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Dapplenose-Approved

File:Dapplenose.png I'm a little unsure of the spots... -- Darkhallows  My den 08:10, October 5, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Beautiful Shady! I see nothing wrong, as usual. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 19:01, October 5, 2009 (UTC)

This looks just fitting for what we call my cat, (perfection in a puss). Nice!Minnowclaw 23:17, October 5, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --Bramble-san 21:14, October 7, 2009 (UTC)

None. Approved. --Bramble-san 21:35, October 8, 2009 (UTC)

Quickpaw (A) - Approved

Quickpaw.apprentice Since Echomist made that beautiful charart of Morningcloud, I figured that her apprentice should have a charart as well. Plus, I wanted to try a ginger cat charart, as I've never done one before. Well, how does it look? Icethroat21 21:31, October 5, 2009 (UTC)

Cute! Blend the shading a little more though, it really sticks out to me. HAWKFIRE98 21:40, October 5, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. How's it look now? Icethroat21 23:02, October 5, 2009 (UTC)

Darken the neck shading the littlest bit.Minnowclaw 23:18, October 5, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Icethroat21 02:37, October 6, 2009 (UTC)

Verry, this is great! Nice job Ice.Minnowclaw 22:55, October 6, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --Bramble-san 21:08, October 7, 2009 (UTC)

None. Approved. --Bramble-san 21:35, October 8, 2009 (UTC)

Stormfur (Ki) - Approved

File:Stormfur-Kit.pngNow that my first image has been approved, I've put up another one. It's Stormfur as a kit this time! How does he look?--Hawktalon 20:22, September 30, 2009 (UTC)

Awwww, he's so cute! I think you should thin the shading on the tail, our left and the neck. Otherwise, this is great!Minnowclaw 23:26, September 30, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I thinned his neck, tail, and left body shading. Minnowclaw, did you mean the left side of his body, or the whole left side of the image?--Hawktalon 19:21, October 1, 2009 (UTC)

The nose needs to be pink, and the shading seems...lopsided. GB57 15:52, October 4, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I changed the nose to pink. Im sorry, GB, but what do you mean by 'lopsided'? --Hawktalon 16:09, October 4, 2009 (UTC)

I mean it looks like you moved all of the shading to one side in each area (legs, tail, torso, etc.). GB57 19:10, October 4, 2009 (UTC)

How do I fix the shading? --Hawktalon 22:41, October 5, 2009 (UTC)

I'm not sure what GB means, but if you could blur all your shading, and maybe smooth out the right angle on the left side of the neck/throat shading, it'd be great. --Bramble-san 23:14, October 5, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I blurred my shading and fixed the neck/throat shading. Constructments? --Hawktalon 19:48, October 6, 2009 (UTC)

He looks fine to me. Are there any further comments? --Bramble-san 21:53, October 7, 2009 (UTC)

Approved. --Bramble-san 21:35, October 8, 2009 (UTC)

Beechfur - Approved

File:Beechfur.warrior.png

Well, another minor character... comments? Mossflight 16:01, September 25, 2009 (UTC)

Darken the shading and make the ear pink more pink.Minnowclaw 18:39, September 25, 2009 (UTC)

Sandwich, pick a file name, like Beechfur.warrior, and reupload on that name every time. Don’t make a new file every time you update, like beechfur1, Beechfur2, Beechfur3… etc. It saves a lot of space. And makes my job a lot easier. :) --Bramble-san 20:50, September 25, 2009 (UTC)

Yes I am currently working on this but I have alot of things in life right now, so I will try at this maybe tonight or tommmorow. Mossflight 21:51, October 1, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I redid the whole image using my personal favorite Burn: Highlights isntead of Burn: Midtones. Should I blend the highlights more? I feel that I should be idk... Mossflight 05:14, October 3, 2009 (UTC)

Yes, blur them just a tad bit more, and then it should be good. Icethroat21 13:29, October 4, 2009 (UTC)

