Talk: Charart/Accepted 5

Shrewpaw(SC) - Approved[]

[[File:Shrewpaw (SC).apprentice.png]]

I decided to colour the other Shrewpaw!! Comments? Sandy ^Talk! 12:28, 31 May 2009 (UTC)

Actually, hang on. The shading is very blotchy - I'm gonna do that now. Oops Sandy ^Talk! 12:32, 31 May 2009 (UTC)

Okay, done. Comments now? Sandy ^Talk! 12:46, 31 May 2009 (UTC)

I don't know... I think some of the shading is still rather blotchy. Maybe you could try blending it more? --Bramble ^{My Realm} 17:21, 31 May 2009 (UTC)

I agree with Bramble. The shading still looks blotchy.--Warrior^♥ 18:48, 31 May 2009 (UTC)

I can't tell whether it has black paws or not- perhaps you could lighten up the gray. Oh, and maybe use a slightly bright pink for the ear. -user: Firebird2102

The background also needs to be transparent :) --Bramble ^{My Realm} 13:46, 1 June 2009 (UTC)

Okay. I lightened the colour, redid the shading completely and the background should be showing up transparent Sandy ^Talk! 13:50, 1 June 2009 (UTC)

The gray part is much better. - user: Firebird2102

Any other comments? Sandy ^Talk! 18:02, 4 June 2009 (UTC)

(Also - Firebird, please sign with four ~s, thank you) Sandy ^Talk! 18:03, 4 June 2009 (UTC)

To be picky, blend the shading and the highlight ending more thoroughly, and blend the black fur with the gray fur some more. Then I think it'd be ready. --Bramble ^{My Realm} 18:05, 4 June 2009 (UTC)

Uploaded: Okay, I blended the highlight and shading area and also the blakc markings as much as I could without smudging the outline or making the transition too gradual (ie. making it a gradient grey...) Sandy ^Talk! 18:28, 4 June 2009 (UTC)

Very pretty. :) Anything else before approval, members? --Bramble ^{My Realm} 18:33, 4 June 2009 (UTC)

I'm not so sure. Where is the light coming from, Sandy? Depending on that, there are a few changes that neeed to be made... -- Dawnfeather

The light source is from the top left Sandy ^Talk! 13:19, 6 June 2009 (UTC)

Ther is no shading behind/under the back leg, and there is shading on the back. the forelegs look a little bit weird in their shading too. -- Dawnfeather 23:53, 6 June 2009 (UTC)

I reduced the shading behind the highlight right down and added shading on the hindleg area. I have no idea what to do with the forelegs though... Sandy ^Talk! 18:55, 7 June 2009 (UTC)

I think it looks better, but it still needs a bit darker shading on her (excuse my immaturity) butt. -- Dawnfeather 02:31, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded: any better now? Sandy ^Talk! 09:16, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

Yes this is very good now except maybe swap around the positions of the pixels in the ey a bit. If just swapping the white and black doesn't work well, fiddle around a bit. -- Dawnfeather 10:10, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

Okay, I changed around the eye. Sandy ^Talk! 12:58, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

Much better. I think that this is ready for approval. -- Dawnfeather 13:10, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

Approval after any comments? xD (just to break up the monotony a little) --Bramble ^{My Realm} 13:58, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

lol Bramble; you have been on a roll today! Sandy ^Talk! 14:15, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

Considering I've only edited the page 7 times, and you've edited it 17 times, :) there's a bit of a dispute on that.... --Bramble ^{My Realm} 14:33, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

That's only because I've made changes on images of my own, done some archiving, and approved an image but forgotten to change the heading to 'approved' and messed up somebody's image... Mainly due to my mistakes then... I've been a total scatterbrain today and I'm not going to edit the page any more today after this post! lol Sandy ^Talk! 14:39, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

No comments for improvement. Approved. --Bramble ^{My Realm} 14:41, 9 June 2009 (UTC)

Molepaw - Approved[]

[[File:Molepaw.png]]

I decided to colour Sorreltail's lost kit as I felt bad that he was rarely mentioned in the books. Sandy ^Talk! 14:03, 6 June 2009 (UTC)

wow.

