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Grasspelt - Approved
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I got an image of a green cat first time I read the name. Constructments? --Bramble-sama 23:14, January 3, 2010 (UTC)
Lol Bramble! I like it! Maybe blur the shading under the ear (the one closest to us, with the ear pink) because it looks a little dark. Good job! (: --★ Batwing ☽ ⋆Deputy⋆ 23:25, January 3, 2010 (UTC)
That's what I thought too! I think it's fine....Snowfern Snow! 00:17, January 4, 2010 (UTC)
Since I was almost a senior warrior before I left, I guess its safe to do this. Please Bramble I've dreamed about saying this! XD Comments before approval? HawkeyRawr! LOL 15:20, January 4, 2010 (UTC)
No, Hawk. Almost a senior warrior is not being a senior warrior. You don't have the power to decline or set the 24 hours, nor approve. Please don't do it again. Besides, I hadn't completed Bluestar's comment yet, which I have done now. --Bramble-sama 22:34, January 4, 2010 (UTC)
... ... Comments before approval? (This is great Bramble) Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 17:36, January 5, 2010 (UTC)
None; approved. --Hд₩₭₮д£O₦ 23:54, January 6, 2010 (UTC)
Petalfur (Ki) - Approved
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This is my first two-colored kit, as well as only my third kit, and I have to admit that I'm actually proud of this image. Comments and suggestions? --Icy-chan 23:42, January 3, 2010 (UTC)
This is beautiful, Icethroat! I see nothing. Snowfern Snow! 00:10, January 4, 2010 (UTC)
Blur the leg shading a little.--:) Mousetalon Meow to me! 02:31, January 5, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Better? --Icy-chan 22:04, January 5, 2010 (UTC)
Much!--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 04:03, January 6, 2010 (UTC)
Comments befora approval? (That gets tiresome to type lol, perhaps I should abbreviate to CBA? ^_^ It's a good tiresome though) Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 09:27, January 6, 2010 (UTC)
It does, though sometimes when I'm bored I just type variations of it. :) Approved. --Bramble-sama 20:41, January 7, 2010 (UTC)
Cinderpelt(Ki)- Approved
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Ok there are a few images in the comments stage and I really wanted to post my cinderkit so here she is. Comments?--AshshadowRawr :3 15:37, January 3, 2010 (UTC)
pretty good!maybe darken the shading a tad but more. FirePeltHow's the prey running? 16:10, January 3, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded Darkened the shading.--AshshadowRawr :3 22:12, January 4, 2010 (UTC)
Blur neck shading Snowfern Snow!22:15, January 4, 2010 (UTC)
It's blurred as much as possible--AshshadowRawr :3 22:33, January 4, 2010 (UTC)
This looks great, and I don't see anything wrong. Comments before approval? Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 14:47, January 6, 2010 (UTC)
Approved. --Bramble-sama 20:58, January 7, 2010 (UTC)
Minty (Q) ~ Approved
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Heheh, she's so nice. :-) One of the images is about to be deleted, so it wont be 36 for long. Comments? --GOT REINDEER?Mumble! 18:29, December 16, 2009 (UTC)
Agreed. Poor Minty! Anyway, onto the image, I think you need to blur the highlights a bit more, and maybe lighten the ear pink. But, otherwise, she looks awesome, Mumble! --AngelstarSilver Bells 19:03, December 16, 2009 (UTC)
Thank you! I'll get onto that ASAP. ;-) --GOT REINDEER?Mumble! 19:47, December 16, 2009 (UTC)
I think Nightfall101 had her already! i swear! but this is good Mumble!--Echopaw 21:15, December 16, 2009 (UTC)
Hmmm... I know it says she's a queen on her page, but she isn't really. If she needed an image, she would be a loner. She had her kits as a loner, and the term queen is only used in Clans, just as kit-mother is used in the Tribe. Other loner/rogue she-cats who had kits aren't classified as queens, such as Sasha. It would be different if this was like Daisy, who had her kits and then joined a Clan, but Minty never joined or will join a Clan. So I don't think she should have a queen image, but a loner image instead. Please correct me if I'm wrong. --SnowstarLeaf-bare is here! 21:41, December 16, 2009 (UTC)
I see where you're coming from Bluestar but the definition of queen is any she-cat expecting or nursing kits. As for the image it's really good but I agree with Angelstar.--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 21:47, December 16, 2009 (UTC)
Awsome Mumble! But I do agree with Bluestar. I think she should have a loner blank rather than a queen blank. Oh and Echo, yes, I did have her reserved for a while, but I had never done a loner before, and when I tried doing Minty, it didn't turn out so good. So, I decided to let someone else do her--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 08:32, December 17, 2009 (UTC)
I discussed my view on this with Bluestar; you can see on her talk page. The bottom line is that this is the correct blank; she-cat nursing kits or pregnant is a queen, thus she be used with a queen blank. Tinselclaw 22:22, December 17, 2009 (UTC)
When I checked nobody had reserved her...? I'm gonna take a look at the discussion, and decide what to do about the blank, but I think I might stick with the queen; A queen is really just a pregnant or nursing she-cat. --GOT REINDEER?Mumble! 17:44, December 18, 2009 (UTC)
REUPLOADED. Blurred her more, kept the blank the same. Anything else? --GOT REINDEER?Mumble! 17:52, December 18, 2009 (UTC)
The earpink looks kind of dark, but that's just my opinion. Ignore me if you think the color is good. ------Night whisker98Merry Leaf-bare! 16:42, December 18, 2009 (UTC)
Yeah, I agree. I'll lighten it up a tad, as well as the shading. --GOT REINDEER?Mumble! 16:25, December 19, 2009 (UTC)
REUPLOADED. Sorry it took so long, I was busy. Lightened the ear pink, but left the shading alone. Anything else? --GOT REINDEER?Mumble! 22:51, December 22, 2009 (UTC)
I think it looks nice.Lighten the shading a tad,please. FirePelt 01:22, December 23, 2009 (UTC)
kk. --GOT REINDEER?Mumble! 18:14, December 23, 2009 (UTC)
