Purdy (Star) - Approved[]
Why kill off Purdy of all characters?? Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣•19:13 Thu Apr 27
I have no doubt it was to please the fans because he was "older than the hills". Smooth out the muzzle shading a little? ✧Winter✧ Onward and upward 19:55, 4/27/2017
This is amazing, define the shading a bit? (I'm always commenting about shading lol) Rainbowmistake (talk) 20:55, April 27, 2017 (UTC)chat
Reuploaded They killed off some of my faves man -.- SS was heart wrenching. I also added more scruff to him so he would be a little more rugged. Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣•22:26 Thu Apr 27
at least he wasn't murdered ;^( can you define the tail shading a little? david 🌈 19:43, April 28, 2017 (UTC)
There is a bit of green around his eyes or maybe that's just my screen KatsCandy (talk) 05:03, April 29, 2017 (UTC)
The green is rheum, because he has rheumy eyes. Dannydismal 05:24, April 29, 2017 (UTC)
On the other images the tear in --> ear isn't on the tip it's only on --> side of the ear and idk if the rheum is covering it (my apologies if it is) but on the kittypet image the scar is much more noticeable, besides those minor things this looks really well-done! ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (03:09, 4/30/2017 )
Might just be my screen, but could you make the scar on his nose a little more visible please? I still can't get over my poor baby's death. ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 19:21, April 30, 2017
Skiddley, please don't repeat comments. Dannydismal 19:32, April 30, 2017 (UTC)
I fixed all the stuff to the best of my ability considering the rheum has to me there, just need to wait for the wifi to get working again. Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣•19:43 Sun Apr 30
Reuploaded I hate wifi sometimes. Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣•20:37 Sun Apr 30
CBA? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 00:02, 5/02/2017
Approved ✧Winter✧ Onward and upward 00:55, 5/03/2017
Flamenose (W) - Approved[]
i'm terrible at matching stripes. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 02:58, April 29, 2017 (UTC)
Define the shading depth a lil? Dannydismal 04:25, April 29, 2017 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Not sure if that did anything. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 14:57, April 29, 2017 (UTC)
Define the shading on the legs Dannydismal 23:43, April 29, 2017 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 02:29, April 30, 2017 (UTC)
The other image looks a little brighter ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (04:44, 5/01/2017 )
I believe they're the same color, it's just the shading and highlights. Dannydismal 04:53, May 1, 2017 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. they should be the same color as I colorpicked from his StarClan. I brightened the red a tad and added a little more texture. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 20:34, May 1, 2017 (UTC)
I like this a lot, so CBA? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 00:00, 5/02/2017
Approved ✧Winter✧ Onward and upward 00:56, 5/03/2017
Patch Pelt (Ki) - Approved[]
Newtspeck didn't have stripes before she was cited tabby, so I'm kinda following that ruling. Not entirely sure if I like this, I might redo it tomorrow. Spoopy baby. —Jayce(02:14, 4/29/2017)
can you define the shading? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 08:04,4/29/2017
Re-uploaded. I like this one better. —Jayce(03:31, 5/01/2017)
Define the shading and shading depth Dannydismal 00:33, May 2, 2017 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. I cannot define it any more than this without a.) changing my light source (which I am not required to do) and b.) distorting the pattern that I have. —Jayce(01:50, 5/02/2017)
Shouldn't the tail shading be on the other side? Dannydismal 01:58, May 2, 2017 (UTC)
Oh, for god's sake. Literally all of my kits use this exact same source, including the one I just got approved right before this. As I have said before, there is more than one source for an image, and this one has not only been used by me, but Category:Kit Character Images over the span of the years we've had the kit blanks. I am not changing it. —Jayce(02:01, 5/02/2017)
CBA? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 12:26, 5/02/2017
Approved —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 12:36, 5/03/2017
Shinecloud (W) - Approved[]
~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 08:09, May 1, 2017 (UTC)
I love this. Can you define shading a tad — Minkclaw 15:56, May 1, 2017 (UTC)
Re-uploaded ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 20:09, May 1, 2017 (UTC)
Define the shading a bit more, especially on the legs. Dannydismal 21:31, May 1, 2017 (UTC)
Re-uploaded I don't want to make the shading much darker. This image is already quite a bit darker than her other images, and all the colors are all the same ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 02:46, May 2, 2017 (UTC)
CBA? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 19:54, 5/03/2017
Approved —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 20:25, 5/04/2017
Beech Tail (Ki) - Approved[]
I did it, yes. ShineC♉♏et 16:31, April 24, 2017 (UTC)
Cute! Define the shading on the right leg. Maybe define the earpink a little? —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 15:42, April 24, 2017 (UTC)
Reuploaded ShineC♉♏et 16:39, April 24, 2017 (UTC)
Could you define the shading on the --> leg? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 20:17, 4/24/2017
Reuploaded ShineC♉♏et 08:39, April 25, 2017 (UTC)
Recede the shading a little on the chest and head? ✧Winter✧ Onward and upward 22:16, 4/25/2017
Reuploaded ShineC♉♏et 14:12, April 26, 2017 (UTC)
Smooth the shading on the --> front leg? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 23:11, 4/26/2017
Smooth out the shading on the chest and head a little, too? —Ivy ☆ 01:38, April 27, 2017 (UTC)
Reuploaded Black Hole / Green Sun – 07:25, April 27, 2017 (UTC)
Define the earpink ErmineGlow (talk) 12:51, April 27, 2017 (UTC)
Reuploaded Black Hole / Green Sun – 13:11, April 27, 2017 (UTC) Maybe?