The only fault I can find is taht the ear colour could be a bit better... -- Dawnfeather 23:57, 6 June 2009 (UTC)

Better in which way Dawn? And thank you :) Sandy ^Talk! 18:33, 7 June 2009 (UTC)

Don't worry about it. I don't remember. :D -- Dawnfeather 00:30, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

Okay then, anything else I can improve? Sandy ^Talk! 07:20, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

Needs some shading at the base of the tail still. Other than that, this is ready for approval. -- Dawnfeather 10:19, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

I added shading and also changed his eye to match Shrewpaw's Sandy ^Talk! 12:58, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? (wow, I'm on a roll today :) --Bramble ^{My Realm} 13:31, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

None; approved. --Bramble ^{My Realm} 14:55, 9 June 2009 (UTC)

Pebblepaw - Approved[]

I tried to make him mottled, and as the eye colour was not specified, I though that blue would suit his name. -- Dawnfeather 00:00, 7 June 2009 (UTC)

He looks a little... bumpy. I see what you are trying to do, but maybe blend him a little bit?-- Darkhallows ^Lair 08:34, 7 June 2009 (UTC)

Is this better? My attempts to make him look mottled make him look bumpy. -- Dawnfeather 09:30, 7 June 2009 (UTC)

I like him. He doesn't really look bumpy anymore, at least. Comments before approval(24 hours)? --Bramble ^{My Realm} 12:37, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

No comments; approved Sandy ^Talk! 11:56, 9 June 2009 (UTC)

Tawnyfur - Approved[]

[[File:Tawnyfur.warrior.png]] Something I threw together in 5 minutes. -shurg- I was bored.-- Darkhallows ^Lair 08:31, 7 June 2009 (UTC)

I like this, but for some reason i think there is something wrong with it which i cannot put my finger on. Good work! -- Dawnfeather 13:30, 7 June 2009 (UTC)

I like it, but I think the line of transition between light and dark is to hard and needs to be more gradual Sandy ^Talk! 18:32, 7 June 2009 (UTC)

Any better now?-- Darkhallows ^Lair 02:08, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

Yes. This too, needs approvaling i think. -- Dawnfeather 02:29, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --Bramble ^{My Realm} 12:42, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

Accept her, please!!! --MUMBLE785 17:35, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

No comments; Approved Sandy ^Talk! 11:59, 9 June 2009 (UTC)

Blossomkit (SC)- Approved[]

[[File:Blossomkit.png]] I hope this isn't too much. I have tons of files sitting in my computer and I want to do some new ones already xD. I don't really like doing kits, as I can never get the shading right. But I think she needed her own picture... poor kit.-- Darkhallows ^Lair 01:36, 1 June 2009 (UTC)

This is great! But shes a tortoiseshell....Sandwich 989 02:09, 1 June 2009 (UTC)

This is Blossomkit of ShadowClan, who's featured in Cats of the Clans. She's a white she-kit. You're probably thinking of Graystripe's daughter, Sandwich. On the image, it's very pretty, but I think all the shading is too focused on the bottom, and maybe you could add some more on the head/shoulder area and lessen the rest. --Bramble ^{My Realm} 02:20, 1 June 2009 (UTC)

Oh sorry! my bad. This is very pretty, sorry for the mixup!Sandwich 989 03:38, 1 June 2009 (UTC)

It's alright. I actually remember her most for the 'her pelt was as red as deathberries' line. I intensified the head shading, but I'm not sure if it's enough...?-- Darkhallows ^Lair 04:24, 1 June 2009 (UTC)

It's not often I find myself saying this, but I think there is a little too much shading on the legs. Try just putting shading down one side of her legs as if the light source is coming from a particular direction. Also, the background is green...on my computer at least. (I seriously don't know what is wrong with my cp... I'm fairly sure you would not have painted it green lol - just make sure it's transparent ;]) Sandy ^Talk! 13:33, 1 June 2009 (UTC)

It needs head shading, and the eyes look...weird to me.--Warrior^♥ 16:03, 1 June 2009 (UTC)

Played with the shading--4.185.210.69 22:05, 1 June 2009 (UTC)

I take it that was Darkhallows... --Mallinois ^{Herding Talk} 00:25, 2 June 2009 (UTC)

Yeah.. I'm on my other computer. Sorry.-- Darkhallows ^Lair 00:47, 2 June 2009 (UTC)

I think the problem with the eyes is that they're too bright. Darken them a little bit, and maybe decrease the saturation a bit, too. It looks good otherwise! --Goldencloud 22:05, 2 June 2009 (UTC)

Darkened them; are they better? Darkhallows ^Lair 07:35, 3 June 2009 (UTC)

Yes, they are much better now. --Goldencloud 15:19, 4 June 2009 (UTC)

I know she's a white cat, but it seems to me that there isn't enough shading. I figure that the light is coming from one side, which is why there is no shading there, but i think the you need to extend the shading on the other side a little bit more, and then maybe darken it at the very edge. I can sympathise with you though. White cats are hard to make. Overall, good work! -- Dawnfeather 07:55, 4 June 2009 (UTC)

