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Pinepaw--Approved

File:Pinepaw.png Wow, this, I think is my third apprentice. Or my Fourth. Actually, it's my fifth. I've done way to many apprentices; over have my images are apprentices. I could ramble on and on....but I won't. So, Comments? —Preceding unsigned comment added by Maplefern (talkcontribs)

Whoops forgot earpink....MaplefernHi everyone! 12:45, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

Looks good, just blur all the shading more, and make the earpink a little brighter and less purple-y. insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular 13:08, January 24, 2010 (UTC)


Reuploaded. Better? MaplefernHi everyone! 13:16, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

Anything else? MaplefernHi everyone! 01:25, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading and make the ear pink smaller. IcestormHi There! 01:28, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? MaplefernHi everyone! 12:45, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

Yep. IcestormHi There! 12:52, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

Anything else? MaplefernHi everyone! 21:53, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading on both of the legs farthest from us--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 02:37, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? MaplefernHi everyone! 23:16, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

Anything else? MaplefernHi everyone! 22:04, January 29, 2010 (UTC)

Anything at all? MaplefernHi everyone! 03:13, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Looks good to me! Comments Before Approval? And Maple, users will comment when they can get on. Please don't rush them.--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 03:55, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Night. I tried to be paitent, but it doesn't come naturally. MaplefernMay StarClan light your pathHow's the Prey running? 12:31, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

L.O.L Mapple, I always have to stop my self from asking especialy, when user won't comment on yours, but will other peoples... I feel like I have to be held back! >:P. L.O.L your not alone... --MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 16:20, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Approved!--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 22:53, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

Firestar (D) - Approved

Firestar.deputy For some reason this image looks really bad to me =/ My first ginger cat. I took the colors from his kittypet image which it why it looks a little different from his leader image. Anyway... Comments? insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular 15:21, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe take the colours from his leader image? MaplefernMay StarClan light your pathHow's the Prey running? 15:26, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Try what mapple said or darken him a bit.--MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 16:10, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded made it a little redder, is it okay now? I can't make it much redder without having to completely redo it... and since his Kittypet image got approved and I used colors from that, I would have thought it'd be okay... insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular 16:26, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Add a few more tabby stripes ansd it should be good. MaplefernMay StarClan light your pathHow's the Prey running? 17:01, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded, darkened the existing stripes a tad and added a couple more small ones. insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular 17:06, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Can you darken the stripes more? I can't see it very well. Ice There will only be five heros.... 17:29, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded, darkened the stripes more. insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular 17:35, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

I think you should add more highlights--Nightshine 19:13, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded accentuated the highlights more; the reason they got dulled was because I put a semi-transparent layer of red over the original pic to make it redder, which covered up the highlights... but I fixed it so they show more. insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular 20:18, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

This is really great. I see nothing. ✐+ᖱ = 21:25, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Me neither! Comments Before Approval?--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 23:00, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Approved--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 22:57, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

Leopardstar (D) - Approved

Leopardstar.deputy Constructments? ✐+ᖱ = 20:31, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

This is great! Maybe add a spot on her right ear and make the muzzle lighter?--Nightshine 20:42, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink a tad and blur it. She's amazing, Sandy! ♥Mouse♥♥Heart♥60px 20:43, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded ✐+ᖱ = 22:08, January 30, 2010 (UTC)
I think it's perfect :)--Nightshine 22:19, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

This is almost ready, just blur the stripes on her midriff--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 22:32, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuloaded. ✐+ᖱ = 10:04, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

try making the stripes a little strater.--MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 15:01, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Might not be necessary, but the area below her ears and above her tabby stripes looks a little bare, maybe add one more spot or stripe there? This is amazing though! insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular 15:24, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded ✐+ᖱ = 20:29, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

I really don't see anything else. Amazing job, Sandy, as usual. ♥Mouse♥♥Heart♥60px 21:44, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

I agree :) Comments Before Approval?--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 22:55, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Approved--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 00:26, February 2, 2010 (UTC)

Cloudtail (KP) -Approved

File:Cloudtail (KP).png Here's Cloudtail when he was catnapped by the twolegs. Any Comments besides the collar which I forgot to fix?AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 15:47, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

