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Ripplestar - For Approval

File:Ripplestar Leader.pngThe perfect Halloween cat, and, strangely enough, another ancient ShadowClan leader. Comments? -- Echoshriek Trick or treat! 23:39, October 30, 2009 (UTC)

Maybe you can make the orange more natural, and love the new sig!--♥Halloweenclaw 23:50, October 30, 2009 (UTC)

This is very nice, Echo! I echo Minnow, and blend the patches more. Nice sig! --Hallow's Eve09 02:14, October 31, 2009 (UTC)

Woah, everyone has Halloween signatures now. I've started a trend! LOL, nice pic. Just do what Minnow and Rain said, and blur the shading, and he should be perfect.  Vampiresong  vants to suck your blood! 18:30, October 31, 2009 (UTC)

black and orange cats are just torties... and well...I think the patches aren't really like that...maybe make them mre...sharpish...-- ☆Pebble☆ X3 00:20, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

He's awsome Echo!!Could you just make the ears and the nose a little more pinkish?HiddensunTalk 01:57, November 5, 2009 (UTC)

~Reuploaded.~ Blurred the patches and the shading, made the orange more natural, and made the ears and nose more pinkish. Pebble, I'm not quite sure what you mean... Could you elaborate, please? --EchomistTalkContribs 13:52, November 5, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink is very dark and needs to be lightened.--*Minnowclaw* 01:44, November 6, 2009 (UTC)

sorreh, what I meant was they look just like torties -- ☆Pebble☆ X3 16:04, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

~Reuploaded.~ I completely redid him, keeping in mind you guys' comments. --EchomistTalkContribs 14:49, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

Wow, nice work Echo! I've looked closely and I can't see anything I'd change. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 17:32, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

Beautiful, Echo! I can't see anything wrong, either. Great job! --Icethroat21Enter at risk 18:19, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Also, I've removed that image Bracken as it was in an odd place on the page and isn't really needed anymore =) Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 21:34, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

None; approved. --EchomistTalkContribs 01:10, November 10, 2009 (UTC)

Robinwing (RC) (A) - For Approval

File:Robinwing.RC.apprentice.png *shrugs* My second tortoiseshell. Personally, I like this one much better than my Olivepaw image, but I guess I'll leave that up to you all to decide. So, commments on the cat with such an original name? :P --Icethroat21Enter at risk 00:30, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

A tortoiseshell and white tom? Inconceivable! Anywaaay, this is really good! I can't see anything wrong at the moment. --HawktalonTalk 01:30, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

Beautiful! Just one thing: darken the ear farthest from us (his left ear). Great job! --Rainwhisker09 02:37, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks for the nice comments! Does the ear look better now? --Icethroat21Enter at risk 03:10, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

This is awesome. Comments before approval? --EchomistTalkContribs 00:57, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

None; approved. --EchomistTalkContribs 01:20, November 10, 2009 (UTC)

Poppycloud(W) Approved

File:Poppycloud.png My first tortie..comments?-- ☆Pebble☆ X3 00:52, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

Well, I'm up early... But, anyway, this is very nice for your first tortie! But on the right side of the orange patches on the haunch and shoulder there seems to be some hair-like smudges. Perhaps you could take them out, for they look a little unusual. --HawktalonTalk 12:26, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

The orange is way too bright... it should be more of a gingery colour. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 19:02, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

Maybe make the ear pink less...bright. --Mosspath of Skyclan 20:55, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

reuploaded-- ☆Pebble☆ X3 01:02, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

The ginger patches look jagged and unnatural. I think they looked better the way that you did them before. --EchomistTalkContribs 14:58, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

reuplloaded-- ☆Pebble☆ X3 16:13, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

This looks great! Can you smudge/blend the edges of the coloured and white patches into the black pelt though as they look slightly like paint splotches. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 17:39, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

is this okay?-- ☆Pebble☆ X3 19:57, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

I can't see any problems. Comments before approval? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 19:35, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