Define the tail shading a little more ✧Winter✧ Onward and upward 13:38, 4/27/2017
Reuploaded Black Hole / Green Sun – 15:02, April 27, 2017 (UTC)
Perhaps define the stripes that are under the shading Dannydismal 23:38, April 29, 2017 (UTC)
Can you also smooth the shading out just a little more on ---> leg and also on the line of shading above <--- leg? I really like this, by the way. —Ivy ☆ 13:49, April 30, 2017 (UTC)
Reuploaded Black Hole / Green Sun – 14:48, May 1, 2017 (UTC)
CBA? ✧Winter✧ Onward and upward 00:30, 5/04/2017
Approved ✧Winter✧ Onward and upward 00:46, 5/05/2017
Jessamy (KP) - Approved[]
I colorpicked from the currently being approved rogue image so that if these both get accepted, they won't need to be tweaked for matching color. Dannydismal 01:29, April 29, 2017 (UTC)
Smooth out the shading? ShypawDo the trickor treat 01:45, April 29, 2017 (UTC)
Define eye depth, and @Shypaw, they could be going for a sharp shading look. ♥ Star red and black ♥<01:47, 4/29/2017>
Smoothing out the shading wouldn't hurt though. —Jayce(01:50, 4/29/2017)
reups I wasn't really going for sharp shading, but I liked how it turned out :^P Smoothed it a tad. Dannydismal 01:54, April 29, 2017 (UTC)
Smooth the shading a tad more on her foreleg and her haunch? —Ivy ☆ 13:53, April 30, 2017 (UTC)
reups Dannydismal 15:06, April 30, 2017 (UTC)
My laptop decided to explode and I lost the layers for this. Wish me luck :^)) Dannydismal 21:46, April 30, 2017 (UTC)
Define the shading on the tail. ErmineGlow (talk) 02:25, May 1, 2017 (UTC)
reups Dannydismal 03:04, May 1, 2017 (UTC)
reups there was a patch of shading that bothered me so I fixed it. Dannydismal 20:57, May 3, 2017 (UTC)
CBA? ✧Winter✧ Onward and upward 00:31, 5/04/2017
Approved ✧Winter✧ Onward and upward 00:46, 5/05/2017
Batear (DF) — Approved[]
Okay, so super sorry for being gone so long. We got rid of our computer and our laptop isn't good for charart. This is my first attempt at art on my iPad, and I really hope it's not a big hassle or needs a ton of work. Also, I accidentally made File:Batear.df.PNG with with the capitalized PNG, so if someone could delete that... :) Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ✣ICouldn'tSayIt To Myself ✣ 05:24, April 30, 2017 (UTC)
How do you do that? Anyways, define earpink? --
Neon Skylite CH-CH-CH-CHERRY BOMB! 09:28, 4/30/2017
Define the shading Dannydismal 14:55, April 30, 2017 (UTC)
I used an app, the same one as Jayie does :) Reuploaded Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ✣ICouldn'tSayIt To Myself ✣ 18:01, April 30, 2017 (UTC)
Crop the image a bit? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 00:20, May 1, 2017 (UTC)
Reuploaded Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ✣ICouldn'tSayIt To Myself ✣ 00:47, May 1, 2017 (UTC)
Re-Reuploaded I felt like smudging the white. :) Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ✣ICouldn'tSayIt To Myself ✣ 00:58, May 1, 2017 (UTC)
Which app? Define the shading Rainbowmistake (talk) 02:41, May 1, 2017 (UTC)chat
ArtStudio. Reuploaded Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ✣ICouldn'tSayIt To Myself ✣ 02:49, May 1, 2017 (UTC)
The white is really bright, mind toning it down a smol bit? --
Neon Skylite CH-CH-CH-CHERRY BOMB! 10:18, 5/01/2017
White is white, Neon. If she changes it, it'll be black-and-gray, not black-and-white. —Jayce(10:20, 5/01/2017)
- Psst, Snowed, I am a he, not a she. :) Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ✣ICouldn'tSayIt To Myself ✣ 13:57, May 1, 2017 (UTC)
Anyways, yeah idk about toning it down...I used pure white and smudged it out. Once I saw how cool it looked when the white contrasted with the black like that, I wanted to keep it that way. If someone else agrees, though, I guess I can change it... Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ✣ICouldn'tSayIt To Myself ✣ 23:57, May 1, 2017 (UTC)
Nah, it looks cool. Though it does look sharp around the belly area. ♥ Star red and black ♥<00:23, 5/02/2017>
Reuploaded. Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ✣ICouldn'tSayIt To Myself ✣ 00:33, May 2, 2017 (UTC)
This is just a suggestion, but you could add more scars to his face. ErmineGlow (talk) 03:39, May 2, 2017 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ✣ICouldn'tSayIt To Myself ✣ 03:55, May 2, 2017 (UTC)
CBA? ✧Winter✧ Onward and upward 00:34, 5/04/2017
Approved ✧Winter✧ Onward and upward 00:46, 5/05/2017
Thrushwing (Star) - Approved[]
Sziri the goat sails away ツ 16:24, May 1, 2017 (UTC)
Define the head shading a bit, I love your style <3 Rainbowmistake (talk) 17:20, May 1, 2017 (UTC)Chat
the dark brown right by the nose should extend up a bit more, it goes past the eye on the warrior. (sorry if I'm not making sense I'm very tired) david 🌈 01:33, May 2, 2017 (UTC)
Re-ups Thanks! Sziri the goat sails away ツ
Wowow, CBA? ✧Winter✧ Onward and upward 00:35, 5/04/2017
Approved ✧Winter✧ Onward and upward 00:46, 5/05/2017
Thrushtalon (E) ~ Approved[]
ik the facial marking placement isn't exact, but it's from the complete opposite side of the cat, so I figure its okay —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 11:21, 5/02/2017
