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Rosepetal (W) - Approved

File:Rosepetal;Warrior.png Not much to say about this one... Constructments? --HawktalonTalk 23:09, November 28, 2009 (UTC)

Beautiful job Hawktalon!!! Could you just blur the tail a little?HiddensunTalk 23:21, November 28, 2009 (UTC)

Yes, blur the tail shadows. Might want to blur the highlights too, but you don't have to. --Mousetalon 23:33, November 28, 2009 (UTC) I'm re-doin my siggy.

Reuploaded - Fixed. And, once again, the changes wouldn't show, so I had to rename the image. Jeez, this has happened twice with me today... --HawktalonTalk 23:45, November 28, 2009 (UTC)

It's happening to me a lot of times too.HiddensunTalk 23:49, November 28, 2009 (UTC)

Same here. :) Mousetalon Call Me Mouse!!!

It's happening to everybody, so I asked Bramble about it, and she said it was okay to upload the new files if we had to. Image-wise, darken the ear pink some, it's hard to see since the fur is a red-ish color. But otherwise, great job! I really like this image! --Icy-chan 00:25, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Thanks, Icethroat! I fixed the ear pink. Hopefully, the upload log will be fixed by tomorrow. --HawktalonTalk 01:19, November 29, 2009 (UTC)


Um... she doesn't look like her kit version (who has faint tabby stripes) File:Rosekit2.png. Cream is a diluted ginger, and thus has stripes.--Darkhallows 04:07, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

Shady is right. Also, the shading looks too dark to me. SandyTalk 15:59, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - *slaps self in face* Stupid me, how could I have forgotten the tabby stripes? Well, I added some faint stripes and lightened the shading. (*sigh* There goes my hopes of the upload log working today. Bramble, could you delete the extra files of Rosepetal, please? Thanks.) --HawktalonTalk 17:51, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

The shading on the back is very dark; lighten it a bit. Otherwise, awesome job. :) --EchomistTalkContribs 13:36, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Lightened back shading. And, omg the upload log works now:D --HawktalonTalk 20:07, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

The tabby stripes look more like lightened areas in the shading rather than tabby stripes, and on the hind leg, for example, you can barely see the tabby stripes. Make them darker than the fur, like the kit image. Otherwise, it looks good. --Icy-chan 02:04, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Urm, the stripes are darker than the fur. I think I can understand how someone can mistake the regular fur color in some places to be the stripes. --SilverbellsMerry Xmas! 16:15, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Hmm...can you maybe make them a little darker by running the burn tool over them a couple of times? (not sure if this will help it or not) --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 00:46, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Done. Anything else? --SilverbellsMerry Xmas! 01:26, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Wow. *hits self on head repeatedly with a random heavy book* I see the stripes now, I thought they were a part of the shading, and that the stripes were the fur. (Basically, as you said.) Yep, it looks a lot better now. Comments before approval? --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 03:13, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Great job- It looks much better now.--:) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! 16:33, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Approved. --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 04:17, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Bone- Approved

Bone.rogue Hey, he's back! Since he's no longer reserved, I decided to bring him back. Constructments? --HoneyfurBob's Your Uncle! 02:10, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

I can barely see the ear pink, and make the color of the scar sort of a reddish color. Otherwise, great job! I'm glad to see him back up for approval, the image was too good to waste. --Icy-chan 12:02, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

Thicken the shading (especially on the white parts), as well as what Icethroat said, and he'll be ready. :) Nice job. --EchomistTalkContribs 13:28, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

Add a Bloodclan collar.--Minnowclaw 00:32, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks, guys! How's this? --AngelstarSilver Bells 02:32, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

Love it, I really don't see anything else at the moment. Does anyone else??? --Honeyrose34 01:18, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

Don't know if I'm being picky or anything, but does he need a mouth? It's really good, though! :) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!!

