Pine - Approved


OK my Fist try so tell me what is not right  Brambleclaw14 Talk 08:32, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

Hi Brambleclaw, that's really good for a first try! Lol, you just barely beat me to putting up the first rogue for approval ever, since the blanks are fairly new, but... XD I can only see a few things you need to change: First, you need shading. It looks like you might have a little, but you need much more. Just decide where your light source is and then figure out where the highlights and shadows would fall. Next, this isn't necessary, but you might want to make the fur slightly off white, because in reality cats aren't perfectly white. Then, the spots. I really like your arrangement, but make a few of them different sizes so it looks a bit more natural. Then, just take the Blue tool (almost every image program has one) and go over all of the color- but don't blur the lines! I know this can sound like a lot to take in, but trust me, that is really good for a first try. ♫ insaneular ♫Down at Fraggle Rock! 12:24, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

Is it just me or is the picture stretched? Also, it looks as if you put shading but in a cream color. You don't want that color for shading. What I recommend for shading is making the cat slightly less white and then taken the burn tool and going over it a lot of times until you can see and differentiate what is shading and what is pelt, but don't forget to blend.*Swallowtip * EMBRACE THE TIP! 13:46, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

It does look stretched. I'm going with Swallowtip on this one. Try making the cat fur a little more grayer, and use the burn tool all over the belly and the chest. --Rainwhisker09 15:13, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

OK I will do all of it soon :/  Brambleclaw14 Talk 16:31, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

The whole thing is a little fuzzy.-- Darkhallows  My den 04:43, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

Well it's a try :/ sould the old file be got rid of?  Brambleclaw14 Talk 09:49, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

Didn't you upload the file with the same name? --Rainwhisker09 12:30, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

nope :/  Brambleclaw14 Talk 14:36, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

You should always upload over the old file. The corrcet file name for this image would be something like: Pine.rogue.png Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 19:46, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

OK I will, if I upload it more  Brambleclaw14 Talk 08:19, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

OK, this file is now called "File:Pine.rogue.png, per suggestion, if I upload any more they will be uploaded over the top of this file. As to what I've done: It shouldn't be streached, if it is then it's a problem with the blank template. Shouldn't be fuzzy (and if it is... well, cats are fuzzy :)). I've added some shading in. Redone the spots and ears. Thanks  Brambleclaw14 Talk 11:29, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

He's nearly there you just need to add a touch of shading on the tail and blend the ear pink into the pelt a bit more. -- Dawnfeather  talk! 12:17, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

OK will do so soon  Brambleclaw14 Talk 13:05, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

I've done it now. I also had to redo the spots, because I deleted them by accident  Brambleclaw14 Talk 13:41, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Very nice! Just color in his eye and give him a pupil and a highlight. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 22:49, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

Ahh yes I was going say I can't find what eye color he has, and what is the pupil?  Brambleclaw14 Talk 07:14, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

oops I know what the pupil is :) I will do the highlight soon,  Brambleclaw14 Talk 14:00, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

sorry this is being so long, but I will do it.  Brambleclaw14 Talk 08:45, September 14, 2009 (UTC)
OK then I put in the pupil, for the eye color well you can see what color it is.  Brambleclaw14 Talk 09:49, September 15, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - The pupil looks strange; try looking at some of the approved rogue's eyes. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 21:30, September 15, 2009 (UTC)

OK then I will do it on thursday :/ (and what is the (m) for?)  Brambleclaw14 Talk 08:35, September 16, 2009 (UTC)

I think (M) stands for Mosswhisker. --Rainwhisker 12:34, September 16, 2009 (UTC)

OK  Brambleclaw14 Talk 12:40, September 16, 2009 (UTC)
OK is this one al right?  Brambleclaw14 Talk 10:51, September 17, 2009 (UTC)

I think he's pretty good now. But what do I know? I'm a newbie.*Swallowtip * EMBRACE THE TIP! 23:40, September 17, 2009 (UTC)

I see nothig wrong! Great work Shruggy. Comments before approval? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 19:24, September 18, 2009 (UTC)

