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Snowy (Q) - Approved

Snowy.queen Hey there. I like this very much. / Changes here if needed User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 23:47, July 3, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light source. Also, the shading on the belly and hind legs seems quite gray. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot23:50 Thu Jul 3

Question: How do you define the light source? As for the shading, I'll have that up in a moment. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 23:52, July 3, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Ups [1] User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 23:54, July 3, 2014 (UTC)

Defining the light source means to make the light face the same way everywhere on the cat. So let's say that your light source in in the top right corner. Everything in shadow would be everything from the bottom left corner. Idk I'm bad at explaining. As for the shading, It wasn't that gray. Now you need to define it. Sorry for the trouble! ^-^` ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot2:23 Fri Jul 4

Define the light on her foreleg farthest from us.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 05:17, July 4, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Ups [2] User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 15:22, July 4, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front two legs. Darkness-wise, I think they're pretty good, but they could use some slight definition. She's looking good, Rocket. Keep up the amazing work. Jayce(05:04, 7/5/2014)

Re-Ups [3] Thank you, Jayce :) User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 14:39, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

The shading near the belly is a bit blotchy- blur it. This is good .o. Cloud 9 The Clock is TICKING! 21:24 Sat Jul 5

Re-Up [4] User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 21:28, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Any comments? User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 16:31, July 9, 2014 (UTC)

define the shading ont he bottom of the face and on her front left paw -Ducksauce 17:16, July 9, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Up [5] User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 17:45, July 9, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the back leg closest to us? As in, the one in the air? Shinxy Blitz and Melody 11:55, July 11, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up. [6] User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 15:52, July 11, 2014 (UTC)

Define, don't darken, the shading. Jayce(14:21, 7/12/2014)

re-Up [7] User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 17:20, July 12, 2014 (UTC)

Now the shading looks blotchy O.o Blur it, please. Cloud 9 The Clock is TICKING! 11:36 Sun Jul 13

re-up [8] User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 15:42, July 13, 2014 (UTC)

The shading looks really dark for a white cat... maybe lighten it up a little bit?--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 23:36, July 13, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Up [9]. I don't really want to lighten the shading anymore than this, and the shading darkness /apparently/ is the artists choice unless it's too dark or too light... oh well. Feel free to flame me as you wish. i like this tho User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 00:36 Mon Jul 14

Sharpen the facial shading a bit and thin it out. Blur the tail shading a little more, and thin out the shading on the legs. Be sure to blur the shading on her front right leg, too! Lightening it would probably help make it look softer, or tinting it, too. For white cats, I usually tint my shading a little bit blue (so I choose a very dark, gray-blue to color with) which helps make a white cats' fur seem soft. Or if I want to give them thin fur, I tint it a red instead. Tinting is optional, but really helps add depth. Rainlegs 19:00, July 15, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up. http://www.ezimba.com/work/140716C/ezimba17991082104600.png I really don't like this now. I thought it was /fine/ before, tbh. e.e User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 23:11 Tue Jul 15

What'cha upset for, Rocket? I quite like this how you have it, and I like it so much, we're gonna CBA it. =) Jayce(22:53, 7/17/2014)

8-D It actually looks different from when i uploaded it, my computer has a habit of making images merge when i upload things too quick for whatever reason. Thank you, Jayce. wooooo CBA! User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 23:36 Thu Jul 17

Approved. Jayce(02:59, 7/19/2014)

Palebird (Ki) - Approved

Palebird.kit shoves palekit at you — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 03:38, 07/7/2014

The earpink looks a little small, can you expand it a tad? *pushes Palekit back* Brick 15:00, July 7, 2014 (UTC)

the earpink looks fine, imho, but can you smudge or blur the shading a bit more -Ducksauce 22:23, July 7, 2014 (UTC)

Agreeing with Duck about the earpink. Define the eye depth a smidge -hugs Palekit- she's so freaking cute Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 22:39, July 7, 2014 (UTC)

'Reups she was also a pain in my rear to do lmao — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 23:13, 07/7/2014

Blur/smudge/blend the shading a little more. Jayce(17:54, 7/9/2014)

