Berrynose(KI)- Approved


This is my 2nd Kit.It was gathering dust in my files,and finally we are allowed to do non-current ranks.I know im the 2nd image over the limit,but I think there 4 images ready to be approved.Critque?Comments?questions?help? FirePelt 22:32, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

blur shading and your NOT over page limit very good!--Echopaw 01:25, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded.thank you echopaw!I blurred the shading more.Anything else?And Echopaw,Please sign with 4 tidles(~). FirePelt 16:13, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Nothing it's purrfect firepelt lets let sandy look at it!Echopaw 16:47, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Thank you for the compliment.I can't wait for bramble or sandy to look at it.I am quite proud of myself.This took a while to make.I did my best!^.^. FirePelt 17:02, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Looks like your opinion is high value, Sand. ;) The ear pink needs to be darker and more visible, Fire. Other than that, the image looks great. --Bramble-sama 17:55, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

lol, no idea why =/ Anyways (see my Americanism there?), all I see, besides Bramble's mention above, is that the eyes ook very red. A paler, more yellowish amber may be better as the kits' eyes are too small to make orange visible properly. Sandy! 17:59, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Kk.I'll work on this soon. FirePelt 18:08, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Anything else?Thank you for the compliment Bramble!^.^ FirePelt Hows the prey running? 00:36, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

I think this looks good =) Comments before approval? Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 23:43, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, I absolutely positively HATE to point this out, but Berrynose's warrior image is long haired. Shouldn't this one be long haired too? --SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 21:48, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

I agree and also the color isn't quite right. --AshshadowRawr :3 21:56, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

So what your saying is,I have to REMAKE THE WHOLE THING??!! FirePeltDONT mess with me. 03:10, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

No, you don't. I can easily layer a longhaired blank over the image and fix it with minor changes to the original picture, and then all you'd have to do is run the burn tool (set on Highlights) over it a few times to make it look like the warrior version. --Bramble-sama 04:27, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

omg.Thank you bramble!Your a big help!I'll run the burn tool over him.thank you again! FirePeltDONT mess with me. 16:12, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.I did the best i could to fix it.How's it look? FirePeltDONT mess with me. 16:21, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Yep, that's much better. I'm sorry I scared you for a minute Fire! Okay, I'd blur the shading just a tinsy bit more. Good job!--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 17:37, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Lol.It's okay night.I'll fix the shading. FirePeltHow's the prey running? 17:44, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Anything else? FirePeltHow's the prey running? 17:47, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the neck shading. Happy New Year!18:10, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Done.Anything else? FirePeltHow's the prey running? 23:26, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

The eye color still isn't quite right. Make it more of an orangy color, like his warrior image---Berrynose --SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 05:16, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

I'm doing the best I can with the color,but it's getting harder to change it. FirePeltHow's the prey running? 15:08, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry Fire, I didn't mean to upset you! I'm just trying to go for consistency.--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 19:23, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

You did'nt upset me!XD.It's just it's getting harder to change the color and blend the new color in with thie shading,cause the new color is darker than the shading.I can't change it now without re-doing it. FirePeltHow's the prey running? 20:06, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Oh no, I didn't mean the pelt color, I meant the eye color--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 20:12, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Ohh!I'm a mousebrain!I did'nt read the eye color I though it was pelt color! FirePeltHow's the prey running? 20:39, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Anything else? FirePeltHow's the prey running? 20:41, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, the eye color is much better! I'd blur the shading more though.--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 22:55, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Dull the color a bit, it's too bright. Look at his warrior image.--:) Mousetalon Meow to me! 00:06, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

I'm having a really hard time with the color,but I just need to find the right tool for the job.Which tool do I use? FirePeltHow's the prey running? 21:45, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

Use the sponge tool and set it to desaturate.--:) Mousetalon Meow to me! 01:23, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Thank you mouse!Anything else? FirePeltHow's the prey running? 20:12, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

I think you shouls redo the shading. He looks kind of sunken in.--AshshadowRawr :3 22:37, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Anything else?Can anyone help me a bit with the shading if it's worse? FirePeltRAWRZ!!!! 21:50, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading under the chin some more. And on second thought, I liked the image you had of him before you changed it.ChelseaFC 23:03, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED.Anything else at at all? ☆ ★Fire★☆ X 23:41, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

the eyes look a little funny...--QuailflightTheAVATAR!Give me a mouse. NOW! 09:40, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

