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Patch (KP)- Approved

File:Patch(KP).pngI counted the images and am pretty sure this is within the limit. Anyway, heres Patch from the Tigerstar and Sasha series.HaikageAsh's Talk 19:23, March 23, 2010 (UTC)


Is there supposed to be a little white dot on his side? Brightmoon The Sign of the Moon! 19:37, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Yes. It's a white underbelly. HaikageAsh's Talk 19:40, March 23, 2010 (UTC)


My bad ;) Brightmoon The Sign of the Moon! 19:56, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Ash... I actually see nothing wrong at all. Brilliant =) This may be premature but CBA? ✐SaNdY 16:58, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

I don't know if it's just me but the right eye looks a little weird like 2 much white pixels or something.Snowstorm Deputy of LightClan! 20:04, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

It looks worse when I take a white pixel out. Kittypet eyes are just strange like that.HaikageAsh's Talk 20:07, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

  • nods* Okay I see. My bad! It looks great!Snowstorm Deputy of LightClan! 23:04, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

Comments were deemed irrelevant. Approved ✐SaNdY 18:59, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

Shrewpaw (TC) (Kit) - Approved

File:Shrewkit(TC).png Eh, I was lazy. Constructments? Bramble 23:26, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the nose pink a little.HaikageAsh's Talk 23:30, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

Lol, Bramble I reserved this at like 2:00 a.m this morning. But you can keep this, I haven't even started it NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 00:08, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading a little more and darken the tail shading--NightshineÜ 05:22, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good Bramble! All I can say is that the Ear Pink is a bit hard to see. FawnstormThe Dark Forest are rising... 09:26, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

All changes have been made. --Bramble 02:26, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

I can't see anything else that needs imporving. FawnstormThe Dark Forest are rising... 12:00, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? ✐SaNdY 16:54, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. ✐SaNdY 19:03, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

Brindleface(Ki)- Approved

Alot of thanks to insane!!--≈Ivy-sama≈ 08:20, March 4, 2010 (UTC Brindleface.kit


Ahhh!!what happend?--≈Ivy-sama≈ 08:24, March 4, 2010 (UTC)

That's easy to sort out just get a new kit line art and put it over it :)  Brambleclaw14 Talk 10:17, March 4, 2010 (UTC)

FIXED--≈Ivy-sama≈ 11:52, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

There are 4 or 5 white pixels on the legs. :) Shistar Mai Talk Page 12:12, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

also you have a white pixel on the right I'll let you find that :)  Brambleclaw14 Talk 12:24, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink should be a bit bigger and maybe a little lighter, and her muzzle has white on it. Crystalpaw *glimmer* 20:07, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

Theiur are some strips with no bluring at all, so I say blur all the stripes once more, Troutleap 21:47, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded

The stripes look black. lighten them a bit.HaikageAsh's Talk 14:50, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded≈Ivy-sama≈ 13:49, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes still look a little dark. Her other images have more of a darkish gray than the classicly black silver tabby markings. But this is amazing! Vancouverpath 00:09, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded≈Ivy-sama≈

The stripes look too close together, try making them more seperated. Also, Her other images have dapples on them, think you could add some? GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 06:09, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded ≈៛₪¥ -§₰₪₥≈

Add a stripe to her foot and blur the specks of gray on her tail and arms some more--NightshineÜ 04:59, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading.HaikageAsh's Talk 20:56, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

≈៛₪¥ -§₰₪₥≈ 13:24, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

Adding to Nightshine and Ashshadow's comments, the stripes are covering part of her right eye (right eye to her, left eye from where we are facing). Try going over the lineart there. This is really good! ☼ Misty ☼Here comes the summer... 08:41, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded

The only thing I see, is to darken the ear pink. Then I think this will be ready :) NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 22:56, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded C'mon, I gootaa do FE characters!--≈៛₪¥ -§₰₪₥≈ 11:22, March 22, 2010 (UTC)

haha, I don't know why people are so fussed over FE characters... they're just cats as always. Anyway, CBA? ✐SaNdY 16:50, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

