Mousey I love it! Quailflight 10:53, May 9, 2010 (UTC)
This is beautiful! But I think the highlight on her tail could be lightened more. 雨晶須 14:01, May 9, 2010 (UTC)
That's really not necessary... the lighting all seems to be fine. Remember that we don't have to go for utmost perfection in the little things, or how we think something would look better. If the image looks nice as it is, then it really doesn't need to be changed. Slapping the 24 hours on this; there's really nothing wrong with it. Bramble 21:58, May 10, 2010 (UTC)
It's great for your first charart! Blur the shading some more--Nightshine{ 22:01, April 28, 2010 (UTC)
is it better? Pantherstorm 22:17, April 28, 2010 (UTC)
This is amazing! She looks a bit lighter than her other images though, run the burn tool over the whole image once or twice ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:29, April 28, 2010 (UTC)
Thank you, how is it now? Pantherstorm 22:54, April 28, 2010 (UTC)
Make the ear pink lighter--Nightshine{ 00:50, May 1, 2010 (UTC)
Does the ear pink look better now? Pantherstorm 01:36, May 1, 2010 (UTC)
I like the second one better. It seems odd to have an underbelly darker than the main color, rather than lighter. --GοlδεnpαωTensou! 21:47, April 30, 2010 (UTC)
They are both really good (only what to expect from Icy XD) But I like the second better SilverclawWe will,We will rock you... 22:05, April 30, 2010 (UTC)
I like the second one best. The brown patches need to be blurred a bit more.AshshadowBring me to Life! 22:31, April 30, 2010 (UTC)
I like the second one--Nightshine{ 23:37, April 30, 2010 (UTC)
The second looks better, I think it will look better with a underbelly patch, and darken the shading some. --HawkshinePartyyyy! 01:37, May 1, 2010 (UTC)
I agree with Nightfall that I would like the first one, but with the colors reversed. :) But it's your decision ultimately. insaneularThe original Hazelnut spread 13:08, May 1, 2010 (UTC)
(M) - Personally, I like the second one, because you almost never see a cat with an underbelly darker than the main pelt color. Also, if you do choose the second image, try making the patches more uneven, as they seem pretty circular to me. Mosswhisker&Steatlhfire 19:38, May 1, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded. I tried what Nightfall and Insane said to, and I like the style and all, but I think i failed with my artistic skills. :P _Icethroat^Only one more month of school! 00:46, May 2, 2010 (UTC)
Make the brown dip in a the chest a little. The white looks like a strait line. --Darkhallows 21:21, May 5, 2010 (UTC)
My internet is extremely slow right now, and it's taking a couple of minutes just to load the page. Our internet speed is supposed to be running at 3 Mg, but it's running at .5 Mg, and my parents don't know how long it will be before it is fixed, so please keep this up at least a week before it's declined, I hope that it will be fixed by then. _Icethroat^Only one more month of school! 22:59, May 5, 2010 (UTC)
My internet is better now. But now I have a question, do I make the brown dip into the chest a little on our right, our left, or on both sides? _Icethroat^Only one more month of school! 18:01, May 9, 2010 (UTC)
Actually, I don't think there needs to be a dip; the cream patch is curved slightly on both sides and it's definitely not a straight line from what I can see... it looks good to me. Comments before approval? Bramble 03:35, May 13, 2010 (UTC)
I know his name is wrong, I'll fix that next upload.Darkhallows 16:19, May 6, 2010 (UTC)
Thicken the ear tuft line art.--Nightshine{ 23:35, May 6, 2010 (UTC)
I copied the lineart from his deputy image.Darkhallows 01:01, May 7, 2010 (UTC)
Okay. I think it looks a little odd though because the line art is suddenly thinner. For the image, make the shoulder highlight brighter and define the stripes some more--Nightshine{ 01:06, May 7, 2010 (UTC)
Sorry this is over the limit.--Nightshine{ 03:17, April 5, 2010 (UTC)
So how do I make it not over the limit? ♥Willow 03:22, April 5, 2010 (UTC)
You have to wait until some more images are approved. The limit is 35 chararts up for approval. I bet plenty will be approved by tomorrow and you can put this up :) --Nightshine{ 03:29, April 5, 2010 (UTC)
K thanks you're really helpful :3 BTW, I like your new siggy! ♥Willow 03:33, April 5, 2010 (UTC)
Thanks! A senior warrior, Bramble or Sandy will decline this soon--Nightshine{ 04:24, April 5, 2010 (UTC)
This can stay up Willowpool as it's now under 35 ✐SaNdY 16:10, April 5, 2010 (UTC)
Anyone? I haven't got any comments yet. It's not declined, is it? ♥Willow 20:53, April 5, 2010 (UTC)
No, it isn't. My main comment is that the shading needs blending. ✐SaNdY 21:03, April 5, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded. How is it now?