I blurred the most it will blur, but I dont think it did much :/. Mossflight 19:42, October 7, 2009 (UTC)

It's fine. This shading style is marvelous, btw. Comments before approval? --Bramble-san 21:15, October 7, 2009 (UTC)

Approved. --Bramble-san 21:50, October 8, 2009 (UTC)

Foxwhisker- Approved

File:Foxwhisker.RC.png My first ginger cat. I hope I made the color right! Comments? HAWKFIRE98 01:16, September 23, 2009 (UTC)

It's very good, but make the color a bit redder. Also thin the shading.Minnowclaw 01:17, September 24, 2009 (UTC)

Better? HAWKFIRE98 13:14, September 26, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Darken your shading; I can barely see it. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 21:07, September 26, 2009 (UTC)

It seems like you just ran over him in random spots with the dodge tool...blur them in more or atleast in the correct spots.-- Shim-ShimNewGladiator! 17:04, September 27, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the highlights a lot.Minnowclaw 00:50, September 29, 2009 (UTC)

How does he look now? HAWKFIRE98 00:40, October 3, 2009 (UTC)

Better, but the highlights still need blurred a lot. The shading needs blurred some more as well. (Side to side, from the shading to the pelt, not just the shading itself.) Icethroat21Enter at risk 00:44, October 3, 2009 (UTC)

Worked on shading and hughlights! HAWKFIRE98 13:44, October 4, 2009 (UTC)

Now there's not enough shading. It needs thickened a lot. Icethroat21 02:02, October 5, 2009 (UTC)

How's this? HAWKFIRE98 23:16, October 5, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --Bramble-san 21:51, October 7, 2009 (UTC)

None. Approved. --Bramble-san 22:06, October 8, 2009 (UTC)

Pinestar - Approved

Pinestar.leader

i haven't uploaded in a long time. Well here it is: Mossflight 00:40, September 24, 2009 (UTC)

Wow! This is great! But you might want to blur the ear pink a bit more. --Rainwhisker09 00:54, September 24, 2009 (UTC)

Blend the shading on the belly more and do what Blackclaw said.Minnowclaw 01:13, September 24, 2009 (UTC)

Ok. Blender belly shading, ear pink, and I fogot to add neck shading the first time, so I added it here. Mossflight 01:38, September 25, 2009 (UTC)

Maybe thin the neck shading a bit - it looks too thick.-- Echomist Hear the Echo... 14:55, September 25, 2009 (UTC)

I echo echo, (lol!)Minnowclaw 00:44, September 29, 2009 (UTC)

I am woeking on this, so please don't decline yet. MossflightBrackenfrost & Fawnspring 03:24, October, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Mossflight 05:25, October 3, 2009 (UTC)

Could someone help? I been trying to fix the coding for my sig but it's not working. Mossflight 05:44, October 3, 2009 (UTC)

huh? it looks all right to me, don't you think you sould ask some on they talk page?

Nevermind I fixed it. Mossflight 17:55, October 4, 2009 (UTC)

There are some white specks on his main pelt inside the lineart; on his ear, on his left foreleg, on his tail (basically just scan the image for any white specks and fill them in). also blur his neck shading a little more. Then he should be good. --Bramble-san 02:31, October 9, 2009 (UTC)

Fixed. Mossflight 21:09, October 9, 2009 (UTC)

I think he's ready now.Minnowclaw 12:18, October 10, 2009 (UTC)

Ok. comments before approval? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 18:21, October 10, 2009 (UTC)

Approved Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 18:59, October 11, 2009 (UTC)

seedpelt - approved

File:Seedpelt.pngNot much to say, what do you think?Minnowclaw 02:59, September 26, 2009 (UTC)

The fleck under the ear pink looks a little unatural. Other then that I think it's gorgus. --Spottedwing 22:26, September 26, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Could you make the flecks different sizes and shapes? Right now they all seem to be the same size and completely circular. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 18:46, September 27, 2009 (UTC)

Is this better?Minnowclaw 21:47, September 28, 2009 (UTC)