Approved ✐SaNdY 19:07, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

Littlecloud (A)- Approved

File:Littlecloud.apprentice2.png Nothing special. Comments?--Vancouverpath 14:14, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

He looks a bit...golden compared to his MC and MCA image. MaplefernCarrying the torch... 14:21, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

I got the color from the MCA image. Should I darken it a bit? Vancouverpath 14:23, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkened the image. I also defined the stripes more. Is this okay?OMpath3rd Place! 14:44, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

He looks a bit dark now. Also I cant really see the earpink.HaikageAsh's Talk 16:55, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the whole image, and blue the shading a tad. --IcyInvading the fire 20:53, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. *Fail* did that make much of a difference? OMpath3rd Place! 22:13, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Wow, this is beautiful Moss! CBA? GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 00:25, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

I think it's still too dark. But it looks really good!--NightshineÜ 02:51, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, but I think that's mostly because of the shading. What do you guys think? Keep it this way or lighten it? NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 08:58, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten it, because the shading on this is much darker than his other chararts--NightshineÜ 14:45, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

Yep, lighten it some more. --Icy-chan says hello! 20:30, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I finally was able to come online! I lightened it a bit. Is this good? OMpath3rd Place! 22:15, March 22, 2010 (UTC)

Hey, Mosspath... Well.. How do I put this? It doesn't look very much like his med cat image. Brightmoon The Sign of the Moon! 23:24, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

It's because of the shading... CBA?Darkhallows 05:42, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

Approved ✐SaNdY 19:11, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

Goldenflower (W) - Approved

File:Goldenflower w.gif
I saw there was no Warrior picture of Goldenflower, so I made one. Helixtalk 10:47, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

This looks really good! But you aren't a member of the project.--NightshineÜ 14:40, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

I never said I was... I don't plan to create additional chararts so I didn't apply for membership; I just saw that one of my favorite cats was missing an image and decided to help out :) Helixtalk 17:26, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

Ask Bramble or Sandy to join the project. As for the image, she's great! Just blur the shading some more and the ear pink looks gray....try running the sponge tool over it one or two times. Hawkfirelikes to PARTAY!! 16:36, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, I don't like the ear pink either, but I used the same color as on the Elder and Queen versions, to avoid problems. Still, I think I'll change it. Check also the image history (click on the image), there is a version with more highlight, but it looks a bit... metallic. Helixtalk 17:26, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

I'll add her, no need to bother Sandy or Bramble about it. This image is really good!Darkhallows 17:15, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good, Helix! But I would lighten the shading a bit, it looks a bit green; especially on her haunch NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 18:56, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

Right, but I did that to match the existing art... those are even greener. Anyway, if it were for me, I'd redo all existing Goldenflower pixels to a much lighter color (she is described as "pale golden-ginger"), something similar in color to Sunfall's art (without the stripes of course). Maybe I'll do exactly that. Helixtalk 19:14, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

Well, wait a minute. We've considered recoloring all her images on the next tweak week. That's when we set a time to make small alterations to pixels that need fixing. We are not doing a tweak week at the moment, so please just stick to this coloring for consistency NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 19:23, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

I liked the version before you did anything to it.. all it needed was some blending of the shading... but that's my opinion. ✐SaNdY 19:56, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

Oh well, choose whichever you like (you might need a screen with high contrast to see the differences). ;) I'd say 2 or 5. Anyway, "tweak week" is coming up, so it won't be around for a long time I guess. Helixtalk 19:58, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

20100317120617!Goldenflower_w.gif 20100317122153!Goldenflower_w.gif 20100317200401!Goldenflower_w.gif 20100318151413!Goldenflower_w.gif File:Goldenflower w.gif

I think 1 or 2 Evanphoto 21:40, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

Uploaded a new version (5th in the above row); more blur and color closer to the elder image. I guess this is the final version. Helixtalk 15:22, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

The image seems a bit faded. besides that the highlight over the eye and the earpink needs to be blurred.HaikageAsh's Talk 19:36, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

