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Bluestar(Ki) - Approved


Well, Bluestar has to be my favorite cat, so I did her kit and apprentice forms. Here's her kit charart. Anything that needs to be fixed? --Quiet!... 20:08, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

This looks great! The ear pink looks too triangular, try blending it more. --Rainwhisker09 20:14, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

The shading under her neck is a sharp right angle, you need to fix that.*Swallowtip * EMBRACE THE TIP! 17:32, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

Updated. Better? --Quiet!... 20:49, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

She needs a silver tipped tail and a silver muzzle the same goes for Bluepaw.--Stonestar 20:57, September 8, 2009 (UTC)Stonestar

(M) - Stonestar, we decieded the the muzzle and tail-tip came with age when we where discussing Bluepaw. Comments before approval in 24 hours? Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 00:04, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

I think it looks great! Icethroat21Hi, how's the prey running? 00:24, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

Oh okay. --Stonestar 11:23, September 10, 2009 (UTC)Stonestar

Comments not relevant; approved. --Bramble My Realm 11:31, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

Brambleclaw (D) - Approved


Okay, my secopnd image up. I hope it doesn't look like I copied it. I opened my version, then opened the new warrior version in a diffrent page, then tried to make it look as similiar as possible. Well, here it is: Mossflight 06:59, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

Blend the shading on the hind leg and back as it is very visible. But very nice!*Swallowtip * EMBRACE THE TIP! 13:44, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

There's a white spot on his paw. Otherwise, it looks great! Awesome job! --Rainwhisker09 15:18, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

In addition to the minor problems above, there's a white pixel on his chest, too. Other than that, he looks wonderful! (: --Quiet!... 20:31, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

I agree with the others, but as I said on the warrior version - do you think you could add some soft highlights? -- Dawnfeather  talk! 10:09, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

Any suggestions where to put the highlight? Mossflight 14:41, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

Well until then I changed the white dots and blended the shading more. Mossflight 16:18, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? -- Dawnfeather  talk! 12:15, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

None. Approved. --Bramble My Realm 12:17, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

Darkflower (W) Approved

[[File:Darkflower_Warrior.png]] I did her as a queen so here she is as a warrior. Comments? --Spottedwing 19:09, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

Put a highlight in the eye. Just one white pixel on the upper left side of her eye. --Rainwhisker09 20:02, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a bit smaller and blend it more. Blur the transition of your shading as well, and some of the lineart has been blurred. I can fix it for you if need be. --Bramble My Realm 21:17, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks Bramble, but I'm going to try and get it myself. I'll just need a day or two. --Spottedwing 02:23, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Fixed the eye, blured shading, and went over lineart. --Spottedwing 23:49, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

Looks good to me. The eye is very pretty; I like the shade of blue you used. Comments before approval? --Bramble My Realm 21:21, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

Already? Wow thank you. --Spottedwing 01:31, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

Approved. --Bramble My Realm 21:28, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

Tigerstar(Ro) - Approved

[[File:Tigerclawrogue.png]] I like making Tigerclaw. it's almost a kind of obsession... Sorry I haven't been around much, especially to you, Bracken. I'll try and be a bit more active. Opinions, critism? Or in Sandy's words, contructments? -- Dawnfeather  talk! 09:39, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

So many rogues up! I guess we all like out-of-clan cats. He looks a little silver as opposed to brown.-- Darkhallows  My den 10:04, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

I've purposely made the shading weird, well, rather the highlighting, because maybe he went to see a moonstone or an intense light on the ground during his time as a rogue as he was prophecised to lead ShadowClan. Just a random thought. Is it too light? -- Dawnfeather  talk! 10:18, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

Hm, actually I like it. It's different ^^.-- Darkhallows  My den 10:25, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

That's the point ;D (lol) Are you sure you don't want me to change it? (Or anything else for that matter?) -- Dawnfeather  talk! 10:27, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

I made the highlight on the beely a little bit lighter in the second image. Which one is better? -- Dawnfeather  talk! 10:32, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

I like the seconded one better  Brambleclaw14 Talk 10:47, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