GIMP keep crashing on me, I'll get this up as soon as possible. I am still working- however, GIMP isn't. ;u; — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 14:22, 07/12/2014

ok it finally worked reupsferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 00:02, 07/16/2014

The little darling looks good to me - how about a CBA? Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 15:21, July 18, 2014 (UTC)

Approved Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 12:16, July 20, 2014 (UTC)

Whiteclaw (Star) - Approved

Whiteclaw.star He needed a StarClan image. Color-picked from his Warrior and Apprentice images. Comments?~Breezeheart~ (talk) 01:20, July 8, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading. Those eyes are beautiful *.* ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot1:59 Tue Jul 8

The white paw seems a bit gray; maybe remove a bit of shading. Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 14:26, July 8, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up. Defined the shading, and lightened the white paw shading a tad. I didnt want to lighten it that much, because then i would get told to define it. Better?--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 08:29, July 9, 2014 (UTC)

define the shading on the paw. -Ducksauce 15:20, July 9, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up. Like i said, i was told to lighten it, and then tod to define it. :/. Defined the shading on the paw. Better?--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 02:53, July 10, 2014 (UTC)

You can have lighter shading and it still be visible. If you want lighter shading and visible at the same time, perhaps try unblurring the shading a bit? Defining means to make more visible. It does not mean darken. I think PCA needs a group lesson on what the difference is between define and darken, myself included. Jayce(03:41, 7/11/2014)

True, but when i do that i get told to blur it more. :/~Breezeheart~ (talk) 03:56, July 11, 2014 (UTC)

Define the chest shading. Jayce(14:21, 7/12/2014)

The white paw is the wrong side, it should be the cat's left, to match the other images. Brick 17:27, July 12, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up. Switched the white paw, and defined the chest shading. Better?--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 03:11, July 13, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading on his white paw just a little bit. Not too much, though. Just enough to smooth it out a little bit. Jayce(19:49, 7/13/2014)

Could you just 'feather' the edges of the white paw where it goes to the black? The other images show tufts of white going into the black, but your one is blurred. Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 19:51, July 13, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up. Blurred the shading on the white paw a tad bit, and feathered the top. Better?--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 23:28, July 13, 2014 (UTC)

Sharpen the facial shading a bit more and the shading near the armpit, as the curves on the cat are sharper there and would cast a bolder shadow than on more round regions. Rainlegs 23:42, July 13, 2014 (UTC)

I think its fine. I shaded Featherwhisker's StarClan image the same way as i did on this. But if someone else agrees, i will.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 23:47, July 13, 2014 (UTC)

Hmm, I think Leggy could be on to something. Here's something I did a while back to test my shading on white cats. The white cat is here, and here's the black cat. The shading (which has no highlights on either image) looks totally flat on the black cat, while the white cat has at least some depth. Here's one around Featherwhisker's coloring. Note how it's still not as defined or dark as it could be? Each image has different coloring and shading techniques and what looks amazing on one image, could possibly not work on another color, even though they're the same blank- this is why I don't copy shading for any of my images. Give Leggy's idea a try, and see what you can come up with. Jayce(23:05, 7/17/2014)

Re-up. Sharpened/defined shading on the face, and on part of the leg. Is that better?--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 18:49, July 18, 2014 (UTC)

Perhaps make it a little more hard-edged on the face and armpit? It just seems really faint and soft right now, but what you did in the last upload seems to have helped a lot. :) Rainlegs 19:52, July 18, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up. Im not going to sharpen it anymore that this; because i know ill get told to blur it. But, is that better?--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 20:41, July 18, 2014 (UTC)

CBA? Jayce(02:57, 7/19/2014)

Approved Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 12:02, July 21, 2014 (UTC)

Mapleshade (Alt. A) - Approved

Mapleshade.apprentice.alt meh… ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 22:51, July 15, 2014 (UTC)

Try blurring the stripes on the ginger parts, to match her other alt images. Brick 06:00, July 16, 2014 (UTC)

Define the overall shading.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 06:43, July 16, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 15:25, July 16, 2014 (UTC)

I really like this. Let's go CBA. Jayce(03:01, 7/19/2014)

sorry but lower the opacity of the stripes a bit to match the other images -Ducksauce 01:52, July 20, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 03:29, July 20, 2014 (UTC)