UPLOADED. That's the best I could do. :P --GOT REINDEER?Mumble! 18:21, December 23, 2009 (UTC)
It looks better!(Shading wise,everytihng else is perfect)You are a talented artist I have to tell you that!(^=._.=^) FirePelt 02:07, December 24, 2009 (UTC)
Thank you! ^-^ --GOT REINDEER?Mumble! 17:28, December 24, 2009 (UTC)
I think it's still too dark in places and I can't see the lineart - the base of her tail, her belly and some areas on her chest and shoulders. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 17:30, December 26, 2009 (UTC)
Mumble, let me say i like you image, but this blank is for a clan queen. Minty is a loner/rough queen, but i'm not sure we need to do anything about it. --♥Shinestar♥ 00:45, December 31, 2009 (UTC)
Shineh (can i call you that for now) it really dosn't matter BTW it's not rough its rouge don't worry every body gets it wrong! Echopaw 01:16, December 31, 2009 (UTC)
It was agreed that a queen is a queen and the same blank will be used for all queens, clan, rogue, ancient, tribe. Sandy! 10:53, December 31, 2009 (UTC)
Wait, for the Tribe of Rushing water? They call their queens Kit mothers. I thought we'd need serperate blanks for them--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 20:23, January 1, 2010 (UTC)
See the Rising Moon section in the approved archives - Bramble has said that seeing as there are only two kit-mothers mentioned, we will add mud streaks to the current blanks. Also, please work on this Mumble, or it will be declined. Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 22:27, January 1, 2010 (UTC)
I am. I'll get her put up soon. --GOT REINDEER?Mumble! 00:25, January 2, 2010 (UTC)
UPLOADED. I got sick of her and just completely redid it. xD --GOT REINDEER?Mumble! 21:31, January 3, 2010 (UTC)
Awww, I kinda liked the other one better. But as for this one, blur the highlight in the middle a lot--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 22:58, January 3, 2010 (UTC)
Kk. --GOT REINDEER?Mumble! 18:15, January 4, 2010 (UTC)
Much better =) I love this Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 19:04, January 5, 2010 (UTC)
She does look much better!*flicks ear with tail*. FirePeltHow's the prey running? 21:48, January 5, 2010 (UTC)
I don't see anything wrong. Comments before approval? Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 13:12, January 7, 2010 (UTC)
Approved Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 12:32, January 8, 2010 (UTC)
Rain that Rattles on Stones (E) - Approved
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Okay, this was hard to do. I've never done an elder with a muzzle "turned white from age". And I was planning on making the only visible eye like, closed, to indicate that it was missing. But I shied away from the idea after I started the image, and just made the eye blue. I'm probably gonna wait till I have more expeirence to do something like that. Okay well, here he is, Rain that Rattles on Stones!--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 00:28, December 28, 2009 (UTC)
Bllur the shading on the tail. ConfettifernAnd a happy Leaf-bare!01:50, December 28, 2009 (UTC)
The muzzle looks like it is a feature of the pelt, not "turned gray from age." Blur it more, or remove it and instead add a paler shade of gray, and highlight it a lot.--NewYearPath Fireworks! Poof... 17:33, December 28, 2009 (UTC)
Reuploaded: I blurred the tail as much as I could, and is the muzzle any better? I tried smudging it a little, and then blurred it, then I added a few highlights--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 20:15, December 28, 2009 (UTC)
(M) - The only thing I see is the muzzle; if it's gray with age, it should have the lightest white tinge next to the lineart and blurred a little inward. Right now it loks like his he just has a white muzzle. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 23:24, December 28, 2009 (UTC)
Okay, I'm not excatly sure I know what you mean Moss. If I tinged it white even more, wouldn't that make it look even more like just a white muzzle?--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 03:49, December 31, 2009 (UTC)
I think Moss means that it's too white now - the white bit should be smaller and should have a bigger gradient change colourwise. So my suggestion is that you remove the white muzzle you have now and then get a white paint brush with faded edges and use that to put the muzzle in and then blur the edges right into the pelt colour. Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 10:19, January 2, 2010 (UTC)
Okay, I'll try that. It might be a while though. I looked at Graypool's image for how to do the gray muzzle, but I guess it makes a difference if the cat is brown, not gray. I'll get to work on it!--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 17:40, January 2, 2010 (UTC)
Okay, I tried that. The pain brush goes over the lineart, so it's extremely difficult to get it in just the right place without messing the lineart up. Any suggestions on how to do it without messing up the lineart?--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 03:02, January 3, 2010 (UTC)
Okay, I need some help people.--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 09:57, January 5, 2010 (UTC)
I can help, if you want... --★ Batwing ☽ ⋆Deputy⋆ 16:22, January 5, 2010 (UTC)
Perhaps do it, let it go over the lineart, clean up the stuff outside the lineart and then paste the lineart (with transparent middle)over the image to get the black back. Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 19:39, January 5, 2010 (UTC)
Alright, I'll do my best--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 21:48, January 5, 2010 (UTC)
I tried, but how do I overlay the elder blank with the transparent middle, onto mine?--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 00:01, January 6, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded: Is this any better? I couldn't figure out how to paste the transparent elder blank over my image, so I found another way to try and fix it. So, is it any better?--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 07:58, January 6, 2010 (UTC)
