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Ruby (Ki) - Approved

[[File:Ruby.png]] Scourge's sister who we all know is responsible for him turning evil...comments anyone?

Something is bothering me about the collar. Should I take it out entirely, or is there some way I could fix it? --Sparrowsong 03:51, 10 August 2009 (UTC)

Try shading the bottom half of the collar to fix it. ;) I think she's great. --MUMBLE785 16:41, 10 August 2009 (UTC)

Ok, I'll go do that.

You really like it? Thanks! *Touched* Sparrowsong 16:58, 10 August 2009 (UTC)

UPDATE: I shaded it a bit, but it's a little hard to tell. It'll probably take a while for the changes to show up. --Sparrowsong 17:06, 10 August 2009 (UTC)

(M) - How can something that evil be so cute? Try adding a highlight on the tag, like I did with Tiny. Seeing as it is made of metal, it would be highly reflective. Also, blur your shading a bit more. Mosswhisker and Steatlhfire 17:19, 10 August 2009 (UTC)

Reuploading. Thanks for your tip. Sparrowsong 17:35, 10 August 2009 (UTC)

P.S. Sorry if it takes me a while to reply - my computer is extremely slow. Like, EXTREMELY.

I luffles her! NOw, the only thing I can see is maybe add a little bit more shading on the right side of her right leg, in that area above her paw. If you don't know what I'm talking about, I can whip up a diagram in less than 5 minutes within the time I see the comment. ;) --MUMBLE785 20:23, 10 August 2009 (UTC)

Kay, I'll get right on it. Sparrowsong 21:57, 10 August 2009 (UTC)

Is the shading in the right part of her foot? Sparrowsong 00:32, 11 August 2009 (UTC)

Comments? Anyone...? Sparrowsong 04:21, 12 August 2009 (UTC)

Sorry Sparrow. The shading's in the right places, just make it all a little thicker and blend it all in. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 11:02, 12 August 2009 (UTC)

Alright. I'll upload it as soon as I can. Sparrowsong 05:14, 13 August 2009 (UTC)

Better? Sparrowsong 05:38, 13 August 2009 (UTC)

Please don't claw my fur off, but I think that the shading is too light. Make it a bit lighter and make blend it more.Minnowclaw 12:48, 13 August 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

I think you meant too dark, Minnow. But yes, lighten the shading just a bit and blur the transition. Also make the shading a bit more thin on the legs, and add shading underneath the collar; there would be a shadow there. She's very pretty, though. --Bramble My Realm 14:50, 13 August 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Sparrowsong 17:38, 13 August 2009 (UTC)

Beautiful. Comments before approval? --Bramble My Realm 15:33, 14 August 2009 (UTC)

There seems to be an odd lighter line on the left shoulder? I can circle it, if needed. :\--Quiet!... 03:54, 15 August 2009 (UTC)

I'll get right on it.  Jane Volturi  (talk!) 03:56, 15 August 2009 (UTC)

Reuploading. Better?  Jane Volturi  (talk!) 04:05, 15 August 2009 (UTC)

Repeating 24 hours. --Bramble My Realm 02:53, 16 August 2009 (UTC)

Approved. --Bramble My Realm 14:49, 17 August 2009 (UTC)

Russetfur (D) - Approved

Russetfur.deputy It's Russetfur! I really liked her in the TigerstarXSasha mangas, and her description looked interesting, so I had to do her. Comments? Echomist Hear the Echo... 12:08, 12 August 2009 (UTC)

She's gorgeous!! The only thing I see is that in TigerXSasha comics, it shows that she has white paws as well. Could you add white paws? Hawkfire ♫ Go Aggies! 12:57, 12 August 2009 (UTC)

She doesn't have a white chest or paws. Not in her descript, and the people who do the mangas are not the Erins, as Sandy stated in another section. If you must have those areas lighter, make them a lighter ginger than her basic pelt. --Bramble My Realm 23:09, 12 August 2009 (UTC)

In Russetfur's description, it doesn't say anything about lighter paws, but it does say a white chest, so I just left her where she was. Should I add the lighter paws? Echomist Hear the Echo... 23:18, 12 August 2009 (UTC)

On her article, it used to. Now it says as the books do: she's a dark ginger she-cat. The Erins probably didn't give much detail on her descript to the manga artist, and he/she probably didn't bother looking it up. Unless the Erins confirm it, or you can provide me a series book reference, we go without. Kk? :) --Bramble My Realm 02:32, 13 August 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Took away the white patch on her chest. How is she? -- Echomist Hear the Echo... 23:39, 13 August 2009 (UTC)

She looks great. Make the ear pink slightly bigger and more triangular. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 09:16, 14 August 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Fixed.-- Echomist Hear the Echo... 15:18, 16 August 2009 (UTC)

She looks great. Comments before approval? --Bramble My Realm 21:27, 16 August 2009 (UTC)

None. Approved. --Bramble My Realm 22:32, 17 August 2009 (UTC)

Pad - Approved

[[File:Pad.png]] You've been waiting for him, so here he is. Criticism is welcome. GB57 18:15, 23 July 2009 (UTC)

I think he looks good. Cute. --Bramble My Realm 19:40, 23 July 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Could you make the ear pink more triangular, darken the shading and add shading under the chin? Other then that he looks great! Mosswisker&Stealthfire 21:54, 23 July 2009 (UTC)

Actually, M&S, if you looked at just about every pair of ears on our kit pics, you'd see that they're not triangular. GB57 22:22, 23 July 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Good point. Never mind. Mosswisker&Stealthfire 23:26, 23 July 2009 (UTC)

But, M&S has a point on the shading under the chin. You would need to make it darker.Minnowclaw 10:59, 24 July 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

He looks super cute, but maybe tone down the ear pink a shade because it looks a very unnatural bright color.--Warrior♥Warrior's Den 16:38, 24 July 2009 (UTC)

Better? GB57 22:17, 24 July 2009 (UTC)

Cutie, but darken the shading just a tad.-- ♪Shimmer 00:19, 25 July 2009 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink a little more. Also, the shading needs to be slightly darker. Good job, GB.  Jane Volturi  (talk!) 20:30, 25 July 2009 (UTC)

He's very cute! The only thing would be if you could darken his eyes just a little bit. He looks great!!!--MUMBLE785 20:40, 25 July 2009 (UTC)

How's that? Also, Mumble, I want to keep the eyes bright, to make him look all cute and innocent. GB57 00:42, 26 July 2009 (UTC)

Any comments before 24-hour approval?-- ♪Shimmer 15:53, 26 July 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Could you curve the neck shading downward just a smidge? It's almost a straight line right now. MosswhiskerAndStealthfire 17:52, 26 July 2009 (UTC)

I'll get on it tomorrow. GB57 00:36, 2 August 2009 (UTC)

The shading on the tail needs to be darker. I can't see it. Otherwise, he's great! --Blackclaw09 20:23, 3 August 2009 (UTC)

Actually, the coloring on the tail is the shading. Anything else? GB57 23:24, 3 August 2009 (UTC)

