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Tawnypelt(A) - Approved

File:Tawnypelt(A).png I know this is over the limit, so please take this down if necessary. Well I personally love Tawnypelt, even if she was Tigerstar's daughter and some elders didn't treat her well about it. One of my favs characters. My second tortoiseshell and first apprentice for approval. Comments?Hidden-Valentine ღ 15:54, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

The highlight you have above the leg looks odd to me,it seems alittle too bright.But,Im still half dead even after I crashed in my cloths at like 8:00 last night because I've been tired all week.So,yeah. ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ FirePelt(L)_Sunny.png 22 15:58, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

Oh my StarClan, this is amazing Sunny! I think it looks fine, but that's just my opinion.MossI'm Up There! 16:01, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks both of you!! And Firey I will wait for more comments about the legs, if you don't mind.Hidden-Valentine ღ 16:04, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

It's not the legs,it'sthe small hightlight ABOVE the legs that kinda bothers me. ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ FirePelt(L)_Sunny.png 22 16:06, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

Oh now I see it!! I'll go fix it right away!Hidden-Valentine ღ 16:10, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I darken teh highlight.Hidden-Valentine ღ 16:19, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

Much better. ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ FirePelt(L)_Sunny.png 22 16:21, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more of a reddish color like on her warrior version. Then this should be ready. Great job, this looks really awesome! --Icy-chan 18:01, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

Due to my just putting the notice up, this can stay here. Hiddensun, in future, don't go over the limit intentionally. :) On the image, great job. Icethroat's hit it on the head, so just do what she said and it'll be good. --Bramble-sama 18:21, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

Amazing job.Do what Icy says,and she should be good. ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ Gimme a Valentine Mouse 22 18:27, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-changed the ear color.Hidden-Valentine ღ 16:37, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? ✐+ᖱ = 16:39, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

Approved ✐+ᖱ = 19:29, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

Purdy (KP) Approved

Purdy.kittypet Oh my god, this is probably my worst attempt at copying another image ever... because Quietstep's work on his elder image was so awesome that I couldn't copy it. Alright, criticism? *dies* insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular 12:53, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink slightly. This is great though! ✐+ᖱ = 13:13, January 24, 2010 (UTC)


'Reuploaded Why is it always the ear pink that kills me? O///O insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular 13:16, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

I love it, but would he really have patchy fur as a kittypet? I think that just happened when he became a loner. What do you guys think?--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 22:08, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

Well he was old so patchy fur as a kittypet should be ok.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 22:20, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

Umm any other issues? (I had the same thinking as you on the patched fur, Ahsshadow) insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular 12:09, January 25, 2010 (UTC)



Just one more thing, and this should be ready. Just blur that shading that's right around his haunch, and goes up to his armpit (lol) NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 23:07, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded, did I blur in the right spot, Night? insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular 00:21, January 26, 2010 (UTC)



Yes, I think so. I think this looks great! Comments Before Approval? NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 00:32, January 26, 2010 (UTC)

Approved!--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 20:08, January 26, 2010 (UTC)

Snowstar (L) - Approved

File:Snowstar Leader PCA.png

(M) - I love how he told Redscar to elect a new deputy.

..You'd think a white cat would be named Snowstar, but no.

My first time using the leader blanks. And look! I gave him fur! Which is 1337. :3

...Comments? Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 22:37, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

Oh. My. God. This is AMAZING! The only thing I could see that might be tweaked is that his ear pink is a bit faint, but seriously, that's EPIC texturing. *wishes I could do that* insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular 22:39, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

(M) - Thanks a bunch Insaneular! (Can I call you that?) As for the ear pink, if you look up gray cats on google they tend to have faint ear pink. If you still want me to change it, I'll be happy to though. ^_^ Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 22:51, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

Lol, you can call me whatever you want (I mean... anything reasonable XD) But I only mentioned the ear pink, because although in real life cats' ears aren't that pink at all, on the wiki I've seen most cats with very bright ear pink despite pelt color. I don't have an issue with it, it looks amazing, just thought it was kinda the way everyone did it :P If nobody else minds, I don't have an issue with it. insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular 00:17, January 26, 2010 (UTC)



Okay, I don't see anything wrong with it! This picture is AWSOME! Comments Before Approval? NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 00:40, January 26, 2010 (UTC)

Approved!--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 03:14, January 27, 2010 (UTC)

Sneezepaw (Ki) -Approved

File:Sneezekit.png Heres Sneezekit. AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 16:44, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

This is good! Just blur the shading a bit. MaplefernHi everyone! 16:47, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thankies Maple(can I call you that?). I blurred the shading and made the background transparent cause I forgot the first time. Anything else?AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 17:00, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