No, he doesn't need a mouth. It's like it should be on the blank. Make the ear pink a little bit thicker, and then he should be ready. --Icy-chan 01:55, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

How's this? --AngelstarSilver Bells 03:06, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Great; comments before approval? --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 01:18, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

None; approved. --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 04:17, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Rowanstar - Approved

File:Rowanstar(L).png

Most of the credit goes to my former apprentice, Swallowtip. I just fixed a few things and put it back. Constructments? --Tinselclaw 22:48, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

I thought I recognized this. I had to do a double take to make sure he hadn't come back. This is great Bramble. I love it.--Minnowclaw 00:21, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

I can't find anything wrong, and no one seems to have any comments, so, comments before approval? (I'm really glad to see Swallowtip's image not go to waste.) --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 01:06, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

None; approved. --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 04:17, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Larksong - Approved

File:Larksong2.pngLarksong was so nice to the kits in Bluestar's Prophecy that I just had to do her. :D Comments? --EchomistTalkContribs 00:15, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

Wait, Wait, Wait, Echo, your signing date says the 2nd of December but it's only the 1st! Even your 2nd image below too! Did you do that or is that your computer?? --Honeyrose34 01:27, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

It's just my insane computer, don't worry about it. :) --EchomistTalkContribs 01:45, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

This is universal time. The new day starts at a specific time. For those who live in America, it's either 5:00, 6:00, or 7:00 when the new day starts, according to the different time zones. Aaaanyway, beautiful image, Echo. The only thing I see (being picky), is that the muzzle looks empty. Maybe put a few patches in? --Tinselclaw 01:58, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

~Reuploaded.~ Thanks, Bramble (or should I call you Tinsel? :D) Fixed. :) --EchomistTalkContribs 13:19, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

Fantastic! I think it's too early for the 24 hours, so we'll wait another day for any more comments before putting it on 24 hours. And just so I don't have to edit twice, same goes for your awesome Ivytail image. --Icy-chan 01:30, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

I managed to wait a grand total of 15 hours. Comments before approval? SandyTalk 16:37, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

None; approved. --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 04:17, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Owlfur- Approved

File:Owlfur(D).png This is Owlfur. Not my best work. Comments?--AshshadowMy Clan 02:28, November 27, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink, add some shading to the paws, and blur all of the shading, it looks messy right now. Great job, though! --Icy-chan 15:58, November 27, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred the earpink some more and added shading to the front leg. The shading on the rest of the body was already blurred to the max so any ideas on how to make it look less messy.--AshshadowMy Clan 16:18, November 27, 2009 (UTC)

Might want to dull the ear pink color, it's really bright. But other than that, awesome!:) Mousetalon Call Me Mousey!!!

Reuploaded Darkened earpink. Can someone delete the original file?--AshshadowMy Clan 20:06, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit and blend it. --EchomistTalkContribs 13:39, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded (I think) Better?--AshshadowMy Clan 21:58, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

Add some shading on the muzzle, and then it should be good. --Icy-chan 03:32, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 20:42, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

I see nothing wrong with it now.--:) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! 16:30, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? SandyTalk 19:45, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Approved. --Tinselclaw 00:49, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Snaketooth - Approved

File:Snaketooth.png My first one!!!! Criticism WANTED!!!!! I'm trying to learn as much as I can to improve him . . . comments?--Mousetalon 18:36, November 21, 2009 (UTC)

This is actually pretty good for a first attempt =) I have a few things to mention though: 1)He is described as a dark brown tabby - could you make his fur colour a little darker? Something like the colour of Tigerstar, Voletooth or Toadfoot. 2) The tabby stripes are good, but there are a couple that look a little odd such as near the base of his tail - just tweak it to make it more of a natural shape. 3) This needs shading, or more shading. There are a few different styles so have a look at some approved pixels for inspiration! The main different styles are: Mousefang, White-eye and Runningwind. 4) The ear pink needs to be smaller and more of a rosy colour. See Brightheart. 5) The highlights need to be a little bigger and blended a lot more. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 19:15, November 21, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded' Darkened him A LOT. Can't see the tabby stripes too well, but I think it's better. Shaded as well and fixed the ear.--Mousetalon 23:46, November 21, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I know, I just did, but I wanted better highlights and tabby stripes.--Mousetalon 23:56, November 21, 2009 (UTC)

The front of him is really blurry.--AshshadowMy Clan 00:07, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Un-blurred him a bit. Better?--Mousetalon 00:50, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry by the front of him I ment the lineart in the front. That still needs to be fixed--AshshadowMy Clan 00:54, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

OH!!!! Let me fix that! Reuploaded I think that's good.--Mousetalon 01:23, November 22, 2009 (UTC)


The cat needs eye color. right now, it's just black. Make it like blue, green or amber. if the page doesn't say, just do one of the randomly. --Honeyrose34 16:04, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I gave him amber eyes, they looked better than blue or green.--Mousetalon 19:14, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