Looks good. I don't see any more problems. --Blackclaw09 01:04, 4 August 2009 (UTC)


The shading could be blended more. -- Darkhallows  Lair 08:32, 4 August 2009 (UTC)

Hey guys, I've been busy lately, and I still am, and then I'm going to be gone for a week, so please do not decline. GB57 15:51, 8 August 2009 (UTC)

(M) - I see nothing wrong, personally. He's so cute! *Huggles* Mosswhisker and Steatlhfire 21:41, 16 August 2009 (UTC)

I have to actually agree with Moss. The shading looks blended fine, I think, Shady. Comments before approval? --Bramble My Realm 02:38, 17 August 2009 (UTC)

Approved Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 08:29, 18 August 2009 (UTC)

Swiftpaw (K) - Approved

File:Swiftpaw(Ki)4.png

Ok heres my first Highlight and Shaded cat put together. It might look unnatural, but its like the Sun is hitting from his left(our right) side and he's turned so the rest of him is in the shadows. And technichally he was seen as a kit because he was a kit during his apprentice ceremony in Fire and Ice. Sandwich989 20:01, 11 August 2009 (UTC)

His ear pink is way too bright. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 20:15, 11 August 2009 (UTC)

Changed ear pink. Sandwich989 21:10, 11 August 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Part of the mouth lineart has been erased. Mosswhisker and Steatlhfire 21:25, 11 August 2009 (UTC)

Changed mouth. Sandwich989 08:06, 14 August 2009 (UTC)

I know the ear pink on his right(his right) ear is shaded, but it looks completely different than the other. Make it a little less dark, similar to the other, but a touch darker. --Bramble My Realm 15:28, 14 August 2009 (UTC)

Fixed. Sandwich989 00:13, 17 August 2009 (UTC)

Nice! His white paws look pure white, though.  Jane Volturi  (talk!) 02:16, 17 August 2009 (UTC)

Well I thought that the white light hitting his highlightd + the shading next to him would make his paws look whiter. Sandwich989 18:52, 17 August 2009 (UTC)

I like it Sandwhich. I think it's ready for approval.Minnowclaw 23:40, 17 August 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

Comments before approval? --Bramble My Realm 19:19, 18 August 2009 (UTC)

None. Approved. --Bramble My Realm 01:27, 20 August 2009 (UTC)

Graypaw - Approved

[[File:Greypaw.png]]I'm finally back! What do you think of Graypaw?Minnowclaw 11:29, 12 August 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw


His eyes look red.--Yai-Girl 21:54, 12 August 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl

Fixed it.Minnowclaw 12:20, 13 August 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

I love this. The only thing I see is that where his gray stripe is, there are a few lighter gray pixels mixed in near his back lineart, and the lineart has also been blurred a bit near his shoulder area. --Bramble My Realm 14:54, 13 August 2009 (UTC)

Is this better?Minnowclaw 15:05, 13 August 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

The ear pink is a little messy, otherwise it's great!-- Darkhallows  Lair 05:18, 14 August 2009 (UTC)

What do you mean by messy.Minnowclaw 12:52, 14 August 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

Make it more triangular, and a touch darker and more pink, so it fits into the ear better. --Bramble My Realm 15:26, 14 August 2009 (UTC)

I thought his eyes were yellow... correct me if I'm wrong though. --Blackclaw09 21:05, 14 August 2009 (UTC)

I did mt best. Is this better?Minnowclaw 15:38, 15 August 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

(S) - Graypaw's eyes are yellow, all right. I think he looks pretty good! Personally. Mosswhisker and Steatlhfire 02:32, 16 August 2009 (UTC)

Changed his eyes to yellow.Minnowclaw 12:52, 16 August 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

I really like the way you blurred the shading (I can never get it so even!), the only thing I'm going to mention is that it looks a bit like a linear gradient.. What i mean is, the shading's only going in one direction, and sort of disregarding his body structure... if you sort of shape it around his legs and such it would look a little better. --♫ insaneular ♫ 18:26, 16 August 2009 (UTC)


Comments before approval? -- Dawnfeather  talk! 00:30, 17 August 2009 (UTC)

Wait his eyes are amber not yellow his warrior pixel has amber eyes too. --Stonestar 00:22, 18 August 2009 (UTC)Stonestar

No, they are yellow. On page 14 of into the wild Rusty says, "If you're the most dangerous thing the woods has to offer, then I think I can handle it," Rusty bluffed. Graypaw look up at him for a moment, narrowing his big yellow eyes." So that proves he has yellow eyes.Minnowclaw 15:02, 18 August 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

And there yellow on page 16 of Firestar's Quest, quote, "His yellow eyes narrowed. 'Firestar, is something bothering you?'". So I think it's safe to say he has yellow eyes. But I guess if his warrior version has amber we should make them amber... =/--Warrior♥Warrior's Den 00:23, 19 August 2009 (UTC)

No we shouldn't. Someone can make the warrior version have yellow during tweek week.Minnowclaw 02:38, 19 August 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

Repeating, 24 hours before approval. His eyes stay yellow - the warrior version can be changed seeing as we have citations for yellow eyes. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 07:28, 19 August 2009 (UTC)

Approved Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 09:36, 20 August 2009 (UTC)

Squirrelflight (Ki) - Approved

[[File:Squirrelkit2.png]]

I hope this cat is okay.I used www.pixlr.com.I tried my best in doing the outline in the sides,but i tihnk i need a way more darker color.she has tabby stripes on her pelt,and they are darker than the ginger colored pelt.I hope squirrelkit(squirrelflight) is okay!I had anotherimage of squirrelkit,but the paw was way to blurred,so i tried to slvge what i could of it and otouch it up a bit --Firepelt 03:10, 26 July 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

She's pretty good, Fire. Her tabby stripes are a little messy, though, I'd look at some of Sandy's approved kit pics; they have awesome tabby stripes. Also, move her pupils down to the bottom of her eyes, and add a white pixel above the pupils for highlights, to make her look alive. Also, remember to add shading. Last of all, blur the edge of her white paw, and take away the black line separating her ginger fur from the white. --Bramble My Realm 03:13, 26 July 2009 (UTC)

The lineart on her white paw shows blurred to me...-- ♪Shimmer♫ 04:00, 26 July 2009 (UTC)

[[File:Squirrelkit-Diagram.png]]

I've made you a diagram. The blue stripes are where your tabby stripes need to be, and when you've added them, using the same color you have the current stripes, blur them a bit. The red circles are where you need to add darker shading; use the burn tool (white-gloved hand) for that. And the green circles are where you need to take out those black lines across the ears, and shrink the pink and put in some ginger around it, like the other approved images. Also, change the eyes like I have them changed. At the moment, her eyes look wonky and twisted. --Bramble My Realm 02:32, 27 July 2009 (UTC)

Thx bramble,I touched her up,burned her stripes,and deleted the old one's and put new ones in,i added darker ginger shading like brownish to her and deleted the black line at the ears. --Firepelt 18:03, 27 July 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