Not that I can see; this looks awesome. Comments before approval? --Icy-chan 12:07, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

Approved!--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 20:42, January 27, 2010 (UTC)

Mistyfoot (Q)- Approved

File:Mistyfoot Queen.pngI know this is over the limit- wait, it isn't! What a miracle! LOL. Well, here is my favorite character as a pretty queen! Comments? Møųşëţąłőʼn!! 15:25, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

This is great! I love the eyes. Darken the ear pink a tad.--Nightshine 19:20, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I think I'm getting the hang of queens! Møųşëţąłőʼn!! 20:11, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

I think you are too! ;) Comments before approval? --Icy-chan 21:46, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

Rock - Approved

File:Rock.Healer.pngNot much to say about this one... Constructments? --Hд₩₭₮д£O₦ 20:09, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

This is good! I tried making one of Rock before. Darken the ear pink a bit--Nightshine 20:23, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

Well, I had been thinking, if he should really be classified as a healer, seeing as how he didn't lead or serve as medicine cat to the ancients, just did the sharpclaw tests, but image-wise, it's really the only thing he could be classified as (And it's not my place to decide anyway so just ignore my ramblings... ehehe). Anyways, I might be wrong on this, but he would still have pupils even though he's blind, right? Because if he went blind just from spending time in the darkness, he wouldn't just... lose his pupils, would he? As I said, I'm not sure, but I would have thought he'd still have them. Other than that the image is awesome though! insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular 20:25, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

I think he would have a pupil too. Maybe make it gray to show that he's blind.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 20:37, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

If you want to see my picture of Rock go here. --Nightshine 20:40, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

Aksully most blind peaple/animal have a pupil like a normal person/animal so he should have a normal eye just like Jayfeather. Right? Echopaw 21:03, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Darkened the ear pink and added pupils. I always imagined Rock without them, so I guess erasing the pupils was a bit of an accident ^ ^; And Insane, Rock was was listed as a Healer on his charcat template, so I just made him one. Though I do agree that he didn't really do any Healer stuff at all. --Hд₩₭₮д£O₦ 21:21, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

(M) - Rock! (Glomps) For the image, smooth out the tail lineart. Also, if you can, add some wrinkles; hairless cats have many wrinkles. Finally, make his skin color more like this. It's a Sphynx cat (Also called hairless cat). (Ignore the darker patches.) Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 22:47, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Ah, Sphynx cats, the ETs of the cat worldXD Anyway, I fixed the tail, added wrinkles, and changed the color. --Hд₩₭₮д£O₦ 20:19, January 26, 2010 (UTC)

(M) - Lol! It looks great now. Just one thing (which I should have mentioned above, but oh well). Just add some shading beside each wrinkle line to show that they curve in there. Do that and then he should be good. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 22:11, January 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Added the shading. --Hд₩₭₮д£O₦ 22:31, January 26, 2010 (UTC)

Looks great! Comments before approval?Darkhallows 23:10, January 26, 2010 (UTC)

This is awesome! I got kind of freaked out when I saw it at first. Maybe you should add a few tiny wrinkles to the tail.--Nightshine 00:26, January 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Thanks^ ^ I added the wrinkles. --Hд₩₭₮д£O₦ 22:03, January 27, 2010 (UTC)

So ugly, but cute too xD. CBA?(again)Darkhallows 00:40, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

If this weren't Rock I would say it was ugly, but it is so great job!Minnowclaw 01:25, January 29, 2010 (UTC)

Lol, approved. Bramble-sama 22:26, January 29, 2010 (UTC)

Stoneteller - Approved

File:Stoneteller(H).png Here he is again.----Nightshine 03:04, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

He looks good! But wouldn't he have mudstreaks? I don't remember whether it said in the book or not--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 03:06, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm, I'm not sure. It said in Outcast that he hardly ever leaves the cave. Would he need mud streaks?--Nightshine 03:12, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, that's a good point. Let me check in Moonrise real quick... --NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 03:25, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, it says right here- Then he spotted Crag again, emerging from the far passage and padding across the caave floor toward the tight group of forest cats. He was followed by another cat, long-bodied and skinny as a WindClan warrior. So much mud plastered his fur that Stormfur couldn't make out what color it was underneath, but his eyes were a deep glowing green, and a few white hairs around his muzzle betrayed the fact that he was older than the cats they had seen so far. That's from Moonrise, pg 113. So, according to this, he does have mud on him--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 03:29, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I added mud streaks. I don't think they look that great though--Nightshine 03:54, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

