Fidgetpaw (MC) - Approved I finally decided on something I like. For those who don't think I can do this, I've already done this before without any objections. Jayce ( 16:28, 11/12/2016 )

I love it, Cloudy! It suits his name :) Even out the ear-pink size and smudge the pelt into the ear-pink a touch more. Maybe also add more light to the lifted paw; the white looks a litle too gray ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 22:54, November 12, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Jayce ( 23:12, 11/12/2016 )

can you define the shading a bit my guy david 🌈 00:23, November 13, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Jayce ( 14:03, 11/14/2016 )

CBA? – Ivy 15:18, November 20, 2016 (UTC)

Approved. Jayce ( 20:06, 11/21/2016 )

Spikefur (Ro) - Approved

Spikefur.rogueAll colors from his other images. Comments? Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 17:21, November 12, 2016 (UTC)

Where is your light source coming from? The shading around the torso is sort of confusing me of where the light shines on the cat. ⚜Flow⚜intherainbows🎀 

I think it's fine, as I've used this lightsource on other images (namely Slate's rogue image). Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 01:26, November 13, 2016 (UTC)

can you define the depth to the shading and define the light on the front legs david 🌈 14:05, November 15, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 18:21, November 15, 2016 (UTC)

CBA? – Ivy 15:16, November 20, 2016 (UTC)

Approved. Jayce ( 20:06, 11/21/2016 )

Pebbleshine (Ki) - Approved

Pebbleshine.kit Holy pattern. Sunjaw, how do you do these things? User:Snowdapple/Sig 04:31, 11/13/2016

Define the darker flecks a little bit. And that was actually done with a custom brush ^^ this pattern would've been a nightmare to do without it lol Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣14:34 Sun Nov 13

Re-uploaded Lmao, I just used the spray can. I think it worked out pretty well xD User:Snowdapple/Sig 16:30, 11/13/2016

Idk if it's just me, but there seems to be a white/really light pixel on the --> back paw, where there wouldn't be light. spooky chocolate nonpareils 23:47, 11/13/2016

There's supposed to be light there in my lightsource, but just a tiny bit. I also have two darker lines for the toe separation. I'll get to that in a sec. User:Snowdapple/Sig 00:10, 11/14/2016

Re-uploaded User:Snowdapple/Sig 00:11, 11/14/2016

CBA? – Ivy 15:15, November 20, 2016 (UTC)

Approved. Jayce ( 20:06, 11/21/2016 )

Silt (Ro) - Approved

Sooo, here's the charart and stuff... Cinderpool Insert good quote here... 21:33, October 29, 2016 (UTC)Silt.rogue

Maybe smooth out the shading on the tail and legs Shypaw11 (talk) 23:02, October 29, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded ^-^ Cinderpool Insert good quote here... 23:22, October 29, 2016 (UTC)

it should be rogue for the file name not rouge. david 🌈 23:45, October 29, 2016 (UTC)

Perhaps even out the texture a tad -- it kinda looks stripey Hollyspotsgood thingstake time✎ 23:46, 10/29/2016

Define the light on the legs. – Ivy 23:50, October 29, 2016 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the main body some more? User:Snowdapple/Sig 14:06, 10/30/2016

Reuploaded Smoothed out shading, added actual lighting, changed file name. Cinderpool Insert good quote here... 15:46, October 30, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading, and check for shading leakage on the legs spooky chocolate nonpareils 16:16, 10/30/2016

Reuploaded Cinderpool Insert good quote here... 18:29, October 30, 2016 (UTC)

add shading depth (on the head, tail, body especially). ~ Fox * 愛してるばんざーい!* 01:05,10/31/2016

I think the light on the legs still needs to be defined more. Add the light on the very fronts of the legs. Also on the tail some. User:Snowdapple/Sig 01:35, 10/31/2016

The texture looks kind of like stripes more than texture, if that makes sense. Thin out the lines and/or smooth them more. It should also follow the form of the body more and if at all possible, the light source. Some people feel that adding deeper texture to shaded areas will make it too dark, though. Just a suggestion on how to make it more obvious that it is indeed texture. If you need any clarification, let me know. Sometimes what I type out can seem vague and scrambled, seeing as it is during breaks between my daily life and I kind of just fire it out as I come up with it. Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣23:02 Mon Oct 31

