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Heavystep (W) - Approved

File:Heavystepwa.pngi dont think any of my charcats are very good anymore...how's this? Pebble2Pineow 22:13, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

I'm not sure if this is good or bad news but its his other leg that is deformed.HaikageAsh's Talk 22:16, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded i hope its this one Pebble2Pineow 22:47, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

Layer a regular warrior blank over this; his leg wouldn't have been deformed while he was performing warrior duties, or at least it wasn't troubling him. Also, please put a link in your signature instead of just the text. I fixed the one above for you. --Bramble 23:10, March 27, 2010 (UTC)


reuploaded how's this?Pebble2Pineow 02:07, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

The lineart for the feet looks a little funny. Can you fix it? I can if you don't want to--NightshineÜ 05:34, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

The shading looks a little... scratchy, as if the sharpen tool has been used in places. Run the blur tool over it a few times and also blend the ear pink. ✐SaNdY 08:55, March 28, 2010 (UTC)


how's this?Pebble2Pineow 16:05, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

I believe while you shaded you went outside the lines as you can see white-gray streaks coming out near his tail. Erase these and the easiest way is to add a white background again to the image. Once done just make it transparent again.--♪Shimmerpool♫ 01:43, March 29, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink needs to be blurred and the line art around his hind leg still looks odd. It's too square.HaikageAsh's Talk 23:41, March 30, 2010 (UTC)


im not rlly sure how im goin to get the leg good nightshine? can you help me?Pebble2Pineow 16:01, April 1, 2010 (UTC)

I fixed it for you :)--NightshineÜ 03:46, April 2, 2010 (UTC)


thanks night :D reuploaded Pebble2Pineow 02:02, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

It looks like on his lower haunch he has a smile face like :) that but facing the normal way.MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 21:38, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

i cant really tell where that is can you circle it Minnow?Pebble2Pineow 21:10, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

ShowI circled the smile in red.MinnowclawMy dragon will eat you! 00:13, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded this is gonna be the last image ill do for the PCA pebble2pineow 02:17, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

I think this looks really good! Lighten his back right foot a tiny bit--Nightshine{ 02:45, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

reuploadedpebble2pineow 18:33, April 15, 2010 (UTC)

Nothing else seems to be wrong. Comments before approval? --Bramble 00:17, April 16, 2010 (UTC)

His hind paws seem to have light spots on them. Otherwise, I see nothing wrong. Rainwhisker武士貓 00:15, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah,thats the only thing,apart from that,perfect. Clarrissa! :) 10:58, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

reuploadedpebble2pineow 14:52, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Beautiful! I know you've decided to quit PCA, but at least you've gone out with a bang :) Comments Before Approval? ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:40, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

None; Approved

☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:13, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Finchstar (L) Approved

File:Finchstar.leader.png Yay :D I'm pretty proud of him! Comments?

NightfallThe evening star is shining bright 21:48, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

Looks awesome! Maybe make the white chest extend lower. --Nightshine{ 23:18, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

This is very good. Lighten up his eyes abit! Dawnleaf 00:27, April 21, 2010 (UTC)Dawnleaf

Reuploaded: Thanks guys! Extended chest white, and lightened eyesNightfallThe evening star is shining bright 01:37, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

This is great! But I see weird pixels by the left ear...Quailflight 06:58, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I felt that the chest wasn't white enough, so I whitened it XD But I don't really understand your comment Quail, would you explain a little more? NightfallThe evening star is shining bright 20:28, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

I see them too. They're above the ear. Do you want me to circle them?--MoonflightA Star In Her Own Mind... 21:00, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: *face palm* I thought you meant there were pixels acually on the image, sorry! Okay, I got it :) NightfallThe evening star is shining bright 22:37, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Icethroat氷喉 03:03, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

i think its perfect to be approvedLionClaw132 03:43, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Approving. Bramble 23:38, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

Blossomfall - Approved

File:Blossomfall (W).png Okay, with one disscussion, and one being withdrawn, this is the 33th, or 34th. I don't know how to do math. =/ lol, anyways, construcments? (I cannot blur the shading anymore) --IceThe stars will light your path... 21:45, April 16, 2010 (UTC)

