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Hazeltail(K)-Approved

File:Hazelkit(tail)-TC.png

She probably needs alot of work,I dont know.Anyways,comments? ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ Valentineღ 22 18:47, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

Can you lighten the ear pink? Right now It's barely visible.MossI'm Up There! 23:10, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Is it better now? ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ Valentineღ 22 12:49, January 18, 2010 (UTC)


No, I still cant see the ear pink Raineh 13:46, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded.Can you see it now? ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ Valentineღ 22 16:15, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a bit more triangular, and blur the shading a lot NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 02:12, January 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Anything else at all? ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ Valentineღ 22 21:08, January 19, 2010 (UTC)

Most of the lineart is blurred and there are some clouds extending out into the background. The eye color is also too grayish; make it a touch more blue in color and a little lighter. Other than that, wonderful job. --Bramble-sama 02:02, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I see what you mean Bramble.I cant belive I missed that!I fixed it though.I had gotten the eye color from her warrio r image.I tried to make it lighter,but keep it cloe to her warrior image color.Anyways,thanks for the compliment.Anything else? ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ Valentineღ 22 02:13, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

Not that I see. Comments before approval? --Icy-chan 21:32, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble-sama 00:30, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

Tawnypelt (Ki)-Approved

Tawnypelt.kitBig fat face plam. This is over the limit and not my best one. But I was waiting to put this up for a month, and whenever the image size went down to 34, I turn around, and people fill it up again. Plus I was REALLY excited and proud of my first tortoiseshell...here she is. If you must, you can decline it. But last time I waited for the image number to go down a lot, my reservation time was up. :'( Critique?MossI'm Up There! 00:25, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

There is a spot next to the image and I dont see much shading. This is really good.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 01:18, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

Haha, the little dot was a little ' not on the image :3 anything else?MossI'm Up There! 01:47, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

Darken all of the shading a bit more, add neck shading (examples: Briarpaw's kit image and Hollyleaf's kit image), maybe add a highlight to the chest and the face (ex: Rainwhisker's kit image and like on my tutorials under kits), and blur the ear pink a bit more. --Icy-chan 16:03, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded.MossI'm Up There! 19:27, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

This is a gorgeous image Moss! But, wasn't Tawnypelt mentioned as pale ginger as a kit? It could have been a mistake, but still. Look, here's an excat quote that I'm typing from the book - . Fireheart saw a ripple of pale amber fur and looked up to see Goldenflower slip out of the nursery behind the dark tabby kit. A pale ginger kit dangled from her jaws, and she placed it gently on the ground next to Bramblekit. And then, a bit farther down the page the kit is revealed to be Tawnykit after Goldenflower says, "It's Tawnykit's first time out of the nursery." That's from Rising Storm, page 19. And that's certainly not the only time she's been mentioned as pale ginger as a kit. That could have been a mistake, but if it was mentioned so much? It was only in Firestar's Quest that it said she was dark tortoiseshell. What do you guys think? NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 02:27, January 19, 2010 (UTC)

The only reason I would leave it is because we're going for consistancy. An example would be Dawnpelt whose warrior image is gray even though she is described as cream furred. We might want to wait for Bramble or Sandy before changing it.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 21:15, January 19, 2010 (UTC)

To Nightfall: I'm pretty sure it was only in A Dangerous Path that she was mentioned as ginger, and in all the rest of the books it was tortoiseshell, so I'd bet that it was a mistake or the Erins changed their minds. Or, I'm not sure if this is possible since I don't know about cat genetics, but maybe she was ginger as a kit then parts of her fur darkened as she grew so she became a tortoiseshell? I dunno if that can happen but I know often human babies' hair starts out light and gets darker, so... ⓘⓝⓢⓐⓝⓔⓤⓛⓐⓡ 20:49, January 20, 2010 (UTC)

Oh yeah I didn't even think of it! but by the time she was an older kit, she was a tortoiseshell, I believe. But this would be one to ask Sandy and bramble. i'll ask right now.MossI'm Up There! 22:23, January 20, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, she was mentioned as pale ginger as a kit. One of Vicky's mistakes; the author's can't be perfect. For the sake of consistency, go with tortoiseshell; she may be given an alternate version as Mosskit had later. --Bramble-sama 00:08, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

Now that this is decided to be fine kept the way it is, I see nothing else with the actual image. Comments before approval? --Icy-chan 21:31, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble-sama 00:31, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

Sweetpaw (Ki)- Approved

File:Sweetpaw (Ki).png

There are a few in the 24 hour stage. Take this down if there are too many--Nightshine 01:38, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

Ok, this is good. But blur the patches on the chest and make the eye color lighter, so it matches her apprentice image. The white hing leg also needs some shading. ßąէωïиց 01:52, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I blurred the chest a bit more. lightened the eye color and added some shading to the leg/foot--Nightshine 03:34, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

Her hind leg visible should be ginger. It's on her apprentice image.Snowfern Snow! 12:13, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I added ginger to the leg--Nightshine 23:42, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

I can't see any shading - perhaps darken it =) Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 11:37, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I darkened the shading--Nightshine 00:01, January 19, 2010 (UTC)

Smudge that ginger part beside her brown leg, then blur it. This is almost ready :) NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 01:56, January 19, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Smudged and blurred ginger--Nightshine 00:21, January 20, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the tail, and I can't really see the ear pink on her ginger ear. I'd lighten and blur it. NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 03:15, January 20, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Blurred tail shading. Lightened ginger ear pink--Nightshine 03:54, January 20, 2010 (UTC)

Blur that darkish ginger part right under her right ear--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 01:18, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Blurred the ginger ear some more.--Nightshine 02:03, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on her brown leg, and the shading on her tail NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 19:00, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Blurred the brown leg shading and tail--Nightshine 00:23, January 22, 2010 (UTC)

