Lionstar - Approved


Here's my 1st leader. Does any one know how to do good highlights like Minnowclaw and Quiet have done on their images? Sandwich989 19:11, 22 July 2009 (UTC)

Wow Sandwich, this looks great. Maybe blend the shading and ear pink a little more, and are his eyes really light blue? And no, I do not know how to add highlights like that. Ask them yourself! :) HawkfireMy Den 22:12, 22 July 2009 (UTC)

I agree with Hawkfire on blending the shading. It took a while for me to find out what you meant by highlights, but I don't use them. I have no clue what quiet does, but if you mean what I did with Thunder, I go to and use the dodged tool for shading and highlights. Hope I helped!Minnowclaw 22:39, 22 July 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

Make the eyes amber as it is a generic colour unless you can find a reference for blue eyes. Take the shading away from the top edge of the tail and add some on the neck and left side of his face. Then blend all the shading more. Highlights aren't strictly necessary but if you do want to add them then use the dodge tool. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 13:32, 23 July 2009 (UTC)

Made eyes amber, fixed tail, and fixed shading. Sandwich989 19:13, 24 July 2009 (UTC)

(M) - I think what Snady meant is to still have the shading along the bottem of the tail, just not on the top. Also, there are two white dots toward the outside of the eyes that aren't highlights that need to be taken out. MosswhiskerAndStealthfire 01:16, 25 July 2009 (UTC)

I made you a diagram for shading. Where I circled in blue, I think you should put some shading. Other that that, This is a REALLY good image! Diagram: [[File:LionstarDiagram.png]] --MUMBLE785 20:38, 25 July 2009 (UTC)

Fixed everything.Sandwich989 21:49, 26 July 2009 (UTC) should have kept the shading you had and added in the shading spots mumble suggested.-- ♪Shimmer 22:05, 26 July 2009 (UTC)
Sorry, I added it now.Sandwich989 07:56, 27 July 2009 (UTC)

It's in the right places now, but you need to blend it in at the edges... Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 14:12, 27 July 2009 (UTC)

Ok, did that. Sandwich989 23:49, 27 July 2009 (UTC)

The shading on his right cheek is too thick. Blur it a lot or take some away. Or both. --Bramble My Realm 23:43, 28 July 2009 (UTC)

There's also some blurry lineart around his hind legs and the join where they meet the front legs. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 09:18, 29 July 2009 (UTC)

I really hate to do this but I can't find the color I was usign for the fur, so I'm gonna withdraw.Sandwich989 19:08, 29 July 2009 (UTC)

Well, after a very convincing argument by Mosswhisker, consider this un withdrawn. Sandwich989 21:16, 29 July 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Glad to hear it. :) Make the shading slighly thinner on the left side of his face. MosswhiskerAndStealthfire 20:04, 30 July 2009 (UTC)

Im really sorry I haven't edited this in a week, im taking care of my mom cause she has brondcidis. Anyway i thinned the cheek, comments? Sandwich989 01:32, 9 August 2009 (UTC)

Oh no, I hope your mom gets better, Sandwich. :( Your image is beautiful, I think that's all it needed. Comments before approval? --Bramble My Realm 02:39, 9 August 2009 (UTC)

None: approved Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 16:50, 10 August 2009 (UTC)

Rainsplash (D) - Approved


Sorry for not getting on for a long time! This was declined because I couldn't get on here, so I reposted it. I changed the the eye to the way the 'eye diagram' is, and someone mentioned not coloring a space between the paws, what space? It looks okay to me, but I'm not that experienced :P --♫ insaneular ♫ 19:44, 2 August 2009 (UTC)

Wow, this looks fabulous! The only thing I can see that's wrong with it is the ear pink - I think it needs to be a little big bigger, right now it's miniature-sized.-- Echomist Look out for flying hedgehogs! 19:54, 2 August 2009 (UTC)

There is the spot between the legs that is colored in. Other then that it looks great. --Spottedwing 00:08, 4 August 2009 (UTC)

Fix the colored spot, I'd be glad to start the 24 hours. GB57 15:46, 4 August 2009 (UTC)

Note: I'm sadly pretty busy and out and around now and for a couple more weeks, so I might not be able to get to my chararts quickly, please don't decline them... I'll do it ASAP. Thanks. ♫ insaneular ♫ 22:48, 7 August 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --Bramble My Realm 20:44, 8 August 2009 (UTC)

