Webfoot (A) - Approved

Webfoot.apprentice His stripes were pretty tough to do, but I like how it came out. Constructments? insaneular Talk 15:14, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good Insane! Better then any of mine! But around his mid-section, it's to dark to really see any stripes or fur. Could you lighten that up or is there a reason you were keeping it like that? Really nice job!--BramblepathBrightshadow is mine! 15:24, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded lightened his midsection a bit. insaneular The original Hazelnut spread 17:30, April 2, 2010 (UTC)
Sweet signature. This is an awesome Webfoot! Blur the little patch of lightness on his forearm--NightshineÜ 00:14, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Add a stripe on the top back of his head. •Maplefern• 13:19, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry for making such a hard image to copy... I tried and failed xD. And I made the original. As for the image, lighten the ear pink.Darkhallows 17:36, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Don't feel bad Darkhallows, I love how the image looks, even if it's hard to copy. Anyways, better now? insaneular The original Hazelnut spread 22:07, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Are there any stripes on the legs? •Maplefern• 20:14, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

There are no leg stripes on his elder pic, so I didn't put any on this one... insaneular The original Hazelnut spread 21:57, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the marking on his head. IceSpring is here! 15:55, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? insaneular The original Hazelnut spread 22:46, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Yep. Comments before approval? Icethroat氷喉 21:15, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble 23:09, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Quince (KP)- Approved I hope I'm not going over the image limit cuz if I am I'll take it down and put it up later. Well, here she is. How is she? --LuckflightKiss Me I'm Irish 23:10, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry this is over the limit. There are two discussions.--Nightshine 23:26, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

There are three discussions up so this in within the limit. Blur the shading and highlights more.AshshadowI'm blue da ba dee da ba di 23:38, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink darker. And add shading to the ear and paw that's not facing us. Icestorm 23:43, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

Whoops I didn't see that. Blur the highlights and shading.--Nightshine 23:54, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: How's this? --LuckflightKiss Me I'm Irish 00:08, February 16, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink looks magenta. Also, Blur the highlights and shading more. But this is good for your first one! MaplefernCarrying the torch... 20:52, February 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I redid the shading and highlights. Earpink too. This good? --LuckflightKiss Me I'm Irish 22:19, February 16, 2010 (UTC)

She should have a collar LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 00:21, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading and highlights more. Icestorm 17:07, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

Her right arm seems too dark. Lighten it a bit--Nightshine 23:05, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I fixed the shading, highlights and arm. I'm having trouble with the collar. Any tips on how to make it on pixlr? --LuckflightHappy St. Patty's Day! 22:33, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

I suggust making the collar in paint then coloring it in pixlr.HaikageAsh's Talk 01:44, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Personally, I think it'd be easier to do it all in pixlr, but of course it's your choice. If you do it in pixlr just take the pencil tool on 1 or 2 pixel size, and just... draw the collar. X3 ♫ insaneular ♫Down at Fraggle Rock! 04:35, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading a tad. SaintIce 02:10, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I just started over and made it a whole lot better. --LuckflightHappy St. Patty's Day! 21:11, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: How's the collar look? --LuckflightHappy St. Patty's Day! 21:20, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

It looks a bit thin and the tag needs to be smaller.HaikageAsh's Talk 21:22, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: thickened the collar.

The shading needs more blurring--Nightshine 00:40, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Try and copy the collar on the kittypet image. User:QuailflightTheCat☮Quail will rescue Haiti!☮We are the World... 05:43, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: blurred shading and fixed collar. --LuckflightHappy St. Patty's Day! 15:13, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the back shading. Sorry but it dosen't look that.........natural. If you see what I mean? Fawnstorm 11:21, February 16, 2010 (UTC) 13:53, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: better? --LuckflightHappy St. Patty's Day! 16:24, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Listen, you're having some though time on the collar. Plus Quince was never a queen. i'd just do the kittypet version. ☮Quail will rescue Haiti!☮We are the World... 05:42, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

Acually, she was a queen. In "The Rise of Scourge" she had given birth to, Ruby, Socks, and Tiny, who later became Scourge. So yes, Quince was a queen. But, collars are hard to draw, especially on queen blanks. I agree with Quail, try doing her kittypet image if you like GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 19:46, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

K I'll try...--LuckflightHappy St. Patty's Day! 21:17, March 2, 2010 (UTC)--LuckflightHappy St. Patty's Day! 14:55, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded:How'd this turn out? --LuckflightHappy St. Patty's Day! 21:58, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm, this is the first time I've critiqued on a Kittypet Blank, but I'm pretty sure the ear pink should be slightly darker (As Quince is a gray cat)... Otherwise, I think this is great! =D
Shistar Mai Talk Page 22:03, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: darkened ear pink. How's this? --LuckflightHappy St. Patty's Day! 22:08, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

