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Tadpole (Ki) - Approved

File:Tadpole.Kit.pngA moment ago, I accidentally added this section in the approved chararts archive. *facepalm* Well, now that I've removed it from the wrong place and put it in the right one, constructments? --ĦĄωĸ†ɑ£ƟȠ 20:52, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Ah, the many attempts of Tadpole. xD Look's great. Just blur the highlight on the chest a tad. Bat 21:07, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Blurred highlight. --ĦĄωĸ†ɑ£ƟȠ 21:19, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Anything else? --ĦĄωĸ†ɑ£ƟȠ 17:53, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

I don't see anything, I'd CBA this if I could. Bat 19:50, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? ✐SaNdY 21:00, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. --Icy-chanHappy St. Patrick's Day! 23:37, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Shellheart (D) Approved

Shellheart.deputy Ah, finally. He's been finished for forever, I was just waiting for the image number to go down. Okay, how is he?--LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 20:14, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the chest shading a bit. This is wonderful! MaplefernCarrying the torch... 20:21, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Better? LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 06:54, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

Perfect to me. CBA? ✐SaNdY 22:18, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. --Icy-chanHappy St. Patrick's Day! 23:37, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Whitewing (A) - Approved

File:Whitewing (A).png This is my first charart, Whitewing as an apprentice! I had a little trouble with the blurring (running into the lines XP). Comments?--Snowflight1Snowflight + Finchfeather 4ever!! 19:15, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

This is pretty good! Just try blurring the shading more. The ear pink is fine--Nightshine 19:23, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I blurred the shading. I think the first one is better :P. --Snowflight1Snowflight + Finchfeather 4ever!! 19:46, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

Just blur the shading on her back a bit more and it should be good--Nightshine 19:49, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I blurred the shading on the back. How is it?--Snowflight1Snowflight + Finchfeather 4ever!! 20:05, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good, but it looks a bit more gray than white. Try lightening the entire image some with the dodge tool. --Icethroat Happy Valentine's Day! 22:30, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I lightened it. How is she?--Snowflight1Happy V-Day!! 15:19, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

Blur all of the shading.AshshadowI'm blue da ba dee da ba di 20:32, February 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred all the shading. Anything else?--Snowflight1Happy V-Day!! 22:45, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

She still looks a bit gray and the shading needs to be blurred more.HaikageAsh's Talk 22:51, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I blurred the shading and lightened it.--Snowflight1Happy V-Day!! 21:54, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

It looks good to me--Nightshine 17:42, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

Me too :) CBA? LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 22:57, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. --Icy-chanHappy St. Patrick's Day! 23:37, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Mousefur (Ki) - Approved

File:Mousefur (Ki).pngEvanphoto 00:47, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

Make the earpink brighter, and she looks crosseyed.Darkhallows 01:01, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading, I can barely see it. Ice Happy Valentines! 01:05, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Evanphoto 15:00, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

It looks like there's something at the bottom of the right paw. It might be my computer though. It's like a little gray spot under the paw.--Snowflight1Happy V-Day!! 20:15, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Evanphoto 20:54, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

This is great! Just darken the ear pink a touch, and I can't really see the nose color. Bat 20:49, February 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Evanphoto 21:22, February 16, 2010 (UTC)

I don't see anything wrong with it.--Nightshine 17:39, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? ✐SaNdY 22:41, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. --Icy-chanHappy St. Patrick's Day! 23:37, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Oakheart (W) - Approved

File:Oeakheart(W).png Well here he is!! I really wanted to do him...love the color of his pelt! Ii know it's over the limit but there are charats about to be approved and some discussion questions-so it's good. Comments? Critics?

HiddenSun

21:31, February 16, 2010 (UTC)

The only thing I see is that maybe the ear pink should be more tringular. MaplefernCarrying the torch... 21:33, February 16, 2010 (UTC)

Also make the ear pink a little more red. Blur the shading on the chest and tail a bit more--Nightshine 00:14, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

If you blur the shading, I don't think there will be anything else that needs improving. ^^ ♫ Misty ♫ 60px 14:09, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Could you lighten the ear pink a bit? It's a little hard to see. Good job on this :) ♫ insaneular ♫Down at Fraggle Rock! 22:15, February 19, 2010 (UTC)


Reuploaded- fixed the ear and blurred the shading as much as I could.