The size is better. Juts run the dodge tool over it a couple of times to make it more white and less grey and this will be ready Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 16:46, January 6, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded: Is this better?--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 20:12, January 6, 2010 (UTC)
Lighten it just a little bit more. --Icy-chan 22:25, January 6, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded: I ran the dodge tool over it some. Does it look better? (I had to change the file name because my computer wasn't saving the changes)--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 07:30, January 7, 2010 (UTC)
It looks much better to me. Comments before approval? Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 09:07, January 7, 2010 (UTC)
Approved Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 12:35, January 8, 2010 (UTC)
Flight of Startled Heron (KM) - Approved
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Constructments? Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 17:43, January 3, 2010 (UTC)
Thicken and blur the mud streaks some. Good job on the image though.--AshshadowRawr :3 17:49, January 3, 2010 (UTC)
Amazing! Do what Ash said and darken the ear pink. --IcestormHI! 18:24, January 3, 2010 (UTC)
The mudstreaks seem kind of gray. Make them more mud-colored. (: --★ Batwing ☽ ⋆Deputy⋆ 01:52, January 4, 2010 (UTC)
Okay, finally updated this. Sorry for the delay. Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 17:56, January 5, 2010 (UTC)
Okay, it might just be my computer, but I can hardly see the mud streaks. Maybe make them darker--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 21:46, January 5, 2010 (UTC)
It's one of those brown on brown things. The mud wouldn't really show.--AshshadowRawr :3 21:51, January 5, 2010 (UTC)
Ah yes, forgot to mention that: I couldn't really get them to show without choosig a horrible sickly green-brown or grey-brown colour, which is what I did to start but was asked to change it. I made them brown, but they don't really show. Should I change them or leave them? Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 09:47, January 6, 2010 (UTC)
I'd leave them. Thats what happened when I made Scree Beneath Winter Sky--AshshadowRawr :3 11:34, January 6, 2010 (UTC)
Yeah. They use mud to camouflouge anyway, so if they're already mud-colored, it won't matter. --★ Batwing ☽ ⋆Deputy⋆ 17:40, January 6, 2010 (UTC)
She looks lovely, the eyes are beautiful. Comments before approval? Bramble-sama 21:14, January 7, 2010 (UTC)
Approved Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 12:38, January 8, 2010 (UTC)
Mistyfoot(A)- Approved
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There are a few up for approval so . . . comments? My first apprentice! I just love Mistyfoot, I hope I get to do her leader image when the book comes out.--:) Mousetalon Meow to me! 03:27, January 6, 2010 (UTC)
This is really good, but she needs ear pink--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 03:41, January 6, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded Wow, I'm stupid. I always forget that!--:) Mousetalon Meow to me! 03:49, January 6, 2010 (UTC)
Lol, it's okay. I would probably darken the shading on the legs farthest from us though, it would add more depth to it--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 03:51, January 6, 2010 (UTC)
- a other good bit to have shading is The back ear. Brambleclaw14 Talk 08:40, January 6, 2010 (UTC)
This is good, but did we ever see her as an apprentice? --★ Batwing ☽ ⋆Deputy⋆ 16:45, January 6, 2010 (UTC)
I don't think so, but she was listed as an apprentice in Secrets of the Clans. Wasn't she? Like on Tallpoppy's page, on her charart template it says, "Apprentice-Tallpaw" We never see her as an apprentice, but she was listed as one in Secrets of the Clans. So I think we can use this--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 20:02, January 6, 2010 (UTC)
If we hold the fact she was mentioned in a book by her apprentice name, whether or not it was in the actual series, than I agree with Nightfall; it can be used. --Bramble-sama 00:16, January 7, 2010 (UTC)
Okay, now that that's cleared up . . . Reuploaded ( Just love bold text!)--:) Mousetalon Meow to me! 00:46, January 7, 2010 (UTC)
Comments before approval? --Icy-chan 21:18, January 7, 2010 (UTC)
Approved Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 12:44, January 8, 2010 (UTC)
Leafpool- Approved
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my second charart...comments??--*Ivy jingle jingle!!* 10:15, December 23, 2009 (UTC)
- it needs more shading, all the tail is a good thing to do and the ear with out the earpink on it can have shading on it to, other then that for now I can't see any thing else. Brambleclaw14 Talk 10:34, December 23, 2009 (UTC)
- Is this charart leafpool? Brambleclaw14 Talk 11:14, December 23, 2009 (UTC)
This doesn't look much like her Medicine cat version Icecloud33 13:41, December 23, 2009 (UTC)
Try to smudge and blur the tabby markings to make them look more natural. Otherwise, it's good! --CandyCaneWolf 17:55, December 23, 2009 (UTC)
Try to make it more of a sandy brown, as she probally got her fur color from Sandstorm. Make the chest white go up to her face, like in Leafpool's medicine cat image. The eyes also seem to be going off the lineart a bit. --SnowstarLeaf-bare is here! 20:49, December 23, 2009 (UTC)
reuploaded--*Ivy jingle jingle!!* 08:07, December 24, 2009 (UTC)
Okay, the color is much better. But I still have a few things
1. The stripes on her back need to be connected to her back in some way
2. The stripes need to be blurred more
3. The white on her chest is still way to big
4. The white on her chest needs to stretch up to her face
5. The white on her paws should be smudged into her pelt and then blurred
Here's something you should do. Save Leafpool's approved medicine cat image, and then bring it up in your art program along with your image. That way you can make it as close as possible--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 08:40, December 24, 2009 (UTC)