Make them thicker and Darken them. MaplefernHi everyone! 11:21, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with thickening them but i think the color is fine.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 15:17, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I thickened and darkened them a bit.--Nightshine 04:51, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

Make the earpink more of a reddish color. Also blur the highlight (?) around his muzzle. IcestormHi There! 01:24, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Changed ear pink. I think the muzzle is fine though.--Nightshine 20:36, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe add a mud streak to his head. ♥Mouse♥♥Heart♥60px 00:05, January 27, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Added mud streaks to head.--Nightshine 01:15, January 27, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? ✐+ᖱ = 21:16, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble-sama 22:30, January 29, 2010 (UTC)

Sasha (Q) - Approved

if somebody has it, please let me do it!!it took me time.and leafpool;s for comments before approval, so i think its okay..--:) Ivy Hi there!! 11:54, January 9, 2010 (UTC) Sasha


It looks good, but you should either blur or burn the brown parts.. Then it will look perfect! SwiftpeltHow's the prey running?

The shading looks a little lumpy. Blend it more.--Darkhallows 14:25, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

Can you darken the brown stripes and other markings a bit? They look a little lighter then the rogue version... ⓘⓝⓢⓐⓝⓔⓤⓛⓐⓡ 17:33, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

It looks AMAZING!!!! I don't know how you get approval cuz I'm an apprintice but you should get it!!!Artimas Hunter 22:37, January 10, 2010 (UTC)Artimas Hunter

Blur the belly shading A LOT.--Møųşëţąłőʼn!! 00:50, January 11, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded--.--:) Ivy Hi there!! 10:44, January 11, 2010 (UTC)

Blur it some more. --Icy-chan 22:07, January 12, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded.--:) Ivy Hi there!! 03:06, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

She looks a little cross eyed. Try making the eyes like in Poppyfrost--Nightshine 04:14, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Nightshine, she looks a little cross-eyed, but overall beautiful--QuailflightTheAVATAR!Give me a mouse. NOW! 04:17, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded--.--:) Ivy Hi there!! 02:41, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights across her pelt, they look lumpy NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 01:53, January 16, 2010 (UTC) reuploadedlalala!!i'm gonna see avatar!!--.--:) Ivy Hi there!! 11:46, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Cool, I hope you like it :) And that looks much better. But make the ear pink a little bigger, look at an approved queen image for reference NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 22:15, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

i don't see problems.. anyway night,thanks for adding comments every time!:)--.--:) Ivy Hi there!! 06:57, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

The pelt looks a bit smudgy - blend it some more. ✐+ᖱ = 21:59, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded!!--.--:) Ivy Hi there!! 11:14, January 19, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink. And just do a once-over with the blur tool over the whole image. Bramble-sama 02:26, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded--.--:) Ivy Hi there!! 04:19, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

I can still see where you've used to the smudge tool... ✐+ᖱ = 11:53, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded--.--:) Ivy Hi there!! 06:56, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

big deal no one comes in!!!--.--:) Ivy Hi there!! 10:09, January 29, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? ✐+ᖱ = 16:51, January 29, 2010 (UTC)

EHH??WHAT IS CBA??.--:) Ivy Hi there!! 01:00, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Watch the caps. It's comments before approval. Congratz.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 01:05, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

As Ash said. Approved ✐+ᖱ = 15:18, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Lionheart (D) - Approved

File:Lionheart(Deputy).png (All but the tail and far leg are made by Dawnfeather) His tail turned out weird -- Icecloud33 02:23, January 22, 2010 (UTC)

This is over the image limit. Please take this down. IcestormHi There! 02:25, January 22, 2010 (UTC)

I thought the limit was 35 this is image 34 so ? Icecloud33 02:26, January 22, 2010 (UTC)

She has a point but i thought he was allready done as a deputy Echopaw 02:27, January 22, 2010 (UTC)

Bluestar had him up but she withdrew him i think Icecloud33 02:29, January 22, 2010 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure his other deputy image was withdrawn/declined? And yeah, it's only image 34, so it should be okay. Not much I can see wrong with this image :) Except, add shading on his other front paw (the one that's raised, and in the back of the other) and maybe add a highlight on his tail? ⓘⓝⓢⓐⓝⓔⓤⓛⓐⓡ 02:30, January 22, 2010 (UTC)

NVM. Thought this was 35. For the image, make the ear pink more pink not purple. IcestormHi There! 02:31, January 22, 2010 (UTC)

Um, Reuploaded and the ear pink is from the warrior image Icecloud33 02:35, January 22, 2010 (UTC)

