Slash (L) ~ Approved[]
...woW ✧Winter✧ 01:18, 5/12/2017
There's strange patch of darkness above the --> back leg... was that intentional? It looks darker than most of the rest of the shading. Branchwing (talk) 14:52, May 12, 2017 (UTC)
Yes its shading depth ✧Winter✧ 02:12, 5/13/2017
It looks out of place compared to the rest of the shading, though. Could you smooth it out a bit? —Jayce(02:13, 5/13/2017)
Define the shading depth on the tail? This must have been difficult to pull off^ It's very pretty!—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 23:29, 5/13/2017
Smooth the markings n paler parts out a tad to better match the other images madie the wicked witch of the west 23:33, May 13, 2017 (UTC)
Define the shading on the head. ErmineGlow (talk) 23:44, May 13, 2017 (UTC)
Also, define the shading depth on the flank and ----> front leg madie the wicked witch of the west 23:46, May 13, 2017 (UTC)
The higher scar on <- front leg should be closer to the white stripe below it and I think the three scratches on the back leg should look like this http://vvcap.com/w09l8ZisTwf and should be a bit longer ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (00:48, 5/14/2017 )
Reuploaded Smoothed everything including little patch of shading above > back leg, defined depth on tail, the head shading didn't really need defining but i put some more shading depth there, and the flank is the part above the leg, danny, and that's pretty defined as is, considering branchwing's comment. and the front leg doesnt need any shading depth in my light source but i gave it a tiny bit. And fixed scars. it doesnt have to match 100% you know @snow (about the length), and besides his leg is curled up, theyre gonna be scrunched together ✧Winter✧ 22:40, 5/14/2017
CBA? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 23:31, 5/16/2017
Approved ✧Winter✧ 04:12, 5/18/2017
Loki (Ro) ~ Approved[]
I dunno if the shading's too dark, because my monitor won't let me see it properly. ♥ Star red and black ♥<01:20, 5/12/2017>
You need the hex codes for the fur, eyes or earpink at all?—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 01:28, 5/12/2017
Minor, but the nose should be a very dark red. Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ✣ICouldn'tSayIt To Myself ✣ 01:29, May 12, 2017 (UTC)
Here's the hex code for the nose: 0d0504 Here's for the earpink:ab4538 And here's for the eyes: 9cff00 (shading tint is optional but here: 6f4dff)—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 01:34, 5/12/2017
Smooth the earpink a little more, shading is leaking on the belly by the back leg's bend, and define the shading on the front leg farthest from us ✧Winter✧ 01:41, 5/12/2017
re-up @Broken I have the exact same hex code? The tint is probably throwing the pink off. Also define what you mean by leaking @Snow. ♥ Star red and black ♥<03:52, 5/12/2017>
Leaking shading means exactly what it sounds like? It's leaking away from the lineart on the --> back leg's bend??Unless you changed it already—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 07:20, 5/12/2017
Leaking shading means the shading doesnt go all the way where its supposed to. Also no broken its not by the back legs bend if you wouldve looked at my comment :/ i said on the belly by the back legs bend ✧Winter✧ 12:27, 5/12/2017
Funny, front leg farthest from us is covered in shading, and I don't see the shading leaking on the belly near the back leg? Unless I'm just stupid? ♥ Star red and black ♥<22:49, 5/12/2017>
Wait, I just checked the current projects list. It says Streamdapple had reserved this on the 2nd, while you reserved it recently... am I missing something, or isn't it theirs? Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ✣ICouldn'tSayIt To Myself ✣ 03:01, May 13, 2017 (UTC)
It was declined (and archived) due to lack of work, and an image is someone's until it's archived, so...does that answer your question? (unless I'm just answering this wrong) ♥ Star red and black ♥<04:56, 5/13/2017>
- Yes that does answer it. Thank you, and sorry. :) Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ✣ICouldn'tSayIt To Myself ✣ 05:12, May 13, 2017 (UTC)
you're welcome Winter. :) ♥ Star red and black ♥<16:33, 5/13/2017>
Smooth shading on head a bit and shading is leaking a bit on both front legs ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (00:53, 5/14/2017 )
re-up yeah I forgot to put it because I'm out of order because I'm kinda sick. :( ♥ Star red and black ♥<17:17, 5/14/2017>
Maybe smooth the shading on the main body and shoulder a bit? —Ivy ☆ 20:49, May 15, 2017 (UTC)
Can you make the earpink a more gray color than what it is now? It looks a little too neon to match the other image. The earpink you want to match is on > ear of the kittypet, and right now it looks too purple ✧Winter✧ 21:37, 5/15/2017
Winter, Broken gave star the exact hex code, so it's probably the tint on the kittypet that makes it look odd madie the wicked witch of the west 22:08, May 15, 2017 (UTC)
re-up Yeah, the tint's throwing the earpink off. Also, Broken's image was fine with it, so *shrugs*. ♥ Star red and black ♥<04:21, 5/16/2017>
CBA? ✧Winter✧ 00:57, 5/17/2017
Approved ✧Winter✧ 04:12, 5/18/2017
Hopekit (Ki) - Approved[]
I know the shading needs to be fixed and I'll get to that in a bit I just wanted to get this up madie the wicked witch of the west 23:28, May 12, 2017 (UTC)
reups "fixed" shading. It's still bad but oh well. madie the wicked witch of the west 23:42, May 12, 2017 (UTC)
darn I wanted this image Smooth out that little chest/belly shading? ♥ Star red and black ♥<23:45, 5/12/2017>