Reuploaded Best I can do, I'm not very good >.< Cinderpool Insert good quote here... 01:41, November 2, 2016 (UTC)

smooth out the texture somemore, it still looks like stripes. make it more softer looking as — Minkclaw 01:54, November 2, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading on body and tail especially spooky chocolate nonpareils 21:56, 11/02/2016

Reuploaded Cinderpool Insert good quote here... 23:11, November 2, 2016 (UTC)

The shading around the belly and ==> hind leg is a little blotchy so smoothen/blur it out. --Foxey Whispers and enchantments 20:25, November 3, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded Cinderpool Insert good quote here... 14:27, November 4, 2016 (UTC)

Make sure the image is full size when you upload it. In addition, the image looks really grey overall. Can you define the light on the face, legs, and tail? – Ivy 00:05, November 5, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Baaassically redid the whole shading. Cinderpool Insert good quote here... 19:21, November 5, 2016 (UTC)

The shading is leaking away from the lineart on the body and legs, also maybe define the light on the tail. spooky chocolate nonpareils 22:46, 11/05/2016

Re-uploaded Cinderpool Insert good quote here... 14:58, November 6, 2016 (UTC)

Comments? Cinderpool Insert good quote here... 03:20, November 10, 2016 (UTC)

Define the leg shading. Appledash❤ crowfeather 03:38, November 10, 2016 (UTC)

Shading is leaking everywhere away from the lineart, especially on legs/face/body. Also perhaps define the light on the tail, since it looks like it's completely in shadow spooky chocolate nonpareils 21:47, 11/10/2016

Eyes and nose spots are empty. ⚜Flow⚜intherainbows🎀 

No, the eyes and muzzle are not empty.^^ Jayfrickin ultra moon babyϟ 21:51, 11/10/2016 21:51, November 10, 2016 (UTC)

Alright, so prepare for the wall of text :P Sorry in advance. The shading on the legs, especially the ones on the right side of the cat, need to be thinned out and placed only on one side, depending on your light source. Which in turn, also means to define the light source. The shading on the tail should be on the other side, since the source is coming from <== direction; the light needs to be on the top. Also, define the shading depth a tiny bit. User:Snowdapple/Sig 22:05, 11/10/2016

Reuploaded ouo Cinderpool Insert good quote here... 16:35, November 11, 2016 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Appledash❤ crowfeather 21:41, November 11, 2016 (UTC)

Sorry should have commented earlier, I was just busy working. There is waste by the muzzle, and the shading is still leaking slightly on the legs and underbelly. User:Snowdapple/Sig 21:47, 11/11/2016

Perhaps define the light on the <-- front paw just a tad spooky chocolate nonpareils 21:49, 11/11/2016

Reuploaded welp Cinderpool Insert good quote here... 00:15, November 12, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded Got help from Winter/Snowdapple Cinderpool Insert good quote here... 16:32, November 12, 2016 (UTC)

I still see those white pixels by the base of the tail. User:Snowdapple/Sig 15:37, 11/13/2016

The shading looks a tad bit blotchy on the <-- front paw, and also on the --> front paw, I think the light could be defined some. Also maybe smooth the bit of shading just on top of the shoulder spooky chocolate nonpareils 20:27, 11/14/2016

Reuploaded ouo Cinderpool Insert good quote here... 23:59, November 14, 2016 (UTC)

I think there's a pixel of waste off to the very <-- under the tail Hollyspotsgood thingstake time✎ 00:52, 11/15/2016

Smudge the pelt into the earpink and darken the edges of the shading where they meet the main lineart; the darkness seems to taper and get lighter as it approaches the lineart if that makes any sense at all ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 07:13, November 16, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded sorry i forgot to upload it Cinderpool Insert good quote here... 19:29, November 19, 2016 (UTC)

Comments? Cinderpool Insert good quote here... 01:31, November 23, 2016 (UTC)

The shading on the main body, from the shoulder to just before the tail, looks more like a line to me than shading. Maybe blur/smudge it or lighten it.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 02:18, November 24, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded Cinderpool Insert good quote here... 03:32, November 24, 2016 (UTC)

could you smudge/blur the <-- ear shading, its looks a little bluer than the other shading — Minkclaw 03:50, November 24, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded Cinderpool Insert good quote here... 18:20, November 25, 2016 (UTC)

CBA? Jayce ( 06:27, 11/26/2016 )

Approved. Jayce ( 16:06, 11/27/2016 )

