31, 2013 (UTC) Shadewing

Define the light source. Atelda insert vague subtext here 03:50, August 3, 2013 (UTC)

Still working? Mistypebble 23:21, August 5, 2013 (UTC)

Sorry I was on vacation. Reuploaded! Stoemstar 17:23, August 6, 2013 (UTC)

She looks too shiny. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot 17:35, August 6, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shading. 🎃Appledash🎃 21:31, August 6, 2013 (UTC)

Could you smoothen out the neck shading a bit? Splook it's a long way down. 21:39 Tue Aug 6

Shading is still sourceless. click here to see a guide I made for you.

  1. REDIRECT User:Kelpsea/Sig 22:27 Thu Aug 8

Lighten the base coat a bit - she looks a tad darker than the apprentice. Queen Beebs 03:51, August 11, 2013 (UTC)

Still working? -And before you say anything, Cloudy, it's not only a leads job, as Duck said-

  1. REDIRECT User:AmaterasuRaven/Sig 18:51, August 12, 2013 (UTC)

While it may not specifically be in the guidelines, it has to do with the approving or declining an image, and therefore it is a lead's job. So please do not do so. -Whiskey our freedom's just a loan20:31 Mon Aug 12 2013

Sorry Rae, it won't happen again. Only if I become a lead one day. I swear.

  1. REDIRECT User:AmaterasuRaven/Sig 22:30, August 12, 2013 (UTC)

Sorry, I keep disappearing, anyways, thanks for the guide Cloudy :} Reups! Stoemstar 23:10, August 14, 2013 (UTC)

Oopsies I'm not Cloudy! We just have the same first name lol Define eye depth?

  1. REDIRECT User:Kelpsea/Sig 23:49 Wed Aug 14

Eye style is artist's choice, I think. But could you define the tail shading just a tad? Good job! Mistypebble 00:13, August 15, 2013 (UTC)

Define the neck shading too. Amazing image is awesome, dear. ouo Jayce team rowlet < 08:00, 8/15/2013 >

Add some more depth to the shading o3o Queen Beebs 21:36, August 15, 2013 (UTC)

Sorry, but it's been over a week with no reuploads. This will have to be declined >.< Mistypebble 05:03, August 22, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. So yeah. Too lazy to start a new section. Not too fond of the shading... Jayce team rowlet < 05:28, 8/22/2013 >

He be sexy, Cloudeh! Stretch the ear-pink a touch with the smudge tool? ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 17:54, August 23, 2013 (UTC)

Blur dat shoulder shading.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  19:55, 23, 08, 2013

Re-uploaded. Eh. Jayce team rowlet < 20:31, 8/23/2013 >

It's been several days without comments, and I really like this, so CBA? Knight Chasing after gold mines 03:58, August 26, 2013 (UTC)

Approved. Jayce team rowlet < 19:38, 8/27/2013 >

Algernon (KP) - Approved

Algernon.kittypet and Prussia's next on the list of Country collars. Sorry for posting this late, band camp is taking up most of my days. Changes may not be showing. Splook it's a long way down. 01:29 Wed Aug 7

Where's the light source? I can't see any. Likin' the eyes on this one o3o Queen Beebs 02:01, August 7, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I redid the shading to have more of the light coming in like <-- . Better? And thanks :D Splook it's a long way down. 20:29 Wed Aug 7

Is there a chance of you being able to define the texture on this? Iveh Yo! 19:15, August 8, 2013 (UTC)

Add a touch more depth to his shading so he doesn't look quite as flat. Rainlegs 23:58, August 8, 2013 (UTC)

Define the earpink. This is amazing! 🎃Appledash🎃 16:05, August 11, 2013 (UTC)

Idk if I'm repeating comments, but the shading looks a bit more like a stripe on his back than shading.

  1. REDIRECT User:Kelpsea/Sig 20:15 Sun Aug 11

Reuploaded. Redid the shading altogether. Is it too dark? Splook it's a long way down. 21:53 Mon Aug 12

Does the base color match? It looks a bit darker on his rogue image. Mistypebble 22:13, August 12, 2013 (UTC)

^ I think what Misty's saying is that there are darker texture "slashes" I'll call them, on the rogue. Please add those. Slashes? What has our world come to...x3

  1. REDIRECT User:AmaterasuRaven/Sig 22:28, August 12, 2013 (UTC)

No, I think the darker "slashes" are just the base under the texture, and yeah I think the base pelt could be darkened a tad. Also, possibly sharpen the texture just a bit. -Ducksauce 02:40, August 13, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the shading a tad.  ☯Stoneclaw☯ 18:03,8/13/2013  

I think the shading should only be blurred on the head, if she blurs it on the body all together it seems itll be too defined to me. 🎃Appledash🎃 13:23, August 14, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Splook it's a long way down. 01:26 Fri Aug 16

Umm, is it just me, or did some error happen to the file? O.O I can't see it anymore ;(

  1. REDIRECT User:Kelpsea/Sig 07:01 Fri Aug 16

I reuploaded the file. Can you see it now? Splook it's a long way down. 17:42 Fri Aug 16

Yep! It's there and looking fineee :)

  1. REDIRECT User:Kelpsea/Sig 17:51 Fri Aug 16

Define the unshaded part on the tail and back foot? Mistypebble 03:55, August 18, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Splook it's a long way down. 22:05 Mon Aug 19

Maybe define/lighten up the "highlight" on his face a little to match the rest of the light-ness of the rest of the cat? Very beautiful! Knight Chasing after gold mines 02:13, August 20, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thank you! Splook it's a long way down. 23:13 Thu Aug 22

I love it, Splook! c: Maybe add some more lighter "slashes" on the face? To make it blend with the rest of the fur? Slashes? Here I go again...

