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queens don't have a transparent background and I don't know how to get it to be so...can anyone help?-- Pebble2Pineow> *poke* hai! 21:33, December 12, 2009 (UTC)
The eyes look... scary. Look at Icethroat's tutorials to see how to do the eyes. --SnowstarLeaf-bare is here! 21:36, December 12, 2009 (UTC)
I've turned it transparent for you. Very nice tabby stripes, by the way. Fix the eyes, and it should be good. Very good job. --Tinselclaw 21:55, December 12, 2009 (UTC)
reuploaded...and thanks bramble-- Pebble2Pineow> *poke* hai! 22:01, December 12, 2009 (UTC)
The eyes still look odd, maybe use strait black for pupils? I can't see them. ~ MUMBLE785MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 22:03, December 12, 2009 (UTC)
Ohp, never mind about the can't see them. Maybe make them thicker though? ~ MUMBLE785MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 22:07, December 12, 2009 (UTC)
It's nice, but what's with her eyes? She looks cross-eyed--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 00:29, December 13, 2009 (UTC)
Check one of Icethroat21's eye diagrams.--:) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! 01:11, December 13, 2009 (UTC)
Yeah, but there are different way to do a queen's eye. Look at Lilyfur, Cloudberry, or Splashnose--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 01:14, December 13, 2009 (UTC)
I would maybe lighten up on the stripes a little, they're very close together. And it doesn't say black stripes, just that she has darker stripes. But the shading and highlights are very nice--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 04:14, December 14, 2009 (UTC)
I'm inclined to disagree with you on the stripes Nightfall: I thnk they look great, not too close at all. If you look at a picture of a silver tabby with darker stripes then the stripes are generally this dark (eg a silver bengal - I cannot be bothered to find a picture right now, sorry ! ^_^ I will if you really need me to, but just google it or something). I would advise you don't change them Bracken, but then that's just my opinion. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 18:24, December 14, 2009 (UTC)
re-uploaded is this okay?-- Pebble2Pineow> *poke* hai! 04:37, December 15, 2009 (UTC)
It's perfect Bracken. I've just engraved a picture of Moonflower the way I think she looks into my mind, so don't bother with my comment about the stripes. And the eye looks ten million times better! Good job!--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 06:34, December 15, 2009 (UTC)
Comments before approval? (Also wanted to apologise for my leaving the images that have reached 24 hours for now; I just don't have time to fiddle around with all the different places different things need to go right now. Sorry Bramble and the other senior warriors, I feel lazy leaving them but that's life ^_^) Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 21:41, December 15, 2009 (UTC)
Pssh, not a problem. You do enough without having to worry about that. :) --Tinselclaw 03:28, December 16, 2009 (UTC)
Approved. Tinselclaw 22:18, December 16, 2009 (UTC)
Whiskerpaw - Approved Edit
File:Whiskerpaw.apprentice.png Well he's back. My first try at highlights on an apprentice so comments?--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 22:23, December 10, 2009 (UTC)
I'll admit, this is WAY better than mine!! Anyway, The ear pink just seems too round. --RoseyHappy Leaf-bare!
The highlights seem weird. The one on the head is oval and over the eye. Maybe try moving it towards the muzzle? Maplefern 11:51, December 11, 2009 (UTC)
Reuploaded I think i made the earpink too big. Maplefern the face highlight is like the one on Reedfeather, but if more people agree with you I'll change it. --AshshadowHappy Holidays! 23:33, December 11, 2009 (UTC)
I like it, just blend the shading and highlights more and it looks good to me. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 22:26, December 14, 2009 (UTC)
Did the best I could do on pixlr. Better?--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 22:53, December 14, 2009 (UTC)
This looks great. People complain way too much about pixlr and its blurring tool. You've done a good job here and Echo does her blending with pixlr and it is flawless! There is no strength in this anti-pixlr arguement (that i have probably used a couple of times myself). Comments before approval? Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 21:39, December 15, 2009 (UTC)
lol. None, approved. Tinselclaw 22:32, December 16, 2009 (UTC)
Swallowtail (A) - Approved Edit
My second apprentice, fourth charart. Comments? Criticism? Her article didn't specify what color her eyes were, so I chose amber. --Rainwhisker09 23:12, December 9, 2009 (UTC)
I can't see her eye color at all--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 23:20, December 9, 2009 (UTC)
I agree with Night. Lighten it. BlacktailLeave me a meow:) 23:54, December 9, 2009 (UTC)
Darken the shading, and since you have a highlight on the head, put one on the shoulder and rear leg too.--Minnowclaw 00:01, December 10, 2009 (UTC)
Done. Anything else? When I tried to darken the shading, it got too dark, and I couldn't blur it well. So I left the shading the same, but added highlights as Minnowclaw said. --Rainwhisker09 15:48, December 13, 2009 (UTC)
