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Cedarheart(W)- Approved
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I know this is over the image limit but my two weeks are almost up and I asked Bramble about it and she said to put it up. That being said heres Cedarheart as a warrior. Comments?--AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 23:18, January 8, 2010 (UTC)
Pretty good ash!The shading seems to dark though,and i think it's odd how the shading stops at the neck line. ☮★Fire★☮ Starclan watchs over me★ 01:05, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
What do you mean by slopes?--AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 01:09, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
NVM. I redid the shading. Better or Worse?--AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 03:22, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
I think the shading is fine. Blur the ear pink a little more though--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 04:49, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded--AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 19:15, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
Comments before approval? --Icy-chan 22:13, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
Approved. Bramble-sama 21:58, January 10, 2010 (UTC)
Husker (Lo) - Approved Edit
Here he is again. So, Comments? ------Night whisker98Merry Leaf-bare! 19:42, December 29, 2009 (UTC)
Lighten the shading and darken ear pink. --IcyLet's Go 2010! 19:50, December 29, 2009 (UTC)
Do you mean the shading on his back? ------Night whisker98Merry Leaf-bare! 20:36, December 29, 2009 (UTC)
ReuploadedHow's this? ------Night whisker98Merry Leaf-bare! 20:40, December 29, 2009 (UTC)
No all the shading. The ear pink needs to be smaller and darker,. (I know I'm a pain) --IcyLet's Go 2010! 20:44, December 29, 2009 (UTC)
The back is still to dark. Maplefern 21:41, December 29, 2009 (UTC)
Reuploaded is this better? ------Night whisker98Merry Leaf-bare! 17:06, December 30, 2009 (UTC)
On his description on his page,it says he has a hay colored tuft of fur on his head,there is no hay colored tuft of fur on this chararts head. FirePelt 22:37, December 30, 2009 (UTC)
FirePelt, this was explained to me before, the mangas are gray, so we can't be sure that the tuft of fur on his head is hay-colored. Also some people make up fake descriptions for cats. If you want to see what Bramble said about that, check the Declined Section, for when it was temporarily declined. That said, do you see anything else wrong with the charart? ------Night whisker98Merry Leaf-bare! 01:14, December 31, 2009 (UTC)
Oh sorry!I can be so mouse-brained sometimes!^.^The backshading is still a little to dark.X FirePelt and a Firey new year!^.^ 21:23, January 1, 2010 (UTC)
It's OK FirePelt, I'll fix the shading...------Night whisker98Merry Leaf-bare! 00:13, January 2, 2010 (UTC)
I can barely see the ear pink. Lighten it a bit.--:) Mousetalon Meow to me! 00:07, January 5, 2010 (UTC)
While the tuft of fur on his head is not hay-colored, it is lighter. See Little Mew]'s page - he is described as a smaller copy of his father, Husker, and he has a light gray tuft of fur on his head. --★ Batwing ☽ ⋆Deputy⋆ 01:03, January 5, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded Anything else? ------Night whisker98Merry Leaf-bare! 21:24, January 7, 2010 (UTC)
Woah, he's mongo sized on my computer!--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 21:26, January 7, 2010 (UTC)
I saw that too Night (is it ok if i call you that?) I fixed it though. Any more comments? ------Night whisker98Merry Leaf-bare! 21:29, January 7, 2010 (UTC)
Yes that's fine if you call me that :) Okay, the gray on top of his head is way to light. Make it darker. Blur the shading on his back more (It looks a lot better though) And the shading on his tail, chest, front left leg, belly, and back left leg look too thin, I'd thicken and blur them if I were you. Also, the gray on his muzzle probably needs to be a smidge darker, and then blured more into the pelt--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 21:34, January 7, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded How's this? ------Night whisker98Merry Leaf-bare! 21:53, January 7, 2010 (UTC)
The shading is much better! But the lighter tuft of gray fur on his head looks too circular. Make it a little more irregular, like a patch of gray--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 21:57, January 7, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded Is it more irregular now? ------Night whisker98Merry Leaf-bare! 22:02, January 7, 2010 (UTC)
It needs to be blurred.--:) Mousetalon Meow to me! 04:11, January 8, 2010 (UTC)
ReuploadedI blurred The patch. ------Night whisker98Merry Leaf-bare! 20:26, January 8, 2010 (UTC)
It looks better! But I'd add some shading to the top of the head where the lighter gray fur is. Like, just connect it with the shading that stopped at the neck. Also, darken and blur the ear pink a little more--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 21:53, January 8, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded... Better? ----Nightwhisker98Rawr! 22:13, January 8, 2010 (UTC)
I really like it, but in the manga, it looked more like the lighter fur was sort of on top of his head, kinda on his forehead, between his ears? It looks a bit odd to me the way it is now, though if it looks okay to other people, then don't mind me XD ☛ⓘⓝⓢⓐⓝⓔⓤⓛⓐⓡ☚ 22:14, January 8, 2010 (UTC)
Which one do you guys like better?----Nightwhisker98Rawr! 22:19, January 8, 2010 (UTC)
I like the one on the right better. --Icy-chan 02:50, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
Yeah, the right one looks better to me too--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 03:08, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
Ok, I changed it to just the one on the right. Thanks for the opinion Night and Icy! ----Nightwhisker98Rawr! 14:20, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
Comments before approval? Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 13:21, January 10, 2010 (UTC)
YES! MY FIRST APPROVED CHARART! Soory about that, I left caps lock on... ----Nightwhisker98Rawr! 13:48, January 10, 2010 (UTC)
Congrats; approved. --Icy-chan ♥ 22:18, January 11, 2010 (UTC)
Thistleclaw (Ki)- ApprovedEdit
He was cuter and nicer as a kit.--NightshineHappy New Year! 03:27, January 4, 2010 (UTC)
