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Nightfur (W) - Approved

File:Nightfurwarrior.png I've been wanting to do another cat, but I've been so busy, I chose a pretty simple one. Besides, he didn't have any charart yet.--Shaf Girl 23:58, February 2, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken the shading some and make the earpink more redish. other than that this is good.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 00:03, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink looks alright to me, it just needs to be blurred.Darkhallows 00:27, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

Add highlights. I don't see any--Nightshine 01:07, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

Highlights are optional.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 01:08, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, I always like them better with highlights--Nightshine 01:33, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Made the earpink a little more red and blurred it, and thickened the shading. I'm still working on how to do highlights. Are there any tutorials on them?--Shaf Girl 17:29, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

Look at the apprentice tutorials on the main page. I would link it but I don't know how.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 20:27, February 4, 2010 (UTC)

Warriors Wiki:Charart/Apprentice Tutorials ✐+ᖱ = 07:07, February 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.--Shaf Girl 02:32, February 6, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is a little to big, make it smaller and darker NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 04:05, February 6, 2010 (UTC)

The shading also needs blending ✐+ᖱ = 16:03, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.--Shaf Girl 19:06, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the earpink some more. This is really good!AshshadowI'm blue da ba dee da ba di 19:21, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.--Shaf Girl 04:11, February 8, 2010 (UTC)

The shading and ear pink still need blending. ✐SaNdY 21:18, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.--Shaf Girl 02:20, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

All I see is that the earpink is touching the lineart in places. ✐SaNdY 22:19, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

The back shading still needs to be blurred more.Darkhallows 17:41, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Fixed the earpink and blurred the back shading more.--Shaf Girl 00:44, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

The back still needs some more blurring--Nightshine 02:28, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

By blurring, do you mean on the outside edge (by the lineart), the inside edge, or all throughout the back shading?--Shaf Girl

03:06, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

The outside edge? I meant the part that is darker than the rest. Where there is a visible line--Nightshine 03:09, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is a tad too bright.--Darkhallows 15:41, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I did kind of see what you mean, Nightshine, though it just might have looked darker because it was around the highlights. Anyways, I blurred it more and toned down the earpink.--Shaf Girl 01:20, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? ✐SaNdY 15:34, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Approved ✐SaNdY 09:32, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Millie (KP)- Approved

File:Millie kp.pngI need to get this approved soon. This might be the only time I get on this week.So, here is Millie. Please don't push me to work to hard. I can only do so much.--Quail!People+Money+Time+Care=Haiti Rebuilt. 07:21, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

She's pretty! But I thought she was classic tabby? -checks- Oh, nevermind. The stripes look a little unevenly blurred, though.Darkhallows 09:02, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED. I tried to blur the stripes more evenly.--Quail!People+Money+Time+Care=Haiti Rebuilt. 10:25, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm... part of her back line is missing I think, and the stripes on her back (the three little spotish ones) look a little. I dunno. And can you make her stripes lighter? Other then that, its awesome! much better then her piccy in the manga! -Owlblaze Oakstar 10:29, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

I don't think the stripe lightening matters, Oakstar. Darkhallows is a senior warrior. He would have told me to make them lighter. Anything else, Project charart?Quail!People+Money+Time+Care=Haiti Rebuilt. 10:35, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

Now Blur the Shading. MaplefernMay StarClan light your pathHow's the Prey running? 12:06, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED Blurred shading. I'm happy now!--Quail!People+Money+Time+Care=Haiti Rebuilt. 17:31, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes on the body look to thick. Can you thinin it out? Ice There will only be five heros.... 21:39, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe add a few stripes on her soulder and haunch. It looks kinda empty.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 21:50, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED I added stripes on the shoulder and haunches, and thinned out the stripes.Does the tail look okay?--Quail!People+Money+Time+Care=Haiti Rebuilt. 06:50, February 4, 2010 (UTC)

The shading and highlights need blending - I can see the transition as a hard line. ✐+ᖱ = 16:01, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

It looks awesome! I love it! -Owlblaze Oakstar 06:06, February 8, 2010 (UTC)

There needs to be a little more stripes were her tail starts. It looks kinda like she might have lost them! XD Hope you see were I mean! Were the haunches and things are. See if you can dd a few more stripes in. Fawnstorm 16:42, February 9, 2010 (UTC)

