Fritz (RP) (KP) Approved

File:Fritz1 KP.png This is my first Kittypet up. I didn't know what colour his eyes were so I took a lucky guess and went with blue. So how is it? ~ Moonpelt~It’s track season~ 13:27, March 26, 2010 (UTC)

Wow, Moonpelt! This is really good! Blur the ear pink some though NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 18:22, March 26, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Night. You should blur the ear pink more and maybe blur the patches more. But other than that, it's really good! ɆƆHØĦƏ@ƦƮ 21:38, March 26, 2010 (UTC)

I love it! The collar is awesome! Make the tag a tad more golden and blur the patches like Echoheart said. Maybe (if you want) you can make the nose a dark gray. I think it always looks cool with a gray cat--NightshineÜ 23:24, March 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks!!! Sorry about how many images are there it wouldn't use this image! LOL. I blured patches a bit more, blurred ear pink, and darkend the tag and the nose. So anything else? Moonpelt~It’s track season~ 01:00, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

I meant to lighten the tag not darken it :D. Darken the back shading a bit more--NightshineÜ 01:24, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ok lightend the the tag and darkend the back shading ( it's hard to see the white shading). Anything else??? Moonpelt~It’s track season~ 01:30, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the face shading a bit more--NightshineÜ 01:32, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

Ruploaded Darkend face shading. Antything else???~ Moonpelt~It’s track season~ 01:38, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

Looks great to me!--NightshineÜ 21:36, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks! Moonpelt 21:50, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

This is lovely, Moon. Darken the face shading a tad more, and blur the patches. :) IceSpring is here! 01:26, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks!!! Darkend the face shading a tad more and blured patches~ Anything else??? Moonpelt 21:58, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Not that I can see. Comments before approval? --Icy-chan says hello! 13:25, March 29, 2010 (UTC)

Well ok thats wierd it may have been the third one down on the image... I don't know. LOL Thankz!!! Moonpelt 13:29, March 29, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. --Icy-chan says hello! 16:13, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

Snowtuft (W) - Approved

Snowtuft.warrior My first white cat, if you can believe it, after how long I've been in PCA. Constructments? insaneular Talk 20:37, March 26, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good. Just lighten the shading some.HaikageAsh's Talk 22:09, March 26, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Insane... Didn't see you have this reserved... I did a Ctrl-F and searched, but didn't find. This is much better than the failure I made. You just need to lighten the shading. Great job on 1st white cat! :D Brightmoon Night Whispers,and Sign of the Moon! 22:12, March 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded It's fine Brightflight, I know it's easy to miss things :) I lightened the shading, it is good, or too light? insaneular Talk 15:53, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

I think the shading's good and that the image is good too! But than again I'm not very good at finding things! :) ɆƆHØĦƏ@ƦƮ 19:30, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

I actually dont think the changes showed. If they did can you lighten the shading a tiny bit more. Also the earpink is a tad purpleish.HaikageAsh's Talk 19:35, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I changed the earpink and lightened the shading even more... is it better now? To me it looks barely visible, but maybe that's my computer screen. insaneular Talk 13:12, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

I can see it, It just needs to be blurred.HaikageAsh's Talk 17:21, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded any better? It always looks different after I upload it then when I'm editing it... insaneular Talk 01:04, March 29, 2010 (UTC)

Mine do that sometimes, too. Image-wise, this looks great. Comments before approval? --Icy-chan says hello! 13:27, March 29, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. --Icy-chan says hello! 16:13, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

Cherrykit (Ki) - Approved

File:Cherrykit (OTS).pngYay! Comments? ☼ Misty ☼Here comes the summer... 16:20, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

This is awesome! All I can see is that there's some blurred lineart around the paws that needs erased. --Icy-chan says hello! 17:02, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good. Blur the shading. Also make the Ear Pink more visible. I imagined her longhaired, what does everyone else think? :) FawnstormThe Dark Forest are rising... 17:39, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

Well, I imagine her short-haired. Darken the ear pink a bit--NightshineÜ 19:29, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

Unless there's something specific that says she's longhaired then leave her shorthaired in my opinion. ✐SaNdY 19:36, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

I think that Cherrykit is shorthaired and Molekit is longhaired. --Icy-chan says hello! 19:40, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

I don't think the hair length matters a lot, but I picture 'ginger' as more orangey-brownish, this looks a bit too golden to me. But I suppose that's also a matter of opinion... insaneular Talk 22:54, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

By making the earpink visible do you mean you want me to darken it or lighten it? It came with the lineart blurred on the blank - maybe I'll erase it on the blanks as well if I get time :) I'll remove the blurry lineart. And yeah, it doesn't really matter what the length of her fur is ;D I see what you mean about the pelt colour Insane... should I change it? What does everyone else think? ☼ Misty ☼Here comes the summer... 09:52, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

I personally like this image exactly the colour it is, ear pink and all... but that's just me. ✐SaNdY 10:20, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

She looks really bright for a ginger cat, can your darken her? Lovely image, Misty. :) -- IceSpring is here! 15:18, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Um... what do I do? Sandy is saying to keep the colour the same and Ice and Insane are saying to darken it... ☼ Misty ☼Here comes the summer... 09:10, March 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Sorry, but seeing as the majority want it darkened I've darkened it! I also removed blurry lineart. ☼ Misty ☼Here comes the summer... 09:18, March 29, 2010 (UTC)

This looks really good, I think darkening it was just what it needed. Comments before approval? --Icy-chan says hello! 13:33, March 29, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. --Icy-chan says hello! 16:13, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

Mousefur (A) - Approved

File:Mousefur apprentice.pngEvanphoto 22:26, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

This is good! Just brighten the highlight on her haunch and blur the shading. Also, blur the ear pink a tad. --IcyInvading the fire 23:09, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Evanphoto 00:18, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

Anything else? Evanphoto 22:52, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink a bit and blur the shading some more--NightshineÜ 05:25, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Evanphoto 12:47, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

I think you blurred the ear pink to much because I can't see any or at least a little bit~ MoonpeltStarClan will win.... 17:55, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Evanphoto 23:56, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

I still can't see the earpink. Darken it some.HaikageAsh's Talk 23:00, March 22, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Evanphoto 11:05, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink more--NightshineÜ 19:43, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Anything else? Evanphoto 22:01, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 01:52, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

I still cant really see the earpink.HaikageAsh's Talk 16:50, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

It must be your computer, cause I can see it. Evanphoto 12:51, March 29, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink's visible. I can see it really well. Might be your computer, or the amount of light on the image OR the angle you look at it. X3 BirchyI am a warrior at heart... 15:28, March 29, 2010 (UTC)

