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Stonestar(L) - Approved

Stonestar.leader I TRIPLE-CHECKEDthis time. So I do NOT think anyone else has done this. If they have, I will wallow in shame. Much shame. Anyway, here is a charart of Stonestar. Constructments? --CandyCaneWolf 00:33, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

Beautiful charart. And No, It hasn't been done/reserved. Try shading the outside of the Hing leg. MaplefernHi! 00:52, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

This is lovely Wolfie. (I'm going to start calling you that. :P) Just blur the shading a bit. --SnowstarLeaf-bare is here! 01:29, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

Okey dokey; i will when I get home. I'm at school right now. And I did put shading on the hindleg, but I guess it's too teeny to be seen. I'll fix it, as well as blurring the shading. --CandyCaneWolf 15:50, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded How's this? --CandyCaneWolf 17:53, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

I can see you've used the smudge tool. You need to blur! =) Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 18:13, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

I did blur. I blurred before i used the smudge. then i smudged. then I uploaded, and you guys told me to blur it more. So i did. and now i have to blur more, but i can't because it's fully blurred. --CandyCaneWolf 01:56, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

You shouldn't smudge just blur. Thats where the problem came from. Maybe you should redo the shading if its already blurred to the max --AshshadowHappy Holidays! 02:00, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded How's this? --CandyCaneWolf 20:32, December 28, 2009 (UTC)


Shading needs more blur c:--Raineh 18:44, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

I blurred it to its maximum though. Lonewolf is confused; she used the blur tool as much as she could! --~Lonewolf~ 21:34, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

I think he looks fine. The shading doesn't need to be blurred more. Comments before approval? Bramble-sama 21:28, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Approved Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 17:24, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Tigerheart - Approved

Tigerheart.warrior

I made him in the style and color of his kit image, as it was done first. His apprentice image looks a little different than this; it can be fixed later. Comments? --Bramble-sama 17:52, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Maybe add a few more stripes on the tail, or make the ones on it smaller. This looks great. But I thought Tigerheart already had a warrior image approved? --♪ Ravenstar ♫ :P 17:56, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Well, as I said, I based it off his kit image, and Tigerkit had only two bands on his tail. As for one already being approved, I don't know of one, or I wouldn't have put this up. --Bramble-sama 18:12, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

This looks great to me. I don't remember an approved warrior version... One thing is that I can't really see the pupil in the eye -perhaps try the style used on... well, I know I use it on my warrior chararts - Brightspirit etc. It might show up better with the yellow eye colour Sandy!

I know which style you mean. Reuploaded, though I'm not sure how well the upload log's working at the moment. The eye does look better this way. --Bramble-sama 18:34, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

It's showing now =) Looks good. I see nothing else Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 19:10, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks... :0 I love that sig.. --Bramble-sama 19:35, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

I love this pic! Only problem is that it's kind of dark. I know the kit and apprentices images for him are dark, too, but this is almost too dark. To me, at least.--Shaf Girl 19:58, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

He IS alittle to dark.May you could copy his apprentice image and get the pelt color from it? FirePelt and a Firey new year!^.^ 21:16, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

Lightened him up, but kept the pelt color. Bramble-sama 03:43, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --Icethroat21Happy New Years! 05:13, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Approved Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 17:37, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Squirrelflight (A) - Approved

Squirrelflight.apprentice

Well, we're allowed to do non-current ranks, so here's Squirrelflight as an apprentice. I know this is the 40th section, but 6 are in the 24 hour stage and one isn't an image. I think I've found my talent... ginger cats. Comments? --♪ Ravenstar ♫ :P 19:41, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

I think you've found your talent as well! This looks awesome! You forgot to add ear pink, and make the white more of a silver-ish color, a very very very light gray, so that the shading on the white paw shows. --Icethroat21Happy New Years! 20:11, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with icey(may I call you that?).Add ear pink and make white a VERY VERY VEry light gray. FirePelt and a Firey new year!^.^ 20:34, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Can't believe I forgot ear pink. -.- Anyways, better? --♪ Ravenstar ♫ :P 20:47, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

I can't really see the ear pink. Maybe make it a bit darker or lighter, whichever one works.--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 20:52, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Ashy(may I call you that?)I can't see the ear pink.Maybe you should copy her warrior image,and get the ear pink color from that.Just a suggestion! FirePelt and a Firey new year!^.^ 21:11, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