Oh, and 'bout the death berries, it was her... *gulps* blood. Misty stream 16:33, 4 June 2009 (UTC)

This looks great. It just needs more shading on the head, and use shading to create a chin on the image like the approved kits. -Mallinois ^{Herding Talk} 13:56, 6 June 2009 (UTC)

Added a lot more shading. Gah, I should forget about doing kits.-- Darkhallows ^Lair 19:53, 6 June 2009 (UTC)

lol. It may seem hard at first but I actually find kits the easiest after a bit of practice. This is starting to look really nice. I think you need to add a tiny bit of shading on the top of her head though. (perhaps on teh right to fit in with the other shading) Sandy ^Talk! 20:19, 6 June 2009 (UTC)

Good job! I aagree with Sandy, just put in a little on the right of the head, and this should be ready. White cats and kits are both very hard, and you've got one that is both and it looks beautiful! :D -- Dawnfeather 23:55, 6 June 2009 (UTC)

Not all white cats are hard- Whitetail wasn't. I added more head shading.-- Darkhallows ^Lair 08:29, 7 June 2009 (UTC)

This is (in my opinion) ready for approval. -- Dawnfeather 12:35, 7 June 2009 (UTC)

This is almost ready - I just think her left ear needs to be shaded too because it looks odd that the light seems to be shining just on her ear and shadowy on the rest of that side. Sandy ^Talk! 18:49, 7 June 2009 (UTC)

Ear shading added.-- Darkhallows ^Lair 21:29, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

It's either not showing up or it needs more. -- Dawnfeather 10:41, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

TRy to bring the shading on the ear to the tip and blend out, and I think it'll look better because I see no shading on the ear.--Warrior^♥ 16:33, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

Oops! Is it there now?-- Darkhallows ^Lair 21:29, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

Looks great now!=)--Warrior♥^{Warrior's Palace} 21:48, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

I love it, it lookss perfect. -- Dawnfeather 06:41, 9 June 2009 (UTC)

Any more comments before approval in 24 hours? Sandy ^Talk! 12:16, 9 June 2009 (UTC)

No comments; approved Sandy ^Talk! 09:04, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

Cherrytail - approved[]

I just noticed that every charart I've done so far is a "tail". lol I didn't even realize that. Anyways! I wanted to try doing a tortoiseshell, I tried to make it look realistic. I haven't tried texture...ing any of these yet, but I've drawn cats before and tried to use that style as best I could. I was surprised no one had done Cherrytail yet, she's the best SkyClan cat in my opinion. I used the same shading layer I used for Hazeltail, so hopefully there won't be as many problems with that. This one has highlights, which I'm unsure about. ---- Goldencloud 17:50, 7 June 2009 (UTC)

EDIT1 I took off the texture, but there's still a little bit on there that just indicates the direction the fur is going. But I've seen this sort of texture before, so hopefully it won't be a problem! ---- Goldencloud 23:23, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

Wow. I adore this. Really great job! -- Darkhallows ^Lair 18:58, 7 June 2009 (UTC)

Thank you so much! *huggles* ---- Goldencloud 21:35, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

This really is beautiful. I take it back; you've just topped the best tortie so far (Sorry Mal!) I can see no problems... Sandy ^Talk! 19:58, 7 June 2009 (UTC)

Wow, thanks! There are some really good torties, are you sure about that? ---- Goldencloud 21:35, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

I tried doing this on Sunpaw, but my pc messed it up. How do you do it? Great! --Mallinois ^{Herding Talk} 22:10, 7 June 2009 (UTC)

I used a photoshop brush that was just a bunch of tiny dots and brushed it with ginger and black at a low opacity. I would make a tutorial, but I stink at making those. :) Thanks a bunch! ---- Goldencloud 21:35, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

woa...