Approved. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 17:52, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

Hollyleaf (Ki) - Approved

Hollyleaf.kit Not much to say about this one, but I need more shading, don't I? Does it need to be darker? Icethroat21Enter at risk 00:55, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

This is amazing! You're very talented. Now, the only thing I can see is that she needs a shadow under her chin. Look at some of the approved kits - Briarkit, Mosskit, and Ruby are a few good examples.  Sparrowsong  Madly Blooming Princess 01:45, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Okay, how does it look, now that I added the shadow under her chin? Icethroat21Enter at risk 02:02, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

You're an extremely talented artist. 24 hours starting now. GB57 15:40, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

None; approved Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 14:41, September 20, 2009 (UTC)

Brackenfur - Approved


Here's Brackenfur, my second-favorite warrior (Tawnypelt is my #1 fave). Hopefully it's better than my first Brackenfur, which looked like a possessed chihuahua. Comments?  Sparrowsong  Madly Blooming Princess 18:45, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - I broke out laughing when I read your comment about the possessed chihuahua. This is good! Just make it so your ear pink isn't touching the bottem of the ear, and see if you can blend it more. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 18:49, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

I think it looks very nice! Just blend the shading a little more! -- Peacesong Click Here To Go To........My Talk Page 18:51, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

I fixed the shading and the ear pink. Is it better now?  Sparrowsong  Madly Blooming Princess 18:57, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

The transition between shading and regular pelt is still too hard. Blend until you can't see a line separating them. The two tabby stripes coming out from his chest, separate them a little bit, it looks likes one big awkward stripe. --Bramble My Realm 21:26, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

Better?  Sparrowsong  Madly Blooming Princess 01:06, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

...Any comments?  Sparrowsong  Madly Blooming Princess 20:46, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

If you could get rid of the mark just below his eye, it would be better. It looks crowded in that area. Also, on the back, there is a strip of light just after the shading and against the lineart. --Bramble My Realm 21:23, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

I've fixed the eye mark...I don't know what you mean by 'strip of light.' Would you mind circling it or something? Thanks.  Sparrowsong  Madly Blooming Princess 02:41, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

You need to extend the shading right up to the lineart on the back - basically, you've missed a spot right next to the lineart. I don't think a diagram is realy necessary to explain this. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 17:40, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

I think I've fixed it now.  Sparrowsong  Madly Blooming Princess 17:52, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

Now you've blurred the lineart there a bit Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 20:30, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

Un-blurred the lineart.  Sparrowsong  Madly Blooming Princess 22:27, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

Is there anything else that I need to fix?  Sparrowsong  Madly Blooming Princess 01:38, September 12, 2009 (UTC)

you should change the eye, try and use technique that the other warriors (erm...see Oakheart) have.-- ☆Brackenstorm☆ X3 02:19, September 12, 2009 (UTC)

I fixed the eye.  Sparrowsong  Madly Blooming Princess 03:39, September 12, 2009 (UTC)

This looks great, but I thought Brackenfur had amber eyes. I don't know where it said his eye color was, but I thought it was amber... Icethroat21Enter at risk 00:54, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

I don't think it ever mentioned his eye color, Ice. I imagined him with blue eyes (like Honeyfern and Poppyfrost), but we can't really be sure...  Sparrowsong  Madly Blooming Princess 17:19, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

That's okay, you have a fine point. I think it's okay if his eyes stay blue. I was just thinking that Honeyfern and Poppyfrost got their blue eyes down the bloodline from Frostfur. I imagined him with amber eyes, because lots of the golden and brown tabbies we have seen so far have all had amber eyes. But I think that blue eyes will be fine. Icethroat21Enter at risk 18:50, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

Alright then. Anything need to be fixed?  Sparrowsong  Madly Blooming Princess 04:33, September 15, 2009 (UTC)

Center the ear pink. Then he's good to go. --Bramble My Realm 21:14, September 17, 2009 (UTC)

