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Willowshine (Alt. MCA 2) - Approved[]

Willowshine.mca.alt2 So I realized they use the same picture in Cats of the Clans, and she is listed as an apprentice, so here's the same version as the one I did before. It should be pretty exact as I have the file and everything. Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 02:48, March 22, 2015 (UTC)

I thought there's already one for her apprentice version. They're both pale gray tabbies, the only difference is the eye color. Anyways, maybe darken the shading a little?~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 () 03:53, March 22, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Don't think so, the other pale's are for the writing, these are after pictures. Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 04:00, March 22, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 07:51, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 09:54, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? Jayce(10:23, 3/25/2015)

Approved. Jayce(13:17, 3/26/2015)

Patchkit (MV) - Approved[]

Patchkit (MV).kit B) david 🌈 00:01, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs? He's so adorable :3 - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 00:22, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

re-uploaded. too bad he's dead lel david 🌈 00:44, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

re-uploaded again and chnged a few things i didnt like david 🌈 01:20, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? Jayce(21:20, 3/26/2015)

Approved. Queen Beebs 21:24, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Rabbitfur (E) - Approved[]

Rabbitfur.elder Bunfur confirmed. Queen Beebs 00:06, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Can you make the tabby stripes lighter? They just seem too dark to me. Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 09:54, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

i think they're fine unless others disagree - i think it's artist choice on stripe darkness? Queen Beebs 10:07, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

stripes are fine, a shae was never specified. anyway lighten up the area where his tail meets his back just a little. david 🌈 14:45, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

re-up Queen Beebs 21:49, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading juuuust a tad. Not much, but kinda like what you did for Mousefang's kit. Jayce(05:55, 3/25/2015)

re-up Queen Beebs 18:38, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

CBA for the ever-so-lovely Beebs? Jayce(21:20, 3/26/2015)

Approved. Queen Beebs 21:24, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Frecklewish (TC) (W) - Approved[]

Frecklewish (TC).warrior - she might fall more into the mottled category than speckled... but I think she looks cool ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 01:49, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Go ahead and... Define the light on the legs? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 02:36, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 02:57, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

her eyes should be cloudy and blind, I would think. david 🌈 11:36, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Nah, that would probably be an alt- Longtail had the same thing happen and since it happened later, it would probably be better to have an alternate image of it once this gets approved. Percy is also the same way. Jayce(11:43, 3/24/2015)

yeah i forgot about that whoops. maybe dull the earpink a ittle and define the haunch shading. david 🌈 01:59, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 03:15, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? This is lovely. .o. Jayce(21:21, 3/26/2015)

Approved. Queen Beebs 21:24, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Swiftflight (W) -Approved[]

Swiftflight.warriorOkay? Okay. User:Burntclaw/Sig 02:57, March 24, 2015 (UTC

Define the ear pink and lighten the shading just a few ticks. Jayce(07:53, 3/24/2015)

Re-upped I was just doing that lol. Much, much happier User:Burntclaw/Sig 08:07, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the ear pink a bit more? Nice. Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 09:54, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped User:Burntclaw/Sig 10:24, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

define the tail shading. david 🌈 14:43, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

The leg shading too^^ all 4.  Frosty ☾Supernatural 06:08, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped User:Burntclaw/Sig 07:49, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? Jayce(21:22, 3/26/2015)

Approved. Queen Beebs 21:24, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Birchface (W) - Approved[]

Birchface.warrior Welp. Jayce(00:42, 3/24/2015)

he looks a little green to me, maybe make him a bit more orange or something idk david 🌈 04:50, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Make him a tad more brown, like one tick or two. Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 09:54, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I love this image so much. Jayce(11:33, 3/24/2015)

Define the shading on the paws farthest from us, if there is any.~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 00:03, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Jayce(01:52, 3/25/2015)

It might just be my terrible eyesight, but maybe define the light a touch more on the tail. He's sexy c: ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 02:34, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Jayce(02:43, 3/26/2015)

define the shading a bit pretty much everywhere, i can't see it. this is lovely tho Jayce .o. — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 21:33, 03/26/2015

Re-uploaded. Meh. Jayce(21:38, 3/26/2015)

CBA? Sexykittycat User:Burntclaw/Sig 05:03, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Approved. Jayce(05:59, 3/28/2015)

Reedshine (MV) (W) -Approved[]

Reedshine (MV).warrior -cough- bae -cough- Tiger Sunny days 02:31, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 07:55, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the main part of the body. Jayce(07:56, 3/24/2015)

Can you make her darker please? Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 09:54, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

This should be named File:Reedshine (MV).warrior.png, (I've renamed it for you, but keep this in mind for the future) as there's more than one Reedshine and we have no proof whatsoever that they're anywhere near the same cat. Jayce(16:03, 3/24/2015)

Sorry, I forgot there were 2 Reedshines. Tiger Sunny days 23:21, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Can you make her a bit darker? Given that she's dark orange and all. Jayce(10:24, 3/25/2015)

Blur the ear pink near the tip touching the fur? User:Streamthatsparkleswhenfrozen12/Sig 12:55, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

^^maybe like a burnt orange. Also I don't know if it's just my eyes but it appears the tail shading is leaking away from the lineart. Wonderful job!  Frosty ☾Supernatural 20:18, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-up Tiger Sunny days 00:09, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Put a bit of shading under the chin and blur the shading around the head. Also, smudge the bottom of the ear-pink a touch more ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 02:36, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

I hate to say this, but now that Reedshine is confirmed to be the same cat as the other one, is this image necessary? ;,; User:Burntclaw/Sig 13:04, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

it wasn't confirmed that they were the same so this image still stays,  anyways define th shading Queen Beebs 21:26, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Yeah, the cite is for the cats mentioned around the time of SkyClan's exile, which are the ones listed in Firestar's Quest. There's nothing about Reedshine anywhere near that. Jayce(21:27, 3/26/2015)

So sorry, Tiger ;.; Anyway, mind smoothing out the shading just a bit? This is a gorgeous image. User:Burntclaw/Sig 00:12, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped. Tiger Sunny days 03:01, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? Gorgeous. User:Burntclaw/Sig 05:01, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Approved. Jayce(05:59, 3/28/2015)

Beetail (D) - Approved[]

Beetail.deputy DD - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 04:44, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

he looks ginger, can you make him a bit less orange? david 🌈 04:50, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Much happier now. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 07:48, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the stripes a tad? Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 09:54, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I thought it looked fine but whatever - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 10:19, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs a little? Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 10:37, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

What color are your pale parts? They look...kinda pink. Nevermind, that's my laptop- it's horribly miscalibrated right now. Jayce(11:26, 3/24/2015)

Re-uploaded - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 12:24, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

The pale parts do look kind of pink to me on my laptop, which is more reliable than my phone for colors and what I trust. Would you mind changing it a tad? giaria time on my side 11:39 Wed Mar 25

Define shading a tad?--Russettail13 (talk) 22:38, March 26, 2015 (UTC)Russett

Re-uploaded - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 11:55, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

the pale parts do actually look a bit pink — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 20:42, 03/25/2015

Define a d smudge the ear-pink a touch ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 02:37, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Completely redid the base color. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 07:53, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? User:Burntclaw/Sig 05:11, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Approved. Jayce(05:59, 3/28/2015)

Nettlepaw (MV) (A) - Approved[]

Nettlebreeze.apprentice These edit conflicts burn. I saw the waste, I'll fix it next upload. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 00:06, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

This looks awesome. :D I love those pale rings on the tail. Could you lighten the shading on the chin and the throat a bit? Jayie Unwritten words~ 00:18, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Damn I wanted this lol. Mind smoothing out the shading on the legs? User:Burntclaw/Sig 00:30, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Spoiler alert! :) He looks a bit gold rather than ginger, can you make him a tad more ginger? I could be wrong but the tabby stripes seem golden. Gorgeous! Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 09:54, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reups Sorry Stealth, but I colorpicked off of a photo of a real life ginger cat (This one). It's just my shading that makes it look golden :/ I dulled the highlights slightly, though, so maybe that'll fix the problem? Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 10:33, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading just a tad bit on the face/muzzle, it looks more like a marking than shading. That might just be me, though. Coffeeshops 01:38 March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Could you make the earpink more pinky? It looks more white right now than pink. This is gorgeous, wonderful job Shinxy!  Frosty ☾Supernatural 20:23, March 25, 2015 (UTC)\

the earpink is fine actually, though I do agree facial shading can be lightened. — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 21:30, 03/26/2015

Sorry it took so long woooah whats with the colored highlights in the editor?? Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 22:20, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Define the eye depth just a little bit and I think this is ready. User:Burntclaw/Sig 05:08, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry, I think the eyes are fine. I'd think we can just go to the CBA. Jayce(11:02, 3/27/2015)

Approved. Tiger Sunny days 15:56, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Darkstar (MV) (L) - Approved[]

Darkstar (MV).leader shading black cats more like nope —.neha it's that gloom boy season. 00:56, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Please define the shading. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 07:50, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.neha it's that gloom boy season. 10:20, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

the shading is leaking about the haunch, and perhaps blur it a bit more. Define the light on the tail and front leg to our right — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 20:39, 03/25/2015

Re-uploaded.neha it's that gloom boy season. 22:59, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

I know people are telling you this Back and Fourth, But my screen see's her as dark grey, not black. Could you darken her? ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 00:54, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

She's the same shade as all the black cats I've done previously, if I darken her anymore, you won't be able to see the lineart at all, so no, sorry. —.neha it's that gloom boy season. 01:01, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

She's plenty dark enough, tbh. I actually would like to CBA this. Jayce(01:25, 3/28/2015)

Approved. Jayce(02:30, 3/29/2015)

Myler (KP) ~ Approved[]

Myler.kittypet ???? ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot0:55 Thu Mar 26

Define the tail shading just a bit and I am going to steal that collar and run with it goodbye. Jayce(00:59, 3/26/2015)

Re-uploaded. Pff... fine. ;D ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot1:29 Thu Mar 26

Smudge the shading more on the legs. User:Burntclaw/Sig 04:59, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Anywhere in particular? ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot20:46 Thu Mar 26

His front leg mainly, just a bit. This is gorgeous. User:Burntclaw/Sig 00:09, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thank you. :) ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot20:57 Fri Mar 27

Let's CBA this even if the collar has been stolen bc it's sexy User:Burntclaw/Sig 03:27, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Approved. User:Burntclaw/Sig 04:50, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

Ravenwing (MC) ~ Approved[]

Ravenwing.mc I'll probably redo the earpink later Coffeeshops 00:10, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Pretty! There's waste near the herbs. Also mind lightening him up just a little bit so that the shading can be a bit more visible? User:Burntclaw/Sig 00:29, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

He's black, not dark gray. Please do not lighten him anymore. He'll just be tweaked later to be darker. I actually think darkening the shading and perhaps playing with your shading and highlight layers might solve the problem. Jayce(00:41, 3/24/2015)

Define the ear pink? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 02:37, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

I just read the book poor him. Make the eyes a tad darker please. Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 09:54, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