The second one is better but I think that it looks to silver.*Swallowtip * EMBRACE THE TIP! 17:57, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

I <3 this :) I like the second image best... the one thing bothering me is that he's a dark brown tabby tom, and this really is kinda light... can you darken it a little maybe, without losing the great shading and highlights? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 19:52, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

Wow, I love the sahding style on this! I think the second one's the best. Just darken it like Sandy suggested. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 23:16, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

Is this better? I tried to keep the shading in there. -- Dawnfeather  talk! 12:48, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

Perfect. (Just needs transparency). Comments before approval? --Bramble My Realm 21:27, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

I'll add the transparency. GB57 22:49, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

Dawn, you are amazing! This is a gorgeous image. I love the new shading style, and I really don't have a problem with it (the picture).  Sparrowsong  Madly Blooming Princess 02:53, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

Approved. --Bramble My Realm 21:28, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

Flowerstem(Le) - Approved

[[File:Flowerstar.png]] The leader that become of Flowerstem, one of the worst named characters I have ever had the un-fortunate to read about. Oh well. Any opinions? -- Dawnfeather  talk! 09:41, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

Heh, seeing her name makes me think of the dandelion stems I ate as a little kid (don't ask). She's very pretty. Though I think the chest shading could use some work (I've been online for like.. 7 hours now xD, so glad a new image is up).-- Darkhallows  My den 10:03, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

But I am asking. (Nah, lol don't worry. I used to eat little bean type things out of prickles. My friend told me that if I ate three I would gorw invisible fairy wings. That brought upon a month of jumping of a handrail in the school playground trying to fly.) Is she better? -- Dawnfeather  talk! 10:24, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

Lol. My dad said if you were thirsty to rip off the top and suck on the stem (I hope he was joking!), it didn't taste very pleasant. So yeah, for years I'd suck on flower stems. At any rate I think she looks great now.-- Darkhallows  My den 10:32, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks. (lol) -- Dawnfeather  talk! 10:34, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

Blend all the shading.*Swallowtip * EMBRACE THE TIP! 17:54, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

Blended, Blent, Blendified, Blendness, or Blendical. Your choice. whichever one you choose, I did it. (lol) -- Dawnfeather  talk! 12:51, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

I like blendical. :) Comments before approval? --Bramble My Realm 21:26, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

None. Approved. --Bramble My Realm 21:28, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

Sunspots - Approved


I'm beginning to like ginger-and-white cats for some reason... I don't know. Anyways, here's Sunspots, a queen from CoOTC. She has like one line, so I thought I'd do her to make up for it. Constructments? --Bramble My Realm 21:58, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Beautiful Bramble! I see nothing wrong. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 22:00, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

The ginger is slightly bright. Try darkening it a tad? Hawkey Ready for action 00:31, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

I would add another ginger patch on her chest.  Sparrowsong  Madly Blooming Princess 01:08, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

I agree with Sparrowsong. Heh, I keep meaning to try a ginger or ginger and white cat, surprisingly I haven't done one before... -- Darkhallows  Lair 04:21, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

Can you darken the shading a little? I can barely see it. Other than that, this looks great! Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 18:37, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks. :) Will do, tomorrow before/after school. --Bramble My Realm 03:24, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

Tried to darken shading, added a patch on her chest, and attempted to make the patches a touch darker. --Bramble My Realm 21:18, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before aproval? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 20:22, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

None. Approving. --Bramble My Realm 04:10, September 12, 2009 (UTC)

Oakheart - Approved

Oakheart.deputy Well, here's Oakheart! I've had him on my computer, like, forever, and I'm finally getting to put him up! ^.^ He's my first tabby, so the stripes probably need some fixing... comments/criticism?-- Echomist Hear the Echo... 12:45, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

This is really great for your first tabby! I don't see anything wrong with the stripes, personally. You could make the shading a bit darker, though.  Sparrowsong  Madly Blooming Princess 16:51, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

I always pictured him a bit more gingerish, but it never specifies it in a book :P The tabby markings are great! Just add a bit more shading and blur everything (including the tabby markings, but only a little bit so they look natural. Don't smudge them into blurry messes) ♫ insaneular ♫Down at Fraggle Rock! 19:48, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