Looks awsome! Comments Before Approval? NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 07:03, January 22, 2010 (UTC)

Approved!--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 02:47, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

Leafpool (Kit)- Approved

Leafpool.kit

So, here she is... does she have enough stripes?Darkhallows 07:21, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

First of all, you forgot to sign :) Second, I don't think the nose should be black. Make it kind of pinkish brown (Does that make sense?) Google a brown tabby, you'll see want I mean. But this is really good! NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 03:53, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

Oops! Sorry about that. I had it pink, but wanted to stick with the black nose of her other images. Any other opinions? Darkhallows 07:21, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

I think the only reason her nose pink is black on her other images is because you can't really do nose pink on any of those blanks. I think it should be pink, but we'll wait for other user's opinions NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 18:58, January 21, 2010 (UTC)\

This may just be me,but the ear pink dosen't look quite right.It's to,whitish to me.Make it more of a pink color.Color needs added to the nose. ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ Valentineღ 22 21:09, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

For examples, just look at Rainwhisker, Petalfur, or Beetlewhisker, Nightfall hit it on the nail, it's because the warrior and apprentice blanks don't have color for the nose. --Icy-chan 21:26, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

Any better?Darkhallows 07:31, January 22, 2010 (UTC)

Kinda.One seems darker than the other,and the darkest one is to close to the lineart,to me. -- ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ Valentineღ 22 20:53, January 22, 2010 (UTC)

Yep. Comments before approval? --Icy-chan 20:59, January 22, 2010 (UTC)

Earpink looks fine to me... Approved seeing as that was the only comment. I am not over-riding you Fire, Icey agrees with me. ✐+ᖱ = 20:23, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

Dappletail (E) - Approved

File:Dappletail Elder PCA.png

(M) - She's so sweet! *huggles*

Long story short, I got Photoshop for Christmas and had trouble installing it. I didn't want to do this image until it got installed. So now it's installed and I got to do her.

There are five images in the 24 hour stage and this is the fourth over the limit so I thought it would be okay. I'll take it down if it isn't.

Constructive criticism?

Oh...my...gosh... This is awesome, Mosswhisker! I can't really see the ear pink, though. Lighten it a bit, and this should be ready:) --Hд₩₭₮д£O₦ 22:06, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Cool she looks like a reverse tiger! I agree with Hawktalon about the earpink.--AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 22:10, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

This is beautiful!--NightshineLet it snow! 22:13, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

(M) - Aww, thanks guys! *Hugs* I lightened the ear pink, and there was a small strip at the top of the image that wasn't transparent, so I fixed that too. (It might take a while for the changes to show up though.) Anything else I should fix? Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 22:20, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink still seems alittle odd to me.Make it alittle lighter. ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ Have a happy Valentineღ 00:54, January 11, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - Moss, I'm not sure if I'll get to call you tonight, so I'll comment here. OMSC, this is good! I take back everything I ever said about fat, lazy, or sitting on hindquarters! But I do agree with firepelt about the ear pink. It sort of looks... gray. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 12:36, January 11, 2010 (UTC)

(M) - Thanks! Lightened the ear pink again and fixed some pixelation on the haunch while I was at it. Does the ear pink look any better? Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 23:13, January 11, 2010 (UTC)

This looks awesome. But, to complain about the ear pink agaian, it looks a bit too purply (I know it's not a word. :P). Make it like Yellowfang's color. ßąէωïиց 20:47, January 12, 2010 (UTC)

Hm . . . just make it lighter and make the brush thicker for the ear pink I guess.--Møųşëţąłőʼn!! 03:04, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

(M) - I tried to fix the ear pink again. Also, I gave the ear a more furry texture. Any better? Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 23:23, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

I cant really see it now.Maybe darken ot some more.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 02:05, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

(M) - Reuploaded. Is the ear pink any better? Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 22:55, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

It looks too gray. Make it more of a reddish pinky color NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 03:16, January 20, 2010 (UTC)

I actually think it looks fine how it is. It looks realistic with a greyish ear colour. ✐+ᖱ = 22:15, January 20, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, that is true :) But I'd blur the markings on her ear farthest from us --NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 23:02, January 20, 2010 (UTC)

(M) - Reuploaded. Whoops, I missed that spot when I was blurring. 'Tis fixed. Anything else? Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 22:20, January 22, 2010 (UTC)

Not that I see :) Comments Before Approval?--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 22:56, January 22, 2010 (UTC)

Approved!--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 21:14, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

Lily (KP) Approved

File:Lily KP.png I have been waiting for forever to put this up! These new guidelines have really improved pca :) Okay, how is she? I googled a real siamese and used that for reference. Comments?--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 21:43, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

It looks great, i can only see a couple things, one is that there's a grey spot outside her lineart behind her shoulder remove that. Also, can you make the brown patch on her face a little bigger (especially above the eyes), since right now it looks a little small, and to me it makes her face look squeezed. ⓘⓝⓢⓐⓝⓔⓤⓛⓐⓡ 21:49, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Better?--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 21:57, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

Yup, looks great now! I can't really see anything else that should be changed ^^ ⓘⓝⓢⓐⓝⓔⓤⓛⓐⓡ 21:57, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

that looks amazing! I just saw 1 thing though. On her collar the little tag thingie isn't colored in. Great job though! Keep going!Artimas Hunter 22:13, January 21, 2010 (UTC)Artimas Hunter

Yes.It needs colored.She looks like a confused/mad.annoyed kitty! Amazing job. ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ Valentineღ 22 22:15, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Acually, it was colored, it was just light silver. I darkened it. And thanks for the comments you guys :)--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 22:36, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

This looks awesome. Comments before approval? --Icy-chan 21:50, January 22, 2010 (UTC)

The pupil is gray, make it black. IcestormHi There! 18:02, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

No, it's black. I got the eye design from Mousetalon's Princess image NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 20:34, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

