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Mist where Sunlight Shimmers - Approved

[[File:Mist.png]] well, icy says its ready!!is it how you do it??*santapool* 07:03, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

It's great! But the shading looks kinda bumpy, and the lineart on her back looks blurred. Also, the image needs to be under the headline part--Nightfall101 08:55, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

Try to connect the mud streaks, 'cause they look like spots now. This looks great! --Rainwhisker09 14:04, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit, and blur the mud streaks, but other than that, AWESOME!!!!!--Mousetalon 19:43, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

The eye needs to look more realistic. (Wow, I missed something like that.) Look at Wing Shadow over Water for an example of how to do the eye. --Icy-chan 20:50, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

reploaded----*Ivypool* 07:24, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

The eye color looks, too big for the eye, it kind of seems too big, if you know what I mean. --Honeyrose34 17:27, November 26, 2009 (UTC) reploaded--*Ivypool* 06:29, November 27, 2009 (UTC)

There are some white spots near the lineart.--Darkhallows 11:17, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

The mud streaks look kind of a olive green colour as opposed to a grey/brown. The ear pink needs to be more triangular also SandyTalk 16:46, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

reploaded--*Ivypool* 07:23, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

The eye still doesn't look quite like it should, look at the top of here and there should be one that looks like the eye on a prey hunter. Also, there's a couple of white pixels near the whiskers, and There's a couple of extra pixels on the bottom of the lineart. I'll go ahead and answer your question here while I'm at it: for an image to be approved, Bramble, Sandy, or a senior warrior will put it on "comments before approval" for 24 hours, and if there no comments, then a Bramble, Sandy, or a senior warrior will approve it, add it to the approved charart pages (at the top of the page, arvhied in multiple pages), and will put the image on the character's page. --Icy-chan 21:50, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

REPLOADEDis it better??*Ivypool* 06:36, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink looks a bit strange, maybe make it more triangular?--Nightfall101 06:46, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

re[;oaded*Ivy jingle jingle!!* 07:04, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Add some shading to the tail.--:) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! 16:29, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

reploaded there!!--*Ivy jingle jingle!!* 11:45, December 5, 2009 (UTC)


The eye still doesn't look right, make it look like this. Also, maybe make the end of the tail a little bit darker than the rest of the tail (just use the burn tool a couple of times), so that it shows the shading more. --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 23:22, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

reploaded--*angel's bells* 06:38, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

The mud streaks need to be a little lighter. Other than that, great job! --SnowstarLeaf-bare is here! 12:15, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

reploaded i think it's strange...--*Ivy jingle jingle!!* 06:24, December 10, 2009 (UTC)

Hmm... the mud streaks look too green still and need to be slightly thinner I think. I'd personally use a size 5 brush and blur well. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 22:44, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

reploadedi started it all over... --*Ivy jingle jingle!!* 07:40, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

I can barely see the ear pink, maybe try changing the ear pink to a lighter or darker color, or making it thicker. --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 21:07, December 18, 2009 (UTC)


reploaded--*Ivy jingle jingle!!* 04:33, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

It looks to hot pink. When you're picking your color, go to the red, and choose a salmony color--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 04:47, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

reploaded *Ivy jingle jingle!!* 03:59, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 16:00, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Approved Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 13:34, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Fish Leap - Approved

File:Fish Leap.tb.png

Yes, this is an ancient cat. I decided that since the ancients eventually become the Tribe, the cats in training to be sharpclaws would generally be classified as to-bes. They're never mentioned as anything but cats in training to be sharpclaws, anyway. Comments? --Tinselclaw 23:04, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Your words confuzzled me, Bramble...but THI IMAGE IS STUNNING!!! XD--MossScrooge Bahumbug! 22:35, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

This is great Bramble. I was just wondering, are these the cats that would be softpaws or are they something different?--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 23:01, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

Darken it to make it a little browner and I think your right, why make a new blank for a cat who we don't even now who they are classified as.--Minnowclaw 18:12, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Darkened. --Tinselclaw 00:58, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Awesome. Comments before approval? --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 14:43, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Approved Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 13:49, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Rainfur(W) - Approved

Rainfur.warrior I really wanted the Firestar's Quest cats done, so I decided to do Raintail. I don't really know how the darker flecks turned out. Comments?Hidden-jimgle ♪ 19:58, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