O.o Wow, this is great, I don't see anything wroung...--MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 15:51, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks Minnow. I fixed the collar.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 15:58, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Aww, that's beautiful ^^ I love the detail on the collar. Brightfrost 16:38, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks! Anything need to be fixed?AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 16:42, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

This lookd great! If I were a Senior Warrior or up, I'd say CBA. But, I'm only an Apprentice so... Great job! Birchy 17:01, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

(M)- Wodnerful! just shade the collar tag some more and then he should be good. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 21:23, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reloaded. Thanks Birchy and Moss. Anything else?AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 23:53, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Great! I don't see any problems! Fawnstorm 13:22, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Agian, I see nothing.MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 15:07, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Comments Before Approval? ✐+ᖱ = 21:19, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Approved--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 03:15, February 2, 2010 (UTC)

Russetfur (R)- Approved

File:Russetfur Rogue.pngI don't think anyone had her reserved, but if someone did, tell me. Well, here's one of my favorite ShadowClan cats, comments? ♥Mouse♥♥Heart♥60px 18:34, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

I can't really see the ear pink. 1) Make it bigger. 2) Make it darker. Nice work! Birchy 18:43, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

This is great! I think the ear pink is fine. Blur the tail shading a bit more.--Nightshine 20:03, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights more. ♥Ice♥♥storm♥File:Icestorm.deputy.png|60px22:06, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred. Anything else I need to change? Or tweak? I love the word tweak. It's cool. ♥Mouse♥♥Heart♥60px 22:38, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Actually, she looks good to me. CBA?Darkhallows 07:36, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe make the ear pink a little pinker. And what is CBA?--MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 15:03, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

It means Comments Before Approval. ;) And the ear pink looks fine to me. But it's your descion. ♥Ice♥♥storm♥File:Icestorm.deputy.png|60px 16:30, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

I got the color from her deputy image. ♥Mouse♥♥Heart♥60px 16:41, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

I think it looks fine.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 19:55, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, anything else? ♥Mouse♥♥Heart♥60px 02:45, February 2, 2010 (UTC)

None, approved :)--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 21:02, February 2, 2010 (UTC)

Purdy (Lo) - Approved

File:Purdy (Lo).png*gulps* This was soo hard to copy Quiet's work! *dies* Oh well, I can improve it. Constructments? IcestormHi There! 15:56, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

Add some stripes down the legs. MaplefernHi everyone! 16:15, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

It's really nice! Maybe add more shading, blur the tabby marks a little bit and do what Maple said.Hidden-Valentine ღ 17:15, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Are the changes showing? I blurred the tabby marks, added shading (oh yes I forgot to) and I added some tabby marks down the legs. IcestormHi There! 02:37, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, now that there's shading, it needs to be darkened, and the two legs in the back (his left legs) need to be darker than the front two (his right legs), and also add a few more stripes to his left legs. Otherwise, this looks really good! --Icy-chan 03:11, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Is this better? Are the changes showing? And thanks everyone. I thought this one was going to be a total fail. IcestormHi There! 22:23, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

I don't think the changes are showing up, and if they are then add more stripes to his legs--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 21:32, January 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Added more stripes to the legs. No Night the changes are showing. How can I tell? I have super vision. ;) ♥Ice♥♥storm♥File:Icestorm.deputy.png|60px 00:05, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

His shoulder looks kinda bare. Add more stripes. MaplefernHi everyone! 00:09, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

I see stripes on his shoulder. Or am I not looking at the shoulder? ^_^ ♥Ice♥♥storm♥File:Icestorm.deputy.png|60px 00:16, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

The lower half, just around where it connects to the leg. MaplefernHi everyone! 00:18, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

I see stripes in places and the shoulders. Is that the image or is it just meh? XD ♥Ice♥♥storm♥File:Icestorm.deputy.png|60px 00:27, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

I think they mean right where the front leg connects to the body, rather than the higher shoulder area near his spine. Does that help? insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular 00:29, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

I think they mean his chest ;)--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 02:36, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Wow, I'm more than an idiot than I thought I would be. ♥Ice♥♥storm♥File:Icestorm.deputy.png|60px 23:24, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