A lot better! Just darken and blur the shading and try to make the ear pink less purpley. You forgot to sign :3--Nightshine{ 23:27, April 5, 2010 (UTC)
Which is better, do you think? I know I post a ton but this is my 1st charart for approval so...Willow★Do you want fries with that? 23:47, April 6, 2010 (UTC)
I would definately say to keep the second one. Blur the shading on it, and make the ear pink more of a reddish color like his deputy image NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 04:16, April 7, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploded. Ok. I fixed the earpink and blurred it. How's it now? By the way, what's CBA? Willow★Do you want fries with that? 19:40, April 7, 2010 (UTC)
CBA means Comments Before Approval. But only the leader, deputy, and senior warriors can use it. Which excudes me! And about Cinderfur, the lineart on the tail looks thin. You should make it look normal, and blur the shading a bit more. ɆƆHØĦƏ@ƦƮ 21:34, April 7, 2010 (UTC)
Wait a second here. I don't think Cinderfur was ever an elder. He died a deputy. *checks* Never mind. Sorry. But how could a deputy used to be an elder? LucyϠ in the Sky With Diamonds 07:21, April 15, 2010 (UTC)
He was never really an elder. he was elder age but had to fend for himself under Brokenstar's rule.Sakura KissMaybe you're my Love 18:56, April 15, 2010 (UTC)
Darken the highlights just a little, because it's too bright now. Rainwhisker武士貓 00:12, April 17, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded. darkened highlights. :Skywish 23:25, April 18, 2010 (UTC)
Looks a lot better! Just blur the highlights some more and it should be perfect--Nightshine{ 23:41, April 18, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded. blurred highlights although for some reason it looks darker :Skywish 00:04, April 19, 2010 (UTC)
Are u sure? I'd say blur it a little bit more anyway. Clarrissa! :) 11:02, April 21, 2010 (UTC)
Are you sure you didn't bur n instead of blur because the whole image is too dark now. Lighten it so it looks more like the color of his deputy version.Sakura KissMaybe you're my love 10:43, April 22, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded. pelt lightened. Skywish♥ 22:03, April 23, 2010 (UTC)
Blur the highlights some more--Nightshine{ 03:23, May 6, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Blurred highlights for the millionth time! lol SkywishLet's goMay 18th! 00:31, May 9, 2010 (UTC)
I think it looks good. Quailflight 10:50, May 9, 2010 (UTC)
Wow! It's been at least a month since I put this up! Skywish Let's go May 18th! 04:15, May 13, 2010 (UTC)
Looks good to me. Comments before approval? Bramble 11:08, May 14, 2010 (UTC)
This is so pretty :D. It's just a touch too light though. Maybe darken it a bit? Jöhn lënnönImagine 19:44, May 9, 2010 (UTC)
This is very nice, Ash:) Along with what Elorisa said, blur the shading on the tail and the midriff. --Ŧ∆ķმ♰§ƱოΣö19:47, May 9, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Thanks. I blurred the shading and darkened the image. Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 23:12, May 9, 2010 (UTC)
The flecks need to be thinner. Mousetalon!! 23:56, May 9, 2010 (UTC)
Make the spots browner/change the file name.Darkhallows 04:03, May 10, 2010 (UTC)
It has the right file name, I took the brown from the medicine cat image, and the flecks look fine to me. They look about the same thickness when you compare them.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 10:47, May 10, 2010 (UTC)
Comments before approval? Bramble 11:01, May 14, 2010 (UTC)
The ear pink needs to be more triangular. 雨晶須 21:06, May 14, 2010 (UTC)
Any more triangular it’d look like a piece of pink construction paper stuck on his ear. It’s fine; you can tell it’s a triangle and it’s soft enough. Approving. Bramble 03:22, May 16, 2010 (UTC)