The front paw facing us should be brown and the back paw facing us should be white. This is very good.Sakura KissMaybe you're my love 21:51, April 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks Ash! Much better than Crookedjaw. *grins* --IceThe stars will light your path... 00:48, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

I'm really impressed with this, Ice. You've really worked on improving your technique and the image is beautiful. The only thing I see needing fixed is that highlight transition with the shading near the shoulder area needs to be blurred; you can see it's rather hard. --Bramble 03:15, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Shouldn't the ginger have stripes?--Darkhallows 07:13, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks Bramble. Shady, I didn't add stripes because I copied the apprentice image, and the apprentice image didn't have stripes. --IceThe stars will light your path... 15:56, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. --IceThe stars will light your path... 17:03, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

By far this is the best image you've done- in my opinion. The white on her muzzle just needs a tiny bit of blurring, however. Mousetalon!! 17:25, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks, Mouse. Reuploaded. --IceThe stars will light your path... 17:29, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Ah, OK. I was going by the kit image, which shows both sides.--Darkhallows 18:50, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

I don't see anything else wrong. As it's a little early, are there any other comments before the 24 hour call? --Bramble 19:43, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

One thing: I think the earpink is to light. •Maplefern• 11:09, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

I copied it from her warrior image. --IceThe stars will light your path... 13:55, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

You don't have to copy it. And I think you mean from her apprentice image. •Maplefern• 14:02, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

I think her pathches are too blurred. But it is still wonderful!--≈៛₪¥ -§₰₪₥≈ 02:34, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

I think the patches are fine....Can I have everyone else's opinon? --IceThe stars will light your path... 20:19, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

They look fine to me :) NightfallThe evening star is shining bright 20:29, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

I'm a sickler for detail but...the ginger patch on the front foot not shown as much is suppose to be black. I got that from her apprentice and kit images. •Maplefern• 22:17, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. --IceThe stars will light your path... 13:50, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

CBA?--Darkhallows 18:24, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Ah wait. He face should be ginger.--Darkhallows 18:26, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

What do you mean? On her apprentice image, her muzzle was white and the face was black. --IceThe stars will light your path... 18:41, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Well, Shady is right if you're looking at her kit image. There is a ginger-brown stripe that runs down from her forehead to the tip of her nose. Just look at her kit image for reference ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:45, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? --IceThe stars will light your path... 19:56, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Make it stretch up a bit more, towards the ears ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:59, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Done. --IceThe stars will light your path... 20:14, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Have the far ear white with a gray tip. Her left back paw is white. Blur the ear pink a bit more--Nightshine{ 04:09, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuplaoded. Is this better? --IceThe stars will light your path... 18:01, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

i thinck you should make the white ear black just becuase it loooks like its blank96.54.70.109 23:52, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Acually, the ear-tip on the ear farthest from us needs to be black (or dark gray). Blur the brown stripe on her face more, make the ear tip on the ear farthest from us black, and this should be good to go :) ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:53, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Done. --IceThe stars will light your path... 20:57, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Looks good to me :) Comments Before Approval? ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:42, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

None; Approved ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:22, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

Splashheart - Approved

Splashheart.warrior

Not much to say. Constructments? --Bramble 23:40, April 19, 2010 (UTC)

This may just be me but he looks green and his eyes look purple. Can cats have purple eyes?Sakura KissMaybe you're my love 23:55, April 19, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, make his eyes more orange-amber coloured. He doesn't look green to me. Blur the ear pink some more and the shading around the haunch and belly.--Nightshine{ 23:57, April 19, 2010 (UTC)

To me, he looks like a really dark sea green. --Gοlδεnpαω Appare! 00:01, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah. I see nothing else wrong with it except for then fact that he's green and his eyes are purple. And Ash, I don't think cats can have purple eyes in real life or be green unless something is wrong with them. >.>--MoonflightA Star In Her Own Mind... 00:38, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

Yes I agree with the others. He looks green and his eyes aren't supposed to be purple. Also, make the earpink bigger. But this is good.SNOWSTORMLast one to the Great Sycamore is crow food! 00:46, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