Why is he sitting on his tail? Try fixing that.--Nightshine 03:35, January 22, 2010 (UTC)

And also his eyes should be green. This looks like a copy of the warrior image wit the tail redone.--Nightshine 03:37, January 22, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, Now that Nightshine mentioned it, it's not the right deputy blank. There's too much of his back leg showing, it should be covered by his tail. How did you get the tail like that? o3o ⓘⓝⓢⓐⓝⓔⓤⓛⓐⓡ 11:48, January 22, 2010 (UTC)

I'm not sure i will try fixing it Icecloud33 12:44, January 22, 2010 (UTC)

Is this better? Icecloud33 13:00, January 22, 2010 (UTC)

You need to make his eyes green--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 19:46, January 22, 2010 (UTC)

His warrior image has amber eyes. Shoudn't we go for consistency Seastar 19:57, January 22, 2010 (UTC)

It does have green eyes (warrior image) anyway Better? AngelstormPurr all the way! :) 20:15, January 22, 2010 (UTC)

When you copy-and-pasted, the lineart was off...try erasing the lineart that should be there (close to the ear and the head). --Icy-chan 21:51, January 22, 2010 (UTC)

White pixle on chest,the lineart it weird nest to head and head,looks like he is sitting on his tail. ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ FirePelt(L)_Sunny.png 22 22:47, January 22, 2010 (UTC)

His tail is fine.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 22:50, January 22, 2010 (UTC)

Their is extra line art on places. Thinin it, and it should be good. IcestormHi There! 18:01, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

Better? AngelstormPurr all the way! :) 01:08, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes on the tail are really bothering me. Could you try and make them look, more irregular, instead of just perfect triangles?--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 01:15, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

Better? we accidentaly uploaded this on Spottedsky's account AngelstormPurr all the way! :) 01:26, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry about that Icy I forgot to log out Seastar 01:30, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, but darken them. I can't really se them all that well. And add one to the tip of the tail NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 17:37, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

Better? AngelstormPurr all the way! :) 00:05, January 26, 2010 (UTC)

Yep :) But darken the shading on the tail, and don't forget to blur it NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 00:30, January 26, 2010 (UTC)

I darkened the shading AngelstormPurr all the way! :) 00:35, January 26, 2010 (UTC)

Just so you know, this is not Bluestars image. I just did the same things that she did. AngelPaw 21:37, January 27, 2010 (UTC)

There's a stripe on his tail that's split in half. It's right by the stripe on the tail tip. Just reconnect it, and then perhaps dodge the tail more? It looks a bit flat compared to the rest of the body--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 20:46, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

Better? AngelPaw 20:52, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

Yep :) Darken the shading where the tail connects to the body, and I think this will be ready--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 22:35, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

Better? AngelPaw 22:49, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

This looks good to me. Comments before approval? ✐+ᖱ = 16:54, January 29, 2010 (UTC)

Approved ✐+ᖱ = 15:22, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Bella (KP) - Approved

File:Bella(KP).png Constructments? ✐+ᖱ = 15:24, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe darken the stripes a little bit, and then this should be good. --Icy-chan 17:05, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded ✐+ᖱ = 17:30, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink more--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 22:17, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Sorry for taking so long ✐+ᖱ = 17:52, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --Icy-chan 00:32, January 29, 2010 (UTC)

None other than it's awsome!Minnowclaw 01:55, January 29, 2010 (UTC)

Approved ✐+ᖱ = 15:30, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Socks (Lo) - Approved

File:Socks(L).png Here's Socks! I'm still not very fond of him, but I did feel a little sorry for them when they were abandoned by their twolegs. But it did teach them a lesson, however, if I had been Scourge, I would have forgiven them and helped them. Anyway, how is he?--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 00:32, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

I'd lighten the eye colour a touch. MaplefernHi everyone! 00:35, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Better? I had to change the file name because the changes weren't showing up. Also, the highlights were kinda bugging me so I darkened them a smidge--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 00:48, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading a touch. IcestormHi There! 12:59, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I blurred it as much as I can. *stabs pixlr*--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 19:05, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

Lol. That's better. But maybe make the highlights more visable? IcestormHi There! 22:03, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I'am horrible at highlighting black cats. I he better?--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 00:38, January 26, 2010 (UTC)

Yep. :) IcestormHi There! 13:12, January 26, 2010 (UTC)

Since I'm not a senior warrior any more someone needs to approve this because it's great. Good job!Minnowclaw 01:27, January 29, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? ✐+ᖱ = 16:56, January 29, 2010 (UTC)

Approved ✐+ᖱ = 15:33, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Oscar- Approved