I can see it , it just looks really faded. Maybe it is my computer.HaikageAsh's Talk 19:32, March 29, 2010 (UTC)

It looks good to me and looks as visible as her elder image ear pink. ✐SaNdY 17:55, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

I think I'm going to go ahead and approve this. NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 22:01, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

Boulder (W) - Approved


This would be like, my 4th or 3rd charart trying to be approved. Anyways, you can take down my other charart that's up. This is Boulder. I really want to do Raggedstar as deputy, can I do him as well as this one? Please... ♣Silverthistle 21:59, March 22, 2010 (UTC)

I love this, Silverthistle! :D Just blur the shading, and brighten the highlight on his haunch. Once again, this is amazing! -- IceSpring is here! 22:06, March 22, 2010 (UTC)

The shading needs to be darkened a bit along with Ice said. To answer your question (or atleast what I think you meant) no. You can't put Raggedpelt up until this is approved. You can still make the image though.HaikageAsh's Talk 22:58, March 22, 2010 (UTC)

As long as it's not reserved, you can do Raggedstar's deputy image, but you can't put it up for approval until this image is approved. --Icy-chan says hello! 23:41, March 22, 2010 (UTC)

So if I don't want to do this image anymore, which I don't, I CAN put Raggedstars' deputy image up? ♣Silverthistle 02:58, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, but it won't take long to get this approved. And you still have Raggedstar as a deputy reserved for 2 weeks. When this limit runs out, you can just preserve him agin. I reckon you should keep up this one, it's really good. Don't give up *Places tail on Silverthistle's shoulder*. Image wise: Do what Ice and Ash said and blur the Ear Pink a but more. ;) FawnstormThe Dark Forest are rising... 12:11, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fine... *tears stream down whiskers* Fawnstorm, that is touching... ♣Silverthistle 22:44, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

Taking over this image due to user withdrawal and the fact that it is very near approval. The tail stripes are fixed. --Bramble 22:36, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

There's blurred lineart and stripes on the lineart in various places. --Icy-chan says hello! 22:55, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

Fixed. Bramble 22:05, March 29, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? ✐SaNdY 17:56, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

None; Approved NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 20:01, March 31, 2010 (UTC)

Willowshine(Ki) - Approved

File:Willowshine (Kit).png

Well, do you like it??--≈៛₪¥ -§₰₪₥≈ 02:59, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Looks great! Make the stripes a little lighter. Lighten the ear pink a bit and darken the nose--NightshineÜ 03:04, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded--≈៛₪¥ -§₰₪₥≈ 03:19, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? ✐SaNdY 08:56, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink is a bit low down the ears ;D ☼ Misty ☼Here comes the summer... 18:26, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink's fine to me. :) BirchyI am a warrior at heart... 19:55, March 29, 2010 (UTC)

fixed it anyway--≈៛₪¥ -§₰₪₥≈ 07:56, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? This is really good Ivy! NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 08:38, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

None; Approved NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 20:05, March 31, 2010 (UTC)

Henry - Approved


Several people have attempted to do him and either given up, or it's been declined. He was one of the first nine characters that we met first met in the series, so I felt I'd better get him done. Constructments? --Bramble 23:25, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

maybe darken the shadin at the waist?Pebble2Pineow 23:44, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

This looks really good, Bramble. The only thing I can see is that the left ear (ear on our right) doesn't need ear pink. --Icy-chan says hello! 13:41, March 29, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe add a stripe on the end of teh tail and the hind foot we can see. :) BirchyI am a warrior at heart... 19:59, March 29, 2010 (UTC)

All changes have been made. On the ear; fail on my part, you'd think I'd know that by now.. --Bramble 21:26, March 29, 2010 (UTC)

Lol, that's okay. :) Image-wise, this looks ready. Comments before approval? --Icy-chan says hello! 16:26, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

I can see the changes on the thumbnail version when I click it but not here. Is it just me?HaikageAsh's Talk 19:30, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

No, its not just you. I can't see the changes either. ☯Sgt. Pepper's☯Lonely Hearts Club Band 19:39, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

The changes are up. Do we continue CBA or start over?HaikageAsh's Talk 23:31, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

Continue; the changes were up on my computer when I put CBA on the image... --Icy-chan says hello! 01:19, March 31, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. --Icethroat I'm a gullible genious. 02:25, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Millie (Q) - Approved

File:MQe.pngHope this is alright. :) I'm new, so how things work are still a little confusing for me - if I made a mistake, please tell me. Crows 01:01, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good! Just blur the stripes more. IceSpring is here! 01:06, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

This is amazing! Get rid of the ear pink on her right ear. I think the stripes are blurred enough--NightshineÜ 01:13, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

Thank you! I removed the ear pink, but I'll wait for more comments before blurring the stripes. :) Crows 01:21, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

I say just blur them around the edges as if look closely you see they look at bit hard.--♪Shimmerpool♫ 01:56, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

Just a tiny bit though. Also blur the ear pink and make it look more like the colour of her warrior charart ear pink--NightshineÜ 02:00, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

Changed and blurred the ear pink and slightly blurred the stripes (is that enough?)... Crows 02:15, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the nose colour just a bit. The stripes look perfect :3--NightshineÜ 02:33, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks! (: I lightened the nose color slightly and made it gray-pink, but I don't know if it's noticable... Also, I changed the tail stripes, are they okay? Crows 02:49, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm...the lineart around the nose isn't there. Could you fix it? The tail look good :)--NightshineÜ 02:56, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

Whoops. o_o Fixed the nose.. Crows 03:06, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

WOW. For a tom stealer, she looks amazing! XD Okay, the stripes on the hind leg seem a bit thicker than the ones on the front legs. Add one or two more stripes to the hind leg, and make them thinner like the ones on the front legs. NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 08:29, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

Looks amazing! Only thing I can see is that the ear pink could be a little more pinkish. Rainwhisker 18:34, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks! x3 I made the ear more pink, fixed the leg stripes, and made her forhead stripes darker. How's that? :3 Crow 23:30, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

When I did Millie's kittypet version, My stripes were thicker, but I think the stripes are okay. ☮Quail will rescue Haiti!☮We are the World... 15:21, March 31, 2010 (UTC)

Acually, I think this looks perfect! CBA? NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 19:54, March 31, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. --Icethroat I'm a gullible genious. 02:25, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Poppyfrost (A) - Approved

Poppyfrost.apprentice I love Poppyfrost. And Tortoiseshells. And the reason I put this up was because withdrew Leafdapple. MaplefernCarrying the torch... 23:20, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good! Do you use GIMP? Anyways, for the image, blur the spots and shading a tad more. IcyInvading the fire 23:24, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

Blurred patches and shading. I don't think the changes are showing up... MaplefernCarrying the torch... 23:46, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading and blur the shading on the tail--NightshineÜ 01:16, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