None. Approved. --Bramble-san 22:49, November 10, 2009 (UTC)

Sneezepaw - Approved I wanted to try an apprentice so here's Sneezepaw.--Ashstar My Clan 00:57, November 4, 2009 (UTC)

Look's really good! Darken the shading, though. :) Goldencloud 01:38, November 4, 2009 (UTC)

Sneezepaw, worst name EVER. For the image, just darken the shading and blur it.--*Minnowclaw* 01:52, November 4, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I feel bad for Sneezepaw. I dont think we'll see him any time soon, what would his name be. Sneezestorm.--Ashstar My Clan 22:15, November 4, 2009 (UTC)

Lol! Sneezestorm. "Hey Sneezestorm, you up for patrol?" I can imagine that now... Anyway, for the actual image, now that you've blured the shading on the chest and belly, it doesn't look white any more, but rather gray. There needs to be some space in the middle that's not as dark as the rest of the gray, a really really light gray or just plain white. The same could go for part of the hind leg. Also, the shading on the gray needs blurred some more. (especially the highlights) --Icethroat21Enter at risk 23:17, November 4, 2009 (UTC)

I understand what you mean about the shading but, what highlights? I didn't add any should I?--Ashstar My Clan 23:28, November 4, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry, my bad, I looked at the space in the gray that wasn't shading and thought it was a highlight. (smacks self) Sorry. I don't think you need to add any highlights unless you want to. --Icethroat21Enter at risk 23:52, November 4, 2009 (UTC)

Lol, it's okay. So I just need to make the chest more white and blur the shading on the gray some more, right?--Ashstar My Clan 23:57, November 4, 2009 (UTC)

Eww, Sneezestrom...reminds mee too much of the swine flu...shivers The only thing I see is that on the chest, there is a little pale-ish gray spot, looking darker than the white.--Mossy SC 00:29, November 5, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry to hear that you caught that Mosspath. I'll work more on this tomorrow. Any comments besides the gray area--Ashstar My Clan 00:46, November 5, 2009 (UTC)?

I'm better now, but I still ahve a horrible cough that won't leave meh...T.T--Mossy SC 00:50, November 5, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I couldn't get the white to look right so I lightened the shading on that part. Is he better?--Ashstar My Clan 20:25, November 5, 2009 (UTC)

He looks great now. --Mossy SC 20:48, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 19:36, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

None. Approved. --Bramble-san 22:52, November 10, 2009 (UTC)

Silverpaw (A) - Approved

File:Silverpaw 1.PNG right this is Silverpaw.  Brambleclaw14 Talk 16:07, November 4, 2009 (UTC)

She's beautiful! The only thing I see is that you need to put less shading on the tail and the far ear. You can hardly see the real color :) MorningleafFox CubWolf Pup 21:03, November 4, 2009 (UTC)

Better?  Brambleclaw14 Talk 10:18, November 5, 2009 (UTC)

I can't really see the pupil, and it looks like the lineart around the eye thickened--Shadowedheart 11:27, November 5, 2009 (UTC)

Better?  Brambleclaw14 Talk 12:50, November 5, 2009 (UTC)

You altered the line art and now she looks mad. Also, make the eyes more orange as they look red now.--*Minnowclaw* 01:39, November 6, 2009 (UTC)

what bit of line art is this?  Brambleclaw14 Talk 09:50, November 6, 2009 (UTC)

You changed the lineart on the eye. --Icethroat21Enter at risk 00:03, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

Better?  Brambleclaw14 Talk 10:56, November 7, 2009 (UTC) (One more day and it's my birthday :D)

It looks like you used the tom blank.Silverpaws page says she-cat, I think thats what Icethroat and Minnowclaw ment.--Ashstar My Clan 15:21, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

oh yeah I can't get PNGs for now and the she cats one is a PNG, I'm working on geting PNGs but for how :(.  Brambleclaw14 Talk 17:48, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

