Birchfall(K) - Approved

File:BirchfallKit.png First kit and first tabby! Woohoo! Comments and/or critique?--Shaf Girl 16:28, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on his paws. Troutleap 17:41, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

Great job but I can't see any black in/on his eyes.--Artimas HunterWelcome to Bramblepath's Den 18:19, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred the shading, and the eye has a pupil, Artimas.--Shaf Girl 03:05, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the stripes like on his warrior image--NightshineÜ 06:45, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.--Shaf Girl 03:33, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

Try to darken his fur a little. Crystals and Pearls *glimmer* 20:12, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

I think the fur color is ok, but make the earpink a bit bigger.HaikageAsh's Talk 20:20, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.--Shaf Girl 02:43, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? ✐SaNdY 18:32, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. --Icy-chan says hello! 21:35, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Onestar (D) - Approved

File:Onewhisker.deputy.png Okay... the most failish image ever... It doesn't look like either the leader or warrior image... but I tried to incorportate the two. I'd say constructments, but I think critisism? is more appropriate, so fire away! ✐SaNdY 21:39, March 6, 2010 (UTC) He looks awesome, Sandy :D It might just be my eyes, but on his leader image his muzzle looks slightly cream colored rather than white... maybe change it on this image? Seriously though, if I had attempted this it would have been way worse. insaneular Talk 21:42, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

I'm boring and sad so I fixed it right away. Don't know if the changes are showing properly though. ✐SaNdY 21:52, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

It looks good Sandy! But maybe add more earpink. --Artimas HunterWelcome to Bramblepath's Den 21:53, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

More as in... lighter? darker? brighter? bigger? sorry Sandy is dumb... ✐SaNdY 11:22, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

I think they mean bigger, but I'd disagree. Maybe lighten it, as I can't really see it right not. MaplefernCarrying the torch... 15:43, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

'Reuploaded ✐SaNdY 15:49, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

I just love this image, good job! It might be just me, but the stripes on the leader image are more dark and dusky looking than on this image, but other than that, it's great! Vancouverpath 00:01, March 8, 2010 (UTC)

This is quite good, Sandy! BUT, the white muzzle and the rest of his pelt need to blend together a little more. Crystals and Pearls *glimmer* 01:46, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I did my best. Duskier isn't really possible unless you want me to redo the whole image as I used the burn tool so it darkened the pelt colour to make the stripes (if that makes sense). The muzzle won't blend any more. ✐SaNdY 21:44, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

i think he looks good. I cant really tell on his other images but should there be a stripe at the base of his tail?HaikageAsh's Talk 01:11, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded ✐SaNdY 18:38, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

I think he's ready. CBA?HaikageAsh's Talk 19:05, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Was Onestar even a formal deputy because Tallstar's deputy was Mudclaw when he died so was Onestar a deputy? --LuckflightHappy St. Patty's Day! 19:07, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Yes. Before tallstar died he named Onewhisker deputy.HaikageAsh's Talk 19:10, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. --Icy-chan says hello! 21:35, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Featherwhisker (MCA) - Approved

File:Featherwhisker.MCA.png Not much to say on this, I used the same style as I used on Dawnflower's apprentice image. Comments and suggestions? --Icy-chan says hello! 02:04, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

He's longhaired but besides that this is amazing.HaikageAsh's Talk 02:06, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

*face-palm* Oh wow, I really should have noticed that, especially since I had his image beside the image I was shading the entire time...I'm not sure if I can fix it or if I'll have to get someone else to fix it for me, but let me see what I can do. --Icy-chan says hello! 02:14, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

If you cant I can replace the blank for you.HaikageAsh's Talk 02:19, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I got it okay. I had to erase the tail and then recolor and shade in the longhair tail, and color in the extra fur on the belly, but aside from that it was really easy to fix. Did I miss anything? --Icy-chan says hello! 02:35, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Not that I can see. Good job.HaikageAsh's Talk 02:39, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Amazing Icy! Just blur the haunch shading a tad. It looks a little dark. IcyInvading the fire 02:40, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks for the nice comments Ash and Ice. :) Does this look better? --Icy-chan says hello! 02:49, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Yep, Icy. (: Amazing image! I don't think i could do better, or anyone else. IcyInvading the fire 02:51, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Icy's right, this looks perfect! CBA? GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 06:06, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. --Icy-chan says hello! 21:35, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Mousewhisker (Ki) - Approved

File:Mousewhisker (kit).png 11:17, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

This is nice! But the shading isn't very noticeable, can you make it darker or add highlights? Also, add neck shading, and maybe make the white less bright, more pale gray. Vancouverpath 14:45, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Evanphoto 16:16, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

make the earpink a little bigger and darken the shading on his white parts a bit more.HaikageAsh's Talk 16:18, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, make the earpink larger and darken his shading on the white parts more. Fire-★ 30px 22:42, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Evanphoto 13:23, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

His chest looks cream coloured. Go to a greyish white instead of a creamy white. MaplefernCarrying the torch... 16:48, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded His warrior version looks creamish too, but maybe lighten the cream if you can.HaikageAsh's Talk 18:34, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Evanphoto 22:36, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

The grey should extend onto the legs a little, cover the eyes:Mousewhisker.warrior Darkhallows 00:12, March 1, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Evanphoto 21:46, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

It still isn't covering the eyes. MaplefernCarrying the torch... 22:40, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Evanphoto 22:38, March 4, 2010 (UTC)

Brighten the ear pink a touch. This is good. :) Bat 01:45, March 5, 2010 (UTC)!