I cant really see the earpink now. Choose a reddish color.HaikageAsh's Talk 22:42, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: fixed eapink. Better? --LuckflightHappy St. Patty's Day! 23:04, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the tail and back. MaplefernCarrying the torch... 22:29, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: How does this look? --LuckflightHappy St. Patty's Day! 02:29, March 4, 2010 (UTC)'s this look? HELLO? --LuckflightHappy St. Patty's Day! 21:00, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

Calm down, people will comment when they can and its only been a day. Add more shading to the haunch and blur the shading and highlights.HaikageAsh's Talk 21:59, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

It's been a little longer than a week, please work on this or it will be declined GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 06:11, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I have a question. I redid her and I was wondering if I had to add highlights or not. --LuckflightHappy St. Patty's Day! 14:55, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

No you dont have to add highlights, but, you need more shading around the shoulder and haunch.HaikageAsh's Talk 16:05, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

The shading needs to be blended... and choosing a file name that doesn't consist entire of caps would be good. ✐SaNdY 15:08, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. ✐SaNdY 22:27, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry it took so long. Better? --LuckflightHappy St. Patty's Day! 23:11, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

Just blur the shading more--NightshineÜ 23:16, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

How's this? --LuckflightHappy St. Patty's Day! 23:29, March 22, 2010 (UTC)

Hey, Moony, well... I just hope you realize that she has amber eyes, and also that the ear pink is brown. No means of being a downer. Brightmoon The Sign of the Moon! 19:16, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Repuploaded: Fixed earpink. As for the eyes, they are amber and are supposed to be amber. --LuckflightHappy St. Patty's Day! 00:31, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink needs to br bigger.HaikageAsh's Talk 01:10, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Done!:) I hope this gets approved soon!--LuckflightHappy St. Patty's Day! 01:22, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

It's close. Just add some shading around the haunch and shoulder and blur it some more.HaikageAsh's Talk 16:19, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Ok. Am I the only person who thinks pixlrs fails when it come to blurring? I don't have GIMP so I don't know how I can blurr it any more than it already is. --MoonflightCome The Dark Side. We Have Catnip... 21:03, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

Well, your shading is in peculiar spaces. I use pixlr, and I'm sure everyone here has had problems. Just keep blurring. Also, where the regular fur color and shading meet, blur THER'E. That way It looks perfect.' I could help you if you want. But it could take awhile.... ☮Quail will rescue Haiti!☮We are the World... 23:53, March 31, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Is she ready? I hope she is. --MoonflightCome The Dark Side. We Have Catnip... 18:06, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the top of her head more and brighten the ear pink.MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 21:12, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Anything else? I hope not. --MoonflightCome The Dark Side. We Have Catnip... 14:49, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

Is the nose not pink for a reason? If it's not, you might want to color it.SnowstormDeputy of LightClan! 17:04, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

Gray cats have gray noses. Raven Randomness! 17:23, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

Ya, but I have a gray cat and he has like a gray tinted pink color. MinnowclawMy dragon will eat you! 23:31, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

Moonflight's choice of nose color was justified, and that's really all that was asked. It's not really a point of debate anymore. Raven Randomness! 23:31, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Ok. Now that that's out of the way, is it ready? --MoonflightCome The Dark Side. We Have Catnip... 23:59, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Moonflight. Ya I think so.--MinnowclawMy dragon will eat you! 01:24, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Icethroat氷喉 21:03, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

The lineart is blurred around the legs... Otherwise, great! Butterfly }{ Song! 19:20, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: PLEASE PLEASE BE READY!!!--MoonflightCome The Dark Side. We Have Catnip... 23:15, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Repeating, CBA? ✐SaNdY 12:46, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

Crowfeather (Ki)- Approved

File:Crowkit.png Here's Crowfeather as a kit (As appeared in A Clan In Need)! I kinda copied my old failed Tadpole and copied the ear color from his warrior picture. Comments? (There are a lot of discussions on here! Poppystorm did not put a reservation on the reservation list so I took it! Do not take down!)--☮Quail will rescue Haiti!☮We are the World... 04:54, March 28, 2010 (UTC)D

Make his eyes a darker blue and darken the shading--NightshineÜ 05:12, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-----☮Quail will rescue Haiti!☮We are the World... 05:24, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink some more and darken the nose colour--NightshineÜ 05:29, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded----☮Quail will rescue Haiti!☮We are the World... 05:34, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Blur shading some more and if possible lighten the highlights a bit. Add shading under the chin--NightshineÜ 05:36, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Tried to lighten the highlights, but my computer won't let me.----☮Quail will rescue Haiti!☮We are the World... 05:43, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading more. This is really good! NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 09:38, March 29, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink looks really light and sort of a grayish-pink color. Make it more of a red color. --Icy-chan says hello! 13:37, March 29, 2010 (UTC)

