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Nettlepaw - Approved

File:Nettlepaw.png

Not a lot to say. Constructments? Bramble 22:49, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

It's really good! Lighten the ear pink a bit--Nightshine 22:52, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

Great job. i agree with nightshinne. i can hardly see the earpink but i my eyesight sucks. Also, this is jut out if curiousity: do you need to do shading for the really dark cats? Great job.--Artimas HunterWelcome to Bramblepath's Den 23:11, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

Artimas: Yes you do =) See Tigerstar, Brambleclaw and any black cat you can think of. Bramble: Nothing to add. Brilliant as usual =) ✐SaNdY 16:32, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

Thank Sandy. :) The ear pink has been lightened. Any other comments? Bramble 20:18, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

Yes: CBA? ✐SaNdY 19:01, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

Approved--LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 06:53, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

Snowbird (W)- Approved

File:Snowbird(W).png I've been bored lately ang Golden kit just got approved. Comments ?AshshadowI'm blue da ba dee da ba di 18:51, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

It is good! Add eye color. --Snowflight1Happy V-Day!! 18:53, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

There is eye color. Her queen pic has pretty dark eyes but I can lighten them if needed.AshshadowI'm blue da ba dee da ba di 18:58, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, I noticed after I posted. I think that it would be good to lighten them.--Snowflight1Happy V-Day!! 19:00, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shadingMINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 19:11, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

This actually looks perfect to me. Nice work =) ✐SaNdY 20:06, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks Sandy. Does this mean not to make the changes above?AshshadowI'm blue da ba dee da ba di 20:30, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

My opinion is no more important than anyone else's, and if they think changes are needed then by all means comply. I just thought I'd show my appreciation. =) ✐SaNdY 19:00, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks everybody. Darkened the shading and lightened the eye color. Anything else?AshshadowI'm blue da ba dee da ba di 19:55, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

That's better. I think it's perfect now. :) --Snowflight1Happy V-Day!! 20:21, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? ✐SaNdY 10:53, February 16, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble 22:19, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

Brindleface (Q) - Approved

File:Brindleface(Q).pngHere she is! This was a lot of fun to make :D--Nightshine 00:50, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

The Yellowfang thing is a discussion--Nightshine 00:51, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

Center the earpink and darken the stripes on her tail. MaplefernCarrying the torch... 00:56, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded fixed ear pink and darkened tail--Nightshine 01:07, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

Night shine, this is beautiful! 1) What program do you use? and 2) Comments before Approval? LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 01:48, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks! I use MS paint to draw the designs then I use GIMP to do the blurring and shading/highlighting--Nightshine 02:14, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

Its wonderful! But I would lessen the amount of stripes on her neck. :). Other then that, awesome? (BTW, is there an extra line on her back foot?) -Owlblaze Oakstar 02:36, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

What do you mean about the back foot? It would be really hard to lessen the neck stripes.--Nightshine 02:41, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

I don't think the stripes do need lessening. They're on her warrior image - Brindleface. LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 02:49, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

I'd add one more stripe, just on the haunch. It seems bare. MaplefernCarrying the torch... 21:30, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Added stripe to the haunch--Nightshine 22:40, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? ✐SaNdY 10:53, February 16, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. --Bramble 22:46, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

Heathertail (A) - Approved

File:Heathertail.Apprentice.pngI saw Heathertail's stripes on her warrior version and I was like "Those stripes are so pretty! I must draw them!" So, here we are. Constructments? --♥ĦĄωĸ†ɑ£ƟȠ♥ 17:59, February 11, 2010 (UTC)


It's beautiful! There aren't any stripes on three of her legs though. The front one closest to us is the only one with stripes--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 19:14, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

Lol Hawktalon! She's awesome! Like Nighty said, there aren't any stripes on three legs. Also, I can't really see the ear pink. Batwing 21:23, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Added stripes and changed ear pink. There weren't any stripes on her warrior image's hind legs, so I didn't add them. Should I put the stripes there, anyway? --♥ĦĄωĸ†ɑ£ƟȠ♥ 21:53, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