Should the white maybe go between the eyes, and then above them a bit, like on the picture? :3 This is very cute! ^^ Brightfrostof SunClan...60px 07:37, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Dang! its so hard to re upload correctly. Evanphoto 21:22, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

Did your changes show?HaikageAsh's Talk 02:54, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, the earpink is brighter Evanphoto 13:16, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

The gray still needs to cover the eyes.HaikageAsh's Talk 14:52, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Evanphoto 10:34, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the transition a tiny bit.HaikageAsh's Talk 22:58, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Evanphoto 01:36, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading on his back, and this will be ready :) GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 06:10, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

ReuploadedEvanphoto 20:24, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Looks great! CBA? GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 23:41, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. --Icy-chan says hello! 21:35, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Cedarheart (A)- Approved

File:CedarA.png So here's the apprentice version of Cedarheart. Don't go saying there's not enough room...there is one discussion.--☮Quail will rescue Haiti!☮We are the World... 07:38, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED for some reason where the eyes weren't done and the ears. I'll need to work on the ears....--☮Quail will rescue Haiti!☮We are the World... 07:53, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED to fix the ugly ears.--☮Quail will rescue Haiti!☮We are the World... 08:25, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

The shading needs to be blurred alot and the earpink is too light for a gray cat.HaikageAsh's Talk 11:30, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED--☮Quail will rescue Haiti!☮We are the World... 22:55, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the haunch and tail more.HaikageAsh's Talk 02:49, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED. Is this good?--☮Quail will rescue Haiti!☮We are the World... 18:32, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED. Forgot to shade haunch.--☮Quail will rescue Haiti!☮We are the World... 18:36, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

Blur a little more?Darkhallows 15:50, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

Can someone work on this for me? I'm going to be busy starting tommorrow. ☮Quail will rescue Haiti!☮We are the World... 20:21, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

It depends: how long do you think it'll be before you can work on this again? If it's less than seven days it can stay (I think), but if it's longer than seven days then this should be withdrawn, or someone can agree to finish this for you, like was done with Blackclaw's elder image or Sorreltail's queen image. How long do you think it'll be before you can work on this again, Quail? --Icy-chan says hello! 23:43, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

Never mind. I found some freetime, so, REUPLOADED. I blurred as much as I could! Please don't push me so hard now. I'm probably not going to be on that much this week. I need to get this approved by St. Patrick's Day. ☮Quail will rescue Haiti!☮We are the World... 00:07, March 8, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED FORGOT TO BLUR BACK.--☮Quail will rescue Haiti!☮We are the World... 00:11, March 8, 2010 (UTC)

The shading on the haunch and tail still needs more blurring. I can help you with that if you'd like.HaikageAsh's Talk 23:03, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, I'm probably not going to be on for at least a week, so Ash, you may help me with the haunch and tail. ☮Quail will rescue Haiti!☮We are the World... 16:10, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I hope you dont mind but while I was blurring the shading I fixed some of the blurred line art for you.HaikageAsh's Talk 18:38, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

It looks a good. CBA?Darkhallows 18:21, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

None; Approved NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 19:49, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

One-eye (A) - Approved

File:One-eye (A).png Yeah, don't take this down because Cloudkit is withdrawn. But any other reasons, yes you can. I'm really proud of her. Comments? All hail the blurry GIMP! :) IcyInvading the fire 21:49, March 10, 2010 (UTC)

I love the shading, Icy! I only have a few things: blur the shading on the tail-tip where it goes from highlight to shading a bit, make the ear pink bigger, and blur the highlight on the muzzle (I think it's a highlight) more or darken it because it looks a bit like a while muzzle. And her eye needs a pupil, since it's not the white one. insaneular Talk 21:51, March 10, 2010 (UTC)

KK. Yes it is a highlight. And, she has a pupil, I blurred it to make her look blind. Should I un-blur it? IcyInvading the fire 21:54, March 10, 2010 (UTC)

I would say so personally, because on her elder image it is normal, and only one of her eyes (the white one) was blind. insaneular Talk 22:01, March 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. IcyInvading the fire 22:04, March 10, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading/highlight on her tail some more. Good job on this one!Vancouverpath 23:28, March 10, 2010 (UTC)

Can you make the whole thing a bit lighter?--NightshineÜ 23:33, March 10, 2010 (UTC)

Wait, Icy, I was literally just about to approve Cloudkit... can I go ahead? Or was there a reason you wanted to withdraw him?GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 23:45, March 10, 2010 (UTC)