There is not much wrong with the image, but where does it say he is tabby? His official description is a bracken-colored tom, and I never remember him being mentioned as a tabby. Book reference? --Bramble My Realm 21:14, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

In the Into the Wild allegiances, he is a reddish brown tom. In the prologue of Forest of Secrets, he is mentioned as a bracken-colored tom. I didn't read anything before about Oakheart being a tabby. --Rainwhisker09 13:46, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

I've never seen him as a tabby either... I also think he needs to be slightly more red. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 17:59, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

Reddish-brown is basically the same as ginger, and virtually all ginger cats are tabbies. I think the tabby markings should stay.  Sparrowsong  Madly Blooming Princess 19:08, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

Russetfur wasn't made as a tabby. If his definition is bracken-colored tom, then there should be no tabby stripes. We'll keep realism out of the picture for now. The people who look here don't care overly much. :) --Bramble My Realm 21:02, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Got rid of the stripes and made the color more reddish.-- Echomist Hear the Echo... 22:30, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Comments before approval in 24 hours? Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 19:15, September 11, 2009 (UTC)

Frisk - Approved

[[File:Frisk.png]] I wanted to try a kit, because they're quick and I hadn't done one before. I had trouble making his flecks look good, and I wasn't sure how much to shade (because I'm on a computer with a bad display, and whenever I go back to my good one the shading looks more dramatic). How does it look? ♫ insaneular ♫Down at Fraggle Rock! 17:34, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - He's so cute! Your shading doesn't look to dark to me. Just blur it a bit more. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 18:22, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded and tried to blur more, although I was on pixlr which is hard to blur with, so it might not be visibly better. Tomorrow night I'll be on my computer with GIMP so I can blur more accurately and powerfully, if it's needed. ♫ insaneular ♫Down at Fraggle Rock! 23:36, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

Aw he's cute. Did you make him on Pixlr? You must be very talented as I can't do it for my life xD. The blurtool is so weak..-- Darkhallows  My den 04:45, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

Yes, I used pixlr, although the weak blur and the fact that whenever you reopen an image the layers are merged are the reasons I don't like it... ♫ insaneular ♫Down at Fraggle Rock! 19:08, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

I love this. It may be my computer, but it looks like there are some lightish-gray clouds near him. If I'm wrong, I'd be glad to start the 24 hours. GB57 22:47, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - It's not your computer; I see the clouds too. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 22:53, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

I notice them as well. Icethroat21Enter at risk 21:26, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded and removed the clouds. ♫ insaneular ♫Down at Fraggle Rock! 22:50, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Comments before approval in 24 hours? Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 19:22, September 11, 2009 (UTC)

None. Approved. --Bramble My Realm 01:34, September 13, 2009 (UTC)


File:Lilystar.png I've had her sitting in my hard-drive forever, like over a month. I think she's pretty, but that's not for me to decide :D.-- Darkhallows  Lair 23:21, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - WOW. Uber pretty! Just darken the ear pink a shade, its so light now that I can barely see it. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 00:02, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

This is beautiful. Just darken the ear pink and she should be good to go. Hawkey Ready for action 00:32, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

Darkened-- Darkhallows  Lair 01:03, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

I'm with Hawky. Comments before approval? -- Dawnfeather  talk! 10:25, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

I think that you need to blend the shading a lot more.*Swallowtip * EMBRACE THE TIP! 17:58, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

I like the shading... The nose needs to be pink though, not grey. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 19:49, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - I think the shading's fine, but add a highlight in the eye too. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 23:21, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

The shading is blended to 100%, and gray cats have gray noses ([ gray cat) I will change the eye though.-- Darkhallows  My den 23:28, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

I changed the eye and made the nose pinker (but still gray)-- Darkhallows  My den 07:52, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

Her left eye and our right, it looks like you made the highlight go over the eye lineart; fix that. Then she'll be good. --Bramble My Realm 11:42, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

Fixed her eye.-- Darkhallows  My den 09:02, September 12, 2009 (UTC)

Coments before approval? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 13:40, September 12, 2009 (UTC)

Approved.--Stonestar 14:09, September 13, 2009 (UTC)Stonestar

Seconding. Stonestar - only senior members have the authority to approve images... Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 14:18, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

Mosspelt - Approved


(M) - Mosspelt seems like a great cat. She was nice to Graystripe while he was in RiverClan, she was mother of our famous Willowshine, and nursed Stormfur and Feathertail. Plus she shares my name!