Oooh, it's nice! But blur the shading some more, and blur the gray on his legs--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 03:28, January 4, 2010 (UTC)
Re-Uploaded I changed the gray on his legs. Is it better that way or the other way?--NightshineHappy New Year! 03:44, January 4, 2010 (UTC)
That looks great! But his white tipped tail looks too gray. Make it more pale--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 04:09, January 4, 2010 (UTC)
Re-Uploaded I made the tail tip paler--NightshineHappy New Year! 04:24, January 4, 2010 (UTC)
This is awsome Nightshine! I have nothing more to say however. It's so good! --SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 04:28, January 4, 2010 (UTC)
Thanks!--NightshineHappy New Year! 04:48, January 4, 2010 (UTC)
I thought I already reserved this? Evanphoto 12:24, January 4, 2010 (UTC)
You had it on your list first, if that's what you mean. What happens to matter is the fact that you either will let Nightshine keep the image as it's rather good, or want me to decline it because you want to do it. --Bramble-sama 23:05, January 4, 2010 (UTC)
So, what should I do? Evanphoto 00:31, January 5, 2010 (UTC)
You can either let Night keep the image up, and work on another, or you can ask for it to be declined and then you do it. Your choice. --Bramble-sama 00:47, January 5, 2010 (UTC)
Keep it Evanphoto 01:00, January 5, 2010 (UTC)
I think I reserved it first though...--NightshineHappy New Year! 01:02, January 5, 2010 (UTC)
Not to start a fight, and please don't take offence Nightshine, but Evanphoto did reserve this first. But that's very generous of you to let Nightshine keep the image! --NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 05:18, January 5, 2010 (UTC)
Did he? Sorry. Thanks for letting me keep it!--NightshineLet it snow! 06:09, January 5, 2010 (UTC)
Can I please do his apprentice image? Evanphoto 22:56, January 5, 2010 (UTC)
Oh, I already made the apprentice image and the kit picture of Sweetpaw...--NightshineLet it snow! 00:19, January 6, 2010 (UTC)
- Okay, take anything not relating to this image to your talk page and work it out between you. Back to the image: This is really good, but perhaps try and blur the edges of the white muzzle really carefully with a small brush, and darken the shading. Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 16:51, January 6, 2010 (UTC)
Re-Uploaded I darkened the shading and blurred the white muzzle some more.--NightshineLet it snow! 00:00, January 7, 2010 (UTC)
You might want to consider making the muzzle a wee bit lighter. It kinda looks like he needs to shave. Use less shading on the muzzle,like about 1-2 times.--Quail! Meow! 08:18, January 7, 2010 (UTC)
Re-Uploaded I lightened the muzzle--NightshineLet it snow! 03:50, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
Comments before approval? --Icy-chan 14:50, January 10, 2010 (UTC)
None; approved. --Icy-chan ♥ 22:18, January 11, 2010 (UTC)
Cherrytail (A)--Approved Edit
Here is Cherrytail. Take this down if it is too far over the limit, but since one is a discussion, I thought I'd be safe. My First Torotoiseshell. Comments? Snowfern Snow! 01:48, January 6, 2010 (UTC)
The tail needs to be blurred.--NightshineLet it snow! 02:09, January 6, 2010 (UTC)
So does the white on the paws.--:) Mousetalon Meow to me! 03:24, January 6, 2010 (UTC)
Okay, there is some lineart missing on the very top of the head, right where the ginger is. Please fix that--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 03:41, January 6, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Better? Snowfern Snow! 12:21, January 6, 2010 (UTC)
The tail still needs to be blurred--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 01:10, January 7, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded.How is it?Snowfern Snow! 21:47, January 7, 2010 (UTC)
It still doesn't look like the tail has been blured. Is there any shading on it? If not, you might want to add some--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 21:49, January 7, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded.I can't blur the tail without blurring the lineart. Snowfern Snow! 21:56, January 7, 2010 (UTC)
Just select the line art, "cut" it (Control-x or Apple-x if you have a mac), then make a new layer, and paste it on that layer. Then you can blur the color without blurring the lineart all you want, though it may blur in from the edges, so you might need to blur, then touch up. ★Insane Batteries not Included 00:13, January 8, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded. How is it? Snowfern Snow!21:34, January 8, 2010 (UTC)
File:Cherrytail Diagram.png In red, I have circled places that looked odd to me. Like, they wern't effected at all by the shading, or when you blurred them. In blue, I've circled a place that needs to be blurred. Okay and lastly, her face is too pale ginger, try darkening the highlights there, just a little bit--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 03:18, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
Try smudging the tail to give it the same affect as the overall body.--AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 13:54, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Snowfern Snow! 13:59, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
Comments before approval? --Icy-chan 14:49, January 10, 2010 (UTC)
None; approved. --Icy-chan ♥ 22:18, January 11, 2010 (UTC)
Feathertail (A)--Approved Edit
Here's Feathertail as an apprentice. Feel free to take this down, but there are 3 image in the 24 hour-stage. First tabby up for approval. Comments? Snowfern Snow! 14:53, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
It looks good! Just blur the markings a bit more--NightshineLet it snow! 16:13, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
Teh tabby marks need to be thicker. --IcestormI LIKE TACO BELL!!! 20:49, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Better? Snowfern Snow! 21:40, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
Yep. But there is extra lineart on his leg that is bothering me. Is that apart of the lineart? --IcestormI LIKE TACO BELL!!! 21:45, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
I opened the blank and it was always there. Not sure if it is normally like that. Snowfern Snow! 21:53, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
Yes, it's always like that... not sure why but it is ^_^ Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 23:12, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