(I actually had this and his star image finished and I was anxious somebody would post it before me lmao this is why I shouldn't make images while mine are being approved. Anyways, would you mind if I did the star image?) As for the image, define the shading a tad? Dannydismal 11:36, May 2, 2017 (UTC)
Reuploaded I wouldn't mind you doing the star - wasn't planning on doing it anyway, I think^^ —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 19:27, 5/02/2017
Might I suggest adding a little shading to the back leg to give the sense the leg is folded? sorry if that makes little to no sense ^^; — max it is the real thing, () 08:15 Wed May 3 2017
Reuploaded I added a tad, but I usually opt not to place any there w/ this source —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 19:45, 5/03/2017
CBA? ✧Winter✧ Onward and upward 00:37, 5/04/2017
Approved ✧Winter✧ Onward and upward 00:46, 5/05/2017
Max (Ro) (Ro) - Approved[]
not sure if I had to add the collar — max it is the real thing, () 20:44 Tue May 2 2017
For the patches on the back, i had it actually kind of heart shaped, and the dots above that were meant to be teardrops, symbolizing angel wings cus he died ;; and the "mask" on his face does actually go over his eyes, as its supposed to be a mask :p ✧Winter✧ Onward and upward 20:50, 5/02/2017
Reuploaded does that work a little better? — max it is the real thing, () 20:56 Tue May 2 2017
Yes but you forgot the teardrops lol :p ✧Winter✧ Onward and upward 20:58, 5/02/2017
Reuploaded they were there, my shading was just a little dark lmao — max it is the real thing, () 21:01 Tue May 2 2017
CBA? ✧Winter✧ Onward and upward 00:37, 5/04/2017
Approved ✧Winter✧ Onward and upward 00:46, 5/05/2017
Leafstorm (Star) ~ Approved[]
- Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 09:35,4/30/2017
I think the stripes might need to be softened a little around the edges and maybe smooth the shading too. Also, there might be a little bit waste under the paws. — max it is the real thing, () 10:35 Sun Apr 30 2017
Re-uploaded - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 10:59,4/30/2017
There's some waste near the ---> ear and in the circle the tail creates. Looking good! ^^ Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 15:02, April 30, 2017 (UTC)
They look cross-eyed Dannydismal 18:17, April 30, 2017 (UTC)
Re-uploaded Thanks Vec! @Danny In all honesty, I used the same pupils for every one of my StarClan cat images. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 02:48,5/1/2017
Is the entire back in shadow? It looks darker than the elbow and <- side of the tail, also the stripes look more dense on the deputy ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (04:34, 5/01/2017 )
Adding onto my previous comment, maybe make the dorsal stripe thicker to help make stripes look more dense ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (04:40, 5/01/2017 )
Re-uploaded ????? the back is not in shadow?? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 11:11,5/1/2017
I didn't REALLY think the back was in shadow I just don't know why the elbow is lighter than the rest of the image.. is it a highlight? ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (20:34, 5/01/2017 )
On the deputy, it looks the legs are paler than the rest of the pelt, so I think it's just that way to match. —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 20:37, 5/01/2017
So do i change anything...? they're highlights, btw - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 12:49,5/2/2017
I think you don't need to change it. Define the tail and face shading just a tad? Dannydismal 00:17, May 3, 2017 (UTC)
Sorry but this has been bothering me. The dorsal stripe just switches colours halfway from the head, and it looks like two stripes of different colours joined into one. :P Also, the brighter part of the stripe, is it on a different kosher? It looks sharper than the other images and unconnected. Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ✣ICouldn'tSayIt To Myself ✣ 02:54, May 3, 2017 (UTC)
There are highlights Winter, and highlights can change colors to a different shade.—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 03:00, 5/03/2017
Yes, but the stripe looks almost plastered on and isn't smoothed out between the other stripes, almost if it's above the other stripe layers, if you understand. :) Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ✣ICouldn'tSayIt To Myself ✣ 04:40, May 3, 2017 (UTC)
Re-uploaded :T - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 08:18,5/3/2017
I don't think you did reupload (also why do you have two dates on the reservation table??) ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (13:41, 5/03/2017 )
... i did reupload, i see the changes. also one is for the tweak - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 13:56,5/3/2017
Re-uploaded tried again - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 14:00,5/3/2017
I think the dorsal stripe still needs to be smoothed and you don't need dates for tweaks ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (14:56, 5/03/2017 )