(insert lightning flash here) SHE...HAS FUR! xP This is my first tortishell up for approval, and I tried to made it as relistic as possible. Comments? Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 18:10, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink. I can't see it. --Rainwhisker09 20:07, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

I wouldn't say to lighten the ear pink, because darker cats are supposed to have that color. What I would say is to make it a bit more solid so its easier to see. --Quiet!... 20:21, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Changed the ear pink, look any better? Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 21:51, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

The black seems so flat... add darker and lighter shades.-- Darkhallows  Lair 01:08, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Adding different shades of black would make it look brindled and non-tortishell...I tried adding some small flecks of colors in the black, and I lightened the neck shading becuase it seemed to dark. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 23:13, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Anything else I need to change? Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 22:51, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

The only thing that bugs me is that the shading seems more darkly saturated and sort of blotchy on the pelt than showing where shadow is. Make the shading more natural, than she'll be good. --Bramble My Realm 02:31, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

The definition of saturation is soaked, impregnated, or imbued thoroughly; charged thoroughly or completely; of maximum chroma or purity; of the highest intensity of hue; free from a mixture of white. Can you tell I got that straight from =) Anyways, basically just make it less... wet-looking. There should be a sponge tool somewhere; set it to desaturate and go over the shading. --Bramble My Realm 20:58, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Thanks Brable! I knew what saturation is, but I wasn't sure how it's used in shading. So I desaturated the shading, and discovered a way to use the dodge tool as a lighten shading tool bascally, so I lightened the shading in a few places. Then I blurred the shading a bit more. Better? Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 23:47, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

I don't know about Bramblt, but it looks great to me! Comments before approval? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 13:38, September 12, 2009 (UTC)

omaigawd I love her... O.O --MUMBLE785MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 21:42, September 12, 2009 (UTC)

Lol, both of you spelled my name wrong two different ways. It does look great, Moss. --Bramble My Realm 01:33, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

Oopsie... lol typo! Approved Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 14:27, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

Flamepaw - Approved

[[File:FlamepawMCA.png]]Now that my medicine cat apprentice blanks are approved, I want to use them. Here's Flamepaw!Minnowclaw 00:17, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

He looks great but could you change the pelt color to more of a ginger color it looks like a reddish pink to me.--Stonestar 00:31, September 10, 2009 (UTC)Stonestar

I agree with Stonestar, it looks more of a reddish pink color. Otherwise, it looks great! Icethroat21Hi, how's the prey running? 00:34, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

Love it, as they said above, it looks pinkish-orange color. Other thing, the ear pink is too bright. Try darkening it a little. The ear pink also looks round, make it triangular. Hawkey Ready for action 02:26, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

Looks great :) You need to match the colour to File:Flamekit.png if that helps. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 17:46, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

Any better?Minnowclaw 14:11, September 12, 2009 (UTC)

Yeah thats the perfect shade.--Stonestar 14:14, September 12, 2009 (UTC)Stonestar

Much better. Icethroat21Enter at risk 16:48, September 12, 2009 (UTC)

It's just a bit blotchy now - blend a little and he'll be good to go. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 14:35, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

Better?Minnowclaw 17:26, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Looks good to me. Comments before approval in 24 hours? Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 18:18, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

None. Approved. --Bramble My Realm 02:30, September 15, 2009 (UTC)

Bluestar(A) - Approved

File:Bluestar Apprentice.png

Introducing... BLUEPAW! Anything that needs to be fixed? --Quiet!... 20:16, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

This is beautiful! All I can see, is that maybe you should blend the ear a bit more. --HoneyfurBob's Your Uncle! 20:22, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