Better but not there yet. The ear pink needs to be much smaller and blended in (look at some approved kits for reference. Mintkit, Fallowkit and Ivykit for example although there are many others) Then sort out the eyes as she looks cross-eyed (again looking at approved kits for guidance will help greatly). She needs more shading on her neck and sides and you need to extend it into the pelt and blend well to lessen the transition. Then make sure she's not blurry as I can see some blurred lineart that's giving her a fuzzy look :) Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 11:19, 28 July 2009 (UTC)

Your getting there! Her tabby stripes need to be more thicker and blended a little more. The linart is also blurred to me. HawkfireMy Den 15:58, 28 July 2009 (UTC)

Stop moving the section! And the pictures, for that matter. All you have to do is upload the new version of the image, then edit this section saying you've updated. No need to move the section, pics, or anything. You've made all our sigs dead somehow. --Bramble My Realm 01:05, 30 July 2009 (UTC)

I've moved this back to join the rest of the section - we do not need duplicates of your approval section on the page Firepelt. Just leave it where it is and comment from there. There's no need for anyone to be moving sections unless they are a senior warrior archiving. I put Bramble's comment in at the bottom but the rest was all duplicate so I just kept one lot. (ps. I think the sigs become dead when you copy from the saved page and not from the editing box). All you need to do is follow the guidelines for improvement and then leave a message in this section when you've done them (remembering to upload the new version). Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 12:21, 30 July 2009 (UTC)

She looks a bit pale to me... Perhaps darken her a little to make the colors mure pure? --MUMBLE785 22:12, 31 July 2009 (UTC)

Some of the ginger is overlapping the outline. The tabby markings need to be less distinct and lightened, while the pelt needs to be darkened a shade. Her eyes look like there cross-eyed some. xD Other than that, it looks good. =)--Warrior♥Warrior's Den 21:38, 1 August 2009 (UTC)

Fixed overlapping,darkened pelt.Done.--Firepelt 19:20, 2 August 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

Maybe you should make the ear pink a more natural color, like a lighter shade of pink. Also, try blurring the tabby markings, just a bit more. But, this is really good. Nice job, Firepelt! --HoneyfurBob's Your Uncle! 21:25, 2 August 2009 (UTC)

I tried to work on squirrel,but my sister's laptop will no accepte the pic for some reason,and current;y my computer is in the shop,it crashed so ALL the images i ever made are lost forever. :(So,ill try and work on ut when i can.--Firepelt 17:39, 9 August 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

I changed the file name to Squirrelkit, as your current one was a bit long. Just say the name of the cat for the name of the file. Actually, only the outside of the lineart, where there's some excess shading needs to be cleared up, and she looks pretty good otherwise. --Bramble My Realm 15:21, 14 August 2009 (UTC)

My computer is gonna be in the shop for about 1 to 2 months bramble,so,can you plase fix up the shading for me?It would be a big help,and I can't wait 2 months to work on it.Can you please?Thx,--Firepelt 16:27, 14 August 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

The nose is the same color as the pelt; change it to pink. She's cute, though.

Sorry to hear about your computer, Fire. I hope it can get fixed soon.  Sparrowkit  (BrookClan Camp) 21:50, 14 August 2009 (UTC)

Sure, Fire. I cleared up the excess shading for you, as well as changing the nose. Are there any other comments? --Bramble My Realm 23:55, 14 August 2009 (UTC)

Just the ear pink needs sorting. It's a bit bright Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 14:06, 15 August 2009 (UTC)

Yes, fix the ear and it should be good.  Jane Volturi  (talk!) 02:42, 17 August 2009 (UTC)


Aw! She's cute.-- Darkhallows  Lair 17:35, 17 August 2009 (UTC)

Forgot I had been given responsibility of the image. :) The ear pink was hard to find, but does this look better? --Bramble My Realm 17:46, 17 August 2009 (UTC)

Yes, she's fine Bramble.Minnowclaw 20:04, 17 August 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

The colour is great, it just needs to be smaller in his ear like the other kit pixels. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 07:32, 19 August 2009 (UTC)

When I did that, it made it extremely hard to see, so I made the pink a touch darker. It blends in with the orange and fools your eyes into thinking it's all orange or all pink, so.... I don't know what to do with it. Is it plausible? --Bramble My Realm 22:54, 19 August 2009 (UTC)

Okay, just leave it as it is now :) I was being picky lol. Comments before approval in 24 hours? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 09:23, 20 August 2009 (UTC)

Thx Bramble so much for working on this for me.Your a big help.:D.I was nerviouse because I couldn't work on the image,but you helped me.Thx.Im so excited that it will be approved in 24 hours.:].--Firepelt 02:13, 21 August 2009 (UTC)FirePelt


Approved (has it been 24 hours? the timing on wikis confuses me).-- Darkhallows  Lair 07:11, 21 August 2009 (UTC)

D!yea!--Firepelt 10:19, 21 August 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

Lol not yet Shady. It was only five hours afterward when you posted. Wait a bit longer. --Bramble My Realm 11:58, 21 August 2009 (UTC)

Now it's time, lol. Approved. --Bramble My Realm 21:06, 21 August 2009 (UTC)

Yea,now it's approved.--Firepelt 21:38, 23 August 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

Talltail- Approved

[[File:Talltail.warrior.png]]

Look everyone! My first real charcat!!! Let me know if it has issues, I shaded him and everything!! I want this charcat to be approved. HawkfireRock and roll all nite! 15:42, 1 July 2009 (UTC)

Well, first of all, I changed the section to Talltail, since that was his warrior name, and as we'll be seeing him in Bluestar's Prophecy as a warrior it will work. Now, the black patches on him need to a color-slightly-lighter-than-black, because then it just goes with the lineart. Lighten the black, and then we'll go from there. Also, if you're still using Paint, I would highly recommend getting GIMP or using pixlr. --Bramble My Realm 17:34, 1 July 2009 (UTC)

Bramble's right. For some idea of what an approved black and white cat should look like take a look at Crowfrost, smallkit or toadkit (approved images). That's the standard we need before approval  Sandy Talk! 15:21, 2 July 2009 (UTC)

His eye looks like he's sinister; perhaps this could be changed?--Yai-Girl 16:30, 5 July 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl

He looks like he popped right out of Pokemon. Give him less of an angry-japanese look. GB57 16:51, 6 July 2009 (UTC)

Okay, Okay. I redid him. Does he look any better?HawkfireMy Den 17:03, 6 July 2009 (UTC)

Why are his feet black?--Yai-Girl 17:48, 6 July 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl

He is better, but I would suggest a black patch on his foreleg coming up to his chest, and lighten the black even more. You also need to blur the transition between black and white on all the places. Some more shading is needed, too. Keep it up, and he'll be approved in no time. And Yai, I'm presuming his paws are black cause he's a black and white cat. --Bramble My Realm 17:54, 6 July 2009 (UTC)

I smudged him, added more shading, and added that patch Bramble wanted. Comments? HawkfireMy Den 18:22, 6 July 2009 (UTC)

