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Kestrelflight (MC) -- Approved

Kestrelflight.mc OK, Hollyleaf USED to be here, but I took her down since it wasn't her current rank. So Kestrelflight! Tell me if it needs to be more grey. and yes, I will work on the whiskers and make it full size.TinselfernHave yourself a merry little Leaf-bare!12:22, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

I don't see any highlights.--:) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! 23:51, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

This is good Maple, but it doesn't really look any thing like his apprentice picture. And highlights arn't required. Although, shading is, which I don't see any of. --SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 08:40, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

(S) - I see a little shading, but there definitely needs to be some more added. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 12:30, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

Shading needs to be blurred more. Man, I haven't been on here for awhile!! Oops! I mean cat. LOL! --RoseyHappy Leaf-bare!

Reuploaded OK, blurred shading (but I could do it more...)TinselfernHave yourself a merry little Leaf-bare!23:15, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

Looks better. Make the ear pink a little bigger though--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 07:33, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better?TinselfernHave yourself a merry little Leaf-bare! 12:01, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Is there anything else?TinselfernHave yourself a merry little Leaf-bare!23:39, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Add some shading to the herbs- they don't look realistic. You might want to color some yellow or brown and make them look like herbs.--:) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! 02:35, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better?TinselfernHave yourself a merry little Leaf-bare!14:36, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

blurr the shading on the leg and neck.--*Ivy jingle jingle!!* 06:44, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

ReuploadedMaplefernHi!13:32, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Nice siggie Maple! Blur the ear pink a little and perhaps add some more shading Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 16:03, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded MaplefernHi!12:51, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Any more comments? MaplefernHi! 15:18, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

This is amazing! Blur the shading on the back (just below the ears) a tad and it should be ready. (: --SnowstarLeaf-bare is here! 15:33, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

reuploaded. MaplefernHi!16:20, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Anything else? MaplefernHi! 22:06, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Add some shading to the white fur. --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 02:13, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

I think it's waay too dark, but Reuploaded. MaplefernHi!16:57, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

Nope, it's fine. Add some shading to the white on the paw and the white on the head, too. --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 23:29, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Anything else? MaplefernHi! 23:59, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

Anything else? Comments? MaplefernHi! 22:49, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 10:26, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

This has Had 48 hours! LOL!Maplefern12:22, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Hey, give us a break. I can't get online on Christmas day, and to be blunt, have other things that I consider much more important than approving charart. Approved Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 17:17, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Lionheart (A) - Approved

Lionheart.apprentice Okay, I know Ashfoot's queen image used to be here, but I deleted it so I could start over. That big hightlight on her stomach was bothering me too much. So here's Lionheart as an apprentice! Okay, I tried to make his tabby stripes like his warrior image. How is he? Oh and by the way, have any of you noticed that Lionheart's eyes on his charart turned green? I could have sworn they used to be amber! Oh well, I'm not really complaining I just thought it was strange. Anyway, enough of my rambling. Comments?--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 00:58, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

It is a good picture, but read Bramble's caption at the bottom of the page.TinselfernHave yourself a merry little Leaf-bare!11:46, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Don't worry, I'm giving people a week, remember? The image looks great, Nightfall. His eyes are green; page 29 of Into the Wild. They may have been mentioned as golden once; I'm not sure, but for now this is fine. I don't see anything wrong right now. --Tinselclaw 22:10, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Awsome! I read your notice, and whipped him right up in one night! Oh and yes, I know his eyes are green in the book, but I meant on his charart. Did somebody change it? I'm sure they used to be colored amber. Anyway, is it ready for approval yet?--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 08:46, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

Awesome; just darken the ear pink a little bit and it should be ready. (I'm back~!) --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 04:32, December 18, 2009 (UTC)


awsome!!

