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Fernsong (A) - Approved

Fernsong.apprentice Took the colors from the file. Gonna redo that tail shading, though, when I'm less tired. Probably. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 21:32, May 2, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading and the facial shading ~ Fox * 愛してるばんざーい!* 06:13, May 3, 2015 (UTC)

Define the earpink. I can't see it that much. He looks gorgeous, Shinx! ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 16:24, May 3, 2015 (UTC)

reups Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 22:18, May 4, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the upper body. The Stylish Ravenpelt I'm too hot! (Hot damn!) 17:16, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

...do you mean his back or his chest area? Chest/neck area, right? Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 21:51, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

I think they mean in between the leg and the belly area, because it looks kind of sharp there. User:StormSongz/Sig 21:52, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

Define the earpink in ===> that ear. It looks like the pelt is inside that ear and I can't hardly see any pink. User:StormSongz/Sig 14:12, May 6, 2015 (UTC)

Define the earpink in the other ear too (so basically define the earpink in both ears :P). I can't see any pink in either ear. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 05:40, May 10, 2015 (UTC)

reups Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 20:19, May 10, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the shading please? Its kinda hard to see. Also, this is a beautiful image; I absoluetly love the colors. :) ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot21:13 Mon May 11

reeeups Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 16:11, May 12, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? you people must tell me your charart secrets Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 22:18, May 13, 2015 (UTC)

Approved. Jayce team rowlet < 03:51, 5/15/2015 >

Alderpaw (K) - Approved

File:Alderpaw.kit.png I tried to match the apprentice, but I don't think I was particularly successful – Ivy 20:41, May 4, 2015 (UTC)

Define the earpink? He looks adorable! ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 21:13, May 4, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Thanks! Hopefully you can see the earpink better now. I hate earpink. – Ivy 22:54, May 4, 2015 (UTC)

Define your light source ~ Fox * 愛してるばんざーい!* 08:20, May 7, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped – Ivy 20:44, May 7, 2015 (UTC)

Comments? – Ivy 00:50, May 11, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe define the front legs shading. Silver The Endless River✼ ~ 11:16, May 11, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped – Ivy 20:27, May 11, 2015 (UTC)

I still can't see your light source ~ Fox * 愛してるばんざーい!* 10:19, May 12, 2015 (UTC)

Uh I can see it just fine User:StormSongz/Sig 13:22, May 12, 2015 (UTC)

Light source is fine, could you define the light on the legs just a touch more and define the ear-pink just a bit more? He's cute! ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 02:09, May 13, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped – Ivy 20:52, May 13, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry for the lack of comments, CBA? User:Burntclaw/Sig 13:39, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

Approved. Jayce team rowlet < 21:35, 5/18/2015 >

Redstar (Alt Star) - Approved

Redstar.star.alt Did anyone miss our great leader? ~ Fox * 愛してるばんざーい!* 01:51, May 10, 2015 (UTC)

Our great leader has a cloud looking blob near his ear aka waste User:Burntclaw/Sig 01:56, May 10, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded thank you for that (; ~ Fox * 愛してるばんざーい!* 01:59, May 10, 2015 (UTC)

Define the earpink more. The shading looks kinda funky on the chest, but I think that's just me. The Stylish Ravenpelt I'm too hot! (Hot damn!) 15:24, May 11, 2015 (UTC)

I can see the earpink just fine. Maybe reduce the tuft-age though User:StormSongz/Sig 15:44, May 11, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Didn't get what you meant but I blurred the shading a bit ~ Fox * 愛してるばんざーい!* 04:32, May 12, 2015 (UTC)

I meant get rid of some of the fur in his ear. He's short furred so he wouldn't have that much tuft age in his ear User:StormSongz/Sig 13:31, May 12, 2015 (UTC)

Could you please clarify that? I don't get what you mean by the tuft. ~ Fox * 愛してるばんざーい!* 13:57, May 12, 2015 (UTC)

tuft noun 1. a bunch or collection of something, typically threads, grass, or hair, held or growing together at the base.

The tuft in his ear. Shouldn't be that big, because he's short-furred. User:StormSongz/Sig 14:22, May 12, 2015 (UTC)

Dude there isn't any tuff what are you talking about User:Burntclaw/Sig 00:41, May 13, 2015 (UTC)

Ive made StarClanners with the same "tuft" you are talking about, and no ones had a problem with it. Unless you can explain, Ive gotta disagree with you for this time. ~ Fox * 愛してるばんざーい!* 01:51, May 13, 2015 (UTC)

it's ear fur......stop being so picky.. david ✌️ 08:23, May 13, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the facial shading, please. Jayce team rowlet < 08:43, 5/13/2015 >

Re-uploaded ~ Fox * 愛してるばんざーい!* 08:51, May 13, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? Been four days.Our leader has waited for 5 months User:Burntclaw/Sig 13:42, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

Approved. Jayce team rowlet < 21:35, 5/18/2015 >

Owlnose (Ki) - Approved

Owlnose.kit This took ages. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot19:19 Sun May 10