Firepelt: I did that when I made it. --♪ Ravenstar ♫ :P 21:34, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, Blue's got a point, it's pretty much the same color on her warrior image. You might want to lighten it a little anyway though--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 21:38, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

Aww Squirrelflight, how I miss working on you! You were my first approved image *huggles* Ha..:D anyway I have this peeved with the shading on templates. You see how her farthest forepaw is kind well back just like her farthest hind leg too? I usually like those to be a tad darker as well they will have shading, but they will also be darker because of her position she's in. You can usually just run over the area once more so it could be just one shade darker than the regular burn shading. Also blur where the white meets the ginger just a tad more.--♪Shimmerpool♫ 22:02, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Better? --♪ Ravenstar ♫ :P 22:36, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

Better but it looks like there's some blurred lineart near her hindquarters and under her chin.--♪Shimmerpool♫ 00:42, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

I don't see what you're talking about... *is confused* --♪ Ravenstar ♫ :P 01:53, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Nevermind. I blew it up bigger for myself and I'm guessing something was up earlier as it looks fine now. It might have been a trick of my eyes with the bright colors.--♪Shimmerpool♫ 06:48, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

This is too red...--*Ivy spring!!* 07:34, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

It's not too red - it's the same colour as her warrior version. This looks good to me Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 10:12, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Anything else? --♪ Ravenstar ♫ :P 16:20, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Not that I can see. Comments before approval? --Icy-chan 19:59, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. --Icy-chan 20:59, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Timberfur(D)- Approved

Timberfur.deputy Well, no one had him reserved or anything . . . so . . . here he is! Comments?--:) Mousetalon]] Meow to me! 16:46, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more of a reddish color like Rippletail, and blur the midriff shading. --Icethroat21Happy New Years! 17:13, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Did my best--:) Mousetalon Meow to me! 17:59, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Hmm...try lightening the midriff shading just a little bit so it doesn't look so dark. --Icethroat21Happy New Years! 03:06, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better?--:) Mousetalon And A Mousey New Year!!!!! 18:07, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Try making the ear pink more triangular rather than circular. And then blur it some more--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 21:43, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

I am so mouse-brained! Reuploaded--:) Mousetalon Meow to me! 15:50, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Add shading to his head if there isn't. --IcestormHI! 18:57, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

There is.--:) Mousetalon Meow to me! 20:34, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --Icy-chan 20:40, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble-sama 22:51, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Minnowtail(Ki) - Approved

Minnowtail.kit i like her so i did her.--*Ivy jingle jingle!!* 06:37, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

She looks cross eyed to me.Go to Icethroats tutorials to see how to do the kit eye.As for the charart itself,Maybe darken the shading just a tad,and to me,the ear pink looks weird,like ones like a fat line and the other is good. FirePelt 17:27, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, I don't think we're supposed to do non-current blanks any more. See the purple notice at the top of the page--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 20:57, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Nightfall, no one said anything about this not being a current image? All the message is saying is that we can do any rank for any cat now(so long as we have the blanks to do so), and that blanks are allowed again. --Quiet!... 21:44, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Oh yeah, I forgot Minnowtail was a kit in the NP series. Sorry Ivy! Oh and Quite, what I meant to type was non-current images. Sorry about the confusion!--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 21:55, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

reuploadedyeah,her dyd was a bit creepy..--*Ivy jingle jingle!!* 03:48, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Yeah, that looks a lot better. But doesn't Minnowtail have amber eyes, not yellow? If so, you might want to change their color.--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 03:51, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

it says she have sharp amber eyes,and sharp amber eyes are yellowish.--*Ivy jingle jingle!!* 04:03, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

I don't think sharp is an adjective for amber, I think it's an adjective for the eyes. They should be the same color as her apprentice image and her warrior image. --Icethroat21Happy New Years! 17:40, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

reuploaded--*Ivy spring!!* 03:02, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

Blur all of the shading just a little bit more, make the neck shading just a little bit darker, and make the ear pink more of a reddish color like on Rippletail. Otherwise, looks awesome. --Icethroat21Happy New Years! 03:48, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded--*Ivy spring!!* 07:40, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --Icy-chan 21:26, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble-sama 22:51, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Beetlewhisker (Ki) - Approved

