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Branch (HJ) (Ki) - Approved

Branch (HJ).kit dont we all love it when our art programs hate us and our siblings pester us and we need food Cinderpool Insert good quote here... 23:15, December 11, 2016 (UTC)

This needs a date on the reservation chart, and it also needs to be named in the correct format to File:Branch (HJ).kit.png. spooky chocolate nonpareils 23:16, 12/11/2016

Donee Cinderpool Insert good quote here... 23:27, December 11, 2016 (UTC)

It only says "Branch.ki.png, are you missing the t? Also, define the earpink a little, I can barely see it. Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ Yo Soy La Princesa 23:45, December 11, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading as well, and add a bit more depth to it. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 05:58, December 12, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaddedd Cinderpool Insert good quote here... 21:34, December 12, 2016 (UTC)

Define the shading again please. It's still hardly noticeable. (btw I love the design you gave him!) VecNot throwing away my shot! 21:39, December 12, 2016 (UTC)

Maybe define the earpink again as well; I couldn't see it on mobile or laptop very well. spooky chocolate nonpareils 23:15, 12/12/2016

Reuploaded Cinderpool Insert good quote here... 03:19, December 14, 2016 (UTC)

Define earpink some more.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 00:21, December 15, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded Cinderpool Insert good quote here... 23:58, December 16, 2016 (UTC)

can you define the stripes some? i'm having trouble making them out throught the shading david ✌️ 16:39, December 17, 2016 (UTC)

reeupploaaddeddd Cinderpool Insert good quote here... 04:15, December 18, 2016 (UTC)

Comments? Cinderpool Insert good quote here... 18:07, December 21, 2016 (UTC)

Please wait for at least five days before asking for comments. With activity how it is, three days isn't a good enough span of time. That being said, what's going on with the ear pink in <- ear? it looks unsmudged and like it was... idk, kinda sharpened and it seems to have these pixels at the end of the ear that look a bit off? Jayce team rowlet < 21:58, 12/21/2016 >

Reuploaded Sorry, I didn't know about the rule change >.< Cinderpool Insert good quote here... 22:52, December 21, 2016 (UTC)

Comments? Cinderpool Insert good quote here... 21:39, December 26, 2016 (UTC)

Define --> ear pink.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 01:29, December 28, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded Cinderpool Insert good quote here... 02:10, December 28, 2016 (UTC)

Define it some more. Maybe put it above the shading layer.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 00:34, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded  I put it between the first and second layers Cinderpool Insert good quote here... 23:54, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

CBA? – Ivy 00:51, January 5, 2017 (UTC)

Approved. Jayce team rowlet < 02:21, 1/06/2017 >

Mudthorn (Star) - Approved

Mudthorn.star Too bad no one cares about him lol. VecNot throwing away my shot! 00:20, December 23, 2016 (UTC)

This is good! However, there's some waste all along the tail.

Nightslash Da Warrior of Shadowclan rar 03:27, December 26, 2016 (UTC)

Thank you, but I didn't see any waste? Perhaps I'm not seeing it. VecNot throwing away my shot! 19:15, December 26, 2016 (UTC)

Have more shading along the edge of the tail? Jayie Just you wait~ 03:41, December 27, 2016 (UTC)

Reups. Expanded the shading on the tail. VecNot throwing away my shot! 04:43, December 27, 2016 (UTC)

I don't know if it's just me but the colour of the fur doesn't seem to match the warrior.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 01:34, December 28, 2016 (UTC)

Reups ...Yeah...you're right. VecNot throwing away my shot! 15:17, December 28, 2016 (UTC)

blur the earpink some more.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 00:42, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

Reups Yup yup. VecNot throwing away my shot! 01:14, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

CBA? – Ivy 00:47, January 5, 2017 (UTC)

Approved. Jayce team rowlet < 02:21, 1/06/2017 >

Birdwing(Q) ~ Approved

Birdwing.queen spooky chocolate nonpareils 01:27, 12/28/2016

Pretty! The shading looks paintbrushy (is that a word?)Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 01:38, December 28, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded Wasn't quite sure what to do so I lightened the shading a few ticks and tried to smooth it out a little though it probably didn't help much spooky chocolate nonpareils 02:48, 12/28/2016