Great work on the spots I think they should give it immediate approval. But his name is Rainfur. WoodClan 20:10, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

Yes, his name is Rainfur. I changed the title for you, and make sure to rename the image. It's no biggie, I get names mixed up too;) Anyway, the image is great, but I think the spots should be less round and more irregular. (Oh, and your signature is misspelled; the "Jingle" part of it has an m instead of an n. Just letting you know:) ) --SilverbellsMerry Xmas! 20:23, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

Make the spots more irregularly shaped and placed.--Minnowclaw 20:43, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I reauploaded the new Rainfur, so sorry that I wrote Riantail. I did the flecks more irregular with the help of teh charart of brambleberry. And than you, I hadn't realized m,y siggy said Hidden-jiMgle.Hidden-jingle ♪ 03:05, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

They still look too regular. Look at other spotted cats for help.--Minnowclaw 16:46, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the shoulder and haunch highlights.--:) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! 23:43, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded-fixed highlights and fixed the spots.Hidden-jingle ♪ 21:39, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Try making the spots different sizes, and some of them a lot bigger. Rainfur is flecked, Brambleberry is spotted, make them bigger and more like flecks, like on Weedwhisker. A flecked cat is basically like a mottled cat, so you could look at Lichen or Ashfur (TC) as well. --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 15:14, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded-I made him flecked like the chararts of Weedwhisker, Lichen, and Ashfur. Thatnks for the examples Icethroat. Comments?Hidden-jingle ♪ 21:17, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

My only comment is "Comments before approval?". :P --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 00:01, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

None; approved. --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 04:57, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

Swiftstar (L)- Approved

Swiftstar (WC).leader Is he okay? Warriors808 22:51, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

This isn't bad but you need to blur the shading and highlights. you might also want to add some shading to his left side.--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 23:08, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

This is awesome! Are you even online? Great for your first try! Just do what Ashy said and he'll be amazing! :) Jinglestorm ♥ Merry Purry Christmas! 23:22, December 1, 2009 (UTC)

Also, he needs ear pink --Spottedwing 00:28, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

The space right between his hind leg and his right fore-arm is white, it needs to be gray--Nightfall101 06:51, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the shading on his leg, it looks . . . smudged. And yes, add ear pink.--:) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! 16:37, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

This hasn't been touched for 7 days. Please work on it soon--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 22:08, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Night, Black hasn't been on because she was on vacation. She went to the cape. Anyways she's online right now so she'll upload it because she already had it done but it wasn't uploaded. Anyways Black, for the image maybe blur the earpink some more and the lineart on the leg looks....blurred. Fill that in black with the bucket tool and I think he'll be ready. Nice job for your first Charart. Oh and Night she works on these but she doesn't have time to upload them. She is always busy. :D Jinglestorm ♥'Merry Purry Christmas! 22:32, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry, didn't know--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 22:33, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Gone on vacation or not, Icestorm, Nightfall was right to say something; if you're not going to be able to update the image for a while, either leave a message saying so, or withdraw the image but leave it reserved so you can put it up when you get back. Image-wise, make the nose color a light gray instead of a pinkish color, don't have the ear pink filling up the entire ear, just in the middle of the ear, and make the ear pink more like the color of Smoketalon or Graymist's ear.

Also, the shading still needs blurred a lot more. --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 23:29, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry. She didn't know. She is only a newcomer. :D Jinglestorm ♥'Merry Purry Christmas! 23:33, December 7, 2009 (UTC)

Blacktail called me and I told her what happened and she said she is re-doing this. :D Jinglestorm ♥'Merry Purry Christmas! 01:50, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

The earpink looks kind of... strange. Make it smaller, and less inward. Blur it a bit as well. --SnowstarLeaf-bare is here! 12:12, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink. It looks too bright to me.––Σ ãliãs G.r.pawRR 08:57, December 10, 2009 (UTC)

Okay. I'll TRY to fix it. I am SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO BAD!at Chararts :( BlacktailLeave me a meow:) 22:14, December 10, 2009 (UTC)

DON'T decline this. I am working on it with the help of Icestorm and Minnowclaw. BlacktailLeave me a meow:) 13:06, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