I'll sort it for you. It's simple to fix. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 17:57, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, I put the right lineart on. I don't see anything else wrong with this. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 18:13, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks Sandy :)  Brambleclaw14 Talk 07:28, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 19:38, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

Approved. --Bramble-san 22:52, November 10, 2009 (UTC)

Tawnyspots(Deputy) - Approved

File:Tawnyspots(D).png...uh..constructments?-- ☆Pebble☆ X3 05:22, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

I'm just an apprentice, and might not be able to offer you much advice, but I think it's amazing!--Nightfall101 05:33, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

Wow, this looks amazing, Pebble! I love how you did the tufts on the ears. Make the ear pink more thin and triangular-shaped, and I'd be glad to approve this. --EchomistTalkContribs 15:01, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

reuploaded-- ☆Pebble☆ X3 16:01, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

Nice one! Oh...the ears! starts to itch scalp. Wonderful! --Mossy SC 23:45, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

I'm sorry, Pebble, but this is the third image that you have up for approval. As it says on the notice, you're only allowed two up at a time. I'm going to temporarily decline it, but feel free to resubmit after Icewing or Poppycloud has been approved. --EchomistTalkContribs 01:34, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

Changing For Approval to Temporarily Declined. --Rainwhisker09 02:42, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

As I originally posted the message to save page space, having this temporarily declined isn't doing any good. Bracken; you can keep this up, but try and make sure to only have two images up at a time in future, because if it happens again the third image will be declined and archived.

On the image, I see nothing. Very nice job. It might actually be ready now. Are there any further comments? --Bramble-san 22:13, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

Approved. --Bramble-san 17:16, November 11, 2009 (UTC)

Crowfeather (App) - For Approval
Hereeeeeeeeeeeeee's Crowfeather as that annoying little apprentice when we first met him. Personally I loved his snobbish personality ^_^ and spunk. You know he was determined to do anything.-- Shim-ShimNewGladiator! 19:09, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

Wow! I don't see anything wrong. Great job! :) -- Echomist Hear the Echo... 20:47, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

(S) - Same here, and I completely agree with you about Crowpaw! He's awesome! Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 16:56, October 19, 2009 (UTC)

Great job, Shimmerpool! Darken the ear pink to a more reddish color, blur the highlights some more, and it should be ready! And I agree with you and Stealthfire, Crowpaw's awesome! Icethroat21Enter at risk 21:01, October 19, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink looks gray. Try making it more pink.--Minnowclaw Enter at own risk... 22:09, October 20, 2009 (UTC)

Question =/ with the new rule, should I still be doing this pic or not?-- Shim-ShimNewGladiator! 01:10, October 28, 2009 (UTC)

It's been 10 days...I'm not sure, but as long as you work on it and post something within the next couple of days it should be fine. (I think.) --Icethroat21Enter at risk 02:15, October 28, 2009 (UTC)

Shimmer: this was put up before the rule and you've had him on your reserved images before the new rule was made so you can finish him and then work only on current ranks. I think his ear pink needs to be darker and the shading/pelt is smeary, so a bit of blending would probably fix it. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 16:29, October 28, 2009 (UTC)

Ok finally got him up inbetween practice and projects. How's the ear now?-- Shim-ShimNewGladiator! 00:36, October 29, 2009 (UTC)

Much better. This is very good Simmerpool! Great job.--♥Halloweenclaw 20:56, October 29, 2009 (UTC)

Maybe blur the ear pink even a bit more than that. Otherwise, this looks great! --EchomistTalkContribs 12:33, October 30, 2009 (UTC)

This is beautiful, Shim! I think the highlights should also be blurred a little bit. But, otherwise, he looks awesome! --HoneyfurBob's Your Uncle! 22:59, October 30, 2009 (UTC)

This hasn't been worked on in almost ten days. Please work on this or it will have to be declined :(. --EchomistTalkContribs 14:52, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