I think it's fine. Continuing 24 hours? Oh, wait, it's been 24 hours already! Wow time flies...anyway, since it's been 24 hours and the eyes are fine, I'm approving this. --Icy-chan 02:08, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

Molepelt (MC) - Approved

File:Molepelt medcat.png Did I go over the image limit? If I did, feel free to remove. I just did this for fun. Still waiting for comments on Ryewhisker. Anyways how is he? --:D Jinglestorm ♥'Merry Purry Christmas! 22:58, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Neat! I really like it. Maybe make the medicine stuff in his mouth a darker green, so it looks more natural. Otherwise, it's awesome! --CandyCaneWolf 23:15, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

I love it Icy! But I think you should probably blur the shading and highlights some, especially around the neck. But it's awesome!--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 23:32, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

His ear pink seems to be a bit too bright - the shade is right, its just light. Highlights would make it seem like there's more shading, and the herbs would look better if all three were different shades(don't forget to shade them, too!). --Quiet!... 08:08, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - I had actually reserved him, but you keep this up; I still haven't got around to doing him anyways, haha. Also, merry Christmas! Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 18:07, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

This is awsome! Darken and blur earpink and it should be good! MerryChristmas!18:23, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

I agree with maple,darken and blur the ear pink. FirePelt 14:28, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Okay for some reason I can't get to pixlr.com. I'll try to get to this as soon as I can. Please don't decline! --IcyLet's Go 2010! 20:27, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Whole image re done. Why you ask? I just wanted to! --IcyLet's Go 2010! 21:37, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

LOL! Okay, I think you should probably blur the shading a little more, and the ear pink looks a little too bright. Try and darken it some--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 21:53, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Done. --IcyLet's Go 2010! 03:03, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

Add some shading to the midriff, like on Bluestar's deputy image, or like on Molewhisker and Silvermask. Also, darken all of the shading. --Icy-chan 16:14, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is a little too bright also - try a Rippletail, Whitethroat, or other darker coloured cat reference like Dustpelt or Swallowtail (RC) Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 16:38, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 11:49, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

I keep uploading it but it won't show up! --IcestormHI! 21:28, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, here's what to do. Upload your new version under the file name Molepelt.medcat.png and then mark your current file with the {{Delete}} tag. Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 21:43, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

I try uploading the new file but it says "Error" and I cant remember the other part. --IcestormHI! 21:59, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

...try it again, I don't know what else to do since you don't remember what the entire message was, so try uploading it again and if it doesn't work try to remember the whole message this next time. --Icy-chan 22:03, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

NVM. I just uploaded a new file. Anything else? --IcestormI LIKE TACO BELL!!! 22:07, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken the shading on the midriff. --Icy-chan 22:25, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. The changes showing? WetstarTaylor Swift! 00:54, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a little lighter and less red. --SweetheartHappy Valentine's Day! 21:39, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Is it ready? IcestormHi There! 18:58, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink more, darken the shading, and the blur it NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 02:35, January 19, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded. IcestormHi There! 21:34, January 19, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is still a little too bright. Try looking at Hollyleaf's image or Nightcloud's image. --SweetheartHappy Valentine's Day! 20:57, January 20, 2010 (UTC)

Huh, according to Tutorials it says that ear pink on a black cat would be red. I'll have to ask Bramble or Sandy. IcestormHi There! 21:50, January 20, 2010 (UTC)

By red I think they meant redish pink. I agree about the earpink being too bright.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 21:57, January 20, 2010 (UTC)

It's a reddish-pinkish-grayish color. For examples look at Hollyleaf's kit image, Splash, Jet, Coal, Cora, Sloefur, etc. --Icy-chan 21:19, January 22, 2010 (UTC)

Better? (Note:I blurred the ear pink as much as Pixlr would let me) IcestormHi There! 21:41, January 22, 2010 (UTC)

The color is much better :) But make it a little bit smaller--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 22:55, January 22, 2010 (UTC)

What smaller? To me, I think this is the smaller I can get. But that's up to you PCA members! IcestormHi There! 23:00, January 22, 2010 (UTC)

Oh! *face palm* sorry, I meant the ear pink--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 23:02, January 22, 2010 (UTC)

It looks small enough, and the right color, too. Comments before approval? --Bramble-sama 00:36, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

None;approved ✐+ᖱ = 11:48, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

Leopardfoot (W) - Approved

File:LeopardfootWarrior.pngEvanphoto 12:35, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

Darken shading. Snowfern Snow! 12:42, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Evanphoto 12:57, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken the shading. --Icy-chan 22:19, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Anything else? Evanphoto 11:46, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is way too small. Thicken it.Møųşëţąłőʼn!! 23:06, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Evanphoto 00:50, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Well, anything else? Evanphoto 16:42, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the earpink more.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 20:31, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Evanphoto 20:37, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Add some shading to her haunch NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 03:51, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Evanphoto 11:26, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

I'd make the ear pink a tad smaller, and more triangular NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 01:53, January 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Evanphoto 12:08, January 19, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading on her legs farthest from us--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 01:17, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Evanphoto 12:23, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

Anything else? -_- Evanphoto 14:54, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? ✐+ᖱ = 14:58, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

None Approved ✐+ᖱ = 12:21, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

Birdflight(Q) - Approved

File:Birdflight(Q).png Here she is-my first queen! Comments? Snowfern Snow! 12:45, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

Wow, that's really good...Nothing to point out...My prediction is this is gonna be approved in less than a week!--QuailflightTheAVATAR!Give me a mouse. NOW! 16:00, January 14, 2010 (UTC)



The tabby stripes are too light. Make them darker like the warrior picture. WoodClan 17:56, January 14, 2010 (UTC) Birdflight.warrior