Nami (KP) - Approved

Nami.kittypet I love this. Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣16:08 Fri Nov 11

Blur the stripes; they seem very hard-edged. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 18:19, November 11, 2016 (UTC)

can u define the shading a lil david 🌈 20:06, November 11, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded I just redid the shading. I didn't like it much. Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣20:16 Wed Nov 16

The stripes still seem hard-edged. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 23:24, November 16, 2016 (UTC)

I think the stripes are fine, good work! — Minkclaw 23:06, November 20, 2016 (UTC)

Except there are other images with solid stripes like this? Any more smoothing and they will begin to run into each other. Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣00:56 Tue Nov 22

There is one, thin stripe on the tail that isn't smudged at all. It's near the ones next to the haunch in case you can't find it. ⚜Flow⚜intherainbows🎀 

the stripes are fine in my opinion, maybe someone can second this? — Minkclaw 17:40, November 23, 2016 (UTC)

I can see it. It's suddenly darker and sharper. It's okay for stripes to overlap a little. Stripes overlap all the time on real cats.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 02:21, November 24, 2016 (UTC)

I'm just going to CBA this, because it seems like the agreement is that the stripes are fine and don't need tweaking. Jayce ( 19:21, 11/26/2016 )

Approved. Jayce ( 16:06, 11/27/2016 )

Mousewing (Star) - Approved Any comments? Water 23:12, November 18, 2016 (UTC)

Perhaps brighten the black a tiny bit? I know it's not full black, I can still see shading, but it looks really similar to the lineart. ⚜Flow⚜intherainbows🎀 

Reupload Water 15:46, November 20, 2016 (UTC)

I'm probably nit-picking here but I feel like there should be a bit more chest shading. Maybe expand on it?Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 02:32, November 24, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload, is this better? Water  02:37, November 24, 2016 (UTC) 

CBA? Jayce ( 06:25, 11/26/2016 )

Approved. Jayce ( 16:06, 11/27/2016 )

Needletail (Ro) - Approved

Needletail.rogue My first rogue. - Jose1106 (talk) 14:45, November 19, 2016 (UTC)

Looks very nice. Mind smoothing out the shading a little? Jayfrickin ultra moon babyϟ 22:24, 11/19/2016 22:24, November 19, 2016 (UTC)

Re-ups - Jose1106 (talk) 23:14, November 19, 2016 (UTC)

Define the earpink a tiny bit. I can't really see it. – Ivy 15:10, November 20, 2016 (UTC)

Re-ups - Jose1106 (talk) 19:53, November 20, 2016 (UTC)

Could you define the white on the chest a bit? spooky chocolate nonpareils 19:44, 11/21/2016

Re-ups - Jose1106 (talk) 23:44, November 21, 2016 (UTC)

Do you want the base colors for this? I have it a bit lighter than it looks right now, and with the texture, it's highly misleading. Jayce ( 23:47, 11/21/2016 )

Sure. ^-^ - Jose1106 (talk) 03:12, November 22, 2016 (UTC)

The base is #C6C6C6, and enlarge the white chest a bit, as it's a little bigger on the apprentice, and that's the first image in the set. Jayce ( 17:41, 11/23/2016 )

Re-ups Is this any better? I had trouble with the texture. - Jose1106 (talk) 19:02, November 23, 2016 (UTC)

The texture and chest is looking too sharp. Blur/smudge them? Nice job!Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 02:35, November 24, 2016 (UTC)

Re-Ups - Jose1106 (talk) 03:05, November 24, 2016 (UTC)

CBA? Jayce ( 21:26, 11/26/2016 )

Approved. Jayce ( 16:06, 11/27/2016 )

Snaketail (P3) (Star) - Approved

Snaketail (P3).star Sziri the goat sails away ツ 19:39, November 19, 2016 (UTC)

Wow, that's nice!CloudHeart100 (talk) 21:52, November 19, 2016 (UTC)

Maybe add a fleck or two to the chin itself? I only see them on the bottom of the head. ⚜Flow⚜intherainbows🎀 

Re-ups Sziri the goat sails away ツ 12:03, November 20, 2016 (UTC)

Define the earpink, it's hard to see. Looks awesome!Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 02:37, November 24, 2016 (UTC)

Re-ups Thanks! Sziri the goat sails away ツ 17:18, November 24, 2016 (UTC)