I promise that I will get to this. (See the comment I left on my Tornear image) My computer won't go to the internet, but the computer I'm using now for some strange reason, won't save the changes I keep trying to make. I'll fix it soon, I promise! Btw, who left the comment above that says "awsome!!" They didn't sign it. Oh well, I just wanted to thank them--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 01:05, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Can you save the image on one computer and then email it to yourself on the computer that will go on the internet, and then upload the changes? --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 18:51, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Well, I tried that on two computers, and it still wouldn't save the changes. But don't worry, it will be fixed by Wednessday, or Thursday--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 23:33, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

YAY!!! MY INTERNET IS BACK ON!!! I'm working on this!!!--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 23:35, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded!!!Finally! Is his ear pink better?--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 04:18, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

Yep. Comments before approval? --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 09:09, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

Approved Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 17:26, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Duskfur (Q) - Approved

Duskfur.queen Meh, minor character. Constructments? --HawktalonMerry Xmas! 17:35, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the shading some and then it should be good. --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 21:31, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Blurred the shading more. Better? --HawktalonMerry Xmas! 21:51, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

This is beautiful Hawk! How in the world do you do your stripes?--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 22:50, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks, Nightfall:D I make my stripes using the awesome and magical combination of the burn, blur, and smudge tool: drawing the stripes with the burn tool, blurring them, then smudging them in the direction that the fur should should be going in certain areas (if that makes any sense). --HawktalonMerry Xmas! 01:18, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Hawktalon, you should make a tutorial if you ever get a minute or two. Even if it doesn't have pictures. No wonder when I tried to make tabby stripes like you do it looked weird, I smudged and then blurred. :) Do you add shading first or the stripes first? (The image itself looks lovely, as usual I'm waiting until this has been up for a while longer to put it on 24 hours. :P). --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 03:33, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 11:37, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Approved Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 17:33, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Troutpaw - Approved

File:Troutpaw.apprentice.png

I really hope this isn't considered over the 35 image limit. :S I figured that because three chararts were Withdrawn/Declined that I was able to post something.. If not, feel free to remove this! Also, I had to upload it under a different file name, because Troutpaw was taken. :\ --Quiet!... 04:55, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

This is so, freakin, AWSOME!!!! But there's just one tiny little thing, the gray on her ear tip could prbably be blurred a little more. But other than that, I really and honestly can't find anything wrong with it! But tell me, how do you do your stripes? I really need to get GIMP...--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 08:35, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Fixed Figured someone would say something about the ear. XD Actually, though, I don't use GIMP, I have PS5. Pretty similar, though, in terms of what you can make with them. This is my first tabby charart here, I decided to keep it simple and just do lines or varying sizes, similar to what I see on normal tabbies, and I'm not a huge fan of the "Y" markings.. I like things a little more complicated. I'll get right on fixing that ear, then. --Quiet!... 08:48, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Awsome! But I don't mean the ear pink, I meant the gray on the tip of her ear--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 08:54, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

I know. I realized it after I said it. I'm just so used to getting comments on the pink, I guess. But I fixed the gray, not the pink. --Quiet!... 08:59, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Cool, I love this! You're really good! I don't see anything wrong with it. But of course, it's up to the senior warriors, Bramble, or Sandy whether it's ready for approval or not. Personally, I think it is! But you might have to wait a while for them to comment, because I doubt any of them will be up at 3:00 a.m :)--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 09:03, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Heheh.. 4am here. X) And thanks! --Quiet!... 09:07, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

lol, I'm lazy today, 10am in not-so-sunny England =P This does look great Quiet, comments before approval? Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 10:14, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

HOLY STARCLAN SANDY. OoO This is the best image EVERS!!! --GOT REINDEER?Mumble! 17:30, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Lol, it's not my image Mumble, but it is great =) Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 18:09, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

1:40 here in M.A :) But this is great! Love your tabby style! --PandastormPanda Love 19:40, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Beautiful! Comments before approval in 24 hours? Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 22:11, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Sandy already started the 24 hours, Moss. XD --Quiet!... 22:31, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

(M) Whoops! xD. Sorry Sandy! Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 18:09, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

NP. Approving =) Sandy wishes you a great Christmas!