Do what Spottedwing said. Then she's good to go. --Bramble-san 02:03, October 1, 2009 (UTC)

I think the shading takes up too much of the pelt... it alost looks like her actual colour. Can you thin the shading and/or add a highlight to the chest area and hind leg curve. Use the dodge tool if you decide to add a highlight and blend well. I'll repeat for emphasis as this seems to be a problem at the moment the highlights aren't necessary but coud enhance the image. Alternatively just work on the shading =) Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 19:19, October 1, 2009 (UTC)

This hasn't been touched in ten days Minnow. Please work on it or it will be declined. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 15:39, October 8, 2009 (UTC)

Wait on archiving this, Sandy. I left a message for Minnow, and I might be able to work on this image. --Bramble-san 02:29, October 9, 2009 (UTC)

Okie dokie. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 16:38, October 9, 2009 (UTC)

Minnow gave me her permission; tried to thin the shading out, and added some highlights. Any other constructments? --Bramble-san 18:13, October 9, 2009 (UTC)

I have a question about what you did to my image. How did you make it so good?!?!?!?! Is it still me image? No, it's to good!Minnowclaw 12:16, October 10, 2009 (UTC)

Seems to be no probems. Comments before approval? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 21:06, October 10, 2009 (UTC)

Approved Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 20:02, October 11, 2009 (UTC)

Dawncloud - Approved

File:Dawncloud.png Hm, Dawncloud... not much to say. Constructments? --Bramble-san 22:00, October 8, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Beautiful! No comments here. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 22:54, October 9, 2009 (UTC)

Surching, surching, no! I got nothing on this! IT'S TO GOOD!Minnowclaw 11:59, October 10, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, a pretty unanimous comments before approval? Fantastic Bramble =) Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 18:01, October 10, 2009 (UTC)

Approved Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 20:05, October 11, 2009 (UTC)

Splash (When Fish Leaps) - Approved

Splash I didn't know which eye colour, so I just went with green. Any constructments? -- Dawnfeather  talk! 07:34, October 3, 2009 (UTC)

He's so cutee.... Perhaps brighten the ear pink. I don see much else.-- Darkhallows  My den 07:46, October 3, 2009 (UTC)

Brightened her ear. -- Dawnfeather  talk! 10:31, October 3, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 15:17, October 3, 2009 (UTC)

The foreleg farthest from us needs to have shading and blurred tabby stripes. But this is awesome, otherwise! --Hawktalon 18:59, October 3, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, I have blurred it as much as it can, but even then, it isn't much. I also added a bit of shading. Sorry for taking for so long - i's school hols here and I'm constantly being dragged away to various places unknown. They're taking me boating in about 5 minutes. This is the second to last day before school goes back, so then I'll be back to a relatively normal scedule. -- Dawnfeather  talk! 00:29, October 10, 2009 (UTC)

You're not in school yet? Lucky! Well, for the image. Very good.Minnowclaw 12:09, October 10, 2009 (UTC)

Repeating, comments before approval? I really can't see anything that could possibly be done to improve =) Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 21:59, October 10, 2009 (UTC)

(Minnowclaw, I live in Australia which is in the southern hemisphere. It's spring here now. I had two weeks off during your summer hols and then a ten week term. This is my two week october holidays which always takes place in... well, october. Then I have the fourth and final term of the year which is the shortest one - 9 weeks. Then I get 6 weeks summer/christmas/new year's holidays! OH yeah, and thanks, Sandy!) -- Dawnfeather  talk! 02:43, October 11, 2009 (UTC)

Oh, okay.Minnowclaw 12:42, October 11, 2009 (UTC)

Approved. --Bramble-san 04:27, October 12, 2009 (UTC)

Morningflower - Approved

Morningflower.queen
Okay, so I know we're doing current ranks now but I've had her on my current projects and really wanted to do her queen version. This is my first tortie attempt (well, the first one I've completed without sending to the recycle bin anyway). I know it has faults but be nice ^_^ I'm more nervous about posting this charart than any other since Kinkfur... lol Constructments?