What's with all the tiny black dots? And try blurring instead if smudging. Sandwich989 19:13, 6 July 2009 (UTC)

Anything else? :) And I have no idea how those black dots get there sandwich, I set it to png but they wont go away!HawkfireMy Den 19:37, 6 July 2009 (UTC)

I don't see the black dots anymore. I think you just add shading and blend it in and it will look good. Sandwich989 22:29, 6 July 2009 (UTC)

I did blend, and I did add shading. I just brightened the shading to make it a silvery color. Anything else? HawkfireMy Den 13:19, 7 July 2009 (UTC)

The black needs to be a lot lighter, and I think in places it goes outside the lineart. --Bramble My Realm 19:06, 7 July 2009 (UTC)

I don't see anyn shading. But I would do is make the blur tool brush big enough so half of it can be on the black and half of it can be on the white and just run it until the black and white stops. Do that where there is all black and white next together. Sandwich989 19:57, 7 July 2009 (UTC)

Better? HawkfireMy Den 20:02, 7 July 2009 (UTC)

Make the black slightly lighter than what you have now so you can see the lineart. And it still needs more shading and the patches need blending. Your doing great. =)--Warrior♥Warrior's Den 20:29, 7 July 2009 (UTC)

I found the perfect shade of black! I added more shading, and I added more blending, is it better? HawkfireMy Den 14:27, 8 July 2009 (UTC)

This is the best yet, and it is a great shade of black. The shading is too pronounced, though, it needs to be more blurred and less standoutish. --Bramble My Realm 14:35, 8 July 2009 (UTC)

Better? I blurred the shading HawkfireMy Den 12:17, 9 July 2009 (UTC)

Better, yes, but put a little bit of the normal black color between the shading and the white on that patch in the middle of his back. His ear pink also needs to be blended more into the pelt. --Bramble My Realm 19:36, 10 July 2009 (UTC)

Better? Reuploaded. HawkfireMy Den 19:34, 11 July 2009 (UTC)

The patches looks smudge inches into the pelt in some places and not blended at all. And I suggest making it a shade darker than pure white.--Warrior♥Warrior's Den 20:20, 11 July 2009 (UTC)

Like this? HawkfireMy Den 12:57, 14 July 2009 (UTC)

Yes! Add some more shading on the chest and possible the muzzle and I think he'll be ready. Perhaps blend the ear pink a little too.  Sandy Talk! 13:36, 14 July 2009 (UTC)

Will this work? HawkfireMy Den 02:28, 15 July 2009 (UTC)


You don't think that you could possibly blend in the shading more? The line between non-shading and shading is still rather distinctive. -- Dawnfeather  talk! 13:37, 15 July 2009 (UTC)

There also looks like a smudge spot near the base of his tail, but on his back.-- ♪Shimmer 17:13, 17 July 2009 (UTC)

This looks great, Hawkfire. I'd suggest you lighten the shading, though. And the black is too dark. I would use the same black as Crowfeather or maybe Nightcloud. Sparrowsong 21:20, 17 July 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded HawkfireMy Den 21:25, 18 July 2009 (UTC)

The patches need blended more. Look at Patchfoot, Smallkit, and other patched cats for reference. --Warrior♥Warrior's Den 23:23, 19 July 2009 (UTC)

Better? HawkfireMy Den 16:57, 20 July 2009 (UTC)

Any more comments? HawkfireMy Den 21:42, 21 July 2009 (UTC)

Again, the ear is the problem here. You need to sort it in the same way as you need to sort Jumpfoot's Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 10:31, 22 July 2009 (UTC)

Wow, Hawkfire, this looks really good! But the ear pink needs to be lighter and more triangular.  Sparrowsong  (talk!) 17:25, 24 July 2009 (UTC)

darken shading. --MUMBLE785 23:43, 24 July 2009 (UTC)

This hasn't been worked on in a week. Please work on this or it will be declined. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 11:27, 30 July 2009 (UTC)

Oh sorry Sandy!! Um..Well to make a long story short, my laptop has the same virus GB's cpu does, and its very bad. So I havent been on my laptop in awhile, which it has all my charart on it. And also, all the computers I have tried, I can't get access to Pixlr, so now I am using my brother's laptop (the same kind of laptop) while mine is getting fixed. Anyway I fixed the ear, and darkened the shading. HawkfireGo Aggies! 14:18, 30 July 2009 (UTC)

He seems a little too dark, I can barely se the outline. Also shouldn't both he and Tallstar have the same markings?-- Darkhallows  Lair 18:10, 30 July 2009 (UTC)

Okay, lighten him a little and Shady, you're right. I'm going to ask you to edit this slightly Hawkfire as I think it will be easier than editig the leader. Can you add a white tail tip and remove the black from the paws. I think with the different angle that they will then look similar enough for the sakes of the project. Do that and it'll be ready! Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 19:31, 1 August 2009 (UTC)

Lightened, fixed the ear. I just redid the whole image to make it look more like Tallstar. Exact same color and I did my best on the markings. Hawkfire ♫ Go Aggies! 14:41, 4 August 2009 (UTC)

Thanks so much Hawkey (sorry you had to redo the image :( ) Darken the shading and blend the ear and he looks good to go Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 19:42, 4 August 2009 (UTC)

Done :) Anyway I am getting sick of redoing Talltail, this is about the 22nd time :) Now I am finally done with him!! Hawkfire ♫ Go Aggies! 13:20, 7 August 2009 (UTC)

Oh, Hawkey, I want so much to approve him, but his shading now needs blending again and there needs to be some added to the white parts of his body, on the haunch, belly, and foreleg particularly. Hang in there! I've been told 23's a lucky number. ;) --Bramble My Realm 00:38, 8 August 2009 (UTC)

I think he looks really nice. Only problem is the shading, like Bramble said.-- Echomist Look out for flying hedgehogs! 00:05, 10 August 2009 (UTC)


Thanks, Anyway, I have been on vacation lately. Heres my "lucky 23" Hope this works! Hawkfire ♫ Go Aggies! 00:03, 12 August 2009 (UTC)

One of his paws are pure white.--Yai-Girl 09:28, 13 August 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl

His near hind paw is pure white; shade it. Also; blend blend blend! Blend the shading so you can see no transition line from shading to pelt, and darken the shading on the white areas. Blur the transition from black to white patch so you can see no transition line. --Bramble My Realm 14:21, 13 August 2009 (UTC)

Fixed white paws and blended shading to the best I can. Added shading to the white parts. Lets get this approved! This takes up about half of the page. Hawkfire ♫ Go Aggies! 14:44, 14 August 2009 (UTC)

Big page or not we can only approve when it's ready. Blend the ear pink in a little. (ps. stop uploading a new file every time lol Just upload over the top of teh old version as it takes up less space on the wiki) Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 14:05, 15 August 2009 (UTC)


Hm...