That patch of fur on his hip has a very thick line art. Thin it out a bit.--MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 14:43, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Um, I don't know how too. (?) Ice There will only be five heros.... 23:07, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

He looks fine to me. CBA?--Darkhallows 23:40, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

Approved--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 21:17, February 2, 2010 (UTC)

Brokenstar (R) - Approved

File:Brokenstar.Rogue.pngI hate this guy so much, but someone had to do him... Constructments? --Hд₩₭₮д£O₦ 22:42, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

I really like how his tail looks like a foot. anyway all I can say is that on his leader version his stripes arent furry like you have. I'm not sure if it matters tho.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 22:50, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

While a rogue his fur probably would have been messier anyway so I think it's okay. The only thing I can see is that I think the ear pink was blurred too much, as I now can barely see it, try drawing it again and then blurring again, but if it's still barely visible then make it a brighter color. --Icethroat Happy Valentine's Day! 12:45, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Lightened the ear pink. --Hд₩₭₮д£O₦ 20:53, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

Right where the tail connects with the body at the top, there is a spot that looks flat. Add some shading there, and this should be good :)--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 22:44, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Added shading --Hд₩₭₮д£O₦ 22:50, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

Awsome! Comments Before Approval?--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 22:51, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

Approved--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 05:32, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

Cody (KP)- For Approval

Cody.kittypet I should put up Spiderkit, but I like her a little better xD.Darkhallows 21:09, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

She's beautiful, Darkhallows! I only see a few small things. One, the collar tag is... blue? Maybe it should be gold or silver? Also, maybe thin out the tabby stripe down her spine, it looks a bit thick to me, but if other people don't think it's too thick then it's okay. :) This is amazing though!!! insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular 21:11, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

(M) - Oh, nice texture on the stripes! And you did a mackerel tabby! *purrs* The only thing I see is that there's a bit on white on our left side of her cheek. (Her right side.) And the blue tag. This is great though. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 21:14, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, I hadn't seen Moss's comment, hold on a sec.Darkhallows 21:22, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Done, added a new stripe, too.Darkhallows 21:27, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Her left ear isn't supposed to have ear pink on it.--Nightshine 21:47, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

I love her! But the sripe on her back should probably be a little bit lighter. Not very much, just a little NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 01:41, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

The backstripe is the same color as the other stripes?Darkhallows 04:41, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

beutiful!!i'm glad you did it instead of me,shady!!--.--:) Ivy Hi there!! 10:29, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, sorry Shady! I was on a not so great computer. No that I'm on my laptop, it looks fine :) Sorry for the confusion NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 18:18, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

You still need to remove the earpink from the left ear.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 23:37, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

Done.--Darkhallows 21:23, February 2, 2010 (UTC)

This looks really awesome. Comments before approval? --Icethroat Happy Valentine's Day! 22:44, February 2, 2010 (UTC)

Echosong (KP) - Approved

File:Echosong (KP).png File:Echosong (KP)1.png

Echo!! One of my favs characters! Well this is my fail at doing these kind of tabby marks...horrible!? Comments? Critics?Hidden-Valentine ღ 17:43, January 26, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good! But some of the stripes don't connect with the lineart, mostly on her tail and back--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 20:18, January 26, 2010 (UTC)

Well because her other charart doesn't show her back I put teh tabby markings like this because i tried making them shorter but it looked really ugly and on teh tail well I can fix it.Hidden-Valentine ღ 20:27, January 26, 2010 (UTC)

This is awesome! But I think her eyes look darker on her medicine cat image. What does everyone else think? Mistyheart 17:32, January 27, 2010 (UTC)

They do but it's probably because the eye is smaller on her med cat image.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 17:42, January 27, 2010 (UTC)

The eye on teh other pixel is darker but if I try making the eyes darker it looks horrible and not even real.But if you want I can change the color.Hidden-Valentine ღ 18:28, January 27, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading, I can't really see it. ♥Ice♥♥storm♥File:Icestorm.deputy.png|60px 22:36, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-darken shading.Hidden-Valentine ღ 23:10, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

Doesn't she have deep green eyes? these look like yellow-green eyes AngelPaw 00:45, January 29, 2010 (UTC)