Darkened and blurred shading. I also brightened the highlights. MaplefernCarrying the torch... 11:49, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink should be a little bigger and lighter. Otherwise i love it!Crystals and Pearls *glimmer* 20:29, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

Made earpink bigger. I don't think I should lighten it, but if you think I should, please let me know. MaplefernCarrying the torch... 00:22, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ginger on her head and add shading to her right arm--NightshineÜ 00:28, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Done. Anyway, no, Ice, I don't use GIMP. I use pixlr. MaplefernCarrying the torch... 01:15, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Can you make the black parts more circular?--NightshineÜ 01:19, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

I've attempted. Does it look good? MaplefernCarrying the torch... 01:49, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit more--NightshineÜ 01:54, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Darkened shading. I'm assuming you didn't mean on the back or chest. MaplefernCarrying the torch... 02:05, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

I just meant on the back. But that's fine. Blur the shading now--NightshineÜ 02:08, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Blurred Shading. Anyway, I realized I've reserved only tortoishells.... MaplefernCarrying the torch... 02:12, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Tail shading needs to be blurred--NightshineÜ 05:04, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

I blurred it as much as I could. MaplefernCarrying the torch... 14:28, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Darken and blur the shading on the tail, and this will be good :) GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 00:37, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

Blurred and darkened tail shading. MaplefernCarrying the torch... 00:42, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

blur the back shading. If it doesn't work, lighten it instead. --IcyInvading the fire 22:10, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

It wouldn't really be shading then, and besides, above you told me to darken it. If people want me to still, I will. MaplefernCarrying the torch... 23:00, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

Just take the small ginger strip under the black above her arm. once you do that I think she'll be ready.HaikageAsh's Talk 14:18, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

This hasn't been worked on in over a week... but I don't actually see any problems with it. As far as I can see, the ginger does extend under the black on the foreleg. Are there any other comments or can we just put the 24 hours on this? ✐SaNdY 08:28, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

The only reason I said to take it away was because I dont see it in her kit image. Looking back at my comment it wasnt that clear. Sorry.HaikageAsh's Talk 16:53, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Wow. My fault. Sorry guys, should I still remove it? MaplefernCarrying the torch... 18:55, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Yes. I just didn't want this to be declined and couln't see the problem. Sorry for the confusion. ✐SaNdY 18:57, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

The was easy to fix. MaplefernCarrying the torch... 19:06, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Add some shading to the white arm--NightshineÜ 19:17, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Fixed. HedgehogflightHedgehogs are flying! 11:42, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

CBA?HaikageAsh's Talk 23:32, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

None; Approved NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 03:44, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

Princess (Q) - Approved

File:Princess(Q).png Ughh! I hate the collar. NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 20:21, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

Make the lineart on the collar thicker, the stripes more like the ones on her kittypet image. But I like this! MaplefernCarrying the torch... 20:37, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

Color in her nose.HaikageAsh's Talk 20:51, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

Amazing! Just blur the shading on her back and the stripes need a tad more blending. Other than what Maple and Ash said, that's all you have to do. (: this is amazing! --IcyInvading the fire 21:12, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

This is amazing! But asking (for reference) if we do a kittypet queen, do we need to draw a collar? Because some people do and some don't...--Artimas HunterWelcome to Bramblepath's Den 19:36, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

Well the only other kittypet queen we've ever done is Ashy's Quince, which has a collar. I would think so, it'd be kinda strange if her kittypet image had a collar and her queen one didn't NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 00:57, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Collars are evil. But, I think it looks better then before. Anyway, I colored the nose (can't believe I forgot that!) Blurred the back shading, and blurred the stripes a bit more. NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 18:54, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken the tail stripes a bit--NightshineÜ 05:27, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Thickened tail stripes NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 04:34, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the back shading--NightshineÜ 23:46, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

It looks like there are a few blank pixels on the back leg near the paw. That might just be the shading but I think they are just blank.--Artimas HunterWarning! This user is reasonably insane! 15:21, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

I'm not sure if you can fix this or not but the collar gets thinner as it goes toward the back.HaikageAsh's Talk 23:01, March 22, 2010 (UTC)

The style of her stripes needs to be the same as on her kittypet version, these stripes look patched and ragged, but the ones on her kittypet image don't. --Icy-chan says hello! 22:50, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

I think these stripes are really nice looking.--NightshineÜ 03:01, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

I'm working on it, I promise :) Just gimme till tomorrow to reupload, I was reading Fading Echoes all day, and didn't get a chance to (Such a good book!) NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 05:58, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuplaoded: Personally, I like the second one a lot better. What do you guys think? NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 21:49, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

I think the first one is better--NightshineÜ 00:28, March 26, 2010 (UTC)

I like the second one, but it's ur charat!Snowstorm! 00:40, March 26, 2010 (UTC)

I like the first one, but the second one looks more like her kittypet image, so I think you should go with the second one. Also, the lineart on the collar is too thin on the first one and too thick on the second one. (Yeah, I know....) --Icy-chan says hello! 00:48, March 26, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry about the colloar, I don't think I'll be able to redo the colloar without redoing the whole image. I love the first one soooo much, but I also really like the second one. Plus, the second one is closer to her kittypet image. So, I'm torn, which one should I keep? NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 03:06, March 26, 2010 (UTC)

Oh no wait, nvm about the collar. I'll get to work on thinning the lineart on the second one NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 03:07, March 26, 2010 (UTC)

I'd definetly go with the second one but that's just me. Don't let my opinion influence your decision. After all, it is your charart:)22:42, March 26, 2010 (UTC)--MoonflightCome The Dark Side. We Have Catnip...

Nightfall, could you please keep this on your Current Projects?Darkhallows 00:04, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

Uh, okay. I've added her back on. So, delete the first one, and keep the second? NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 03:26, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, keep the decond and delete the first. --Icy-chan says hello! 22:53, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

Deleted the first one NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 00:38, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken and blur belly shading--NightshineÜ 05:32, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I thickened and blurred the belly shading, but when I tried to make the collar lineart thinner it looked really weird. NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 22:10, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

Wow, this is sooooooooooooo much better than mine, Night! You might need to blur the belly shading a tad more, however.Møųşëţąłőʼn!! 18:15, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Thanks, Mousey! Yours is amazing too though :D I blurred the belly shading as much as I could. Better? NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 23:17, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

I think you might want to blur the ear pink a little. Rainwhisker 01:15, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded:' Better? NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 05:38, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

I think she is ready now.MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 21:24, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

CBA?HaikageAsh's Talk 14:46, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

Approved ✐SaNdY 14:43, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Stonestream(A) - Approved