CBA? Jayce ( 06:24, 11/26/2016 )

Approved. Jayce ( 16:06, 11/27/2016 )

Tangleburr (DF) - Approved

Tangleburr.df~Patchfeather~ 04:27, November 15, 2016 (UTC)

Smoothen out texture some, there are some parts that look like scribbles going in an odd angle?? If I make sense, I see it most on her side and back..great job though! — Minkclaw 13:59, November 15, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. thanks. ~Patchfeather~ 23:02, November 15, 2016 (UTC)

Really nice image^^ Perhaps round out the brown on the tail a bit to match the other images a bit more, and also, the earpink is leaking out of the ear line that it's supposed to be in. spooky chocolate nonpareils 00:16, 11/16/2016

Re-uploaded. thanks! ~Patchfeather~ 04:23, November 16, 2016 (UTC)

the ear pink is still leaking out of the ear line. ~ Fox * 愛してるばんざーい!* 13:40,11/20/2016

Is it the top or the bottom of the ear? I looked and I can't find it. ~Patchfeather~ 14:08, November 20, 2016 (UTC)

never mind, my bad. I mixed up the ear pink color and the brown >< ~ Fox * 愛してるばんざーい!* 10:24,11/21/2016

The gray looks a little dark compared to the other images. I think that's because of the shading though. Maybe double check the gray base/lighten shading?Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 02:27, November 24, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I think it is a shading, I lightened some of the gray, hopefully it looks better now. ~Patchfeather~ 22:01, November 24, 2016 (UTC)

It still looks too dark on the top part of the tail and on her side, just behind her front leg.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 00:13, November 25, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. ~Patchfeather~ 02:04, November 25, 2016 (UTC)

CBA? Jayce ( 18:32, 11/28/2016 )

Approved.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 01:51, November 30, 2016 (UTC)

Snipkit (Kit) - Approved

Snipkit.kit Now I can understand why everyone says the kit blank is hard to work with :/ Comments? Maple 23:07 Tue Nov 15

Can you smooth out or smudge the white splotch some more? It looks a bit too defined. User:Snowdapple/Sig 23:55, 11/15/2016

Re-uploaded Maple 23:15 Thu Nov 17

Blur the earpink a little. Maybe lighten it a bit too. ~Patchfeather~ 23:38, November 17, 2016 (UTC)

The shading looks a tad bit blotchy towards the top of the white patch spooky chocolate nonpareils 20:43, 11/18/2016

Re-ups Maple 22:59 Fri Nov 18

Comments? Maple 22:34 Wed Nov 23

I'm seeing sudden lighter pixels <--- side of the legs, can you fix those? Also, smudge/blur the ear pink just a little bit. Nice work! Black-furred kits are especially hard to do.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 02:29, November 24, 2016 (UTC)

Re-ups Maple 16:39 Fri Nov 25

CBA? Jayce ( 18:31, 11/28/2016 )

Approved.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 01:51, November 30, 2016 (UTC)

Chestnutkit (star) - Approved

Chestnutkit.starPoor little thing. Cute name though. Comments?Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 23:08, November 18, 2016 (UTC)

You mind filling up that nose hole and make the lighter areas a bit more obvious? ⚜Flow⚜intherainbows🎀 

Reupload Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 22:43, November 19, 2016 (UTC)

Uhh, I don't mean to offend or anything, but can I have some comments, please?Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 02:30, November 23, 2016 (UTC)

Pretty sure you should wait five days, because barely four seems pushing it. Anyways, give the shading a bit more shape, it seems uneven and I'm probably being confusing. Jayce ( 23:10, 11/24/2016 )

Alrighty then, five days. Give shape? I'm not sure what you mean by that. Do I add shading depth?Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 00:18, November 25, 2016 (UTC)

Yeah, that's what I meant. I'm sorry, it's been a busy week. Jayce ( 17:12, 11/25/2016 )

Reupload that's okay.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 23:00, November 25, 2016 (UTC)

CBA? Jayce ( 18:30, 11/28/2016 )

Approved.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 01:51, November 30, 2016 (UTC)

Fidgetpaw (MCA) - Approved

Fidgetpaw.mca There we go, now that I have a design that I actually like.. Jayce ( 20:23, 11/21/2016 )

Define shading on the --> back paw. ⚜Flow⚜intherainbows🎀 

Because idiot me is tired, you mean the frontmost back paw??? Jayce ( 02:38, 11/22/2016 )

