Blossomkit(TC)(KI)-Approved[]
[[file:Blossomtc2.png]] Darkhallows is back... sort of. My computer is pretty much a goner, so I'm currently using my other computer. Which is in the basement. I'ts a little slow, but whatever. -- Darkhallows Lair 03:07, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
This shouldn't be up for approval for long Shady. As far as I remember, the only problem was with her right ear - it needs to show up more. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 12:30, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
It wasn't the ear pink, it was the black running under it. Is she better now?-- Darkhallows Lair 18:37, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
Yep. Comments before approval? --Bramble My Realm 00:41, 31 July 2009 (UTC)
None. Approved.. phew. :) --Bramble My Realm 01:19, 1 August 2009 (UTC)
Owlstar- Approved[]
Well, here's my first image; hope it's okay. Constructments? --HoneyfurBob's Your Uncle! 15:25, 22 July 2009 (UTC)
Make the eyes amber, they are yellow.And blend the ear pink, besides that iy looks greats! HawkfireMy Den 16:23, 22 July 2009 (UTC)
Thanks, Hawkfire! The changes haven't been showing up for me, yet, but, I darkened the eye, and tried blending the ear. How's this? --HoneyfurBob's Your Uncle! 16:40, 22 July 2009 (UTC)
(M) - Not bad at all for a first iamge! But you need to add more shading and make the shading you already have darker. (If your using Pixlr.com or Photoshop, use the burn tool.) Mosswisker&Stealthfire 17:04, 22 July 2009 (UTC)
Thanks, M&S! I used the Burn Tool on all my shaded areas, then blended it into the pelt. But, I'm not sure where I could add extra shading. I was thinking the back? --HoneyfurBob's Your Uncle! 18:22, 22 July 2009 (UTC)
I can't see any shading whatsoever. GB57 18:41, 22 July 2009 (UTC)
Darkened the shading. Is this better? --HoneyfurBob's Your Uncle! 19:14, 22 July 2009 (UTC)
No. There's only shading on the tail and leg. Look at the other leader pics to see where you still need shading. GB57 19:24, 22 July 2009 (UTC)
I've been looking off the Sunstar picture for reference. I have shading under the chin, on the forelegs, and the places you mentioned, GB. Do you want me to darken it again? And, would one of the places that need shading be the back? --HoneyfurBob's Your Uncle! 19:44, 22 July 2009 (UTC)
(M) - Sunstar's shading is pretty advanced. Try looking at Lionstar right below this entry for your shading and highlights. Mosswisker&Stealthfire 20:34, 22 July 2009 (UTC)
I extended the shading up Owlstar's back. Is there anywhere else he needs it? --HoneyfurBob's Your Uncle! 21:20, 22 July 2009 (UTC)
(M) - Better. Try adding some more shading on the right side of his face and the left side of his chest. Mosswisker&Stealthfire 21:38, 22 July 2009 (UTC)
Like this? --HoneyfurBob's Your Uncle! 22:44, 22 July 2009 (UTC)
(M) - Yup! Just blur all of the shading in as much as you can and he'll look great!Mosswisker&Stealthfire 22:57, 22 July 2009 (UTC)
Tried blurring the shading. Anything else? --HoneyfurBob's Your Uncle! 23:09, 22 July 2009 (UTC)
Nice first image. You need to add thicker shading on the back, legs and tail and add some on the head too. Blend it all in and then blend the ear pink too as it is quite stand-out-ish. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 13:33, 23 July 2009 (UTC)
As well as blending the ear pink also make it darker. That light of a pink on a gray cat's ear looks really strange, esp. if you picture it in the real world. Make it a lot darker. But I like him otherwise. --Bramble My Realm 15:50, 23 July 2009 (UTC)