Smoothen out the shading at the top of the shoulder of the <--- leg, where it meets the side of the face. :) Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ Yo Soy La Princesa 23:29, December 30, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded spooky chocolate nonpareils 23:39, 12/30/2016

The shading on the main body still looks a little paintbrushy.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 00:44, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded Still not sure what paintbrushy means? That's literally as much as I will smooth it out, as I can point out several other approved images with rougher shading in a similar style to this. spooky chocolate nonpareils 02:40, 12/31/2016

I don't think the shading looks paintbrushy or rough, it's good. CBA? – Ivy 00:49, January 5, 2017 (UTC)

Approved. Jayce team rowlet < 02:21, 1/06/2017 >

Nettlesplash (Lo) - Approved

Nettlesplash.loner First loner image. – Ivy 01:56, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

CBA? Jayce team rowlet < 21:31, 1/05/2017 >

Approved.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 06:05, January 7, 2017 (UTC)

Luna (KP) ~ Approved

Luna.kittypet Sziri the goat sails away ツ 23:01, December 26, 2016 (UTC)


Great job on the eye color and pelt markings! I can find no fault/NTI in this! Amazing!TawnyBracken (talk) 02:02, December 27, 2016 (UTC)TawnyBracken

Tawny, please only comment critiques about the artwork. You can't just say "nice job" and leave. Anyway, the brown looks too black on the face. Or maybe that's just shading. Either way, can you please lighten it? VecNot throwing away my shot! 02:07, December 27, 2016 (UTC)

Re-ups Thanks Tawny Sziri the goat sails away ツ 17:30, December 27, 2016 (UTC)

Nice job! Is there meant to be earpink on the --> ear? If so, I cannot see it (probably not supposed to O.o) also, the light source of the tail doesn't match the rest of the body.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 01:36, December 28, 2016 (UTC)

Re-ups Thanks!There aren't earpink there Sziri the goat sails away ツ 22:11, December 30, 2016 (UTC)

Can you define the shading on the front leg?Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 00:43, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

Re-ups Sziri the goat sails away ツ 15:53, January 1, 2017 (UTC)

CBA? – Ivy 00:17, January 7, 2017 (UTC)

Approved.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 06:19, January 8, 2017 (UTC)

Carpkit (Star) ~ Approved

Carpkit.starAll colors from kit image. Comments? Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 00:38, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

Can you define the shading just a tad, particularly on the main body and tail? – Ivy 00:50, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 00:57, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

The shading on the front body still looks undefined. Try adding some depth. ~ Fox * 愛してるばんざーい!* 09:46,1/2/2017

Reuploaded. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 20:19, January 2, 2017 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Appledash❤ crowfeather 23:39, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Approved.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 06:19, January 8, 2017 (UTC)

Piketooth (Star) ~ Approved

Piketooth.star don't have the file anymore but it's not a complicated pattern so w/e david ✌️ 11:58, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

The earpink doesn't seem as pink as on the warrior image. It looks nice. :D Jayie Just you wait~ 21:44, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

reuploaded david ✌️ 14:48, January 3, 2017 (UTC)

There are some specks of waste around his tail. - Jose1106 Ready for ANYTHING! 02:14, January 5, 2017 (UTC)

reuploaded david ✌️ 20:08, January 5, 2017 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Appledash❤ crowfeather 23:38, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Approved.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 06:19, January 8, 2017 (UTC)

Cherrypaw (SHA) (A) ~ Approved

Cherrypaw (SHA).apprentice This is a pretty pattern Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 14:33 Mon Jan 2

Smudge/Blur the shading a bit more. Cursed for life 18:06, January 2, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded this earlier but then didn't actually say anything Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 23:51 Thu Jan 5

Comments before approval? Appledash❤ crowfeather 23:38, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Approved.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 06:19, January 8, 2017 (UTC)

Cricketkit (Star) ~ Approved

Cricketkit.star Completely forgotten how to charart >_> Silver The Endless River✼ ~10:42,1/5/2017

eyes should be orange. david ✌️ 14:26, January 5, 2017 (UTC)

Re-ups how did I miss that Silver The Endless River✼ ~14:38,1/5/2017

Remove the white, as she's only stated to have a white hind leg. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 18:04, January 5, 2017 (UTC)

Re-ups Smoothened the chest shading a bit. I thought tabbies are allowed to have white paws/chest/muzzle? Especially when she has some white genes (imnotmakinganysense) but if someone else agrees I'll gladly change it. Silver The Endless River✼ ~00:40,1/6/2017