This is Quail, i'm too lazy to sign in. I'm going to need a few more days. Please don't decline this unless i'm not on on valentine's day.76.196.235.53 16:58, February 9, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED Does it look better now? *prays to StarClan, begging to get this approved*--Quail!People+Money+Time+Care=Haiti Rebuilt. 06:12, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

I love this!!I'm sorry i can't approve..≈Ivy-sama≈ 10:47, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? ✐+ᖱ = 14:25, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Quail, I've just got two more things. Blur the stripes more, and blur the ear pink. Then this will be ready, I promise!--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 19:09, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

I was abaout to have to put the 24 notice on this to be declined, but I decided this is so close to approval that I'd just fix it. Hope you don't mind Quail, but I didn't want this to go to waste. The shading and stripes have been blurred. ✐SaNdY 22:34, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

Much better :) CBA? LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 22:50, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, sorry, I know I'm the one who put the CBA on this, but I just noticed one more thing. Brighten the highlights on the shoulder, and the haunch GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 20:09, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED sorry for the very long wait. Thank you Sandy! I thought this would be declined!--Quail!People+Money+Time+Care=Haiti Rebuilt. 04:54, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED I thought the highlights were too dark. Sandy, you may change it up if you wish. I have no problem with that.--Quail!People+Money+Time+Care=Haiti Rebuilt. 06:07, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED--Quail!People+Money+Time+Care=Haiti Rebuilt. 08:28, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

Add a stripe or two to the hind leg that's a bit hidden from us, (her left one) and blur the stripes on her ears. GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 16:48, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED Quail!People+Money+Time+Care=Haiti Rebuilt. 04:53, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

I really see no problems. CBA again? ✐SaNdY 18:53, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Approved ✐SaNdY 09:34, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Hawkfrost (Ki) - Approved

File:Hawkfrost kit.png

OMG he stinks...MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 19:09, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

Can you bring the white chest up some and maybe anke it a tiny bit thicker. AshshadowI'm blue da ba dee da ba di 19:11, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

The white chest should extend upwards more and make a kind of circularish patch. ✐SaNdY 20:05, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

And make his eyes more icy blue. They look a bit dark--LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 22:14, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Better? MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 04:49, February 16, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a bit smaller and make it more reddish (the ear pink). Rainwhisker 18:40, February 16, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good, Minnow, the only thing I see is that his white chest is a bit uneven. (Or did you mean to do it that way?) I'd say make it a little more symmetrical. ♫ insaneular ♫Down at Fraggle Rock! 04:36, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Better?MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 01:20, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

Bring the chest higher and keep it as even as possible.--Quail!People+Money+Time+Care=Haiti Rebuilt. 08:33, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I'm sorry guys that I haven't been getting these things up quickly cause this has been the worst month of my life (I'm not kidding). On the note of warriors, is this any better?MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT

Much better --Quail!People+Money+Time+Care=Haiti Rebuilt. 04:55, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --Icy-chanHappy St. Patrick's Day! 00:58, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Approved ✐SaNdY 09:50, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Brindleface (A) - Approved

File:Brindleface (A).pngI know this is over the limit but there are three discussions and this should be 35. I got GIMP! :D Comments on my fail on Brindlepaw? Icestorm 00:29, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

i am sorry but i dont know why it put 2 DarthGuy 00:29, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

and if u awnser my questions could u please do so on my userpage. thank u :) --DarthGuy 00:32, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Darthguy please don't post so many topics! For the image. Make the ear pink a little more pinkish and bigger. Darken the shading--Nightshine 00:35, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Fill in the two white pixels on the two back legs.--Snowflight1Happy V-Day!! 00:43, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Her stripes seem a tad thick. Thin them a bit.HaikageAsh's Talk 00:45, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Icestorm 00:49, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

You should check out Brindleface's other charart's and who made them and where they made them. Cause who's ever currently trying to make Brindleface's queen, had gone to several art sites! ♣Silverthistle 00:59, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

What do you mean Silverthistle? Icestorm 01:00, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe add some speckles to her, like on her warrior pic. ♫ insaneular ♫Down at Fraggle Rock! 01:05, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