HiddenSun
20:02, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? ✐SaNdY 22:44, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. --Icy-chanHappy St. Patrick's Day! 23:37, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Timberfur (W) - Approved

File:Timberfur.pngComments? ♫ Mistyheart ♫ 60px 09:57, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good Misty! Blur the shading quite abit though and make the ear pink a bit smaller! Fawnstorm 10:00, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Tried to blur shading and decreased earpink. :) ♫ Mistyheart ♫ 60px 10:14, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Good! Did you put any Highlights on the tail? I can't see any! XD! Fawnstorm 10:21, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Do short-haired cats need highlights on the tail? XD ♫ Misty ♫ 60px 10:49, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Don't know but try it anyway and see if it looks OK! Fawny 10:55, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading some more and yes, most people put highlights on the tails of short haired cats.HaikageAsh's Talk 11:41, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Thats what I though! XD! Fawny 11:44, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Added highlights and blurred as much as possible. What else do I need to do? ♫ Misty ♫ 60px 14:01, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on his front leg. The part that isn't shaded stands out a bit! Fawny 14:54, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Tried to blur the shading on the leg. ♫ Misty ♫ 60px 17:11, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? ✐SaNdY 22:44, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. --Icy-chanHappy St. Patrick's Day! 23:37, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Crookedstar (D) - Approved

Crookedstar.deputy Oh dear. He looks like he's chewing gum. Anyways, Constructments? ♫ insaneular ♫Down at Fraggle Rock! 11:50, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

Your right! He does, but this is really good! Try and make the Ear Pink a bit lighter. Fawny 60px 11:54, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I lightened the ear pink. Better? ♫ insaneular ♫Down at Fraggle Rock! 12:14, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah! I really can't see anything wrong! Fawny 60px 16:15, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

The shading in the middle of the haunch and front leg looks a little darker than the rest. Bat 17:19, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

It is. Barely any light would get into that crevice, as opposed to a little more light that would hit, for instance, the back of the haunch... ♫ insaneular ♫Down at Fraggle Rock! 17:22, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

He's got chubby cheeks! Make the eye color a tad bit darker--Nightshine 17:34, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

The eye color's the exact same as from the leader image.... Should I still change it....? ♫ insaneular ♫Down at Fraggle Rock! 17:35, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, Ok. It just looked weird, how high it stretched up. Bat 17:35, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, I use a very exaggerated Shading style. If it looks too odd, I can change it... ♫ insaneular ♫Down at Fraggle Rock! 17:37, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

Just, don't make it go up as high. The darkness of it is good, but I just don't think the shadow would come up that high. Bat 17:39, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I did my best to make the shadow smaller... does it look any better? ♫ insaneular ♫Down at Fraggle Rock! 17:42, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

Yep. ;) All I see now is there's a patch right under the cream on the neck that looks a tad more yellowish than the rest of his pelt. Bat 17:44, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

That's his neck shading. It looks very orangey when I use burn on the cream fur... o3o ♫ insaneular ♫Down at Fraggle Rock! 17:45, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

It is a little gingery but it looks fine to me - that's the colour it goes with the burn tool. If you look closely at the leader image there is some slightly orangey shading so this should be okay. You know I love your bubble-gum cat Insane. ✐SaNdY 22:17, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

He looks so cute! Sorry, just though I'd add that in LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 22:30, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

I know, he looks like he has chubby little cheeks! :D Bat 01:03, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Um, does that mean there's nothing else to fix? ^_^ ♫ insaneular ♫Down at Fraggle Rock! 01:42, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

I don't think so. CBA? GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 02:00, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble 17:17, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

Redtail (A) - Approved

File:Redtail(A).pngComments?--Nightshine 18:35, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

Very nice, but perhaps make the patches more smudged like his deputy image? They look a little too... smooth right now. Bat 19:20, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Like that?--Nightshine 19:24, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

Yep, now just blur them a tad. Bat 19:49, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred more--Nightshine 20:20, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

Make all the patches the same colour. MaplefernCarrying the torch... 22:06, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

You mean the ginger?--Nightshine 22:14, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