Re-uploaded - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 01:32,5/4/2017
Might be just me, but the part where the lines stop seem to be a bit... sharp? Try smoothing out by adding a layer with lower opacity or smth ;P this is like so awesome i cant even ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 (07:05,5/5/2017)
Re-uploaded - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 14:09,5/5/2017
CBA? ✧Winter✧ Onward and upward 21:14, 5/05/2017
Approved —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 21:41, 5/06/2017
Jumper (L) - Approved[]
i've had enough of looking at this so here. I copied off the rogue and loner because they're both before the kit, which is why the black on the face is different. (I'll get that strip of whatever on the leg later.) david 🌈 02:39, May 3, 2017 (UTC)
Pretty much the whole chest and belly should be black, and black looks darker than other images (does that mean the other images need to be tweaked? o.o) ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (06:48, 5/03/2017 )
reuploaded i'm pretty sure the dark on the chest of the rogue is shading. and it looks darker than the rogue because I didn't colourpick off that, it looks more dark grey lul. david 🌈 14:48, May 3, 2017 (UTC)
withdrawing david 🌈 20:43, May 3, 2017 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Taking over, using collar lineart from David's version, and I think I gotta play with the patches a bit more. Also, the rogue was first, and I personally don't think that it looks like shading, (especially when looking at the original version before it was tweaked) so I went with that instead of what David had. The kit doesn't match at all, so I didn't even bother using that. —Jayce(02:40, 5/04/2017)
Woah, cool, you're allowed to do that?? :0 :) Anyways, smoothen out the shading on the lower half of the ---> front leg. It looks like it was a gradient and smooth and then just stopped. This looks nice. Should we nominate the kit image for matching the black patches a bit better, maybe? Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ✣ICouldn'tSayIt To Myself ✣ 03:08, May 4, 2017 (UTC)
I've got a feeling it's probably the colors and the contrast and blend and what not, but the earpink seems to look like its leaking. Unless you're made black and white cats like this before, or that's intentional, then whoops—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 03:52, 5/04/2017
Re-uploaded. Shrank the amount of black on the underside of the tail too. The ear pink isn't leaking. It's not mandatory to fill the entire ear area with ear pink, so that's what I did. No blank has a requirement to fill that entire section; it's just a matter of preference. Also, the collar color is slightly lighter due to me thinking he's probably had that same collar for ages so chances are it's probably faded in coloring by now lmao. —Jayce(03:58, 5/04/2017)
I feel like the collar should be the same color though, because he was leader when he was not that old as far as I know, and wouldn't Scourge's collar have to be tweaked to be a more faded color then? I'm very tired so I probably don't make sense—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 04:03, 5/04/2017
Well, actually, not quite. I'd say that each blank depicts a different period in time. The rogue image could hypothetically be from early BloodClan times (or when the cite first says he joined BC), and this leader cite is from the Ravenpaw's Path graphic novels. That's quite a time difference. Also, no, don't go tweaking anything; this is just a preference of mine that I thought was kinda interesting and shows that not everything is from the same time period. It's kinda like how if we don't have a cited collar color, it technically doesn't have to match. —Jayce(04:05, 5/04/2017)
Still feel like it should be the same, but hey, whatever. Guess it is a bit of a time gap, but I don't feel like the collar would have worn out by then, as the Ravenpaw comics took place when Leafpool and Squirrelflight were still kits, and Jumper's collar wouldn't be that worn out yet, but that's probably just me. I used to draw BloodClan cats and put nicks and tears in their collar to signify its worn out state—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 04:12, 5/04/2017
But as per the rules, I technically am not required to match the collar color at all unless there's a citation for said color. Which there isn't, and it's kinda feeling like you're forcing me to change it. =/ That's actually not that bad of an idea hmmmmm. —Jayce(04:14, 5/04/2017)
I'm not forcing anything, just got that feeling like it should be the same, but I guess the color is the artist's choice after all^Gave 'em a more fiercer look imo. I loved that style of worn-out collars when I used to draw Brick and Bone or Scourge—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 04:16, 5/04/2017
Re-uploaded. And because we have no cite, now his collar is purple. chances are I might change it (don't hold me to it) in the future, but for today, I'm in a purple mood. and I also added some facial shading because wow it looked flat. —Jayce(04:30, 5/04/2017)