To me he looks like a very dark green kitty. Blur the ear shading some more! :3 Dawnleaf 13:46, April 20, 2010 (UTC)Dawnleaf

Yeah, he looks green. Cats eyes can be violet (Heathertail), but not purple. How did his eyes come to be purple anyway? Otherwise, the earpink could stand to be a little more visible, and the highlights make it look like there is two light sources... Butterfly }{ Song! 19:09, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

Ok everyone. Calm down. I think we made our point clear. No need to comment about that anymore.--MoonflightA Star In Her Own Mind... 19:35, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

Some changes are accounted for. I got his eye and pelt color from the image he was presented during Code of the Clans. I have, however, changed the eye color to a more blue tint. The pelt is not green, it's gray. There might be a touch of an olive tint, but he's a RiverClan cat any way. You never know; they could have some moss in their fur. --Bramble 21:15, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

I think it says in his article that he has amber eyes, though that may have been one of those things that was just randomly added. Cool Blue Reason: Wrapped Around Your Throat 22:32, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, I'm looking at his image right now. I don't think they're blue, they're definately a sort of amberish-golden brown. But on this image, his pelt does look a bit green to me. NightfallThe evening star is shining bright 22:35, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

Amber eyes have been added. As for the pelt, there's nothing wrong with a little bit of foreign color mixed in with the gray. It's not an obvious green, nor a definite gray. Nothing is ever perfect or definite in the natural world. I've looked at it many times, and I still can't convince myself that I see any green. Is there anything else besides the pelt that needs addressing? --Bramble 01:53, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

I don't think so. Blur the ear pink a bit more--Nightshine{ 02:07, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Could you blur the shoulder highlights a smidge also? Mousetalon!! 14:38, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

As for the pelt color (sorry for bringing this up again, I just wanted to reslove it) it's probably our computer screens. On my computer, he looks very green. But on my laptop, he looks perfect. So it all just depends on your screen resolution. ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:47, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

It looks very green to me, too.--Darkhallows 06:39, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Highlights and ear pink are taken care of; and, as a submission to popular consensus, I've desaturated the pelt some. Now it's definitely, absolutely gray. :) --Bramble 23:04, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

I can tell that the green is gone now, and it's a really nice gray, too. :) Comments before approval? Icethroat氷喉 00:14, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

None; Approved ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:25, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

Jagged Lightning (SC) - Approved

File:Jagged Lightning.png Finally got off my lazy butt and made him. Comments? --Gοlδεnpαω Appare! 23:21, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

I really like this. Just make the white tail tip a bit longer. Sakura KissMaybe you're my love 10:36, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

Better? --Gοlδεnpαω Appare! 21:44, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights on the back need blurring. Mousetalon!! 00:51, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Done. --Gοlδεnpαω Appare! 01:25, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

I'd blur them alittle more,if its possible,also,you could blur the earpink,too. Apart from that,great! Clarrissa! :) 16:31, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

I acually don't think that the highlights, shading, or the ear pink need blurring anymore. Maybe just blur the white transition more and this will most definately be ready :) ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:51, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Done. I agree with the ear needing more blurring, though. --Gοlδεnpαω Appare! 21:24, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Icethroat氷喉 22:53, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

None; Approved ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:27, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

Spiderleg (A) - Approved

File:Spiderleg.apprentice2.png

I don't know why I love doing black cats....I've been waiting for a spot to open up so I'm glad to finally put this up. Comments?--Shimmerpool★Follow the stars...☆ 01:37, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Nice :) MAke the ear pink more black. Shruggytalk 08:09, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

The current ear pink is the same as the one on his warrior image, so I think thats okay. Just don't quote me on that, though... --Quiet!... 15:36, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

I've looked at this for about 5 minutes and I can't see anything. It's lovely Shimmer =) I think the ear pink is fine as it is. (ps. nice sig Shimmer) ✐SaNdY 16:22, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

The underbelly could be blurred more. Quailflight 16:51, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

I requested this,too. I almost finished it. :( Zoe27 10:17, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Zoe but Shimmer did have this first. AshshadowBring me to Life! 14:01, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Updated

1. The colors came directly from his warrior image as I think its best to use the same colors as the first image that was created for the character
2. Thank you Sandy ^^ this sig took me forever to work out right
3. Underbelly blurred more using the fadeout effect as well
4. Zoe I've had this up for like over a month...I've just recently renewed it so it wouldn't look so old because I had one image up for so long.

