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Stonefur (W)- Approved

Stonefur.warrior

My first Charart up for approval! Comments? Suggestions? Concerns? (P.S. if you were making a charart for Stoenfur please tell me.)--Mosspath of Skyclan 15:57, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

Whoever this is, please sign with --~~~~ next time so we know who you are. For the image, blur the shading more.--*Minnowclaw* 15:55, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

Whoops! Sorry! I'll fix that.--Mosspath of Skyclan 15:57, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

It's fine, no need to be sorry.--*Minnowclaw* 16:00, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded blurred shading.--Mosspath of Skyclan 16:04, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

This is very good for your first charart. I'd suggest you make the earpink darker though. See Rockpaw as an example or Rubblepaw or Scorchfur. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 16:07, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded darkened ear pink.--Mosspath of Skyclan 16:14, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

This is great for your first charart! All I see is that the hind leg shading needs to be blended a little more. --Hallow's Eve09 16:15, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink isn't that much darker. Try making it darker and redder.--*Minnowclaw* 16:17, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded darkened ear pink and blurred shading more.--Mosspath of Skyclan 16:26, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

Good job, I don't see anything wrong.--*Minnowclaw* 16:31, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

Stonefur's eyes should be more brownish, and he needs battle scars on his ears. Otherwise, this is great! --Rainwhisker09 16:35, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I made the eyes more brown and gave him battle scarred ears. I'm not sure if that's what people would call "battle scarred ears" I just made the tips rougher.--Mosspath of Skyclan 16:45, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

Great job, Mosspath! All I can see is that when you tipped the top of the ear off, you didn't completely erase all of the lineart that you got rid of. Otherwise, the ears are fine, because the scars would actually be on the back of the ears, which we can't see from this angle of the image. --Icethroat21Enter at risk 17:23, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

I think the eyes are fine now, and do what Ice said. Also, there's some gray above the ears. NVM. --Rainwhisker09 17:24, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Erased stuff above ears.--Mosspath of Skyclan 17:34, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --Bramble-san 19:33, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

Approved! Great first image =) Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 18:44, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

Jet (Lo) - Approved

Jet.loner Poor Icethroat has no life on the weekends except for special events like holidays and such, so all she does is sit at her computer all day and make chararts, and then go play games while she waits for comments. (lol) Anyway, here's Jet as a loner. And I know the highlights need blurred, but they are blurred to the max. So...suggestions? --Icethroat21Enter at risk 19:02, October 31, 2009 (UTC)

LOL, and I though I was the only one! For the image, make the ear pink brighter, but not too bright.--*Minnowclaw* 20:55, October 31, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. lol, Minnowclaw! Me too! For the image, does the ear pink look better now? --Icethroat21Enter at risk 03:30, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry, not really.--*Minnowclaw* 12:50, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I changed the color of the ear pink. Does it look better now? --Icethroat21Enter at risk 17:30, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but i'm not seeing a change.--*Minnowclaw* 18:55, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

Try uploading it again. Sometimes the uploading server goes haywire and won't show the changes. --Rainwhisker09 19:26, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

Can you see it now? --Icethroat21Enter at risk 20:02, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

Yes I can. Perfect. Comments before approval in 24 hours?--*Minnowclaw* 22:05, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

None. Approved.--*Minnowclaw* 23:07, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

Crookedstar - Approved

File:Crookedstar.png

Don't know what to make of this one... how is he? --Bramble-san 03:24, October 28, 2009 (UTC)

Wow... that's really good. :) All I have is a suggestion; Shouldn't he have a Crooked jaw? XD Shistar BOO! 12:18, October 28, 2009 (UTC)

That's all I go too. If it helps, it said in bluestar's prophecy that it looked like it had been flipped over.--Minnowclaw Enter at own risk... 22:29, October 28, 2009 (UTC)

I tweaked his mouth line a little bit; look more crooked now? --Bramble-san 04:23, October 31, 2009 (UTC)

Hmm..I think it just looks like he's frowning now. Perhaps you could move the actual jaw (chin) lineart over a few pixels. Unless you've already done that; it's kind of hard to tell. Wonderful job on the coloring itself, though!:) --WerecatHappy Halloween! 15:33, October 31, 2009 (UTC)

Thank you. :) Does this look better? --Bramble-san 23:27, October 31, 2009 (UTC)