-- Dawnfeather 00:14, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

lol THANK YOU! ---- Goldencloud 21:35, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

Wow. This really is beautiful, Goldencloud and I do like it... but it looks different from all the rest of our approved images. With the added texture, it's a different style then all the others and it's set apart. I'm really trying to say this in a polite way... I don't know, this is just my opinion, that the style is too different. If others' opinions override mine then we can accept it. --Bramble ^{My Realm} 12:36, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

Thank you, Bramble! *glomp* I guess I can sort of understand that...although there are some pretty contrasting styles among the character arts as it is. I'm not trying to argue or anything, I'm just pointing that out. :) Do you think if I took the texture off and reuploaded it would be more acceptable? ---- Goldencloud 21:35, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

Actually, i have to agree with Bramble. Please take no offense as this is seriously the best image i have ever seen. It just isn't in the same style, and many of the approved images couldn't be done in this style even if we tried. -- Dawnfeather 12:44, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

Well, I guess that would sort of be like a compliment. ---- Goldencloud 21:35, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

As much as I hate to say it I have to admit Bramble is probably right. This is such a beautiful image though and it seems harsh to say that it's too good... :( Sandy ^Talk! 13:00, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

I suppose being declined because it's "too good" (haha as if) is better than being declined because it's horrible. ---- Goldencloud 21:35, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

I'm really really sorry, Goldencloud. ;_;. I just don't think it will work like this. --Bramble ^{My Realm} 14:35, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

In that case, tell me how I could make it work. ---- Goldencloud 21:52, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

OMG, SHE HAS FUR!!! I was wanting to do this with my images, too, but I have no idea how... As for the debate: I think we should accept her because all of the cats are in different "styles", and it's how you can tell that different people do different images. This is the best image we have ever seen, and you guys are gonna stoop so low as to not accept the maine coon just because of all of the sphinxes weve made? Sometimes you guys don't make very much sense to me... --MUMBLE785 17:33, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

lol OMG I KNOW, RIGHT? I agree with you on the whole "styles" thing. Looking at all of the approved images, I can see a definite contrast in styles, I can even tell that two different cats had the same artist. I'm not trying to push this to be approved or anything, I'm just debating the "style" issue. ---- Goldencloud 21:35, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

I think this is wonderful, but it looks unnatural, sort of. Other images are in different styles, and I've seen real tortoiseshells. I've seen ones that look like Sunpaw, and I actually know one that looks like Tawnypelt, just brown and black. I don't think we are stooping low, Mumble, but we need to keep style consistent. This may not be the best image we have ever seen, Just to point that out. She looks wonderful, but do tortoisheshells really look like this? She looks a little like a tiger to me... --Mallinois ^{Herding Talk} 18:47, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

I actually used a tortoiseshell reference when I drew this. Just like me, I can't find it right now to show you. But I have seen a cat that looks like this! I think I may know why it looks unnatural. The highlight layer is set to color dodge, which brightens the gingerish/orange color. I can try setting it to something more subtle and see what it looks like. She may look like a tiger because of the black pattern, and I threw a few tabby stripes in there. Thanks! ---- Goldencloud 21:35, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

Try taking off the fur texture, Goldie. We'll see what it looks like then. I really hope this can be approved, as it's beautiful. --Bramble ^{My Realm} 22:01, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

Done! ---- Goldencloud 23:23, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

That makes it a lot better. Goldencloud, you're really good at this! Any more comments until approval? 24 hours time. --Mallinois ^{Herding Talk} 00:01, 9 June 2009 (UTC)

Thanks! Actually, this is a record. My other pixels had loads of problems! -- Goldencloud 01:17, 9 June 2009 (UTC)

No comments; approved Sandy ^Talk! 09:14, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

Foxpaw - Approved[]

A few have already been posted since i came,, so I hope you like this one. :) -- Dawnfeather 00:33, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

The shading on his leg looks pink...-- Darkhallows ^Lair 02:20, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

I made it more of the other color. What else can i do? -- Dawnfeather 02:29, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

On the hind leg curve two of the stripes look blurry and sort of scratchy. Make them more distinct, just not too much. --Bramble ^{My Realm} 14:11, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

Is this better? -- Dawnfeather 06:46, 9 June 2009 (UTC)

I still think his hind leg looks a tad pink, but it's not too bad. Everything else looks perfect! -- Goldencloud 17:44, 9 June 2009 (UTC)

REUPLOADED. Is this better? -- Dawnfeather 06:53, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

I've looked closely and I really can't see any pink anymore, so I think this is ready. Comments before approval? --Bramble ^{My Realm} 16:19, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

None. Approved Sandy ^Talk! 15:05, 11 June 2009 (UTC)

Owlpaw - Approved[]

Ther is only one excuse for no noticing my current theme - living undr a rock. -- Dawnfeather 12:36, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

Either that, or being blind. :) I like him, but on his page it says his eyes are yellow, and these are green. I can try and check that if you want, I'm not sure if that's verifiable. --Bramble ^{My Realm} 13:14, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

I confess that i made him from the description in the Sunrise allgiances, which says nothing about eye colour, so i went with green randomly. I have changed it now. :P -- Dawnfeather 06:48, 9 June 2009 (UTC)