What I meant was too go and ask Nightshine (who made her as queen!) and ask what sites she used to make the brindle (speckle's) on her charart. Dose that explain it? *smiles* ♣Silverthistle 01:11, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Yes and I know what sites she used. She used MS Paint and GIMP. Icestorm 01:18, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

The specks need to be all over the body.HaikageAsh's Talk 01:37, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

This really doesn't look much like her other images - you picked a challenge here Ice =) I think you need to open this image and the one your copying from side by side and get the exact colours, shapes of the stripes and positions of the speckles. It will take a while, but the results will be worth it. ✐SaNdY 11:49, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Right, which one do you like better? Icestorm 19:44, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Based on consistency, the one on the left with the darker stripes, although they need to be thinner and more frequent, and more speckles are needed. ✐SaNdY 19:48, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

I'm keeping the one with thinner stripes up, and I'll add them in a sec. Icestorm 19:55, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Icestorm 20:13, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the stripes on the top of her head some more--Nightshine 22:48, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Icestorm 00:32, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

It looks really pretty Ice! It seems a little bit light though. Maybe run the burn tool over it a few times? Just for consistency, since both of Brindleface's images are pretty dark--LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 01:04, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

What is light? Icestorm 01:09, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. If you mean the image then I fixed it. Icestorm 01:19, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, I just meant her pelt. It looks better now :) But blur the highlight on her face more --LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 01:42, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? :D Icestorm 02:16, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

If you can blur the specks some more.HaikageAsh's Talk 12:24, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

I can't. I tried to but it didn't work. I hate you Pixlr. *grabs a torch* Icestorm 23:44, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks Ash, I'm going to give Pixlr a lesson once and for all. *goes to war with Pixlr* Icestorm 01:06, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

The markings look a lot better to me, at least :) The ear pink looks kinda grayish purple though, can you make it lighter and/or brighter? ♫ insaneular ♫Down at Fraggle Rock! 04:33, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

I got the color from her warrior image. Should I lighten/brighten it? Icestorm 15:49, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

No, change it entirely and get the color from the queen image. (the ear pink) --Icy-chanHappy St. Patrick's Day! 23:55, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I don't feel good... Saint Ice 22:27, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

There is a stripe in her middle area that looks kind of thick. Can you thin it out a bit?-Nightshine 01:31, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

Wha stripe? If your talking about the one on the hauch, I made it because it was on her warrior image. SaintIce 01:33, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

Okay I guess you don't need to change it. It seems thick to me though--Nightshine 01:39, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

Her lower half is darker than the upper part of her body. Lighten the highlight or the shading.HaikageAsh's Talk 20:35, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

Ashshadow is right. Lighten the highlight, or darken the shading. Also, the stripe on her midriff is rather thick, compared to the rest of the stripes. MaplefernCarrying the torch... 22:52, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

Wait the one near the midriff, or the one on it that runs on the lower stomach? If it is the one that runs on the lower stomach, I got it from the warrior image. SaintIce !22:54, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

Ah, whatever. Reuploaded, hai =) lol SaintIce 23:05, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? ✐SaNdY 20:09, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Icestorm but the stripes don't look much like her warrior image. :) See here:

File:Brindleface.pngSorry again. Fawnstorm 11:21, February 16, 2010 (UTC) 12:02, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

I copied it from the warrior image as much as I could. SaintIce 17:41, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

It's not the same side of the body so I think it should be ok.HaikageAsh's Talk 18:31, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes are very similar, and Ice has done the best she can. Comments before approval (asides stripes)? --Bramble 18:32, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Approved ✐SaNdY 09:53, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Oatwhisker - Approved

File:Oatwhisker(WC)(E).png Oatwhisker of WindClan. Constructments? --Bramble 23:20, February 8, 2010 (UTC)

The highlight on his hind leg looks really light, it sticks out a lot. At least that's my opinion. Maybe blur it a bit more? Otherwise, great job!HeartpathLove, Jaggedclaw! 23:22, February 8, 2010 (UTC)

This is awesome, Bramble! Although, the dash in the lineart on his chest is blurred, and there's also minor blurring in many other places, but it is very hard to see so it might not be an issue. seriously, great image though! insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular 23:26, February 8, 2010 (UTC)

