Shadow (Lo) - Approved Edit

File:Shadow loner.png

I really need to lay off the loners. But, she was easy to do. One section is a discussion, so this should be #35. Comments? Bat 00:12, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

I don't see anything wrong with it...SaintIce 00:18, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a little smaller--Nightshine 00:21, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlight more if possible.HaikageAsh's Talk 15:48, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I made the ear pink smaller, and no, it's not possible to blur the highlight anymore. :P Bat 20:11, February 28, 2010 (UTC)!

Blur the shading on the front leg that is lifted. MaplefernCarrying the torch... 22:42, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Blurred shading on leg and a few other places I saw. =) Bat 20:37, March 4, 2010 (UTC)!

CBA? ✐SaNdY 18:43, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

None; Approved GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 09:52, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

Harespring (A) - Approved Edit

File:HarespringA.png Here's Harespring as an apprentice. Comments/Criticism? --Rainwhisker 17:31, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

I can't see any shading. Go and put some on. Or maybe it's just my computer... ☮Quail will rescue Haiti!☮We are the World... 18:51, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

I think it's just your computer or a style your not used too because I can see shading. Darken the earpink a little.HaikageAsh's Talk 18:56, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

The shading makes his fur grayish. Ease up on the shading. Crystalpaw *glimmer* 20:11, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

I lightened the shading and darkened the ear pink. And Quail (mind if I call you that?) I can see the shading fine on my computer. Rainwhisker 22:16, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

Looks fine to me. CBA? ✐SaNdY 20:32, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

None; Approved GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 09:56, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

Dapplenose (E) - Approved Edit

File:Dapplenose.Elder.pngNothing much to say about this one. Constructments? --Ŧ∆ķმ♰§ƱოΣ 20:21, March 4, 2010 (UTC)

Maybedarken the ear-pink? I think it's great otherwise, though. Crystalpaw *glimmer* 22:17, March 4, 2010 (UTC)

Add a couple of flecks to the face, it looks kind of empty compared to the rest of the image, and it's not that way on the warrior image, so I think there should be at least one fleck near the eye or something like that. Otherwise, this looks great as usual Hawktalon. :) --Icy-chanHappy St. Patrick's Day! 02:18, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good Hawky. Darken the ear pink. Fawnstorm 17:07, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading a little.HaikageAsh's Talk 02:45, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I saw the Alice in Wonderland movie last night (in 2D, though, since the 3D version was sold out). It was an epic win on so many levels. --Ŧ∆ķმ♰§ƱოΣ 16:42, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

Yes yes yes yes yes yes!!!! I'm going to see Alice today!!!!! GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 19:39, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? ✐SaNdY 20:40, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

None; Approved GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 09:59, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reedwhisker (A) - Approved Edit

File:Reedwhisker (A).png Decided to do an easy one this time. Comments? —Preceding unsigned comment added by Goldenpaw (talkcontribs)

This is great, Goldenpaw, but, however, you forgot to use your signature on your comment. I would add more shading. ☮Quail will rescue Haiti!☮We are the World... 19:46, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

It's great! Darken the tail shading some more--Nightshine 19:47, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

And also make the whole thing darker. Right now he looks dark gray but he is supposed to be black. His warrior image is a lot darker--Nightshine 19:52, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

I'm really sorry, but he was never seen as an apprentice; it was mistakenly put in his name list but his first appearance was as a warrior :( Maybe this can be someone else though. If you darken it, maybe Reedwhisker? insaneular Talk 19:56, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

I'm assuming Smokefoot was introduced to make up for still having Smokepaw in the allegiances in Starlight-Sunset, so the Smokepaw must of been Smokefoot. Gοlδεn pαω 20:04, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Wasn't Smokepaw the cat that fell to his death, or is he from a different clan?HaikageAsh's Talk 20:11, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