reploaded--*Ivy jingle jingle!!* 12:05, December 26, 2009 (UTC)
The pelt doesn't match Leafpool's medicine cat image. And the eye is freaking me out. Try looking at Stoneclaw on how to do the eye. Also she needs ear-pink. --:D Jinglestorm ♥'Merry Purry Christmas! 17:09, December 26, 2009 (UTC)
reuploaded--*Ivy jingle jingle!!* 04:08, December 27, 2009 (UTC)
Make it more like this:And the eplt dosent look like her medicine cat version.reuploaded--*Ivy jingle jingle!!* 03:50, December 28, 2009 (UTC)
Okay, it's getting better. But the color still isn't quite right. Try running the dogde tool over the entire image a couple of times, that ought to help. And the stripes are getting better too, but they look kinda sloppy--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 04:23, December 28, 2009 (UTC)
I'd like to note that the thumb near the bottom is from Fire, not Ivy. :x --Quiet!... 04:26, December 28, 2009 (UTC)
I saved her medicine cat pic on my computer and erased the herbs,and I tried to put her chin on.You can tell.I put it on to show her what the pelt color is,where the white comes,and the tabby strpes. FirePelt 20:23, December 28, 2009 (UTC)
i'm proud of this one for sure!!!reuploaded--*Ivy jingle jingle!!* 03:43, December 29, 2009 (UTC)
Her tabby stripes are too dark, sorry.--:) Mousetalon Meow to me! 18:06, December 29, 2009 (UTC)
- The tabby markings are darker than the ones on the medicine cat image. The ear pinks are different too. Blend in the area where the white fur touches her tabby fur. Plus add some shading.----Shimmerpool2010 on its way! :D
this is better reuploaded--*Ivy jingle jingle!!* 06:24, December 30, 2009 (UTC)
The ear pink needs to be blurred. And the tabby markings look a little dark -- Icecloud33 16:10, December 30, 2009 (UTC)
Her eye looks a little squished to me.--NewYearPath Fireworks! Poof... 19:05, December 30, 2009 (UTC)
i used color dropper.reuploaded--*Ivy jingle jingle!!* 03:42, December 31, 2009 (UTC)
The color of the stripes is better, but they need to be blurred into the pelt. And also, Moss is right about the eye. Look on one of Icethroat's tutorials for help on the eye--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 03:44, December 31, 2009 (UTC)
thanks!! reuploaded--*Ivy jingle jingle!!* 04:01, December 31, 2009 (UTC)
Still, the eye is freaking me out. Look at Brambleberry or Whitestorm or Stoneclaw on how to do the eye. Also darken ear pink. There's something about the stripes that's borthering me. I don't know what it is. But I will tell you when I've figured it out. --IcyLet's Go 2010! 03:05, January 1, 2010 (UTC)
reuploded--*Ivy spring!!* 03:16, January 1, 2010 (UTC)
REPLOADED--*Ivy spring!!* 07:32, January 2, 2010 (UTC)
Ivypool, please fix the eye like many users have said. --★ Batwing ☽ ⋆Deputy⋆ 22:28, January 2, 2010 (UTC)
REUPLOADED--*Ivy spring!!* 04:03, January 3, 2010 (UTC)
Sorry, but the eye still looks nothing like the one on her warrior image, or any of the cats that Icestorm suggested for reference. Also, you need to blur the white way more, you need to lighten and blur the ear pink, darken the shading a little, and blur the stripes some more--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 05:13, January 3, 2010 (UTC)
reuploaded...--*Ivy spring!!* 05:30, January 4, 2010 (UTC)
Sorry, but it needs to be a tad darker. Try uploading the med cat image with it to get the eye color.--:) Mousetalon Meow to me! 02:32, January 5, 2010 (UTC)
reuploaded!!--*Ivy spring!!* 03:07, January 5, 2010 (UTC)
This looks almost ready =) All I can see is that the edges of the white where it meets the brown, the ear pink and the tabby stripes need a slight blurring. Go easy on the stripes though =) Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 19:22, January 5, 2010 (UTC)
reuopiadedthanks for the good comment,sandy!!--*Ivy pool~* 03:56, January 6, 2010 (UTC)
Ivy, for the last time, fix the eye. --★ Batwing ☽ ⋆Deputy⋆ 17:37, January 6, 2010 (UTC)
There is nothing wrong with the eye, I'm sorry. This is exactly the same eye style I use on every one of my warrior, deputy and med cat chararts and it has never been a problem. I think Icy may actually have this eye style on her tutorial; I know I'm not the only one to use it. I've checked it in large and it's fine. The problem is that her eyes are yellow/amber which sometimes makes the pupil stand out too much and the highlight difficult to be seen. I don't really think it's fixable though Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 20:50, January 6, 2010 (UTC)
Yeah, it's the style I use. It's missing a couple of black pixels though, probably from where the white belly line was made. That's probably what's making it like it isn't fixed, so the black pixels need added back in. --Icy-chan 21:55, January 6, 2010 (UTC)
No, I don't think Bluestar means the pupil. (I don't mean to put words in your mouth Blue) I think it's the lineart. If you look at her warrior image, it just looks different. It's mainly the bottom part of the eye. Maybe there's som lineart missing?--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 01:19, January 7, 2010 (UTC)
Sorry, I didn't make myself clear; the black pixels I was talking about were the missing lineart. Thanks for clearing that up for me, Nightfall. --Icy-chan 01:57, January 7, 2010 (UTC)
what??should i fixit or not??@@--<span style="font-family:Papyrus;*Ivy</span> 03:28, January 7, 2010 (UTC)
no idea what your ssaying,but i checked the eye..--*Ivy pool~* 03:37, January 7, 2010 (UTC)
Okay the eye is much better! But, the white on her paws and chest look too gray. Run the dodge tool over it some and then this should probably be ready!--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 03:40, January 7, 2010 (UTC)
reuploaded--.--:) Ivy Hi there!! 11:11, January 8, 2010 (UTC)
Comments before approval? Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 11:34, January 8, 2010 (UTC)
Approving Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 13:44, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