File:Oscar(KP).png I've been waiting to post this and Sneezekit just got approved. comments?AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 20:49, January 27, 2010 (UTC)

This is awsome! But try adding some shading to the base of the tail (Or the butt :D) and blur the ear pink some more--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 20:51, January 27, 2010 (UTC)

The tag doesn't seem right. There's a line running from the bottom of it to the fur. I don't know if it's the lineart or not. Birchy 20:55, January 27, 2010 (UTC)

It's a part of the lineart. I wasn't sure if I should color it or if that line was a mistake. Which do you think?AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 20:58, January 27, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe you should erase it. It just looks unusal. Oh, there's a blob of black on it too. Birchy 21:00, January 27, 2010 (UTC)

Both mistakes, but for some reason it's been happening on several people's kittypets. You should erase them though. They're not meant to be there (I'm 99% sure) insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular 21:01, January 27, 2010 (UTC)

'Reuploaded. 'Thanks everybody. Blurred earpink and removed black spots. Is this what you meant by add shading to the base of the tail Night?AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 21:26, January 27, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, that's better :) Add some shading to that tiny bottom part of the hind leg that's almost hidden. (Do you know which one I mean?)--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 21:30, January 27, 2010 (UTC)

Yup. anymore comments before I reupload.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 21:38, January 27, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading a touch on the upper half of the hind leg that is shown (do I make sense?) MaplefernHi everyone! 23:14, January 27, 2010 (UTC)

Yup. I'll update him tomorrow(mostly because I managed to distract myself with cooking mama) and to allow time for more comments.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 23:23, January 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 20:39, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

This is great! I can't see anything wrong!--Minnowclaw 01:13, January 29, 2010 (UTC)

I agree :D Comments Before Approval?--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 05:47, January 29, 2010 (UTC)

Approved ✐+ᖱ = 15:38, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Daisy (Lo)- Approved

File:Daisy Loner.png*shudders* My first loner. Go on, tell me how bad it is. Go on, go on. ♥Mouse♥♥Heart♥60px 23:44, January 27, 2010 (UTC)

I see nothing wrong about this its really good! Echopaw 23:49, January 27, 2010 (UTC)

The shading under the neck is a bit dark, and the shading could be blurred a touch more. But this isn't bad at all! MaplefernHi everyone! 23:52, January 27, 2010 (UTC)

Agreed with Maple, and also the tail shading is a little dark. Awesome image!MossI'm Up There! 21:31, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

This is great other than the things mentioned. Great job!!!!!--Minnowclaw 01:08, January 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Yay! You're back, Minnow! Okay, anything else? ♥Mouse♥♥Heart♥60px 03:39, January 29, 2010 (UTC)

I don't see anything else :D Comments Before Approval?--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 05:48, January 29, 2010 (UTC)

Approved ✐+ᖱ = 15:40, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Brackenfur (Kit) - Approved

File:Brackenfur (K).png


Ok.... This is my first kit. I looked at the tutorials, and i'm not quite sure if I shaded, dodged, burned, and blurred right but..... I'm an apprentice, and proud of my work! :D SwiftpeltHow's the prey running?


Try uploading it on here so we can see the picture without clicking on the link.--NightshineLet it snow! 01:39, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

I tried, but It didn't work... Do you think you could save it and upload it yourself? Swiftpelt 04:01, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

Got it. That's a very interesting file name though--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 04:44, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

The shading needs to be blurred more, and... it looks a little yellow.--Darkhallows 14:28, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the yellow spots. Make the ear pink darker and thicken the tabby stripes.--IcestormI LIKE TACO BELL!!! 21:42, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is like, hot pink. Make it like his warrior image-- Brackenfur. And the stripes look way to much like thin veins. Maybe try and make them a little thicker, or bigger, then blur them. --NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 22:00, January 9, 2010 (UTC)


Reuploaded Better? SwiftpeltHow's the prey running?

The ear pink is much better. But his nose needs to be the same color as the ear pink, or at least really close--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 23:49, January 9, 2010 (UTC)


Reuploaded Nose fixed. SwiftpeltHow's the prey running?

The Tabby stripes need to be blurred, and his pelt color looks a bit too orange, can you try and make it a bit more golden brown like his warrior pic? ⓘⓝⓢⓐⓝⓔⓤⓛⓐⓡ 00:46, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Now it's about as golden brown as It can get. SwiftpeltHow's the prey running?

Look at his warrior image and take the colours from there.Snowfern Snow! 01:44, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I gave it better coloring.SwiftpeltHow's the prey running?