Oh, and Bluestar has a silver-tinged muzzle, and silver-tipped tail. ;) --HoneyfurBob's Your Uncle! 20:23, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

I didn't add the silver muzzle and tail tips because (from what I know) those came with age. unless someone has proof of otherwise, I'm not going to add it. :\ --Quiet!... 20:35, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

I always thought that too. I think it's fine as it is. One thing; the shading seems to go right across the face. Make it more curved downward, so it's as if she has a jaw shadow. --Bramble My Realm 21:22, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Wow... O.O She needs a pupil in her eye though. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 21:52, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

Updated. Anything else? --Quiet!... 01:12, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

The neck shading needs to be blended more.*Swallowtip * EMBRACE THE TIP! 17:33, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

Kay, I'm gonna' fix that in a minute, but one thing... Bluekit wasn't put on the approved art list? o.O;; Any reason why, because after all, its not on this page anymore, and its on her page.--Quiet!... 00:41, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry Quiet! The approved list is now updated. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 16:06, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Beautiful! Comments before approval (24 hours?) Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 18:01, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

I think it looks great, shading and all. This is great, Quiet! Icethroat21Enter at risk 18:53, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks, guys! Kinda' funny seeing "Quiet" with the exclamation mark after it. Makes me wonder if its because of my signature or not. XD--Quiet!... 00:31, September 14, 2009 (UTC)

Icethroat, if there’s nothing to be improved upon the image, please don’t comment at all. Approved. --Bramble My Realm 02:30, September 15, 2009 (UTC)

Rosetail - Approved


Here's my first elder. Is she good? Her description was kinda confusing - I thought that 'pinkish-orange' would be a color similar to Brackenfoot's, but I'm not quite sure. Anyways, comments?  Sparrowsong  Madly Blooming Princess 17:28, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

I like it. But in Bluestar's Prophecy it was revealed Rosetail was a tabby. Could you add some stripes? Hawkey Ready for action 18:00, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

Yes, and add more shading too :) Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 18:21, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - I took this off of the thumbnail becuase it was messing up the layout of the section below this slightly... I hope you don't mind. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 18:26, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks Moss. And I added stripes and more shading.  Sparrowsong  Madly Blooming Princess 18:34, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

I thought she was a brown tabby with a red tail, like Poppydawn?-- Darkhallows  My den 04:49, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

As far as I know, it never said that. I have not read BSP, though, so I can't really be sure...  Sparrowsong  Madly Blooming Princess 06:13, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

I don't have my copy on me but it says something like: "...named her Rosekit because of the red spots on her tail." and "the tabby warrior"/"the red-tailed warrior." and her mother was Poppydawn. Heh, I actually paid close attention to her part because I quite enjoyed her character.-- Darkhallows  My den 10:17, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

Hmm...I don't think I can change her to brown without completely redoing the image. Perhaps I could add some darker ginger spots on her tail?  Sparrowsong  Madly Blooming Princess 23:07, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

It also mentions her having a "pinky-orange" tail.. I wish they had kept her description strait. "The red-tailed warrior changed the subject..." "Snowkit named her for the pinky-orange color of her tail" "The young tabby..." I think she should be OK the ways she is.-- Darkhallows  My den 07:41, September 9, 2009 (UTC) there anything else I can do to improve her?  Sparrowsong  Madly Blooming Princess 16:51, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

No, this is lovely. Comments before approval? GB57 22:44, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

  • Blushes* Thanks, GB!  Sparrowsong  Madly Blooming Princess 02:41, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

I thought that it was just her tail that was orange-pinkish, and that the rest of her fur was tortoiseshell or white or something, like Sweetpaw and Thistleclaw. But I think this pic will be fine. It looks great! Icethroat21Enter at risk 21:29, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

I don't mean to sound demanding and I know you guys must be busy, but it's been over 24 hours.  Sparrowsong  Madly Blooming Princess 19:27, September 12, 2009 (UTC)

You are right, but I have a comment to add (sorry). The shading really does need to be blurred into the pelt more. There's too hard of a line. --Bramble My Realm 01:33, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

Better?  Sparrowsong  Madly Blooming Princess 17:19, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