The eyes are actually fine. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 10:20, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

lel he deserved it, anyway add some shading or something to the herbs so they dont look flat. david 🌈 14:46, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I pretty much redid most of this because I lost the layered file. Coffeeshops 1:11 25 Mar. 2015 (UTC)

This should say "For Evaulation" since you are a kit, but no need to change it. I'll promote you since you know what you are doing. User:Burntclaw/Sig 02:36, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit more, please.  Frosty ☾Supernatural 06:17, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Coffeeshops 19:37, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

can you please lighten him up very slightly, I can't see any of the lineart. david 🌈 06:55, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I hope this isn't too gray now. Coffeeshops 19:34, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

lighten him a tiny bit more, still can't see any lineart — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 21:31, 03/26/2015

Re-uploaded. I'm not lightening it anymore after this. Coffeeshops 23:59, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading everywhere. User:Burntclaw/Sig 00:14, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit as well. —Ivy 13:53, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Coffeeshops 20:50, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? I'd can't see anything wrong with this tbh. User:Burntclaw/Sig 03:32, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Approved User:Burntclaw/Sig 07:42, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

Oakstar (L) - Approved[]

Oakstar.leader So happy I finally got my first leader image. :D I'm really happy with how he turned out - I tried to make him look like a burmese cat, but I think the darker face kind of got lost in the shading. Ah well. Thoughts? Jayie Unwritten words~ 00:16, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define earpink :3 So much like an oak tree, so beautiful(like I said in the chat) ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 02:37, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Wow! Looks Great! It's fur looks so much like oak! User:FinalWarriors/sig

I see the earpink fine, tbh - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 02:39, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Very well done! Can you define the legs shading? Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 09:54, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading too, please. ^^ Jayce(14:41, 3/24/2015)

Along with define it, could you blur the tail shading a little bit? I can see it, but it looks hard-edged. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 15:18, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Jayie Unwritten words~ 01:32, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the muzzle shading a bit? It almost looks like he has a rope tied around it xD like a muzzle. Lovely image, I love the way you did the texture. =)  Frosty ☾Supernatural 06:15, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Darken his base color just a tad if he's dark brown. Smudge the tail shade just a bit more. User:Burntclaw/Sig 04:57, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

tail shading is fine tbh — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 21:32, 03/26/2015

Darkened the coat color (didn't realize Oakstar was dark brown) and smudged the muzzle shading a bit. Jayie Unwritten words~ 00:27, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? User:Burntclaw/Sig 03:35, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Approved User:Burntclaw/Sig 07:44, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

Frecklewish (TC) (Alt. W) - Approved[]

Frecklewish (TC).warrior.alt - Basically the same as her warrior, just blurred the eye colors together and made the pupil dark brown instead of black. I haven't gotten a chance to read MV, so idk if she has scars by her eyes or not. ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 21:35, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

maybe make it almost white so its more noticable? I think her eyes would have ended up something like those blind cats that have silvery/milky white eyes, but maybe milky yellow or something. idk im bad at explaining david 🌈 01:57, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 02:10, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

I'm just asking but if she was injured by the snake then shouldn't she have a red mark on her face? Otherwise it looks like there's no difference. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 04:23, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Normally, I would add scars, but there's nothing in her description that suggests that she acquired scars. then again... I haven't read MV yet.. ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 05:38, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

She was injured by the adder, which caused her blindness (and she died from it, I think), so... I believe adding some form of scars would be acceptable to differentiate between the normal image and after she was injured. Jayce(06:21, 3/28/2015)

Re-uploaded ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 14:54, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

define the pink around her eyes more and maybe just make the eyes a tad more white perhaps. david 🌈 17:44, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on her front right leg and the light on her right back leg User:Burntclaw/Sig 03:25, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

This was literally just approved- all Scarlet did was edit the normal warrior's eyes. The shading is fine as it is- if there was an issue, that should have been said when the other image was up. Jayce(11:46, 3/29/2015)

Re-uploaded ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 20:53, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 02:36, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

Approved. User:Burntclaw/Sig 05:33, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Eeltail (MV) (Warrior) ~ Approved[]

Eeltail (MV).warriorLil' Tabby Sziri the goat sails away ツ 17:57, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Define shading a tad? Russettail13 (talk) 18:24, March 25, 2015 (UTC)Russet

Add a touch more light to the fronts of the forelegs and top of the tail ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 21:12, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Sziri the goat sails away ツ 18:51, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit, it looks a little grayish and it's hard to see. —Ivy 21:17, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Sziri the goat sails away ツ 13:42, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

I think this is the tom blank, and it needs to be the she-cat blank. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 15:13, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

But doesn't it confirmed that he is the same Eeltail who appeared in Code of the clans? Sziri the goat sails away ツ 16:37, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

As far as I can tell, it was decided that Vicky was only talking about the cats who were from Firestar's Quest, not any of the other books. I asked Kate on her blog, but it hasn't been posted yet. For now, at least, it should probably be a she-cat blank. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 18:48, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Okay Sziri the goat sails away ツ 18:56, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading and the shading on the back legs. User:Burntclaw/Sig 03:30, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Sziri the goat sails away ツ 15:02, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

This lovely kitty deserves a CBA. Tiger Sunny days 00:12, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

Approved User:Burntclaw/Sig 06:18, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Deerdapple (W) - Approved[]

Deerdapple.warrior Sweet Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 22:12, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Oooh, pretty. Can you lighten the base color a bit, please? Tiger Sunny days 22:45, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge or blur the stripes more - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 01:26, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Define head shading a bit? Russettail13 (talk) 01:52, March 25, 2015 (UTC)Russet

Define the shape of the ear pink. I can kinda see it, but at the same time, I can't. Jayce(01:57, 3/25/2015)

define the shading everywhere a tad giaria time on my side 11:36 Wed Mar 25

Reups thanks, Tiger~ Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 22:45, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

She's silver, lighten up the base color just a little more. User:Burntclaw/Sig 00:11, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Reups Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 02:39, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs and I think this would be ready (not like it's my choice but this looks awesome =) - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 11:06, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Darken the stripes. Given that she's a silver tabby (basically tbh), I think you can get away with using pure black (or one/two shades off) for the stripes. ^^ Jayce(11:22, 3/29/2015)

Reups Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 21:30, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? Jayce(11:45, 3/30/2015)

Approved Tiger Sunny days 13:01, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Birchface (Ki) - Approved[]

Birchface.kit Welcome to the jungle, we got fun and games. All colors are from the warrior. Jayce(06:54, 3/28/2015)

Define the shading on the legs User:Burntclaw/Sig 10:47, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Tiny precious bundle of fur. *.* I may hate these blanks but they make some damn cute images. Jayce(11:43, 3/29/2015)

blur/smudge the shading on the legs a tad? giaria time on my side 11:40 Mon Mar 30

I'm gonna hold off on that, since it would basically contradict what Burnt told me to do- I'd be back where I started, since I didn't define the shading all that much. Jayce(11:43, 3/30/2015)

I actually like this, let's go CBA User:Burntclaw/Sig 05:30, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Approved. Jayce(05:34, 4/1/2015)

Rainfall (W) - Approved[]

Rainfall.warrior Black cats are hard to deal with. ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 () 09:17, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit. Jayce(09:21, 3/27/2015)

re ups that's why I thought it looked so weird 0.0~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 () 09:23, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit more. ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 20:17, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

In my own opinion I think if I lighten it more it'll be invisible. ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 () 02:12, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Nah, the shading's fine, just define the ear pink a little and I think this will be ready. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 04:20, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 () 10:29, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? User:Burntclaw/Sig 10:39, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but please lighten the shading a few ticks. The shading was fine how it was here. Jayce(11:39, 3/29/2015)

also please blur it a ton giaria time on my side 20:44 Sun Mar 29

I'm sorry but I can't see anything on the picture you showed me @Jayce maybe I'll check it closed up when I get back home tonight.~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 () 00:32, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups lightened the shading quite a lot and made the texture more visible. ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 () 14:37, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

the back shading looks really dark? maybe lighten it up a tad bit more and define the shading on the front legs a bit giaria time on my side 21:22 Mon Mar 30

The back shading darkness matches the one Jayce posted... ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 () 03:19, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

I think it's fine. re-CBA? User:Burntclaw/Sig 06:24, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Approved. Jayce(06:31, 4/1/2015)

Milkfur (MV) (W) - Approved[]

Milkfur (MV).warrior Lets approve this quick before I eat her base color is pure white so please do not tell me to change it User:Burntclaw/Sig 06:16, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Wrong file name whoops can someone rename it please User:Burntclaw/Sig 06:18, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

I'll get that. You're gonna need to change something, because she looks a bit brownish-cream, and if she's supposed to be white, that's what she's supposed to be. Jayce(06:20, 3/28/2015)

Re-uped Lowered the opacity of the texture that was causing the problem. Without the shading she is actually really white now. User:Burntclaw/Sig 06:27, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

she still looks cream. david 🌈 06:33, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped This shading came from hell I think User:Burntclaw/Sig 06:38, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

She looks so good and tasty but I think she does look cream. Maybe tint her a little closer to blue? Idk ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 () 06:46, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped I would really not rather tint her blue bc the style, without the shading she is pure white. I tried lightening up the shading a little bit if that helps. User:Burntclaw/Sig 06:52, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

something needs to be done, because shes still looking cream. david 🌈 03:42, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

I think it's the shading or the texture thats making her cream... ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 03:52, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

What I meant by tinting to blue is the texture and/or shading.~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 () 05:15, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Ew User:Burntclaw/Sig 10:38, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

I'm sorry to say, but she looks kinda... green? for some reason :\ maybe you should try black... I think I'm just directing you to make a mess but I'm trying to help... white cats are tough too :PPP~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 () 11:11, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

How does she look green????? And I tried black, it doesn't fit well with the shading style I'm probably gonna redo this dumb shading if I can't get it to look right. Sorry for constantly opposing you, but I don't think it looks green at all. User:Burntclaw/Sig 11:18, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

It doesn't look green the slightest imo - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 11:20, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

I didn't make it clear, it just looks sorta teal XP but the shading and texture look so awesome. I don't really suggest redoing it unless there are no other ways. I think it might look good if it's a purplish blue - if you get what you mean? I've never done this before so I don't know anything :o~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 () 11:28, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Hmm, can you humor me and lighten the shading a bit, and upload it somewhere that I can see it? I'm not saying you need to do it here- I just want to see what it looks like with a bit lighter shading... that might solve the coloring issue. Jayce(11:33, 3/29/2015)

Tinypic was being a pain and China won't let me access Ezimba so I uploaded it over my personal image. User:Burntclaw/Sig 11:52, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

That's fine and I think the lightened shading works. Go ahead and upload that to this- I love how it looks. It's not overly dark and you can clearly see it. Kinda reminds me a bit of Blizzardwing's chararts, actually... Jayce(11:55, 3/29/2015)