That's the common confusion, but Smokepaw and Smokefoot are two different cats... insaneular Talk 20:13, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Two different cats with two different fur colors. If Smokefoot was apprenticed after Sunset, he would have less than 8 moons of apprenticeship, which is way too short compared to other apprentices we've seen. Gοlδεn pαω 20:16, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

So will this be changed to Reedwhisker?--Nightshine 20:20, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

To stop some debate from starting, I don't see why not. I just need to change the eye color. Gοlδεn pαω 20:22, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Um..his eye is kind of weird. I see a lot of white but no black.--Artimas HunterWelcome to Bramblepath's Den 16:37, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

There's only one pixel of white. I switched around the shades of his eye, so the black will hopefully show up better. --Gοlδεnpαω Appare! 17:01, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe add another black pixel in the eye, i can see it but the white is still more visible.HaikageAsh's Talk 23:49, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

Better? --Gοlδεnpαω Appare! 22:49, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

Yep. Comments before approval? --Icy-chan says hello! 19:28, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. --Icy-chan says hello! 22:07, March 8, 2010 (UTC)

Icicle (Ki) - Approved Edit

Icicle.kit Since one topic is discussion, this shouldn't be over the page limit. Although I lightened the gray from what it was originally, I think that it's still too dark...comments and suggestions? --Icy-chanHappy St. Patrick's Day! 23:00, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with you about the gray. maybe dodge it a bit.HaikageAsh's Talk 23:02, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit more--Nightshine 23:06, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

I'd say, define the stripe and white chest a bit more so they look like markings... now they kinda look like highlights that are not blurred enough. I think the gray looks fine, but that's my opinion. ♫ insaneular ♫Down at Fraggle Rock! 23:27, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

(M) - Perhaps lighten the gray a smidge. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 01:19, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I lightened the gray and blurred the shading some more, but I'm not sure how to define the markings. How should I do that? --Icy-chanHappy St. Patrick's Day! 15:46, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Ok, well when I did her this is what i did. I made the markings a very pale gray. That made them easier to blur and it was still very distinct.--Artimas HunterWelcome to Bramblepath's Den 16:33, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

The fur color is pale do I define the markings that I already have? --Icy-chanHappy St. Patrick's Day! 16:37, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

What I mean is a grey that is almost white but I think for what you have now, it is very defined. Maybe you should blur some more?--Artimas HunterWelcome to Bramblepath's Den 16:45, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Blur...the markings or the shading? --Icy-chanHappy St. Patrick's Day! 18:36, February 28, 2010 (UTC) to be more descriptive. The markings. Sorry about that.  :) --Artimas HunterWelcome to Bramblepath's Den 01:01, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. --Icy-chanHappy St. Patrick's Day! 22:56, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

This looks awsome! The only thing I see, is that there seems to be a ring of darker fur just around the white patch on her forehead. I love the new siggie btw!! GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 19:41, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks, Nightfall. :) That was actually shading, but I've lightened it. Better? (Also, let me know if the changes don't show up.) --Icy-chan says hello! 21:48, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

the only thing i see is that the earpink on our right is a bit rectangular. Fix that and she should be ready.HaikageAsh's Talk 00:00, March 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Let me know if the changes don't show up, they've been a bit slow on my computer lately... --Icy-chan says hello! 01:44, March 8, 2010 (UTC)

I think she looks good. CBA?HaikageAsh's Talk 20:30, March 8, 2010 (UTC)

None; Approved GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 06:33, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

Crookedstar (A) - Approved Edit

File:Crookedstar(A).png I like how this turned out--Nightshine 00:29, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

I like him too. Just make the ear pink a little bigger cuz I can't see it much. --LuckflightHappy St. Patty's Day! 22:59, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

Blur where his cream chest connects with his brown fur more. Very nice image :) insaneular Talk 01:36, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred chest and fixed ear pink. Is the twisted jaw okay?--Nightshine 01:49, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

I think it gives him a cute kissy look.HaikageAsh's Talk 01:54, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