Like can you make that even cuter? >.> Smooth out the right leg shading? Silver The Endless River✼ ~ 00:59, May 11, 2015 (UTC)

Our right or his right? ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot1:56 Mon May 11

Our right, his left^^ Silver The Endless River✼ ~ 12:47, May 11, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a few ticks, just enough to see the stripes through it User:StormSongz/Sig 15:46, May 11, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot21:23 Mon May 11

Comments? ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot20:42 Fri May 15

Ok, a Comment: Can you define the light on his tail a teeny tiny bit? -☽Sunstream ✼ Quarter Quell Time!☾ 23:24, May 15, 2015 (UTC)

I can see it just fine ~ Stormsong Let it storm♫ 02:53, May 16, 2015 (UTC)

Agreed. Sorry Sun. CBA? User:Burntclaw/Sig 13:43, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

Approved. Jayce team rowlet < 21:35, 5/18/2015 >

Storm (Ro) (Alt Star) - Approved

Storm (Ro).star.alt changes probably aren't showing so have this screenshot. Jayce team rowlet < 09:28, 5/13/2015 >

There's waste next to the ear. And while you are at it, brighten up the ear pink just the slightest. I'm fine with it if you'd rather not to, because I understand how dull the ear pink can be on dark gray cats. ~ Fox * 愛してるばんざーい!* 10:10, May 13, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Changes. Jayce team rowlet < 10:36, 5/13/2015 >

Lighten the shading some. Maybe like two or three bits. ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 15:00, May 13, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Jayce team rowlet < 23:19, 5/13/2015 >

CBA? User:Burntclaw/Sig 13:45, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

Approved. Jayce team rowlet < 21:35, 5/18/2015 >

Seedpelt (W) ~ Approved

File:Seedpelt.warrior.png I copy pasted the deputy into new lineart, with the tail being the obvious exception david ✌️ 19:35, May 12, 2015 (UTC)

oohh very purtty, Skt! Define the shading on the chest/under the chin just a touch more and define the light on the tail ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 02:06, May 13, 2015 (UTC)

Still working? User:Burntclaw/Sig 13:43, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

re-uploaded. yes, I've been busy. david ✌️ 15:45, May 18, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? If all but the lineart is from the deputy, then i think this is ready to go.~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 00:44, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

Approved. Jayce team rowlet < 00:47, 5/21/2015 >

Oatclaw (W) - Approved

Oatclaw.warrior Oatmealclaw. All I can say is I tried. Sorry Jayie I'm afraid I ruined your character :o Silver The Endless River✼ ~ 15:17, May 14, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on each leg ~ Stormsong Let it storm♫ 15:51, May 14, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups Silver The Endless River✼ ~ 10:37, May 15, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten his base pelt just a teeny tiny bit- the apprentice looks slightly lighter. Or, alternatively, I'm sure Jayie would gladly give you the colors should you think you need them. I think it matches just fine. Jayce team rowlet < 10:40, 5/15/2015 >

re-ups I kinda think she added the highlights? I actually tried it out but it sucked even more than thise :P I brightened the base color slightly though Silver The Endless River✼ ~ 11:01, May 15, 2015 (UTC)

Darken the stripes a bit, and possibly add a few more? Also, I have the files for several of Jayie's images, and none of them use highlights. Presumably the same holds true for Oatclaw. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 16:21, May 15, 2015 (UTC)

Shinx is right, I never use highlights, only shading. This looks really good. :) I'd be happy to send you the files, if you can give me an email to send them to. Jayie Unwritten words~ 04:17, May 16, 2015 (UTC)

Phew, I decided not to add highlights because it looked not right, and I was correct :) bramble.snow@gmail.com is my email Silver The Endless River✼ ~ 10:17, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups Silver The Endless River✼ ~ 13:29, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? Jayce team rowlet < 18:40, 5/19/2015 >

Approved. Jayce team rowlet < 00:47, 5/21/2015 >

Ivypool (Alt. W) - Approved

Ivypool.warrior.alt2 - She was called "silvery-white", which describes a base color ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 00:59, May 15, 2015 (UTC)

Beautiful. Just beautiful. Can you blur the shading more? -☽Sunstream ✼ Quarter Quell Time!☾ 01:23, May 15, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 03:39, May 15, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the light/shading on the tail? ~Snow~ 06:45, May 15, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs ~ Fox * 愛してるばんざーい!* 08:10, May 15, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 01:36, May 16, 2015 (UTC)

Add more light to the back legs and define the shading depth. User:Burntclaw/Sig 13:44, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 20:48, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? Jayce team rowlet < 18:40, 5/19/2015 >

Approved. Jayce team rowlet < 00:47, 5/21/2015 >

Birchkit (TAQ) (Kit) - Approved

File:Birchkit (TAQ).kit.png This is beige, right? A sort of light brown-cream? I'm pretty happy with how this turned out. Thoughts? Jayie Unwritten words~ 03:12, May 15, 2015 (UTC)