No, the eyes look fine. But maybe lighten the ear pink more? NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 18:42, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

Done! ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ Have a happy Valentineღ 22 21:15, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, I know you're probably tired of hearing this, but blur the chin shading as much as you possibly can. It looks like a line. But other than that, this looks awsome! NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 01:05, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Anything else?Thx for the comment Night! ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ Have a happy Valentineღ 22 17:03, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 22:05, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Sandy,Im half dead right now,whats CBA stand for? ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ Have a happy Valentineღ 22 22:08, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Lol, it stands for Comments Before Approval :) NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 22:13, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Thank you Night =) I'm too lazy (and bored of it) to type the whole thing... guess I should. Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 22:16, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

lol.I can tell.Told you im half dead! XD ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ Have a happy Valentineღ 22 22:17, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Lol. A. :) --Bramble-sama 16:17, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

Half Moon (TB) Approved

File:Half moon.png well some how would not upload blueh's one she fixed for me so heres the original --Echopaw 01:33, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Here you go, Echopaw. Again, please sign with four ~. --♪ Ravenstar ♫ :P 16:56, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

I doEchopaw 20:02, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

It doesnt look like you do.I can't even click on anything to go on your profile,so it doesnt seem like tidles are used.NONE of your comments are click able except for he one at the top of this message.PLEASE sign with 4 ~. FirePelt Hows the prey running? 20:07, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

Yes well on to the charart :) The ear pink should be in the middle of the ear.  Brambleclaw14 Talk 17:25, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED i hate saying that but any more? problems --Echopaw 18:45, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and shading and this should be good. --♪ Ravenstar ♫ :P 20:58, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED how's this? Echopaw 17:37, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

There's little gray marks floating around her. Clean those up.--♪Shimmerpool♫ 03:58, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Well... i try to do that but it dosen't wark so ya help me! Echopaw 02:41, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

Use the eraser tool.--Møųşëţąłőʼn!! 02:30, January 11, 2010 (UTC)

i do but it has a checkored backround so it's hard! Echopaw 21:31, January 11, 2010 (UTC)

Fill in the background and erase it again.--AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 22:12, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

There's no grey in the bg - I checked. I also softened the shading and blended the ear pink for you - hope you don't mind Echo, I just think it's about time this was approved ;) Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 22:21, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with you Sandy but I still see the gray. Maybe it's just me screen.--AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 02:15, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

I feel bad now - I found the grey and removed it for you Echo. It was my screen. Anyway, unless anyone has any other comments, I'm putting 24 hours on this =) Great job, Echo Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 12:02, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. --Icy-chan 16:17, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

Hareflight(W) - Approved

File:Hareflight(W).png I know this is wayover teh limit, but I've been waiting since new year's to post this up and each time I look there have been new images posted up. Feel free to take this out if it's way too much. Comments?Hidden-Valentine ღ 15:58, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

  • frowneth* This was MY image! But anyway, lighten it up a little. It looks dark brown. HawkeyRawr! LOL 16:01, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

The shoulder highlights look too bright. Maybe run the burn tool over a time or two? SwiftpeltHow's the prey running?

I'm taking by that Hawkey that you're happy for Hidden to use this image? Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 17:29, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

The shoulders look concentrated. Make them wider.--:) Mousetalon Meow to me! 23:53, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-is this better?Hidden-Valentine ღ 00:16, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

Much! Darken the shading on her paws farthest from us though. It will add some depth to it NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 01:54, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded-added more shading to the back legs.Hidden-Valentine ღ 03:20, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --Icy-chan 22:33, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble-sama 16:26, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

Speckletail (Q)- Approved

File:Speckletail (Q).png

There are many pictures about to be approved. I used the same colors as the Speckletail elder I made--NightshineLet it snow! 20:53, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

This is very good, Nightshine:) Blur the marking on the tail tip more, though. --Hд₩₭₮д£O₦ 22:01, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Blurred the tail tip.--NightshineLet it snow! 23:47, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink looks strange. Blur it more.--Møųşëţąłőʼn!! 00:45, January 11, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I redid the ear pink--NightshineLet it snow! 01:10, January 11, 2010 (UTC)