Jay's Wing (TB) - Approved
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Ok, so Lionheart used to be here, but I gave up on him so here's Jay's Wing as a to-be! I'm pretty proud of him, if I do say so myself! Comments? --★ Batwing ☽ ⋆Deputy⋆ 16:35, January 5, 2010 (UTC)
Okay, my comment is first to say that you shouldn't just delete sections and replace them. If you want to give up on an image, withdraw it and create a separate section for your new image... Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 19:11, January 5, 2010 (UTC)
As for the image, the shading needs thickening and blurred Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 19:14, January 5, 2010 (UTC)
Sorry Sandy, but I had had Lionheart withdrawn for several days and Bramble or you never moved it to the declined section, so I put Jay's Wing up here so I wouldn't have to wait until more images were approved. I'll fix the shading in a moment. --★ Batwing ☽ ⋆Deputy⋆ 19:17, January 5, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded - Thickened and blurred shading. --★ Batwing ☽ ⋆Deputy⋆ 19:25, January 5, 2010 (UTC)
Okay, just for future reference =) Sorry for missing it. This looks good, but the ear pink looks too bright - make it more like Tornear or Rippletail Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 09:39, January 6, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded - Meh, I hate picking ear pink color. I got it from Tornear. Better? --★ Batwing ☽ ⋆Deputy⋆ 16:54, January 6, 2010 (UTC)
Yeah, the ear pink's better. All of the shading needs blurred, though. --Icy-chan 22:23, January 6, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded - Had to save a new file because the changes weren't showing up. Better? --★ Batwing ☽ ⋆Deputy⋆ 21:54, January 7, 2010 (UTC)
The reason it wasn't archived (I think) was because that you had withdrawn it but someone told you to wait, and then you edited it and reuploaded it so we thought that you had changed your mind, and also, when you withdraw something it's a lot easier to see if you change "For Approval" to "Withdrawn" or "Withdrawing". But for the actual image, it looks really good. But there's a highlight on the hind leg, and nowhere else, and it looks out of place (if that makes sense), so try adding a couple to the head and a couple to the shoulder. (If they're there already then either make the highlights brighter or the one on the hind leg a bit less bright.) --Icy-chan 02:04, January 8, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded - Fixed highlights. --★ Batwing ☽ ⋆Deputy⋆ 03:14, January 8, 2010 (UTC)
Comments before approval? Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 11:50, January 8, 2010 (UTC)
Approving Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 13:46, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
Redwillow - Approved
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Okay, this is bad. I'll redo the image as many times as you want me to. Anyway, Comments?
you forgot your siggy maplefern and this is okay! Echopaw 13:02, January 2, 2010 (UTC)
Thanks for reminding me Echopaw! Happy New Year!13:10, January 2, 2010 (UTC)
Okay, both the colour need to be less yellow. Make the ginger more orangey and the brown a bit more, well, less yellow as it makes it look kind of green. I was also debating whether by brown and ginger the Erins meant a kind of tortoiseshell pattern. What does everyone else think? I'm going to have a look for some real cat images and see. Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 16:05, January 2, 2010 (UTC)
Well, I typed in brown and ginger cat and also tortoiseshell into google images and found a few pictures that I think represent a brown and ginger mottled cat as well as an image from google will. [1] The first is more gingery, the others are darker. [2], [3]. Anyway, that's my take on it =) The shading also needs to be thicker and more blurred and the ear pink could do with being a tad darker Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 16:11, January 2, 2010 (UTC)
ReuploadedHappy New Year!16:27, January 2, 2010 (UTC)
Anything else? Maplefern20:05, January 2, 2010 (UTC)
Anything? Snowfern Snow! 13:27, January 3, 2010 (UTC)
I can barely see the ear pink, but don't worry, it's always hard on ginger cats to get a good color. Try experimenting with different shades of red and pink until you find a really good color. --Icy-chan 14:23, January 4, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Done. Better? Snowfern Snow!22:43, January 4, 2010 (UTC)
The colour's good, just blend it a little. Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 19:34, January 5, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Better? Snowfern Snow!22:00, January 5, 2010 (UTC)
Better. Just darken the shading and he'll be good to go a mon avis Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 16:48, January 6, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Better? Snowfern Snow! 01:09, January 7, 2010 (UTC)
Comments before approval? Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 12:11, January 8, 2010 (UTC)
Approved Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 13:49, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
Ryewhisker (W) - Approved
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My first tabby. I did the best I could. I really want this approved by Christmas. Please! Comments before Christmas? --:D Jinglestorm ♥'Merry Purry Christmas! 01:28, December 18, 2009 (UTC)
Maybe more shading and some more stripes.--Darkhallows 12:18, December 18, 2009 (UTC)
Blend the ear pink more, add more shading and blend, darken the tabby sttipes, and add more tabby stripes. Also, make them a little more wavy and not strait y's.--Minnowclaw 17:55, December 18, 2009 (UTC)
Done. Wait I am too lazy to put the Reuploaded sign up. Wait I just did! --:D Jinglestorm ♥'Merry Purry Christmas! 23:29, December 18, 2009 (UTC)
The shading looks messy. Blur it and add highlights to the head and tail.--:) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! 01:46, December 19, 2009 (UTC)