Fixed... what about now? Helixtalk 20:43, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

The only thing I would fix is the shading near the face. The transition line between shading and the regular pelt color is abrupt; soften it out with the blur tool. Also, I'm assuming from reading the text above that you don't wish to become a member, and that this is only temporary. Is that the case? --Bramble 22:54, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

I did that on purpose, to give the impression of the head's "width" that casts a shadow on the neck, but I can fix it. As for membership of the project... I can't decide, as I don't know if I can dedicate myself to it, or if I can live up to the standards (although I made a second charart since - for my user page - and starting to get the hang of it). Helixtalk 00:19, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

Uploaded new version - Helixtalk 05:40, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

The shading on the haunch and tail needs blending a little more, particularly the haunch as it looks a little smudgy. ✐SaNdY 16:40, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

The lineart looks dark grey instead of black, and I agree with Sandy that the shading needs blending. Apart from that, this is really good! ;D ☼ Misty ☼Here comes the summer... 16:42, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

yes indeed, it ended up dark grey, I fixed it. Some more blur. Helixtalk 21:36, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? ✐SaNdY 16:53, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

Approved ✐SaNdY 19:36, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

Snowy (Q) Approved

File:Snowy queen.pngHere is my first queen so how is she??? MoOnPeLt 16:39, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

She's awesome! Just blur the shading some more, and the ear pink looks a little bit out of the ear. Try smudging it up a little. But nice job on the color! :) Hawkfirelikes to PARTAY!! 16:42, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I made the ear pink more blured and pushed it up more, and I blured the shading. Anything else??? MoOnPeLt 16:59, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink a tiny bit and blur the shading--NightshineÜ 22:24, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkend ear pink. Blured shading. MoOnPeLt 23:05, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit more--NightshineÜ 05:20, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

There is too much shading. You have a line of shading on every side of the lineart where it is only needed on opposite sides to the light source. Choose a direction for your light and add shading where the shadows will fall. ✐SaNdY 16:41, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried redoing the shading... MoonpeltStarClan will win.... 19:27, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Her eyes are too dark. Make them more like her rouge image. Some of the line art looks blurred, back you fix that?--NightshineÜ 20:37, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ok you were right lightend eye color and also sharpened the blurred line art. Anything else??? MoonpeltStarClan will win.... 20:58, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

She looks very gray, run the dodge tool over the pelt a couple of times NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 21:03, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I redid the shading cause I thought it didn't look right and I lightened it like nightfall said. MoonpeltStarClan will win.... 21:54, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

It looks better :) But, the eyes look a bit cross-eyed. Look at Icethroat's tutorial for the eye NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 22:02, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried a new type of shading idea and I changed the eyes. Anything else???MoonpeltStarClan will win.... 22:53, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

The eyes look better, and I really like the shading style! But, now the shading is really dark, lighten it NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 23:15, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Lighten the shading. Anybody want me to change anything else? MoonpeltStarClan will win.... 23:53, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

A lot better :) Okay, all I see is that the nose pink either needs to be colored, or darkened if it's already colored NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 01:36, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkend nose color~ Anything else??? MoonpeltStarClan will win.... 02:49, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

Just blur the ear pink a little. ✐SaNdY 08:03, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred the ear pink. Should I change anything else??? MoonpeltStarClan will win.... 13:52, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

Remove the ear pink from the ear farthest from us. It shouldn't be there because that ear is turned away from us. (See an approved queen image for an example) NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 19:29, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ Ok I took that ear pink out~ Anything else~ MoonpeltStarClan will win.... 19:34, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? ✐SaNdY 16:53, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

Approved ✐SaNdY 19:42, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

Swiftbreeze (Q) - Approved

Swiftbreeze.queen Well, this is my first image done solely with GIMP and I'm not sure about the result... I did my best with the stripes, though the warrior version's are very messy and hard to imitate. Critism welcome on this one. ✐SaNdY 20:55, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Lol, sorry about those stripes. I brought up a picture of a real tabby on pixlr and coppied the stripes from that. However I didn't consider that they'd be impossible to copy XD Anyway, this is really good! I would probably darken the stripes a bit more, and perhaps thicken them a bit NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 20:57, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Yes thicken the stripes a bit and that one stripe on her shoulder is at a weird angle. Also darken the shading--NightshineÜ 21:01, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