File:Stonestream(paw).png Yet another gray shorthaired cat. Comments?HaikageAsh's Talk 22:08, March 26, 2010 (UTC)

I can't see the earpink too well. It looks grayish. ɆƆHØĦƏ@ƦƮ 22:18, March 26, 2010 (UTC)

I will admit that it looks a tad grayish but I can see it well on my computer. is anyone else having trouble seeing it?HaikageAsh's Talk 01:41, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink on both his elder and warrior image are more of a pinky color. I would change it NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 01:49, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I still don't think it was that bad but I changed it anyways. Comments?HaikageAsh's Talk 17:00, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink looks kind of pinkish-gray right now, make it more of a red color. --Icy-chan says hello! 13:31, March 29, 2010 (UTC)

None of his chararts have a redish earpink. This color is close to the color used in his warrior image.HaikageAsh's Talk 19:26, March 29, 2010 (UTC)

I know that it's close to that, but sometimes the ear pink on the other images isn't the best ear pink color for an image of another rank, because of various shading styles, so I think that you should go ahead and change the ear pink...maybe make it the same color as on his elder image? --Icy-chan says hello! 02:04, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

No matter what color I make it it will always look grayish because of the blurring and size of the ear. I'm not trying to start anything but I really don't see a problem with the color I used.What does everyone else think?HaikageAsh's Talk 19:39, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

It's not even a pinkish gray: it's just gray. Make it more pink. Raven Randomness! 23:38, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

I think it's your computer because its not gray on mine. I'll reupload it tomorrow to give others time to comment.HaikageAsh's Talk 23:49, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

It looks kinda gray on my computer. Rainwhisker 01:13, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Its going to look grayish regardless.HaikageAsh's Talk 14:59, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Not to be rude or anything, but it still looks grayish. Do you want me to help? Rainwhisker武士貓 14:27, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

It's gonna look grayish regardless because of the bluring. Besides Gray cats have Grayish earpinks.HaikageAsh's Talk 14:37, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --Icethroat I'm a gullible genious. 22:57, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

Approved ✐SaNdY 16:07, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Foxheart (W) - Approved

Foxheart.warriorAfter I messed up on Yellowfang, I have decided to go for something a little easier. XD! X Comments? FawnstormThe Dark Forest are rising... 16:38, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

The shading needs to be blurred.

Reuploaded Not sure if it worked. Did it? FawnstormThe Dark Forest are rising... 17:05, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

Not really. Maybe try lightening the shading a tad.HaikageAsh's Talk 19:35, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? FawnstormThe Dark Forest are rising... 19:41, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

Try blurring it more, mostly around the haunch and chest--NightshineÜ 05:23, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? FawnstormThe Dark Forest are rising... 16:19, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the midriff shading a tad bit more. --Icy-chan says hello! 02:25, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred the midriff shading. XD FawnstormThe Dark Forest are rising... 09:29, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on her haunch and largen the earpink a tad. Darken her shading. Also, her pelt needs to be a more orange colour. Right now it's red. Make it more like her deputy image: File:Foxheart Deputy.png☼ Misty ☼Here comes the summer... 16:33, March 20, 2010 (UTC) But I got the colour right from her deputy image. I don't see how it looks 'red'? I am doing this on my mums phone so I won't sign off. FawnstormThe Dark Forest are rising... 11:35, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on her chest fur a lot. ☼ Misty ☼Here comes the summer... 17:04, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Hope it now looks less red. Blurred all the shading. FawnstormThe Dark Forest are rising... 11:35, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the chest shading. Nice job! BirchyI am a warrior at heart... 13:53, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Any better? FawnstormThe Dark Forest are rising... 16:02, March 22, 2010 (UTC)

The shading still needs to be blurred. If you use Pixlr, I can do it for you. If you use photoshop, or gimp, set the blur tool to %100.Darkhallows 17:19, March 22, 2010 (UTC)

I use Pixlr. :) |How do I do it? It never seem to look any different when I blur it. FawnstormThe Dark Forest are rising... 12:58, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Pixlr is fail when it comes to blurred xD. So it won't blur more than that. I can do it in GIMP, if you want?Darkhallows 05:45, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks. FawnstormThe Dark Forest are rising... 10:09, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

Comments? FawnstormThe Dark Forest are rising... 12:49, March 26, 2010 (UTC)

I'd lighten the earpink a tad. After that it should be ready. --MoonflightCome The Dark Side. We Have Catnip... 22:45, March 26, 2010 (UTC)

File:Blr.pngDarkhallows 00:11, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

It won't let me upload it on Pixlr. And Pixlr won't let me upload cave-guard blanks. FawnstormThe Dark Forest are rising... 17:08, March 31, 2010 (UTC)

Soften the shading on the chest and haunches, and make the shading on the tail a little more defined. After that, it should be ready! Echostar 21:43, March 31, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks to Darjhollows for shading HELP! I've lightened the Ear PInk! FawnstormThe Dark Forest are rising... 09:32, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

This looks fine to me. CBA? ✐SaNdY 14:45, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Approved ✐SaNdY 13:22, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Sootfur (A) - Approved


Hi everyone! This is Sootfur when he was an apprentice. CONSTRUCTIVE comments that will help me make it better will be fine! I hope it gets approved!Snowstorm! 00:38, March 26, 2010 (UTC)

We give out constructive comments all the time. Blur the shading, make the ear pink a bit softer, it's a bit neon. And make the eyes more of an amber colour. Add some highlights. But this really good. FawnstormThe Dark 

Forest are rising... 16:00, March 22, 2010 (UTC)

Thank you

! This is my first one (besides Diesel , I was tired and dumb!!) Ok!Snowstorm! 00:38, March 26, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sure you know this but put Reuploaded in bold every time you have edited it and re-done it.