It doesn't look like there is much shading... could you add some highlights?-- Darkhallows  Lair 17:21, 17 August 2009 (UTC)

I think the shading's fine. Also, with the black patch on the right, when it cuts in, it's very sharp and needs to be blended.Minnowclaw 23:34, 17 August 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

Fixed! :)Hawkfire ♫ Go Aggies! 15:49, 18 August 2009 (UTC)

Hmmm, he may be ready, Hawkey! :) Are there any other comments? --Bramble My Realm 22:56, 19 August 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --Bramble My Realm 01:55, 21 August 2009 (UTC)

None. Approved. --Bramble My Realm 03:30, 22 August 2009 (UTC)

Deadfoot- Approved

[[File:Deadfoot.png]] Here he is, I hor the paw is OK... My computer is fixed, and I'll get it back tomarrow ^^. It had this super weird error or something... -facepalm--- Darkhallows  Lair 22:56, 2 August 2009 (UTC)

The coloring and shading is great, I have only a couple things. First, there's a couple white pixels on his tail, remove those. Also, is the raised paw the twisted one? It looks a bit strange using that one because it looks a bit more like he just has a short leg... I think you might be able to make it look more twisted if you used a different leg, but that's just me. ♫ insaneular ♫ 23:05, 2 August 2009 (UTC)

This is pretty good except I think the ear pink could be a little bit brighter, You don't have to agree though... Bracken- 23:43, 2 August 2009 (UTC)

You could make the ear pink lighter, because it's the same color as the scar on his muzzle. --Blackclaw09 20:19, 3 August 2009 (UTC)

Changed the ear, though I left the paw the same.-- Darkhallows  Lair 08:42, 4 August 2009 (UTC)

There's a white pixel on his paw, the one next behind his tail. I'm pretty sure it's not supposed to be there. --Blackclaw09 20:43, 4 August 2009 (UTC)

He has short fur. But I love his color. Does it say somewhere that he's longhaired? He's WindClan, and they generally have short fur. --Bramble My Realm 00:30, 8 August 2009 (UTC)

The fur was just a random pick, I changed it. Also I changed the paw... is it alright?-- Darkhallows  Lair 07:56, 10 August 2009 (UTC)

Yes, the paw looks great. Sparrowsong 18:16, 10 August 2009 (UTC)

The paw does look better, and thanks for turning him shorthaired, but his eye looks stretched for some reason. --Bramble My Realm 02:20, 13 August 2009 (UTC)

(M) - His ear pink is too light and looks very smudged. Mosswhisker and Steatlhfire 19:07, 13 August 2009 (UTC)

(M) - I like the way you did his foot - very nice. And his ear pink looks alot better now. Great job! Mosswhisker and Steatlhfire 21:40, 16 August 2009 (UTC)

The eye still seems stretched. --Bramble My Realm 17:43, 17 August 2009 (UTC)


Oops! Better now?-- Darkhallows  Lair 04:27, 21 August 2009 (UTC)

Yep. Comments before approval? --Bramble My Realm 21:17, 21 August 2009 (UTC)

None. Approved. --Bramble My Realm 23:01, 22 August 2009 (UTC)

Whitestar- Approved

Whitestar.leader My first white cat! *Fidgets Nervously* I'm still a little in the dark on shading, but, I'll get there, some day! What do you think of him? --HoneyfurBob's Your Uncle! 20:08, 4 August 2009 (UTC)

Maybe darken the area between his front legs. --Blackclaw09 20:39, 4 August 2009 (UTC)

Fixed. --HoneyfurBob's Your Uncle! 21:10, 4 August 2009 (UTC)

The shading's a bit light, and it needs to be blended more. --Blackclaw09 21:17, 4 August 2009 (UTC)

Is this better? Or, does it need to be lighter/darker? --HoneyfurBob's Your Uncle! 16:10, 6 August 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink is a bit light. You could darken it more. --Blackclaw09 17:27, 6 August 2009 (UTC)

The transition between the ear pink and the shading is distinct; blur them both. Also add a bit of shading to the top of his head. --Bramble My Realm 20:31, 8 August 2009 (UTC)

Better? --HoneyfurBob's Your Uncle! 17:16, 11 August 2009 (UTC)

It's better to me. You need to add more shading on the (his right) of his chest.Minnowclaw 12:56, 13 August 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

One of his back legs is a lighter color than the rest of the body.--Yai-Girl 16:23, 13 August 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl

Blur your highlights as well as your shading; also add a bit of shading to (his right) cheek. --Bramble My Realm 23:57, 14 August 2009 (UTC)

On his right leg, there isn't shading on our left side. Make more shading and join them up.Minnowclaw 20:09, 17 August 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

Reuploaded. I'm not sure what you mean by the side of his chest....do you mean his back? I'm also not sure what you mean by highlights (I don't remember putting in any highlights; pitiful, right?). Oh, and, Minnowclaw? Are you talking about the right foreleg, or the right back leg? Sorry if it's a weird question. =) --HoneyfurBob's Your Uncle! 23:34, 18 August 2009 (UTC)

foreleg. Sorry for not being clear.Minnowclaw 16:01, 19 August 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

Remember to add shading on his other cheek. --Bramble My Realm 22:43, 19 August 2009 (UTC)

Sorry, Bramble. I accidently loaded the wrong file, so, technically, the previous file didn't have any change at all, on it. XD Hope that makes sense. Anyway, if I loaded it correctly, this time, I added shading on the left side of his cheek. Oh, and, Minnowclaw? I'm really sorry, but, do you mean our right, or his right? --HoneyfurBob's Your Uncle! 14:39, 20 August 2009 (UTC)

(M) - I don't think that's really needed Minnowclaw, but that's just my opinion. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 14:08, 23 August 2009 (UTC)

I actually think the image is ready to be approved. Comments before approval? --Bramble My Realm 21:23, 23 August 2009 (UTC)

I think it looks pretty good. Icethroat21Hi, how's the prey running? 20:30, 24 August 2009 (UTC)

I think the image looks great, the shading is very good. -- ღ♥Peacesong♥ღ  Peacesong's Talk 20:48, 24 August 2009 (UTC)

Comments not relevant; approved. --Bramble My Realm 22:13, 24 August 2009 (UTC)

Sandstorm - Approved

[[File:Sandstorm(Queen).png]]Not much to say, what do you think?Minnowclaw 14:02, 12 August 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

(M) - Make the tabby markings thicker, and blur them thoroughly. Also, the background needs to be transparent (I can do it for you, if you want.) Mosswhisker and Steatlhfire 14:16, 12 August 2009 (UTC)

Done. Could you actually make it transparent for me?Minnowclaw 12:31, 13 August 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

(M) - Image is now transparent. Darken the ear pink, and there is a white pixel near the base of the tail. Darken the markings a shade too. Mosswhisker and Steatlhfire 19:00, 13 August 2009 (UTC)

I darkened and blurred the shading, but I didn't make the tabby stripes darker because it says she has barley visible tabby stripes.Minnowclaw 20:15, 13 August 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

(M) - You still need to darken the ear pink though. Mosswhisker and Steatlhfire 22:57, 13 August 2009 (UTC)

good?Minnowclaw 23:42, 13 August 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw


