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Morningflower (E) - Approved

Morningflower.elder

Thought I may as well do her elder version too while I was at it so here she is Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 19:02, October 10, 2009 (UTC)

Betutiful!Minnowclaw 23:16, October 10, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - No complaints here! Nice job! :) Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 01:38, October 11, 2009 (UTC)

Um... maybe you can put some ginger spots on her face, too. But other than that, wow! Eveningswift :) 02:48, October 11, 2009 (UTC)

Uh... nevermind. But maybe the bottom of her cheek? Eveningswift :) 02:50, October 11, 2009 (UTC)

There is no ginger in her queen one so we should leave that out.Minnowclaw 12:38, October 11, 2009 (UTC)

I used exactly the same colours for her elder version as her queen version. I don't think I can really fit anymore spots on her face without losing too much black. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 18:52, October 11, 2009 (UTC)

My last coment wasn't clear and I just whant to make sure you know what I said. I meant that there was no ginger on her check in the queen one.Minnowclaw 14:08, October 12, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, sorry I haven't been here for a couple of days; life takes over sometimes. Do I need to add ginger spots on her face or not as I'm confused? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 15:42, October 14, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry, I can't make myself clear. No you don't.Minnowclaw Enter at own risk... 00:22, October 15, 2009 (UTC)

Darken the shading a little, then she should be good. --Bramble-san 02:23, October 15, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Sorry it took so long. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 15:55, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

No problem. Comments before approval? --Bramble-san 18:08, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

None; approved Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 18:33, October 19, 2009 (UTC)

Brindleclaw (w) - Approved

Brindleclaw.warrior I dont know what to say...♥Shadowedheart♥ 12:28, October 17, 2009 (UTC)

She's amazing Shadowedheart!!I just think you blurred the lineart around her.ღ Şũήמy ★ 12:50, October 17, 2009 (UTC)

It seems like you also colored the lineart the same black you made her fur while blurring it. Add the lineart back in..-- Shim-ShimNewGladiator! 03:49, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

I hope you don't mind; I fixed it for you, as many people have lots of trouble fixing the lineart and it ends up distorting the image. The picture is beautiful. At the moment, I don't see anything wrong. --Bramble-san 04:37, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks!♥Shadowedheart♥ 12:18, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

Maybe darken the shading a bit; I can hardly see it. Beautiful image, though! -- Echomist Hear the Echo... 13:30, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded, darkend shading a bit--♥Shadowedheart♥ 13:51, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

Wow. One of our best tortoiseshells to boot. Comments before approval? --Bramble-san 18:08, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

None, approved Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 18:50, October 19, 2009 (UTC)

Greeneyes - Approved

File:Greeneyes.pngPresenting Greeneyes, the... well... she-cat with green eyes. :P Comments/criticism? -- Echomist Hear the Echo... 01:04, October 18, 2009 (UTC)


Oorrrrrr - soooome ! I love it. Anyone else? -- Dawnfeather  talk! 01:45, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

Wow! This is... amazing! But if you want to be picky, there are some grayish spots in the top of the tail lineart. I hope that made sense. --Hallow's Eve09 02:21, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

~Reuploaded.~ Aw, guys, you're too nice... :D . Lineart's fixed. -- Echomist Hear the Echo... 13:29, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --Bramble-san 18:08, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

Approved Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 18:53, October 19, 2009 (UTC)

Beechstar - Approved

File:Beechstar.pngMy first leader. Comments? -- Echomist Hear the Echo... 15:06, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

This is marvelous (wow, I don't think I've ever used that word to describe something :p)! It's a little too early to start the 24 hours, but great job! GB57 15:10, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

I agree with GB. No problems I can see =) Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 16:16, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

Pity we only saw him when he was old and dying. He looks awesome here :) --Bramble-san 18:08, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

Beautiful! I see nothing wrong. Great job, Echomist! Icethroat21 18:20, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Just one small thing. The eyes need different colors of blue in them to make them look less flat. You can look at some other cats with blue eyes to see what I mean. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 18:27, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

~Reuploaded.~ Thanks so much, guys! =) Moss, the eyes already had different shades of blue in them, but I darkened them so that they would be more noticeable... is he better? -- Echomist Hear the Echo... 19:19, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Yep! Comments before approval in 24 hours? Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 21:57, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

Approved. --Bramble-san 01:55, October 20, 2009 (UTC)

Loner Blanks - Approved

Loner Blank Long Female Loner Blank Long MaleLoner Blank Short Female Loner Blank Short Male

(M) - I did more of a Melonlemon-style with these blanks and I'm pretty happy with the way they turned out. I also made an example (The shading might be in the wrong places though.)