Lighten the eye colour a bit more. TinselfernHave yourself a merry little Leaf-bare!14:59, December 14, 2009 (UTC)
Reuploaded What else? --Rainwhisker09 01:10, December 16, 2009 (UTC)
Nothing from me. Comments before approval? --Tinselclaw 22:23, December 16, 2009 (UTC)
Approved. Tinselclaw 22:31, December 17, 2009 (UTC)
Whitestorm (D)-Approved Edit
Okay here he is! I am waiting for comments on my Nightwing. I still have to blur the shading on her. XD Anyways enough of my Nightwing talk. Here is Whitestorm as an awesome deputy! Comments? :D Jinglestorm ♥'Merry Purry Christmas! 16:29, December 12, 2009 (UTC)
Grr. Shading doesn't show up good. :D Jinglestorm ♥'Merry Purry Christmas! 16:31, December 12, 2009 (UTC)
The shading is working it's just too light right now, darken the shading and lighten the highlights. Also, the highlights are a circle becuase that wouldn't be what a highlight would look like on a cat. Make the ear pink a lighter pink and then move it down. Last, blur the shading and highlights more.--Minnowclaw 16:34, December 12, 2009 (UTC)
How do I make the highlights less of a circle. And how do i lighten them? :D Jinglestorm ♥'Merry Purry Christmas! 16:37, December 12, 2009 (UTC)
To make it lighter, go over more times until it's a good color. The make it less of a circle, move your mouse around when your making the highlight and don't just click. Also, it kind of helps me to put it on a lower hardness so that is doesn't look that much like a circle--Minnowclaw 16:39, December 12, 2009 (UTC)
Oh and how do I move the ear pink down? What tool do I go over the highlights with? :D Jinglestorm ♥'Merry Purry Christmas! 16:41, December 12, 2009 (UTC)
Very good, Icestorm! You use the dodge tool to add highlights. Also, run over the shading lightly with the burn tool; I can't really see them. Other than that, I think it's ready. :) ~ MUMBLE785MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 22:05, December 12, 2009 (UTC)
Thank you Mumble! Should I add highlights again? :D Jinglestorm ♥'Merry Purry Christmas! 22:09, December 12, 2009 (UTC)
It looks good, Icy!!:) Like what Minnowclaw said, blur the ear pink and lighten it up. Couldn't do Fallowtail right now, cuz I'm not allowed:) --Santashadow Have A Very Purry Christmas! 22:28, December 12, 2009 (UTC)
The highlights seem too obvious. Blurr them maybe? Maplefern 22:58, December 12, 2009 (UTC)
Blur the shading on his chest more.--:) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! 01:09, December 13, 2009 (UTC)
In Bluestar's Proophecy his eyes are blue not amber eyes.Echorain3
His eyes have been mentioned as sandy-colored yellow and blue. We decided on yellow, so this is fine. Darken the shading and blur the highlights and the shading together fully. --Tinselclaw 17:06, December 13, 2009 (UTC)
The lineart is all blurred, and the top of his ear is missing. --Rainwhisker09 01:25, December 16, 2009 (UTC)
Could you please make the eye like the current Whitestorm warrior pixel? Then it should be good to go. --Tinselclaw 22:26, December 16, 2009 (UTC)
Done. --:D Jinglestorm ♥'Merry Purry Christmas! 23:04, December 16, 2009 (UTC)
Comments before approval? --Tinselclaw 23:15, December 16, 2009 (UTC)
Approved. Tinselclaw 22:31, December 17, 2009 (UTC)
Pounce (R) - ApprovedEdit
I feel bad about exceeding the image-limit, but it won't be the 38th for long (I hope). Anyway, I tried to imitate what his stripes looked like in the manga, which is why they look like that. If I need to change them, I will. Plus, I changed my sig. Everyone was calling me Flamingomom because it didn't say "Hawktalon"XD (Not that that's a problem, or anything^^')(I would've named my username "Hawktalon", but I could only use my mom's username for her Verizon Yahoo account. I have no e-mail account. Whatafail). But, enough of my rambling on. Constructments? --HawktalonMerry Xmas! 20:14, December 14, 2009 (UTC)
WOW!!! I love this; it's beautiful. Just blend the shading a little and I can't see anything else. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 22:34, December 14, 2009 (UTC)
Reuploaded - Thanks, Sandy:3 I blended the shading some more and, on a whim, I decided to lighten the highlights a bit. Better now? --HawktalonMerry Xmas! 23:19, December 14, 2009 (UTC)
I don't see any white in the eye, but otherwise- AMAZING!!!!!--:) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! 23:47, December 14, 2009 (UTC)
Oh, my, GOSH! This is beautiful!!!! But yes, there needs to be a pupil. But this is incredible--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 06:39, December 15, 2009 (UTC)
Reuploaded - Thanks Mousetalon and Nightfall^-^ I added the eye-white (how could I have forgotten to do that>_<). Oh, and I had the weirdest dream last night that Goldenflower was once a ShadowClan catO_o... --HawktalonMerry Xmas! 20:34, December 15, 2009 (UTC)
Looks awsome!! And Goldenflower in ShadowClan? Woah! Your sub conciense must have linked her to Tawnypelt. Isn't it freaky how your sub consiense is in TOTAL control of your dreams? It makes me shiver--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 01:41, December 16, 2009 (UTC)
Oh, believe me, I could go on a ten-hour long rant about how dreams are freakishly awesome. Comes from the books I read. :) But I'll spare you from that and just start the 24 hours. Great job, Hawktalon. Comments before approval? Tinselclaw 03:19, December 16, 2009 (UTC)