Approved Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 17:49, 10 August 2009 (UTC)

Windflight- Approved


Since my Rainsplash was pretty much done, I decided to start another. It was my first try at a tabby, and I tried to get the more natural look that ones like the Mintfur picture had (Because the 'bunch of Ys' marking on many tabby chararts look a bit strange to me... they look like veins) and it looked okay at first, then I ran into some trouble with making the shading look even, because it made the markings look less distinct... but I figured I'd put it up here so I could get tips on how to fix that. Comments...? --♫ insaneular ♫ 20:34, 2 August 2009 (UTC)

I think he looks fabulous! Nothing wrong as far as I can see :)-- Echomist Look out for flying hedgehogs! 21:59, 2 August 2009 (UTC)

The tabby markings looks great, but the shading needs to be blended more and needs to be thicker and added on his chest.--Warrior♥Warrior's Den 23:48, 2 August 2009 (UTC)


Here - the circled area is the bit that shouldn't be coloured on both this and Rainsplash. It is a space and should be transparent like the background. Other than that just make the ear more triangular and this looks great! Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 11:14, 3 August 2009 (UTC)

Oh, I thought that the body would be showing through that space. Thanks for clearing that up :P I'll fix it on both as soon as I'm at the right computer again. ♫ insaneular ♫ 23:30, 3 August 2009 (UTC)

Note: I'm sadly pretty busy and out and around now and for a couple more weeks, so I might not be able to get to my chararts quickly, please don't decline them... I'll do it ASAP. Thanks. ♫ insaneular ♫ 22:48, 7 August 2009 (UTC)

I reuploaded it, and fixed the colored spot. If there's more I need to do before it can be put up it will have to wait until Thursday at the earliest, sadly, because I can't get to my computer with GIMP until then. --♫ insaneular ♫ 22:36, 8 August 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --Bramble My Realm 13:40, 9 August 2009 (UTC)

None; approved Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 18:09, 10 August 2009 (UTC)

Robinwing (TC) - Approved

[[File:Robinwing.Queen.png]]Well, I was feeling ambitious, so I made my first queen! Presenting... Robinwing of ThunderClan! I tried to get the patch of ginger on the chest right, but if it needs to be a different color or something just let me know. Comments/criticism?-- Echomist Look out for flying hedgehogs! 19:43, 8 August 2009 (UTC)

Looks good! The only thing I can think of for now would be the chest color. It's a little bit pinker than it should be... But that's my opinion. You may want one of the higher ranks to agree with me first, though... --MUMBLE785 19:49, 8 August 2009 (UTC)

Make the ear pink just a tad bit darker and increase the size a tad, as well as adding some ear pink on the other ear, to be picky. I personally think the chest color is alright; any opinions on this? --Bramble My Realm 20:01, 8 August 2009 (UTC)

(M) - I think the chest color's fine. Could you blend a little more on the belly please? MosswhiskerAndStealthfire 20:06, 8 August 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Okey-dokey, I left the chest color the same, enlargened and darkened the ear pink, added ear pink to the other ear, and blended the belly. Better?-- Echomist Look out for flying hedgehogs! 01:09, 9 August 2009 (UTC)

She's great. Comments before approval? --Bramble My Realm 13:52, 9 August 2009 (UTC)

Approved Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 20:02, 10 August 2009 (UTC)

Longtail (E) - Approved

[[File:Longtail Elders.png]]

(M) - I'm back! Did you miss me?

...Yea, probably not. :P

Anyways, I feel bad for Longtail. He was forced to become an elder way too early because of his blindness. Also, he proves that even if you have done the wrong thing in the past, you can still do the right thing.

His description is so confusing! Gah! *Brain implodes* How can you have a pale tabby tom with dark black stripes? I made him a silver tabby because that is the only way I could see a tabby having black stripes. I can easily change the color if I need to. Oh, and I used striped tabby markings instead of classic this time becuase of him having dark black stripes. To show his blindness I made his pupil a very pale shade of gray. MosswhiskerAndStealthfire 12:45, 6 August 2009 (UTC)

I love him! A few things

  • Try changing him to pale brown tabby, if it doesn't look good just keep it gray
  • I can barely see the eye color, try darkening it a little?

