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Cinderpaw - Approved

Cinderpelt.mcaI'm not sure about the paw...Minnowclaw 01:18, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

I think the paw looks great! So does the shading and everything! Icethroat21Enter at risk 01:21, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

The paw looks awesome! -- Pandasong Pandasong's Talk Page 01:54, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

Can you add a highlight to the herbs as a final touch? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 14:48, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

Is this better? Wow, I didn't think the paw was good at all.Minnowclaw 17:21, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - The bent paw needs thickened lineart, and it's bend is too sharp. Round that out, and then she'll be good. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 17:58, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

It's supposed to be her hind leg that's bent. I have a book reference on her article talk page. The warrior version is wrong too. --Rainwhisker09 12:01, September 14, 2009 (UTC)

Blackclaw is right. I also came across a reference when rereading one of the books. It is her hind leg. Bramble - what shall we do about her warrior version?? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 18:31, September 14, 2009 (UTC)

Hmm... someone willl just have to change it, as mal hasn't been seen in the last milennia. Any calls for you could do it? I will, if no one else wants to. --Bramble My Realm 21:36, September 18, 2009 (UTC)

I will do her medicine cat version. I just erased the leg because I couldn't get it right and it wouldn't show up on the other side in real life.Minnowclaw 22:14, September 17, 2009 (UTC)

She is a dark gray. -- Dawnfeather  talk! 23:53, September 18, 2009 (UTC)

better?Minnowclaw 16:58, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Darker than that - it needs to look like her medicine cat version. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 20:56, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

Better?Minnowclaw 22:52, September 20, 2009 (UTC)

Still needs to be darker; it's two shades too light. Also, shade the herbs some too. --Bramble’-san' 21:07, September 21, 2009 (UTC)

Better?Minnowclaw 01:39, September 24, 2009 (UTC)

Much better. Comments before approval? --Bramble-san 02:41, September 24, 2009 (UTC) None. Approved. --Bramble-san 02:44, September 25, 2009 (UTC)

Jaypaw - Approved

Jayfeather.mca I'm so fed up with the other type of tabby stripes! I tried this one, is it good?.Minnowclaw 23:31, September 17, 2009 (UTC)

I love this. He is supposed to be just grey, though, and this is more like light grey/silver. I'd change him to darkish grey.  Sparrowsong  Madly Blooming Princess 03:31, September 18, 2009 (UTC)

better?Minnowclaw 16:42, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

Yes, he looks better now that he's darker, but what happened to the tabby stripes? Icethroat21Enter at risk 17:29, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

Wait, I thought that he wasn't tabby?Minnowclaw 19:02, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - His page description is a small gray tabby tom. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 21:01, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

He's a tabby...--Warrior♥Warrior's Den 15:31, September 20, 2009 (UTC)

Darn it, oh well, looks like were going back to the beginning. I returned him to tabby and made him darker.Minnowclaw 17:05, September 20, 2009 (UTC)

It looks fine to me. He's a gray tabby, and that's what we've got here. Comments before approval? --Bramble’-san' 21:10, September 21, 2009 (UTC)

Hmm... His eyes seem to dark for a blind cat. On the eclipse cover he has lighter eyes. Change that then it should be perfect. Mossflight 22:10, September 21, 2009 (UTC)

Better?Minnowclaw 01:33, September 24, 2009 (UTC)

Yep. Mossflight 01:49, September 24, 2009 (UTC)

WEEEEEEEEE YAY!Minnowclaw 02:07, September 24, 2009 (UTC)

Lol. Comments before approval? --Bramble-san 02:41, September 24, 2009 (UTC)

None. Approved. --Bramble-san 02:44, September 25, 2009 (UTC)

Brambleberry - Approved

Brambleberry.mcWell, here's Brambleberry, my fist medicine cat. I tried adding some highlights, and I honestly have no clue how it looks. Comments?-- Echomist Hear the Echo... 15:17, September 21, 2009 (UTC)

it looks like you missed a bit on the left leg?  Brambleclaw14 Talk 15:49, September 21, 2009 (UTC)

This looks too gray to be a white cat. It did say she was white with black dots sand a strikingly pink nose, yes? Mossflight 22:07, September 21, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Made her coat color whiter.-- Echomist Hear the Echo... 21:14, September 22, 2009 (UTC)