Approved. Tinselclaw 22:31, December 17, 2009 (UTC)
Lizardfang (E) - ApprovedEdit
- Well, there's a 24 hour call on at least half a dozen images so here's to hoping I got the description right this time... Constructments? Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 22:34, December 14, 2009 (UTC)
Saber-toothed kitteh! Lol Anyway, I think the tooth could be a little less yellow or lighter. But otherwise, this is amazing! --HawktalonMerry Xmas! 23:02, December 14, 2009 (UTC)
Okay, maybe the colour is different on my cp as it doesn't look that yellow to me. I did it like that because she's old and old cats have yellowing teeth. I'll lighten it tomorrow. =) Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 23:03, December 14, 2009 (UTC)
As usual, wonderful job. And I agree with you, Sandy, the teeth look fine.--:) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! 23:46, December 14, 2009 (UTC)
Forget what I said about the tooth, my computer was being stupid, it made the colors all messed up. The tooth looks fine now:) --HawktalonMerry Xmas! 20:37, December 15, 2009 (UTC)
Comments before approval? Tinselclaw 03:35, December 16, 2009 (UTC)
Approved. Tinselclaw 22:31, December 17, 2009 (UTC)
Nightwing (W)- Approved Edit
My second Charart! Comments? :D Jinglestorm ♥'Merry Purry Christmas! 23:59, December 3, 2009 (UTC)
Nice job!!! Maybe blur the ear more and either make the shading darker or the pelt lighter.Hidden-jimgle ♪ 00:05, December 4, 2009 (UTC)
It's AWESOME Icy, but blur the ear pink a little and maybe a couple shades lighter. Otherwise, It lookes great!!:) --Santashadow Have A Very Purry Christmas! 00:07, December 4, 2009 (UTC)
The ear pink needs to be a bit smaller. It takes up the whole ear. Great job, my apprentice! :) Jinglefire'Tis the Holiday Season! 00:11, December 4, 2009 (UTC)
Um I am trying to full it up to a lighter black but it fills the line-art to! Help! :D Jinglestorm ♥'Merry Purry Christmas! 00:14, December 4, 2009 (UTC)
Reuploaded I still think the earpink is still too big. :D Jinglestorm ♥'Merry Purry Christmas! 00:38, December 4, 2009 (UTC)
If you use pixlr.com you can either use burn tool to make darker or doge too to make lighter parts.Hidden-jimgle ♪ 01:06, December 4, 2009 (UTC)
And to blur the ear pink. It's too bright, run the burn tool over it a bit.--:) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! 20:16, December 4, 2009 (UTC)
Reuploaded :D Jinglestorm ♥'Merry Purry Christmas! 21:32, December 4, 2009 (UTC)
This looks great! But try making the ear pink more of a purplish-color. Like Fuzzypelt And maybe make it's postion a little higher--SNOWFALLLet it snow, let it snow! 03:55, December 5, 2009 (UTC)
Workin on it. :D Jinglestorm ♥'Merry Purry Christmas! 16:48, December 5, 2009 (UTC)
Reuploaded Is she ready for approval? :D Jinglestorm ♥'Merry Purry Christmas! 21:08, December 5, 2009 (UTC)
Blur the earpink some more. I think she'll be ready after that--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 22:47, December 5, 2009 (UTC)
Reuploaded Blurred earpink. Better? Is she resady for approval? :D Jinglestorm ♥'Merry Purry Christmas! 23:15, December 5, 2009 (UTC)
Stop asking. It will be approved when it's ready. Add some shading on the top of the head and more on the chest. There is a dark patch on the haunch among the shading; get rid of that. also blur the shading as much as you possibly can. --Tinselclaw 01:54, December 6, 2009 (UTC)
I am sooooooooooooooooo sorry. And how do I get rid of it? (Please don't laugh) :D Jinglestorm ♥'Merry Purry Christmas! 03:06, December 6, 2009 (UTC)
Reuploaded Grr. Pixlr is getting on my nerves. Well I blurred the shading as much as I could. And I tried to get rid of the dark thing on her hind leg but it wouldn't leave! Help! :D Jinglestorm ♥'Merry Purry Christmas! 23:56, December 8, 2009 (UTC)
How about erasing it and recoulouring it? Just a suggestion. Maplefern 00:09, December 9, 2009 (UTC)
I don' know. I'll only do it if Warriors,Senior Warriors,Sandy or Bramble tells me to. :D Jinglestorm ♥'Merry Purry Christmas! 20:36, December 9, 2009 (UTC)
Icestorm, everyone's opinions and suggestions are valued, and plus, Maplefern's right, you could try erasing it, or using the pencil tool at size square one and coloring it white instead of erasing it, and then coloring it back in again. --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 00:04, December 10, 2009 (UTC)
Sorry, I just wasn't sure. Working on it. :D Jinglestorm ♥'Merry Purry Christmas! 12:56, December 10, 2009 (UTC)
Perfect Icey! X3 Maybe just lighten it an insy winsy bit otherwise PERFECT! --Echopaw 00:37, December 11, 2009 (UTC)
Okay I re-did this. Any more comments? :D Jinglestorm ♥'Merry Purry Christmas! 01:12, December 11, 2009 (UTC)
Looks good, but the ear pink needs to be smaller, and the shading could be blurred a little more--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 02:08, December 11, 2009 (UTC)
Okay. I am going to school right now so I will work on this when I come back. :D Jinglestorm ♥'Merry Purry Christmas! 12:55, December 11, 2009 (UTC)
The shading on the chest looks....different. Maplefern 22:51, December 12, 2009 (UTC)
How? :D Jinglestorm ♥'Merry Purry Christmas!