This is great! The ear pink looks a little big. Everything else is perfect--Nightshine 00:30, February 9, 2010 (UTC)

Enlarged and blurred the highlights, so it didn't stick out so much, fixed the blurring on the dash as best I could, and made the ear pink a touch smaller. What else? --Bramble 14:24, February

Again, awesome! I don't see anything wrong now. HeartpathLove, Jaggedclaw! 22:38, February 9, 2010 (UTC)

Amazing job! I tried to take a whack at him, it did'nt turn good. ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ 30px 22:45, February 9, 2010 (UTC)

CBA?Darkhallows 03:34, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

Should've been approved a long time ago, but I never archived it. :) My bad. Approving. --Bramble 01:24, March 1, 2010 (UTC)

Whitewing (Ki)--Approved

File:Whitewing (Ki).png This is my first kit! How is it?--Snowflight1Happy V-Day!! 00:41, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

Not bad, just darken the eye color and earpink a tad.HaikageAsh's Talk 00:56, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the back and legs. Good job! Bat 01:01, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Darkened earpink and eye color. Blurred shading on the back and legs. What else?--Snowflight1Happy V-Day!! 02:28, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the tail some more--Nightshine 02:18, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Darkened the shading on the tail (I actually forgot it all together XP)--Snowflight1Happy V-Day!! 21:49, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? ✐SaNdY 09:54, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. --Icy-chanHappy St. Patrick's Day! 22:15, March 1, 2010 (UTC)

Poppyfrost (ki)--Approved

Poppyfrost.kit Here is Poppyfrost! As a kit! My first kit, actually. Comments? MaplefernCarrying the torch... 13:39, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

I don't see much shading. ✐SaNdY 14:20, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Are the changes showing up? MaplefernCarrying the torch... 16:12, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Blur thr patches on her head/face some more.HaikageAsh's Talk 21:42, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Blurred patches on face. Comments? MaplefernCarrying the torch... 23:03, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a tad bigger and blur the ginger near the bottom on her left paw--Nightshine 23:13, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Made ear pink bigger and blurred ginger. Anything else? MaplefernCarrying the torch... 23:26, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm now the ear pink is too dark. Can you lighten it?--Nightshine 23:28, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - like that? MaplefernCarrying the torch... 23:49, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

Make the eyes more of a bright blue, they look a little too dark--LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 23:52, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - brightened eye colour. Anything else? MaplefernCarrying the torch... 23:59, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is still too dark--Nightshine 02:06, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe try to make the colours more... scattered? Crystalpaw *glimmer* 16:22, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I made it the same colour as Poppyfrost.queen Well, roughly. MaplefernCarrying the torch... 12:31, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

Well the ears on kits are so small that you have to change the color a bit. Thats what happened when I made goldenflower as a kit so I suggest that you made it a tad lighter.HaikageAsh's Talk 12:34, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - ta-da! Comments? MaplefernCarrying the torch... 15:18, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

Better, just make it a tad bigger.HaikageAsh's Talk 01:02, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - made earpink bigger. MaplefernCarrying the torch... 21:50, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

Anything else? MaplefernCarrying the torch... 22:48, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the white fur some more, or make the highlight on the white fur on the chest a bit brighter. --Icy-chanHappy St. Patrick's Day! 00:16, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Darkened white shading. MaplefernCarrying the torch... 01:17, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

I think this is fine :) ♫ Misty ♫ 60px 12:56, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry but I can't see the Ear Pink that well. Try lightening it! XD! Fawnstorm 11:21, February 16, 2010 (UTC) 18:11, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - better? MaplefernCarrying the torch... 16:00, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

I think it's perfect!--Nightshine 20:03, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --Icy-chanHappy St. Patrick's Day! 15:49, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. --Icy-chanHappy St. Patrick's Day! 22:15, March 1, 2010 (UTC)

Cloudpelt (D) Approved

File:Cloudpelt(D).png I tried a different eye style this time! But, I think I'll keep sticking to my original after this. Comments? GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 03:18, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading some more. HaikageAsh's Talk 03:19, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Is this any better? GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 03:35, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe darken the shading a little bit, or brighten the highlights. Vancouverpath 14:46, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Are the changes showing up? Man, I stink at white cats. GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 18:17, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Yes the changes are showing up, and this is good, you don't stink at white cats Night!!!! As for the image, it's great. I wish I could approve this... It's awesome... --NightyMeh kitteh is hoplessley confused... 15:20, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