WoodClan's right. She looks nothing like her warrior image. She's to golden colored. Make her like a creamy brown. The stripes nedd to be thicker and darker, and the ear pink needs to be lighter. And also, the eye farthest from us looks very strange. Make them both like the ones on Icethroat's tutorials NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 18:38, January 14, 2010 (UTC)


Reuploaded. Thanks Quail. Anyways, is she better?Snowfern Snow! 12:29, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

Yup. Maybe make her eye and earpink a bit darker.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 21:16, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

Blur all of the shading a little bit more, and make the stripes touch the lineart. --Icy-chan 21:48, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Snowfern Snow! 23:17, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Anything else? MaplefernHi everyone! 11:36, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading more, and lighten the ear pink to make it look the same color as her warrior image NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 01:54, January 19, 2010 (UTC)

Night, I took the colour of the ear pink from her warrior image, and then I was told to darken it. Should I still lighten it? MaplefernHi everyone! 11:36, January 19, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm, maybe lighten it just a tad (I'm just going for consistency) NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 20:20, January 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Better? MaplefernHi everyone! 23:08, January 19, 2010 (UTC)

Anything else? MaplefernHi everyone! 21:38, January 20, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on her belly and elbow more--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 23:03, January 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I hope it looks better! MaplefernHi everyone! 00:15, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

The two stripes on the belly nearest the haunch look more distinct compared to the others. Blur them a touch for consistency, and maybe brighten the nose pink a touch to give the face more of a pop. Bramble-sama 02:10, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

haha sorry, that is an incredible use of the word 'pop' Bramble =P I agree with what you said though (for want of adding an actual constructive comment to this discussion) ✐+ᖱ = 21:06, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

I'll reupload it when I get home. MaplefernHi everyone! 21:22, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Better? MaplefernHi everyone! 22:45, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

Anything else? MaplefernHi everyone! 21:33, January 22, 2010 (UTC)

Sandy: I know, ain't it great? :P Comments before approval? --Bramble-sama 00:35, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

Approved ✐+ᖱ = 12:23, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

Patchpelt (A) - Approved

Patchpelt.apprenticeHere he is! Sorry if this is WAYYY over the limit. Take this down if need. Anyways I need to do a patched cat to become a warrior. I want to become a warrior! Comments? IcestormHi There! 17:34, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Beautiful, all I see is maybe add more shading since it's really hard to see.Hidden-Valentine ღ 17:42, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Are the changes showing? IcestormHi There! 17:46, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

I don't think they did. Blur the earpink some more adn darken the shading if this is the changed version.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 20:30, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Anything else? IcestormHi There! 20:41, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Anymore comments? IcestormHi There! 19:11, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

Add some shading to the tail.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 19:26, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded IcestormHi There! 19:31, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

Darken earpink a bit. I can barely see it. MaplefernHi everyone! 11:35, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

The patches on the hind leg look more blurred than the other patches, can you blur the others more to be like that, especially the one on the tail?MossI'm Up There! 19:55, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

1. Darken the shading, blur all the little tiny edges of the black pathches, blur the black part on the tail, and darken the ear pink. This is really good! NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 00:11, January 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. IcestormHi There! 21:30, January 19, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink still needs to be a little darker, so we can see it. Less of a pale cream-white, and more of a pink rose petal color. (I feel poetic today) --Bramble-sama 02:07, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

Better? Sorry if it is not, as I mentioned before, broken arm. D: IcestormHi There! 22:33, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

I think it's better :) Try blurring the shading on his hind leg furtheset from us. Like, just run the burn tool over it a couple of times. It would give the image more depth NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 22:41, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

Is he better? I just want to get him in the CBA stage. IcestormHi There! 22:53, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

Don't push it for the CBA stage. The senior warriors, deputy, and leader don't like it much when you do that, from what I see. To me, it looks like the gray line you get from blurring it sticks out a little too far, of course, I am half dead right now and it might just be me though. Maybe look into that? ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ Valentineღ 22 23:20, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

I was kidding when I said that. I just want to work on it. :) Huh, I don't really get what your saying. Can you try to explain it better? IcestormHi There! 00:16, January 22, 2010 (UTC)

no worries Ice ;) FirePelt, I fixed your typos so your comment will make sense. I think what FirePelt means is that it's bene over blurred and the grey blurry bit you get between the black and the white is too big. I'm not sure I agree with that though - it looks fine to me ✐+ᖱ = 16:46, January 22, 2010 (UTC)

When I first got Stoneclaw approved I should have said I like to work on Chararts so much I want them to stay on the page. I don't see any blurred lineart if your trying to say that. But it's up to you awesome PCA members to decide. IcestormHi There! 21:30, January 22, 2010 (UTC)!

Not the lineart - the black/white transition. Like I said, it looks fine to me. CBA? ✐+ᖱ = 13:37, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

Approved ✐+ᖱ = 12:31, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

Princess (KP)- Approved

File:Princess KP.pngI used her Cats of the Clans picture for colors and reference. So, my favorite kittypet, besides Snowdrop. Comments?Møųşëţąłőʼn!! 19:54, January 16, 2010 (UTC)


It looks awesome, but isn't she a tabby? Also, her page says she has green eyes. ⓘⓝⓢⓐⓝⓔⓤⓛⓐⓡ 19:55, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Awesome image!MossI'm Up There! 19:56, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Darken ear pink and her eyes are amber right? Make them more of a yellow-orange (thhat's what amber is right??) IcestormHi There! 19:58, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

She's very pretty. (: But, she's a tabby, and her eyes are supposed to be green. (: ßąէωïиց 20:08, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Giver her tabby stripes an make her eyes green. ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ Have a happy Valentineღ 22 20:10, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

HER EYES ARE GREEN!!!