Okay Night. You can approve Cloudkit. And yeah Nightshine I will, and thanks Moss. (: IcyInvading the fire 01:02, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. IcyInvading the fire 01:39, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

I would darken her muzzle, it looks too white now. But this is fantastic! GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 04:18, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

Correct. It looks like a white muzzle right now. MaplefernCarrying the torch... 11:51, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Darken muzzle, IcyInvading the fire 22:58, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

The highlight on the tail could be darkened, too. MaplefernCarrying the torch... 20:22, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

The shading on the front legs is a bit dark compared to the rest of the shading.HaikageAsh's Talk 20:30, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Lighten paw shading, darken highlight. IcyInvading the fire 23:17, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on her haunch GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 23:58, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

It looks fine to me, plus, it won't blur anymore. IcyInvading the fire 00:05, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the earpink and make it a bit longer.HaikageAsh's Talk 01:02, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. IcyInvading the fire 01:16, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the muzzle a bit more. And then there's this place right where the leg connects with the haunch that needs blurring GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 23:50, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. IcyInvading the fire 00:04, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the muzzle GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 00:16, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

The shading needs blurring.Darkhallows 05:37, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Updated. IcyInvading the fire 15:04, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the highlights on the body. MaplefernCarrying the torch... 18:29, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

I tried it, but once I did, there were no highlights. --IcyInvading the fire 21:02, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

This acually looks fine to me :) CBA? GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 23:53, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Approved NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 19:53, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

Jayfeather (WA) - Approved

Jayfeather.apprentice Hrm, didn't come out as good as I hoped since it was a tabby style I'm not used to. Ah well, constructments? insaneular Talk 21:52, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

Darken all the stripes, I can't really see them. MaplefernCarrying the torch... 21:55, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded too much, or just dark enough? insaneular Talk 22:05, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

Just dark enough. Very good Insane! :D Leprecat The End of the Rainbow is the Place tooby! 23:01, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

This is great, Insane! I love the stripes. :) Just blur the highlights a tad, and add one on the tail. IcyInvading the fire 23:30, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

And, can you blur the pupil a tad to make him look blind? IcyInvading the fire 23:31, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

No, that shouldn't be necessary, Icy. If your blind, your pupils stay the same. See Jayfeather's mca and mc images, and Rock's image GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 23:38, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Added tail highlight and blurred them a bit insaneular Talk 00:17, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Make the earpink a tiny bit bigger.HaikageAsh's Talk 01:14, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded better? insaneular Talk 02:29, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

I can really see the ear pink. MaplefernCarrying the torch... 12:29, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I assume you meant that you can't see the ear pink? XD I brightened it a bit. insaneular Talk 15:28, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Looks great :) CBA? GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 23:56, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink a bit--NightshineÜ 05:07, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded ...Better? insaneular Talk 15:06, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Repeating, CBA? GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 23:53, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Approved NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 19:55, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

Oakfur (A) Approved

Oakfur.apprentice He was the only one who became a warrior. Then, his sister turned up out of nowhere in TFA XD I'm still wondering what happened to Marshkit... Anyway, comments?GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 02:22, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, his sister showing up was really random. Image-wise, the highlight on the haunch is brighter than the others, so either lighten the others, or darken the highlight on the haunch. This is really good, though. --Icy-chanHappy St. Patrick's Day! 03:13, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Brightened highlights :) GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 03:41, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

Looks awesome! Blur the shading some more--Nightshine 03:45, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I blurred it as much as I could GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 04:32, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlight on his face, and also make his ear pink stand out from his fur more if you can. insaneular Talk 19:41, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I tried to blur the highlight, and I don't think it looks any better. As for the ear pink, should I lighten it, or darken it? I tried darkening it, and it didn't look too good GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 19:55, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

Does he need an apprentice pic? If he does maybe darken the highlights a tad they're pretty close to white. for the earpink I would say lighten it.HaikageAsh's Talk 21:14, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

In a few books, he was listed as an apprentice in the allegiances. And I'll get to work on the highlights and ear pinkGoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 00:29, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the back. MaplefernCarrying the torch... 22:46, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

Can you make him more brownish? He looks a little maroon right now--Nightshine 01:49, March 4, 2010 (UTC)

And darken the ear pink. MaplefernCarrying the torch... 11:38, March 4, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, but I was told to lighten it by Ashshadow. I haven't done it yet, because I'm not on a computer that can. I tried to darken it, but it looked awful GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 15:15, March 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I darkened highlights, lightened ear pink, and blurred the shading on his back GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 08:12, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, wait guys? Ashshadow is right, he was never listed as an apprentice I don't think. Just let me change the eye color, and I'll make this Oakfur's apprentice image. GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 23:56, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Again, sorry guys! Eye color and file name have been changed GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 23:44, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

This looks awesome, and very ready. :) Comments before approval? --Icy-chan says hello! 01:10, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Approved (Am I allowed to approve my own images?) NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 20:02, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

Moonflower (W) - Approved


She is awful. >.< Batwing 16:07, March 14, 2010 (UTC)!