Marshscar (D) - Approved

Marshscar.deputy Constructments? Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 16:14, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Really good but the scar above his eye looks like an eyebrow, unless thats what you were going for.--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 16:19, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

The one scar on his hind leg looks pointy...is it supposed to be like that?--Scroogepath Bahumbug! 18:02, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, basically I've messed up with the scars... I'll try again later as it'll take some time to get the colours and shasing gradient right underneath and I stupidly didn't save an unscarred copy. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 18:08, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

I actually thought it looked pretty cool...the pointed scar could have been like one scar on top of another or something...but if you want to fix it, that's fine too. --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 18:58, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Well, how about I expain why I did the like I did and then you guys can decide whether I change them or not. Basically, the 'eyebrow' is a scratch above the eye. I was going to do it through the eye but figured there would hardly be an eye if I did that. The one on the flank is pointed because not a cuts are straight lines; the claws of his enemy may have caught and cut a jagged line. I can still change them but I didn't want all the scars the same straight lines. Your verdict? Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 19:41, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

I like it a lot how it is now! --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 19:51, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - I like it! Just one thing, I'd add a half scar (one that's wrapped around his body so you can't see it in this pose) on his legs or tail. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 22:09, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, now that I can easily do without having to reverse anything =) I also saved this one as a separate file on my cp just in case you don't like it! Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 22:22, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

It looks great. Comments before approval? --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 01:17, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

Approved Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 17:41, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Tornear (E) - Approved

Tornear.elder Well, I figured Tornear needed an elder picture. What do you think? I tried to make the stripes look as much like his warrior image as I could. How is it?--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 23:58, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

I love the neck and below, but the head looks bland, add a highlight and some more shading over there.--Minnowclaw 16:45, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Is this better Minnow?--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 03:42, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

(S) - I love Tornear! He's so cool! And I love the way your tabby stripes turned out! But... Can you blur the shading on the tail? Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 12:41, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

Hey guys, please don't take this down. When I try to upload it, the changes don't show up. Don't worry, I'll get it fixed!--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 07:06, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

MY INTERNET IS BACK PEOPLE!!! I'm working on this, I promise!--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 23:36, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

REUPLOADED: REUPLOADED PEOPLE!! YAY! MERRY CHRISTMAS!--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 04:17, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

Comments? Anyone? I didn't mean to scare people with all the joyous yelling, I'm just happy that my internet is back!--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 03:32, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

I can't see anything wrong. Comments before approval? Sandy! 22:08, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Approving Sandy! 22:22, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Foxleap (W)- Approved

Foxleap.warrior

I have to say, THANK YOU ICESTORM!!! :D I like this picture WAYYYY better than my Ryewhisker!!! Well, here is Foxleap!--MossScrooge Bahumbug! 23:17, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

Well, this is good Moss, but two things. 1)The image has to be full size. 2) The coloring is wrong, Foxleap is red brown tabby. Right now it's just brown tabby. Look at his apprentice picture for help-Foxleap--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 01:18, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

It is the right size Nightfall... the colourig could be more reddish though. Apart from that, this is really very good. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 22:09, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

reuploaded Did it change? Or is it still on the original?--MossScrooge Bahumbug! 16:53, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

It changed, but it still doesn't look like the same color as on his apprentice image. --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 18:53, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded did I get it right this time?--MossScrooge Bahumbug! 22:59, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

Make it a LITTLE redder.--:) JingletalonI've been dreaming of a Warriors Christmas 03:14, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Mouse is right. This looks way to brown. Look at his apprentice picture---Foxleap--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 04:42, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

'Reuploaded--MossScrooge Bahumbug! 22:54, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

This looks much better. I can barely see the ear pink, though. --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 23:00, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