  1. REDIRECT User:AmaterasuRaven/Sig 02:34, August 23, 2013 (UTC)

The ear-pink gets a bit lost in the shading ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 17:52, August 23, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks! Changes may not be showing. Splook it's a long way down. 21:32 Sat Aug 24

CBA? Sexy image, dear<3 Jayce team rowlet < 22:36, 8/25/2013 >

Approved. Jayce team rowlet < 19:38, 8/27/2013 >

Larksplash (A) ~ Approved

Larksplash.apprentice Eh this sucks.. It was hard to match the marvelous warrior image. So, she gets an apprentice image because she was mentioned as one. Comments for improvement?  ☯Stoneclaw☯ 21:07,8/11/2013  

She is AWESOME!!! However, some of the tabby lines seem a teeny bit smudged. And her underbelly seems a bit darker. Other than that, it's AMAZING, :D!! Creameh

I think she needs to be more mottled too. I also fixed the align for you Iveh Yo! 21:17, August 11, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Creamtail, I'm not sure what you mean by tabby lines, as she's not a tabby. Also, I tried to lighten her belly, but that's as far as I can, because of the lightsource/shading. Not sure if changes are showing yet.  ☯Stoneclaw☯ 16:50,8/12/2013  

She has a creamish color on her warrior image, can you add it? (or define it, if it's just there but not very visible) Mistypebble 22:11, August 12, 2013 (UTC)

Define the chest. (I'm not sure if this is a repeat of what misty said, if so, I'm so sorry!) 🎃Appledash🎃 13:20, August 14, 2013 (UTC)

Maybe it's just my monitor settings, but does the >> earpink drag past the ear onto the dark spot? Good job!

  1. REDIRECT User:Kelpsea/Sig 23:58 Wed Aug 14

Do you want the .xcf? You're missing a few of the colors I had in her tortie pattern. ouo (I can also tell you how I did the patches, because they really weren't made to be mottled. Just some layer effects) Rainlegs 03:17, August 16, 2013 (UTC)

Could you give it to me? It would be really helpful. C: Because your skill is unmatchable and epic.  ☯Stoneclaw☯ 04:26,8/16/2013  

Reuploaded. I redid this, and I got the colors from the .xcf, so I'd rather not change them. ilu Leggy ty so much. Changes aren't showing yet, I assume..  ☯Stoneclaw☯ 18:38,8/16/2013  

Reuploaded. I forgot to add nosepink. o3o  ☯Stoneclaw☯ 19:12,8/16/2013  

Psst. I can't tell if you added it or not, but there were white tufts of fur in her ear on the warrior. Did you add them in? o3o Rainlegs 21:11, August 18, 2013 (UTC)

o3o I can't tell if he did, Leggo. So yeah, I have got a critique on the ear as well.. It looks like the earpink leaks out of the ear, and onto the face. I believe it should stay higher up, and in between the lineart up there, and it seems to go beyond that, making it look sloppy. If possible, please fix that Stoner. Or I'm just extremely picky cx  Frosty ☾Supernatural 12:03, August 22, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I actually did add the white, but it didn't turn out to be very visible. I tried defining it. Also, the earpink wasn't leaking out on to the face, but I did make it... shorter, for lack of better words. By the way, Darkfrost, I'm actually a she. x3 But it's okay. :)  ☯Stoneclaw☯ 03:52,8/23/2013  

Define the shading on the back --> leg? Oh my goodness I'm sorry! I'm still learning everyones genders. xD  Frosty ☾Supernatural 13:18, August 23, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded.  ☯Stoneclaw☯ 18:25,8/26/2013  

CBA? c: Mistypebble 06:48, August 27, 2013 (UTC)

Approved. Jayce team rowlet < 21:18, 8/28/2013 >

Bristlekit (Ki) - Approved

Bristlekit.kit Comments? Raven Chicks = Trouble 20:51 Fri Aug 16

Define light source; though it could just be my device. •Wanty•That's fine too! 01:57, August 18, 2013 (UTC)

Perhaps add a highlight or something to differentiate the shading from the base pelt a little bit? This is coooool~ Jayce team rowlet < 01:58, 8/18/2013 >

Re-uploaded. Raven Chicks = Trouble 03:21 Sun Aug 18

I see nothing wrong, wonderful job. •Wanty•That's fine too! 01:54, August 20, 2013 (UTC)

I'd hate to sound impatient but might I ask for comments? Raven Chicks = Trouble 00:55 Wed Aug 21

No, that's fine. It's been a few days, our bad. It may just be my computer, but does the texture make it look like a dark brown? If it's just me, my bad p: Mistypebble 01:32, August 21, 2013 (UTC)