Hawkfire ♫ Go Aggies! 15:28, 6 August 2009 (UTC)

It looks pretty good to me, but I'm no expert at this. --Blackclaw09 17:31, 6 August 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Hawkfire ~ I didn't make him brown becuase it looked extremely strange to have a brown tabby with black stripes. I'm not trying to be stubborn, trust me. I did fix his eye though. MosswhiskerAndStealthfire 19:35, 6 August 2009 (UTC)

(M) - So what do I need to fix? ;) MosswhiskerAndStealthfire 21:49, 7 August 2009 (UTC)

Longtail isn't gray... it may look weird for him to be a pale tabby with black stripes, but that's what he really is...Is there a ref anywhere that says he's gray? This looks like Darkstripe, except he never lived long enough to be an elder. --Bramble My Realm 00:26, 8 August 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Bramble ~ Ha, he does look like Darkstripe! I posted a second version, this one brown with black stripes. MosswhiskerAndStealthfire 15:28, 8 August 2009 (UTC)

The second one looks alot more like Longtail. I don't think that anyone reserved Darkstripe. Mabie you could do Darkstripe when Longtail is apporved/declined with the tabby markings, If you want to of corse. The only thing I can see is I can't see his eye pupul. --User:Spottedwing 17:11, 8 August 2009 (UTC)

(M) - I made the pupil light gray becuase I was trying to show his blindness. MosswhiskerAndStealthfire 17:49, 8 August 2009 (UTC)

He's awesome, exactly how I pictured Longtail. :) I removed the gray one, and I think you showed his blindness pretty well. The only thing I see is that the black patch on the end of his tail is too black; you can't see the lineart against it. Just make it a touch lighter, and Longtail'll be good to go. If no one else is doing him, you should try his warrior version. --Bramble My Realm 20:05, 8 August 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Bramble ~ The darkness on the tail comes from my excessive over-shading. :) It should be fixed now. Also, I will do Longtail as a warrior and Darkstripe in the future (Unless somebody else wants to do him, in which case, go ahead) once I get through my list of other cats I want to do. (No, I seriously have a list.) MosswhiskerAndStealthfire 20:31, 8 August 2009 (UTC)

Lol I need to get a list... I'm currently working through the SkyClan cats. Comments before approval? --Bramble My Realm 13:48, 9 August 2009 (UTC)

He looks fine, put I though he was white with tabby points (like in the manga). Oh well, this is good.-- Darkhallows  Lair 06:44, 10 August 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Color is hard to tell in the manga, seeing as it's in black and white. What book are you talking about? Mosswhisker and Steatlhfire 17:55, 10 August 2009 (UTC)

The one at the end of BSP, he's white with paw, nose and tail stripes.-- Darkhallows  Lair 08:16, 11 August 2009 (UTC)

(M) - What book is BSP? I can't think of a manga title that has that abbreviation (except Bluestar's prophecy, and that's not manga) Mosswhisker and Steatlhfire 17:38, 11 August 2009 (UTC)

They have an "Exclusive Manga Adventure" at the end of Bluestar's Prophecy that has when Rusty joins TunderClan. IT shows Longtail fighting him. =) They could've put white for a light color, though...--Warrior♥Warrior's Den 23:57, 11 August 2009 (UTC)

I think we should go by the book description of him not the manga seeing as it could easily be interpreted as a variety of colours. Also, the person/people that draw the mangas are not the Erins. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 11:00, 12 August 2009 (UTC)

Yes; good point. He's a pale tabby; he's not white. Technically these comments are not relevant; approved. --Bramble My Realm 23:09, 12 August 2009 (UTC)

Stormtail - Approved

Stormtail.warrior Well, here's Stormtail, father of our famous Bluestar. He's my first solid-colored cat, so the shading probably needs improvements. Comments/criticism? Echomist Look out for flying hedgehogs! 18:28, 8 August 2009 (UTC)

WOW! He looks great flawless except maybe make the ear a little bit darker. Stonestar 19:41, 8 August 2009 (UTC)Stonestar

I agree with Stonestar. You're very talented, Echo. :) --Bramble My Realm 20:00, 8 August 2009 (UTC)

(M) - The only thing that jumps out at me is that part of the eye linart, the pupil, seems to be turned dark blue. He looks great though! MosswhiskerAndStealthfire 20:08, 8 August 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks for the compliments guys! Moss, I fixed that thing with the pupil, but I kept a little bit of dark blue around the corners of the eyes so that the light blue kind of blends with the black. Is that ok or should I get rid of it? -- Echomist Look out for flying hedgehogs! 00:49, 9 August 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Much better. :) Nice image! MosswhiskerAndStealthfire 01:02, 9 August 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --Bramble My Realm 13:51, 9 August 2009 (UTC)