I darkened the ear pink, and thickened the shading. But, it looks a little lumpy to me.... --HoneyfurBob's Your Uncle! 17:06, 23 July 2009 (UTC)
(M) - I don't think it looks lumpy at all. Could you try to make the ear pink and nose color more like Cloudstar's? Mosswisker&Stealthfire 22:04, 23 July 2009 (UTC)
I modeled the ear, and nose, off Cloudstar. Is this better? Or, does it need to be darker? --HoneyfurBob's Your Uncle! 22:18, 23 July 2009 (UTC)
Personally I'd make a it a bit darker as Owlstar has a darker pelt colour than Cloudstar. Also, blend the shading on the flank more. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 14:01, 24 July 2009 (UTC)
I tried to model the ear pink off some of the approved black cats, and I blended the shading a bit more. Is this better? --HoneyfurBob's Your Uncle! 14:25, 24 July 2009 (UTC)
Blend the front and hind leg shading and add a tad more shading on the head and left side.--Warrior♥Warrior's Den 16:34, 24 July 2009 (UTC)
Is this a little better? --HoneyfurBob's Your Uncle! 18:21, 24 July 2009 (UTC)
He looks great, except I think he needs a bit more shading on his hindleg, front leg, and back. And maybe some on top of the head. That's all I see. --Bramble My Realm 21:06, 25 July 2009 (UTC)
Sorry for taking so long to respond; it's been a busy week for me. =) Anyway, I tried adding more shading. Is this better? --HoneyfurBob's Your Uncle! 14:16, 28 July 2009 (UTC)
That's good, but you now need to blend the shading in at the edges. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 16:09, 28 July 2009 (UTC)
I'm not all that good at this shading stuff. =) But, anyway, I tried to blend it in a bit more. How's this? --HoneyfurBob's Your Uncle! 18:41, 28 July 2009 (UTC)
Blur the shading just a bit more. Basically just run the blur tool down it about three times. We'll tell you if it's too much. Be careful not to hit the lineart though. --Bramble My Realm 23:46, 28 July 2009 (UTC)
Tried blurring the shading. Is this too much? Too little? --HoneyfurBob's Your Uncle! 16:32, 31 July 2009 (UTC)
I think that's just right, personally. Comments before approval? This image is beautiful. --Bramble My Realm 18:26, 31 July 2009 (UTC)
None; approved Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 18:56, 1 August 2009 (UTC)
Mousewhisker (W) - Approved[]
[[file:mousewhisker2.png]] Finally up! Now who shall I do?....-- Darkhallows Lair 03:26, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
The white looks a little... yellow.--Warrior♥Warrior's Den 14:44, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
The join where the grey meets the white near the base of the tail is at an odd angle - it seems rather abrupt. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 17:33, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
I changed it, but it's not showing up yet...-- Darkhallows Lair 18:43, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
(M) - The haunch has a little bit of white on the gray part. ₪ MosswhiskerAndStealthfire 19:16, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
It looks like there’s gray on his eye.. it looks sort of filmed over or like he’s looking behind him. --Bramble My Realm 00:41, 31 July 2009 (UTC)
The new version is up, taking Moss and Bramble's comments into consideration.-- Darkhallows Lair 03:00, 31 July 2009 (UTC)
This is really nice - comments before approval? -- Dawnfeather talk! 23:13, 31 July 2009 (UTC)
None; approved Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 19:06, 1 August 2009 (UTC)
Nightstar(Le) Approved[]
[[File:Nightstar.png]]