Just for fun when I was re-doing Swiftstar I made him into a long haired cat. Is that okay? BlacktailLeave me a meow:) 00:51, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

well, Swiftstar is a WindClan cat so I personally think it better if he were shorthaired. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 14:50, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

DON'T DECLINE THIS! Warriors808 just called me saying she's working on this and she is trying to blur the shading it's just she says it's hard. Could anyone like be her mentor? --PandastormPanda Love 14:28, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

try lighting up the shades a bit it really works

It's beautiful, I just love what you did with the eyes. I think the ear pink need to be blurred though. --Spottedwing 04:19, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 15:11, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

She needs help with blurring the shading. --PandastormPanda Love 23:36, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Don't decline. Bramble is going to help her with blurring the shading. --PandastormPanda Love 02:04, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Okay I am trying blurring the shading. I hope it works! --BlacktailTalk! 02:27, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 13:40, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Looks pretty good to me!I don't see a reason why it should'nt be Approved. FirePelt 23:48, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Approved. --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 15:41, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

Squirrelfur (W) - Approved

Squirrelfur.warrior My second charart. Comments? --Holly...leaf or berry?

This is incredible! Just two things, first of all I think I can see a gray speck on his belly. And then (This might just be me being picky) but the face looks a little to dark. Maybe lighten up on the shading there?--Nightfall101 20:59, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

Nice job Holly!!! I agree with Night that the face is kinda too dark. And maybe blur a little the shading and the pink in the ear.Hidden-jimgle ♪ 21:21, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

i love it! although, i agree also, the face is a bit too dark and shade the ear. Otherwise, its fantastic! --♥Shinestar♥ 23:31, December 2, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks =). Better now? ----Holly...leaf or berry?

This is looking good. But there are two spots where the shading doesn't connect with the lineart. Right on his butt, (yeah, I said it =]) And the bottom of his front right paw.--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 02:07, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

The lineart looks as if it is blurred. Blur the fur, and lighten up a bit, especially on the paws. --Rainwhisker09 23:25, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

The tail looks really dark. But I'm picky :)--Shaf Girl 01:07, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I redid this one, I hope it looks better now ^^ Holly...leaf or berry?

This is amazing! Just darken the ear pink a tad. --SnowstarLeaf-bare is here! 16:13, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. --Holly...leaf or berry?

Look at the images for Cloudtail, Rippletail etc and use that colour. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 15:12, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. --Holly...leaf or berry?

Comments before approval? Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 13:45, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

None; approved. --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 15:41, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

Redstar - Approved

Redstar.leader Yes, I know it's the 39th image on the page, but it won't be the 38th for long. Anyway, I added a couple tabby stripes here and there because I felt like coloring a ginger cat the natural way:) Constructments? --HawktalonMerry Xmas! 20:42, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

This is great! But the highlights are... a little bright, either that or the pelt is too dark, also, i can't see the shading very well. --Nightwhisker98Merry Christmas :D 20:46, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

The shading is much too dark, and you need to make a bit of distinction between the shading and the main pelt color and highlights. Right now it just looks like he's colored this way, with no shading. --Tinselclaw 22:39, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Fixed the shading (I hope) and highlights. Better? --HawktalonMerry Xmas! 01:14, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

The shading's still too dark, and I can't see the original fur color anywhere between the shading and highlights. Try lightening the shading and/or darkening the highlights. --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 14:46, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Lightened the shading more. Is it better? --HawktalonMerry Xmas! 18:48, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Yep. Comments before approval? --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 15:04, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

None; approved. --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 15:41, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

Dapplepelt- Approved

Dapplepelt.mc Well some images are in the 24 hour stage so I thought putting this up would be ok. Comments on my first tortiseshell?--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 20:38, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

i see nothing wrong.... :D--*Ivy jingle jingle!!* 08:00, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

It might just be my computer screen, but it looks as if the highlights could be blurred a lot more. Also, the way her tortoiseshell patches are blurred looks kinda strange. Especially the ones in the middle. And the ones along the lineart could use some more blurring --SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 08:49, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Well kinda. I didnt really like the first one so I made a new one and decided to see which one you guys like best.--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 21:14, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

I liked the color and texture of the ginger on the second one, but the shapes were a bit square.--MossScrooge Bahumbug! 21:18, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I decided that I liked this one better. I added earpink and tried to fix the squareness of the patches. Comments?--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 15:32, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