Reuploaded Ok I made the ear pink softer and blurred the shading and changed the color of the eye to more amber. But about the highlights, I know to use the dodge tool but where do I put the highlights?Snowstorm Deputy of LightClan! 16:21, March 22, 2010 (UTC) see one of the tutorials for Info on how to highlight them. The ear pink is good but now looks a bit purple.FawnstormThe Dark Forest are rising... 19:57, March 22, 2010 (UTC)

Save it as a png. It looks too pixelated right now--NightshineÜ 00:23, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

  • nods slowly* ok well im fixing it now. sorry about the break i was at a friends house.Snowstorm! 00:38, March 26, 2010 (UTC)

If you're not comfortable with highlights you don't have to do them. Besides that and what Nightshine said, blur the shading.HaikageAsh's Talk 00:19, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

Okay thanks ash shadow i like highlights but i don't know how to do them ;). Ok well I did download it as png. I'll try it again and blur the shading

Reuploaded Ok I fixed the ear pink and did the highlights but they suck :p! So, um there it is.Snowstorm! 00:38, March 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ok I blurred that shading and downloaded on png. Is it any better?Snowstorm! 00:38, March 26, 2010 (UTC)

It still looks pixely and the shading needs to be blurred more.HaikageAsh's Talk 01:09, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

I blurred the shading but I don't know how to make it less pixely. Sorry about not knowing anything, this is my first charat!Snowstorm! 00:38, March 26, 2010 (UTC)

It's fine, Snow :) Don't feel bad! To be honest thought, I'm not sure how you'd make it less pixly either... anybody? NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 07:01, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks Night. Any comments on the image?Snowstorm! 00:38, March 26, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading more, and make the ear pink a bit redder like on his warrior image. insaneular Talk 21:38, March 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fixed earpink and burred shadingSnowstorm! 21:53, March 26, 2010 (UTC)

Make the earpink a bit bigger and add some shading to his chest.HaikageAsh's Talk 16:39, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Made earpink bigger and added chest shading.Snowstorm! 20:47, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

I put the image at the top of the page; that's where it should be. When you upload a new file, just leave the code up there. Now, you need to add a little more shading on her lower back, and blur all of the existing shade. --Bramble 23:30, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Added lower back shading and blurred existing shading. Snowstorm! 23:51, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Try saving it as a .png instead of .jpg. If you already are... *shrugs* Raven Randomness! 21:02, March 29, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the shading some.HaikageAsh's Talk 21:05, March 29, 2010 (UTC)

Do you use MS Paint? Because those can end up pixelly sometimes. Raven Randomness! 21:20, March 29, 2010 (UTC)

There is no way to undo the pixely as the original was saved under the .jpg format. You will simply to do redo the whole image again under .png as there's positively no way to go back the image before its first save. You must have saved it as jpg before you saved it as .png or it got saved as a .bit (i think thats the right extension) file instead as some of the blanks will try to save this way if your not watching your computer carefully. If it was a gif this could possibly also caused the problem as well so its showing up as png, but the original part when it was pixely will never be able to be deleted. Even if you try to resave it as .png it won't work so don't waste your time. Sorry about this as I hate when I used to find this out about images I love saving :( Now I save everything .png the moment I get it so it can have the best quality.--♪Shimmerpool♫ 01:48, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Lightened shading. Do I really have to start over? If I do , maybe I will give up on the image. *sigh* wow im just so confused!Snowstorm! 02:05, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

I can help you make it look less pixel-y. Do you want me to?--NightshineÜ 02:38, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

Oh yes please! By the way, thanks for snowstorm, it looks great! Snowstorm! 03:39, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded fixed it--NightshineÜ 04:12, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks nighteh! Any comments on the image?Snowstorm! 14:03, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

I think that the shading should be blurred some more: not the shading to the pelt, but within the shading. Also, there's a couple of spots on the back where the shading doesn't touch the lineart. --Icy-chan says hello! 01:29, March 31, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Fixed shading. Not to be rude or anything but I cant really blur the shading anymore. Sorry!Snowstorm! 01:49, March 31, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the shading more. It probably wont look as if it needs to be blurred more if you do that.HaikageAsh's Talk 20:11, March 31, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Lightened shading. Is it approval ready yet?SnowstormDeputy of LightClan! 03:56, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading more and darken the ear pink a bit more--NightshineÜ 04:46, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Darkened ear pink but the original was straight out of his warrior image=) Again, I really can't blur the shading more.SnowstormDeputy of LightClan! 22:21, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

I can help you with bluring the shading if you'd like.HaikageAsh's Talk 22:33, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Oh can you? Thanks! Snowstorm! (i am working on my signature, so thats why i'm signing with just snowstorm!)

Sorry Snowstorm. you would be better off redoing the image. when I opened it so I could blur i saw that there was a lot of blured lineart. Thats the real problem. I can still show you what I was able to do if you'd like. HaikageAsh's Talk 23:31, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Sure, I guess you can show me. But if I really have to start over, I will just give up on the image. Snowstorm!

Please don't give up. I remember when I made my first tabby and had to start over. It's alot of work but it's all worth it in the end. <-- This is what i was able to do. HaikageAsh's Talk 23:43, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks, it looks much better than mine. Sooooooo do I have to start over now? Snowstorm!

The lineart looks a bit bumpy but im sure thats fixable. See what others think first and reupload this image over your original one.HaikageAsh's Talk 01:08, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Anyone?SnowstormDeputy of LightClan! 16:58, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

Add some shading to the hind leg farthest from us, and his belly. Btw, you should probably wait until about five days before asking for comments. People can't comment every single day ;D NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 00:11, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Added shading. Opps, Im sorry. I just was bored and my boredom gets to best of me sometimes. XPSnowstormDeputy of LightClan! 01:42, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

He looks nice!--MinnowclawMy dragon will eat you! 15:03, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? ✐SaNdY 16:06, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Approved ✐SaNdY 13:31, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Mitzi (KP) - Approved

File:Mitzi.Kittypet.pngOkay, I have some explaining to do... I know she's described as a tortoiseshell in her article, yet this image has gray patches on it instead of what is usually black. But, in A Clan in Need she has no black on her body like other tortoiseshells shown in the mangas. Just white, a pale gray (which is probably orange), and a darker gray. So, I thought she may be a gray tortoiseshell ( But, if you guys disagree, I'll make the gray areas black. Also, there are four discussions, so this isn't over the image limit. --Ŧ∆ķმ♰§ƱოΣ 14:48, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Oops, forgot to add shading to the collar. --Ŧ∆ķმ♰§ƱოΣ 14:53, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

It looks amazing how it is now! --NightyMeh kitteh is hoplessley confused... 15:00, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading on her gray and orange fur a bit.HaikageAsh's Talk 17:02, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

It's called a dilute tortoiseshell, I have one ^^. But, if you go that route she needs stripes.Darkhallows 17:09, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Darkened shading and added stipes. --Ŧ∆ķმ♰§ƱოΣ 17:52, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the stripes just a little bit. --Icy-chan says hello! 22:15, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Darkened stripes. --Ŧ∆ķმ♰§ƱოΣ 19:17, March 29, 2010 (UTC)

The tabby markings on her back in the ginger area could do with some blurring. :) BirchyI am a warrior at heart... 19:57, March 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Blurred stripes. --Ŧ∆ķმ♰§ƱოΣ 19:07, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

The ginger on her back looks more yellowish than ginger, could you darken it maybe? Or desaturate and then darken? NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 21:44, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Darkened ginger patch. --Ŧ∆ķმ♰§ƱოΣ 19:08, March 31, 2010 (UTC)