tbh I couldn't tell what was black n what wasn't, so I gave up on it. can u define the face shading a bit david 🌈 19:35, May 4, 2017 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. —Jayce(02:14, 5/05/2017)
CBA? ✧Winter✧ Onward and upward 21:15, 5/05/2017
Approved —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 21:41, 5/06/2017
Stick (L) ~ Approved[]
Not totally happy with this but it's nice to take a break from studying and do chararts ^^ Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 19:12, May 3, 2017 (UTC)
He should have a torn left ear or right, idk, and I feel like there is a bit more ragged fur..I don't know, it just seems different then the other images. Maybe the stance won't show as much ragged fur—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 19:46, 5/03/2017
Broken, the ear is already torn ✧Winter✧ Onward and upward 20:01, 5/03/2017
Reups No, Broken was right. I was in the middle of replying when there was an edit conflict. I got distracted and didn't comment here right away. My fault, not Broken's. Anyway, thanks for the comment, Broken. I knew I was missing something. And, I agree. The stance doesn't completely allow me to show a lot of ragged fur, though I did add a tiny bit more. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 20:04, May 3, 2017 (UTC)
Is there any light in the eyes? It looks like it's covered in shadow, and thank you Vec^^ And your welcome —Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 21:32, 5/03/2017
Reups Another thing I was forgetting haha Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 00:43, May 4, 2017 (UTC)
CBA? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 14:27, 5/05/2017
Approved —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 21:41, 5/06/2017
Echomist (Star) - Approved[]
I'm so shocked this hasn't been approved already.. Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣•13:51 Thu May 4
can you define ear pink a tad? This is absolutely stunning, Sun — Minkclaw 13:56, May 4, 2017 (UTC)
Reuploaded This is as much as I can do, as it still needs to match the other images. Also messed with the shading a little bit. Thanks Mink ^^ Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣•14:01 Thu May 4
Maybe define the shading depth just a small bit? Your Chararts are awesome, Sun!—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 16:20, 5/04/2017
Could you smooth out the little line of shading by -> ear a little bit? ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (01:30, 5/05/2017 )
Reuploaded That's as smooth as I'm making it. Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣•17:35 Fri May 5
CBA? ✧Winter✧ Onward and upward 21:17, 5/05/2017
Approved —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 21:41, 5/06/2017
Sparrowtail (Ro) -Approved[]
—Ivy ☆ 23:44, May 3, 2017 (UTC)
The eyes seem a lot more greyish-white on this than the other images, which have blue eyes. :) Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ✣ICouldn'tSayIt To Myself ✣ 23:55, May 3, 2017 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. The eyes are blue, or at least they're supposed to be? I colorpicked again from the kit and replaced the color, so hopefully that solved the issue. —Ivy ☆ 00:04, May 4, 2017 (UTC)
CBA? Looks great c: —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 14:20, 5/05/2017
I'm still seeing gray eyes. Could you tell me what your hex codes are? Not breaking CBA since this isn't that big of an issue and might be how Wikia displays their images; not a user-generated problem. —Jayce(12:19, 5/06/2017)
My hex codes for the eyes are #5c6969, #c3d8d8, and #e5f3f3, which are light blue -- I know they're not super bright, but the eyes aren't super bright blue on the kit or warrior, either. I colorpicked the values from the kit/warrior multiple times, but that doesn't mean I got them right. If you think they need to be brightened at all, I'd certainly do so. —Ivy ☆ 13:11, May 6, 2017 (UTC)
Approved ✧Winter✧ Onward and upward 02:29, 5/07/2017
Rippleclaw (E) ~ Approved[]
This needs some work ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (20:52, 4/30/2017 )
I think there's texture on the other images? ErmineGlow (talk) 20:55, April 30, 2017 (UTC)
Smudge the stripes a bit; they seem rather solid compared to the others, especially the StarClan image. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 20:56, April 30, 2017 (UTC)
I know it's probably just me, but this seems almost white—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 21:43, 4/30/2017
Reuploaded Stripes look too soft I think.. And ya it does seem white but it's the same color as the other images ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (22:15, 4/30/2017 )
Oh that's weird I didn't see ErmineGlow's comment. Yeah I couldn't tell if there was texture or not ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (22:21, 4/30/2017 )
There's texture, I'm pretty sure of it. Dannydismal 22:35, April 30, 2017 (UTC)