That's what I mean. Sorry that I wasn't clear. MaplefernCarrying the torch... 22:26, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Fixed ginger patches--Nightshine 22:35, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

Anything else?--Nightshine 19:50, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

The shading on his black ear is a bit dark, I can't really see the lineart. Lighten it up a little bit. --Icy-chanOlympics of 2010!! 20:17, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded lightened ear--Nightshine 20:28, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --Icy-chanHappy St. Patrick's Day! 20:57, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. --Icy-chanHappy St. Patrick's Day! 22:11, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

Shadepelt (A)- Approved

File:ShadefurA.png Sandy could you please put Shadepelt (A) on the reserved list for me, please. I know I haven't gone over the limit of charart's! So please don't take this down, I will if it comes to that! ♣Silverthistle 15:36, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

You can edit that list yourself you know, Silverthistle. Just add in whichever character it is. I have done so this time. As for the image: it's really good but I have no choice but to decline it as this is your second on the page with Ivytail (W). Either this will need to be declined, or Ivytail withdrawn, your choice. ✐SaNdY 15:39, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

That's a really hard decision... but, I'll have to go with keeping Shadepelt (A). Ivytail is way to hard, Shadepelt's is easier by a boat-load! ♣Silverthistle 15:46, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

I withdrew her and archived for you. For this image, you need to darken the shading a little. ✐SaNdY 16:06, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I think it won't be long till I get her approved, do you guys? ♣Silverthistle 18:19, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading and add some to the tail. Icestorm 17:57, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Yes. Now brighen the highlights then blur them. Icestorm 18:21, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

I think you may be right Silver - this looks good to me =) The only thing I see is that the ear pink ould do with being inside the ear a little more, and perhaps a more reddish colour. ✐SaNdY 18:31, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I hope I can get it approved today! Also, for the main project page, you guys should put up a page that shows all the charart's that are needed for characters. Like: Shadefur apprentice needed, Ivytail queen and apprentice needed, Millie kittypet needed. ♣Silverthistle 18:50, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Silver - look here to see who needs images and of which rank or if you'd rather see them by Clan, here ✐SaNdY 19:37, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, that's good. But you should put it on the main Project page. Also, I need opioions and comments! Come on people, ondelay! mush! *howls, with gleam of humor in eyes* ♣Silverthistle 04:05, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

Lol! Okay, blur the ear pink, and the shading on the tail a lot more LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 04:20, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, I added a link on the main page. Happy now? ;) ✐SaNdY 20:46, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, I'm as happy as a newborn kit! Now, when do you think I would might get this approved? (Specifically like: March 5th) ♣Silverthistle 05:13, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

The only thing I see is blur the highlight on the face, and blur the ear pink. Then this should be ready :D LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 05:17, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

Can you darken the shading a bit?--Nightshine 17:36, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

Cool Silver =) (Why March 5th btw?) The shading looks fine to me... ✐SaNdY 22:45, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blured the ear pink and darkened the shadeing. I think the shading was fine, and it is too dark now. But whatever... ♣Silverthistle 17:52, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

I think this looks great! CBA? GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 20:07, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. --Icy-chanHappy St. Patrick's Day! 22:11, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

Rowanclaw (A) - Approved

File:Rowanclaw.apprentices.png I asked Nightfall for her opinion and she helped me decide to put the second image up for approval, but then I thought and decided that I wanted to second-check with everyone else of which image I should put up for approval to have it look like his warrior image but at the same time be more ginger like his description says. There's onte discussion, so this shouldn't be over the limit, but if it is I'll take it down. Comments, suggestions, and opinions? (The shading is blurred on the individual images on my laptop for when I upload it to one image after I decide which one to keep up.) --Icy-chanOlympics of 2010!! 22:35, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

I say, the first one, for consistency, as we did with Dawnpelt's warrior image. It'd be nice to have one of the more ginger ones as an alternate version, though... ♫ insaneular ♫Down at Fraggle Rock! 22:37, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

I like the middle one. The first one reminds me too much of Lionheart.HaikageAsh's Talk 22:39, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

I like the third one because it's a nice vibrant colour but as for Rowanclaw I guess the second one would be best--Nightshine 22:40, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