This looks awesome! Can you maybe add another ginger patch on the tail or front leg?--NightshineÜ 04:42, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Dilute tortoiseshells have cream, not ginger. Other than that, it looks great! --Gοlδεnpαω Appare! 05:29, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Do the patches look cream? My old moniter died last night, and the new one is huge. Everything looks blurry around the edges and the colors seem desaturated, so I don't know if the ginger patches look cream enough now. Nightshine, I tried to make the image designed like she is in the manga, so she was shown to have only two cream patches. Should I still add the extra two? --Ŧ∆ķმ♰§ƱოΣ 18:08, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

A bit paler. It's more a dark peach at the moment. --Gοlδεnpαω Appare! 20:48, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Done. --Ŧ∆ķმ♰§ƱოΣ 00:44, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Oh I've never read that manga. I guess it's fine then. Darken the shading a bit more--NightshineÜ 00:45, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Darkened shading. --Ŧ∆ķმ♰§ƱოΣ 15:50, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

I think she's ready now.MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 21:41, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is kind of hard to see. Raven Randomness! 03:48, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Fixed ear pink. --Ŧ∆ķმ♰§ƱოΣ 15:38, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? This is lovely Hawk =) ✐SaNdY 14:50, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Approved ✐SaNdY 13:34, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Whitestorm(Ki)- Approved

File:Whitestorm.Kit.pngNot much to say about this ... comments? ɆƆHØĦƏ@ƦƮ 20:58, March 26, 2010 (UTC)

He looks a bit too gray to me, can you lighten him? insaneular Talk 20:59, March 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Made his pelt brighter. ɆƆHØĦƏ@ƦƮ 21:35, March 26, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading around his head and neck--NightshineÜ 19:36, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. (I don't think the changes are showing) ɆƆHØĦƏ@ƦƮ 20:46, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

Wait a couple of hours before deciding whether the changes are showing or not if there's not much difference and it's hard to tell, but if there's a significant change that was made and it's not showing, then upload under a new file and put the delete tag on the old one. From what I can see right now, darken the shading a little bit more, but then lighten the entire image. Right now it looks light gray, but it needs to be a white cat, so lighten it some. --Icy-chan says hello! 13:30, March 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Lightened the pelt and darkened the shading. ɆƆHØĦƏ@ƦƮ 20:30, March 29, 2010 (UTC)

Look at Whitestorm's deputy picture. File:Whitestorm (D).pngDarken the ears a bit, and the shading just a little bit more. It's okay that it's more white since this is Whitestorm when he is getting old. Other than that, he just looks so cute and perfect! I ♥ this! Echostar 21:49, March 31, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Darkened the ears and darkened the shading as well. Any more comments? ɆƆHØĦƏ@ƦƮ 22:58, March 31, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 06:54, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

I think the shading looks a little too dark. Lighten it up a little. Rainwhisker 14:57, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Lightened the shading. ɆƆHØĦƏ@ƦƮ 18:19, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? ✐SaNdY 10:17, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

File:Whitestorm kit errors.png
I decided to just do a picture to help me explain. I always like to test an image out on a white background because thats when the lineart shows best where its been smudged or blurred out. As you can see the little gray specks. I noticed them on the screen and just had to make sure by zooming end. Its common to do this with a transparent image. Click it to see it better as its a screenshot from my computer. Just erase these and you'll be good to go :)--♪Shimmerpool♫ 22:25, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I erased the gray pixels as much as I could. Comments? ɆƆHØĦƏ@ƦƮ 13:43, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink looks a little circular, you could smudge it or something. Rainwhisker武士貓 14:28, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Made it less circular, is it okay? ɆƆHØĦƏ@ƦƮ 16:44, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

It looks fine now.--MinnowclawMy dragon will eat you! 18:55, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks! :) ɆƆHØĦƏ@ƦƮ 19:40, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? --Ŧķ§ƱΣö 17:42, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. --Ŧķ§ƱΣö 22:25, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

Willowpelt (Ki) - Approved

Willowpelt.kit I tried a new shading style, and I don't think that it worked...I'll probably end up redoing the image with my usual shading style, but I figured it couldn't hurt to see what everyone else thought of my epic fail. :) I tried the shading style like on my tutorials, but the shading was either too light or too dark because of the color of the pelt, which I used the colordropper tool to get from the warrior version, so I had to go with this style. Comments and suggestions? --Icy-chan says hello! 02:31, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

This isn't bad at all! Try darkening the shading a teensy bit and shorten the left ear pink a bit--NightshineÜ 02:35, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

Willowpelt's left ear, or our left ear (her right ear)? --Icy-chan says hello! 11:36, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

Her right ear (our left)--NightshineÜ 04:38, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. --Icethroat I'm a gullible genious. 17:49, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval?HaikageAsh's Talk 21:34, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. Icethroat氷喉 00:53, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Sharpclaw Blanks - Approved


I've made these a while ago and now I finally get to put them up. Yay!--NightshineÜ 23:59, March 10, 2010 (UTC)

The back paw looks strange and the fur on the back can go. B-Day-Kitty! :D 00:04, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

I dunno if it's just my computer (Sorry if it is) but when I try to use the PaintBucket to fill in the main body (This applies to all the blanks) on Pixlr, the eye that is fully visible fills in as well. D= Shistar Mai Talk Page 00:08, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

The paws are oddly shaped: They have an extra toe, or so it looks like. There are also visible gaps in the lineart in the eyes. MaplefernCarrying the torch... 00:11, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I made the backs unfluffy. I think it might be your computer doing that Shistar. On the front paws of cats they have a weird thumb-like toe thing. They have that on the Loner blanks as well. I hope that's what you were talking about.--NightshineÜ 00:14, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

Shigura: It does that on a lot of the blanks, I think it happened when Pixlr was updated or something like that. Nightshine: the back hind paw looks a bit flat, try bringing the front of it forward a little bit in a curve like the other hind paw. About the front paws, (on the loner blanks) I don't think there's an extra toe...I think that's a tuft of fur on the longhair blanks, so in my opinion I think that you should get rid of the extra toe. However, aside from those things, these look really good! I just have to say that I love the fur on the longhairs. :) --Icy-chan says hello! 00:54, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded fixed back paw and got rid of extra toe.--NightshineÜ 01:16, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

Make the nose shorter on the right than on the left. --Gοlδεnpαω Appare! 01:26, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

The back paw looks a bit too big, perhaps make it smaller? GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 01:34, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded made back paw smaller and fixed nose--NightshineÜ 01:59, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

Make the shoulder a bit more...subtle, I guess you could say. Right now it's just this sort of drop from the neck to the back.--Shaf Girl 06:38, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

The front paws look a bit like camel feet. Maybe make the foot round and then put the line in instead on individual toes.HaikageAsh's Talk 23:06, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