The ginger looks too yellowish. Make it look more like the ginger on Robinwing (RC) or Olivenose. --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 14:50, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

It looks yellowish because of the highlights. Should I darken them?--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 14:53, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Yeah, try darkening them. --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 15:07, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

ReuploadedDarkened.--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 15:12, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, it looks better. I can barely see the ear pink, try a few different shades of pink and red and see which looks better. --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 15:10, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I think the earpink is too dark now but I couldn't really see it in other colors.--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 16:20, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

I think it looks fine. Comments before approval? --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 18:48, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

None; approved. --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 19:21, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

Speckle (Lo) - Approved

Speckle.loner I know, I've gone way past the image number, but I got my laptop back and I really wanted to have an image up, so here we go. I'll put Splash back up once the number of images on the page clears a bit. I'm not sure how this image turned out...comments and suggestions? --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 23:27, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Maybe darken the ear pink. But that's all I see right now. Does anyone else see anything? --:D Jinglestorm ♥'Merry Purry Christmas! 23:32, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Would she be classified as a queen because she is a she-cat nursing kits?TinselfernHave yourself a merry little Leaf-bare!23:34, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

I don't know if this is really flecked. They look more patchish to me, but I really like the image.--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 23:35, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Aww, I completely forgot that she was nursing kits. Is there another cat this image could work for? --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 23:45, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

She's still a loner. This can be her loner version, and the queen version can be done later. I would make this slightly like Lichen's image, with brown specks among the patches and white. Leave it as it is now and add to it. Tinselclaw 00:43, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

I like Brambles idea, this is too good to go to waste! Just do the things said and this should be good. Also maybe darken the flecks, but the way you have it it might be too hard.--Minnowclaw 02:54, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Do I put the brown specks on just the brown fur, or do I put them in the white fur, too? --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 14:26, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I kind of doubt this was what you were talking about, so I still have the original pic before this on my laptop, and I have this as file two on my laptop. Is this what you were talking about? --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 17:36, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Looks great! I think this is what they were talking about. I also see that the ear color is,pink. Fix that please. Besides that, I love it! --RoseyHappy Leaf-bare!

Maybe blur the earpink a bit.MaplefernHi!23:15, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I blurred the ear pink. Is this any better? --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 23:23, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Yep. Looks amazing. Comments before approval? Bramble-sama 16:18, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble-sama 17:29, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Tess - Approved

Tess.rogue well the page died down so here's Tess.--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 23:49, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Tess is a rogue, since she and her group were originally from BloodClan, and they basically attacked Ravenpaw and Barley. --Tinselclaw 00:35, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Okay I wanted to do a rogue anyway. Someone should change her category, she shows up in loner.--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 00:37, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Rogueified Lol. Fixed her--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 02:42, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Unless it's supposed to be white, blur the neck/chest -- Birchy

Its not white its pale gray and I will blur it a little more. Also please sign wiyh 4 ~.--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 15:51, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred it some more--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 21:39, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 15:46, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble-sama 17:29, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Splash (Lo) - Approved

File:Splash (Lo).loner.png Yup, as soon as the image number dies down, I just have to fill it up again by adding another image. :P Anyways, here's Splash, back up for approval. Comments and suggestions? --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 23:58, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

This is really good...all I see is that maybe the white part at the belly is kinda too poity at the top, mayeb make it more natural with a curve or something. But that's just my opinion.Hidden-jingle ♪ 00:23, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

I don't understand...where is it pointy at? Sorry, I'm probably missing something obvious. --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 00:32, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Lol, the white patch on his torso, it rises up in a point right on his chest. If you could round it out, it would look better. --Tinselclaw 00:33, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. How's this? --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 01:02, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Better. Not as pointy as before. MaplefernHi! 13:54, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --Bramble-sama 23:47, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble-sama 17:29, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Fritz - Approved

File:Fritz (PO3).loner.png

I figured I'd save Dove's Wing for later. Comments? --Tinselclaw 00:37, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

I don't know if apprentices are allowed to comment on the chararts..if they aren't, I'm sorry. but I think i just saw this image in the Declined Pixels archive; i think it was by nightwhisker...i'm so confused.... --CandyCaneWolf 01:43, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Apprentices are allowed to comment and thats because Nightwhisker did him but took him down. As for the image,maybe blur the earpink more.--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 01:48, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Good Job on Fritz, just blur the earpink and the white patches a tiny bit more. Ashshadow, I already told you, my image was not good for Fritz, and I saw Bramble had reserved him. Fritz deserved a better image. I like this one better. ------Night whisker98Merry Leaf-bare! 18:21, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