reups heck sorry madie the wicked witch of the west 23:53, May 12, 2017 (UTC)
Define stripes, unless I'm stupid and blind and they're not stripes? me 2 --
Neon Skylite CH-CH-CH-CHERRY BOMB! 00:29, 5/13/2017
How would I do that though? They're the same color as the star, should I sharpen them? madie the wicked witch of the west 00:47, May 13, 2017 (UTC)
on the star, the stripes seem to be um... thicker? maybe that would help. holy #@##$ this is super cute - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 03:25,5/13/2017
Okay, I know you must've colorpicked, but this seems paler from the Star, unless it's my eyes again xD—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 04:20, 5/13/2017
Unfortunately, I disagree with you. The base color seems the same, it's just the tint that looks different. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 04:56,5/13/2017
I'm gonna reup soon, I lost this file and recovered an older version so I'm redoing the shading, but, yes, Broken I colorpicked from the most unshaded untouched spot I could find on the back. If this continues to be a problem, I'll try and get the star's file from Shrikestep madie the wicked witch of the west 14:18, May 13, 2017 (UTC)
reups madie the wicked witch of the west 14:33, May 13, 2017 (UTC)
Maybe define the stripes that are under the shading, as they seem to fade away a bit in shape —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 14:58, 5/13/2017
reups madie the wicked witch of the west 15:03, May 13, 2017 (UTC)
reups waste and the belly shading was bothering me madie the wicked witch of the west 18:04, May 14, 2017 (UTC)
I like this. Comments before approval? Appledash the light of honor 17:50, May 16, 2017 (UTC)
Approved ✧Winter✧ 04:12, 5/18/2017
Juniper Branch (W) ~ Approved[]
a simpler one david 🌈 18:54, May 15, 2017 (UTC)
Define light on the tail? It looks wholly coated in shadow. --
Neon Skylite CH-CH-CH-CHERRY BOMB! 21:19, 5/15/2017
Not really? You can see the light on > side of the tail because of the pattern ✧Winter✧ 21:28, 5/15/2017
Define the shading depth just a smidge madie the wicked witch of the west 23:01, May 15, 2017 (UTC)
reuploaded' david 🌈 16:46, May 16, 2017 (UTC)
CBA? ✧Winter✧ 00:59, 5/17/2017
Approved ✧Winter✧ 04:12, 5/18/2017
Pricklekit (WC) (Ki) - Approved[]
My first image posted here... Hope you like it! Branchwing (talk) 22:23, May 10, 2017 (UTC)
Define the shading, define the shading depth, this needs a black tipped nose, define the light on the ---> front leg. Nice! madie the wicked witch of the west 22:28, May 10, 2017 (UTC)
I don't think the black-tipped nose would be visible on this blank, as assuming that it's on the bridge of the nose is an assumption, and we don't make those here. ✧Winter✧ 22:52, 5/10/2017
no it's not? dew nose has the exact same thing except with white. david 🌈 23:33, May 10, 2017 (UTC)
Reuploaded I added the black tipped nose, considering the comment about Dew Nose. Also made her nose a little lighter to differentiate the tipped nose and the actual nose a little bit better, they would have been nearly the same color if I didn't. Hopefully I defined the shading enough. Branchwing (talk) 00:41, May 11, 2017 (UTC)
Very nice! :) Smooth out shading depth a tad? ShypawDo the trickor treat 00:48, May 11, 2017 (UTC)
Cute! Smooth out the shading just a little bit?—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 04:52, 5/11/2017
Reuploaded Branchwing (talk) 21:37, May 11, 2017 (UTC)
Define the shading again madie the wicked witch of the west 01:28, May 12, 2017 (UTC)
I think the shading itself is rather okay, but feel free to do so anyway. Define shading depth as well? ✧Winter✧ 01:36, 5/12/2017
I feel like I could be defined just a wee bit on the legs(the shading)—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 06:09, 5/12/2017
Reuploaded Also changed the main color slightly, if you don't mind. I still have the hex code for the original color if you want me to change it back. Branchwing (talk) 14:38, May 12, 2017 (UTC)
Make eyes look more yellow? ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (05:13, 5/13/2017 )
Reuploaded I just changed the hue a little bit, but I can repick the colors if you all think that's too close to gold or amber. Branchwing (talk) 12:28, May 13, 2017 (UTC)
Define the legs and tail shading and smooth the ear pink madie the wicked witch of the west 01:06, May 14, 2017 (UTC)
Reuploaded I have trouble defining things don't I. Especially the tail. But I think I'm doing the right thing. Branchwing (talk) 01:33, May 14, 2017 (UTC)
I think you know what you're doing, so I'll promote you to an apprentice. Smooth the shading some more ✧Winter✧ 21:34, 5/15/2017
Reuploaded Branchwing (talk) 23:41, May 15, 2017 (UTC)
Define shading depth on the legs and on the back paw. madie the wicked witch of the west 23:42, May 15, 2017 (UTC)
Reuploaded Branchwing (talk) 21:41, May 17, 2017 (UTC)
CBA? ✧Winter✧ 04:17, 5/18/2017
Approved.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 10:31, May 19, 2017 (UTC)
Dodge (L) - Approved[]
Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣•00:58 Tue May 16
Define the head shading a smidge Rainbowmistake (talk) 01:12, May 16, 2017 (UTC)chat
Reuploaded Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣•14:27 Tue May 16
his chest and muzzle should be pale, and any other paler parts on here that aren't the legs could be defined. david 🌈 00:45, May 17, 2017 (UTC)
His chest? On the rogue, I don't think his chest is pale. Unless it is and I'm not seeing it?—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 04:39, 5/17/2017