If I put deep green eyes, they will look really bad on her and unreal.(and your siggy looks just like mine confused me for a second) I put the other image with the green eyes beside her.which one is better?Hidden-Valentine ღ 14:23, January 29, 2010 (UTC)

Totaly the one on the right.:)MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 14:34, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Minnow. And I can't see anything else. ✐+ᖱ = 15:35, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

I like the one on the right, too, and I can't find anything else that's wrong with the image. --Icy-chan 16:33, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

(M) - Personally, I like the one on the left. But that's just me. You should probably go with the right one, seeing as that matches her description more. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 21:27, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

I do like the one on the right, but you're right when you say it looks a bit unreal. Try lightening it just a tad more, and there are ways to add more depth to it. Like, make it darker on the top, closer to her eye lid, and lighter as it goes down. The queen and leader images are good examples for that--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 22:11, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-I kinda fixed the eye..does it show?Hidden-Valentine ღ 00:53, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

It shows to me. I think this is ready now.MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 16:13, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

CBA--Darkhallows 23:42, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

Is it approved? It's been like two days.

HiddenSun
20:04, February 4, 2010 (UTC)

Yep :) Approved--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 22:21, February 4, 2010 (UTC)

Mallownose (A) - Approved

Mallownose.apprentice So I looked at his warrior image and went "WOW THOSE ARE THE COOLEST TABBY STRIPES EVER!" So here's his apprentice image. Unfotunately, my shading style conflicted with the cool stripes a bit... but does it look okay? insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular 23:47, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

I think this looks great! Blur the shading on his midriff, and there's this one spot on his belly that's lighter than the shading--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 00:02, February 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded, any better? It's tough to blur the shading without blurring out his stripes, but if it's necessary to blur it more then I can figure it out. How is it though? insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular 20:46, February 2, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes are cool xD. CBA?--Darkhallows 04:48, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

Approved ✐+ᖱ = 20:42, February 5, 2010 (UTC)

Snowfur (K) - Approved

File:Snowfur (K).png First charart is this okay Seastar 19:59, January 22, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm, I don't see any shading. Look at some apprentice tutorials to learn how to shade a white cat--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 22:59, January 22, 2010 (UTC)

Nightfall, there is shading. I've learned a trick, when I look at my laptop from different angles determines whether you can see the shading on a white cat or not...Spottedsky, thicken and darken the shading and this should be good. This is awesome for your first try! --Icy-chan 02:18, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

In Bluestar's Prophecy its mention that her ears are gray.--♪Shimmerpool♫ 19:10, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

Must have been a typo, because they're blue. It says right here- "Snowkit!" Bluekit breathed. "What is it?" Snowkit blinked open her eyes. They were blue.. Bluestar's prophecy, pg 10. And, after Whitestorm was born Bluestar mentioned countless times of how much Whitestorm's blue eyes reminded her of Snowfur's eyes. And on top of that, her apprentice, warrior, and queen images have blue eyes.--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 22:13, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

You must have misread ears for eyes. I think they are supposed to be gray tiped.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 22:17, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

Oh yeah, that's right. Spottedsky, make her ear tips gray. Look at one of her approved character pixles if you have trouble--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 01:14, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

Better? Seastar 01:17, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

Umm, what do you mean by that?--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 01:19, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

Huh changes aren't showing. Try it again, then upload. If not you'll have to change the file name. So add the gray ear tips and blur the shading more. IcestormHi There! 01:21, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

Is this better? they are showing up now Seastar 01:28, January 25, 2010 (UTC) Can you maybe darken the shading a tad? I know it's there, but it would be easier to run over the burn tool once or twice, then blur. SwiftyHow's the prey running?

