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Crowfeather- Approved

[[File:Crowfeather.png]] [IMAGE RELOCATED]

Many might remember the first image I tried out when I first joined. I did Crowfeather along with Squirrelflight. Though Squirrelflight was made around the same time and approved, I never got around to edit poor Crowfeather. Since I finally have time on my hands I've reuploaded him. I remembered Kitsu saying I needed to re-add the line art back to him. So here's Crowfeather with the lineart back again and the same coloring. Comment please :) -- Shim-ShimShimmering Crystals 06:39, 8 November 2008 (UTC)

That's really good! I couldn't do better than that! >_< --Leopardstar's Ultimate fan 13:46, 8 November 2008 (UTC)

The shading on his back looks... awkward. Also, the pink part of his ear looks like a perfume bottle instead of a triangle. GB 16:08, 8 November 2008 (UTC)

Yeah I remembered Kitsu saying something about it too. Well now here's the update version. I redid his ear and decided on my new way with shading. -- Shim-ShimShimmering Crystals 17:34, 9 November 2008 (UTC)

Okay, now he looks like someone stuck their hands in like, five different types of black paint, and rubbed their hands all over him. He needs to be one color, with shading. The ear looks better, though. GB 17:54, 9 November 2008 (UTC)

Actually, GB, with some blending his hindquarter will be wonderfully shaded and look nicely 3D. Now, Shim, you just need to get the head and forequarters in the same way and blend everything together. The ear... I would love to see less pink because dark furred cats have dark skin. And the pink nose... Please do away with it, as it looks... rather out of place. Great improvements so far, I look forward to seeing you take it the rest of the way.  Kitsufox  Fox's Den 15:57, 10 November 2008 (UTC)
Got it Kitsu. Here's the new uploaded version of Crowfeather. I did all what you said, but I think I took out too much pink. Comments please ^_^ -- Shim-ShimShimmering Crystals 00:29, 12 November 2008 (UTC)
Personally, I think more pink can come out. I hate bright pink ears. They look terribly unnatural. Google some black cat pictures and you'll see what I mean. The hindleg looks great, now blend some more on the forequarters, try and get a more defined shoulder going on, and add shading to the head. You're doing great.  Kitsufox  Fox's Den 03:49, 12 November 2008 (UTC)
Sure thing. Just to let everyone know I shall probably be away for about a week or two. Though a week is the least amount of time I'd give. So if this gets moved I under stand. Just to inform everyone.-- Shim-ShimShimmering Crystals 02:00, 14 November 2008 (UTC)
I'll be leaving this one, just so that no one starts their own version of him. This one is darn-near approved, and I'd have to have the work duplicated.  Kitsufox  Fox's Den 16:57, 17 November 2008 (UTC)
I'm back! And thank you so much Kitsu for holding Crowfeather. Well here's his updated version. I love how much he has improved.-- ShimmerCrytals 03:22, 26 November 2008 (UTC)
Well no one has said anything so I decided to just update Crowfeather some myself.-- ShimmerCrystals 19:58, 28 January 2009 (UTC)
I like the image, but it looks smudged together and could be blended to take away the smudges. --MallinoisThe Puppy's Crib The Puppy then barked -Ui! 22:04, 28 February 2009 (UTC)
I can't blend him anymore believe me I tried, he just keeps looking the same over and over again. Kitsu did say it gave him that 3D effect though. I'll see what I can do tomorrow when I get out of training.-- ♪Shimmer 02:36, 10 March 2009 (UTC)
I think that the eye is a few shades too dark. Maybe lighten it up a little, without becoming ice blue, or anywhere near it. (Crowfeather must have absoulutely NO similarities to hawkfrost!) Dawnfeather 08:36, 1 April 2009 (UTC)


Personally I think this is really starting to look good. There are a few tiny things I've picked up though. Firstly, on the ear there is an area where it has spilled onto the black lineart and there is actually colour outside of the outline as well. Secondly, the highlighting above the eye needs to be blended a tiny bit more if possible. The eye looks really good in my opinion - I like the different shades you've put in.--Sandy Leader's Den 14:14, 7 April 2009 (UTC)

Finally some free time from test! Anyway UPDATED!!!! Now here's my new version of Crowfeather. I readded the lineart so it wouldn't look that way. I decided not to change the eye. I like doing it that way, it makes my pictures different from others. I also made him transparent now so there's no white background.-- ♪Shimmer 01:31, 24 April 2009 (UTC)

Nice! The one thing I see is that, where the belly/neck shading ends, it could be blended more. Otherwise, wonderful. I hope GB accepts this. --DarkHallows Lair 02:37, 24 April 2009 (UTC)

Much better. Nice work Shim. I think this is ready for approval; it's definitely up to the standard of the other approved images--Sandy Leader's Den 17:11, 24 April 2009 (UTC)

Voletooth - Approved

[[File:Voletooth2.PNG|left]] [IMAGE RELOCATED] Okay, I tried an image of Voletooth. Constructive critisism welcome :)--Sandstar12 21:41, 8 November 2008 (UTC)

This brown has a slight tan tinge to it. Also, there's something in the background that looks like the shading of a white cat. GB 00:17, 9 November 2008 (UTC)

I sorted the background and darkened his colour a bit. --Sandstar12 12:02, 9 November 2008 (UTC)

That's really good! And reallistic! --:Leopardstar's Ultimate Fan 15:41, 9 November 2008 (UTC)

Thank you Leopardheart--Sandstar12 15:48, 9 November 2008 (UTC)

Hm... you could also touch up the pink part of the ear a bit. GB 16:29, 9 November 2008 (UTC)


Okay, I increased the pink colour--Sandstar12 16:48, 9 November 2008 (UTC)

The color was fine; it's the fact that the ear looks like you just stuck it on and blended. It needs to be more of a triangle shape. GB 17:04, 9 November 2008 (UTC)

Okay, how about now?--Sandstar12 18:46, 11 November 2008 (UTC)

It's a good start, but there's still some work to do. The shading needs to be completed (why none on the muzzle?) and the shoulder needs some definition. The ear pink needs some blending, and the shade could be toned down (really bright pink never looks quite right).  Kitsufox  Fox's Den 17:48, 12 November 2008 (UTC)

I sorted the ear, added some shading around the muzzle and shoulder areas as well as some highlights on the flank and middle chest area. I also blended this shading more thoroughly. --Sandy 19:02, 13 November 2008 (UTC)

I think its a beautiful pic, Sandy. The shading really gives it a 3D touch and blend. --Bramble Bramble's Realm 19:19, 16 November 2008 (UTC)

Thanks Bramble!--Sandy 20:35, 16 November 2008 (UTC)

Anything else needs doing?--Sandy 21:12, 20 November 2008 (UTC)

It's looking really good, but I have a few things for you. The shoulder/neck shading is a little weird... I think because there's no shading creating any roundness for the head. The tummy/elbow/knee zone is pretty much unshaded and could use some. And the shading could all use a touch more blending, as there are a number of points where things look like markings rather than shading.  Kitsufox  Fox's Den 16:33, 25 November 2008 (UTC)