[[File:Ravenpaw_Example.png]]

Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 22:13, September 7, 2009 (UTC)


These are great! Give the muzzle a bit more of a stop and the ears look weird... but I really like them. - Darkhallows  Lair 22:45, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

this looks really good Mosswhisker! but since they're loners ,wouldn't the fur be a bit scruffier?-- ☆Darkkeh☆ uh...hi 22:46, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

For some reason the head looks a bit small to me... but they look great otherwise! --Rainwhisker09 23:35, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

Wow, Mosswhisker... you're amazing at making blanks! There are only a few things that I can say about these. Firstly, the neck looks a bit too thin, almost pinched, maybe you could make it a bit thicker. Also, I think there should be a bit more definition between the neck and the foreleg, it looks a little too smooth to me. These are incredible, though! ♫ insaneular ♫Down at Fraggle Rock! 23:39, September 7, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Thanks guys! I'll change them tomorrow, after school. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 00:03, September 8, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Okay! I changed the muzzles so they have a stop, fixed the foreleg, and fixed the neck. (All I did was shorten it, and I think that helped.) I also didn't know what was wrong with the ears, but I did make them less pointy. I didn't change the fur because it's pretty scruffy as it is, and Loners wouldn't be a scruffy as Roughes. I didn't change the head size becuase when I inceased in by a mear 2 pixles, it looked waaay to big. I also got rid of the gray lines on the longhaireds. What else do I need to fix? Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 22:35, September 9, 2009 (UTC)

The ears look a little small. Can you make them a bit bigger? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 20:19, September 10, 2009 (UTC)

The toes on their paws look a little weird... could you change them? --Rainwhisker09 20:22, September 11, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Changed the toes and (even though it's hard to see) widened the ears. I also changed the shape of two of the paws a bit. Better? Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 19:55, September 12, 2009 (UTC)

I think there great. I just think that the eyes are a little small. Other then that I hope they get approved before long. --Spottedwing 02:05, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

I don't know..the eyebrows look awkward?––Σ ãliãs G.r.pawRR 09:49, September 14, 2009 (UTC)

I think the whiskers are a little short. But they're great otherwise! --Rainwhisker09 12:05, September 14, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - I'll fix these tomorrow. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 23:55, September 14, 2009 (UTC)


I have a few things -

  • The legs are all different lengths. Tey get longer and longer towards the right of the image. The front paw which is bent in the action of walking should be shorter than the others, (because it is bent and therefore not at it's full length) but at the mkoment it is too long.
  • The body is slanted downwards (towards the front of the cat) This may look okay as you finish up the image without being adjusted, but you can have a go at making it more evn if you want to.
  • The ears looks to thin. Don't change the height right now, but have a look at the ears. Also, the back one should probably be on the other side. maybe just fiddle around a bit.
  • The muzzle - it just looks weird to me, no offense. Lots of it is out of proportion and place just within that small space. Open up an approved blank and these, and carefully chck the face, moving around the pixels until they look similar-ish.

Don't get me wrong - i think that these are good, and I know that you've put a lot of effort into them. I'm just trying to help. -- Dawnfeather  talk! 06:54, September 15, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - I fixed zeh whiskers. I didn't change the eyes because I couldn't get them to look right, and I don't know what you mean by "eyebrows".

Thanks Dawn! I'll fix those things tomorrow. (I'm suffering from chronic lazyness right now.) Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 21:52, September 15, 2009 (UTC)
Lol, sorry Moss. I thought the whiskers were eyes, and the eyes were eyebrows.––Σ ãliãs G.r.pawRR 13:46, September 16, 2009 (UTC)
I think the whiskers should be a bit far apart. That's why they looked like eyes to me. (no offense)––Σ ãliãs G.r.pawRR 09:28, September 17, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - I fixed the paws and the ears. I'll fix the rest soon. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 23:12, September 17, 2009 (UTC)

It looks like their far rear leg goes through the pelt.*Swallowtip * EMBRACE THE TIP! 23:48, September 17, 2009 (UTC)

I was thinking the same thing, but I didn't know how to word it, so thank you, Swallowtip. ;) Otherwise, these look great! Icethroat21Enter at risk 01:19, September 18, 2009 (UTC)

The hind legs are kind of overlapping, if you know what I mean...––Σ ãliãs G.r.pawRR 09:11, September 18, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - I fixed the legs and the whiskers. I can't get the muzzles to look right Dawn; could you maybe make me a diagram? Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 23:05, September 18, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - What else do I need to fix besides the muzzles? Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 21:04, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