What happened to her strikingly pink nose? :( Lol the pelt looks great now, change the nose back, and then I think she'll be ready. --Bramble-san 21:49, September 22, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Oops... I redid the whole image and forgot about the nose. LOL. How is she now?-- Echomist Hear the Echo... 00:40, September 23, 2009 (UTC)

Looks good to me. But I probably missed something.Minnowclaw 01:25, September 24, 2009 (UTC)

She looks good to me, too. Nice job, echo. Comments before approval? --Bramble-san 02:41, September 24, 2009 (UTC)

None. Approved. --Bramble-san 02:44, September 25, 2009 (UTC)


Tallpoppy (Q) - Approved

Tallpoppy.queen
I'm taking the opportunity whilst I actually have the time to put some images up so here she is. Constructments? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 19:07, September 21, 2009 (UTC)

Oh wow, Sandy, she looks beautiful. Nothing I can see is wrong with it. I love your tabby stripe style. :) btw, like my new siggie? --Bramble’-san' 21:15, September 21, 2009 (UTC)

Thank you :) I was a bit wary of trying these as they always looked so hard to do, but I guess it payed off! I love your new siggie :) What does 'Bramble-san' mean though ??? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 16:43, September 22, 2009 (UTC)

Meh, I was watching too many a Japanese anime. :) Basically, they added -san (which means respect and other honor stuff) to the end of their leader's name. Plus I thought Bramble-san sounded cool. You can just call me Bramble as usual though. ;) Does anyone else have any comments? Or shall I start the 24 hours? --Bramble-san 22:14, September 22, 2009 (UTC)


So have I xD. Up to 15 episodes a day -hides-... Though perhaps we could call you Bramble-sama :P. Anyways, the images is great! I love the stripes.-- Darkhallows  My den 05:34, September 23, 2009 (UTC)

One thing the left ear maybe should bw pink? bur I'm new so.... "_"  Brambleclaw14 Talk 05:52, September 23, 2009 (UTC)

Lol :) Shruggy: I'm assuming you mean the ear on our left, not her left. If so then I'm not going to add ear pink as it wouldn't be visible from this angle. If you mean her left ear then can you expand on that please? :) Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 16:46, September 23, 2009 (UTC)

heh I mean our left (I'm on the IRC)  Brambleclaw14 Talk 16:51, September 23, 2009 (UTC)

Lol Shady. But why Bramble-sama...? Anyway, comments before approval? --Bramble-san 02:47, September 24, 2009 (UTC)

I think -sama means like an important person, or a leader. (I watch naruto a lot) --Rainwhisker09 12:28, September 24, 2009 (UTC)

It does. I just prefer –san cause it rolls more easily off the tongue and –sama makes me think of the bad guy from one of the animes I watch. :) Image:approved. --Bramble-san 02:44, September 25, 2009 (UTC)

Blackfoot (D) - Approved

Blackstar.deputy

His other two versions, rogue and leader, have been done, so I thought I would do the version we saw him in during the first series. Constructments? --Bramble My Realm 02:33, September 21, 2009 (UTC)

He looks good to me, Bramble. --Darkhallows... Having major wiki issues.

Blend the shading on the back a little. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 18:28, September 21, 2009 (UTC)

I'm not sure it did much, but I blended on high power and this is the best I can do. --Bramble’-san' 21:13, September 21, 2009 (UTC)

Looks great! Comments before approval?-- Darkhallows  My den 05:26, September 23, 2009 (UTC)

the lineart on his back is blurred, other than that! I love him!!!X3-- ☆Brackenstorm☆ X3 22:21, September 23, 2009 (UTC)

I can't see any blurred lineart Bracken... Looks perfect to me...Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 20:18, September 25, 2009 (UTC)

This has been sitting here for over 24 hours, no other comments, approved. HAWKFIRE98 12:58, September 26, 2009 (UTC)

Seonding approval. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 09:44, September 27, 2009 (UTC)

Raggedstar (Le) - Approved

Raggedstar.leader
I've done two versions of him with different tabby stripes. Which is best? Constructments? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 12:28, September 20, 2009 (UTC)

My mum thinks the one on the left, but I say the one on the right. They are both brilliant. -- Dawnfeather  talk! 12:43, September 20, 2009 (UTC)