I'm so sorry, but I still think it looks to, brownish-orange--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 23:03, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

1) Reuploaded made ear pink lighter, more visible and 2) I think it's fine, but I might just be saying that becuase it's my image...what does everyone else say? I always pictured Foxleap looking more russety than Firestar-red.--MossScrooge Bahumbug! 23:07, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

I know, I'm sorry Moss. It really is a good image, it's just the color that's bothering me. But the seniors might think differently--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 23:10, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

We'll see what they think. Acutally, I might make the stripes more visible anyways, they're too faint. (I know, I'm corredting myself :D)--MossScrooge Bahumbug! 23:15, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Yeah, the stripes faint, maybe darken them? Also, color wise, it does look more orange than red...maybe try using the sponge tool or red eye whatever-it's-called tool? (it's an eye that's looking at you on the toolbar). --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 00:42, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded darkned tabby stripes. I tried the red-eye tool, but it made the picture grayscale instead. Also, on the apprentice image, it looks a little orange so that's how I kept it.--Scroogepath Bahumbug! 01:00, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

I think this looks great. Comments before approval? Sandy! 22:14, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Approved Sandy! 22:25, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Stormfur (CG) - Approved

Stormfur.cg

I have no clue where he went, so here he is again! xD --SnowstarLeaf-bare is here! 23:45, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

nice job Iceyfang 00:04, December 21, 2009 (UTC)iceyfang

Darken the ear pink and mudstreaks. --PandastormPanda Love 12:58, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

His earpink seems crooked. MaplefernHi!15:28, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Fixed ear pink and mud streaks. --SnowstarLeaf-bare is here! 15:57, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Blur all of the mud streaks multiple times until they're blurred really good. --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 15:46, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Better? --SnowstarLeaf-bare is here! 20:31, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

Yup. Add couple of highlights, or darken the shading, I can barely tell the difference between the shading and the actual fur color. --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 20:57, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

I think the earpink is too bright for a gray cat.--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 01:26, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Better? --SnowstarLeaf-bare is here! 20:45, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

One, make the earpink less hot pink, and two, the mud patch on his back is too round...and least for me...try making it just a streak, not patchy.--MossScrooge Bahumbug! 23:37, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

I don't know if it's just my computer, but the ear pink doesn't look hot pink at all to me. Also, that's how the mud streaks are on other approved cave guards, so I think it looks fine. Please don't take this as me just refusing to work. --SnowstarLeaf-bare is here! 16:35, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Hmm...I think it's okay, actually. Bluestar, just make the ear pink more of a reddish color like on Rippletail and then it should be good. --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 16:58, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Better? Also, please comment on my Jayfeather! He hasn't been commented on in forever and I think he's ready. --SnowstarLeaf-bare is here! 16:28, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Sandy! 22:07, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Approving. Have reuploaded under suitable file name and marked old file for deletion. Sandy! 22:37, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Stonepelt(E) - Approved

Stonepelt.elder

First elder, second tabby. I like how his markings came out here more than they did on Troutpaw. (: Anywho, what do I need to fix still, or is this good to go? --Quiet!... 08:20, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

Just ad a slash (scrape) over his shoulder and do some shading--HI 10:23, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

Echopaw, please sign correctly. Also, there's nothing in his description about a scar/slash on his shoulder, and there IS shading.. --Quiet!... 16:56, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

well is this stonepelt as in bluestars mentor because he retierd to the elders den because he got a bad cut on his shoulder sorry quiet:"(--Merry Leaf-Bare to all and all a good night! 17:22, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

Echopaw is correct, Stonepelt did have to retire due to a shoulder injury, as seen in Bluestar's Prophecy. Also, Echopaw, please sign using four of these: ~, or hit the signiture button. We need to know who you are. (: --SnowstarLeaf-bare is here! 19:48, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

Thats true but it could've just gotten infected, and if it did leave a scar we don't know which shoulder it was. It could be on the other side or him.--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 19:59, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