Beetlewhisker.kit - Okay, so we're onto to additional ranks again, and seeing as he only has two ranks, I thought him a good place to start. I am glad I did him, because following the image I made for his warrior version was a little tricky - I am glad I am spared the guilt of forcing anyone else to attempt the stupid shaped patch some idiot decided looked good on his warrior version. *cough* me *cough*. Needless to say, it was an odd shape to put on the kit blank, but I've done my best. Construtments? Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 20:39, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Adorable. Maybe add a little more shading to the neck?--:) Mousetalon And A Mousey New Year!!!!! 21:24, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

I agree with mousey(may I call you that?)Add a little more shading to the neck and maybe make the ear pink just a little bit lighter.just like by 1 percent. FirePelt and a Firey new year!^.^ 21:14, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Done Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 11:38, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

It looks better.I like the angle you have the eye pupil at. FirePeltHow's the prey running? 16:48, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --Icy-chan 01:46, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble-sama 22:51, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Running Horse- Approved

Running Horse.elder Okay I know that this is over the limit but I saw six images in the "Comments before approval" stage so I thought it would be okay.--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 20:40, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

I honestly see nothing wrong with it, good job!--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 20:56, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

Amazing job!Maybe darken the shading,as I cant really see it on his dark pelt.Other than that,if you fix it,the image looks wonderful. FirePeltHow's the prey running? 16:55, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks Nightfall and Firepelt. Darkened the shading.--AshshadowRawr :3 17:31, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Your welcome.He looks much better now,shading wise. FirePeltHow's the prey running? 17:36, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, this is amazing! I think it's ready, Bramble, Sandy, senior warriors?--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 03:40, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

I think this looks awesome as well. Comments before approval? --Icy-chan 04:16, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble-sama 22:51, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Ashfoot (Q)- Approved

Ashfoot(Q)

My first queen!--NightshineHappy New Year! 01:45, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

She’s lovely, Night, but the shading on the back near the shoulder needs to be blurred some more. Bramble-sama 01:51, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded--NightshineHappy New Year! 01:54, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good! I love how you made her nose gray, I've been kinda conflicted with wether or not I should make the gray cat's noses gray. Because typically, gray cats have gray noses. (My two cats are gray) Anyway, this is awsome!--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 18:49, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 18:50, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble-sama 22:51, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Rainwhisker (Ki) - Approved

Rainwhisker.kit I know this is above the page limit, but one of the images is being declined so I was hoping it would be okay. But anyway, this is only my second kit image, and on my first kit image I used a different shading style, so I'm not sure how this turned out. Making this image means a lot to me, because Rainwhisker is my favorite character, so being able to make one of his images just shouts out "AWESOME!" at me. :) Anyway, enough of my rambling on, comments and suggestions? --Icethroat21Happy New Years! 05:25, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

This image is amazing Icy!Maybe blur the shading around the legs alittle more. FirePeltHow's the prey running? 17:37, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. How's this? --Icy-chan 19:56, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 18:49, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble-sama 22:51, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Berrynose (A)- Approved

Berrynose.apprentice

A very annoying cat in my opinion.--NightshineHappy New Year! 02:07, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Very good image! Darken and blur the ear pink some more though--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 03:37, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded--NightshineHappy New Year! 05:03, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 18:48, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble-sama 22:51, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Gorsetail (NP Warrior)- Approved

Gorsetail (NP).warriorHere's Gorsetail...I'm pretty sure nobody's reserved him...so..how is he?-- Pebble2Pineow> *poke* hai! 18:40, December 22, 2009 (UTC)


Beautiful! --Raineh 00:13, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Very good job! Just darken the ear pink a little, so we can see it, and blur some of the highlights.--Rainwhisker09 00:16, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

reupladed -- Pebble2Pineow> *poke* hai! 19:17, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more of a reddish color, and then it should be ready. --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 19:53, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

And try to make the ear pink not touch the lineart.--:) Mousetalon Meow to me! 20:56, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

reuploaded again I don't think it was ever touching the lineart(does it looks like it is?)-- Pebble2Pineow> *poke* hai! 03:55, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Yeah, it looks like it is, actually. Also, it still needs to be more of a reddish color. --Icethroat21Happy New Years! 00:12, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

reupladed-- Pebble2Pineow> *poke* hai! 00:40, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --Icy-chan 14:29, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Approved Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 19:06, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