I don't know either.... Anyway, any other comments? Snowfern Snow! 23:23, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
I'd darken the tabby stripes a little, like on her warrior image--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 23:31, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Better? Snowfern Snow! 23:40, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
Yep :) But add a stripe to to both of her back legs, they look kind of bare--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 23:51, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Better? Snowfern Snow! 01:31, January 10, 2010 (UTC)
Comments before approval? --Icy-chan 16:50, January 10, 2010 (UTC)
None; approved. --Icy-chan ♥ 22:18, January 11, 2010 (UTC)
Bluestar(Q)- Approved Edit
I know I'm above the limit, but there are several up for approval, and whenever I wait, more get posted. So here she is. My first queen! Comments?--:) Mousetalon Meow to me! 16:37, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
This looks great, Mousetalon:) The ear pink looks too much like a hot pink, though. Make it a salmon color instead. --Hд₩₭₮д£O₦ 17:25, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
Um, I used Bluestar's leader image for reference, and copied the color from there . . . should I still fix it?--:) Mousetalon Meow to me! 18:02, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
Make the fur lighter around her muzzle and the tip of her tail.--NightshineLet it snow! 18:22, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
Oh, well never mind what I said, then^^ And Nightshine, it was agreed that Bluestar got her silver muzzle and tail tip later in life due to age, so she didn't have them when she was a queen. --Hд₩₭₮д£O₦ 18:54, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
Okay. I guess that would make sense. She looks a little too blue to me though.--NightshineLet it snow! 19:57, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
She does look to blue.Pull up her leader image and get the color from it. ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ Have a happy Valentineღ 20:49, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
I did.--:) Mousetalon Meow to me! 21:04, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
I think it looks fine. It's excatly the same color as her leader image--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 21:49, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
Well, besides that, is there anything else I need to do?--:) Mousetalon Meow to me! 22:54, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
The eye looks a bit strange...make it look like Lilyfur, Robinwing (TC), Ferncloud, or on my tutorials. --Icy-chan 23:06, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
I did it like your tutorials, Icethroat.--:) Mousetalon Meow to me! 23:12, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
On her left eye (the one on our right), you were off on the black pixels by one, it needs to go over one to the left, so that there's two vertical on the right. (Does that make any sense? If not, I'll try to explain it better but I'm not sure if I can or not...) --Icy-chan 23:37, January 9, 2010 (UTC)d
I think a simpler way to put it would be, just move the left eye pixel one space to the left--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 00:06, January 10, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded Ta-da!--:) Mousetalon Meow to me! 01:15, January 10, 2010 (UTC)
Much better!--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 01:32, January 10, 2010 (UTC)
I thought I reserved Bluestar? NVM. --Happy New Year!09 02:07, January 10, 2010 (UTC)
Comments before approval? Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 13:16, January 10, 2010 (UTC)
None; approved. --Icy-chan ♥ 22:18, January 11, 2010 (UTC)
Yellowfang (Ro) - Approved Edit
I've got Rock ready as well, but since there are quite some images up, with some in the 24 hour stage, I thought that it would be all right. If it isn't decline/withdraw/whatever this. I don't think I got the scars quite right. I tried to do it looking at the medicine cat version.GrayravenpawScourge • Redtail • Bluestar • Tigerstar • Crookedstar • Graystripe 06:35, December 30, 2009 (UTC)
- Well done with jag :) as for the scars I would try and make them go all the way to the line art (like in the warrior charart) but not the one over the eye. The ear pink is red thats right for a black cat, but on her other charart it's pink, I'm not saying you should make this one pink as well but it's something to think of and maybe make this one have pink or the other one have red. and don't forgot that we are trying to make so all the pages have a charart not just one having lots, but seeing you have made this I think it would be good to get it approved, but them try and find pages with no charart. Brambleclaw14 Talk 08:53, December 30, 2009 (UTC)
- My mistake. I intended to say that I tried to do it by looking at the medicine cat version. btw, the eye is orange. GrayravenpawScourge • Redtail • Bluestar • Tigerstar • Crookedstar • Graystripe 12:23, December 30, 2009 (UTC)
Actually, Brambleclaw, if you look at the purple message, we are now allowed to do non-current ranks. As for the image, just blur the highlights. --Happy New Year!09 15:24, December 30, 2009 (UTC)
I can't see the eye all that well. Maybe pick a lighter orange for it? The one you picked it pretty dark. --Quiet!... 21:48, December 30, 2009 (UTC)
Reuploaded.GrayravenpawScourge • Redtail • Bluestar • Tigerstar • Crookedstar • Graystripe 04:40, December 31, 2009 (UTC)
oops Brambleclaw14 Talk 06:33, December 31, 2009 (UTC)
- hmm...why did you say the eye is orange? :/ Brambleclaw14 Talk 17:33, January 2, 2010 (UTC)
the eye is orange on this. I thought you said the eye is red, my mistake again.GrayravenpawScourge • Redtail • Graystripe • Cinderpelt 04:46, January 4, 2010 (UTC)
- OK Brambleclaw14 Talk 13:13, January 4, 2010 (UTC)
I think the scars are done well, but something is bugging me about the highlight on the stomach, it looks a bit awkward... ★Insane Batteries not Included 00:01, January 7, 2010 (UTC)
ReUpLoAdEd. GoT bOrEd WiTh NoRmAl CaSeS (lOl)GrayravenpawScourge • Redtail • Graystripe • Cinderpelt 09:26, January 7, 2010 (UTC)
Make the highlights a little less bright. --Icy-chan 21:34, January 7, 2010 (UTC)
rEuPlOaDeD. lolGrayravenpawScourge • Redtail • Graystripe • Cinderpelt 11:34, January 8, 2010 (UTC)