Okay, the color is a lot better. But the ear pink looks weird, one's smaller than the other. Please make them as even as possible. Second, the stripes still need to be blurred some. And third, the eyes look... strange. Like maybe some lineart was cut off? Look at User:Icethroat21/Tutorials for help on the eye--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 06:10, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Eyes fixed, ears fixed, stripes blurred.SwiftpeltHow's the prey running?

Add a stripe to each of the front two paws, blur the highlights, and there's some lineart missing in multiple places. Also, the ear pink looks a little purplish, make it more pinkish or reddish. --Icy-chan 16:56, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded A else? SwiftpeltHow's the prey running?

The ear pink is too bright, make it more salmony. Second, blur his chest shading.--Møųşëţąłőʼn!! 02:26, January 11, 2010 (UTC)


Reuploaded SwiftpeltHow's the prey running?


Look at his warrior image for earpink color and blur chest shading more. --Nightwhisker98Rawr! 21:11, January 14, 2010 (UTC) Brackenfur


' ' 'Reuploaded' ' ' I think this has been up for about a week now. :O Swiftpelt 13:00, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

Blend the highlights on his chest and add some tabby markings to his chest. ✐+ᖱ = 19:13, January 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Swiftpelt 23:05, January 22, 2010 (UTC)

The lineart looks too thin. Try copying it back over the blank. --Icy-chan 23:55, January 23, 2010 (UTC)


Anything else? SwiftyHow's the prey running?

Darken the shading and add some under his chin. ✐+ᖱ = 20:30, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

Better? SwiftyHow's the prey running?

The stripes on the chest look really wierd. They look all jumbled up together. Try deleting some, and blur them a lot.--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 02:49, January 28, 2010 (UTC)


Reuploaded SwiftyHow's the prey running? Swiftpelt bluestar

CBA? ✐+ᖱ = 15:17, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Some of the lineart is missing--Nightshine 22:14, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

I fixed the lineart for you again Swifty. No other comments; approved ✐+ᖱ = 10:54, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Dawnpelt (Ki) - Approved

File:Dawnkit.pngThis is my first charart! Is it alright? Mistyheart 19:57, January 26, 2010 (UTC)

This is awsome Misty(mind if I call yoi that?)! I see nothing wrong.Hidden-Valentine ღ 20:13, January 26, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good Mistyheart! But blur all of her shading more --NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 20:17, January 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Is it better? (Btw, yeh, you can call me Misty, I like it!)

The eyes look a bit strange, could you make them look like the ones here? Once you fix that it should be ready, this looks really good for your first image! (A lot better than my first image. :P)--Icy-chan 22:44, January 26, 2010 (UTC)

I moved Dawnpelt. Make sure that when you re-upload her, she's not in the section heading. As for the image, blur the ear pink some. And good job, you should be glad you didn't see my first image. *shudders* ♥Mouse♥♥Heart♥60px 23:35, January 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Hey guys! I blurred the ear pink. I also changed the eyes - do they look okay now? Mistyheart 16:26, January 27, 2010 (UTC)

Hey! Looks amazing! Did you use the dodge tool? Fawnstorm 17:07, January 27, 2010 (UTC)

Yeh, I used dodge :) Is there anything else I need to work on / edit / improve? Mistyheart 17:24, January 27, 2010 (UTC)


I can't see anything that needs improving! I hope everyone sees the picture of Tawnystar. She's amazing! I tryed to load up applestar but I didn't know who to. Can you leave a message on my talk page thing? Fawnstorm 17:28, January 27, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks, Fawnstorm! What does everyone else think? Do you think there is anything else I need to work on / edit / improve? Mistyheart 18:58, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

This is great Mistyheart =) Just make the ear pink smaller ✐+ᖱ = 19:25, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

Amazing Misty and I think it won't be long before its approved! (I'm not suggesting anything, just saying!) :-) Fawnstorm 16:57, January 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Mistyheart 10:14, January 29, 2010 (UTC)


Awh, cuuuute! The shading is great. I can't wait to see if it's approved! :D Brightfrost 00:38, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink looks much better in size. Blur it more, and this should be ready :)

Reuploaded. Better now? Mistyheart 10:35, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

I think she's ready now.MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 14:33, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

I agree. This is a great first charart Misty =) Comments before approval? ✐+ᖱ = 15:36, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Approved ✐+ᖱ = 11:04, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Skywatcher (Lo) - Approved

File:Skywatcher.Loner.png I know it's section 37 but there are 2 join requests so it's still under the limit. Anywho, my first loner, comments, contructments? insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular 20:57, January 26, 2010 (UTC)