Yes, I do. ⚜Flow⚜intherainbows🎀  02:40, November 22, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. An attempt was made. Jayce ( 17:31, 11/23/2016 )

Maybe smudge the white on the face into the black a bit more. :D
Winterpaw: I am a true Monster
23:57, November 26, 2016 (UTC)

I don't have it smudged on the MC, so smudging it here would mean I'm altering the pattern and I'd have to tweak the other image to match it. Jayce ( 00:00, 11/27/2016 )

Okay! It just looked a square face or too much of a straight line, but it's fine! :D
Winterpaw: I am a true Monster
03:18, November 27, 2016 (UTC)

Yeah, the white on the face looks fine. CBA? – Ivy 21:16, November 28, 2016 (UTC)

Approved.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 01:51, November 30, 2016 (UTC)

Strikestone (Ro) - Approved

Strikestone.rogue hey look who finally stopped being unreliable and unmotivated Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 20:03 Tue Nov 22

Try smudging the stripes a tiny bit. CloudHeart⚔ Keep your eyes and ears open 22:43, November 22, 2016 (UTC)

I think the stripes on this are fine, as the other images are just like this and if they're smoothed too much it wouldn't match as well. spooky chocolate nonpareils 22:47, 11/22/2016

Wow those markings! Can you define the shading on the front legs?Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 02:43, November 24, 2016 (UTC)

reups Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 16:01 Thu Nov 24

could you define the ear and nose pink please? — Minkclaw 21:20, November 26, 2016 (UTC)

I can see those just fine? User:Snowdapple/Sig 14:15, 11/27/2016

CBA? Jayce ( 18:28, 11/28/2016 )

Approved.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 01:51, November 30, 2016 (UTC)

Cora (Q) - Approved

Cora.queen david 🌈 13:32, November 23, 2016 (UTC)

Yay Cora! (sorry, I love her) Can you add some shading to her back? Also, this is just me nitpicking but on the --> ear, the earpink falls away from the lineart a little, along the <-- top of the earpink.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 02:48, November 24, 2016 (UTC)

ive used this source on queens before, ill fix the earpink when i get home. david 🌈 08:45, November 24, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded david 🌈 20:13, November 24, 2016 (UTC)

sorry to intrude once more, this is really great, but considering she doesn't have the rank would she get this? Correct me if wrong my brain isn't fully awake — Minkclaw 21:24, November 26, 2016 (UTC)

Mink, please do not comment on images just to say that; it's a waste of an edit and counterproductive. Anyways, are the ears supposed to have any shading? I can't see any and I'm not sure if it's just my eyes or not. Jayce ( 21:24, 11/26/2016 )

I wasn't just saying anything, anyway, I was asking if she'd get this image seeing as how she does't get the rank? That has been asked on several other images. — Minkclaw 21:31, November 26, 2016 (UTC)

it's a blank for any pregnant don't need the rank. david 🌈 21:31, November 26, 2016 (UTC)

also no i didn't feel like adding any shading to the ears this time. david 🌈 00:13, November 27, 2016 (UTC)

CBA? Jayce ( 18:29, 11/28/2016 )

Approved.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 01:51, November 30, 2016 (UTC)

Suzy (Ro) - Approved

Suzy.rogue I can't do tortoiseshells, but I figured I'd give one a try. – Ivy 14:03, November 23, 2016 (UTC)

define nose pink, this is pretty good — Minkclaw 17:37, November 23, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. – Ivy 19:50, November 23, 2016 (UTC)

Can you darken the black a little? It just looks a little light for a black cat to me (and a little green??)Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 02:50, November 24, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I messed with the colors a bit. Her base is gray, actually, and since she isn't specifically said to be black-and-orange, I think I can go a bit lighter on the colors if I want, right? It shouldn't be greenish anymore, at least. – Ivy 15:00, November 24, 2016 (UTC)

The colors are your choice entirely, save for adding white (which I am still extremely annoyed about, but anyways), due to her colors not being specified. Jayce ( 17:07, 11/24/2016 )

Hmm. Since no one else has comment after me... CBA? Jayce ( 18:26, 11/28/2016 )

Approved.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 01:51, November 30, 2016 (UTC)