--Shimmerpool★Follow the stars...☆ 02:36, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

................ok Edit I just looked at the chart and somehow Spiderleg wasn't under me anymore...I find that strange because I remember the last time I checked he was there.

Oh sugar, that may have been me when I was clearing out old reservations. I'm sorry. Zoe, Shimmer did have this first and it's my stupidity that caused this. Sorry all. ✐SaNdY 08:25, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Ah ok, thenz Sandy. Well any more comments anyone?--Shimmerpool★Follow the stars...☆ 01:31, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

Comments Before Approval? ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:47, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

None; Approved ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:29, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

Jay's Wing(SC) - Approved

File:Jay's Wing(SC).png My first sharpclaw! Comments?--Nightshine{ 20:34, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good. Make the earpink a bit more trianglar.AshshadowBring me to Life! 20:46, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded fixed ear pink--Nightshine{ 20:54, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

He looks good to me :) Comments Before Approval? ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:32, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

None; Approved ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:31, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

Stormfur (Lo) - Approved

Stormfur.loner I'll archive my withdrawn Goldenflower apprentice image later when everyone's been able to see it, so this is still within the limit. Not much to say, comments and suggestions? Icethroat氷喉 16:01, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Make it a bit darker, the base seems to be more a medium grey than a dark one. --Gοlδεnpαω Appare! 17:12, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading more. The highlights look, dull, can you brighten them? --IceThe stars will light your path... 20:15, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Icethroat氷喉 21:05, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

The highlight on his midsection looks a bit odd, as he wouldn't have a circular bump there like his shoulder. Perhaps make it a bit wider, following the shape of his body? insaneular The original Hazelnut spread 22:21, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

Should I make it more like the shading style that I used on Lichen, with only the two highlights? Icethroat氷喉 19:56, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Not sure if this is any better or not, but I've tried to fix the highlights... Icethroat氷喉 22:16, April 14, 2010 (UTC)

Much better, just blur them a tad more. --IceThe stars will light your path... 13:58, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. It didn't blur much more... Icethroat氷喉 21:53, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

He's shiny in a lot of places, not that there's anything wrong with that... The ears are kind of going "boing", but that's the fault of the blank... The only thing I can see wrong other than those is the fact that his muzzle shouldn't be that shiny, his jaw isn't that big... And the earpink is in a wierd sortof shape... That's it. Butterfly }{ Song! 01:17, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe lighten ear pink? Smoke on the waterFire in the sky☼ 19:28, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry I haven't been as active as I should have been for the past week or two, I've been really busy, but I should be able to fix the ear pink and darken the highlights on the muzzle tomorrow or in a couple of days. Icethroat氷喉 03:11, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Ah, at last. :) Sorry it took so long. Icethroat氷喉 01:25, April 29, 2010 (UTC)

Looks great :) Comments Before Approval? ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:30, April 29, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. _ Icethroat ^ Only one more month of school! 21:33, April 30, 2010 (UTC)

Graypool (A) - Approved

Graypool.apprentice Well here she is. Her charart templete has her listed as an apprentice so I'm guessing she was in BP. Comments?AshshadowBring me to Life! 20:37, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Beautiful! Lighten the ear pink a bit and blur the shading on the haunch--Nightshine{ 20:41, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

She was only listed as a kit in BP, (however, she was obisiously apprenticed in that book) but she was listed as an apprentice in Secrets of the Clans. This is really good Ash! The only thing I see, is to maybe make the eyes more of a yellow color. Right now they look amberish-orang☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:42, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

I took the earpink and eye color from her elder image. Should I still change them?AshshadowBring me to Life! 20:47, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

-face palm- my bad ;) Well, then the only thing I see is to maybe darken the shading on both the legs farthest from us

☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:57, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