Reuploaded. Sorry for bold text, but I needed to say that.Møųşëţąłőʼn!! 20:12, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Added tabby stripes.Møųşëţąłőʼn!! 20:15, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Her eyes dont look green in the image. Anyway add a tabby m and blur the stripes some.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 20:19, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Anything else?Møųşëţąłőʼn!! 20:24, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

This is great =) Just add some more stripes to the top of her head and [our] right side of her face, and darken the ear pink and she'll be ready Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 21:02, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Sweet! Møųşëţąłőʼn!! 21:20, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Anything else?Møųşëţąłőʼn!! 18:02, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

Add a couple of stripes to the head above the eyes. --Icy-chan 18:43, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Done and done. Møųşëţąłőʼn!! 17:36, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes on her forhead are too straight. Make the tabby M above her eyes. I'd google a tabby cat for reference. Also, there's gotta be ear pink on her right ear too. NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 19:54, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Møųşëţąłőʼn!! 23:33, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

Compared to the other stripes, the tabby M looks a bit cartoony. Maybe make it thinner? And the right ear should have ear pink as well as the left. This is really good! NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 01:58, January 19, 2010 (UTC)

For the M...maybe make it less of a perfect M and more jagged, and blur it more.MossI'm Up There! 22:52, January 20, 2010 (UTC)

Add a few stripes above the M as well. Bramble-sama 02:05, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded! :) Did all of that. Møųşëţąłőʼn!! 02:50, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink a tad, and this should be ready! NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 03:02, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded! Yayzee! Oh, I made up a word! Møųşëţąłőʼn!! 04:17, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

LOL. There are a few white pixels on her belly. That is probably her white underbelly, so blur them. MaplefernHi everyone! 11:25, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred as much as possible. Møųşëţąłőʼn!! 16:38, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --Icy-chan 18:54, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

Approved ✐+ᖱ = 12:38, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

Morningflower (W) - Approved

There are 9 in 24 hours (either for approval or denial) and one declined awaiting archiving.

Morningflower.warrior Constructments? ✐+ᖱ = 15:10, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

Wow Sandy you may have an obbsesion for Morningflower. :) I love this image! Just darken ear pink. IcestormHi There! 15:13, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

Nope =P Just thought I should complete the set, so to speak, to save anyone else struggling to copy my awful tortoiseshells ^_^ I'll see to all comments later so I can edit all at once. Thanks Ice. ✐+ᖱ = 15:16, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

I got bored so I reuploaded Anything else? ✐+ᖱ = 19:35, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

Your tortoiseshells aren't bad! In fact their great! Anyways I looked for 2 minutes and cant find anything wrong with it. IcestormHi There! 19:39, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

I haven't found anything either. Comments before approval? --Icy-chan 00:31, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

It might just be me,but,the ear pink seems smal and it looks to far down,of course,it migt just be me being half-dead again. ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ Valentineღ 22 13:24, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

Nope, you're right FirePelt, but I think it's different from cat to cat... --Icy-chan 15:13, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

You got a point,Icy. ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ Valentineღ 22 16:18, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

So, do you want me to change it or not. I think it's just I blurred the top bit in a bit more than the bottom by accident. ✐+ᖱ = 19:35, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

Just blur the bottom of the earpink is what I think...MaplefernHi everyone! 21:44, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded ✐+ᖱ = 21:51, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

Perhaps make it higher? It looks too low right now NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 01:59, January 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded finally. Sorry it took a few days - hectic real life at the moment. ;) ✐+ᖱ = 16:54, January 22, 2010 (UTC)

It's still low, but it's taking up more of the ear now so I think that it's fine. Repeating comments before approval? --Icy-chan 04:51, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved ✐+ᖱ = 12:44, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

Patchfoot (Ro) - Approved

Patchfoot.rogue This will probably be the last image I post for a while, but, anywho, comments? It was my first rogue so I just winged it on the shading, I had the light source above him, although I think the highlights look a bit strange? How can I improve it? ⓘⓝⓢⓐⓝⓔⓤⓛⓐⓡ 03:34, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

Add color to the nose--Nightshine 03:40, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

Add color to the nose,and the highlights look fine.It looks like it's Sunhigh in the image! ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ Valentineღ 22 21:11, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

The patches don't look dark enough, make them darker so tha they're as dark as the warrior image. I like how you have the shading done, though. --Icy-chan 21:28, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded added nose pink, and ran the burn tool over each patch (except his head), is it any better now? ⓘⓝⓢⓐⓝⓔⓤⓛⓐⓡ 21:56, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

I think so! But blur the shading a lot on his legs, and his neck NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 22:38, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded, and blurred the shading more. It's hard for me to gauge how much to blur since I haven't shaded a white cat before, does it look better? ⓘⓝⓢⓐⓝⓔⓤⓛⓐⓡ 02:37, January 22, 2010 (UTC)

A lot better than any of my white cat chararts. :) Maybe blur the ear pink just a tad bit more, and then this should be good. --Icy-chan 04:50, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

Blurred it more, is it ready, or did I blur too much? insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular 18:13, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

Nope, I think it looks fine. Comments before approval? (By the way I just have to say that your new siggie is awesome. :D) --Icy-chan 20:13, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

Approved ✐+ᖱ = 12:46, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

Rainwhisker (A) - Approved

Rainwhisker.apprentice I looked at the page number and saw that it was 33 and I was like, "OMG it's below 35!" or something insane like that. ;) Anyways, I've been waiting a while to put up an image, so I'm really glad to say here is Rainwhisker's apprentice image! (Yay! This is my second charart of my fave character! *evil laugh*) --Icy-chan 03:05, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

Looks amazing, Icy :D Only thing is that his ear pink looks a little small, either make it bolder or brighten it maybe? insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular 03:07, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

This is awsome! But, blur the shading a little more, especially around his back--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 03:08, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks Night and Insane. :) The shading was blurred to the max in a program with awesome blurring, so I tried lightening the shading. Does it look better? Also, the ear pink was already a good size, I had just blurred it too much, so I tried coloring it again with a barely lighter color. Does any of it look better? --Icy-chan 03:36, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