Have I posted this twice? Dunno... But, I'm sorry, to those who saw, about my blow up last night. I was having a bad day, but I'm sorry, and I'm staying. Anywho, I did Scourge. I hope he looks ok, and will he be able to have a chance at being accepted? I don't know if I used the right blank... --MUMBLE785 20:22, 25 July 2009 (UTC)
I'm sorry, this won't be accepted. It's good, but Scourge is considered a rogue. Jane Volturi (talk!) 20:24, 25 July 2009 (UTC)
Too true as Scourge, but this image is awesome and I would hate it to go to waste. Mumble, no one is currently working on Nightstar; you can take away the collar and change the eyes amber. You could go with either Nightstar, or you could lighten it and make it Swiftstar of WindClan. Your choice. Also, I am glad you are staying. :) You have great talent. --Bramble My Realm 20:37, 25 July 2009 (UTC)
Thank you! And I'll change him to nightstar. ;) --MUMBLE785 20:42, 25 July 2009 (UTC)
The transition is complete... IT'S ALIVE!!! xD Jk. It's just nightstar. Suggestions? --MUMBLE785 20:57, 25 July 2009 (UTC)
Technically Nightstar's dead. ;) He looks great, except I think the shading on the right side of his face (our left) is a bit too thick, as well as under his neck. --Bramble My Realm 21:04, 25 July 2009 (UTC)
xD Ok, I'll fix it. --MUMBLE785 21:46, 25 July 2009 (UTC)
REUPLOADED. I fixed it! --MUMBLE785 22:49, 25 July 2009 (UTC)
ear color should be a shade or two lighter, in my opinion. rainpelt
I don't know about that, rainpelt. He is a black cat, and it might look unnatural that bright...--MUMBLE785 01:38, 26 July 2009 (UTC)
REUPLOADED. Fixed! ;) --MUMBLE785 19:54, 26 July 2009 (UTC)
I think he's a bit too dark. Can you lighten him a bit so the shading and features show up more? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 16:07, 28 July 2009 (UTC)
Sure. --MUMBLE785 22:08, 31 July 2009 (UTC)
REUPLOADED. OMG!!! Sandy; you are a genious! I think he looks better myself! xD --MUMBLE785 22:19, 31 July 2009 (UTC)
Comments before approval? (He is outstanding!) -- Dawnfeather talk! 00:31, 1 August 2009 (UTC)
Thank you! Already? Cool! :D --MUMBLE785 00:57, 1 August 2009 (UTC)
None. Approved. --Bramble My Realm 01:27, 2 August 2009 (UTC)
Featherwhisker(MC) - For Approval[]
[[File:Featherwhisker.2.png]] Here is my Featherwhisker, inspired by Shaf-Girl's new biography of Pinestar including Featherpaw. A whole new look on him makes me want to make his image. Comments/criticism? -- Dawnfeather talk! 07:18, 29 July 2009 (UTC)
(M) - As usual, I see nothing wrong. Great job! ₪ MosswhiskerAndStealthfire 20:38, 29 July 2009 (UTC)
I see nothing wrong eaither.i agree with moss&stealth.Keep up the good work =^._.^= --Firepelt 23:25, 29 July 2009 (UTC)FirePelt
As usual, det är häftigt. ;) Basically Moss's echo. Comments before approval? --Bramble My Realm 00:53, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
This looks great as usual. Underneath the ear there is a bit where the shading stops rather abruptly - can you blend it in a little? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 12:29, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
Is this better? -- Dawnfeather talk! 23:10, 31 July 2009 (UTC)
Yep. Repeating, comments before approval? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 11:50, 1 August 2009 (UTC)
None. Approved. --Bramble My Realm 13:21, 2 August 2009 (UTC)
Lizardstripe (Q) - Approved[]
[[File:Lizardstripe Queen.png]]
(M) - It's...Lizard...stripe...
Okay, so I don't actually like her that much, for she's probably the reason that Brokenstar became evil. But she did die of Greencough, and her kits would have only been apprentices.