Hawkwing (W)- Approved

Hawkwing.warrior colors + texture and stuff matches deputy spooky chocolate nonpareils 14:46, 11/26/2016

could you smooth/blur the shading please — Minkclaw 21:26, November 26, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded Tried; don't think I can smooth it any more than this. spooky chocolate nonpareils 23:10, 11/26/2016

Comments? spooky chocolate nonpareils 17:56, 12/01/2016

CBA? Jayce ( 18:33, 12/01/2016 )

Approved. – Ivy 21:25, December 2, 2016 (UTC)

Nettlespot (Star) - Approved ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 05:27, November 23, 2016 (UTC)

could you blur or smudge the spots a tad; this is great ^^ — Minkclaw 17:35, November 23, 2016 (UTC)

She doesn't have to do that, Mink, as it's not like that on her other images. Jayce ( 17:39, 11/23/2016 )

I think there are meant to be sort of bands on the tail, like on the queen (since I think it's the same angle?). Can you add some?Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 02:45, November 24, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 03:26, November 24, 2016 (UTC)

could you lighten the shading possibly? — Minkclaw 21:21, November 26, 2016 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 01:00, November 29, 2016 (UTC)

CBA? – Ivy 21:31, December 2, 2016 (UTC)

Approved. Jayie Just you wait~ 15:16, December 4, 2016 (UTC)

Appledawn (Star) ~ Approved

Appledawn.starSziri the goat sails away ツ 20:30, November 27, 2016 (UTC)

this is really good, could you define the nose pink? — Minkclaw 20:54, November 27, 2016 (UTC)

I love how you make the eyes stand out! CloudHeart⚔ Keep your eyes and ears open 17:06, November 28, 2016 (UTC)

Remember Cloudheart, you're only supposed to comment for critique comments only. Anyway, could you possibly make the tail stripes thinner. They're not as thick on the other image. - Jose1106 Ready for ANYTHING! 20:33, November 28, 2016 (UTC)

Re-ups Thanks:) Sziri the goat sails away ツ 20:49, November 28, 2016 (UTC)

CBA? – Ivy 21:30, December 2, 2016 (UTC)

Approved. Jayie Just you wait~ 15:18, December 4, 2016 (UTC)

Downkit (Star) ~ Approved Water 20:36, November 27, 2016 (UTC)

Shouldn't this be long-haired? It says she has fluffy fur. - Jose1106 Ready for ANYTHING! 01:12, November 29, 2016 (UTC)

No, it wouldn't be. There was a discussion on their images on the old declined section, and it is supposed to be short. spooky chocolate nonpareils 01:14, 11/29/2016

Fluffy does not mean long. And anyways, down feathers are short feathers on a premature owlet or other bird. Jayce ( 02:56, 11/29/2016 )

this look great! there's ear pink leaking on the --> at the very top — Minkclaw 17:20, December 2, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload Water 17:32, December 2, 2016 (UTC)

Darken the shading? Jayie Just you wait~ 00:32, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

Reupload, Hope this is fine. Water 16:41, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Appledash❤ crowfeather 00:23, December 5, 2016 (UTC)

Approved. – Ivy 21:26, December 6, 2016 (UTC)

Reedpaw (HJ) (A) ~ Approved

Reedpaw (HJ).apprentice david 🌈 02:01, November 30, 2016 (UTC)

did you give her heterochromatic eyes? lighten the tail shading some — Minkclaw 04:49, November 30, 2016 (UTC)

Ooooh, heterochromia! Are there any other odd-eyed kitties? Anyways dull the earpink --

Neon Skylite Down by the Wexford border 04:52, 11/30/2016

ear pink looks fine to me. — Minkclaw 04:54, November 30, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading or highlights on the tail. Is this molded after one of your cats...? I feel like I've seen this somewhere before. Jayce ( 07:01, 11/30/2016 )

reuploaded based it off a random brown tabby, and i'm not dulling the earpink because i'll get about 5 messages saying to define it. david 🌈 18:23, November 30, 2016 (UTC)

Wow, I love the pattern on this. :D Define the shading on the tail and in the ears? Jayie Just you wait~ 00:37, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded ty david 🌈 14:55, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Appledash❤ crowfeather 00:23, December 5, 2016 (UTC)

Approved. – Ivy 21:26, December 6, 2016 (UTC)

Carpkit (Ki) ~ Approved

Carpkit.kitI'm going to try not to withdraw this again. Comments? Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 02:29, November 22, 2016 (UTC)