Nah, I agree, it looks brown. Canadia~ Sirius is hiding... 17:08, August 21, 2013 (UTC)

The highlight on --> this shoulder is blotchy and needs to be smoothed out.  Frosty ☾Supernatural 11:59, August 22, 2013 (UTC)

The shading looks fine to me. Jayce team rowlet < 20:33, 8/22/2013 >

He doesn't appear brownish to me. Raven Chicks = Trouble 21:13 Thu Aug 22

The shading on the [our] right shoulder is a little blotchy. The highlight only, not the actual shading. And try this code, Bloo[he doesn't look brown to me either, but might as well fix what you can't see] #080708 .. That may help a bit. *shrugs* Nice job so far c:

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I think the shading and color is fine, though I'll change it if anyone else agrees. Raven Chicks = Trouble 05:44 Mon Aug 26

Doesn't look blotchy or brown to me either, but even if it was brownish it would still be acceptable anyways.

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Shall we go CBA? Jayce team rowlet < 21:15, 8/28/2013 >

Approved. Jayce team rowlet < 02:22, 8/30/2013 >

Shrewtooth (Alt W 2) ~ Approved

Shrewtooth.warrior.alt2 He was seen with a white muzzle in the manga of SD. Comments? Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 02:09, August 23, 2013 (UTC)

I don't think that'd be major enough to get an alt, imo, but I'll see what others think o3o Queen Beebs 02:12, August 23, 2013 (UTC)

Well, if we were doing it for Shrewtooth, then we should probably be doing it to the rest of the Manga alts, which there has been many. But I think we should have Cloudy or Scarly decide. Imho, I don't see a real problem with doing alts based on the manga descriptions. 

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It's too little of a change to account for an alt, so I agree with Bbun. I believe we already had this discussion, but I could be wrong.. Mistypebble 03:08, August 23, 2013 (UTC)

I think it warrants an alt. Brackenfur has an alt for white paws, I believe. White is not equal to a pale or gray coloring, so I think it could stay. Can you make the muzzle more white, though? Jayce team rowlet < 11:25, 8/23/2013 >

Gonna say it is warranted simply because Petalnose had an instance almost exactly the same as this, and she has an alt. david ✌️ 11:29, August 23, 2013 (UTC)

Yeah I think we should let this stay. I agree with Cloudy. The Brackenfur alt had such little change, yet it still passed. Maybe smooth out the neck shading? It looks a little blotchy.  Frosty ☾Supernatural 13:23, August 23, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded whitened the muzzle a bit more. But I think the neck's fine.Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 14:38, August 23, 2013 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink just a bit?  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  19:33, 23, 08, 2013

Maybe smudge the white out into the fur a bit? Right now it just looks like a blot of white. Make it blend in more, please. c:

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Reuploaded Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 01:56, August 24, 2013 (UTC)

Could I snag another comment? Its been over 48 hours without comment.Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 13:46, August 26, 2013 (UTC)

Sure..It looks a little flat. Darken the shading where the creases would be according to your light source please.

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Creases? O.o what do you mean?Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 14:43, August 26, 2013 (UTC)

Lol like where the legs come together, where the neck slopes. Stuff like that. Where there would be no light at all. Lol sorry, I knew "creases" was the weirdest word I could put xD

  1. REDIRECT User:AmaterasuRaven/Sig 17:08, August 26, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded the belly and the throat, then. Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 18:56, August 26, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front legs? Very nice ^^ Mistypebble 06:30, August 27, 2013 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink? Awesome charart, Sorrel!! ♥♥ Creameh 22:27 Tue Aug 27

Reuploaded thank you, Cream and Misty! Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 14:11, August 28, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shading on his chest? Creameh 16:48 Wed Aug 28

The only shading in that area is the throat, the rest has none, so I think it's fine.Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 17:00, August 28, 2013 (UTC)

Can you maybe define the earpink a smidge? Very nice! User:Shadewing/Sig 19:02, August 29, 2013 (UTC) Shadewing

Reups thank you! Changes may not be showingSorrel It's everything I dreamed 21:02, August 29, 2013 (UTC)

I'm really impressed with this image, and there haven't been any comments for a while, so CBA? Knight Chasing after gold mines 16:43, August 31, 2013 (UTC)

Approved. Splook it's a long way down. 17:46 Sun Sep 1

Tawnypelt (Alt A) ~ Approved

Tawnypelt.apprentice.alt This is the tawny alt not a pale ginger. Color seems a bit off to me but that might be how I shaded... comments? Jayce team rowlet < 20:57, 8/29/2013 >

Blur the shading on the chest. This is great, and those eyes *.* ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot 21:29, August 29, 2013 (UTC)

I think the shading's fine. But I'll fix it if someone else disagrees with me. ouo And thank youuu Jayce team rowlet < 21:39, 8/29/2013 >

I think that the shading and color are fine. Creameh 12:29 Fri Aug 30

Idk the shading looks a little receded and flat. (the word "receded" is a real word, as in "receded hairline", fyi c;)

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It's not receded in the least, as that's not how I make my shading. That's not even how I get rid of waste either. The way I shade, there's no possible way for it to really even do that, and I honestly don't think it's flat. I was actually expecting to be told to blur it. And I know it's a word....... ouo Jayce team rowlet < 23:54, 8/30/2013 >

Sorry! I just saw a while ago you commented that you weren't sure if that was a word :P Maybe it's just my awful eyesight. Maybe clarify light source a smidge? You don't have to if you don't want.