I know why you took Fritz down, I was explaining to Lonewolf why it was in the declined section.It might just be me but the black looks a little brownish.--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 18:31, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Oh, OK...The Back does look kind of brownish, I agree with Ashshadow... ------Night whisker98Merry Leaf-bare! 18:57, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Hey, when I was looking at the picture above and then scroled down, it looked like the same cat, so I had to adjust my eyes for a sec. LOL! Besides my rambling, the ear pink just stops at the dip in the ear. Maybe make it go around it so it looks like it was there till the cut in the ear. Get what i'm saying? --RoseyHappy Leaf-bare!

Yes I do; that was bothering me beforehand. Fixed the ear pink, and attempted to make the black less brown.. Anything else? Bramble-sama 03:18, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

Nope, it's awesome. Comments before approval? --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 05:01, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble-sama 17:29, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Fallen Leaves (TB) - Approved

File:Fallen Leaves.tb.png Constructments? Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 13:16, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Lighten his face a bit. MaplefernHi!13:34, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Add more shading on his belly--Echoheart 13:47, December 21, 2009 (UTC)Echoheart

I thought someone might say that Echoheart so I already had a second version stored on my cp. I lightened the face and also added ear pink, which I soo did not forget to do before ^_^ Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 14:01, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

It can't really see any shading on the back. --SnowstarLeaf-bare is here! 15:49, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

That's because there isn't any. The light source is coming from the top so there are no shadows on his back, they are all underneath his body. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 15:55, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Make the eyes just a little bit darker, they look too light right now. Fix that, and this should be ready; it looks awesome. --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 17:45, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Done Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 18:27, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 15:20, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble-sama 17:29, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Specklepaw - Approved

Specklepaw.apprentice There are already 3 images, or so, in the 24-hour stage, so I think I'm safe. Anyway, I loved Specklepaw in Code of the Clans, he was just so cute^^ Constructments? --HawktalonMerry Xmas! 15:11, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Make the image more of a reddish color rather than pink and then this should be good. --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 15:14, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I think you meant the ear pink, Icethroat:) Anyway, I changed it. Better? --HawktalonMerry Xmas! 15:27, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Whoops, I did mean the ear pink, sorry. I must have been half asleep still when I posted that comment. :) It looks much better now, I'll wait a little longer though before starting the 24 hours, it's much too early. It looks awesome, though. --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 16:54, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 15:21, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble-sama 17:29, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Dawnpelt (W)- Approved

Dawnpelt.warriorThis isn't above the limit, there are images up for approval now . . .I made her a while ago . . . hm. Well, I am actually kinda proud of her, I just love the color gray. Well, enough of my babbling . . . Comments?--:) JingletalonI've been dreaming of a Warriors Christmas 15:40, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

This is really good all I can see is that you blurred a little lineart on the back leg.--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 16:39, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better?--:) JingletalonI've been dreaming of a Warriors Christmas 16:59, December 21, 2009 (UTC)


Back legs aren't shaded. MaplefernHi!17:04, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

The style of shading I use doesn't require them to be.--:) JingletalonI've been dreaming of a Warriors Christmas 17:28, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Isn't the line art on the back blurred Icecloud33 17:58, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Beautiful Jingletalon!! All I see is maybe blur the pink ear a little more.Hidden-jingle ♪ 17:58, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

I know her apprentice picture is light gray, and this image does look beautiful, but Dawnpelt is actually a cream-furred she-cat, not light gray. --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 18:42, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Yeah, why is that? Can there be like a, creamy-gray color? But Ice is right, this is beautiful!--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 21:30, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Is there a way I can change the color? I was trying to stay consistent with the apprentice image. And no, I un-blurred the back lineart already.--:) JingletalonI've been dreaming of a Warriors Christmas 00:23, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

That's a good question...maybe Sandy or Bramble will know? --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 00:39, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

I do know how to change the color, but as Dawnpelt's apprentice image is the same color as this, it needs to stay this way. The chief aim at the moment is consistency. We can go back and change both of them to be more cream-colored in the future, if need be. Bramble-sama 02:19, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