Updated. Been stuck with practice and homework none stop. My school made it to the playoffs so its no telling how much more time it shall take it away from me.-- Shim-ShimNewGladiator! 22:14, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

Know how you feel, Shimmer. Marching band eats was actually her euphonium that took away our first leader, ironically. Comments before approval? --Bramble-san 22:16, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

None; approved. --EchomistTalkContribs 01:23, November 12, 2009 (UTC)

Icewing (W) - Approved

File:Icewing.png The first white cat I've had up for approval...Anything to fix?-- ☆Pebble☆ X3 15:33, October 24, 2009 (UTC)

This is wonderful, Bracken! But, she looks a bit bluish. Make the shading more of a pale gray. Great job, though! --HawktalonTalk 16:21, October 24, 2009 (UTC)

Great job, Bracken! But I have to agree with Hawktalon, the image looks more blue than white. And also, the ear pink needs to be more in the middle of the ear rather than on the edge of the ear like it is now. Icethroat21Enter at risk 17:04, October 24, 2009 (UTC)

Aren't we supposed to wait until TFA comes out before we make the TFA characters? --EchomistTalkContribs 18:12, October 24, 2009 (UTC)

Oh yeah, sorry, Bracken. Otherwise, Foxleap wouldn't have had to be withdrawn. Sorry, Bracken. Icethroat21Enter at risk 18:19, October 24, 2009 (UTC)

wait, before I withdraw this, are there any other white she-cat warriors?-- ☆Pebble☆ X3 18:58, October 24, 2009 (UTC)

here's Icewing now-- ☆Pebble☆ X3 19:00, October 24, 2009 (UTC)

re-uploaded-- ☆Pebble☆ X3 18:54, October 25, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink and bluish-color still need fixed. Icethroat21Enter at risk 19:11, October 24, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded-- ☆Pebble☆ X3 18:54, October 25, 2009 (UTC)

Much better! There's some blurred lineart on one of the front legs, though. Icethroat21Enter at risk 19:10, October 25, 2009 (UTC)

There's also a line of white pixels on the top of the back leg's lineart. :) Shistar BOO! 20:57, October 27, 2009 (UTC)

reuploaded -- ☆Pebble☆ X3 21:18, October 31, 2009 (UTC)

There's a gray line next to her front right leg. Ashshadow My Clan 00:32, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

reuploaded-- ☆Pebble☆ X3 01:00, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, this is amost ready. The chest shading looks very smudgy though, can you use the blur tool and blend it a little? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 19:19, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

reuploaded-- ☆Pebble☆ X3 20:11, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval?--Bramble-san 22:45, November 10, 2009 (UTC)

48 hours approval?LOL-- Pebble2Pineow> sho retarded 00:59, November 13, 2009 (UTC)

lol, sorry for the delay; sometimes it just happens. Approved Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 08:32, November 13, 2009 (UTC)

Shadow - Approved

Shadowstar.leader Well here she is! Not too proud of her, but any comments anyways?--Mossy SC 17:53, November 3, 2009 (UTC)

Humm I don't see anything

Sorry that was me! My computer froze then that's all that showed up.IcestormWanna meet in my nest? 20:15, November 3, 2009 (UTC)

Oh, haha. Hi! --Mossy SC 20:16, November 3, 2009 (UTC)

Humm.. I don't see any shadding IcestormWanna meet in my nest? 20:19, November 3, 2009 (UTC)

Workin on it.--Mossy SC 20:20, November 3, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded darkened shading.--Mossy SC 20:27, November 3, 2009 (UTC)

Okay umm I'm not sure but try lighing the earpink to a lighter pink but not too light.IcestormWanna meet in my nest? 20:54, November 3, 2009 (UTC)

Reupoaded higlighted ears.--Mossy SC 20:57, November 3, 2009 (UTC)

Maybe thicken the shading a bit. --Ashstar My Clan 21:27, November 3, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded thickened shading.--Mossy SC 21:34, November 3, 2009 (UTC)