Try adding some tabby stripes to the face, and make them less of a pattern of Ys but soe squggly lines, some Ys, and some little dashes in between the lines.--MossScrooge Bahumbug! 20:04, December 20, 2009 (UTC)
Um I don't get what your saying. Help? --PandastormPanda Love 21:43, December 20, 2009 (UTC)
Icestorm, she means that the stripes are shaped liked 'Y's. Add a line in between some of them and make them smaller. MaplefernHi!14:09, December 21, 2009 (UTC)
Reuploaded Whole image re-done. I also tried a diffrent style of shading. Any more comments? --:D Jinglestorm ♥'Merry Purry Christmas! 22:13, December 24, 2009 (UTC)
I would probably blur the shading a little more, and make the stripes a little longer. Also, add some stripes to the legs. But other than that, it looks great!--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 23:34, December 24, 2009 (UTC)
Do I really have to? I was thinking of adding some lines and I kinda like it how it is now. --:D Jinglestorm ♥'Merry Purry Christmas! 23:43, December 24, 2009 (UTC)
Which do you guys like better? --:D Jinglestorm ♥'Merry Purry Christmas! 23:46, December 24, 2009 (UTC)
I like the one on the right better. --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 03:13, December 25, 2009 (UTC)
The one on the right is better. All I can say is tone down the ear pink a little bit, blend the corners of it, and maybe add a little more shading? Should be good to go, then. (: --Quiet!... 08:15, December 25, 2009 (UTC)
So the one on teh right? Tell me if the changes didn't show up. Oh and Quietstep can you reply to my friend requst? Thanks! I don't think the changes showed up.--:D Jinglestorm ♥'Merry Purry Christmas! 18:44, December 25, 2009 (UTC)
The right one although the ear pink needs blurring (which, if done right, should dull the colour a little too as it will mix in with the brown), the stripes look very blotchy and blurred. Perhaps make them a solid colour and more defined. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 17:49, December 26, 2009 (UTC)
Can you tell me how to fix them? --:D Jinglestorm ♥'Merry Purry Christmas! 17:56, December 26, 2009 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Tell me if the changes didn't show. --:D Jinglestorm ♥'Merry Purry Christmas! 21:13, December 26, 2009 (UTC)
Blur the shading more but be careful not to hit the stripes. Also - the ear pink needs to be more like Swallowtail (RC) or Lionheart or Weaselfur Sandy! 22:52, December 27, 2009 (UTC)
Which one do you like better? --IcyLet's Go 2010! 19:57, December 29, 2009 (UTC)
Comments? --IcyLet's Go 2010! 02:39, December 30, 2009 (UTC)
To be honest, I liked
the best, but out of these two, I like the stripes on the one on the right, but I like the color on the one on the left better. --Icethroat21Happy New Years! 04:12, December 30, 2009 (UTC)
I agree with Icethroat. Try darkening the second one, as well as blurring the ear pink and the general pelt. It looks pretty good. --Bramble-sama 18:37, December 30, 2009 (UTC)
Done. Anymore comments? --IcyLet's Go 2010! 02:29, January 1, 2010 (UTC)
Make the stripes darker. Also, there's some extra lineart on the ear and the top of the head. --Icethroat21Happy New Years! 18:09, January 1, 2010 (UTC)
Can you get rid of it? --IcyLet's Go 2010! 18:15, January 1, 2010 (UTC)
I fixed the stripes. Give me a sec to upload it. --IcyLet's Go 2010! 18:19, January 1, 2010 (UTC)
Done. --IcyLet's Go 2010! 03:52, January 2, 2010 (UTC)
Maybe lighten the ear pink a little. --HoneyfurBob's Your Uncle! 16:13, January 2, 2010 (UTC)
Done. --IcestormHI! 17:15, January 3, 2010 (UTC)
Comments? I need this approved! --IcestormHI! 18:52, January 3, 2010 (UTC)
Add a couple of stripes to the head and paws, and add shading to the midriff. Also, it was only an hour and a half between your two comments, people will comment whenever they can get on. --Icy-chan 20:05, January 3, 2010 (UTC)
There is some blurred lineart around the eye Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 16:33, January 6, 2010 (UTC)
Done. Sorry Icethroat my calender on my computer was broken. The time too. --IcestormHI! 13:05, January 7, 2010 (UTC)
The ear pink is a little too bright, after that this should be ready.--Darkhallows 22:27, January 8, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Tell meh if changes aren't showing. --IcestormI LIKE TACO BELL!!! 03:06, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
Are the changes showing? There not on my computer. --IcestormI LIKE TACO BELL!!! 20:56, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
Yep, they're showing. In that case, comments before approval? --Hд₩₭₮д£O₦ 22:19, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
None; approved. --Hд₩₭₮д£O₦ 16:01, January 10, 2010 (UTC)
Pebbleheart -Approved
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2nd Charart first tabby. What do you think--Icecloud33 01:28, December 30, 2009 (UTC)
Pretty good, but the stripes are awful thick. Thin them down a bit and make them less like straight triangles; swiggle them a little. Also, add some more shading on the legs and paws. --Bramble-sama 18:41, December 30, 2009 (UTC)
Is this better? Is the stripe on the tail too thick -- Icecloud33 00:42, December 31, 2009 (UTC)
Much better. Just blur the ear pink and the shading transition. --Bramble-sama 19:00, December 31, 2009 (UTC)
Better? -- Icecloud33 20:13, December 31, 2009 (UTC)
Add some shading to the tail. --Icethroat21Happy New Years! 05:30, January 2, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded -- Icecloud33 13:42, January 2, 2010 (UTC)
The image looks lovely, but the shading needs to come from the same direction. The body has shading on one side, the tail another, and the herbs at another angle. It needs o be all at the same angle. --Icy-chan 20:13, January 2, 2010 (UTC)
So where do i put the shading on the herbs and tail? -- Icecloud33 20:42, January 2, 2010 (UTC)
On the bottom of the tail with an angle at the same angle as the body shading, and the same on the herbs, having them both the same color to begin with, and then adding shading to it at the same angle as the body shading. --Icy-chan 01:49, January 3, 2010 (UTC)
