Mallownose (Kit) - Approved

Mallownose.kit His apprentice image was so fun that I did his kit image too XD I think it looks pretty good compared to my last kit. Comments? insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular 20:47, February 5, 2010 (UTC)

it looks like you could Blur the Right ear pink a bit more.  Brambleclaw14 Talk 20:51, February 5, 2010 (UTC)

Saturate the ear pink a bit more, but I love it otherwise.--MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 23:54, February 5, 2010 (UTC)

I won't be able to edit this till tomorrow, but by saturate do you mean make it a more vivid color or blur it more? (the meaning of that word always confused me, just want to make sure before I do the wrong thing) insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular 23:57, February 5, 2010 (UTC)

Uh...I'm not sure either, but since the sponge tool is set for either saturate or desaturate, and when you saturate it it becomes brighter and more ginger-ish, I'm guessing more of a vivid color. Plus, I think the ear pink is blurred really well already, so I don't think it's to blur the ear pink. --Icethroat Happy Valentine's Day! 00:13, February 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded made ear pink brighter, it it better now? insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular 16:20, February 6, 2010 (UTC)

Yep. CBA? --Icethroat Happy Valentine's Day! 22:41, February 8, 2010 (UTC)

Approved--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 00:14, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

Jacques (KP) - Approved

File:Jacques.KP.png Since two sections are discussion, I figured that it'd be okay to go ahead and post this. Comments and suggestions? --Icethroat Happy Valentine's Day! 22:26, February 6, 2010 (UTC)

I think he looks great, but his collar and tag look a bit odd... maybe make the tag gold or silver and make the collar one color (as opposed to blue and purple) insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular

Really awsome!! Just do what Insaneular said.


22:33, February 6, 2010 (UTC)

Also make the ear pink smaller.--Nightshine 22:48, February 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. The changes aren't showing on my computer...let me know if I need to try and upload it again. --Icethroat Happy Valentine's Day! 23:00, February 6, 2010 (UTC)

This is great! But just to be picky, I would say to blend the shading under the ear more. --ChelseaFC 05:15, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

Which ear? (Also, the changes still haven't show on my computer, should I try uploading under a different file?) --Icethroat Happy Valentine's Day! 17:06, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, I would. Just put a delete tag on the old file. ✐+ᖱ = 17:08, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. --Icethroat Happy Valentine's Day! 19:48, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

Nice image Icethroat. I don't see anything. ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ 30px 22:50, February 9, 2010 (UTC)

I agree! Comments Before Approval?--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 00:05, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble 02:28, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

Hussar (KP) - Approved

File:Hussar.Kittypet.png.pngI decided not to add the scar because that was probably from the dogs, therefore he got it after he was a kittypet. Constructments? --ĦĄωĸ†ɑ£ƟȠ 16:11, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

He's nice! (On the scar, I agree with you; I didn't take Jingo's tail-tip off either). Being picky, the only things I see are blur the highlights a little bit, particullarly on the back, and darken the ear pink a touch. But he's really good! ßąէωïиց 18:30, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Thanks, Blue:) --ĦĄωĸ†ɑ£ƟȠ 19:32, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

Welcome. (: I don't see anything else, but, being super picky, if you were just looking for something to do, (xD), then maybe blur the highlight in the middle of the collar. I don't see anything other than that. ßąէωïиց 19:36, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Blurred the highlight. --ĦĄωĸ†ɑ£ƟȠ 20:53, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

Good job Hawktalon! I like this image. ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ 30px 22:48, February 9, 2010 (UTC)

I think it's ready.MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 14:15, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Bramble 17:16, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble 17:42, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

Jingo (KP) - Approved

Guess who's back? :) -blows noisemaker and balloons fall from the sky- I've missed you guys! -huggles- Lucky me! I thought all the kittypets would be made already! But here's Jingo, one of my favorite characters. I couldn't get the furry effect on the stripes like on her loner image, but I'm guessing that since she was groomed by her Twolegs as a kittypet, she her fur wouldn't be as messy...? I didn't take her tail-tip off, because I'm pretty sure that happened in the dog attack. Anyways, comments? ßąէωïиց 20:30, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

Welcome back! I'm not sure about the tail tip but you need to remove the earpink from the left(our right) ear and darken the shading.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 20:44, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

I did the ear pink as it was done on the approved Princess. I'll darken the shading now. ßąէωïиց 21:18, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

I looked and there is no earpink on that ear on Princess.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 21:22, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Darkened and blurred shading. Better? ßąէωïиց 21:24, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

I circled it in red. If you still can't see it, blow it up a few times. ßąէωïиց 21:31, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

Erm, there might be a sliver of pink from after Mouse erased it, but we had these discussions on the first few kittypets; the maker of the blanks said that the ear is facing away and tat it wouldn't need pink. insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular 21:33, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, ok. I didn't know cats could turn their ears like that. xD Anything else I need to do before I fix the ear pink? ßąէωïиց 21:42, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