Okay, I added some shading around the head and on the tummy/knee area. I also blended all the shading more thoroughly--Sandy 17:37, 25 November 2008 (UTC)


Looks Great! -- Mallinois 20:36, 21 December 2008 (UTC)

Yes! It finally uploaded - I edited the eye to add a highlight :) --Sandy Leader's Den 20:11, 9 February 2009 (UTC)



Blend it a bit more and mabye add highlights, just a tiny bit, but if highlights destroy the image, just keep it without. --MallinoisThe Puppy's Crib The Puppy then barked -Ui! 22:06, 28 February 2009 (UTC)

I blended again and have added a highlight down the shoulders and back. The blending is as much as it will go--Sandy Leader's Den 20:41, 6 March 2009 (UTC)

I noticed some blurry outline whilst looking through my images and have fixed that --Sandy Leader's Den 08:13, 3 April 2009 (UTC)


The shading down his side on his back looks... I don't know,... bumpy? Yeah, I know cats aren't exactly perfetly smooth, but it looks as if his side is covered with various tumors!  Dawnfeather  23:12, 9 April 2009 (UTC)

whoa! Thanks for pointing that out! Is this any better? I might increase the shading now because some of seems to have been lost with the blending...--Sandy Leader's Den 10:05, 10 April 2009 (UTC)

Okay. Done --Sandy Leader's Den 10:10, 10 April 2009 (UTC)

There seems to be a splotch on the top of the back leg, and lack of shading in the middle of the tummy/chest. Other than that, it's wonderful. Good work, Sandy.  Dawnfeather  08:11, 13 April 2009 (UTC)

Actually no. I take back what I said a few hours ago. It looks good NOW.  Dawnfeather 

Thanks Dawnfeather. Is there anything else to be done? --Sandy Leader's Den 17:10, 23 April 2009 (UTC)

I think this is ready for approval.  Dawnfeather  23:24, 24 April 2009 (UTC)


Voletooth.warrior

He needed tabby stripes so here he is :) Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 09:41, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

I got nothing. :) Any other suggestions? --Bramble My Realm 12:16, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

Maybe blend the tabby stripes a little more and sorry for my inactivity i went camping for 3 days. --Stonestar 13:07, 27 August 2009 (UTC)Stonestar

Reuploaded Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 16:25, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

Suggestions before approval? --Bramble My Realm 21:05, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

none. Approved. I hope I archive this right... lol Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 10:42, 29 August 2009 (UTC)

Feathertail - Approved

[[File:Feathertail.gif|left]] [IMAGE RELOCATED] Alright, I fixed the pic. Kitsu, I buffed the shading a bit to make it look more 3-d. It is better now? (Sorry about the delay, I am working on Poppyfrost, my first tortie, and having trouble.) FxC 22:45, 22 November 2008 (UTC)

What happened to the ear and tail?--Redflare 22:48, 22 November 2008 (UTC)


The poor ear..the poor tail! What did you do to them? Any way, some more blended shading and it would look good. Fix the ear and tail. User:Mallinois Coyote=background:Black>Coyote The Doghouse 01:57, 23 November 2008 (UTC)

Sorry. I am on my grandparents computer, so using Photobie. I fixed the lineart, at the expense of the transparent background. The background will be brought back as soon as I get back on my own laptop. FxC 15:58, 23 November 2008 (UTC)

The outline's gone really weird in places... If you have GIMP or Photoshop, I recomend just copying the black lineart out of a clean version of the blank, and then pasting it in over the top as it's own later ;) This is acctually a trick I use all the time to keep my lineart clean. Some shading on the head and underside would be nice.  Kitsufox  Fox's Den 16:42, 25 November 2008 (UTC)


Here s the new version. I pasted the blank and it looks great. As for the shading, I did a bit on the muzzle, as well as the right foreleg. I personally am proud of the improvements. :D Kitsu, does it need a bit more shading in the "tummy" area? I was debating on that. FxC 15:25, 30 November 2008 (UTC)

The blue eyes look extremely cloudy and dark. GB39 15:45, 30 November 2008 (UTC)

Well, I will lighten them up a bit, but I always envisioned Silver and Feather as having mysterious, hazy blue eyes a bit like Heathertail. FxC 23:20, 2 December 2008 (UTC)


This looks pretty clase to approval, just alittle use of the lighten tool and it'll work. Good luck with Poppyfrost!Mallinois The Doghouse 20:29, 13 December 2008 (UTC)



Use the lighten tool on the tail and a bit in the back, and try to even out the colors. Some places are light, and some are dark. --MallinoisThe Puppy's Crib The Puppy then barked -Ui! 22:09, 28 February 2009 (UTC)

The Eye is... extremely dark. Lighten it up a bit!!! --MUMBLE785 20:49, 16 March 2009 (UTC)

Doesn't she have long hair? And a river blue eye? ..::Applestar4904 16:19, 31 March 2009 (UTC)


I like it! But she looks to... misty? Like sort of hazy, and I think you might want to darken it a little bit. --Darkhallows 04:49, 11 April 2009 (UTC)

Actually, I think this looks fairly nice. Are there any other comments before this is approved? GB57 05:41, 19 April 2009 (UTC)


It looks good, except for that the ye looks black, and the blue needs to show in the eye. -- Mallinois  Fluffy Power 20:07, 20 April 2009 (UTC)

The onlt thing I think needs doing before approval is to make the eye a slightly lighter blue so the colour can be seen. This is really good though FxC and should be approved soon --Sandy Leader's Den 17:12, 23 April 2009 (UTC)

Approving-the eyes are just fine. GB57 00:20, 1 May 2009 (UTC)



Feathertail.warrior

Hey Hawkfire here! I just got finished with her. (really sorry Shimmer!) I fixed her ear pink and her eye, and lightened the shading on her tail. I can't get the old pic of the oringinal Feathertail! I accidently uploaded it with the same name. Somebody help please. Hawkey Ready for action 13:34, 30 August 2009 (UTC)

The ear needs to be blended more.--Stonestar 13:35, 30 August 2009 (UTC)Stonestar

Something looks funky about the way it was blended- I mean from the original, not what you did. I'm not sure if it's because the lines got smudged in or they just had a weird shading style, but I think you should go over the shading a bit and then reblur it.Same for the tabby markings, they look a bit strange, so maybe if you went over them in the same color then blurred them again that would work. --♫ insaneular ♫ 15:09, 30 August 2009 (UTC)

Very good, but I believe Feathertail should be long-haired. It's because a. she's RiverClan; they generally have thick fur and b. she was said to have a feathery/fluffy tail.  Sparrowsong  Madly Blooming Princess 17:57, 30 August 2009 (UTC)

Insanular, umm...wow I am not sure I can do all of that. The tabby stripes look amazing and the shading is great to me. I will change her to a long hair, even tho I never imagined her that way. Silverstream is short hair, and she's from RiverClan. If I did have to change her to long-hair, I would have to redo the whole image. Do you really want me to do that? Hawkey Ready for action 19:49, 30 August 2009 (UTC)


I could change her to a long-hair if you want, with oly minor edits..-- Darkhallows  Lair 20:22, 30 August 2009 (UTC)