She looks great. (: Just blur the shading on the belly and tail. ßąէωïиց 20:49, January 12, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Blurred belly and tail--Nightshine 01:14, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

The highlight on her face and soulder is brighter than the one on her haunch. Other than that very good.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 21:37, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I added more highlight to the haunchNightshine 02:21, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

That very small part right on the back of her neck is bright when the spot next to it is dark. I'll try and clarify if you need me to :) NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 01:58, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I fixed the lighter part at the neck.--Nightshine 23:56, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

I can't see any problems. Comments before approval? Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 11:40, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. --Icy-chan 16:24, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

Smallstar (L)- Approved

File:Smallstar L.png Okay, I have been waiting for forever to put him up. He's been finished for like, three weeks. But, if you think this is to far over the limit then I'll take him down. But anyway, I got his coloring from his kit version. Comments?--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 00:54, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading on his leg? And make the ear pink smaller. WetstarTaylor Swift! 00:56, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I blurred the shading on his legs as much as I could. And as for the ear pink, it's excatly the same size as Sunstar's approved leader image--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 01:01, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

This is great! I love it!--Nightshine 01:08, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

On the black patch near his neck, the blurring seems kind of sudden. Blur it some more.--Møųşëţąłőʼn!! 03:38, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I blurred it, is it better?--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 06:39, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

The shading on the hind leg (haunch?) looks too dark, try lightening it some. (The hind leg with black fur.) --Icy-chan 22:23, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Is this better? I ran the dodge tool over the shading there a couple of times. NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 00:10, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

It looks better.Amybe dodge it just alittle more. ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ Have a happy Valentineღ 22 15:17, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

I think the color is okay. We don't want the highlight too bright.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 20:33, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

This looks great to me. Comments before approval? Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 11:38, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. --Icy-chan 16:32, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

Mothwing (MCA) - Approved

File:Mothwing(MCA).png So, it's Mothwing as a medicine cat apprentice. I tried to make the tabby stripes match her med cat version as much as I could. How does it look? ⓘⓝⓢⓐⓝⓔⓤⓛⓐⓡ 18:50, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

She's great! Just darken ear pink and make it taller and smaller. IcestormHi There! 18:52, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

I used the same ear pink from her Med cat version, so I thought this shade would be good? and by taller, you mean make it longer vertically? because it looks pretty big to me. I do know that the shape is a bit strange though, the ear pink for appretices always kills me. But it looks quite tall already...? ⓘⓝⓢⓐⓝⓔⓤⓛⓐⓡ 18:54, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Beautiful!! All I see is that one part of teh herb is really dark, maybe lightened it a little.Hidden-Valentine ღ 18:57, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Nevermind on the comment I posted. Just do what Hiddensun said and this should be good. :) IcestormHi There! 18:59, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded and lightened the herbs, per request. How's it look now? ⓘⓝⓢⓐⓝⓔⓤⓛⓐⓡ 19:02, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

She's awesome! Just blur the darker ear tip a bit.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 20:28, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I tried to blur it more, but there wasn't much more I could do. Anything else? ⓘⓝⓢⓐⓝⓔⓤⓛⓐⓡ 20:55, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 11:22, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble-sama 16:32, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

Mosspelt (Q) Approved

File:Mosspelt queen.png If this is too far over the page limit, then I'm very sorry and will be happy to take it down for a little longer. I got her markings from her warrior image, and, oddly enough Mosspelt's warrior image has green eyes instead of blue. Oh well. Comments?--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 03:24, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

This is soo beautiful i have no words to describe it!! Good job Nightfall!!Hidden-Valentine ღ 03:32, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks Hiddensun! That means a lot!--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 04:59, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

(M) - I did her warrior image. When I did it, her description said green eyes. After it was approved it was changed to blue eyes. I was going to change it but then I forgot. I'll go ahead and fix that.