She's not a classic tabby Darkhallows 22:40, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

I thought classic tabby were y-shaped markings...? I can't get the furry, smudged effect like on her loner image. ßąէωïиց 00:19, February 4, 2010 (UTC)

Take a small smudge brush (literally, size 1) and smudge 'em. Welcome back, Blue! MaplefernMay StarClan light your pathHow's the Prey running? 00:28, February 4, 2010 (UTC)

I think the y shaped ones are for striped tabbies.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 00:33, February 4, 2010 (UTC)

'Y' shapes are mackrel, not classic.Darkhallows 10:37, February 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I made her alot better, but the changes don't seem to be showing... ßąէωïиց 01:50, February 6, 2010 (UTC)

Hmmm, try saving it under a different file name NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 03:59, February 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Kay, I saved her under a different file name. How is she now? ßąէωïиց 15:18, February 6, 2010 (UTC)

Looks great. Komentarji pred odobritvijo? --Bramble 16:50, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

Lol Bramble. ;) Batwing 20:24, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

Approved ✐+ᖱ = 14:27, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

Ferncloud (A) - Approved


Which one do you like better? Ferncloud is one of my favourite cats.--Nightshine 21:37, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

The one closets to your siggie. EcHoPaW 70px 21:49, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

The one on the right =) It needs ear pink though ✐+ᖱ = 21:50, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

Oh yeah I forgot about that.

I'll use the second one then and add ear pink.--Nightshine 22:12, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I added ear pink.--Nightshine 22:15, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

Looks lovely. Are there any other comments? Bramble 16:43, February 9, 2010 (UTC)

I find the spots too defined. MaplefernMay StarClan light your pathHow's the Prey running? 23:05, February 9, 2010 (UTC)

I was going to post that, but I decided not to, seeing as I saw you had already put it up. They are to defined. Maybe giving the spots a another blurring will make them not as defined, but still make it look good. ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ 30px 00:24, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

I think that the spots are fine seeing as her queen and warrior image are like that.MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 14:14, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

When I tried blurring the spots a bit it looked really weird.--Nightshine 22:10, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

O: That's an awesome image, Nightshine! I see nothing wrong. HeartpathLove, Jaggedclaw! 01:04, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks! Is the ear pink fine? I always mess that part up--Nightshine 01:17, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, it's fine. You are so talented!!!HeartpathLove, Jaggedclaw! 01:22, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks so much!--Nightshine 02:09, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

The spots look fine. Comments before approval? Bramble 02:55, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

Much better than mine would have been. Great job. Approved ✐+ᖱ = 14:30, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

Poppydawn (Q) - Approved

Poppydawn.queen I didn't add the white muzzle as I assumed that would have come with age. Constructments? ✐+ᖱ = 13:30, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

This looks awesome, Sandy:) Make the ear pink a tad bigger, though. --ĦĄωĸ†ɑ£ƟȠ 16:13, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks Hawk ✐+ᖱ = 17:49, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

I love this! Blur the stripe on her front left paw a bit more--Nightshine 19:45, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded ✐+ᖱ = 21:04, February 8, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe darken the shading a bit or give it more highlight--Nightshine 00:32, February 9, 2010 (UTC)

This is awesome Sandy! *Gags in awe* But the two stripes above her head make her look like she is frowning. Maaybe you could move them around a bit? As I said before AWESOME! Fawnstorm 16:39, February 9, 2010 (UTC)

This is an amazing image! The stripes above the eyes are fine, Fawnstorm, they don't need to be moved. ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ 30px 22:49, February 9, 2010 (UTC)

Ah now what - move them or no? I tried to copy them from the Elder version... ✐+ᖱ = 18:54, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

Nah, don't worry about it, they look fine. Kommentare vor der Genehmigung? 19:10, February 10, 2010 (UTC) --Bramble Okiedokie. Thanks for the comment though Fawn =) Bramble: Noticed the language fetish going on. Nice. Talk to you soon. ✐+ᖱ = 19:18, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

Hey FirePelt! XD I misunderstood your comment but I know now! I didn't say anything though! XD! I just feel the eye stripes look a bit like she is frowning.If you could try and shift them a bit Sandy! Fawnstorm 12:54, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

Please correct me if I'm wrong, but do you think she should have like an aged grey muzzle? I did read the comment above about assuming it would have come with age, but isn't Poppydawn already old when she is featured as a queen? Please don't take offence, I just wasn't sure and wanted to know what everyone else thought. :D Mistyheart 16:21, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