This is really good Dawn :) Sandy ^Talk! 09:26, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

Is there anything else I can do? -- Dawnfeather 13:33, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

Don't think so. :) Any comments before approval? --Bramble ^{My Realm} 15:30, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

None; Approved Sandy ^Talk! 15:07, 11 June 2009 (UTC)

Millie - Approved[]

She became a warrior, so I thought i should make her. I wasn't sure about the tabby markings, but i may end up re-doing them anyway. PLease post what you think. -- Dawnfeather 12:31, 9 June 2009 (UTC)

I love the stripes Dawn. She looks great! I think she could use a little more belly shading though.-- Darkhallows ^Lair 19:29, 9 June 2009 (UTC)

I LOVE HER, but I have to agree with dawn. Stretch the between-the-front-and-back-legs shding towards the back a little bit. Other than that, she looks almost EXACTLY like Millie!!! --MUMBLE785 19:57, 9 June 2009 (UTC)

DO NOT REDO THE TABBY MARKINGS. They look great! Personally, I prefer this style of tabby markings over the other kind. Nothing against any of those tabbies, though, they still look good. I love her eye color. -- Goldencloud 22:48, 9 June 2009 (UTC)

REUPLOADED. I added in some more shading. If you liek these markings, you'll like Tigerclaw's better. They are the same style, but his are a bit neater. Speaking of Tigerclaw -- is he llong haired or short haired. -- Dawnfeather 22:56, 9 June 2009 (UTC)

This looks great! I love the realistic marble-tabby effect you've made here. :) Great work Sandy ^Talk! 11:25, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

Wow, this is cool. I really like it, Dawn. Comments before approval? --Bramble ^{My Realm} 16:14, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

I think its beautiful. Its perfect.-- ♪Shimmer^♫ 00:02, 11 June 2009 (UTC)

None; approved Sandy ^Talk! 15:10, 11 June 2009 (UTC)

Swallowtail - Approved[]

[[File:Swallowtail.png]]

I wanted to test out Dawnfeather's beautiful blanks, so I tried my hand at Swallowtail, a RiverClan elder. I'm not sure if the highlights look good, so please critique! --Bramble ^{My Realm} 22:45, 8 June 2009 (UTC)

Actually Bramble, you're your usual amazing self. I love how you did the tabby markings. I was hoping that those would be do-able with the blanks! Again, this is really good. -- Dawnfeather 06:39, 9 June 2009 (UTC)

Beautiful, but Swallowtail has green eyes. --Mallinois ^{Herding Talk} 16:02, 9 June 2009 (UTC)

I hope nobody minds me commenting. The only thing is that the colors are very dark - or, atleast, on my computer. I honestly though she was black until I increased the brightness on my computer screen. Mosswisker&Stealthfire 19:20, 9 June 2009 (UTC)

It might be your computer, becuase i can tell that shes brown. The pictures very good. Sandwich 989 22:12, 9 June 2009 (UTC)

This is definitely brown. It's really beautiful Bramble. You just need to change the eye colour to green as Mal said and it'll be reday in my opinion. Sandy ^Talk! 11:26, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

Changed the eye color to green. It even looks prettier to me with that color. :) Anything else? --Bramble ^{My Realm} 15:32, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

Nope, this is ready. (for approavl) -- Dawnfeather 08:10, 11 June 2009 (UTC)

Any more comments before approval? Sandy ^Talk! 10:05, 11 June 2009 (UTC)

None; Approved Sandy ^Talk! 08:31, 12 June 2009 (UTC)

Medicine cat blanks - Approved[]

[[File:MedcatMaleShort.png]][[File:MedcatMaleLong.png]]

I did as you asked, Bramble, and made Medicine cat blanks of all of them, but i didn't do the apprentices as someone (Sorry, i forgot to check!) has already started on some, and I think that they are better than mine. I didn't uploaded them onto the actual page as i don't know how to put them in there.