As for your image, I see nothing wrong. Great job! Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 22:39, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks guys! And Moss, her warrior image was so good that I didn't even know her eyes were green until I pulled in up on pixlr. :) NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 22:45, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

(M) - *Purrs* I just fixed her; her eyes are now the correct blue. (Yay for the color replacement tool!) Thanks for reminding me! Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 22:51, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

I think this looks awesome, Nightfall, great job. Comments before approval? --Icy-chan 02:26, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. --Icy-chan 16:38, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

Healer Blanks - Approved

File:Healerlm3.png File:Healersm.png

There are a couple of images in the approval stage, so here are my healer blanks! I made two sets, because I wasn't sure which one looked better. The ones on the top have the regular leader tail, and the ones on the bottom have an altered one. I didn't leave the tails on the long-hairs the same. Credit goes to Melonlemon for making the leader blanks, which I modified these off of. --Happy New Year!09 17:37, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

SO CUTE!!! LOVE IT! Echopaw 17:38, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Can't really tell the males and females apart . . . wait, are there males and females?--:) Mousetalon Meow to me! 17:47, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

These are really good!! I personally like the top ones, but the bottom ones are good too. --★ Batwing ☽ ⋆Deputy⋆ 17:56, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

There really good.I like them.They look alot like the leader blanks!The tail and some other things are diff though,there really good. FirePeltHow's the prey running?

You need a short haired female one and a long haired female. --IcestormHI! 18:26, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Acually, we agreed that we should only make male healer blanks, as Stoneteller is the only healer we've ever seen. If Stoneteller's next apprentice is a she-cat, then we can make female ones--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 18:41, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

actually,We have seen rock,who is a mysteriouse Healer from long ago!;D FirePeltHow's the prey running? 18:52, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

They are all male and we need no female blanks for now (see Blackclaw's user talk page). They look like the leader blanks, because they are, FirePelt. They have been modified, as the warrior blanks were to make med cats etc. These look good. I think I prefer the changed tails and the herbs with two pieces (if that makes sense) The only problem I see is that there are too any tiny lines on the tails that may make them hard to colour. Perhaps try and simplify the longhaired tails a little. Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 18:45, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

[[File:Stoneteller.png]] I made one of Stoneteller. He looks pretty good!--NightshineHappy New Year! 20:58, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

I don't understand what you said about the tiny lines on the tails, Sandy? And the healers with the two piece herbs are the top right image and bottom left image, right? Thanks for all the nice comments, everyone! --Happy New Year!09 23:30, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Blackclaw. I don't think the lines on the long haired one's tail would make it difficult to color--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 20:05, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

can i do stoneteller if this gets aproved i really want to do him!!! Echopaw 00:32, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

I was hoping the one I made could be used for Stoneteller--NightshineHappy New Year! 01:01, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, ignore me then ^_^ You just need to choose which two you want to keep and take the others off the page. Night Shine: Your Stoneteller is wow but you two need to discuss it yourselves and come to some sort of agreement. Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 17:41, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

I guess I'll use the ones with the changed tails and the two piece herbs. The extras I'll remove from the section. -- 01:44, January 6, 2010 (UTC) Blackclaw09 not logged in

Aww I like the one piece herb. I'll change the one of Stoneteller now.--NightshineLet it snow! 02:11, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

I like the one piece herb better too. The two peice herb looks, unnatural--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 04:01, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

I agree. The one-piece herb looks much better. --★ Batwing ☽ ⋆Deputy⋆ 16:57, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

I think they are perfect!The one-piece herb looks better. ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ Have a happy Valentineღ 23:08, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

they look nice. except... no offence but the one shown looks like it has a moustache. Rofl =D--Santamoon Merry Christmas!18:31, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

I've put the ones with the one piece herbs back up. I just need to change the tail on the shorthairs. Or should I leave that the same? --Snowfall09 20:00, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

I think you should change them only because you changed the long hairs.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 21:06, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

I think you should change the tails on the shorthairs as well just because you changed them on the longhairs. But once you do that, I think that these should be ready. --Icy-chan 22:38, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

I changed the tail on the shorthair. Any better? Snowfall09 03:23, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

Yep. I haven't found anything else wrong with these; comments before approval? --Icy-chan 15:41, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. --Hд₩₭₮д£O₦ 20:20, January 19, 2010 (UTC)

Duke - Approved

File:Duke (KP).png Ok 6 are images in the CBA phase, and two were put on rush so I think this is ok. Here's Duke.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 18:31, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

Darken ear pink, and blur the fur on his front leg. IcestormHi There! 18:33, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