Okay. For the image, I don't see anything else wrong. Comments before approval? --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 15:24, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble-sama 17:29, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Dove's Wing - Approved

File:Dove's Wing.tb.png

Um.. yeah, Jay's Wing's sister. Constructments? Bramble-sama 16:22, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the shading by his leags a little more, but it's BEAUTIFUL!!!!!--:) JingletalonI've been dreaming of a Warriors Christmas 16:26, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

She's beautiful Bramble! I see nothign wrong.Hidden-jingle ♪ 17:54, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

Just blend the chest shading a little and she'll be good to go. =) Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 18:05, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

All shading has been blended. In hindsight, I probably should have made this a longhaired cat, as she's probably Dovepaw's counterpart just as Jayfeather's was Jay's Wing, but all well. Anything else? --Bramble-sama 18:07, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Not that I see. Comments before approval? --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 19:29, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Wonderful image,Bramble.She should be approved. FirePelt 03:31, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Firepelt, please stop saying comments between the 24 hours that aren't aimed towards improvement for the image, it clogs up the edit log. For the image itself, approved. I'm going to approve and then archive, so I don't take as long and have to deal with edit conflicts afterwards. --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 01:25, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

Jaggedtooth (R)- Approved

File:Jaggedtooth.rouge.pngWell, I know this is past the image limit, but I will be busy and might not be able to post, so here. Comments?--:) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! 04:05, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Very good! Just darken the tail a bit more, blur the stripes on the tail, and make the ear pink pinkish. --Rainwhisker09 00:06, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better?--:) JingletalonI've been dreaming of a Warriors Christmas 02:27, December 20, 2009 (UTC)


Darken the stripes and ear pink more.--Minnowclaw 02:51, December 20, 2009 (UTC)


Reuploaded Anything else?--:) JingletalonI've been dreaming of a Warriors Christmas 16:24, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

Not that I see. Comments before approval? --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 19:31, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

None; approved. --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 01:26, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

Chirp (Lo)- Approved

Chirp.lonerWow I haven't been on in a while! :) Here he is, Chirp! I just love that name...comments?--MossScrooge Bahumbug! 11:34, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

I think it's pretty good. Maplefern 11:50, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

It could use a bit more pink in the ears --Santastar Merry Catmas to all and all a good night! 12:12, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

The tabby stripes really need blurred. --Bluestar1776 20:34, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Did that help? P.S. This is my first Charart as a warrior! ^.^ --MossScrooge Bahumbug! 21:09, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

He's really good Mossy!! All I can see is maybe make the shading thicker, and what others osers said.Hidden-jimgle ♪ 21:21, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

The stripes just look to dark and "solid" to me... try running the dodge tool over them a bit, and blur them a bit more. --SnowstarLeaf-bare is here! 21:43, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink, thicken the shading (that's on the edge of the lineart, the shading inside the fur caused by the highlights is okay, but either brighten the highlights some more [only a little bit] or darken that other shading as well [only a little bit]), and blur the stripes a lot more. Glad you're back on. ;) These tabby stripes are awesome, by the way. --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 22:37, December 8, 2009 (UTC)

This hasn't been worked on for 6 days... please work on it!! --SnowstarLeaf-bare is here! 22:17, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry...CURSE YOU PREALGEBRA YOU ARE LITERALLY RUINING MY LIFE!!!!! Sorry, I have anger management issues. Will work on it soon.--MossScrooge Bahumbug! 21:19, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded the burn tool is my hero :)--MossScrooge Bahumbug! 21:58, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

color the ear more,but AWSOME!!!my past mentor's past apprentice!!--*Ivy jingle jingle!!* 09:08, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploded Today is my dad's birthday.--MossScrooge Bahumbug! 16:59, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Thicken the shading, or brighten the highlights a lot. Either one will work. Also, happy late birthday to your dad! --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 23:07, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I brightnened highlights, and my dad appreciates it. --MossScrooge Bahumbug! 22:33, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

Happy really late birthday to your dad! Anyway, blur the neck shading a bit and it should be good.MaplefernHi!00:43, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Haha, and reuploaded.--MossScrooge Bahumbug! 21:46, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Looks great. Comments before approval? --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 21:49, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

None; approved. --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 01:28, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

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