Great job. I see that the one tabby mark near the center of his flank seems.....hollow. I don't know if that makes sense or not it seems like it was kind-of painted. if you don't know what i mean, just ask. --Honeyrose34 21:12, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fixed it. Thanks, I think that happened when I was fixing the blur on his chest.--Mousetalon 21:17, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - His eyes need a pupil. Try looking at some of the approved warriors for help. Mossfire & Steatlhfire 22:02, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded There. --Mousetalon 22:25, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

The shading seems sort of blotchy.--Darkhallows 23:29, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

How should I fix it? --Mousetalon 03:04, November 23, 2009 (UTC)

For the blotchy shading, use the blur tool and run it over the blotchy areas. The bottom of his left fore paw (the one closest to us) is a little blurred. It looks great! --Rainwhisker09 13:28, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

ReuploadedThanks a lot! I think I fixed that part . . . anything else?--Mousetalon 19:39, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

The lineart on his chest and front paw closest to us looks thin.--AshshadowMy Clan 01:59, November 27, 2009 (UTC)

ReuploadedBetter? I fixed the shading a bit too. :) Mousetalon Call Me Mousey!!!

(M) - Very good. However, the ear pink is too light (Look at Tigerstar's image) and the lineart on his chest looks blurred. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 20:35, November 27, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded AGAIN Better? I've reuploaded this nine times. Do we need to go for ten? :) Mousetalon Call Me Mousey!!!

The lineart is blurred/missing in some spots.--Darkhallows 11:13, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, I got really annoyed with him, so I completely re-did him. Reuploaded :) Mousetalon Call Me Mousey!!!

(M) - This looks wonderful. The only thing is, what's that scar on his haunch for? Sure he broke his leg, but that will no doubt heal and it wouldn't scar. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 19:19, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

What scar? Oh! My bad!!! I think that happened when I was putting in the ear pink! MouseyChat

Lol. Also, could you please make the eye like this: File:Eyediagram.jpg Bramble-san 23:28, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I hope I did it right . . .MouseyChat

Err, no. Add two black pixels, one on top of the other, on the left side. Then, where it looks like two stairs on the eye lineart, add another black pixel to the bottom of the lower stair. Then, on the right side, get rid of the two first upper black pixels, and then all the rest of the pixels necessary to leave one vertical line right next to the colored part of the eye.

If that was way too confusing, I can just do it for you. But you'll have to learn how. --Tinselclaw 22:52, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

It made absolutely no sense, so I clicked on the eye diagram again, erased everything on the eye but the color, and drew it from there. I think I got it this time . . .:) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!!

This looks good to me. Comments before approval? SandyTalk 19:43, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Yup, much better. Just add some shading on the tail (a highlight on the top would be good), and this should be ready. Great job! --Icy-chan 01:10, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Done and done.--Tinseltalon09:13, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

I didn't even notice Sandy's comment when I posted mine...but anyways, this is ready. Repeating comments before approval? --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 03:52, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Approved Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 11:09, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Blossompaw- Approved

File:Blossompaw.apprentice.png I tried to match Blossomkit's picture the best I could. Meh. What do you think of her? --HoneyfurBob's Your Uncle! 01:37, November 24, 2009 (UTC)

She's BEAUTIFUL (lol i almost spelled it wrong)Honey!!! All I see is add shading.HiddensunTalk 01:39, November 24, 2009 (UTC)

Awesome!! This looks better than the kit picture i think. It looks like on the kit one that she got sprayed w/ mud! Besides the kit picture, nice! All i see is maybe make the ear pink a tad darker and bigger. I can't see it that well.--Honeyrose34 21:11, November 24, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks, guys! Is this better? --HoneyfurBob's Your Uncle! 21:20, November 24, 2009 (UTC)

The shading still needs to be on there. --Honeyrose34 21:43, November 24, 2009 (UTC)

I actually had shading, but I guess it was just too light. XD Sorry about that, guys. Better? --HoneyfurBob's Your Uncle! 18:51, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the patches of fur, but otherwise it's au-mazing!!!!! :) Mousetalon Call Me Mousey!!!