Blur the highlights more, and this should probably be ready--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 03:24, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded.GrayravenpawScourge • Redtail • Graystripe • Cinderpelt 13:49, January 10, 2010 (UTC)
Anything more, or is it good enough?– – Grayravenpaw – – Scourge • Redtail • Graystripe • Cinderpelt 08:56, January 12, 2010 (UTC)
Not that I can see. Comments before approval? --Hд₩₭₮д£O₦ 20:06, January 12, 2010 (UTC)
Approved. Bramble-sama 22:47, January 13, 2010 (UTC)
Graystripe (D) - ApprovedEdit
There are some images in the 24hour stage, so...Evanphoto 18:30, January 3, 2010 (UTC)
Try and make it look a bit more like Graystripe's other images, maybe? (Lighten the body color and leave a dark strip of fur on the spine) other than that, it looks good. ★Insane Batteries not Included 18:34, January 3, 2010 (UTC)
I added "For Approaval" on the title, don't forget that next time.--:) Mousetalon Meow to me! 18:47, January 3, 2010 (UTC)
I agree with Insane, you need to darken the stripe like on his warrior image. --★ Batwing ☽ ⋆Deputy⋆ 18:49, January 3, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded Evanphoto 18:56, January 3, 2010 (UTC)
You dont need to upload a new image each time. Just upload over the old one, it helps save space.--AshshadowRawr :3 18:59, January 3, 2010 (UTC)
Evanphoto 19:10, January 3, 2010 (UTC)
Ash is right, and the stripe still isn't quite thick enough--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 19:19, January 3, 2010 (UTC)
Reupload Evanphoto 19:25, January 3, 2010 (UTC)
Yeah, that's a lot better. Thicken the shading more--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 19:36, January 3, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded Evanphoto 19:42, January 3, 2010 (UTC)
Make his base color and eye color a little bit lighter and it'll be perfect! WoodClan 21:45, January 3, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded Evanphoto 22:10, January 3, 2010 (UTC)
I've moved your image to the top of the section, it should always be uploaded up there. As for the image, blur the ear pink--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 22:53, January 3, 2010 (UTC)
All of the shading seems a bit dark, and the stripe wouldn't run down his tail if it's on his back. --★ Batwing ☽ ⋆Deputy⋆ 23:28, January 3, 2010 (UTC)
Acually, on his warrior image the tail does run to his tail. But your right about the shading. When I said thicken it, I meant make it bigger.--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 23:34, January 3, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded Evanphoto 23:39, January 3, 2010 (UTC)
Okay, now make the shading bigger, especially on the haunches. Look at some approved chararts for reference. Here are a few examples, but there are lots of different ways to do shading--- Berrynose Rippletail Rainfur--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 23:43, January 3, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded Evanphoto 00:32, January 4, 2010 (UTC)
Yeah, that looks better. But the middle of the pelt looks kinda bumpy. Try just taking the blur tool, and blur it all around the pelt. Be careful not to hit the lineart though--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 03:15, January 4, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded Evanphoto 12:36, January 4, 2010 (UTC)
That is much better! The shading on the haunches isn't touching the lineart in some places, though. Fix that--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 20:50, January 4, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded Evanphoto 21:31, January 4, 2010 (UTC)
Now the shading is uneven. Highlights need to be on the shoulder as well.--:) Mousetalon Meow to me! 00:02, January 5, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded Evanphoto 00:30, January 5, 2010 (UTC)
Awsome. But make the part of the stripe on his tail thicker--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 22:15, January 5, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded Anything else? Evanphoto 22:59, January 5, 2010 (UTC)
Good job. I think the highlights look a bit smudgy, can you blur them some more--AshshadowRawr :3 23:21, January 5, 2010 (UTC)
Reupload Evanphoto 23:53, January 5, 2010 (UTC)
The highlights on his shoulder look . . . concentrated. Could you make them broader, like on Oatwhisker (TC)?--:) Mousetalon Meow to me! 00:40, January 7, 2010 (UTC)
I second Mousey, and blur them a lot. I mean a lot.--NewYearPath Fireworks! Poof... 21:24, January 7, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded Evanphoto 23:13, January 7, 2010 (UTC)
Maybe add a small highlight above the one on his shoulder? Just a smallish one, not that bright--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 05:05, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded Evanphoto 13:07, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
Well, anythig else? Evanphoto 12:12, January 11, 2010 (UTC)
Make the eye more like his warrior image. --IcestormI LIKE TACO BELL!!! 12:56, January 11, 2010 (UTC)
Reupload Evanphoto 22:54, January 11, 2010 (UTC)
Comments before approval? This looks great. Bramble-sama 23:41, January 11, 2010 (UTC)
Approved. Bramble-sama 22:54, January 13, 2010 (UTC)
Wing (KM) - Approved Edit
-shrugs- I could be prouder. The mudstreaks didn't really turn out how I wanted them to. Anyway, here's Wing Shadow over Water as a kit-mother! Sandy said I could use the queen blanks. Comments? --★ Batwing ☽ ⋆Deputy⋆ 23:24, January 3, 2010 (UTC)
Try doing the mud streaks thicker. Snowfern Snow!00:02, January 4, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded - Thickened mud streaks. Nice siggie Maple. ;) --★ Batwing ☽ ⋆Deputy⋆ 00:58, January 4, 2010 (UTC)
Blur the mud streaks some more. --Icy-chan 22:32, January 4, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded - Blurred mudsteaks. --★ Batwing ☽ ⋆Deputy⋆ 23:57, January 4, 2010 (UTC)
There's a spot on her haunch where it looks like there are highlights. They need to be blurred, it looks unnatural.--:) Mousetalon Meow to me! 00:16, January 5, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded - Blurred haunch shading. --★ Batwing ☽ ⋆Deputy⋆ 00:55, January 5, 2010 (UTC)
This is really good! But blur the highlights on the head, tail, and belly.--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 22:14, January 5, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded - Blurred highlights. --★ Batwing ☽ ⋆Deputy⋆ 22:53, January 5, 2010 (UTC)