Holy StarClan, Bat, this is amazing. Just darken the shading a tad, I can't really see it. IcyInvading the fire 16:33, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Agreed; this is amazing. Better than I could ever do. ^_^ All I can see is the earpink (Which should be slightly darker as Moonflower is a gray cat. =D) Shistar Mai Talk Page 16:34, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Thank goodness, she's not as bad as I thought. ^^ Darkened shading and ear pink. Anything else? Batwing 17:19, March 14, 2010 (UTC)!

She looks great, but the shading on the back paws looks a tad odd. Like her paws are darker, not shaded.Darkhallows 18:14, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Oh my Starclan, Bat, how do you do this kind of stuff? I agree with Dark, the back paws look blackish... Other than that, amazing. Leprecat The End of the Rainbow is the Place tooby! 18:17, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Lightened back paw. Thanks, Brightflight. =) Anything else? Batwing 19:02, March 14, 2010 (UTC)!

Not that I see... this is a tad early, but CBA?Darkhallows 19:47, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

It looks like there is a pink pixel on the nose.HaikageAsh's Talk 19:50, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

It makes her look cute. c: I like putting pink noses on gray cats. Batwing 19:53, March 14, 2010 (UTC)!

It may not be that big of a deal ,but the noeses on warrior blanks are usually left black.HaikageAsh's Talk 19:57, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Squirrelflight (W) has a pink nose. I'm going to leave it like that. Batwing 20:53, March 14, 2010 (UTC)!

I think it's fine, so I think that the cba can just continue instead of being started over. --Icy-chan says hello! 23:18, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Mmkay, then, approved.Darkhallows 17:37, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

Patchpelt (W)- Approved

File:Patchpelt(W).png Take him down if he's over the limit, but I don't think he is. I think he's one of my better ones.Echoheart 11:45, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

The patches on his back and chest don't look much like the ones on his elder image...well they do, except on here they look very much connected, whereas his elder picture's ones are a little less touching...does that make any sense? Also, you might want to add a patch on his front the elder image you wouldn't see it if it was there.HeartpathLove, Jaggedclaw! 15:38, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

Hello Echoheart! This is really good! There is a little grey smudge thingy on the patch that covers his face. It might just be me but if you can see it then I knoww I'm not going blind like Jayfeather! XD! Fawnstorm 16:48, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink needs blending and I can't see much shading. ✐+ᖱ = 17:06, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Is there anything else? Echoheart 20:40, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink lighter like his elder image--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 23:30, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

...Don't know if you saw my comment above there ;) HeartpathLove, Jaggedclaw! 01:50, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

About your comment Mosspelt, which front leg? And about the image, it's reuploaded. Echoheart 11:52, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

I'd say the front leg closest to us. The patches all need blurring a little more and the shading isn't visible on the white areas. ✐SaNdY 11:40, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Echoheart 19:06, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

Smudge the patches (do not smudge them out just smudge the patches) then blur them more. Icestorm 17:12, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. How about this? Echoheart 11:39, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

Anybody? Echoheart 23:08, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, darken the shading on the white fur just a tad bit more, I can tell it's there butI think it should be a bit darker. --Icy-chanHappy St. Patrick's Day! 00:18, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Now what? Echoheart 11:19, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

Can you make the ear pink smaller? It looks a bit big. XD! Fawnstorm 11:21, February 16, 2010 (UTC) 10:39, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I made the ear pink smaller. Echoheart 16:36, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

This may just be me, but I still can't see any shading... ✐SaNdY 09:40, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I tried to make the shading darker. Anything else? Echoheart 12:04, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Can you make the ear pink a bit brighter? If you do that, I don't see much else that needs doing! Fawnstorm 11:21, February 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Anything else (again? XD) Echoheart 14:46, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Anything? Sorry, but I'm a really impaitent person. Echoheart 11:14, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink looks gray, make more pink like his elder image. Darken the shading on the white parts, and blur the patches a lot moreGoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 19:48, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

Also, on the white, it is kinda hard to see the shading. A hint for shading on the white: eithe make it a really pale gray, or take the burn tool, set it on highlights instead of midtones, and make the exposure about 5. The image is coming along though! Vancouverpath 01:20, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

Try adding a few spots in the white part, and the earpink looks grayish. Crystalpaw *glimmer* 20:29, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changed the color of the white to more of a gray. Echoheart 21:01, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink looks a little fluorescent, try making it more natural, or rosy instead of really pink pink. Vancouverpath 01:18, March 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changed the ear pink. Echoheart 11:48, March 10, 2010 (UTC)

Anyone? Sorry again.Echoheart 11:23, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the patch on his tail, and the very tip of the front paw farthest from us is lighter than the res of the shading. GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 23:13, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Darkened the patch on the tail and fixed the shading. ɆƆHØĦƏ@ƦƮ 23:34, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