I used classic tabby markings. I know that it never said she had white on her muzzle, but I can't imagine a cat with a white underbelly and chest without a white muzzle. Meh, I can change it if you guys think I should. Comments? ₪ MosswhiskerAndStealthfire 18:19, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
I a well OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Beautiful! I see nothing wrong!Minnowclaw 18:22, 30 July 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw
This is great! You're turning into oene of our most talented artists Moss! You're getting as consistent as Dawn :) I can't see anything either. I love the muzzle, it looks really good. I say leave it with a white muzzle. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 18:38, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
I love it! Its even better than your Silverstream! :) Great job, Moss! Hawkfire ♫ Go Aggies! 20:04, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
(M) - I didn't make Silverstream, the ever so talented Shimmer did :D. Anyways, thank for the complements, everyone! ₪ MosswhiskerAndStealthfire 20:08, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
She’s as beautiful as an ill-tempered ShadowClan queen can look. :) I agree with Sandy and the others whole-heartedly that you’re getting very talented. The only thing I see is that the shading style on her haunch looks different than the rest of the shading; it looks as if it was saturated as well as shaded. A bit of it also overlapped the haunch and went on the belly area. --Bramble My Realm 00:41, 31 July 2009 (UTC)
(M) Thanks Bramble! I don't know what exactly you meant about the shading, seeing as I used the same method for the haunch as the rest of the body. Anyways, I fixed that (I think) and got rid of the excess shading. Right now the changes aren't showing up though. (Anyone else notice how many problems with uploading we've been having lately?) ₪ MosswhiskerAndStealthfire 22:31, 31 July 2009 (UTC)
Yes. I don't think my Brightkit showed up. This is gergus, I just can't see the ear pink. --Spottedwing 00:31, 1 August 2009 (UTC)
(M) - Now that changes are showing up again, I fixed the ear pink so it shows up more. ₪ MosswhiskerAndStealthfire 00:50, 1 August 2009 (UTC)
Comments for approval in 24 hours? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 19:33, 1 August 2009 (UTC)
(M) - Please note that I will be gone on vacation the 2nd throught the 6th. Please do not delete this. Thank you! ₪ MosswhiskerAndStealthfire 00:38, 2 August 2009 (UTC)
None; approved Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 18:36, 2 August 2009 (UTC)
Cloud Spots (Med Cat) - Approved[]
[[File:Cloudspots.medcat.png]] I've had him sat on my cp for what seems like a very long time waiting to be put up :) Here he finally is! Constructments? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 10:33, 27 July 2009 (UTC)
ears need to show up a bit more, in my opinion. other than that, it looks awesome!
This looks great, Sandy! The only things I can see are to darken the ear pink and to lighten the shading. I can't see the back feet the shading is so dark! :) HawkfireMy Den 15:49, 27 July 2009 (UTC)
Sandy,cloudspot's is awesome,and as hawky said,darken the ear pink,and lighten the shading,other than that,if you fix it a bit more,awesome! --Firepelt 17:58, 27 July 2009 (UTC)FirePelt
Okay. I darkened the ear pink and lightened the whole image so the shading was less prominent. I can't do much with 'fix it up a bit more' Firepelt as I don't know what that means but thanks for the great compliments! lol Anything else? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 11:01, 28 July 2009 (UTC)
Bring the white on the ear out a bit more, and move the pink inside the ear a bit more. Right now it's over the transition between black and white, and it looks odd. Also add some more specks on his tail. He looks great otherwise though. --Bramble My Realm 23:40, 29 July 2009 (UTC)
I extended the white on the ear and added a bit between his ears as it looked really strange without it. I added more spots on his tail.and moved the ear pink. Think I got it everything. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 12:04, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
(M) - The part where the white on the ear connects with the black looks too round. ₪ MosswhiskerAndStealthfire 19:08, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
Better? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 12:34, 31 July 2009 (UTC)
(M) - Much. I like this alot! ₪ MosswhiskerAndStealthfire 00:29, 1 August 2009 (UTC)
Beautiful. 24 hours starting now. GB57 00:39, 2 August 2009 (UTC)