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I think it's okay, you can tell it's coming from above left. david ✌️ 00:26, August 31, 2013 (UTC)

CBA okay with yah? ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 02:51, September 3, 2013 (UTC)

Approved. -Whiskey our freedom's just a loan18:04 Wed Sep 4 2013

Hawkheart (MC Alt 3) ~ Approved

Hawkheart.mc.alt3 He was described as mottled grey-brown in TR ouo. Comments? — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 20:26, 08/16/2013

Define the shading on the haunch and paws. Sexy~ ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot 20:42, August 16, 2013 (UTC)

Nice! Maybe lighten the shading? Or at least smooth it out? User:Shadewing/Sig 02:28, August 19, 2013 (UTC) Shadewing

Shading darkness is artist's choice. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot 17:20, August 20, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded.ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 23:25, 08/20/2013

Define the forehead shading. -Ducksauce 23:27, August 20, 2013 (UTC)

There's no shading on the forehead. o3o — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 23:29, 08/20/2013

Define the ear pink a bit? It looks gray. He is sexy. xD  Frosty ☾Supernatural 11:57, August 22, 2013 (UTC)

I'm not too sure, but since his description has been changed, shouldn't this be declined, because it would now count as a partial? If not, I think the earpink is fine, it's a lighter shade of the base coat. — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 14:54, 08/23/2013

The ear-pink looks a bit too uniform, give it a smudge and the pelt looks a bit greenish to me ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 17:51, August 23, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the legs a tad more. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot 14:07, August 24, 2013 (UTC)

Actually, I think you might be right on that, Ferk. Guys, what do the rest of you think? Looks like a partial to me. Jayce team rowlet < 22:38, 8/25/2013 >

Not sure. In page 7 of TR it says he is a gray-brown tom, which would be what were dealing with. It might be, but I'll go through TR again and see. :/

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Maybe make that ears a tad more pink? Creameh 19:20 Tue Aug 27

Mottled gray-brown alone, though, I think would suffice. Gray-brown is a specific shade... I think?? I'm not entirely sure. Also, Ferk, you'll need to reupload soon, remember that. ^^;; Jayce team rowlet < 19:33, 8/27/2013 >

It never said he was mottled in page 7, but yeah I think it would be a specific shade. Kinda like this: #6b6767 ~ Or, working off this, it would be a darker gray-brown. *Shrugs* I need some sleep, you can't get any in a tent..you're practically on the ground.

  1. REDIRECT User:AmaterasuRaven/Sig 20:38, August 29, 2013 (UTC)

Sorry, Ferk. There hasn't been any uploads in well over a week, and according to the guidelines, I have to decline this. x.x Jayce team rowlet < 19:20, 8/31/2013 >

Is it okay if I take over? ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot 19:29, August 31, 2013 (UTC)

Yeah. c: Go ahead and reserve it, Hawkeh. Unless someone else says otherwise..

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Re-uploaded. My first medicine cat. And I know I suck at mottles please don't rub it in. Is it gray-brown enough? Changes might not be showing. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot 18:25, September 1, 2013 (UTC)

This is amazing! Trust me, nobody is good at mottles. Maybe define the shading on the neck a bit?

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Re-uploaded. Thank you! ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot 00:00, September 2, 2013 (UTC)

I love this! I'm doing a mottle above you: Blizzardpaw, and it's so hard. I know how you're feeling. xD Define the shading inbetween the legs, I see its lightly shaded, but since there would be no light, perhaps make it darker? o3o  Frosty ☾Supernatural 12:15, September 2, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thank you so much! Changes might not be showing. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot 15:26, September 2, 2013 (UTC)

I can't see anything wrong with this! SplashStarClan be with you.    18:18, 9/3/13

Blur the earpink, and then I'll CBA it. 🎃Appledash🎃 11:09, September 4, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Changes not showing. Thank you, Splashmist! ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot 01:14, September 5, 2013 (UTC)

Very nice! CBA, as promised above? ^^ Knight Chasing after gold mines 04:53, September 5, 2013 (UTC)

Approved. Jayce team rowlet < 16:44, 9/6/2013 >

Tawnypelt (Alt Ki 3) ~ Approved

Tawnypelt.kit.alt3 This is for the tawny alt, not pale ginger, and the color might be a bit off due to the way I shaded Queen Beebs 21:33, August 29, 2013 (UTC)

Yes, I can agree with the shading. Maybe tint it to a dark orange/brown? But anywho, this is great! ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot 21:36, August 29, 2013 (UTC)

Re-up Queen Beebs 21:40, August 29, 2013 (UTC)

Adorable<3 Lighten up the shading a tad.  ☯Stoneclaw☯ 02:08,8/30/2013  

I think it's fine, since shading darkness is artist's choice Queen Beebs 02:08, August 30, 2013 (UTC)

Cute, Beebs! c: Define the earpink on this ----> ear? It looks like a dark blot due to the shading. Looking good:)