The pink ear is still a bit faint and there dosen't seem to be any strupes on the haunch paw nearest to us! This is really good though! XD! Fawnstorm 16:50, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Fixed ear pink and added stripes. --♥ĦĄωĸ†ɑ£ƟȠ♥ 17:11, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good! Try and add some to the forepaw nearest to us! I don't think I could to a cat like that to save StarClan! XD! Fawnstorm 16:19, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Added stripes (and happy valentines day, everyone!). --♥ĦĄωĸ†ɑ£ƟȠ♥ 22:09, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

This looks really awesome, Hawktalon. Comments before approval? --Icy-chanOlympics of 2010!! 22:55, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

Hi Hawktalon. This is really awesome, like icethroat said, but I think the ear needs 2 be more pink it sort of looks brown; I cant see it very well:(BeewingBuzz Like A Bee 02:14, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Fixed ear pink. --♥ĦĄωĸ†ɑ£ƟȠ♥ 15:22, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

Could you make the ear pink not touch the lineart? ♥Mouse♥♥Heart♥[[File:Pinkheart.png|60px]] 21:12, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - *sigh* Ear pink on apprentices are hard... --♥ĦĄωĸ†ɑ£ƟȠ♥ 21:58, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

Repeating CBA? ✐SaNdY 10:57, February 16, 2010 (UTC)

Approved--LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 00:03, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Rosetail (W)- Approved

File:Rosetail Warrior.png Bluestar's BFF forever! Well, here she is. My first tabby in forever. Comments? ♥Mouse♥♥Heart♥[[File:Pinkheart.png|60px]] 15:36, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

Looks great to me. There's a little dot of shading on her lower chest, though, that needs to be blurred a bit. --Bramble 16:38, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is a little faint. Darken it a bit. --♥ĦĄωĸ†ɑ£ƟȠ♥ 17:38, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. And Bramble, the 'dot' is actually the start of a tabby stripe on her chest. I got that from her elder pic. ♥Mouse♥♥Heart♥[[File:Pinkheart.png|60px]] 22:00, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

Hello? Is there anything else I need to do? ♥Mouse♥♥Heart♥[[File:Pinkheart.png|60px]] 00:05, February 16, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? ✐SaNdY 10:54, February 16, 2010 (UTC)

Approved--LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 00:08, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Stormfur (W) - Approved

File:Stormfur (W).gifGr...Six more weeks of winter. Woah, that groundhog Phil is such a liar. Anyways how do you like my fail on Stormfur? Ice There will only be five heros.... 21:22, February 2, 2010 (UTC)

He is really good, just blur the shading more all around, blur the earpink a little more, and maybe add a highlight to his tail. insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular 21:24, February 2, 2010 (UTC)

I didn't even realize that is was groundhog day today! I was snowboarding....As for the image, blur the shading and highlights. MaplefernMay StarClan light your pathHow's the Prey running? 21:26, February 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blured as much as possible. Stupid Phil. You would have seen your shadow anyways, the sun is out. But your so cute little Groundhog! Ice There will only be five heros.... 21:36, February 2, 2010 (UTC)

Make the tail highlight so that it fits the curve of the tail and blur it. The highlights on the body still need to be blured more but im not sure what to tell you.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 21:59, February 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Is this better? Ice There will only be five heros.... 23:14, February 2, 2010 (UTC)

Could you blur the highlight on the tail? It looks as if he has a grey tipped tail AngelPaw 00:35, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Ice There will only be five heros.... 01:25, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

Add shading to the tail. MaplefernMay StarClan light your pathHow's the Prey running? 13:31, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Ice T here will only be five heros.... 21:57, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

For the highlight on the tail, could you make it more with the curve of the tail like Ashshadow said? I mean, with the dodge tool, make a line that goes along his tail, following the curve, rather than a spot at the top of it. Like Icecloud said, it looks a little like a gry tipped tail. insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular 20:43, February 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? —Preceding unsigned comment added by Icestorm123 (talkcontribs)

He looks much better, just blur the tail more now. insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular 01:20, February 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Ice Happy Valentines! 01:36, February 6, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe make the earpink a bit larger and blur the tail. Other than that, I can't see anyhting that needs improving. :) Mistyheart 14:10, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Is this better? And thanks Misty! Ice Happy Valentines! 23:56, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

I think it looks really good XD ! But anyway, I think you should blur the earpink more and blur the tip of the tail.Echoheart 01:26, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks! Is this better? Ice Happy Valentines! 01:35, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