Is this better? I'm not sure if the tail was right. It looks strange -- Icecloud33 01:14, January 7, 2010 (UTC)
I think the tail looks okay. There's a white pixel in the lineart of the fur on the chest, though. --Icy-chan 21:32, January 7, 2010 (UTC)
I love the tabby markings, but, the herbs look a bit too fluorescent green to me. X3 ☛ⓘⓝⓢⓐⓝⓔⓤⓛⓐⓡ☚ 17:44, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
Is this any better? -- Icecloud33 18:17, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
Yeah, it looks great :) I don't see anything wrong. ☛ⓘⓝⓢⓐⓝⓔⓤⓛⓐⓡ☚ 19:08, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
Comments before approval? --Icy-chan 21:22, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
None; approved. --Hд₩₭₮д£O₦ 16:03, January 10, 2010 (UTC)
Dustpelt (A) - Approved
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Although this is image 36, there are 3 images in the 24 hour stages at present. I took the colours as best as I could from his warrior image and modeled the stripes etc from that image. Constructments? Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 14:49, January 6, 2010 (UTC)
Oooh, I like it! Something about the stripes are bothering me... maybe blur them a bit more? Eh. --★ Batwing ☽ ⋆Deputy⋆ 16:46, January 6, 2010 (UTC)
I personally think the stripes look fine.. base on style with the Dustpelt image, they're pretty alike. If the stripes were blurred, it wouldn't look similar to his warrior image any more. The only thing I see is to add some shading to the bottom of the tail, as it looks flat, and if possible, blur the stripes on the tail as well. --Bramble-sama 00:14, January 7, 2010 (UTC)
Done Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 11:55, January 7, 2010 (UTC)
Maybe make the ear pink a tab bit smaller,by like,1/2 a percent at the top of the ear pink.It looks amazing besides that!*Purrs* ☮★Fire★☮ Starclan watchs over me★ 01:37, January 8, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 17:44, January 8, 2010 (UTC)
Comments before approval? --Icy-chan 21:44, January 8, 2010 (UTC)
None; approved. --Hд₩₭₮д£O₦ 16:04, January 10, 2010 (UTC)
Scorchfur (W)-Approved
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Well, I figured I'd get some current images knocked out before I started more additional images. How is he?--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 20:21, January 6, 2010 (UTC)
The eyes look a little weird.--NightshineLet it snow! 23:15, January 6, 2010 (UTC)
Weird how? Like the way I did the pupil, the lineart, the color, what?--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 23:44, January 6, 2010 (UTC)
[[File:Before_and_After.png]] I changed it to the way it looks on Icethroat's tutorial. That is the before and after. The white part was red and one black pixel was missing.--NightshineLet it snow! 23:52, January 6, 2010 (UTC)
When I first started the PCA I looked at Graystripe's warrior image for help on the eye. So I've been doing it like that ever since. I suppose I can change it if it's really important though--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 23:55, January 6, 2010 (UTC)
I don't think it's that important. Everyone does the eyes slightly different.--AshshadowRawr :3 23:59, January 6, 2010 (UTC)
Okay. I just thought it would look better--NightshineLet it snow! 00:16, January 7, 2010 (UTC)
Don't worry Nightshine. I'm going to be trying that eye style for my next character. But I'd like to stick with this one for Scorchfur. What about the image itself?--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 00:17, January 7, 2010 (UTC)
I think it looks great! The ear pink should be a little bigger though--NightshineLet it snow! 00:18, January 7, 2010 (UTC)
Blur the shading on the hind leg a little bit more. --Icy-chan 01:03, January 7, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded: I'am afraid you can't really see that I blurred it. And about the ear pink, I realized that if I made it any bigger it would touch the lineart--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 07:39, January 7, 2010 (UTC)
Comments before approval? Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 21:42, January 7, 2010 (UTC)
The highlights near the midriff look a bit strange. --★ Batwing ☽ ⋆Deputy⋆ 05:02, January 8, 2010 (UTC)
Strange like how?--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 05:59, January 8, 2010 (UTC)
I don't know... they look connected and unrealistic. Try blurring them a bit more, and if nessicary run the burn tool over it once. --★ Batwing ☽ ⋆Deputy⋆ 23:01, January 8, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded: Well, I blurred it as much as pixlr would allow. Does it look any better?--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 02:33, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
Looks good to me. Comments 'afore approval?--Darkhallows 14:39, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
None; approved. --Hд₩₭₮д£O₦ 16:06, January 10, 2010 (UTC)
Darkstar(SC)- Approved
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I know, I know, over the limit. I haven't done an image in FOREVER though. Decline, if you want.--Darkhallows 18:49, January 7, 2010 (UTC)
This is really good but when did Darkstar get a discription? The only thing his page says is yellow eyes.--AshshadowRawr :3 19:51, January 7, 2010 (UTC)
Oh... I thought it said 'dark tom with yellow eyes'. hold on a sec.--Darkhallows 20:00, January 7, 2010 (UTC)
Nope, his discription is "an elderly tom with yellow eyes". I just read the section in my copy of Code of the Clans, and I found nothing to suggest his pelt color. Sorry. This is a very good image, though. (: --★ Batwing ☽ ⋆Deputy⋆ 20:33, January 7, 2010 (UTC)
That's a shame because that's excatly how I pictured him. Is there anyone else you could use this for?--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 21:21, January 7, 2010 (UTC)
If you add some brown patches and change the eye color to amber he could be Mothpelt, since he was technically leader... He's the only cat he could be. --★ Batwing ☽ ⋆Deputy⋆ 21:46, January 7, 2010 (UTC)