-kneels onto the ground- Teach me your mystic ways of Character Art, Master! Ok, but to be serious I'd reccomend darkening and defining the shading overall, it's barely there. Other then that it looks great, I love the markings! The Stylish Ravenpelt I'm too hot! (Hot damn!) 13:46, May 15, 2015 (UTC)

Beige is a khaki-like color, so yes, it looks about the right shade. Can you define the ear pink? I'm having trouble seeing it. Jayce team rowlet < 14:15, 5/15/2015 >

Reuploaded. Aw, thanks. :D I darkened the shading, and made the ear pink darker and more saturated. Does it stand out better now? Jayie Unwritten words~ 04:14, May 16, 2015 (UTC)

I see nothing else wrong here, so lets try a CBA. Wonderful job Jayie. =)~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 00:44, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

Approved. Jayce team rowlet < 00:47, 5/21/2015 >

Curlfeather (K) ~ Approved

Curlfeather.kit My first character art, I'm so nervous even though there's nothing to be nevervous about! I might redo the brindling on the face (or whatever you'd call that) I'm not sure if I like it. The Stylish Ravenpelt I'm too hot! (Hot damn!) 13:59, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

You must reserve this on the main page of PCA. I'll do it for you this time. Define the shading on the legs and the tail, this looks good. ~ Fox * 愛してるばんざーい!* 00:16, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

My apologies, thank you for letting me know and adding me to the list. The Stylish Ravenpelt I'm too hot! (Hot damn!) 13:59, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

This should be 'For Evaluation' since you're new. You're not on the project member list, only the table. Are you sure you asked to join beforehand? If not, then you're not allowed to make charart. (I did look first) User:StormSongz/Sig 02:30, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

Anyone can make images, regardless of project membership. That is not required. If they're on the table, then they can make whatever their heart wants, regardless of whether or not they're in the project "member list". As long as it's reserved on the table, then they're fine. .-. Jayce team rowlet < 02:39, 5/5/2015 >

Define the shading overall, not just on the legs and tail. Amazing job for your first that texture is much better than my first attempt. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 12:32, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

If I'm correct, the rules say you don't have to be a part of the project to submit art like Snow said. I just put in a request to join regardless, so no worries! P.S. I'll fix and reup it once I'm on my main computer. The Stylish Ravenpelt I'm too hot! (Hot damn!) 13:59, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

Please darken the shading. And sorry about that earlier User:StormSongz/Sig 21:39, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded The Stylish Ravenpelt I'm too hot! (Hot damn!) 22:39, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on her head just a bit? It might just be my monitor... Looks good! Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣• 23:37, May 5, 2015 (UTC)

Try to mach File:Curlfeather.warrior.png. I can ask Darkfire to send you the xcf. if you want. ~Sunstream ☽☾ *Ruler of Darkness* 00:49, May 6, 2015 (UTC)

I did use it as a reference, but I'll try and edit it so it looks closer to it. I use SAI for my drawings, so the GIMP file wouldn't really work. The Stylish Ravenpelt I'm too hot! (Hot damn!) 01:11, May 6, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded The Stylish Ravenpelt I'm too hot! (Hot damn!) 01:21, May 6, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the back paw ~ Fox * 愛してるばんざーい!* 08:00, May 6, 2015 (UTC)

Honestly, I love this shading. Could you define the shading on ---> leg? ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 08:31, May 6, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded The Stylish Ravenpelt I'm too hot! (Hot damn!) 20:50, May 6, 2015 (UTC)

Soften and expand the shading on the legs ~ Fox * 愛してるばんざーい!* 04:49, May 7, 2015 (UTC)

Define the facial shading User:StormSongz/Sig 14:51, May 7, 2015 (UTC)

Also add some shading on the bottom back <==== this side of her tail User:StormSongz/Sig 20:19, May 9, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded The Stylish Ravenpelt I'm too hot! (Hot damn!) 20:41, May 11, 2015 (UTC)

Add some shading where the back paw meets the body ( on >>> this side of the image in the corner) and define it there, seen as with your light source, there should be a shdow there (not much, but a shadow nontheless). Also, blur the shading at the base of the tail. I love this image. :) ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot21:16 Mon May 11

Reuploaded The Stylish Ravenpelt I'm too hot! (Hot damn!) 19:51, May 13, 2015 (UTC)

Can you dull down your highlights a bit? The warrior image is not that bright. ~ Stormsong Let it storm♫ 15:48, May 14, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded The Stylish Ravenpelt I'm too hot! (Hot damn!) 19:45, May 14, 2015 (UTC)

I know there is probably just light on her, but can you darken up this cutie a tad? -☽Sunstream ✼ Quarter Quell Time!☾ 23:16, May 15, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the forelegs. – Ivy 20:16, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