She doesn't look at all like her warrior version, try changing the stripes to match.-- Darkhallows  Lair 05:09, 14 August 2009 (UTC)

I don't think it turned out to well, but I did my best to copy her warrior version.Minnowclaw 12:51, 14 August 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

Blend the shading, theres a distinctive line from the shading to the ginger. Blur the tabby stripes some more into the pelt. They kinda stick out. Hawkfire ♫ Go Aggies! 14:46, 14 August 2009 (UTC)

Blend the shading more,and blur the tabby stripes,maybe also burn them a bit.As hawky said,they do kinda stick out.--Firepelt 16:31, 14 August 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

No need to agree with me on everything ;) Hawkfire ♫ Go Aggies! 18:22, 14 August 2009 (UTC)

Add some markings on her belly. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 14:20, 15 August 2009 (UTC)

What about this? And for Sandy, I don't think I should because it look crowded when I do that and there wasn't any markings in her warrior version.Minnowclaw 15:42, 15 August 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

This looks great. I see a few problems with the shading, though. Here's a diagram:

[[File:Sandstorm_diagram.png|thumb|left]]

Red is where there needs to be shading, green is where I think it's too light.  Jane Volturi  (talk!) 17:31, 15 August 2009 (UTC)

Darkened and added more shading.Minnowclaw 12:50, 16 August 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

Add some shading on top of her head and she's good to go. --Bramble My Realm 21:28, 16 August 2009 (UTC)

Done.Minnowclaw 20:18, 17 August 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

The upload log is screwed up... nothing's showing up. The hind leg shading and the head shading are gone. Upload the shaded version as a new file; Sandstorm.queen should work. --Bramble My Realm 19:15, 18 August 2009 (UTC)

doneMinnowclaw 02:42, 19 August 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

Awesome. Comments before approval? --Bramble My Realm 22:41, 19 August 2009 (UTC)

should the shading on the stomach be a bit darker? -- Bracken-  Hey there! Whassup!!! 23:42, 19 August 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Add some haunch shading too. (It used to be there, I don't know what happened to it. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 00:42, 20 August 2009 (UTC)

It's there now. Repeating 24 hrs. --Bramble My Realm 01:38, 25 August 2009 (UTC)

Approved. --Bramble My Realm 03:26, 26 August 2009 (UTC)

Archeye (W) Approved

[[File:Archeye.png]]

So, it's Archeye. Not much to say about this, only thing is that the shading doesn't seem to show much with the black stripes. I can make it more dramatic if necessary. Comments? ♫ insaneular ♫ 22:30, 10 August 2009 (UTC)

Blend more, shade a tad bit darker, and make the tabby stripes thinner. They look blotchy right now. Other than that, he looks good. ;) (Don't forget to sign with four ~'s!!!) --MUMBLE785MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 22:27, 10 August 2009 (UTC)

Okay, I'll change those things soon (And I just forgot to sign, I don't know why... XD) ♫ insaneular ♫ 22:30, 10 August 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I increased shading, thinned out the stripes, and blurred thoroughly. Does it look better now?

The tabby stripe on his neck is very light ad needs to be the same color as the other stripes.Minnowclaw 11:33, 12 August 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

That's not a tabby stripe. That's the shadow from his jaw. --♫ insaneular ♫ 21:05, 13 August 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Move the jaw shadow to other other side, under his chin. Also, thin and blur the tabby markings on his front leg. Mosswhisker and Steatlhfire 22:01, 14 August 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded, and changed what you said, Mousewhisker. Is it better now? --♫ insaneular ♫ 18:16, 16 August 2009 (UTC)

(M) - It's actually Mosswhisker. ;) And yes, I think he looks great now. Mosswhisker and Steatlhfire 21:36, 16 August 2009 (UTC)

Oh, sorry! I knew it was Mosswhisker, I just was spacing out, and there's Mousewhisker in the books... yeah X3 Sorry! --♫ insaneular ♫ 23:11, 16 August 2009 (UTC)

(M) - No problem! I figured that that was just a mistake, seeing as Mousewisker is a charater in the books. :) Oh, I really like the jaw shadow on him now, seeing as it no longer looks like a tabby stripe. (Forgot to comment on that earlier, XP) Mosswhisker and Steatlhfire 00:54, 17 August 2009 (UTC)

Blend his jaw shadow and his ear pink. Then I think he's good to go. --Bramble My Realm 17:50, 17 August 2009 (UTC)


The ear pink seems a bit bright and un-natural too.

This hasn't been worked on in a week - if it isn't worked on soon i'll have to decline it. -- Dawnfeather  talk! 10:17, 23 August 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded, changing what Bramble said. (The reason I couldn't work on it was because I was away from my computer for several days- I apologize for forgetting to tell you.) --♫ insaneular ♫ 18:38, 23 August 2009 (UTC)


Comments before approval? He looks great. --Bramble My Realm 00:59, 24 August 2009 (UTC)

This is great! All I see is some lineart smudging.--Quiet!... 06:21, 24 August 2009 (UTC)

I think he looks very nice, but Archeye's lineart on his back is smudged. -- ღ♥Peacesong♥ღ  Peacesong's Talk 20:48, 24 August 2009 (UTC)

I agree that it looks pretty good, but I see two things. First of all, between his chest and belly, and the end of his tabby stripes, there's something that looks like a white-light-gray-ish spot that looks lighter than the rest of his fur. Secondly, I can understand why you didn't do this, because the tabby stripes take up so much room being thick, but aren't there any tabby stripes on his belly/chest as well as his back? Otherwise, it looks great! Icethroat21Hi, how's the prey running? 21:03, 24 August 2009 (UTC)

Ice, the lighter spot is a highlight, so its fine. xD And not all cats have tabby stripes on their bellies. A lot of tabbies I've see in real life don't have belly stripes, including my uncle's. --Quiet!... 01:31, 25 August 2009 (UTC)

Oh, sorry. xD I think it looks great! Icethroat21Hi, how's the prey running? 21:33, 25 August 2009 (UTC)

Fixed the lineart smudge and tried to blur the highlight a bit more. Does it look good now? --♫ insaneular ♫ 16:50, 26 August 2009 (UTC)

(M) - The ear pink is too bright for a gray cat - try darkening it a shade. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 18:09, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

Darkened the ear pink a bit. Better? --♫ insaneular ♫ 21:59, 28 August 2009 (UTC)

Repeating 24 hrs. --Bramble My Realm 21:15, 29 August 2009 (UTC)

I still see blurred lineart. Its especially noticeable on the tail, I'm not sure if its anywhere else, though. :\.--Quiet!... 23:34, 29 August 2009 (UTC)

I went over it again and tried to fix all the little smudges I missed before... can you see any left? --♫ insaneular ♫ 04:13, 30 August 2009 (UTC)

Perfect. :D Now you just have to see what everyone else says, but I'd say this is ready. --Quiet!... 05:42, 30 August 2009 (UTC)


Comments before approval?-- Darkhallows  Lair 20:24, 30 August 2009 (UTC)