It kind of looks like a thin line. Maplefern 00:02, December 13, 2009 (UTC)
I don't know what you mean. I think your saying the lineart is a thin line. :D Jinglestorm ♥'Merry Purry Christmas! 00:11, December 13, 2009 (UTC)
If i was in charge of PCA i would approve! really good job!--Echopaw 00:26, December 13, 2009 (UTC)
Okay, never mind. Maplefern 12:07, December 13, 2009 (UTC)
I have a few things: The ear pink is too big: Nightwing is a black cat and the ear pink is not normally even visible. For the purpose of charart we do add ear pink but it needs to be smaller than that of a coloured cat. Look at 
as an example. Also, the shading is too thin and is blotchy/missing in places. Thicken it and blend it using the blur tool. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 12:25, December 13, 2009 (UTC)
Those things have been accomplished though the artist did not say so. Approving. Tinselclaw 01:51, December 18, 2009 (UTC)
Lightningpelt- ApprovedEdit
A minor character. Comments? HawkfireTalk! 00:59, November 9, 2009 (UTC)
The white streak on her back would probably be on the lineart, rather than on the side of the pelt like it is now. Otherwise, great job, Hawkfire! --Icethroat21Enter at risk 01:26, November 9, 2009 (UTC)
I echo Icethroat, and also make the ear pink more of a fine triangular shape, and less of a bright pink color. --♫EchomistTalk♦Contribs 01:49, November 9, 2009 (UTC) Awesome! Um I don't really see anything *goes closer* Nope [[User:Icestorm123|<span style="background:silver; color:goldenrod;">'''Icestorm'''</span>]]<sup>[[User Talk:Icestorm123|<span style="color:blue;">How's the prey running?</span>]]</sup> 02:02, November 9, 2009 (UTC)
(S) - Make sure you make it slightly smaller, as we probably wouldn't be able to see it all. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 18:04, November 9, 2009 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Made the streak on the back, and worked on her stripes and ear pink. HawkfireTalk! 19:05, November 15, 2009 (UTC)
nice work. but now I can hardley see the streak. maybe make it a bit bigger and longer. Darkmoon25
Your tabby stripes seem to be blurred. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 19:56, November 16, 2009 (UTC)
Reuploaded. HawkfireTalk! 23:11, November 20, 2009 (UTC)
Ok the image still looks good. but I can hardly see the ear pink and the streak looks more like a patch now then a streak. But good job Darkmoon25
This hasn't been updated in awhile. Please update soon.--Darkhallows 11:04, November 29, 2009 (UTC)
Reuploaded. HawkeyRawr! LOL 19:36, November 29, 2009 (UTC)
There is some blurred lineart around the neck area, and the lineart on the back is a bit too thin. Also, the ear pink is touching the bottom of the ear when it should be a fine triangular shape, kept inside the ear lineart. Fix these things, and she'll be ready. :) --♫EchomistTalk♦Contribs 13:47, November 30, 2009 (UTC)
This hasn't been updated in a week; please work on it or it will be declined. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 11:06, December 6, 2009 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Sorry about that! Jinglefire'Tis the Holiday Season! 21:46, December 6, 2009 (UTC)
(S) - The tabby stripes aren't as blurred on the shoulder as they are on the haunch. Streak looks great though. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 17:58, December 10, 2009 (UTC)
The upload log isnt working for me. I will try to update soon. Jinglefire'Tis the Holiday Season! 00:56, December 15, 2009 (UTC)
Okay... I think (my opinion) the stripes look perfect. This is probally the best image I've ever done. I dont think they need to be blurred anymore, for the image will be ruined if I do so. Jinglefire'Tis the Holiday Season! 00:28, December 17, 2009 (UTC)
I agree! It looks amazing!--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 08:37, December 17, 2009 (UTC)
I think it looks purfect hawky!I like the stripes also.--Firepelt 23:16, December 17, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt
Then... Comments before approval?--Darkhallows 12:21, December 18, 2009 (UTC)
Yeah she looks awesome! PLEASE DON'T LEAVE! --PandastormPanda Love 18:56, December 19, 2009 (UTC)
Approved. Tinselclaw 20:42, December 19, 2009 (UTC)
Brick (R) - Approved Edit
File:Brick.rogue.png My first rogue (I think...) We have no gender for him(?) but I thought he(?) could still have an image seeing as he(?) has a full description otherwise. I did him(?) as male (hence me using 'him' and 'he') but figured that if he turns out to be a she then it will be simple enough to change the blank. Therefore, constructments? Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 10:45, December 13, 2009 (UTC)
Yeah, it makes sense that it would be a he (A she-cat named brick? xD). I don't see anything wrong with it. Great work. : ) --MUMBLE785MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 14:24, December 13, 2009 (UTC)
Feel free to ignore my comment: the eye color is a tad too bright. My computer makes many things too bright. --RoseyHappy Leaf-bare!