I would have to go with the 3rd one. The first one is too brown, middle one two light brown, and the third one perfect yellowy golden brown! ♣Silverthistle 04:02, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

I would have to say the 1st one... --NightyMeh kitteh is hoplessley confused... 22:50, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Ummm....let's compared them to his warrior image, shall we? File:Rowanclaw.warrior.4.png

From what I see, the first one looks the most like his warrior image, but the second is okay. The third's colour is too strong. MaplefernCarrying the torch... 17:19, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

Ah! So many diferent opinions! I decided that I like Insane's idea the best: she had a very good explanation. So, now that I've decided to keep the first one up, comments and suggestions? --Icy-chanOlympics of 2010!! 21:14, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading some more.HaikageAsh's Talk 21:41, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

Yay~ Blur the stripes more so they blend with his pelt, like his warrior image, and also make the ear pink lighter like his warrior image. Really nice image ^^ ♫ insaneular ♫Down at Fraggle Rock! 22:13, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I didn't make the ear pink the same color as the warrior version because I think that the ear pink is too light on the warrior version, but I did lighten it a little bit. Is this any better? --Icy-chanOlympics of 2010!! 18:16, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

This looks fine to me :) CBA? GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 10:10, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. Although this is my own image, it's been more than 24 hours, so I'm assuming that I'm allowed to approve this... If not, then someone please second their approval. --Icy-chanHappy St. Patrick's Day! 22:57, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

Runningwind (A) - Approved

File:Runningwind(A).pngConstructments?--Nightshine 01:10, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

Ooh, nice stripes! The stripes on his legs look a little thick though, maybe make them a bit thinner? GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 03:13, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded thinned the leg stripes--Nightshine 03:19, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

My oppinion is that I think it looks great!!! Love the stripes and great shading! Moonpelt1786 04:38, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

Pretteh! :D Just make the tail stripes a bit thinner. Bat 12:14, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

Ooh, much better than my warrior version. But I can't see the ear pink too well.--Darkhallows 14:20, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded thinned tail stripes and I tried fixing the ear pink. Hopefully it's better. I love your warrior version of him!--Nightshine 00:24, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

Amazing! I can't find anything wrong with this! Saint Ice 00:26, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe shorten the stripe on his eye, as it is pretty long. MaplefernCarrying the torch... 11:38, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights seem a bit bright, run the burn tool over them once. Also, add some more stripes to the tail, and darken the shading on the tail, so it looks more like his warrior version. Bat 22:19, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded added more tail stripes, darkened tail and shortened eye stripe--Nightshine 22:33, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

You forgot a </span> in your sig, but I fixed it for you here. Image-wise, I think this looks really good, comments before approval? --Icy-chanHappy St. Patrick's Day! 22:49, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. --Icy-chanHappy St. Patrick's Day! 03:12, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Shnuky (KP) - Approved

File:Shnuky.kittypet.gif

I think we finally got her desciption right. So, to celebrate, here she is. I went brown, because I find gray cats drab, and I just did Ruby. Constructments on the cat with the most kittypet-ish name ever? Bat 22:18, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

Good job! I really like the collar. Make the nose a tad less hot pink.HaikageAsh's Talk 22:22, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Lightened nose color. Thanks, Ashshadow. When I made it, I was trying to make the collar look like it had tiny flowers on it, but I like the way it turned out. (: Anything else? Bat 22:25, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

Look! I really am alive, and i've come back! As for the image, make the nose pink the same color as the ear pink. Fire-★ 30px 01:02, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

So, should I make them both the same color as the ear pink or nose pink? Bat 01:08, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

Get the color from the ear pink. --Icy-chanHappy St. Patrick's Day! 02:16, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Changed nose color. Anything else? Bat 12:11, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

Not that I can see. Comments before approval? --Icy-chanHappy St. Patrick's Day! 22:44, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. --Icy-chanHappy St. Patrick's Day! 03:12, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Dappletail (W) - Approved

File:Dappletail.Warrior.pngWell this was a challenge. I tried to imitate the markings as best I could, but I failedD: Constructments? (PS, my sig is in Japanese [not the letters, the word]. It literally translates to "Hawktalon." I was boredXD) --Ŧ∆ķმ♰§ƱოΣ 20:40, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