I already darkened the shading once should it still be darker? Seastar 00:55, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

No, I think the shading is fine :) But, the ear pink looks almost purple. Make it more, reddish-pink. And the gray on her ears needs to be at the tip of the ears. Right now, the whole ear is gray. Put it more on the tip, and darken it--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 02:42, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

Better? CharmPaw 20:13, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry forgot ear tips again better?CharmPaw 20:19, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is better, but the gray on the tips of her ears needs to be darkened more--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 20:48, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

Better? CharmPaw 20:57, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

Yes. Blur the earpink a tiny bit more.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 21:11, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

Is this better? CharmPaw 21:16, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

Yes but I forgot to mention that you need to blur the shading. Sorry.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 21:19, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

Its okay Better? CharmPaw 21:23, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

This may be my computer but I barely see any shading - just some around the legs and left side. Can you darken the shading under her chin and on her head and her (our) right side? ✐+ᖱ = 15:26, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Better? CharmPaw 00:19, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Yes but can you add some to the head and under the chin too? ✐+ᖱ = 11:02, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

And blur it a little more.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 19:44, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

I did both but it was a little hard to blur. CharmPaw 01:28, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

I think this is almost ready! Just darken the shading her hind paw NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 01:34, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

Better? CharmPaw 23:52, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

Looks great! Comments Before Approval?--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 23:56, February 2, 2010 (UTC)

Approved ✐+ᖱ = 20:47, February 5, 2010 (UTC)

Hattie (KP) - Approved

Hattie.kittypet *stares* My worst image ever by far...comments and suggestions? (Yesh! Number 35! I'm not over the limit! Yay...) --Icy-chan 17:02, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

It's not worse!! I actually love it! All I see (but might no be necessary-it's just a comment) maybe make teh ear and nose a little more pinkish.Hidden-Valentine ღ 17:09, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

I think the highlight did its job! Just dark the nose pink a bit, as Hidden said. MaplefernHi everyone! 17:11, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. *sighs in relief* Okay, I'm glad it wasn't as horrible as I thought. ;) --Icy-chan 18:41, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe make the nose pink the same color as the earpink. This is really good!AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 18:43, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I made it more of a reddish-brown color, but if I made it the same color as the ear pink then it would be way too dark, so I chose the ear pink color with the colorpicker tool and then made it a lighter color of the colors in that range. (If any of that actually made sense then yay. :P) The point being: does it look any better? --Icy-chan 19:06, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

Yup =)AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 19:08, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes look odd, not like tabby stripes. I'm not sure would you could do about it, though, maybe just tinker with them?Darkhallows 18:56, January 26, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe it's just me, but it looks like the stripes in the highlighted area look more blurred than in the shaded area. But this is wonderful, way better than how mine would look!MossI'm Up There! 20:46, January 26, 2010 (UTC)

...I'm not exactly sure what to do, could you maybe try and explain it a little bit more? --Icy-chan 22:27, January 26, 2010 (UTC)

The tabby stripes on the back where the highlights are the brightest are more blurred than the ones, oh, let's say on the haunch and such. They need to be blurred evenly. ♥Mouse♥♥Heart♥60px 00:07, January 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. *cries in horror* Ah~ I ended up drawing the tabby stripes again with the burn tool...and this now officially looks horrible! Let me know what I can do to fix this horrible thing. --Icy-chan 22:56, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

O.o OMG THIS IS SOOOO GOOOOOOOOD!!!!!!! I love it sooooooo much.Minnowclaw 01:32, January 29, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes on her body aren't bad at all :) But the stripes on her face look strange. They look way to thick, make them thinner. Especially the tabby M above her eyes--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 05:52, January 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks Minnow and Night, I'm glad you think that this is getting better because I think that it's getting worse and worse. :) --Icy-chan 23:05, January 29, 2010 (UTC)

Don't be so hard on yourself Icy. I like the image. Just blur the face highlight more and maybe disconnect the m from the stripe on the side of her face.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 23:10, January 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Aww, thanks Ash. The only reason I'm so hard on myself is because I'm horrible at tabbies and can't seem to find a good style that I like. :) Anyway, is this better? --Icy-chan 23:33, January 29, 2010 (UTC)

Lol. Who are you telling about tabbies. If you look on my page at all the tabbies i've done they're all a different style XD. any about the pic, yup its better.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 23:43, January 29, 2010 (UTC)

The stripe on the head looks like a M. Fix that and this should be good.--MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 16:17, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

That's the tabby "M" Minnow. It looks fine to me.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 16:29, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

It's supposed to look like an "M", lots of the images have them. --Icethroat Happy Valentine's Day! 17:56, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlight on her face, and blur the stripes on her visible hind paw. Then this should be good!--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 23:20, February 2, 2010 (UTC)