It's pretty good but blur the highlights a bit more...they look really distinct. Also, if there's a highlight on his muzzle, then there is no need for there to be shading on the muzzle.HeartpathLove, Jaggedclaw! 15:59, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Ice Happy Valentines! 02:33, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

The shading on his tail and body needs blending ✐SaNdY 11:55, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Ice Happy Valentines! 17:23, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

The shading looks a bit too... square (I don't know if that makes sense) like the pelt is sort of boxed in by the shading. Also, darken the shading on both his hind legs, and there are places around the legs mainly where where there is shading, there are little parts that don't have shading on them LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 01:17, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

Hey, Icestorm. Got your message on my talk page, and not that I think about it doesn't really make any sense does it ;) Okay, never mind that. Just blur the shading a whole lot more LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 21:27, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. That is as much as I can blur. Ice Happy Valentines! 01:22, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

Any more comments? Icestorm 21:14, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

NVM. Blue helped me do this in GIMP. :) Icestorm 23:04, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? (And wow.) ✐SaNdY 11:05, February 16, 2010 (UTC)

Thank you. Icestorm did the shading, then I blurred it and cleaned it up in GIMP. Bat 15:42, February 16, 2010 (UTC)

Approved--LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 00:21, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Lionheart (Ki) - Approved

Lionheart.kit Since there's one discussion topic, this should be fine to post as it's the 35th image, but if I need to take it down I will. This is my first tabby kit, and I'm still horrible at tabbies, so let me know whatever I can do to improve this. :) --Icethroat Happy Valentine's Day! 19:37, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

This is A-M-A-Z-I-N-G! Blur the stripes near the edges a touch. MaplefernCarrying the torch... 21:26, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Any better? (By the way, I love your new siggie Maplefern.) --Icy-chanOlympics of 2010!! 22:20, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks. I can't see anything else now. MaplefernCarrying the torch... 22:27, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

I think you should thin the lines on the forehead. Other than that, it's awesome!--Snowflight1Happy V-Day!! 22:33, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. This better? --Icy-chanOlympics of 2010!! 22:46, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

I think you should define the lines on the forehead a little bit more. It's still awesome!--Snowflight1Happy V-Day!! 23:07, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

...How should I do that? --Icy-chanOlympics of 2010!! 00:56, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

Use the body color and erase the blurring. Then blur it again, but not as much. Then you could use the burn tool again to do the shading if it got messed up.--Snowflight1Happy V-Day!! 00:59, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Is this any better? --Icy-chanOlympics of 2010!! 21:34, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? ✐SaNdY 10:52, February 16, 2010 (UTC)

Approved--LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 00:45, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Graystripe (KP) - Approved

File:GraystripeKP.png Here's Graystripe. Comments? --Rainwhisker567 14:23, January 31, 2010 (UTC)


Nice work. But on the tag, there's a blob of black, with a line connecting to the fur. Delete this, as it shouldn't be here. (It's the lineart, I know, but it needs to be fixed. These need to be removed from all linearts.) Darken the stripe along his back. Good job!Birchy 14:25, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink and the stripe on his back.Then maybe make the tuff on his head the same color as his stripe to show it coming over his head. Then do what Birchy said the this should be good.MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 14:51, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

To Birchy, I fixed the lineart the other day, so it shouldn't be a problem after this one. And to Blackclaw, really good, just thin his back stripe and darken it a little more. 15:23, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, do all that. But the stripe needs to come over his head. See his warrior image - Graystripe--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 22:55, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Done. Any other concerns? Rainwhisker50px 21:09, February 5, 2010 (UTC)

You made the stripe too big. It covers the hidden haunch.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 01:52, February 6, 2010 (UTC)

Ashy's right. Look at Cody. There is a stripe on her back, it might help--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 03:46, February 6, 2010 (UTC)

Ash is right. The stripe has hidden the farthest haunch,make the haunch the color of the shading, so it looks right. ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ 30px 23:39, February 8, 2010 (UTC)

Is this any better? Rainwhisker 00:53, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

Connect the part of the stripe on his back, to his collar. Then define the part of the stripe on his head more--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 01:56, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry I haven't been on in a while. Night, I did what you said, or tried to. How's this? Rainwhisker 18:34, February 16, 2010 (UTC)

Looks good to me :) CBA?--LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 06:46, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

I started the 24 hour process at like, 1:00 a.m the other night, so it's been 24 hours. Approved--LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 05:08, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Sasha(KP)- Approved

File:Sasha (KP).png

Im not sure about this one, it probably fails. Anyways, comments?(it's Firepelt,I have to fix my siggy because its messed up.