Re-upped Thank you =D User:Burntclaw/Sig 12:02, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped I added a new layer of shading depth because I noticed the image looked a little flat. Also I expanded the tail shading and now I'm so much happier with this, I actually like the shading. User:Burntclaw/Sig 12:59, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the tail and neck just a tad. This is lovely. Coffeeshops 17:01, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped I smudged it, I didn't blur my shading, so I smudged it more instead. User:Burntclaw/Sig 04:49, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

define the shading on the back leg closest to us, and the light on the front leg closest to us giaria time on my side 11:42 Mon Mar 30

Re-upped Please do not tell me to define the shading further- as I can see it fine- any more definition and the color will be off again. User:Burntclaw/Sig 14:28, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

I love how it looks now :D It does look quite like Blizzardwing and I like his image. I think this is fine~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 () 09:30, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Nah, I'm not gonna ask you to define it. I'll CBA it instead. Jayce(13:53, 3/31/2015)

Approved User:Burntclaw/Sig 13:56, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Splashfoot (W) ~ Approved[]

Splashfoot.warrior My first charart, comments? Also, could someone tell me why this is coming out really small so I can fix it? —Ivy 21:22, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Well firstly what program are you using, Icebreeze?  Frosty ☾Supernatural 22:32, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

GIMP. —Ivy 23:22, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Okay, so maybe you're not making it full size. To do it, click on the blank on the charart page and click full size. Also, are you using layers? If not, make a layer and put the colors and add another layer for shading. Okay, so can you define the shading, please? Tiger Sunny days 23:25, March 24, 2015 (UTC)

Thanks for all the help, Tiger! Your suggestion about making it full size was very helpful, and I think I have a correctly sized blank now. Yes, I'm using layers, and I have defined my shading on my charart. I will re-upload tomorrow. Thanks again! =) —Ivy 01:36, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

The image needs to be bigger. It isn't the right size as the others. ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 03:51, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Anyways, why is the eye sort of... deformed? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 08:35, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

It'll probably be fixed when they use the right size blank as they mentioned earlier. giaria time on my side 11:37 Wed Mar 25

Re-upped Okay, at least the charart is the right size now —Ivy 20:26, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped The linear art was weird in some spots, tell me if you notice any more. —Ivy 20:40, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

the lineart is still blurred. File:Warriorlongm.gif <-- Save that file, clear the white parts, remove your current lineart layer, then paste this in as a new layer. If you don't understand what I'm saying, I can show you. Alternatively, you could just redo this completely with the file i linked you. — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 20:45, 03/25/2015

Add a little bit of light on the front leg. It looks like something out-of-sight is blovking it. Spottehwobble!

Re-upped I completely redid the image. I will add some more light on my next reupload, I didn't see your comment until it was too late, Spotteh —Ivy 23:59, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Can you make the shading a little less blotchy, define the ear pink, and maybe use this as a reference for shading? Tiger Sunny days 00:07, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Remove the earpink on the back ear and there is waste in the triangular hole between the legs. ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 01:23, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe smooth out the edges of the shading on the hanch. ~Sunstream ☽☾

Re-upped Ok, I redid the shading —Ivy 21:09, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth it out some, and there's some waste around the image. —.neha it's that gloom boy season. 21:12, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

remove the shading from the tip of the tail, and the shading is leaking at the bottom of the tail. put shading all up the backside of the tail — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 21:38, 03/26/2015

Re-upped —Ivy 21:53, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

There is waste on the back,legs and end of the tail. Good job! 😃 --~Sunstream ☽☾

The shading is leaking on the back, back legs, and on the part under the base of his tail Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 22:48, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Thanks, Sun! =) —Ivy 00:13, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the back legs and define the eye depth. Given the shading a good blur with a hard edged blur tool. User:Burntclaw/Sig 04:59, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped —Ivy 20:35, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Extend the tail shading and blur it, as well as the front leg shading. Tiger Sunny days 22:16, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped —Ivy 23:33, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Define the overall shading a bit, please. Also, clear up the waste near the front paw please. I think I'll make you an apprentice after this.Tiger Sunny days 00:24, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped —Ivy 00:50, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

It's leaking on the back spine and there is waste in the triangle area between the legs. ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 00:56, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

You seem to know what you are doing, so I'll go ahead and make you an apprentice. Also, can you expand the light on the haunch?Tiger Sunny days 00:58, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Thanks for making me an apprentice, Tiger! =D —Ivy 02:02, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the shading and light in the front legs? Tiger Sunny days 02:10, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped —Ivy 13:37, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the back legs and blur the tail shading some. This is gorgeous! User:Burntclaw/Sig 03:31, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Thanks! —Ivy 13:15, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

So there's kind of a lighter line running in the back. Can you put a bit of shading there to cover it. Also can you define the shading in the neck, end of the tail, and the front paw farthest away from us. Tiger Sunny days 14:05, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped —Ivy 15:16, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Oh, this looks much, much better than when you started. I really like it. c: Define the earpink just a tad, it's hard to see. Coffeeshops 16:58, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Thank you, Raven! —Ivy 17:12, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

I think there's a rather hard-edged point on the hind leg/haunch maybe blur that out a bit ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 () 00:40, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

I really think it's ok. I'm guessing that if I blur it, someone will tell me to define it again. However, if someone else agrees I will. —Ivy 00:48, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

Not the entire shading, just one point at the hind leg. I'm not that experienced after all so I'll agree that when someone else also agrees with me :) he looks handsome, btw~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 () 00:52, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail, especially at the near base of it, then give the shading there a good blur. User:Burntclaw/Sig 14:40, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Ok, I tried. —Ivy 21:08, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

Just blur it a tad more on the tail. I think this is really good User:Burntclaw/Sig 04:57, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Thanks, Burntclaw =) —Ivy 20:22, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Thicken and define the shading on the head; it looks a little lacking compared to the rest of the body ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 22:26, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped That would be because I somehow forgot to shade the head —Ivy 23:58, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the face and chest a bit more, and I think it'll be awesome. Tiger Sunny days 01:46, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped —Ivy 21:15, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

You've come a /long/ way since you started, and a CBA is fair enough. Tiger Sunny days 22:15, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

24 hours, approved. Tiger Sunny days 00:19, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Squirrelflight (Alt. W) - Approved[]

Squirrelstar.warrior.alt - ...welp... I think I might redo her tabby pattern ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 17:29, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Can you lighten up her tail a bit? ~Sunstream ☽☾

Imo she looks fine. —Ivy 20:55, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

if you smudged the stripes, maybe smudge 'em a little more? if you didn't then it's fine giaria time on my side 00:02 Wed Apr 1

I love her pattern and texture. I can't see an unsaid problem. how did you even do this ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 () 01:46, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 02:33, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 04:29, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 05:07, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

There are white pixels coming off of her tail tip ~ ~Sunstream ☽☾

17:00, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 17:04, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? Purrttyyy Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 20:58, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Approved. Tiger Sunny days 00:21, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Frecklewish (TC) (Ki) - Approved[]

Frecklewish (TC).kit Coffeeshops 16:18, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the spots morre? Looks fabulous, Raven :3 ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 19:06, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks, Bramble. c: Coffeeshops 19:40, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs and the tail. I think you matched it really well, well done. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 00:39, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

She looks a touch on the greenish side. Try shading with a dark red/reddish brown ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 03:39, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

I can't see your light source, the head is telling me that it is coming from ==> and the rest from <== User:Burntclaw/Sig 03:53, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I used a different program for the shading, so it should look a lot better now. Coffeeshops 13:11, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading depth on ==> side of the cat User:Burntclaw/Sig 13:15, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Coffeeshops 13:23, March 31. 2015 (UTC)

Sorry to be constantly nagging your image, but I don't really see any change. Shading depth is the gradient from light to dark, and since it would be darker as light fades, I suggest addng another layer of shading at a lower opacity other on the edge of the image if that made sense lol User:Burntclaw/Sig 13:31, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded No, it's fine, you're not nagging! I did that before and I didn't see much of a change either, and I didn't realize until I reuploaded it. It should be fixed now. Coffeeshops 13:38, March 31, 2015, (UTC)

Maybe change the shading demensions and/or darkness a tad, the spots are merging with the shading. Lookin good!!  Frosty ☾Supernatural 17:21, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Lightened the shading a tad. Coffeeshops 21:20, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

I think adding a bit of light wouldn't hurt to put on the hindpaw in this lovely image. Tiger Sunny days 00:07, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the ear pink more. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 04:37, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Coffeeshops 13:24, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the earpink a bit more, then I think it'll be good to go. Tiger Sunny days 22:10, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Coffeeshops 14:15 April 2, 2015 (UTC)

Oh I love this! CBA? ~Sunstream ☽☾

Um... aren't senior warriors the only people allowed to CBA things? Anyway, lovely image, Ravenstep. —Ivy 00:06, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Sunstream, only senior warriors and above can CBA things. I'll CBA this, since I really can't see what's wrong with it. User:Burntclaw/Sig 00:51, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

I was only asking if it should be CBA. ~Sunstream ☽☾

Approved User:Burntclaw/Sig 06:31, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Larchkit (MV) (K) ~ Approved[]

Larchkit (MV).kit Hiya.~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 04:48, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Can you make him more brown? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 04:56, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

Define and darken the shading- I can barely tell it's there. Jayce(21:24, 3/26/2015)

Define the earpink too, please. Tiger Sunny days 22:18, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 23:12, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Is his base brown or black? Because tbh it looks black/dark gray. Jayce(06:58, 3/28/2015)

Re-uploaded. It was a very dark brown on the orange side of the color wheel.~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 16:58, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

He still looks black... idk it might be my monitor (which it's horrible with blacks and browns), but it really looks black with brown shading or some stuff like that. Jayce(13:51, 3/31/2015)

He looks brown to me, very dark brown, but brown all the same. —.neha it's that gloom boy season. 19:03, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

I think it may be your monitor Jayce. Right now hes actually fairly lighter than the start, with slightly darker brown markings.~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 23:33, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Define shading a touch? Great job he's beautiful! Russettail13 (talk) 00:06, April 1, 2015 (UTC)Russet

His shading is already on 100% opacity, and also barely smudged compared to some of my other images. Do you mind if i get a second opinion on that?~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 01:36, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

The shading looks fine. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 04:32, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

"with slightly darker brown markings." > Um, but he should be solid, not with markings? Unless I'm misunderstanding what you're saying, all we have a cite for is him being dark brown. Jayce(13:24, 4/1/2015)

It sorta looks like texture actually. I'm not really sure if that's what she really meant. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 13:26, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Honestly, i just somewhat did what Jayie did with Oakstar's image, just a darker shade against his base and less visible for that matter. He was described as a solid, and im assuming it got approved? I can always remove it if anyone else says otherwise.~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 19:39, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

I like this, and he's clearly solid.... CBA? User:Burntclaw/Sig 04:45, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Approved User:Burntclaw/Sig 06:33, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Snowbush (W) - Approved[]

Snowbush.warrior Haters gonna hate. I love his name if I haven't made that perfectly clear already. Jayce(09:49, 4/1/2015)

Smooth out the shading a little? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 09:59, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Just redid it. Jayce(11:09, 4/1/2015)