Thanks, Mousey! How's this? --HoneyfurBob's Your Uncle! 00:43, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

I know you've heard this a lot, but blur the patches and darken the shading even more. Then she'll be ready. :) Nice job. --EchomistTalkContribs 13:41, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry, guys. I've been having a bit of uploading trouble lately, which is why my changes haven't been showing up; but as soon as I figure out what's wrong, I'll fix her. ;) --AngelstarSilver Bells 00:30, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

Oopsy. =) Didn't see Bramble's message until after I posted the above message. =D Lol. Is this better? --AngelstarSilver Bells 02:07, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

I think this looks really good, add some shading to the white fur (the belly and hind leg) and this should be ready. --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 00:55, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

I agree- it looks really good. Well done!--:) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! 16:28, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks! Better? --AngelstarSilver Bells 00:45, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Can you lighten the shading on the white fur just a little bit? It's too dark, so either blur it a lot, or just use the dodge tool on a really realy really low opacity. Especially on the hind leg. Make it look more ike a really light silverish color rather than that dark of a gray, like the shading on Icecloud or Thistlepaw. --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 16:05, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Is this what you're talking about? --AngelstarSilver Bells 16:38, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Yup. Great job. Comments before approval? --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 16:55, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Approved. Tinselclaw 19:14, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Oatwhisker(TC)- Approved

File:Oatwhisker (TC).pngMy second one!!!!! Anything I need to improve? :) Mousetalon Call Me Mousey!!!

(M) - Your highlights are much too bright. Run the burn tool over them a few times. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 20:20, November 27, 2009 (UTC)

I fixed you sig again Mousey: your final span and sup tags were the wrong way around - they have to be in order from inside to out if that makes sense: in pairs. eg <sup><span style...><b></b></span></sup> wih your content in between... As for the image, looks good =) Make the ear pink a darker reddish colour though. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 20:24, November 27, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Stupid siggy. :( Okay, fixed the highlights, better? :) Mousetalon Call Me Mouse!!!

You still need to do the ear. The highlights look good though Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 12:41, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

REUPLOADED Ooops. caps lock. Anything else?:) Mousetalon Call Me Mouse!!!

Um . . . did everyone forget? Is there anything else I need to do? --:) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!!

Can you sign with four tidles and not three? There's no time, and what time the posts were posted is actually important. Image-wise, the eye needs to look like it does on your Snaketooth image. --Icy-chan 00:07, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Um . . . what do you mean by four tidles? Where do I put them? An let me fix the eyes real quick . . .--Mousetalon 00:27, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Never mind, you got it. When you sign your post, it must have been a typo or something, because the times weren't there. But it's okay now. Also, can you blur the shading anymore? Some parts go from dark to light, and others have the smooth transition with medium color in the middle, so blur it as much as you can. --Icy-chan 00:40, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I blurred it as much as I could.--:) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! 16:32, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

There's some blurred lineart right along the bottom of the hind leg--Nightfall101 00:47, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

ReuploadedI think I got it.--:) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! 02:36, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

I personally can't see anything else. Comments before approval? Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 11:16, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

(S) - The ear pink looks circular, but it might be my computer, or me. I can't see with these stupid contacts. :( Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 17:02, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Approved. Tinselclaw 19:14, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Silvermask (D) Approved

File:Silvermask 2.png Alright, Hawkfire instructed me to do a gray tabby, and I really thought Silvermask needed a picture, so I hope this is okay Hawkey! Anyway, the stripe on his face was fun to do, I always pictured it that way. Comments?--Nightfall101 04:52, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

This is awesome! Once you get this approved you are going to be a warrior! Anyways might wanna blur the shading. :D Jinglestorm ♥'Merry Purry Christmas! 13:02, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Really Good! But shouldn't the mark on his face be lighter in color? WoodClan

Not really, WoodClan. It's fine, Nightfall. And WoodClan, are even signed up for this yet? --Honeyrose34 22:33, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Okay, I blurred the shading more. Better?--Nightfall101 23:37, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Looks good, I love the mask.--:) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! 02:32, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks! Check it out, I finally got a christmas siggie! Any more comments?--SNOWFALLLet it snow, let it snow! 03:04, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Add shading on the midriff. --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 03:56, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

What's a midriff? (Please don't laugh)--SNOWFALLLet it snow, let it snow! 03:59, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I tried to do the midriff, is it better?--SNOWFALLLet it snow, let it snow! 04:52, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Try blurring the midriff some more, and then it should be good. You can just use the image on the right, there's now no need for the one on the left. I like your new sig, by the way. --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 05:12, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Okay, I blurred it as much as pixlr would allow. I'am so getting GIMP.--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 22:42, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Hmm...is it possible you could make the middle of the midriff (lol) as light as the rest of the shading on the midriff? --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 04:05, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Better?--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 04:26, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Yep. Great job, Nightfall. Comments before approval? --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 04:37, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Approved. Tinselclaw 19:14, December 6, 2009 (UTC)