Reuploaded Ooh I'm excited that the texture actually somewhat resembles texture bc I had no idea what I was doing ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (02:17, 5/01/2017 )
Hello yes OA of the warrior image here. There's a lot of texture on that. I may or may not have been experimenting when I tried that image. The stripes are also drawn on with a size one brush and smudged; these stripes are a bit too smooth. Also, the base is meant to be this pale, Broken, since he's silver-and-black, not gray-and-black. Also brighten up the ear pink a bit. —Jayce(02:33, 5/01/2017)
Reuploaded Ayy I feel like this is comin along nicely :D, I forgot to check which image came first so I was mostly tryin to copy the starclan image, hence the smoother stripes, lack of texture, and wrong color earpink. Tomorrow I'll define texture a lil more and adjust the facial stripes ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (04:23, 5/01/2017 )
Smooth out the stripes more. They look too sharp, compared to other images. -- Neon Skylite CH-CH-CH-CHERRY BOMB! 10:20, 5/01/2017
If she does smooth them, they'll need to be smudged, not blurred; remember, Neon, warrior is first in this set. —Jayce(10:29, 5/01/2017)
Idk if it's just me, but the shading seems a little flat. Also, define the light a little on the face? ShypawDo the trickor treat 20:24, May 1, 2017 (UTC)
Reuploaded Wooow texture is fun ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (20:31, 5/01/2017 )
Shading on tail could be defined. ♥ Star red and black ♥<01:36, 5/02/2017>
Could you define the shading overall? — Minkclaw 19:50, May 2, 2017 (UTC)
Reuploaded Adjusted stripes and defined shading ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (07:29, 5/03/2017 )
The stripes look thicker on the star and warrior - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 12:17,5/3/2017
Reuploaded ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (14:31, 5/03/2017 )
CBA? ✧Winter✧ Onward and upward 00:35, 5/04/2017
The stripes under the shading look gray? If it's just me, or there's a valid reason for it, then resume CBA when it originally started. Dannydismal 23:42, May 4, 2017 (UTC)
No you're right :( but idk how to fix that ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (00:11, 5/05/2017 )
You darken them?—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 00:29, 5/05/2017
Perhaps darken the shading that's over the stripes? Dannydismal 00:33, May 5, 2017 (UTC)
I cannot darken black stripes Broken, and I did try darkening the shading but it's tinted so it looks worse, but lightening the shading helps.. but I don't want the shading to be too light ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (01:18, 5/05/2017 )
You can if you believe. Also, maybe try changing the tint?—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 03:13, 5/05/2017
Reuploaded I don't want to change the tint if I don't have to so I tried putting stripes over shading layers since they were darker anyways but if this doesn't work then I'll change the tint :'( tbh I think it looked better when the stripes were under the shading, now it looks flat ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (03:29, 5/05/2017 )
I think you'd be fine if at this point you just darkened/defined the shading a tad. madie the wicked witch of the west 03:36, May 5, 2017 (UTC)
Reuploaded ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (12:41, 5/06/2017 )
Re-CBA? ✧Winter✧ Onward and upward 14:31, 5/06/2017
Approved ✧Winter✧ Onward and upward 15:52, 5/07/2017
Thrushtalon (Star) - Approved[]
I'm really proud of how this turned out! Tried that one fancy thing with the eyes, probably not as good as ya'll who do it with every star charart. Dannydismal 01:07, May 5, 2017 (UTC)
Define the <--- pupil? It's a little hidden. ShypawDo the trickor treat 01:10, May 5, 2017 (UTC)
Dorsal stripe seems a little too smudged out in the middle--mind fixing that? Looking good! ♥ Star red and black ♥<01:16, 5/05/2017>
reups It was actually a highlight, but I removed it since it'd probably just cause more problems in the future, you know? Anyways, is the pupil better now? Dannydismal 01:20, May 5, 2017 (UTC)
Blur the shading/highlight on his back? Cool! I might try something like this too soon—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 01:29, 5/05/2017
reups I wasn't quite sure what you meant since I removed the highlight, but I smoothed the flank shading and the dorsal stripe a bit since it was a bit pixely. Dannydismal 01:40, May 5, 2017 (UTC)
The stripes seem to look softer on his other images. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 04:01,5/5/2017
reups madie the wicked witch of the west 04:10, May 5, 2017 (UTC)
At least on the bottom half of the flank, under the dorsal stripe, the stripes a little tiny bit more dense. To match the elder, since that's the image that shows from that side of the cat, even though the warrior's the first. —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 14:23, 5/05/2017
I think there's a bit of shading leaking between two of his toes on <--- paw, unless that was intentional. —Ivy ☆ 20:24, May 5, 2017 (UTC)