This is awesomedorable. Can you fix the shading on the back leg? Sorry...my eyes don't agree with it. ~Sunstream ☽☾

Re-uploaded. I assume you mean the actual back leg? Jayce(17:13, 4/1/2015)

Could you blur the tail shading? User:Burntclaw/Sig 09:12, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Don't want to blur it too much or else I think you might not be able to see it. Jayce(10:40, 4/3/2015)

Nah, it's fine and let's go CBA I love his name User:Burntclaw/Sig 10:41, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Approved User:Burntclaw/Sig 11:16, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Sparkpaw (A) ~ Approved[]

Sparkpelt.apprentice wen u mum com home an make hte spagheti david 🌈 04:22, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the back legs just a lit'l bit? lit'l she-firestar - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 04:37, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Not entirely sure, but should she get an image yet since her book hasn't been released? ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 05:08, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Vicky confirmed their descriptions so they can - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 05:09, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Kate posted the allegiances on her blog, not Vicky. Since they're post on her blog, they're considered a valid source of information and we can use them. Jayce(05:24, 4/1/2015)

Maybe this is a spam, but I wished she's long furred. Beautiful, btw~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 () 14:33, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Give that she's a spitting image of Firestar, making her short-furred would make more sense. Jayce(17:14, 4/1/2015)

re-uploaded. I did want to make her long haired but decided against it david 🌈 18:04, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading just a little and I think it is ready Who knew Squirrel had such a sexy daughter User:Burntclaw/Sig 10:33, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

re-uploaded david 🌈 10:42, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

CBA, as promised? User:Burntclaw/Sig 10:43, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Approved User:Burntclaw/Sig 11:16, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Petalkit (MV) (Ki) ~ Approved[]

Petalkit (MV).kitMade her belly a little fluffy. :3 Maanhart Speaking quietly ☽︎ 12:09, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the ear pink just a little more? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 11:18, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups ~ Smudged it a little more, I hope you can see it. ^^" Maanhart Speaking quietly ☽︎ 19:01, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

I kinda can't see the ear pink at all- perhaps change the shade of it a bit? Jayce(13:54, 3/31/2015)

Honestly, I can see it very clearly. User:Burntclaw/Sig 09:03, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups ~ Darkened the ear pink some. Maanhart Speaking quietly ☽︎ 11:34, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? I honestly cant see anything else wrong. Great work =).~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 20:14, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Approved User:Burntclaw/Sig 05:43, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

Ferntail (Q) ~ Approved[]

Ferntail.queenCirmos:) Sziri the goat sails away ツ 17:04, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

define the face shading just a smidge. david 🌈 11:44, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups Sziri the goat sails away ツ 12:08, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

Nice! I saw an S shaped tabby stripe on her face 😃. There I are a few empty pixels around her muzzle, but other than that she looks fine to me! ~Sunstream ☽☾

Re-ups Yes,i usually draw lil S-stripes on my tabby cats :3 Sziri the goat sails away ツ 16:28, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

She is sooooo pretty. CBA? Tiger Sunny days 22:01, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Approved User:Burntclaw/Sig 05:43, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

Puddlepaw (MCA) -Approved[]

Puddleshine.mca This little ball of fluff is /mine./ ^^ Jayie Unwritten words~ 16:04, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

My favorite shading again! Adorable! Can't see problems. ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 () 01:35, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

can you define the shading on the brown on the closest foreleg? david 🌈 11:43, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Defined the shading, and added more fur texture on the brown. Jayie Unwritten words~ 00:35, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Only just now realized I hadn't filled in Puddlepaw's nose color. :P Added that, and tweaked the texture a little more. Jayie Unwritten words~ 00:49, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Rah! This is awesomedorable!! I don't see anything wrong with it. ~Sunstream ☽☾

Sunstream, please keep in mind that if your going to comment, please only do it if you have critique to give. While saying compliments are nice, it does count as spam. Ive seen this quite a few times recently, so its not just you. Anyways, this is gorgeous, so lets go with a CBA.~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 20:10, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Approved User:Burntclaw/Sig 05:44, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

Wasptail (Q) ~ Approved[]

Wasptail.queen Hi, insanely proud of this. User:Burntclaw/Sig 14:03, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Shh, Goldenfall+Petal! XDDD~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 () 14:28, April 1, 2015 (UTC)It's beautiful! Maybe smudge /her/ left front leg shading just a teenie bit. ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 () 14:28, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped I just smudged it everywhere, shifted the highlights and changed her eye color to green. User:Burntclaw/Sig 05:08, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading on the tail and belly just a few ticks. Jayce(12:14, 4/4/2015)

Re-upped on the face too. Also defined the shading on her left front leg User:Burntclaw/Sig 12:19, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 20:52, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

Approved. Tiger Sunny days 23:35, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

Foxpaw (A) - Approved[]

Foxnose.apprentice - Yes, he is a pointed tabby, so he's not getting anymore stripes ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 04:30, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Define the ear pink - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 06:26, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

blur/smudge the stripes a little more? they're looking a tad hard-edged giaria time on my side 20:52 Fri Apr 3

i thought pointed tabbies were only on mink point cats and such? the closest thing to that on a solid would be a ticked tabby. [just want to throw this one out there] Queen Beebs 21:07, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 23:13, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

who cares honestly he's a tabby? thats all that matters? can you make him slightly more russet, I thought he was brown at first. david 🌈

Re-uploaded ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 03:41, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Minor thing, could you define the shading on his right front paw? User:Burntclaw/Sig 00:43, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 02:10, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? User:Burntclaw/Sig 02:53, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

Yes, define the earpink, and define the shading on the upper half of the tail. Spottehwobble It's Lemon scented!

I think it's fine. Ear-pink doesn't have to be neon pink in contrast, and considering he's a long hair, his ears will be pretty furry. ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 18:55, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Agreeing with Scarlet tbh and I'm gonna continue the CBA. Jayce(18:56, 4/7/2015)

Approved User:Burntclaw/Sig 00:16, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Appledusk (W) ~ Approved[]

Appledusk.warrior My first warrior. For the chest, I tried to go for a soft look (feather soft!) Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 02:25, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

I think the feather softness was in reference to the fur's feel and not necessarily the color. Thicken the shading on the back and define it on the head, and smudge the pelt into the ear-pink. ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 02:40, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload I know, I thought just the lighter chest is fitting, and tried to make it look soft. Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 02:55, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Unless he's said to have a lighter-colored chest, I think it should be removed. It's allowed on tabbies because they usually have them. Jayce(09:20, 3/27/2015)

Blur the shadin more - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 10:46, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Make the base color a little less gingery? Russettail13 (talk) 16:03, March 27, 2015 (UTC)Russet

Reupload Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 23:25, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

He looks really orange, make him brown just a little more. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 04:29, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 05:10, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Now he looks kinda green... ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot22:45 Sat Mar 28

Reupload goodness hope his not feeling sick XD. Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 23:00, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Tone down the ear pink a little and define the light on the legs. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 11:04, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

It still looks a bit greener than brown. Tiger Sunny days 14:08, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

the shading looks kinda blotchy, smooth it out a bit? giaria time on my side 20:43 Sun Mar 29

Reupload I can't change his colour away from green anymore. His starting to look ginger again. Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 22:07, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

He actually looks like an old version of Oakheart's tawny alt... Might I suggest a shade around #A06F44? That's the color I used for Grasspelt. He's still looking a bit ginger on my screen. Jayce(23:55, 3/29/2015)

Reupload thanks for that. Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 00:02, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

she shading is still a tad blotchy on the neck. smooth it out a little more? giaria time on my side 11:45 Mon Mar 30

Reupload I just read the book again and his mentioned to have the same soft shade of brown as at least Petalkit, so I colour-picked off her image. Credit to Petalkit's OA. :) Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 21:56, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit more User:Burntclaw/Sig 06:23, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload I've redone the tail shading since it is leaking away from the lineart. I've also got the eyes to match Patchkit's eyes, since it is mentioned to have matched. Credit to the OA of Patchkit's image. Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 07:03, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink a bit more. He also looks a touch on the shiny side ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 22:25, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload I think the shiny fits, he has glossy fur. Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 22:34, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 04:30, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

The neck, head and tail shading are a little blotchy in places. Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 20:49, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Also, might I suggest shifting the brown's certain shade a little? It's looking a little dark cream, rather than pale brown. Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 20:52, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 22:50, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs, blur the shading on the main body and make it curve a little bit more to the body. User:Burntclaw/Sig 09:04, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Where do you mean by body shading? Maybe show me a redline. Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 09:44, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

http://tinypic.com/view.php?pic=n38aj4&s=8 Mainly on the neck and the body. User:Burntclaw/Sig 10:37, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Is that better? Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 23:51, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Yep! Now just define the light on all the legs and I think this is good to go User:Burntclaw/Sig 02:56, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 23:03, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? User:Burntclaw/Sig 05:50, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

define the light on all the legs? sorry for interrupting your CBA giaria time on my side 22:15 Sun Apr 5

Reupload Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 10:23, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

Re-CBA? User:Burntclaw/Sig 11:04, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

Approved User:Burntclaw/Sig 00:17, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Birchface (Star) - Approved[]

Birchface.star happy screeching. Jayce(11:25, 4/4/2015)

lel could you define the shading everywhere just a tad plzUser:Burntclaw/Sig 12:06, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Jayce(12:11, 4/4/2015)

define the shading on the pale bit of his chest. (if theres any im so sleep deprived rn) david 🌈 19:41, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Jayce(20:28, 4/4/2015)

define the shading everywhere? i cant see where any of it is giaria time on my side 11:38 Mon Apr 6

Well, it's kinda hard to see the shading with these images because of how dark it is- and I'm not going to lighten him up since that would mean I'd need to tweak his warrior and kit. He's described as almost black, making this a tricky color to get right that doesn't look green. The shading's just as defined on this image as it is on his other two. Jayce(11:49, 4/6/2015)

I don't know what you're talking about gia I can see it very clearly - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 11:52, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

Honestly, i agree with Jayce and Foxy here. I cant see anything else wrong, so lets try a CBA for this gorgeous kitty.~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys

Maybe smudge/blur the chest-stripes a tad? Spottehwobble It's Lemon scented!