Is it any better now? I centered the pink and also darkened it a little because I thought it was too light.  Sparrowsong  Madly Blooming Princess 21:27, September 17, 2009 (UTC)

Much better. What do you think senior warriors?*Swallowtip * EMBRACE THE TIP! 23:44, September 17, 2009 (UTC)

I wish I was a senior warrior so I could say the magic words... He's awesome. :) --MUMBLE785MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 00:47, September 18, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks :). He sure is a lot better than my other Brackenfur...*shudders*  Sparrowsong  Madly Blooming Princess 01:35, September 18, 2009 (UTC)

Dito Mumble.*Swallowtip * EMBRACE THE TIP! 01:48, September 18, 2009 (UTC)

lol sorry. Busyness ^_^ comments before approval? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 17:29, September 18, 2009 (UTC)

All I would say is the part on the upper back, theres 3 consecutive tabby markings. They look really close together, maybe take out the middle. And on the tail one of the markins goes out of the lineart. Mossflight 22:02, September 18, 2009 (UTC)

Better?  Sparrowsong  Madly Blooming Princess 22:20, September 18, 2009 (UTC)

The only thing I see is a slight bit of coloring near the middle of his tail that goes out of the lines. Other than that, it's wonderful. GB57 15:46, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

Better?  Sparrowsong  Madly Blooming Princess 16:50, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Comments before approval in 24 hours? Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 20:59, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

Approved Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 21:02, September 20, 2009 (UTC)

Breezepelt (A) - Approved

Breezepelt.apprentice After getting my first image approved, I wanted to try an apprentice and a kit, so, well, here's Breezepaw. How does he look? Icethroat21Enter at risk 00:43, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

If you want to be fussy, he needs a bit of soft shading under his chin. Other than that, he's amazing! You are very talented. -- Dawnfeather  talk! 05:05, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Did I get enough shading under the chin? Icethroat21Enter at risk 16:21, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Looks good to me. Any comments before approval in 24 hours? Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 20:54, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

Approved Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 21:08, September 20, 2009 (UTC)

Kestrelpaw(MCA) - Approved

File:Kestrelpaw Apprentice.png I just knew he was going to be Kestrelflight! I just knew it! Also, his description said a gray brown tom with white splotches, so I tried to make his base colour both gray and brown at once. Opinions/constructments? -- Dawnfeather  talk! 05:09, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

Beautiful. Let's see if anyone has any comments, and then I'll start the 24 hours. GB57 15:38, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

I don't think you'll get many fish on that hook. This is good, no, great, no I awesome! I think we should stat to 24 hours.*Swallowtip * EMBRACE THE TIP! 16:34, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Beautiful! Comments before approval in 24 hours? Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 20:52, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - None; Approved! Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 21:11, September 20, 2009 (UTC)

Mousewhisker (A) - Approved

Mousewhisker.apprentice Well, my first cat with two colors. Mousewhisker's page said he had blue eyes, but his warrior version had green eyes. I wasn't sure which one to do, so I followed his page and gave him blue eyes. Should I change them to green? Also, I'm not certain how I did on the shading between the gray and the white. I don't like the transition between the two colors on the hind paws, but what do you all think? Icethroat21Enter at risk 16:22, September 20, 2009 (UTC)

I'll change the Warrior version to blue eyes. You have the correct color. GB57 17:29, September 20, 2009 (UTC)

I really like him. Should I start the 24 hours? -- Dawnfeather  talk! 21:46, September 20, 2009 (UTC)

You should, but I think I will. :) Comments before approval? --Bramble My Realm 21:50, September 20, 2009 (UTC)

Approved Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 18:36, September 21, 2009 (UTC)

Socks ~ (Kit) For Approval


Yayzers! My first kit! I gave him an orange collar because I felt like it. *shrugs* Suggestions? --MUMBLE785MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 22:59, September 12, 2009 (UTC)

This is really sweet :) I like the orange collar lol. As for suggestions: Make the ear pink smaller Runningkit is a good example of size and colour. Add some shading on the head and under the collar and thicken it slightly on the sides. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 15:56, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks, Sandy! : ) Ok, I'll get on that once I finish Scourge's improvments. : ) --MUMBLE785MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 00:17, September 17, 2009 (UTC)