You wont exactly have to redo her all the way. The technique I use is past the image in paint and color the lineart white. Then take the lineart of the long hair and past it over, with white being transparent and you just have to remove the eye out of the other image. The only problem is you will have to add more coloring to the tail area and the chest.-- Shim-ShimNewGladiator! 20:27, 30 August 2009 (UTC)

Shady that would be very kind of you! Now all I have to do is mess with the ear pink. :)Thanks so much! Hawkey Ready for action 21:46, September 1, 2009 (UTC) [[file:feti.png]] You may need to work on the tail but here.-- Darkhallows  Lair 07:04, September 4, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks so much! She's gorgeous! I will fix the shading on the tail and blend the ear pink, then she should be good to go!! Hawkey Ready for action 23:23, September 4, 2009 (UTC)

It needs to be done soon, because this has surpassed Tweak Week and been up for more than a week. If it isn't worked on soon, I'll have to take it down. --Bramble My Realm 01:33, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

In the transition between shorthair and longhair, it looks like some of the lineart on the stomach lost its double pixel, so it looks thinner than the rest. Fix that, the shading on the tail, and blend the ear pink, and it will look great. Icethroat21Enter at risk 15:32, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

Ooh sorry! I am working on her right now. Hawkey Ready for action 20:22, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

Okay how does this look? Hawkey Ready for action 22:49, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - There's a strip of light on the tail, and the whole body needs more shading. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 21:31, September 15, 2009 (UTC)

I've taken care of it. --Bramble My Realm 21:43, September 20, 2009 (UTC)

Thistleclaw - Approved

[[File:Thistleclaw.png|left]] [IMAGE RELOCATED] Nobody seems to talk about him very much. I felt bad for Thistle, so i thought I'd color him. --Bramble Bramble's Realm 05:11, 30 November 2008 (UTC)

I love this image - great job--Sandy 15:11, 30 November 2008 (UTC)

Thanks Sandy! --Bramble Bramble's Realm 16:44, 30 November 2008 (UTC)

Well, I only see a few spots that might need improvement. The spot around the ear is an unnatural circle, as well as the line that defines the light grey from the dark grey on the left foreleg. Maybe the shading could be amped up a bit. And some highlights on the forelegs would be nice. Otherwise, this is beautiful, Bramble. FxC 23:20, 2 December 2008 (UTC)


I'll see about the highlights and amping the shading, but I don't know what you mean about an unnatural circle. --Bramble Bramble's Realm 23:36, 3 December 2008 (UTC)


I think FxC means the ear's ending has an unnatural curve...--Mallinois Woof! DoggieDish 17:02, 19 December 2008 (UTC)

Wow. O.O --Mumble785 14:40, 23 December 2008 (UTC)



I think it looks good, just the ear has an odd curved ending to where it blends into the pelt. --MallinoisThe Puppy's Crib The Puppy then howled bravely -Ui! 22:18, 28 February 2009 (UTC)

Yeah I agree. I think that you could make the shape of the tranistions between the colours seem more random, if that makes absoulutely any sense! Not just on the ear, but on the muzzle and the tail, and it you want to be ridiculously fussy, the foreleg as well. Overall, though, looking good! The shading and blending is perfect! Dawnfeather I am of the Forest - I am of the Dawn's Radiance 06:53, 9 April 2009 (UTC)

To be honest, I think this is ready. Anything else that needs to be worked on before approval? GB57 05:47, 19 April 2009 (UTC)

No, it's good now. Actually, it's a lot better than a few of the ones that were approved a long time previously. Oh well, at least we have GB approving some and cleaniong up the page a bit now. Aprrove it!  Dawnfeather  05:38, 22 April 2009 (UTC)

III LIVE!!! Bramble has returned! XP I know this is close to being approved, thanks Dawnfeather and GB, but I tweaked the ear as Mallinois suggested and the fur around the foreleg and I think it looks better.

T'will be more active now that this page is starting to get cleaned up. --Bramble Bramble's Realm 02:01, 23 April 2009 (UTC)

This should be approved. Great work Bramble!--Sandy Leader's Den 10:36, 25 April 2009 (UTC)

Applekit - Approved

Applefur.kit

Okay, I know there are a lot of images up for approval right now, but I got bored waiting for progress on the ones I already have up and so I started work on some others. Well, here's Applekit (sc)--SandyLeader's Den 17:39, 29 December 2008 (UTC)



It's adowable!!!!!!! One thing I say though is that it needs to be darker, as Applekit is dark ginger. Other than that, it's cute(Mallinois like cute :) --Mallinois 19:32, 30 December 2008 (UTC)


Better now? --Sandy Leader's Den 15:27, 2 January 2009 (UTC)

[And thanks Mallinois :)]--Sandy Leader's Den 15:29, 2 January 2009 (UTC)


Much better. She looks like a wittle apple! I guess thatr's why they named her Applekit. --Mallinois 16:49, 2 January 2009 (UTC)

Is there anything else anyone thinks I need to do with this image at the moment?--Sandy Leader's Den 18:35, 1 February 2009 (UTC)

I found that she still needs to be darker, and mabye add tiny tabby markings... --Mallinois B e w a r e o f F l u f f y 22:17, 4 March 2009 (UTC)

Okay, I've made her darker. I'm not sure about the tabby markings but I'll work on it -Sandy Leader's Den 20:26, 6 March 2009 (UTC)

I think she willl need tabby markings, but i don't know how much they have to stand out. Try to make them not too much darker than the base fur colour, but still dark enough that yo;u can see them easily.  Dawnfeather  23:19, 13 April 2009 (UTC)

She doesn't need the tabby markings. Any other comments before I approve this image? GB57 05:54, 19 April 2009 (UTC)


Again, I like this one. I think you should approve it. --DarkHallows Lair 07:01, 20 April 2009 (UTC)

Brownpaw-Approved

File:Brownpaw.png


I have no idea if this is any good, I almost never color like this. But whatever... I felt kind of bad that he was around for five books and was never made a warrior, and then he poofed.--Darkhallows 10:55, 2 March 2009 (UTC)

I think it's pretty good! I do feel sorry for Brownpaw, and any other cat that never gets to become a warrior. Can I make a suggestion? I think you should add some more smaller stripes on his back and hind leg. Just a suggestion, though! --Goldencloud 03:39, 5 March 2009 (UTC)


The thing is I added that little dark patch on his hindleg, to sort of complete the leg, so stripes would be awkward looking, I can add more on the back though. Darkhallows 05:46, 5 March 2009 (UTC)


You need to blend the stripes. --Mallinois B e w a r e o f F l u f f y 22:19, 5 March 2009 (UTC)

Better? Darkhallows 01:44, 6 March 2009 (UTC)

No one was commenting, so I updated it myself. Darkhallows 08:09, 10 April 2009 (UTC)

I really like it, but the stripe shapes seem unnatural for a cat. (Keep in mind that i have not met many cats in my life, even if i have had a lot of experience with the ones i do know.)  Dawnfeather  08:21, 13 April 2009 (UTC)


Changed to the kind of stripes that others have. Are they better?--Darkhallows 10:21, 14 April 2009 (UTC)