Oh my gosh I just want to pinch him! <3 The ear pink looks black, can you lighten it?Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 02:42, November 24, 2016 (UTC)

Not really; any lighter, it will be hard to see. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 17:02, November 24, 2016 (UTC)

I'm finding it hard to see as it is, though. It looks like it's part of the pattern itself, not ear pink. Jayce ( 17:03, 11/24/2016 )

I tried several different colors, and this is honestly the best I can get. Anything else is even harder to see. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 17:12, November 24, 2016 (UTC)

Then perhaps alter the base a bit? I can't tell that's ear pink at all, and I can almost guarantee that it'll get nominated in the future, so I really don't see why you can't try and tweak the colors to make it more visible. Jayce ( 17:13, 11/24/2016 )

Reuploaded. I'll fix the earpink later. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 17:18, November 24, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded. This is about as good it's going to get. For some reason, I absolutely cannot make the earpink even kind of visible on both ears. It would always be easy to see on one ear but not the other or hard to see on both. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 18:11, November 24, 2016 (UTC)

Adorable! Maybe the white parts need to be lightened a bit more. The mottles need to be a tiny little bit more smooth. CookiesAreEpic123 (talk) 05:36, November 25, 2016 (UTC)CookiesAreEpic123

Reuploaded. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 01:50, November 27, 2016 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the shading just a tiny bit? Neck shading on these blanks can be such a pain. Jayce ( 18:34, 12/01/2016 )

ReuploadedBluestar Leaf flying in the wind 02:06, December 2, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs? Jayie Just you wait~ 00:25, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 05:44, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

CBA?Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 00:07, December 8, 2016 (UTC)

Approved. – Ivy 00:44, December 10, 2016 (UTC)

Harrybrook (W) - Approved

Harrybrook.warrior Here goes nothing. VecThere was an idea... 21:34, November 30, 2016 (UTC)

Smoothen out tail shading --Foxey Whispers and enchantments 21:36, November 30, 2016 (UTC)

This needs to match the colors of his kit image more spooky chocolate nonpareils 21:38, 11/30/2016

smoothen and lighten body shading — Minkclaw 21:45, November 30, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded VecThere was an idea... 21:58, November 30, 2016 (UTC)

Harrybrook's kitten image has a lighter white and this white here looks gray could you lighten that so it matches the kit image — Minkclaw 22:05, November 30, 2016 (UTC)


Lightened the underbelly VecThere was an idea... 22:55, November 30, 2016 (UTC)

No idea if its just me but I was just looking at the kit again and the white along his front seem pretty long from what I see on the kit it goes from mid chest to his muzzle — Minkclaw 02:02, December 1, 2016 (UTC)

Mmm...I think I understand what you're saying. Judging from his kit image, I see the paler parts going from his muzzle to along his belly/underside, as evident from previous version of the kit images. That's why I have the paler parts the way it is on his warrior image. A second opinion, perhaps? VecThere was an idea... 02:09, December 1, 2016 (UTC)

It's not white, it's paler gray. Jayce ( 03:08, 12/01/2016 )

Oh, well from what I saw on the kit it was more white than pale gray, however, was only asking about the width of the paler parts. As explained earlier form File:Harrybrook.kit.png the paler went form mid chest to his muzzle. — Minkclaw 15:16, December 1, 2016 (UTC)

Shorten the paler parts, and redid the highlights So like this? VecThere was an idea... 16:37, December 1, 2016 (UTC)

Alright, so, I'm the one that tweaked the kit, and I can tell you that the pale part does go down to the underbelly. It also goes just above the nose, and shouldn't be near the eyes. This goes way too high up on the muzzle, so you'll have to shrink it up on the muzzle, and extend it to the underbelly as well...please tell me this makes sense. Jayce ( 18:28, 12/01/2016 )

Expanded the paler parts to the belly and shortened the muzzle Thanks for the clarifications, Jayce. I think I did it according to your clarifications? VecThere was an idea... 18:49, December 1, 2016 (UTC)

If I'm correct there seems to be some shading or something leaking on his elbow/shoulder area just above the curve in his haunch thing — Minkclaw 17:17, December 2, 2016 (UTC)

Did you mean the paler part of his belly? I believe that is supposed to be there. VecThere was an idea... 17:42, December 2, 2016 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the back of the neck, and on the tail? Jayie Just you wait~ 00:49, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