  1. REDIRECT User:AmaterasuRaven/Sig 22:41, August 30, 2013 (UTC)

It's due to the shading, so I think it's fine, as a few other of my chararts have a similar style o3o Queen Beebs 22:44, August 30, 2013 (UTC)

Okay o3o

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I have to agree with Raven on this one. While it may be on your other images, this ear pink color is hard enough to work with as it is, and I honestly can't tell it's there. On your other images, I can, while on this, it's damn near impossible to see. Jayce team rowlet < 19:04, 8/31/2013 >

Re-up Queen Beebs 19:25, August 31, 2013 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink and blur the shading on the tail ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 02:51, September 3, 2013 (UTC)

I think they're both fine - if I defined the earpink more it wouldn't match the apprentice o3o Queen Beebs 21:38, September 5, 2013 (UTC)

Define doesn't mean change the coloring, though. It just means making it more visible, by perhaps unblurring it or something along those lines. Jayce team rowlet < 21:49, 9/5/2013 >

Re-up defined earpink Queen Beebs 22:17, September 5, 2013 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Knight Chasing after gold mines 19:58, September 7, 2013 (UTC)

Approved. Mistypebble 20:55, September 8, 2013 (UTC)

Tawnypelt (Alt W 3) - Approved

Tawnypelt.warrior.alt3Vicky stated that Tawnypelt should still be a tawny/pale ginger-ish color, so this warrants an alt. I tried combining the two colors. I know it says she has been called tawny in the books as a warrior, but I don't think that tawny and pale ginger are the same things, either, unless she meant that she is ginger with tawny-ish stripes, which makes the most sense. However, if they are the same thing then go ahead and decline this then. Iveh Yo! 19:51, August 28, 2013 (UTC)

I love this tabby style. Expand the highlight on the shoulder. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot 19:55, August 28, 2013 (UTC)

This is awesome!! Maybe expand the highlight on the hind leg as well? Creameh 21:12 Wed Aug 28

Maybe lighten the shading and thin it out some? This is great! User:Shadewing/Sig 19:04, August 29, 2013 (UTC) Shadewing

Wouldn't this have to match the alt kit, as it's pale ginger as well? o3o Queen Beebs 19:12, August 29, 2013 (UTC)

I thought alts didn't have to match each other? Isn't matching artist's choice? I could be wrong... Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 12:27, August 30, 2013 (UTC)

I agree with Beebs. The kit and the apprentice are the same, so should be the warrior. So maybe this should be a solid instead of a tabby, to match with the other alts.

  1. REDIRECT User:AmaterasuRaven/Sig 19:25, August 30, 2013 (UTC)

Agree with beebs and raven. Sorry. And if these stripes are here to stay, smudge them to make them look realistic. And there's a wide spanse of area- upper back/neck/throat- that look quite flat.

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Matching alts is not necessary, I believe. And I think the stripes are good, but maybe blur them a bit? Jayce team rowlet < 23:48, 8/30/2013 >

Sunstar's alts don't match so I will not make this match either, since it is not required. If it was I'd happily make them match. And this is ginger, so she has to have stripes. I will fix the shading and blur the stripes here in a little bit, I just wanted to point that out real quick. Iveh Yo! 01:51, August 31, 2013 (UTC)

And I was looking over Tawnypelt's alts earlier, and I realized there is already a pale ginger alt for her. Sorry. o3o

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No, there's only pale bracken-colored and tawny. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot 19:14, August 31, 2013 (UTC)

Oh. *shrugs* It might be my computer xD

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Reuploaded Also, I have to work all of this week, so I'll be back over the weekend (hopefully) so that I can improve upon your suggestions. So, if it becomes Friday, please don't ask me if I'm still working on this, I most certainly am :) Iveh Yo! 16:38, September 1, 2013 (UTC)

Expand the highlight on the shoulder some more, it makes the neck shading look flat. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot 16:41, September 1, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded Like that? I honestly don't shade like that so I'm kinda unsure Iveh Yo! 16:51, September 1, 2013 (UTC)

Just a tad more up the throat... this is turning out nicely! ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot 17:29, September 1, 2013 (UTC)

Yeah..But even if she didn't want to, it doesn't look flat anymore. Give the earpink a little smudge, it looks a bit too uniform. This is looking nice! c:  Frosty ☾Supernatural 12:19, September 2, 2013 (UTC)

Ear pink looks fine, imho. Jayce team rowlet < 16:49, 9/2/2013 >

Define the unshaded part on her front leg? (the one closest to us) Love this, Ivy~ Mistypebble 03:13, September 3, 2013 (UTC)

Define all the shading? I can't really see the depth well. 🎃Appledash🎃 11:08, September 4, 2013 (UTC)

Still working, Ivy? ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 22:04, September 6, 2013 (UTC)

Yes I am, I just got home and am going to work on it tonight when I get back from my nephew's football game. Iveh Yo! 19:11, September 7, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded Layered two new lighting layers and smudged earpink. I go in for work again tomorrow so try to suggest improvements quickly so I can make them, if you can! Iveh Yo! 03:27, September 8, 2013 (UTC)

Maybe expand the "highlight" up the shoulder a bit? -Whiskey our freedom's just a loan16:43 Mon Sep 9 2013

Maybe fix the tail so that it doesn't look too straight? Gingerpetal @she-cat central  StarClan enlightening~ 12:54, September 11, 2013 (UTC)

The tail is fine, and we aren't touching the blanks. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot 21:01, September 11, 2013 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail? Looks good. c:

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Reuploaded I don't really like how the light source colors are coming out, but I'll see what you guys think. And thanks for the kind words if I haven't already said so. Iveh Yo! 19:42, September 13, 2013 (UTC)

CBA? -Whiskey our freedom's just a loan7:29 Sat Sep 14 2013

Sorry, but the back/neck/throat spanse is still flat.