Here is Clovertail as a warrior, since her kits were made apprentices just before Firestar and Sandstorm left in Firestar's Quest. Comments/Criticism? --Rainwhisker武士貓 21:56, April 12, 2010 (UTC)
Ooh! I likes! But the white-meets-brown place near the chest looks...awkward. Willow★Do you want fries with that? 23:11, April 12, 2010 (UTC)
It's the same as her queen image: Rainwhisker武士貓 00:05, April 17, 2010 (UTC)
Yeah, this looks good to me. The only thing I see is maybe blur the ear pink
Blur the earpink, blur and brighten the highlights, and lighten his haunch shading. It looks a little too dark. --IceThe stars will light your path... 02:20, April 17, 2010 (UTC)
Blur the earpink and brighten the shoulder highlight so it matches the haunch hightlight. →•Maplefern•← 11:12, April 18, 2010 (UTC)
The highlights look awkwardly bright compared to her queen image, try darkening them some. ♪Icethroat氷喉♫☀ 02:13, April 20, 2010 (UTC)
That would probably be due to her queen image not having highlights. Yeah, so you should either darken them like Icey said or you could get rid of them. Their not required and I don't usually use them as you can see below in Frostfur's apprentice pic. But if you want to use them, darken them.--MoonflightA Star In Her Own Mind... 19:32, April 20, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded. What else? 雨晶須 02:33, April 24, 2010 (UTC)
Move the ear pink up a bit--Nightshine{ 04:14, April 25, 2010 (UTC)
There's a gap inbetween the haunch and front leg. Make it white. :) BirchyI am a warrior at heart... 13:05, April 25, 2010 (UTC)
File:Sandstorm Apprentice.png Since there is 4 discussions and 1 being declined this should be under the limit. Also my Chasing Clouds is going to be declined so I'll put this up. And last the sun is hitting her back so the shading is on her front. Constructments? MoonThe oneand only! 15:39, April 25, 2010 (UTC)
Lighten the whole image a bit and darken the ear pink. This looks awesome! Also add a few more tail stripes and darken them--Nightshine{ 00:35, April 26, 2010 (UTC)
I think the stripes are fine since she has barely visible stripes. The earpink needs to be darkeded and blurred.--MoonflightA Star In Her Own Mind... 19:01, May 6, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded Sorry I already darkened them so if you want me to lighten them just right below! Constructments? ϟSinking Moonϟ 01:47, May 7, 2010 (UTC)
She looks fine to me. Comments before approval? --Bramble 03:42, May 13, 2010 (UTC)
I think the shading on the haunch needs blurring a little more. ✐SaNdY 16:10, May 13, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded Better? Moonpelt₪ 01:16, May 15, 2010 (UTC)
Repeating 24 hours. Bramble 02:22, May 17, 2010 (UTC)
I believe this is along my lines of fail...it took forever to get those stripes to match his other image, but it was worth it. Comments?--Shimmerpool★Follow the stars...☆ 21:37, April 30, 2010 (UTC)
I know I shouldn't be here.... but not fail Shimmer, stunning. ✐SaNdY 21:40, April 30, 2010 (UTC)
Sandy, *waggles finger* get off the computah XD Shimmer, this looks awsome! The stripes look as if they were smudged instead of blurred though, so maybe blur them some more ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:52, April 30, 2010 (UTC)
Updated...and *gasps* Now Sandy, even I know you shouldn't be here lol. Finish those exams because mine are coming up in two weeks. I'll be in your situation soon :P How is this? I'm beginning to fly though images again o.o better find someone else now...--Shimmerpool★Follow the stars...☆ 22:18, April 30, 2010 (UTC)
The stripe on the haunch seems a bit smudged. Maybe darken it a tiny bit.AshshadowBring me to Life! 22:35, April 30, 2010 (UTC)
Highlights need blurring. Mousetalon!! 20:47, May 1, 2010 (UTC)
This is the best I can do. Anymore and I'll start messing up the stripes.--Shimmerpool★Follow the stars...☆ 00:03, May 2, 2010 (UTC)