None. Approved. --Bramble My Realm 22:27, 31 August 2009 (UTC)

Medicine cat apprentice blanks - Approved

[[File:MCALongFemale.png]][[File:MCALongMale.png]][[File:MCAShortFemale.png]][[File:MCAShortMale.png]]I made them before tweek week and then had to wait till after, nos I can finally put them up!Minnowclaw 14:06, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - There is an extra line under the chin after the herbs...I can point it out, if you need me to. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 18:18, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

Better?Minnowclaw 20:18, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

Much. These are very good. Does anyone else have anything? I don't see anything else wrong with them. --Bramble My Realm 21:51, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - I agree Bramble. Comments before approval in 24 hours? Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 21:59, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

None. Approved. Wow, that had to be the record-breaker for the time of pending approval... --Bramble My Realm 02:47, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

Birchfall - Approved

File:Birchfall.png My first image. Comments? Criticism? Feel Free Bracken- 17:32, 1 August 2009 (UTC)

This is good Bracken! The only problem I see is the smudged lineart. Fix that, then we can see if there are any other issues.-- Echomist Look out for flying hedgehogs! 18:25, 1 August 2009 (UTC)

I see a few problems. His pelt is a strange orange colour where it should be brown (like his father). The lineart is very blurry so Echo's right, that does need fixing. Also, the large triangular tabby markings you've used are deemed as cartooony and are not acceptable for the high standards of the project. There are a few alternative marking methods that are esay to do. You can use wavy markings such as on Tornear or Stumpytail - I use these personally for warriors and there are very easy to do. You can also try the 'jagged y' markings such as on Brambleclaw or Cinderheart and there are others besides such as Sunstar. I would suggest either of the first two options however as it is your first image - make sure they're only slightly darker than your base colour. When you've sorted the lineart and the colour and the markings then we'll talk shading. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 19:21, 1 August 2009 (UTC)

Here's Birchfall again, I hope he's better this time. Bracken- 20:12, 1 August 2009 (UTC)

He looks a lot better but next time can you post Birchfall at the same place as your first one. Stonestar 20:22, 1 August 2009 (UTC)Stonestar

He's much better. You just need to make the pink of the ear more triangular and less blurry, so that it doesn't interfere with the lineart. You could also look at some of the approved warrior images to get an idea of the small issues like the ear pink, shading, and how to make the pupil of the eye.-- Echomist Look out for flying hedgehogs! 01:05, 2 August 2009 (UTC)

The shading on the need is very... stand-out-ish. make it end at the tip of the whiskers and erase all that darker color that was paint over his neck. Some of his eye has went over the outer lineart. The shading needs to be blended a lot more, and needs to be darker. I can barely see it in some places. The tabby markings are almost a sickly green color. Make it only a shade or two darker than the pelt.--Warrior♥Warrior's Den 19:11, 2 August 2009 (UTC)

We're getting there. You have all the components it just looks a bit messy. You need to carefully blend the shading into the pelt so it is a smoother colour transition. Take a bit away from the top of the muzzle as it runs straight from the head and looks odd. Then straighten some of the markings so they look a bit neater and add some more in the gaps you've missed. Make the ear pink triangular and blend it in slightly. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 11:26, 3 August 2009 (UTC)

Blend the ear pink, like sandy said, but I think that the shape is fine. Make the pink a little bit darker, though... It's sort of bright. You need to blend the shading and markings tremendously. Try using the blur tool at http://www.pixlr.com/. It'll help you out. ;) Other than that, great image. :) --MUMBLE785 21:50, 5 August 2009 (UTC)

Okay, This should be okay, I changed the stripes, and blurred "everything" I hope this is good! -- Bracken-  Hey there! Whassup!!! 23:19, 7 August 2009 (UTC)

Thin the shading a little bit (It goes a little too far into the body), lighten it a little bit, and blend it some more. ;) --MUMBLE785 18:26, 8 August 2009 (UTC)

Re-uploaded! -- Bracken-  Hey there! Whassup!!! 23:36, 8 August 2009 (UTC)

Very good bracken-i love him!!!i just suggest to blend in a littl the shading. ♫ Shimmer ღ  23:51, 8 August 2009 (UTC)

re-uploaded Is he a bit too pink? -- Bracken-  Hey there! Whassup!!! 02:57, 9 August 2009 (UTC)

i've got 2 I'm not sure which one is better... Can you tell me maybe? -- Bracken-  Hey there! Whassup!!! 22:01, 9 August 2009 (UTC)

(M) - I personally like the first one. However, use the same eye technique you used on the second one on the first one. Mosswhisker and Steatlhfire 01:25, 10 August 2009 (UTC)

I got two more!!! new stripes. is blurred better? or non blurred stripes? -- Bracken-  Hey there! Whassup!!! 23:08, 10 August 2009 (UTC)

I like the color and the shading, but I think the shading needs to be blurred more... I think the stripes should be a tad bit thicker, and when blurring them be careful not to smudge the lineart because it looks like it got a bit blurred. Also, maybe vary the shape of the stripes a bit (make some longer, or some thicker, or make some 'Y' shaped) because not all the stripes on a tabby look the same. Otherwise, it looks great. --♫ insaneular ♫ 23:38, 10 August 2009 (UTC)

okay,3 -- Bracken-  Hey there! Whassup!!! 00:02, 11 August 2009 (UTC)

Right. I'm not sure which version you want to work on but personally I like the third best. Add tabby stripes on the rest of the body (and legs/tail/head etc). Make sure you have shading in all the required places: top of head, back ear, back, chest, tail, legs, curve of hindleg and blend it all a little without blending the lineart. You just need to neaten this image up a bit as everything's a little messy. Make the ear pink triangular and in the center of the ear and then blend a little. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 10:18, 14 August 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- Bracken-  Hey there! Whassup!!! 22:03, 16 August 2009 (UTC)


Make the stripes on the upper back longer, and add more shading.-- Darkhallows  Lair 17:43, 17 August 2009 (UTC)

The stripes look like you made a line then used the smudge tool. Make them firmer and add them on the head. Add stripes on his chest. Blur the shading and add more on the top of the head. Also thin the shading on the chest.Minnowclaw 20:07, 17 August 2009 (UTC)Minnowclaw

Re-uploaded-- Bracken-  Hey there! Whassup!!! 17:53, 18 August 2009 (UTC)

The tabby stripes look great (how did you do them? I'd be interested in giving them a go) Lighten the shading a little and blend it in more. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 13:15, 19 August 2009 (UTC)

There are some white pixels on his chest, and smudges all around outside/on the lineart. The tabby stripes are a little weird for me, but that's just me, I'm weird. xD --Quiet!... 06:17, 24 August 2009 (UTC)

reuploaded -- Bracken-  Hey there! Whassup!!! 16:41, 24 August 2009 (UTC)