I think you should still lighten the ear pink a bit. It looks like a different colour then her elder image.--Nightshine{ 21:00, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes made. AshshadowBring me to Life! 21:09, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? _ Icethroat ^ Only one more month of school! 01:49, April 29, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. _ Icethroat ^ Only one more month of school! 21:33, April 30, 2010 (UTC)

Sorreltail (A) - Approved

File:Sorreltail.Apprentice.pngSince there are two discussions, this is technically the 35th image. Anyway, constructments? --Ŧķ§ƱΣö 19:15, April 26, 2010 (UTC)


Wow! This is awsome!!! I think you should lighten the ear pink just a tad bit! Dawnleaf 19:23, April 26, 2010 (UTC)Dawnleaf

Reuploaded - Thank you^-^ Lightened ear pink --Ŧķ§ƱΣö 19:27, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink smaller, it takes up the entire ear. --Gοlδεnpαω Tensou! 23:36, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - It was the right size, there was just a small patch of orange on the top of the ear and it's color was too similar to the ear pink. I defined the ear pink a bit more. --Ŧķ§ƱΣö 19:46, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Icethroat氷喉 01:16, April 29, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. _ Icethroat ^ Only one more month of school! 21:33, April 30, 2010 (UTC)

Honeyfern (A)- Approved

File:Honeyfern A.png I'm back~~! Do you like the picture?? I used pixlr because there were layer problems with Gimp.--≈៛₪¥ -§₰₪₥≈ 12:20, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

I would add some tabby markings to her front legs, chest and also her tail, and blur the markings some more. Dawnleaf 14:42, April 22, 2010 (UTC)Dawnleaf

Well, acually there shouldn't be any stripes on her chest because there aren't any there on her warrior image. But yes, there should be some on her tail and legs. Also, darken the stripes on her forehead a bitNightfallThe evening star is shining bright

reuploaded--≈៛₪¥ -§₰₪₥≈ 11:55, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

I think it looks fine but blur the back a bit more. Zoe27 10:31, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded--≈Ivy -sama≈ 05:43, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the stripes on the legs and tail ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 05:48, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Near the middle of the tail (a little bit to our left of it) is a stripe that starts to go on the lineart. Icethroat氷喉 02:05, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuloaded--≈Ivy -sama≈ 07:46, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

CBA?AshshadowBring me to Life! 22:49, April 30, 2010 (UTC)

None; Approved ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:05, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

Dawncloud (A) - Approved

Dawncloud.apprentice


Heres the second one for Dawncloud. (: I'm pretty sure this isn't over the limit.. --Quiet!... 06:47, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

One thing..WOW! Springstar 00:48, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the stripes on the tail just a little bit, and on the front legs as well. Other than that, this is great! :) Icethroat氷喉 03:00, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Did it a few hours ago, just forgot to say it. >.< --Quiet!... 04:29, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

Lol :) Comments Before Approval? ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 06:40, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

None; approved. _ Icethroat ^ Only one more month of school! 16:40, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

Spottedleaf (A) - Approved

Spottedleaf.apprenticeSpottedleaf as an apprentice. Comments? •Maplefern• 11:26, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

Her shading needs to be blurred more, and her patches aren't blurred evenly. Can you blur them evenly together? --IceThe stars will light your path... 11:53, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

Maplefern I have this reserved. Moonpelt ۞ 13:06, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

I'm almost positive that Maple had this first. I checked the history of the page and she recently renewed the date. You can talk to her about it on her talk page if you really want to do this image but not here.Sakura KissHaikage 21:25, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

I've hd this reserved since March 14 and recently renewed the date. •Maplefern• 10:35, April 14, 2010 (UTC)

There is 3 stripes on the leg that is facing us that need a whole lot of blurring. Also, the tail stripes need a lot of blurring too.--Snowstorm Happy Mother's Day! 22:53, April 14, 2010 (UTC)

Ok... I'm sorry. Otherwise the image. The color is so off from the medicine cat image and all the others are darker! So darken it. And like the others said blur the stripes. Burnpelt 04:23, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

I fixed it....two hours ago. Fail. •Maplefern• 18:35, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Anything else? •Maplefern• 17:19, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