I'd agree to removing it as well, as from what I've heard, tabbies can have pale parts added, but adding white is a bit of an assumption for her description spooky chocolate nonpareils 00:57, 1/06/2017

Re-ups Does this work^^ Silver The Endless River✼ ~01:54,1/6/2017

They were never allowed to have extra white, dear. It's always been pale. Now, while it looks white on some images, it's almost always been pale... unless someone lies just to get their images how they want them. The pale as you have it is completely acceptable and I actually really like it. Jayce team rowlet < 02:15, 1/06/2017 >

is the nose filled in? or am I just being a blind ass again david ✌️ 21:02, January 7, 2017 (UTC)

It's pink lmao Silver The Endless River✼ ~06:56,1/8/2017

CBA? Jayie Just you wait~ 17:01, January 11, 2017 (UTC)

Approved. – Ivy 21:41, January 13, 2017 (UTC)

Pebbleshine (W) - Approved

Pebbleshine.warrior~Patchfeather~ 15:18, January 1, 2017 (UTC)

I dunno if it's just me, but I don't think the tint of the brown matches the other images. It seems a bit too...dark. VecNot throwing away my shot! 01:20, January 2, 2017 (UTC)

I think there should just be a little more marks with a slight lighter shade so it's a bit like a gradient effect? (what am I even Silver The Endless River✼ ~08:01,1/2/2017

Re-uploaded I can't tell if it looks any lighter. I used a much lighter brown though. ~Patchfeather~ 16:48, January 2, 2017 (UTC)

Would you like the file? The pattern doesn't seem to match correctly, as Sunjaw did it a certain way. User:Snowdapple/Sig 14:59, 1/03/2017

Perhaps add more speckles on the underside of the tail, as the other images seem to have a few more there spooky chocolate nonpareils 19:54, 1/04/2017

Re-uploaded Yeah, I think the file might help. ~Patchfeather~ 14:22, January 5, 2017 (UTC)

I'm struggling to see the earpink.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 06:26, January 8, 2017 (UTC)

There seems to be a few speckles going down the leg on the kit and apprentice image. Could you add those? Cursed for life 03:13, January 9, 2017 (UTC)

Still working?Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 20:49, January 11, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Yeah, sorry I've been busy. ~Patchfeather~ 16:10, January 12, 2017 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Appledash❤ crowfeather 23:36, January 13, 2017 (UTC)

Approved. – Ivy 00:27, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

Duckkit (Star) - Approved

Duckkit.star First original design. ^^ And yes, I did surgically place the short-haired tail onto this one. He's only described with a "straight tail", not a tail like his father, who's described with a "tail like a reed". Comments? VecNot throwing away my shot! 02:27, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Define the ear pink a little bit! It looks super cool. :DDD Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ Yo Soy La Princesa

He looks really greenish-yellow. Can you make him brown? Jayce team rowlet < 02:37, 1/06/2017 >

Reups I was thinking the exact same thing right after I posted it, Jayce. XD Found a different shade that I liked. VecNot throwing away my shot! 02:46, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Could you shift it just a little bit more? Now he looks slightly orange... but that could also be my screen. Jayce team rowlet < 02:48, 1/06/2017 >

Reups. Yeah, you're right. VecNot throwing away my shot! 02:52, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

It's possibly my screen problem or my eyes? But to me it looks like... it has a ginger pelt with greenish stripes? Silver The Endless River✼ ~04:47,1/6/2017

Reups I could see that for the stripes, but not so much on the pelt color. Probably because I've already changed it three times already in one day. Can I have a second opinion on the pelt color please? VecNot throwing away my shot! 05:09, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

I have to agree, it looks more brownish gold than anyting. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 05:35, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Reups You know what they say: fourth--er, fifth time's a charm, right? VecNot throwing away my shot! 06:08, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading on the chest, and I feel like there should be shading under the chin/cheek, or along the lower cheek, if that makes sense? Jayie Just you wait~ 17:03, January 11, 2017 (UTC)

Reups VecNot throwing away my shot! 22:42, January 12, 2017 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Appledash❤ crowfeather 23:34, January 13, 2017 (UTC)