Still working? Jayce team rowlet < 22:27, 5/18/2015 >

Reuploaded The Stylish Ravenpelt I'm too hot! (Hot damn!) 00:41, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the edges of the shading. Its getting really dark Very nice! bramble//may –––love paint every afternoon 19:02, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded The Stylish Ravenpelt I'm too hot! (Hot damn!) 19:04, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

Aw man, I know you were just told to define the shading on the forelegs, but I think you can get away with lightening the shading in that area to almost match the rest of the darker shading. Atelda insert vague subtext here 01:44, May 20, 2015 (UTC)

Nah, it was actually a mistake. I lightened up all the other layers of shading but it seems I didn't lighten up that layer, so thanks for pointing that out! The Stylish Ravenpelt I'm too hot! (Hot damn!) 13:29, May 20, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded The Stylish Ravenpelt I'm too hot! (Hot damn!) 18:57, May 20, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? User:Burntclaw/Sig 07:08, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

Approved Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 14:57, May 24, 2015 (UTC)

Rippletail (SC) (K) - Approved

Rippletail (SC).kit I dont know if I named this file correctly.... These blanks are so tiny But the shading looks like crap. ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?!

Define the shading on the face and around the front legs. The Stylish Ravenpelt I'm too hot! (Hot damn!) 21:37, May 6, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the shading as well – Ivy 22:59, May 6, 2015 (UTC)

Define your light source ~ Fox * 愛してるばんざーい!* 23:31, May 6, 2015 (UTC)

Nope, it wasn't named right, so I'll go ahead and fix that for you. ^.^ Jayce team rowlet < 23:39, 5/6/2015 >

Define the light on the tail User:StormSongz/Sig 14:53, May 7, 2015 (UTC)

re-up woot woot ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 20:50, May 7, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the back paw User:StormSongz/Sig 20:52, May 7, 2015 (UTC)

Blue the shading ~ Fox * 愛してるばんざーい!* 09:40, May 8, 2015 (UTC)

You mean blur, right? Also, maybe lighten it a few ticks? ~Snow~ 22:25, May 8, 2015 (UTC)

If I lighten it, its gonna look like there isn't any shading. So Im .. not going to do that :/ ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 22:04, May 10, 2015 (UTC)

Actually, all you need to do it lighten it jussst a tiny bit, by 2 or 3 pixels on the opacity bar and you should be okay. Also, blur the shading on the head. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot21:19 Mon May 11

I'm sorry, but I have to decline this. It's been over a week without uploads. Jayce team rowlet < 06:50, 5/15/2015 >

I'll take over. Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 15:43, May 15, 2015 (UTC)

Reups changes be here. I like this. Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 12:02, May 16, 2015 (UTC)

Can you lighten up the shading just a couple ticks? Not too much. Jayce team rowlet < 08:38, 5/19/2015 >

Reups Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 17:21, May 20, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? Jayce team rowlet < 01:15, 5/23/2015 > Approved Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 14:57, May 24, 2015 (UTC)

Birch (Ro) - Approved

Birch.rogue ah yes only i can ever 100% match my patterns correctly Queen Beebs 22:26, May 11, 2015 (UTC)

Nice, please unsmudge the stripes in the middle of his side? Like you can see two lines there. If you get what I mean... If not I can circle them Silver The Endless River✼ ~ 07:24, May 12, 2015 (UTC)

the stripes on his kit were smudged similarly so i'll let this slide o3o Queen Beebs 09:56, May 12, 2015 (UTC)

These two lines only I meant. =) Silver The Endless River✼ ~ 10:13, May 12, 2015 (UTC)

can you shade the nose or something? it looks odd being so bright with the shading as it is. 19:43, May 12, 2015 (UTC)

i've tried throwing the nose under the shading layer but i'd be told to make it more visible because it'd look thesame as the pale markings under there, therefore i think it's okay, but i'll re-up w/ the stripes Queen Beebs 18:48, May 13, 2015 (UTC)

re-up Queen Beebs 19:29, May 13, 2015 (UTC)

You don't have to put it under that shading layer. Just make a new one that only shades the nose. Jayce team rowlet < 06:48, 5/15/2015 >

re-up Queen Beebs 14:15, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

I still see those two smudge lines in the middle of his side- did you not get those when Bramblesnow pointed them out? They really stand out and it kinda bugs me. Jayce team rowlet < 02:37, 5/18/2015 >

re-up Queen Beebs 10:17, May 18, 2015 (UTC)

The two lines are gone, but I see some other lines 0.0 might just be me. Silver The Endless River✼ ~ 10:18, May 20, 2015 (UTC)

His stripes /are/ smudged on the kit, so keep that in mind. Queen Beebs 23:08, May 20, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? Jayce team rowlet < 01:13, 5/23/2015 > Approved Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 14:57, May 24, 2015 (UTC)

Flowerpaw (A) ~ Approved

File:Flowerpaw.apprentice.png I suppose I can post this now. She was so fun to do! ~ Stormsong Let it storm♫ 15:03, May 13, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading? She's as pretty as her name suggests! Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 22:14, May 13, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the most visible hind paw's shading? Tiger Sunny days 22:26, May 13, 2015 (UTC)