No offense taken lol. Critism is why I post my images here... Anyway, I really don't mind, but at the moment I'm getting some conflicting instructions so can't do anything with the image at all. I have two questions then I'll set to work: 1. Do or don't the eye stripes need changing because I'm just confused, and 2. grey muzzle or no? (ps. Misty - I love that you spell it with an E) ✐+ᖱ = 16:35, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks Sandy XD About the stripes: I don't think they look like she's frowning that much - but it wouldn't matter either way. Her elder image has "eyebrow stripes" so I personally think it best to copy them from there for consistency. XD It doesn't matter about the grey muzzle cos other queen images don't have two seperate images for when they are old and young if you see what I mean. XDD Mistyheart 16:42, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

Gray muzzle shouldn't be in there, because I'm pretty sure she was fairly young when she was a queen. The marks on her head are too far away to appear like eye brows and cause an angry/frowning facial expression. That's my take on it; any other opinions out there? Please speak now or hold your peace. :) --Bramble 17:32, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

I agree about both. But other than that, this is awsome :) --NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 18:59, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

I think that Nightfall said everything that I have to say. :) It looks awesome. --Icethroat Happy Valentine's Day! 14:24, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry about that! XD! Maybe my eyesight has gone all weird? Anywho...this is great! XD! Fawnstorm 16:41, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

No problemo. Due to irrelevant comments, approving this. Bramble 19:12, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

Stonefur (D) - Approved

File:Stonefur.deputy.gif God. I hate his ears. I wanted to change them from the warrior version where they were just... chopped off... but they look a little odd. How should I change them or other things? insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular 17:07, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

(M) - I like it! I honestly see nothing wrong. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 22:36, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

It's great! I agree with Mossy. Nothing wrong--Nightshine 22:37, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the neck shading a tad. MaplefernMay StarClan light your pathHow's the Prey running? 22:40, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

Blue the neck shading. *searchs over with emerald eyes* I see nothing besides that. ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ 30px 22:59, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

Repeating Maple and Fire, blur neck shading a bit. This is awesome! Better than when I make his warrior version.HeartpathLove, Jaggedclaw! 23:37, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred the neck shading more, and thanks, guys XD I thought I'd have to change the ears 5 million times. insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular 03:10, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

I love the ears! And I also think this is ready :) Comments Before Approval?--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 19:15, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble 19:13, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

Rock Beneath Still Water (CG) - Approved

I know this is #41(whoa), but there's one discussion, four images in the 24 hour stage, and one to be declined. I really hate his tail. Why did Sharptooth have to bite it off?GrayravenpawScourgeRedtailGraystripeCinderpelt 10:58, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

I really like the mud lightning, but I think the ear pink could be red, or darker.  Brambleclaw14 Talk 16:45, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, his stumpy tail doesn't look right. There's no lineart to indicate where the tail ends. Try fixing that--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 19:25, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

I like the coloring, but I think the tail would look a smidge less odd if it stuck out past the body a little bit. Not a ton, because I know it has to be short, but the way it is now it almost looks like part of the body, so if you made it stick out a bit it would be more clear that it was the tail. ⓘⓝⓢⓐⓝⓔⓤⓛⓐⓡ 21:12, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

I don't really understand what you mean. If you do that on a cave guard blank....As for the ear pink, I took the same colour which I used on Jag, as if I'm not wrong, that's the standard colour. If I am wrong, just tell me, and I'll change it. GrayravenpawScourgeRedtailGraystripeCinderpelt 05:01, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

But Jag isn't the same color as Rock. I can barely see the ear pink on this one--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 05:07, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry, I was looking at the tail in the wrong direction, but I figured out what the problem is after looking at the blank again. I think you just forgot to put the end of the tail in? It looks like the tail just vanishes... (Maybe it's my computer screen, since his fur is so dark) but I made a diagram to show what I mean. File:Rock(CG).example.png I think when you were erasing the tail you just forgot to put in a new end, like that. As I said, I'm on a semi-cruddy monitor right now, so it might be the screen not letting me see it, but... yeah... ⓘⓝⓢⓐⓝⓔⓤⓛⓐⓡ 17:31, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

No Insaneular, you're right. There's no end to the tail. That's what I was trying to say in my first comment.--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 22:41, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.GrayravenpawScourgeRedtailGraystripeCinderpelt 09:28, January 11, 2010 (UTC)

The way you ended the tail looks odd. Maybe make it a bit longer. I dont really know how to describe what I'm talking about.--AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 21:12, January 11, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, I agree with Ashshadow, can you make the tail a bit longer, so it overlaps with the front leg a bit? ⓘⓝⓢⓐⓝⓔⓤⓛⓐⓡ 21:17, January 11, 2010 (UTC)

It is supposed to be a stump. And I don't think stumps are that long. "...whose tail was merely a stump."– – Grayravenpaw – – ScourgeRedtailGraystripeCinderpelt 05:47, January 12, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah but maybe make the end more round. It looks to boxish--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 05:52, January 12, 2010 (UTC)

D'oh! Just ignore me, then. I was thinking just a short tail, not a stump. *fail* ⓘⓝⓢⓐⓝⓔⓤⓛⓐⓡ 12:06, January 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.– – Grayravenpaw – – ScourgeRedtailGraystripeCinderpelt 04:05, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, the tail is better. But his hanuch is bothering me. Do them more like this maybe?-