Blur the gray part on her front right leg. It looks to straight and even--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 20:59, January 8, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded - I blurred and smudged it all a bit. Better? --★ Batwing ☽ ⋆Deputy⋆ 22:59, January 8, 2010 (UTC)
Yeah. Add some shading to the neck (on the white fur), and then this should be good. --Icy-chan 00:51, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded - Darkened neck shading. Better? --★ Batwing ☽ ⋆Deputy⋆ 19:40, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
Add some shading to the back ear and then this should be good. --Icy-chan ♥ 21:52, January 10, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded - Better? --ßąէωïиց 23:26, January 10, 2010 (UTC)
Yah; comments before approval? --Icy-chan ♥ 22:44, January 11, 2010 (UTC)
Approved. Bramble-sama 22:57, January 13, 2010 (UTC)
Snaketail_(FQ)~ Approved Edit
well this should be within 35 by later today or tomorrow. If it's to far over the limit please feel free to take it down. Comments?--AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 21:04, January 10, 2010 (UTC)
This looks awesome! The only thing I see is that there's a white pixel in between some of the lineart of the long fur, just color that in and then this should be good. --Icy-chan ♥ 21:48, January 10, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded? I dont think the change showed. Thank you Icy, I might actually be able to stick with this style.--AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 22:06, January 10, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded again The changes never showed up last time.--AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 20:36, January 11, 2010 (UTC)
Blur the ear pink a bit more ----Nightwhisker98Rawr! 22:25, January 11, 2010 (UTC)
Awesome. But the ear pink needs lightened/blurred. ßąէωïиց 20:48, January 12, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded--AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 01:03, January 13, 2010 (UTC)
Comments before approval? --Icy-chan ♥ 22:16, January 13, 2010 (UTC)
Approved. Bramble-sama 22:12, January 14, 2010 (UTC)
Clawface (R) Approved Edit
I've been pretty busy for a while, and I just remembered that I have this image that I've been waiting to put on here after the number died down. So here ya go!--Shaf Girl 02:05, December 28, 2009 (UTC)
The shading is WAY to dark.Also,make the ear pink smaller and blur,blur,blur!The line art on one of the legs seems fuzzy. FirePelt 03:48, December 28, 2009 (UTC)
Firepelt, you tell her to blur more.. Then say that the lineart is already blurred? That's not too helpful. :\ Anywho, back to the image. The shading isn't all that bad, just blur it in more and it should thin out(make it lighter/more blended). The ear pink should be a bit smaller, fix that by using a brush tool or the eraser(depending on whether or not you put it on a new layer). Also, the lineart on parts of the legs did get blurred. Also, though it might just be me, it seems as though you forgot to color his eye? --Quiet!... 04:22, December 28, 2009 (UTC)
No,I mean try to Blur the shading.Not the lineart.She needs to FIX the lineart. FirePelt 04:27, December 28, 2009 (UTC)
I never said to blur the lineart.. --Quiet!... 04:30, December 28, 2009 (UTC)
No,I meant the Lineart LOOKS blurred.I said htat. FirePelt 04:44, December 28, 2009 (UTC)
Whatever you said.....which leg?--Shaf Girl 04:49, December 28, 2009 (UTC)
The back front leg. FirePelt 15:45, December 28, 2009 (UTC)
Reuploaded. His eye is colored, Quietstep.--Shaf Girl 19:52, December 31, 2009 (UTC)
Any more comments?--Shaf Girl 17:37, January 3, 2010 (UTC)
With all the shading on his body, maybe add a little to the top of his head? It just looks kinda barren up there. Especially since the ear farthest from us has shading--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 18:53, January 3, 2010 (UTC)
Alright. Sorry I haven't been working on this, I have finals coming up and I'm very busy so please don't take it down.--Shaf Girl 05:04, January 8, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded.--Shaf Girl 04:57, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
Much better :) Make the ear pink bigger though, look at these rogues for help-- Snowy, Stick--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 05:00, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
But Quietstep said to make it smaller. *is confused*--Shaf Girl 01:11, January 10, 2010 (UTC)
The earpink looks fine on my computer. Just blend the shading and try and get a smoother line and this will be ready Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 17:33, January 10, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded.--Shaf Girl 01:17, January 11, 2010 (UTC)
Sorry about that Shaf girl. I think this is ready :)--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 01:22, January 11, 2010 (UTC)
Comments before approval? --Bramble-sama 23:25, January 13, 2010 (UTC)
Approved. Bramble-sama 22:19, January 14, 2010 (UTC)
Graypool (Q)- Approved Edit
There are a few images up for approval, if I'm too far up go on and decline . . . well, do I need to add scars? Because she was an elder with scars and such, but was she a queen with scars? Hm . . . comments?--Møųşëţąłőʼn!! 03:49, January 12, 2010 (UTC)
This is very nice Mousetalon! But the eyes look very strange, could you maybe do them like these? Splashnose, Lilyfur--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 04:42, January 12, 2010 (UTC)
This is great! I don't think you need to add scars.--Nightshine ★ 04:50, January 12, 2010 (UTC)
Yeah, Nightshine's right about scars. I bet she got those after she left the nursery--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 05:31, January 12, 2010 (UTC)
The eyes do look a bit strange. Make them like in Icethroat's tutorials, or like Nightfall said. The highlights and the tail and face could be blurred a bit more. ßąէωïиց 20:39, January 12, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded Anything else?--Møųşëţąłőʼn!! 00:23, January 13, 2010 (UTC)
There is a random black line near her face. She's really good.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 21:33, January 13, 2010 (UTC)
Yeah, that was a result of my suckish typing.Møųşëţąłőʼn!! 00:07, January 14, 2010 (UTC)
Comments before approval? --Icy-chan ♥ 03:02, January 14, 2010 (UTC)
Approved. Bramble-sama 23:08, January 15, 2010 (UTC)
Thornclaw- Approved Edit