I'm pretty sure there would be a pale chest - it just appears to be under shading on the rogue, I think. —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 11:20, 5/17/2017
what spooky said. even colourpicking that area to another area in shadow gives a noticable difference in colour. david 🌈 15:33, May 17, 2017 (UTC)
Reuploaded A lot of the tail and muzzle pale is under shading. Its definitely there though btw. Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣•21:43 Wed May 17
CBA? ✧Winter✧ 04:19, 5/18/2017
Approved.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 10:31, May 19, 2017 (UTC)
Dawn Mist (W) ~ Approved[]
all colors from her queen image - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 02:05,5/17/2017
There's a bunch of waste outside th eneck, beneath the ---> front paw, and ---> back paw. Also, in that chest fluff that hangs over, there are two pixels of waste that is common to get filled in. :) good job Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ✣ICouldn'tSayIt To Myself ✣ 02:09, May 17, 2017 (UTC)
Re-uploaded waste all murdered, and thanks. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 02:21,5/17/2017
Define the shading depth on both the front legs and the back leg furthest from us. Nice—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 05:38, 5/17/2017
Re-uploaded xie xie, also changed some things on the white - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 07:04,5/17/2017
lmao i thought that was gibberish until i remembered my very little chinese. CBA? ✧Winter✧ 04:20, 5/18/2017
Approved.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 10:31, May 19, 2017 (UTC)
Deerdapple (E) - Approved[]
I tried out a new shading style. All colors from her warrior. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 03:17, May 17, 2017 (UTC)
This is gorgeous, Patch! I believe there is shading leaking on the chest right above the tail. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 03:19, May 17, 2017 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Thanks! <3. I think I got it, not sure though. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 03:24, May 17, 2017 (UTC)
Define the shading depth on the head a wee bit? Do you use Photoshop? Your images are very pretty—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 04:34, 5/17/2017
Re-uploaded. Thank you! I use GIMP. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 05:41, May 17, 2017 (UTC)
Wow this is cool. Idk but the stripes seem lighter than on the warrior? ShypawDo the trickor treat 23:39, May 17, 2017 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. I tried to darken them but I'm not sure if it did anything. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 00:48, May 18, 2017 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. got it. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 01:03, May 18, 2017 (UTC)
can you smooth the shading a tiny tiny bit, especially on back/rump/tail areas ✧Winter✧ 04:21, 5/18/2017
Re-uploaded. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 14:15, May 18, 2017 (UTC)
CBA? ✧Winter✧ 15:08, 5/18/2017
Approved —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 15:37, 5/19/2017
Talonpaw (A) - Approved[]
Silver tabbies are the second best pelt kind (after black-and-white of course) <3 —Jayce(20:32, 5/17/2017)
His eyes are amber & these look blue madie the wicked witch of the west 20:43, May 17, 2017 (UTC)
Could you define the shading just a little? —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 20:44, May 17, 2017 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Was using eyes from a different image and forgot to swap them out, my bad. —Jayce(20:50, 5/17/2017)
This is so awesome! Your chararts are so good. :) Do you mind smoothening out the shading on the front paw closest to us? There looks like there's a patch of darker shading on the shading there, if that makes sense. ShypawDo the trickor treat 23:35, May 17, 2017 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. I think I got the right paw? 'cause I looked on the other paw and couldn't see anything out of place... —Jayce(01:09, 5/18/2017)
Define the shading on the front paws/legs ✧Winter✧ 04:22, 5/18/2017
Re-uploaded. —Jayce(08:05, 5/18/2017)
CBA? ✧Winter✧ 15:09, 5/18/2017
Approved —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 15:37, 5/19/2017
Moss Tail (W) - Approved[]
I went for something simple, idk. —Ivy ☆ 21:04, May 17, 2017 (UTC)
Approved.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 05:14, May 20, 2017 (UTC)
Seedpelt (MV) (Star) ~ Approved[]
I always had my eye on this guy ever since I first joined. Together at last... Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 02:27, May 17, 2017 (UTC)
I believe that their is white on the tail. This is really beautiful! Much better than mine. ErmineGlow (talk) 02:41, May 17, 2017 (UTC)
Define or expand the tail shading? Pretty^—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 02:47, 5/17/2017
Define eye depth? And <---- ear pink if you can, if not that's alright. Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ✣ICouldn'tSayIt To Myself ✣ 02:48, May 17, 2017 (UTC)
I know I'm going to be told to stop, but the eye depth is very visible for me.—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 02:55, 5/17/2017
It's ok, I also agree that the eye depth is visible. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 03:01,5/17/2017
Reups <3 Ermine, there is white on the tail. What did you mean by that? Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 03:33, May 17, 2017 (UTC)
i guess you could expand it a little, as on the warrior it nearly takes up one third of the tail. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 07:08,5/17/2017