There one white pixel on his belly, where all the black is GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 23:57, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Filled in the pixel. ɆƆHØĦƏ@ƦƮ 00:46, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Actually that one white pixel is still there. Perhaps darken the shading there. Also the hind leg not facing us should be black. HaikageAsh's Talk 10:45, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ɆƆHØĦƏ@ƦƮ 11:38, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

Like the new siggie! This is looking really good! The Ear Pink is very large. Try to make it smaller! FawnstormThe Dark Forest are rising... 17:23, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. And thanks for the comment! ɆƆHØĦƏ@ƦƮ 21:04, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good Echo! CBA? NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 08:30, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

None. Approved. --Bramble 22:57, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

Mothwing (Ki) - Approved

File:Mothwing (Ki).pngDecline this if it over the limit, but there are two discussions (I think) - the one about the blanks and the confusion of the mousefur apprentice image. Anyway, is it alright? ☼ Misty ☼Here comes the summer... 16:21, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

I think this is the 36th image. Fawny 11:21, February 16, 2010 (UTC) 19:15, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

Acually, I think this is the 35th. Make the nose pink a bit lighter, and the eyes look more yellow than amber. Make them more amberish. This is really good though! GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 19:43, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit.HaikageAsh's Talk 21:17, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

Right, sorry! XD! She needs to lokk a bit more 'marbled'. Like her med cat image. Mothwing (Ki) looks a I know that she is a tabby but make her look like her med cat image. Fawny 11:21, February 16, 2010 (UTC) 12:06, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

Marbled like how? :3 ☼ Misty ☼Here comes the summer... 12:19, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

I would upload Mothwing's med cat image but it woon't let me. Make the stripes blockya dn thick. Not like striped. More liek Mothwing and Silverstream (easy to see on her). Tell me if you don't understand. Fawny 11:21, February 16, 2010 (UTC) 12:25, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

I don't understand, but Fawnstorm says it doesn't matter... so I'm gonna reupload her when I get home cos I can't right now -glares at ancient, prehistoric, dodgy school compuers- ;D ☼ Misty ☼Here comes the summer... 12:37, March 3, 2010 (UTC)
Does anyone else agree that she should be more marbled? I think it should. Fawny 11:21, February 16, 2010 (UTC) 12:42, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Edited eyes, nose and shading. Sorry about the "marble" thing, guys! Fawny said it didn't matter, then changed her mind (see the strikethrough comment) and says I should marble it. So should I? Fawny, I'm sorry but I really don't understand what you mean by "marbling" it, but thanks for the advice! Please explain and can everyone else say their opinions? Thanx ;D ☼ Misty ☼Here comes the summer... 17:07, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

Make the tabby stripes more 'blocked'. Kinda chunky. Like Mothwing's med cat image:

File:Mothwing.pngSee how the stripes are joined and together? Just have a go at marbling them. Fawny 11:21, February 16, 2010 (UTC) 18:06, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry about the marbling confusion. It's just you said at school that it didn't matter. I don't really see what I can do to edit Moth - her stripes are already chunky and joined together. ;D ☼ Misty ☼Here comes the summer... 18:41, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

What else do I need to do? ;D ☼ Misty ☼Here comes the summer... 20:07, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

I still think you need to marble them. Make her look lesss dark because in her Med cat image. Especiaally her legs and tail. Yoou don't have to though. And I sorted out my siggie. :( Fawny 12:53, March 4, 2010 (UTC)

Why the sad face? What do you mean by "Make her look lesss dark because in her Med cat image"? And I can't "marble" her if I don't know what it means. Sorry. I just don't see what's wrong with her stripes. And I still don't understand the "marbling" thing. Pleeeese someone as well as Fawny comment! ;D ☼ Misty ☼Here comes the summer... 17:41, March 4, 2010 (UTC)

I meant she dosen't have dark legs and tail in her med cat image but she does in her kit image. But because you don't want me to comment anymore, I won't. (That is what you want isn't it? Its really hard to understand how people say thins online!) Fawnstorm 18:40, March 4, 2010 (UTC)

I'm not very good at explaining things, but I'll try and help explain this. The tail looks fine, but the rest of the stripes sort of look like Y-shaped tabbies, while on her medicine cat image and medicine cat apprentice image the stripes are marble type stripes. Some examples of of marble tabby kits are Lionheart's kit image, Tigerheart's kit image, and Brambleclaw's kit image. The problem with the stripes is that they're the wrong type of stripes. However, the dark legs and tail are fine, since that's the type of shading that's being used. The image overall looks great, just make the stripes a bit wider and more triangular so that they're less like Y's and more like on the examples I gave you, and this should be good. Does this help any at all? --Icy-chanHappy St. Patrick's Day! 23:50, March 4, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks Icy and Fawny! Sorry X a trillon for wasting peoples time by being dense. I'm soooooo sorry I didn't understand! I'll reupload her ASAP ;D ☼ Misty ☼Here comes the summer... 12:56, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks for explaining that Icy! Sorry for not explaining it as well as well as Icy did Misty. *Face pillow*. I got Frosty's text and I thought I had mistunderstood you. Thats what I meant when i said Marble. Thanks so much for explaining it. Fawnstorm 13:32, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Phew. I marbled Moth! Are the stripes alright? I completely redid her. Comments? ;D ☼ Misty ☼Here comes the summer... 16:54, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