[[File:Leafpool2.png]]

I also added this picture of Leafpool to prove that they work, although the blanks by themselves look a bit weird. -- Dawnfeather 06:40, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

Love the idea, and your Leafpool is great, but could you make the herbs look a little more like herbs? Maybe add leaves of something? -Sparrowwing talk

They are leaves aren't they? I thought they were holding a kind of bundle of a few leaves... Sandy ^Talk! 12:09, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

So... What do I do? If anything? -- Dawnfeather 13:32, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

Personally I like them as they are; simple, easy to use, and clear to see what they are. Just my opinion Sandy ^Talk! 14:34, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

I agree with Sandy. I can't see anything that can be improved, really. Awesome work! You're really the blank-making queen, Dawn. :) --Bramble ^{My Realm} 15:53, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

I don't see very much stuff that she did here. All she did was put some herbs in the warrior blanks' mouths. You guys got mad at me for editing the warrior blanks once. --MUMBLE785 17:00, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

That was probably because we didn't yet have permission to edit the lineart. Now we do, so that's why Dawn has put herbs in their mouths. And it's harder than it looks to do that, I already tried. --Bramble ^{My Realm} 17:16, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

I agree with Mumble and Bramble. I'd say these are ready to go! All she did was add leaves to their mouths, but she gave us medicine cat blanks! This isn't really important right now, since you aren't actually posting Leafpool yet, but she has amber eyes. ;) -- Goldencloud 18:22, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

I'm glad you like them, but i refuse to take much credit for them. Sandstar of Warriors wish did all the work, really. -- Dawnfeather 22:54, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

So humble, Dawn. :) Comments before approval, members? --Bramble ^{My Realm} 15:37, 11 June 2009 (UTC)

I think they're perfect! Smokeberry 01:38, 12 June 2009 (UTC)

No comments; Approved. Thank you Dawn for providing us with Medicine Cat Blanks! Sandy ^Talk! 08:37, 12 June 2009 (UTC)

ps. Dawn, please put Leafpool up for approval seperately when the page has died down a bit! Sandy ^Talk! 09:13, 12 June 2009 (UTC)

Toadkit (TC) - For Approval[]

I love his cheeky attitude and persistence so I wanted to colour Toadkit :) Comments? Sandy ^Talk! 12:33, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

If it can be done can you move the black patch on his left side farther down? For some reason it looks odd at this angle. Other than that I love his patches and I can almost see the attitude. :) --Bramble ^{My Realm} 15:59, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

He looks great, like he's saying "Bring it on world." xD--Warrior♥^{Warrior's Palace} 17:38, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

I can just hear him saying, "Yeah, bring it on!" The only problem I see is what Bramble already pointed out. Great job! -- Goldencloud 18:43, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

Aw he's great Sandy!-- Darkhallows ^Lair 08:35, 11 June 2009 (UTC)

Better? I moved it down a few pixels to take it off his chin ;) Sandy ^Talk! 10:26, 11 June 2009 (UTC)

It's like you plucked the picture from my mind. Yep, much better. Comments before approval, members? --Bramble ^{My Realm} 15:49, 11 June 2009 (UTC)

none. Approved and added to the page. --Mallinois ^{Herding Talk} 17:57, 12 June 2009 (UTC)

Hawkfrost- Approved[]

Well...Here is the first character art that I've made. What say you? Smokeberry 21:15, 25 May 2009 (UTC)

It's really good for a first image! I just think there are 3 things you could improve on: 1.) Make the eye have a pupil. It looks kinda like it doesn't. 2.) Make the tabby making thinner, blend them a little more, and make them jagged Ys. Use Squirrelflight as an example. 3.) Make the shading a tad bit darker. Other than that, It looks awesome!

Thanks! I'll fix that right away. Smokeberry 21:37, 25 May 2009 (UTC)

The image has been changed...Is it better now? Smokeberry 21:57, 25 May 2009 (UTC)

Smokeberry, you didn't read the notice:One image at a time, so you'll have to wait for Jayfeather and Cinderfur, who by the way don't have their blanks yet. On this one, the tabby markings are dots and lines. Try using the jagged lines like Lionblaze, Squirrelflight, Dustpelt, and Brownpaw, or use the wavy ones like Heathertail --Mallinois ^{Talk • Contribs} 00:06, 26 May 2009 (UTC)

Mallinois is right Smokeberry. Also, the ear is way too pink - that would need to be sorted as well. Sandy ^Talk! 08:33, 26 May 2009 (UTC)

A couple of things: There is no shading that I can see. It needs some. Look on the Approved images to see how to do that; The tabby markings need to look...realistic. Looks at some Approved tabbies for examples; Nothing's blended. Use smudge tool for that. --Warrior^♥ 01:59, 27 May 2009 (UTC)

To add to that, Hawkfrost also has a white underbelly. --Bramble ^{My Realm} 17:40, 27 May 2009 (UTC)

I have fixed it. In my opinion the color is too dark, but then he is evil. Anything else? Smokeberry 23:38, 27 May 2009 (UTC)