Smooth the shading a little more on the flank and chest/legs area ✧Winter✧ Onward and upward 21:18, 5/05/2017
reups madie the wicked witch of the west 22:40, May 5, 2017 (UTC)
Is it a rule that you have to colorpick eye color? (I may be totally wrong on this but I thought I'd point it out anyways) I know that the warrior and elder images have much less room for eye depth but the colors on this look like a different shade of green to me ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (13:06, 5/06/2017 )
As long as it has the same shade of green in the eye it's ok, but if it throws off the colors too much then it should be changed ✧Winter✧ Onward and upward 13:12, 5/06/2017
CBA? ✧Winter✧ Onward and upward 14:34, 5/06/2017
Approved ✧Winter✧ Onward and upward 15:54, 5/07/2017
Curlypaw (Ki) ~ Approved[]
Yayy final one in the set. Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ✣ICouldn'tSayIt To Myself ✣ 02:02, May 5, 2017 (UTC)
I think that little bit between the legs should be all in shading as the light wouldn't hit there? Maybe, I'm not entirely sure - still getting use to a pair of glasses at the moment ^^; — max it is the real thing, () 08:43 Fri May 5 2017
Ok, I'm not asking for a second opinion or brushing it off, but isn't this the case where Snowed said different sources are alright and don't have to match correctly? Does it need to be completely in shading? I'd just like confirmation, then I'll change it. :) Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ✣ICouldn'tSayIt To Myself ✣ 02:19, May 6, 2017 (UTC)
Actually, you did technically just ask for a second opinion, and I think that no matter how you look at this light source there should be shading there. madie the wicked witch of the west 04:28, May 6, 2017 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ✣ICouldn'tSayIt To Myself ✣ 04:37, May 6, 2017 (UTC)
Just gonna pop in like you asked and say that Danny is correct with this; it's under the cat and unless your source is from below (which would be neat someone needs to try that), there should very much be no light there.
Also asking for a second opinion in this case is more of a good idea than it is bad; many light sources exist, therefore making sure it's right (or damn close to it, same thing) isn't something I'd warn for. It's kinda like asking for help in class if you're not 100% sure your way would get you the desired results. —Jayce(12:16, 5/06/2017)
Pretty^ CBA? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 13:51, 5/06/2017
Approved ✧Winter✧ Onward and upward 15:54, 5/07/2017
Snowbird (R) ~ Approved[]
Doing something simple. Also had some issues posting this from mobile, but that's solved now, sorry —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 02:06, 5/05/2017
Smooth out the shading on the base of the tail and the flank a bit. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 19:14, May 5, 2017 (UTC)
Reuploaded —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 20:13, 5/05/2017
Smooth it out a tad more? And on the head as well ✧Winter✧ Onward and upward 21:19, 5/05/2017
Reuploaded dunno if it made much of a difference —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 21:27, 5/05/2017
CBA? ✧Winter✧ Onward and upward 14:34, 5/06/2017
Approved ✧Winter✧ Onward and upward 15:54, 5/07/2017
Reedshine (MV) (Star) - Approved[]
matched as best as I could to the warrior (since it's the first in the set). — max it is the real thing, () 08:38 Fri May 5 2017
This is beautiful, maybe define the flank shading a bit? (I really love this) Rainbowmistake (talk) 13:27, May 5, 2017 (UTC)Chat
reuploaded — max it is the real thing, () 21:00 Fri May 5 2017
Smooth the shading a little bit on the flank ✧Winter✧ Onward and upward 21:22, 5/05/2017
reuploaded — max it is the real thing, () 21:29 Fri May 5 2017
Maybe add some more speckles to paws and define the stripe that connects to -> eye? ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (13:12, 5/06/2017 )
reuploaded that eye stripe is covered by shading, but, I did what I could. — max it is the real thing, () 22:24 Sat May 6 2017
CBA? ✧Winter✧ Onward and upward 16:02, 5/07/2017
Approved. —Ivy ☆ 20:30, May 8, 2017 (UTC)
Flashnose (A) - Approved[]
colors were picked from the warrior. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 13:46, May 5, 2017 (UTC)
Can you brighten the white muzzle just a little bit? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 14:26, 5/05/2017
Re-uploaded. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much
Can you smooth that pale orange patch on her eyebrow a little? ✧Winter✧ Onward and upward 21:25, 5/05/2017
need the file? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 02:52,5/6/2017
Re-uploaded. atm, i don't think I need the file, but I'll give you a message if that changes. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 03:06, May 6, 2017 (UTC)
It looks like the cream spot on the back leg closer to us is a little more blurred out on the warrior image and on the tail I think the ginger should blend a little more with the cream ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (13:18, 5/06/2017 )