  • shrugs* Sorry, When I put it on a cat once someone told me to take it off. I forget which one, but it happend.--MINNOWCLAW 00:06, February 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Not sure if it did much or not... --Icethroat Happy Valentine's Day! 22:10, February 5, 2010 (UTC)

This is Awesome! I don't see anything wrong! MaplefernMay StarClan light your pathHow's the Prey running? 22:14, February 5, 2010 (UTC)

I think this is fine :) Comments Before Approval?--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 23:19, February 5, 2010 (UTC)

None. Approved. Bramble 21:13, February 6, 2010 (UTC)

Brambleclaw (Ki)- Approved

File:Brambeclaw(Kit).png Yay, my first character art was approved! ^^ Now here's Brambleclaw! *Huggles Bramblekit* §₩1ƒ₮¥Mice taste goooood.

He looks greenish. Make him more brown. And Blur the tabby stripes. MaplefernMay StarClan light your pathHow's the Prey running? 13:34, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded This time I got the colors directly from his deputy image. §₩1ƒ₮¥Mice taste goooood.

Much better! Darken the shading and earpink a touch and this will be good. MaplefernMay StarClan light your pathHow's the Prey running? 13:57, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? §₩1ƒ₮¥Mice taste goooood.

Now the ear pink is a little too dark and you've lost it in the pelt. Don't lighten it, but make it a dark redish color.MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 14:55, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded §₩1ƒ₮¥Mice taste goooood.

....Anything else? §₩1ƒ₮¥Mice taste goooood. 7:06, Febuary 3, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? ✐+ᖱ = 07:08, February 5, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble 21:17, February 6, 2010 (UTC)

Goosefeather (E) - Approved

File:Goosefeather.Elder.pngOMG, spotty kittehXD Constructments? --Hд₩₭₮д£O₦ 16:56, February 3, 2010 (UTC)'

Lol! I like him! The dots seem kind of a little too round, try making them more oval shaped so he doesn't look like a gray leopard. xD ßąէωïиց 20:33, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Thanks^ ^ Is this better? --ĦĄωĸ†ɑ£ƟȠ 20:52, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

Yep. ^^ Just darken the shading at the middle of the tail, and this should be good. (: ßąէωïиց 21:33, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

I remember when I tried to do a spotted cat *starts a flash back* No, I'll spare you all. I love it, just make the ear pink a bit darker.--MINNOWCLAW 01:43, February 4, 2010 (UTC)

Ruploaded - Lol, Minnowclaw! Darkened tail shading and ear pink. --ĦĄωĸ†ɑ£ƟȠ 20:14, February 4, 2010 (UTC)

This looks really awesome, Hawktalon. Comments before approval? --Icethroat Happy Valentine's Day! 21:57, February 5, 2010 (UTC)

None. Approved. Bramble 21:28, February 6, 2010 (UTC)

Violet (KP) - Approved

File:Violet (KP).png Here's Violet! I'm not extremely proud of her stripes, but they could be worse. Comments?--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 21:40, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more red and darken it. The stripes are great!--Nightshine 21:55, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Some of the stripes look a bit too blurred it. Wetty What do you mean they only had 31 flavors?! 21:58, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Thanks Nightshine! Is the ear pink better? And I'm not sure what you mean about the stripes Westream--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 22:38, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Like they're a bit to like out there and weirdish. --Wetty What do you mean they only had 31 flavors?! 22:41, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Hmmm, I'm still not sure what you mean. That doesn't make sense--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 22:53, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

I think that they mean some of the stripes are not as clear as some other ones. MaplefernMay StarClan light your pathHow's the Prey running? 23:25, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Is this any better?--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 23:38, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Not much, but some are like just not in the right place Wetty What do you mean they only had 31 flavors?! 21:39, February 2, 2010 (UTC)

It might just be the highlights that make the stripes look weird. Maybe break that extra long stripe that starts on the mostly hidden haunch.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 21:45, February 2, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, the long stripe that reaches to her haunch?--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 23:21, February 2, 2010 (UTC)

Yep.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 23:27, February 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Is this any better?--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 23:46, February 5, 2010 (UTC)