Since there are three discussions, I decided to post this. But if need be, I can take it down. =) Comments? --HoneyfurBob's Your Uncle! 22:24, January 11, 2010 (UTC)
Darken the ear pink a little bit. --Icy-chan ♥ 23:05, January 11, 2010 (UTC)
The eyes look a little strange. Is there any white in them?--Nightshine ★ 01:19, January 12, 2010 (UTC)
Nice tabby stripes! But, make the eye like on Squirrelflight's apprentice image, or Jayfeather's medicine cat apprentice picture. There's also a highlight by the front leg closest to us that looks like it needs blurred. ßąէωïиց 20:42, January 12, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded. How's this? --HoneyfurBob's Your Uncle! 23:56, January 13, 2010 (UTC)
Comments before approval? --Icy-chan ♥ 03:05, January 14, 2010 (UTC)
Approved. Bramble-sama 23:18, January 15, 2010 (UTC)
Kittypet Blanks - Approved Edit
[[File:Sharpclaw Blanks FemaleShort.png]][[File:Sharpclaw Blanks MaleShort.png]][[File:Sharpclaw Blanks FemaleLong.png]][[File:Sharpclaw Blanks MaleLong.png]] [IMAGES RELOCATED]
((Well, I figured because there are a few images on 24 hours that this would be alright to post.. If not, please decline/withdraw/whatever this!)) I've been waiting a while to try doing a blank set, and I finally got my chance. (: I tried to make it so there are no odd pixels(ones you'd miss with the fill tool). What do you guys see that needs to be fixed/changed? --Quiet!... 00:09, December 29, 2009 (UTC)
I like them,but the mouth seems,odd to me.Here,I'll add a pic of when I saved this for a tester cat.I did'nt want to get all into detail,but I wanted to see how it would fill in,and how the shading would look.I think they look ok.I'll check them over some more. FirePelt 00:20, December 29, 2009 (UTC)
Actually, only the left ear should need pink. The right ear is facing the side, but both can have pink, I guess. As for the mouth, how does it seem odd to you? I might be able to fix it. --Quiet!... 00:38, December 29, 2009 (UTC)
These look pretty good, but the tuft of hair, make it just a straight line (well, curved along the head line, but not with the extra fur) on the shorthairs, kind of like on the cave-guard blanks where the tuft of fur is only on the longhairs. --Icethroat21Happy New Years! 01:05, December 29, 2009 (UTC)
They seem a little too chubby for a sharpclaw. They look more like kittypet blanks to me (not a bad thing, though, seeing as we need those).--Shaf Girl 01:41, December 29, 2009 (UTC)
Reuploaded the short haired blanks. Shaf, its probably because their belly isn't visible at all. Its hidden behind their hip and front leg. --Quiet!... 01:47, December 29, 2009 (UTC)
This might just be me and not matter but it's hard to put tabby stripes on these. Again I dont think they're any tabby sharpclaws.--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 03:12, December 29, 2009 (UTC)
Reuploading right now because I forgot their whiskers.. >.< --Quiet!... 06:47, December 29, 2009 (UTC)
Three tabbys in the ancients: Stone song, Furled Bracken and Jay's wing.
this is Beutiful! --Echopaw 14:27, December 29, 2009 (UTC)
This is great, Quiet! Just make the ears a bit smaller, and the chest on the longhairs kind of look wierd... --♪ Ravenstar ♫ :P 16:35, December 29, 2009 (UTC)
Okay, I made an example for the shorthaired blank. If you color the nose black, it looks strange. I also used a different style for the eyes.--:) Mousetalon Meow to me! 17:34, December 29, 2009 (UTC)
(M) - Wow, the lineart is really smooth. Do you have a tablet?
Anyways, the only things are that the eyes and mouth look slightly twisted, the shoulder should be brought in a bit, and there's a thick black spot. I made you a diagram to help explain.
Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 20:39, December 29, 2009 (UTC)
Okay, I understand the shoulder, but why the jaw and eyes? Their heads are tilted slightly, and putting their jaw and eyes completely straight up would be awkward. :\ As for the thick spot, I'll see what I can do.. --Quiet!... 01:06, December 30, 2009 (UTC)
(M) - Oh, I didn't relize that their heads were turned. *Fail* Nevermind. Oh, also shorten the wiskers on the right side a bit. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 01:29, December 30, 2009 (UTC)
This are so awsome Quiet! But, they look soooo cudly! A little too cudly for Sharpclaw blanks however. If you put a collar on these, they'd make PERFECT Kittypet blanks! Oh well. But for the blanks themselves, I think the eyes might be a little bit difficult to do. I mean, I don't know since I haven't colored one yet. But they look a little big. Maybe make the eyes a little more like the ones on the Cave Guard blanks?--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 03:11, December 31, 2009 (UTC)
I made an example of one. You should make the ear bigger and fix what Mosswhisker and Sleathfire said. --IcyLet's Go 2010! 17:47, December 31, 2009 (UTC)
No more examples; it's already been determined these blanks can be used. However, as two other users have commented, they look much more like kittypets than sharpclaws. The ones Lonewolf97 has up at the moment haven't been worked on for a while, and he can't even have them up; he hasn't had any approved yet, so he's only allowed to have one image up; Stonestar. Would you please consider changing these to kittypet blanks? --Bramble-sama 19:05, December 31, 2009 (UTC)
Please please please? All you'd have to do is add a collar--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 21:55, December 31, 2009 (UTC)
These would make excellent Kittypet blanks,Quietstep.I think you should tske this into though,it's easy to do the collar. FirePelt 00:20, January 1, 2010 (UTC)
Sorry, been a bit busy last two days. XD; Yeah, I can make them into kittypet blanks. --Quiet!... 18:20, January 1, 2010 (UTC)
Yay! *starts cabbage patch dance*--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 20:20, January 1, 2010 (UTC)
Yeah. yours are WAYYYYYYYYYY better than mine. Wayyyy better. Mine stinks. I really like the pose! --~Lonewolf~ 21:32, January 1, 2010 (UTC)
Yeah, the look totally says, "Pet me, I'm adorable!"--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 21:42, January 1, 2010 (UTC)
Thank you for agreeing!They do look adorable! FirePeltDONT mess with me. 03:46, January 2, 2010 (UTC)
hmm..i changed the boldface for you.i love this!!--*Ivy spring!!* 07:43, January 2, 2010 (UTC)
I think if you add the collar it will be ready to go! (in my mind i would think) -Shinestar i didn't put my siggie cause i am logged on to my sis's account so ya.