Approved. Beautiful job, Sandy. GB57 02:06, 3 August 2009 (UTC)
Thank you GB! Archiving Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 11:16, 3 August 2009 (UTC)
Tallstar(Le)- Approved[]
[[File:Tallstar13.png]] Comments?--Yai-Girl 14:41, 16 July 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl
Very good. =) Maybe tone the ear pink a shade lighter, blend the black patches, and add shading.--Warrior♥Warrior's Den 15:33, 16 July 2009 (UTC)
Good, just do all the things above, and make the eye amber (orange) because it's yellow and he has amber eyes. HawkfireMy Den 21:33, 16 July 2009 (UTC)
He looks more really dark brown then he does black. That may just be my computer though.--:LST DragonClan's Camp 00:03, 17 July 2009 (UTC)
He looks good, but he has no shading. --Goldencloud 03:35, 17 July 2009 (UTC)
I added shading, made the ear pink lighter, made the eyes amber, and blurred the black. Anything else?--Yai-Girl 15:00, 17 July 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl
Darken the shading a bit, I can barley see it. Also, add some shading on the hid leg.Minnowclaw 17:00, 17 July 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw
Better?--Yai-Girl 04:28, 18 July 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl
(M) - The tendril on the nose looks strange. Try widening it at the bottem and then gradually thinning it out. Mosswisker&Stealthfire 19:10, 18 July 2009 (UTC)
I agree with Moss, and I also think the shading needs to be blurred a bit. Also add a white pixel by the pupils, for a highlight. --Bramble My Realm 20:14, 18 July 2009 (UTC)
I forgot how to blend shading again, sorry.--Yai-Girl 04:52, 19 July 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl
I looked at the approved leaders. How does he look?--Yai-Girl 05:01, 19 July 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl
To blend shading use the smudge or blur tool and run it across it. Use the dodge tool for shading, but it wont work on white images so make his pelt color just a shade darker than pure white.--Warrior♥Warrior's Den 17:00, 19 July 2009 (UTC)
I changed him, how does he look?--Yai-Girl 15:55, 20 July 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl
dark... his white patches are grey now... Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 18:22, 20 July 2009 (UTC)
I'd have to agree with Sandy. Overall he's darker. I'd suggest going over it with the dodge tool in some places for brighter highlights to bring it up to near white and possibly making his eyes lighter as well? --Quiet! 08:52, 21 July 2009 (UTC)
Better?--Yai-Girl 15:37, 21 July 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl
He still needs to be a bit lighter. Just darker than pure white. Also, blend the shading into the pelt. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 19:18, 21 July 2009 (UTC)
Sorry I din´t respond right away I'm on a trip to Spain and I don't want people geting angry becouse I saved lots of chages. So, please don´t delete Tallstar or the Kittypet Blanks.--Yai-Girl 21:51, 23 July 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl
I made the pelt a lighter color.--Yai-Girl 15:17, 25 July 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl
The transition between the eyes is sort of an odd shape to me... Could you make it rounder? Other than that, I love him! --MUMBLE785 22:58, 25 July 2009 (UTC)
Darken the shading. Other than that, it's very good. Jane Volturi (talk!) 02:42, 26 July 2009 (UTC)
(M) - I agree with Sparrow. Also, there are a few white pixles on the black on his left shoulder that you should get rid of. ₪ MosswhiskerAndStealthfire 20:46, 26 July 2009 (UTC)
The tendril up his nose is a direct rectangle. Make it more like a natural triangle, with blurring. Also, you need to work on your kittypet blanks when you have time. --Bramble My Realm 23:23, 28 July 2009 (UTC)
When I tried the nose looked strange I don´t think I can do it.--Yai-Girl 14:42, 29 July 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl
[[File:Tallstar diagram.png]]
(M) - I drew you a diagram for the nose tendril and white on the shoulder and how to fix the tendril and white. ₪ MosswhiskerAndStealthfire 22:17, 29 July 2009 (UTC)
I am bad at the marking, but here it is.--Yai-Girl 21:09, 1 August 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl
Just blend it up a bit and into the pelt like on Moss' diragram. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 18:29, 2 August 2009 (UTC)
Blendned the marking.--Yai-Girl 18:50, 2 August 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl
Looks good to me. Comments before approval? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 20:02, 2 August 2009 (UTC)