I'll try to get on the cpmputer as soon as I can. Don't decline if I'm not on Sunday.☮Quail will rescue Haiti!☮We are the World... 15:18, March 31, 2010 (UTC)

Can some one please thake this over for me? again, I'm very busy and I don't think I can get on next week. ☮Quail will rescue Haiti!☮We are the World... 17:59, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

I think he is ready now.MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 21:40, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED. I was a little shaky because I felt a 7.2 earthquake, but, I failed on the blurring. Can I have some help?--☮Quail will rescue Haiti!☮We are the World... 04:56, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Oh my god! A 7.2 earthquake. I would probably screech if I felt that. Anyway, he's really nice and as I said before I think he is ready.--MinnowclawMy dragon will eat you! 15:07, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

A 7.2 earthquake? Come on, thats elder tail's if you live in the U.S.A! What country do you live in? Ham and Eggsa days work for a chicken, a lifetime commitment for a pig 02:10, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

Users talking about the earthquake: This is a charart approval page, not a talk page. Please stop. ☮Quail☮ Felt that earthquake in Mexico... 12:07, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

Quail is right about the chatter. Quail: You said you wanted some help so I had a look at it in GIMP. I blurred the shading a little more but you had it done very well already. CBA? ✐SaNdY 09:53, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Approved ✐SaNdY 09:47, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Snapper (R) - Approved

File:Snapper.png Probably my worst charart ever. --Rainwhisker 14:50, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

I think (By what I can see) that you blurred all the patches exept the white on the tail could you blur that??? Otherwise nice job!!! , Moonpelt1786 15:05, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

This looks really awesome! Darken and blur the ear pink some more. --Icy-chan says hello! 16:19, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

I love this, Rain! Just do what icy said, and blur the white on the tail, and the end of it near his neck. IceSpring is here! 01:34, March28, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the patches more and blur the ear pink. Plus it's really good! BirchyI am a warrior at heart... 17:25, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks for all the nice comments! What else? Rainwhisker 18:28, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the forehead scars a teensy bit--NightshineÜ 04:44, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Done. Any better? Rainwhisker 14:57, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe make them a little pinker . . . use the sponge tool on pixlr fdor that, they look more like tabby stripes than scars. Møųşëţąłőʼn!! 17:58, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Done. Rainwhisker 01:06, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Looks good to me. MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 21:31, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 18:44, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Errr... The cuts are ORANGE... Butterfly }{ Song! 19:26, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Not on my computer. I think the scars look fine. What does everyone else think? NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 19:30, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

They're not orange but they are a strange color for scars. on my computer anyway.HaikageAsh's Talk 19:44, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Not on mine, the scars are cat skin color. MinnowclawMy dragon will eat you! 22:06, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

They are a strange shade for a scar. Try making them more pink-gray and paler--Nightshine{ 00:08, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

Ok, I have no idea what to do, since there are users telling me different things. What should I do? Rainwhisker武士貓 01:35, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Do what you think is best.MinnowclawMy dragon will eat you! 14:41, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Nightfall and Minnowclaw; the scars look fine. Approving. --Bramble 18:11, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Feathertail (Ki) - Approved


Im not proud of this image. ♣Gaelic Irish♣ 21:08, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Forgot to mention that there are 4 discussions and 1 being declined. ♣Gaelic Irish♣ 21:12, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

I have this image reserved! Someone keeps taking it off but I swear, I do. And no one before me had it, can I please do it? Feathertail is my faveorite charecter. Please?--Artimas HunterWarning! This user is reasonably insane! 21:20, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Well if you had this image reserved before the user erased it, then I guess. ♣Gaelic Irish♣ 22:03, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Artimas, your two weeks were up, I think. So I think Moss has permission to do this image -- IceSpring is here! 22:12, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Well the two week limit was up but she has a character up for approval so it can't really count. I think the reason your reservations were removed was because of the lack of date. This is something you two will have to settle on your own.HaikageAsh's Talk 22:16, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Your projects have been removed because you don't date them Artimas. We didn't add the date column just for fun... it kinda needs to be filled. Sandwich has the full right to do this image as it was reserved incorrectly. This may seem unfair but... perhaps focus on getting Sandstorm (A) approved first Artimas.If you want to sort something out between you then it needs to go to the talk pages. ✐SaNdY 22:20, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Some comments on the image itself: the nose needs colour and the stripes need to be darkened. Also add some stripes on her belly and chest as there is a big gap. ✐SaNdY 17:00, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

Ok, I'll keep the image. Real sorry, Artimas. I'll promise i'll make this image really pretty. ♣Gaelic Irish♣ 19:49, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks but i just want to say (not being obsessive here) but the reason there wasn't a date was because I had this reserved before the table was set up. By the time it was set up I had forgotten the date. So, whatever you peeps think. I'll be disappointed if I can't do it but I know you'll do a great job Sandwhich.