The eyes look a bit strange, the pupil looks more dark gray than black, and maybe make the colours more similar. (If that makes sense) Blur where all the black meets all the white, it looks kinda strange. This is really good, I love the collar. But would there be a tag on a spiked collar? Nevermind. ßąէωïиց 20:06, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

No the part about making the colors similar dosent make sense, could you explain it some more. Where the black meets the white is blured but i guess i could remove some of the resulting gray.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 20:14, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

The colours look too different - I suggest picking one colour, then use that colour and slightly lighter and darker colours to colour the eye. Some of the pixels look much too dark, and not close enough to the colour of the eye. And where the white meets the black, it looks like you just smudged it all; blur it a bit more, particuarlly on the head. ßąէωïиց 21:10, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Where the white met the black was blurred and I didnt change the eye because I dont think it's that noticable unless you zoom in on the image but I did fix the pupil.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 21:19, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

You probably did this on purpose for a reason I don't know, but there's no ear pink on the right ear? ⓘⓝⓢⓐⓝⓔⓤⓛⓐⓡ 23:10, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

It's not supposed to be there. Quiet said so when Firepelt made the first example.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 23:22, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

But, I'd add ear pink to the other ear anyway. Because the cat is looking straight at you, even though his body is turned. So, the fronts of both ears are facing us. NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 01:41, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

I dont know. Quiet who made the blanks said that the right ear was turned at an angle. I'm just going with what the creator said.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 01:51, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the transition between the black and white a lot more. --Icy-chan 15:58, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 16:45, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

Three things. First of all, I still think you should add some ear pink to the right ear. But perhaps it's not that big a deal. Second, the spikes on his collar look more like circles. Not the one that sticks out at the end, but the ones that are facing us. I like to sketch pictures of dogs with spiked collars, and that always seemed a big difficult. But I think what you should do, is (You may ask me to clarify if needed) try and draw the spikes on the front going down. Like an upside down triangle. (If you need me to do a diagram, I'd be happy to) And third, this image is very good!! NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 02:05, January 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks Night. I see what you're saying about the earpink but the real reason for me not adding it now is because of the shading. About the spikes i'll change the if they dont look any better now that I darkened the shading on them. I was going for the rounded look if you can see it.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 20:55, January 19, 2010 (UTC)

Looks much better :) NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 21:01, January 19, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks! Anything else?AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 22:18, January 19, 2010 (UTC)

Not that I can see. Comments before approval? --Icy-chan 23:06, January 19, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble-sama 04:10, January 20, 2010 (UTC)

Fallowtail - Approved

File:Fallowtail Queen.pngI'm really sorry for increasing the image limit even more, but I've been waiting a long time for the image number to go down to less then 35, but whenever it gets close enough, it breaches 40 again. I really want to put something up for approval, and Fallowtail was getting close to the time limit it could stay up in the current projects. So, again I'm sorry about this. Constructments? --Hд₩₭₮д£O₦ 18:36, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

This looks really good, but I can barely see the ear pink, so either darken it or change the color of it. --Icy-chan ★ 19:28, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Thanks, Icy:) Is this better? --Hд₩₭₮д£O₦ 20:17, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

It's better.Her fur looks like it has little red circles in some parts. ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ Valentineღ 22 20:59, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

'Reuploaded' - I think I see what you mean... Better? --Hд₩₭₮д£O₦ 21:13, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

Yes. ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ Valentineღ 22 21:13, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good! I don't see any problems with it.--Nightshine ★ 00:22, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights more. But this is really good! NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 01:10, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

Agreed.Blur the highlights more into the pelt. ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ Valentineღ 22 13:23, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

O.o This image is so........ AMAZING! Swiftpelt[[User Talk: Swiftpelt] How's the prey running?]]