Their hind end looks slightly higher than their font; like they're coming down from a hill. Balance those out, and also make the hind paw that's lifted curl slightly outwards, if you know what that means. It'll look more natural. --Bramble-san 23:03, September 21, 2009 (UTC)


Could you move the eyes and whiskers down a few pixels? And maybe make the eyes a little bigger.-- Darkhallows  My den 23:45, September 21, 2009 (UTC)

there is a line on their leg hind leg that is driving me nuts.Minnowclaw 01:45, September 24, 2009 (UTC)


The longhairs fur-tufts seem to go a little too far down the legs.-- Darkhallows  My den 05:00, September 24, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - I'm going to work on these this weekend. (School has eaten my free time and is using my relaxation as a toothick. >_< ) Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 19:34, September 24, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - See, I'm not dead! xP I fixed the tufts, moved the eyes and whiskers back a few pixles, and fixed the bodies so they're leveled out (Dawnfeather actually commented on this, and then I completely forgot to fix it, which shows just how much I pay attention. -_-;;; ) I tried to fix the eyes, but then they looked too big. Sorry! Also, that line is the haunch, and I didn't know how to curve the paw back; could you explain that a little more Bramble? Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 20:16, September 27, 2009 (UTC)

Well, kind of like this little guy here See how his back paw sort of curves backward, because he just took it off the ground? --Bramble-san 22:22, September 27, 2009 (UTC)

Lovely, mossy. But on the short-hairs, on the back of the paws there no claw like the long-hairs... And there's really something btohering me about the eyes... There really, really small...--Warrior♥Warrior's Den 18:57, September 29, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Thank you Bramble; wonderful pic! I fixed the paws. Warrior♥, I should have the changes you mentioned fixed by Thursday. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 22:51, September 29, 2009 (UTC)

The head does look small in proportion to the body. It looks fine in all of the other departments, though. --Sandiwolf 02:24, October 3, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - That actually isn't a dewclaw; it's just a tuft of fur. Origonally it was a dewclaw, but then I realized you wouldn't see that on a cat unless you were very close to them, so I changed it to a fur tuft.

As for the eyes, I decided that I would keep trying to fix them until I got them to be bigger. So I opened Pixlr and got it right on my first try this time. O.O Now, the eyes look a little strange when they're not colored in, but I made a colored example of Husker to show you guys what they look like when they're colored in. There are actually two different ways you can do the eyes, but I prefer this style.

[[File:Husker_Longer_Ex.png]]

Also, I'll fix the heads soon. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 01:37, October 4, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - I've fixed the heads. Better? Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 19:33, October 5, 2009 (UTC)

The still look a litle off-blanaced; the hind end looks too high up, as if they're tilted forward, and the very back leg looks too high off the ground. Also; on the farthest back legs, I know you're trying to show toes, but the curves look odd; try taking them out. Other than this, I'd say they're ready. --Bramble-san 22:15, October 7, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Thanks Bramble! I will get to these soon (Sunday at the latest) Also, I am going to do Crookedstar as a deputy and the kittypet blanks; first I have to get done with these. So ... yea. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 23:00, October 7, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - All praise weekends! I took out the paw curves and fixed the backs. I didn't change the leg becuase it looked very... awkard when I did. What else should I fix? Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 19:36, October 11, 2009 (UTC)

I think these are ready. Awesome job, Moss. Comments before approval? --Bramble-san 23:49, October 12, 2009 (UTC)

The rear left leg looks like it goes throught the hip. Minnowclaw  21:34, October 13, 2009 (UTC)

What does that mean? Would you mind elaborating some more, Minnow? --Bramble-san 02:21, October 15, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Yes, please elaborate some more. That's the haunch, so I don't know what exactly you mean. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 17:25, October 16, 2009 (UTC)

The body sort of looks like a... box. Maybe make the chests or backs more round?  Ghostfire  Happy Halloween! 21:47, October 17, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - I rounded their rumps in an attempt to make them less box like. Better? Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 18:51, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

I think they're beutiful, but its not my choice--♥Shadowedheart♥ 11:33, October 19, 2009 (UTC)

I agree. Repeating, comments before approval? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 17:52, October 19, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry if i'm making you mad Mouswhisker, but do you still want me to tell you what I meant? --Minnowclaw Enter at own risk... 22:18, October 20, 2009 (UTC)

These really have no issue on them that I can see. They're ready to be accepted. Approving. --Bramble-san 03:07, October 21, 2009 (UTC)

Runningbrook - Approved

File:Runningbrook.pngSince we're doing current ranks, and Dawnpelt's article only had an apprentice version, I figured someone should do the warrior version. :) Comments/critcism? --EchomistTalk/Contribs 22:46, October 19, 2009 (UTC)