Shall we return to CBA, then? Jayce(03:39, 7/20/2014)

Approved. Jayce(20:26, 7/21/2014)

Ferncloud (Q) ~ Approved

Ferncloud.queen ew, I know. My first dapples, and I'm not entirely impressed. Changes be here Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 15:28, July 4, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading. Queen Beebs 16:55, July 4, 2014 (UTC)

Reups changes aren't showing yet Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 21:24, July 4, 2014 (UTC)

blur the dapples a bit. Also, possibly lighten them a tad to match the kit, apprentice, and warrior, that's up to you though. -Ducksauce 23:28, July 4, 2014 (UTC)

I'm having a difficult time seeing the ear pink in --> ear. Mind shifting some shading around a bit so I can see it? Jayce(06:00, 7/5/2014)

Reups changes Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 14:36, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on her front legs.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 04:36, July 6, 2014 (UTC)

Reups Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 10:00, July 6, 2014 (UTC)

-nudges- Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 20:43, July 9, 2014 (UTC)

Wouldn't there be at least some light on her chest? Jayce(21:28, 7/9/2014)

That depends on the light source. The face is suggesting a frontal light source, so yes, there would be light on the chest, but the tail suggests from behind, where there wouldn't be any, depending on the angle of the shading. Like in Hawk Swoop's queen, the light from behind is at a slight angle, which illuminates the sharper bones in her facial region, but because cats don't have convex chests, the chest itself isn't lit up. Rainlegs 02:38, July 11, 2014 (UTC)

Dosen't really tell me what to do, sorry... do I add/remove/leave the chest shading? Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 18:53, July 11, 2014 (UTC)

I think she's saying tweak your light source to either match the face or the tail. I'd say go with the tail, since it matches Hawk Swoop's, and that's an amazing source. Jayce(14:21, 7/12/2014)

I don't see how I would tweak the tail shading, though, since it looks the same on Hawk's and on Fern's Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 14:49, July 12, 2014 (UTC)

Not quite. The facial shading is different. I think the shading is more focused on the top of the head and side of the face (note how those things are different on that image compared to yours). This seems more centered around the side of her face, instead of moreso on the head and side. Basically, imagine the shading as a wheel- You'd probably need to turn the shading a bit in order to shift that highlight and probably make it smaller. You'd need to fix the facial shading if you're going with the tail shading, and the tail shading if you're going with the facial shading. I think I explained that basically enough, I am terrible with these and if I am wrong please come and correct me. Jayce(14:57, 7/12/2014)

I still don't really understand... could someone give me a shading placement for the face?Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 02:58, July 13, 2014 (UTC)

The highlight is in the middle of her face- if your light is coming from behind, then her muzzle will mostly be in shadow, and really only her cheekbone, the side of her face, and her browbone would be illuminated. The shading at the tip of the tail would be gone, as well, as the way it sits right now suggests the light's coming up from below instead of straight from the side. Hawk Swoop's highlights are pretty easy to spot, so make sure they sorta line up with her's and you'll be okay. Rainlegs 22:48, July 13, 2014 (UTC)

I can barely see her face highlights, actually. Can't someone please give me a face shading placement? It would make it much easier. Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 17:15, July 14, 2014 (UTC)

Here you go. The blue is where shading needs to be added, and the creamy-white color is where highlights need to be added. Rainlegs 18:57, July 15, 2014 (UTC)

Reups click here for the disaster Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 21:24, July 16, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the stripes (all of them, not just the ones on her tail) and lower their opacity only a teeny bit. Comparing them to the warrior and StarClan especially, they appear slightly more hard-edged. I'd say you did a stellar job in matching the pattern, though. I'm very impressed with how well you've done. =) Jayce(22:56, 7/17/2014)

Reups thank you, Snowman Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 15:20, July 18, 2014 (UTC)

-nudge- Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 12:01, July 21, 2014 (UTC)

CBA? Jayce(13:19, 7/21/2014)

Approved Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 17:38, July 22, 2014 (UTC)