Reuploaded - Aww, thanks guys:3 I blurred the highlights more, but the changes aren't showing on my computer. --Hд₩₭₮д£O₦ 17:30, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, there it isXD Heh, my computer is so slow:) --Hд₩₭₮д£O₦ 17:49, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

She looks better. ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ Valentineღ 22 18:54, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink a little more, then blur the highlight on her tail som. And then I think this will be ready :) NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 02:10, January 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Blurred the ear pink and tail highlight more. Any other comments? --Hд₩₭₮д£O₦ 20:14, January 19, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, this is the first time I've ever said this... Comments before Approval? XD NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 20:17, January 19, 2010 (UTC)

Approved! XD--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 22:49, January 20, 2010 (UTC)

Icecloud (W) Approved

[[Image:Icecloud(W).png]] My third cat. She looks a bit strange -- Icecloud33 23:27, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot more! --IcestormHI! 23:27, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

Better? -- Icecloud33 23:42, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

I'd recommend changing the shading style, that style looks odd on white cats. You can look at this list for tutorials, there are many other styles which look a bit less awkward on white cats :) and don't forget to blur it well. Insane Batteries not Included 00:16, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

I think Insane's right. Try looking at Cloudtail, Whitewing or Whitetail as examples Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 12:19, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Better? is it a little dark? -- Icecloud33 18:10, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

It needs highlights. Use the dodge tool set on 50.--:) Mousetalon Meow to me! 19:05, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

Highlights are optional. You don't have to add them but you can if you want.--AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 19:08, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

I tried adding them but they wont show up -- Icecloud33 01:29, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

The exposure should be 100. Mind you, that isn't the brush size. Snowfern Snow! 12:40, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

I tried that, but they will not show up -- Icecloud33 01:31, January 11, 2010 (UTC)

Set it to highlights.--Møųşëţąłőʼn!! 01:38, January 11, 2010 (UTC)

What should it be set to (exposure, not size) -- Icecloud33 01:40, January 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? -- Icecloud33 23:52, January 11, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights a lot. They look to much like neat circles--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 00:12, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

And the shoulder highlights are way too high. Look at my tutorial or Bluestar's for help.--Møųşëţąłőʼn!! 00:26, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

Better?, are the changes showing up? -- Icecloud33 01:16, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

The changes are showing up. But they still look kinda strange. Get the brush size on 50, and choose the brush style with the faded edges. Then do the highlights NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 23:19, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

Um, what should the exposure be set to Icecloud33 00:24, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, just 50 I believe. I think that's the normal setting NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 00:25, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

Someone told me to put it on highlights because they wouldn't show up so, should it be set at 50 in highlights (that's what I used last time and they look a little bright Icecloud33 00:57, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

Yes. Highlights always look bright on white cats.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 21:23, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

I don't think you need to worry too much about highlights. Just darken and blur the shading and this looks fine to me Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 11:46, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

Better? Icecloud33 21:32, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? ✐+ᖱ = 19:10, January 20, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble-sama 02:42, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

Jigsaw (KP) - Approved

File:Jigsaw.png Since my Mothwing image is about to be approved, and there are a couple images about to be declined, I'm posting this (take it down if it's too many images). So, it was my first time on a kittypet and my first time with tabby patches, so, I just did what I thought looked good, and I think it turned out pretty well... how is it? ⓘⓝⓢⓐⓝⓔⓤⓛⓐⓡ 14:33, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

Blend the highlight on his head, make the nose more of a pinkish-grey (I know he's black, so it can be greyish), and make the ear pink less purply-pink and more reddish-pink ✐+ᖱ = 14:36, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Any better? ⓘⓝⓢⓐⓝⓔⓤⓛⓐⓡ 14:41, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is a bit too bright... Evanphoto 15:13, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded lightened the ear pink more. For some reason though, it always looks more bright on here than on my image program... o3o... ⓘⓝⓢⓐⓝⓔⓤⓛⓐⓡ 15:43, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink is too fluro now.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 19:23, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded and made it a lot lighter, because whenever it looks lighter on my image program it still looks fluorescent here. Is it better now? ⓘⓝⓢⓐⓝⓔⓤⓛⓐⓡ 23:06, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

Ah, you're gonna love hearing me say the ear pink's too bright. It needs to be more of a reddish color, like the color on Rippletail. --Icy-chan 14:57, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.... Gah! This earpink is killing me! I tried to make it much redder like on Rippletail, is it okay now? *dies* ⓘⓝⓢⓐⓝⓔⓤⓛⓐⓡ 15:06, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

Ack! Dx Sorry! But I think that it does look much better at last. And I'm happy to that it does look much better. Comments before approval? ;) --Icy-chan 15:17, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

only thing i want to say is that this is AWSOME. Nice job! ♥Shinestar♥ 19:35, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