Sharpclaw(D) - Approved

File:Sharpclaw(D).png

I tried the same tabby markings as Crowtail. Comments? Hidden-jimgle ♪ 21:27, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Darken earpink :D Jinglestorm ♥'Merry Purry Christmas! 21:33, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded-fixed the ear.Hidden-jimgle ♪ 01:09, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

This looks awsome! But maybe add a stripe to the very base of the tail. It looks blank--SNOWFALLLet it snow, let it snow! 03:42, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Thanks!! And I added a stripe on his tail.Hidden-jimgle ♪ 03:51, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

The stripes look awesome, but the fur color looks more of a red color rather than ginger. --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 03:58, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Well there's losts of cats with fur like that or brighter like Squirrelflight and Firestar.Hidden-jimgle ♪ 04:06, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

True, but it does look red-brown--SNOWFALLLet it snow, let it snow! 04:10, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded-I made him a little more gingerish-orangeish(are those even words lol).Comments?Hidden-jimgle ♪ 17:35, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Try blurring the tabby stripes a bit.--:) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! 18:59, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded-blured the tabby markings.Hidden-jimgle ♪ 19:13, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Awesome. Make the green eyes a bit darker, though, I can barely tell what color they are apart from the pelt. --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 20:09, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded-made the eyes more green and darker-I think they got light when I was doing the highlights.Hidden-jimgle ♪ 20:16, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

The book describes Sharpclaw as being slightly darker in color than Firestar. Make him reddish in color and it'll be perfect. WoodClan 3:47

Thanks!!But I just made him unredish-if you look in the picture's history thing you can see that it used to be kinda reddish.Hidden-jimgle ♪ 20:51, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

I think the color is perfect, you shouldn't have to change it again--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 22:52, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

I agree with Nightfall, it should stay as it is. WoodClan isn't even a member of this project. It's a little early for the 24 hours, so I'll wait a few more hours before starting the 24 hours. It looks aweomse, though. --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 23:20, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, it's been long enough. (I think) This awesome image needs to wait only 24 more hours now. :P Comments before approval? --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 01:06, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Approved. Tinselclaw 19:14, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Starlingpaw (A) - Approved

File:Starlingpaw.png Not my favourite image but... SandyTalk 21:44, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

He's really good Sandy!! And I really like the shading you do. All I can see is maybe make the ear darker.Hidden-jimgle ♪ 01:58, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Maybe blur the shading on the hind leg a bit more. It looks really good!!!!!--:) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! 02:33, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Thank you Hiddensun =) I've darkened the ear pink and blurred the shading as much as it will let me. For some reason it isn't working so well with ginger... Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 22:21, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

I don't see any shading on the tail. (Sorry if it's there already. if it is, then make it darker/lighter) --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 23:28, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Done Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 06:49, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

I've searched and searched and have found nothing else wrong with this awesome image. Comments before approval? --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 15:05, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Approved. Tinselclaw 19:14, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Boulderpaw- Approved

File:Boulderpaw.apprentice.png Well, I finally finished him (after re-doing him ten-thousand times). Constructments? --AngelstarSilver Bells 16:34, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Awesome. I can't see much shading on the tail, but other than that, this is awesome! --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 16:51, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Beautiful Honey or should I call you Angel). All I can see is maybe make the ear darker.Hidden-jimgle ♪ 17:37, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Both Honey and Angel work with me. Choose whichever one you prefer. =D By the way, it's snowing over here, and it's looking amazing! --AngelstarSilver Bells 19:17, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

I can't see anything else. Comments before approval? Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 11:34, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Approved. Tinselclaw 19:14, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Hollowpaw - Approved

File:Hollowpaw.Apprentice.png Yay, I have GIMP now:D No more suckish blurring for meXD Constructments? --SilverbellsMerry Xmas! 18:30, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