Looks much better, but try blending it just a tad bit more. Just a bit more blending so it's not such a hard line, and it should be fine. Icethroat21Enter at risk 18:43, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

I blended it more. I accidentally blurred some of the stripes more, too - hope that's ok.  Sparrowsong  Madly Blooming Princess 19:33, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

Looks good to me. Comments before approval? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 19:34, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

None. Approved. --Bramble My Realm 02:30, September 15, 2009 (UTC)

Flora - approved

File:Flora.pngwell... my first pic, o god please don't hurt me!*Swallowtip * EMBRACE THE TIP! 13:43, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

She's cute Swallowtip! I'm like half asleep and the only thing I see is the eye doesn't have a pupil.-- Darkhallows  Lair 14:32, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I added a black spot to make the pupil more noticeable, better?*Swallowtip * EMBRACE THE TIP! 14:41, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

Is the nose supposed to be pink? I thought we made them black (except for the queen blanks). --Rainwhisker09 15:15, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - This is great for your first image! Blackclaw, the noses should be pink if on the blanks they are not colored in black. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 18:20, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

The brown under the ear cuts off in an abrupt line, can you smooth this out a little? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 18:25, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I know it doesn't look much different, but I tried to get it there with the blur tool and it didn't work so I smudged it.*Swallowtip * EMBRACE THE TIP! 19:49, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

It looks great! Very nice job. --Rainwhisker09 20:10, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Try taking the brown patch and spreading it over that little patch on white on the ear pink to make it look more natural. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 21:56, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkened ear pink and extend the brown patch.*Swallowtip * EMBRACE THE TIP! 02:21, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

She's very nice, but some of the patches are too circular for their own good. Mabe make them a bit more randomly shaped, especially that one on the belly? -- Dawnfeather  talk! 10:12, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Lightened the patches and made them more random.*Swallowtip * EMBRACE THE TIP! 17:30, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Just give the eye and nose some color and she should be ready. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 23:31, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

That was dumb of me to forget that. Oh well, Reuploaded.*Swallowtip * EMBRACE THE TIP! 00:03, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

Also, her back looks a bit blank. Maybe you should add one more patch there. DOn't forget to blend! =D -- Dawnfeather  talk! 12:18, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

And all of your lovely shading has gone! You'll have to redo that. Just do hese two things and she should be ready.

ReuploadedI wouldn't call it lovely, but thanks, who ever you are. Made a patch on the back and added shading.*Swallowtip * EMBRACE THE TIP! 00:22, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Just blur your shading more and it should be ready. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 19:21, September 11, 2009 (UTC)

ReuploadedBlended the shading more.*Swallowtip * EMBRACE THE TIP! 20:59, September 12, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Much better. Comments before approval in 24 hours? Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 18:03, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

Add some more shading on the white parts of her, and add some highlights. -- Pandasong Pandasong's Talk Page 17:00, September 13, 2009 (UTC) 22:23, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded added more shading, but highlights aren't necessary and if Mosswhisker thinks it okay then I'm not adding them.*Swallowtip * EMBRACE THE TIP! 23:13, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Better. Repeating 24 hours. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 21:27, September 15, 2009 (UTC)

Approved. --Bramble My Realm 01:37, September 17, 2009 (UTC)

Blackfoot (Ro) - Approved

[[File:Blackfootrogue.png]] Well, he did have a sentence of exile for awhile, and we all know he was one of 'Brokenstar's Rogues', the new pop sensation, so I figured that he needs a rogue image as well. -- Dawnfeather  talk! 07:18, September 15, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Very nice! Just blur your shading in more. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 21:21, September 15, 2009 (UTC)

Fixed up shading. Any better? -- Dawnfeather  talk! 06:24, September 16, 2009 (UTC)

Looks good to me. comments before approval? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 19:01, September 17, 2009 (UTC)

Approved. --Bramble My Realm 21:38, September 18, 2009 (UTC)

Scourge ~ (R) Approved

File:Scourge (r).png

I'm Baaaaaaaaa-aack! Sorry about my inactivity, but it looks like tweak week's over, so here's scourge! He turned out very well, though I may need to adjust him. Suggestions? --MUMBLE785MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 21:34, September 12, 2009 (UTC)