Girl, you have talent! The only thing I can see is that the ear pink is a little too small. PERFECT color, though. Sparrowsong 16:28, 10 August 2009 (UTC) (too lazy to dress up my signature LOL)

Thanks Sparrow! I enlargened the ear pink a tad. Better? Echomist Look out for flying hedgehogs! 22:09, 10 August 2009 (UTC)

Repeating, comments before approval Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 19:55, 11 August 2009 (UTC)

Soulden´t it be approved now, it´s the 13th.--Yai-Girl 13:30, 13 August 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl

Sorry Yai - I've been busy again. Life is taking over at the moment ;) Approved Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 13:47, 13 August 2009 (UTC)

Honeyfern(Ki)- Approved


My first real charart!!I made a kit of Honeyfern because i just love her!!Let me know if there is anything i can do to make her better!!! ♫ Shimmer ღ  20:25, 8 August 2009 (UTC)

Wow.. this is very very good for your first charart, Song. (Do you mind if I call you that? It distinguishes you from Shimmerpool) The only thing that really pops out at me is that the tabby stripes are a bit hard to see. Make them a touch darker. --Bramble My Realm 20:30, 8 August 2009 (UTC)

thanks so much!!and sure you can call me song!!yeah i was wondering about those tabby markings.(they were bothering me)so sure i'll fix them. ♫ Shimmer ღ  21:00, 8 August 2009 (UTC)

Ok i fixed the tabby marking.are they dark nough or should i put them darker?is there anything else i can do to make the charart better? ♫ Shimmer ღ  21:44, 8 August 2009 (UTC)

Awww she's so cute. The only thing I can see is the ear pink should be a little more bigger, so then we can see it. It's really good for your first time. --User:Spottedwing 22:24, 8 August 2009 (UTC)

thanks!!i sthis dark enough or should it be darker? ♫ Shimmer ღ  22:32, 8 August 2009 (UTC)

Not bad song, but I think there should be a tad more shading other than that, She's great! -- Bracken-  Hey there! Whassup!!! 23:17, 8 August 2009 (UTC)

i added some shading hope its enough. ♫ Shimmer ღ  00:19, 9 August 2009 (UTC)

Wow! That's really good Song! Only thing I would do is darken the shading so that it is more pronounced.-- Echomist Look out for flying hedgehogs! 01:13, 9 August 2009 (UTC)

Aww!She is cute!I think the tabby stripes look better now that you fixed them.Also,darken the shading a bit like echo said.It's awesome for a first charcat!--Firepelt 20:18, 9 August 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

Thanks!!=D Is she better now or worse? ♫ Shimmer ღ  22:00, 9 August 2009 (UTC)

Your welcome!=D I think she's better,why would she be worse?--Firepelt 22:20, 9 August 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

tanks!!!i juts want to know if she's good with the changes i make. ♫ Shimmer ღ  23:30, 9 August 2009 (UTC)

She looks great! (BRAMBLE, We may need you over here...) --MUMBLE785MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 22:30, 10 August 2009 (UTC)

The nose is really red - make it the colour of the ears. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 20:07, 11 August 2009 (UTC)

is the nose g d now?or does it need more improvement? ♫ Shimmer ღ  22:19, 11 August 2009 (UTC)

This looks REALLY good -- Bracken-  Hey there! Whassup!!! 22:22, 11 August 2009 (UTC)

I'm not sure what you mean Mumble, unless it's a bout the insane number of images we have up at the momen.t Comments before approval? --Bramble My Realm 23:09, 12 August 2009 (UTC)

None. Approved. --Bramble My Realm 03:09, 14 August 2009 (UTC)

Gorsetail (Q) - Approved

[[File:Gorsetail.queen.png]] Okay, now the page is moving a little faster I feel I can finally put her up. I tried to keep the shading visible but was careful not to make it too dark as that was the problem with Brightflower. Constructments?