ps. Bramble, I made a typo when uploading, please can you delete [[File:Morningfower.queen.png]] Thanks xSandy~Dragonkit's Forest 21:50, October 5, 2009 (UTC)

There's a white pixel on the right of the head. But otherwise, this looks great, Sandy! Icethroat21 22:35, October 5, 2009 (UTC)

This cat doesn't look like Morningflower. She wasn't once beautiful, she is beautiful. Nice job Sandy!Minnowclaw 23:16, October 5, 2009 (UTC)

Deleted. :) Lol Minnow, this is her queen version. The image is magnifique, Sandy. Maybe just blur her patches a touch more, and add a few more ginger speckles in the large areas with just black. --Bramble-san 23:19, October 5, 2009 (UTC)

Well... you know what I mean. Perfection!Minnowclaw 23:20, October 5, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks Icethroat - I noticed that when I uploaded her but couldn't be bothered to change it until I knew what else to do. Thank you Minnow =) Bramble: Danke, and I'll work on her either tomorrow or thursday. Tuesday is my uber busy night. lol Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 16:47, October 6, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - I know it says dark tortishell on her page, but this is too dark; I can't see the lineart. Lighten her up a little. Also, do you have a reference that says she had a white paw? It just says tortishell on her page, not tortie and white. (Either way, blend it in more.) Also, the white spot on her tail is the same deal. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 22:06, October 6, 2009 (UTC)

Also, there is still a white pixel on her neck.Minnowclaw 22:54, October 6, 2009 (UTC)

Okay everyone, I'll fix this tomorrow probably. Minnow: I know there is - i haven't edited her yet... :/ Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 16:30, October 7, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I've made the changes but they're not yet showing on my computer. I hope you can all see the new version. Comments? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 19:49, October 8, 2009 (UTC)

Oh, and Bramble... I did it again... that stupid typo file =( please? sorry x Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 20:37, October 8, 2009 (UTC)

Lol Sandy :) Deleted. I love the speckles, they make her look really tortie-like. I don't see anything else. The only thing maybe, maybe is to make her black a touch more like dark brown, as some torties I've seen have dark brown as their background pelt color, and it looks cool. But that's optional. You think it should stay that same, that's fine. --Bramble-san 22:03, October 8, 2009 (UTC)

I took a picture in my head of what it would be if she had a dark brown pelt. I think you should stick to black, but that's just me, this is your image.Minnowclaw 12:05, October 10, 2009 (UTC)

Well, I tried to do a dark brown version bu it messed up all the patches something terrible and I couldn't get it to look right. Sorry Bramble but I think she's going to have to stay black. I'll do another tortie soon with a dark brown pelt. =) Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 17:51, October 10, 2009 (UTC)

That’s a-okay. :) She looks fine black. Comments before approval? --Bramble-san 04:25, October 12, 2009 (UTC)

Approved. --Bramble-san 03:39, October 13, 2009 (UTC)

Dawnstripe- Approved

File:Dawnstripe.png. Light base with lighter stripes? Kill me?-- Darkhallows  My den 04:16, October 8, 2009 (UTC)

This looks great! All I can say is that some of the shading looks more gray than the color of the rest of the fur. It looks strange being so dark, especially on the tail and the hind paw. Try making it lighter, more like the color of the pelt. Icethroat21 20:28, October 8, 2009 (UTC)

I think that the shading looks fine. On a cat like this it might turn orange if you do it differently. Good job Darkhallows.Minnowclaw 12:00, October 10, 2009 (UTC)

I have to agree with Minnow: I see no problems. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 17:56, October 10, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --Bramble-san 04:25, October 12, 2009 (UTC)

None. Approved. --Bramble-san 03:39, October 13, 2009 (UTC)

Oakpaw (A) - Approved

File:Oakpaw (A).PNG Right I'm not sure what to think of this :/  Brambleclaw14 Talk 05:20, September 23, 2009 (UTC)