Lol i did that too. For the image maybe blur the stripes a tiny bit more. This is really good.HaikageAsh's Talk 20:47, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Oh, it's in Japanese! I was wondering what it was before you mentioned it *facepalm* --Ŧ∆ķმ♰§ƱოΣ 20:57, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

OH. MY. GOD. This is awesome!! The only thing I see is the top front leg (the one we can't see very well, behind the front-front leg) needs more stripes. Bat 22:41, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

I knew that kage meant shadow so I assumed that hai meant ash. Your new sig's cool, Hawktalon. :) Image-wise, do what Blue said, as well as add a stripe or two to the muzzle as without a highlight like the elder image it looks a tad bit bare. Add a couple to the ankle right below the haunch as well. --Icy-chanHappy St. Patrick's Day! 23:13, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Added stripes. --Ŧ∆ķმ♰§ƱოΣ 23:28, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

Add more stripes to the back leg. Bat 01:07, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

I think this looks great! Good stripes! But I agree with Bat more stripes on the back leg otherwise GREAT! Moonpelt1786 04:42, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Moar stripesXD --Ŧ∆ķმ♰§ƱოΣ 20:11, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

Lol Hawktalon. xP All I see (this really is the last thing xD) is that I don't see much shading on the legs. Bat 23:09, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - There was already shading there so I darkened it a bit so it was easier to see. --Ŧ∆ķმ♰§ƱოΣ 20:21, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

Looks great. Comments before approval? --Icy-chanHappy St. Patrick's Day! 21:21, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. --Icy-chanHappy St. Patrick's Day! 03:12, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Voletooth (E) Approved

Voletooth.elder Comments? GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 23:54, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

It's great!! Blur the shading some more--Nightshine 23:55, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Thanks! Blurred it as much as I could GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 00:13, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe darken the stripes like on his warrior image.--Nightshine 00:27, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

Blend the highlight on the face more. This is great. (: Bat 00:28, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Stripes have been darkened, and highlight has been blurred :) GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 00:54,

February 22, 2010 (UTC)

I think it looks very good great job! Moonpelt1786 04:46, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks Moonpelt! GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 08:43, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

The haunch is a little bare. Add a stripe, maybe? MaplefernCarrying the torch... 12:25, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Stripe has been added :) (I also added one to his shoulder, cuz I thought that looked a bit bare too) GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 21:04, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

Oh wait, changes aren't showing. One sec GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 21:05, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Okay, now stripes have been added GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 21:06, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --Icy-chanHappy St. Patrick's Day! 21:23, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. --Icy-chanHappy St. Patrick's Day! 03:12, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Hutch- Approved

File:Hutch1.pngHopefully this isn't over the limit. i wanted to get him up before someone made a warrior image for him.HaikageAsh's Talk 23:46, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

It's great! Can you add more highlight to it? The ear pink is too dark--Nightshine 23:51, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Lightened the earpink. Nightshine, highlights are optional and I chose not to add them.HaikageAsh's Talk 00:02, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Well then can you darken the shading? I don't really see any--Nightshine 00:04, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Thats a can-do. Darkened the shading.HaikageAsh's Talk 00:27, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

This is good! Can you darken the stripes? Icestorm 00:57, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Add some shading to the collar. Bat 01:05, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Darkened stripes and collar shading. HaikageAsh's Talk 01:29, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --Icy-chanHappy St. Patrick's Day! 00:15, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. --Icy-chanHappy St. Patrick's Day! 03:12, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Susan (KP)- Approved

Well,Sandy put Sasha CBA few hours ago,so I guess its okay.I used Insane's tutorials..--.--:) Ivy Hi there!! 10:53, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

File:Susan.png Blur the shading on the back, the tabby stripes in the shaded area, and the ears. And on the tag, there's a black blob with a line connecting to ghe fur. Erase this, because it shouldn't be there. (I know it's on the lineart, it just needs to be removed). Otherwise, great job! Birchy 10:56, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded--.--:) Ivy Hi there!! 11:14, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Great! There's still that blob on the tag. Any you coloured in the line. Erase them, and this will be great!Birchy 11:16, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