Add a stripe to the haunch. MaplefernCarrying the torch... 12:44, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded added two stripes to haunch--Nightshine 00:18, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

Anything else?--Nightshine 01:02, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

The stripe on the tip of his tail is a little big. Make it a little smaller. --LuckflightHappy St. Patty's Day! 02:57, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded shortened tail tip stripe--Nightshine 01:05, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

Anything else?--Nightshine 22:47, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

People will comment when they can, please try to wait at least four or five days before asking for comments. I actually think this is ready. Comments before approval? --Icy-chan says hello! 23:46, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the transition from the paws to the leg. MaplefernCarrying the torch... 01:24, March 8, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred paws--NightshineÜ 00:28, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

Looks good to me :) CBA? GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 07:54, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

Approved GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 23:47, March 10, 2010 (UTC)

Socks (KP) - Approved Edit

File:Socks.kittypet.png.png Here's Ruby's littermate, Socks! He needs some work...comments? HeartpathLove, Jaggedclaw! 13:56, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

Wait, do we even need him as a kittypet? We have him as a kit with a collar, but we never saw him as a kittypet older than six moons. Just asking so if I'm wrong please don't get mad.MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 14:06, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

When I had my Ruby (KP) up for approval, this was brought up, and other people said that yes, we would need kittypet images for them.HeartpathLove, Jaggedclaw! 14:08, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, thanks for not getting made at me :) On the image, I can't see anything wrong. P.S who here loves the snow day?MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 14:19, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

(For the record, I'm loving this snow day! We get off tomorrow and Friday too! And Monday! A six-day weekend!)HeartpathLove, Jaggedclaw! 23:29, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading, and the tag is the same color as his collar. Make it yellow, like on his kit image--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 19:21, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkened shading, yellowified tag (if that's a word...)HeartpathLove, Jaggedclaw! 15:34, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

It's great, Moss. :) Now, darken the shading more then blur it. Ice Happy Valentines! 01:08, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I might have made it worse on the leg...whenever I blur it, it gets bigger and darker...suggestions? P.S. I won't be here during this weekend, maybe on Sunday night, when I'm getting back from my reterat :) So I'm pretty much signing off here on this image.Vancouverpath §USA!§ 23:21, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Are there any further comments?Vancouverpath 17:38, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

Should the hind leg that's half hidden from us be white? I thought that was the leg, not the paw GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 00:28, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure that was the paw, that's what it looks like to me at least. What does everyone else think? I think I'm going to try and redo the shading.Vancouverpath 13:38, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-sorta I made another versoin. Original is on the left. Which one does everone like better? Vancouverpath 14:41, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

I like the one on the right. I'm not sure but I agree with Night based on the side we can see. I think that that would be the back part of his leg and not the paw.HaikageAsh's Talk 18:07, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, that's what I meant. Sorry, I'm not too good at phrasing things like that :) And yes, I like the one on the right. GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 18:22, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Mental note: it's the leg not the paw. I think this is the right version...and that's okay, Nightfall :) --Vancouverpath 01:15, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

I can't tell the difference between the tag and the collar. MaplefernCarrying the torch... 22:26, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

Just lighten the gold for the tag and it should be perfect.--Nightshine 23:20, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded How's that? Sorry, I haven't been on as much as I'd like to be. Vancouverpath 23:23, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a bit more triangular--Nightshine 23:26, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better?Vancouverpath 23:53, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

Yep. Comments before approval? --Icy-chan says hello! 01:20, March 10, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. --Icy-chan says hello! 00:47, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

Cloudtail (Ki) - Approved Edit

File:Cloudtail (Ki).pngHere's Cloudtail as a kit. (: Comments? SaintIce 15:37, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

This is very good, Icestorm:) But there is blurred lineart on his forelegs and his left eye (our left), and he looks crosseyed. Move one of the eye highlights to the other side of the pupil. --Ŧ∆ķმ♰§ƱოΣ 15:49, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks, Hawk. (: These changes better show up, or -grabs a torch- SaintIce 16:11, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Darken and blur the movie.Darkhallows 00:17, March 1, 2010 (UTC)