Reups ~ Stormsong Let it storm♫ 01:06, May 14, 2015 (UTC)

Define the depth of the shading- it appears flat. Jayce team rowlet < 07:35, 5/15/2015 >

Reups ~ Stormsong Let it storm♫ 16:42, May 15, 2015 (UTC)

Switch the shading on the tail to the other side of it, to match the rest of your light source. Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 02:27, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

Reups ~ Stormsong Let it storm♫ 02:34, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading, as I can't see it. Jayce team rowlet < 18:41, 5/19/2015 >

I'd like a second opinion on that as I can see it just fine. Storm 21:33, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

Yes I agree with Cloudy, please either add depth or maybe tinting it would help. ~ Fox * 愛してるばんざーい!* 23:16, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

Reups Cannot define it anymore or else whole tail will be shadow. Storm 01:53, May 20, 2015 (UTC)

Comments? Storm 03:14, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? User:Burntclaw/Sig 03:15, May 23, 2015 (UTC) Approved Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 14:57, May 24, 2015 (UTC)

Sparrow Fur (Alt. Ro) - Approved

Sparrow Fur.rogue.altShe was called brown in AFD, so here's the little beauty :3 (there's slightly darker fur on her head, back, legs and tail, not misplaced shading ^.^; I can remove it if I need to) Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣• 02:42, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

OMFG I cannot do this O.O If you can, maybe you should define the tail shading. ~ Fox * 愛してるばんざーい!* 04:46, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

I agree with Foxy!!! you all know how terrible I am with texture x.x Define light on /her/ right front leg, beautiful!^^ Silver The Endless River✼ ~ 11:56, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

There's some waste at the top of the image above her tail. Also expand the shading on the tail as it appears cut off to me. Looking wonderful sunjaw! Storm 03:32, May 20, 2015 (UTC)

reupped Thanks all ^.^ I ended up redoing the tail shading and defined the highlights a little bit so hopefully that helps Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣• 12:18, May 20, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? User:Burntclaw/Sig 12:22, May 23, 2015 (UTC) Approved Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 14:57, May 24, 2015 (UTC)

Brackenpelt (Ki) ~ Approved

Brackenpelt.kit ~ Fox * 愛してるばんざーい!* 04:44, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

Oh how lovely 0.0 Smooth out earpink, tail shading and the shading on her side? This is sooo cute XDDD Silver The Endless River✼ ~ 11:58, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ~ Fox * 愛してるばんざーい!* 12:34, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

want the xcf for this? Queen Beebs 18:27, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Redone to match 100% ~ Fox * 愛してるばんざーい!* 08:32, May 20, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? Been three days. User:Burntclaw/Sig 12:19, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

Approved Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 14:57, May 24, 2015 (UTC)

Owl Eyes (Ro) - Approved

Owl Eyes.rogue Yay, it's my birthday! :D I honestly think he could be darkened if he is dark grey. User:Burntclaw/Sig 07:59, May 15, 2015 (UTC)

Happy birthday, Burnt!! =) This is a lovely image. Could you smooth out the shading just a tiny bit, though? Jayce team rowlet < 08:11, 5/15/2015 >

Re-upped thank you =P User:Burntclaw/Sig 08:20, May 15, 2015 (UTC)

Happy birthday! Hope you have a great day. Anyway, smudge/blur the tail shading a tiny bit, and possibly define the eye depth? Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 15:12, May 15, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Thanks :) User:Burntclaw/Sig 04:23, May 16, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe darken the eyes more orange- Amber like the kit? User: Dewdrops56/talk 14:00, May, 19, 2015

The eyes seem to me to be the same color as the kit's, so I think it's fine. – Ivy 20:11, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

Agreed with Icebreeze. Silver The Endless River✼ ~ 09:06, May 20, 2015 (UTC)

Comments? User:Burntclaw/Sig 03:03, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a bit more- I can see the smudge marks on my phone. It's kinda hard to smudge on solid cats, since you can't get sloppier, like you can on tabbies. (or so said Shelly a very long time ago) Jayce team rowlet < 07:10, 5/23/2015 >

Re-upped I'd really not rather smudge them anymore, if that's okay. The whole point of smudged shading on solid cats is that the smudge marks are there, to create a furry affect. User:Burntclaw/Sig 08:08, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

I'm sorry, that came out so wrong. I have no filter- I should really invest in one. I didn't actually mean your shading was sloppy or anything, I was quoting an old senior warrior and former staffer. Smudged shading is just harder for people like me on solid cats, so I kinda thought it was the same for others. It was also on my phone, and as I'm sure everyone with an apple iPod or iPhone product can agree with, it makes everything look ten times worse than it actually is, my apologies. I know what the smudged shading is there for, but I'm used to being told to smooth it out more, due to me apparently having splotchy shading. Jayce team rowlet < 12:25, 5/23/2015 >