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I disagree. It looks fine, and I'm going to continue the CBA. Jayce team rowlet < 16:41, 9/14/2013 >

Approved. Jayce team rowlet < 17:44, 9/16/2013 >

Tawnypelt (Alt A 2) ~ Approved

Tawnypelt.apprentice.alt2 This is my first charart, I'm quite proud. I can see that's it's more like a yellow, so, I'll fix that when I can. Comments? Creameh 22:13 Fri Aug 30

Add stripes, and she needs to be shorthaired. Queen Beebs 22:15, August 30, 2013 (UTC)

Which alt is this for? Because I have the tawny alt already reserved. Is this supposed to be the pale ginger? Also, I changed the heading, as you've never had an image for PCA before. Jayce team rowlet < 22:19, 8/30/2013 >

Add shading, make the pelt more orangey than yellow. And some of the yellow is on the lineart, which I think is blurred.Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 22:28, August 30, 2013 (UTC)

There is waste all around the image. And where is your source for this alt? Please provide the page number and/or the book you discovered the mistaken color. And like Sorrel said, there is yellow paint on the lineart. Also, when you fix the colors and such, define the shading and blur it a bunch. You can do it, Creameh! I believe in you! c:

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Oh, and make the background transparent. Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 22:46, August 30, 2013 (UTC)

Raven, this alt is for the pale ginger one, which was confirmed to have been Tawnypelt's actual description by Vicky Queen Beebs 22:47, August 30, 2013 (UTC)

Is it just me, or is the image smaller than the normal blank? ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot 22:51, August 30, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded changes aren't showing, and the tabby colors won't work. Creameh 23:21 Fri Aug 30

Reuploaded changes now showing, and, Hawkmask, I fixed it. Now it's the same as the regular blank. Comments? Creameh 23:29 Fri Aug 30

Yes, I now know that, Beebs. It's just that she wasn't really specific when she posted this, and I believe everyone in the project should be specific where they got their reasons to create an alt. Just sayin'. And if it's her actual descriptive image, then why isn't the pale ginger one her main, and the other an alt?

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Reuploaded

Because the Erin's later changed her description to her current one. That's why she this is an alt instead of her real image. And, sorry about not being specific, Raven. :) Creameh 23:39 Fri Aug 30 23:39, August 30, 2013 (UTC)

Chill, Raven, please. There's a cite on her article, and that's all that's needed. She doesn't need to specify unless she really wants to. There's currently a discussion in PC about what needs to be done about Tawnypelt, which can be found here, and if you're so concerned about it, perhaps you should contribute to the discussion. Jayce team rowlet < 23:40, 8/30/2013 >

The lineart is blurred in places and there's still yellow on the lineart. And please add some shading? Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 23:46, August 30, 2013 (UTC)

I wasn't getting angry, Cloudy. And it's okay, Cream. c: And anyway, I didn't know about any of that, so thanks for updating me. I'm a little busy right now, and I don't have that much time to find out about this stuff in one sitting. x3 Sorry for the trouble!

  1. REDIRECT User:AmaterasuRaven/Sig 00:01, August 31, 2013 (UTC)

Hiyaa I found the problem c: Click |this link and then right click the image that pops up in the next page, then save. That should get you the full-size image and then all the lineart critique wont happen. What program do you use? By the way, stipes aren't realistic, and color isn't too realistic either. Nice going so far :)

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Thanks, Kelpsey. Well, I'm going to download Gimp soon, so I'm currently using an app called 'Pics Art'. It's good, but it doesn't do certain things, such as blurring and shading. Creameh 00:20 Sat Aug 31

Reuploaded I know the shading is bad, I'll fix that. Creameh 12:39 Sat Aug 31

Kelpsey, I made her a -quick example- of what this cat should probably look like. Just click down to the section where it talks about the alt. I don't think it looks that bad, but I think it is a good example of what should be coming out, right?