Wait what O.o. Shading, darken and blur the shading.Darkhallows 00:18, March 1, 2010 (UTC)

Lol, Shady. (: Reuploaded. Yay, better? SaintIce 21:48, March 1, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading. MaplefernCarrying the torch... 22:44, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Troutleap 01:01, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --Icy-chanHappy St. Patrick's Day! 20:53, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

There are some gaps between the shading and the edge of the lineart... also it needs a little more blending. ✐SaNdY 20:35, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. This is as much as I can blur. Troutleap 21:30, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

Than smudge it a little, and then blur.Darkhallows 15:39, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Troutleap 17:17, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

He looks like a pale gray cat now. Lighten him some.HaikageAsh's Talk 18:44, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Pale gray kitteh! Palekit, or Graykit. X3 IcyInvading the fire 01:39, March 8, 2010 (UTC)

Looks good to me! Good job Iceh! CBA? GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 07:53, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Ice, but I just thought I'd say that it looks really grey compared to his warrior image! :3 Maybe if you thin and lighten the shading a tad, and make him altogether quite a bit lighter? Sorry! -Brightfrost

Brightfrost, um, I don't think he does not look gray, and I think the shading looks fine... IcyInvading the fire 22:19, March 10, 2010 (UTC)

Withdrawing. IcyInvading the fire 22:34, March 10, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. (Icestorm gave me permission) GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 01:27, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

Longtail (W) - Approved Edit

Longtail.warrior This should be under the limit because there are a few discussions. Anyways, how does he look? insaneular Talk 21:26, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

Looks great! I attempted to do his warrior image before and failed :(. Darken the ear pink a tiny bit--Nightshine 21:28, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? insaneular Talk 21:35, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

Totally! Maybe add one or two more small stripes on his haunch--Nightshine 21:37, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded added a couple more stripes. insaneular Talk 03:11, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

I dont know if it's a stripe or not but there's a black line that goes into the ear. It looks connected to the line art.HaikageAsh's Talk 01:40, March 8, 2010 (UTC)

It is a stripe. His elder image had a stripe there, so I just copied it. insaneular Talk 01:41, March 8, 2010 (UTC)

He has a ripped ear. I know his elder versoin doesnt have one but it's part of his description.HaikageAsh's Talk 20:41, March 8, 2010 (UTC)

D'oh, can't believe I forgot that. Added it now. How's it look? insaneular Talk 21:55, March 8, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the stripes on his left arm a teensy bit more. This looks amazing!--NightshineÜ 06:43, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

Gorgeous!!I don't see anything wrong..≈៛₪¥ -§₰₪₥≈

Reuploaded did what NightShine said. Any better? insaneular Talk 20:27, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

This is amazing, Insane! CBA?GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 03:14, March 10, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. --Icy-chan says hello! 03:07, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

Stonepelt (W) - Approved Edit

File:Stonepelt.Warrior.pngHe was Bluestar's original mentor, so he must be awesome. Constructments? --Ŧ∆ķმ♰§ƱოΣ 19:57, March 8, 2010 (UTC)

Amazing, Hawk! The only thing I can find is you need to darken the shading a tad. Other than that this is amazing! -huggles- IcyInvading the fire 20:16, March 8, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good but his elder image is short haired.HaikageAsh's Talk 20:23, March 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - *facepalm* My brain must have been dead. Anyway, I darkened the shading a tad and changed the blank. --Ŧ∆ķმ♰§ƱოΣ 20:53, March 8, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink is a tad long. Shorten it a little.HaikageAsh's Talk 21:45, March 8, 2010 (UTC)