It's fine, honestly. I don't think it needs to be smudged. Jayce(18:51, 4/7/2015)

I agree with Skye. It's fine and he looks beautiful ^^ - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 00:02, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

It's fine- continuing CBA and approved00:20, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Havenpelt (W) ~ Approved[]

Havenpelt.warrior Apparently a pelt can be a haven Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 20:46, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading Russettail13 (talk) 01:02, April 2, 2015 (UTC)Russet

I'd much rather not. The base is rather dark anyway, so defining the shading is no easy job. The shading is on multiply, almost pure black and if I increase the opacity much more, I'll get an annoying 'splotch' on the lighted areas. For some reason that happens when I shade black cats. Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 01:36, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

I think you could define the neck shading, unsmudge it a little bit, it looks way too smudged/blurred. Also, define the light on the tail. User:Burntclaw/Sig 03:22, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

Reups Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 11:05, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the white on the neck, it looks a little odd--for lack of better word--in comparison to the rest of the white. Gorgeous!  Frosty ☾Supernatural 13:10, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

Reups danke Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 15:54, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading, especially on the main body and the tail. User:Burntclaw/Sig 11:01, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Reups Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 17:57, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

define the shading on the body just a tiny bit? giaria time on my side 20:49 Fri Apr 3

Reups Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 23:16, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

i know theres an apprentice image to match, but can you darken her some? she looks dark grey rather than black (and so does the apprentice tbqh) david 🌈 06:42, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Agreed with David- Black-and-white cats are sometimes a butt to shade because of this. Do you shade all of it with one layer? If you do, shading the black with one layer and the white with another is just as good, if not a bit easier to control how gray the white looks, and how dark/light the black looks. Jayce(12:13, 4/4/2015)

Reups okay, I've darkened the black - but not too much, because otherwise I'll be told to define the shading, and yes, it's an utter nightmare when I get that weird splotchy mark on my black and white shading. Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 15:22, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Comments? Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 00:37, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

How about a CBA? User:Burntclaw/Sig 00:40, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Approved Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 00:42, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Lakeheart (Q) ~ Apporved[]

Lakeheart.queen - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 09:58, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

would you like the .xcf? anyways, point out the edges of the stripes more, smudge the tail stripes some more, and define the shading. Queen Beebs 10:01, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded The file would be really helpful Beebs =) my e-mail is thefoxgirl15@yahoo.com - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 10:16, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

<3 Can you define the shading a bit? ~Sunstream ☽☾

I think the shading is fine. I can see it. User:Burntclaw/Sig 00:54, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

I think she should define it everywhere, except for the tail. giaria time on my side 11:36 Thu Apr 2

Re-uploaded I defined it as far as I can - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 11:59, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

I can't see any shoulder or facial shading- define it, please. Given your source, there should be some. Jayce(13:01, 4/2/2015)

Re-upped - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 13:11, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Shifted the colors around using the xcf Bbun gave me - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 07:24, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

define the belly shading just a tiny bit more? giaria time on my side 20:48 Fri Apr 3

Shading definition is fine, it could be smoothed out, in fact. but could you maybe make the stripes a bit neater and make them match more with the warrior User:Burntclaw/Sig 02:52, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I accidentally used Burnt's account again. I redid the stripes and fixed the shading, I hope it looks better this way. I do not want to define the belly shading or it will clash with the pale underbelly. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 05:52, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

if thats shoulder shading it needs to be smudged or whatever. david 🌈 13:05, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the back leg furthest from us a smidge - so beautiful. Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 14:58, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thanks~ btw it was a stripe combined with the texture, not the shading - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 05:35, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Fixed stuff I hated - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 06:47, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

I like this. CBA? User:Burntclaw/Sig 02:51, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Approved User:Burntclaw/Sig 02:53, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Leafkit (TAQ) (Ki) ~ Approved[]

Leafshade.kit she's ssssssssmokin'. (easter egg to who guesses the ref) david 🌈 18:57, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Define the facial shading, if there is any. she looks like a mini Dewy Leaf c: ~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 19:55, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

re-uploaded. reincarnation confirmed david 🌈 05:02, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

yeah can i have some comments guys david 🌈 02:17, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? User:Burntclaw/Sig 02:49, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Approved User:Burntclaw/Sig 02:55, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Spiketail (D) ~ Approved[]

Spiketail.deputy Welp... first charart. Hopefully I don't chicken out or get arrogant and I didn't screw anything up /)-(\ ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 04:45, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Where are the pupils/eye color? I can't see any at all, and he needs to have them. Also, darken his base just a bit, and blur the main body shading a tad. Jayce(05:53, 3/25/2015)

blur the shading a lot, and make the light on the bent leg more visible giaria time on my side 11:35 Wed Mar 25

There is waste under at the outside of his chest. Pretty goood for your first one! ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 19:06, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changed eye colour, redid with a darker grey. Eye colour was originally supposed to be grey until my lesson learned: Never put grey eyes on a grey cat. --~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 03:40, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Realized I messed up on shading. I'll start work on it tomorrow when I wake up or after I get home from the hospital. --~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 03:41, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Add pupils, if you want to look at examples, you can look at some of mine. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 04:56, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Added pupils (who ever knew eyes could be so difficult? I need new glasses). Might as well do this before I sleep since it's fast. Thank you for the examples, Foxy :) --~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 05:47, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

You're welcome! If you need help you can always ask me. :) Now, just darken and define the shading and define the eye depth. We're getting there and he looks awesome. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 10:49, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Is it okay if I can get a recommendation on what to set the blur rate to? I use Gaussian Blur on gimp. --~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 18:29, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Well, it depends on the blanks. I used to make 25 my very maximum for any blank, before I started smudging instead. Try stuff out, see how it looks. Gaussian blur tends to make look flat or occasionally blotchy, though. Try using the blur tool on a high rate if you have trouble finding a good setting for guassian blur. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 18:47, March 27, 2015 (UTC)

Define shading everywhere Russettail13 (talk) 02:09, March 28, 2015 (UTC)Russet

Could I get some assistance on trying to shade in GIMP? I know, it sounds stupid but somehow, GIMP just doesn't want me to shade correctly anymore. I tried using the smudge tool (though I suck at smudging), I tried using the blur tool, and I even tried using gaussian blur. For gaussian blur, the option was greyed out. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 04:49, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Try a hard edged blur tool and blur the edges only at a rate of 100, make sure the mode is RGB. It you would like I could make a tutorial for you. I suggest not using the smudge tool until you have more practice. However if you do decide to use it use a hard edged smudge tool at the rate of 60 depending on how much you want it smudged and smudge the shading towards the direction of fur. Sigh with ~~~~ please. User:Burntclaw/Sig 03:30, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Dang it! I forgot, thank you for reminding me. That's what I get for being sleepy. I'll try, but if it doesn't succeed, I'll redo the image. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 04:49, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded After getting SkyClan's Destiny, munching on some candy, and finding my glasses, I finally found out why it wouldn't shade. It wasn't on RGB. Sorry if there seems to be a lack of change. I set gaussian blur to 20 and made the eyes brighter. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 21:40, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading depth a bit more. Jayce(00:14, 3/30/2015)

Reuploaded I have an uneasy feeling that I blurred too much, since I'm not sure if I can really see the shading, but I could be wrong. --~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 00:28, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded I might give this a thorough check again. I bumped down the blurring rate to about 27.5 ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 01:19, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Bumped it down to 26. Still using Gaussian Blur because I'm lazy. --~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 01:27, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Bumped it down to 24. Didn't like it at 26. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 03:24, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading quite a bit. —.neha it's that gloom boy season. 10:23, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Took shading down to about 23 or 22. I spy a bit of waste so I'll get at that immediately. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 21:39, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Bye bye, waste. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 21:54, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

No, I meant make it more visible, not less visible. I can't see the shading right now. —.neha it's that gloom boy season. 23:42, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry, I had a hard day and can't think >< I can't even remember to stop aligning the image. I feel stupid. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪

Reuploaded Hopefully this bad day doesn't stretch on for me. Anyway, I blurred and adjusted a bit. At first I thought I didn't see the shading, but it was because of my glasses. I'm still pretty unsure though. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 00:11, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Its fine, everyone makes mistakes now and again. As for the image, define the foreleg shading. You did beautifully on this Skid. =)~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 01:41, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks :D (I hope the changes are showing) ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪

Darken the shading quite a bit. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 04:34, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried not to darken too much because for me, a little goes a long way. one of my last uploads before chicago. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪

Darken or define the shading just a little more? Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 20:50, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded hopefully it shows the changes... Redid shading since I lost the other file. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪

Darken the shading more - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 06:29, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪

Since you clearly know what your doing, im changing the heading and promoting you to an apprentice. As for the image, define the overall shading- i can barely see it.~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 20:22, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

I don't really think it needs defining, just darkening. giaria time on my side 20:46 Fri Apr 3

Reuploaded Is this too much? I want to make sure I have just the right amount of shading. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪

define the shading on the legs User:Burntclaw/Sig 06:38, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

You could define the shading everywhere but the flanks. ~Spotted

Reuploaded I still am sort of fretting that this might be a bit too much of shading. In my next upload, I'll lighten some of the shading. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪

Dull down the ear pink User:Burntclaw/Sig 03:25, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded I lost my save so I'll have to redo the shading again. I got the earpink though. I have a headache so I wanted to get this done as soon as possible. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪

Reuploaded Added shading to the hind feet, not sure if it's my computer screen or not because I tried defining the leg shading and I don't know if I can see it. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪

Reuploaded Shading darkened some more. Too dark? ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪

CBA? Queen Beebs 22:34, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Approved. Tiger Sunny days 23:33, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Spikefur (W) - Approved[]

Spikefur.warrior All colors from the apprenice, which I'm the OA of. I can't remember, but I think that the shading opacity is the same as the apprentice as well. Comments? Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 12:41, April 2, 2015 (UTC) 

Smooth out the shading- don't care if you blur it or smudge it. (not sure of your style tbh) Jayce(12:59, 4/2/2015) 

Reuploaded. Btw, I always blur my shading. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 20:27, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

 Can you make the ear pink not cover the whole inside of the ear? Love that face 😃 . ~Sunstream ☽☾

 Reuploaded. Thanks! Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 23:49, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

 Define the neck shading and smooth it out on the main body User:Burntclaw/Sig 10:40, April 3, 2015 (UTC) 

lighten up the shading a lot and define your light source giaria time on my side 11:52 Fri Apr 3

 I think it's fine on both accounts; I use this same shading before (on Lionblaze's warrior alt before it was tweaked). However, I'llchange it if someone else agrees. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 12:26, April 3, 2015 (UTC) 

Imo, the shading looks fine. ~Sunstream ☽☾

 I agree with burnt clW, please smooth it out - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 14:08, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

 Reuploaded. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 20:01, April 3, 2015 (UTC) Reuploaded.