The orange is a little too bright, make it more natural ginger.BirthdaypathLet's go April 7! 21:13, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

The pelt is a bit unnaturally bright. Her medicine cat was darker, and was she actually a warrior apprentice? Butterfly }{ Song! 19:18, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

She was a warrior apprentice for a bit in BP, before Goosefeather retired. Raven Randomness! 21:29, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

Her tabby stripes on her tail on her Medicine Cat picture is are brown, not black.Also her pelts needs more bluring and the pelt colour is too bright,it should be a more natural colour like her Medince Cat picture. Dawnleaf 01:03, April 24, 2010 (UTC)DawnleafFile:Spotted.png

Can you make the orange a lighter and duller, more natural color? Also, ditto what Dawnleaf said about the tail. ~Echostar 17:23, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

When I do, it makes her look...wierd. •Maplefern• 00:20, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Did you try desaturating her?

☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:11, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

This is what it looked like when I desaturated her:Spottedleaf.apprenticeWith a little work, it will look more like her medicine cat image.--Earthstorm Keep the Earth clean! 03:47, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

I brought it up on pixlr, and I got it to look very similar to her medicine cat image. Here's what I did; I selected the desaturate tool (sponge), set it to 25%, and ran it over the image three times. Then, I chose the burn tool and set it to 50%, and ran it over the image twice. ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:20, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

Fixed, like, 5 days ago. I'm horrible. •Maplefern• 00:30, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

Run the desaturate tool over her one more time, and blur the stripes on her tail. There is also a white pixel on her hind leg farthest from us ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:38, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

Done. •Maplefern• 00:44, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

Much better :) Make the ear pink slightly bigger ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:47, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

Done! •Maplefern• 01:04, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

Add some shading, and perhaps a highlight, to her tail, and she'll be ready :) ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:24, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

Added shading and highlighting. •Maplefern• 01:28, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

Comments Before Approval? ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:30, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

I think it should be approved! I don't see anything, and it's beautiful. Butterfly }{ Song! 16:11, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

None; Approved ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:12, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

Brightwhisker (L)- Approved

[[File:Brightwhisker_Leader.png]] Well, I really liked her in CoTC, but I was sad when she died. She was, however, leader for a time, even though she never got her name. So, comments? Mousetalon!! 16:12, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

I guess she was technically leader. I think there should be some white on the haunch in full view. There are also two white pixels by the tail that should be brown. Sakura KissMaybe you're my love 18:31, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. What exactly do you mean by that, Ash? I also added shading, which I didn't do before. *face palm* Mousetalon!! 23:41, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

All I meant was that there is white on her haunch on her deputy image but none here.Sakura KissMaybe you're my love 01:54, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

It looks amazing! Just do what Ash said, and shrink and darken the ear pink. 晶須 15:18, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I didn't change the ear because that's how I do leader ears- it's on other leader images, and I got the color from her deputy image. Should I still change it? And I cannot believe I forgot the white on the haunch! I feel so stupid! I'm just not on it this week! Mousetalon!! 17:24, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

No, I don't think you need to darken the ear pink anymore, since you took the color from her deputy image. I think the shading on the bottom of the tail (the white part) could be darkened some, but that's about it. 晶須 17:28, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Also shorten the white on her tail--Nightshine{ 19:46, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

I'd suggest lowering the white on the leg. Quailflight 06:57, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

I think both of the white patches look fine where they are. Is there a reason they need to be moved? I'm probably just going blind, but I'm pretty sure they look fine.. --Bramble 02:21, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Um . . . okay, so what should I do? Mousetalon!! 01:47, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

This looks awsome, Mouse :D The only thing I see, is blur the shading and highlights more. And, do you see the blue line on this diagram? Make the brown go up like that. File:Brightwhisker.diagram.png

☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 06:14, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Sorry I took so long to update. Mousetalon!! 20:31, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

Lol, that's alright :) Comments Before Approval? ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:59, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble 22:34, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Sorreltail (Ki) - Approved

File:Sorreltail.Kit.pngYep, another Sorreltail imageXD Constructments? --Ŧķ§ƱΣö 21:44, April 30, 2010 (UTC)