I like it dark, because it fit's his personality. I think he still needs more shading though. -- Dawnfeather 11:10, 28 May 2009 (UTC)

Yes. Just add more shading on the back and the chest, and perhaps on the curve of the leg. I really like this. --Bramble ^{My Realm} 16:31, 28 May 2009 (UTC)

I really like the tabby markings now and think it looks good. I have something to add though - on my computer it is showing up on a white background not transparent and there is a strange black line at the top; is this just me or does it need to be made transparent? Sandy ^Talk! 16:34, 28 May 2009 (UTC)

Add more shadong, and take away the triangle-ness of the tabby markings, plus the ear is a little dark and there's a black line at the top. Plus, get rid of the markings int he middle of the body. --Mallinois ^{Talk • Contribs} 20:41, 28 May 2009 (UTC)

Lemme just remove the line, and this will be done. G B 57 02:53, 29 May 2009 (UTC)

There. Approved. G B 57 02:56, 29 May 2009 (UTC)

What the...? Can someone fix this line before it's posted? Thanks. G B 57 02:58, 29 May 2009 (UTC)

GB, aer you listening? Quite a fwe of us think that there should be some more shading before it is approved. -- Dawnfeather 06:08, 29 May 2009 (UTC)

Wait, GB. Several people still have comments for improvement, and after those have been made the image can be approved. Don't approve the image just because it looks finished to you. Smokeberry, this can definitely be approved soon, just add more shading on the places mentioned above and tweak the markings a little like Mallinois suggested. I can turn it transparent for you if need by after changes have been made. --Bramble ^{My Realm} 13:52, 29 May 2009 (UTC)

Very nice! But I think the ear needs to be blended a bit more.--Warrior^♥ 14:23, 29 May 2009 (UTC)

Actually, I think the ear is a little too dark... you can hardly see it over the dark pelt colour. Sandy ^Talk! 19:26, 29 May 2009 (UTC)

He looks awesome. ^-^ --MUMBLE785 22:43, 29 May 2009 (UTC)

Sorry, didn't know there was still criticism. G B 57 23:09, 29 May 2009 (UTC)

No problem, buddy. :) It was easily fixed. --Bramble ^{My Realm} 23:57, 29 May 2009 (UTC)

GB, don't feel bad. As you said, everyone makes mistakes, and this one doesn't matter, as it was easily and effortlessy fixed. I do agree that this is SO CLOSE to being ready for approval though. :D -- Dawnfeather 07:46, 30 May 2009 (UTC)

Is this better? Smokeberry 00:49, 2 June 2009 (UTC)

Beautiful. The ear pink still needs to be lighter, as I think it looks too red at the moment, and I think Sandy mentioned that, too. Other than that, this is extremely close to being ready for approval. --Bramble ^{My Realm} 17:47, 2 June 2009 (UTC)

Also there is some blurry grey stuff outside the outline on his chest. That needs to be fixed Sandy ^Talk! 18:10, 2 June 2009 (UTC)

His ear and the blurry spot has been finished. Anything else? Smokeberry 22:03, 2 June 2009 (UTC)

Yes, that line's back. G B 57 22:54, 3 June 2009 (UTC)

~~Its PERFECT, I LOVE the tabby stripes! Keep it that way, the tabby stripes like on squirrelflight and other tabbies, are pretty ugly(sorry D:) Dictation 23:12, 3 June 2009 (UTC)~~ Attacks multiple artwork. User may not continue editing Project Character Art until July 15th. Slash any content posted by this user until then. G B 57 23:38, 3 June 2009 (UTC)

Augh! Curse that line! I'll have to remove it. Anything else? Smokeberry 23:41, 3 June 2009 (UTC)

This is looking really good now; once you've removed the line I think this will be ready for approval Sandy ^Talk! 17:59, 4 June 2009 (UTC)

Looks amazing! If it were me, I would add some more tabby stripes, but it looks great even without them. --Goldencloud 22:51, 4 June 2009 (UTC)

The outlines blurred in several places. It is quite pretty otherwise.-- Darkhallows ^Lair 08:24, 5 June 2009 (UTC)

The outline is a little blurred, and the marking on the tail could be toned down quite a bit... Otherwise, you have some great looking artwork. --Mallinois ^{Herding Talk} 12:11, 5 June 2009 (UTC)

I love him, I truely do, but isn't hawkfrost a longhaired cat? In his pic in cats of the clans he's a longhaired tom... --MUMBLE785 19:46, 9 June 2009 (UTC)

We don't really pay attention to things in the pictures unless they've been confirmed by Erin Hunter. It never says he's longhaired in the books, I don't think. Just a dark tabby with ice blue eyes and a white underbelly. --Bramble ^{My Realm} 16:08, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

HE HAS BEEN FINISHED. Or so I say. Anything else?