None; Approved!-- Darkhallows Lair 08:31, 4 August 2009 (UTC)
Harespring - Approved[]
Here's Harespring, my first Charart ever. He's probably not that good, but... well... comments?--EchomistLilydapple 00:49, 28 July 2009 (UTC)
(M) - This is really good! The only thing that strikes me is the eye; it needs to have more color to it. Look at some of the other approved warrior eyes for examples. ₪ MosswhiskerAndStealthfire 01:07, 28 July 2009 (UTC)
This is really good for your first ever charart Echo. I would suggest looking at some approved warriors for help with the highlighting and pupil in the eye and also make the white a very very pale grey instead so that the shading shows up. Add shading on the curve of the hind leg, chest, head and bottom edge of the tail. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 13:04, 28 July 2009 (UTC)
Yes, this is pretty good for your first charart. But you need to darken the shading a bit - I can hardly see it. Sparrow (song) 20:55, 28 July 2009 (UTC)
Reuploaded. I fixed the eye, and I'm trying to make the shading look more natural, but I'm not that good at it. Anyway, is it better?--EchomistLilydapple 17:48, 29 July 2009 (UTC)
(M) - For shading, I use the burn tool (If you don't have this tool, go to www.pixlr.com) Then go up to brushes, click on size 20 to 30 (depending on what area you're shading),and put the hardness at 0. Then just run it over the areas you need to shade about 2 to 3 times. Hope that helps! ₪ MosswhiskerAndStealthfire 20:35, 29 July 2009 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Thanks Moss! I used the burn tool, just the way you said, and I think he's better.EchomistLilydapple 21:07, 29 July 2009 (UTC)
The white parts look kind of green... Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 17:36, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
(M) - The shading's better. Could you add some under the chin and on his back? ₪ MosswhiskerAndStealthfire 18:38, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
I re-did the image, fixing the "green" parts so that they looked white, adding shading to the chin and back... but for some reason it's not showing the updated version. This is weird...--EchomistLilydapple 21:55, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
This is really very good, Echo. The only thing I see is that I think the patch on his chest should be bigger; bring it up more so it fills the entire chest area. --Bramble My Realm 00:41, 31 July 2009 (UTC)
This is great Echo, the things is that the face being blank looks awkward. Can you add a patch over the ear or something?-- Darkhallows Lair 03:19, 31 July 2009 (UTC)
Reuploaded. I made the patch on his chest bigger, and I put a patch over his other ear. Is he done yet?-- Echomist Look out for flying hedgehogs! 23:03, 31 July 2009 (UTC)
I think so. Comments before approval? -- Dawnfeather talk! 00:34, 1 August 2009 (UTC)
This looks good just put some more color in the eye than it will be set. Sandwich989 15:48, 1 August 2009 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Well, I put more color in the eye, and I blurred the ear pink a little because it looked too distinct. Is he better?-- Echomist Look out for flying hedgehogs! 18:45, 1 August 2009 (UTC)
Almost there. He seems a bit pixely on the shading and top of the head - can you blur a little to remove the sharpness and then he's good to go. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 19:00, 1 August 2009 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Thanks Sandy, I didn't realize that. Did I fix it well enough?-- Echomist Look out for flying hedgehogs! 19:34, 1 August 2009 (UTC)
Yep. Repeating: Approval in 24 hours. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 15:12, 2 August 2009 (UTC)]
He's been up for 24 hours without any comments... is he approved yet? I'm sorry for being so impatient, but this is my first Charart and I want it to be approved really bad so that I can put up more :)-- Echomist Look out for flying hedgehogs! 16:40, 4 August 2009 (UTC)
Sorry Echo. Things are a little busy round here. Bramble's away until friday, GB's only here every other week for personal reasons and I had a funeral today on the other side of the country. Dawn was probably asleep when you posted that, but I can't be sure. lol Anyway. No comments; approved Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 19:53, 4 August 2009 (UTC)
Nightpelt (W) - Approved[]
[[File:Nightpeltshorthaired(W).png]]
Okay, I hope that the ear pink is finally alright. --Nigthflight 04:22, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
- The ear pink needs to show more. Make it a brighter color. Not like a hot pink, but a dark red/pink color.--Warrior♥Warrior's Den 14:40, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