Make it sort of tilted, because now, it looks like my friends cat who broke her jaw from falling out of her 5 story apartment when she was a kitten. Don't worry, the only side effect is that she drools when she purrs.--*Minnowclaw* 02:39, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

Poor kitty. :) Does this look better? It's not as if it's been smushed now, more like it's been jarred to the side. If it still doesn't look good, you'll have to explain to me how to do it... I really am not sure what I can do to make it perfect. --Bramble-san 22:56, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

It looks fin now Bramble. But where did you get the reference for the cream paws and neck. If it's abstract art then don't change it because I have done my fair share of that in my pictures. --*Minnowclaw* 23:33, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

The shameful truth is that he had a cream chest and front paws in his Cats of the Clans picture, and I thought he looked good with them. :) Is he alright this way?--Bramble-san 00:13, November 3, 2009 (UTC)

I think he looks fine the way he is. A lot of our approved pictures have extra features (even though I can't name one off the top of my head). =) --HoneyfurBob's Your Uncle! 00:26, November 3, 2009 (UTC)

Ya I added some things to my leopardstar because it looked better with them then without. Okay, I don't see anything wrong and I can't wait to see waht totally cool things you have to show us next. So... Comments before approval in 24 hours?--*Minnowclaw* 01:38, November 3, 2009 (UTC)

None. Approved. Great job!--*Minnowclaw* 22:14, November 3, 2009 (UTC)

Spottedleaf (MCA)- Approved

File:Spottedleaf(MCA).pngI made this by accident while trying to make two of my characters, soo.. I'm kina going to use this with a different eye color a bit in an Rp...Hope you dont mand. Comments?--♥Shadowedheart♥ 21:09, October 27, 2009 (UTC)

This is good but you used the regular apprentice blank Ashshadow 21:19, October 27, 2009 (UTC)

Darn! I just relized that. Here, lemme change that.--♥Shadowedheart♥ 21:29, October 27, 2009 (UTC)

Actually, Grayravenpaw had this researved before you did. But before you withdraw it, I suggest changing it into another tortoiseshell apprentice, like Dappletail. Mossflight 21:37, October 27, 2009 (UTC)

This is great, but we said that we would only do curent pictures. Are there any other cats you make her?--Minnowclaw Enter at own risk... 21:38, October 27, 2009 (UTC)

I, I really don't know. When did we decide to do only current characters?♥Shadowedheart♥ 21:42, October 27, 2009 (UTC)

I thought we were doing imageless characters. Ashshadow 21:46, October 27, 2009 (UTC)

My fault, I didn't announce the decision we made. Keep this up; it's good, but after it's approved then do imageless characters, as Ashshadow says. Spottedleaf already has a picture. I believe you misunderstood; you can do whatever character you like, but in the current rank they are in, and only if they don't have a picture. Follow me? --Bramble-san 22:07, October 27, 2009 (UTC)

I follow, but someone said G.R.paw reserved spottedleaf as a mca. And I did all of this work, and blah. Who else can this be?♥Shadowedheart♥ 23:31, October 27, 2009 (UTC)

Well, why don't you talk to Lightning (G.r.paw) and ask if he'd mind you doing this image? It's worth a try and that reservation has bene up for a lot longer than two weeks (even counting his illness recently) Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 13:27, October 29, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry Shadowedheart! I just read my coment over and it was SO unclear. My bad!--♥Halloweenclaw 20:49, October 29, 2009 (UTC)

Shouldn't this be taken down now?--*Minnowclaw* 20:58, October 31, 2009 (UTC)

No. Well, I don't think so atleast. G.R.paw's out and its been awhile so.. i think i should be able to do this image. I worked forever on it.--♥Shadowedheart♥ 21:43, October 31, 2009 (UTC)

I really like this image and have spoken with Bramble and we've agreed you can keep her up as Spottedleaf. Back to the actual image as there haven't been any comments so far about it. I really like it, as I said, and can't see anything wrong. I'll give others a chance to comment now the mix-up has been started and then I think it's ready for approval. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 23:16, October 31, 2009 (UTC)

The back leg that's mostly hidden looks really dark compared to the rest of the brown in her pelt. --Ashshadow My Clan 01:16, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

That's because the chest casts a shadow over it, thus making it darker.♥Shadowedheart♥ 02:37, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