Wonderful! However, he needs a few more stripes on his legs and haunch. Crystals and Pearls *glimmer* 01:53, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Shortened ear pink and added stripes. --Ŧ∆ķმ♰§ƱოΣ 20:17, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good! Just define the stripes on his tail a lot more GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 03:13, March 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Darkened tail stripes. --Ŧ∆ķმ♰§ƱოΣ 20:10, March 10, 2010 (UTC)

I can't see anything else that's wrong. Comments before approval? --Icy-chan says hello! 00:58, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. --Icy-chan says hello! 02:52, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

Swallowtail (RC)(w) - Approved Edit

File:Swallowtail.warrior2.1.pngehhhh. I hate it.Darkhallows 15:35, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

You might, but I sure don't! Just make the ear pink more triangular. ✐SaNdY 15:45, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

This is simply amazing, Shady! A true work of art! But there are some spots of shading that might need to be blurred a little more, just a smidgen, like on the neck, hind leg, and bottom of tail.Vancouverpath 23:57, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

I like it. (: their are some spots of shading that need a tad more blending, -adding to Sandy's comment- IcyInvading the fire 20:20, March 8, 2010 (UTC)

I don't see any stripes on the leg farthest from us, but this is (as Vancouverpath says) a WORK OF ART! Don't criticise yourself, Shady. It'll only make your artwork worse! Compliment yourself, it helps! Crystals and Pearls *glimmer* 01:49, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

I redid it, and am much happier with V2, what do you think?Darkhallows 16:41, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

Oh yeah, definately go with version 2 :) Just make the ear pink more reddish GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 17:50, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

Yep, go with V2, but use the ear pink color from V1. --Icy-chan says hello! 21:18, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

Done.--Darkhallows 16:50, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --Icy-chan says hello! 22:13, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. --Icy-chan says hello! 01:56, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Dawnflower (A) - Approved Edit

Dawnflower.apprentice Well, here's the third image I've made for Dawnflower. (I know, I should find another cat, but I seem to have gotten pretty good at her images so here's another...) I used Mousetalon's apprentice shading style on this, or tried to anyway, so how did it turn out? --Icy-chan says hello! 21:10, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

Beautiful, Icy! I don't see anythign at the moment.Vancouverpath 01:28, March 10, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the neck shading, IcyInvading the fire 01:37, March 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? --Icy-chan says hello! 21:45, March 10, 2010 (UTC)

I think so. Comments before approval.HaikageAsh's Talk 23:08, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. --Icy-chan says hello! 01:56, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Clovertail (R) - Approved Edit


Wow, its been 2 months I think since I've done an image, so the image is probably not that good. ChelseaFC 20:03, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

This isnt bad. I would make the white on her front legs go up higher and darken the earpink.AshshadowI'm blue da ba dee da ba di 21:17, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

Is it just me or is the background pink?--MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 19:12, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

Pink? I don't know, its white on my computer/gimp. ChelseaFC 21:14, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

It's a very light pink. I can make it transparent if you want.Darkhallows 23:23, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: And yes, could you do that for me Shady? ChelseaFC 20:49, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

The white on the front legs still needs to be a little higher and the white underbelly should go up a little faurther.AshshadowI'm blue da ba dee da ba di 20:30, February 16, 2010 (UTC)

Since Shady's not on I could make the background transparent if you want. Icestorm 16:41, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded- I made the white go higher on her front legs, but I didn't on her belly because if Idid, wouldn't it go on her side? ChelseaFC 23:03, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

It should go higher on her chest, like her queen image - Clovertail.queen--LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 00:19, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Hows this? ♣Gaelic Irish♣

I like it. just blur the shading on her back some more.HaikageAsh's Talk 21:51, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

And she looks a tad gingerish compared to her queen image. Maybe desaturate her a bit? GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 01:40, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

How would I do that? ♣Gaelic Irish♣ 05:06, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

If you use pixlr, use the sponge tool set to desaturate.HaikageAsh's Talk 05:09, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