YES I love them!  Dawnfeather  23:26, 14 April 2009 (UTC)


Thank you! --DarkHallows Lair 07:52, 18 April 2009 (UTC)


There is a lack of tabby markings at the top of the front foreleg -- Dawnfeather  09:59, 27 April 2009 (UTC)


Fixed. --DarkHallows Lair 10:22, 30 April 2009 (UTC)


(Tweak Week)

File:Brownpaw.apprentice.png

I didn't really plan on doing the whole image again, but the old one was such a mess that I gave up and redid it. I've gotten better since then any way... I hope he looks alright.-- Darkhallows  Lair 06:07, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

He's beautiful, or should I say, handsome. I love the subtle shading, and the markings are terrific. -- Dawnfeather  talk! 06:13, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

Very handsome. The marking across his eye make him look sort of feminine, though. Take that out, and it should be good. --Bramble My Realm 12:17, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

He looks very nice, the markings are really good and the shading is perfect. -- ღ♥Peacesong♥ღ  Peacesong's Talk 17:48, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

Wow, he looks great. Can you make the ear pink more central and triangular though? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 19:48, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

Thanks! I got rid of the eye mark (which did make him look like a girl) and I think the ear pink is better. Heh, as fun as tweak week is I can't wait to put up my Twist image... well I have a couple more images to do before then, I really can't stand my Whitetail or Nettleclaw.-- Darkhallows  Lair 22:03, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

blur the ear pink, other than that he looks great.--Yai-Girl 16:14, 28 August 2009 (UTC) Yai-Girl

Done.-- Darkhallows  Lair 02:42, 31 August 2009 (UTC)

Suggestions before approval? --Bramble My Realm 02:47, 31 August 2009 (UTC)

None, approved. --Bramble My Realm 11:42, 1 September 2009 (UTC)

Heathertail (Approved)

[[File:HeathertailPixel.gif]] [IMAGE RELOCATED] I hope this is acceptable for character art, this is the first one of these I've done. I did this on Photoshop Elements 6, with my mouse. Do you guys think she's too dark? She's described as a light brown tabby, and to me she looks light brown. Anything that you say needs fixed I will be happy to fix! I'm sorry if this sounds like a deviantART comment that's what I'm used to writing. :) --Goldencloud 03:39, 5 March 2009 (UTC)

EDIT1 - I lightened her up a bit, but I tried to keep the stripes a little bit darker. And I added the stripes on the back of her neck. Thank you for the advice! --Goldencloud 00:22, 6 March 2009 (UTC)
EDIT2 - Completely redid her fur. I tried to "randomize" the stripes and make them more squiggly sort of, and made her even lighter. If the stripes are still "cartoony" or look like tatoos, I'm going to need more specific help. :) --Goldencloud 22:13, 19 March 2009 (UTC)


First off, welcome to Charart. Onto the image, I like it. I would make her a little lighter though. Darkhallows 05:39, 5 March 2009 (UTC)

Thank you! And done! --Goldencloud 02:09, 9 March 2009 (UTC)


omG, I love it! --MUMBLE785 18:54, 7 March 2009 (UTC)

Thanks! --Goldencloud 02:09, 9 March 2009 (UTC)


As much as this is loved, her tabby markings look like tatoos, especially the one coming from her eye. --Mallinois F l u f f y is W a t c h i n g . . . 23:37, 8 March 2009 (UTC)

I'm not quite sure what you're talking about. How can I fix it? --Goldencloud 02:09, 9 March 2009 (UTC)
I personally like that...Darkhallows 04:30, 9 March 2009 (UTC)

OooLala! Very nice! I did at first expect her to look a little for of a golden colour like in the cats of the clans but this is really nice. I just hope that if they approve of this picture that they won't expect the rest of us to make ours look that good. (that's sorta a compliment)--Thornpathtogehodou 05:42, 10 March 2009 (UTC)



This really has issues. The tabby markings are WAY too cartoony, and they still look like a henna artist did them. The image also looks in need of a lighter color, as Heathertail is light brown. --Mallinois F l u f f y i s W a t c h i n g 00:35, 13 March 2009 (UTC)

I can't fix it until I know how to. Okay, they look cartoony. How do I make them look more realistic? And she IS light brown. --Goldencloud 21:12, 19 March 2009 (UTC)

I don't think the tabby markings are "cartoony," but they do kinda look like tatoos. Maybe try to blend them more, and get rid of the one coming from the eye. That should make it look better. EDIT~ I did it again! What is up with me and my timesignatures? Gosh!!! --MUMBLE785 20:59, 17 March 2009 (UTC)

Okay, I'll try that. Don't worry about the timesignature thing, I forget all the time! --Goldencloud 21:12, 19 March 2009 (UTC)

Really pretty ^^. --DarkHallows Lair 03:45, 22 April 2009 (UTC)

I actually really like this and you've obviously worked hard to get it to this standard.--Sandy Leader's Den 12:36, 25 April 2009 (UTC)

Hollyleaf-Approved

[[File:Hollyleaf.PNG]] [IMAGE RELOCATED]


I think I can put up another cat, since I'm not working on any, and the page is down from 54 sections to 36, so it's less crowded. This is my only pixel up right now, so It has some concentrated work into it. Critisism accepted greatly. -- Mallinois  Dog Lingo 22:21, 23 April 2009 (UTC)

It's beautiful! --brambleberry 16:19, 24 April 2009 (UTC)Brambleberry

It is good but perhaps you could increase the shading on the belly and forelegs as it's not immediately obvious there is any at all-Sandy Leader's Den 17:24, 24 April 2009 (UTC)

The pink on the ear only covers half the ear, and there needs to be some extra shading behind the shoulders. 1000 million trillion times better than my attempt though!  Dawnfeather  11:47, 27 April 2009 (UTC)


Added more ear pink and amped up shading. -- Mallinois  Fluffy's Territory 12:43, 2 May 2009 (UTC)

Mallinois, this is great. Any more comments before this goes up? GB57 14:24, 2 May 2009 (UTC)

You could probably amp up the shading a little bit more. Try a few highlights. I'm not sure how they would work, but its worth a try.  Dawnfeather  07:25, 3 May 2009 (UTC)

Mousefur - Approved

[[File:Mousefure.png|left]] [IMAGE RELOCATED] I know this is my second one this weekend, but I thought I may as well get in here and do Mousefur while I can. I like her much better than my Hollyleaf. I wasn't sure of the colour of her eyes, so I just did them amber. Constructive critism would be very much appreciated. ( How do I/ can I offically join the project as a warrior?) Dawnfeather 02:19, 28 March 2009 (UTC)

Make her more realistic in her colors. She looks either like she was a technicolor cat once, or a robot colored her. Try more blending where the colors change into shading and highlights. (Mumble785, again. Still lazy...) --68.102.111.72 19:23, 29 March 2009 (UTC)


REUPLOADED I wanted to do more, make her a bit darker, blend a bit more, ex. , but GIMP is throwing a fit. Opacity is either 100% or 0%. However, I did the best I can for the moment, and I shall try and update her as much as I can until GIMP is a bit more... cooperative. Does anyone know why or how it is doing this? Or how to fix it? Dawnfeather 05:28, 30 March 2009 (UTC)