I know there's a shadow but the shading looks darker than the shading on the pelt. That might just be me though.--Ashshadow My Clan 02:42, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

Take it.––Σ ãliãs G.r.pawRR 11:07, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

I think the shading looks fine. --Icethroat21Enter at risk 20:06, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

We always have put shading on the leg like that because of I shadow. Don't worry Ashshadow. When I first joined, well you don't even want to know. Does anyone else have anything or does anyone else side with Ashshadow?--*Minnowclaw* 01:21, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

I think she looks fine. Comments before approval? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 14:51, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

None, approved.--*Minnowclaw* 02:11, November 4, 2009 (UTC)

Halftail - Approved

File:Halftail.png

Had a job making the hind leg that's normally hidden by the tail look good... how is he? Constructments? --Bramble-san 23:36, October 31, 2009 (UTC)

The hind leg looks great but, maybe you should move the line for the front leg donw a little. Ashshadow My Clan 00:16, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

I think you should shift the hind leg paw to the left a bit. It looks kind of awkward right now. --Rainwhisker09 19:22, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

Done. Anything else? --Bramble-san 01:55, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

Looks good to me Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 19:02, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

On the front leg we can see, the elbow-ish part looks a little lifted as if he's about to stand up. I don't know if its the charart blank or if its a mistake or intended to be that way.--Mossy SC 23:48, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

That's just how the lineart is. --Bramble-san 01:15, November 3, 2009 (UTC)

kk, I wasn't sure.--Mossy SC 01:44, November 3, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval in 24 hours?--*Minnowclaw* 02:04, November 4, 2009 (UTC)

Approved. --Bramble-san 04:08, November 5, 2009 (UTC)

Applekit (Redone) - Approved

File:Applekit.png Okay, so I've tweaked her to fit with her accurate description and uploaded it over the old file name to save space on the wiki. Constructments? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 19:02, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

I love her! Just darken the shading a little bit.--*Minnowclaw* 22:59, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

She's gorgeous, but I can't see her ear pink very well. Maybe it's just me.--Mossy SC 23:50, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

Oh ya Moss. (Can I call you Moss?). I see that, (or don't) IDK.--*Minnowclaw* 00:29, November 3, 2009 (UTC)

Moss is fine!--Mossy SC 00:34, November 3, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Darkened the shading and lightened the ear pink. I'll do Birchstar's updates after tea =) Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 18:26, November 3, 2009 (UTC)

I see it now, good job!--Mossy SC 18:29, November 3, 2009 (UTC)

I love it now! Comments before approval in 24 hours?--*Minnowclaw* 22:08, November 3, 2009 (UTC)

Approved. --Bramble-san 04:08, November 5, 2009 (UTC)

Gorsestar (L) - Approved

File:Gorsestar-Leader.pngOkay, my first charart. Sorry if i'm doing something wrong. X3 And perhaps I shouldn't have started with a Tabby... :/ Okay, I'm ready for the critique! (And yes, sorry but I couldn't figure out how to get the background transparent. XP) Shigura Mah Talk Page 00:48, October 23, 2009 (UTC)

WOW I like this XD the left ear pink is on the line art a bit. and the left leg at the top the dark bit is going out of the line art an bit. and with the head you see the line like a bowl (sort of) try and put a bit of shading under it.  Brambleclaw14 Talk 10:04, October 23, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. And is it just me, or does my attempt at shading resemble a collar? XD Shigura Mah Talk Page 11:30, October 23, 2009 (UTC)

lol yeah maybe a bit try looking at Vinestar.  Brambleclaw14 Talk 11:33, October 23, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Shigura Mah Talk Page 11:40, October 23, 2009 (UTC)

nice one more thing on the new bit on the left it's gone over the line art  Brambleclaw14 Talk 11:42, October 23, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Shigura Mah Talk Page 11:55, October 23, 2009 (UTC)

Wow, this is impressive for your first Charart, Shigura! Just a few things - first of all, the ear pink is a little too circular (it should be more triangular-shaped, and kept inside the ear lineart). The nose should be colored in pink (for a grey cat, it should be a dull grayish-pink color). The tabby markings should be thinner (maybe make them with a size 3 brush), there should be a lot more of them, and they should be blurred into the pelt just a bit. Lastly, darken the shading a bit, especially on the head to make it look more 3-dimensional. As for the transparent background, I did it for you (I hope you don't mind). --EchomistTalkContribs 12:34, October 23, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I couldn't get the thick stripes off Gorsestar without making him look dumb, so I started again with the Gorsestar picture I had with just the shading. I tried doing stripes like the one on the Birchstar picture. Are they any good? Shigura Mah Talk Page 20:22, October 23, 2009 (UTC)