This is very good. Nighteh, (nightshine) I think the shading looks fine, it just needs blurring at 100%. (this does not make any sense, right?) --BlacktailTalk! 22:10, March 20, 2010 (UTC)



I thought Icestorm was doing this. Echo-Wave Hi kitteh! 00:26, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

Echo: I had her reserved, then un-reserved her. As for the image, it's great Sandy! Blur the shading some more and thickin' the stripes. IceSpring is here! 00:32, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Night: No worries, it's not your fault you're a better artist than I am ;) Blacktail: The shading was blurred at 100% but that's by the by. Echo: Of course I checked =) Everyone: I redid all the shading and blurred it (at 100%). I also redid the stripes. Anything else? ✐SaNdY 08:53, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

This looks awsome! And, thanks! But your a wonderful artist, everybody just has a different way of doing stripes, and no one else can duplicate them just right. Okay, the only thing is that there is a small white pixel that should be black, somewhere under her tail around her butt area. Fix that, and this should be ready :) Grrr, I've got a song from "The Marvelous Misadventures of Flapjack" stuck in my head XD NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 09:40, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

Nightfall, it's like that on the lineart. lol BirchyI am a warrior at heart... 13:56, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, sorry. *face palm* I was half asleep at the time. Gah, the song is still stuck in my head! NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 19:23, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

Anything else? ✐SaNdY 16:56, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

Not that I can see. Comments before approval? --Icy-chan says hello! 22:46, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

Approved ✐SaNdY 19:50, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

Cloudspots (W) - Approved

File:Cloudspots.pngI reposted Cloudspots! Comments? ;D ☼ Misty ☼Here comes the summer... 16:29, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Nice! Blur the front paw furthest away from us. BirchyI am a warrior at heart... 16:48, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred paw ;D ☼ Misty ☼Here comes the summer... 17:00, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

This is awesome, Misty! Just lighten and blur the highlight on his haunch. -- IceSpring is here! 18:49, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

It says the ears are white, but the top of his head is white too. Shouldn't that part be black? NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 20:42, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

The Ear Pink looks a bit baby pink. It's a bit bright. Also blur all the white patches. FawnstormThe Dark Forest are rising... 10:39, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

Responding to Night's comment, yeah, I wondered about that, but I just copied that from his med cat image. Shall I change it? And Responding to Fawn's comments, I got the earpink colour off his med cat image.File:Cloudspots.medcat.pngHere's the image. ;D ☼ Misty ☼Here comes the summer... 18:56, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, I knew that but I just wasn't sure. Oh well, we'll keep that part white for consistency, then fix it on the next tweak week :) NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 19:27, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

I think when I did the med cat image I was told to add a white bit on his head as it looked strange without. I might be wrong but... ✐SaNdY 20:26, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

His med. cat image is a bit greyer than this one. :P FawnstormThe Dark Forest are rising... 16:13, March 22, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I've blurred, lightened, etc, but I've kept the white part on the head. ;D ☼ Misty ☼Here comes the summer... 19:47, March 22, 2010 (UTC)

This is awesome! :D All I can say is maybe bring the grey highlight all the way down the tail, only a bit lighter, like on the med cat, but that's only really a minor thing :P Love it! ^^ Brightfrost

Reuploaded. Tail highlighted! ;D ☼ Misty ☼Here comes the summer... 16:35, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Awesome :D But, just to be picky of me, the highlight is on the upperside of the med cat tail rather than the underside. Just me being picky ;P Brightfrostof SunClan...60px 21:49, March 23, 2010 (UTC)


Can you make his white chest a bit thinner like his medicine cat image? Other than that it's great. insaneular Talk 02:33, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I redid him. ☼ Misty ☼Here comes the summer... 17:10, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? You've done a great job with him. ✐SaNdY 19:01, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