Whoopsie... forgot to sign! Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 20:21, 4 August 2009 (UTC)

Very prettyful Sandy, one thing tho, shes crosseyed! Hawkfire ♫ Go Aggies! 16:11, 5 August 2009 (UTC)

Is the tail shaded? --Blackclaw09 20:16, 5 August 2009 (UTC)

The tail is shaded, and she's not cross-eyed, Hawkey. That's the normal way the queens' eyes have always been done. --Bramble My Realm 00:35, 8 August 2009 (UTC)

Personally, I think this image is ready as it is. Comments before approval? --Bramble My Realm 13:47, 9 August 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Take out the ear pink on the far ear (Our left.) I know some of the approved queens have ear pink in that ear, but I've drawn cats and looked at cat pictures for a long time, and I can almost guarantee you there would be no ear pink in that ear, for it would be facing the opposite direction, so we'd see the back of the ear, not the inside. :) Mosswhisker and Steatlhfire 17:50, 10 August 2009 (UTC)

Ear pink removed Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 19:49, 11 August 2009 (UTC)

(M) - The background needs to be transparent too. :) Mosswhisker and Steatlhfire 21:27, 11 August 2009 (UTC)

Oopsie. Done :) I either forget because I have to use a different programme for transparency than I do for making the image, or I remember and then edit it and the programme I use for images turns it white again. lol Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 10:57, 12 August 2009 (UTC)

Lol, repeating 24 hours. --Bramble My Realm 02:16, 13 August 2009 (UTC)

None; approved. The page is slowly getting smaller... Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 09:13, 14 August 2009 (UTC)

Brightheart(Ki) - Approved

[[File:Brightheart (ki).png]] I wanted to have a go at a kit. Can anyone tell me how to put shading on a white kit? --Spottedwing 18:12, 17 July 2009 (UTC)

1.) Add shading by taking the brush tool in, choose the 5 brush and change the exposer to 50%. Put the brush when the shding should go and blend.

2.) The patches look to circleish and ovalish. Make them sort of lumpy.

3.) Blend all the patches and ear pink

Do this and it should be good.Minnowclaw 19:41, 17 July 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

Like Minnowclaw said, fix the patches. No cat has such even markings like this.-- ♪Shimmer 21:14, 17 July 2009 (UTC)

I agree with Minnowclaw and Shimmer. To put shading on a white cat you need to make sure the cat isn't pure white. Make her slightly greyish so the shading will show up.  Sandy Talk! 07:15, 18 July 2009 (UTC)

I finally got her reuploaded. My computer is being slow again. I added shading and redid the patches. What do you guys think? --Spottedwing 21:53, 18 July 2009 (UTC)

Try to position the patches like on the queen and warrior versions of her. I thinkIt's nice that you're using a different shade then those, as then they're all different and as ginger changes in the lighting... Also, the eyes are very dark green. Try lightening them like on the warrior and queen versions. Finally, my computer's coming back tommorrow! I can put up Oakheart, Jayfeather, and Crookedstar! --Mal Sorrel-Wolf 12:26, 19 July 2009 (UTC)

This is very good but the ginger splotches need to be more lumpy the one on her head is good though. User:Stonestar 13:47, July 19 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I made the blotches more lumpy and I added another blotch between her legs. I also made her eyes lighter. --Spottedwing 17:52, 19 July 2009 (UTC)

She needs more shading on the neck, head and left side of her body. Blend the edges of the patches slightly and also the shading. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 09:21, 20 July 2009 (UTC)

The shading is really bothering me. Her right forepaw has the regular white while the rest of her is darker and has more shading. Fix this by adding some of the regular white in her. Also blend the patches like Sandy said.-- ♪Shimmer 18:23, 20 July 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry it took so long. It's fair week and I'm so busy with my animals, that I'm barly at home. I made her white, went over the shading, and tried blending in the blotches. --Spottedwing 02:57, 22 July 2009 (UTC)

It's a good start. Blend the shading just a bit more, though, and add some on the chin. Sparrowsong 03:16, 22 July 2009 (UTC)

P.S. Sorry to be OT, but does anyone know why this page is locked? I don't see why it needs to be.