I think it looks pretty good, Bracken-. I hate to be picky about some of the little things, but it sort of looked like some of the tabby stripes were different textures in one place than another. Try to make it look all the same, maybe smudge them together or make the lines diagonal rather than straight horizontal and vertical. Also, there's a couple of white pixels near his chest, can you fill those in? And just one other thing, some of the tabby stripes are in the outline black pixels, and others don't even look like they're touching the outline. Try to blend them together some more. Otherwise, it looks great. Icethroat21Hi, how's the prey running? 20:41, 24 August 2009 (UTC)

I agree with Icethroat, its looks like some tabby stripes are........jaggier, or sharper then other sites, I suggest to smudge all the stripes a bit. -- ღ♥Peacesong♥ღ  Peacesong's Talk 20:46, 24 August 2009 (UTC)

Very nice, but it looks like you've accidentally blurred some of the tail lineart. If you can't see it, I'll make a diagram for you.  Jane Volturi  Sparrowsong 19:11, 26 August 2009 (UTC)

I don't exactly know why, but the tabby markings are bothering me... I think it might be because I'm not yet used to the style. *shrugs* Oh well. I can be starnge sometimes... Other than that, he's looking pretty good. ;) --MUMBLE785MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 15:30, 29 August 2009 (UTC)

Pretty good, all I see is that there is a narrow stripe of gray on his back, erase that, otherwise, its very good! -- ♥Peacesong♥  Peace is here..... 21:49, 29 August 2009 (UTC)

gray? (can see it.....) anyways reuploaded this time I blurred the stripes... did I blur the lineart? -- Bracken-  Hey there! Whassup!!! 21:53, 29 August 2009 (UTC)

You blurred the lineart in some spots, (behind the back leg and a few spots on the tail). I like it better blurred. But that's just my opinion. We'll have to see what Bramble thinks. ;) --Spottedwing 00:52, 30 August 2009 (UTC)

I personally like the new stripes. They look more natural. I fixed the blurred lineart for you, Bracken. I think the only thing you really have left to do is blur the shading where it comes across the body. Other than that he's pretty good. --Bramble My Realm 17:21, 30 August 2009 (UTC)

REUPLOADEDwait, so is the blurred on better? or the other on the left? I reuploaded the one on the left -- ☆Darkkeh☆ Just try and shut me up 16:46, 31 August 2009 (UTC)

Blurred looks better, that way the tabby stripes won't be all jaggedy. -- ☮ ♫'Peacesong☮ ♫ Ready To Pounce! 21:52, 31 August 2009 (UTC)

The color is more of a cream or light ginger (like Sandstorm and Daisy) while it should be brown. I like the markings, they're kinda different but they look good.  Sparrowsong  Madly Blooming Princess 03:05, 1 September 2009 (UTC)

He's great bracken- just put more shading on the right legs.ღ Sunny ღ 16:31, September 1, 2009 (UTC)

wait, I thought Birchfall was light brown, his colour is a bit darker than Honeyfern who is also light brown so, should I change it? -- ☆Darkkeh☆ Narf.Yes 17:16, September 1, 2009 (UTC)

Yes, I would say to still make it a little darker. Mossflight 19:12, September 1, 2009 (UTC)

I like the second one better; just make the markings a little bit darker, and he'd be awesome. ;) But, that's my opinion. *shrugs* --MUMBLE785MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 23:12, September 1, 2009 (UTC)

re-uploadedokay, how's this?-- ☆Darkkeh☆ Narf.Yes 17:30, September 2, 2009 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink a little so it's more the same colour as the Original Ashfur (TC) warrior pic (see below) Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 17:43, September 2, 2009 (UTC)

reuploaded -- ☆Darkkeh☆ Narf.Yes 17:52, September 2, 2009 (UTC)

Bracken, it looks great! You're really improving. The only thing I can see is that there's a thin line sticking out on his back, probably from when you were fixing some blurred lineart? Just erase it, and it'll be fine. --♫ insaneular ♫ 13:25, September 3, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried adding highlights this time and darkened the stripes and fixed the thin line on his back, is this any better?-- ☆Darkkeh☆ uh...hi 19:38, September 3, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Add some shading on the far forleg and hindleg. They look very flat right now. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 21:56, September 3, 2009 (UTC)

reuploaded-- ☆Darkkeh☆ uh...hi 20:00, September 4, 2009 (UTC)

There's still a little lineart smudging, and a white pixel on his chest.--Quiet!... 20:10, September 4, 2009 (UTC)

All I can see is that the lineart on his back is smudged. -- Peacesong SkyClan: Always reaching new heights 20:13, September 4, 2009 (UTC)

Fix that and also add some more shading on the tail and hindquarters. It's almost there. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 08:36, September 5, 2009 (UTC)

Yes, as they said. : ) I LOVE him! --MUMBLE785MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 21:06, September 5, 2009 (UTC)

reuploaded-- ☆Darkkeh☆ uh...hi 00:40, September 6, 2009 (UTC)

There is some smudged line art on his hindquarter.-- Shim-ShimNewGladiator! 17:11, September 6, 2009 (UTC)

This looks like 99% ready, there are only a few small things, such as tiny bits of smudged lineart or a place where you might have gone outside the lines with the color. What I recommend is to zoom in a ton, then just go around the whole image looking for little places to be touched up, and then it should be good to go. The image looks great though! ♫ insaneular ♫ 18:20, September 6, 2009 (UTC)

reuploaded!-- ☆Darkkeh☆ uh...hi 04:35, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Comments before approval in 24 hours? Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 22:17, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

I think it looks great! Icethroat21Hi, how's the prey running? 01:03, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

Whew, approved. --Bramble My Realm 02:48, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

Twist- Approved

[[File:Twist.PNG]] I've had a lot of trouble with the face stripes, though I think they'd look better from the front. Ah well, here she is... there are three rogues up already, heh, I should have put up Lilystar.-- Darkhallows  Lair 14:28, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

No you shouldn't have put up Lilystar because this will be one before you can say mouse. Make the ear pink bigger and brighter.*Swallowtip * EMBRACE THE TIP! 14:33, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - I like this alot! Very good. Just fix the ear pink and this should be ready. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 18:15, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

I have just one other thing. On the face, there is a large amount of ginger fur in a sort of stripe up the back of her neck and head onto her ear. Can you extend the black across a little so this doesn't stand out so much? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 18:24, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

Changed her ear, face and texture.-- Darkhallows  Lair 22:41, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

Omg, brilliant. My favourite tortie yet. Comments before approval? -- Dawnfeather  talk! 10:13, September 8, 2009 (UTC)


Approved. -- Dawnfeather  talk! 12:21, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

Sasha-Approved

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This is my fisrt rogue.Really sorry Insaneular!!!Please help me make her better!Shim-Shim ★ 19:41, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

This is very pretty. Just blur the shading some more and that's all I can see at the moment. --Bramble My Realm 21:20, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

reuploaded-but i can't relly blur any more of the shading than what I just did.Shim-Shim ★ 17:20, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

I think she's beutiful!*Swallowtip * EMBRACE THE TIP! 17:31, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Hmm, I think this is ready. Comments before approval in 24 hours? Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 23:26, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

None. Approved. --Bramble My Realm 01:38, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

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