I forgot to get rid of the waste from when I blurred it. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 20:03, April 3, 2015 (UTC) 

define the neck shading? he's nice giaria time on my side 20:50 Fri Apr 3  Add some more light to his legs maybe? ~Sunstream ☽☾

Reuploaded. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 21:51, April 3, 2015 (UTC) 

Give the tail shading a blur User:Burntclaw/Sig 06:39, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

 Reuploaded. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 07:05, April 4, 2015 (UTC) CBA? User:Burntclaw/Sig 02:51, April 7, 2015 (UTC) 

Sorry for interrupting the CBA, but I think the shading could use some smoothing out ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 12:58, April 7, 2015 (UTC) 

Reuploaded twice. First time a forgot about the waste (again). Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 20:09, April 7, 2015 (UTC) Shall we go CBA again? Jayce(10:02, 4/8/2015)

 Approved.--~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 04:45, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

Seedpelt (Alt W) ~ Approved[]

Seedpelt.warrior.alt idk giaria time on my side 17:15 Sat Mar 28 Weren't she and the other Seedpelt said to be the same cat? And if so, shouldn't she match the other Seedpelt's description? —Ivy 17:34, March 28, 2015 (UTC) 

it would be an alt now, it should just be renamed and it'll be fine. david 🌈 17:42, March 28, 2015 (UTC) 

Re-named. Also, brighten up the white a bit on the muzzle and tail. Jayce(20:15, 3/28/2015)

 Correct me if I'm wrong, but I remember that alts had to match the normal images in terms of fur length, so, shouldn't this be short-furred, like the other image. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 23:13, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

 Blur/Smudge the white more and define the earpink. ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 23:55, March 28, 2015 (UTC) 

Shouldn't Seedpelt match her new description? ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 03:54, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

 this is an alt, not the warrior. david 🌈 03:55, March 29, 2015 (UTC) Blur/smudge the shading more, it's a bit hard edged. Tiger Sunny days 14:11, March 29, 2015 (UTC)

 practically redid it the reason it didn't match the normal image before is because i didn't see that they were the same cat. giaria time on my side 18:10 Sun Mar 29

Can you blur the shading a bit more? Tiger Sunny days 20:31, March 29, 2015 (UTC) 

it looks fine to me, but if someone else agrees then i will its smudged not blurred giaria time on my side 21:16 Sun Mar 29

 I'm gonna agree with Tiger here. Please smudge it, if you don't blur it. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 21:39, March 29, 2015 (UTC) 

Define the shading on the front legs while your at it.~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 02:39, March 30, 2015 (UTC) 

Smudge the white more - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 04:37, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

 reups i should probably smudge the neck shading anymore but eh i'll probably be told to do it anyway giaria time on my side 11:38 Mon Mar 30

 Define the tail shading and smudge the shading a lot on the haunch. Smudge the white towards the direction of fur. User:Burntclaw/Sig 14:34, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

 reups giaria time on my side 01:21 Wed Apr 1 Define the ear pink just a little, and he looks a tad greenish. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 04:29, April 1, 2015 (UTC) 

Lighten up that brown a lot. The description is light brown-and white. This even borders on a darker neutral brown. Jayce(17:15, 4/1/2015)

 Smooth out the shading on the main body, a bit. Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 20:48, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

 reups seedpelt is a female btw giaria time on my side 21:07 Wed Apr 1 

Shouldn't you be using the male blank? The allegiances listed her as a male, not a female. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 12:03, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

 well i was told to match the female gender but i can change that if i have to. giaria time on my side 03:43 Fri Apr 3

 Well Mosskit's alt is a male cause she was called one. Seedpelt was also called a male along with her description. I think you should really tweak it into a male blank. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 03:49, April 3, 2015 (UTC) 

Blur the shading more, especially on the haunch. User:Burntclaw/Sig 09:02, April 3, 2015 (UTC) 

reups giaria time on my side 11:50 Fri Apr 3

 Define the ear pink - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 14:40, April 5, 2015 (UTC) 

reups giaria time on my side 22:13 Sun Apr 5 

Few ayswithout comments, CBA? User:Burntclaw/Sig 06:38, April 8, 2015 (UTC) 

Approved.--~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 04:45, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

Thrushtalon (W) - Approved[]

Thrushtalon.warrior I love le stripes <33 The shading, I know, comment away about that ;-;❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 01:20, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Given that he's light brown, I think he could be lightened - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 01:27, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

I think it's fine. Coffeeshops 01:29, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

I agree with Fox. I think it could be lightened a lot - he looks more dark brown than light right now. Maybe lightening up the shading, too, could help. —Ivy 01:40, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

ups I forgot to blur the shading, hold on.. ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 01:51, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Can you make the stripes on his forelegs match the rest of his pattern? If you believe its fine, then by all means feel free to disregard me.~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 03:42, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

I'll do it later, I dont have time right now.. And I'll redo the sading aswell.. ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 03:48, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge or blur the stripes more. I like these stripes too - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 11:57, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Make him a bit browner; he's looking more gray-brown to me (might just be me, though). Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 15:49, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups The shading looks wwwwaaaaayyyyyyyy better, /not ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 19:57, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

blur/smudge the shading some — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 20:46, 03/25/2015

re-up ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 21:10, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Watch the stripes on the haunch on under his neck/chest; he's starting to toe the line of triangle tabby. Also, blur and lighten the shading on the back ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 21:11, March 25, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe you could lower the shading's opacity as well, because I can't see the stripes at all through it. —Ivy 21:12, March 26, 2015 (UTC)

re-up re-did him and made him a mackerel tabby. Dont know if it was the right choice... ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 02:18, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit, and blur it more. You can try secondary shading as well but it's just a suggestion. ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 () 02:24, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

re-up I should darken the shading more '-' ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 02:41, March 28, 2015 (UTC)


Can you blur the shading a bit? I <3 his stripes. Tiger Sunny days 02:54, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

Also, can you smudge/blur the stripes a bit, too? Tiger Sunny days 03:03, March 28, 2015 (UTC)

define the light on the legs a tad giaria time on my side 20:38 Sun Mar 29

re-up Did I answer everyone's questions? ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 01:53, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

Can you smudge/blur the shading a bit more, it's still kind of hard edged. Tiger Sunny days 13:27, March 30, 2015 (UTC)

It looks fine to me, honestly. Could you smudge the stripes a bit more? This is looking very nice!!  Frosty ☾Supernatural 17:17, March 31, 2015 (UTC)

Gonna have to agree with Tiger, just blur/smudge the shading a bit more. —.neha it's that gloom boy season. 00:15, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Also, define the light on the legs. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 04:39, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

still needs blurring, and the stripe by his ear is really hard edged. david 🌈 11:46, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

re-up I think he looks a little better. Changed the eyes to green because I think he looks sexier that way. ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 21:17, April 3, 2015 (UTC) x2 I dont know why the stripes look so hard edge on the wiki '-' My GIMP Says it's perfectly stripe like.. ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 21:21, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Define the neck shading and the eye depth, please. —Ivy 23:21, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

re-up Merp? ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 13:15, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Yo the shading looks really nice! Now define the shading on his back right paw, and add a few more stripes to the head. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 14:34, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

You could smudge the thicker darker stripes on the tail. Spottehwobble!

I think the stripes are fine. And Spotted, if you are doing big text, end it with </big> please. Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 23:54, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

So do I have to do what Foxy suggests on the stripes or... Leave it how it is? Im a little confused 3x ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 15:39, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

re-up on the shading, dont know 'bout the stripes...❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 15:44, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light in the front paw farthest from us and smudge some of the stripes a tad more on the tail. Lovely. :) Tiger Sunny days 00:01, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Is there a way you could make the base a bit more of a warmer brown? He kinda looks just the slightest bit green- nothing too much. Just the tiniest bit more towards orange I think would do the trick. Perhaps around the shade of #9E7D5E? Jayce(06:34, 4/8/2015)

Add more stripes to the head. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 12:59, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

I add about the same amount of stripes to my warrior images, and countless others have no more than an M or W stripe- tbh, I think the amount of stripes on the head is perfectly fine. Jayce(13:05, 4/8/2015)

re-up looks iccky. ): ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 14:39, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

No, it doesn't. I think it looks phenomenal, hence why I'm going to CBA it. Jayce(15:04, 4/8/2015)

hate to interrupt but could you smooth out the shading near the shoulder andon the tail? then back to CBA Queen Beebs 20:29, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

re-up -flips table- ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 20:58, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

CBA ? User:Burntclaw/Sig 00:13, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

Approved User:Burntclaw/Sig 08:19, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Alderpaw (App) -Approved[]

Alderheart.apprentice I am incredibly proud of this. =3 Tiger Sunny days 01:27, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading and the light on the back leg. User:Burntclaw/Sig 09:18, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

the stripes seem to get lost in the shading, define them or something? david 🌈 11:41, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Tiger Sunny days 00:48, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on his right back paw and the shading depth User:Burntclaw/Sig 09:09, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

define the shading? lookin nice giaria time on my side 20:50 Fri Apr 3

Thanks Tiger Sunny days 23:04, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on our right back leg? So cute. Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 15:02, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading just a tad, his stripes are still getting lost in it.~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 00:01, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

^-^ I can't lighten it any more or it'll look a bit odd Tiger Sunny days 21:58, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? User:Burntclaw/Sig 09:34, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

I'm gonna be real picky here and I'm so sorry, but it's something that I know I've been told about countless times. Could you make the ear pink less neon red? Other than that, I quite like this image. *.* Jayce(10:02, 4/8/2015)

Re-upped :) Tiger Sunny days 23:29, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Thank you. CBA? Jayce(05:22, 4/9/2015)

Approved User:Burntclaw/Sig 08:19, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Milkweed (Q) - Approved[]

Milkweed.queen Gah, I cannot get that shading to work. Any suggestions? The tabby bits are find, it's the black splotches that I can't seem to shade properly. Also, she was described as a splotched black-and-ginger tabby from what I heard, so I decided to make her a ginger tabby with black splotches, because that's what some tortoiseshell cats look like. It seemed to fit. Jayie Unwritten words~ 02:07, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Shouldn't we find the cite first? Anyways, try to smudge the patches more. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 02:21, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

page is up, she needs a torn eartip, black muzzle, and a scar on her muzzle. david 🌈 08:42, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Smudged patches more, tweaked shading (still not happy with it), and added what Skt said. Any more suggestions on fixing the shading? Jayie Unwritten words~ 16:38, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

THat is amazing! I couldn't do that, but can you smudge the shading on the tail and define the shading a tad on her face? Spottehwobble It's Lemon scented! [1]

Also maybe blend the scar into her fur more? It looks too sharp. — Fez   talk  21:40, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Are the black lines texture or something if so they can be smudged User:Burntclaw/Sig 00:11, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

What black lines? She has black markings overtop of her ginger fur, and tabby stripes. There's no texture anywhere on her. Jayie Unwritten words~ 00:30, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Gosh sorry, I should have explained. It looks a little like texture, (doing my best to explain) and they are dark lines running over the direction of fur. If you think its fine ignore me. Sorry Jayie. User:Burntclaw/Sig 00:33, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. The dark lines are actual markings of the fur, not texture. I tweaked the scar, tweaked the shading, and gave her the amber eyes she's supposed to have. Jayie Unwritten words~ 01:26, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

I'm having a really hard time seeing the shading, could you define it for me? I actually didn't notice there was shading at first oops Jayce(09:42, 4/8/2015)

Reuploaded. Oh god, that belly shading looks awful, but I tried. D: Jayie Unwritten words~ 17:37, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Tone down on the highlights a bit, perhaps? Especially on the belly, it looks like metal-shine, for lack of a better phrase. — Fez   talk  17:53, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Is this better? Jayie Unwritten words~ 18:24, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? Jayce(15:53, 4/9/2015)

Approved. Jayie Unwritten words~ 18:25, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Juniperpaw (A) - Approved[]

Juniperclaw.apprentice shading black cats is a pain —.neha it's that gloom boy season. 21:20, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Define shading just a tad Firetail TEEHEE | Sharks are OSM 21:35, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.neha it's that gloom boy season. 21:39, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