Darkened the shading on the neck, tail, and a little bit on the spine, and fixed the eye (because it was bothering me) Thanks! VecThere was an idea... 01:21, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs, it's a little hard to distinguish.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 00:16, December 8, 2016 (UTC)

Re-ups Attempted to define shading on legs VecThere was an idea... 00:42, December 8, 2016 (UTC)

CBA? Jayce ( 19:29, 12/08/2016 )

Approved. – Ivy 00:44, December 10, 2016 (UTC)

Foggy (KP) (KP) - Approved

Foggy (KP).kittypet gave it a shot spooky chocolate nonpareils 22:43, 12/02/2016

Smooth out the line of shading on the back of the hip? Jayie Just you wait~ 01:00, December 3, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded tried to spooky chocolate nonpareils 01:04, 12/03/2016

Smooth out the shading a fair bit more, pretty much everywhere. Jayce ( 22:26, 12/03/2016 )

Reuploaded spooky chocolate nonpareils 19:14, 12/04/2016

Extend the shading on the back paws. Appledash❤ crowfeather 00:21, December 5, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded spooky chocolate nonpareils 01:09, 12/05/2016

maybe define the nosepink? i thought it wasnt filled in at first david 🌈 20:13, December 6, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded spooky chocolate nonpareils 20:37, 12/06/2016

CBA? Jayce ( 19:29, 12/08/2016 )

Approved. – Ivy 00:44, December 10, 2016 (UTC)

Zack (KP) - Approved

Zack.kittypet Sziri the goat sails away ツ 20:53, December 4, 2016 (UTC)

Pardon for the intrusion but aren't colorpoint cats technically only the tail-tip, paws, muzzle, and ears? Those are all the "points". User:Snowdapple/Sig 21:08, 12/04/2016

Are they? cat genetics is confusing and I've seen a few images like this....but idk if they're photoshopped or not. Jayce ( 21:23, 12/04/2016 )

All the colorpoints I've seen have darker tails, legs, faces, and ears, so I think this is correct. - Jose1106 Ready for ANYTHING! 21:33, December 4, 2016 (UTC)

Colorpoint cats, if your referring to the tail an all, have the whole tail colored see_here. — Minkclaw 23:06, December 4, 2016 (UTC)

think its fine, nearly all of them seem to have it going up their legs and faces n such. david 🌈 17:36, December 5, 2016 (UTC)

Since all anyone's commented on is the points, and majority says it's fine, I'm going to CBA this. Jayce ( 19:29, 12/08/2016 )

Approved. – Ivy 00:44, December 10, 2016 (UTC)

Rubblekit (Star) - Approved Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 12:13 Mon Dec 5

the shading seems really neon. — Minkclaw 17:31, December 5, 2016 (UTC)

Yes, Mink, it's a shading tint, and there's nothing that's saying Shinx isn't allowed to use one. I've seen many people use a greenish tint on their images; I've also seen red, blue, purple, and yellow. Jayce ( 20:01, 12/05/2016 )

not saying not to use green (thatd be hypocritical) but it could stand to be darkened just a lil. david 🌈 20:03, December 5, 2016 (UTC)

I wasn't saying they could, I was just saying its a little bright. — Minkclaw 20:26, December 5, 2016 (UTC)

this better? Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 21:55 Mon Dec 5

it looks like the blue (???) shading is leaking into the <== ear — Minkclaw 23:21, December 5, 2016 (UTC)

Green, actually. And it's an entirely intentional shadow. Would you like me to darken it on the earpink some more? Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 01:59 Tue Dec 6

I still think it's a little...what's the word? Obtrusive? Not to mean it as rude, but green shading makes this image look a little odd. Do you mind trying a dark pink-purple possibly? That would work a bit better. User:Snowdapple/Sig 02:28, 12/06/2016

I'd rather not if I don't absolutely have to, sorry. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 02:42 Tue Dec 6

Yes please. I think the shading his fine. It just looks odd because not very many people use it. — Minkclaw 03:13, December 6, 2016 (UTC)

I think the tint is alright, but it's a little too light and saturated, maybe just darken it a bit? Jayie Just you wait~ 04:30, December 6, 2016 (UTC)

That's the darkest I'm willing to make it. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 14:24 Tue Dec 6

CBA? Jayce ( 19:29, 12/08/2016 )

Approved. – Ivy 00:44, December 10, 2016 (UTC)

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