Hoping this is okay! --Nigthflight 21:51, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
- Better. But near his paws it seemed like you dodged everything. Darken it just a tad.--Warrior♥Warrior's Den 22:42, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
I don't know Warrior. I actually really like that effect... it looks like the light source is coming from behind and hitting his backa nd the backs of his legs... Any other opinions? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 19:13, 1 August 2009 (UTC)
I agree with Sandy; it looks good just the way it is.-- Echomist Look out for flying hedgehogs! 01:11, 2 August 2009 (UTC)
Okay, well this has been sat here for 24 hours for opinions. Any more comments before approval? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 18:33, 2 August 2009 (UTC)
None, approved. GB57 23:26, 3 August 2009 (UTC)
Thrushpelt(W)- Approved[]
[[File:Thrushpelt2.png]]
Ok I really don't want my Thrushpaw to go to waste so I made this one.Sandwich989 18:19, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
It’s a perfect shade of sandy-gray, the color is beautiful. Do you think you could make the patch smaller, or more flash-like? It says a flash of white in his description, and this looks more like a patch. --Bramble My Realm 00:41, 31 July 2009 (UTC)
Done. Sandwich989 06:35, 3 August 2009 (UTC)
Comments before approval? (your getting really good Sandwhich)-- Darkhallows Lair 20:06, 3 August 2009 (UTC)
None, approved. GB57 23:32, 3 August 2009 (UTC)
Ravenpaw - approved[]
[[File:Ravenpaw2.png]]
Heres my first go at an apprentice blank. I unsuccesfully added highlights but I left them there so you can tell me if there good. It's the Thunderclan one btw.Sandwich989 07:46, 27 July 2009 (UTC)
She's beautiful. Can I suggest that you darken the shading a tiny bit, not so that it looks dramati, just so it is a tiny bit more visible. -- Dawnfeather talk! 12:00, 27 July 2009 (UTC)
Also maybe blend the ear pink a small bit more.--Warrior♥Warrior's Den 20:15, 27 July 2009 (UTC)
(M) - He needs a pupil and highlight in his eye. ₪ MosswhiskerAndStealthfire 21:57, 27 July 2009 (UTC)
Darkened shading a little, fixed eye, blended in ear more. Sandwich989 23:14, 28 July 2009 (UTC)
It's a great image, but I don't think it's needed. Thrushpelt is never shown as an apprentice, is he? If you'd do his warrior self that would be better. --Bramble My Realm 23:38, 29 July 2009 (UTC)
How about if this gets approved, I will immediately do his warrior. Since we are trying to get all pixels for all cats. Sandwich989 01:03, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
I dunno... if he was never shown as an apprentice or mentioned as one then we shouldn't really do the image. That's like assuming he actually was one - he could have been a rogue joined immediately as a warrior - okay it's unlikely but I don't think we should take that liberty as to assume his history. Perhaps you could make it into a different cat with a similar description. I'll have a think and see who it could possibly be. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 11:56, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
Ok, I changed it. ;(.Sandwich989 18:51, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
Ravenpaw! :D The only thing I see is that the patch on his chest needs to be shrunk down to a fleck; there was only a tiny bit of white on his chest. I love the shading job and the way he’s textured, though. --Bramble My Realm 00:41, 31 July 2009 (UTC)
Yes! Great choice Sandwich. I had a bit of troube thinking of another cat it could be! lol. Just make the edit Bramble suggested and he should be good to go :) Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 12:22, 31 July 2009 (UTC)
Fixed.Sandwich989 06:27, 3 August 2009 (UTC)
Comments before approval?-- Darkhallows Lair 08:34, 4 August 2009 (UTC)
I dont' mean to sound pushy but this has been up with the CBA tag and its been 36 hours... Sandwich989 03:39, 6 August 2009 (UTC)
- I'm on it. Approved. --Mal Sorrel-Wolf 13:19, 6 August 2009 (UTC)
Redtail- Approved[]
[[File:Redtail.png]]
- Well before I have to leave Monday, I wanted to upload the first deputy we ever met, Redtail. I gave him amber eyes since they never gave any information about his eyes, plus to me it seemed to fit him better than green and blue was just yucky..So here he is. I gave his tail a darker ginger since he was best known for it and I think he inherited from his mother Swiftbreeze since she is known for her red tail too. Comments anyone?-- ♪Shimmer♫ 05:15, 26 July 2009 (UTC)