Not bad, just darken and blur the shading, and also, her eyes looks a bit neon blue to me, make them more neutral, like Heathertail's maybe? insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular 20:47, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

Firepelt, while you fix your siggie, can you at least put something like [[User:FirePelt|Firepelt]] ~~~~~ so that it looks like this: Firepelt and has the time shown, that way there's a link to your user page and from there we can get to your talk page. For the image itself, Insane covered almost all of it, but make the ear pink more of a reddish color, like on Rippletail's or Mossypaw. --Icy-chan 21:26, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

I had gotten her Ear pink directly from her rouge image, but i'll make it more of a red color. ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ 30px 21:15, January 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Anything else? ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ 30px 21:15, January 26, 2010 (UTC)
This is really good Fire! But bur the shading more. ♥Ice♥♥storm♥File:Icestorm.deputy.png|60px 21:11, January 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Thank you Ice. Anything else?ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ 30px 00:36, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

Something is missing... Why not get the Dodge tool and run it over the hind leg and shoulder once or twice? Maybe the head needs a good Dodging too. After that, It will look so much livelier! SwiftyHow's the prey running?

Dodge her? Why? I got her color directly from her rouge image though. Why dodge? ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ 30px 02:06, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

I have to admit, Im not the best as dodging. Really! Im not. truth is, im horrible. I dont think i'll be able to do that. ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ 30px 02:16, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

Blur shading. MaplefernHi everyone! 02:18, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

I could Dodge it for you, if you'd like. SwiftyHow's the prey running?

Reuploaded.I blurred the shading, you can try to dodge it you you'd like, Swifty, then post it on my talk page to see if i'll use it instead.Anything else? ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ 30px 16:36, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

blur the shading a bit.Minnowclaw 01:23, January 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Anything else?

No, I think this is ready now. MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 16:15, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

I think more shading is needed on the face, tail and foreleg and it all needs blending some more. ✐+ᖱ = 21:21, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Anything else? ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ 30px 23:35, February 2, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm... Can you make her paws and her muzzle darker brown? She is supposed to be some sort of siamese I think, according to her piccy in the manga. -Owlblaze Oakstar 07:11, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

She looks nothing lie a siamese, and I got the color from her rouge version. ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ 30px 20:59, February 4, 2010 (UTC)

I still see no shading on her tail or forleg Perhaps thicken it. ✐+ᖱ = 22:35, February 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Anything else? ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ 30px 16:50, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

Blend the shading on her back and add some to her right foreleg. ✐+ᖱ = 16:23, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Anything else? ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ 30px 19:07, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

This is great FirePelt! Sorry about the...um....confliction on Sandy's Poppydawn. All I can say is blur her shading on the head! As I said before this is really good! Will you sign my friends list? Fawnstorm 16:45, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

Off-Topic - Fawn: I'm going to speak for Firepelt here (sorry) and say don't worry about it. That's what the system is about and every opinion is welcome. If you believe something should be changed strongly enough then fight for it, as long as you stay polite and respectful to other opinions then there's no problem. FirePelt: For the image, perhaps make the nose colour the same as the ear colour. ✐SaNdY 21:26, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Sandy! I'll try and stay on topic from now on! XD! Make Sasha's ear pink a bit lighter! XD! Fawnstorm 10:30, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I had got the ear pink color directly from her queen image. Firepelt ★ 30px 15:21, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, ok. Never mind. XD! Fawnstorm 16:49, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

Thhe highlight in the eye is quite big. MaplefernCarrying the torch... 21:06, February 16, 2010 (UTC)

Uh, Fire, Bluestar has another Sasha KP image at the bottom of the page. which one of you reserved it?--Artimas HunterWelcome to Bramblepath's Den 15:43, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

Fire, This image is awesome, but on the PCA page, you don't have her reserved, Blue does. Unless you reserved her first and then took her down, you may want to take this off of the talk page... (It's Nightwhisker, siggie's not working...)