Jagged Peak (Alt Ro) ~ Approved

Jagged Peak.rogue.alt david 🌈 04:16, July 15, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on his front left leg (if he's facing us, I think it's his left...the one we can see all of on his front set of legs idk), and his tail. Jagged Peak caused his own misery lmao Jayce(04:23, 7/15/2014)

re-uploaded david 🌈 02:30, July 18, 2014 (UTC)

CBA? Jayce(13:14, 7/21/2014)


Approved Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 17:38, July 22, 2014 (UTC)


Hawkheart (Star) ~ Approved

Hawkheart.starHere's Hawkheart from StarClan. I picked the colors from his warrior/medicine cat picture. I'm not very good at mottles, though. :/ Maanhart Speaking quietly ☽︎ 15:11, July 14, 2014 (UTC)

Add some more mottles and sharpen them. This is pretty! ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot15:57 Mon Jul 14

Re-up ~ I added some more mottles, but how do you sharpen them? Maanhart Speaking quietly ☽︎ 16:38, July 15, 2014 (UTC)

What program do you use? ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot17:54 Tue Jul 15

I use Photoshop. Maanhart Speaking quietly ☽︎ 18:31, July 15, 2014 (UTC)

Select your sharpen tool and then run it over the brown and gray parts a few times. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot18:45 Tue Jul 15

Re-up ~ When I used the sharp tool, strange colored pixels appeared so I used a sharpen filter. Maanhart Speaking quietly ☽︎ 18:31, July 15, 2014 (UTC)

The gray patches on his other images are a tad bit lighter than that. Lighten them a little bit.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 06:44, July 16, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up ~ Lightened the gray patches a little bit. Sorry for being late. ^^" Maanhart Speaking quietly ☽︎ 16:03, July 18, 2014 (UTC)

Sharpen the gray patches some more. Both his medicine cat and warrior images shows that those patches are sharper. Other than that, this is actually really good. :)--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 21:40, July 18, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up ~ Sharpened the gray patches. Thanks! ^^ Maanhart Speaking quietly ☽︎ 13:15, July 20, 2014 (UTC)

CBA? Jayce(20:52, 7/21/2014)

Approved Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 22:05, July 22, 2014 (UTC)

Fircone (Star) ~ Approved

Fircone.star Holy crap, I'm happy with how this came out. Skye requested that I did this, but I received permission from both them and Beebs to redo the pattern, as I felt my old one wasn't mottled enough to match the current description. I'll gladly redo the rogue to match this, especially since I have the files! Rainlegs 23:15, July 11, 2014 (UTC)

Just gonna fix a small detail with your comment... and as long as you're gonna redo the rogue (which you need to nominate too lmao), then I have no real complaints. Maybe just darken the shading a little bit on the back-area (or haunch whatever it is) Jayce(23:39, 7/11/2014)

Much perfect, such ginger. Add some depth to the chest shading a teeny bit? Queen Beebs 01:23, July 12, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Eh I'll nominate it once I get this done. Rainlegs 22:45, July 12, 2014 (UTC)

The white on the tail looks really gray... Lighten that up a bit?~Breezeheart~ (talk) 07:27, July 13, 2014 (UTC)

its in shadow of course its gonna look grey. david 🌈 11:01, July 13, 2014 (UTC)

Tell that to anyone else who's shading on a white cat/ white patches on a cat. If that applied to everyone, then PCA members wouldnt ask them to "lighten the white, it looks gray" so much on other chararts. If that part of the tail is supposed to be white, then he really should lighten it up a bit. Otherwise it just looks like he has a gray patch on his tail.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 19:44, July 13, 2014 (UTC)

I think it's just because of how Leggy has her light source. It does look really gray, though... I will give you that. Jayce(19:46, 7/13/2014)

It's entirely in shadow..there's no way I can lighten it and be consistent, for the light is coming entirely from our left side. The shading on the tail, since it's plumy, engulfs a majority of it, and really only the edges are illuminated, and in this case, since he has white on the underside of the tail, only the tortie top is lit up.