None; Approved NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 18:51, March 26, 2010 (UTC)

Brambleclaw (A) - Approved

File:Brambleclaw.apprentice.png gar, I think I'm getting worse at charart rather than better. DX Anywho, constructments? insaneular Talk 23:17, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

Nooo, Insane, your are getting better.. For the image, maybe add/darken the shading on the neck. And add shading to the paws, or darken them. --IcyInvading the fire 23:28, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded sorry for being lazy and not updating this. I just added more shading to the paws and the neck. I know the neck shading looks a bit odd but that's because he has a stripe going across his neck, and I didn't want to block it out too much. Is it okay? insaneular Talk 00:22, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the arm stripes and blur the ear pink a bit more--NightshineÜ 05:25, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Once again sorry for not updating quickly. Does it look any better? I had to do it in pixlr since I'm not at my computer with GIMP. insaneular Talk 19:21, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the stripes on his legs, and this will be good :) NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 06:11, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Guh, couldn't see how much that last one failed on my other computer. I redid it with GIMP and I think the arm stripes look much better now... insaneular Talk 19:30, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Blend the ear pink a little and he'll be ready a mon avis. ✐SaNdY 16:52, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded better? insaneular Talk 02:24, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? ✐SaNdY 19:34, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

None; Approved NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 19:00, March 26, 2010 (UTC)

Brackenfur (A) - Approved

File:BrackenfurApprentice.png First apprentice! Oh the failure. Anything to improve?--Shaf Girl 02:38, March 18, 2010 (UTC)


Darken the ear pink and arm stripes--NightshineÜ 02:42, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good! Blur the stripes some more, darken the Ear Pink like Night said and maybe darken the highlights on his tail. They look a bit bright. Either darken the highlights or the stripes there. FawnstormThe Dark Forest are rising... 09:31, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.--Shaf Girl 22:22, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? ✐SaNdY 19:46, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

Wow...that was quick XD--Shaf Girl 23:10, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

Lol; Approved NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 19:05, March 26, 2010 (UTC)

Stonestream (W)- Approved

File:Stonestream(W).pngComments? ɆƆHØĦƏ@ƦƮ 10:40, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

Make the Ear Pink a bit darker. See the chart on Misty's Tutorial for the corredt Ear Pink. This is really good thpugh. FawnstormThe Dark Forest are rising... 13:01, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, but you already have an image up for approval. Choose which one you would like to post. As for the image, the shading needs some blurring. Fawn, the ear pink looks fine to me, but maybe not to other people. --SaintIceHappy Saint Patrick's Day 21:16, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Fawn, the earpink could be a bit darker. The shading also needs blurring.HaikageAsh's Talk 21:27, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changed ear pink and blurred shading. ɆƆHØĦƏ@ƦƮ 23:05, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Ice. I just though tit looked a bit light! XD! FawnstormThe Dark Forest are rising... 09:23, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

This may be an opinion but I think the ear pink takes up to much room it the ear ~ MoonpeltStarClan will win.... 16:20, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

So should I make the ear pink smaller? ɆƆHØĦƏ@ƦƮ 20:02, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Yes. There is also a light colored smudge on his chest.HaikageAsh's Talk 20:11, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changed the size of the earpink and filled in the lighter spot. ɆƆHØĦƏ@ƦƮ 10:25, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

I like this a lot! CBA? NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 22:01, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

None; Approved NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 19:08, March 26, 2010 (UTC)

Tallstar (A) - Approved

File:Tallstar Apprentice.pngThree of the sections are discussions, so this isn't over the limit. Anyway, this is my second charart in a row with the prefix "Tall" in its name... Constructments? --Ŧ∆ķმ♰§ƱოΣ 19:15, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

Wow! Looks great. But he has a white chest. MaplefernCarrying the torch... 22:56, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

This is great, Hawk. :) Just darken the shading on the black transition. --SaintIceHappy Saint Patrick's Day 22:59, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