This is really beautiful!! All I see is maybe blur the shading a little more and blur the ear pink.Hidden-Valentine ღ 21:00, January 26, 2010 (UTC)

This is great! I always pictured him as a super old cat with a lighter gray muzzle but this is awesome! I agree with Hiddensun to blur the shading more.--Nightshine 00:28, January 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded, blurred shading and ear pink more; does it look better? Also, was it a specific area of shading that I needed to blur more, or, is it good now...? insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular 02:10, January 27, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, blur the shading on the back of the haunch more--Nightshine 03:34, January 27, 2010 (UTC)

Ditto above, and also, maybe add a highlight to the top of the head, or the muzzle? You don't have to if you don't want to.MossI'm Up There! 21:33, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shadding by one.--Minnowclaw 01:20, January 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded, any better? This shading is killing me for some reason. @Moss, I didn't highlight the head cause his ears are blocking where my light is coming from. And YAY, MINNOWCLAW'S BACK!! Good to see you again, Minnow! insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular 02:16, January 29, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, much better and it's good to see you too. I just couldn't stay away from this place.Minnowclaw 03:21, January 29, 2010 (UTC)

Looks much better. But there are a few places, one on his chest, and three on his hind leg that's closest to us, where the shading is very bright. They're just little specks. Darken those, and I think this will be ready :)--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 05:54, January 29, 2010 (UTC)

Fixed, sorry about those >.< insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular 20:25, January 29, 2010 (UTC)

I love it now.Minnowclaw 00:26, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? ✐+ᖱ = 15:36, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Approved ✐+ᖱ = 11:07, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Jayfeather (Ki)- Approved

File:Jaykit.pngThis is Jaykit! What do you think? It's my first Charart and I think it went quite well! I'd. like to hear suggestions for improvement! Fawnstorm 19:29, January 27, 2010 (UTC)

Not bad. His base pelt color looks a bit purpleish to me though.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 20:50, January 27, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe add some shading, blur the ear pink, and add some stripes. And..... Isn't Jayfeather LONGHAIRED? O.o SwiftyHow's the prey running?

Yep Jayfeather is Longhaired AngelPaw 01:14, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks, I'll work on it! 92.43.64.86 10:07, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I made the stripes really dark so that they seem to fade as he gets older! what do you think? He's also now longhaired!

This is a really really good first charart! The only thing I can think that needs improving is maybe use the dodge tool on his face and tail tip, and possibly edit the left stripe stripe on his chest so it is all one colour and not patchy, if you see what I mean. Brilliant! :P 86.182.38.30 17:47, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks for your advice! I'll work on it!

Reuploaded I did what you suggested on the stripe and I agree, I probaly should have do that more carefully! If you noticed I darkened the stripes completely! Hope this is OK now? I am still open for suggestions on how to improve him!!!Fawnstorm 18:48, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

Better but the stripes are too dark. Try getting the color from one of his approved images.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 19:51, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, make the stripes much thinner. See: File:Runningkit.3.png. Also, make the ear pink slightly more of a reddish colour and blend it. Then thin the shading a little bit as it looks right now as if there is just a paler patch in the middle. Look at File:Hollykit(NP).png for shading thickness. ✐+ᖱ = 20:06, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

This looks much better just blur the stripes a little more. insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular 20:29, January 29, 2010 (UTC)

ADORABLE! The stripes look much better. :) Brightfrost 14:13, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Is it better?

This looks great to me. Comments before approval? ✐+ᖱ = 15:37, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Approved ✐+ᖱ = 11:17, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Frostfur (Q) - Approved

File:Frostfur.pngYay! I think I did a good job on this.--Nightshine 00:28, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

This is good, just darken the shading a bit more and then blend a bit more. (White cats shading is always sooooooo hard :P)Minnowclaw 00:29, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I fixed the eye while I was at it.--Nightshine 00:37, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the chest, belly and tail shading. MaplefernHi everyone! 00:38, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Blurred as much as I could. --Nightshine 00:48, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

I think she is ready now. Good job Nightshine!MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 14:30, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? ✐+ᖱ = 15:43, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Approved ✐+ᖱ = 11:19, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Ice- Approved

File:Ice.rogue.png Okay, he's back up! Constructments? --SweetheartHappy Valentine's Day! 00:33, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

Looks great. Just put a little shading on the ear, and blur the ear pink just a touch. --Bramble-sama 01:10, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

It might not be necessary, but I think a couple highlights on his shoulder and haunch would make the shading look a little more dramatic :) Also, blur the ear pink. ⓘⓝⓢⓐⓝⓔⓤⓛⓐⓡ 01:33, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