I don't know how to fix Gimp, but I like this image. The colour is great - very 'dusky brown' and I can see the shading coming along nicely. When you do eget GIMP working again I would just suggest blending it more to create a smoother transition betweeen the colours. --Sandy Leader's Den 19:03, 31 March 2009 (UTC)

Um, I know this is a stupid question, but how do you blend on GIMP? Whenever I try it comes up with a little symol for the mouse which instead of just having the blend symbol on it, also has a little circle with a dash through it, telling me I CAN'T blend. Dawnfeather 08:17, 2 April 2009 (UTC)

Okay, I wouldn't know because I don't have GIMP but someone recommended www.pixlr.com earlier on this page so you could try that. --Sandy Leader's Den 14:42, 7 April 2009 (UTC)


Use the blur tool (the one that looks like a water droplet). --DarkHallows Lair 02:59, 24 April 2009 (UTC)

I've already tried that...  Dawnfeather  08:47, 24 April 2009 (UTC)

Okay, I went to pixlr and I actually made it a bit better, or at least that's what I think. I could probably make it smoother again if i spend some more time, but I can't right now.  Dawnfeather  09:16, 24 April 2009 (UTC)

Okay, i've done some more.  Dawnfeather  00:04, 25 April 2009 (UTC)


You may have had it set to 'Sharpen' (in your GIMP). It looks better, but the outline is smudged in some places. --DarkHallows Lair 04:51, 25 April 2009 (UTC)


I've given up on GIMP, and am now using pixlr, because unlike GIMP, it does not hate me! I cleaned up the line art. I probably blended some more as well earlier today, but i'm not sure. Anything else?  Dawnfeather  09:42, 25 April 2009 (UTC)

I really like this Dawnfeather. It looks a lot better than before. Good work! --Sandy Leader's Den 10:44, 25 April 2009 (UTC)

Thanks Sandstar. Anything I can work on?  Dawnfeather  06:37, 27 April 2009 (UTC)

Approved. Great work, Dawnfeather :). Bramble, don't put this up yet, because I still don't know how we're doing the whole stage-of-life thing. This would be her Warriors pic. GB57 15:25, 2 May 2009 (UTC)


Wow GB! Thanks.  Dawnfeather  09:13, 3 May 2009 (UTC)

GB, do you want me to archive this and just not add it on her article? Or just leave it here? --Bramble Bramble's Realm 12:23, 3 May 2009 (UTC)

Aren't we going to put all of the cat's stages of life in their profile?  Dawnfeather  10:38, 4 May 2009 (UTC)


Yes, we just don't know how exactly we're going to do that yet. We'll probably discuss it when we've gotten our new leader. --Bramble Bramble's Realm 21:10, 4 May 2009 (UTC)


(Tweak Week)

[[File:Mousefurwarrior.png]](NAAAAAHHRRR! The pic won't show, so i deleted it. Some help please)

The thing isn't letting me upload it right now, and it wouldn't an hour ago either. I was just wondering, how many tweak week images can be up on the page at once? Sorreltail and Tawnypelt also have to be uploaded sometime, and I will probably edit Foxpaw and Owlpaw too. -- Dawnfeather  talk! 07:27, 27 August 2009 (UTC)


I completely re-did her beause editing her wasn't working well. At all. -- Dawnfeather  talk! 10:58, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

I think two at once should be adequate, as some users don't have images they want to redo. She looks beautiful. I don't have any suggestions for more. --Bramble My Realm 12:11, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

All I can see is that a little more blending would help as it's little smudgy. Looks great though! Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 16:30, 27 August 2009 (UTC)

She looks really good, no suggestions, like Bramble said. -- ღ♥Peacesong♥ღ  Peacesong's Talk 17:49, 27 August 2009 (UTC)


Sorry Sandy, but I can't blend her anymore. It has no effet because she has been bllended to her limit. -- Dawnfeather  talk! 00:04, 29 August 2009 (UTC)

lol. No problemo Dawn. In that case: suggestions before approval? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 10:29, 29 August 2009 (UTC)

Whitetail- Approved

[[File:Whitetail.png]] [IMAGE RELOCATED] I finally got Spiderleg and Brownpaw accepted, so here's Whitetail. --DarkHallows Lair 00:14, 7 May 2009 (UTC)

I'm seriously shocked at how people keep uploading these almost-ready-to-be-approved images. The only problem is the nose; it needs to be black instead of white. GB57 00:31, 7 May 2009 (UTC)


Thank you GB! I changed the nose to black. Anything else you see wrong with her?--DarkHallows Lair 02:44, 7 May 2009 (UTC)

Nope, that's why I approved her :). GB57 02:56, 7 May 2009 (UTC)


Thank you again GB!--DarkHallows Lair 04:40, 7 May 2009 (UTC)

Spiderleg-Approved

[[File:Spiderleg.PNG]] [IMAGE RELOCATED]User: Darkhallows I was bored, so I decided to do some art.



The coding was wrong. I fixed it. --MallinoisHimatsu's Howl 23:12, 27 January 2009 (UTC)


The image is blotchy, there's no shading, and it has blotches of white. The brown belly needs blending into the pelt. The eye also looks wierd. --MallinoisHimatsu'sHowl 23:15, 27 January 2009 (UTC)

I worked with it, is it better? user: Darkhallows

The brown belly is perfect, but the ears look unatural almost white? Make them a different pink but blur them because how black cats' ears are. Look at a few pictures for reference.-- ShimmerCrystals 02:56, 28 January 2009 (UTC)


Okay, I fixed the ear. I wanted to point out this is my first time with the art and I'd like to join or whatever.user: Darkhallows

I really like the belly. But the eyes look like he had too much coffee, and there's something about the ears... GB57 05:50, 1 February 2009 (UTC)

He took my advice at looking at pictures of black cats. Good, but you didn't have to add the extra hair on the ears. You could just blend the pink in more and smudge black around it giving the fur over taking it affect.-- ShimmerCrystals 02:18, 3 February 2009 (UTC)

She. I didn't look at pictures, just my cat. (His name is Spider, oddly enough). But yeah should I blend it or not?

