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Shrewfoot (W)- Approved

Shrewfoot.warrior Well, not much to say about her . . . comments?--:) Mousetalon Meow to me! 19:13, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Oops! I didn't know Spottedwing had her reserved! Forgot to check. Sorry!--:) Mousetalon Meow to me! 20:10, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Try speaking to Spottedwing. Also, check how long ago she reserved her - if it was two weeks ago or longer, you can have her regardless. If it was sooner, and Spottedwing won't let you have her then you'll have to withdraw this. =( Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 20:22, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

You can keep this, Mouse. Spottedwing's two weeks were up. On the image, it looks great. The cp I'm using doesn't have great resolution, so I might miss something else, but all I see at the moment is that the black paws are a little too dark. Bramble-sama 21:35, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Great! Well, I used the dodge tool to try and lighten the foot, because when I used the bucket tool, it would turn the entire lineart that color, so . . . better?--:) Mousetalon Meow to me! 16:17, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Yep. Blur the midriff some and then it should be good. --Icethroat21Happy New Years! 17:54, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Anything else?--:) Mousetalon Meow to me! 16:58, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

My computer's broken so I wouldn't be able to work on my images anyway. By the way she looks great. --Spottedwing 18:08, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Sandy! 19:33, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble-sama 18:41, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Pinefur (W) – Approved

Pinefur.warrior constructments? Sandy! 22:20, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Lovely Sandy! The only thing I see is maybe blur the highlights a tad. --SnowstarLeaf-bare is here! 22:28, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sandy! 15:26, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Looks awesome. Comments before approval? --Icethroat21Happy New Years! 17:01, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble-sama 18:41, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Speckletail - Approved

Speckletail.elder

The pale tabby queen who became an elder. My second cat! Please comment.--Night shine 05:47, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Pretty dang good. The only things I can see would be to blur the tabby markings some more, darken the shading, and darken the ear pink. Onther than that, you did well. ; ) --MUMBLE785MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 14:26, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Mumble said it all! LOL! Yeah, all I see is the stuff that Mumble already mentioned! --RoseyHappy Leaf-bare!

Hopefully I made it better ^^--Night shine 23:32, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Your picture automatically updates, so you don't need to re-post. Just reupload it. As for the image, personally I think the ear pink is too purple. TinselfernHave yourself a merry little Leaf-bare! 23:57, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

I changed the ear pink color--Night shine 01:04, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

Wait, I think Darkhallows had Speckletail reserved first--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 07:36, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Night shine, Darkhallows reserved it first and you aren't a member.

Shady's time limit ran out. The two weeks she had to do the image have been used up. I say again;there is no such thing as reserved. Night shine is perfectly able to do this image. Night is a member; check the list. For the image, Night, you need to add more tabby stripes on the chest and on the haunch and blur them in more. Also add some lengthen the shading and blur it into the pelt some more. --Tinselclaw 22:16, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Isn't Speckletail a pale brown tabby she-cat?--MossScrooge Bahumbug! 22:24, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

[1] This is pale brown tabby. --Tinselclaw 22:28, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

I don't know, it looks cream colored to me--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 08:43, December 17, 2009 (UTC)


she looks great to me!!good tabby markings and shading!--*Ivy jingle jingle!!* 09:10, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

I think it's really cool.--:D Tinselbreeze ♥'Merry Purry Christmas! 20:01, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

This hasn't been worked on since the 14th, Night Shine. Please work on this or it will be declined as there are still outstanding comments for improvement. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 10:30, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

I'm sorry! I'm working on fixing it right now.--Night shine 15:32, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded--Night shine 05:10, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

I really like this =) Just add some more stripes to the rest of the body and head etc, perhaps ake some of different lengths and sizes. Then run over them with the blur tool once or twice to blend slightly. (Also, remember to sign with ~~~~ Sandy!