Re-uploaded I fixed a couple of things I didn't like, smoothed it out just a little bit and defined the shape. btw I didn't really find that rude, I knew what you really meant about the sloppiness so yeah there was really no need to apologize :D User:Burntclaw/Sig 12:49, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

A stripe/block of shading seems to be on his "arm" :P I like this! >< Silver The Endless River✼ ~ 07:37, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uppedGet approved you Owl ugh User:Burntclaw/Sig 08:04, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Okay, let's try and CBA the Owl, shall we? Jayce team rowlet < 11:22, 5/25/2015 >

The Owl is approved. User:Burntclaw/Sig 11:45, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

Curlfeather (W) - Approved

Curlfeather.warrior I tried??? I also color-picked from the kit. Jayce team rowlet < 01:19, 5/19/2015 >

I love this Snowy! Define the shading on the tail and the back leg closest to us? Storm 01:22, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

May just be my screen but this looks slightly lighter than the kit, perhaps it's just the shading or something, so if you think it's all right, disregard me. Back leg shading looks fine though. Pretty! – Ivy 01:29, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

You know I think it is just the shading. Just ignore my above comment. – Ivy 01:32, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

It's just the shading- the kit's is darker, and mine is tinted a brown-ish color. Anyways, re-uploaded. Jayce team rowlet < 01:35, 5/19/2015 >

Holy crap the texture is so good >.> Define shading overall, love this^^ Silver The Endless River✼ ~ 11:55, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

Don't worry about the kit being darker, the original warrior was darker so I darkened the kit to match, but I'm going to lighten it back up to match this one because I don't like the dark color. (And I can do that now that the original warrior was declined) The Stylish Ravenpelt I'm too hot! (Hot damn!) 13:51, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

Raven you're not allowed to tweak images even if its yours. Only warriors are allowed to. Storm 14:14, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

The image hasn't been approved yet, so I can still make changes to it. -looks up- The Stylish Ravenpelt I'm too hot! (Hot damn!) 15:14, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

My bad, thought it was approved already. As for the image Snowy, maybe darken the shading a bit? Storm 15:16, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Jayce team rowlet < 18:35, 5/19/2015 >

Could you blur/smudge the body shading just a bit? —.neha darling just hold on. 18:56, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Jayce team rowlet < 19:04, 5/19/2015 >

Define the shading ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 06:33, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Jayce team rowlet < 11:37, 5/22/2015 >

Smooth out shading on the legs <3 Silver The Endless River✼ ~ 00:59, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I have so many different shading layers, that it took me a bit to find out which layer I needed to smooth out...lol Jayce team rowlet < 01:21, 5/25/2015 >

CBA? User:Burntclaw/Sig 10:04, May 27, 2015 (UTC)

Approved. Jayce team rowlet < 15:49, 5/28/2015 >

Jaywing (K) - Approved

Jayclaw.kit His name sounds too much like Jay's Wing. Me + texture = no – Ivy 23:20, May 18, 2015 (UTC)

She looks a little dark to me. ~ Fox * 愛してるばんざーい!* 00:24, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped He does to me, too. Hopefully this is better, but if it's not I'll gladly lighten it further. – Ivy 00:59, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs? And maybe get rid of that shadow to the left on the chest/neck as it shouldn't be there with your light source. Storm 03:29, May 20, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped – Ivy 20:08, May 20, 2015 (UTC)

Still looks a little dark. Maybe lighten just a tad? User: Dewdrops56/talk 22:13, May, 21, 2015

Re-upped – Ivy 00:49, May 22, 2015 (UTC)

Smooth out the neck shading ~ Fox * 愛してるばんざーい!* 11:30, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped – Ivy 12:03, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the texture? It's hard for me to see, and with these blanks, that just makes it worse. Jayce team rowlet < 01:30, 5/25/2015 >

Re-upped – Ivy 01:43, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Yes, on these blanks stripes look like blobs. I like him! Smooth out the earpink a tad^^ Superior work Ice Silver The Endless River✼ ~ 07:44, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped Thanks, Bramble :) – Ivy 12:44, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

I like this, actually. CBA? User:Burntclaw/Sig 14:01, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

Approved. Jayce team rowlet < 15:49, 5/28/2015 >

Sparrowtail (W) - Approved

Sparrowtail.warrior He has no specific color, but he's shown in the list of characters needing art so... Yep. I love the name Sparrowtail yay :D I actually came up with it before Silver The Endless River✼ ~ 09:26, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

he has an image that needs ti be matched. its not that hard ti check his page. ._. david ✌️ 09:54, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

Omg I'm so dumb I swear I clicked on his page multiple times but I didn't realize it I'll upload it very soon Silver The Endless River✼ ~ 10:14, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