This looks fine to me. CBA? ✐SaNdY 09:56, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. --Icy-chanHappy St. Patrick's Day! 22:15, March 1, 2010 (UTC)

Firestar (A) - Approved

File:Firestar(A).png I can't believe no one's done this! Comments?--Nightshine 03:28, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

There are some stripes that are so dark, they look almost red. Lighten those, and lighten the ear pink too. This is really good! GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 03:36, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded lightened ear pink and I tried to lighten some dark stripes--Nightshine 03:48, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, the tail stripes are extremes: the shaded parts are way too dark, and the highlight is too bright. MaplefernCarrying the torch... 01:34, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I adjusted the shading and highlights--Nightshine 01:47, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Anything else?--Nightshine 19:56, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

This looks good to me. CBA? ✐SaNdY 09:58, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. --Icy-chanHappy St. Patrick's Day! 22:15, March 1, 2010 (UTC)

Gorsetail (W) - Approved

File:Gorsetail.Warrior.png*sigh* Patched cats are so hard to shade T^T Constructments? --Ŧ∆ķმ♰§ƱოΣ 19:19, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

I like it a lot! But the patches look kind of too light, (maybe that's not the right word) and they look like part of the shading. Perhaps either lighten the shading, or darken the patches. GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 19:21, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Darkened the patches a bit. I don't want to make them too dark because her description said that her patches were a very pale gray. --Ŧ∆ķმ♰§ƱოΣ 19:28, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on her white parts a bit more, the shading there looks a little distinct. ♫ insaneular ♫Down at Fraggle Rock! 20:32, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Blurred shading. --Ŧ∆ķმ♰§ƱოΣ 21:27, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Anything else? --Ŧ∆ķმ♰§ƱოΣ 15:44, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? ✐SaNdY 15:55, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. --Icy-chanHappy St. Patrick's Day! 22:15, March 1, 2010 (UTC)

Sunstar (D) - Approved

Sunstar.deputy Oh gosh, this took a long time to shade. I tried to copy Goldencloud's gray shading style as best I could, and I had to use a black airbrush since if you burn yellow it turns orange... anyways. Constructments? ♫ insaneular ♫Down at Fraggle Rock! 15:44, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

It looks really good! XD But I think you should blur the shading a bit more. Echoheart 16:43, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

This is amazing! Lighten the tail shading a tiny bit--Nightshine 19:48, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Any better? insaneular Talk 20:05, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Wooowwwww! ☮Quail will rescue Haiti!☮We are the World... 20:07, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

I see nothing wrong! The stripes are perfect!--Nightshine 20:08, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

This is...perfect. I don't see ANYTHING wrong with it! Great job Insane!--Artimas HunterWelcome to Bramblepath's Den 21:21, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

The space between his legs is yellow. Besides that this is great!HaikageAsh's Talk 22:42, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Wow. That was really dumb of me. Thanks for pointing that out. Anything else? insaneular Talk 16:18, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Nope, this looks awesome. Comments before approval? --Icy-chanHappy St. Patrick's Day! 16:33, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

I just have a question ,this looks great but is the background supposed to be blakc or clear or what? Because people say to have a clear background but so many pictures have black, blue, or anothert color for their background. This is really confusing me,can someone explain?--Artimas HunterWelcome to Bramblepath's Den 16:36, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Transparency is the word we use; it's just so whatever color background the picture is on, it's background will be that color. It makes it look nicer. Does that help? --Bramble 00:13, March 1, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. --Icy-chanHappy St. Patrick's Day! 22:15, March 1, 2010 (UTC)

Icewing (Q) - Approved

File:Icewing 2.pngMy first white cat. I know she looks pale grey, but I copied the colour from Icewing's warrior image: File:Icewing.pngSo what do you think? :) ♫ Misty ♫ 60px 12:08, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