He's really GOOD!!! I see nothing wrong!! Just one question...How do you get GIMP?Hidden-jimgle ♪ 18:36, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Please tell me how to get GIMP as well! (In other words, just say how when you reupload your image) Image-wise, darken the ear pink to more of a reddish color. Otherwise, awesome! Great job! --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 18:50, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Darkened the ear pink. Icethroat and Hiddensun, to get GIMP, you firstly go to www.gimp.org. Then, at the very bottom of the home page, there are lists of things, like "History", "Features", etc. On the "Downloads" list, you click on the type of computer system you have (I have Windows). If you have Windows, click on "Installer" when you get to the GIMP For Windows page. Then click Download. After that, you have to click on "direct link". It will begin downloading from there. If you have a Mac OS X or a Unix... well, the directions for those will be similar. GIMP will be downloaded into your computer, so a new icon that looks like a dog head should be among the other icons on that page where the taskbar is (I don't know what it's called, but I think you know what I meanXD). Hope this helps:) --SilverbellsMerry Xmas! 20:59, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks so much!!Hidden-jimgle ♪ 21:10, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks, but I asked my parents if I could download it onto my laptop, and they said no. (I don't know why, but they installed Photoshop on my computer, which has pretty good blurring abilities. *shrugs*) Image-wise, this looks awesome, but it's too early for the 24 hours, so can you maybe add some tabby stripes on the left hind leg and front leg? (the legs in the back) --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 22:43, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Added the stripes. Anything else? --SilverbellsMerry Xmas! 23:46, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

I think Flamingomom did a wonderful job on hollowpaw.I think it's ready,thats my opinion.--Firepelt 18:52, December 6, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

Comments before approval? Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 11:36, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Approved. Tinselclaw 19:14, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Logfur-Approved

File:Logfur.PNG This is Logfur.  Brambleclaw14 Talk 10:46, November 13, 2009 (UTC)

Darken the stripes or lighten the pelt because it's hard to see them.--*Minnowclaw* 20:18, November 13, 2009 (UTC)

It might just be me, but the image looks very dark and very red and there seems to be some paler grey/white on the lineart. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 20:25, November 13, 2009 (UTC)

The image is really really dark. The image needs lightened a lot. Try the dodge tool on 100% size 100 or 200, so you get the entire image. Use the tool about three or four times, or maybe six or seven. Until you think it's bright enough, which you'll probably know. Also, the lineart does look gray in some areas. From what I can see of it, though, the tabby stripes look very nice. --Icethroat21Enter at risk 02:49, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

I agree with Icethroat, it's waaaaay to dark. And I do see the gray lineart. But I really like the stripes!--Nightfall101 05:38, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

It did say Dark Brown but it looks like this is to dark :) I will do this ASAP.  Brambleclaw14 Talk 13:28, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

Waaaaay to dark, I can barely see the stripes. The shading is good, though. --Bluestar1776 19:04, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

I've brightened the brown colour, and removed the gray from the outline (replaced with black). Hope that's okay :) -  Brambleclaw14 Talk 11:00, November 16, 2009 (UTC)

Now it looks somewhat reddish rather than dark brown. --Rainwhisker09 23:07, November 16, 2009 (UTC)


I agree w/ Rainwhisker, maybe make it just plain dark brown, not to bright, not too dark. Do get what i am saying, my friends say that i talk like i'm from a diff country! Anyway, just don't make it too red looking. --Honeyrose34 23:32, November 16, 2009 (UTC)

I've made the fur more brown now. Let me know what you think :) -  Brambleclaw14 Talk 10:23, November 18, 2009 (UTC)

It looks redddish brown now. Try changing the color altogether instead of lighting it. Darkmoon25 It looks brown to me, so I'd have trouble making it look more brown :). The RGB for it atm is 59-37-16 which is about the right ratio as far as I'm aware. -  Brambleclaw14 Talk 16:58, November 18, 2009 (UTC)


It looks better now, great job Bramble!! ( is okay if i call you that? just checking!) --Honeyrose34 00:23, November 19, 2009 (UTC)

Honeyrose, you might not want to call Brambleclaw that because the fantastic leader of this project is a user named Bramble. I was confused and thought that you were mistaken when I saw the post and I think other people with be.--*Minnowclaw* 01:42, November 19, 2009 (UTC)

lol you can all call me Shruggy if you feel like it :)  Brambleclaw14 Talk 07:11, November 19, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink is a very strange colour. Try looking at some approved cats and choose a different shade. Um... I think Tigerstar is a good example Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 19:03, November 19, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry Sandy but if I try it goes brown...:/  Brambleclaw14 Talk 19:12, November 23, 2009 (UTC)

hmm....as he's a darkbrown cat I did the ear like a black cats ear.  Brambleclaw14 Talk 08:11, November 24, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, don't worry. Can you just blend it a tiny weeny bit and this should be good for approval. =) Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 19:33, November 24, 2009 (UTC)