I think it looks fantastic! Shouldn't the Apprentice blanks be changed so that weird black blob on the foot is gone?--Nightshine 04:22, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

Woah! I've never even noticed that blob until you pointed it out! Well, we could talk to Bramble or Sandy about it--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 05:09, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

...for now, should I erase the blob? --Icy-chan 15:02, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

For consistency issues; nah. :) Perhaps in about two years when warriors ends and we have NOTHING to do, we can go back and erase all those on all the apprentice blanks. Then we can throw a party. :) Image looks great, Icy. Comments before approval? Bramble-sama 18:23, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

Approved ✐+ᖱ = 12:52, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

Thistleclaw (A)- Approved

File:Thistleclaw(A).png

Huh,Im not sure about this one,my second apprentice.I got his warrior image and copyed all the colors from that.How is he? ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ FirePelt(L)_Sunny.png 22 15:35, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

He's really good Eechopaw!! Maybe blur teh shading and highlights a little more and you have to save the image when you do it with teh extension of ".png" you image is with ".jpg". Hidden-Valentine ღ 15:37, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

Im not Echopaw! Im Fire! I'll get right to blurring the shading more. ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ FirePelt(L)_Sunny.png 22 15:40, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Anything else? ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ FirePelt(L)_Sunny.png 22 15:44, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

I wanted to see what it looks like with some highlights.Which do you lie better? Right:orignal Left:new ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ FirePelt(L)_Sunny.png 22 16:16, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

They're the same image, they both have the same file name. They are both showing the current version of the image, so I can't really say which one is better. --Icy-chan 16:35, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

I know they have the smae name.The one on the left is lighter because I added faint highlights,there not the exacte same image. ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ Gimme a Valentine Mouse 22 16:39, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

When you upload an image with the same file name, it uploads a new version on the file with that name, so they are the same picture, and since they're no difference I can't tell a difference and say which one is better. --Icy-chan 18:06, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

Nm then.Im still half-dead,so that might be the reason WHY i though they were differnt.*Shrugs* Anyways,what do you guys think about it? ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ Gimme a Valentine Mouse 22 18:14, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

erm.. I think this looks fine, though the conversation above sort of confused me. Comments before approval? --Bramble-sama 20:04, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

Approved ✐+ᖱ = 12:55, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

Rainstorm (W)- Approved

Rainstorm.warrior(Yes this image is #36.) However, I saw my image for Rising Moon ready for approval and (yes it's me again) I put him up!!! My first mottled cat...Comments?--NewYearPath Fireworks! Poof... 19:11, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

He seems a bit dark. Maybe lighten him up a little? --Quiet!... 21:41, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

He, he looks a little blue to me. --IcyLet's Go 2010! 19:07, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

He's supposed to be blue.--NewYearPath Fireworks! Poof... 20:54, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the shading on his haunch more.--:) Mousetalon And A Mousey New Year!!!!! 21:25, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

The spots look a bit like a pattern to me, maybe try scattering a few more of varied sizes in an uneven way? Usually on mottled cats I see the spots concentrating toward the spine, so if you just sprinkle a few more along his back, it would probably look a bit more natural. Insane Batteries not Included 15:58, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

This hasn't been worked on for almost a week. Please work on this soon or it might be declined. --Hд₩₭₮д£O₦ 23:51, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, I have to take a short hiatus from working on this. Stupid homework. *Kills Pre-algebra.* So can someone decline this, and I'll put it back up later?--NewYearPath Fireworks! Poof... 21:08, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

NVM what I said, I finished homework and my work for the weekend :) I'll work on this tonight.--NewYearPath Fireworks! Poof... 21:13, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. yep!--MossI'm Up There! 22:46, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

Perhaps make the spots a little darker. --Hд₩₭₮д£O₦ 17:30, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, we can barely see them now.--Møųşëţąłőʼn!! 02:30, January 11, 2010 (UTC)

Workin' on it, thank god death week is over ^.^MossI'm Up There! 23:29, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

Blur them (the spots) more, please.Møųşëţąłőʼn!! 00:28, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.MossI'm Up There! 18:06, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a bit lighter. And also, his eye kind of looks like it's the same color as his pelt. Could you make it a different color? Like amber or a lighter blue? --SweetheartHappy Valentine's Day! 21:39, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded.MossI'm Up There! 23:08, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading a lot, it's hard to see right now. And then make the ear pink more triangular, and raise it up more NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 02:34, January 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Is the ear pink okay? And I added more highlights to bring out the shading a bit more also.MossI'm Up There! 22:48, January 20, 2010 (UTC)

I think the ear pink still needs to be lightened a bit. Try looking at Rippletail's image for reference. --SweetheartHappy Valentine's Day! 01:35, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks, Sunny, I didn't even notice! Anything else?MossI'm Up There! 22:41, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

The color of his ear pink is much better! But, try positioning it a little higher NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 22:43, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Phew!MossI'm Up There! 22:54, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? ✐+ᖱ = 19:50, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

Approved ✐+ᖱ = 19:09, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

Star That Shines On Water - Approved

i'm sorry to bramble by yelling,but i've got minnowtail aproved so this is the 2nd one.--*Ivy spring!!* 03:09, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

File:Star that shines on water.png

The mudstreaks look unnatural... make them darker, and disconnect the ones that are connected. The streak on the head also looks strange. --★ Batwing ☽ ⋆Deputy⋆ 18:51, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

Just blur them and maybe smudge them a bit.--:) Mousetalon Meow to me! 00:17, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded i think its ready for approval,but thats for b,s,i,e,d,m&s to decide.--*Ivy spring!!* 03:48, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

Add a streak to the top of her head, and blur the shading and highlights--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 03:49, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded--*Ivy pool~* 04:03, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