Thank you so much! I LOVE the fact that I'm an apprentice. But, I don't know how to down load any images, or blanks. Can someone please help me? Oh, and, by, the way, Who's my Mentor? LILYFERN

Please keep the question marks to a minimum. We acually don't do mentors anymore, but there are these tutorials to help you with shading. Hawktalon, this is incredible! Blur the patches on the tail a bit more ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:54, April 30, 2010 (UTC)

This is incredible. Asides from what Night said I think the eye looks a bit odd. It looks like shes looking down. Maybe change the position of the highlight in it.AshshadowBring me to Life! 22:29, April 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Thanks Ash and Night^-^ Fixed eyes and blurred tail patches. --Ŧķ§ƱΣö 23:13, April 30, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink some more and make the black patches on the tail bigger--Nightshine{ 23:47, April 30, 2010 (UTC)

I love this, Hawk! Just lighten the paw and neck shading a tiny bit. --HawkshinePartyyyy! 01:33, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Done. --Ŧķ§ƱΣö 18:39, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

Looks great :) Comments Before Approval? ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:09, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble 22:34, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Smallear (W) -- Approved

File:Smallear (W).png This is Smallear as a warrior! Comments, Questions, Concerns?--Snowflight1Thank StarClan Newleaf is here! 21:02, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading and make the ears smaller, like his elder image. This is great, otherwise:) --Ŧķ§ƱΣö 21:15, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading a little more. Quailflight 06:59, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Can someone help me shrink the ears?--Snowflight1Thank StarClan Newleaf is here! 23:14, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

I can help--Nightshine{ 23:20, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Tell me if you don't like it--Nightshine{ 23:32, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

I think it's good. Thank you for helping, Nightshine! --Snowflight1Thank StarClan Newleaf is here! 23:37, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

This is good :) Make the ear pink more of a reddish color, like his elder image. ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:02, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Reddened earpink. Comments?--Snowflight1Thank StarClan Newleaf is here! 23:11, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Can you blur the ear pink? Springstar 20:41, April 29, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading as well. And yes, the ear pink looks a whole lot better :) ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:54, April 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred earpink and shading. Comments?--Snowflight1Thank StarClan Newleaf is here! 23:27, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

Comments Before Approval? ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 05:10, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble 22:34, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Crookedstar (Ki) - Approved

File:Crookedstar (Ki).pngHuh....two words...total-fail comments? --IceThe stars will light your path... 20:58, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

Awwww, he's cute. The only thing is I cant really see the earpink or tail stripes.AshshadowBring me to Life! 21:04, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks, Ash. Darkened tail stripes and ear pink. --IceThe stars will light your path... 22:10, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

Add some tiny stripes to his front legs. He's adorable! Mousetalon!! 00:25, April 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks Mouse, added front leg stripes. --HawkshinePartyyyy! 22:04, April 30, 2010 (UTC)

The only thing I see is to blur the cream transition on this <---- side, and darken the stripes on his forhead ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:39, April 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. --HawkshinePartyyyy! 00:53, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink and he'll be ready :) ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:18, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. --HawkshinePartyyyy! 01:23, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten it a little bit more, it's still really hard to see ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:27, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Lightened the ear pink more. --HawkshinePartyyyy! 01:31, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

The color is much better :) Just make the earpink a bit smaller ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:38, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? --HawkshinePartyyyy! 20:50, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

Comments Before Approval? ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:52, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble 22:55, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Sedgewhisker (A) - Approved

Sedgewhisker.apprentice Tried to emulate the stripes on her warrior image, but it wasn't that easy. Comments? --Gοlδεnpαω Tensou! 21:26, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good! Darken the tail stripes some, darken the eye color just a little bit (it looks a tad bit lighter than the warrior and kit versions), and you forgot the ear pink. Otherwise, this is awesome. :) _ Icethroat ^ Only one more month of school! 00:52, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

Done. Can't believe I forgot the ear pink. xD --Gοlδεnpαω Tensou! 01:17, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

It's okay- we all do it. I really don't see anything else. Mousetalon!! 12:10, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? --Bramble 22:46, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