Ugh it doesn't match Silver The Endless River✼ ~ 12:45, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light/shading on the legs/paws? It looks wonderful silver! Storm 12:52, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups Silver The Endless River✼ ~ 12:54, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail? He looks good! Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣• 18:44, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

define it on the legs, too. david ✌️ 18:51, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

re-ups just came back from China so I wasn't able to work on this sorry Silver The Endless River✼ ~ 10:49, May 24, 2015 (UTC)

Comments? Silver The Endless River✼ ~ 01:04, May 27, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? Jayce team rowlet < 05:24, 5/27/2015 >

Approved. Jayce team rowlet < 15:49, 5/28/2015 >

Ivypool (Alt. W) - Approved

Ivypool.warrior.alt3 - she was called gray and white in Dovewing's Silence ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 01:27, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

gray and white is pretty much silver and white if you ask me, are you sure they weren't just briefly describing her without saying her as a tabby? I might be wrong though. I love the texture!^^ Maybe lighten the front leg shading, and define the source on her hind leg, pretty! Silver The Endless River✼ ~ 07:38, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

Gray and silver are separate shades. ~ Fox * 愛してるばんざーい!* 10:27, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

Gray-and-white is not silver-and-white. Jayce team rowlet < 11:04, 5/21/2015 >

Define the light on the tail Storm 12:57, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded On her hind paw farthest from us, she does have a gray toe, so that may be the shadow you're seeing Bramble ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 21:57, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the main body. User:Burntclaw/Sig 06:59, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 07:01, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the earpink just a tiny bit? It might be my screen though. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 01:38, May 24, 2015 (UTC)

I think it's fine ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 02:01, May 24, 2015 (UTC)

It's blurred enough, but you might as well dull it down a bit. User:Burntclaw/Sig 08:05, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail and the light on the back legs ~ Fox * 愛してるばんざーい!* 11:05, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

I'm not sure why the ear pink should be dulled down, Burnt. If she changes the coloring, you might not be able to see it, which would probably result in a never-ending circle of defining, dulling, changing the color, blurring, ect. This shade of ear pink has been used on various other cats before, and I rarely ever see anyone have an issue with it. Also, if you don't mind, Scar, could you define or expand the light on the legs? I'm having trouble seeing it, and the frontmost visible leg looks like it's almost all in shadow....unless that's intentionally done like that. If it is, go ahead and keep it as it is. Jayce team rowlet < 11:19, 5/25/2015 >

Re-uploaded I think I got what everyone said... On the heel of her left forepaw, so has some gray, so that could be the darker shadow you're seeing ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 02:22, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

Define the tail shading. User:Burntclaw/Sig 10:04, May 27, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 17:18, May 27, 2015 (UTC)

I still can't see it tbh. Perhaps add a new layer of shadng depth? User:Burntclaw/Sig 10:31, May 28, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 21:51, May 28, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 04:38, May 31, 2015 (UTC)

Approved. User:Burntclaw/Sig 13:24, June 2, 2015 (UTC)

Ferntail (Ki) ~ Approved

Ferntail.kit Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 16:09, May 18, 2015 (UTC)

Add some shading between the tummy and on the leg as well. Looking good Storm 16:13, May 18, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the head, and the light on the back paw. Cutie! Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 17:19, May 18, 2015 (UTC)

It could be defined everywhere ~ Fox * 愛してるばんざーい!* 08:33, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

The leg, tail, and paw shading is fine, tbh. Jayce team rowlet < 08:36, 5/19/2015 >

done there already was shading on the leg and tummy, Storm, so I defined it. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 11:17, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe possibly darken the shading a few ticks? Storm 03:28, May 20, 2015 (UTC)

Reups Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 09:54, May 22, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the side of the face? Storm 13:45, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

reups Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 16:02, May 28, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the back paw ~ Fox * 愛してるばんざーい!* 00:58, May 29, 2015 (UTC)

reups Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 12:40, May 29, 2015 (UTC)

CBA?~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 04:38, May 31, 2015 (UTC)

Approved. User:Burntclaw/Sig 13:25, June 2, 2015 (UTC)

Yarrowpaw (Ki) - approved

File:Yarrowpaw.kit.png So much harder to match than I thought it was going to be O.O color picked as well as I could from apprentice. Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣• 00:34, May 27, 2015 (UTC)

Omg so cute!! <333333 Maybe smooth out his "fingers"? I know it would be a big pain band maybe smooth out the belly-pale more^^ Silver The Endless River✼ ~ 01:17, May 27, 2015 (UTC)

I don't know if it is my stupid eyes, but he looks oranger than the apprentice. Or is that your shading? ~ Fox * 愛してるばんざーい!* 05:02, May 27, 2015 (UTC)

Hm...let me mess around with the shading and see if that helps at all. That apprentice image was a bit difficult to tell exactly what the base was compared to the shading. I tried three or four shades and none looked exact. Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣• 11:17, May 27, 2015 (UTC)

@Foxy I found that too, but I thought it was the shading. Sun, you might wanna contact Scarly and ask her for the apprentice file^^ Gah I can't take my eyes off this cute little mewling Silver The Endless River✼ ~ 11:24, May 27, 2015 (UTC)

reupped On it ^.^ My computer is acting up on me, so I only put this here to see if it looked any better Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣• 11:40, May 27, 2015 (UTC)