Doesn't it say that she is cream furred?--AutumnSky 22:49, October 19, 2009 (UTC)

Yes, but the apprentice version is light gray... should I make this version cream anyway? --EchomistTalk/Contribs 22:50, October 19, 2009 (UTC)

You should go by what the book and the page says, not what the picture is. (if they're different, like Dawnpelt) The image looks great, though! Icethroat21Enter at risk 23:02, October 19, 2009 (UTC)

I'm kind of confused as to why the apprentice version's gray, though... do you mind if I wait until Bramble, Sandy, or one of the senior warriors says that it should be cream? --EchomistTalk/Contribs 23:06, October 19, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - I'd say make her cream, as that might have been a mistake in the alliegnces. However, don't just make a new Dawnpelt, use this old version as a different cat. (I'd recommend Runningbrook. I don't see anything wrong with it otherwise. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 23:16, October 19, 2009 (UTC)

~Reuploaded.~ Added tabby stripes; she is now Runningbrook. Comments? --EchomistTalk/Contribs 00:45, October 20, 2009 (UTC)

Wow, this looks amazing, Echomist! Great job! I can't see anything wrong! Icethroat21Enter at risk 00:50, October 20, 2009 (UTC)

Aw, thanks, Icethroat! *purr* --EchomistTalk/Contribs 00:54, October 20, 2009 (UTC)

*claps* your getting to be quite the artist Echo!Minnowclaw Enter at own risk... 22:00, October 20, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --Bramble-san 03:03, October 21, 2009 (UTC)

Approved. --Bramble-san 02:48, October 22, 2009 (UTC)

Goldenflower (E) - Approved

Goldenflower.elderHey, I'm back. Sorry I wasn't on the PCA for a while; I was sorta busy. Anyway, here's Goldenflower with the ripped ear...comments? --Sparrowsong 00:23, October 19, 2009 (UTC)

Wow! Nice job, Sparrow! Maybe thicken the shading, just a bit, and blur it. -- Echomist Hear the Echo... 00:28, October 19, 2009 (UTC)

Better? Sparrowsong 00:41, October 19, 2009 (UTC)

Much better. :) I don't see anything else wrong. --EchomistTalk/Contribs 22:47, October 19, 2009 (UTC)

(S) - Me either. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 17:36, October 20, 2009 (UTC)

Very good!--Minnowclaw Enter at own risk... 22:06, October 20, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --Bramble-san 03:04, October 21, 2009 (UTC)

Approved. --Bramble-san 02:48, October 22, 2009 (UTC)

Birchstar (RC) - Approved

File:Birchstar (RC).png My first leader and my first tabby. Comments? --Spottedwing 00:42, September 12, 2009 (UTC)

Here are a few things:

  • Needs shading. If it's there, I can't see it.
  • The nose pink is too bright, it's more of a hot pink rather than just a pink. Try to lighten it some. But from the pictures I was looking at on Google images, brown cats tend to have either brown or black noses, depending on whether they're multi-colored. Try changing it to just a lighter shade of brown from the color of the fur.

It mostly just needs shading. The ear pink looks fine, and so does most of the tabby stripes. Otherwise, I think it looks good. Icethroat21Enter at risk 02:16, September 12, 2009 (UTC)

The tabby stipes need to be longer in most cases and more varied. Add shading and blend it well. Lighten the nose pink. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 13:34, September 12, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Redid the image. Made the tabby stripes longer, fixed nose and ear pink, and added shading. Is there anything else? --Spottedwing 02:40, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

Still needs thicker and darker shading. Then blend it for natural transitions. As for the stripes - make them less regular. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 14:36, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

What do you meen by regular?--Spottedwing 02:27, September 14, 2009 (UTC)

um... regular. i'll try and think of another way to describe it lol. bear with me. Make the different lengths, shapes and sizes. That would make them less regular. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 18:29, September 14, 2009 (UTC)

Made the tabby stripes longer and darker. Added more shading. I really don't know what to think of it. Is it better? Worse? --Spottedwing 00:54, September 15, 2009 (UTC)

Thicken the tabby stripes a bit more.*Swallowtip * EMBRACE THE TIP! 01:39, September 18, 2009 (UTC)

Also, more shading is needed. Thicken it slightly and then blend. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 15:04, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

I'll get to her as soon as I can. My life has been busy since school started, so I'll try to get to her during the weekend. --Spottedwing 16:14, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

Thickened the shading and the tabby stripes. --Spottedwing 19:33, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