Should he look like his warrior image or leader image? I like his leader image better because it looks like a tuxedo :)--NightshineÜ 00:17, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Lol Night, I agree. I think that you should take the black off the chest and make it more patchlike.HaikageAsh's Talk 00:25, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more reddish and extend the black to the arms a bit--NightshineÜ 00:32, March 20, 2010 (UTC)


I noticed on his article that his leader image doesn't have a patch on his chest, but his warrior image does. This should be fixed on the next tweak week, but should we add a patch to his leader image, or take the patch off his warrior image? NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 04:42, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good Hawk! Though the patches on here look a bit black. Isn't Tallstar grey and white? See his leader image:

[[File:Tallstar.png]]FawnstormThe Dark Forest are rising... 09:20, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Well, his leader image looks gray and white, but it's been comfirmed millions of times in the series that he's black and white, not gray and white. NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 09:25, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Thats weird. What are we going to go by? FawnstormThe Dark Forest are rising... 10:06, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Well, I don't think his leader charart was meant to look gray and white, although now that I think about it, it really does. But that can easily be fixed during tweak week. Another issue is the black patch on his chest, which he has on his warrior image but not on his leader image. Personally, I think I'd make him without the patch. I don't picutre him with the black patch on his chest, but I also don't picture him like his leader image is. Similar to his leader image, but not excatly. But, let's wait till Bramble or Sandy can get on to offically decide what wer're goning to do NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 10:18, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

I think that the patch on his warrior version is ok because that patch kind of sticks out on that side. HaikageAsh's Talk 13:14, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

I think it definitely should be kept black and white. As well as Tallstar being black and white in the books, his warrior image is black and white. ☼ Misty ☼Here comes the summer... 16:57, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

The two different chararts confused me as well... So, I made a second version with his leader version's coloring (on the right). Which one should be kept? --Ŧ∆ķმ♰§ƱოΣ 17:03, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

I think the one on the right is better--NightshineÜ 19:28, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

The one on the right. --Icy-chan says hello! 02:22, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

Yep, the one on the right NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 02:27, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry for being such a mouse-brain. Image wise: Keep the first ones colouring on the second desgin thing. FawnstormThe Dark Forest are rising... 10:42, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

The left one is beautiful! But i have to go with the right. Echo-Wave Hi kitteh! 16:41, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, image on the right it is:) Constructments? --Ŧ∆ķმ♰§ƱოΣ 16:45, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

Awesome, Hawk. Just blur the highlight on his haunch. -- IceSpring is here! 19:36, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - There isn't a highlight on his haunch (it's white so a highlight would be hard to see there), so I blurred the shading on it instead. --Ŧ∆ķმ♰§ƱოΣ 20:45, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

This is amazing! I see nothing wrong--NightshineÜ 20:52, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --Icy-chan says hello! 23:25, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

Um yes I'm just an apprentice so ignore me if you like but his chest looks a little gray to me. He's black and white. Or is that just the shading?Snowstorm Deputy of LightClan! 15:55, March 22, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Yes, it's shading:) Though, I knoticed it looked a little dark, so I lightened it a tad. --Ŧ∆ķმ♰§ƱოΣ 21:33, March 22, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, it looked fine on my laptop when I put cba on it...can you lighten the chest shading just a little bit more? --Icy-chan says hello! 01:54, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - It's alright, Icy:) Actually, the image didn't reupload correctly and the shading stayed as it was before, for some reason. Hopefully, the changes will show now (PS, I never got the chance to reserve an FE character, so now I'm sadD: Oh, well). --Ŧ∆ķმ♰§ƱოΣ 19:08, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Can you thin the shading on the chest a little; it's just a tad too thick and none of the white can really be seen. ✐SaNdY 16:55, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Thinned chest shading. --Ŧ∆ķმ♰§ƱოΣ 19:10, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

Gah, it won't reupload right again>.< I changed the file name (could someone delete the other one, please?). --Ŧ∆ķმ♰§ƱოΣ 19:17, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

Of course. Comments before approval? Bramble 05:20, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

Approved ✐SaNdY 08:36, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Cloudpaw (A) - Approved