These are good. I could nevery make good blanks. The face looks a little square if you know what I mean. --LuckflightHappy St. Patty's Day! 23:09, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded fixed front paws and shoulder--NightshineÜ 02:16, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

Would it be okay for me to comment? I think that the faces should be a little rounder. Quoth the Raven, Nevermore 02:20, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

The longhairs need more facial fur, and some fluff along the back.Darkhallows 17:02, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

Ignore my horrible redline (and blue... green). I'm using a touchpad xD. [[File:Lineover.png]]Darkhallows 17:18, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

Those are great. Night! However, the (what would be) belly (under the chest, past the leg in front, nearest to the haunch) looks a little tubby. make it curve inward, JUST A LITTLE! =) Crystals and Pearls *glimmer* 20:23, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded made backs a bit more fluffy, lengthened back paw, added haunch, made front paws rounder, added fluffy cheeks and I attempted to fix the head but it looks strange to me.--NightshineÜ 01:15, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

You're right. I think it's the placement of the eye that makes the head look strange. also make the nose a little bigger.HaikageAsh's Talk 01:19, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded made nose bigger--NightshineÜ 02:52, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

The chest is jutting out a bit on the shorthairs. (Lol, I'm all for subtle anatomy.)--Shaf Girl 04:01, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded made chest smoother--NightshineÜ 04:30, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

It has a bit of a flattened face, doesn't it? Echostar~ May StarClan Light Your Path 18:30, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Make the front back leg a little flatter in the paw area so that it doesn't look too round, but not pencil flat. Snowflight1Thank StarClan Newleaf is here! 18:37, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

There are still gaps in the eye lineart. Fix those. Quoth the Raven, Nevermore 21:39, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded made foot a bit more flat. Raven: What do you mean? --NightshineÜ 22:58, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

If you use the paint bucket, the fully visible eye fills in, too. Quoth the Raven, Nevermore 00:54, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Which program do you use? I use MS paint and that never happens--NightshineÜ 00:58, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

That only happens in pixlr. I think the eye should be ok because the same thing happens with leader and kittypet blanks.HaikageAsh's Talk 01:00, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

(To Ash- the loner blanks do it, too) I think they look good. Raven Randomness! 04:33, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

The paws are still too big.Darkhallows 18:27, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded made paws smaller--NightshineÜ 04:39, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

This is great! I bet they're going to be approved. What will the eyes look like? FawnstormThe Dark Forest are rising... 16:41, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

They look a little fuzzy to me. ✐SaNdY 18:48, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

Here I'll re-upload the long haired male one--NightshineÜ 00:33, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

I fixed it--NightshineÜ 00:40, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

Is the shorthaired female blank blurry, or is that just Expie (My computer's name)? Raven Randomness! 01:28, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

It doesn't look blurry on my computer--NightshineÜ 01:54, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

All except the long haired male looks blurry to me. They still color in fine though.HaikageAsh's Talk 19:28, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

That's what it looks like on my laptop, too. --Icy-chan says hello! 19:52, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

I re-uploaded all the blanks. I hope it's not blurry for anyone now--NightshineÜ 03:40, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

Their heads look a bit squashed, and the line where the head overlaps the ear should be a bit rounder. These are really good though! NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 02:30, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded made head rounder. I'm still not sure of how I can fix the shape of the head. Any suggestions?--NightshineÜ 19:57, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Try it like this - [[File:DiagramSC.png]]

And then the hind leg farthest from us looks kinda strange. Like that line shouldn't stretch that far NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 23:12, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded thanks for the diagram! That's just what was missing! I fixed the head and far leg--NightshineÜ 23:29, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

These are so awsome! Now, the little line that overlaps the ear should probably be a bit shorter. And the line should start a smidge lower - [[File:SCDiagram2.png]] NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 23:44, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded adjusted ear thing--NightshineÜ 23:58, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Anything else?--NightshineÜ 00:51, March 22, 2010 (UTC)

Ditto above--NightshineÜ 04:05, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Be patient, Nightshine :) Wait atleast five days or so before asking for comments. Add a line to indicate where the belly is, because the chest shouldn't automatically connect to the hind leg. [[File:Sharpclawdiagram.png]] NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 06:10, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded added belly--NightshineÜ 00:36, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

Lower the fur on the longhaired one's cheeks a little NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 03:09, March 26, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded lowered cheek fur--NightshineÜ 03:19, March 26, 2010 (UTC)

I filled it in and shigura is right, the eye that is fully visible does fill in. I don't know how to fix it but maybe there is a gap?Snowstorm! 16:49, March 26, 2010 (UTC)

Acually, Snow, pixlr is doing that now for some reason. I've experianced it with all the blanks, if I fill in the pelt it colors in the eye too. So it's not the blanks, it's pixlr. The only thing I see, is to make the hind paws farthest from us smaller, and maybe thicken the lineart a bit on the longhaired one's cheek fur NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 19:42, March 26, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded made back paw smaller. When I tried thickening the fur on the cheek it looked really weird--NightshineÜ 01:56, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

Should I make the tail on the long haired ones fluffy?--NightshineÜ 04:39, March 29, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, add some more tufts of fur to them NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 07:15, March 29, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded added fluffiness to tail--NightshineÜ 23:37, March 29, 2010 (UTC)

My attempt at a redline. :) If you need me to explain anything in greater detail, just ask. Crows 03:02, March 30, 2010 (UTC)


Here's another small redline for the longhaired cat. ^^ Again, if something isn't clear...

[[File:Notherredline.png]]Crows 03:14, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded great tips! I did all what you said. Theres too much to list--NightshineÜ 03:53, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry. ;_; I think I went a little overboard with this redline. I meant to just fix the eyes, really, but I got carried away.. I put in the references to actual cats to explain my reasons for the redline. If you choose to make the changes I made, you can go ahead and copy and paste it onto your cat, because there are a lot of tiny details that might be hard to copy freehand. <:3 Hope it helps!