Where's the collar Quiet? FirePeltHow's the prey running? 16:07, January 3, 2010 (UTC)
- Enough. Stop pestering - Quiet will get to it when he (?) has time to. This has only been sat here for two days without work or comment from the artist. Give people a chance to have their lives too. (Also - people's names are capitalised...) Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 17:33, January 3, 2010 (UTC)
I'ma she.. ;-; Anyway, I'm getting on it right now... And yes, I DO have a life outside of this Wiki. --Quiet!... 02:17, January 4, 2010 (UTC)
Wow these are adorable! Quiet, your a great artist. :) Anyway, just add a collar and make the eye a little smaller, and they should be good t go! HawkeyRawr! LOL 15:09, January 4, 2010 (UTC)
Hi Hawkey!--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 20:03, January 4, 2010 (UTC)
Aw!! So cute! The heads seems a tad too round on the short hairs. Maybe add a fur tuft or two?--Darkhallows 17:57, January 7, 2010 (UTC)
Sorry for not being able to get to these till now. Big Health Class project is due on Monday, was eating up quite a bit of my time. And Dark, I had some on them but was told to remove them from the short hairs. :\ --Quiet!... 21:28, January 8, 2010 (UTC)
I've removed the example images as they're taking up space. Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 21:45, January 8, 2010 (UTC)
I think the short hairs look fine :) Just do what Hawkfire said and these should be perfect!--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 21:50, January 8, 2010 (UTC)
Oh, OK. Maybe add a collar? They are pets.--Darkhallows 22:31, January 8, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded. And I knew to add a collar. It was only said five times now.. >.> --Quiet!... 22:32, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
These are sooo adorable!! Maybe thicken the collar's lineart? --★ Batwing ☽ ⋆Deputy⋆ 22:34, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
Darken the collor line art and change the file name from sharpclaw to kittypet please. ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ Have a happy Valentineღ 23:05, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
It's amazing overall, but you might want to darken the collar lines a bit so it's easier to see. --PabloDePablo 23:37, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
[[File:Cody.png]]i don't know pablo,i tried cody and it is good.--.--:) Ivy Hi there!! 03:27, January 13, 2010 (UTC)
I still think the collar lineart needs to be thickened. As opposed (Is that how you spell it?) to the rest of the lineart, it looks to thin.--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 06:41, January 13, 2010 (UTC)
I think the kittypet kits are just gorgous! Except, you should consider making some non- kittypet ones also...- 17Silverthistle
Silverthistle, what does that even mean? --NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 21:25, January 13, 2010 (UTC)
You know, like Clan kits. Without the collar, more Clan cat like? - 17Silverthistle
Here's one I made of Princess and Firestar. I like it!Nightshine ★ 02:17, January 14, 2010 (UTC)
My character, Millie as kittypet. 17silverthistle 02:56, January 14, 2010 (UTC)
Silverthistle, there already are kit blanks. And I don't really think we need any more examples, but these are really good :) NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 02:59, January 14, 2010 (UTC)
How do I get it on Millies page though? That was my whole purpose in the 1st place, and I was hoping Bramble and Icethroat (my mentor) would comment.17silverthistle 03:10, January 14, 2010 (UTC)
Woah, slow down! These blanks haven't even meen approved yet! And the mentor apprentice system is gone now. But we have to wait until Quietstep can thicken the lineart on the collar. Then you've got to reserve Millie's kittypet version, and then you can put her up for approval here. And please, for the second time, you've got to sign with the four ~ NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 03:12, January 14, 2010 (UTC)
heres my new smudge i made! this is a really good blanks Quiet!
I repeat, no more examples. The blanks have been proven to work. Now please stop pestering and only comment if it's something constructive about the images. Bramble-sama 22:16, January 14, 2010 (UTC)
I think they are perfect!--Nightshine ★ 00:30, January 15, 2010 (UTC)
I dont think the collar line art is that big of a problem, but thickening it wouldn't hurt.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 02:35, January 15, 2010 (UTC)
I'm pretty sure the collars are fine. If there are no other comments, consider these approved (There haven't been any comments besides about collars for the last 48 hours; no need to use the 24 hour call). Bramble-sama 23:17, January 15, 2010 (UTC)
So, can we use them? Evanphoto 00:54, January 16, 2010 (UTC)
Approved. Yes they can be used, but please no arguments over characters and please don't flood the page - normal limit applies. Thank you Quiet =) These are great Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 15:02, January 16, 2010 (UTC)
Runningstorm (W) - Approved Edit
- Mufufu, Insane returns to PCA >D I know this is pushing the limit even with a ton about to be approved, but I haven't done charart in AGEEESSS, and other people have been posting stuff too, so... yeah :P I tried to make it look as much like the kit version as I could, but I admit I am a bit out of practice. Comments?? ☛ⓘⓝⓢⓐⓝⓔⓤⓛⓐⓡ☚ 16:05, January 10, 2010 (UTC)
I don't remember the description saying he had a cream chest. HawkeyRawr! LOL 16:08, January 10, 2010 (UTC)
I know, but his kit version had that, so I put it on this one. ☛ⓘⓝⓢⓐⓝⓔⓤⓛⓐⓡ☚ 16:09, January 10, 2010 (UTC)
Noo... his kit version doesn't have a cream chest either. HawkeyRawr! LOL 16:10, January 10, 2010 (UTC)
I took the colors exactly from his kit version. It does have a patch of lighter fur going from the chest to the muzzle. ☛ⓘⓝⓢⓐⓝⓔⓤⓛⓐⓡ☚ 16:12, January 10, 2010 (UTC)
He has a highlight on his chest, but that's it. Take off the cream chest, and replace it with a highlight. HawkeyRawr! LOL 16:13, January 10, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded I dunno, I kinda liked the way it looked with the lighter chest, but... I removed it now. ☛ⓘⓝⓢⓐⓝⓔⓤⓛⓐⓡ☚ 16:19, January 10, 2010 (UTC)