Is this better? --SweetheartHappy Valentine's Day! 15:24, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading a touch and this should be ready. IcestormHi There! 17:56, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. ✐+ᖱ = 15:28, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, Sandy! I've been very busy with homework, lately. Anyway, I've blurred the shading as much as I can. --SweetheartHappy Valentine's Day! 16:17, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Looks good to me! Comments Before Approval?--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 22:29, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble-sama 21:48, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Blackclaw (E) - Approved

File:BlackclawE.png Since there are a few images that are being approved/declined, I decided it was okay to post Blackclaw as an elder. Comments/Criticism? --Happy New Year!09 01:56, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

dodge the middle,cause i chan't see the shading now.--*Ivy jingle jingle!!* 04:04, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Done. Anything other comments? --Happy New Year!09 19:20, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Perhaps darken the ear pink a little? More like his warrior image- Blackclaw--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 21:41, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Done. --Happy New Year!09 14:20, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights more--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 10:01, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

Better? --Happy New Year!09 15:03, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a little bit darker, the same color as his warrior image. --Icy-chan 22:46, January 11, 2010 (UTC)

This hasn't been touched in a week, please work on it or it will be declined NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 20:03, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

Can you keep this up for another day? I just installed Windows XP on my computer and I haven't transfered all my old information to it. I'll do it as soon as I can. Snowfall09 03:12, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

Alright, done. Anything else? Snowfall09 03:18, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink a bit more, and then this should be good. --Icy-chan 15:39, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

This hasn't been worked on in a week. Please upload soon or it will be declined NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 07:21, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

I've lost interest in continuing on working on this image. Consider this withdrawn. Snowfall09 23:58, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

If it's okay with Blackclaw I could put on the final touches to get it approved... I mean, it's a very nice looking image, it'd be a shame to get it declined now. insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular 00:23, January 26, 2010 (UTC)

When an image is withdrawn, the user loses his rights to it. You can go ahead and finish it up, Insane, so long as you give credit. Bramble-sama 23:47, January 27, 2010 (UTC)

Is it okay if I finish it while I have Skywatcher up or do I have to wait until he gets approved? Just don't want to be doing them both at once if I'm not supposed to. insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular 00:25, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

Seriously Insane, my feeling is just do it and get it approved. It was up on the page before that rule even came into place and only needs a finishing touch. ✐+ᖱ = 16:50, January 29, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Sandy, just didn't want to get anyone angry, anyways, I blurred the ear pink more since that was the only comment that I saw left. insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular 20:28, January 29, 2010 (UTC)

I didn't mean it like that, sorry - I just meant.. ah never mind. Anyway, the shading needs blending. ✐+ᖱ = 20:30, January 29, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded blurred it more, any better? insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular 20:41, January 29, 2010 (UTC)

Theres a line on his head, a little right of the eye, that you should blur. SwiftyMeow.

Reuploaded and fixed (I think) insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular 15:46, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? ✐+ᖱ = 21:53, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Approved!--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 18:25, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

Fuzzypelt(W) - Approved

File:Fuzzypelt(W).png

Hmm.. what was I gonna say on this pic... oh yes; ultimate fail. =) Please, constructments? --Bramble-sama 01:09, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe put one more tuft, right before his ear. No other comments then that. MaplefernHi everyone! 01:11, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

Bramble three words: not ultimate fail. I agree with Maple, other than that I see nothing else. IcestormHi There! 01:14, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

I've been waiting to see this one for a long time. Ice is right: so not ultimate fail. He's really good =) The bit behind his ear looks too flat though, as Maple said. ✐ᖱ = 13:27, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm.. if you say so. =) The tuft has been added right in front of the ear. --Bramble-sama 22:12, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

Hey, this is awesome Bramble! :D But why not add another tuft of fur below his right ear? I think it would look better that way. SwiftyHow's the prey running?

Another tuft has been added. --Bramble-sama 22:22, January 29, 2010 (UTC)

Looks great to me. Comments before approval? --Icy-chan 22:46, January 29, 2010 (UTC)

The shading looks a little dark to me. ✐+ᖱ = 15:29, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

I'm with sandy on the shading. How does a cat get such fluffy fur? (if you made him red he would probably look like he was on fire :P) Nice job though Bramble!MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 03:31, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, it looked fine on my computer two days ago, but now the shading does look kind of dark... *face palm* --Icethroat Happy Valentine's Day! 14:56, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

No problem. Is this better? --Bramble-sama 21:47, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

I think it looks fine :) Comments Before Approval?--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 22:58, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Approved!--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 22:48, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

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