Yes, she's getting there! Just thicken the shading slightly anf add more under the chin, then blend it all in. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 10:25, 22 July 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I added shading on her neck. --Spottedwing 02:49, 23 July 2009 (UTC)

Please comment --Spottedwing 13:54, 26 July 2009 (UTC)

(M) - The spot on her head is still rather round. Also, the two spots on the chest are bothering me; make them more lumpy. MosswhiskerAndStealthfire 17:54, 26 July 2009 (UTC)

The spots look like they've been stuck on... Try making them less regular - more like patches than spots. Also, add shading on her head and thicken all the shading before blending in thoroughly. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 18:44, 26 July 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry it took so long. I redid the blotches. --Spottedwing 18:29, 27 July 2009 (UTC)

I left the blotch on her head round, because thats how it is on the Queen virsion. --Spottedwing 17:22, 28 July 2009 (UTC)

She just needs some shading on her cheeks, the ginger mark on her tail blurred, shading added to the bottom of the tail, and the neck shading curved downward some more. Then I’d call her good to go. The patches are much better. --Bramble My Realm 00:41, 31 July 2009 (UTC)

I think she reuploaded. The new virsion isn't showing up on my computer. I redid the neck and blured the tail mark. --Spottedwing 00:07, 1 August 2009 (UTC)

Add some shading on her head. thicken the neck shading and blend it in more. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 11:46, 1 August 2009 (UTC)

I added shading to her face. --Spottedwing 23:56, 1 August 2009 (UTC)

You need to make all the shading thicker and darker and then blend it in (especially on the neck) Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 18:31, 2 August 2009 (UTC)

Fixed the neck shading. --Spottedwing 00:10, 4 August 2009 (UTC)

Please comment User:Spottedwing 02:03, 7 August 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Connect the top part of the patch on her shoulder (our left) with the lineart on the side. MosswhiskerAndStealthfire 22:54, 7 August 2009 (UTC)

Did it reupload? If it did, the left patch is connected to the lineart. --User:Spottedwing 23:23, 7 August 2009 (UTC)

What else? --User:Spottedwing 00:44, 8 August 2009 (UTC)

Lower the neck shading so it shows a chin, and lighten that area of shading just a bit. Then add some shading to her other cheek. Then she should be good. --Bramble My Realm 20:38, 8 August 2009 (UTC)

Done. How does she look? --User:Spottedwing 22:12, 8 August 2009 (UTC)

Better, but the neck shading still looks too thick; like a band around her neck. (sorry for being picky) Her highlights on her ginger patches need blurring, too. --Bramble My Realm 02:42, 9 August 2009 (UTC)

I blurred the highlights and I fixed the neck shading. --User: Spottedwing 17:28, 9 August 2009 (UTC)

I decided to redo the neck shading because it still looked like a gray band around the neck. is there anything else? --Spottedwing 16:59, 12 August 2009 (UTC)

No, I think it's ready.Minnowclaw 13:05, 13 August 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

I'll agree with that. Comments before approval? --Bramble My Realm 14:28, 13 August 2009 (UTC)

None. Approved. --Bramble My Realm 15:35, 14 August 2009 (UTC)

Cloudtail (A) - Approved

[[File:Cloudpaw.png]] I always liked Cloudtail as an apprentice. I don't know why the background came out black. Can anyone tell me how to make it transparent? --Spottedwing 00:22, 1 August 2009 (UTC)

Put the blank on pixlr in the first place. Boltstar 01:29, 1 August 2009 (UTC)

(M) - I made the background transparent for you. (Always save images as .png) Your shading needs blended alot more and the nose shouldn't be pink. MosswhiskerAndStealthfire 19:19, 1 August 2009 (UTC)

Add shading on the top of the head, the chest, curve of the hindleg and then blend it all in to the pelt for a smooth finish. The nose needs to be black and the ear pink needs to be more central and triangular. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 19:37, 1 August 2009 (UTC)

I took a close look at Tinypaw and added shading and redid the nose and eye. --Spottedwing 00:06, 2 August 2009 (UTC)

Blend the shading in and this'll look good - it needs to be thicker and blended and try and fill the gap between the shading and lineart with shading too as it looks a little strange. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 18:20, 2 August 2009 (UTC)

Filled in the gap. I'll get to the shading tomarrow. --Spottedwing 23:21, 2 August 2009 (UTC)

Fixed the shading. --Spottedwing 00:14, 4 August 2009 (UTC)

Please comment User:Spottedwing 02:15, 7 August 2009 (UTC)

The shading is a bit too thick and dark on the top of the head; lighten it and decrease it a little bit. Also blur all your current shading, but be careful not to hit the lineart. --Bramble My Realm 02:36, 8 August 2009 (UTC)

Done. Is there anything else? --User:Spottedwing 03:18, 8 August 2009 (UTC)

I fixed the lineart on the top of the head because it was smeared. Is there anything else? --Spottedwing 17:02, 12 August 2009 (UTC)

Looks great to me. Comments before approval? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 14:04, 13 August 2009 (UT C)