File:RockCG diagram.png --NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 06:52, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.– – Grayravenpaw – – ScourgeRedtailGraystripeCinderpelt 09:46, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe bring the line down a little or get rid of that black pixel.--AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 02:09, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

What do you mean? – – Grayravenpaw – – ScourgeRedtailGraystripeCinderpelt 10:08, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

There is a black spot above his foot. Either get rid of it or connect the leg to it. I can make an example if you need it.--AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 14:47, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.– – Grayravenpaw – – ScourgeRedtailGraystripeCinderpelt 09:34, January 22, 2010 (UTC)

Add some more shading and blend it. The shading you have now has been donne on highlights right? It looks very... saturated ✐+ᖱ = 20:37, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.– – Grayravenpaw – – ScourgeRedtailGraystripeCinderpelt 11:54, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a bit brighter and more noticeable. Also, blur the mud streaks a tad bit more. --SweetheartHappy Valentine's Day! 19:19, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

Also add a streak to his head--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 02:50, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

Color the nose in. If it already, make it lighter. Good job! Birchy 17:30, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. btw, I'm going to another state for my granddad's first death anniversary, so I won't be on on the 3rd, 4th, 5th, 6th, and the 7th, so please do not decline.– – ```Grayravenpaw``` – – ScourgeRedtailGraystripeCinderpelt 12:55, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe add a mudstreak to the middle of his haunch.--AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 19:32, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Anything else?– – ```Grayravenpaw``` – – ScourgeRedtailGraystripeCinderpelt 09:34, February 2, 2010 (UTC)

Wait a sec, didn't he lose all of his tail? -Owlblaze Oakstar 03:29, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

His tail was a stump. Refer to Moonrise if you have it. The part where they run away from the Tribe of Rushing Water.– – ```Grayravenpaw``` – – ScourgeRedtailGraystripeCinderpelt 08:49, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

The shading's really dark and bumpy, try blurring it alot. ßąէωïиց 21:35, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will declined. Batwing 22:36, February 8, 2010 (UTC)

I just returned yesterday at 5 am, and just saw this. Reuploaded– – ```Grayravenpaw``` – – ScourgeRedtailGraystripeCinderpelt 09:24, February 9, 2010 (UTC)

The shading's a little dark, and could be lightened a little bit. Also, blur the ear pink a little more (on the outside of the ear pink that's touching the fur on the ear). --Icethroat Happy Valentine's Day! 01:06, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded ҖѬ ѳѥ ѯ 09:15, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --Icethroat Happy Valentine's Day! 19:00, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. Thanks for sticking this one out Lightning. ✐SaNdY 11:49, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

Snowdrop - Approved

File:Snowdrop.png Since one of the sections is a discussion i guess it is okay to post. This is my first kittypet AngelPaw 01:37, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

You're going to need to change the eye color Icecloud. It clearly states she has green eyes. But this is very good! NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 01:40, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

Better? AngelPaw 01:45, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

Yep :) Darken the shading, and add some the the head NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 02:50, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

Better? AngelPaw 23:45, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

I still cant see shading on the head. Besides that blur all of the shading and add some to the mostly hidden foot.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 23:01, February 2, 2010 (UTC)

Shading is blurred to the max. Is this better? AngelPaw 00:24, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

It might be just the lineart, but she looks kind of crosseyed. It's cute, though.--Shaf Girl 17:32, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

Better? AngelPaw 00:12, February 4, 2010 (UTC)

It's almost ready, just add some shading to the very top of the head, and her other ears--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 03:47, February 6, 2010 (UTC)

Better? AngelPaw 13:46, February 6, 2010 (UTC)
Yes! The only thing left that I see is the ear pink. It looks a tad purple, make it more of a light pink. Do that and this should be ready :) NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 23:55, February 6, 2010 (UTC)

Fixed ear pink AngelPaw 23:37, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

She looks cross-eyed to me. ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ 30px 23:40, February 8, 2010 (UTC)

I fixed this once how should I fix it again AngelPaw 00:56, February 9, 2010 (UTC)

I acually don't think you should change the eyes. She does look a little big cross-eyed, but I think it's cute. Snowdrop didn't seem like the sharpest tool in the barn in TFA, so I think that look makes her look not only adorable, but also a little bit, ya know ;) I don't know, it's your call. I think you should just make the ear pink a little bigger, and it should be almost ready --NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 06:54, February 9, 2010 (UTC)

It does look cute! I don't think she is the sharpest tool in the barn either, and the eyes DO make her look a little ;) Nightfall. I do see that the ear pink needs to look larger but nothing else besides that. ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ 30px 00:32, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

Is this better? AngelPaw 00:13, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

Her eyes are blue again.AshshadowI'm blue da ba dee da ba di 00:37, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