Urm, I don't think Brick has ever been mentioned as being ginger. Ignore me if I'm wrong. --SilverbellsMerry Xmas! 15:52, December 13, 2009 (UTC)
Brick is a girl, it says it in her article, but ignore me if i'm wrong. Other than that, This looks great. --Nightwhisker98Merry Christmas :D 16:58, December 13, 2009 (UTC)
In the manga she's in, she has eye lashes. It makes her look pretty feminine. Although, she doesn't have a white patch on her back; she has a patch of fur missing, about right between her shoulder blades. It's too bad that everything in a manga is gray. But since we assumed that Ruby was gray, we can just assume that Brick is ginger. --Tinselclaw 17:00, December 13, 2009 (UTC)
Okay! I made her a girl (when I looked at her article it said unknown gender, I'm sure). I kept her ginger but changed the white patch to a section of missing fur. I lightened the eyes. Also, the upload log is playing up again so I changed the file name. Bramble, pretty please can you delete the old one? Brick.rogue.png (I feel bad asking you again but... sorry.) Any more comments? Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 22:24, December 13, 2009 (UTC)
You can decide on whether this would make a difference or is important, but right now the furless patch looks like a pink patch on her back. You may choose to ignore this comment.TinselfernHave yourself a merry little Leaf-bare!01:22, December 16, 2009 (UTC)
hmm... any suggestions on how else I can do it? I see what you mean but I'm at a loss. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 17:20, December 16, 2009 (UTC)
How about sort of like the way you did Raggedstar's fur (you did do him, right?); put a little tuft of fur in front of it, but don't cover it completely? It'll make it look more convincing. --Tinselclaw 22:38, December 16, 2009 (UTC)
That's a good idea Bramble, I didn't think of that. Okay, sorry it took a couple of days for me to get round to it, but here she is. Better? Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 15:30, December 18, 2009 (UTC)
Awesome. Comments before approval? --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 23:30, December 18, 2009 (UTC)
Approved. Tinselclaw 00:45, December 20, 2009 (UTC)
Crowfur- Approved Edit
The highlight on his hind leg is really bugging me. I've played around with it a lot, but can't get it to look quite right. Any suggestions? --AngelstarSilver Bells 22:15, December 9, 2009 (UTC)
Good; but the color seems to cut off at the head and into a lighter area...? The scars could be blended more. And maybe darken the shading. Other than that it seems fine.--Warrior♥Warrior's Den 22:25, December 9, 2009 (UTC)
This is good, but is the muzzle supposed to be white? Or is it tinged silver because of age? If it's tinged silver, I'd smudge it then blur it into his face, because it looks like he was born with that color muzzle. Btw, I LOVE how you do that missing fur! Did you do Graypool too? You're really good at that!--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 22:40, December 9, 2009 (UTC)
Nightfall, I did Graypool. Anyway, onto the image. The whiskers look like they have a couple missing pixels; fix that. Great job, otherwise:) --SilverbellsMerry Xmas! 22:54, December 9, 2009 (UTC)
Oh, I'm sorry Flamingmom!--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 22:55, December 9, 2009 (UTC)
It's okay, everyone makes mistakes:D --SilverbellsMerry Xmas! 22:57, December 9, 2009 (UTC)
Good job! Just blur the ear pink more. Oh, and did you reserve Crowfur on the Project page, 'cause I didn't see it. --Rainwhisker09 23:09, December 9, 2009 (UTC)
Crowfur's page (Last I looked) said that he had "a silver muzzle." That may mean silver-tinged with age; and if that's so, is there a picture I could use for reference on how to make a silver-tinged muzzle? Oh, and sorry, Flamingomom! I actually modeled the fur off Graypool (Since it looked so good), but I didn't mean to copy you or anything! I'm real sorry about that. And, yes, I did reserve Crowfur. But if you want to do him, Rainwhisker, you have my full permission to, since my Crowfur isn't anything to look at. =P --AngelstarSilver Bells 22:08, December 11, 2009 (UTC)
No, I was just wondering. Sorry! And your Crowfur looks really good. --Rainwhisker09 23:51, December 11, 2009 (UTC)
It's okay. =) Sorry, I didn't want to make you feel awkward or anything. --AngelstarSilver Bells 00:55, December 12, 2009 (UTC)
It's okay, Honeyfur:) --SilverbellsMerry Xmas! 01:13, December 12, 2009 (UTC)
Add some shading on the hindleg curve and the chest. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 10:38, December 13, 2009 (UTC)
How's this? --AngelstarSilver Bells 02:45, December 14, 2009 (UTC)
I still can't see any on the chest or the bit above the tail where it meets the hindleg, if that makes any sense. Look at File:Ashfur(SC).elder.png (I know it's my image and I don't normally give my own as examples but it's the first one I can think of that demonstrates what I mean) Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 17:45, December 18, 2009 (UTC)