I like this- CBA? Jayce(05:20, 4/9/2015)

Approved. Jayie Unwritten words~ 18:25, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Fern (Ro) ~ Approved[]

Fern Leaf.rogue david 🌈 03:06, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Waste right next to the chest. Lovely job David^^  Frosty ☾Supernatural 03:34, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

re-uploaded huh thought I got all of it but apparently not, thanks though david 🌈 04:59, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 07:08, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Approved Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 13:52, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Patchkit (MV) (Star) ~ Approved[]

Patchkit (MV).star Poor kit ;___; User:Burntclaw/Sig 02:56, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Brighten the white up a bit. Pretty cute for being...deceased. ;_; Nice job!  Frosty ☾Supernatural 17:07, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

You can clearly tell its white tbh. It doesn't need to be pure white - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 00:06, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

There is little I can do, honestly. It's one tick off of pure white, and if I lighten up the shading, it won't show up on the ginger too well, and I like how the shading darkness it now, so I'd rather not touch it. User:Burntclaw/Sig 00:09, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Make it pure white. I don't know what people have against using it, but it's more than acceptable and lessens the chance of it being gray. Or perhaps add some faint highlights on the white. Jayce(04:20, 4/8/2015)

Re-upped Oh no, it's not that I'm against using it. It's just that I color picked off his kit image, that's why it's off. I actually always use pure white unless there is a image to match- Now it's pure white, so it shouldn't look too dark. User:Burntclaw/Sig 07:50, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

that's bcause he has very slight texture, I used pure white for the base. I always do. david 🌈 07:57, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped I added texture User:Burntclaw/Sig 08:35, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

I think the ginger patch along his back/shoulder would extend a bit further down and go closer to his neck and the lineart where the leg starts. I also think the ginger on --> paw should be extended a fair bit- it looks like there's only a small part of the foot and barely anything else on that part that's got white on it. I think it could possibly be extended to the elbow-area... I'm looking at the kit image, and it appears to do that on David's image. Unless my eyes are tired? idk Jayce(15:10, 4/8/2015)

Re-upped Did I get it? User:Burntclaw/Sig 02:57, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

Love that shading. CBA? Jayie Unwritten words~ 18:48, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Approved User:Burntclaw/Sig 01:33, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Larkkit (K) ~ Approved[]

Larksong (AVoS).kit Decided to do it. How do you? c: If something is wrong - write. Сияние Кометы 19:25, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

P.s – Somehow, all the time want to call Larkwing.

Ok, a few things. First, please sign your posts with ~~~~ so we know who you are. Also, don't align your images. I fixed the alignment for you, but for future reference, don't add the |left after the image. Also, the file should be named Larkkit.kit.png, so can someone fix that? As for the image, it's pretty good but define the shading and dull down the earpink. Also, I'm pretty sure he should have a black nose, as he's a black cat. —Ivy 16:17, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded – Sorry, but I didn't understand (translator) about the signature and the left side. May you explain slightly in a different way? But I nevertheless understood some and corrected. So?

I'm really bad at explaining but I'll try. For the signature: add ~~~~ after what you write to sign. For the image: your code should read [[File:Larkkit.kit.png]] instead of [[File:Larkkit.kit.png|thumb|left]]. And on the image, please dull the earpink a bit more. —Ivy 17:23, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded – Next day I will make more dark earpink. Сияние Кометы 19:25, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Can you blur the ear pink after you dull it please? ~Sunstream ☽☾ *Ruler of Darkness* 17:39, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded – I updated. It is already possible to lay out? Сияние Кометы 12:46, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading just a little? I like this. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 13:37, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded – What does "Define the shading just a little" mean? Sorry, but I didn't understand. Участник:Сияние Кометы‏‎ 13:51, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

It's making the shading more visible, which I think you could still do - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 14:18, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded – And how so to make? Участник:Сияние Кометы‏‎ 15:12, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

Shading black cats is hard. What art program do you use? ~Sunstream ☽☾ *Ruler of Darkness* 16:17, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded – I use the GIMP program. Участник:Сияние Кометы‏‎ 16:22, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

define the shading on the legs, tail, and the right side og the body. giaria time on my side 11:39 Mon Apr 6

Re-uploaded – It has to be so shaded? ShineStar 15:32, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

Blue/smudge the shading and blur the ear pink on -----------------> this side just a tttiinyy bit. ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 13:01, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded – What, Brambleshade? Участник:Сияние Кометы‏‎ 16:17, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

In my opinion, though I am not in PCA, I think you should brighten the earpink as little is possible. Spottehwobble It's Lemon scented!

I think the earpink is alright. Tiger Sunny days 23:58, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Can you darken the nose coloring? Black cats should have a really dark gray (like almost black) or black nose... I think. I remember asking about the nose thing once and got told it didn't need to be pure black. Jayce(09:58, 4/8/2015)

Unless they forgot to say "re-upload" here, the nose is already black. That could be my screen though. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 00:06, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

It looks red to me, not black. I zoomed in on my phone and laptop. Jayce(05:21, 4/9/2015)

Re-uploaded – What you on me pulled hard? :D And now normal nose? ShineStar 07:44, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

It may be my computer or my glasses, but if not, dull the earpink to our right a tad. Nevermind. It's fine, imho. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪


Re-uploaded – Everything is good? Now it is possible to lay out? ShineStar 14:19, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Looks good. CBA? Jayie Unwritten words~ 18:40, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Approved User:Burntclaw/Sig 01:34, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Larchkit (MV) (Star) ~ Approved[]

Larchkit (MV).star hello.~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 01:17, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Smothen the shading on the tail maybe? Lovely Breezy ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 01:52, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

It looks fine to be honest. I think if she smoothed it out she would be told to define it - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 04:00, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry, I agree with Bramble. It could be smoothed out. while you're at it, smudge the earpink a bit more User:Burntclaw/Sig 09:35, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 04:35, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

This looks great. CBA? Jayie Unwritten words~ 18:51, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Approved User:Burntclaw/Sig 01:36, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Stonetooth (TAQ) (W) ~ Approved[]

Stonetooth (TAQ).warrior My first white cat. Maanhart Speaking quietly ☽︎ 15:43, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail a tad - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 07:21, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups ~ Maanhart Speaking quietly ☽︎ 18:14, April 6, 2015 (UTC)

Define the head shading a bit? Lovely job!  Frosty ☾Supernatural 17:09, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

blur the tail shading a little? mostly where it meets the base of the tail Queen Beebs 21:04, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Re-ups ~ Thanks. :3 Maanhart Speaking quietly ☽︎ 20:49, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

I love that shading sooo much. CBA? User:Burntclaw/Sig 09:05, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Approved. Queen Beebs 11:28, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Blossom (ro) ~ Approved[]

Blossom.rogue i have returned Queen Beebs 22:03, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tortie parts. —.neha it's that gloom boy season. 22:07, April 7, 2015 (UTC)

She has tortoiseshell splotches, which I believe is something like this? User:Burntclaw/Sig 00:02, April 8, 2015 (UTC) Maybe a bit more patchy? User: Dewdrops25:45, April, 7, 2015

I think the splotches on the tortoiseshell were meant to be on the tortie part? I'd like a second opinion on that ;;; Queen Beebs 01:19, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

splotchy could just mean messy looking, it doesn't have to be tortoisehsll patches. david 🌈 03:11, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Actually, the quote was "her tortoiseshell splotches...." User:Burntclaw/Sig 03:13, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

I think if that's what the quote says, you should probably match that. I changed Alder when she was called splotchy, so it's only fair to change this to match what the quote says. Judging by the quote, it sounds like a white base with tortie patches and stuff... kinda like Sweetpaw. Jayce(06:28, 4/8/2015)

re-up i guess so Queen Beebs 20:24, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading just a little bit. This is lovely. Coffeeshops 21:43, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

re-up thank Queen Beebs 20:56, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

do you think you could look the patches look more like tortiseshell? she looks kinda like a brown patched tabby rn. david 🌈 10:15, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

re-up she's a chocolate tortie just so u know Queen Beebs 10:21, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Could you add a few more tortie splotches and mottles onto the two big patches on her back? Jayie Unwritten words~ 18:49, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

re-up idk man Queen Beebs 02:34, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? User:Burntclaw/Sig 09:02, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Approved. Queen Beebs 11:28, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Frecklewish (Alt. W2) - Approved[]

Frecklewish (TC).warrior.alt2 ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 04:03, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the main body - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 09:40, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 01:06, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the shading on the front paw farthest from us?~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 05:13, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 05:37, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

Coul you recede some of the shading on her upper leg and shouler? Jayie Unwritten words~ 18:53, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 20:03, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

This is gorgeous, Scarlet. CBA? User:Burntclaw/Sig 09:03, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Approved. Queen Beebs 11:28, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Slash (Alt Ro) - Approved[]

Slash.rogue.alt I took the gray as a partial of gray tabby (and gave him everything else he was cited for since it is part of his description) since I think we operate like that with normal descriptions...idk about you, but writing tabby all the time would get tedious and redundant. Jayce(07:03, 4/8/2015)

Re-uploaded. David suggesting erasing the whiskers since he's clearly mentioned with only half of them and I would think that's kinda important to his description. Jayce(07:07, 4/8/2015)

Does he have white stripes on his front legs? Otherwise, could you define the shading on the front leg farthest from us? This is beautiful..I swear how the hell do you always make them look so perfect. o3o~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 09:03, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. They should be slashes, not stripes. I made them wrap around, kinda like how a ribbon would work, since there's not much to work with in terms of leg space. My OC is a silver tabby, so I have a lot of time to make gray/silver tabbies and it's some of my favorite things to make, besides black-and-white cats Jayce(09:11, 4/8/2015)

define the shading a bit? this is gorgeous giaria time on my side 11:37 Wed Apr 8

Re-uploaded. Thank youuu. Jayce(11:48, 4/8/2015)

Smudge the stripes a tad more? Lovely job, he's simply striking. =)  Frosty ☾Supernatural 18:36, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

Um, they're not smudged at all, actually... that's just how I used the paintbrush tool. o3o Jayce(18:53, 4/9/2015)

Add more shading on the belly and hip? They look a little flat. Jayie Unwritten words~ 18:55, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I just tweaked it in various places tbh. Jayce(02:04, 4/11/2015)

Love the stripes. CBA, anyone? User:Burntclaw/Sig 09:04, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Approved. Queen Beebs 11:28, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Honeykit (TAQ) (K) - Approved[]

Honeyfur.kit p much a diluted brightheart — Fez   talk  13:06, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Looks beautiful and adorable! User: Dewdrops/ talk 6:33, April, 10, 2015

Dewdrop, please do not spam an image with non-critique comments. Compliments are nice, but they are considered as spam. For the image, define the ear pink just a little. User:Burntclaw/Sig 14:05, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Fez   talk  14:29, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Erase a little of the shading on the chest, the light should be hitting there. Jayie Unwritten words~ 19:05, April 10, 2015 (UTC)