Oopsies XD sorry Darkhallows. She did! You'd be better off blending them in well.-- ShimmerCrystals 03:53, 7 February 2009 (UTC)


Fixed the ear I also tried to redo the eye, but I don't like it... Darkhallows 01:33, 18 February 2009 (UTC)

I don't either. He looks like he has invisible hooks pulling his eyes back. GB57 19:24, 22 February 2009 (UTC)

I couldn't agree more. I tried again. UGH I've never had problems with eyes before.--Darkhallows 09:08, 23 February 2009 (UTC)
By the way, is the ear to bright? Darkhallows 01:20, 6 March 2009 (UTC)

Yes...I'd say the ear is a little bright. I think you need to chose a darker pink (see some of the accepted black cat pixils for a colour idea) and blend it into the pelt a lot more thoroughly. --Sandy Leader's Den 19:57, 6 March 2009 (UTC)


Is it better now? Darkhallows 09:48, 8 March 2009 (UTC)

It is better than it was before. You could still go for a deeper pink if you wish though. This looks good --Sandy Leader's Den 08:08, 3 April 2009 (UTC)


The back and the face anre amazingly blended, but the belly doesn't look like it has been blended at all.  Dawnfeather  23:28, 9 April 2009 (UTC)

I see what you two mean... I'm working on it now, hopefully it's updated by the time you read this. --Darkhallows 03:38, 10 April 2009 (UTC)

It's a lot better, but you could probably go for a little tiny bit more blending on the front though.  Dawnfeather  02:39, 14 April 2009 (UTC)

Done. Also blended a few other places, and fixed the lines on his chest.--Darkhallows 10:19, 14 April 2009 (UTC)


Blended the whole body a little so it doesn't look so pixely. I also changed the eye to the one on the blank. Any comments? Please?--DarkHallows Lair 08:41, 24 April 2009 (UTC)

I think it is ready for approval  Dawnfeather  08:45, 24 April 2009 (UTC)

I think this looks really good. You definitely need to get rid of the cyan background though - it should be transparent...--Sandy Leader's Den 17:15, 24 April 2009 (UTC)

It is transparent...--DarkHallows Lair 04:47, 25 April 2009 (UTC)

hmm...it's showing up as bright blue for me...must be my computer. sorry Darkhallows--Sandy Leader's Den 08:12, 25 April 2009 (UTC)


I'll check it out on my other computers ^^. Anything else you see that needs to be fixed?--DarkHallows Lair 01:03, 27 April 2009 (UTC)

No. I like this image Darkhallows.--Sandy Leader's Den 14:30, 27 April 2009 (UTC)

If you look closely, you'll see that you smeared out of the lines near the nose. If you could fix that, I'd be glad to approve this, Darkhallows :). GB57 14:35, 2 May 2009 (UTC)


Thank you! I fixed it. --DarkHallows Lair 03:48, 3 May 2009 (UTC)


Dovekit-Approved

[[File:Dovekit.PNG]] [IMAGE RELOCATED]


My first real try at a kitten. Please comment. -- Mallinois  For Talking 12:16, 4 May 2009 (UTC)


The ear colour could be brighter/darker, and it needs more shading.  Dawnfeather  13:17, 4 May 2009 (UTC)

Firstly, I would have used the longhaired blank because she is a fluffy she-kit...personal opinion. I think the eyes are slightly too bright and it does need more shading. A good start though  Sandy Talk! 19:53, 4 May 2009 (UTC)


I added more shading and brightened the ars and lightened the eyes. -- Mallinois  For Talking 22:51, 4 May 2009 (UTC)

Perhaps you could put the pupils on the bottom line instead of the top right corner. Right now it looks like she's looking at a hovering butterfly out of the corner of her eye. But that's minor. I like this; I almost choked when I saw the cuteness :). --Bramble Bramble's Realm 00:34, 5 May 2009 (UTC)


Like Sandy said, she's fluffy. Also the eyes do look a little weird. Otherwise good though.--DarkHallows Lair 06:22, 5 May 2009 (UTC)


If I use the Longhair blank, The background turns black, and I can't change it. I have to use the shorthaired blank... --Mallinois Talk! User contributions 20:05, 5 May 2009 (UTC)

Approved. You're getting really good at this, Mallinois :). GB57 23:39, 6 May 2009 (UTC)

Larchkit - Approved

[[File:Larchkit3.png|left]] [IMAGE RELOCATED] Everybody's on a kitten spree, and Hollykit(NP) has been done, so I thought I would do her sister, Larchkit. What does everybody think? --Bramble Bramble's Realm 00:31, 5 May 2009 (UTC)


I think it looks great, but the nose color should be toned down and a bit more shading could be added, but very amazing for a kitten. Good job! --Mallinois Talk! User contributions 00:39, 5 May 2009 (UTC)

Nose toned and shading intensified in areas. --Bramble Bramble's Realm 01:13, 5 May 2009 (UTC)


It's an interesting colour, but I like it. Good work, Bramble! I see what they mean when they say that you are talented at this.  Dawnfeather  06:25, 5 May 2009 (UTC)

Thank you, Dawnfeather. :) --Bramble Bramble's Realm 14:58, 5 May 2009 (UTC)

I love this Bramble but I think the ear colour needs to be slightly less orangey (if that makes sense) - I think it's because of the pelt colour underneath. Also, some more shading on the belly would look good.  Sandy Talk! 15:23, 5 May 2009 (UTC)

Made less orange ears (yes, it does make sense :). It definitely looks pink on my computer now. Also added shading on the belly area. --Bramble Bramble's Realm 21:10, 5 May 2009 (UTC)

I know I'm not a part of Charart, or even a part of this wiki (I need to wait until I'm thirteen), but I just felt the need to comment on this image, because I think it's amazing! Great job, Bramble; I can see no fault in this. Sorry if I'm annoying you, I just really needed to say that. XD 72.205.13.34 20:07, 6 May 2009 (UTC)

Bramble, this is excellent, and I think you just set a new record by getting this approved in a day :p. GB57 23:32, 6 May 2009 (UTC

Briarkit - Approved

Briarlight.kit
I drew Briarkit. Any constructive criticism is appreciated. GB 03:44, 14 September 2008 (UTC)

A few things. One, the background cannot be colored, and also needs to be transparent. I can fix that for you. Two, the eyes are "missing." Three, there needs to be more blending and shading. FxC **The Waterfall** 13:34, 14 September 2008 (UTC)

1. I will fix the background, but I would appreciate it if you made it transparent.
2. Her eye-color hasn't been said yet; if it is revealed in Long Shadows, I'll add it.
3. If you can give me some tips on how to do the shading and blending, I'll work on it. GB 14:39, 14 September 2008 (UTC)

Idf you downloaded an art program you should have a blurtool if you do you use a darker shade around the edges then you use the blurtool to blend them together.--Redflare 14:45, 14 September 2008 (UTC)

I reuploaded Briarkit; I attempted to some shading. Like it? GB 15:32, 14 September 2008 (UTC)

It's better!--JKO 21:18, 14 September 2008 (UTC)


Thanks Jakko! FxC, any comments? GB 22:38, 14 September 2008 (UTC)

Thanks for the great comments! If there's anything else I can do to improve it (besides blurtool :p), tell me! GB 22:53, 14 September 2008 (UTC)

Looks better. The outline need to be black though. For the eyes, I know it hasn't been revealed. I suggest green - it's really neutral. --FxC **The Waterfall** 02:19, 15 September 2008 (UTC)

If we left things out to wait for details from the books, pretty much none of the characters would be able to be done. I'd personally suggest a generic cat-eye-color like amber. Outlines need to be black. Shading is needed. And the pink selected for inside the ears... It's rather... bright and unnatural.. Maybe suggest a softer, gentler pink.  Kitsufox  Fox's Den 16:37, 16 September 2008 (UTC)

Added her eyes. But I forgot about the black outline, fix that as soon as I can! GB 00:24, 18 September 2008 (UTC)

Did the outline. GB 23:33, 24 September 2008 (UTC)