Why'd you make them blue? They were perfect before... --NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 06:12, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

I can't see any shading either. Looking at the file history, it looks as though you've reuploaded the first version... ✐+ᖱ = 16:31, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

Oh sorry. my bad fixing, AngelPaw 21:20, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

Fixed this is it better? AngelPaw 21:25, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

CBA?--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 19:43, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

Approved ✐SaNdY 11:52, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

Shadepelt (W)- Approved

File:Shadepelt Warrior.pngWell, not much to say about her . . . comments?♥Mouse♥♥Heart♥[[File:MothxMouse.png|60px]] 23:11, February 4, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more triangular. MaplefernMay StarClan light your pathHow's the Prey running? 23:22, February 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Done. ♥Mouse♥♥Heart♥[[File:Pinkheart.png|60px]] 01:11, February 5, 2010 (UTC)

The midriff shading is too distinct, blend ✐+ᖱ = 20:59, February 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Anything else? ♥Mouse♥♥Heart♥[[File:Pinkheart.png|60px]] 19:53, February 6, 2010 (UTC)

Is there anything else I need to improve? (Go Saints!) ♥Mouse♥♥Heart♥[[File:Pinkheart.png|60px]] 22:18, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

Blur all of the shading some more, and the midriff still looks a little distinct. Also, blur the ear pink some more. --Icethroat Happy Valentine's Day! 23:32, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reploaded. Curse you, midriff! ♥Mouse♥♥Heart♥[[File:Pinkheart.png|60px]] 20:44, February 8, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a tiny bit bigger--Nightshine 02:51, February 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Okay. Anything else? ♥Mouse♥♥Heart♥[[File:Pinkheart.png|60px]] 01:33, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading and highlights on her haunches, and her chest and shoulders--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 01:54, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I've blurred all I can. ♥Mouse♥♥Heart♥[[File:Pinkheart.png|60px]] 23:18, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

This looks awsome :D CBA?--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 19:42, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

Approved ✐SaNdY 12:02, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

Oakheart (Ki) - Approved

File:Oakkit 2.pngHere is Oakheart as a kit. Comments? Mistyheart 16:40, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

The shading is very nice ^^ Just make the ear pink a little smaller, and make the eyes look more like other kits' eyes such as on these images (Make the pupils more on the bottom of the eye, I mean) insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular 17:10, February 10, 2010 (UTC) File:Frisk.png File:Snowkit.png

Actually, that's how some of the other kits' eyes have looked. (here, here, here, and here) Just fix the ear pink and then it should be good. --Icethroat Happy Valentine's Day! 21:26, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe make the nose color a bit darker and make the eye color darker--Nightshine 22:13, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

Did we ever see Oakheart as a kit? For the image, there is some gray in the space close to his head.AshshadowI'm blue da ba dee da ba di 22:33, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

Ah, sorry Icethroat, I'd never seen that kit eye style before X3 To Ashshadow, he was mentioned as a kit in the allegiances of Bluestar's Prophecy, being nursed by Lilystem. insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular 23:09, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

For kits I always do the eye style on Icethroat's tutorial--Nightshine 23:14, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

I'm gonna reupload him when I get home cos I'm on a school pc right now. :) Sorry I didn't reupload him earlier but my pc went haywire :3 I actually copied the eye colour off oakheart's deputy image but I'll darken it if you like. Can you please explain what you mean about the gray space? Like circle it or something? Thanks :D Mistyheart 10:16, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

Don't worry about the gray. It seems to be gone now.AshshadowI'm blue da ba dee da ba di 16:06, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks Ash XD I fixed the ear pink (hopefully) and I darkened the eyes and nose. :) What else do I need to do? Mistyheart 16:12, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink a bit more. And Ash, he was listed as a kit in the allegiances of Bluestar's Prophecy--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 19:17, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

Ok. Wow i just had an eye test and am already seeing things. That gray keeps showing up and disappearing.AshshadowI'm blue da ba dee da ba di 01:31, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Hi! Blurred ear pink but can't see any sign of grey. XD Mistyheart 12:55, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

It looks fine. my computer screen just doesnt like me.AshshadowI'm blue da ba dee da ba di 15:40, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? ✐+ᖱ = 15:57, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading a little XD! This is awesome though! XD Fawnstorm 16:38, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

I think the shading looks fine--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 19:41, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

Shall I blur it or not? :3 Mistyheart 08:21, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

Nah, it's fine :) Repeating, CBA? LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 08:27, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

Approved; comments were irrelevant ✐SaNdY 12:19, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

Sparrowpelt (SC) (KP) - Approved

File:Sparrowpelt SC KP.png

I found Boris who is also a dark brown tabby tom so I can still use this. THE SECOND ONE IS NOT DONE. I just want to no which tabby strips are better. Please give you opinion.--Minnowclaw 00:21, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

I like the first design better.--Nightshine 00:26, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Good, I am better at that, any other votes?Minnowclaw 00:29, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