Could you perhaps lighten the patch on his nose? It's hard to see the lineart there. And I know I colored his nose pink in the rogue image, but to be consistent, I think we decided to just leave the warrior nose black. Also, his eyes are blue in the rogue version. Darkstripe seems to have his eye color change many times; they've been mentioned as yellow, blue, and brown.. I think. Sorry about the trouble you had with the stripes; it was my style you had to try and copy. --Bramble 22:52, May 3, 2010 (UTC)
His eyes are golden on rogue image Bramble, see: File:Darkstripe (R).png And its fine :) I like to challenge myself. I kind of had to highlight the top of his head again so it could blur in well.Updated--Shimmerpool★Follow the stars...☆ 00:59, May 4, 2010 (UTC)
Fix the highlights. Mistcloud 20:58, May 4, 2010 (UTC)
Sorry about the golden eyes mishap; I was looking at the one saved on my computer, which had blue eyes. :) On the image, his midriff has some black stripes that are awful close in color to the lineart; lighten those up a bit. Same thing for the stripe along his lower back; lighten that just a touch. Bramble 03:38, May 13, 2010 (UTC)
Well, some images are in the CBA stage, and mine should get approved today, so I think I'm safe. But I think this cat is messed up. He has a girly name, and can willows be red? And...ginger brown cat? *dies* --HawkshinePartyyyy! 22:02, May 3, 2010 (UTC)
Again, when I state 35, I mean 35. That doesn't mean put up another when images are in CBA or if they're being declined, or if your image is very close to being approved. It means put it up when there's room. Now, the image is well done. The only thing I see is that the spots look too regular and poka-dotted. Make them a few different sizes and more irregular, and blur. --Bramble 22:44, May 3, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded. I'm really sorry, Bramble! I promise it won't happen again. And thanks. :) --HawkshinePartyyyy! 23:24, May 3, 2010 (UTC)
Add brown patches, and maybe make the mottled more like his warrior image. →•Maplefern•← 10:56, May 4, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded. The shading made the dark spots a reddish colour...should I keep it that way, or lighten it? Btw, the shading was in the front so the highlight was on her back. Than,ks for the nice comments! :D --HawkshinePartyyyy! 21:16, May 4, 2010 (UTC)
The ear pink blends just a tad too much, make it brighter.--Darkhallows 21:13, May 5, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded. It wouldn't blur more. --IcestormPeace 23:39, May 5, 2010 (UTC)
The patches don't really look like his warrior image - . →•Maplefern•← 23:46, May 5, 2010 (UTC)
Maple's right, it doesn't. it's too bright, and there's to dramatic a change between colours. Butterfly }{ Song! 16:17, May 8, 2010 (UTC)
Um....I copied the colours from his warrior image....--IcestormPeace 16:24, May 8, 2010 (UTC)
It's the way you did the shading and highlights. I suggest redoing it because the mottles look more like spots and are too big.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 21:45, May 8, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded. --IcestormPeace 23:17, May 8, 2010 (UTC)
Darken the image more. It looks a bit yellow right now.--Nightshine{ 03:52, May 11, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded. -IcestormPeace 01:18, May 13, 2010 (UTC)
Blur the highlights a bit. Riverpelt 00:27, May 16, 2010 (UTC)
There is no highlights...--IcestormPeace 00:35, May 16, 2010 (UTC)
he looks terribble he has some errors but i will fix them Iceyfang 21:31, April 22, 2010 (UTC)iceyfang
You used the thumbnail instead of the full sized blank. Remake it using that. Sakura KissMaybe you're my love 21:38, April 22, 2010 (UTC)
reuploaded Iceyfang 21:57, April 22, 2010 (UTC)iceyfang
Add more shading around the body, blur it, make the ear pink more....pinkish. Blur the highlights and add more stripes. --IceThe stars will light your path...