It looks like the outline was changed from the original lineart... and the eyes... have this creepy staring Zombie thing going on...  Kitsufox  Fox's Den 14:40, 28 October 2008 (UTC)

Kitsufox is right. It does look like a zombie with these eyes.ZZ Top 19:46, 29 October 2008 (UTC)

Maybe you should just draw in little pupils to make it look more natural. 97.115.124.162 03:04, 31 October 2008 (UTC)

I agree...--JKO 03:05, 31 October 2008 (UTC)

This really does look good, GB. Just draw some pupils in like 97... said and blur the shading and ears and it'll look great! --Bramble Bramble's Realm 22:22, 6 November 2008 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I have GIMP now! GB 01:06, 8 November 2008 (UTC)

Much improved. The eyes are still... a bit off. You might wish to spend some more time on them. And the shading needs to get blended into the picture, as does the pink on the inside of the ears (right now it just looks like a dollop of paint fell there). You've sorted the outline issue wonderfully, though.  Kitsufox  Fox's Den 15:12, 10 November 2008 (UTC)

Thanks Kitsu! I'm on it. GB 15:16, 10 November 2008 (UTC)

Better? GB 15:27, 10 November 2008 (UTC)

The ear pink is still unblended and incredibly bright. The shading is still un-blended. The eyes do look good, though.  Kitsufox  Fox's Den 17:25, 12 November 2008 (UTC)

I'll take your advice, Kitsu. I'll work on Briarkit. On the changes. GB 23:59, 13 November 2008 (UTC)

Better? GB 00:07, 14 November 2008 (UTC)

Your'e so close. I think what'll help is making the pink of the ears more triangular. 97.115.120.104 01:57, 14 November 2008 (UTC)

The pink is really a bit bright yet for such a dark furred cat. And blending it a bit more, so it's just a hint of how thin the fur on the inside of the ears and they'll be pretty good. You should also blend a touch more under the chin, as that shading line is still really sharp. You also missed shading on the bit of belly that shows, and want to make sure all your shading transitions are nice and smooth. You're almost there!  Kitsufox  Fox's Den 16:49, 17 November 2008 (UTC)

I'll work on this tomorrow. (SB's using the computer, which has GIMP on it.) GB 22:22, 19 November 2008 (UTC)

How's this? GB 03:12, 20 November 2008 (UTC)

The hard transitions between colors are still there. They need to get blended. Shading needs to be smooth and not look so sharply defined against the rest of the pelt. You're just about there. Get the blending, and I don't think I'll have anything else.  Kitsufox  Fox's Den 16:26, 25 November 2008 (UTC)

I'll work on it tomorrow. GB 21:22, 26 November 2008 (UTC)

Better? GB 03:16, 28 November 2008 (UTC)


The hard lines are still in the shding, I desparately wangt the shading and blending amped up so she has that aceppted look. --Mallinois The Doghouse 01:26, 18 December 2008 (UTC)

Um... what? GB39 21:59, 21 December 2008 (UTC)


Sorry, I typed too fast whil holding something. What I meant is that she needs blending on the hard transitions on the shading. --Mallinois 22:54, 21 December 2008 (UTC)

Better? GB39 18:03, 23 December 2008 (UTC)

Looks good to me. ;) --Mumble785 23:30, 27 December 2008 (UTC)



I think the ears need a little more blending, and mabye some highlights... If you try and it looks wierd, just don't do the highlights. --MallinoisThe Puppy's Crib The Puppy then barked -Ui! 21:58, 28 February 2009 (UTC)

I think the ears could be more pointy... but looks great! ::Applestar4904 16:11, 31 March 2009 (UTC)

I'll blend the ears a little bit more, but they don't need to be pointier. GB57 15:09, 1 April 2009 (UTC)

I think that her right ear (on our left) could be a little bit pointier, because it look fairly round right now. The nose looks a little unnatural in the colour, but then I'm used to the warrior ones where you don't even have to colour the nose! In general however, It is great! Dawnfeather I am of the Forest - I am of the Dawn's Radiance 06:48, 9 April 2009 (UTC)

Applestar, Dawnfeather, if you guys have a problem with the ears, take it up with Kitsu. She made the blanks, I'm just using them. GB57 13:57, 18 April 2009 (UTC)

Any other comments before approval? GB57 16:19, 19 April 2009 (UTC)

I think it's ready ^^.--DarkHallows Lair 06:56, 20 April 2009 (UTC)

The eyes look weird. Sorry about the comment with the ears, don't worry about it, i didn't realise. (Dawnfeather, just not logged on) 211.29.46.132 00:42, 22 April 2009 (UTC)

The neck shading is wider on one side then the other it makes it look angled, other than that good :).

I think this is ready for approval GB. You've done a good job with the image. The only thing I can see is that the nose colour is a lot brighter than the ears; perhaps this could be toned down. Apart from that I'd agree that it's good to go --Sandy Leader's Den 17:09, 23 April 2009 (UTC)

Better? GB57 23:25, 1 May 2009 (UTC)

The shading needs to be blended into the rest of the body better.  Dawnfeather  08:15, 2 May 2009 (UTC)

Better? GB57 23:14, 2 May 2009 (UTC)

Could be done some more.  Dawnfeather  23:17, 2 May 2009 (UTC)

I think this is ready GB - you've done a good job and it's up to the standard of the other approved images so I say it should be approved --Sandy Leader's Den 16:32, 3 May 2009 (UTC)

This has been up far too long. I agree with Sandy; it should be approved. There's nothing wrong with it and it looks good. --Bramble Bramble's Realm 00:37, 4 May 2009 (UTC)


GB, this is definetly ready for approval, but the ear pink needs to be blended into the pelt, then it'll be ready. --Mallinois Talk! User contributions 00:42, 5 May 2009 (UTC)

Mallinois, I've constantly blended this, and if I did it anymore, it would probably turn brown :/. Anymore comments before this is approved? GB57 23:34, 6 May 2009 (UTC)

None, this should have been approved days ago  Sandy Talk! 16:32, 7 May 2009 (UTC)


Whitethroat - Approved

[[File:Whitethroat2.PNG]] [IMAGE RELOCATED]

Okay, I got bored seeing as I currently have nothing else to do on my other images at the moment and decided to colour Whitethroat. Please comment appropriately. --Sandy 17:38, 15 December 2008 (UTC)


I think you pretty much have this done, except for the paint-like swirlyness. Try blurring full-time. --Mallinois The Doghouse 22:25, 15 December 2008 (UTC)


Better?--Sandy 16:58, 16 December 2008 (UTC)



Preety Good. --Mallinois The Doghouse 23:27, 16 December 2008 (UTC)


Whitethroat also haas white paws -- random guest


Okay, I'll work on that when I have time--SandyLeader's Den 10:06, 23 December 2008 (UTC)

This looks really good. The blending is beautiful, and the shading is great too.--Jakko123 15:39, 28 December 2008 (UTC)


Okay. I added his paws - thanks for reminding me, I forgot they were white too. Anything else need changing?--SandyLeader's Den 12:14, 24 December 2008 (UTC)

If I could accept it, I sure would! I don't think anything needs to be changed! But that's my opinion. --Mumble785 19:46, 24 December 2008 (UTC)