Approved. – Ivy 00:27, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

Darktail (Loner) - Approved

Darktail.loner

hahaha i'm not living up to the other artists' great art sorry guys

also ill fix the waste above the back later Cinderpool Insert good quote here... 03:39, January 6, 2017

Smoothen out the shading Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ Yo Soy La Princesa 03:40, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

It might be me, but I can't really see the earpink. Besides that, nice work! :) Shadowbright67 (talk) 06:08, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Blend the shading more, please. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 12:14 Fri Jan 6

reuploaded i just realized how awful that shading was Cinderpool Insert good quote here... 22:59, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

Smoothen out the shading on the hind leg closest to us. :DD Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ Yo Soy La Princesa 21:00, January 7, 2017 (UTC)

reuploaded stuff things insert creative message here Cinderpool Insert good quote here... 00:41, January 8, 2017 (UTC)

Could you define the light on the paws, except for the very front one? spooky chocolate nonpareils 04:15, 1/09/2017

reuploaded also fixed where the shading was leaking away from the lineart a bit Cinderpool Insert good quote here... 23:44, January 9, 2017 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit! Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ Yo Soy La Princesa 02:15, January 10, 2017 (UTC)

I think the shading should be lightened by a teeny bit =) Silver The Endless River✼ ~12:03,1/10/2017

reuploaded oops haha i left that on the darker opacity from when i was messing with the shading Cinderpool Insert good quote here... 21:27, January 11, 2017 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Appledash❤ crowfeather 23:34, January 13, 2017 (UTC)

Approved. – Ivy 00:27, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

Fallowfern(E) ~ Approved

Fallowfern.elder spooky chocolate nonpareils 11:40, 1/06/2017

Maybe add just a teensy bit of shading on the two front paws? I know the light's coming from the front so they shouldn't have much on them, but not having any shading makes them look flat. Same goes for the ears. – Ivy 00:11, January 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded spooky chocolate nonpareils 00:57, 1/07/2017

I think it's a good idea to add some shading on her shoulder so it like connects to the back shading^^ Silver The Endless River✼ ~12:04,1/10/2017

Reuploaded spooky chocolate nonpareils 21:04, 1/10/2017

CBA? – Ivy 21:59, January 13, 2017 (UTC)

Approved. – Ivy 00:27, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

Quailkit (Star) ~ Approved

File:Quailkit.star.png Water 16:39, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

There seems to be two unfilled white pixels on --> side of the tail spooky chocolate nonpareils 23:01, 1/07/2017

Reupload Water 17:50, January 8, 2017 (UTC)

There's an extra grey pixel on the belly, near the <-- leg. Cinderpool Insert good quote here... 03:18, January 9, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe define/darken the shading on the head a bit! :) Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ Yo Soy La Princesa 02:14, January 10, 2017 (UTC)

Reupload Water 18:32, January 10, 2017 (UTC)

CBA? – Ivy 22:00, January 13, 2017 (UTC)

Approved. – Ivy 00:27, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

Roach (Ro) - Approved

Roach.rogue Why was shading this so frustrating? – Ivy 00:14, January 8, 2017 (UTC)

It looks as though there's an unfilled pixel on the <--- ear. Shypaw11 (talk) 00:21, January 8, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Messed with the shaidng, but as far as I can see, there aren't any unfilled pixels in the ears. – Ivy 00:24, January 8, 2017 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Appledash❤ crowfeather 13:01, January 11, 2017 (UTC)

Sorry, but the hue seems to shift throughout the pelt for me. It looks sort of pale yellow, but that may be the shading. kiddoi a brawl is surely brewing! 23:14 Wed Jan 11

Re-uploaded. The base color is completely gray and the same throughout, so it must have been the shading as you suggested. I made the shading pure black instead of tinted, hopefully that fixed the issue (although it didn't look yellowish to me?). – Ivy 21:20, January 12, 2017 (UTC)

CBA? Jayce team rowlet < 03:53, 1/16/2017 >

Approved.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 07:43, January 18, 2017 (UTC)

Clovertail (E) - Approved

Clovertail.elder david ✌️ 16:47, January 8, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the neck shading a bit? Jayce team rowlet < 23:37, 1/08/2017 >

Still working?Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 20:50, January 11, 2017 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading and lighten the neck a bit! Good work!TawnyBracken (talk) 04:11, January 13, 2017 (UTC)TawnyBracken

reuploaded why would i lighten it when it's the same as the rest of the shading david ✌️ 20:06, January 13, 2017 (UTC)