Anyway, she needs to be more silver, now she's kinda gray.--Artimas HunterWarning! This user is reasonably insane! 21:22, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

To get her the color she is on her warrior image, you can save her warrior image and use the dropper to get the color on this picture. I don't know if you knew that already.--Artimas HunterWarning! This user is reasonably insane! 22:40, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

I tried to make it more Silver, and add tabby markings moer, and I made the shading more of my style of kits. But I think I made it worse? ♣Gaelic Irish♣ 22:48, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

I think the silver is good, she was described as a silver kit several times, but maybe make the tabby marks bigger and have less of them?--Artimas HunterWarning! This user is reasonably insane! 22:53, March 24, 2010 (UTC)'s been like 3 days and nothings happened. Are you still here Sandwich?--BramblepathBrightshadow is mine! 16:11, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

Artimas calm down. A user has a week before they have to work on an image. Imagewise, the silver still seems a bit dark and the stripes a bit light compared to her other images.HaikageAsh's Talk 16:15, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

I'm not trying to be mean Ash. I just wanted to know if Sandwich was still working on her.--BramblepathBrightshadow is mine! 16:17, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

I know you're not trying to be mean. I'm just saying that they still have four days before comments like yours should be made.HaikageAsh's Talk 16:24, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

I'm working on it. I just have to redo the shading then I can put it up. ♣Gaelic Irish♣ 18:27, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded- okay, I think I failed at this attempt. ♣Gaelic Irish♣ 22:04, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good. The only thing is that the stripes shouldn't go stright across the tail. I can't tell in her warrior image but they dont in her apprentice image. Also blur the body stripes a tiny bit.HaikageAsh's Talk 20:09, March 31, 2010 (UTC)

Like Ash said, make the stripes more like the Y'sMINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 21:27, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

For sure, I will get to this on Monday (I'm at my dad's, he doesnt have GIMP). ♣Gaelic Irish♣ 23:54, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ♣Gaelic Irish♣ 23:53, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

The tail is better now, but I can't see the ear pink on our right and Featherkit's left ear..--MinnowclawMy dragon will eat you! 01:27, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Her left ear is in the shade. ♣Gaelic Irish♣ 19:32, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Never mind then, I see it now. I think this is ready for approval.MinnowclawMy dragon will eat you! 22:05, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

CBA?Sakura KissHaikage 23:39, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Approved ✐SaNdY 13:36, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Leafstar (W) - Approved

File:Leafstarw5.png I think there are 5 discussions, so I should be able to post her... I followed the colors of her leader image. Note - her shading may be a little hard tos ee because she is multicolored, but it's there. :3 Crow 02:32, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

This is amazing as always Crow. Make the tail stripes darker or find a way to define them more--NightshineÜ 02:43, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

Thank you! :3 I tried to lighten the base and darken the stripes slightly... Is that enough? Crow 02:50, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a bit smaller. Also try darkening the shading a bit more. This looks amazing. Do you use a tablet?--NightshineÜ 02:52, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

This is amazing but the style of stripes doesn't really match the stlye used on her other images.HaikageAsh's Talk 02:54, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

Darkened the shading a bit... How can I make them match more? Crow 02:56, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

Make them thinner. Like this: MoonflightCome The Dark Side. We Have Catnip... 15:15, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

Her stripes don't match the rogue or leader image, they need to match stripe for stripe. The ear pink also needs to not touch the lineart. It's such a beautiful image, though, it's a shame the stripes don't match! Møųşëţąłőʼn!! 02:24, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Her stripes are done in a more realistic style, yes, but still look a little like the other images. I say keep it this way, she's so pretty!--Darkhallows 05:32, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

The patches need to be a creamy pinkish colour. I know it looks awkard (at least the colour by itself) but that is the colour of her leader image. •Maplefern• 10:50, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Shady but I disagree. I do like this style of tabby stripes better than the ones on her other images but I do think they need to be changed to match. Her other Images were made first and the stripes on them are thinner and more rounded.HaikageAsh's Talk 21:13, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

For what it is worth, I agree with Shady. To me, this looks perfect; it is close enough to match the other stripes... ✐SaNdY 09:58, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, Ash, but I agree with both Shady and Sandy. NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 20:36, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Same with me. I think these stripes are beautiful.--Nightshine{ 05:09, April 9, 2010 (UTC)


Does this match better? :) --Bramble 18:38, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

I wasnt saying that I didnt like the stripes I said they didnt match. Yes Bramble, thats a better match.Sakura KissHaikage 21:04, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

Do you need me to edit my rogue image then? Mousetalon!! 23:27, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