Get rid of the ear pink on his left ear. We don't need ear pink on that ear. IcestormHi There! 18:25, January 19, 2010 (UTC)

Removed it... Now is that the last thing? (Lol his ears are the only thing that I've been having problems with....) ⓘⓝⓢⓐⓝⓔⓤⓛⓐⓡ 21:12, January 19, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, some had it and others didn't and I wasn't sure if it was okay or not...but now that that's solved, repeating CBA?(lol, I'm lazy and can't type out the full CBA.) ;) --Icy-chan 03:34, January 20, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble-sama 02:47, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

River (Lo) -Approved

[[File:Riverstar loner.png]]

I've been waiting forever to put him up. Since Wing was just approved, here is River as a loner. I'm super proud of him - I think this might be my best image ever. :) ßąէωïиց 23:31, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good! But the blur the shading and highlights more, they look a tad lumpy NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 23:36, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Ah, how I hate Pixlr's blurring tool! -.- Anyways, better? ßąէωïиց 00:36, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

Make the earpink a bit smaller and darker.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 21:18, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I got the colour from his leader image, and made it smaller. Better? ßąէωïиց 19:33, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

Blur all of the shading a bit more, it looks a bit square-ish right now. --Icy-chan 15:49, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

Due to circumstances, I'll take over this image, as there's very litte needs to be done. Will do changes when it's not 10 at night. :) Bramble-sama 04:17, January 20, 2010 (UTC)

Shading has been blurred. --Bramble-sama 02:21, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

Looks awsome! Comments Before Approval? NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 03:04, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

Approved! --NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 21:39, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

Hollyleaf (MCA)-- Approved

[[File:HollyleafMCA2.png]] You might remember this....LOL, I completely redid the shading today. I thought I'd be safe, if not, take this down. Anyway, comments? Snowfern Snow! 22:53, January 11, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading just a little bit more. Also, add shading to the herbs:if there's any I can't see it, add it either like you did to Gingerfrost on PCWiki (with the different colors), or add the shading like on my tutorials. --Icy-chan 23:11, January 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Snowfern Snow! 23:27, January 11, 2010 (UTC)

I can't really see the color of her eyes.--Nightshine 01:36, January 12, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights look a little strange. Blur them a bit. On black cats, if the highlights won't blur any more, a little trick is to run the smudge tool around the edge of the highlight then try blurring it. ßąէωïиց 20:38, January 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded--how is she? Snowfern Snow! 23:46, January 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink, and the shading on her haunches more--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 00:55, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Snowfern Snow! 23:21, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, the shading is better. But the ear pink looks a little weird, it's like solid on one side and on the other it's blurred. Make it more triangular, then blur it all NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 23:29, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. How is she? Snowfern Snow! 23:34, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

It doesn't look as if you've changed anything NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 03:06, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Snowfern Snow! 11:37, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

Anything else? Snowfern Snow! 23:11, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink still looks half blurred and I can't see any shading on the haunch.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 20:35, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Snowfern Snow! 22:37, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Anything else? MaplefernHi everyone! 19:57, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

Anything at all? MaplefernHi everyone! 01:45, January 19, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink just a tad and blur it, and darken the shading some on the back and blur it NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 01:51, January 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? MaplefernHi everyone! 23:17, January 19, 2010 (UTC)

Anything else? MaplefernHi everyone! 21:45, January 20, 2010 (UTC)

Looks great. Comments before approval? Bramble-sama 02:21, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble-sama 02:16, January 22, 2010 (UTC)

Willie (R)- Approved

[[File:Willie_Rogue.png]] I saw plenty of images for approval, and several pages are discussion pages, so here he is, the tom from Shattered Peace. Comments?Møųşëţąłőʼn!! 00:42, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes look a little strange, like in some parts of them there is a tiny spot that is thicker than the rest of the stripe. Try thickening them, then bluring them. And then the shading needs to be blurred some, and I'd add a little more shading around his legs and belly. NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 03:09, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the earpink, stripes, and shading some more. --Nightwhisker98Rawr! 21:08, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. When I tried thickening the srtipes, it threw off the entire image. I just blurred them. Anything else?Møųşëţąłőʼn!! 00:56, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