I always thought the shoulder bone got dislogded or something, and never healed properly. I could be wrong (I probably am) But that's how I've always pictured it. And Ash is right, it could be on the other side--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 21:10, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

It could have meant numerous things, which is why I didn't add a scar. :\ --Quiet!... 03:34, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

This picture is beautiful!--NightshineHappy Holidays! 18:38, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, no scar as we have no reference. If we get more information at a later date, this can be edited to include a scar. Comments before approval? Sandy! 22:22, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

I think it's been 24 hours so i wish i could say approved Echopaw 16:09, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

No, it has not. Please stop harrassing people to approve; not just you Echopaw but others as well. It will be approved as we have time. Real life comes first. Also, if there's nothing you have to say concerning the image after the 24 hours have been cast, please don't comment. Bramble-sama 21:37, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

It has now been 24 hours and 22 minutes by my watch. Approved. (By no comments concerning the image - Bramble means no constructive comments - if you only have a 'well done' then please refrain from adding it as it makes it harder to see which images need approving) Sandy! 22:48, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Whitewater (E) - Approved

Whitewater.elder *shrugs* Not much to say for thie one. I know she already has a warrior image, but she's an elder now, and needs an elder image. Comments and suggestions? --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 22:00, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Blend the shading from the back of the neck to the tip of the tail. She's beautiful :D--MossScrooge Bahumbug! 22:23, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. How's this? --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 00:39, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Perfect! But that's up to the senior warriors...--Scroogepath Bahumbug! 00:42, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Wonderful job,Icethroat.I always though you where a VERY talented artist.Again,amazing job! FirePelt 05:09, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 18:10, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

The highlights on the haunch and shoulder look like big white spots. Blur them a bit. --SnowstarLeaf-bare is here! 19:44, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I've blurred it as much as it can blur... --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 03:29, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

I think it looks pretty good.--:D Tinselbreeze ♥'Merry Purry Christmas! 19:10, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, sorry for my premature 24 hour call - the transition looked and still does look fine to my eyes ;) Repeating, comments before approval? Sandy! 22:19, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble-sama 16:17, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Heavystep (E) - Approved

Heavystep.elder I know I'm past the limit, but at least 4 images are in the approval stage, so I figured it was okay. Anyway, my first tabby! Comments/Criticism? --Rainwhisker09 00:15, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

This looks really good, Rainwhisker! All I can see is to make the ear pink more of a reddish color, and to maybe add a stripe or two in the middle on the hind leg in what looks like an empty space. --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 03:36, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Done. Anything else? --Rainwhisker09 01:15, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

looks good. Comments before approval?--Darkhallows 16:23, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

None; approved. --Icethroat21Happy New Years! 22:54, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Scree Beneath Winter Sky- Approved

Scree.cg My first cavegaurd. I must say im pretty proud of it. Comments? --AshshadowHappy Holidays! 17:32, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Is he a tabby or is that mud? If he's not covered in mud, you might want to add some in a more reddish shade so it doesn't blend with the markings. I really like this, though! Good job! --CandyCaneWolf 17:56, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

I don't get what you're saying. He's a tabby and has mudstreaks. Are you saying to make the mud more red?--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 18:05, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

That is exactly what Wolfie is saying. Add more red or darken them. I can't see them. Maplefern

Well brown wouldnt really show up on brown and he is described as mud-colored.--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 02:44, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

I'm with Ashshadow, you wouldn't be able to see the mud, and if he is mud colored, he might not have any mud on him anyways since they use it to disguise the cats.--Scroogepath Bahumbug! 18:24, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - I agree, you wouldn't be able too see the mud streaks much on this. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 22:12, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, comments before approval? Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 17:32, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

None; approved. --Icethroat21Happy New Years! 22:54, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Jagged Rock Where Heron Sits (CG) - Approved