CBA? Jayce team rowlet < 03:53, 1/16/2017 >

Approved.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 07:43, January 18, 2017 (UTC)

Stagleap (TR) (Star) - Approved

Stagleap (TR).star Hello heavy texture <33 Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣19:51 Tue Jan 10

Gorgeous. Define the light on the tail a bit. VecNot throwing away my shot! 04:58, January 11, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded This is as much as I'm able to define it. Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣16:55 Wed Jan 11

Lighten the shading a bit? I have nothing else to say about this other then 'This is AMAZING!' Good work!!TawnyBracken (talk) 03:31, January 13, 2017 (UTC)TawnyBracken

Thank you ^^ But can I get a second opinion on the shading opacity? I'm only asking because this isn't any darker than his other images. Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣15:54 Fri Jan 13

I think it's fine personally. Like you said, it's similar to his other images. VecNot throwing away my shot! 16:04, January 13, 2017 (UTC)

I agree, the shading darkness looks fine to me. CBA? – Ivy 00:45, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

Approved.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 07:43, January 18, 2017 (UTC)

Cloudmist (Lo) ~ Approved

Cloudmist.loner First charart! Hopefully this goes well. The turtorials were really useful. Shadowbright67 (talk) 04:21, December 29, 2016 (UTC)

Nice job for your first one! Smudge the shading and lighten it a bit though. Cursed for life 04:28, December 29, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded (thank you! :) ) - Shadowbright67 (talk) 05:06, December 29, 2016 (UTC)

Not sure if you're aware, but her base on the apprentice image is pure white. I can't tell because the brightness on my desktop is lowered right now. Jayce team rowlet < 05:28, 12/29/2016 >

There are some sharp white pixels on the <--- front leg (where it meets the rest of the body) and on the other front leg towards the shoulder. Probably just missing some shading there. :P VecNot throwing away my shot! 19:47, December 29, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded My screen was at max brightness, but lowered it now and managed to find the white spots. It still looks sorta white to me, but I tried to pale the shading to hopefully make it look less gray if it did. Shadowbright67 (talk) 22:28, December 29, 2016 (UTC)

Can you add some depth to the image, for instance the belly? — paper · finches 14:38, December 30, 2016 (UTC)

Define the light a bit on the legs and tail. – Ivy 00:51, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

Reuploaded not sure about the depth Shadowbright67 (talk) 17:23, January 3, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe just add a touch more depth to the shading, and define the light on the paws again spooky chocolate nonpareils 11:42, 1/06/2017

Maybe darken the ear pink? Shypaw11 (talk) 21:54, January 6, 2017 (UTC)

The shading seems to be leaking away from the lineart on the belly, near the <--- leg. Cinderpool Insert good quote here... 02:16, January 7, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded Couldn't really catch the shading off-lineart so I'm not sure if its still there after using the eraser by the leg and belly. Shadowbright67 (talk) 03:57, January 7, 2017 (UTC)

Leaking away from the lineart means it's not reaching the edge of the lineart. On the belly, there's white space between the lineart and the rest of the shading, it's right by the edge of the leg at the bottom of the belly. Cinderpool Insert good quote here... 03:10, January 9, 2017

This is probably minor, but the nose color on the apprentice image is a very different color :) Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ Yo Soy La Princesa 02:18, January 10, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Right, thanks for explaining what it meant. Shadowbright67 (talk) 22:14, January 11, 2017 (UTC)

Just smooth out the shoulder shading and then it'll seem good to go. Appledash❤ crowfeather 23:37, January 13, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Sort of changed eye color, because at first, I saw it silverish, but when I got on my phone, it looked pale blue. Shadowbright67 (talk) 01:31, January 14, 2017 (UTC)

Her eyes are meant to be blue. Did you get the colors from the apprentice image or the warrior image that I have posted below? You're required to match the apprentice image in terms of coloring. Jayce team rowlet < 03:05, 1/14/2017 >

At first, I tried apprentice, but my laptop was too bright so I just went on to warrior eye color. I'll darken it tomorrow, since I can't do anything in the app I'm using. (Just noticed that the fur is looking silvery-white, so I'm going to make it paler.) Shadowbright67 (talk) 05:45, January 14, 2017 (UTC)