True, but he never received his nine lives and name, so he never really made it to leader status--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 21:51, January 7, 2010 (UTC)
Yes that is true BUT,He still lead the clan for a short period of time,so to say as the leder.I think he should have a leader image.Nice job my past mentor. FirePeltRAWRZ!!!! 23:15, January 7, 2010 (UTC)
I'll wait to see Sandy or Bramble's opinion. I don't have my copy of CoOTC, at the moment, wasn't there a picture of him? Or was that the deputy.--Darkhallows 02:12, January 8, 2010 (UTC)
I double-checked CoOTC. It does have a picture. It's in b&w, but he has dark-colored fur. --★ Batwing ☽ ⋆Deputy⋆ 04:10, January 8, 2010 (UTC)
That is correct!--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 06:02, January 8, 2010 (UTC)
Oh yeah, I just looked. That's definately him. But add some knicks to both of his ears, because he has them in his picture--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 06:05, January 8, 2010 (UTC)
Like these?--Darkhallows 16:59, January 8, 2010 (UTC)
Perfect!--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 19:16, January 8, 2010 (UTC)
So, on the understanding that someone has found a reference (is there a page number that we could cite on his page?), I see nothing wrong with this. Comments before approval? Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 21:00, January 8, 2010 (UTC)
It's on page 125 of CoOTC. Image-wise, his nose needs colored. --★ Batwing ☽ ⋆Deputy⋆ 23:03, January 8, 2010 (UTC)
Done.--Darkhallows 23:17, January 8, 2010 (UTC)
Repeating comment before approval? --Icy-chan 00:49, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
None; approved. --Hд₩₭₮д£O₦ 16:07, January 10, 2010 (UTC)
Ashkit- Approved
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I know I'm over the image limit, but I've been waiting a week for it to go down. So, if it's alright, I'd like to keep this up. --HoneyfurBob's Your Uncle! 21:05, January 7, 2010 (UTC)
The face looks more like it is more white than it is gray,like a white blob is on his face.Please fix that. FirePeltRAWRZ!!!! 21:52, January 7, 2010 (UTC)
Actually, the "white blob" on his face is supposed to be a highlight. =P Would you like me to blur it some more? --HoneyfurBob's Your Uncle! 15:06, January 8, 2010 (UTC)
I know it's the highlight.It needs to be blurred more,seeing as right now it looks like a blob highlight. ☮★Fire★☮ Starclan watchs over me★ 22:11, January 8, 2010 (UTC)
He's so cute! maybe darken the shading a tad.--AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 01:06, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
Thanks, Ashshadow! Anyway, I darkened the shading and tried to blur the face some more. I've blurred it as much as I can and it still hasn't changed. Should I darken it so it won't show up as much? --HoneyfurBob's Your Uncle! 15:04, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
hmm, it looks fine on my computer Honey... Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 18:20, January 9, 2010 (UTC) Whoops, that was meЅд₦₫y ♪ 18:20, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
He looks fine to me too and your welcome.--AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 17:57, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
I think it looks fine, too. Commens before approval? --Icy-chan 21:06, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
None; approved. --Hд₩₭₮д£O₦ 16:09, January 10, 2010 (UTC)
Grasspelt (K)-Approved
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Grasspelt my first kit (I think) Brambleclaw14 Talk 13:21, January 8, 2010 (UTC)
I don't see much shading.--Darkhallows 16:50, January 8, 2010 (UTC)
- lol the shading looks more like the pelt ;) I'll try and darken it a bit. Brambleclaw14 Talk 16:53, January 8, 2010 (UTC)
- Reuploaded Brambleclaw14 Talk 17:01, January 8, 2010 (UTC)
The eyes look a little strange, look at User:Icethroat21/Tutorials for help on the eye--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 19:15, January 8, 2010 (UTC)
- Reuploaded Brambleclaw14 Talk 19:47, January 8, 2010 (UTC)
That's much better :)--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 20:56, January 8, 2010 (UTC)
Darken the ear pink a little bit, I can barely see it. --Icy-chan 21:51, January 8, 2010 (UTC)
- Reuploaded Brambleclaw14 Talk 06:39, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
Comments before approval? --Icy-chan 20:18, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
None; approved. --Hд₩₭₮д£O₦ 16:10, January 10, 2010 (UTC)
Wind(star) (Lo) - Approved
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There are two join requests and 3 images in 24 hours so I figured it would be safe to post this. My first loner, I believe. Constructments? Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 17:57, January 8, 2010 (UTC)
Oooh, I like her! Maybe just blur where the highlights meet the shading a tad more. --★ Batwing ☽ ⋆Deputy⋆ 18:25, January 8, 2010 (UTC)
Done my best =) Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 19:24, January 8, 2010 (UTC)
Much better. If I had to say something else, the chest and belly shading look a little dark, but I'm being super picky. Feel free to ignore. --★ Batwing ☽ ⋆Deputy⋆ 19:34, January 8, 2010 (UTC)
Well, I tried to get it around the same colour as the Leader image. I can change it if you'd like though Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 19:42, January 8, 2010 (UTC)
I wouldn't change it, it looks fine to me :)--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 03:22, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
Same here, I really don't see anything, except maybe darken the ear pink?--:) Mousetalon Meow to me! 03:49, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
Great job Sandy! Just darken the ear pink a little.--Darkhallows 14:32, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
Done Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 14:34, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
Comments before approval?--Darkhallows 15:45, January 9, 2010 (UTC)