Time to be approved! Since I am helping with getting ready for tweak week, I am gonna approve this and move it over Hawkfire ♫ Go Aggies! 17:30, 14 August 2009 (UTC)

Seconding Approval. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 14:09, 15 August 2009 (UTC)

Rogue Blanks- For Approved

[[file: Rougueblankssf.PNG]] [[file: rougueblankslf.PNG]] [[file: rougueblanksm.PNG]] [[file: rougueblanklm.PNG]]

Well the fur is very messy... but they are strays, right?-- Darkhallows  Lair 02:47, 1 August 2009 (UTC)

Oops! Rainpelt had called them... I've messaged him about it. Sorry...-- Darkhallows  Lair 03:04, 1 August 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Oh, these are really nice! Also, I can see these more as loner's than rouges...maybe you should take to Hawkfire about that possibility. *Shrug* MosswhiskerAndStealthfire 19:20, 1 August 2009 (UTC)

  • snicker* im a boy. anyway, put on a scourge collars --rainpelt

(M) - I wouldn't put on collars; very few rouges have them. Also, make sure the lineart is the same for all of them. MosswhiskerAndStealthfire 23:58, 1 August 2009 (UTC)

They don't need collars - as far as I'm aware the only rogues with collars are BloodClan - when users make the BloodClan cats they can add collars of their own as each cat will have a different collar anyway and not all rogues have collars as Moss quite rightly said. Just take a look at the whiskers and eyes as they are all different shapes etc and need to be the same style on each (excepting the subtle gender difference of course) Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 15:18, 2 August 2009 (UTC)

All right, I think it's better now. I changed the paws too, they were bothering me. Here is a colored example (though it was before I changed them) File:Ice.png-- Darkhallows  Lair 22:51, 2 August 2009 (UTC)

I really like these. I don't see anything wrong. These may become the quickest approved blanks.. ever lol. Any other comments? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 11:22, 3 August 2009 (UTC)

They look pretty good. --Blackclaw09 20:12, 3 August 2009 (UTC)

Okay then! Approval in 24 hours. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 20:00, 4 August 2009 (UTC)

Wait!!! I found something: You need to split each cat into one image. I may be wrong, but the two females are one image, and the two males are one image. There needs to be four images, not two. ;) --MUMBLE785 20:57, 5 August 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Could you round off the shorthaired's tails? They're ab-normally pointed. Also, maybe you could give them some claws, simply becuase thinking of cats like Scourge or Bone in these blanks seem strange. It's just a suggestion though. *Shrug* MosswhiskerAndStealthfire 20:48, 6 August 2009 (UTC)

I wouldn't add claws because that's just Scourge and Bone, Not all loners. What about Barley and Ravenpaw? I also think the tails are fine. I think that the lie-art is fine, but they need to be split into four images. --MUMBLE785 19:35, 7 August 2009 (UTC)

(M) - I wasn't saying that they needed to be super-long dog claws, I was just thinking regular cat claws. All cats have claws (except for kittypets, who could be de-clawed.) MosswhiskerAndStealthfire 21:41, 7 August 2009 (UTC)

Oh... But, wouldn't they keep their claws sheathed unless they were fighting? :/ --MUMBLE785 21:55, 7 August 2009 (UTC)

(M) - It was just I suggestion. Oh, and tilt the whiskers upward a bit. MosswhiskerAndStealthfire 22:50, 7 August 2009 (UTC)

I think they look good without claws, but the whiskers do need to be tilted upwards, and maybe make them only have two so it's consistent with the other images. I also think the females' eyes need to be thickened similarly to the males, just with the feminine look. --Bramble My Realm 00:33, 8 August 2009 (UTC)

Oh, and the ears are a little bit too big to me, --MUMBLE785 19:46, 8 August 2009 (UTC)

I changed the whiskers and eyes. The ears were very awkward looking at a smaller size, so I kept them the same. Also, the images are separate.-- Darkhallows  Lair 08:52, 10 August 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Personally, I think these are ready for approval. Mosswhisker and Steatlhfire 19:10, 13 August 2009 (UTC)

You're right Moss. Comments before approval in 24 hours? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 08:30, 14 August 2009 (UTC)

None; approved. I'm going to rename these files before adding them with the other blanks as they currently read 'rougue blanks' lol Nice work Shady Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 14:09, 15 August 2009 (UTC)