Very nice! Near the rump area, it looks like there is some smudged pixels and the shading seems to be a bit off..Sorry if I'm wrong and it's supposed to be like that!𐌕𐌀𐤔𐌽𐍅βṜΛϾḲΣṆ😼 (talk) 07:11, January 14, 2017 (UTC)TawnyBracken

Reuploaded. Shadowbright67 (talk) 03:37, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

The shading on the --> back leg seems to be leeking. It means that the shading blurs off before the lineart. Cursed for life 03:40, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Shadowbright67 (talk) 03:49, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

shading is unusually dark +doesnt line up with linear art on back leg, shoulder and neck. Lifesucks24.7 (talk) 13:40, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

The shading isn't too dark at all, in my opinion. Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ Yo Soy La Princesa 21:52, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

The shading is fine. CBA? Jayce team rowlet < 04:07, 1/19/2017 >

Approved.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 09:03, January 20, 2017 (UTC)

Wavepaw (A) - Approved

Wavepaw.apprentice she's waving buh-bye to 2016 too ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 03:11, December 31, 2016 (UTC)

Thank god this terrible year is over. Define the light on the back paws. Appledash❤ crowfeather 02:19, January 1, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 16:38, January 1, 2017 (UTC)

Define the earpink in the <--- ear. VecNot throwing away my shot! 03:34, January 4, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe define the shading a little bit? – Ivy 00:51, January 5, 2017 (UTC)

Still working?Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 06:25, January 8, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded yes, I forgot to say I was going to be gone for this week but I messaged Cloudy ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 00:06, January 10, 2017 (UTC)

It might just be me, but the silver patches seem a little dark to be silver, and not just gray. Also, I'm having a hard time making out what are the white patches, what's silver, and what's shading on the face. Maybe define all of that a little? Jayie Just you wait~ 17:00, January 11, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 00:44, January 12, 2017 (UTC)

Silver still looks too dark. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 00:47, January 12, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 02:14, January 12, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading c: Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ Yo Soy La Princesa 17:19, January 12, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 18:36, January 12, 2017 (UTC)

Define teh shading more. Appledash❤ crowfeather 23:37, January 13, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 02:39, January 14, 2017 (UTC)

Comments? ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 03:49, January 18, 2017 (UTC)

CBA? – Ivy 21:33, January 18, 2017 (UTC)

Approved.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 09:03, January 20, 2017 (UTC)

Redclaw (Star) ~ Approved

Redclaw.star meh Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 01:20 Tue Jan 10

The earpink looks a bit different than the other image. Nice pattern! :D Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ Yo Soy La Princesa 02:13, January 10, 2017 (UTC)

holy crap this is awesome It could be my screen, but I'm seeing the shading to be... light green that it's kinda odd? Maybe shift the tint or darken it a tad? Silver The Endless River✼ ~12:07,1/10/2017

Reups Yea that's cus it is green shading. I darkened it some, but if you want me to change the tint I can. green shading on a red cat probably wasnt my brightest idea lmao (but thanks) Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 20:15 Tue Jan 10

I think the tint is fine. Mind smudging the ---> ear pink a bit? VecNot throwing away my shot! 05:20, January 11, 2017 (UTC)

reuploaded Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 11:13 Sat Jan 14

CBA? – Ivy 21:35, January 18, 2017 (UTC)

Approved.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 09:03, January 20, 2017 (UTC)

Brackenfur (Alt. W 5) ~ Approved

Brackenfur.warrior.alt5He has a russet alt and a pale ginger alt, but he was also called dark ginger. Comments? Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 14:47, January 8, 2017 (UTC)

Dull down the neon. User:Snowdapple/Sig 17:08, 1/08/2017

Reuploaded. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 20:03, January 8, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs VecNot throwing away my shot! 23:38, January 9, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 01:02, January 10, 2017 (UTC)

Smudge the belly color a bit? Looks too blotchyTawnyBracken (talk) 09:05, January 11, 2017 (UTC)TawnyBracken

Reuploaded. It was already smudged, but I went and smudged it a little more. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 20:04, January 11, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the back foot that we can see all of. It doesn't seem like there's shading there at all, when there kinda has to be. Also define the light on the tail. Jayce team rowlet < 07:48, 1/12/2017 >

Reuploaded. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 13:33, January 12, 2017 (UTC)