Fire: you do not have to take her down; you've had her up for weeks before Blue made that 'reservation'. CBA? ✐SaNdY 21:25, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

Until approved please add this to your reservation list.--Darkhallows 04:09, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Approved ✐SaNdY 13:01, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Pinestar (KP) - Approved

File:Pinestar KP.png Ah, finally, my computer is working again! I had finished him the day I reserved him, but at that time we didn't have these rules so the page was always really cluttered, and I never got time to put him up. Anyways, comments?

This is awesome! Make his eyes a bit darker--Nightshine 00:49, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I darkened eyes, and I also erased the weird blob on his tag--LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 00:54, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading a little.Darkhallows 05:58, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink a bit.MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 16:48, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

There's like a square-ish blob of fur underneath the collar tag. Batwing 20:49, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Okay, I blurred the shading. As for the ear pink, I got it from his leader image. Do you want me to darken it anyway? And about the blob of fur under his tag, that's his chest. I'm not sure why they aren't on the short-haired blanks though.--LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 01:50, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

It's not on Graystripe's kittypet version for approval above. Bat 22:15, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Weird squarish blob thing, has been removed! Thanks Blue, I probably wouldn't have realized that if you hadn't pointed it out :)--LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 01:53, February 16, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --Icy-chanOlympics of 2010!! 22:11, February 16, 2010 (UTC)

Approved ✐SaNdY 13:04, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Rippletail (A)- Approved

Rippletail.apprentice I feel so sorry for him, so I did his apprentice charart. Comments? MaplefernCarrying the torch... 22:18, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

This is good! Just make a few stripes longer and redden and center the ear pink.--Nightshine 22:42, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Lengthened stripes and made ear pink more reddish. Anything else? MaplefernCarrying the torch... 23:23, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

Wow! Great job! I just think that the ear pink could use some blurring, and blur the stripes more. Rainwhisker 18:37, February 16, 2010 (UTC)

Do what Rainwhisker said, and the paws look a little flat, add some more shading to them. (: This is really good though. (: Bat 20:47, February 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Blurred ear pink and stripes. Comments? MaplefernCarrying the torch... 22:49, February 16, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? ✐SaNdY 21:36, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

Approved ✐SaNdY 13:09, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Wolfheart (W) -Approved

File:Wolfheart(W).pngWell there are two discussions so this should be within the limit. Any comments on my epic failure of a shorthaired cat?AshshadowI'm blue da ba dee da ba di 23:13, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the tail and head highlight. MaplefernCarrying the torch... 23:20, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the chest highlight a bit and darken the shading--Nightshine 23:21, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

And also darken the ear pink a tad--Nightshine 23:22, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

I got the earpink color from her kit version, but I'll see what i can do about the shading.AshshadowI'm blue da ba dee da ba di 23:26, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I redid the shading. Better?AshshadowI'm blue da ba dee da ba di 23:44, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the top of the ear pink, and this will be ready :)--LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 00:43, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

By top do you mean near the tip or the top half of the earpink?HaikageAsh's Talk 00:47, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

The tip LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 04:45, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I know it doesnt look like I did anything but I blurred it more.HaikageAsh's Talk 11:48, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

It looks great to me - CBA? ✐SaNdY 12:19, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Approved--LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 19:45, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

Nightcloud (Q)-Approved

File:Nightcloud queen.pngHey! It took me AGES to do this! XD So what do you guys think?? Fawnstorm 16:34, February 9, 2010 (UTC)

She's lovely. :) The only things that stick out is that the back could do with some shading, the nose needs to be colored in, and the shading on the belly needs to be blurred a bit. This is wonderful for your first (?) one, though. Great job. --Bramble 16:39, February 9, 2010 (UTC)

I had to change the file name, though, as you uploaded the image over the warrior version. Please upload on this file name: Nightcloud.queen. Thanks. --Bramble 16:41, February 9, 2010 (UTC)

This is wonderful! All I see is do what Bramble said and add ear pink. (: Batwing 16:44, February 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Can't think what happened to the ear pink and the nose! Bet it was family! Anywho I reuploaded the image (Nightcloud.queen) and re-put on the ear pink and the um........nose pink. XD This is my first black queen Bramble :) I have done a tortoiseshell and white, a grey and a ginger and white. So yeah! Fawnstorm 17:01, February 9, 2010 (UTC)

She's lovely! Black cats are really hard and you made a fantastic job Fawny :D I can't really see anything that needs to be fixed! Brightfrost 17:09, February 9, 2010 (UTC)