I like the first one :) Evanphoto 00:47, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, the first one it is. Now I'm ready for critice. Thank you insaneular for help on my sig!MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 01:02, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Nice to see ya back Minnow :). The earpink is a little too bright. Good job besides that.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 01:09, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded LOL, anyone who remembers me knows that I always had a problem with that :P.--MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 01:16, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

I have been very kindly asked to switch this from boris to Sparrowpelt and that is what I'm going to do so this is now sparrowpelt.--MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 02:39, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

For the image itself, make the ear pink more of a reddish color like on Rippletail or maybe Stick, but otherwise I'm glad that you're back Minnow! But I noticed in your new siggie (which I think is awesome), you put User talk instead of User talk, and Usercontributions instead of user contributions or speical:contributions/Minnowclaw, so it's leaving red links everywhere, if you could fix that it'd be awesome. --Icy-chan 03:11, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Ya, that was in my old one, but I fixed it and now my new one doesn't do that. It'll get to the image tommorow. I have no intrest to work at 12:58am becaue I will probably make him look like a crazy mine reading cat because of lack of sleep :PMINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 02:39, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

reuploded and I also made him a little darker.--MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 14:27, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

He has the normal, pointy stripes. Not the Y-shaped ones. MaplefernHi everyone! 14:38, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

( I'll fix him now...--MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 14:52, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

The second one is a check to make sure I'm doing it right. is it okay? *hides behind a rock waiting to hear yowls of disproval*--MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 14:58, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

I'm not going to let out yowls of dissaproval, don't worry. :) But this still isn't the right type of stripes, try looking at his warrior version for help. Also, make the brown a bit darker, the brown doesn't look the same as his warrior version either. --Icy-chan 16:05, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Is there like a tutorial on how to do these stripes because I suck at them... :(MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 22:12, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Yes. Here ;) ✐+ᖱ = 22:14, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

ReuplodedThanks Sandy, Nice sig! Okay, I don't think I did too great of a job, but I used the same colors, made him short haired and gave him the right eye colour.--MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 22:30, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Oops. You couldn't see the ear pink there... --MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 18:35, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Blend the shadig transition a little more. ✐+ᖱ = 21:19, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I know that there looks like there is no difference, ut it is blended to the max now.--MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 22:16, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Question: Which sig is better? My old one or this? --MINNOWCLAW 02:26, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a bit darker. Also, I actually like your other sig better, with the letters going up and down, but either is fine, they're both better than mine. :) --Icethroat Happy Valentine's Day! 01:44, February 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better?MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 22:16, January 31, 2010 (UTC

If you could get a 1px brush and blend the shading by the whiskers and mouth that would be good. ✐+ᖱ = 16:26, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better?MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 21:37, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

Yep, looks good to me. CBA? --♥ĦĄωĸ†ɑ£ƟȠ♥ 17:31, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble 18:36, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

Goldenflower (Ki)- Approved

File:Goldenflower(kit).png There are two discussions up so this should be ok image wise. Heres Goldenkit. Comments?AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 20:33, February 2, 2010 (UTC)

I can barely see her ear pink. should it be a little darker? AngelPaw 20:34, February 2, 2010 (UTC)

I agree that the earpink should be darker, and also add a little more shading, or darken it, on her legs. insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular 20:44, February 2, 2010 (UTC)

I got the color from her elder version but I can darken it some more.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 20:46, February 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. the earpink color looks weird now but i couldnt see it any other color. I also fixed the shading on her legs.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 22:17, February 2, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading under her chin and on her head--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 00:06, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

The shading wont blur anymore.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 00:34, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is a little too reddish and I don't know if this is my computer (weell this isn't mine, it's my Dad's Fireman computer at the warehouse.) but I see a dark smudge on the top of her head. I don't know if that's the shading or not but I guessing so, but I could make wrong judgements...Honeyrose34 00:58, February 3, 2010 (UTC) Stupid computer, won't let me put on my siggie.....

Yes its shading. as for the earpink, I didnt want it to be that color but you cant see it when I make it lighter.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 01:03, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploadedish I tried a new style of shading. Which is better?AshshadowI'm blue da ba dee da ba di 17:28, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

The right EcHoPaW 70px 22:42, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

I like the one on the left better. --Icethroat Happy Valentine's Day! 23:38, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

I liked the one on the left too but I kept getting comments about things I couldn't fix.AshshadowI'm blue da ba dee da ba di 20:51, February 8, 2010 (UTC)

The one on the left does look better the one on the right. ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ 30px 23:15, February 9, 2010 (UTC)

Should I just take the other one down than?AshshadowI'm blue da ba dee da ba di 23:23, February 9, 2010 (UTC)

I think that would be best Ash. ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ 30px 00:26, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