The shading still needs to be blurred NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 02:32, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

If it's on the back, that's the stripe. Møųşëţąłőʼn!! 13:49, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Oh! *face palm* Try blurring that just a little more, especially on the tail NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 22:17, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded! Done. And don't blame yourself, Night, I would've done the same thing. Møųşëţąłőʼn!! 01:37, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

The image looks great. Comments before approval? Bramble-sama 02:15, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble-sama 02:16, January 22, 2010 (UTC)

Firestar (KP) - Approved

[[File:Firestar_(KP).png]]Here is the all too famous leader as a fat little kittypet!!--Nightshine 04:41, January 20, 2010 (UTC)

Firestar's one of my fav cats!*purrs* Anyways,blur the shading alittle more maybe.The ear pink seems whiteish though.Maybe make it more of a pink/red color. ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ Valentineღ 22 20:43, January 20, 2010 (UTC)

I heard that the creator of the blanks intended for the left (for us) ear to be turned away, so we wouldn't see the ear pink on that ear. Other than that, this is a very good image! ⓘⓝⓢⓐⓝⓔⓤⓛⓐⓡ 20:46, January 20, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Deleted the right ear pink, made the ear pink darker and blurred shading more--Nightshine 02:01, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

Much Better.The earpink should maybe be a bit more,red.Look at bluestar1776's ear pink chart,and get the color from there. ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ Valentineღ 22 02:15, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I hope the ear pink is better--Nightshine 02:44, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

It looks way better.I removed the chart,seeing as you don't need it naymore,and I did'nt want it to take up space. ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ Valentineღ 22 21:07, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

Looks great. Comments before approval? --Icy-chan 23:50, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble-sama 00:09, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

Dewspots (W)- Approved

[[File:Dewspots(W).png]] My first tabby!!!!!!! Is there anything I could do to it? Comments? Thanks!!!!--Echoheart 22:03, January 3, 2010 (UTC)Echoheart

Darken the tabby stripes some.--AshshadowRawr :3 23:32, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is too bright, and needs to be blurred.--:) Mousetalon Meow to me! 00:02, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

This needs shading, or more shading Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 18:13, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is to bright.It needs more shading,the eye needs colored in properly,and darken the tabby stripes. FirePeltHow's the prey running? 21:53, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I changed the name of the file to Dewspots(Warrior).png accidentaly.Anyway,is there anything else I could do to it?--Echoheart 11:14, January 7, 2010 (UTC)Echoheart

This is much better. But the flecks look a little too much like snowflakes. Make them more of a gray color, and more irregular--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 21:54, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

I kind of like them . . .--:) Mousetalon Meow to me! 01:37, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, you're right Mousey. I look at it now and I wonder, "What in StarClan's name was I thinking?" :) On second thought, the flecks look fine Echo. But add a stripe that starts at her eye lash, and then goes down more to her neck. Look at an approved image of a tabby cat for an example-- Swiftbreeze, Brambleclaw, Tornear, Voletooth--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 03:10, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

Shes really pretty. Blur the earpink some more.--AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 03:18, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

What happened to the pretty one?--:) Mousetalon Meow to me! 21:06, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

What do you mean Mouse?--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 23:09, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

lol, this one looks pretty to me =) Just darken the shading and she'll be good. Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 13:18, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Forget that, my computer was wacked up and showed the old one.--:) Mousetalon Meow to me! 23:20, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

hmm I don't want to have to say this because I love this image, but please work on it or she'll have to be declined. Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 11:51, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

I'm taking a while because I'm having problems on saving it. Could you help me?Echoheart 20:38, January 18, 2010 (UTC)Echoheart

Could you tell me what you mean excatly? NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 02:32, January 19, 2010 (UTC)

When I try to save it, it saves on pixlr editor but not on my computer. Do you think I'm doing anything wrong?Echoheart 12:25, January 19, 2010 (UTC)Echoheart

Try again, and see what it does. There doesn't seem to be anything wrong with the saving feature. Bramble-sama 02:39, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Is there anything else I need to do to it?Echoheart 12:26, January 21, 2010 (UTC)Echoheart

CBA? ✐+ᖱ = 21:09, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

Approved.Bramble-sama 00:22, January 23, 2010 (UTC)