Thanx Brightfrost! XD Fawnstorm 17:10, February 9, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink looks odd. ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ 30px 22:43, February 9, 2010 (UTC)

make it a little larger and blur a little more.ҖѬ ѳѥ ѯ 10:52, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

also make the ear pink darker.MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 14:07, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

This is great Fawny, but maybe go over the ear pink - it looks a bit transparent, like the black is showing through. I can't see anything else that needs improving :) Mistyheart 10:19, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

Repuloaded Sorry it has taken forever to finaly reuploaded it! Pls excuse me XD! I have to everything on the school Pc's and it has taken me like 10 minutes to uploaded her again! Anywho...........yeah..............I redid her! XD Fawnstorm 18:47, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading, highlights, and ear pink a lot more--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 18:57, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

Repuloaded Thanks for the comment Nightfall XD! Any more?

Make the ear pink more of a reddish color--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 19:47, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on her back a bit, but this is a brilliant black cat - I couldn't do a black cat to save my life. Mistyheart 08:28, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

Repuloaded Okay! I did her again! I blurred the back sshading as much as I could. XD! Fawnstorm 10:27, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

I can't see anything that needs improving! ^^ XD Mistyheart 09:29, February 16, 2010 (UTC)

The shading and everything is wonderful Fawn. All I see is that the ear pink needs some attention from the blur tool =) ✐SaNdY 10:58, February 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Done that! Does it look okay now? Fawnstorm 11:35, February 16, 2010 (UTC)

She's wonderful Fawn. :) I can't see anything wrong with it now. Icestorm 16:38, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

I love the image it's brilliant! I don't see anything that needs improving! XD! ♫ Mistyheart ♫ 60px 10:17, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? ✐SaNdY 11:59, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Approved--LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 19:49, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

Redtail (W) - Approved

Redtail.warrior Pretty proud of this one ^^ My first tortie, too. Comments? ♫ insaneular ♫Down at Fraggle Rock! 21:29, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

This is amazing for your first tortoiseshell, Insane! Blur the marking a touch. MaplefernCarrying the torch... 22:52, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

This is wonderful! Make the ear pink a bit smaller and blur the white paws some more--Nightshine 23:23, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

Make the tail a tad redder like his Deputy image. Bat 00:41, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Darken his red patches a little XD ♫ Mistyheart ♫ 60px 09:59, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I made the ear pink smaller, and blurred the white paws... I didn't change the colors because I took the colors right from the deputy image; they might look different because of the way I shaded it. (My highlights usually make colors look more saturated...) If you guys still think I should change them I will. ♫ insaneular ♫Down at Fraggle Rock! 16:37, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

This looks perfect to me. ✐SaNdY 16:38, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

I second that :) CBA?--LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 22:44, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Approved LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 06:58, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

Runningnose (MCA) - Approved

File:Runningnose(MCA).pngComments?--Nightshine 22:58, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a little bigger, and darken the shading if you can, looks good ^^ ♫ insaneular ♫Down at Fraggle Rock! 22:59, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Darkened shading and fixed ear pink--Nightshine 23:20, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

Any other comments?--Nightshine 22:44, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink, and this will be ready :) --LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 01:43, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded fixed ear pink--Nightshine 22:42, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

Pefect :) CBA?--LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 23:52, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. --ĦĄωĸ†ɑ£ƟȠ 18:27, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

Ruby (Lo) - Approved

Ruby.loner

I don't like her. She was mean to Tiny. -.- But, I thought she'd be simple to do. Comments? Bat 17:34, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

I don't see anything wrong Blue. Brilliant image =) ✐SaNdY 17:39, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks Sandy! :D Bat 17:40, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

It's great! Maybe darken the ear pink a tiny bit--Nightshine 17:51, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

I got the ear pink color from her kittypet image, should I still change it? Bat 17:59, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

I guess not. But it does seem a little too light--Nightshine 18:02, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

So, change or not? Bat 18:10, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

Sure--Nightshine 18:25, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I saturated the ear pink a touch. Anything else? Bat 18:29, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

I don't see anything else wrong:) CBA? --ĦĄωĸ†ɑ£ƟȠ 18:32, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. --Ŧ∆ķმ♰§ƱოΣ 15:39, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

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