It's one section on the cat, and the other lighter patches, most notably on the chest, the base of the tail, and the face, are clearly white, so one may assume that the giant darker section on the tail is the same hue. Assuming there's a random gray patch on the tail, even with the other white markings, is like assuming that a solid gray cat is two shades of gray because one region on the body appears darker than the other. I've always been against the "lighten the white" comment, as it's really the shading causing the trouble, and if it makes a section appear gray, then you need to define and sharpen it. Your "white" can be any light color, because you don't have to use solid white, as long as your shading is sharp enough and can easily be perceived as shading instead of a new color on the cat. Rainlegs 22:58, July 13, 2014 (UTC)

Honestly, I see no point whether the white looks gray or not. As long as the white is white, it's going to be white no matter what color the shading makes it look. Even in real life, shadows on, say, white clothing can appear to be gray. It can't be helped if the shading on the white is gray, because it would seem rather flat otherwise. In my opinion, keep it the way it is, Leggy. I don't mean to sound snippy or rude. I apologize if you take it that way. This isn't even worth arguing for. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot23:32 Sun Jul 13

Would I get shot for asking you to maybe blur the wisps (for lack of a better word) of fur in the ear so they don't see as hard-edged? Also do you use white or is it an offwhite (with tinted shading I would assume???)? The shading makes it look pink or something and with the rest of the pelt, it actually looks really neat. o.o Jayce(18:18, 7/18/2014)

Reuploaded. Nah, you won't be shot. I just used a fatter brush when I did it the first time, and I thinned them out so they looked a bit more hair-like. The shading's tinted a very dark green, and I used a white tinted slightly orange for the whole body because I wanted to make this guy super red. Rainlegs 19:49, July 18, 2014 (UTC)

CBA? Jayce(20:56, 7/21/2014)

Approved Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 22:05, July 22, 2014 (UTC)


Brindleface (Q) ~ Approved

Brindleface.queen ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot20:45 Sun Jul 13

Maybe define the face and leg shading? This is really pretty! Eɢʀᴇᴛᴛ 22:48, July 13, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thank you~! ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot23:03 Sun Jul 13

Define the light on the hindleg farthest from us. Wow hawk; this is amazing :)--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 23:29, July 13, 2014 (UTC)

Can you try to straighten out and smudge the stripes a little more to give them the wispy look that the StarClanner and warrior have? They aren't this curly-looking or bold on the others. Rainlegs 23:32, July 13, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks Breeze. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot0:29 Mon Jul 14

Define the facial shading. Jayce(04:27, 7/15/2014)

Re-uploaded. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot17:59 Tue Jul 15

Smooth out the stripes, and smudge out the tips. I didn't mean like in the direction of fur when I said the above comment, haha. Blur the stripes a little bit too. Rainlegs 18:43, July 15, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Oh, hehe... duh. lol ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot21:41 Tue Jul 15

Define the shading on her chest and lifted foreleg ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 04:00, July 16, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot17:31 Wed Jul 16

Define the shading a bit on the back leg that's completely visible. Although, it's moreso the foot itself that could use some defined shading, not the actual leg. Snowman likes. Snowman wants to steal it. ouo Jayce(22:50, 7/17/2014)

Re-uploaded. In exchange for your eyes. C:< ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot1:53 Fri Jul 18

You can't have my eyes, but you can have a CBA. Jayce(20:53, 7/21/2014)

Approved Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 22:05, July 22, 2014 (UTC)

Stonepelt (Star) ~ Approved

Stonepelt.star Here's Stoney! ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot23:03 Sun Jul 13

Define the facial and tail shading. I love the stripes :)--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 23:30, July 13, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thank you. c: ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot0:29 Mon Jul 14

Define the scar just a bit? I'm having a rough time seeing it. Jayce(04:26, 7/15/2014)

Re-uploaded. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot18:02 Tue Jul 15

Define the shading on the visible legs.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 06:46, July 16, 2014 (UTC)

Honestly, I think it's fine. I'll change it if someone else agrees. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot17:27 Wed Jul 16

I think the left one (our left) could be darkened a tiny bit more especially toward the edge of the lineart. The right paw is fine. ((this is going by our angle not the casts so the left is << and the right is >>)) — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 17:36, 07/16/2014

Re-uploaded. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot20:10 Wed Jul 16

Could you possibly define the ear pink just a bit? Sorry for the couple of days without comments, dear. I hadn't noticed! =( Jayce(03:22, 7/20/2014)