I say the one on the right. Icethroat21Enter at risk 14:31, September 20, 2009 (UTC)

Lol, thank your mum for me Dawn! I like the one on the right best but I wanted to see what everyone else thought as triangle markings have been considered cartoony and not up to project standards in the past. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 14:39, September 20, 2009 (UTC)

I'd go for the right one. =) I think the tabby markings look better on it. But either one needs for blending and darker shading. And the black lines... I can tell your using though as detail for the patchy fur, but maybe make them a darker brown so they don't stand out as much. Hehe, checking in.--Warrior♥Warrior's Den 15:37, September 20, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I've saved over the first version as the other was definitely most popular. Warrior: I've blended the shading as much as possible and have also blended the markings a little too. I've lightened the black lines to a dark brown but haven't darkened the shading. When I tried to darken it by just one degree it became so distinct and dark that it was impossible to blend. I have done a version with highlights though to try and make the shading seem darker than it actualy is. The highlighted version is now on the right, the normally shaded version on the left. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 16:26, September 20, 2009 (UTC)

I like the right one best, yet again, but there is a little patch on (his left, our right) shoulder where the shading and higlighting meet pretty suddenly and could be blend more. Other than that, Thumbs Up! -- Dawnfeather  talk! 21:32, September 20, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Personally, I prefer the one on the left. *Shrug* Up to you though. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 23:38, September 20, 2009 (UTC)

Hmm, I have to go with the right as well, if you want majority rules opinion, Sandy. Fix what Dawn said and he should be good to go. I might do Brokenstar next, so he'll have his son to go with him. :) --Bramble-san 21:54, September 22, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, majority wins then. I've done my best to blend the transition but i can't do much more because of distorting the markings and ruffly-fur-stuff. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 19:30, September 24, 2009 (UTC)

He looks great now. Comments before approval? --Bramble-san 21:04, September 25, 2009 (UTC) None. Approved. --Bramble-san 21:30, September 26, 2009 (UTC)

Lionblaze (A) - Approved

Lionblaze.apprentice

Well, I'm not really sure how to do a tabby yet, and I was trying different things, and I wasn't sure which of these two to put up for approval. Personally, I don't like either of them, but which one do you all like better? Icethroat21Enter at risk 00:15, September 21, 2009 (UTC)

IDK. Keep the first one and put the shading you put on the second one on the first.Minnowclaw 01:12, September 21, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - I like the second one personally. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 01:21, September 21, 2009 (UTC)

I took down the one on the left, because the stripes looked weird, and I like the one on the right better. So, what changes should I make to this one? Icethroat21Enter at risk 01:36, September 21, 2009 (UTC)

I made the shading lighter, because I felt like it was too dark. Well, what else do I need to do? Icethroat21Enter at risk 21:22, September 21, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Add tabby markings on the tail and legs. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 00:01, September 22, 2009 (UTC)

REUPLOADED. Added the stripes, but they're not very noticable on the tail. How does it look? Icethroat21Enter at risk 01:44, September 22, 2009 (UTC)

lighten up the shading on the belly. It looks as if that was her pelt color.Minnowclaw 01:27, September 24, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, I'll get to him ASAP. Icethroat21Enter at risk 01:37, September 24, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Okay, how does it look now? Icethroat21Enter at risk 20:15, September 24, 2009 (UTC)

Good.Minnowclaw 20:32, September 24, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --Bramble-san 21:04, September 25, 2009 (UTC)

None. Approved. --Bramble-san 21:30, September 26, 2009 (UTC)

Lionblaze (Ki) - Approved

Lionblaze.kit
My second-favorite character as a kit. Criticism welcome.  Sparrowsong  Madly Blooming Princess 23:26, September 22, 2009 (UTC)

Very cute! Darken the shading, and maybe darken the stripes a shade or two, and he should be good to go! HAWKFIRE98 01:11, September 23, 2009 (UTC)

Better?  Sparrowsong  Madly Blooming Princess 02:29, September 23, 2009 (UTC)

You seem to have blured the tabby stripes more and now they look smudged. You need to fix that and, you need to change the tabby stirpes on his left becuase now they look like bumblekit's.Minnowclaw 01:22, September 24, 2009 (UTC)