REUPLOADED. --MUMBLE785MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 01:19, September 17, 2009 (UTC)

I believe Sandy meant to thicken the ‘’shading’’ on both sides, not the collar lineart. That looks strange now. Other than that, it’s ready. --Bramble My Realm 21:11, September 17, 2009 (UTC)

xD Your right! Stupid me! I'll fix it. --MUMBLE785MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 00:41, September 18, 2009 (UTC)

Made the collar lineart thinner... --MUMBLE785MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 17:07, September 20, 2009 (UTC)

Perfect. Comments before approval? --Bramble My Realm 21:34, September 20, 2009 (UTC)

Approved Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 18:40, September 21, 2009 (UTC)

Brook (w) - Approved

This image has been sitting on my computer for a month and I think its time I get it out to the world ^_^ I've been so super busy I'm seriously going to have to stick with one image at a time for now. So what do you guys think of Brook (Brook Where Small Fish Swim) as a warrior of ThunderClan is?-- Shim-ShimNewGladiator! 21:43, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

Wow! She is so beautiful! The image looks really good, maybe you could make the ear pink a little brighter? Just by a little bit! -- Pandasong Pandasong's Talk Page 17:00, September 13, 2009 (UTC) 21:46, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

This is gorgeous! Only thing, ear pink, brighten and blend it a little more. And I always pictured Brook as a striped tabby, not a classic tabby. Are you sure? Hawkey Ready for action 21:59, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - I think classic is fine. Blur your shading transition a bit more too. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 22:17, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

Beautiful! Fantastic! This is marvelous! I think the classic tabby is fine, and very pretty. :) Icethroat21Enter at risk 00:14, September 14, 2009 (UTC)

I think that you need to blend everything more (excluding the line art, of course!) -- Dawnfeather  talk! 06:57, September 15, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Lighten your tabby markings a shade or two too. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 21:22, September 15, 2009 (UTC)

Whew...finally able to get on and update this picture. Here we are with the shading transition blended and ear. I tired the whole lighten the tabby marking but it came up as some ugly brown that didn't go with the fur color at all.-- Shim-ShimNewGladiator! 22:49, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

Well, it looks good to me. Comments before approval? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 11:57, September 20, 2009 (UTC)

Approved Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 18:48, September 21, 2009 (UTC)

Jaggedtooth - Approved

Jaggedtooth.warrior My first charart in a while. This was originally supposed to be Lionblaze but I never had word from Mal to submit it during Tweak Week so I've searched long and hard for another cat it could be and found Jaggedtooth! Not my favourite cat but every one needs a charart. Consructments? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 10:20, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

This looks great Sandy! Maybe, (and this is just me searching for the tiniest bit in this awesome pic) you should make the ear pink pinker. If that makes any sense.*Swallowtip * EMBRACE THE TIP! 16:31, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Should show up in a few minutes Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 18:09, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Nice to hear you still got to use your Lionblaze for something! This looks great. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 20:53, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

This is great! The ear pink is much better.Minnowclaw 21:44, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Comments before approval in 24 hours? Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 18:00, September 20, 2009 (UTC)

It's okay. You made me laugh. (Rodd and Todd in background - yyaaayyyyy!)(lolololol). Added mud streaks, comments, critism? -- Dawnfeather  talk! 21:16, September 20, 2009 (UTC) Mega oops, wrong discussion.

lol Dawn! Approved Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 18:54, September 21, 2009 (UTC)

Hazelstar- Approved

Hazelstar.leader I'm on a leader spree! Three leaders in a row. XD Lol. Anyway, here's Hazelstar. Originally, he was Redstar, but, then I figured out Redstar was already reserved, so, I lightened him up, and turned him into Hazelstar! Comments? --HoneyfurBob's Your Uncle! 20:44, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

Very good. Just blur the shading transition some more. --Bramble My Realm 21:21, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

Err... is there supposed to be color under his hind leg? --Rainwhisker09 23:36, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