Re-uploaded--NightshineHappy Holidays! 00:59, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Sandy! 13:23, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble-sama 17:56, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Jayfeather (MC) - Approved

Jayfeather.mc

I was surprised no one had made/reserved him when I did... anyway, he's been gathering dust in my files while I've waited for Snowfur to be approved (she just was!!), so here he is. I think I might need to darken the stripes. Comments? Concerns? --SnowstarLeaf-bare is here! 01:14, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

His eyes are white, he may be blind, but Jayfeather does not have white eyes. Make them blue, please. Jinglefire'Tis the Holiday Season! 01:46, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink appears purplish and the tabby stripes are too blurred. Feel free to ignore the marking part. TinselfernHave yourself a merry little Leaf-bare!02:03, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Jayfeather already has a Mc picture by Dawnfeather-- Pebble2Pineow> *poke* hai! 04:32, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

The stripes are way to blurred. And the highlights on his face look like cobwebs, as do the ones on his legs. Blurr them some more please. And yes, Bracken's right about Dawnfeather's picture. I don't really know if it's been approved, you'll probably have to ask Bramble or Sandy--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 06:38, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Well, Jayfeather is still an apprentice on his page, and he hasn't been reserved by anyone. So I would think that ment I could do him. My computer is sick, so I need to get on my mom's to fix those things. --SnowstarLeaf-bare is here! 11:53, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Whilst Dawn's image was very good, it was never submitted for approval as far as I know and so has not been officially accepted by the project. This can stay up. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 19:04, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks, Sandy. Anyway, I fixed the things you guys said. I had to save a new file because the changes weren't showing up. --SnowstarLeaf-bare is here! 23:53, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, the ear pink looks kinda, lopsided. Try straightening it more, and make it a little darker. Jayfeather is a tabby, but he hardly has any stripes. Try making them thicker, and adding more. Google a gray tabby for reference. But this is much better than before =)--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 01:13, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Added more stripes and fixed ear pink. --SnowstarLeaf-bare is here! 11:46, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Okay...can you add shading to the shoulderish part? Do you see where I mean? Just dodge tool it and then blur and it looks good!--MossScrooge Bahumbug! 22:21, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Make the ear pink smaller and less bright, make it more salmon-ish. And blur it.--:) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! 23:53, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fixed ear pink and shoulder. (: --SnowstarLeaf-bare is here! 11:49, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

the earpink needs to be blurred more and maybe darken his tabby stripes a little. I can't really see the ones on his body.--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 21:42, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

The hind leg's shading needs to be blurred a little more.--Shaf Girl 20:07, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Tried to darken the stripes without making them too dark. Blurred leg shading and earpink. --SnowstarLeaf-bare is here! 23:40, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Make the earpink alittle smaller it takes up the whole ear.--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 00:24, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Errr, it's supposed to. If you look at a cat's ear, the ear pink takes up the whole inside of the ear. It's not just like a big pink splotch. --SnowstarLeaf-bare is here! 04:04, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

If you look at other approved images it dosent fill the whole ear so I think you should make it smaller.--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 16:32, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Just make it slightly smaller so that it isn't touching the lineart. Also make it a more reddish colour - like Rippletail or Tornear's images. Go over the stripes once with the burn tool and run over them once with the blur tool. Perhaps add a small highlight to the herbs as well for a finishing touch. Look at Leafpool's Med Cat image as an example. Sandy! 22:12, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Better? --SnowstarLeaf-bare is here! 00:18, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Earpink is touching the line art. ConfettifernAnd a happy Leaf-bare!17:23, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Better? I didn't want to make it too small. --SnowstarLeaf-bare is here! 18:56, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Sandy! 13:26, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble-sama 17:56, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Snaketail(E)- Approved

Snaketail (P3).elder I tried to make him look like his warrior image. Comments?--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 17:44, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the neck shading. Otherwise, it looks great. Unless there is something I've missed...ConfettifernAnd a happy Leaf-bare! 18:04, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded I think I made it worse.--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 16:27, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

hmm... hate to say it, but in all honesty, I think you did make it worse. It looked more blurred before. Sandy! 19:32, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

ReuploadedOk I think I fixed it.--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 19:46, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --Bramble-sama 18:52, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble-sama 17:56, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Robinwing (WC)-Approved

Robinwing (WC).warrior Okay, here's Robinwing of WindClan! Man, why are there so many Robinwings? There's been one in every single clan. Even SkyClan! What's wrong with, Robinflight, or Robinsong? Huh, anyway. How do you like her?--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 23:44, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