Comments? --Spottedwing 17:28, September 21, 2009 (UTC)

Your tabby stripes are too few and far between. They also are too thick and they all look alike. Put in some more and vary their length and look; I know warriors are a different pose but you can look at the approved tabbies for reference if there are no leader tabbies approved. Your shading also needs to be increased, slightly thickened, and the transition then needs to be blended thoroughly. --Bramble-san 23:00, September 21, 2009 (UTC)

Redid the tabby stripes. --Spottedwing 01:03, September 23, 2009 (UTC)

I like them now.Minnowclaw 01:40, September 24, 2009 (UTC)

Add a bit more shading and blend it in.-- Echomist Hear the Echo... 14:46, September 25, 2009 (UTC)

Added shading on her left side and I blended it in as much as I could. How does she look? --Spottedwing 22:49, September 25, 2009 (UTC)

Comments? --Spottedwing 21:22, September 26, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - She needs some shading under her chin. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 18:39, September 27, 2009 (UTC)

Hows this? --Spottedwing 18:53, September 27, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Move it up so it's right against the chin line. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 20:28, September 27, 2009 (UTC)

Hows this? --Spottedwing 21:28, September 27, 2009 (UTC)

Wasn't really liking the neck shading, so I blended it in more. How does she look? --Spottedwing 01:37, September 28, 2009 (UTC)

Darken the neck shading.Minnowclaw 00:58, September 29, 2009 (UTC)

I'll get to her as soon as I can. It's homecoming week and its making me busy. Please don't decline. --Spottedwing 20:32, September 30, 2009 (UTC)

Hows this? Wow I say 'Hows this?' alot. --Spottedwing 20:09, October 4, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the stripes more. --Rainwhisker09 21:02, October 7, 2009 (UTC)

Done! How does she look? --Spottedwing 01:10, October 9, 2009 (UTC)

Pretty good. Just a few things left. Add a few more tabby stripes on her haunch, but be careful to make it not looked cluttered in that area. Thicken and then thoroughly blend her shading; the shading on Cloudstar is a good example. Lighten her ear pink just a touch, and make sure they are triangular and blended. Add some tabby stripes and put shading on the belly area inbetween the forelegs and again blend the shading thoroughly. Put a few slightly varied colors of the same base eye color in the eye, to make it look more life-like. Not to boast, but you can use my fursona on my user page for an example. A few darks, a few lights, and a saturated pixels. Be careful on her neck shading; don't make it too thick, and make sure to blur it hard. More shading around her head; forehead, cheeks, etc. Again blur. Add some more tabby markings on her tail, as well. --Bramble-san 02:44, October 9, 2009 (UTC)

Added more tabby stripes. Fixed the eyes, did all I could to the shading without messing up the tabbystripes, added shading and tabby stripes to the belly, added face shading. Did I miss anything? --Spottedwing 01:03, October 11, 2009 (UTC)

All the shading is a little too light.Minnowclaw 12:44, October 11, 2009 (UTC)

Fixed. --Spottedwing 15:53, October 11, 2009 (UTC)

The shading on the neck is good ow, but on the legs and back and chest it still needs blending more. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 16:20, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

Fixed the shading. --Spottedwing 22:27, October 19, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --Bramble-san 22:17, October 22, 2009 (UTC)

Approved Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 19:54, October 23, 2009 (UTC)

Sloefur (D) - Approved

Sloefur.deputy There is shading, but it's hard to see...and what you can see it really messy...should I thicken/darken it, and blur it some more? I've blurred it over and over again, but Pixlr isn't doing much for blurring... Icethroat21 00:39, October 9, 2009 (UTC)

I'll add more shading soon...I should be able to get to it today or tomorrow... Icethroat21 02:11, October 10, 2009 (UTC)

Like you said your self, shading. It's easier with a black cat to do shading with the dodge tool, but if your more comfortable using the burn don't listen to me. This is also very dark. I know that it's not black becuase if I tilt me CP I can see the line art. But lighten it up a bit.Minnowclaw

I've got a busy next couple of days, and I won't be able to get on very much. I'll try to work on Sloefur when I can, even if I don't have enough time to reupload it, so please don't decline this. Icethroat21 17:24, October 11, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I found that it was a lot easier to just start over than to try and edit it, because the shading that I did have was really messy and hard to work with. So...I know that the shading needs blended, but Pixlr doesn't want me to be able and blend it all very much...I mainly can't get the shading on the hind leg right. Any suggestions for what I can do about the shading on the hind leg, as well as on the midriff? Also, sorry I haven't worked on this in a while. Icethroat21 00:46, October 16, 2009 (UTC)