File:Cloudpelt(A).png Ok what do you think? :)  Brambleclaw14 Talk 20:00, March 8, 2010 (UTC)

Awesome, Shruggy. (: Darken the shading, and ear pink. IcyInvading the fire 20:18, March 8, 2010 (UTC)

You either erased the eye bit or used the tom blank. Other than that and what Icestorm said this is wonderful.HaikageAsh's Talk 21:49, March 8, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good! But you've made the shading a bit too dark, run the dodge tool over the whole image a couple of times GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 06:31, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

Hold on Icestorm said to darken the shading and you said to lighten it? And for the ear pink I used the one from the her warrior charart. And yes I used the tom one xD I'll sort out the eye with the shading when I know if I should lighten it or darken it :)  Brambleclaw14 Talk 11:08, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

I think you should lighten it, darkening it would make her look even more gray than white GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 17:52, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Nightfall, it needs to be lighter. Also, even though the color you used is from another of a cat's images, the color may not work for your particular image because of shading or other reasons, so I think that the ear pink should be darkened just a tad bit, too. --Icy-chan says hello! 21:15, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

It looks a little too gray. Crystals and Pearls *glimmer* 20:15, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

I agree. Just run the dodge tool over the whole thing once or twice--NightshineÜ 05:03, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

I hate to tell you this, but Snowbird never made an appearance in any book as an apprentice. Somehow it kept being put up on her article. Sorry, and I did check all possible books that she would be an apprentice. Skyfeather 22:03, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

Huh, that's kind of strange. I could have sworn she was listed as an apprentice in one book. Well, there are tons of white cats. This could be Frostfur's apprentice image, or you could even make it Cloudpelt's apprentice image so you wouldn't have to change the blank. NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 05:15, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

Skyfeather: Thanks for telling me that :) I think I'll make this Cloudpaw. I'll rename it when I upload a new one.  Brambleclaw14 Talk 11:34, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

Does Willowpelt have an app image yet? This would be perfect... ✐SaNdY 23:00, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

Willowpelt's app image is up for approval.HaikageAsh's Talk 23:03, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

Oops. I am so stupid sometimes. I feel a little out of touch at the moment lol ✐SaNdY 17:21, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

There doesn't seem to be anything preventing approval on this image, besides the needed file name change.. Right color, shading's fine, it all seems fine. Comments before approval? I'll rename the image if and when it gets approved. Bramble 19:23, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

I still think the shading is a bit dark, he looks a little too gray to me. And to stay consistent with his warrior and deputy image, his eye color should probably be a lighter blue NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 19:31, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

OK, I've made the eye lighter useing his warrior charart, also I've made the plet lighter. :)  Brambleclaw14 Talk 09:15, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? ✐SaNdY 15:42, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

Approved ✐SaNdY 15:49, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Hawkfrost (A) - Approved

File:Hawkfrost (A).png Since my Spottedkit turned out to be fail, I withdrawn her and put this up. Construments? -- IceSpring is here! 23:08, March 22, 2010 (UTC)


Good job Ice, this is much better than my attempt at him. Just make the white underbelly more visible and blur the ear pink. Batteh 23:38, March 22, 2010 (UTC)!


Reuploaded. -gasps- Blue, that's not true! Your art is wayyy better than mine. -- IceSpring is here! 00:05, March 23, 2010 (UTC)


The stripes look a bit fuzzy/overblurred, they're quite a bit thinner and pointier on his warrior image... insaneular Talk 00:18, March 23, 2010 (UTC)


Just darken them some, and add some more NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 01:09, March 23, 2010 (UTC)


Reuploaded. Man, I got the song Replay stuck in my head. -sings it IceSpring is here! 01:32, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Add some more thinner stripes and add a few to his head. Darken the tail stripes--NightshineÜ 03:40, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

There is no way I can add more thinner stripes, seeing there is no room. Reuploaded. -- IceSpring is here! 22:53, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Comments? IceSpring is here! 22:43, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes seem a little bit too wide compared to the warrior and kit versions, try thinning them out some, and then darkening them just a tad bit. --Icy-chan says hello! 00:43, March 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. IceSpring is here! 00:12, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