I like her.I think its a nice image.Maybe darken the shading on the head by like,3 and a half percent. FirePelt 03:50, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

There hasn't been one in ShadowClan yet! (Not that I know of, anyway.) I wrote a fanfic about there being too many Robinwings, actually. But anyway, for the image, blur all of the shading on the back just a little bit more. --Icethroat21Happy New Years! 06:07, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Okay, I saved it as two files because I didn't really like how the shading on the head turned out. I've never ever done shading on the face before, so I wanted to see which image you guys like better.--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 20:11, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

They both look really good, and I can barely see the difference. They both look fine, you can just choose which one you keep up for approval. --Icethroat21Happy New Years! 17:11, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I decided to keep the first image. I didn't like the shading on the second one--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 20:59, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --Bramble-sama 22:07, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble-sama 17:56, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Rising Moon (Q)-Approved

Rising Moon.queenSo...both Chirp and Foxleap were approved and I've been waiting for a while to put this up so here she is! She's my first two-color cat that I made really fast...please comment and criticize, I need something to do :P --NewYearPath Fireworks! Poof... 17:38, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

P.S. This is the 36th discussion...but one image is being disclined...so yeah...--NewYearPath Fireworks! Poof... 17:39, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Good job! Blur the white on the chest a little. It looks spiky... --♪ Ravenstar ♫ :P 17:55, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

She's beautiful! Remove the earpink from the farthest ear, as there is no need to have it there. ConfettifernAnd a happy Leaf-bare! 18:20, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

I love this Mossy, but the thing is I already told Blackclaw that we should save the ancient queens for the kit-mother blanks, as the ancients eventually turn into the Tribe and we were going to use separate blanks for kit-mothers. It'd be like the to-bes being used for the 'soft paws', and it would save using the kit-mother blanks only twice. I'm open on suggestions on this though; if you really want to use the queen blanks, then I can compromise. Bramble-sama 21:49, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Oh...darn...yeah I didn't know about that...and are the kit-mother blanks approved yet? If not, I'd prefer just to keep this one, I need something to do :) but it didn't take long so I could redo it on another blank. I just don't want to be waiting forever for a blank to be approved to do this pic again.--NewYearPath Fireworks! Poof... 00:28, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Don't worry about it, Mossy. Icethroat had an idea that we could put mud streaks on the queen blanks to show kit-mothers, so we won't have to make an extra pair of blanks. Now, for the image, the white looks a little too pure and bright; make it a touch more dark, but not so that it looks too gray. --Bramble-sama 00:40, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Got rid of unnecesary earpink, blurred, made white less bright. I didn't add mud streaks in case the idea wasn't officalized.--NewYearPath Fireworks! Poof... 18:54, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Mud streaks aren't necessary anyway; this is an ancient queen, not a kit-mother. Comments before approval? --Bramble-sama 19:07, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble-sama 17:56, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Spottedpelt (W) - Approved

Spottedpelt.warrior I know this is over the image limit, but there are some images on the 24 hours already. My first tortoiseshell, Spottedpelt. I did my best to make her look like Spottedleaf, but I epically failed. --Rainwhisker09 01:26, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

You did not fail! This is great! Hold on let me get a good look at it. --:D Jinglestorm ♥'Merry Purry Christmas! 01:46, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, darken ear pink and make it smaller. Are the white spots completly white? If not make them a very very very light gray. --:D Jinglestorm ♥'Merry Purry Christmas! 01:48, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

This looks fantastic! I agree with Icestorm, though, the white parts of the fur need some shading. They don't have to be completely really light gray, you can put the burn tool on highlights instead of midtones and put it at about 10-14 percent and shade like you normally would. Also, make the ear pink more of a reddish color. --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 03:33, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Uploaded I've darkened the white parts and made the ear pink reddish. Anything else? --Rainwhisker09 00:06, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Make the ear pink just a little bit darker, and then it should be good. --Icethroat21Happy New Years! 02:26, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded What else? --Happy New Year!09 19:21, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 20:32, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble-sama 01:32, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Robinwing (RC) (W) -Approved