She looks a bit chestnut in this image but in her queen image, she looks browner (^ see above) ^^ Fawny 60px 16:59, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded- How's this? ♣Gaelic Irish♣ 22:58, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink is a bit bright and it looks like the shading comes off her chest a tiny bit. other than that I really like it.HaikageAsh's Talk 23:00, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

Uggh, I've been grounded again!. Now I can't go on here for like 2 weeks. If I manage to get time to do this, it won't be until later this week. Maybe, just maybe, someone would like to finish this for me, if I don't post it by this Friday? ♣Gaelic Irish♣ 00:32, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

I think Clovertail was a loner, not a rogue. I may be wrong, though.Crystalpaw *glimmer* 20:27, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

No, on her article, it says she was previously a rogue. Rainwhisker 22:26, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ♣Gaelic Irish♣ 22:51, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --Icy-chan says hello! 21:14, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

None; Approved GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 22:24, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Violet (R) -Approved Edit

File:Violet(Ro).png I tried to match the style used on her kittypet image, but I dont think I did such a good job. Comments?HaikageAsh's Talk 15:53, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

This is really beautiful Ash!! But maybe lighten it up a bit.


16:02, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks Sunny. Also thanks to everyone. You all helped me become a senior warriow.HaikageAsh's Talk 16:42, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

This is great! (Ignore me if this is supposed to be there) But the earpink is a bit 'blown' off to the left. x3 Shistar Mai Talk Page 18:48, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

Thats a stripe. I can define the earpink more if need be though.HaikageAsh's Talk 18:51, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, I would define it more. This is a beautiful image! Congratulations, Ash!Vancouverpath 23:55, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. The earpink doesnt like me. Thanks Moss.HaikageAsh's Talk 01:36, March 8, 2010 (UTC)

This is BEAUTIFUL! But lighten the earpink and blur the feet with the legs some more. Crystals and Pearls *glimmer* 01:51, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

I got the earpink color from her kittypet image. Should I still change it? What do you mean by the feet with the legs?HaikageAsh's Talk 20:31, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

I think what Crystal means is that you should blur the white paws. As for the earpink, I think it's fine but if other people think you should lighten it, you probably should. And congrats on becoming a senior warrior :) --LuckflightHappy St. Patty's Day! 20:40, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. For future reference Crystal thats the transition. I blurred it some more although I dont think it made much of a difference. Thanks Moonflight.HaikageAsh's Talk 20:54, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, Ash! And, yes, that is better. Crystals and Pearls *glimmer* 20:14, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

This is great! Darken the nose-pink so it's not as close to the pelt color as it is now. Other than that, AWESOME!--Snowflight1Thank StarClan Newleaf is here! 16:25, March 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. HaikageAsh's Talk 20:14, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --Icy-chan says hello! 20:53, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

None; Approved GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 22:27, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Stonefur (A) - Approved Edit


Here he is. I'm afraid he doesn't look much like his deputy image, you can thank my shading style for that. I didn't add "battle-scarred ears", but tell me if you think I should. Comments? Bat 12:02, March 9, 2010 (UTC)!

Why did you delete mine? *growl* 12:11, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

-sighs- Echostar, I've listed the reasons why on the declined image. One, you're not a member of this project. Two, you need to reserve something before putting it up for approval, in this case Nightshine had Sharpclaw blanks reserved first. And three, you have to draw them yourself. You can't merge two together and take credit for it. Blue, this is fantastic! The only thing I see is to lighten the eye. It looks a bit brown now, make it more yellow-amber like his deputy image GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 17:54, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Lightened eye color. Echostar, no need to growl at me. Bat 01:37, March 11, 2010 (UTC)!

I don't think she was growling at you, she probably just hit edit page and posted on the last post on the page which must have been this at the time. Image wise, this look much better, and really awesome, and I can't find anything else wrong with it. Comments before approval? --Icy-chan says hello! 20:51, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

None; Approved GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 22:31, March 13, 2010 (UTC)