Yes! Add some stripes to the ears now! MaplefernMay StarClan light your pathHow's the Prey running? 23:49, February 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Better?--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 00:09, February 6, 2010 (UTC)

Much. Comments before approval? --Icethroat Happy Valentine's Day! 19:39, February 6, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. --Icethroat Happy Valentine's Day! 21:30, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

Speckletail(W) - Approved

File:Speckletail(w).pngHere is the last picture of Speckletail! --Nightshine 18:24, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good Nighty! But blur the tabby stripes more. Ice There will only be five heros.... 18:27, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the tabby stripes, and the ear pink towards the top looks, weird to me.ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ 30px 18:53, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Re-UploadedI blurred the stripes--Nightshine 18:57, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Really beautiful Nighty! All I see is maybe make the ear a little more pinkish, or it could just be me.Hidden-Valentine ღ 19:28, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

I think the color is ok but it's shaped kinda funny. Maybe blur the top some more.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 19:57, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I redid the ear pink--Nightshine 20:19, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Nice job! It looks fine to me.HeartpathLove, Jaggedclaw! 00:25, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the top of the ear pink. MaplefernMay StarClan light your pathHow's the Prey running? 22:46, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Blurred ear pink--Nightshine 01:48, February 2, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the stripes on the tail a touch, as I can't see them well. MaplefernMay StarClan light your pathHow's the Prey running? 22:01, February 2, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Darkened the tail stripes.--Nightshine 00:38, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

I don't see a whole lot of shading.--Darkhallows 22:33, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Darkened shading--Nightshine 23:11, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

Anything else?--Nightshine 18:14, February 6, 2010 (UTC)

Not that I can see. Comments before approval? --Icethroat Happy Valentine's Day! 19:41, February 6, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. --Icethroat Happy Valentine's Day! 21:30, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

Mistyfoot (Ki)- Approved

File:Mistyfootki2.pngThis is my first Charart, I hope it's okay :3 I think I might need to fix the shading on the head, it looks a bit square. But yeah. :) I think it went quite well for a first one :D Brightfrost 16:41, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Not bad. Darken her pelt color some so it matches her other images and blur the shading some.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 16:44, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded... any better? I found it quite hard to darken her. Brightfrost 16:52, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

On the right side of the body, blur the shading some more. The part near the highlight. Blur the top of the head, and the left paw. It's really good though! Birchy 16:59, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Brilliant! But maybe blur the flank. :P Mistyheart 17:12, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is too light. Make it darker and slightly more reddish. ✐+ᖱ = 17:13, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded, any better? I fixed the ears. Brightfrost 18:28, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot more, especially on her head--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 22:07, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded, but I don't think that the blurring has made a difference, you can't really tell. And can't get the head any blurred without blurring the lineart around it. :/

I think it worked really well. Her head dosen't look that 'square' anymore! Sorry I couldn't rate before! 94.10.41.117 09:44, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks! I hope she gets approved :D Congrats on Jaykit! Brightfrost 14:29, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Um... well... No, I got nothin'. I think this is ready now.--MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 15:05, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Yay! :D Thanks. 78.150.124.66 15:58, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

It looks like you blurred the lineart on the head. After you fix that I think it'll be ready.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 16:17, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Awesome, I'll try that now. Brightfrost 16:43, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded! Fixed the lineart. Is there anything else? Brightfrost 17:21, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

There's a little white pixel on her right paw (Or our left) fill that in with gray--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 22:56, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded, fixed the paw ^^ Brightfrost 19:02, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

Anything else I need to add? I'd like to get Mistykit approved so I can post Goldenflower, she's ready. :3 Brightfrost 19:02, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

The eyes look a bit strange. Look at User:Icethroat21/Tutorials to see how to do the eye--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 19:45, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

The eyes on her were copied off that tutorial, there's nothing I can do to change them... they look like any other kit's. Brightfrost 20:58, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

Oh! *face palm* Man, it's just my computer screen again. Never mind, the eyes look fine--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 23:44, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the earpink some more.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 23:47, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded, attempted to blur the earpink a little more. Brightfrost 07:22, February 2, 2010 (UTC)

This is great! I can't see anything that needs improving. :D Mistyheart 17:06, February 2, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink slightly bigger, and then this should be good :)--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 00:11, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded, hope I haven't done too much on the ear. Thanks ^^ Brightfrost 17:11, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