Wait, I forgot to do the nose. Silly me. XD Any other critique besides the fact the nose is white? XDD Shigura Mah Talk Page 20:26, October 23, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, sorry for triple-posting, but I re-uploaded, this time with the nose colored in. =) Shigura Mah Talk Page 22:54, October 23, 2009 (UTC)

No, good job Shigura!--Minnowclaw Enter at own risk... 12:53, October 25, 2009 (UTC)

Umm.. did I upload it wrong? For some reason the image keeps reverting back to the white-nosed picture! Or is it just me? D: Shistar BOO! 20:00, October 26, 2009 (UTC)

That's only in the boxes of all the previous images. If you look at the actual image up top, not in the boxes, you should see the updated image. I've wondered about that, too, but I know that the uploaded image is visible on the top, the one the full size and not in the box. For the actual image, it looks lovely, but you might want to add some shading between the two ears on the head. --Icethroat21Enter at risk 00:28, October 27, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Any more critique? :3 Shistar BOO! 00:37, October 27, 2009 (UTC)

Add some shading on the left (our left, Gorsestar's right) side of the head, like you did on the other side. Otherwise, great job! --Icethroat21Enter at risk 00:47, October 27, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Shistar BOO! 00:59, October 27, 2009 (UTC)

Could you make the nose a bit more of a grayish-pink? It looks a bit redish Ashshadow 22:35, October 27, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Shistar BOO! 23:27, October 27, 2009 (UTC)

It's pretty good, but the ear pink looks too purple and the stripes need to be blurred a bit.  Vampiresong  vants to suck your blood! 21:44, October 29, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink looks more purple than pink. --Icethroat21Enter at risk 00:39, October 30, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry, I just realized that Sparrowsong said that the ear pink looked purple, and then I say it again...sorry, I wasn't paying attention like I should have been. Also, the tail-tip looks a bit strange... --Icethroat21Enter at risk 03:10, October 30, 2009 (UTC)

On many gray cats, the noses are kind of a dark, rosy color. Could you make the nose color a bit more like that? --EchomistTalkContribs 12:38, October 30, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, normally I would have this done, but I'm really sick. ;_; Please don't decline this, and Echo; I'm really sorry I haven't gotten that Grey She-cat with the amber eyes fixed yet.I'll have this done by the end of the week. Or I'll try to.. Shistar BOO! 12:53, October 30, 2009 (UTC)

Aw, sorry to hear that, Shigura. :( Hope you get better soon. And don't worry about the gray she-cat with amber eyes, it's not like it's timed or anything :). --EchomistTalkContribs 22:11, October 30, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Sorry if there's color over the lineart, and if the nose isn't any darker. I really couldn't tell if It managed to save or not. My computer crashed when I tried to save the image. >_> Shistar BOO! 19:16, October 31, 2009 (UTC)

Aww, that stinks! T.T (Are apprentices allowed to critique?) I think that the eye shine looks a bit odd, does anyone else think so? Great job though.--Mosspath of Skyclan 14:24, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

Yeah, I asked that same question a while ago. XD But yeah, you can critique. (As someone told me, It's part of the learning experience.) As for the eyes... can someone give me something to look at, or a guide of somesort? Shistar BOO! 14:55, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

You should scroll down and look at Bramble's Crookedstar eyes, they are pretty good.--Mosspath of Skyclan 14:59, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Shistar Mai Talk Page! =) 16:28, November 4, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 17:37, November 5, 2009 (UTC)

Approved Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 18:31, November 6, 2009 (UTC)

Fuzzypelt- Approved

File:Fuzzypelt.elders.png Oh my, his name -shudders-.--Darkhallows 02:47, October 28, 2009 (UTC)

I love the fur, Darky. At the moment, I have nothing. --Bramble-san 03:25, October 28, 2009 (UTC)

Ya, Nothin' as usual.--Minnowclaw Enter at own risk... 22:29, October 28, 2009 (UTC)