Reups Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 17:18, May 17, 2017 (UTC)
smooth shading on the chest a little ✧Winter✧ 04:21, 5/18/2017
Reups Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 04:30, May 18, 2017 (UTC)
CBA? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 15:41, 5/19/2017
Approved —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 18:23, 5/20/2017
Spider Paw (W) - Approved[]
I didn't add the extra toe because on the Early Settler, it's on the side that's not showing, but I can add it. ShypawDo the trickor treat 01:48, May 12, 2017 (UTC)
Reuploaded Smoothed out shading. ShypawDo the trickor treat 01:53, May 12, 2017 (UTC)
Nice! Smooth the shading just a tad more and define the light a little. madie the wicked witch of the west 01:57, May 12, 2017 (UTC)
Can you try to add it in? Just a little bump on his other foot would be ok ✧Winter✧ 01:59, 5/12/2017
I was just about to comment to smooth the shading, but Snek already said that I feel like the light could be defined on the back paw—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 02:02, 5/12/2017
Well broken little did you know I also said to define the light already madie the wicked witch of the west 02:19, May 12, 2017 (UTC)
Reuploaded Wow. :p ShypawDo the trickor treat 02:27, May 12, 2017 (UTC)
Gonna be of the unpopular opinion here, but I really don't think you'd need to show that extra toe at all. This blank doesn't show that side of the cat, and the lineart looks a little awkward and forced with how it is. The paw would have to be kinda twisted in order for it to show that toe anyways given how this blank is shown. —Jayce(02:28, 5/12/2017)
Reuploaded ShypawDo the trickor treat 02:33, May 12, 2017 (UTC)
Smooth the shading on the ear on <--- side? Congratulations on 2 approved images :)—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 02:44, 5/12/2017
Reuploaded Thank you, Broken! :) ShypawDo the trickor treat 02:58, May 12, 2017 (UTC)
Smooth the shading on the top of the head and the ear that is farthest away from us? ╾erdich Mitchell 04:09 12 May 2017
Shading's leaking on the belly. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 06:13,5/12/2017
On the back leg closest to us, it looks like there's a spot of shading that should be smoothed. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 14:19, May 12, 2017 (UTC)
Reuploaded ShypawDo the trickor treat 22:33, May 12, 2017 (UTC)
I think the overall shading could be smoothed a little, but also particularly on the ears. In addition, I think the shading's leaking a bit on the haunch. —Ivy ☆ 23:04, May 12, 2017 (UTC)
Reuploaded ShypawDo the trickor treat 00:25, May 13, 2017 (UTC)
I think the shading's still leaking on the belly and on the front leg closest to us. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 04:08, May 13, 2017 (UTC)
For lack of better words, the shading near to the lineart looks really... pixely, moreso on the back and tail-tip, but in a few other spots too. Not sure if it's like blurred lineart or just something odd? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 15:02, 5/13/2017
Reuploaded ShypawDo the trickor treat 17:53, May 13, 2017 (UTC)
Could you smooth the shading on the back leg closest to us, near the paw? I feel like the shading there ends abruptly. And, could you make the shading less pixely, as Spooky stated? Branchwing (talk) 18:01, May 13, 2017 (UTC)
Reuploaded ShypawDo the trickor treat 18:08, May 13, 2017 (UTC)
Looking good! Smooth the shading on the farthest ear madie the wicked witch of the west 18:17, May 13, 2017 (UTC)
Reuploaded Thank you! ShypawDo the trickor treat 18:26, May 13, 2017 (UTC)
Define shading? And smooth shading on both ears, top of head, tail, and two paws further from us ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (00:59, 5/14/2017 )
Reuploaded ShypawDo the trickor treat 02:09, May 14, 2017 (UTC)
Could you smooth the shading a little bit? Branchwing (talk) 02:41, May 14, 2017 (UTC)
Reuploaded ShypawDo the trickor treat 03:00, May 14, 2017 (UTC)
It looks like you smoothed shading in only some places. Please smooth all of it, define shading depth, and there's some smudged/blurred lineart at the tip of tail and by the neck ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (03:35, 5/14/2017 )
Reuploaded ShypawDo the trickor treat 03:43, May 14, 2017 (UTC)
Give some shape to the flank shading, it looks like a straight line madie the wicked witch of the west 03:46, May 14, 2017 (UTC)
Reuploaded ShypawDo the trickor treat 04:05, May 14, 2017 (UTC)
Smooth the shading on all of the paws and the ear farthest from us. Branchwing (talk) 12:21, May 14, 2017 (UTC)
Reuploaded ShypawDo the trickor treat 15:54, May 14, 2017 (UTC)
Smooth out the back shading just a small bit? This is cool^—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 20:32, 5/14/2017
Reuploaded Thank you! ShypawDo the trickor treat 21:01, May 14, 2017 (UTC)
Idk if it's just me, but the earpink and the shading are making it look like there's a stray gray pixel in the earpink. And define the shading more on the tail and add more shading to the back paw closest to us on the paw itself, as it looks like it fades away. ANd it looks like also that the shading is leaking on the legs. Smooth the shading more as well, and recede the shading a tiny bit on the top of the head, as if the light's coming from the < and up area, there wouldn't be that much shadow there ✧Winter✧ 21:40, 5/15/2017
Reuploaded ShypawDo the trickor treat 21:55, May 15, 2017 (UTC)