Ok. So comments?AshshadowI'm blue da ba dee da ba di 00:42, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading a tad bit more. ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ 30px 00:57, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I know it doesnt look like much but this is the best I could do without it turning into a big blobby mess.AshshadowI'm blue da ba dee da ba di 01:25, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

It looks better now. Is it just me, or is her nose gray? ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ 30px 16:22, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. It wasn't gray but i made it brighter.AshshadowI'm blue da ba dee da ba di 16:30, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

This looks fine to me. Osservazioni prima dell'approvazione? --Icethroat Happy Valentine's Day! 14:44, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry but I have something. The shading on top of the head looks too thick to me, and there is a gap between the neck and side shading that needs smoothing out a little. ✐SaNdY 21:22, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

Any suggestions about the head? Last time I tried to thin it out some it ballooned back to that size.AshshadowI'm blue da ba dee da ba di 21:25, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

Just don't let it extend so far down to her eyes. You could also try lengthening it width-wise to go closer to her ears. ✐SaNdY 21:31, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Tried my best.AshshadowI'm blue da ba dee da ba di 21:41, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

Repeating CBA? ✐SaNdY 11:54, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

Approving. Bramble 18:36, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

Dawnflower (Q) - Approved

Dawnflower.queen My second queen! Thanks to Mousetalon so much for the really helpful tutorials on queen shading. Comments and suggestions? --Icethroat Happy Valentine's Day! 02:37, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink looks kin of malformed. Make it more centered.--Nightshine 02:43, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I redid the ear pink. Any better? --Icethroat Happy Valentine's Day! 14:18, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

Brilliant. I honestly can't see anything wrong. Comments Before Approval? ✐SaNdY 14:31, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble 18:36, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

Littlecloud(MCA) - Approved

File:Littlecloud(MCA).pngLittlecloud! The best medicine cat ever--Nightshine 00:29, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

This is really nice looking :D And I agree that Littlecloud rules. Just blur the shading along his spine a bit more, especially the shading on the back of his head. ♫ insaneular ♫Down at Fraggle Rock! 00:31, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred back shading--Nightshine 00:41, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

This is really awsome!! ♥ it!! But maybe just blur teh pink in the ear a little more.


01:06, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred ear pink more--Nightshine 02:06, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken the tabby stripes. MaplefernMay StarClan light your pathHow's the Prey running? 13:07, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded thickened stripes--Nightshine 18:25, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? ✐SaNdY 18:50, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble 19:56, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

Leopardstar (W) ~ Approved


Bad News; My Activity = Epic Fail 5725. :( Good News; I have finished the whole warriors series! *cough*For now...*cough* To celebrate the good news, here's Leopardstar as a warrior. ^-^ Deisel is on my flash drive at school, so I have to put him on some other time. Read over the guidelines again to refresh my memory, and am I allowed to have one or two images up at a time? Anywho, Comments? GOT REINDEER?Mumble! 21:41, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Only one at a time. This is great! The eye looks funny because I always do it the way from Icethroat's tutorial. Make the ear pink darker.--Nightshine 21:52, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

One at a time. My only problem with this is that it doesn't look much like File:Leopardstar.png... ✐+ᖱ = 21:55, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

That's true. It looks kind of neon-ish--Nightshine 21:56, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, try darkening the highlights a tad more. Make the spots more of a reddish brown, and put some tabby stripes on her side--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 22:05, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, I agree. I'm not much of a copyer. I'll see what I can do. GOT REINDEER?Mumble! 14:21, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED. I made it as much like her as possible, basically redoing everything except the eye and ear-pink. Anything else? GOT REINDEER?Mumble! 14:44, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Make her more golden. MaplefernMay StarClan light your pathHow's the Prey running? 14:49, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Make her eyes more golden and make her ear pink redder. Trust me, doing leopardstar is sooooooo confusing, but it works eventualy. I had to come up with ten different trys before I got one to put up and it was bad >P.MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 14:59, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, she's too... brown, and not gold, run the dodge brush over her?--Darkhallows 21:14, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

On it. ^-^ GOT REINDEER?Mumble! 23:51, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED. Anything else? GOT REINDEER?Mumble! 01:45, February 2, 2010 (UTC)

Try making it goldish? Echopaw 01:53, February 2, 2010 (UTC)

Try just running the dodge tool over it a couple of times, and that should take care of the color--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 03:11, February 2, 2010 (UTC)

I think you should use the sponge tool on saturate once before dodging. It might help brighten it a little.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 00:14, February 4, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED. I think the sponge did the trick there. ^-^ I'm happy. Anything else, mis amigos? GOT REINDEER?Mumble! 22:22, February 5, 2010 (UTC)

The only thing I see is that the ear pink should probably be lightened a little more, because it looks the same color as her spots. Then this should be ready :D--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 23:18, February 5, 2010 (UTC)

Ok! ^-^ GOT REINDEER?Mumble! 21:42, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

I think the eyes look a bit strange. But I love the image! XD Mistyheart 19:08, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