Let's start with the first thing: shading. The shading on his isn't enough. I have a guide on my page, so you can check that out.-- Darkhallows  My den 05:40, September 23, 2009 (UTC)

is it on your user page?  Brambleclaw14 Talk 05:43, September 23, 2009 (UTC)

Yup! I just put it up there. You don't need to shade in that style, though. It's just what I find easiest.-- Darkhallows  My den 05:54, September 23, 2009 (UTC)

I think the sgading is to dark??  Brambleclaw14 Talk 06:00, September 23, 2009 (UTC)

Right is this good??  Brambleclaw14 Talk 06:18, September 23, 2009 (UTC)

I know whats not right I'm not doing the shadeing right I'm going it Right soon  Brambleclaw14 Talk 16:38, September 23, 2009 (UTC)

Blend all the darker patches more.Minnowclaw 01:14, September 24, 2009 (UTC)

Silly, me! This is oakpaw of Shadowclan right? The darker parts must be shading. My bad. He's very good otherwise, but I'll have something for you when the shading is redone.Minnowclaw 01:19, September 24, 2009 (UTC)

yep he is a Shadowclan cat "_" and they are shading.  Brambleclaw14 Talk 09:51, September 24, 2009 (UTC)

here he is.  Brambleclaw14 Talk 15:38, September 24, 2009 (UTC)

Wait on his page it said he is form the other clan?? but it don't say he as dark patchs? :/  Brambleclaw14 Talk 09:52, September 25, 2009 (UTC)

Not sure what you mean by dark patches, but for the image, add some shading on his back and head and blur the ear pink a bit more.-- Echomist Hear the Echo... 14:54, September 25, 2009 (UTC)

huh? Put shading on his back? the sun is form the back :/ if a should then a will.  Brambleclaw14 Talk 14:59, September 25, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, then, but if the sun's coming from the back, you should probably add some highlights there with the dodge tool. -- Echomist Hear the Echo... 18:39, September 25, 2009 (UTC)

I don't have to make Highlights do I?  Brambleclaw14 Talk 09:12, September 30, 2009 (UTC)

No you don't have to. Sometimes it's better with and sometimes without. Why not give it a try and if you don't like it keep it how it is.Minnowclaw 23:39, September 30, 2009 (UTC)

Right I put in the Highlight but not sure if it worked.... Brambleclaw14 Talk 08:00, October 2, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink needs blurred. Icethroat21Enter at risk 00:08, October 3, 2009 (UTC)

Right.  Brambleclaw14 Talk 04:38, October 3, 2009 (UTC)

He's a tabby, yes? If so then he needs more tabby markings... not just on his back. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 18:50, October 4, 2009 (UTC)

All right sholud he have some on his front as well? and is there a better sort for that?  Brambleclaw14 Talk 06:48, October 5, 2009 (UTC)

He should have them all over. His back, his chest, legs, hind quarters, head, tail. There isn't a specific style that's good, it's up to you but try and vary them a little withn whichever style you choose so you don't just have those long 'y' shapes you currently have. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 16:43, October 5, 2009 (UTC)

Ok I'm going do them soon.  Brambleclaw14 Talk 09:51, October 6, 2009 (UTC)

Ok I like this one XD I try do make tabby things all over. hope it's good.  Brambleclaw14 Talk 08:43, October 7, 2009 (UTC)

Very nice. I love these. :) Just add some slightly more visible ones on his legs, and put shading on his back. Then he's good to go. Awesome job. --Bramble-san 21:56, October 7, 2009 (UTC)

lol....the sun is for his back...I forgot to make the highlights. and if I did shading on his back I would have to make the tabbys again.  Brambleclaw14 Talk 08:51, October 8, 2009 (UTC)

You wouldn't have to make the tabby stripes again, not if you used the burn tool and was careful when you blurred the shading. But I think you should add some shading on the bottom of the chin at least, even if you can't add any other shading on the back. Icethroat21 20:34, October 8, 2009 (UTC)