Smooth out the shading just a tiny bit on the top of the head and on the paws furthest away from us. It looks a bit sharp. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 16:41, May 16, 2017 (UTC)
I think the shading on the front paw farthest from us is leaking too far onto the toes, where it should be in all light ✧Winter✧ 00:58, 5/17/2017
Reuploaded ShypawDo the trickor treat 01:41, May 17, 2017 (UTC)
The lineart looks blurred, or something weird/pixely is happening wherever the shading touches the lineart on this. Can you try and fix it? Also, smooth the shading on the top of the head, the back leg furthest from us, and the < ear —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 19:59, 5/17/2017
Reuploaded ShypawDo the trickor treat 22:29, May 17, 2017 (UTC)
The shading blotchiness/lineart pixeliness is still there on the tail-tip, > ear, belly, legs, and lower back. —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 18:44, 5/18/2017
Reuploaded If it's still there, can you please circle it? ShypawDo the trickor treat 22:36, May 18, 2017 (UTC)
It's mostly gone. can you smooth the shading on the < ear, top of the head, < front & back paws, tail, and belly? That's where it looks a little blotchy. —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 12:57, 5/20/2017
Reuploaded ShypawDo the trickor treat 16:02, May 20, 2017 (UTC)
Comments before approval? This is really good. Appledash the light of honor 20:19, May 20, 2017 (UTC)
Approved —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 23:59, 5/21/2017
Spotted Fur (W) - Approved[]
Failed at matching my own pattern again Sziri the goat sails away ツ 19:25, May 14, 2017 (UTC)
Smooth out the tail shading? Unless that's part of the pattern :P This is very beautiful Sziri! Your images never fail to amaze me :)—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 19:42, 5/14/2017
Re-ups Ohh,thank you Sziri the goat sails away ツ 20:41, May 14, 2017 (UTC)
Define the shading on the front paw farthest from us? I really like this one Rainbowmistake (talk) 20:43, May 14, 2017 (UTC)chat
Maybe smooth the shading on both the front paws actually^—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 20:50, 5/14/2017
Re-ups Thanks! Sziri the goat sails away ツ 08:38, May 16, 2017 (UTC)
CBA? ✧Winter✧ 00:58, 5/17/2017
sorry to break this, but the spots and stripes seem far too dark compared to the other images. david 🌈 16:06, May 17, 2017 (UTC)
Re-ups Sziri the goat sails away ツ 19:10, May 17, 2017 (UTC)
Smooth shading on the back legs ✧Winter✧ 04:18, 5/18/2017
Re-ups Sziri the goat sails away ツ 17:34, May 19, 2017 (UTC)
CBA? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 12:58, 5/20/2017
Approved —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 23:59, 5/21/2017
Snowbird (A) - Approved[]
Wow, I tried a dark green/blue shading tint and I actually don't mind it? Yay! Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ✣ICouldn'tSayIt To Myself ✣ 23:29, May 16, 2017 (UTC)
Nice. Smooth out the shading a little on the face and chest, and maybe lighten the overall shading a tick or two. —Ivy ☆ 23:49, May 16, 2017 (UTC)
Reup Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ✣ICouldn'tSayIt To Myself ✣ 00:20, May 17, 2017 (UTC)
Define the eye depth a little bit, and also define the chest light. —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 11:21, 5/17/2017
Define the light on the ears a little bit. Branchwing (talk) 00:59, May 18, 2017 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ✣ICouldn'tSayIt To Myself ✣ 04:23, May 18, 2017 (UTC)
CBA? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 12:58, 5/20/2017
Approved —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 23:59, 5/21/2017
Applefrost(Ki) ~ Approved[]
I am aware of my trash attempt to texture, and the shading being too dark maybe. Comments for Applefrost? Also, the picture might look blurry?? Idk, it shows as blurry in the editor.—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 02:21, 5/17/2017
Is there white in the eye? Because I'm not seeing any at all. Also, it doesn't look blurry to me. —Jayce(02:27, 5/17/2017)
I can see the white. Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ✣ICouldn'tSayIt To Myself ✣ 02:28, May 17, 2017 (UTC)
Re-uploaded! Defined it. There was texture and a bit of shading covering it.—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 02:38, 5/17/2017
Re-uploaded! Surprised nobody mentioned the shading depth yet o.o—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 04:30, 5/17/2017
Add a bit of light to the back paw darnit i wanted this madie the wicked witch of the west 05:03, May 17, 2017 (UTC)
Re-uploaded!—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 05:24, 5/17/2017
The base looks green-tinted on the two screens I've looked at it on, idk, perhaps shift it a smudge? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 11:23, 5/17/2017
I totally get the frustration of not being able to do images you want to do but can people stop guilt tripping each other over images they didn't get to do? I know it's not really against the rules or anything, but not everyone needs to hear it. Sorry if I came off as rude, but it's been happening a lot on the approval page. As for the image, the brown could be fixed with a reddish tint, or you could color pick from Appledusk (as they were said to look alike? Idk) - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 11:33,5/17/2017
Also can you lighten the shading? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 23:59,5/17/2017
Texture looks great, but on the upper left in our view, the texture looks out of place. ♥ Star red and black ♥<03:21, 5/18/2017>