reuploded Iceyfang 22:14, April 22, 2010 (UTC)iceyfang
It's not terrible, Iceyfang! But the ear looks too fake, and smudge the stripes.--≈៛₪¥ -§₰₪₥≈ 11:48, April 23, 2010 (UTC)
reuploadediceyfang 15:18, April 23, 2010 (UTC)iceyfang
Blur the ear more and blur his back. Also,why is the colour overlapping the lineart,did you blur it a little too much? Apart from this,its not terrible,its great! Clarrissa! :) 16:36, April 23, 2010 (UTC)
reuploadediceyfang 01:27, April 24, 2010 (UTC)iceyfang
The tabby stripes are too dark and the ear pink is too bright. Mousetalon!! 01:57, April 24, 2010 (UTC)
The ear pink is too bright. Zoe27 10:28, April 24, 2010 (UTC)
reuploaded iceyfang 13:38, April 24, 2010 (UTC)iceyfang
Woah...What happened to the stripes?They are too light,and I can see dark stripes under. Well apart from that really good! Smoke on the waterFire in the sky☼ 19:41, April 24, 2010 (UTC)
reuploaded iceyfang 00:25, April 25, 2010 (UTC)iceyfang
The stripes are too dark, copy them from his elder image. His earpink appears to be purple-pink, and I don't see any eye-color. Φτερόaεράκι 00:50, April 25, 2010 (UTC)
the stripes are wayyyyy to dark try making them like his elder image for instance...make his stripes 2 more shadings than his pelt colorLionClaw132 03:49, April 26, 2010 (UTC)
i cant get to work on this for 2 weeks but do not decline this can some else do it for now iceyfang 03:46, May 2, 2010 (UTC)iceyfang
I'd be happy too, unless if I need to wait on Darkstripe being approved..--Shimmerpool★Follow the stars...☆ 01:04, May 3, 2010 (UTC)
It looks like you're using the paintbrush tool to do the stripes. I believe that you're supposed to use the pencil tool. Ravenflight92 15:38, May 9, 2010 (UTC)
As Iceyfang has given up rights to the image and asked for someone else to do it, someone can work on the image even if their own is up for approval. I would, but I don't have a lot of time these days. First come, first serve; whoever would like to do the image gets to if they speak up first. Bramble 04:03, May 13, 2010 (UTC)
I'll take this. Poppydawn is in the 24h stage right now, so I hope it's okay. Do I have to put it under my reserved chararts?--Nightshine{ 04:08, May 13, 2010 (UTC)
Re-Uploaded I re-did this image. Comments?--Nightshine{ 01:37, May 14, 2010 (UTC)
I don't really want to do this charart any longer. Withdrawing--Nightshine{ 23:37, May 17, 2010 (UTC)
I'll do it, if I can. --IcestormPeace 23:50, May 17, 2010 (UTC)
That's fine.--Nightshine{ 00:07, May 18, 2010 (UTC)
I don't see anything wrong with it anyway... -- Sandystar 18:53, May 20, 2010 (UTC)
Well then, CBA?Darkhallows 21:00, May 21, 2010 (UTC)
I just withdrew Boulder, so this should be fine. How is it?--Nightshine{ 23:44, May 17, 2010 (UTC)
Looks good! Just darken the haunch and muzzle shading. Blur the ear pink some. --IcestormPeace 00:28, May 18, 2010 (UTC)
It's really good! Just make the ear more pink. Darken the haunch just a tiny bit more. -FrostHeart 02:00, May 18, 2010 (UTC)
The ear pink is acually the same color as his elder image; I don't really think it should be changed. And I think the haunch looks fine, but that's just me. ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:09, May 18, 2010 (UTC)
Re-Uploaded I darkened the haunch shading a bit--Nightshine{ 05:05, May 18, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Lightened the shading and blurred the neck shading. I couldnt change the earpink because it blended into the pelt and would have to be a dark pink which looked strange. When I lightened the pelt it looked really bright or didnt change much. Comments? Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 20:03, May 18, 2010 (UTC)