The changes aren't showing, try uploading it under a new file name. --Icy-chan says hello! 12:49, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Stupid changes...-stabs them- IceSpring is here! 15:50, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

Can you make the white underbelly go out onto the body a tad further?--BramblepathBrightshadow is mine! 16:12, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. IceSpring is here! 17:12, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

Beautiful image, Ice. Comments before approval? --Bramble 22:39, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

Thank you, Bramble. :) IceSpring is here! 01:28, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Approved ✐SaNdY 15:52, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Owlwhisker (A) - Approved

File:Owlwhisker(A).pngHere is Owlwhisker as an apprentice! This is actually the 34th post if I am correct (cause I forgot what I counted XP).Comments? Concerns?Snowflight1Happy V-Day!! 19:27, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

He looks good, just darken his stripes a little and blur the shading on his back. insaneular Talk 21:28, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Darkened stripes and blurred back shading. What else?Snowflight1Happy V-Day!! 00:37, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten or brighten the ear pink because I can barely see it right now. Otherwise, this looks really good. --Icy-chan says hello! 17:59, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Lightened earpink. It may take a while to show up (hasn't shown up for me yet XP). Is it too light? Icy- Thanks! --Snowflight1Thank StarClan Newleaf is here! 01:35, March 8, 2010 (UTC)

Try making it a tad darker and make his tail stripes darker--NightshineÜ 06:44, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Darkened ear pink and tail stripes. might be a while to show up.--Snowflight1Thank StarClan Newleaf is here! 23:08, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit and blur it--NightshineÜ 05:02, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Darkened and blurred shading. What else?Snowflight1Thank StarClan Newleaf is here! 14:53, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

thinin the shading and blur it. And darken his tail stripes more, i can hardly see them. --IcyInvading the fire 22:15, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

How would I thin the shading?Snowflight1Thank StarClan Newleaf is here! 23:59, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

I think the shading is fine. Add a stripe to the far ear--NightshineÜ 00:01, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Is the ear stripe too faint?Snowflight1Thank StarClan Newleaf is here! 00:22, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, darken it some more. This looks great!--NightshineÜ 05:30, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Anything else?Snowflight1Thank StarClan Newleaf is here! 23:29, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

Very good job Snowfeather! :D I couldn't have done better myself! (Well, obviously...) Brightmoon The Sign of the Moon! 19:22, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the earpink a tiny bit and then this should be ready.HaikageAsh's Talk 16:34, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Is that all?--Snowflight1Thank StarClan Newleaf is here! 14:16, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? ✐SaNdY 15:48, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

None; Approved NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 23:02, March 29, 2010 (UTC)

Snipe- Approved

Snipe.rogueI hope he's OK... I don't own the book, just glaced trough at the store. I tried to make him look like a tortie, and not a rottie.Darkhallows 15:01, March 26, 2010 (UTC)

Make his nose more pinkish. This looks pretty awesome!--NightshineÜ 23:27, March 26, 2010 (UTC)

Done.Darkhallows 17:14, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --Icy-chan says hello! 17:22, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. --Icy-chan says hello! 02:11, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

Thornclaw (Ki) - Approved

Thornclaw.kit Sorry I haven't been on much in the past week, it's been pretty hectic. This image is epic fail in my opinion, but it's a better Y-shaped stripes than my Lionblaze apprentice image (which is really bad). I tried to make it like other kit tabby images, where the stripes get bigger and thicker as they get older, so that's why the stripes are thin, but if they need to be thick let me know and I'll try to make them thicker...Comments and suggestions? --Icy-chan says hello! 14:37, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good. Just darken the highlights a tiny bit.HaikageAsh's Talk 16:22, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Did I darken them enough? (Are the changes showing?) --Icy-chan says hello! 17:23, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

Nevermind my second question, it uploaded right, it just took a while for the changes to show up. --Icy-chan says hello! 23:00, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? ✐SaNdY 15:59, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. --Icy-chan says hello! 02:11, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

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