Re-uploaded! Thank goodness my block was lifted..you have no clue how good it feels to be back. Sorry about all that. Also, Star, could you please specifiy what you mean by 'out of place' next time? I added some more texture there by just a bit, but I didn't exactly know what you wanted me to do so yeah x.x—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 07:25, 5/18/2017
Oh forgot to add^ I did colorpick from Appledusk, it might just be the texture that's throwing off the colors.—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 07:28, 5/18/2017
Actually, Appledusk's coloring is a bit on the green side, so I really don't think you're gonna be able to change it much without having to alter Appledusk as well. ...which I think might actually be because of the shading. not totally sure on that one. —Jayce(08:09, 5/18/2017)
Oh, I'm sorry Broken. What I meant by out of place is that it kind of looks like stripes or something like that, and kind of hard-edged. It's kind of hard for me to explain, I'll try to provide something for you to understand. (I suck at explaining this) ♥ Star red and black ♥<21:13, 5/18/2017>
So like, is there anything you want me to change?? You're only telling me about how the texture looks weird, so I'm not sure if I should change the texture or not.—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 22:39, 5/18/2017
I think they're trying to say the texture needs to be smoothed a little?? That's what it sounds like to me? madie the wicked witch of the west 22:42, May 18, 2017 (UTC)
Re-uploaded! So ugly tho :P—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 23:25, 5/18/2017
The ear pink looks just a little bit neon madie the wicked witch of the west 23:27, May 18, 2017 (UTC)
Every color on this Charart is colorpicked off Appledusk. I just colorpicked his nose and made it the earpink. I don't see why I'd have to change it, but if others agree, I'll change it.—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 23:48, 5/18/2017
Nah, if you colorpicked, it's likely fine. Smooth the shading on the back paw? And maybe a little bit on the tail madie the wicked witch of the west 00:52, May 19, 2017 (UTC)
Re-uploaded!—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 02:20, 5/19/2017
CBA? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 13:03, 5/20/2017
Approved —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 23:59, 5/21/2017
Birchbark (Ro) ~ Approved[]
w david 🌈 18:41, May 18, 2017 (UTC)
Define the shading depth on the line that runs across the top of the back, and the one on the main body (not near the shoulder, more on flank/near the haunch) madie the wicked witch of the west 20:34, May 18, 2017 (UTC)
reuploaded i tried. light brown is a dodgy colour to work with david 🌈 23:32, May 18, 2017 (UTC)
Do you think you could smooth the shading on the toe on back paw closest to us? In the rear end below the tail, is that tiny pixel supposed to be transparent, and not filled in? 13:14, May 19, 2017 (UTC)
reuploaded didn't even notice that david 🌈 02:23, May 20, 2017 (UTC)
CBA? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 13:03, 5/20/2017
Approved —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 23:59, 5/21/2017
Thorn (W) - Approved[]
Cute scruffy girl(?) Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣•19:23 Fri May 19
Isn't there supposed to be some ragged fur on the tail? Unless it wouldn't be visible from this angle, there appears to be some ragged fur on the tail on the es and loner (I think)—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 19:27, 5/19/2017
ragged fur doesn't have to match between images. david 🌈 19:32, May 19, 2017 (UTC)
This needs notched ears madie the wicked witch of the west 20:10, May 19, 2017 (UTC)
Reuploaded Wow that's a major pull a blank on my end... Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣•21:15 Fri May 19
CBA? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 12:59, 5/20/2017
Approved —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 23:59, 5/21/2017
Duskpaw (Ki) ~ Approved[]
—spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 19:29, 5/17/2017
Define shadinf depth a little tiny bit madie the wicked witch of the west 20:44, May 17, 2017 (UTC)
Reuploaded —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 20:56, 5/17/2017
Add the paler underside, and add/define the paler parts around the eyes. Would you like the file? Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 01:59, May 18, 2017 (UTC)
Reuploaded —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 18:54, 5/18/2017
CBA?Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 01:15, May 21, 2017 (UTC)
Approved.Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 06:06, May 22, 2017 (UTC)
Pine Needle (W) - Approved[]
I really like his name ^^ ╾erdich Mitchell 08:09 15 May 2017
Define the light a little more on the back paw farthest from us, the tail, and smooth the earpink a little more? nice job! ✧Winter✧ 21:44, 5/15/2017
Reuploaded Did my best, ╾erdich Mitchell 04:32 16 May 2017
Smooth the shading on the back legs? Do you use Photoahop, or am I just a really unexperienced GIMP user? xD—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 19:18, 5/16/2017
Reuploaded, I use GIMP but I've been using it for a while now I guess ^^; ╾erdich Mitchell 20:38 17 May 2017
CBA? ✧Winter✧ 04:19, 5/18/2017
Hate to break CBA, cause this is nice, but smooth out the tail shading? Seems kinda hard-edged to me.—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 05:26, 5/19/2017
I feel as though if you smooth it, you'd lose the definition of it. But again, that's my own opinion. — max it is the real thing, () 09:47 Sun May 21 2017