Sorry about that! By the chest, I thought that you meant the area in between his two legs. =P Is this what you mean? --AngelstarSilver Bells 18:40, December 18, 2009 (UTC)
Yep, that's what I meant - sorry for the confusion, I'm awful at explaining things at the moment. I see nothing else. Great job Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 17:17, December 18, 2009 (UTC)
Approving. Tinselclaw 00:51, December 20, 2009 (UTC)
Milkfur(D)-ApprovedEdit
I know,the chest shading is messed up,I'll work on that.Suggestions?help?comments?critque?--Firepelt 22:28, December 6, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt
can you take it out of the thumbnail so i can see it better? --♥Shinestar♥ 22:36, December 6, 2009 (UTC)
i would darken the ear pink a bit. --♥Shinestar♥ 22:49, December 6, 2009 (UTC)
Reuploaded Darken ear pink-Check --Firepelt 23:00, December 6, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt
It's too small. You've made it in the size of the thumbnail version. You have to click on the image on the main page, then save it to your computer and edit it.--Tinselclaw 23:40, December 6, 2009 (UTC)
Reuploaded. i REUPLOADED IT,MADE THE FUR MORE OF A MILKY WHITE COLOR,FIXED THE EAR PINK.THE SHADING,AND THE LINE ART AND EYES.--Firepelt 23:38, December 7, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt
Is there going to be anymore comments?I have seen on a list of need charcat art that milkfur needed to be done as a depty.I need this one approved so if i gett 1 or 2 more,Ill be a warrior,--Firepelt 00:51, December 8, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt
Its only been a couple hours Firepelt anyway the shading looks a little messy.--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 00:55, December 8, 2009 (UTC)
The ear pink needs to be faded and the shading is blotchy and messy.--:) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! 01:13, December 8, 2009 (UTC)
Reuploaded.How's the shading now?I fixed it with the dodge tool,and added some where I had forgotten it.--Firepelt 02:00, December 8, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt
He needs eye color--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 02:14, December 8, 2009 (UTC)
Reuploaded.Done.--Firepelt 16:16, December 8, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt
Anything else?I tried to fix the shading.is it ok?--Firepelt 19:53, December 8, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt
It's better but the shading on the body is a bit dark. Try making it the same color as the legs furthest from us and blur it some more.--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 00:29, December 9, 2009 (UTC)
The lineart closer to his ear is blurred. Blur the shading more and add a pupil to the eye. (Get pencil tool brush 1 fill white pixlrs on the eye and leave 3 colored pixels. :D Jinglestorm ♥'Merry Purry Christmas! 13:04, December 9, 2009 (UTC)
Fixed the shading the best I could and I lightened the eye color,to dark of blue.I also I fixed the line art(sorry it was blurred!).Anything else?Firepelt 15:12, December 9, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt
The shading still looks a little blotchy.Try blurring it some more--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 21:51, December 9, 2009 (UTC)
pixlr's blurring tool is like,horrible.I did the best I could with it,and it still looks alittle dark around the top of the front leg.Firepelt 22:31, December 9, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt
I would darken the chest/back shading just a tiny, tiny bit if possible, and add some shading to the tail. Other than that, this looks great. (: --SnowstarLeaf-bare is here! 21:35, December 10, 2009 (UTC)
Reuploaded.Done.I think i might be alittle dark,though.Do you think so?PIxlr's blurring tool dosen't seem right these days.Firepelt 23:40, December 10, 2009 (UTC)Firepelt
IDK but i thought he was a LONG hair cat but it doesn't matter (vicky changes things all the time!) thats whats fun! XD other than that perfect! --Echopaw 00:42, December 11, 2009 (UTC)
Thank you,echopaw.Hopefully,i'll get some more good comments,and it will be approved.1 more image on my way to a warrior.Firepelt 00:46, December 11, 2009 (UTC)
Now the shading's a little dark. Try making it the same as the tail shading. --SnowstarLeaf-bare is here! 12:00, December 11, 2009 (UTC)
Reuploaded.I am like,having a HORRIBLE time with pixlr's blurring tool.I did the best i could!Firepelt 22:31, December 11, 2009 (UTC)
Brighten the eye colour a little. Maplefern 22:33, December 12, 2009 (UTC)
Ear pink and shading still need blurring.--:) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! 01:22, December 13, 2009 (UTC)
Reuploaded.Anything else?Firepelt 18:00, December 13, 2009 (UTC)
can you try to blur the shading alittle more. I know pixlr's blur tool isnt the best. also your siggy isnt working, its just writing.--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 18:05, December 13, 2009 (UTC)
Reuploaded.I blurred the shading.Anything else? Firepelt 19:22, December 13, 2009 (UTC)Firepelt