Smoothen the stripes a bit? When I first saw this, I thought you just drew lines on it. Sorry if I'm giving too much criticism...TawnyBracken (talk) 00:31, January 13, 2017 (UTC)TawnyBracken

Reuploaded. I redid the stripes, as I like this pattern a bit better. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 01:24, January 13, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading and smudge the stripesTawnyBracken (talk) 02:22, January 13, 2017 (UTC)TawnyBracken

Reuploaded. I'd prefer not to smudge the stripes, as they are only a few pixels wide at most, and smudging them would make them look distorted, to the point where one might not be able to tell they are stripes. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 19:45, January 13, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading on the neck and also on the upper back area. – Ivy 22:19, January 13, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 02:13, January 14, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe smooth out the shading on the main body just a little bit? – Ivy 21:32, January 18, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 22:22, January 18, 2017 (UTC)

Comments? Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 07:02, January 23, 2017 (UTC)

CBA?Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 05:36, January 24, 2017 (UTC)

Approved.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 03:46, January 26, 2017 (UTC)

Thistleheart (Star) ~ Approved

Thistleheart.star Sziri the goat sails away ツ 20:57, January 10, 2017 (UTC)

Maybe lighten and smudge the shading in the direction of fur on the body instead of...every direction if you know what I mean? I thought this was a gray and white for a second =P Silver The Endless River✼ ~00:39,1/11/2017

Recede/erase away some of the shading on the face, it feels like there's too much of it in shadow based on how much light is on the back. Jayie Just you wait~ 04:52, January 11, 2017 (UTC)

Re-ups Sziri the goat sails away ツ 20:54, January 11, 2017 (UTC)

Amazing! Alot better then I could do...lighten the shading a bit, looks gray on the flank and paws a tiny bitTawnyBracken (talk) 00:32, January 13, 2017 (UTC)TawnyBracken

Re-ups Thanks! Sziri the goat sails away ツ 13:30, January 13, 2017 (UTC)

The ear tips look a bit gray, like Snowfur's𐌕𐌀𐤔𐌽𐍅βṜΛϾḲΣṆ😼 (talk) 23:15, January 14, 2017 (UTC)TawnyBracken

Re-ups Sziri the goat sails away ツ 20:52, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

So sorry if her eyes are supposed to be light blue, I'm kinda stupid, but maybe darken the eye depth a bit?❀𐌀𐌓𐌓𐌋𐌄𐌁𐍂𐌄𐌄乙𐌄❀ (talk) 04:34, January 17, 2017 (UTC)AppleBreeze

They're supoposed to be like this Sziri the goat sails away ツ 18:52, January 17, 2017 (UTC)

There seems to be two stripes in the --> eye.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 07:39, January 18, 2017 (UTC)

Yeah, this is the eye-style I use one my Starclan characters Sziri the goat sails away ツ 12:51, January 18, 2017 (UTC)

I think the shading is leaking at the base of the right ear. — paper · finches 19:37, January 18, 2017 (UTC)

Re-ups Sziri the goat sails away ツ 20:56, January 18, 2017 (UTC)

CBA? I love the shading. – Ivy 23:39, January 23, 2017 (UTC)

Approved.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 03:46, January 26, 2017 (UTC)

Pricklekit (RC) (Star) ~ Approved

Pricklekit (RC).star spooky chocolate nonpareils 02:18, 1/16/2017

Beautiful! Mind fixing the eye depth a bit?❀𐌀𐌓𐌓𐌋𐌄𐌁𐍂𐌄𐌄乙𐌄❀ (talk) 05:57, January 16, 2017 (UTC)AppleBreeze

Reuploaded spooky chocolate nonpareils 15:49, 1/16/2017

Looks like the shading is cut off on the leg closest to us❀𐌀𐌓𐌓𐌋𐌄𐌁𐍂𐌄𐌄乙𐌄❀ (talk) 05:50, January 17, 2017 (UTC)AppleBreeze

It's not cut off; the light source calls for the shading placement to be as such, so it's supposed to be that way. spooky chocolate nonpareils 11:13, 1/17/2017

Smooth out the shading a bit. VecNot throwing away my shot! 03:43, January 18, 2017 (UTC)

Reuploaded spooky chocolate nonpareils 19:05, 1/18/2017

Comments? spooky chocolate nonpareils 21:19, 1/23/2017

CBA? – Ivy 23:39, January 23, 2017 (UTC)