It's GREAT! The only thing I can see is that he needs the white paw, and that his right ear (our left) shouldn't have pink. Other than that, I absolutely love this.  Sparrowsong  Madly Blooming Princess 21:53, September 12, 2009 (UTC)

Thank you! ^-^ I'll do that. --MUMBLE785MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 22:17, September 12, 2009 (UTC)

REUPLOOOOAAADED!!! Added teh white paw, took away zeh ear pink on one ear. Is that better? --MUMBLE785MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 22:38, September 12, 2009 (UTC)

The white paw looks very good, lots better! Pandasong Pandasong's Talk Page 00:07, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

oops, I thought I was doing scourge! (NVM yours a lot better)X3 he has a dark purple collar -- ☆Brackenstorm☆ X3 00:09, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Very good! Just a few things though. Like Bracken said, the collar is dark purple, and it looks like it has spikes right now. It actually has dog teath, which would be longer, curved, and would be flipped in different directions. Very good image though! Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 14:18, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

The single white paw looks more of a light-gray-silverish color, rather than white. And as Mosswhisker said above, purple color, bigger teeth, etc. Otherwise, this looks great! Icethroat21Enter at risk 00:10, September 14, 2009 (UTC)

The paw is shaded, so that's why it's not pure white. But, I'll get to work on the changes. ; ) Also, If I am inactive, please excuse my abcense as my schoolwork pushes most of my computer time into my weekends. I'll try to get on more often, sooo... Yeah. Please don't delete meh images! Thank you! --MUMBLE785MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 00:15, September 17, 2009 (UTC)

Should I make every HUGE to make him tiny? xD Jk. Anyway, REUPLOADED with a fixed collar. --MUMBLE785MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 01:15, September 17, 2009 (UTC)

Wow, the collar looks so much better! It looks really cool! Icethroat21Enter at risk 02:22, September 17, 2009 (UTC)

I have to agree. The image actually looks very good as it is. Good job, Mumble. Comments before approval? --Bramble My Realm 21:11, September 17, 2009 (UTC)

Thank you! :) --MUMBLE785MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 00:40, September 18, 2009 (UTC)

Approved. --Bramble My Realm 21:38, September 18, 2009 (UTC)

Ratscar - Approved

[[File:RatscarV2(2).png]] Alright, this is my first charart! Well, what do you think? I feel like I need a lot more shading, and I think that the scar looks a little weird...Icethroat21Hi, how's the prey running? 20:15, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

Yeah, the scar looks strange, you should blend it a little bit, add some more shading and then blur it, looks okay. -- Peacesong Click Here To Go To........My Talk Page 22:43, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - This is good for your first image! For the scar, lighten it so it's more pink, blur it thoroghly, and try putting it horazontally across the back. Lighten the ear pink and blur it too. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 23:20, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded! Okay, what else can I do to improve? I feel like I went crazy on the shading, and that the scar is too big, but I'm not really sure how to make it any smaller without destroying some of the shading, or the scar itself. Can anybody give me any suggestions, and tell me what you think? Icethroat21Hi, how's the prey running? 00:59, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

Alright, since no one has said anything yet, can I just ask about the shading? I think I got it too dark, and I'm thinking if I could have gone without the highlights or not... Icethroat21Hi, how's the prey running? 21:07, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Whoops, sorry. Lighten the shading, as it is pretty dark right now, and try making the scar a little shorter, just past the edge of your image. Also, make the eye more like the other approved warrior's eyes. Then we'll work on shading. ;) Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 22:46, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Okay, I made the scar shorter, and I tried to make the shading a little less dark by blurring it a little more, but I think it looks messier now. And I tried doing what you said about the eye, too. Anything else besides needing to make the shading even brighter? I'm not sure how to make it any brighter than it is now. Any suggestions? Icethroat21Hi, how's the prey running? 23:40, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - To lighten the shading you run the dodge tool - a black stick with a black ball - over your shading. I can fix it if you want me too. And the ear pink is much to bright; use a color simalar to other brown cats. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 22:45, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I fixed the ear pink, or at least tried to, and I tried to make the shading brighter. Do I need to make it even brighter? Icethroat21Enter at risk 23:43, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Select the dodge tool, and in the box and the top set it to shadows. Then bring the stength down to 7. That should lighten the shading. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 19:18, September 11, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded! Is the shading bright enough? Icethroat21Enter at risk 20:10, September 11, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Getting there! Lighten it a bit more though. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 19:57, September 12, 2009 (UTC)