I'll try to lighten the shading soon... (the shading looks too dark, right?) Icethroat21 00:54, October 16, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I tried to lighten the shading. But if I lighten the entire charart, then the shading gets ruined. And I tried to blur the shading as much as possible, but it's blurred to the max in pixlr. So...suggestions? Icethroat21 21:40, October 17, 2009 (UTC)

No, this is great. Comments before approval? GB57 15:51, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

This may be my screen resolution but the shading looks a little blotchy... can you blend a little more? Apart from that tis good. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 18:30, October 19, 2009 (UTC)

I've tried to blur it some more, but it was basically already blurred to the max. Icethroat21Enter at risk 20:56, October 19, 2009 (UTC)

So...any suggestions? Icethroat21Enter at risk 21:34, October 22, 2009 (UTC)

I don't see anything wrong. :) Great job! --EchomistTalkContribs 21:58, October 22, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --Bramble-san 22:06, October 22, 2009 (UTC)

Approved Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 19:59, October 23, 2009 (UTC)

Duskfur - Approved

Duskfur.warrior Echomist saw that I made this, and said I should put this up. How is it?

As for the image, gorgeous. There's just one problem; is Brindleclaw the first image that you ever put up for approval on here? If she is, you have to wait until she gets approved before you can post another image. Sorry, I forgot to tell you that... -- Echomist Hear the Echo... 13:58, October 18, 2009 (UTC)


Thanks for tellingme, I'll wait then. :)--♥Shadowedheart♥ 14:06, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

Here, I put that it's temporarily withdrawn, because this pic is beautiful, and I don't want it completely withdrawn. When your other pic gets approved, put "For Approval" back at the top of this section. GB57 15:31, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

Now that this is back up for approval, I'll comment on it. Beautiful, I can see nothing wrong. Great job Shadowedheart! Icethroat21Enter at risk 21:12, October 19, 2009 (UTC)

(S) - Yeah, it looks awesome! Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 17:35, October 20, 2009 (UTC)

It looks a little bit camoish.--Minnowclaw Enter at own risk... 22:12, October 20, 2009 (UTC)

Camoish? I don't think I follow. Please Describe.--♥Shadowedheart♥ 23:56, October 20, 2009 (UTC)

There's nothing wrong with a cat like her looking a bit like camo. Shadowedheart, if you could tidy up where you smeared the color outside of the tail (towards the middle-left of the tail), I'd be glad to approve this. GB57 22:01, October 21, 2009 (UTC)

REuploaded : Fixed smears--♥Shade♥Meow/Prey 23:54, October 21, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --Bramble-san 22:17, October 22, 2009 (UTC)

None; approved Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 20:07, October 23, 2009 (UTC)

Featherstorm (Q) - Approved

Featherstorm.queen Finally I got her up! She took forever to do xD.-- Darkhallows  My den 15:56, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Wow, there are no words to describe the pure awesomeness of this pic! Just a few things. One, there are a few white pixels in several places. Two, she needs ear pink. Three, several places seem to be.... blue, like on her tail. Three, there is a strait, unblurred line next to the tabby M that needs to be taken out. Finally, her hind paw facing toward us is a different brown than the rest of her body, and needs tabby stripes. Then she should be good. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 18:25, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

(S) - So cool! It looks great to me, but I don't really do charcat that much, so don't listen to me. Listen to Moss. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 16:54, October 19, 2009 (UTC)


I made her a little more brown all over, got rid of the blue (I hope!) and the white spots. I meant to get this up sooner, but my darn internet was down. -- Darkhallows  My den 13:40, October 22, 2009 (UTC)

Beautiful! I sure don't see anything wrong. :D Anyone else? --EchomistTalkContribs 20:57, October 22, 2009 (UTC)

Nope. Comments before approval? --Bramble-san 22:03, October 22, 2009 (UTC)

Fantastic Shady. Approved. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 20:12, October 23, 2009 (UTC)

Rubblepaw - Approved

File:Rubblepaw.pngRubblepaw, my first apprentice and my fourth Code of the Clans character. Comments? --EchomistTalk/Contribs 16:20, October 20, 2009 (UTC)

Very nice Echo! Just lighten the highlights on his shoulder a little bit.Minnowclaw Enter at own risk... 21:59, October 20, 2009 (UTC)

~Reuploaded.~ Thanks, Minnow =) . Lightened shoulder highlights. --EchomistTalk/Contribs 22:12, October 20, 2009 (UTC)

Your welcome, you deserve it. As for the picture, I don't see anything wrong now.--Minnowclaw Enter at own risk... 22:40, October 20, 2009 (UTC)