Re-uploaded. Fez   talk  20:07, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

I absolutely love this. CBA? Sorrel It's everything I dreamed

The left ear looks too yellow. Define it to pink, please?[[ User: Dewdrops56/talk] 7:04, April,m11, 2015

That would be the earfur. I believe it looks fine as-is. — Fez   talk  14:11, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

It's fine. Continuing CBA. User:Burntclaw/Sig 14:25, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Approved User:Burntclaw/Sig 14:04, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Star Flower (L) - Approved[]

Star Flower.loner Why the hell did she hang out with Clear Pain in the first place - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 08:37, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Thin out the stripes just a tiny bit by a pixel or two where they're thicker. There are a couple that look to be maybe six or so pixels long, when they look slightly shorter in width on the rogue. Also, unsmudge the tail stripes a bit as well- they're not as smudged on her rogue image. That's what I'm basing all my comments off of since it's a clear side-view. And she hung out because they're both trash imho. Jayce(08:44, 4/8/2015)

Re-uploaded *prays to Erins that her kits won't be trash too* - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 08:55, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Why do people hate them so much? >.> I love them both ;_; especially Clear Sky. Anyways, beautiful^^ I think her rogue image's stripes are less broken, and are less smudged/lighter texture. ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 () 09:42, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

I think it's fine, I have the rogue file that Beebs sent to me and I matched it - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 09:44, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

What's the point of asking for comments if users are going to reject them as often as they do? Yes, I'm going there, because this is totally unnecessary. Bramblesnow is correct, honestly. I'm looking right at her rogue image and they are smudged slightly less than this. Jayce(09:55, 4/8/2015)

Re-uploaded Sorry about that ;.; is this better? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 10:55, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

I have a slight concern. If it's a side view, and Star Flower has a stripe along her back, wouldn't it show less than that big stripe you have? Maybe thin it out a little bit, as well as the base of the tail towards her back leg. StormSongz (talk) 15:12, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Am I the only that's happy for Clear Sky, that he has a new mate? Looks great. See if you Should consider blurring it....?User:Dewdrops56/Dewdrops56 8:21, April, 8, 2015

The stripes are smudged, not blurred. I'll try to smudge them more when I've got the computer, but not much, otherwise it would be just contradicting to what Cloudy said, and someone will tell me to unsmudge it again. Also, as for the stripe, the loner is facing a different side. But actually, I might redo these stripes since I seem to have trouble tweaking them right. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 23:22, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I am not smudging them more now. That will contradict to what Skye said, someone will tell me to unsmudge it again because that's how it looks on the rogue - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 02:56, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

I think it looks good now :3 User:StormSongz/Sig 13:54, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

Strenthen the shading on the belly and throat, they're leaking away from the side edges of the legs and muzzle, if that makes sense. Jayie Unwritten words~ 18:57, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Can you try lightening her white fur? I know it's the shading, but it is described as pure white, and a bit of highlight lighting wouldn't hurt. Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 23:50, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the back and/or head a little bit? Unless told otherwise (I'm sleepy and on my tablet). You did gorgeous on this. :) ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪

Re-uploaded There isn't back shading Blitz, but thanks :) - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 06:04, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? User:Burntclaw/Sig 09:04, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry, but the dorsal stripe on the rogue's tail is thinner than the one you have on the loner's tail- can you thin it out by a few pixels? Jayce(13:50, 4/11/2015)

Re-uploaded - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 14:11, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Re- CBA? User:Burntclaw/Sig 14:15, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Approved User:Burntclaw/Sig 14:18, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Ravenwing (MCA) ~ Approved[]

Ravenwing.mca Changes Yeah... I can't shade on black cats or apprentice/mca blanks. I will probably redo this painfully bad shading on my next upload. Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 16:06, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

There is waste on the leaves. ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 17:52, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

Reups redid the shading, and I got rid of the waste. Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 22:39, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

More shading just under the bend of that front leg? Jayie Unwritten words~ 19:02, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

I don't know the exact place you want me to put more shading - I've looked, but I don't see a place that needs more shading added. Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 22:06, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the shading a bt more on the gind lets and up to the tail? Great job! ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 02:03, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Darken the base a few ticks, not too much, just a little bit. User:Burntclaw/Sig 10:39, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Reups Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 13:42, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? User:Burntclaw/Sig 14:28, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Approved User:Burntclaw/Sig 14:19, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

Ambermoon (W) ~ Approved[]

Ambermoon.warrior I'll redo the shading if it's really as crappy as I think it is. I'll probably also smudge the stripes a bit more if needed.~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 () 14:27, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

Sweet! Smooth out the shading a bit. Oh and maybe blur the stripes? ~Sunstream ☽☾ *Ruler of Darkness* 17:06, April 1, 2015 (UTC)

I'll smude the stripes instead, and I'll redo the painful shading. ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 () 01:38, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

The shading looks fine, but you should smudge it in the direction of the fur. giaria time on my side 11:37 Thu Apr 2

I agree with Sunstream, please smooth out the shading. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 12:01, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

There is waste in the triangle hole :3❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 20:06, April 2, 2015 (UTC)

Ouch! Painful mistake now that I've been doing chararts so often and I still forget to remove the triangle XP I do have a problem though, I'm in Zhuhai so my computer doesn't have gimp. I'll download it and redo the entire thing. ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 () 03:18, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 () 05:36, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading more User:Burntclaw/Sig 06:19, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Still working, Bramble? User:Burntclaw/Sig 08:32, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

re-upsYep... sorry for the delay just got back from my vacation trip, and don't even talk about my computer's crappiness.~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 () 09:45, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit and define the light on the paws- I'm having a rough time telling the pale parts from the main pelt. Jayce(10:00, 4/8/2015)

this?~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 () 10:21, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Why are there two of them? >.>~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 () 10:23, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

All you really have to do is edit the section and say reuploaded, tbh. You don't have to add another image in or anything of the sort- the section automatically updates with the new version once you upload it to the file... idk why it aligns it or adds a second one. Jayce(10:29, 4/8/2015)

I think it looks lovely :) StormSongz (talk) 15:17, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Thank you so much:))) but tbh if anyone mentions for the shading to be lightened, I'll totally agree with that~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 () 16:21, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Hm blur the edges of the shading a bit. Looking lovely. =)  Frosty ☾Supernatural 18:32, April 9, 2015 (UTC)

can't blur it more also lightened it^^~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 () 03:26, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe erase a little of the shading on that back ear on the left edge, to show a little light shining on it? Also, a little more shading along the the right edge of her cheek fur. Jayie Unwritten words~ 18:31, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 () 12:41, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? Lovely Charart makes up her lovely name User:Burntclaw/Sig 13:46, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

It has been 24 hours... I literally counted :P ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 () 13:49, April 13, 2015 (UTC)

Aproved User:Burntclaw/Sig 14:00, April 13, 2015 (UTC)

Lilyheart (Q) ~ Approved[]

Lilyheart.queen Not happy with these stripes :/ Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 03:06, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the facial shading. User:Burntclaw/Sig 03:14, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

I don't know but she seems a little lighter than her other images? It could be the use of highlights though. Also, I think the stripes are thicker and less dense on her other images. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 03:45, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

If you can see here- http://warriors.wikia.com/wiki/File:Lilyheart.warrior.png - she has some gold highlights on her face and sides. Can you add those in? ~Sunstream ☽☾ *Ruler of Darkness* 13:51, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

Reups They were already in, under the darker stripes, so I can't add them. I used the warrior image for reference, sooo... sorry :/ And my images always seem to look lighter, it's just the highlights. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 16:50, April 3, 2015 (UTC)

the belly looks pretty grey, lighten the shading up a tad? she's pretty giaria time on my side 20:51 Fri Apr 3

reuploaded Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 23:13, April 4, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading User:Burntclaw/Sig 05:40, April 5, 2015 (UTC)

The shading that is between the back and the belly gives the stomach a lumpy look. Could you remove it please? I'm so sorry you can totally ignore me if you want ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot23:21 Sun Apr 5

Still working, Shinx? Four days is good enough of a time to ask and I know you appreciate reminders. Jayce(08:39, 4/8/2015)

yeeeep, I was sick for a couple days and didn't really get on the computer, sorry. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 08:54, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

I think all her apprentice and her warrior need to be tweaked, as she has white patches, it's shown on her kit but not on the others. Having a white underbelly + chest doesn't really indicate patches. Could you add them, please? User:Burntclaw/Sig 09:32, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Nominate it first, please. Then you can ask Shinx to add the patches. Jayce(10:03, 4/8/2015)

Nomination is upUser:Burntclaw/Sig 10:54, April 8, 2015 (UTC)

Needs to be dark brown, as she was specified to be that color. And add the gold highlights that were mentioned before, please. User: Dewdrop56/ talk 7:43, April, 10, 2015

Add more shading to the very edge of her tail, along the left side right next to the lineart, and pull back the shading off the white part just a little, if that makes sense. Jayie Unwritten words~ 18:32, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

She is dark brown, exactly the same shade as her other images. I colorpicked from them. She only looks lighter because I add highlights to my images. And Jayie, you kind of make sense?? I get what you mean for me to do, but where exactly on the tail do you mean? Sorry, I can't figure out where exactly you meant by "The very edge of her tail, along the left side right next to the lineart". Do you mean the tip of the tail, next to the lineart, or...? Sorry >< Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 22:25, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Set's being tweaked for white patches Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 22:47, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 04:22, April 13, 2015 (UTC)

Approved. Jayie Unwritten words~ 12:01, April 14, 2015 (UTC)

Jay Frost (Ancient) - Approved[]

Jay Frost.ancient This is the culmination of all the good things in this world. :D Also, I accidently misnamed this file, could someone rename it for me? Sorry about that. Jayie Unwritten words~ 19:07, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

I named it Jay Frost.ancient (2).png by accident. Jayie Unwritten words~ 19:08, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

Define earpink? Lovely! ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 22:52, April 10, 2015 (UTC)

And define the shading everywhere. Its so beautiful x3 ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 02:01, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

I think you should cite the fact that she's an adult on the page first - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 09:52, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

It's a he! Anyways, this is soooooo gorgeous... ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 () 10:08, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

What are those pink marks, along the back and the hind leg? Are they scars? How on earth do you even do this stuff? This is incredible... Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 13:47, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

You never cease to amaze me with your beautiful chararts, Jayie. Do you mind smudging the scars just a tad?~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 15:31, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Tweaked the shading, darkened it and tried a different hue, I think this looks better, tweaked the texture, much happier with it, defined the ear pink (it's a color that works well on large images but is really hard to see on chararts, so I did my best to define it with the shading), yes the pink are scars, I don't think smudging them would help, it would just make them look all wavy and blurred like fur markings, and thanks. :D Jayie Unwritten words~ 20:06, April 11, 2015 (UTC)

Tweaked the saturation on the texture, it was making Jay Frost look a little more gray than he's supposed to be. Jayie Unwritten words~ 01:00, April 12, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 04:19, April 13, 2015 (UTC)

Approved. Jayie Unwritten words~ 12:03, April 14, 2015 (UTC)

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