Crag where eagles nest(CG)-Approved

File:Crag.cg.png

This is my first ever cave guard.I'm not shure about the mud streaks though.Comments?Critque?Questions?Help? FirePelt 05:06, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

You need to color the space between his legs and right now he looks kind of black. Lighten him a little. As for the mud, it looks kinda shiney(cant think of a better word)--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 15:12, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Kk.I'll work on it as soon as I come back from shopping,prob wont be able to work on it till about,4 o' clock,eastern standered time. FirePelt 18:53, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Also, darken the ear pink. --PandastormPanda Love 19:43, December 24, 2009 (UTC)Icestorm!

Reuploaded.Anything else? FirePelt 02:10, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

Add somemore shading, and blur the brown streaks.--Darkhallows 15:07, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Anything else? FirePelt 15:38, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the earpink,shading, and mud some more. This is very good.--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 00:08, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

The shading needs to be thicker and blurred more as I can barely see it. Sandy! 22:18, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Anything else at all? FirePelt 23:51, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Make the earpink more salmony. Maplefern 22:09, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Anything else at all? FirePelt 22:35, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Earpink is to light but the nose is good. ConfettifernAnd a happy Leaf-bare!14:58, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded.anything else?I fixed the ear pink.Anything else at all? FirePelt 15:44, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

The shading still looks too thin to me, and the ear pink and nose too bright. Look at the approved image of Jagged Rock Where Heron Sits to see which colour to use. Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 17:31, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded,Anytihng else? FirePeltHow's the prey running? 17:57, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 19:26, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble-sama 01:44, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

Pebblefoot-Approved

Pebblefoot.warriorHere is Pebblefoot! Third Charart. It said that once you had one image approved, you could put up two. Correct me if I'm wrong. And I hope this isn't over 35. Anyway, comments?ConfettifernAnd a happy Leaf-bare!19:56, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

The texture is great =) Just thicken and blur the shading, and blur the highlight on the face. Sandy! 22:24, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ConfettifernAnd a happy Leaf-bare! 22:46, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Anything else? ConfettifernAnd a happy Leaf-bare! 23:22, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Thicken all of the shading some more, and add some more to the tail. --Icethroat21Happy New Years! 02:30, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maplefern 02:37, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Anything else? ConfettifernAnd a happy Leaf-bare!16:07, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Anything? ConfettifernAnd a happy Leaf-bare!01:49, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

He looks very bumpy. I know he's supposed to be mottled, but still. And most of the shading on the front legs and along the back, isn't even touching the lineart--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 21:48, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ConfettifernAnd a happy Leaf-bare!00:02, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

The shading is a little better, but it still looks really bumpy to me. And the shading a long the tail looks very unnatural. Make the shading run along the lineart all the way up to the tip of the tail--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 03:17, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Anything else? Happy New Year!22:41, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Yes, the tail looks better. But the shading on the front right leg is really bothering me. Try blurring it a lot--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 20:21, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Happy New Year!21:28, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

Anything else?Happy New Year!17:19, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Anything at all? Snowfern Snow!21:34, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Looks fine to me. I wish I could say "Comments before approval?". xD --★ Batwing ☽ ⋆Deputy⋆ 22:27, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Add some shading to the hind paw that doesn't already have shading on it. --Icy-chan 22:29, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded better? Snowfern Snow!22:42, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 19:28, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble-sama 01:44, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

Scratch- Approved

File:Sharpclaw.rogue.png

Since so many images are at the 24 hour status and Bumblekit is almost done to be approved I decided to get this next image up. Here's Sharpclaw when he was a rogue known as Scratch.-- Shim-ShimNewGladiator! 19:10, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

Awesomeness! Maybe blur the shading. Also blur the highlights. --IcyLet's Go 2010! 19:17, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

Also, add a pupil in his eye. His eye looks lifeless. Give him some good life. --IcyLet's Go 2010! 19:18, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