Re-uploaded. idk if it's too bright now. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot16:28 Sun Jul 20

CBA? Jayce(17:38, 7/22/2014)

Approved. Jayce(19:18, 7/24/2014)

Fallowfern (Q) - Approved

Fallowfern.queen Hey. [10] User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 15:53, July 4, 2014 (UTC)

Define the overall shading and light on her legs. Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 15:54, July 4, 2014 (UTC)

[11] Re-ups User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 16:04, July 4, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the edges of the belly shading, and darken it while you're at it. Jayce(04:31, 7/5/2014)

IDK if it's necessary, but add some shading around her shoulder, too? Shinxy Blitz and Melody 12:29, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Ups [12]. I'll add shading around the shoulder if someone else asks me to. It looks okay to me, but, then again, I'm a newbie User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 14:43, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Yeah, go ahead and do that. I think you'd need it with your source anyways. Jayce(14:46, 7/5/2014)

Re-Ups [13] I really hope it's shaped okay. This image is actually really, /really/ fun. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 15:06, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Remove that bit of shading right by the chest since it doesn't belong there. And you might want to get a second opinion on this, but can you define the earpink a bit? Also blur the stomach shading a tad. Silverhmm 16:34, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups. Ehhhhhhh... okay. The earpink is under the shading layers, I'll re-do it if someone else agrees, mainly because it took a few tries to get them right without seemind, well, neon-ish. [14] also the shading is strange on her leg i know but that's the only way I could include the shoulder and not the chest. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 17:36, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

By shoulder I meant that line between the belly and the head, but okay... Darken the shading on the legs slightly, maybe? And there's waste by her chest. Shinxy Blitz and Melody 18:57, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Up. Better? I've got 13 layers of shading on this one cat... how did this happen?User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 20:42, July 5, 2014 (UTC)

Define the tail and facial shading; also, define the earpink a bit. i can barely see it, especially in the <--- ear.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 04:37, July 6, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Ups [15]. I moved the earpink so it was above all the shading. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 14:03, July 6, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on her tail Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 22:44, July 7, 2014 (UTC)

Re-Up. Sorry it took so long, I've been working and away from GIMP. [16] User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 21:13, July 8, 2014 (UTC)

Comments? User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 00:44, July 11, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the hindleg furthest from us; there would be light there.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 03:39, July 11, 2014 (UTC)

There is light there, on the inside closest to her belly. If I try to add more, it'll throw off the shading I already have, because the original shading (where the light is) is connected to the original shading on her belly, face, legs, and tail. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 15:49, July 11, 2014 (UTC)

Re up. [17] i am so done with this shading tbh. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 15:58, July 11, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the belly shading. Jayce(14:21, 7/12/2014)

re-up. [18] User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 17:21, July 12, 2014 (UTC)

Comments? User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 23:10 Tue Jul 15

Add some depth in the shading ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 04:06, July 16, 2014 (UTC)

Define the earpink.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 06:50, July 16, 2014 (UTC)

re-up http://www.ezimba.com/work/140717C/ezimba17991054259200.png User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 14:56 Wed Jul 16

Comments? User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 14:26 Sat Jul 19

Blur the shading a bit. Jayce(13:18, 7/21/2014)

Re-up http://www.ezimba.com/work/140723C/ezimba17991047380500.png User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 19:51 Tue Jul 22

CBA? Jayce(15:49, 7/23/2014)

Approved. Jayce(19:18, 7/24/2014)

Cherrytail (Q) - Approved

Cherrytail.queen i've always loved this pattern. comments? -Ducksauce 05:56, July 13, 2014 (UTC)

This is really good :) The giner patch on her face is supposed to extend to the top of her nose. (Her apprentice and Kittypet images have it) so it'll match her other images. Also, define the facial shading a tad bit.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 07:24, July 13, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded thanks Breezeheart! c: -Ducksauce 13:29, July 13, 2014 (UTC)

Could you try smudging the patches (like on her rump and legs) a little bit more on a lower setting brush? This is really nice, Duck. Probably one of your better chararts. Jayce(19:48, 7/13/2014)

Define the shading a bit? This is purrtty Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 19:49, July 13, 2014 (UTC)