Jag.cg

I sort of darkened the shading a bit too much, didn't I? I tried to do it by looking at the tutorials.––Σ ãliãs G.r.pawRR 10:14, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Yes, the shading does look a little dark and bumpy. Lighten and even it. Good job though! --SnowstarLeaf-bare is here! 12:07, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Add mud streaks. :D Jinglestorm ♥'Merry Purry Christmas! 13:05, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

nice work Lighting :) there are some white bits of color on the tail lineart, and back lineart. otherwise I lile this.  Brambleclaw14 Talk 19:00, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Awsome! Just a few things 1)The space in between his legs and paws should be gray, not white (See Moss that grows by river, or Night of No Stars) The ear pink and nose pink look purple. Try making them more of a reddish color 3)I see two white pixels on the tail--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 20:06, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink so it won't look so purple.--Minnowclaw 00:05, December 10, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Do the mud streaks look a little awkward?––Σ ãliãs G.r.pawRR 09:51, December 10, 2009 (UTC)
you have one white pixel on the tail still. as for the mud I've never done it before so don't know :/  Brambleclaw14 Talk 10:42, December 10, 2009 (UTC)

(S) - I think that the problem with the mud streaks is that on almost every Tribe cat they're all the same thickness. Normally, they would be narrower at the ends. But, as I said, almost every image has mud streaks like that, so... Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 17:51, December 10, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, the ear pink and the nose pink still look very purple--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 23:15, December 10, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded.––Σ ãliãs G.r.pawRR 09:52, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

You still have a white pixel on your tail. But the ear pink and nose are better. Maplefern 11:44, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded.––Σ ãliãs G.r.pawRR 11:55, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink and nose need to be more of a rosy colour. Also, the mud streaks look painted on. Look at the approved prey-hunter stripes as a good example; these haven't quite been perfected on the caveguards yet. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 21:36, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded.––Σ ãliãs G.r.pawRR 10:19, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink is WAY to bright. It should be more of a samlon color. Darken it a bit. --♥Shinestar♥ 02:21, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

I lightened it some time ago, but then Sandy told me to make it a rosy colour, so that's what I did.––Σ ãliãs G.r.pawRR 09:02, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Maybe you should go to red (not the pink) and select a pink from there.TinselfernHave yourself a merry little Leaf-bare!

I know Lightning. I said rosy but I didn't mean bright pink. Look at... Rippletail, Cloudtail, um, I can't think of any more right off the top of my head but look at the aproved images. Sorry for the confusion. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 14:40, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded.––Σ ãliãs G.r.pawRR 05:42, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Run the burn tool over the ear pink and nose pink, it looks hot pink. But it's getting better!--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 06:06, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded.––Σ ãliãs G.r.pawRR 09:19, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Anything else?––Σ ãliãs G.r.pawRR 10:06, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the mud streaks a lot, and then it should be good. --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 15:29, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded.––Σ ãliãs G.r.pawRR 10:12, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 16:05, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink looks more of a hot pink... make it more salmony. --SnowstarLeaf-bare is here! 16:30, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Make the nose a more grayish pink.--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 00:29, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded, and btw, images are approved in 24 hours, this should've been approved on the 25th.––Σ ãliãs G.r.pawRR 09:12, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Eugh, no it should not. 24 hours is a guideline and people cannot be expected to be online on Christmas day; we have lives too. This is the second time in the space of 5 minutes I've seen a comment like that and it is not making me happy =( Regardless, this image had comments made so the 24 hours must start over once the image has been fixed. I still don't think it's ready however as the ear pink is still too bright. Look at Rippletail, Weaselfur etc and use that colour. Sorry if I sound harsh. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 17:25, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

I agree with sandy,about the whole thing.The ear pink looks like a hot pink in your face all over the place color.Fix that and he should be good to go. FirePelt 23:49, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry, and you don't sound harsh. I was just a big grumpy. Rare, that is. Reuploaded.––Σ ãliãs G.r.pawRR 04:23, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink looks fine now.Amazing job! FirePelt 15:39, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