Blur it some more on the back. And yes, Pixlr's blurring tools aren't the greatest.TinselfernHave yourself a merry little Leaf-bare!22:50, December 14, 2009 (UTC)
Reuploaded.Blur shading on the back-Check.Anything else? Firepelt 01:17, December 15, 2009 (UTC)
Are the back legs supposed to be shaded?TinselfernHave yourself a merry little Leaf-bare!11:31, December 15, 2009 (UTC)
Reuploaded.I can't belive i forgot to shade the legs in the back! Firepelt 22:20, December 15, 2009 (UTC)
Anything else?........ Firepelt 23:37, December 16, 2009 (UTC)
(S) - I can see where you added it, but I personally can barely see it. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 12:33, December 17, 2009 (UTC)
Thx Mosswhisker!I darkened the shading,is everything ok now? Firepelt 22:51, December 17, 2009 (UTC)
Anything else?Anything?AT ALL? Firepelt 00:12, December 19, 2009 (UTC)
I cannot see the eye colour, can you lighten it please? Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 15:13, December 20, 2009 (UTC)
Reuploaded.Done. FirePelt 16:25, December 20, 2009 (UTC)
Anything else?Anything,at all? FirePelt 18:16, December 20, 2009 (UTC)
Comments before approval? Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 20:04, December 20, 2009 (UTC)
Approved. Tinselclaw 23:45, December 20, 2009 (UTC)
One-eye (E) - ApprovedEdit
I don't really know which eye is 'clouded and sightless. --Spottedwing 03:16, December 7, 2009 (UTC)
The cloudy eye is the one that we don't see (On this blank) So I'd color the eye amber. The shading could be blurred a little more, and I'd probably add some shading to the front paws too. And I can barely see the ear pink--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 06:27, December 7, 2009 (UTC)
how abought blurring the shading??*Ivy jingle jingle!!* 07:17, December 7, 2009 (UTC)
Blur the shading, and darken the ear pink just a tiny, tiny bit. --SnowstarLeaf-bare is here! 21:41, December 8, 2009 (UTC)
I think she is white, not grey. But if you intend to have a grey pelt, then it is good. Maplefern 00:28, December 9, 2009 (UTC)
No, One-eye is pale gray, not white--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 04:14, December 9, 2009 (UTC)
Reuploaded sorry it took so long. Fixed the eye and blurred the shading. --Spottedwing 05:09, December 13, 2009 (UTC)
Looks better, but the front paws still need shading--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 05:21, December 13, 2009 (UTC)
Hows this? --Spottedwing 03:24, December 14, 2009 (UTC)
That's better, but make the eye color more amber. Right now it looks gold--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 03:32, December 14, 2009 (UTC)
Fixed. --Spottedwing 03:37, December 14, 2009 (UTC)
Hmmm, it still looks yellow to me. Amber is like a light reddish-orangeish-brownish color--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 03:52, December 14, 2009 (UTC)
Make it almost orange with a tinge of yellow. TinselfernHave yourself a merry little Leaf-bare!14:55, December 14, 2009 (UTC)
Hows this? --Spottedwing 01:17, December 15, 2009 (UTC)
Better, but it still looks too yellow. Try adding a pale reddish color--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 06:44, December 15, 2009 (UTC)
The eye looks fine to me. Just add some shading along the hindleg curve and this will be ready. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 21:33, December 15, 2009 (UTC)
Reuploaded. --Spottedwing 02:46, December 17, 2009 (UTC)
blurr the shading and add some to certain places.--*Ivy jingle jingle!!* 07:55, December 17, 2009 (UTC)
Be more specific Ivypool, which places do you mean?--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 07:36, December 18, 2009 (UTC)
Add some shading to the haunch (hind leg?). --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 23:39, December 18, 2009 (UTC)
Reuploaded --Spottedwing 02:53, December 19, 2009 (UTC)
Comments before approval? Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 15:14, December 20, 2009 (UTC)
Approving. Tinselclaw 23:45, December 20, 2009 (UTC)
Pod (Lo) - Approved Edit
I know I should've posted Heavystep first, but I was having some trouble with the deformed leg. So, in my spare time, I made Pod. Comments/Criticism? --Rainwhisker09 21:09, December 12, 2009 (UTC)
I can't see any highlights or shading.--:) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! 01:09, December 13, 2009 (UTC)
I agree with Mousey. It looks kind of flat. TinselfernHave yourself a merry little Leaf-bare! 00:01, December 14, 2009 (UTC)
It also says "muzzle tinged with silver". TinselfernHave yourself a merry little Leaf-bare!19:56, December 14, 2009 (UTC)
Mousetalon, highlights aren't neccesary, and I'll thicken the shading. Oh, and I forgot the gray muzzle. I'll do it now. --Rainwhisker09 00:31, December 16, 2009 (UTC)
Uploaded Done. Any other problems? --Rainwhisker09 01:14, December 16, 2009 (UTC)
Better. And I know, I just didn't knoiw if you wanted them or not. :)--:) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! 03:15, December 17, 2009 (UTC)
I don't see anything else. Comments before approval? --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 14:55, December 20, 2009 (UTC)