He's awesome, Icethroat! The things I see though, is that you may want to blend it some more, and I thought I saw a little bit of blurred lineart somewhere... *shrugs* Maybe not. --MUMBLE785MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 21:37, September 12, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded! I brightened and blended the shading a lot more. Or, at least tried to, anyway. Well, what do you think? And yes, there was some blended lineart, Mumble, I tried to fix it, but I'm not sure if it worked or not. How did I do? Is the shading bright enough, Mosswhisker? Icethroat21Enter at risk 00:37, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

Your shading is a sickly grey colour and the whole image is blotchy. You need to take all the shading off and start over, using the burn tool at about 50% and running is once down the appropriate areas. Don't put shading around the outside of the ear pink as this just looks messy and like you've smudged the lineart. Then blend it all in. The shading should look a darker brown, not grey. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 16:03, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

REUPLOADED. I started everything over from scratch, and redid the shading like you said. Instead of using the smudge tool, which I've learned not to use, I used different shades of brown and brought them together, and then blended them. Does it look any better? How did I do? Icethroat21Enter at risk 23:48, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

Beautiful. Much better, he looks like a new cat. Just increase the amount of shading on the main body and blur it as well as the shading on the tail. --Bramble My Realm 01:07, September 14, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks, Bramble! I'm afraid I don't have time to work on the image until tomorrow after school and homework, but I promise I'll get to it soon! Icethroat21Enter at risk 01:23, September 14, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Scratch that, I found just a little bit of time to work on it. I added a lot more shading, but I didn't add any on the muzzle or the top of the head. Do I need any on the top of the head? Icethroat21Enter at risk 01:51, September 14, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - This is really looking nice! Blur your shading more (Be careful not to hit the lineart!), and add some in the middle of the back like on Bluefur. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 23:08, September 14, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks, Mosswhisker! I'll get to it sometime tomorrow after school and stuff. :) By the way, were you talking about Bluefur warrior or deputy? (and what did you mean by back line?) Icethroat21Enter at risk 01:36, September 15, 2009 (UTC)

REUPLOADED. Okay, I blended the shading some, and tried to make the transition between the shading and the normal fur a bit lighter and not as hard. But I'm still not certain what you mean by the back line. (I know, probably something obvious that I am once again missing.) Well, what else needs improved? Icethroat21Enter at risk 21:21, September 15, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - I meant the deputy version. :) And I said "on the back like". Just add shading in the middle, basically. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 21:25, September 15, 2009 (UTC)

Oh, sorry, my bad. *face-palm* Okay, I'll get to that and reupload it soon! Icethroat21Enter at risk 21:33, September 15, 2009 (UTC)

**REUPLOADED** I think I did the right thing...if not, let me know. But I think I added the right thing, with the back and does it look? Icethroat21Enter at risk 22:07, September 15, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Perfect! Just darken the new shading a smidge. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 23:00, September 16, 2009 (UTC)

**REUPLOADED** Okay, I darkened it a bit. What do you think? Icethroat21Enter at risk 23:51, September 16, 2009 (UTC)

He's come very far. He looks awesome. Comments before approval? --Bramble My Realm 21:13, September 17, 2009 (UTC)

Yes I love him and the scar! That is all.*Swallowtip * EMBRACE THE TIP! 01:38, September 18, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks, Swallowtip, Bramble! *squeal of excitement* Icethroat21Enter at risk 10:58, September 18, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Congrats Icethroat! This looks great! Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 22:09, September 18, 2009 (UTC)

Approved. --Bramble My Realm 22:10, September 18, 2009 (UTC)

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