There's a white pixel in the lineart of the tail. Other than that, I can see nothing. I'd say beautiful, but I don't think that fits it for Fuzzypelt, so I'll say awesome instead. Awesome! --Icethroat21Enter at risk 03:02, October 29, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --EchomistTalkContribs 12:42, October 30, 2009 (UTC)

There is still a white mark.--*Minnowclaw* 19:05, October 31, 2009 (UTC)

Ugh, stupid me, I was tired and I didn't read Icethroat's comment >.< . -- Echoshriek Trick or treat! 19:54, October 31, 2009 (UTC)

Don't worry Echomist, we always have times like that.--*Minnowclaw* 20:57, October 31, 2009 (UTC)

Done. Sorry it took so long xD.--Darkhallows 03:48, November 5, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 19:57, November 5, 2009 (UTC)

Approved Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 18:46, November 6, 2009 (UTC)

Cora (R) - Approved

Cora.rogue Well, after Hawkey withdrew her charart of Cora, I decided that I wanted to give it a try. To be honest, I'm not very proud of this image...did I get the nose color and eye color right? (I don't think I did...) --Icethroat21Enter at risk 22:29, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a little brighter and pinker.--*Minnowclaw* 22:56, November 2, 2009 (UTC)


Don't know what you're talking about, Icethroat. :) The image is awesome. Just do as Minnow suggested and then I'd call her good. --Bramble-san 23:03, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? --Icethroat21Enter at risk 21:56, November 3, 2009 (UTC)

Brighten it more. It sort of looks gray right now.--*Minnowclaw* 22:03, November 3, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Any better? --Icethroat21Enter at risk 22:18, November 3, 2009 (UTC)

Yep, but the background looks like an odd gray. Can you make it transparent or do you want me to do it for you?--*Minnowclaw* 01:58, November 4, 2009 (UTC)

Can you please make it transparent for me? Sorry, I don't know how to. --Icethroat21Enter at risk 03:21, November 4, 2009 (UTC)

Here you go. --*Minnowclaw* 14:42, November 4, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks, Minnowclaw. Anything else? --Icethroat21Enter at risk 21:30, November 4, 2009 (UTC)

Not from me. Comments before approval? --Bramble-san 04:18, November 5, 2009 (UTC)

Approved Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 20:58, November 6, 2009 (UTC)

Wetfoot - Approved

File:Wetfoot.png Poor guy... wasn't mentioned much. I did like him at the Gathering in F & I, though. Constructments? --Bramble-san 04:28, November 5, 2009 (UTC)

Amazing, as usual, Bramble. :) I see nothing. Does anyone else? --EchomistTalkContribs 13:54, November 5, 2009 (UTC)

Searching.. Searching... No, I have nothing, but my brain is fried from downloading all 6 hours of the warriors starlight audio book one 80 minuet disk at a time. OMG.--*Minnowclaw* 01:19, November 6, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 18:51, November 6, 2009 (UTC)

Approved. --Bramble-san 20:27, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

Mothflight (MC) - Approved

File:Mothflight.medicinecat.png I'm not too fond of this image, actually. I don't feel like the shading's blurred enough, but I've blurred over it many many times... So, here's Mothflight, the first medicine cat to ever go to the Moonstone. Comments and Suggestions? --Icethroat21Enter at risk 23:12, November 4, 2009 (UTC)

He's awsome!!Could you make the shading in the tail a little darker, it's hard to see. But other than that he's great.HiddensunTalk 23:12, November 4, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I love the burn tool, made that much easier. :) Better, or does it need darkened some more? --Icethroat21Enter at risk 23:20, November 4, 2009 (UTC)

The shading on the tail is good, but now could you also put more shading on the body of the cats?That's all that I can see, other than that she's great!HiddensunTalk 01:51, November 5, 2009 (UTC)

Put more shading on the body, or darken the shading on the body? There's already a lot of shading on there. --Icethroat21Enter at risk 01:55, November 5, 2009 (UTC)

sorry-my bad.darken the shading.HiddensunTalk 02:12, November 5, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. It's darkened now, but it's blurred to the max. Does it look better now? --Icethroat21Enter at risk 03:39, November 5, 2009 (UTC)

LOL! I was going to do her, but got to fed up with the shading. Anyway, this looks great, but the ear pink is more of a hot pink. Make it duller.--*Minnowclaw* 01:22, November 6, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Any better? --Icethroat21Enter at risk 01:35, November 6, 2009 (UTC)