Approving. Tinselclaw 23:45, December 20, 2009 (UTC)
Tangle (R) - ApprovedEdit
Tangle! ^^ I'm really proud of this one.--Night shine 04:28, December 14, 2009 (UTC)
This is good!! I would make the "ragged fur" a bit thinner, though, like Raggedstar's image. Also, darken the shading a tiny bit and darken ear pink. Fix those and this should be good. (: --SnowstarLeaf-bare is here! 11:59, December 14, 2009 (UTC)
He's awesome! --MUMBLE785MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 17:51, December 14, 2009 (UTC)
Darken the earpink. I ca barely see it. TinselfernHave yourself a merry little Leaf-bare!17:55, December 14, 2009 (UTC)
I edited it--Night shine 03:45, December 15, 2009 (UTC)
It looks much better. I would just blur the ragged fur a tiny, TINY bit. Not too blurry! --SnowstarLeaf-bare is here! 23:56, December 15, 2009 (UTC)
I blurred the ragged fur a bit ^^ I hope you guys like it.--Night shine 01:25, December 16, 2009 (UTC)
Perfect. I think this is ready. --SnowstarLeaf-bare is here! 01:29, December 16, 2009 (UTC)
Great Thanks!--Night shine 01:31, December 16, 2009 (UTC)
Is it going to be approved?--Night shine 01:05, December 18, 2009 (UTC)
If you could blur the whole center of the body to make the highlights coalesce better, that'd be great. Other than that, the image is very well done. Tinselclaw 01:44, December 18, 2009 (UTC)
Reuploaded--Night shine 02:17, December 18, 2009 (UTC)
This looks awesome. Maybe darken the ear pink just a little bit more, and darken the color of the eyes just a tad bit, and this should be ready. --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 23:33, December 18, 2009 (UTC)
Reuploaded again. I hope you like it!--Night shine 00:46, December 19, 2009 (UTC)
Yup, I think it looks fine now. Comments before approval? --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 14:53, December 20, 2009 (UTC)
Approving. Tinselclaw 23:45, December 20, 2009 (UTC)
Olivenose (W)- Approved Edit
Did I exceed the image limit?I was too lazy to check. Well, it's my first tortoiseshell- cower in fear! Anyways, comments?--:) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! 23:56, December 16, 2009 (UTC)
This is very good Mouse! But it doesn't look very much like her apprentice picture. Her apprentice picture is tortoiseshell with a white muzzle and chest. See this-Olivepaw. Your's doesn't look like that. It's so awsome though!--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 08:56, December 17, 2009 (UTC)
I agree. Plus, theres no earpink. Jinglefire'Tis the Holiday Season! 19:40, December 17, 2009 (UTC)
Hawkey's right, there's no ear pink. But I would hate for this to go to waste, is there another character you could re-submit this as?--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 19:45, December 17, 2009 (UTC)
This succeeds the page limit; from the comments I see, this needs some work, and so this should be taken off the page. For now.--MossScrooge Bahumbug! 21:06, December 17, 2009 (UTC)
Okay, take it off. But remember, I did the tail and muzzle right- the Olivepaw image is another side of her body, not the same one. And I will add ear pink.--:) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! 00:38, December 18, 2009 (UTC)
No need the take this day now. It is within 35 images and there are other images that have exceeded the limit. Moustalon, this is very good. Just fix the things said up there and this should be good. :)--Minnowclaw 18:00, December 18, 2009 (UTC)
Reuploaded I think that's better. Do you guys think I should redo her?--:) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! 01:01, December 19, 2009 (UTC)
Oh I think it's beautiful Mouse! But you still need to add ear pink--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 01:04, December 19, 2009 (UTC)
Okay, I made another image. Which one do you like better?--:) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! 01:29, December 19, 2009 (UTC)
I think the second one looks more like her apprentice picture.--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 01:31, December 19, 2009 (UTC)
Okay.--:) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! 03:25, December 19, 2009 (UTC)
Oh Mouse, this is beautiful! But, maybe connect the black on her front leg with the ginger on her pelt instead of leaving a white space in between it--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 03:34, December 19, 2009 (UTC)
No, look at her apprentice pixel.--:) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! 04:02, December 19, 2009 (UTC)
Oh yeah, I see what you mean. But maybe try and smudge into the white more? It looks unnatural--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 04:07, December 19, 2009 (UTC)
Reuploaded Okay, I went ahead and blurred her muzzle while I was at it. Anything else?--:) JingletalonI've been dreaming of a Warriors Christmas 22:52, December 19, 2009 (UTC)
This looks much better than the apprentice pic I made for her. :) Comments before approval? --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 14:31, December 20, 2009 (UTC)
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