Looks fine to me. Re-CBA? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 11:47, 5/22/2017
Approved —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 13:44, 5/23/2017
Leafshade (W) - Approved[]
All colors from her other images, I just gave the shading a red tint. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 16:28, May 19, 2017 (UTC)
Smooth out the shading on the tail a tad? Beautiful image! ^^ Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 19:59, May 19, 2017 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Thank you! I fixed up the shading on the rest of the body too. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 20:08, May 19, 2017 (UTC)
Smooth tail shading some more? --
Neon Skylite CH-CH-CH-CHERRY BOMB! 00:15, 5/20/2017
Re-uploaded. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 02:53, May 20, 2017 (UTC)
The lighter parts look a little lighter/more defined on the kit, which is the first, so could you go and check that? It might be my monitor, but these seem a little duller. —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 13:01, 5/20/2017
Re-uploaded. —PatchfeatherHangar 18, I know too much 23:22, May 20, 2017 (UTC)
CBA? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 00:04, 5/22/2017
Approved —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 13:44, 5/23/2017
Bloomheart (Star) - Approved[]
~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 02:47, May 20, 2017 (UTC)
Define the head shading a bit, omg i love this Rainbowmistake (talk) 02:48, May 20, 2017 (UTC)chat
Re-uploaded ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 02:51, May 20, 2017 (UTC)
lighten the shading, i can't see the pattern underneath at all. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 11:14,5/20/2017
Gonna be yelled at to stop, but I don't see why you can't see the pattern beneath the shading? I can see the pattern beneath the shading just fine, so maybe it's your screen? Idk, the shading seems like it doesn't have to be lightened at all imo—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 15:46, 5/20/2017
I agree with Broken. I can see the pattern underneath the shading as well. Vec I am Iron Man! 👾 16:43, May 20, 2017 (UTC)
Broken, you should be allowed to express your opinion as long as you back it up with reasoning, which you did in this case. And yes, my screen displays things very darkly. I guess it's fine in other people's eyes. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 03:47,5/21/2017
Define the shading depth along the flank a small bit.—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 05:08, 5/21/2017
Define the eye depth madie the wicked witch of the west 13:41, May 21, 2017 (UTC)
Re-uploaded I don't want to do too much more with the eye color: all the colors are the same as his other images ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 22:01, May 21, 2017 (UTC)
CBA? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 00:04, 5/22/2017
Approved —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 13:44, 5/23/2017
Blue Whisker (W) ~ Approved[]
i hate her new pattern :[ - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 04:31,5/20/2017
Does she have her real;y long whiskers? I can't really tell. {{SUBST:Nosubst|User:ErmineGlow/Sig}} (talk) 16:46, May 20, 2017 (UTC)
Are the whiskers supposed to be gray? ShypawDo the trickor treat 16:48, May 20, 2017 (UTC)
Yes they are described as translucent Rainbowmistake (talk) 17:47, May 20, 2017 (UTC)chat
uh I don't remember, can someone remind me if i need to elongate the whiskers? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 03:41,5/21/2017
Her description doesn't say anything about long whiskers. I don't think i have to. I'm not really sure. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 03:43,5/21/2017
No, you don't have to. The other images have only the original lengths, so this would be the same —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 14:28, 5/21/2017
I'll just CBA this now 'cause why not —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 00:05, 5/22/2017
Approved —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 13:44, 5/23/2017
Mud Paws (W) - Approved[]
Yes, I'm aware most of the shading should be smoothed out, I just wanted to get this up before I went to school madie the wicked witch of the west 11:37, May 18, 2017 (UTC)
Maybe lighten the shading just a smidge as well? I like this^^ Rainbowmistake (talk) 12:13, May 18, 2017 (UTC)chat
Idk, in this light source, I don't think that patch of shading in front of the shoulder by the chest would be there ✧Winter✧ 13:52, 5/18/2017
I've had shoulder shading there on my images. I personally think that is a matter of personal preference if it is placed there or not. Realistically there would be some shading there due to musculature and skeletal placement. Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣•19:40 Thu May 18
reups @Winter, it's on the apprentice tutorials, so I mean?? It's probably fine anyways madie the wicked witch of the west 20:33, May 18, 2017 (UTC)
There isn't one source for every image Snowdapple :/ I don't want to come off as rude, but if it was added as a source in the Apprentice Tutorials, why does Snek have to remove that patch of shading? There's multiple sources..—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 21:12, 5/18/2017
And smooth the shading on the shoulder and haunch. Looks kinda blotchy^—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 21:14, 5/18/2017
Shading could be smoothed. ♥ Star red and black ♥<21:16, 5/18/2017>