This looks great to me. Comments before approval? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 20:55, November 6, 2009 (UTC)

Approved. --Bramble-san 23:50, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

Snake - Approved

File:Snake.Rogue.png I've gotta say, I'm not too proud of this one. He's a BloodClan cat, so I gace him a toothed collar and enhanced claws. The collar I personally hate. But nonetheless, constructments? --HawktalonTalk 22:12, November 3, 2009 (UTC)

This looks really good but, you might want to make the teeth on his collar a tad less yellow --Ashstar My Clan 22:40, November 3, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Thankies, Ashshadow;)! Changed the teeth coloring. Better? --HawktalonTalk 01:48, November 4, 2009 (UTC)

Thin the shading on the belly and the hip. Then blur it more.--*Minnowclaw* 01:53, November 4, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Fixed shading. Comments? --HawktalonTalk 02:16, November 4, 2009 (UTC)

For the shading on the hip, it sort of digs into the cat and it looks like a triangle. Shorten it to look smoother and less triangleish.--*Minnowclaw* 01:41, November 6, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Fixed the shading on the hip. Better? --HawktalonTalk 20:30, November 6, 2009 (UTC)

This looks good to me. Comments before approval? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 10:30, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

Approved Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 21:36, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

Braveheart - Approved

Braveheart.warrior Okay, so I messed up with Birchstar so here's the next on my list, the noble StarClan spirit, Braveheart. Constructments? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 22:26, November 4, 2009 (UTC)

He's awsome!!Could you make the shading in the tail a little darker, it's hard to see. But other than that he's great.HiddensunTalk 23:46, November 4, 2009 (UTC)

Done. I also added some highlights on a whim. Comments? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 18:55, November 5, 2009 (UTC)

Darken the stripes. They sort of look faded into the pelt.--*Minnowclaw* 01:24, November 6, 2009 (UTC)

Done Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 07:09, November 6, 2009 (UTC)

I love this. comments before approval? --Bramble-san 20:24, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

None; approved Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 21:41, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

Brightspirit (W) - For Approval

File:Brightspirit.warrior.png We all know how important this image is due to the young girl this cat represents so I want to mke it as good as possible. Constructments please x Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 19:21, November 5, 2009 (UTC)

Wow, Sandy, this is amazing...that little girl would be so thrilled...just darken the stripes a bit, since silver tabbies generally have really dark (often black) stripes. Sparrowsong 20:07, November 5, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks Sparrowsong =) (ps. I kept the other version just in case as this one is worse a mon avis) Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 21:01, November 5, 2009 (UTC)

Sandy this is amazing! But the stripe below the jaw looks odd. That little girl watching from heaven would be so pleased. HawkfireTalk! 22:42, November 5, 2009 (UTC)

Whoops. That was my overapping burn tool by accident. Fixed. My last update this evening lol. I need sleep! Night! Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 22:46, November 5, 2009 (UTC)

Good night Sandy! For the image, the line that goes across the muzzle looks lighter than the rest of the stripes.--*Minnowclaw* 01:14, November 6, 2009 (UTC)

fixed Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 07:07, November 6, 2009 (UTC)

Wow, that is lovely! Brightspirit is a beautiful cat, and you brought that out well! That girl would be screaming with joy! I really don't see anything. :) --Mossy SC 23:14, November 6, 2009 (UTC)

Emmy would love this. :) Comments before approval? --Bramble-san 20:23, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

RIP Emmy. Approved Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 21:43, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

Smallear - Approved

File:Smallear (E).png Attempted to shrink the ears. Hope they look fine. --Bramble-san 04:28, November 5, 2009 (UTC)

I would make the ears a bit more small and round, like how they are in the book.--Shadowedheart 11:25, November 5, 2009 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but I really don't want to mess with the ears... you wouldn't believe how hard it is getting them in proportion. If you look at the regular elder blank, you can see that they are bigger than the ones here. --Bramble-san 22:20, November 5, 2009 (UTC)

Doesn't he have a nick in his ear from like a hawk or something?--*Minnowclaw* 01:16, November 6, 2009 (UTC)

An owl. :) Fixed. --Bramble-san 22:08, November 6, 2009 (UTC)

Daw, Bramble, I was going to do him! In your list you had his name crossed out so I didn't read it....but he looks better than mine, I guess.--Shaf Girl 19:58, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 18:17, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

Approved Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 19:40, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

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