The shading on her haunch still needs to be blurred.--:) Mousetalon Meow to me! 00:38, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded,but i'm not sure where the haunches are.--.--:) Ivy Hi 03:47, January 7, 2010 (UTC)


File:Haunches diagram.png I've circled the haunches--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 03:55, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

reyploadedthanks night!!i'm really proud of this.--.--:) Ivy Hi there!! 11:09, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Dodge the muzzle, it looks flat.--:) Mousetalon Meow to me! 22:42, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded--.--:) Ivy Hi there!! 11:06, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

It still looks kind of flat, and the eyes look wierd. look at Icy's tutorial for help with that. --Nightwhisker98Rawr! 21:14, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded!!--.--:) Ivy Hi there!! 02:38, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - The streak that goes from the neck the past the shoulder, could you make it look like it follows the shape of her body more? Right now it's just there. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 18:34, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded!!!!!!!--.--:) Ivy Hi there!! 11:36, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Dodge the muzzle a bit more, and blur the ear pink a bit more. --Icy-chan 15:46, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded--.--:) Ivy Hi there!! 11:12, January 19, 2010 (UTC)

I don't like the way the mud on her shoulder connects to the mud on her body in one long line... perhaps separate it ✐+ᖱ = 20:36, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

In addition to what Sandy said about the mud streaks, the one that's curvy on the tail looks unnatural...mud isn't going to make itself that pretty on the pelts of cats. XP So maybe try disconnecting it and making it a little bit straighter? --Icy-chan 23:52, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

reu[lpaddekk spelling..--.--:) Ivy Hi there!! 06:17, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

This looks fine to me. Comments before approval? ✐+ᖱ = 11:52, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

Approved ✐+ᖱ = 19:11, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

Sorreltail (Q) - Approved

File:Sorreltail queen .png

I know, this is image number 43 (:O). But lots are in the 24 hour stage. Feel free to decline due to image number. Anyways, here's Sorreltail as a queen! Awesome cat in my opinion. Comments? --★ Batwing ☽ ⋆Deputy⋆ 22:38, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

I thought I had her reserved?--:) Mousetalon Meow to me! 22:39, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

Well, whatever. First, it looks nothing like her warrior image.--:) Mousetalon Meow to me! 22:41, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading at the very end of the back. --IcestormI LIKE TACO BELL!!! 22:42, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

Mouse - nope, you had her reserved as an apprentice, and just changed it, if you look at the history, I had her first. -sigh- I can't make it look like the warrior image, not texture-wise atleast, 'cause I got the colors from the warrior image. And, you didn't need to post yours here, as it looks even less like her warrior image. --★ Batwing ☽ ⋆Deputy⋆ 22:44, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Blurred back shading. Better? --★ Batwing ☽ ⋆Deputy⋆ 22:46, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

I know, that's why I said whatever. I didn't mean the texture, I don't know if anybody can do that, I mean the pattern of her fur. But I don't care about mine. I used it as an example. But, the side of the queen is the same side as the warrior, and her fur pattern doesn't look like her warrior image.--:) Mousetalon Meow to me! 22:53, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

Mouse is right, it doesn't really look anything like her warrior picture. Here, look-- Sorreltail--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 23:18, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

You should let Mousetalon have it. She reserved it first. This one doesn't look like her warrior image. The white is supposed to be on her belly.--NightshineLet it snow! 23:40, January 9, 2010 (UTC)


Right, this one should be declined, Mousetalon not only reserved it, but also hers looks more like her warrior pic. SwiftpeltHow's the prey running?

HEY! STOP! She reserved it before me, apparently, and she could always edit hers.--:) Mousetalon Meow to me! 00:13, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

ENOUGH. If you get off your butts and check the history, you'll see that I reserved it first, Swiftpelt and Nightshine. I doubt you even looked to see who reserved it first. It's not your place to say things like that. Swiftpelt, you're a new user here, so please don't go around saying what should and shoudn't be declined. That's up to Bramble, Sandy and the senior warriors. Mousetalon had the apprentice version reserved, and changed it today. I've had her reserved as a queen for quite away. And about it looking like the warrior image. This happened with Lionheart as well, and I'm pretty sick of it. I'm not a copy machine, please don't act like I should be, 'cause I doubt any of you who commented could make a better one. --★ Batwing ☽ ⋆Deputy⋆ 00:24, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Blue,calm down. ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ Valentineღ 22 13:27, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

And Swiftpelt, if there's anything that makes me mad, it's comments like yours. It's not your area to say this should be declined. Why don't you go check the history and see how wrong yoou are? --★ Batwing ☽ ⋆Deputy⋆ 00:25, January 10, 2010 (UTC)


Sorry, It's just that they said it.... It's not like I meant to say anything against you... Sorry.... SwiftpeltHow's the prey running?

Hey guys, calm down. You can take this to your talk pages and discuss it gently. As for it not looking like her warrior image, wer'e just trying to go for consistency here. Lionheart was coming out very well, and it was your choice to withdraw him. Just get to work on her, and at least try to make her look as much like her warrior image as you can--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 00:48, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Swift : -sigh- Sorry, I just hate it when people say stuff that they have no idea about. Night : As I said, I'm not a copy machine, and it seems like you guys won't accept less than that: a copy. I'll try to re-do it, but then it will probally look even less like her warrior image. --★ Batwing ☽ ⋆Deputy⋆ 00:53, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Not trying to "feed the flames" here, but I think if you make her belly white and focus the black and ginger on her back, that could make it look a bit more like the warrior image. (I think that's the main issue the others have with it, but correct me if I'm wrong). I don't think they're trying to say that you need to have the patches PERFECTLY, just that it does look a bit odd with the patches on the stomach (although none of them said anything about how you should change it, so I can understand why it was frustrating). I'm sure if you just did that, everyone could calm down... I agree that this is getting very out of hand.