I'm really sorry about starting the 24-hour call before the ear pink was better, I ended up making everyone grumpy... :( But I agree with Firepelt, it looks much better, now. Repeating comments before approval? --Icethroat21Happy New Years! 18:15, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

No need to be sorry. I guess I'm a bit too eager for my first approved image. I would be, considering what happened to Molepelt.GrayravenpawScourgeRedtailBluestarTigerstarCrookedstarGraystripe 05:48, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Well, congratulations! Approved Sandy! 19:23, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Swallowtail - Approved

Swallowtail (WC).warrior My first Charart What do you think?

--Icecloud33 01:49, December 23, 2009 (UTC)
nice something I see is the line of shading is very distinct. Trying using te blur tool to soften it up a bit. Also, you need more shading, and the shading shouldn't be in such a straight line, it should hug to the edge of the picture. And the ear pink is slightly too low try puting it more in the ear. Other then that it's looking very nice :)  Brambleclaw14 Talk 10:30, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Is this better? --Icecloud33 19:21, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

lol, this is good =) (Nice to see my shading style being copied - and if you didn't then don't tell me; I'll let myself feel pleased that you did!). I would suggest adding some highlights along the back. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 18:12, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Added highlights, anything else? --Icecloud33 18:57, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more like the color on Rippletail, and then this should be good. --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 01:21, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I changed the ear pink. Is it better? --Icecloud33 19:56, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Yeah. Comments before approval? --IcethroatHappy New Years! 00:05, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

wait!!blur the shading.--*Ivy jingle jingle!!* 04:27, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

I don't know Ivy, I think it looks fine--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 00:31, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

So, should I change it or not? --Icecloud33 13:49, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Yeah, maybe blur it just a little more, especially up in the neck area. Then I think this should be ready--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 17:48, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I blurred it is it better--Icecloud33 22:16, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Yep. Repeating comments before approval? --Icethroat21Happy New Years! 22:31, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Approved Sandy! 19:26, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Dawnflower (E) - Approved

Dawnflower.elder I did my best to make this look like her warrior image. Comments and suggestions? --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 01:56, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

Tis is great! Just darken teh ear pink --:D Jinglestorm ♥'Merry Purry Christmas! 03:21, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

I made it the same exact color as her warrior image, but I'll get to it sometime tomorrow or the day after. Thanks for the compliment, though. :) --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 04:13, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. How's this? --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 03:31, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

It's wonderful,icethroat!The ear pink is better.I'm like HORRIBLE at doing elder ear pinks,but the ear pink on this one is WAYY better than what mine look like. FirePelt 23:35, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? (The trick with the ear pink is simply getting the right colour for the base colour and then blending in well.) Sandy! 20:56, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Approved Sandy! 19:29, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Purdy(E) - Approved

Purdy.elder

Okay, had a bit of a hard time with figuring out how to do patching, but Graypool's charart turned out to be a big help with that. (: Figured I'd go a bit more fancy than the previous tabbies I've done, too. --Quiet!... 20:07, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

I was going to add him to my current projects and give him a go, but yours is much better than my attempt would have been! All I can see is that the ear pink needs to be more pink. This is great =) Sandy! 22:25, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Brightened and saturated the pink a bit more. Anything else? (: --Quiet!... 22:49, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

I dont see anything.Good job! FirePelt 20:38, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Man this is so awsome! The stripes are seriously reminding me of chocolate! *mouth starts to water*--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 22:39, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Oh my starClan, he stunning!!! Well, not the actual character, but your tabby stripes are awesome!!!!--NewYearPath Fireworks! Poof... 17:31, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Looks awesome. Comments before approval? --Icethroat21Happy New Years! 17:52, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Approved. Fantastic =) Sandy! 19:34, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

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