Robinwing (RC).warrior I know this doesn't look very good. I didn't save before making this patched, and then I remembered, that his apprentice image wasn't patched. So then I had to do a ton of blurring, and it still doesn't look quite like his apprentice version...Comments and suggestions? --Icethroat21Happy New Years! 23:11, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

uh...i thought i was doing it..--*Ivy jingle jingle!!* 03:28, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Ivy(if its ok I call you that) it was checked and Icethroat had him on her current projects first. As for the image I like it alot,but maybe blur the earpink a tad--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 03:31, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

oops--*Ivy jingle jingle!!* 03:47, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. How's this? --Icethroat21Happy New Years! 04:10, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Darken ear pink. --IcyLet's Go 2010! 01:57, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. --Icethroat21Happy New Years! 02:44, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 20:33, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble-sama 01:32, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Dovepaw-Approved

File:Dovepaw.apprentice.png Since Kestrelflight was approved, I'm posting her. Anyway, I should apologise to Sandy (Sorry!). So here is Dovepaw. Second charart. Comments? ConfettifernAnd a happy Leaf-bare! 17:37, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Add ear-pink. --:D Jinglestorm ♥'Merry Purry Christmas! 17:42, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Lol, don't worry about it =) Yes, add ear pink and darken the shading. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 17:43, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Yes what Sandy said. --:D Jinglestorm ♥'Merry Purry Christmas! 17:45, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ConfettifernAnd a happy Leaf-bare! 17:48, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more of a reddish color. --:D Jinglestorm ♥'Merry Purry Christmas! 17:50, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

i think it's too bright now....ConfettifernAnd a happy Leaf-bare! 17:56, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded.ConfettifernAnd a happy Leaf-bare! 18:02, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Anything else?ConfettifernAnd a happy Leaf-bare! 20:54, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

It looks . . . teal. Run the desaturate tool over it a few times.--:) Mousetalon Meow to me! 20:54, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Anything else? ConfettifernAnd a happy Leaf-bare! 21:02, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Anything else? ConfettifernAnd a happy Leaf-bare! 14:24, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Add neck shading. --Icethroat21Happy New Years! 06:10, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded better? ConfettifernAnd a happy Leaf-bare!13:05, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Make it darker, the same color as the rest of the shading. --Icethroat21Happy New Years! 17:58, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Comments? ConfettifernAnd a happy Leaf-bare! 18:24, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

I still can't see the neck shading. For an example, look at Thistlepaw (P3). Try making the neck shading thicker. --Icethroat21Happy New Years! 19:29, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better?ConfettifernAnd a happy Leaf-bare! 19:33, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Anything else? ConfettifernAnd a happy Leaf-bare! 21:39, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

The shading looks unnatural. Blur it.--:) Mousetalon Meow to me! 16:56, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I can't blur the shading around the whiskers without bluring the whiskers.ConfettifernAnd a happy Leaf-bare!00:00, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Sandy! 13:40, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble-sama 01:32, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Bumblepaw (Ki) Approved

Bumblestripe.kit
Happy to finally be back on here ^_^ Well I saw the news post and decided to get back to an old image I had from before. I used his apprentice image for reference so his colors would be the exact same. Comments :) ?-- Shim-ShimNewGladiator! 22:21, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

This looks awesome! I think I see a little bit of blurred lineart around the paws, though. Also, the shading on the chest could be blurred a little bit more. Otherwise, great job! --Icethroat21Happy New Years! 22:25, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Updated--Shimmerpool2010 on its way! :D

This is awesome but...aren't we supposed to do current ranks only?--NewYearPath Fireworks! Poof... 18:56, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Mossy, look at the purple message up top that says "Important!" and it now says that we can do non-current ranks again, so this is fine. Shim (Can I call you that?), this looks awesome. Comments before approval? --Icethroat21Happy New Years! 19:40, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

I think the ear pink should be blurred a bit more. And welcome back Shimmer:) --HawktalonMerry Xmas! 22:39, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Updated and thx ^_^--Shimmerpool2010 on its way! :D

Sorry, it looked fine on my laptop, but I think it's better now. Repeating comments before approval? --Icethroat21Happy New Years! 17:46, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble-sama 01:32, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Petalfur (W) - Approved