Blend all of the shading a whole lot.*Swallowtip * EMBRACE THE TIP! 18:00, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

Can you darken the shading, blend the edges a little more and make the ear pink slightly smaller so it doesn't fill the whole ear. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 18:38, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

Is this better? Or, does he need to be blended more? --HoneyfurBob's Your Uncle! 22:49, September 12, 2009 (UTC)

This is better and yes he does need more bending. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 14:49, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

This hasn't been worked on in a week Honeyfur. Please work on this or it will be declined. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 09:47, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry, Sandy! My teachers have been giving me loads of homework, lately, so I've been using most of my time to keep up with my schoolwork. Anyway, I tried to blend the shading a bit more. I used the blur tool, but it's kind of weak on Pixlr. Is there any other tool that may work on shading? --HoneyfurBob's Your Uncle! 16:11, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

For a lot of shading, you can use the smudge tool, and then blur it, but it doesn't have as great of a quality as the blur tool does. If the blur tool is too weak, just blur the same spots over and over again until it's blended enough. For the actual picture, the shading transition on the hind leg needs blurred some more. Otherwise, this looks great. Icethroat21Enter at risk 16:45, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

Seriously, don't worry about it Honeyfur. Schoolwork is bogging me down at the moment too. The blending actually looks fine now, in my opinion. I'd try darkening the shading a bit though as it doesn't really stand out. Also, I know highlights aren't mandatory but sometimes they really enhance an image and they seem to look especially good on the leader images. Try looking at Quiet's Dawnstar (I think it was Dawnstar anyway) and some of the approved leaders and maybe add a small highlight on the chest and perhaps the hindleg too just to add depth to the image. It's looking realy good though. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 17:45, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

I've tried highlights before, but they've never really looked right. I usually use the tool that lightens up an image (The Dodge Tool?), and then I try and blur the edges of the lightened area. Am I doing it right? --HoneyfurBob's Your Uncle! 21:31, September 20, 2009 (UTC)

He looks great. Comments before approval? --Bramble’-san' 22:13, September 21, 2009 (UTC)

None. Approved. --Bramble-san 22:15, September 22, 2009 (UTC)

Tawnypelt (Q) - Approved

I've always wanted to do my favorite character, but she already has a lovely warrior image, so I did her as a queen. I love the queen blanks; they're so easy to do and their expressions are so peaceful. Anyway, is this any good?  Sparrowsong  Madly Blooming Princess 21:35, September 20, 2009 (UTC)

She's very good! The only things I can see are to maybe add a pink pixel on this side of the nose because it looks lopsided right now, and to add random shades of green into the eyes to make them look more lifelike. I love how you have done the shading, and made her in the style of the warrior version. -- Dawnfeather  talk! 21:43, September 20, 2009 (UTC)

The transition line on the shading needs to be blended some more, and her pupil looks slightly paler-than-black. That, and what Dawn said, and she's perfect. Very good job. --Bramble My Realm 21:46, September 20, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks so much, you guys! I blurred the shading transition and fixed the pupil. Now, I don't mean to sound whiny, but I didn't add another pink pixel because it looked very unnatural when I did.  Sparrowsong  Madly Blooming Princess 22:03, September 20, 2009 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit, I can't see it the easily.Minnowclaw 01:17, September 21, 2009 (UTC)

Better?  Sparrowsong  Madly Blooming Princess 01:32, September 21, 2009 (UTC)

Much better. I personally think it's ready. Comments before approval? --Bramble’-san' 21:12, September 21, 2009 (UTC)

None. Approved. --Bramble-san 22:15, September 22, 2009 (UTC)

Smokepaw (A) - Approved

File:Smokepaw Apprentice.png

(M) - Poor Smokepaw, he never got to see the new territory. At least we know he is in the ranks of StarClan though.