I agree with Insaneular. It looked like a cream chest on the kit charart to me too.--AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 16:33, January 10, 2010 (UTC)
The changes aren't showing up, but I clicked on the image itself and could see the changes in the thumbnail, so make the ear pink more of a reddish color, and if the changes still don't show up try uploading a new file under Runningstorm.W.png or Runningstorm.warrior.png and put {{Delete}} on the old file. (I think, that's what I saw Sandy say somewhere...I think that's what you do...) --Icy-chan 17:25, January 10, 2010 (UTC)
lol, yeah. Find a new file name and mark the old one to be deleted - saves Bramble and I having to go through the unused files deleting them later - did you know that there were about 700 before we went through them recently? (I actually forget how many times I marked an image with the delete tag...) That was a fun job =) Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 17:27, January 10, 2010 (UTC)
Alright, it should be the newer one now. I still liked the lighter chest though, Plain tabbies look so... plain XD But I suppose we can't put in things it doesn't say. And, Icethroat, I used the ear pink color from the kit image, so I thought this would be okay? (even though it is a bit pale) ☛ⓘⓝⓢⓐⓝⓔⓤⓛⓐⓡ☚ 18:15, January 10, 2010 (UTC)
Great! Just blur all the shading. ßąէωïиց 20:50, January 12, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded made ear pink a bit more pink and blurred more... ☛ⓘⓝⓢⓐⓝⓔⓤⓛⓐⓡ☚ 01:01, January 13, 2010 (UTC)
Comments before approval? --Icy-chan ♥ 22:12, January 15, 2010 (UTC)
None; approved. --Hд₩₭₮д£O₦ 18:12, January 16, 2010 (UTC)
Mothflight (W) Approved Edit
Second Charart! Yay! Well I decided to do Mothflight as a warrior now that were aloud to put up non current ranks again. I tried to do the shading but it would never show up! Please help! Comments? BlackyOMG 2010 IS ON IT'S WAY! 19:59, December 31, 2009 (UTC)
Make it a pale grey (not too grey but a bit grey)so the shading will be visible. Happy New Year! 20:13, December 31, 2009 (UTC)
Aww your off already! I agree with Maplefern. --IcyLet's Go 2010! 20:16, December 31, 2009 (UTC)
This hasn't been worked on in more than a week. Please work on it or it will be declined. It should have been declined by now. As for the image, there's some blurred lineart by the ear. --★ Batwing ☽ ⋆Deputy⋆ 19:23, January 6, 2010 (UTC)
Relax, she has till tomorrow before the week limit is up, and after that we give her another 24 hours, then decline it if there's no response. --Bramble-sama 00:05, January 7, 2010 (UTC)
i'm sorry. My computer was sooooo slow. I uploaded the new one. BlackyOMG 2010 IS ON IT'S WAY! 02:23, January 7, 2010 (UTC)
Umm, I like the old one better--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 03:38, January 7, 2010 (UTC)
Okay, the ear pink is too dark and needs blending in a little, I can't see any colour in the eye - perhaps change it if it's already there; if it is, my apologies - , and the shading looks too dark. Blend the chest, back and haunch shading and get rid of the smudgy grey marks around the midriff. The tail has too much shading - just a single line along the bottom edge is enough - then blend. Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 13:18, January 7, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded. I'll wait a little while for the changes to show up. BlackyOMG 2010 IS ON IT'S WAY! 23:07, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
Blur the shading some more.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 22:09, January 13, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded. anything else? BlackyOMG 2010 IS ON IT'S WAY! 03:09, January 16, 2010 (UTC)
There's a little line of blurred lineart on the top of her ear NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 03:10, January 16, 2010 (UTC)
reuploaded. anything else? BlackyOMG 2010 IS ON IT'S WAY! 03:16, January 16, 2010 (UTC)
CBA? Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 14:57, January 16, 2010 (UTC)
None; approved. --Hд₩₭₮д£O₦ 18:06, January 17, 2010 (UTC)
Sheer path beside water fall (CG)-Approved Edit
I am having a difficult time with the mud stripes,seeing if I try and make them more red,I'd have to re-do the entire image because of there postioin.Anyways,Questions?Help?Comments?Critque? FirePeltHow's the prey running? 20:21, January 6, 2010 (UTC)
Well, first of all his nose pink is way to bright. Make it the same color as his ear pink--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 20:23, January 6, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded.Anything else? FirePeltHow's the prey running? 20:39, January 6, 2010 (UTC)
He looks a bit too dark. Lighten him a little bit. --Hд₩₭₮д£O₦ 21:37, January 6, 2010 (UTC)
His description is a Dark brown tabby tom Im just making him the color I often see for dark brown tabbys.Actally,he's a little lit for dark brown. FirePeltRAWRZ!!!! 21:45, January 6, 2010 (UTC)
The tabby stripes are too thick. Snowfern Snow! 22:57, January 6, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded.Anything else?I fixed the tabby stripes. FirePeltRAWRZ!!!! 21:39, January 7, 2010 (UTC)
Maybe add a few more stripes.--AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 20:34, January 8, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded.I added some more tabby stripes.I made one coming from his eye,seeing as I see alot of tabbys that have that,how does the eye stripe look?oh,and,anything else? ☮★Fire★☮ Starclan watchs over me★ 22:09, January 8, 2010 (UTC)
I think the eye stripe looks cool. As for the image blur the stripes and mud some more.--AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 23:31, January 8, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded.Thank you Ash about the eye stripe! ^.^ ☮★Fire★☮ Starclan watchs over me★ 23:36, January 8, 2010 (UTC)
The mud looks like patches, not streaks, giving the appearance of a tortie. Can you make them more... streaky?--Darkhallows 14:41, January 9, 2009
Reuploaed.Anything else? ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ Have a happy Valentineღ 23:31, January 9, 2010 (UTC)
Not that I can see. Comments before approval? --Hд₩₭₮д£O₦ 18:09, January 16, 2010 (UTC)