Her patches seem a bit more yellow then the ones on her other images, maybe make them a tad more orangish? She's gorgous! ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 04:01, July 16, 2014 (UTC)

thanks guys. re-uploaded -Ducksauce 01:33, July 20, 2014 (UTC)

Define the facial and belly shading. Also, are the paws supposed to be white? I can't tell. Jayce(20:55, 7/21/2014)

re-uploaded yeah they're white and I can tell fine but Ii added a highlight so they'll show better. -Ducksauce 21:49, July 21, 2014 (UTC)

CBA? Jayce(15:51, 7/23/2014)

Approved., Jayce(19:18, 7/24/2014)

Tallpoppy (Alt Q) - Approved

Tallpoppy.queen.alt Hello Jayce(18:33, 7/11/2014)

Define the shading. Queen Beebs 01:23, July 12, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I stole and tweaked Velvet's texture. Jayce(04:26, 7/12/2014)

Okay, Leggy's beating me with a stick, so I'm gonna redo this texture and reupload in a bit. Jayce(23:41, 7/13/2014)

Re-uploaded. Got rid of the texture since it didn't like me and basically redid it. Jayce(13:34, 7/14/2014)

Re-uploaded. After some encouragement, I tried to at least do something and brought back what I worked on last night. Jayce(14:06, 7/14/2014)

Define the shading a bit more around her belly and shoulder ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 04:03, July 16, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the front leg closest to us. Wow, this is really good, Snow.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 06:48, July 16, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Jayce(15:00, 7/16/2014)

Define the shading on the hind leg that we can see all of? — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 13:51, 07/21/2014

lol, finally a comment. Reuploaded. Can we maybe please not go like five days without saying anything???? Couple days is fine, but there's also other work to be done. Jayce(20:31, 7/21/2014)

Curve the texture between he belly and the back? Shinxy Blitz and Melody 09:22, July 22, 2014 (UTC)

It is curved, and I think it's pretty okay how it is, but I'll see what I can do if more people agree. Jayce(12:52, 7/22/2014)

define the light a smidge on the top of the tail. lovin the texture! -Ducksauce 21:06, July 22, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thank you~ Jayce(15:40, 7/23/2014)

CBA? david 🌈 00:48, July 24, 2014 (UTC)

Approved. Jayce(01:12, 7/25/2014)

Poppydawn (Alt. Q) - Approved

Poppydawn.queen.alt not sure whether or not she'd get a graying muzzle ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 22:51, July 15, 2014 (UTC)

Im not completely sure; But i think Poppydawn wasnt an elder yet when she was a queen, so shes not supposed to have the gray muzzle... someone correct me if im wrong.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 06:42, July 16, 2014 (UTC)

I dunno, I kinda disagree with the above comment. Being a warrior/queen doesn't mean you have to be young. Being an elder is only a named rank, so I think a queen could still have a graying muzzle. But I may just be incredibly tired and spitting up nonsense. Also, her warrior alt has it, sooo....? Brick 16:40, July 16, 2014 (UTC)

Her alt images show it, but her normal queen doesnt. I say add it, if anyonne else aggrees. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 00:14 Fri Jul 18

This is why we check references. Judging by what's shown in the references, she was called brown as a queen in the allegiances of Yellowfang's Secret, which is long before she retires. Therefore, she would not get the gray muzzle, as she was said to have had it when she retired, and we don't add things from before citations. So, we wouldn't add it if she got an apprentice image or something along those lines. The alt warrior gets it since it went along with that description, and the same can be said for her elder image, StarClan image, ect. Jayce(02:57, 7/18/2014)

Re-uploaded ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 03:11, July 18, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit? I can barely see it. Perhaps blur it a bit, the edges also look a bit too sharp... But it could be me. — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 14:31, 07/19/2014

Re-uploaded ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 22:56, July 19, 2014 (UTC)

I'm kinda having an issue seeing the ear pink. Mind defining it? Jayce(20:51, 7/21/2014)

Re-uploaded ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 21:07, July 21, 2014 (UTC)

CBA? Another lovely image, dear~ Jayce(00:51, 7/24/2014)

Approved. Jayce(01:12, 7/25/2014)

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