Approved.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 03:46, January 26, 2017 (UTC)

Flailfoot (Star) ~ Approved

Flailfoot.star Water 02:27, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

I can't see the white in the eye...is it there? Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ Yo Soy La Princesa 03:49, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

Could you make some shading on the chin? I think there should be some. ^^ Thunder, The king of all. 14:30, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

Reupload Water 15:51, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

Something is leaking on the ---> chest near the lineart. Can't tell what it is. VecNot throwing away my shot! 18:42, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

Reupload Water 15:58, January 18, 2017 (UTC)

CBA? – Ivy 23:44, January 23, 2017 (UTC)

Approved.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 03:46, January 26, 2017 (UTC)

Roach (Ki) - Approved

Roach.kit Cricket is a cute name. – Ivy 21:24, January 18, 2017 (UTC)

could you smoothen the shading a tad and maybe lighten it some? — Minkclaw 17:14, January 19, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. – Ivy 21:14, January 19, 2017 (UTC)

CBA?Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 05:38, January 24, 2017 (UTC)

Approved.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 03:46, January 26, 2017 (UTC)

Cloudmist (W) - Approved

Cloudmist.warrior will eventually tweak shading I think. All colors from apprentice file. Jayce team rowlet < 23:37, 1/08/2017 >

I know you said you might tweak the shading, but can you make the tail shading less lumpy (there's basically just a part in the middle that's not as shaded as the top and bottom), and try to define light/shade on the legs as you do that? Lovely white kitteh Silver The Endless River✼ ~16:34,1/9/2017

Re-uploaded. Jayce team rowlet < 07:41, 1/12/2017 >

Define the earpink a little bit! :) Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ Yo Soy La Princesa 17:17, January 12, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Jayce team rowlet < 03:56, 1/16/2017 >

the tail shading could more visible Lifesucks24.7 (talk) 13:46, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

It's a couple pixels wide and difficult to shade. I'd like a second opinion on that, because I can see it just fine, even without my glasses on. Jayce team rowlet < 14:16, 1/16/2017 >

I agree with you Snowed, I can see it just fine. Thunder, The king of all. 14:28, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

I agree, too. I think it's partly because the talon the warrior is so oddly skinny, there isn't a lot of room for shading + normal color to be shown. Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ Yo Soy La Princesa 21:49, January 16, 2017 (UTC)

Could you dull down/reduce the highlights a little? — paper · finches 17:38, January 19, 2017 (UTC)

It's pure white and I have no highlights. I can't dull anything. Pure white is very much allowed and all of my white cats have it as their base. Jayce team rowlet < 17:52, 1/19/2017 >

I thought it could of been highlights on the leg which gave it the hard edge so could you smooth out the shading on top of the front leg instead? — paper · finches 21:19, January 19, 2017 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I don't use highlights on anything. It's not required, therefore I find it pointless to fiddle with them when in most cases, it distorts coloring and causes me more trouble than it's worth. Jayce team rowlet < 03:19, 1/21/2017 >

CBA? – Ivy 21:40, January 26, 2017 (UTC)

Approved.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 03:48, January 28, 2017 (UTC)

Sweetbriar (Ki) - Approved

Sweetbriar.kit D'aw. Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣16:45 Wed Jan 18

Do you need and/or want the file for her queen image? Jayce team rowlet < 04:06, 1/19/2017 >

I think I'm good without it. I just need to shift the markings on her chest/neck area a little. I did this in the wee hours for fun/practice matching on the kit blank originally since I couldn't sleep lol. Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣19:11 Thu Jan 19

Reuploaded. Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣00:02 Sat Jan 21

Can I nudge this? Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣16:24 Wed Jan 25

I think you have to wait five full days now (not entirely positive if the rule's gone into effect, though). Anyhow, this looks great, CBA? – Ivy 21:43, January 26, 2017 (UTC)

Approved.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 03:48, January 28, 2017 (UTC)

Snakepaw (Ro) ~ Approved

Snakepaw.rogue out of practice david ✌️ 18:39, January 18, 2017 (UTC)

Define the shading? It looks super cool David {: Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ Yo Soy La Princesa 01:21, January 20, 2017 (UTC)

reuploaded david ✌️ 15:48, January 21, 2017 (UTC)

CBA? – Ivy 21:44, January 26, 2017 (UTC)

Approved.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 03:48, January 28, 2017 (UTC)

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