It's good!! Blur the shading some more and darken the ear pink. Can you center the pupil of her left eye?--Nightshine 19:54, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Other than what Nightshine said, I see nothing wrong with it. :) Good job. --LuckflightHappy St. Patty's Day! 20:54, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good Misty. I haven't done a white queen yet. I've done white warriors, just not white queens. All I can say is make thr Ear Pink a tad lighter and, like Nightshine said, blur all the shading. I can't see any shading on the front leg farthest from us. This is really good though! Fawnstorm 11:21, February 16, 2010 (UTC) 13:49, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Do I lighten or darken the earpink? :3 Nightshine said to darken it and Fawnstorm said to lighten it... ♫ Misty ♫ 60px 14:41, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Well, I think it's fine as it is... Just sort the eye out as Nightshine said, and blur the shading. ✐SaNdY 14:44, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I blurred the shading and I sorted out the eye. :) ♫ Misty ♫ 60px 17:47, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Misty, you haven't reserved her. Fawnstorm 19:29, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, she did. I just had to override her edit so I could fix something else. It also doesn't matter too much as long as no one else had her up on their list. Great job Misty. Comments before approval? --Bramble 00:15, March 1, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. --Icy-chanHappy St. Patrick's Day! 03:19, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

Tawnyfur (A)- Approved

Tawnyfur.apprentice Nothing special... she just needed to be done.Darkhallows 15:21, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

Lovely. (: Just blur the shading on the tail and the bit near her hindquarters. Bat 23:07, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

She looks a bit dark compared to her warrior image. Try lightening it witth the dodge tool GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 04:35, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

Yes Goldfall is right she looks more brown than her warrior image. Her warrior image is mor of a tan or a light sand color( something like that). Moonpelt1786 18:15, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Is this better?Darkhallows 18:13, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Yep. Comments before approval? --Icy-chanHappy St. Patrick's Day! 21:56, March 1, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. --Icy-chanHappy St. Patrick's Day! 01:35, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

Jake (KP) - For Approval

File:Jake Kittypet PCA.png

(M) - This should be under the limit seeing as two of the sections are disscussions. If it's over you can take it down.

Jake is both Scourge's (My favorite cat!) and our famous Firestar's father. What more could you ask for?

Gah this took forever to do! *dies*

Anyways, constructive critisism? Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 02:00, February 8, 2010 (UTC)

Strange, this isn't how I pictured him. I thought he'd look more like Firestar, since he's his father... But for this image, darken the ear pink. It's really good though! Batwing 02:17, February 8, 2010 (UTC)

He should be more gingery. The markings on his tail and forehead look strange.--Nightshine 02:19, February 8, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Nightshine, he looks to cream colored. NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 04:06, February 8, 2010 (UTC)

His pelt looks cream, make it a ginger color. Also, he markings do look odd/strange. ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ 30px 20:34, February 8, 2010 (UTC)

He looks peachy and cream, like said above, and I thought he was a solid ginger. The tabby stripes looks real cool but I didn't think he had stripes. HeartpathLove, Jaggedclaw! 13:59, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

(M) - Reuploaded. Yay for snow days! I changed the pelt color, eyes, ear pink, and the shading and highlihgts. Better? Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 22:32, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

It's great! Make the ear pink more reddish--Nightshine 22:44, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

(M) - Reuploaded. Fixed ear pink. Is it better? Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 23:05, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

Amazing, as always, Mosswhisker! The only thing is that the artist of the blanks said that the right ear (for us, left ear for the cat) is turned away so that ear doesn't need ear pink. Seriously though... it's awesome! insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular 23:31, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

He is Firestar;s father, maybe you could make him a bit firey color? Wetty What do you mean they only had 31 flavors?! 00:02, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

This is AMAZING! Get rid of the ear pink on his left ear and this will be perfect. XD Mistyheart 14:48, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

(M) - Reuploaded. Removed ear pink from our right ear. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 02:11, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

How do you do that kind of fur? It's amazing! Anyways, he seems a little . . . bright. Maybe dull the color a bit. ♥Mouse♥♥Heart♥[[File:Pinkheart.png|60px]] 21:10, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the fur a tad. Icestorm 17:14, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

(M) - Reuploaded. I desaturated the fur. Icestorm, I didn't blur the fur because I used the same texture as I did on Snowstar. Anything else that needs fixed? Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 20:56, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

Are his eyes that color? I may be wrong, but aren't they green? I'm probably wrong. I just pictured them green since he's Firestar's father. I'm usually wrong though. --LuckflightHappy St. Patty's Day! 22:16, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