Petalfur.warrior I'm not sure what to think of this one, I think I got the shading on the white fur too dark, but I'm not sure...comments and suggestions? --Icethroat21Happy New Years! 02:33, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Yes the shading on the white fur is a little dark--Icecloud33 13:20, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Did I lighten it enough? --Icethroat21Happy New Years! 16:41, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

This looks better -- Icecloud33 00:44, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 20:34, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble-sama 01:32, January 2, 2010 (UTC) 

Owlclaw (W)- Approved

File:Owlclaw.pngI know, over the limit, but there are images up for approval, including mine, so . . . comments? --:) Mousetalon And A Mousey New Year!!!!! 03:03, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

I think he looks great. I can't see anything that needs to be fixed at the moment. --Bramble-sama 18:54, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Darken ear pink and I think he'll be good to go. :) --IcyLet's Go 2010! 19:41, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Anything else?--:) Mousetalon And A Mousey New Year!!!!! 00:14, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Make it a redish color. --IcyLet's Go 2010! 17:31, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Anything else?--:) Mousetalon And A Mousey New Year!!!!! 18:33, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Nope nothing else. --IcyLet's Go 2010! 18:35, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Awesome. Comments before approval? --Icethroat21Happy New Years! 18:41, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Maybe add some small stripes to the chest. --IcyLet's Go 2010! 18:45, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Then it wouldn't look like the apprentice image, Icy.--:) Mousetalon And A Mousey New Year!!!!! 21:22, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Oh okay. --IcyLet's Go 2010! 21:24, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Comments irrelevant so continuing from the previous 24 hour call Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 22:09, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble-sama 01:32, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Pouncetail (E) - Approved

Pouncetail (RC).elder I know this is over the image limit, but there's a whole bunch that are in the 24-hour stage, so I think I'm safe. Anyway, merry Christmas everybody:D I got a tablet today, too:D --HawktalonMerry Xmas! 00:27, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

This is really good just maybe make the earpink a bit darker.--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 00:32, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Thanks, Ashshadow:) I darkened the ear pink. Better? --HawktalonMerry Xmas! 00:44, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Yup, I think so.--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 00:47, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

This is great =) Blur the edges of the shading though as there is a distinct line between the shading and white of the pelt. Sandy! 22:23, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I'm so sorry for my inactivity lately! Somehow, a virus had worked its way into the computer and kept me from getting on the internet. And now my new tablet isn't working. We think the virus is gone now, but we can't be sure, so my dad has to send the computer off to one of his friends to fix it completely (so I won't be on even more soon D:). And so much has happened since I've been gone! Anyway, is this better? --HawktalonMerry Xmas! 22:29, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Hmm...try lightening all of the shading just a tad bit, but not too much. Also, sorry to hear about your computer, I'd go crazy if I had to lose my laptop because of a virus. :D --Icethroat21Happy New Years! 05:14, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Thanks, Icethroat:) I lightened the shading. Better now? --HawktalonAlmost 2010! 20:54, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Yes. But on his warrior image there is a ginger patch on his chest. You don't need to make it huge, just a small patch that looks like it's continued from the other side. Happy New Year!22:28, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Stupid me, how could I have forgotten to add the patch on his chest? *hits self with random heavy book* --HawktalonHappy New Year! 16:40, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

Lol Hawktalon! Anyway, I think this looks awesome. Comments before approval? --Icethroat21Happy New Years! 18:07, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble-sama 21:32, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Owl Feather (Q) - Approved

Owl Feather.queen Constructments? Sandy! 17:54, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink is a bit bright, and the eyes are creeping me out. Good job on the pelt. (: --♪ Ravenstar ♫ :P 17:57, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I modeled the eyes off of the approved File:Robinwing.queen.png Thak you for bringing this to my attention Bramble =) Sandy! 18:15, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

It's up to you how you do the eye, but it just personally freaks me out. I don't see anything else. Good job. :) --♪ Ravenstar ♫ :P 15:39, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

Well, I changed it for you so it does matter. Is this version okay or would you like me to try a third eye style? Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 19:33, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

Much better. I just don't like when it feels like it's watching you... *shudder* Anyway, I see nothing else wrong. Good job. (: --♪ Ravenstar ♫ :P 19:50, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --Icethroat21Happy New Years! 20:18, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble-sama 03:00, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

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