Either thicken the shading or add a small highlight in the middle of the hind leg. Also, either thicken the shading on the bottom of the tail, or add a highlight on the top of the tail. I love your new siggie, by the way! --Icethroat21Enter at risk 21:43, November 3, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks! My 2 fave colors!--Mossy SC 21:45, November 3, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded added highlights and thickened shading.--Mossy SC 21:53, November 3, 2009 (UTC)

Add yellow to it and you'd have my three fave colors. :) For the image, the too dark. Try running the highlight tool over it once at about 28%. --Icethroat21Enter at risk 22:00, November 3, 2009 (UTC)

I know that she has green eyes, but now they look neon. Make them darker.--*Minnowclaw* 01:54, November 4, 2009 (UTC)

the shading looks a bit too dark. and maybe darken the eyes.=)--Darkmoon25 17:15, November 4, 2009 (UTC)

UUUUUGH!!! The shading is so messed up, I'm re-doing her. Probably won't start till tommorrow, still coughing, and it's hard to create when your cough is phlegm-y. -_- --Mossy SC 00:26, November 5, 2009 (UTC)

I feel for you Mossy. I have what ever the heck my friend David had and I had to get blood taken out of me and the doctors couldn't find my vain! Grrrr... I will hurt those doctors. Anyway, feel better!--*Minnowclaw* 01:42, November 6, 2009 (UTC)

I think she looks awesome,and I don't care if other people can't see it.--Echorain3 22:28, November 6, 2009 (UTC)Echorain3

Eww, gross Minnow! Haha, the one bad thing about friends. I'm re-doing this anyways, and since I'm getting rid of that cough, I think I should have this by tomorrow! :) --Mossy SC 23:19, November 6, 2009 (UTC)

Echorain3: We value everyone's opinion here. That's yours, but it's everyone else's too. The image does look good but there are still things that can be done to make it look better. That's the way the project works. Mossy: For me it's just the shading on the flank and legs that looks off but seeing as you're redoing it anyway it shouldn't be a problem. Glad you're feeling better =) Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 10:29, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

Redone yayy! I've started on a new slate so I'm ready to improve it! Comments? --Mossy SC 20:47, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

This new one looks much better, Mosspath! All I can see at the moment as that you might either want to lighten the highlights, or darken the shading. Either one will work. --Icethroat21Enter at risk 23:43, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

Also, I changed the heading up top back to "For Approval" for you, since it's back up for approval now. :) --Icethroat21Enter at risk 23:46, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

I agree with Icethroat. Also, the pelt looks a bit grainy so some blur tool might help =) Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 17:40, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded how's that? --Mossy SC 23:56, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

Answering question here, Mossy: never move the section; if people have comments, they will give them. Possible no one commented because this is ready. comments before approval? --Bramble-san 22:59, November 10, 2009 (UTC)

I say that's as good as your going to get. Aren't they going to approve it? I've been waiting for this for a long time now. WoodClan

sorry, sorry, sorry. Approved Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 08:39, November 13, 2009 (UTC)

Whiteberry (E) - Approved

Whiteberry.elder Um, not much to say about this one except that I got stuck at 'b' as a lot were reserved and decided to start from the bottom of my list now... so 'w' and not Whitefang as I got confused with him... it says he's Leopardstar's mate but on Whiteclaw's page it says he was her mate... grrr. anoyed. Anyway, constructments? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 22:01, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

Two of the toes are lighter. --Mossy SC 23:57, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

Fixed Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 20:05, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

I think Whiteberry has blue eyes--Nightfall101 19:35, November 10, 2009 (UTC)

It didn't say on his page so I gave him a generic amber. Do you have a reference Nightfall? A book name and page number? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 23:10, November 10, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry, I guess I just imagined that--Nightfall101 23:41, November 10, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --Bramble-san 17:15, November 11, 2009 (UTC)

None; approved Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 09:21, November 13, 2009 (UTC)