I think the shading could be darkened more. 晶須 23:24, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Better? --Gοlδεnpαω Tensou! 21:18, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

Yep. Repeating comments before approval? _ Icethroat ^ Only one more month of school! 00:21, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

None; Approved ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:34, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

Sparrowpelt (A) - Approved

File:Sparrowpelt(SC).apprentice.png I tried a new shading style. Comments?--Nightshine{ 21:16, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

This is nice. I don't know what to say so let me get back to you on that....Quailflight 12:04, April 29, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks! :]--Nightshine{ 23:50, April 29, 2010 (UTC)

Make it lighter.--Shaf Girl 01:23, April 30, 2010 (UTC)

It's just as dark as his other images--Nightshine{ 05:04, April 30, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the eye color a bit. It looks white right now.AshshadowBring me to Life! 22:36, April 30, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded darkened eye colour--Nightshine{ 23:45, April 30, 2010 (UTC)

This is amazing! Just make the ear pink smaller and more reddish like his warrior image. Then he'll be ready :) ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:22, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded fixed ear pink--Nightshine{ 00:49, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? _ Icethroat ^ Only one more month of school! 00:25, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

Oh wait; shouldn't his file name be changed real quick to match the new naming system? ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:33, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I changed it. This is still approved right?--Nightshine{ 23:33, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

Oh yeah :) Approving ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:53, May 7, 2010 (UTC)

Shortwhisker (W)- Approved

Hutch.warrior He's an epic fail. Comments?AshshadowBring me to Life! 02:46, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

Epic fail? I don't know what you're talking about; he looks amazing! =D I think you just need to lighten his ear pink, and he'll be good. --HoneyfurBob's Your Uncle! 02:58, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

I don't really think it's necessary, Honeyfur. Nice job! Moonpelt ? 03:19, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, lighten his ear pink a bit and make the tail stripes more visible--Nightshine{ 03:56, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks Honey and Moon. I lightened the earpink but there isnt anything I could do about the stripes. Comments? AshshadowBring me to Life! 16:06, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

He looks really dark, could you lighten it a little?Darkhallows 21:20, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

He's actually lighter than his kittypet image because of the highlight. The images won't match if I lighten it anymore.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 21:39, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

I don't see anything else wrong :) Comments Before Approval? ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 07:06, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. Bramble 18:55, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Halftail (W) Approved

Halftail.warrior There are a few discussions, so I think this is okay. I tried to copy Bramble's stripe style, and failed XD Comments? ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:26, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

Looks awesome! Make the ear pink more triangular. Also, do you think you could approve Jay's Wing? It's been over 24 hours.--Nightshine{ 03:29, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Thanks! Centered ear pink. And are you sure? It's still the 27th where I'am. Oh wait, I was up past midnight last night, so I approved him and Spiderpaw (and I think one other) in the a.m. Does that count as a full 24 hours though? ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:40, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

The time is different on the wiki. Right now it would be 3:51 pm April 28th for the wiki--Nightshine{ 03:51, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, so we go by the time on the wiki? ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:53, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

I do. Or you can remember what time it was CBA'd. Darken the shading a bit more--Nightshine{ 03:57, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Darkened shading ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 05:09, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

Try adding a few more stripes in between the others--Nightshine{ 05:12, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

I don't know, that would make the stripes look very crowded as they are already pretty close together. Plus, the stripes on his elder image don't have smaller stripes in between ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 05:22, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, then it is perfect! To me at least. What do you say about Jay's Wing?--Nightshine{ 05:40, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

The shading on the haunch could be lightened a bit, but other than that it is amazing! Mousetalon!! 23:51, April 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Thanks, Mouse! I lightened the shading a little bit on the haunch ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 08:01, April 30, 2010 (UTC)

Brighten the haunch highlight a teensy bit--Nightshine{ 03:32, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights on the haunch and chest need blending a little more. ✐SaNdY 19:18, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Okay, I brightened the highlight on the haunch, and blurred the highlights ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:30, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? _ Icethroat ^ Only one more month of school! 18:05, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

None; Approving ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 05:44, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

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