I'm going to regret putting this up while my other blanks are up later, aren't I? :P Anyways, I would have put this up sooner, but I decided to change the image. The old version (which you can still see in the upload log) was a darker color and had the shading in different places. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 17:59, September 20, 2009 (UTC)

Yeah, I like this one better than the darker one. Nice job, Mosswhisker! Icethroat21Enter at risk 19:10, September 20, 2009 (UTC)

I really like him but I think the way the neck shading comes in from behind him doesn't look right. Also, something about shading on the chest seems weird too. But other than that, he's beautiful! -- Dawnfeather  talk! 21:45, September 20, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - I used almost the exact same shading style as one Bluestar's apprentice version, so could you explain to me how to fix it while refering to that image? It would help me alot. ^^ Thanks! Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 22:08, September 20, 2009 (UTC)

Hmmm, I have to say I think the shading looks fine. You're right, if you look at Bluepaw's image, the shading is almost exactly alike. As that was approved, I think this should be as well. Comments before approval? --Bramble-san 22:11, September 22, 2009 (UTC)

None. Approved. --Bramble-san 23:18, September 23, 2009 (UTC)

Lilystem (Q)- Approved

File:Lilystem.png Huh, the wiki seems to be working for me again. So I thought I'd upload Lilystem!-- Darkhallows  My den 23:08, September 21, 2009 (UTC)

She's beautiful, Shady. The only thing I see is that her nose looks odd all black; if you could make it a grayish-pink, it'd be great. --Bramble-san 01:42, September 22, 2009 (UTC)

Alright.-- Darkhallows  My den 07:08, September 22, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? She is magnifique. --Bramble-san 22:12, September 22, 2009 (UTC)

None. Approved. --Bramble-san 23:18, September 23, 2009 (UTC)

Darkstripe (R) - For Approval

File:Darkstripe (R).png

Hmm... strange I should work so hard on a cat I despise.. this is possibly the best shading job I've ever done. Anyway, constructments? --Bramble-san 22:55, September 21, 2009 (UTC)

He's beautiful! I love the stripes < 3.-- Darkhallows  My den 23:05, September 21, 2009 (UTC)

WOW! This is great! Good job bramble!Minnowclaw 23:23, September 21, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - *Is envious of markings* Wow, this is great Bramble! Just lighten up the shading on the muzzle, it's way to dark right now. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 00:00, September 22, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks for the compliments, guys. :) I lightened the muzzle, and also turned the eyes blue, as they looked weird to me yellow. Do they look better yellow? --Bramble-san 01:39, September 22, 2009 (UTC)

Looks great Bramble-san (love the siggie, by the way). Comments before approval?-- Darkhallows  My den 05:18, September 23, 2009 (UTC)

I just want to add cool sig and nice work Bramble!Minnowclaw 01:22, September 24, 2009 (UTC)

Approved. -- Darkhallows  My den 05:06, September 24, 2009 (UTC)

Silverstream (W) - Approved


My first classic tabby. I tried my best to make her look like her queen version. Anyway, does she look good?  Sparrowsong  Madly Blooming Princess 21:13, September 14, 2009 (UTC)

The color and stripes look fine. Things that bother me: The eye, it needs another black pixel, and the ear pink, too dark and on the top of the ear. Hawkey Ready for action 22:11, September 14, 2009 (UTC)

Better?  Sparrowsong  Madly Blooming Princess 23:09, September 14, 2009 (UTC)

10px Use this as a reference for the eye. --Bramble My Realm 21:11, September 17, 2009 (UTC)

Ok, is this better? I'm pretty satisfied with the way it looks now, personally.  Sparrowsong  Madly Blooming Princess 21:27, September 17, 2009 (UTC)

Yes, the eye looks much better. Icethroat21Enter at risk 16:27, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

The ear could be just a tiny bit bigger.-- Shim-ShimNewGladiator! 18:55, September 20, 2009 (UTC)

Better? BTW, I love your awesome queen version of Silverstream. The tabby stripes look so neat.  Sparrowsong  Madly Blooming Princess 19:29, September 20, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Comments before approval in 24 hours? Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 21:51, September 23, 2009 (UTC)

Approved Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 18:50, September 24, 2009 (UTC)