I think Sandy, the senior warriors and I need to start organizing the next Tweak Week; mainly because we're getting so low on characters that need only one image. We'll get started on organzing that as soon as possible. In the meantime, don't worry about your rogue image yet, Mouse. We'll get it in time. Comments before approval on this image? --Bramble 17:30, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

hmm, we do need to discuss it at some point. As for the image; it's beautiful and now approved. ✐SaNdY 13:52, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Petalnose (KP) - Approved

File:Petal.kittypet.png Yay! I'm pretty proud of this one :) NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 16:43, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Wonderful job, Night:) The ear pink needs to be more triangular, though. --Ŧķ§ƱΣö 17:45, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Triangulafied ear pink XD Btw, I LOVE the new siggie!! NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 04:14, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good Night! Its really amazing. What colour is the tag meant to be? It looks a bit dull grey. Try and make it more silver or gold. But this is amamzing! FawnstormThis is one battle Tigerstar will not win... 10:45, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

My cats don't have collars anymore, but when they did, they had little silver bells instead of gold tags NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 22:16, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

Cool! :) Can you make it more of a silver colour? It's kinda grey at the mo. :) Γǻώήςτόŗm 18:32, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Well, I lightened it. Did that make it any better? NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 20:41, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Brilliant. Sorry if you think I'm picking Night. ;) Its a really amazing pic, I can't see anything else wrong. Γǻώήςτόŗm 08:35, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? ✐SaNdY 09:55, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. ✐SaNdY 14:00, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Brokenstar (A) - Approved


I know how I keep disappearing so much and wow I must admit, you guys have done a great job of getting so many images up I almost couldn't find any to do. However I did :D This guy was shown to us as an apprentice during Bluestar's Prophecy...well he was mentioned, remember the apprentice who got into a fight at a Gathering ;) ? So here's an image that I've done. I looked at his leader one for reference on his colors so I think I have him downpacked. Comments anyonez?--♪Shimmerpool♫ 00:02, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights and darken the shading. This is good.HaikageAsh's Talk 00:08, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Welcome back, Shimmer, good to see you. :) I think the three most obvious highlights, on the face, shoulder and haunch shouldn't be there; they look awkward. I think the image would look just fine without them. Ash is also right about adding some more shading, and the ear pink: make that a little bit more visible. --Bramble 00:16, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Hiya, Shimmer, welcome back:D *hugglez* Bramble and Ash have covered most of it, but the ear pink needs to be a bit bigger as well. This looks awesome, otherwise:) --Ŧ∆ķმ♰§ƱოΣ 00:22, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

UPDATED I couldn't get rid of the highlights...afraid I lost that touch of taking them away and keep on editing. But I blended them in more and made the ear pink more visible.--♪Shimmerpool♫ 01:09, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

This is lovely, Shimmer. Welcome back by the way. :) Just blur the highlights more, and the stripes need more blending. IceSpring is here! 01:33, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Done and done :)--♪Shimmerpool♫ 01:48, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

His tail doesn't really look right. On his deputy, rogue, and leader image, his tail bends up - File:Brokentail.deputy.png

But on this image, it just looks like there's a tiny bend in the middle of the tail. Bring the tip of the tail up higher NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 05:26, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Yo Shimmerpool! Welcome back. :) There's a little bit of blurred lineart on the muzzle, and darken the shading on the tail a little bit. --Icy-chan says hello! 16:38, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Updated Is the tail better?--♪Shimmerpool♫ 17:55, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Try doing the charart again with this blank I made with the tail up. File:TailExample.gif ☮Quail will rescue Haiti!☮We are the World... 07:46, March 29, 2010 (UTC)

Done....--♪Shimmerpool♫ 01:38, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

Ok...changes aren't showing >.< but when you look under the add image you see the new version until you click it.--♪Shimmerpool♫ 01:41, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

The changes are showing now. The highlights still look kind of messy, so either darken them just a tad bit, or blur them some more. Also, it looks like some of the lineart on one of the hind paws got erased, and there's some jagged lineart on the tail. --Icy-chan says hello! 02:00, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

I can't tell Ice as they still aren't showing up for me :( I noticed that when I got that blank about the legs and tried readding some of it. Once it shows up for me I'll see it more...Edit Lets try again...under new upload I saw the very old I'm not sure what you guys are seing but I fixed what you said on the version I have on my computer.--♪Shimmerpool♫ 01:06, March 31, 2010 (UTC)

No comments in a few days kind of have me worried....--♪Shimmerpool♫ 01:59, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Bend the tail up a little bit more.MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 21:39, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Updated--♪Shimmerpool♫ 01:14, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

Make the stripes on his back a bit longer NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 20:29, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Updated--♪Shimmerpool♫ 00:39, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? ✐SaNdY 13:38, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. ✐SaNdY 18:49, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

Rosetail (Ki) - Approved

File:Rosetail.Kit.png.pngConstructments? --Ŧķ§ƱΣö 22:28, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

Looks great! Darken the ear pink and tail stripes--Nightshine{ 22:35, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