I'm no good at critiquing Marbled cats (When it comes to their stripes) so you'll have to wait for Fawnstorm and Icethroat to give you their opinion. But I think the stripes need to be slightly more blurred. =D Shistar Mai Talk Page 16:58, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah I agree with you. Blur the stripes a bit and dodge the base of her tail, its a little dark. Fawnstorm 17:04, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

Yep, blur them a tad bit more, and then this should be good. This looks much better. --Icy-chanHappy St. Patrick's Day! 21:03, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred stripes and lightened tail base. Thank you sooo much guys for your comments and your help! ;D ☼ Misty ☼Here comes the summer... 07:57, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

I think the Lineart on her right back-paw is blurred. I am not sure though. Tell me if I'm wrong. ;D Fawny 09:44, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I fixed line art. Sorry for not working on it - I was skiing. ;D Comments? ☼ Misty ☼Here comes the summer... 16:14, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the nosepink a tiny bit.HaikageAsh's Talk 19:36, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Darkened nose pink. Comments? ☼ Misty ☼Here comes the summer... 08:13, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

Argh! It won't reupload. ☼ Misty ☼Here comes the summer... 08:16, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

I'm gonna have to try again later - my computer won't let me reupload it. ☼ Misty ☼Here comes the summer... 08:19, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

Just save it under a different file name, works every time :) NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 08:24, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks, Night! ;D ☼ Misty ☼Here comes the summer... 08:38, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

Your welcome! CBA? NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 08:52, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

This doesn't effect the CBA, but if you uploaded a new file, can you put the {{Delete}} tag on the old file so that it can be deleted? Thanks, --Icy-chan says hello! 22:01, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Misty but the Ear Pink is more of a reddy colour than the pink one on her med cat image. FawnstormThe Dark Forest are rising... 18:09, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

I think the earpink is fine. Kit's have smaller ears so you cant always use the same color as in their other images. See Goldenflower's kit image.HaikageAsh's Talk 19:23, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

I guess your right Ash. I personally think CBA should go back up again. Sorry for any disturbance. FawnstormThe Dark Forest are rising... 19:38, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

Irrevelant comments; approved. Bramble 23:05, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

Quince(Q)- Approved

File:Quince(Q).png I used the same colors being used for her kittypet image. I also wanted to giv putting a collar on a queen blank a go and Moonflight changed her image to kittypet. Comments?HaikageAsh's Talk 23:55, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

The shading seems a little too dark on her face and tail. Make the ear pink a bit smaller--NightshineÜ 23:57, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. very good, Ash! --IcyInvading the fire 00:26, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

This is wonderful! Make the tag on the collar a bit smaller. Man, I'm doing Princess's queen image, and the collar is awful! GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 00:32, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

This is awesome as always. Just lighten her front leg that's not facing us. It's a good thing it turned out better than my queen. Mine was awful!!! --LuckflightHappy St. Patty's Day! 00:37, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks for the comments everyone. I can't make the tag smaller without re-doing the whole image. Should I redo her or is the tag not that bad? Nightfall: I drew the collar in paint if that helps.HaikageAsh's Talk 00:47, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

I think the tag olooks fine. You just need to lighten the shading, Ash. --IcyInvading the fire 20:55, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Lightened the shading. I left the earpink that size because I have seen approved queens with earpink that size. If the tag is really bothering you Night it wouldn't really take that long to redo, so just let me know.HaikageAsh's Talk 21:04, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, no! This is beautiful, I don't want you to re-do it. Maybe just thicken the lineart on the tag, would you have to redo the whole image to do that? NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 02:58, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Nope. I was able to do that.HaikageAsh's Talk 10:29, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

Beautiful, Ash! CBA? NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 08:59, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

None. Approved. Bramble 23:07, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

Tallpoppy (E) - Approved

File:Tallpoppy.Elder.pngI don't like this one. At all >.< Constructments? --Ŧ∆ķმ♰§ƱოΣ 15:14, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

She looks great, Hawktalon, just darken the earpink a bit because it looks fluorescent. insaneular Talk 15:28, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Darkened ear pink. --Ŧ∆ķმ♰§ƱოΣ 15:40, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

It looks like there are some lighter patches around the whiskers and nose, the haunch, the leg, and the tail tip. It may be highlights, but either way, blur them. Batwing 16:11, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Blurred highlights. --Ŧ∆ķმ♰§ƱოΣ 18:24, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded (Again) - Sorry, it didn't upload right. Hopefully the changes will show now. --Ŧ∆ķმ♰§ƱოΣ 20:09, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

This is great, Hawk! Just darken the shading a tad, I can't really see it. Or is it my dumb computer? IcyInvading the fire 20:52, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

I can see the shading. This is amazing! OMpath3rd Place! 22:19, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