OK.  Brambleclaw14 Talk 19:42, November 24, 2009 (UTC)

Better?  Brambleclaw14 Talk 07:23, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --EchomistTalkContribs 17:33, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

The tabby stripes are layered right over the shading; they're lighter than the pelt, while in the regular pelt area, they're darker. The stripes around the mouth look odd, as well. --Bramble-san 03:52, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

Oh no thats bad it rebooted but I had not saved logfur :/ I will see what I can do :).  Brambleclaw14 Talk 07:05, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

This hasn't been worked on in a week, Shruggy. Please update or it will have to be declined SandyTalk 19:33, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry this has been so long. Better?

uhh..that was me.  Brambleclaw14 Talk 09:01, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

I fixed it a little better for you; it should be ready now. Great job on this, Shruggy. I also added transparency for the background. Comments before approval? --Tinselclaw 01:57, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Approved. --Tinselclaw 02:04, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Coal (Lo) - Approved

Coal.loner *shrugs* Not much to say about this one. Comments and suggestions? (Does the shading need blurred??) --Icy-chan 02:26, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

He's awsome Icy!!! I think that the blurong is good except for the below part of the face.Hidden-jimgle ♪ 21:07, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks, Hiddensun! I'll get to it either tonight or tomorrow, I'm on my mom's laptop right now, not mine, so I don't have the files to edit. --Icy-chan 22:04, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

Nice job! Just blur the shading like Hiddensun said, and the rear leg farthest from us should be darker. Also, the eye looks kinda red. Great job though! --Rainwhisker09 22:50, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Let mek now if I need to darken the hind leg some more. How's this? --Icy-chan 00:46, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Love it but i can't really see the ear pink. --Honeyrose34 14:59, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 16:45, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Looks amazing. Comments before approval? --Tinselclaw 02:37, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Approved. --Tinselclaw 02:16, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Snowflake - Approved

File:Snowflake Kit.png I feel like she needs fixing, but I dunno...does she? ~Mistpelt~ 21:32, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

I always think that the kits are sooo cute!! Maybe blur the shading more.Hidden-jimgle ♪ 21:57, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

and make the patches a litle more wavy.Hidden-jimgle ♪ 21:58, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

I found two things. One, the eye color needs to show up better. I don't really see any. And two, the ear pink is too light. Fix those two things and you should be good! --RoseyHappy Leaf-bare!

Re-uploaded. 'Kay, I blurred the shading more, made the patches wavier, darkened the ear pink, and brightened up the eyes. ~Mistpelt~ 22:47, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

I can still barely see the ear pink; try making it a different color pink. --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 23:22, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Fixed the ear pink. ~Mistpelt~ 23:32, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Awesome. Comments before approval? --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 00:41, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

I think that the ear pink is too big for the ear. Sorry if this ruins your chance of getting this approved soon!!--RoseyHappy Leaf-bare!

Rosey, ear pink size differs from cat to cat, as well as some cats having brighter ear pink than others. Continuing comments before approval? --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 19:38, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Approved. --Tinselclaw 02:16, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Briarpaw (A) - Approved

File:Briarpaw1.png

Ok, NOW this might be my best image I ever did. So comments. (And again, my apologies to Honeyrose for doing the same image as her). ChelseaFC 23:07, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Oh Shoot! She already has a kit image! Bramble, do itake this down or can I can leave it up. If I can, I pormise I will only do cats without images. ChelseaFC 23:10, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

This can stay up, she already has a kit picture, she needs an apprentice picture. :D Jinglestorm ♥'Merry Purry Christmas! 00:39, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

No worries, cats with their status updated in TFA are getting new images. For the image, this is very good. Lighten the ear pink, and this should be good. --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 00:40, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Don't worry, Sandwich. It's really no problem. I really do love this though. I can't see anything at the moment, so keep the good work going!! --"'Rosey'""'Happy Leaf-bare!'"

Reuploaded. ChelseaFC 02:04, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --Tinselclaw 02:36, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Approved. --Tinselclaw 02:23, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

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