Driftkit - Approved

File:Driftkit.pngYet another Code of the Clans character. Comments? --EchomistTalkContribs 01:29, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

Great! As usual, I can see nothing. This is optional, but maybe you could add a highlight to the top of the tail. But as I said, optional. Great job! --Icethroat21Enter at risk 01:37, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

Aw, thanks, Icethroat =). I was thinking about adding a highlight on the tail, but I decided against it because I figured that the body would be shielding the tail from sunlight. Of course, I can add a highlight if everyone's opinions outweigh mine. --EchomistTalkContribs 01:47, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

Great! And I added a highlight to my Pebblekit(one of my chararts)'s tail. But you don't have to if you don't want to. I don't see anything wrong. --Rainwhisker09 02:39, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

~Reuploaded.~ I decided oh, what the heck, and made a highlight on the tail :). Any more comments? --EchomistTalkContribs 01:11, November 11, 2009 (UTC)

Haha. :) Comments before approval? --Bramble-san 17:14, November 11, 2009 (UTC)

Approved Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 09:44, November 13, 2009 (UTC)

Mudpuddle - Approved

File:Mudpuddle.pngWow, this might well be the best cat I ever did... comments? --EchomistTalkContribs 01:27, November 10, 2009 (UTC)

Wow, Echomist, fantastic! This is absolutely beautiful! The only thing I can see is that the ear pink is a little too red for a white ear...for white fur the best ear color is a pinkish color rather than a reddish color. Fix that, and he should be good. Great job! --Icethroat21Enter at risk 03:40, November 10, 2009 (UTC)

~Reuploaded.~ Thanks so much, Icethroat. :) Fixed. --EchomistTalkContribs 13:13, November 10, 2009 (UTC)

WOW! I can't see anything! Great job!But lets let some other people talk.--*Minnowclaw* 23:57, November 10, 2009 (UTC)

I see nothing. Comments before approval? Bramble-san 17:12, November 11, 2009 (UTC)

Approved Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 09:47, November 13, 2009 (UTC)

Hailstar - Approved

File:Hailstar.Leader.png I really have to lay off gray cats... But, anyway, I tried out a new shading style. But I don't really like it. Nonetheless, constructments? --HawktalonTalk 18:11, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

He's really good!! Jut one thing, could you make the nose a little more pink?HiddensunTalk 19:36, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

Maybe make the ear pink a little smaller.--Shaf Girl 19:51, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Fixed the nose and ear pink. Constructments? --HawktalonTalk 01:51, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the shading and highlights a lot. --EchomistTalkContribs 14:59, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I tried D: Pixlr makes meh angreh. Is it better? --HawktalonTalk 16:30, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

(S) - Maybe you could make the nose a bit darker, but otherwise it looks really cool! Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 17:59, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Changed the nose pink. Better? --HawktalonTalk 22:59, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

(S) - Wrong word. xp Duller, not darker. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 18:29, November 12, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Lol, it's alright;). Changed the nose pink. Better? -- HawktalonTalk 21:42, November 12, 2009 (UTC)

I see nothing wrong now. I love the green you chose for the eyes. Comments before approval? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 09:31, November 13, 2009 (UTC)

Approved Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 22:11, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

Sagewhisker (MC) - Approved

Sagewhisker I visit this wiki frequently and I thought I'd do some of the char art in my spare time. What do you think of this one? --Yukitora 05:56, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

I love how you did the whiskers! Just darken the shading, add a highlight to the top of the herbs, and make the ear pink a bit less of a bright pink color, and she'll be ready. --EchomistTalkContribs 14:56, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Did as you asked! I hope I didn't totally kill the shading by darkening, one of my issues is that I tend to do that ^^'--Yukitora 21:06, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

Urgh, sorry, when I said "less of a bright pink color" I meant darker salmon-pinkish, rather than lighter pink. But the shading's much better now :) . --EchomistTalkContribs 01:51, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