Anymore comments? :3 Brightfrost 20:27, February 6, 2010 (UTC)

Comentários antes da aprovação? (CBA) --Bramble 22:45, February 6, 2010 (UTC)

) Approved--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 04:16, February 8, 2010 (UTC)

Fuzz (KP) - Approved

File:Fuzz (KP).pngEvanphoto 12:36, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink, thicken the shading all around, and it looks like there's a black blob on the edge of the collar tag....? insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular 13:11, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Evanphoto 13:26, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the shading then blur it. IcestormHi There! 01:26, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Evanphoto 12:13, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

Anything else? Evanphoto 01:45, January 26, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more of a reddish color NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 06:44, January 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Evanphoto 12:46, January 26, 2010 (UTC)

Any comments? Evanphoto 22:51, January 27, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken the shading on his back, and the ear pink still looks a little bit purplish (Is that a word?) --NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 02:39, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Anything else? Evanphoto 12:15, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

The shading on his back still needs to be just a smidge bigger. But the ear pink is much better :)--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 20:49, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Any other stuff? Evanphoto 12:24, January 29, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the back. And where it stops for the hind leg, make it a little rounder. Birchy 17:35, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Is that it? Evanphoto 16:51, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe fill in that square where there is no shading. I can explain more if you need me too.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 19:47, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Please explain Evanphoto 23:01, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Well theres a gap in the shading. If you scroll down and look at sasha, I think you can see what I mean. If not I could made you a diagram.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 23:10, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, I don't see it Evanphoto 00:27, February 1, 2010 (UTC) Sory, I don't see it

I think Ashshadow means that little squarish spot on his back. Like, where it's thick, then it stops being thick, then continues being thick again. Just thicken that part in the middle. Is that what you meant Ashy?--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 00:57, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

Yup. Thanks for explaining it better Nighty.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 01:22, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Evanphoto 12:04, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

It doesn't look like yo changed anything NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 18:21, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

I fixed the back shading Evanphoto 22:13, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

I don't think we're on the same page. Would you like a diagram?AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 22:58, February 2, 2010 (UTC)

Yes please Evanphoto 00:47, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

[[File:Fuzz_diagram.png]]The poorly circled spot needs to be shaded. AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 00:53, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks for the diagram , Ash; ok, I shaded the spot. Evanphoto 02:11, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and shading some more--Nightshine 02:18, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Evanphoto 22:31, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink a bit more and also add shading in the little crevice between his foreleg and his haunch. insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular 23:08, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Evanphoto 01:16, February 4, 2010 (UTC)

Make the shading on the head a smidge bigger--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 00:38, February 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Evanphoto 21:52, February 6, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? ✐+ᖱ = 11:26, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble 22:43, February 8, 2010 (UTC)

Ruby (KP)-Approved

Ruby.kittypet I don't have much to say. First kittypet. Everyone seems to be in the mood, and I don't want to be left out :)MossI'm Up There! 21:27, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

Wait, this is good but does she need a kittypet image? Think about it. They were kits when they were kittypets, and these blanks are for full grown cats. We wouldn't use a rogue blank for Tadpole. I think they're good with the images they've got already, the kit blanks but with collars. I don't know, what do the rest of you think?--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 22:28, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

Firetstar has a kittypet image, and nobody said anything about him. Besides, how much time did elaspse during the Rise of Scourge? MaplefernHi everyone! 00:54, January 29, 2010 (UTC)

Nightfall, it's true. they were kittypets in the rise of Scourge while he started BloodClan so wouldn't they kittypet images. They would have grown up as Kittypets AngelPaw 00:59, January 29, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, for the image, darken the shading a little bit or add some brighter highlights. Other wise it looks great!--Minnowclaw 01:05, January 29, 2010 (UTC)

Forget my last comment. Just blur the shading a bit more.--MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 14:32, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. The tail shading wouldn't blur anymore, and then the shading on the shoulder got darker. MossI'm Up There! 16:54, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? --Icethroat Happy Valentine's Day! 00:54, February 8, 2010 (UTC)

Approved--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 07:02, February 9, 2010 (UTC)

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