I don't see anything wrong either. Great job, Echomist! Icethroat21Enter at risk 21:36, October 22, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --Bramble-san 22:01, October 22, 2009 (UTC)

Approved Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 20:14, October 23, 2009 (UTC)

Fernpelt (W) - Approved

File:Fernpelt-Warrior.png Not much to say other than that this is my first tabby. Constructments? --HawktalonTalk 19:54, October 21, 2009 (UTC)

Wow, this is beautiful, Hawktalon! The only thing that needs to be fixed is the ear pink - right now, it's filling the whole ear, but it should be a triangular shape kept inside of the ear. --EchomistTalkContribs 20:00, October 21, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Thanks, Echomist! Fixed the ear pink. Constructments? --HawktalonTalk 21:17, October 22, 2009 (UTC)

I don't see anything wrong now. :) Nice job! --EchomistTalkContribs 21:19, October 22, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --Bramble-san 22:17, October 22, 2009 (UTC)

Approved Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 20:16, October 23, 2009 (UTC)

Merry - Approved

File:Merry.pngSince I wanted to try out Moss's beautiful blanks, I decided to make Merry, one of Jingo's group of loners. Constructive criticism is welcome. --EchomistTalkContribs 20:56, October 22, 2009 (UTC)

This is awesome, Echomist! All I can point out is that the ginger patches look more yellow than ginger. But otherwise, I see nothing else wrong! Wonderful job! --HawktalonTalk 21:20, October 22, 2009 (UTC)

~Reuploaded.~ Urrgh, it's my computer - it has weird brightness levels. That yellow looked like ginger to me, but I switched computers, and I fixed the coloring. How is she now? --EchomistTalkContribs 21:46, October 22, 2009 (UTC)

Great! It looks much better now. I see nothing wrong with it. Icethroat21Enter at risk 21:49, October 22, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --Bramble-san 22:17, October 22, 2009 (UTC)

None; approved. Nice work! Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 20:19, October 23, 2009 (UTC)

Ashfoot (De) - Approved

Ashfoot.deputy
Okay, so I'm starting at the letter A and working my way down I think ^_^ It's my new plan of action. Ashfoot was first so here she is i her most current form. =) Constructments please? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 20:07, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

She's fabulous! :D Maybe just blur the shading a tad. -- Echomist Hear the Echo... 20:46, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

Good. But the highlights could be blurred more.  Ghostfire  Happy Halloween! 23:57, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

Okay. There are no highlights Hawkey, but I blended the shading the best I could. I don't think the blur tool will work any more. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 20:29, October 19, 2009 (UTC)

The shading needs blurred a tad bit more, because there's too hard of a line. Have you tried using a lower percent (somewhere below 50) highlight (on midtones/highlights) on the edge of the shading to make it a color in between the shading and the pelt, and then blurring it? Icethroat21Enter at risk 21:06, October 19, 2009 (UTC)

There will always be some sort of line no matter how much bluring you use. Also, darken the shading more.--Minnowclaw Enter at own risk... 22:08, October 20, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, well I've taken your advice Icethroat and given it a go. The image on the right is the new one. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 14:48, October 21, 2009 (UTC)

It looks a bit...rough. Try adding white highlights slightly and blur, sometimes that may be all it takes.♥Shade♥Meow/Prey 20:21, October 21, 2009 (UTC)

This reminds me why I avoid grey cats... Anyway, I reuploaded over the original file name now. Better? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 12:04, October 22, 2009 (UTC)

The lineart looks a little bit blurred on the curve of the haunch and the shoulder. :) I don't see anything else, though. --EchomistTalkContribs 21:20, October 22, 2009 (UTC)

I reapplied the lineart. Love Gimp xx Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 18:41, October 23, 2009 (UTC)

I don't see anything wrong now. :) Comments before approval? (Yay, I've always wanted to say that lol) --EchomistTalkContribs 18:13, October 24, 2009 (UTC)

Congrats Echo =) Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 21:23, October 24, 2009 (UTC)

Approved. --Bramble-san 22:53, October 25, 2009 (UTC)

Graypool (Elder) - Approved

File:Graypool-Elder.png My first elder! Just so you know, the description said she had patchy fur so I guessed that meant she had a couple of bald spots here and there. That's what those pink thingies are. Constructments? (P.S., Check out my new siggie :D) --HawktalonTalk 16:39, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