Like Nighty said, darken ear pink and maybe blur the stripes a little more? SilverstarLeader of Shineclan! 22:38, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

Fantastic. Darken the body stripes just a little bit, and do evertihng that everone else said. Icethroat氷喉 01:05, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Darkened ear pink and stripes and blurred stripes. --Ŧķ§ƱΣö 21:58, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Awsome! Should blur stripes on the haunch and left paw/leg, whatever! (:s 17silverthistleWelcome to the Nursery! Of SkyClan! 23:30, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Blurred stripes. --Ŧķ§ƱΣö 21:29, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? ✐SaNdY 14:05, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Approved ✐SaNdY 19:36, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

Shredtail(W) - Approved

File:Shredtail(W).png I haven't put a charart up for ages! How is he?--Nightshine{ 23:30, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

This is amazing Night! Can you just make the Ear Pink a bit paler and darker the highlights :) Γǻώήςτόŗm 15:23, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded fixed ear pink and darkened highlights--Nightshine{ 23:50, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

Highlights need blurring- they're too bright. Mousetalon!! 23:58, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

Whoops the changes didn't show. I hope they're fixed now--Nightshine{ 00:08, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

I'm leaving to go to Hawaii now. I won't be back until the 18th. So please don't decline this.--Nightshine{ 17:26, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, have fun Night! And besides, there's not much more improvement needed. Mousetalon!! 19:12, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Indeed. Comments before approval? Bramble 22:54, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Approved ✐SaNdY 19:38, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

Sharpclaw (W) - Approved

File:Sharpclaw.warrior.png Comments? --Gοlδεnpαω Appare! 23:56, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Love it!! Just blur the stripes a bit more and darken the ear pink. Also make the ear pink smaller--Nightshine{ 23:59, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Better? --Gοlδεnpαω Appare! 00:45, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

Grrrrrrrrrrrrrr I want to post mine so bad!!!! XP Image wise, blur the stripes and darken the earpink more. Also blur the highlights. Me want to post it so badSnowstormDeputy of LightClan! 04:04, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

You'll get it posted soon :) Image Wise: This is really, really good. Make the ear pink smaller and darken it. Well done! Γǻώήςτόŗm 15:31, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

Better? --Gοlδεnpαω Appare! 00:32, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the tail stripes more--Nightshine{ 01:26, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Better? --Gοlδεnpαω Appare! 01:41, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

I see nothing wrong. Brilliant as usual; CBA? ✐SaNdY 14:06, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Approved ✐SaNdY 19:39, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

Graystripe(Lo) - Approved

File:Graystripe loner.png ~K I know there is a lot of Graystripe fans out there so here is his Loner image!!!...!!! LOL So, Constructments??? !(THANKS FOR REOPENING)!~Moonpelt 03:54, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

His front side looks too dark. Try darkening the highlights a bit. Make the back stripe thinner and a bit lighter. Also darken the ear pink and blur the belly shading a tad--NightshineÜ 04:11, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a bit more red, too. NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 06:52, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the stripe on his back and darken the Ear PInk (See Night's comment). FawnstormThe Dark Forest are rising... 11:20, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried doing evrything you guys siad but nightshine Front side looks to dark, darken highlights Don't really get it but I tried LOL, Constructments??? Moonpelt 15:41, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink is a bit big. HedgehogflightHedgehogs are flying! 19:24, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Made ear pink smaller~ Constructments??? Moonpelt 20:21, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

I think he looks good.MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 21:48, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks! StarpeltLook at the stars 22:25, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Blur his stripe. IceSpring is here! 15:58, April 5, 2010 (UTC)\

Reuploaded I tried but it was hard not to mess it up by blurring it to much so it's not a HUGE difference but there is one. Constructments???? StarpeltLook at the stars 23:20, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Define the ear pink more and this should be ready--Nightshine{ 01:23, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded~Constructments? StarpeltLook at the stars 04:37, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the stripe on the tail a little more. ✐SaNdY 13:42, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried but it was hard to blur it but have the stripe take up the whole tail... Constructments??? Moonpelt ۞ 15:16, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

None from me; CBA? ✐SaNdY 18:59, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

Approved ✐SaNdY 10:34, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

Sedgewhisker (Ki)- Approved

Sedgewhisker.kit I know it says 37, but there are four discussions, so this is technically within the limit (take it down if otherwise). Not much else to say, so...comments?OMpath3rd Place! 14:31, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Otherwise, this is really good!--Snowflight1Thank StarClan Newleaf is here! 14:34, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Good job, but some of the tabby stripes seem more blurred than others. Is there a way you can fix that . . . ? Møųşëţąłőʼn!! 17:50, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good. Blur the shading just abit! :) Dawnleaf 19:30, April 3, 2010 (UTC)Dawnleaf