Better?  Sparrowsong  Madly Blooming Princess 16:18, September 24, 2009 (UTC)

Yes, much.Minnowclaw 20:30, September 24, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --Bramble-san 21:04, September 25, 2009 (UTC)

None. Approved. --Bramble-san 21:30, September 26, 2009 (UTC)

Leafpool(MCA)- Approved

Leafpool.mca I think she's too dark, compared to Dawn's MC version, but I'm not sure. I can lighten her if needed.-- Darkhallows  My den 01:55, September 24, 2009 (UTC)

Wooooooooooooooooooooow! That's what I said when I say this and my 14 year old brother siad, "Sup dawg? Why ya howlin'?" Lol, for the image, well, um, I'm at a loss on where to begin on how great this is! I don't think it's too dark.Minnowclaw 02:05, September 24, 2009 (UTC)

I think it's perfect. Very very nice, Shady. --Bramble-san 02:52, September 24, 2009 (UTC)

Darky, this is wayyyy better than my Leafpool. If you wanted to and Bramble agreed, you could edit or redo the leafpool med cat. Or I could. Tomorrow. Note: I am lots better already so I will edit again 2day or tomorrw. g2g now, doctors appointment! (yes bramble, that was a really bad, very funny pun! ) -- Dawnfeather  talk! 01:21, September 25, 2009 (UTC)


I'd be happy too, but she's your image xD. Anyway, I hope you feel better soon. -- Darkhallows  My den 06:46, September 25, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 20:23, September 25, 2009 (UTC)

None. Approved. --Bramble-san 21:30, September 26, 2009 (UTC)

Mudfur - Approved

Mudfur.mc *Shrugs* Not much to say about this one. Comments/criticism?-- Echomist Hear the Echo... 17:35, September 24, 2009 (UTC)

W.O.W. No critisism possible from me. Nice work. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 19:26, September 24, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --Bramble-san 21:04, September 25, 2009 (UTC)

None. Approved. --Bramble-san 21:30, September 26, 2009 (UTC)

Cedarheart (E) - Approved

Cedarheart.elder My first elder. Comments?-- Echomist Hear the Echo... 14:45, September 25, 2009 (UTC)

This is very good! I can't see anything wrong with it.Minnowclaw 18:39, September 25, 2009 (UTC)

Wow, really? *touched* Thanks!-- Echomist Hear the Echo... 20:40, September 25, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --Bramble-san 21:04, September 25, 2009 (UTC)

None. Approved. --Bramble-san 21:30, September 26, 2009 (UTC)

Stripes- Approved

Stripes.rogue Heres my first rogue! It took forever to do the stripes! Comments? Hawkey Ready for action 17:17, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

Hawkfire, this is beautiful! The only things I can see are: 1. the ear pink is too light and needs to be blurred 2. the shading needs to be darker and look more like shading; right now it just looks like blobs of darker color.  Sparrowsong  Madly Blooming Princess 17:34, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

(M)- I love the pattern of your stripes! Just do what Sparrowsong suggested and it should be good. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 18:14, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

Is this better? Darkened shading and ear pink Hawkey Ready for action 00:31, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

The shading should be blurred into the pelt a little more.-- Darkhallows  My den 04:48, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

Ugh, I tried but whenever I try to blur the shading, it messes up the stripes. I may just have to withdraw this if I don't figure out something Hawkey Ready for action 20:22, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

The shading on the back is too much, try bluring it! -- Pandasong Pandasong's Talk Page 17:00, September 13, 2009 (UTC) 22:59, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

My only suggestion would be to lighten the shading so it doesn't look so dark compared to the pelt. But then the shading wouldn't be there so... --Rainwhisker09 12:08, September 14, 2009 (UTC)

I know I don't have the power but work on this, it's going to be declined.*Swallowtip * EMBRACE THE TIP! 23:43, September 17, 2009 (UTC)

It still has two days Swallowtip. Also, please try and avoid caps- it's ike your shouting. Use italics for emphasis. or bold. Hawkey: Just lighten the back shading a little more. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 19:26, September 18, 2009 (UTC)

Ooops, my bad. Sorry hawky, this is very good and I didn't mean to shout. My laptops bugging up, I though I was outting it out of caps.*Swallowtip * EMBRACE THE TIP! 15:56, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