The eyes look weird. look at Night shine's tutorial for eyes here Echoheart 11:36, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks guysreuploded--.--:) Ivy Hi there!! 11:44, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the highlight on the tail a little bit, then this will be great!MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 14:29, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Hey, I'm glad my videos could help :) One thing I'd suggest is blurring the tabby stripes on the head a little more. insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular 15:49, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

You still haven't fixed the tag. Where it's golden, there's a black blob. Get rid of that, and coming down from it is a line. Get rid of that, the color there and it should be ready! Also, blur the stripes on the tail, near the end. Birchy 17:03, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

The color looks really off. It says that Suzan is a light brown tabby. This looks golden, almost yellow--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 22:08, January 30, 2010 (UTC) REUPLOADEDsorry but ive been busy!!--.--:) Ivy Hi there!! 10:28, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

The head looks flat. MaplefernMay StarClan light your pathHow's the Prey running? 12:03, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading and highlights more. Other than that this is really good! Ice There will only be five heros.... 22:22, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

I changed the style.comments?--.--:) Ivy Hi there!! 06:03, February 2, 2010 (UTC)

maybe make the eye color a tiny bit lighter and darken the shading.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 17:42, February 6, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes look very wobbly. I'm assuming you copied the style Shady used for Cody, so try and make the lines a lot smoother ✐+ᖱ = 11:30, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

reupoloaded--.--:) Ivy Hi there!! 10:30, February 8, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the stripes and the shading more--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 20:01, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded..--:) Ivy Hi there!! 07:25, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

All I can see is that the stripes are still shaky in places - makes her look like her spine is wobbly. Just smooth them out a little and blur a tiny bit. The highlights need blending also. ✐+ᖱ = 12:57, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED!!≈Ivy-sama≈ 03:26, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

Add shading to the left (our right) ear, and then this should be good. --Icethroat Happy Valentine's Day! 23:01, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

Yoopee!!≈Ivy-sama≈ 12:54, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, found one more thing: blur the ear pink a little bit more and make it a tad bit darker. --Icethroat Happy Valentine's Day! 19:49, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

FIXED!!≈Ivy-sama≈ 10:55, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

snarls* If nobody comes I'll withdraw this!!--≈Ivy-sama≈ 06:11, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

Ivypool, that behavior is unacceptable. Users will comment when they can get on, they all have lives other than this wiki. Somethimes it takes a while, but they will comment. As for your image, make the eyes green (It says she has green on her article) blur the shading on the tail a lot more, blur the ear pink more, and dodge the muzzle--LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 06:45, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

I echo Night. I think the highlights are still too concentrated too. ✐SaNdY 21:29, February 17, 2010 (UTC)


Sorry..Re upladed--≈Ivy-sama≈ 06:58, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Blur all the stripes more, especially on the tail. And brighten the highlight on her face--LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 22:46, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

I wouldn't blur them, try smudging them.Darkhallows 17:31, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Yay!GIMP! reuploaded--≈Ivy-sama≈ 10:40, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

Brighten the highlight more on her muzzle GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 04:40, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

REuploaded--≈Ivy-sama≈ 11:03, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? ✐SaNdY 19:59, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

Approved ✐SaNdY 15:32, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Brokentail (D) - Approved

File:Brokentail.deputy.png I should really do myself a favor and stop making deputy images where the lineart needs to be changed and I have to copy Bramble's awesome leader images XD But they're fun to do. Comments? (I know the tail looks a bit odd, but it was very difficult to bend it on the deputy blank) ♫ insaneular ♫Down at Fraggle Rock! 20:25, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

Imagine how hard it would be in the warrior blank. Nice job Insane, maybe add a stripe to the shoulder area.HaikageAsh's Talk 20:50, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

This is wonderful! And I think the tail looks awsome! I'm doing his kit version, and the tail just looks awful. I would add some tripes to his forehead, as he does on his leader image GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 03:03, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Added a stripe to the shoulder, and darkened the stripes on his forehead (There were stripes there, Night, but the highlight made them rather hard to see) Better? ♫ insaneular ♫Down at Fraggle Rock! 21:25, February 23, 2010 (UTC)\

I think it's perfect!--Nightshine 02:20, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Boy, me too! CBA? GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 02:35, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Approved ✐SaNdY 15:39, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

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