Moss, this is really awesome. Blur the markings and darken the shading. IceSpring is here! 15:52, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Ugh, I really hope the changes show! Thanks for the comments everyone! Wow, do my muscles hurt!BirthdaypathLet's go April 7! 21:42, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

The eye looks a little strange; I would suggest putting a black pixel in underneath the white pixel and see if that does the trick. Also, the earpink is a little pale. ✐SaNdY 13:47, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded :)>BirthdaypathLet's go April 7! 15:03, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? ✐SaNdY 19:00, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

Approved ✐SaNdY 10:38, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

Diesel - Approved


I modeled him entirely off his image in the manga. He also has no collar, so I took that off; if people feel it necessary I can put one on. Constructments? --Bramble 22:14, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

One word............WOW! Way better then my failure! All I can see is to blur the hilights more and blur the stripes too. Amazing!SnowstormDeputy of LightClan! 22:16, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the head shading and make the ear pink a bit lighter.--Nightshine{ 22:17, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Okay this is reallllly nitpicky so feel free to ignore it, but on his neck you can kinda see that the collar was erased. I suggest putting another stripe in that neck area and/or smoothing out his neck lineart because there's a little change in depth from the collar-fur transition. insaneular The original Hazelnut spread 22:24, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

All changes have been made. Plus the collar thing, Insane. :) You have a good eye. --Bramble 23:04, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

I love this image, Bramble. Just blur the shading around his shoulder area, or if you can't, lighten it. It's all I see. --IceThe stars will light your path... 23:07, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Make the little area below the muzzle cream coloured, because of his chest--Nightshine{ 03:41, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

This is SO AMAZING! Hey Sysops, put this up for approval! I don't see anything, other than the one Night pointed out... Butterfly }{ Song! 13:03, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

A few things Crystalpearl:
  1. Sysops have nothing to do with the running of Projects, they just oversee everything to do with the wiki. The only difference with PCA is that Bramble is Project Leader and Sysop, but incidentally she is unable to approve her own images anyway under the rules of the Project.
  2. This image is already 'up for approval', you mean that it should be approved.
  3. You are right however; this is amazing =)

Ya, sorry! This is amazing now, I was in a bit of a hurry, so that's what came to mind. But now it fits my description of AWESOME, so I think it should be approved! Butterfly }{ Song! 19:23, April 13, 2010 (UTC) Nice work Bramble. All I see is that maybe you could add another small stripe to the top of his right foreleg; it looks a little empty. ✐SaNdY 14:51, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Nice little spiel, Sand. :) Changes have been made; stripe added and cream chest. --Bramble 17:22, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks ;) CBA? ✐SaNdY 19:41, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights make the stripe looks a little purple. Could you darken the stripes? Other then that, it's great! ;)SnowstormDeputy of LightClan! 00:49, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

It looks fine to me. Maybe it's just your monitor.--MoonflightCome The Dark Side. We Have Catnip... 23:43, April 14, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah maybe. Well this needs to be approved. It has been two days.--Snowstorm Happy Mother's Day! 02:36, April 15, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, I don't see any purple on him. I'll go ahead and approve him then

NightfallThe evening star is shining bright 02:51, April 15, 2010 (UTC)

Brook Where Small Fish Swim (Lo) - Approved

File:Brook loner-1-.png

I was soo scared by the April fools joke! And for Brook, she and Stormfur were loners when they traveled to the lake, and were instant loners when Leopardstar kicked them out.--≈៛₪¥ -§₰₪₥≈ 10:44, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good, I like the tabby pettern. Blur the shading and make the Ear Pink less 'baby pink', if you see what I mean? Also add a few stripes to her paws. FawnstormThe Dark Forest are rising... 11:17, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Great job!! But it says she has a torn ear. Could you make that??? Moonpelt 17:18, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'm glad my first Loner turned out well!--≈៛₪¥ -§₰₪₥≈ 11:16, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading. •Maplefern• 17:10, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Shouldn't it be Rouge? i thought cats that had homes which wasn't a clan or tribe was a loner. Rouges are cats that travel and have no home, aren't they? BirchyI am a warrior at heart... 22:11, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Birch, rogues are loners that are hostile. Is Brook hostile?--≈៛₪¥ -§₰₪₥≈ 13:46, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded--≈៛₪¥ -§₰₪₥≈ 13:50, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

The blurring needs some work- File:Brook Tips.png Møųşëţąłőʼn!! 02:02, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Mouse!! You're back~~!reuploaded--≈៛₪¥ -§₰₪₥≈ 11:26, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

Wow! I love the tabby pattern! Try to make the eye more gray. Right now, it looks blue. Also, darken the earpink a little bit more. But this is good!SnowstormDeputy of LightClan! 14:16, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded--≈៛₪¥ -§₰₪₥≈ 13:12, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading more. This is very nice though. ✐SaNdY 13:45, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