Yeah I can make a highlight on his back so you can see the sun is from the back, and I could do shading on the chin.  Brambleclaw14 Talk 04:39, October 9, 2009 (UTC)

Ok I've tried to make all the things...:)  Brambleclaw14 Talk 06:17, October 9, 2009 (UTC)

This looks fantastic to me. Comments before approval? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 16:36, October 9, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - There is a pink pixel on his nose; we don't color in the apprentice's noses. Also, the ear pink is too bright for a gray cat. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 19:24, October 9, 2009 (UTC)

It got killed :( so I had to make a new one...Tried to do all the things.  Brambleclaw14 Talk 07:33, October 10, 2009 (UTC)

Nice tabby stripes!Minnowclaw 12:19, October 10, 2009 (UTC)

Repeating; comments before approval? --Bramble-san 04:25, October 12, 2009 (UTC)

If someone comments does the approval thing stat over? I'm a bit er... :)  Brambleclaw14 Talk 07:50, October 12, 2009 (UTC)

If the comment is irrelevant such as 'This looks great' or 'No probems' or 'Change his eye colour from green to blue then he's good' etc then the 24 hours doesn't need to start over, but if the comment is an improvement that means the image needs some work such as changing the ear pink, shading, tabby stripes, shape of patches etc then it will normally be repeated to make sure everyoe has had a chance to comment on the finished product and list anything they have a problem with. For example, my comment here will not have any effect on whether the image is approved once the time limit is over. If someone were to come and say 'Oakpaw's a brown tabby not grey, it says on page * of Rising Storm (okay eg)' then the reference would have to be checked and if necessary the image changed, then the 24 hours would be started again. Phew. There we go. My rambling response =) Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 17:10, October 12, 2009 (UTC)

lol thanks sandy :)  Brambleclaw14 Talk 17:46, October 12, 2009 (UTC)

Yeah, thanks. Bramble glad she didn’t have to type all that. :) Approved. --Bramble-san 03:39, October 13, 2009 (UTC)

Pebble - Approved

File:PebbleToBe.png Um... (searching for something to say! AhhhH!) the best To Be that we have met, really. -- Dawnfeather  talk! 02:45, October 11, 2009 (UTC)

Wow! Maybe blur the top of Pebble more, though. Maybe... :) Great, Dawn. Eveningswift :) 02:47, October 11, 2009 (UTC)

She is blurred to her max everywhere, unless you can point out a certain spot where she isn't :) -- Dawnfeather  talk! 10:23, October 12, 2009 (UTC)

On that not. I can see nothing wrong.Minnowclaw 14:07, October 12, 2009 (UTC)

Neither can I. Comments before approval? --Bramble-san 23:45, October 12, 2009 (UTC)

Two days up for approval?Minnowclaw Enter at own risk... 00:21, October 15, 2009 (UTC)

My apologies. Approved. --Bramble-san 02:16, October 15, 2009 (UTC)

Barley (R) - Approved

File:BarleyLongHairedRogue4.png

This is Barley as a cat in BloodClan, and my first character art. I don't care if it looks great, this is sort of a practice anyways. Anything to improve?--Shaf Girl 03:47, September 27, 2009 (UTC)

It needs shading (the burn tool should be good for that), the black patch on his belly needs to be bigger, as there needs to be a balance between the black and white, and his eye needs a white pixel. Also, his ear pink needs to be blurred. Right now, it looks circular, and it needs to look triangular-ish, like the shape of the ear. Otherwise this it good for your first charart! Icethroat21Enter at risk 13:28, September 27, 2009 (UTC)

Barley is long furred.Minnowclaw 14:30, September 27, 2009 (UTC)

You sure? It just says he's a black and white cat. I'll make the changes, though.--Shaf Girl 20:25, September 27, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded.--Shaf Girl 21:02, September 27, 2009 (UTC)

It's not long haired and yes i'm sure he's long haired. Ravenpaw is a short haired and if you look at any of the mangas where they are shown together, Barley has longer, thicker fur.Minnowclaw 23:46, September 28, 2009 (UTC)