reups why did I even do this I hate shading on warriors Broken, it's fine, I know you weren't trying to be rude but both I and Sunjaw already gave a reason as to why it's fine. Thanks for the help, but it was pretty much dealt with. madie the wicked witch of the west 21:24, May 18, 2017 (UTC)
Wha? Oh shoot I wasn't looking when I said the above comment. Sorry for repeating comments. :P But anways could you define texture on the head? ♥ Star red and black ♥<22:11, 5/18/2017>
reups I did your comment, then I decided to define the texture everywhere to better match the other images, and even worked in some texture highlights and sort of did something with the shading?? Idk man but tell me if it looks off now. madie the wicked witch of the west 22:37, May 18, 2017 (UTC)
Shouldn't there be shading on top of the head with the light source? ShypawDo the trickor treat 22:38, May 18, 2017 (UTC)
reups madie the wicked witch of the west 22:53, May 18, 2017 (UTC)
Can you maybe try to round it out more so tht the light is on the front of the leg? Because the shading is kinda leaking onto where the light should be (adding onto previous comment. Also the new alien movie was really spooky ...) ✧Winter✧ 04:17, 5/19/2017
reups I believe i got where you meant?? madie the wicked witch of the west 04:22, May 19, 2017 (UTC)
There's some shading on the tail that looks blotchy compared to the rest, see here http://vvcap.com/mEwAiZVwqJE. All in all, it's very nice^—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 05:35, 5/19/2017
reups it was actually texture madie the wicked witch of the west 20:29, May 19, 2017 (UTC)
There's leaking shading on the start of the tail http://vvcap.com/1aFe3hgGdrB—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 21:58, 5/19/2017
reups madie the wicked witch of the west 16:49, May 20, 2017 (UTC)
Smooth shading/shading depth a little bit? And define shading on the back part of the back leg closest to us and rump? ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (17:11, 5/21/2017 )
reups madie the wicked witch of the west 17:51, May 21, 2017 (UTC)
CBA? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 21:41, 5/22/2017
Approved —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 21:45, 5/23/2017
Nettlebreeze (W) - Approved[]
I really like making ginger cats, in case no one can tell. —Ivy ☆ 13:27, May 21, 2017 (UTC)
Nice! Define the earpink? Branchwing (talk) 13:43, May 21, 2017 (UTC)
the stripes on his other images seem to be uh, less smudged? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 14:22,5/21/2017
Re-uploaded. Yeah, I realized that about the stripes and I tried to sharpen them a bit, hope this is a little better. —Ivy ☆ 14:39, May 21, 2017 (UTC)
On the kit and starclan image the paws don't look pale at all, on the other images it's hard to tell, so yeah I don't think the paws are supposed to be pale ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (17:30, 5/21/2017 )
Also maybe try blurring stripes a little? They look softer on the other images ❅ SNOWFALL ❅ (17:33, 5/21/2017 )
Re-uploaded. Well, the apprentice is the first image in the set, and I'm pretty sure the paws are at least partially pale on that and the elder, so I just receded the pale fur a little. —Ivy ☆ 18:43, May 21, 2017 (UTC)
Smoothen out the pale chest a bit Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ✣ICouldn'tSayIt To Myself ✣ 18:49, May 21, 2017 (UTC)
I think on the apprentice the paws don't look pale, but the underside of the legs do. madie the wicked witch of the west 18:52, May 21, 2017 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. —Ivy ☆ 19:35, May 21, 2017 (UTC)
Pretty <3 CBA? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 21:35, 5/22/2017
Approved —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 21:45, 5/23/2017
Toadskip (Star) - Approved[]
Oh, Christ, I haven't done a charart in so long, so I honestly have no idea if this is good or not. Appledash the light of honor 20:18, May 20, 2017 (UTC)
I like this! Define the shading a bit? Rainbowmistake (talk) 20:58, May 20, 2017 (UTC)chat
Smoothen out the earpink Ⓦⓘⓝⓣⓔⓡ ✣ICouldn'tSayIt To Myself ✣ 21:00, May 20, 2017 (UTC)
Define the color in the <-- eye madie the wicked witch of the west 21:41, May 20, 2017 (UTC)
Re-uploaded: Appledash the light of honor 22:36, May 20, 2017 (UTC)
There's some waste by the ---> ear. Pretty kitty! ShypawDo the trickor treat 22:44, May 20, 2017 (UTC)
This is very nice^^ Define the pupil in the <-- eye?—Broken_Foot⭐StarClan's Prophet⭐ 00:31, 5/21/2017
Uh, the pupil is black and three pixels wide? How am I supposed to define that? Appledash the light of honor 01:59, May 21, 2017 (UTC)
Each eye style is different, Broken. I do believe I've seen this eye style in a couple different images before, and I think the only problem you're having is how the color is placed... but eye style is artist's choice, and since this doesn't look cross-eyed, the image is fine as it is. You don't really have a lot of room in <-- eye, so you're extremely limited as to what you can do, and the way it's placed also makes things difficult. —Jayce(02:14, 5/21/2017)
Re-uploaded: I got rid of the waste, but didn't define the eye. Appledash the light of honor 14:30, May 21, 2017 (UTC)
Define face and chest shading? madie the wicked witch of the west 23:53, May 21, 2017 (UTC)
Also, the white on the legs should go up higher. madie the wicked witch of the west 23:54, May 21, 2017 (UTC)
Re-uploaded: Appledash the light of honor 18:00, May 22, 2017 (UTC)
CBA? —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 13:53, 5/23/2017
Approved —spooky is that... a furry cat?!? 15:14, 5/24/2017