Good job. I'm not gonna say beautiful, because Graypool isn't exactly a pretty cat, but excellent job! GB57 16:44, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Very good! But on the patches, take out the lineart on the bottem of them and then blur the pink and gray together, and see how that looks. It might make it look more natural. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 18:21, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Thanks, GB ^^! Mosswhisker, I did what you said, but I didn't take out all the lineart on the bottem of the patches because they looked, well, weird when I did. Constructments? --HawktalonTalk 19:31, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

Maybe you could make like a weird light pink, but not to light like those pinkish grays instead? The bright pink looks kind of unnatural in my oppinion.-- Shim-ShimNewGladiator! 19:51, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

I fixed it, but it won't reupload the new image, only the current one. I think my computer has a mental disorder *has a computer that frequently does not work properly* --HawktalonTalk 00:19, October 19, 2009 (UTC

Reuploaded - It works now :D. Stupid computer, work for meh! Anyway, I lightened the... skin pink, lol. Comments? --HawktalonTalk 00:23, October 19, 2009 (UTC)

Any comments? --HawktalonTalk 21:56, October 22, 2009 (UTC)

Not from me. :) Nice job! --EchomistTalkContribs 21:57, October 22, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 16:16, October 24, 2009 (UTC)

Approved. --Bramble-san 22:53, October 25, 2009 (UTC)

Redclaw - Approved

File:Redclaw-Warrior.png Ugh, I hate this picture. But I'll put it up anyway. The shading is blurred as far as it can go. Constructments (I love that word :3)? --Hawktalon 22:53, October 5, 2009 (UTC)

He's good, but the shading and highlights need to be blurred a lot. HAWKFIRE98 23:03, October 5, 2009 (UTC)

Ya, blend. Minnowclaw 23:14, October 5, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried to blur the shading more, but I don't think much has changed (stupid Pixlr >_<).Any constructments? --Hawktalon 19:52, October 6, 2009 (UTC)

Your right, nothing much happend. Try smudging it.Minnowclaw 22:53, October 6, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Smudged the shading. Comments? --Hawktalon 21:32, October 7, 2009 (UTC)

Sumdge this more and blend, but it's much better. Focus on the shading on the head. (That part tripped me up on my Seedpelt).Minnowclaw 12:02, October 10, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Smudged and blurred the shading more. Anything else? --Hawktalon 20:10, October 11, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink if gray.--Minnowclaw 00:28, October 12, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Erm, the ear pink wasn't gray. But I did notice that ear pink was a little hard to see, so I changed it. Constructments? --Hawktalon 19:47, October 12, 2009 (UTC)

Maybe it was my laptop, it's a fourth hand-me-down and falling apart. Better now, but it needs to be a little bit brighter.Minnowclaw Enter at own risk... 00:23, October 15, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Brightened the ear pink. Any other comments? --Hawktalon 19:21, October 15, 2009 (UTC)

Nope; this is ready. Comments before approval? --Bramble-san 18:08, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

Approved. --Bramble-san 22:53, October 25, 2009 (UTC)

Mossheart - Approved

File:Mossheart.pngMossheart, my first tortie. *twists fingers together nervously* I don't think that she came out that well... but I guess that's for other people to decide. Comments? --EchomistTalkContribs 20:53, October 23, 2009 (UTC)

Who are you trying to kid Echo? She came out fine, well more than fine actually. I think you need to darken the shading a little, but I can see no other problems. =) Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 22:05, October 23, 2009 (UTC)

~Reuploaded.~ Thanks, Sandy =) Darkened shading. Anything else? --EchomistTalkContribs 00:21, October 24, 2009 (UTC)

Now that you fixed the shading, I see nothing wrong. Beautiful, Echomist! Great for your first tortie! Icethroat21Enter at risk 02:17, October 24, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval?--Darkhallows 07:39, October 25, 2009 (UTC)

None, approved.--Darkhallows 19:32, October 26, 2009 (UTC)

Gorseclaw (TC) - for approval

File:Logfur.png*Shrugs* A minor character. Comments/criticism? --EchomistTalkContribs 20:51, October 23, 2009 (UTC)

I see nothing wrong. Looks perfect to me. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 22:06, October 23, 2009 (UTC)

Looks great! But, unfortunately, Logfur has already been reserved by Nightflight. Sorry :( --HawktalonTalk 22:11, October 23, 2009 (UTC)

Right you are, Hawktalon. He is now Gorseclaw. --EchomistTalkContribs 00:17, October 24, 2009 (UTC)

I can see nothing wrong. Great job, Echomist! Icethroat21Enter at risk 02:01, October 24, 2009 (UTC)


Comments before approval?--Darkhallows 07:38, October 25, 2009 (UTC)

Approved! Echo you are really good ^^.--Darkhallows 19:41, October 26, 2009 (UTC)

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