Thanks Mumble :)--SandyLeader's Den 20:00, 24 December 2008 (UTC)

Mumble, that's not true. There's still a lot it needs. Sandy, the shade of black you picked is really dark, and it makes it hard to see the eyes. Also, the back paws are still black. GB39 22:05, 24 December 2008 (UTC)


Okay. I lightened the colour and coloured the back paws white. I've also added some darker shading along the back and in the other usual places now this is visible.--SandyLeader's Den 12:26, 28 December 2008 (UTC)

Better... *nods head and gives two thumbs up* --Mumble785 18:43, 28 December 2008 (UTC)


Wow. Perfect. Flamefeather 18:30, 1 February 2009 (UTC)

I think he could use a white dot for the pupil...or is it iris? Correct me on the word if I'm wrong. I'm in physical science now and totally forgot everything XD-- ShimmerCrystals 03:59, 7 February 2009 (UTC)

Better?--Sandy Leader's Den 13:34, 7 February 2009 (UTC)

hmm...i edited it and reuploaded but over five hours later and the changes still aren't showing on my cp...--Sandy Leader's Den 18:20, 7 February 2009 (UTC)

The change is finally showing. Is this better Shim?--Sandy Leader's Den 20:12, 9 February 2009 (UTC)



Some of the outline looks changed. --MallinoisThe Puppy's Crib The Puppy then howled bravely -Ui! 22:21, 28 February 2009 (UTC)

Not that I'm aware of...where do you mean?--Sandy Leader's Den 19:50, 6 March 2009 (UTC)

I think it's the further ear (where it meets the head). --MUMBLE785 20:43, 16 March 2009 (UTC)

Thanks Mumble, I didn't spot that. I've fixed the outline now and it should be showing up correctly. --Sandy Leader's Den 08:10, 3 April 2009 (UTC)

I'm being ridiculously fussy, but I think that the shape of the white on the front should be a little more random. Just make it staick out in a place or two. Also, the dark shading on the bottom part of the top part of the hind fore-leg (if that makes any sense! I mean the part which is like the knee/thigh) the shading is a little bit weird. It ends in a round shape, instead of smoothly ending. Keep in mind that i am in a cruel, judging unfairly mood, before you are offended by my critism. It is really good! Dawnfeather I am of the Forest - I am of the Dawn's Radiance 13:06, 9 April 2009 (UTC)

I'm not offended Dawnfeather. Thanks for pointing out its faults! I've worked on the legs and tried to smooth the endings out (even though I got confused by which leg you meant!) I also tried to do something with the chest fur...not sure whether it looks better or worse though --Sandy Leader's Den 18:52, 9 April 2009 (UTC)


I love it, Sandstar! (Sorry, just a random thought, while thinking of your name. Sanstorm would make a good leader!) I can see no faults anymore! Sorry for confusing you. I even confused myself a little bit too!  Dawnfeather  23:18, 9 April 2009 (UTC)

Thanks (and yes she probably would!) --Sandy Leader's Den 09:44, 10 April 2009 (UTC)

The eyes are a bit small, making them bigger might help, otherwise, I like. --Firebird2102

The eyes are the standard size; I haven't changed the lineart so I can't really make them bigger...--Sandy Leader's Den 18:58, 20 April 2009 (UTC)

Okay, I decided to update myself and I tweaked the white fur blending. Is there anything else? --Sandy Leader's Den 19:04, 20 April 2009 (UTC)


Along the back it seems like there are some white/gray pixels. --DarkHallows Lair 02:50, 24 April 2009 (UTC)

I've had a look but I can't see anything ut of place. The only thing there is the shading and highlights...--Sandy Leader's Den 17:13, 24 April 2009 (UTC)

The ear is way too dark. Otherwise, this is good. GB57 23:26, 1 May 2009 (UTC)

Okay, I've updated and it should show up in a moment. Better? --Sandy Leader's Den 16:38, 3 May 2009 (UTC)

For some reason it isn't updating properly yet - I've checked it uploaded and the thumbnail is there but it's not showing up here  Sandy Talk! 20:10, 3 May 2009 (UTC)

Okay, it's showing up now - is this better?  Sandy Talk! 10:32, 4 May 2009 (UTC)


It's better, but maybe make it(the pink of the ear) a little wider. (This is just me being a perfectionist again.) Once you've done that, I can see absolutely no reason why this shouldn't be approved.  Dawnfeather  11:01, 6 May 2009 (UTC)

I don't know...I tried to keep it to a slightly smaller than average size because he's a black cat. Are there any other opinions on whether I should make it bigger or not because I'm not sure which is right... Sandy Talk! 14:18, 6 May 2009 (UTC)


No, don't worry. I wasn't sure if it was right or not myself. Can we get a GB-the-awesome-approving-machine in here? This needs to be on the other charart page, not this talk one! (lol)  Dawnfeather  06:14, 7 May 2009 (UTC)

Approved *bleep bloop*. GB57 23:12, 7 May 2009 (UTC)

Honeyfern- Approved

[[file:Honeyfern.PNG‎]] [IMAGE RELOCATED] Alright, so I feel sort of bad uploading another one so soon. But I figure that if I'm going to upload it, might as well do it now. Anyway, I though she deserved a picture. --DarkHallows Lair 04:48, 7 May 2009 (UTC)


Oh my gosh, that is so pretty! I haven't even rad sunrise yet, but I miss her already! She is an awesome character!  Dawnfeather  06:06, 7 May 2009 (UTC)


Thank you! Is there anything I can fix? --DarkHallows Lair 07:03, 7 May 2009 (UTC)


Ask someone who doesn't like her as much! I wasn't sure if the eyes were supposed to be blue, but you are right on that one. I love the way you have done the shading and the tabby markings. However, some of the tabby markings don't meet the black line very neatly, and the ear and eyes (although the paleness suits her personality) could be a tinsy bit brighter/darker. Only a tinsy bit though. I still stick by what I said earlier- she is beautiful, and I can't believe that Berrynose didn't fall for her until just before she died.  Dawnfeather  07:21, 7 May 2009 (UTC)


I fixed the tabby markings, and brightened the ears/eyes. Thanks again Dawnflower.--DarkHallows Lair 09:27, 7 May 2009 (UTC)

It's awesome. (it's Dawnfeather, not flower :) )  Dawnfeather  09:45, 7 May 2009 (UTC)

Ooh! This is one of the best I've seen so far on this page! As far as suggestions go, I would add a bit more of a "honey" brown to the pelt and maybe a lighter pink in her ear. Great job, though! -user: Firebird2102

This is beautiful! I don't see anything wrong with it except that the ear pink could be blended a little bit more. Other than that, this looks ready for approval. --Bramble Bramble's Realm 20:58, 7 May 2009 (UTC)


Simply marvelous.Sandwich989


Firebird, changing the pelt color isn't really an option... because then I'd have to change other things and it's not worth the effort. But I can change the ear.--DarkHallows Lair 23:10, 7 May 2009 (UTC)

Approved! Good job, Darkhallows! GB57 23:23, 7 May 2009 (UTC)

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