The only thing I see, is to add a stripe to the tip of her tail. But this is amazing! NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 03:24, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the back a bit. This looks awesome!--NightshineÜ 03:31, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Added tail stripe and darkened back shading. --Ŧ∆ķმ♰§ƱოΣ 19:11, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

Please blur the earpink a tad more --NightyMeh kitteh is hoplessley confused... 19:13, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Blurred ear pink. Also, I changed the file name back to Tallpoppy.Elder. I'm not sure how it changed to Tallpoppy_Elder before... --Ŧ∆ķმ♰§ƱოΣ 19:21, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

This is just beautiful! I would blur the ear pink a little more though NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 20:00, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I blurred it as much as I could without blurring the lineart. --Ŧ∆ķმ♰§ƱოΣ 19:26, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

This is incredible! Comments Before Approval? NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 19:40, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

Whitetail(q)- approved

File:Whitetail.queen.pngThe lightsource is from the back.Darkhallows 18:44, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Very nice, just blur the smudges. MaplefernCarrying the torch... 18:46, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

The smudges are there on purpose. Like on Yellowfang.Darkhallows 18:58, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

She has a pinkish tint to her. Did you do that on purpose?HaikageAsh's Talk 19:58, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

I tried to, it doesn't show up for me XD.Darkhallows 21:23, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

This is amazing, Shady^-^ Though, there's a small white pixel on her foreleg nearest to us and ear pink needs to be a little bigger. --Ŧ∆ķმ♰§ƱოΣ 22:35, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the tail. The eye looks strange. Can you fix that too?--NightshineÜ 02:52, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

The light is from the back, thus the tail has less shading. I darkened it though.Darkhallows 05:23, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

Very good, Shady! Can you blur the smudges a tad? --IcyInvading the fire 23:30, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

DoneDarkhallows 17:58, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --Icy-chan says hello! 20:26, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

Willowpelt (A) - Approved

Willowpelt.apprentice My favorite character's mother's apprentice image! (That was kind of complicated...) Anyways, I really need to stop doing apprentice images, this is my third in a row...comments and suggestions? --Icy-chan says hello! 21:50, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

This is great, Icy! But, make the ear pink more in the ear. It looks as if dancing. IcyInvading the fire 21:55, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

This is great Icy!! Just do what Icy said (wow lol so many Icys lol)


22:14, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Yep. lol. :) Icestorm, what do you mean by "more in the ear?" --Icy-chan says hello! 23:06, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

More in the middle of the ear, sorry, I suck at grammar. --IcyInvading the fire 23:21, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more lighter, and the fur more grayish. Otherwise, it looks great! Rainwhisker 00:26, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

It looks more like a white cat with a lot of shading than a gray cat. Could you take off a little of the highlights? Echostar~ May StarClan Light Your Path 22:05, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

I got the fur color from the warrior version, but as for the other comments I'll make the changes either tonight or tomorrow. --Icy-chan says hello! 22:39, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

I think it looks good the way it is. CBA?Darkhallows 18:03, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. --Icy-chan says hello! 14:35, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

Rose (KP) - Approved

File:Rose.png Wanted to do something a bit more challenging, but not too bad like a tortie. Comments? --Gοlδεnpαω Appare! 01:17, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

She's great! Just darken the shading, I can't see it much. --IcyInvading the fire 01:23, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good :) But the cream part of her pelt is way to light, it looks almost yellowish-white. Run the burn tool over that part of the pelt a couple of times NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 05:12, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink is a bit too big and her nose looks the same color as her fur. Perhaps make it more pinkie.HaikageAsh's Talk 23:13, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

Cats with brown fur around their nose and paw pads have brown skin there. --Gοlδεnpαω Appare! 23:56, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, Goldenpaw's right about that. If you google a siamese (aren't they cute?) then you'll see that the nose is the same color as the brown part of their fur NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 00:56, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

Make the cream part a little darker. And blur the shading some more. ɆƆHØĦƏ@ƦƮ 23:01, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

Better? --Gοlδεnpαω Appare! 01:10, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

Looks perfect to me!--NightshineÜ 05:26, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --Icy-chan says hello! 14:33, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. --Icy-chan says hello! 02:29, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

Foxleap (Ki) - Approved

File:FoxleapKit.pngYep, here he is ^^ After I completely messed up with Goldenflower, I'm pretty pleased with this. Comments? Brightfrostof SunClan...60px 17:54, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

This is brilliant, Frosty! All I can think of for you to improve is blur his haunch. Otherwise, this is amazing! :) x ♫ Misty ♫ 60px 19:07, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

You didn't mess up with Goldenflower, she was good. This is amazing Frosty. Make the Ear Pink a tad bigger and a bit lighter. Fawnstorm 11:21, February 16, 2010 (UTC) 19:33, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded! Awh, thanks guys :] But still, I hated the Goldenflower image xD Anyway. I made the ear pink bigger and lightened it a bit, but maybe a bit too light pink? :3 And I attempted to blur the haunch a little. It's really annoying because his ear pink is really dark in his warrior image, I don't like it >:3 Hope this looks better. I think I'll stick to kits from now on, they're easier xD Brightfrostof SunClan...60px 19:59, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Errrr... any comments? o.O Brightfrostof SunClan...60px 07:23, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