I still see some colour going out of the line art. Layer over another one a erase the straying pixels. Other than that I see nothing else--Nightshine{ 00:00, May 20, 2010 (UTC)
Mind telling me where? I thought I had erased it all... I fogot to lock the transparent pixels Dx.Darkhallows 01:04, May 20, 2010 (UTC)
Alright, done. Gah, I made a few mistakes in the setup of the image, which is making it hard to shade, though, overall, I'm happy with it.--Darkhallows 20:48, May 21, 2010 (UTC)
It looks good, but the shading is not very visible. Also, (this is not a requirment, but my inner artist speaking) there doesn't seem to be a light source.Darkhallows 01:31, May 21, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded: I really don't know how to do that. I darkened the shanding though. How is she now?--MoonflightA Star In Her Own Mind... 20:13, May 21, 2010 (UTC)
It looks really good, Moonflight, but like Dark said, their doesn't seem to be a light source. May I suggest getting rid of the shading on its tail, back, and back of its head, this could help you with your light source issue. RiverpeltHeart of Amber 00:05, May 22, 2010 (UTC)
There doesn't need to be one. She can add it if she chooses. All I see if that the ear pink could be more in the middle of the ear. Move it north. Also darken the shading on the chest and muzzle. --IcestormPeace 02:24, May 22, 2010 (UTC)
You can rarely see the shading. Set the appearance at around 5 and use it from the hardness in and out and outline the shape. Make the ear shape a bit bigger.
That was Frostheart. Frostheart, please type four of these ~ whenever you leave a comment. The shading looks fine to me, as does the ear pink ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:30, May 23, 2010 (UTC)
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Well, since Artimas couldn't do her, Bramble offered to let me do her! So, here she is! Comments? Mousetalon!! 23:12, May 4, 2010 (UTC)\
I'm really happy with this! Comments?--Nightshine{ 02:46, May 7, 2010 (UTC)
This is Flametail as a warrior apprentice! Comments?--Snowflight1Thank StarClan Newleaf is here! 00:02, May 6, 2010 (UTC)
I know his name is wrong, I'll fix that next upload.Darkhallows 16:19, May 6, 2010 (UTC)
Here is Clovertail as a warrior, since her kits were made apprentices just before Firestar and Sandstorm left in Firestar's Quest. Comments/Criticism? --Rainwhisker武士貓 21:56, April 12, 2010 (UTC)
Rainwhisker武士貓 00:05, April 17, 2010 (UTC)
Well, some images are in the CBA stage, and mine should get approved today, so I think I'm safe. But I think this cat is messed up. He has a girly name, and can willows be red? And...ginger brown cat? *dies* --HawkshinePartyyyy! 22:02, May 3, 2010 (UTC)
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he looks terribble he has some errors but i will fix them Iceyfang 21:31, April 22, 2010 (UTC)iceyfang
Remake it using that. Sakura KissMaybe you're my love 21:38, April 22, 2010 (UTC)
--Quiet!... 23:57, April 22, 2010 (UTC)
I just withdrew Boulder, so this should be fine. How is it?--Nightshine{ 23:44, May 17, 2010 (UTC)
Questions? Comments? Concerns?--MoonflightA Star In Her Own Mind... 00:08, May 21, 2010 (UTC)
There are 6 discussions, and one declined image, so it should be ok. This is the alternate Mintkit. Comments? 雨晶須 00:59, May 21, 2010 (UTC)
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