This is very good, Shimmy. (Mind if I call you that?) The shading needs blurred a tad, but be careful not to blur the stripes any more. The highlights really need blurred - try using the one with the hardness inside with it getting lighter as it goes out instead of the solid brush next time. I bet you didn't understand a word of that. I didn't. --♪ Ravenstar ♫ :P 19:56, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

Updated I understood what you said perfectly :D and Shimmy is fine too :)--♪Shimmerpool♫ 21:36, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights still need to blurred a lot--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 21:46, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

I think this is as much as I can blur them. Updated--♪Shimmerpool♫ 22:17, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

The shading on the back is too dark; I can't see the stripes. --Icy-chan 20:05, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

I never touched the shading on his back. If I lighten it then the markings wouldn't even go. That would throw the whole image off as I got the colors from his deptuy image. Are you sure its not the computer you're using? Because I see nothing wrong with the shading at all and I can see teh tabby stripes just fine.--♪Shimmerpool♫ 03:33, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, I forgot that he had a deputy image already, and that the stripes connected like that. Ugh, just ignore my last comment. Add a couple of small stripes to his belly and then it should be good. --Icy-chan 04:14, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Updated--♪Shimmerpool♫ 03:46, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

This looks great to me. Nice job Shim =) Comments before approval? Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 19:30, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble-sama 01:44, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

Leafstar(R)- Approved

Leafstar.rogueWell, I know I'm above the image limit, but there are some images in the 24 Hour stage, and every time I try to wait, more images pop up and I can't post, so enough of my babbling. Comments?--:) Mousetalon And A Mousey New Year!!!!! 16:30, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the cream patches a bit, like her leader image--Leafstar Happy New Year!17:03, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

ReuploadedHm . . . I think I got it . . .--:) Mousetalon Meow to me! 17:21, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

The cream patchs still seem to bright.May you should save her leader image,and get the color of the patchs from That,then change the patchs on this one. FirePeltHow's the prey running? 17:40, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Okay. I brought up her leader image and got colors from there. Ta-da!--:) Mousetalon Meow to me! 18:09, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

The eye looks a bit strange and maybe make the ear pink stretch up higher? This is just me being picky. (: --★ Batwing ☽ ⋆Deputy⋆ 22:29, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I used a diagram for the eye, so I don't know what else to do for that, but how is the ear pink? I can't make it go any higher!--:) Mousetalon Meow to me! 15:56, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

The eye looks fine. Can you try to blur the tail patch a little.--AshshadowRawr :3 16:05, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Done. Anything else?--:) Mousetalon Meow to me! 17:31, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Not that I can see. Comments before approval? --Icy-chan 14:21, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble-sama 01:44, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

Swoop of Chestnut Hawk (KM)- Approved

Swoop.km Okay, there are six images in the 24 hour stage so I thought I'd go ahead and put this up. I'm not extremely proud of it though. Comments?--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 19:39, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good! The only thing I can see is that the mud streaks look more gray than brown, and they could also be thickened. --Icy-chan 19:53, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Is this better?--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 20:14, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Yep, add a streak to the tail. --Icy-chan 21:05, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Better?--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 02:30, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

You forgot to sign, but yeah, it looks better. I can barely see the ear pink, though, it's always hard for ginger cats, try experimenting with darker and lighter colors until you find a good color that's easily visible. --Icy-chan 00:47, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, and sorry I forgot to sign. *face palm* I'll get to work on the ear pink!--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 02:30, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Alright, I lightened it, is it any better?--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 02:52, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah. Blur the shading on her front left paw and the belly just a little bit more and then this should be good. --Icy-chan 14:17, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I blurred it as much as I could--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 20:11, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --Icy-chan 22:31, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

add more mud streaks..--*Ivy spring!!* 03:30, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

Acually Ivy, I don't think I really want to add more streaks. I think it looks fine the way it is--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 03:38, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Ivypool, I'm going to go with Nightfall on this one. Kit-Mothers probably don't go out of the cave as much as prey-hunters and cave-guards do, so some of them might not have as many mud streaks as others. But we'll wait for some more opinions before making the final decision. --Icy-chan 03:54, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

Ice is right, and Sandstar's image of Flight helped me draw the streaks--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 05:20, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

So, do we have to start the 24 hours over again, or can we just pick up from the last?--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 00:02, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

No, we carry on if the comments were irrelevant. Therefore, approved =) Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 09:31, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

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