Maybe smudge the lighter color on the chest just a tiny bit? The Stylish Ravenpelt I'm too hot! (Hot damn!) 13:24, May 27, 2015 (UTC)

reupped Color picked from psd file ^.^ I tried the best I could to get the chest pale to smudge more but I can't even tell if it did anything this blank is so tiny >.<; But hopefully it looks better! Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣• 00:51, May 28, 2015 (UTC)

Comments? Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣• 12:33, May 31, 2015 (UTC)

how about a CBA instead? Wonderful job.~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 18:53, May 31, 2015 (UTC)

Approved User:Burntclaw/Sig 00:28, June 3, 2015 (UTC)

Cloverfoot (ki) ~ Approved

Cloverfoot.kit i tried Queen Beebs 00:46, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

Blur the stripes, as they're a bit softer on her other image. Jayce team rowlet < 05:32, 5/27/2015 >

re-up Queen Beebs 00:33, May 29, 2015 (UTC)

Couple days without comments, so lets try a CBA.~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 21:39, June 1, 2015 (UTC)

Approved User:Burntclaw/Sig 00:32, June 3, 2015 (UTC)

Sparkpaw (K) - approved

File:Sparkpaw.kit.png Oh our kit is back User:Burntclaw/Sig 11:49, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

Aww it's a baby Firestar. <3 Does the shading on the tail need to be on the inner side, with your light source? Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 23:45, May 28, 2015 (UTC)

Hmmm, I honestly don't think so. All of my kits are shaded this way. But thank you :D User:Burntclaw/Sig 08:08, May 29, 2015 (UTC)

Define the leg shading (especially --> one), the tail shading, and maybe the facial shading too. Can you also define the shape of the ear pink? I'm unable to really see it. Jayce team rowlet < 03:11, 5/30/2015 >

Re-upped Y u Sparkpaw so annoying =P User:Burntclaw/Sig 03:50, May 30, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? Beautiful Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 22:33, June 1, 2015 (UTC)

Approved User:Burntclaw/Sig 00:32, June 3, 2015 (UTC)

Podlight (K) - Approved

Podlight.kit I think I did et :3 Storm 21:12, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading on the back foot. ~ Fox * 愛してるばんざーい!* 10:01, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

I think I made it clear that its pretty defined... Could I get a second opinion? Storm 13:55, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

Define it on our right front leg and smooth out the shading on the tail. User:Burntclaw/Sig 13:57, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

I agree with Fox, and the "second opinion" thing is kinda also what I was referring to... Jayce team rowlet < 14:00, 5/26/2015 >

Reups defined a couple other things too Storm 14:38, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

comments? Storm 15:15, May 29, 2015 (UTC)

blur the shading more on our left and his right of the leg and maybe blue the tail shading some too bramble//may –––love paint every afternoon 19:09, May 29, 2015 (UTC)

Reups Storm 21:55, May 29, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the gray parts of the fur just a tinnnnnnnnyyyy bit bramble//may –––love paint every afternoon 21:43, May 30, 2015 (UTC)

Reups Lightened the shading a bit more as well Storm 01:24, May 31, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? Jayce team rowlet < 13:58, 6/3/2015 >

Approved User:Burntclaw/Sig 08:31, June 5, 2015 (UTC)

Sloefur (Mc) - Approved

File:Sloefur.mc.png One week? Hopefully I can pass '-' bramble//may –––love paint every afternoon 19:06, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink a tad. I can't really make it out without zooming really close. Storm 22:54, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Bramble has an image to match, and the earpink matches the deputy image, so I don't think she needs to lighten the ear pink unless the other image is nominated for a tweak. Jayce team rowlet < 23:48, 5/25/2015 >

Smooth out shading everywhere, define light on the front legs and perhaps lighten the herbs. The shading's leaking from where the front leg and hind leg meet. Silver The Endless River✼ ~ 01:13, May 27, 2015 (UTC)

re-up smudged shading? nope bramble//may –––love paint every afternoon 20:04, May 27, 2015 (UTC)

Can you smooth out the main body shading a little more? – Ivy 20:27, May 29, 2015 (UTC)

re-up this still sucks. And the shading isn't even Smudged ;-; bramble//may –––love paint every afternoon 21:18, May 29, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry to be a bother, but maybe smooth out the shading a bit more? ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 21:49, May 29, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten it up a few ticks, please. User:Burntclaw/Sig 05:50, May 30, 2015 (UTC)

re-up ok, so I used the blend tool (Dont ask why.) I blured the edges afterward, and I have to say, it isn't too too bad. bramble//may –––love paint every afternoon 15:04, May 30, 2015 (UTC)

CBA? Jayce team rowlet < 13:58, 6/3/2015 >

Approved User:Burntclaw/Sig 08:33, June 5, 2015 (UTC)

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