Pouncetail (A) - Approved

[[File:Pouncepaw.png]] I used the same colours as I did for Pouncetail and tried to match the layout of patches. Constructments? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 11:26, 12 August 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Very nice! Just like his warrior version. :) Darken the shading a bit, and once again the background needs to be transparent. ^_^ Mosswhisker and Steatlhfire 14:13, 12 August 2009 (UTC)

Oops... sorry Moss (I am such a mousebrain). Done Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 16:05, 12 August 2009 (UTC)

All I can see is that on his haunch with the orange patch you have the shading, then a normal part, then it gets dark. Does that need to be fixed?Minnowclaw 12:39, 13 August 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

It goes Shading, highlight and then normal. I'll fix it later whne I get to my own computer to make it less of a sharp transition. Thanks Minnow Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 13:41, 13 August 2009 (UTC)

Okay. I've blended it in as much as possible. Better? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 08:39, 14 August 2009 (UTC)

He's great. (transparency needed, though :) Comments before approval? --Bramble My Realm 15:51, 14 August 2009 (UTC)

No comments; approved. I added transparency too. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 14:32, 15 August 2009 (UTC)

Whitestorm (A) - Approved


Ok, hopefully if this is approved it will be my 10th! comments?Sandwich989 20:34, 10 August 2009 (UTC)

Technicaly, he was never shown as an apprentice. Boltstar 20:37, 10 August 2009 (UTC)

He was never seen as an apprentice (I think), but I know he was mentioned as one. Maybe add some shading to his tail and legs, they look very flat. --Skyfeather '95 20:59, 10 August 2009 (UTC)

He was seen as an apprentice. Snowfur spends his vigil by his side in Secrets of the Clans. Anyway, it doesn't matter. We need all characters in all past and current forms. About the image: I agree with skyfeather about the shading. It's very good other than that. ;) --MUMBLE785MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 22:24, 10 August 2009 (UTC)

I agree with Skyfeather, and Mumble. Also, maybe add some shading on the top of his head. By the way, this is really good. =) --HoneyfurBob's Your Uncle! 17:20, 11 August 2009 (UTC)

Fixed. Sandwich989 21:16, 11 August 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Add some shading to the top of the head and the foreleg and hindleg facing away from us. Mosswhisker and Steatlhfire 23:54, 12 August 2009 (UTC)

Added. Sandwich989 08:12, 14 August 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval in 24 hours? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 10:43, 14 August 2009 (UTC)

None. Approved. --Bramble My Realm 15:24, 15 August 2009 (UTC)

Mumblefoot (E)- Approved


I don't have much to say about this other than that he's my first elder. Any comments...?

(M) - Blur everything thoroughly. (Mumblefoot. Heh, his name cracks me up. ^_^) Mosswhisker and Steatlhfire 17:35, 11 August 2009 (UTC)

Like Moss said, it needs blending. x3 Really good, though.--Warrior♥Warrior's Den 20:12, 11 August 2009 (UTC)

That band of shading around the neck looks like a collar, You could probably take that out. Other than that, blend, and it looks great. --Bramble My Realm 02:35, 13 August 2009 (UTC)

Updated it, and blended it a bit. Is it better now? --♫ insaneular ♫ 23:53, 13 August 2009 (UTC)

Perfect. Comments before approval? --Bramble My Realm 15:24, 14 August 2009 (UTC)

None; approved Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 15:37, 15 August 2009 (UTC)

Hawkheart(MC) - Approved It's Hawkheart! I don't like him at all, but he was the only dark brown tom med cat I could find.--Warrior♥Warrior's Den 00:52, 12 August 2009 (UTC)

Make the ear pink smaller and extend the belly shading to meet the back shading. Lighten the herbs on both ends so you keep the contrast but so that it can be seen as it's very dark on the bottom. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 11:36, 12 August 2009 (UTC)

Better?--Warrior♥Warrior's Den 15:00, 12 August 2009 (UTC)

I think he is ready to be approved. Nice Warrior.Minnowclaw 12:40, 13 August 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

He needs some shading on the bottom of his herbs, but other than that he's great. --Bramble My Realm 14:52, 13 August 2009 (UTC)

Better?--Warrior♥Warrior's Den 23:48, 13 August 2009 (UTC)

I can't see anyhting wrong now. Comments before approval? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 15:35, 15 August 2009 (UTC)

Approved Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 15:50, 16 August 2009 (UTC)

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