ⓘⓝⓢⓐⓝⓔⓤⓛⓐⓡ 00:54, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, Bluestar, I didn't ask for them to say that stuff.--:) Mousetalon Meow to me! 01:00, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

It's not your fault Mouse. And I agree with Insane. If you tell me what to fix I'll be fine, but if you just tell me it needs fixing, I won't be that happy with you. --★ Batwing ☽ ⋆Deputy⋆ 01:25, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

If you look at the patches on her warrior image, you can see how to do them, that;s what I did.--:) Mousetalon Meow to me! 01:32, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Now why couldn't anybody have told me that in the first place? --★ Batwing ☽ ⋆Deputy⋆ 01:39, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - There, I completley redid her. Better? --★ Batwing ☽ ⋆Deputy⋆ 01:53, January 10, 2010 (UTC)


It looks good. The one thing that I see is that the ear pink could be more darker so we can see it. --Happy New Year!09 01:54, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

That is better Bluestar! Blur the shading and highlights, and then maybe daken the shading on the white parts of her body--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 01:58, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Looks awesome, Bluestar :) That was what the people complaining were referring to, right? It was the only thing I could see wrong with it. ⓘⓝⓢⓐⓝⓔⓤⓛⓐⓡ 02:23, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I think I made the shading on the white too dark... --★ Batwing ☽ ⋆Deputy⋆ 03:23, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

It's fine, just blur it some more.--:) Mousetalon Meow to me! 04:20, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken the shading on the white fur, I can barely see it. --Icy-chan 14:47, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Blurred shading. Icethroat, I don't know if it's just my computer, but the shading already looks really dark on mine. --ßąէωïиց 17:16, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the neck shading. Also, the shading is dark depending on what angle you look at it for white cats, so make the brush size bigger and go over the shading you have now as well as adding some new shading (making it thicker), so it looks sort of like the shading on the white fur of Poppyfrost's queen image. --Icy-chan 17:31, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? --ßąէωïиց 17:37, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe blur the highlights on the tail.--Møųşëţąłőʼn!! 02:25, January 11, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the belly shading and on the fore arm and neck--Nightshine 04:26, January 11, 2010 (UTC)

There is a shadow on the image.--AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 21:12, January 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - The changes aren't showing up... ßąէωïиց 21:09, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

...Ok now they are. Better? ßąէωïиց 21:08, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

Yep! But it's kinda hard to see the ear pink, maybe lighten it some? And then that small strip of ginger color on the very tip of her tail could be blurred more NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 00:03, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I got the ear pink from the warrior image, but I lightened it anyway. Better? ßąէωïиց 00:40, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the white parts a little. This is really good Blue.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 20:39, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaed - Meh, it looks too dark to me. What do you guys think? ßąէωïиց 19:36, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

No, I think the shading looks fine. Good job! NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 20:05, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the neck shading a lot more. --Icy-chan 15:48, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to user being blocked. Bluestar has given permission for this to be edited, should anyone want to. --Bramble-sama 19:48, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

So, can I edit this image I think it is quite good Icecloud33 01:13, January 19, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry Icy but I've edited it and forgot to upload it. Should I change the title from "Declined" back to "For Approval"? Anyways any other comments? IcestormHi There! 01:35, January 19, 2010 (UTC)



It's okay I wanted to do Lionheart's deputy image Icecloud33 20:21, January 19, 2010 (UTC)

The shading needs to be blurred all over, especially on the back. The transitoin is very hard. also add a little more shading on the white parts of the fur. Bramble-sama 02:23, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

Since she won't be on for a month, will this be declined? Møųşëţąłőʼn!! 19:46, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

Icestorm's adopted it with Blue's permission ✐+ᖱ = 20:43, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

On her tail, can you put the black and ginger patches all on one side like on her warrior image? Other than that, this looks awesome. insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular 21:27, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

Aw, sorry I can't work on this. SO maybe someone else can? (Reason:Busy with other Chararts)IcestormHi There! 02:40, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

Well, I'll do it if it's okay since Patchfoot is in CBA? This is pretty close to being approved anyway, methinks. insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular 02:43, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

That's fine Insane. Really, this doesn't need much. ✐+ᖱ = 11:54, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

Alright, I reuploaded it. I rearranged the patches on the tail to look more like the warrior image, and added more shading and highlights. I haven't shaded a queen before, though, so do they look okay? (Come to think of it, I haven't done a tortoiseshell before either. XD) insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular 13:06, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights need blending, but the shading is good =) ✐+ᖱ = 16:53, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blended the highlights more, as much as I could. Does it look better? insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular 19:28, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? ✐+ᖱ = 19:34, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. Nice work Blue, Ice and Insane =) Combined effort there! ✐+ᖱ = 19:23, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

Seville - Approved

File:Seville.Kittypet.pngI thought I'd might as well put this up now since I'm going to see Avatar today. Anyway, this is my first kittypet:) Constructments? --Hд₩₭₮д£O₦ 20:01, January 22, 2010 (UTC)

D'aww, someone else put something up at the same time as me and now mine's over the limitD: Sorry about thatD: --Hд₩₭₮д£O₦ 20:04, January 22, 2010 (UTC)

Huh, maybe make the ear pink more of a darker pink color,seeing as to me it's to light.I am Half-dead right now again so,yeah. ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ FirePelt(L)_Sunny.png 22 21:53, January 22, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Yay, it's under the limit now:D Anyway, I fixed the ear pink (I hope). Better? --Hд₩₭₮д£O₦ 17:24, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

Yep. Maybe add a highlight on the front paw. IcestormHi There! 17:59, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Added the highlight. --Hд₩₭₮д£O₦ 18:10, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? ✐+ᖱ = 11:58, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

Approved ✐+ᖱ = 19:27, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

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