Swallowtip: That's why they make the preview button before you click save page. Hawkfire: To lighten the shading, but not mess up the stripes, try using the dodge tool. Otherwise, it looks very good. Icethroat21Enter at risk 16:38, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, I have tried the dodge tool. And secondly, sorry I have been gone, very busy in the past week. You can't really expect me to be on every minute. And Swallowtip, I forgive you but don't yell at me anymore, especially in caps! HAWKFIRE98 17:20, September 20, 2009 (UTC)

I think you accidentally lightened the stripes while you were using the dodge tool on the shading. --Rainwhisker09 12:36, September 21, 2009 (UTC)

The shading now needs to be redone. Don’t do it as dark as it was, and make sure the transition line is blended thoroughly. --Bramble-san 02:41, September 24, 2009 (UTC)

Okay I redid the shading and added highlights. HAWKFIRE98 23:48, September 26, 2009 (UTC)

I added transparency to the image, and I think he's ready. Good job, Hawkey. Comments before approval? --Bramble-san 20:12, September 27, 2009 (UTC)

None. Approved. --Bramble-san 22:35, September 28, 2009 (UTC)

Barkface (MC) - Approved

Barkface.mc Well, not much to say for this one...did I make the tail short enough? Icethroat21Enter at risk 22:30, September 26, 2009 (UTC)

Wow, this is very good, Icethroat. His tail is short enough, yes. just blend the shading on his midriff and I'd call him good. --Bramble-san 22:37, September 26, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I think I fixed it...I've blended it to the best of my ability. Icethroat21Enter at risk 23:09, September 26, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - I like his tail! There's a small area of shading next to the herbs that needs blended though, and that patch of light fur where there's no shading on it that should be taken out, I think; it's not really neassary and it would make the image look better over all. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 01:00, September 27, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I got rid of the patch of light, and I agree that it looks better. And that shading next to the herbs is blended to the best of my ability without blending the lineart. Icethroat21Enter at risk 01:55, September 27, 2009 (UTC)

This looks good Icethroat the only thing I have to say is the herbs seem like an unnatural green to me. I say maybe make the side of the herb that is like "laying" on his fur darker so it has shading. That way the other part looks like he's not looming over it.-- Shim-ShimNewGladiator! 17:01, September 27, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Look better now? Icethroat21Enter at risk 19:29, September 27, 2009 (UTC)

This is ready. Comments before approval? --Bramble-san 20:14, September 27, 2009 (UTC)

None. Approved. --Bramble-san 22:35, September 28, 2009 (UTC)

Morningcloud - Approved

Morningcloud.warriorI don't really like her, but I have a new goal: I'm going to do all of the Code of the Clans cats that don't have a Charart. And Morningcloud didn't. So here she is. Comments/criticism?-- Echomist Hear the Echo... 22:36, September 26, 2009 (UTC)

Morningcloud looks great, Echomist! All I can say is that there are a couple of places on the lineart of the tail, and a couple on the hind paw, that are the color of the fur, and need to be colored back in black. I can circle them if you want. Should I? Icethroat21Enter at risk 23:27, September 26, 2009 (UTC)

Oh my days! We do not need a diagram for every improvement suggested. Echo, just take a look at the whole lineart and check it is completely black. I don't see anything else - nice work =) Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 09:36, September 27, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry, Sandy. Echomist, the lineart shouldn't be too hard to find... Icethroat21Enter at risk 13:23, September 27, 2009 (UTC)

lol, that's okay Icethroat =) I wasn't just sending that message to you personally. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 13:58, September 27, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Fixed the lineart. Comments?-- Echomist Hear the Echo... 15:04, September 27, 2009 (UTC)

Very nice, Echo. You're really good at this. In some time I think you'll be able to become a mentor for some of our new members. :) Comments before approval? --Bramble-san 17:53, September 27, 2009 (UTC)

Wow, thanks, Bramble! ^_^ -- Echomist Hear the Echo... 18:06, September 27, 2009 (UTC)

You’re welcome. :) Approved. --Bramble-san 22:35, September 28, 2009 (UTC)

Stormfur (A) - Approved

Stormfur.apprentice Yay! My first charart! How does it look?--Hawktalon 21:50, September 26, 2009 (UTC)