I can barely see the earpink. Try to lighten it some.SnowstormDeputy of LightClan! 17:48, April 11, 2010 (UTC) REUPLOADED--≈៛₪¥ -§₰₪₥≈ 22:25, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? ✐SaNdY 15:46, April 14, 2010 (UTC)

Approved ✐SaNdY 07:08, April 15, 2010 (UTC)

Weaselfur (A) - Approved

Weaselfur.apprentice Weaselfur.warrior ✐SaNdY 14:37, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Looks great! Blur the shading a bit more--Nightshine{ 14:52, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Wow Sandy! This is really good! But as Nightshine said, blur. ☮Quail will rescue Haiti!☮We are the World... 14:57, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks both of you. I did my best with the blurring; not even GIMP will do it any more for me. ✐SaNdY 15:40, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

I can't see the ear pink. Icethroat氷喉 20:48, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

On his warrior image the ear pink is really pale also. Make the paws a little more white. They look kind of grey--Nightshine{ 23:24, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded ✐SaNdY 11:03, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Icethroat氷喉 21:19, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the white transition a bit more--Nightshine{ 21:22, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

It looks like you might have blurred in some of the Lineart with the white paws. It looks kinda grey around the orange-meets-white bit. Make the ear pink a little less red. This is awesome!Γǻώήςτόŗm 18:34, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded ✐SaNdY 21:12, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

I know it's only been 3 days but the page is busy at the moment, so is there anything else I need to fix? ✐SaNdY 13:59, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

It looks a bit to orangey compared to his warrior image.... kü§ÅnÅgï 14:00, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

I think the color is fine. The shading on his warrior version is really dark which would make the pelt look darker.Sakura KissHaikage 14:03, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

I did wonder when this would come up. I took the base colour from his pelt with the dropper tool but no matter what I do I can't make the shading the same; I have no idea how Gorse ever did that to start with (When I tweaked his warrior image I worked with the shading that was there already)... What should be done about it? ✐SaNdY 14:04, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

I played with it a bit, and I think I found the answer. I assume you use the burn tool when you shade, Sand. There should be an option to change something called the range at the top; it will be set on Midtones. You need to change it to highlights. Then it will shade like how Gorse did it. --Bramble 23:04, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

I'd already tried that Bramble, and didn't get the right colour, but I tried again to no avail. I just can't work with shading on highlights. I'm going to withdraw this in that case and work on something I can do. If anyone wants to take over this and finish him off, by all means be my guest; I hate to see art go to waste. The only other option is that his Warrior image is redone in an upcoming Tweak Week. Otherwise, this can be archived. ✐SaNdY 20:46, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

Personally I do think that the shading on his warrior version is too dark.Sakura KissHaikage 20:52, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

No, guys; let's not. I personally love Weaselfur's image; I remember thinking how awsome it was when I first joined. - Nightfall

Okay, okay. Ash and Insane have given me something new to try so I'll give it a go and leave this here for the moment. ✐SaNdY 10:22, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ✐SaNdY 13:37, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

Sandy, it looks perfect! I don't really see anything wrong - NightfallThe evening star is shining bright 20:08, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

CBA?Sakura KissMaybe you're my Love 00:34, April 14, 2010 (UTC)

Approved ✐SaNdY 07:15, April 15, 2010 (UTC)

Cinderheart (A) - Approved

File:Cinderheartapprentice.png Wow...this turned out better than I expected. Comments?--Shaf Girl 01:53, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Looks great! Thicken the shading a bit and blur. Make the ear pink a tad bigger and a bit darker--NightshineÜ 02:31, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.--Shaf Girl 05:44, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

The shading on her back and haunch needs to be blurred more. Møųşëţąłőʼn!! 21:49, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Just saying, I'll be on vacation until next Monday, so I won't be able to work on this for a week. I'll get right back on it once I'm back, though.--Shaf Girl 19:14, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

Blur shading more.--Nightshine{ 04:17, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Blur shading and stripes alot more. A tip, I usually redid the hole image, then followed a tutorial on shading or didn't so shading at all! Hope it helps! Ham and Eggsa days work for a chicken, a lifetime commitment for a pig 02:47, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Silverthistle, I did use a tutorial. Pixlr and I are just a little uncooperative when it comes to the blur tool. ;) --Shaf Girl 00:35, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

I think this looks good. Just add a stripe on her face and I think she'll be ready.Sakura KissMaybe you're my Love 20:00, April 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Anyone else annoyed by the new pixlr look?--Shaf Girl 23:37, April 15, 2010 (UTC)

As the saying goes" if its not broken dont fix it" pixlr must not know that.Anywho CBA?Sakura KissMaybe you're my love 23:51, April 15, 2010 (UTC)

It is... meh... silly pixlr. Anyway, Approved ✐SaNdY 14:55, April 16, 2010 (UTC)