  1. REDIRECT User:AmaterasuRaven/Sig 12:45, August 31, 2013 (UTC)

Cream, be on chat now and we'll do a join.me. I've got it now, and I'll show you how to do shading, stripes and the delightful results of layers on pixlr. X3 Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 13:13, August 31, 2013 (UTC)

The ear pink is too neon. Amber The One and Only

The lineart is still blurred with yellow over it. And the blank isn't the same size as the other apprentice images. Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 11:24, September 1, 2013 (UTC)

There are dashes of white everywhere, can you fill it in with colour? Amber The One and Only 16:55, September 1, 2013 (UTC)

The stripe pattern is lost in the shading and the ear-pink is spilling out the lineart ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 03:22, September 4, 2013 (UTC)

The shading on the back needs to be blurred loads. Amber The One and Only14:57 Thu Sep 5

Still working? ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 19:01, September 5, 2013 (UTC)

She's still working. We've been trying to find a time when I can help her with her art but my schedule is so crammed x.x my bad. ;.;

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Sorry, but as per the guidelines, I must decline this. A week is, sadly, a week. Jayce team rowlet < 20:12, 9/7/2013 >

I'll take over.Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 21:36, September 7, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded' see here for changes. c: Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 21:55, September 7, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a bit Queen Beebs 21:56, September 7, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded lookey hereSorrel It's everything I dreamed 22:00, September 7, 2013 (UTC)


Aw, :( I'm sad now. But, I'll get more opportunities. Anyway, make the ear-pink more pink. Creameh 23:46 Sat Sep 7

Reuploaded changes aren't showing yet. Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 01:21, September 8, 2013 (UTC)

Receding shading to the left of the back leg closest to us. 'Tis coolio 8)

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Re-upies dank you Kelps c: changes aren't showing yet. Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 18:18, September 8, 2013 (UTC)

Define the unshaded parts on the tail and paws? Mistypebble 20:54, September 8, 2013 (UTC)

Reups I decided to define the shading overall, too. Think I'll lighten it, thoughSorrel It's everything I dreamed 20:29, September 9, 2013 (UTC)

Could you blend the chest highlight just a smidge? This looks fantastic :)Splook it's a long way down. 23:18 Mon Sep 9

Reuploaded thank you, Shoon! c: Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 17:52, September 10, 2013 (UTC)

The shading seems to be residing from the back near the end/start of the tail. Could you fix that? ^^ Mistypebble 03:38, September 12, 2013 (UTC)

That's because the head doesn't block all of the light from hitting the back. It's fine. Rainlegs 23:54, September 12, 2013 (UTC)

CBA? -Whiskey our freedom's just a loan7:28 Sat Sep 14 2013

Sorry,but remove the highlight from the part of the underbelly nearest to the back leg nearest to us- it makes it seem like there is a light source from under her to the right. This is awesome~

  1. REDIRECT User:Kelpsea/Sig 16:30 Sat Sep 14

Also, not mandatory though; define eye depth? There's only one color in her eyes.. But its completely up to you.

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Er, no there's not. :/ There is three. You're not looking hard enough. It doesn't need any more defining. Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 16:41, September 14, 2013 (UTC)

Looks fine to me, honestly. Continuing CBA. Jayce team rowlet < 16:42, 9/14/2013 >

I said the eye depth is definitely optional, but can you fix this? It's throwing off the light source so can you paint over that? one last thing...

  1. REDIRECT User:Kelpsea/Sig 04:52 Sun Sep 15

Define the light on the tail a little maybe? Raven Chicks = Trouble 09:11 Sun Sep 15

Reups Kelps, there was three colours in the eye, not one, so it didn't need any defining anyway. Also, you've repeated what you said when Cloudy said the belly was fine. However, I've removed it anyway in case someone agrees with you. Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 15:34, September 15, 2013 (UTC)

Re-CBA? Jayce team rowlet < 17:43, 9/16/2013 >

Sorry to interrupt..but as I was inspecting for blurred lineart, I came across waste between ---> this back leg and the belly. Please remove it. It's faint, but if you zoom in, you'll notice it.

  1. REDIRECT User:AmaterasuRaven/Sig 03:26, September 17, 2013 (UTC)

Reups Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 15:26, September 17, 2013 (UTC)

This is absolutely gorgeous- CBA? Knight Chasing after gold mines 01:40, September 18, 2013 (UTC)

Approved. Jayce team rowlet < 05:25, 9/19/2013 >

Meadowslip (W) ~ Approved

Meadowslip.warrior Should I make her a more neutral shade, or is a darker color okay with you guys? I mean it doesn't matter to me either way so...comments? Jayce team rowlet < 17:42, 9/16/2013 >

Maybe just a shade lighter? This is gorgeous, Cloudy! Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 17:45, September 16, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Better, Sorrel? And thank you~ Jayce team rowlet < 17:48, 9/16/2013 >

Define the unshaded part on the back rear leg? Amber The One and Onlycolor: purple">17:51 Mon Sep 16

There wouldn't be an unshaded part, I don't think, since it's under the cat. Jayce team rowlet < 17:53, 9/16/2013 >

She should probably be a more neutral shade since it isn't specified. -Whiskey our freedom's just a loan18:36 Mon Sep 16 2013

Re-uploaded. How about this? Jayce team rowlet < 18:43, 9/16/2013 >

She's described with green eyes in TR.. -I'll look for the page later -_- for now just take my word for it, I post the page number and chapter tomorrow- make them green please.

  1. REDIRECT User:AmaterasuRaven/Sig 00:35, September 17, 2013 (UTC)

I just checked my copy of TR, Raven, and it doesn't specify Meadowslip's eye color - so it's Skype's choice for her eye color. Queen Beebs 00:37, September 17, 2013 (UTC)

No no..it's within the book, not on her description. [Trust me, Beebs, there is no way you read through the whole book that fast xD] Eh I'll check..but I'm pretty sure in a part it says she has green eyes. And anyway, it'd make better sense since Deadfoot has green eyes. Where would he have gotten them? But I'll check tonight..