Very pretty. The shading is too dark, lumpy, and needs to be blended into the pelt more. HAWKFIRE98 21:51, September 26, 2009 (UTC)

Great! Just blend the shading some more.  Sparrowsong  Madly Blooming Princess 21:52, September 26, 2009 (UTC)

Mega oops! Sorry! We saved the page at the same time! The shading thing is for Whitewing's Queen version! Stormpaw looks brilliant. Oops! *dies of embarrassment* Look, just pretend this never happened lol. HAWKFIRE98 21:54, September 26, 2009 (UTC)

Lol, Hawkfire! Hawktalon, this looks pretty good for your first charart! All I can say is that the shading needs blended into the pelt some more. In other words, what Sparrowsong said. :) Stormpaw looks great! Icethroat21Enter at risk 22:13, September 26, 2009 (UTC)

He's so cute. I just think that the shading needs to be blended into the pelt a little more. --Spottedwing 22:16, September 26, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Aw, crud! I already lightened the shading >_< But don't blame yourself Hawkfire. It was a simple mistake. So, should I darken the shading? And I blurred the shading as much as I could, but I use Pixlr, which has notoriously weak blending power. Comments?--Hawktalon 22:25, September 26, 2009 (UTC)

On the haunch there is a light spot (which I'm pretty sure is the highlight) that should be blended in. This is pretty good for your first charart! --Rainwhisker09 00:35, September 27, 2009 (UTC)

He actually looks better with the lightened shading! :) I did good! HAWKFIRE98 13:34, September 27, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blended the highlight. And lol, you're right Hawkfire, it does look better! Comments?--Hawktalon 14:07, September 27, 2009 (UTC)

This is really good for your first image Hawktalon. Just darken the pink of his ear just a tad, running over it once with the burn tool should do it.-- Shim-ShimNewGladiator! 17:03, September 27, 2009 (UTC)

ReuploadedThanks, Shimmer, and everyone else, for your constructive and nice comments! They mean a lot to me:) Darkened the ear pink. Constructments?--Hawktalon 17:40, September 27, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - You're using the same shading style as me and Quietstep use, right? In that case, thiken the shading under the chin; that will make it look natural. Also, try taking out that highlight on his haunch; it's not nessary and it makes it look as if his haunch is made out of plastic. Do that and he should be good. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 18:33, September 27, 2009 (UTC)

ReuploadedThickened the shading under the chin and removed the highlight on the haunch. Mosswhisker, I used Bluestar's apprentice version as a reference for the shading. I hope that's alright with Quietstep. Constructments?--Hawktalon 20:55, September 27, 2009 (UTC)

None from me. He's very good, Hawktalon. Comments before approval? --Bramble-san 22:16, September 27, 2009 (UTC)

None. Approved. --Bramble-san 22:35, September 28, 2009 (UTC)

Flick (R) - Approved

Flick.rogue

Okay, my first charart, please don't decline this too quickly because I will not be on on weekdays, well, I might be on a little while, so I will only be able to edit the image sometimes. Not much to say about the image! -- Pandasong Pandasong's Talk Page 17:00, September 13, 2009 (UTC) 22:45, September 13, 2009 (UTC

This looks fine, but the lineart is blurred. Also, try blurring the ear pink some more. Icethroat21Enter at risk 00:15, September 14, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, I'll have to do that on Saturday, next Saturday, I can't do it on Weekdays. -- Pandasong Pandasong's Talk Page 17:00, September 13, 2009 (UTC) 00:55, September 14, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- Pandasong Pandasong's Talk Page 17:00, September 13, 2009 (UTC) 22:49, September 14, 2009 (UTC)

This is amazing for your first image, Peacesong! (Do you want me to keep calling you that or should I call you Pandasong?) Just get rid of the grey pixel on his leg and it should be good. I can circle the grey pixel if you want...  Sparrowsong  Madly Blooming Princess 00:17, September 15, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks! You can call me whatever you want, Peace, Peacesong, Panda, Pandasong, anything works! :) And if you could circle the grey pixel, that'd be great! ^_^ -- Pandasong Pandasong's Talk Page 17:00, September 13, 2009 (UTC) 00:44, September 15, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Okay, I edited a few things, anything else that needs changing? -- Pandasong Pandasong's Talk Page 17:00, September 13, 2009 (UTC) 00:51, September 15, 2009 (UTC)