I think the eyes are fine. The ear pink should be a bit lighter though--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 21:38, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED. Let's see how soon I can get this accepted. And can I still do Diesel as a KittyPet? He's still here, and they already have him up as a loner, and I believe I have him on hold as a kittypet? GOT REINDEER?Mumble! 15:38, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

Yep, this looks awsome Mumble! CBA? LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 18:47, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble 20:12, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

Cinderheart (Ki) - Approved

Cinderheart.kit Constructments? ✐SaNdY 21:11, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

Wow! I can honestly see nothing wrong! Good job :D--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 23:29, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

This is great! Should the stripes be a bit more blurred?--Nightshine 00:42, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, the stripes might need some slight blurring. Awesome job Sandy! HeartpathLove, Jaggedclaw! 01:31, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded And there was me thinking I'd blurred them too much. Thanks guys. ✐SaNdY 11:16, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

Looks great :D CBA? LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 00:55, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

Approved--LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 21:11, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

Spiderleg (Ki) - Approved

File:Spiderleg.kit.PNGI hate it.Darkhallows 22:46, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

It's really good, don't hate it! I can't see anything really wrong with it. insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular 22:59, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

The way his eyes look, it's like he is cross eyed. And the ear pink should be brighter.MINNOWCLAW 23:58, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

I was about to say that. Also, lighten all of him a tad. MaplefernMay StarClan light your pathHow's the Prey running? 00:00, February 4, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, and his nose should be a greyish pink. Or something. §₩1ƒ₮¥Mice taste goooood.

No, the nose looks fine--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 23:23, February 5, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe make a nose a teeny bit lighter.

The eyes make him look worried. The ear pink should be more reddish.--Nightshine 04:40, February 6, 2010 (UTC)

He looks kinda cross-eyed, and the nose needs colored. ßąէωïиց 16:38, February 6, 2010 (UTC)

No, the nose is fine. Black cats don't typically have pink noses, they're usually black like them. --NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 06:48, February 9, 2010 (UTC)I

I've been soo busy, sorry. I just redid him, I like this one more, anyways.Darkhallows 03:30, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

I love it. ;) Just darken the ear pink. Batwing 20:25, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

The eyes look a bit different to the ones on Icethroat's tutorial, and I thought they looked a bit weird. Other than that, darken earpink and then this is great! XD Mistyheart 14:57, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

Gah, earpink >.< I fail at it... over a year and I still can't do ear pink. I haven't read her tutorial, actually... I've done kit eyes before like this though. I think they're alright.. Anyways. I darkened his earsDarkhallows 02:23, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

I love it Shady! CBA? LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 06:39, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

It's good! But I was wondering, for most black cats aren't they supposed to be a SUPER dark grays so you can see the mouth and line art? That might not be the case but I'm pretty sure someone told me that before.--Artimas HunterWelcome to Bramblepath's Den 01:07, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

I can see the lineart clearly... on all of my computers...Darkhallows 02:48, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

I think this is fine, I can see the lineart on all of my computers too. Approved--LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 21:19, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

Cherrytail (KP)--Approved

Cherrytail.kittypet Not much to say about this one. Comments? MaplefernMay StarClan light your pathHow's the Prey running? 23:03, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

This looks great! Blur the ear pink and the ginger patch around the eyes some more--Nightshine 02:32, February 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? MaplefernMay StarClan light your pathHow's the Prey running? 21:23, February 2, 2010 (UTC)

Yep! Blur the ginger tipped tail a bit--Nightshine 02:40, February 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded- better? MaplefernMay StarClan light your pathHow's the Prey running? 12:35, February 4, 2010 (UTC)

Anything else? MaplefernMay StarClan light your pathHow's the Prey running? 01:11, February 6, 2010 (UTC)

The ginger on her face looks much brighter than the rest... ✐+ᖱ = 11:36, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

That's because I smudged it. The second one, I took the colour from a smudged patch. Which one (if any) do you like better? MaplefernMay StarClan light your pathHow's the Prey running? 13:35, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

I like the first one better--Nightshine 05:44, February 8, 2010 (UTC)

I like the coloring on the first one better. So yes, I think the first is better than the second. ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ 30px 00:30, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

I like the first one, just add some shading to the patch on her face, because it's so bright that it looks a bit flat. insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular 23:22, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

Ditto.HeartpathLove, Jaggedclaw! 00:52, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Better? MaplefernMay StarClan light your pathHow's the Prey running? 12:22, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

There's a funny darker line over the face patch. If this is shading, blend it. ✐SaNdY 21:22, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I think it's a lot better. Comments? MaplefernMay StarClan light your pathHow's the Prey running? 20:01, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

I think it looks a lot better, too. You can take down the image on the right I think. Comments roimh cheadú? (for the left image) --Icethroat Happy Valentine's Day! 20:01, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

Approved--LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 22:11, February 15, 2010 (UTC)