I hope not, as he's great and he should be approved. :) Though that's up to our members, not me. Comments before approval? --Bramble ^{My Realm} 03:09, 12 June 2009 (UTC)

None;approved Sandy ^Talk! 12:35, 13 June 2009 (UTC)

Minnowpaw - Approved[]

Not used to apprentices ... is she alright?-- Darkhallows ^Lair 08:54, 9 June 2009 (UTC)

I thought that she was dark gray. -- Dawnfeather 10:09, 9 June 2009 (UTC)

It said black and white on her page...-- Darkhallows ^Lair 19:30, 9 June 2009 (UTC)

It said black, or possibly gray and white. Personally, i always imagined her as black, but that is just my personal opinion. -- Dawnfeather 06:50, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

The color is sort of black... Besides color, any comments on the actual image? Anyone?-- Darkhallows ^Lair 06:04, 11 June 2009 (UTC)

I think she needs some more shading on her back, and her eyes look odd, I don't think I see a pupil really in there, it's just amber colored. Try adding in a black pixel right next to the white pixel. --Bramble ^{My Realm} 15:55, 11 June 2009 (UTC)

(M) - The ear pink is almost non-existant. Try increasing the size of it. Mosswisker&Stealthfire 22:53, 11 June 2009 (UTC

Added back shading, changed the eye and ear. Anything else?-- Darkhallows ^Lair 23:20, 11 June 2009 (UTC)

It looks great Darkhallows and I can't see anything wrong. Any more comments before approval in 24 hours? Sandy ^Talk! 08:36, 12 June 2009 (UTC)

None; approved. If her colour is later confirmed to be different to shown here then she can be redone :) Sandy ^Talk! 12:38, 13 June 2009 (UTC)

Eaglekit - Approved[]

Meh, I started him, why quit? I'll make the background transparent (when I figure out how), but I need advice on highlights. G B 57 22:36, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

He looks alright! Only thing I suggest is maybe darkening the shading. Though I don't know if I can help with the whole transparency thing or not. What editing program do you use? -- Goldencloud 23:08, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

GIMP. G B 57 23:14, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

Fiddlesticks, I use Photoshop. If you want, I could make it transparent for you, then e-mail it to you to re-upload. Or if you don't want to do all that just ask someone else, I guess. Sorry! -- Goldencloud 23:19, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

(M) - While it may mess up your image slightly, I first make my images .GIF . Then I go to www.gifworks.com and make the background transparent from there. But that's only one way; I'm sure there are better ways of doing it. Mosswisker&Stealthfire 00:55, 11 June 2009 (UTC)

I think that if the shading was any darker, it wouldn't look nice. But I made the background transparent. G B 57 03:05, 11 June 2009 (UTC)

Perhaps, but try it anyway. If it doesn't look nice you can always lighten it again. As it is now, it's hardly visible. -- Goldencloud 03:19, 11 June 2009 (UTC)

I see it fine. Anybody else have trouble seeing the shading? G B 57 03:46, 11 June 2009 (UTC)

U'm with Golden cloud. The shading needs to extend further and be darker. -- Dawnfeather 06:08, 11 June 2009 (UTC)

Better? G B 57 06:36, 11 June 2009 (UTC)

It needs to be spread out more. Instead of being dark, light. It needs to be dark, darkish, midway, lightish, light. It needs to be spread out further as well. -- Dawnfeather 08:09, 11 June 2009 (UTC)

I like the colour you've chosen but you need to make the shading thicker and kind of blur it out into the middle of the pelt more (if that makes sense). I would forget alltogether about highlights though... Sandy ^Talk! 10:16, 11 June 2009 (UTC)

Better? G B 57 16:52, 11 June 2009 (UTC)

24 hours starting now. Any criticism needs to be posted during this time. G B 57 01:23, 12 June 2009 (UTC)

His neck shading; it's straight and needs to be curved down a little to make it look like there's a chin. (sorry didn't post earlier, had an ortho) That's all, I think. --Bramble ^{My Realm} 03:05, 12 June 2009 (UTC)

I curved it as best as I could. I hope it looks good. G B 57 03:48, 12 June 2009 (UTC)

It's better. Comments before approval? --Bramble ^{My Realm} 21:41, 12 June 2009 (UTC)

None;approved Sandy ^Talk! 12:41, 13 June 2009 (UTC)

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