  1. REDIRECT User:AmaterasuRaven/Sig 01:22, September 17, 2013 (UTC)

Deadfoot's eye color isn't cited, either- it's the artist's choice in the image if there isn't a legit color named. Find a cite, and we can change it, but until then it can be whatever color Skye wants. Rainlegs 02:43, September 17, 2013 (UTC)

Until there's a cite for her eye color, it's staying as-is, thank you. Jayce team rowlet < 04:34, 9/17/2013 >

Very nice!! Define the shading on the arm? (Idk what yo call a cats arm, XD) Creameh

Well if I define it any more, I'll probably get told to blur it. I mean it's already overly-defined for my shading style as it is, actually. Jayce team rowlet < 04:44, 9/18/2013 >

You should be blurring it anyway when you are told to define shading, not waiting for someone to tell you. But anyway, I agree with Cream. Define this <--- front leg shading please.

  1. REDIRECT User:AmaterasuRaven/Sig 14:19, September 19, 2013 (UTC)

Sorry, but I disagree. I think it's fine as it is. And sorry, but isn't that first part a rude, Raven? I apologize if it isn't.Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 14:26, September 19, 2013 (UTC)

I don't usually like to critique earpink, but do you think you could kinda contain it a bit? It looks like you smudged it a bit too much. -Whiskey our freedom's just a loan15:00 Thu Sep 19 2013

Re-uploaded. S'all good, Breezey. I'm not good with ear pink on warrior blanks, so it doesn't bother me any. Also, Raven, no. To define shading means to make it more visible. So, if I define it, I could easily accidentally overdefine it, hence why I said that I would get told to blur it, more than likely. I do this often enough on the apprentice blanks to know what I mean when I say it. I'm not going to "blur it anyways" when I'm told to define the shading because that completely defeats the purpose of defining it. Jayce team rowlet < 21:51, 9/19/2013 >

It wasn't rude, Sorrel. And Cloudy, no need to get snippy. And when I say "blur it anyways" I mean sometimes when you define shading it looks slightly pixelated. And it doesn't always defeat the purpose when you blur it, if you overdefine it, then you blur it slightly to match the right shade. Please don't get mad over nothing, it was a simple comment. You listen to the comments, and you reply nicely. You could have said "Sorry, Raven, but if I do that it will become overdefined." That way, you wouldn't be snippy, and you wouldn't cause anger in a certain user.

  1. REDIRECT User:AmaterasuRaven/Sig 22:33, September 19, 2013 (UTC)

Alright, since I can't fully stop anybody on this, I'm going to ask everybody to take those types of messages and bring them to the person's talk page. This is a charart, and the only thing we need commenting on is critique. Mistypebble 23:01, September 19, 2013 (UTC)

And even then, Raven, I still honestly believe where you told me to define it is fine. Sorrel also agrees with me, so I'd really rather not change it. I can see it just fine, and I don't like overly-defined shading as it is. I considered the "you should be" part rather offensive, because an artist can choose not to accept a critique or suggestion by another member. I wasn't snippy, and was completely calm and level-headed in my response. I actually had to read over your message a few times to even get what you meant, since normally, define and blur are hardly ever used in the same sentence. Also I forgot to mention that in my last upload, I just redid the ear pink because it was icky and merged with the layer below it by accident. Jayce team rowlet < 23:23, 9/19/2013 >

The shading is look slightly blotchy on the haunch, may you smooth it out please? And I'm sorry. This is looking great. c:

  1. REDIRECT User:AmaterasuRaven/Sig 14:43, September 20, 2013 (UTC)

The shading looks fine. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot 15:18, September 20, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the shading a tad on the neck, and enlarge the earpink. This is looking awesome~  ☯Stoneclaw☯ 21:10,9/21/2013  

I think the earpink is fine. But I agree with the blurring part.

  1. REDIRECT User:AmaterasuRaven/Sig 00:01, September 22, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Since I got conflicting opinions on the ear pink, I'll leave it as-is until someone else says otherwise. Jayce team rowlet < 00:22, 9/22/2013 >

I agree with Stoney with the earpink. Those eyes. *.* ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot 00:25, September 22, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I hate ear pink. Jayce team rowlet < 03:39, 9/22/2013 >

CBA? At this point we're really just nitpicking. -Whiskey our freedom's just a loan3:49 Sun Sep 22 2013

So sorry to interrupt..but the tail shading is darker than the rest of the shading, and I've got called out on that before, so I should use it here. Please make it match with the rest, please.

  1. REDIRECT User:AmaterasuRaven/Sig 16:23, September 23, 2013 (UTC)

Darkness is artist's choice. I wasn't talking about darkness with yours, Raven. I was talking about the overall shading style. It seemed blotchy and inconsistent, as in how it was done. This is fine, imho. Jayce team rowlet < 17:12, 9/23/2013 >

Looks fine to me. Sometimes shading can look darker in parts. Continuing CBA. -Whiskey our freedom's just a loan17:15 Mon Sep 23 2013

Approved. Jayce team rowlet < 04:43, 9/24/2013 >

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