[[User:Crows|[[File:Newredline.png]]Crows 07:16, March 30, 2010 (UTC) ]]

I think that the paws on Crow's redline image are the only things that should be reuploaded. The eyes and cheeks are fine. They only need to be made looking up. :) BirchyI am a warrior at heart... 14:43, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

They're just suggestions. :3 Crows 21:47, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded did all you said. I kind of copied it :3 I hope you don't mind. You can put on your user page that you helped out with them. Comments?--NightshineÜ 23:50, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

No, no, it's alright. ^^ I just editted. Crow 23:55, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

These are really good, but I think that it's backside needs to be expanded a bit, because it looks a bit skinny behind the legs, where the tail starts. Overall though - Good Job! 09:50, March 31, 2010 (UTC)

I don't think you reuploaded the male longhair. But they look great! Rainwhisker 14:32, March 31, 2010 (UTC)

The face went back to its older version... Evanphoto 15:22, March 31, 2010 (UTC)

I like how they look now, they're really good! NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 19:59, March 31, 2010 (UTC)

I hope all the new blanks are uploaded. Just tell me if they aren't. Should I change anything on the new ones?--NightshineÜ 21:09, March 31, 2010 (UTC)

The first one seems to have gone back to the older blanks... Crow 01:32, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

I re-uploaded it again. I hope it's good now!--NightshineÜ 01:34, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

These looks much better. I have a couple of picky things though: the edge of the front right paw needs to be rounder, add a pixel to the right ear to make the transition smoother, raise the thin edge of the haunch just a little bit so that the hind paw isn't so squished but it's still low enough, and on the longhairs add a couple of pixels to the tails to smoothen the transition. Here's a diagram to help explain what I'm talking about: [[File:SharpclawColorDiagram.png]] (Bramble, sorry about uploading yet another file, once these are approved I'll put the delete tag on it.) --Icethroat I'm a gullible genious. 02:09, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded fixed the pixels and made front paw rounder--NightshineÜ 04:09, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

It looks like there's some extra lineart on the front right paw, and you forgot to add the pixels to the tails on the longhairs. --Icethroat I'm a gullible genious. 17:27, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

If there's any space, add some white in the nose. --Gοlδεnpαω Appare! 19:39, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

The line on the hind leg that Icethroat circled also needs to be as thick as the rest of the lineart. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Mousetalon (talkcontribs)

Mousey, you forgot to sign. :) --Icethroat I'm a gullible genious. 01:39, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded deleted some pixels on paw, added some to fluffy tail. I think it looks better with the thin lineart on the haunch. And there isn't much space for white on the nose--NightshineÜ 02:22, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, dear, I need to remember that! I really need to get back into habbit of signing, I almost forget every message I leave! As for the nose, is there room for one little white pixel? Møųşëţąłőʼn!! 13:54, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

I actually think the nose is fine black.HaikageAsh's Talk 14:49, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, I looked to see what it would look like with a white pixel in the nose and I thought it looked weird. Look for yourself.--NightshineÜ 16:29, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

[[File:SharpclawNose.png]] I dunno, there's space for two and it doesn't look too bad to me. --Gοlδεnpαω Ap<span style="color:are!<span style="color: 16:42, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

I think it looks better without a white space--NightshineÜ 17:24, April 3, 2010 (UTC) </span></span>

[[File:....png]]The highlighted red part is a little odd because not all cats have a lighter belly, like black cats.MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 21:22, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

I'm not sure what you want me to fix. --NightshineÜ 21:28, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, Nightshine, but I do like it better with the white nose. Just my opinion. Møųşëţąłőʼn!! 22:21, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

I'm going to leave it like this. :3 Anyone know what Minnowclaw meant in that redline?--NightshineÜ 22:29, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

He meant that you should get rid of the lineart that he highlighted in red. Raven Randomness! 22:32, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

But then it will have no belly.--Nightshine{ 23:36, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

Okay then, never mind and Raven, and anyone else who thinks I'm a boy, I'm not, I'm a girl.MinnowclawMy dragon will eat you! 23:38, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, Minnowclaw XD. Raven Randomness! 02:59, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Just make the noses white and then I think these are ready to be put to use; they look brilliant. ✐SaNdY 14:41, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Can't wait. These deserve to be approved, Night has worked so hard on them! FawnstormNever miss a beat.. 15:30, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

For the third time. I would like to keep the noses the way they are. I think it looks better--Nightshine{ 23:37, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

I was testing these and making an image on them just because I felt like it, and I filled in the nose in just two pixels, and I think it looked fine...want me to show you the pixels I chose, and maybe those could be the ones you make white? I realy think that the nose should have a little white in it, there's enough room for at least a little bit of nose color... Icethroat氷喉 23:58, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Can't we just keep them black though?--Nightshine{ 01:31, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

I think their fine other than the eye, waaayy in the back, the right side of its head is too small. You should make it larger, also heres an example: [[File:RisingMoon_SharpClaw.png]]☮SilverthistleBerrystumpytail, Ha!☮ 02:55, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

I'll try to repeat what Minnow was trying to say: the lineart highlighted in red should be removed. [[File:Point.png]]Raven Randomness! 03:05, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded made smaller eye bigger. If I remove that line art then the blanks will have no belly--Nightshine{ 03:20, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

On the lineart: then, by the same logic, the queen blanks and the kit blanks would have no belly. You can tell where the belly is, and the lineart there is awkward. Raven Randomness! 03:24, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Why thank you, Nightshine! :) ☮SilverthistleBerrystumpytail, Ha!☮ 03:25, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

I was told to put line art there to show were the belly is. Minnowclaw even said never mind about her red line. I think it looks fine with the line there.--Nightshine{ 03:30, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

That lineart is definitely needed. As for the noses, I don't think it matters. Are there any other comments or can we start the 24 hours? ✐SaNdY 13:20, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Can you make the eyes rounder? It looks like they're narrowing their eyes. Raven Randomness! 17:38, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded changed eyes--Nightshine{ 23:46, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

You've done an amazing job with the Night. well done! FawnstormThis is one battle Tigerstar will not win... 10:48, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? (Note: I have removed the extra images from this section) ✐SaNdY 16:00, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

Approved ✐SaNdY 09:46, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Patchpelt (Ki) - Approved

Patchpelt.kit Comments? --Gοlδεnpαω Appare! 07:31, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good! Make the shading on the patch on his face less obvious, and maybe make the Ear Pink on the black ear look a bit more like the white ear pink. Also make the white ear Ear Pink a bit less pale. Once again- GREAT! FawnstormThe Dark Forest are rising... 11:19, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Better? --Gοlδεnpαω Appare! 17:44, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Awww, he's cute! I think he is ready now.--MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 21:50, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

The pink on his right ear is darker that than the pink of his ear on his left. Its bothering me, maybe make them both the shade of the one on his black ear.--♪Shimmerpool♫ 22:07, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

It's shading Shimmerpool. BirchyI am a warrior at heart... 22:09, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Actually, they are different shades. I'll fix it. --Gοlδεnpαω Appare! 23:22, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Any other comments? --Gοlδεnpαω Appare! 03:49, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 05:03, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

The bottom of his chest needs to be blurred more. IceSpring is here! 15:57, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

So does the black patch on his front leg. Mousetalon!!Mousestars 19:13, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Done. --Gοlδεnpαω Appare! 22:13, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

CBA?Darkhallows 05:51, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

None; Approved NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 20:27, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

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