Re-uploaded. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 15:03, May 6, 2017 (UTC)
This is beautiful Patch! <3 Love it! Define the facial shading just a wee bit?—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 17:07, 5/06/2017
Re-uploaded. Thanks! I was just staring at it for 15 minutes and was thinking, should I darken the stripes on the body a lil bit? —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 19:04, May 6, 2017 (UTC)
CBA? ✧Winter✧ Onward and upward 16:03, 5/07/2017
Approved. —Ivy ☆ 20:30, May 8, 2017 (UTC)
Wolfstep (A) - Approved[]
stupid me forgot to put a date on the reservation table. — ☆ paper · finches ★ 14:36, May 6, 2017 (UTC)
yeah sorry about that ;; can you smooth the shading a tad bit more? ✧Winter✧ Onward and upward 14:39, 5/06/2017
re-uploaded - nah, don't worry about it was my own fault — ☆ paper · finches ★ 15:57, May 6, 2017 (UTC)
Smooth it(the shading) just a small bit more? This is very nice! I was going to try and do his apprentice, but I gave up xD Tabbies are difficult for me—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 17:15, 5/06/2017
Imo the shadings smooth enough, just define it. madie the wicked witch of the west 17:21, May 6, 2017 (UTC)
The shading doesn't look smooth enough for me :/ Like the tail shading seems too sharp still, and I can see the haunch shading looks a bit too sharp as well. And the chest shading. Other then that, the shading is smooth enough—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 17:24, 5/06/2017
Danny, please don't say "it's fine." :) Define the shading depth. Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ✣ICouldn'tSayIt To Myself ✣ 17:38, May 6, 2017 (UTC)
re-uploaded - I think the texture's is making the shading look sharp when really it isn't? I've blurred and defined the shading. — ☆ paper · finches ★ 18:15, May 6, 2017 (UTC)
Define the shading a teensy more on the front paw closest to us? ✧Winter✧ Onward and upward 00:01, 5/07/2017
+ the back paw furthest away from us. this is cute :3 - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 01:12,5/7/2017
re-uploaded — ☆ paper · finches ★ 10:24, May 7, 2017 (UTC)
CBA? ✧Winter✧ Onward and upward 16:03, 5/07/2017
Approved. —Ivy ☆ 20:30, May 8, 2017 (UTC)
Quick Water (W) ~ Approved[]
school trip tmr :( try and throw all of your comments before i leave tomorrow! (i wont be here for a week or so) - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 02:22,5/7/2017
Define the texture on the white marking on the head madie the wicked witch of the west 02:54, May 7, 2017 (UTC)
Re-uploaded - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 03:09,5/7/2017
the white on the head is supposed to be two parts. one on the bridge of the nose and the other the forehead. te mark also isn't that big on her other images, it's more of an oval shapeand should only go to around to near the top of her head at the end point. also shrink the white on the hind leg, there's a little too much of it.david 🌈 03:42, May 7, 2017 (UTC)
Re-uploaded did i get it all? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 04:05,5/7/2017
yup. I'd reduce the white on the leg just a little bit more, but that's preference, not going to hold you to it. david 🌈 04:08, May 7, 2017 (UTC)
The bend in the hind leg should have white. madie the wicked witch of the west 04:19, May 7, 2017 (UTC)
Re-uploaded is this what you all meant? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 04:34,5/7/2017
Can you smooth out the earpink a tiny bit where it meets the base of the ear? It's looking a little too defined ✧Winter✧ Onward and upward 16:10, 5/07/2017
Re-uploaded well i wish you could've commented earlier. but thankfully i didn't leave yet - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 22:34,5/7/2017
CBA? ✧Winter✧ Onward and upward 12:58, 5/08/2017
Approved ✧Winter✧ Onward and upward 23:33, 5/09/2017
Night (D) - Approved[]
doesnt she have a black chin? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 02:48,5/7/2017
Re-uploaded. That wasn't shading? Whoops. I was using the loner as the base, since it's the first in the set. —Jayce(02:57, 5/07/2017)
Re-uploaded. White tweak + shading modification. —Jayce(04:41, 5/07/2017)
Can you possibly define the shading on the head/neck area as well as the tail? I might just be blind on the tail part, but lol ✧Winter✧ Onward and upward 16:11, 5/07/2017
Re-uploaded. —Jayce(02:37, 5/08/2017)
CBA? ✧Winter✧ Onward and upward 12:59, 5/08/2017
Approved ✧Winter✧ Onward and upward 23:33, 5/09/2017
Holly (W) ~ Approved[]
david 🌈 02:49, May 7, 2017 (UTC)
Please don't shoot me for another shading comment but can you define it a bit?(sorry if this is nitpicky) Rainbowmistake (talk) 14:22, May 7, 2017 (UTC)chat
reuploaded yr fine. I tried adding slight highlights to the edges of some of the spikes, does it help tell apart the base and shading better? david 🌈 16:08, May 7, 2017 (UTC)
Much floof, such wow. CBA? ✧Winter✧ Onward and upward 12:59, 5/08/2017
Approved ✧Winter✧ Onward and upward 23:33, 5/09/2017