Very good! Just blur the highlights and do what Echo said. --Rainwhisker09 02:41, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I think I might have just murdered it with shading. I hate when layers and the blur tool are out to get me! I'm not sure if the ear color is okay now, This is what I would think is a dark salmon-pinkish color, but it could be a little bright.--Yukitora 03:25, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

Smudge the ear pink so the end isn't touching the head. And try blurring it again. If it's blurred to the max, just say so. --Rainwhisker09 13:46, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

(S) - Her ear pink looks dark. Could you make it lighter? Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 18:01, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Take that, Photoshop Elements 6 scum! You and your ability to ruin a manual blur is no match for the smart blur! I hope I got the ear color right this time, I'm satisfied that it isn't boring into the head now :P This is personally my favorite version.--Yukitora 01:16, November 11, 2009 (UTC)

The lineart is blurred in lots of places. --Icethroat21Enter at risk 01:19, November 11, 2009 (UTC)

Can that be fixed? --Yukitora 01:42, November 11, 2009 (UTC)

I don't know how to fix it, but I think that you can get the lineart and put it over the image already, while making the inside transparent or something like that. I don't know how to do that, though, but I think Bramble does. You'll have to ask her. Sorry, --Icethroat21Enter at risk 02:13, November 11, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Fixed the blurry parts of the lineart. I also thought that the shading was a bit light so I darkened them a little bit.

This looks good to me; I can't see anything wrong; comments before approval? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 09:37, November 13, 2009 (UTC)

Approved Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 22:17, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

Petalnose - Approved


Hey there everybody! Long time no see. Does anyone here even remember me? I see there are a lot of new people here. I feel so old! Anyways, here's the first charart I've done in who knows how long. I hope my skills haven't abandoned me. So go ahead... How bad IS it? I think the shading needs blended a little more, but I won't do anything until someone tells me to. :) Goldencloud 19:58, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

the ear should be pink.  Brambleclaw14 Talk 20:05, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

This is actually really good! The shading looks fine to me. Great job! :) --HawktalonTalk 20:50, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

Thin the neck shading. --Rainwhisker09 21:40, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Hi Goldencloud! *Nuzzles* Long time no see! This is amazing. The shading's so smooth... *drool* All I see is the the neck shading upward and thin the belly shading. Love the way you did the ear pink, by the way. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 22:01, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

Goldie! :D I thought we'd lost you. Very glad you came back. Your artist skills are still as great as ever, I see. Real quick question, unrelated to the brilliant image: I have you down as a mentor (a lot happened while you were gone; see Forum:PCA Mentors/Apprentices Prgm). Are you going to be able to do that? I don't want to overwhelm you if you're just coming back. --Bramble-san 22:53, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

<(0o0)> WOW! I have a petalnose, but this is SOO good!--*Minnowclaw* 00:32, November 3, 2009 (UTC)

Brambleclaw14 The ear is pink, but I'll saturate it a bit more.
Hawktalon Thank you! :D
Rainwhisker I think I get what you mean, but if I fix the wrong area let me know.
Mosswhisker&Stealthfire Mosswhisker!!! *tackles* Thanks! I shall fix that.
Bramble :D I have returned! You didn't think you could get rid of me that easily did you? ;) I haven't done one of these in so long, I'm surprised it actually turned out. Sandy said she was just going to keep me on the list but not assign me any apprentices until I decide I'm ready. You'll have to talk to her about that. *shrugs*
Minnowclaw Wow, thank you! I doubt that though, I'd still like to see yours.
Goldencloud 01:37, November 4, 2009 (UTC)

ok it looks brown to me but that me. :)  Brambleclaw14 Talk 09:17, November 4, 2009 (UTC)

You can have an apprentice if you'd like Goldencloud =) You told me you wanted to get some charart done and get back into it first... Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 18:38, November 6, 2009 (UTC)

This has been sitting here for a long time. Comments before approval?--Darkhallows 09:59, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

None; approved Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 16:43, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

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