Ooooh I like this one. The thing i see is on the right foreleg, try blending more in between the two colors. Sandwich989 07:48, 26 July 2009 (UTC)
Nice job!As sandwich said,try blending more between colors,other than that,no flaughts are visable to me!Kepp up the good work! --Firepelt 02:24, 27 July 2009 (UTC)FirePelt
His body is great and looks like a perfect tortie should look, but his tail is way too red. It actually looks crimson. Try making it just a darker shade of his ginger coloured body fur. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 13:03, 26 July 2009 (UTC)
- Here we are. I used a tortie picture for reference when I was making him since its my first shot at making one. I think I got the color of the tail down this round.Man..I've realized I've come a long way from just my first pixel Squirrelfight...O.o The changes isn't showing up for me....so I hope they show up later because it is when you look at the recent uploads-- ♪Shimmer♫ 16:44, 26 July 2009 (UTC)
Now it shows up ^_^ comments?...so it can get more attention Updated-- ♪Shimmer♫ 03:54, 27 July 2009 (UTC)
lol. I changed the file name as rainpelt uploaded a leader pose over it... the file name would have been changed anyway in keeping with the others. I think this looks much better. I'll have another look in a minute and may post again :) Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 10:04, 27 July 2009 (UTC)
I think he looks good. Does anyone else have anything? --Bramble My Realm 00:02, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
Comments before approval? --Bramble My Realm 18:28, 31 July 2009 (UTC)
The shading needs to be blurred a lot more. There is a very distinct line still. -- Dawnfeather talk! 00:33, 1 August 2009 (UTC)
He's amazing!!! I love him, please tell me how to do torties like that! Hawkfire ♫ Go Aggies! 14:51, 4 August 2009 (UTC)
Repeating, comments before approval? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 19:48, 4 August 2009 (UTC)
Sandy this has been sitting here for 3 days now. I am moving it to the accepted art. This image is long overdue. Hawkfire ♫ Go Aggies! 13:38, 7 August 2009 (UTC)
Approved
Toadfoot (Ki) - Approved[]
[[File:Toadkit(SC).png]] I matched the colour perfectly with his warrior version :) (I am sad...) Anyway, constructments? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 20:20, 4 August 2009 (UTC)
Beautiful! Any more comments before the 24 hours are started? GB57 23:41, 4 August 2009 (UTC)
His eyes have no pupils. -- Dawnfeather talk! 09:50, 5 August 2009 (UTC)
Yes they do. Second pixel along from the left on the bottom (in each eye). The same as always. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 13:57, 5 August 2009 (UTC)
You could make the ear pink lighter, but it's just a suggestion. --Blackclaw09 20:59, 5 August 2009 (UTC)
I think the ear pink is perfect the way it is. --MUMBLE785 21:53, 5 August 2009 (UTC)
Restarting 24 hours. GB57 18:48, 6 August 2009 (UTC)
None. Approved. --Bramble My Realm 00:16, 8 August 2009 (UTC)
Bluestar(D) - For Approval[]
[[File:Bluefur2.png]] (Created new section)
I think that she is beautiful, but before we approve her lets get in some other comments. -- Dawnfeather talk! 23:20, 31 July 2009 (UTC)
It's gourgus, I just think that the ear pink should be a little more brighter. --Spottedwing 00:10, 1 August 2009 (UTC)
I'm not sure, it looks pretty natural now. Any brighter would make it less natural and more fluoro, something we try to avoid... It's your choice, Mumble. -- Dawnfeather talk! 00:36, 1 August 2009 (UTC)
(M)- I don't think you need to make the color brighter, but blur/smudge it less. Make it more distinct. ₪ MosswhiskerAndStealthfire 00:47, 1 August 2009 (UTC)
I think I'll just make it more distinct. ;) --MUMBLE785 01:00, 1 August 2009 (UTC)
The picture is great, but wasn't she described as being scarred? (I'm not sure if you have to put that in, but I noticed some of the cats that have scars in their description have scars on the charart, so I just thought I'd point it out...) ♫ insaneular ♫ 23:40, 3 August 2009 (UTC)
- The image is very dark, like the lineart is smudged into it, the same problem goes for Fireheart. --Mal Sorrel-Wolf 12:30, 2 August 2009 (UTC)
So, make the image lighter? --MUMBLE785 23:27, 4 August 2009 (UTC)
Mal, it doesn't look dark to me... The shading could be lighter, though. ;)--Warrior♥Warrior's Den 19:10, 6 August 2009 (UTC)
kk! --MUMBLE785 18:55, 7 August 2009 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Better? --MUMBLE785 18:59, 7 August 2009 (UTC)
She's beautiful. I don't see anything that needs to be changed. Comments before approval? --Bramble My Realm 02:34, 8 August 2009 (UTC)
YAY!!!! :D --MUMBLE785 18:22, 8 August 2009 (UTC)