File:Flick.diagram.pngHe still has the grey pixel. I've circled it for you.  Sparrowsong  Madly Blooming Princess

OKay, thanks! -- Pandasong Pandasong's Talk Page 17:00, September 13, 2009 (UTC) 00:56, September 15, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Anything else? -- Pandasong Pandasong's Talk Page 17:00, September 13, 2009 (UTC) 00:59, September 15, 2009 (UTC)

There are a few bits of blurred line art on his back leg. Other than that, he should be approved soon. -- Dawnfeather  talk! 09:06, September 15, 2009 (UTC)

I will fix that after school today then. -- Pandasong Pandasong's Talk Page 17:00, September 13, 2009 (UTC) 11:50, September 15, 2009 (UTC)

Could you circle the blurred line art for me? Thanks if you could! -- Pandasong I ♥ Pandas 20:05, September 16, 2009 (UTC)

I'll circle it for you. I should get it done soon. Icethroat21Enter at risk 20:24, September 16, 2009 (UTC)

[[File:Flick.Diagram2.png]] Okay, here's what needs fixed. The red circles are for blurred lineart, the blue circle is where the lineart is almost gone and needs more black pixels, and the yellow circle is for where there is a gray pixel that needs to be black. I hope this helps some. Icethroat21Enter at risk 20:38, September 16, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks so much! This will help a lot! -- Pandasong I ♥ Pandas 21:37, September 16, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I fixed some of that, what else needs fixing? -- Pandasong I ♥ Pandas 21:53, September 16, 2009 (UTC)

he's great! but I see a small line on his tail-- ☆Brackenstorm☆ X3 23:58, September 16, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks! Could you circle the line for me? So sorry that I'm asking everyone to circle the problems for me, but I want to fix the exact thing so I won't miss any problems. --PandasongI ♥ Pandas 00:13, September 17, 2009 (UTC)

it's small...I knowFile:Flick.Bracken.png-- ☆Brackenstorm☆ X3 02:12, September 17, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks, its okay if its small, I want to fix any problems there are! :P --PandasongCall Me Panda! 20:16, September 17, 2009 (UTC)

Blur your highlights and shading a lot, taking care not to hit the lineart. Then I’d call him good to go. --Bramble My Realm 21:11, September 17, 2009 (UTC)

I'll do that tonight then! --PandasongCall Me Panda! 22:07, September 17, 2009 (UTC)

Very good! I would go with Bramble, the highlights and shading need more blending. And the belly shading: there are some spots that haven't had shading go over it. I'm lucky to be your mentor :). Mossflight 22:33, September 17, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks Mossflight! I will do that after I help my little sister with her homework! (Means I will do it tonight!) --PandasongCall Me Panda! 22:36, September 17, 2009 (UTC)

I'm so sorry I didn't reupload it yet! I'm just really busy these days, really sorry, I just had Chinese School today, I will try hard to reupload it on Sunday! Really sorry! --PandasongProud Owner of a Imaginary Panda! 02:30, September 20, 2009 (UTC)

Really sorry, I just couldn't get on! Please don't decline it even if I'm not on for a week, I'm just super busy! --PandasongProud Owner of a Imaginary Panda! 00:47, September 22, 2009 (UTC)

It's okay Pandasong. He's good and won't be declined as long as your trying to get on.Minnowclaw 01:36, September 24, 2009 (UTC)

I echo what Minnowclaw said. Also, just a reminder, but when you reupload an image, save it over the old file, and not Flick7, Flick8, etc. Just pick one name: Flick.rogue, for example, and use that continuously. It saves space. --Bramble-san 02:41, September 24, 2009 (UTC)

With Peacesong's permission, I made the necessary changes ( which were few). Comments before approval? --Bramble-san 20:04, September 27, 2009 (UTC)

I'm not sure if this is the way it's supposed to be, but there's a thin strip of light on his tail. --Rainwhisker09 01:44, September 28, 2009 (UTC)

That's a highlight. It's supposed to be there. --Bramble-san 00:08, September 29, 2009 (UTC)

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