Did you get the eye colour of of his warrior/apprentice image? And did you use the burn tool to do his tabby markings? I can base my comments on that. XD! Fawny 11:21, February 16, 2010 (UTC) 12:01, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

The eyes came straight from the warrior image, but I used the colour picker to get the tabby colour, as I wasn't sure if the user that did him as a warrior had gone over the markings more than once. :) Brightfrostof SunClan...60px 17:50, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

If I am honest I think you should choose a darker ginger colour for the stripes. The current pnes look slightly brown. Try useing th burn tool. Just to see how they come out. XD Fawny 11:21, February 16, 2010 (UTC) 18:04, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

I've tried using the burn tool on him, but the stripes come out quite ginger, instead of brown, as he is supposed to be a red-brown tabby I think? Sorry! But thanks for the comment. :] Brightfrostof SunClan...60px 19:06, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

I think the color of the stripes is fine. maybe darken the earpink some, its a bit hard to see.HaikageAsh's Talk 02:52, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded, darkened the ear pink, but I think that's made it harder to see? :3 Brightfrostof SunClan...60px 19:01, March 7, 2010 (UTC) I got the first ear pink colour direct from the Foxleap image.

Yeah its harded to see, Sorry. The earpink color for kits is hard to find since there ears are so small. Experiment with different colors until you find the right one.HaikageAsh's Talk 01:44, March 8, 2010 (UTC)

Download Foxleap's warrior picture and copy the earpink from there. ☮Quail will rescue Haiti!☮We are the World... 01:46, March 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded, re-done the ear pink (copied it of Foxleap's warrior image), however, it's VERY dark and very hard to see! ;3 Which is why I had it quite light in the first place. Brightfrostof SunClan...60px 17:19, March 8, 2010 (UTC)

Add a stripe or two to his visible foot--NightshineÜ 04:56, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

It's been a week, please work on this or it will be declined NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 03:49, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry, I'm trying to work on it but Pixlr won't open for some reason and hasn't for a couple of days- has anyone else had the same problem? Brightfrostof SunClan...60px 07:48, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

Finally reuploaded, so sorry for the delay, I've finally been able to upload it on the school comps. Added two stripes to the foot but you can't see them much. Anything else? Brightfrostof SunClan...60px 16:51, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

This is good! It should get approved soon! FawnstormThe Dark Forest are rising... 17:13, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? ✐SaNdY 15:12, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble 19:25, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

Cloudberry (W) - Approved


-sob- Her story makes me sad. ): Poor Cloudberry & Ryewhisker. Wonder who their kits are... :P Anyway, comments? (I CANNOT blur the shading anymore). Batwing 01:04, March 18, 2010 (UTC)!

Looks great! I see nothing wrong--NightshineÜ 01:20, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Nightshine, there is barely anything wrong with it!!! Great job! MooNPelT 01:31, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

Tis is great, Blue. (: All I see is add a small highlight to the muzzle then blur it. And add some shading to the paw not facing us. Other than that, I see nothing wrong with this image. Great job. :) --SaintIceHappy Saint Patrick's Day 01:42, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

Define the earpink some more. MaplefernCarrying the torch... 11:51, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good. Maybe blur the chest shading a bit? FawnstormThe Dark Forest are rising... 09:33, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Meh, sorry this took so long, my computer is sick. D: Brightened muzzle highlight, darkened paw shading, blurred chest shading. Maple, could you please explain what you mean by "define the ear pink more"? Batwing 20:01, March 20, 2010 (UTC)!

What Maple means is that the ear pink is blurred too much, but I think that it's fine. Comments before approval? --Icy-chan says hello! 02:26, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. Sorry it took two days instead of one to approve this. --Icy-chan says hello! 23:12, March 22, 2010 (UTC)

Stonestar(D) -Approved

[[File:Stonetail.png]]Another deputy. Not much to say about him. Comments?HaikageAsh's Talk 23:20, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

Awesome! Just darken the ear pink! MaplefernCarrying the torch... 23:25, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

It's the same color as his leader version. Should I still change it? I will if you think I should.HaikageAsh's Talk 23:32, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

The shading is too dark--NightshineÜ 04:02, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

Go ahead and darken the ear pink a little bit. --Icy-chan says hello! 13:59, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I darkened the earpink a little. I didnt change the shading because it doesnt look too dark to me and is close to the color of the shading on Quince who has a similar pelt color.HaikageAsh's Talk 20:02, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

I love it Ash. :) Just blur the shading on the paw facing us. --SaintIceHappy Saint Patrick's Day 23:00, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

Amazing! Make the Ear Pink a tad larger and make it darker. Also Blur the shading on his neck. FawnstormThe Dark Forest are rising... 09:28, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. thanks Ice and Fawn.HaikageAsh's Talk 13:32, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? ✐SaNdY 08:08, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

None; Approved NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 01:55, March 23, 2010 (UTC)