To change him to long haired, you have to change blanks. Icethroat21Enter at risk 01:04, September 29, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Barley is now a longhair.--Shaf Girl 03:40, September 29, 2009 (UTC)

Better. Try to make the patches more irregular.Minnowclaw 23:30, September 30, 2009 (UTC)

What do you mean?--Shaf Girl 02:23, October 2, 2009 (UTC)

Try to make the patches more odd a to smooth.  Brambleclaw14 Talk 12:42, October 2, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the shading. --Rainwhisker09 21:27, October 3, 2009 (UTC)

The shading needs to be thicker and only in the places where there would be shadows - take a look at the image and actually think about where your shading needs to be. At the moment it's just hugging the lineart all the way around with the effect that it just looks like a second lineart. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 13:37, October 4, 2009 (UTC)

This hasn't been touched in a week.Minnowclaw 12:15, October 10, 2009 (UTC)

lol forget what I said XD  Brambleclaw14 Talk 18:14, October 10, 2009 (UTC)

I'm getting to it, don't worry. I'm very busy!--Shaf Girl 19:11, October 10, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded.--Shaf Girl 19:34, October 10, 2009 (UTC)

Take a look at some other patched cats like Rowanstar on how to do the patches.Minnowclaw 23:22, October 10, 2009 (UTC)

Err... Minnowclaw, Rowanstar's image was declined. --Hallow's Eve09 14:51, October 11, 2009 (UTC)

I looked at Brightheart's patches.--Shaf Girl 17:22, October 11, 2009 (UTC)

Blackclaw: I typed the wrong this. Shafgirl: They are more wigly. (Terible word).--Minnowclaw 00:34, October 12, 2009 (UTC)

The shading is too dark. Otherwise, he's not bad at all :). Sparrowsong 01:45, October 14, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I made the patches a bit more "wigly" and the shading lighter.--Shaf Girl 04:22, October 14, 2009 (UTC)

I can see nothing wrong with this. Wonderful job, Shaf. Comments before approval in 24 hours? GB57 17:27, October 17, 2009 (UTC)

Approved Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 16:28, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

Rushtail(elder) Approved

File:Rushtail.elder.png erm....yeah-- ☆Pebble☆ X3 03:09, October 4, 2009 (UTC)

He's great! But the tail shading needs to be blurred into the tail, and on his haunch, there is a huge spot of lighter color. HAWKFIRE98 13:16, October 4, 2009 (UTC)

This is a good start, but it needs blurred a lot. Blur the highlights and different colors, and even blur the ear pink. I'd bring the ear pink to the middle of the ear and then blur it. Otherwise, great job Bracken! Icethroat21 13:34, October 4, 2009 (UTC)

Blur, and maybe smudge a litle if the bluring dosen't workMinnowclaw 22:56, October 6, 2009 (UTC)

I do have photoshop hurhur *reuploaded*-- ☆Pebble☆ X3 00:49, October 11, 2009 (UTC)

This looks much better, nice job! The ear pink is a strange triangle though... look at some other elder images and try to copy the way the ear pink is done. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 11:13, October 11, 2009 (UTC)

I echo Sandy. If it helps the ear pink should look like a curved triangle. Also, the shading and highlights are soooooooooooo good now.Minnowclaw 12:41, October 11, 2009 (UTC)

photoshop pwns! x3 re uploaded-- ☆Pebble☆ 

X3 16:38, October 11, 2009 (UTC)

The ear punk is to bright pink.--Minnowclaw 00:30, October 12, 2009 (UTC)

Blug! Don't take any notice to my past question. I was too tired to be making scince. What I ment to say was the ear pink (not punk) is too bright.Minnowclaw 14:12, October 12, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded-- ☆Pebble☆ X3 04:48, October 17, 2009 (UTC)

This is one of the best pics I've seen all week. 24 hours starting now. GB57 17:28, October 17, 2009 (UTC)

Approved. --Bramble-san 17:55, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

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