I pictured them green too, but if there isn't a reference, then we can't really assume that LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 22:51, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

There is a dary grayish spot on his shoulder and the base of his tail.HaikageAsh's Talk 20:28, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

(M) - Reuploaded. Fixed discoloration. Better? Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 22:12, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

I just noticed that his shoulder's fur seems to stand out. Try to make it more like the rest of his body. --LuckflightHappy St. Patty's Day! 16:20, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more pink--MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 17:40, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

(M) - Reuploaded. Fixed shoulder fur and saturated ear pink. Better? Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 18:28, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

I don't see anything wrong with this! CBA? GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 19:49, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. Well done. Bramble 23:48, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

Stonefur (Ki) - Approved

Stonefur.kit Okay, so Molekit was an utter disaster but maybe Stonekit will fare slightly better. Note: I am aware that the warrior image has scars, not have had battle scars as a kit. Also, I am aware that the warrior image has highlights, but I never user highlights with the kit blanks. Constructments? ✐SaNdY 12:19, February 28, 2010 (UTC)


This is so cute! ^^ The colour is perfect. However, maybe make the ear pink visible, (a bit 'brighter' in the middle, so the pink is easier to see) like his warrior image? And also, aren't grey cats supposed to have darker grey noses on their chararts? That's what I did with Mistykit. The shading is lovely. :) Brightfrostof SunClan...60px 12:39, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

I agree Frosty. XD! Make his Ear Pink a but lighter as well. Even though he is a grey kit make a bit more visible. XD! Fawnstorm 11:21, February 16, 2010 (UTC) 13:43, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Is there something wrong with my pc? I cannot see the image at all... ♫ Misty ♫ 60px 19:13, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

He looks great, but there are 1 or 2 gray pixels in the top right corner of the image :P insaneular Talk 00:22, March 1, 2010

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the shading on his chest and right side (looking at him) is a bit dark. Fawny 11:21, February 16, 2010 (UTC) 12:08, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Sorry it took so long. ✐SaNdY 21:14, March 4, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --Icy-chanHappy St. Patrick's Day! 20:50, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved ✐SaNdY 20:33, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

Mudclaw (WC) (D) - Approved

File:Mudclaw(WC).deputy.png My first mottled cat, so I open for critique. Constructments? insaneular Talk 22:17, March 1, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the back shading, and darken ear pink. MaplefernCarrying the torch... 23:11, March 1, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded any better? insaneular Talk 21:07, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

This looks fine to me :) CBA? GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 06:32, March 4, 2010 (UTC)

Approved ✐SaNdY 20:36, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

Clawface (A) - Approved

File:Clawpaw(face).png Clawpaw, I like that name. The character himself is a different story. Comments?HaikageAsh's Talk 03:15, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

He looks great! Just blur the ear pink, and lighten the pelt a littleGoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 03:19, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Thank you night. I blurred the earpink more and lightened the pelt a bit. Anything else?HaikageAsh's Talk 03:25, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Er, his warrior image is still a good bit lighter: Clawface.warrior Other than lightening it I can't see anything wrong, though. ♫ insaneular ♫Down at Fraggle Rock! 20:31, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

I got the color from his warrior version, my highlights just arent as bright. I can still lighten it if you think it's too dark.HaikageAsh's Talk 20:35, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, you probably should. But I have a question, why doesn't he have any battle scarrs on his warrior image? His descriprion says he's a battle scarred tomGoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 21:48, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

I was wondering that too but figured it would wait until we had another tweak week. I'll get to lightening the image now.HaikageAsh's Talk 21:54, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.HaikageAsh's Talk 22:00, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

He was called Clawface because he had a lot of scars on his face. At least add a few. And somebody tell the creator of Clawface (W) to add scars as well. Crystalpaw *glimmer* 20:18, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

His warrior image will most likely wait as it isn't top priority and I doubt he had scars as an apprentice even if he did i'm going to leave them out for the sake of consistency. Anything else?HaikageAsh's Talk 21:56, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

Ash is right: the scars can wait until Tweak Week and they wouldn't ideally be on his apprentice image anyway. CBA? ✐SaNdY 18:42, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

None; Approved GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 09:47, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

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